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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.16 08/03/2014 Update!
« Reply #160 on: August 05, 2014, 11:43:01 PM »
What? What's the big problem???
oh no, just after spent the happy time with acchan she got a bad news  :cry:
so who is the stalker?!  :shocked
does takamina and acchan makes a problem? or else ...

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.16 08/03/2014 Update!
« Reply #161 on: August 12, 2014, 12:19:03 PM »
hi guys! as what i've said last week, the stalker will be revealed on this chapter...
it's jurimayu's turn this time so just let them explain what happened... enjoy!

@cisda83: hey yo! i always wait for your comment and expect the word "trouble" in it! cisda83 wa omoshiroi na hito ne... so may i present you the trouble you are waiting for! let's start from atsumina first!
@korin48: alright, alright.. i'll update a little faster now okay hehe
@Keisthename: i'm trying hard to get back to being punctual! but the faster i update the sooner zenpen ends y'know lol
@Tanchan: hmm ray is... well she's uhm... (sigh...) to those who already read her, you think i can give spoilers now? can i? can i? lol chotto abunai ne? i might lose atsumina readers if they learn about it T^T
@ryu201: hope you're not disappointed if i kinda compared her to jurina's character... i just think it suits her though their auras were totally different hehe
@IamNot_Glad: trouble with a capital T? what does that mean? hehe lemme guess... uhm T-Takamina?? lol
@Justqle: well technically they did the problem hehe.. you'll find out at the end of this chapter :)

When the Time Stops
Chapter 17

She's the only reason why I chose to go to this school.

Mayu-chan. She knows I always wait for her up here at the rooftop every lunch break, but still she never shows up. I understand that she already made new friends in this school, unlike me. She's the only friend I knew here, so I had no choice but end up eating alone.

She's one year ahead of me, so she graduated middle school first and I was left behind. I can't imagine how I survived that one year without her, that's why I decided to follow her in highschool. I was so excited then to be finally able to enter her school, just to realize that things between us have already changed. I thought she'd be happy to see me here, but it seems like the opposite way. She became distant and I don't know why.

Eventhough I knew she's not coming to eat lunch with me, my heart still continues to hope and wait for her. Sometimes, I just practice few dance steps here at the rooftop to kill time before I return to my classroom. Now that I mention it, during my first few days up here, I remember there are also seniors having lunch here. I wonder why they're not coming back anymore.

Lunch break is almost over, I guess it's time for me to go back to my class now. I opened the door of the rooftop and accidentally hit someone inside. A male student dropped some photos he's holding. I apologized and helped him pick up the photos one by one. He immediately ranaway after, but then I noticed there's still one photo left on the floor.

"Wait, you forgot this one!" I shouted.

I ran after him to return that one photo he missed, but I didn't catch him. He went straight inside his classroom. WAIT. Isn't this the room of Class 2-A? So, it means he's one of Mayu-chan's classmates!

The school bell rang. Shoot! I'm late for my afternoon class! Maybe, I'll just return this photo some other time.

I entered my classroom and took my seat. I looked at the photo, it's a picture of a girl wearing same uniform like ours. She's a student here and I find her very pretty. Maybe, that guy who took this photo is in love with her. I wonder why I think she's somehow familiar. I guess I already met her before, I just can't remember where. Our lesson has started so I slipped the photo somewhere in between my note pages and put it inside my bag.

After my afternoon classes, I went next to the student council room. I knew from the start that Mayu-chan is a member of the student council, that's why I volunteer myself to be the first year representative. This can give me a chance at least to be near her everyday. Desperate move? Well, maybe.

Takahashi-senpai is already there, quietly reading the school newspaper. She's looking at the photo of Maeda Atsuko featured on its front page. So, the drama club will have another school play this year and she'll be the main actress. I noticed that there's something in the way Takahashi-senpai stares at her photo.

"Seitou kaichou and Maeda-senpai are really close, ne?" I said as I took the seat next to her.

Takahashi-senpai suddenly turned around to look at me. She's blushing hard.

"Sorry, did I startle you?" I apologized.

"It's okay..." She looked back on Maeda-san's photo. "Well.. yes, we're kind of close." She smiles and scratches her head. "But maybe not as close as you and Mayu-chan."

"What made you say that, Seitou kaichou?" I asked.

"Because you mentioned before that you've been friends since middle school. Atsuko and I just met when we started highschool." She explained. "I was actually wondering how the two of you became friends?"

I think she's the first person to ask how Mayu-chan and I met. And I'm very pleased to tell her about it.

"I was also a freshman that time when I first saw her in an empty piano room. It was late in the afternoon and everyone's got home already. Then I heard someone playing the piano. She doesn't play so perfectly but I know she plays from her heart. And that what keeps me on coming back to that room to see her again."

"An empty room... I can clearly imagine. Your first meeting is quite familiar with mine. The scene is almost close to how Atsuko and I first met, too."

"Really? So, what happened?" I curiously asked her.

Takahashi-senpai blushed even harder. Maybe she's remembering something special to her.

"The time back then... it just stopped for a moment..." She whispered to herself.

"Stopped?"

"Ah, hehe... don't mind what I said!" She giggled. The smile on her face isn't fading away. She turned back the topic. "So, is Mayu-chan... a special person to you?"

I wasn't expecting that kind of question from her. "Mayu-chan... well, she's..."

"What are you guys talking about?" Just right on time, Mayu-chan arrived.

"Jurina? You look like you've seen a ghost. I hope you're not talking about me..." She raised an eyebrow.

"Ofcourse not! Seitou kaichou and I were discussing about the latest issue of our school newspaper." I defended.

"Oh, I already read the article written there about you, Seitou-kaichou. Nothing but good things." Mayu-chan said.

She has an article? I borrowed a copy of the newspaper and looked for her part. I scanned what's written about her. It says Takahashi-senpai is genius, kind-hearted, hardworking, and a perfect role model to all the students. Wow, she sounds so cool here. Does she have any flaw?

"I haven't read it yet." Takahashi-senpai said.

She's funny! She's holding the newspaper the entire time she's here but she's not interested on reading about herself. She's only staring at Maeda-senpai's photo.

"Drama club's featured on the frontpage since it's now their sixth consecutive year being the top club of our school." Mayu-chan speaks again.

"How about the other clubs' status?" I asked.

"I have here the list of old and new clubs. And also those clubs pending for approval." She handed me the list.

As I browsed the list, one club name captured my attention. I read the details about that new club request.

"Rooftop club?"

Suddenly, two female students went inside the student council room. They seem to be close friends of Takahashi-senpai. Then, the shorter girl noticed my presence and started yelling at me.

"You're a student council member?!!"

Huh? Does she know me? Mayu-chan started scolding me again eventhough I don't know what's happening. Then the girl yelled next at Takahashi-senpai. Is she talking about the Rooftop club? Oh, I finally recognized them! They were those seniors back at the rooftop. So, they want it to be a private place on their own.

"I'll just wait for my turn next year to use the rooftop." I decided to give it up to them.

The taller girl went near me and held my hand. Woah! She's so pretty upclose! OMG. Now, I remember her! She's the girl on the photo earlier! So that's why she looks so familiar!

Mayu-chan and the smaller girl tried to stop us, so she let go of my hand.

"Nyannyan, let's leave now!" The shorter girl said.

"Yuuchan, will you please at least say thanks to....."

"Ah, it's Matsui Jurina." I followed up.

".....to Matsui-san." She continued.

"Fine..." She pouted cutely then turned to me. "Hey, freshman. Thanks, anyway." She obediently said before she went out the room.

"Sorry for Yuuchan's attitude. She's not like that at all times. By the way, I'm Kojima Haruna and she's Oshima Yuko." She offered her hand as she introduced herself. I was about to take it but...

"I'm Watanabe Mayu! 2nd year representative!" Mayu-chan grabbed her hand before me.

What's wrong with her?!

"Nice to meet the both of you. We're actually Takamina's classmates. Speaking of Takamina, where is she?"

We looked around and Takahashi-senpai is suddenly nowhere to be found. All of us didn't notice that she's left already. Kojima-san then excused herself and followed Oshima-san outside.

Mayu-chan didn't speak to me again when we're left alone in the student council room. After our duties are done, we finally decided to go home. We went out the room and saw my fan girls waiting for me outside. Oh, great. I can sense Mayu-chan's reaction and it feels scary. The girls started talking to me.

"Matsui-san! When is your next performance!"

"We'll watch you dance again!"

"Ah hehe.. thanks.. I, uhm, need to go now.." I excused myself.

They're still squealing. I saw Mayu-chan's reaction became even worse. I immediately ran after her.

"Mayu-chan, why aren't you talking to me?" I asked.

"Nothing." She continued to walk away.

"What did I do again this time?"

"Why do you keep on asking that? Do you want to know the answer? Since you came here you bring me nothing but headache!" She answered in a higher tone.

It hurts to hear those words from her. Maybe, I'm just a nuisance to her after all. We continue to walk home from school without talking. Then, I break off the silence again.

"So, you didn't want me follow you here?"

She stopped walking and took a deep sigh.

"That's... that's not what I meant." She turned around and looked at me.

"Why are you staring at Kojima-senpai like that earlier?" She asked out of nowhere.

"E-Eh? I just think she's familiar..."

"Ofcourse she is! She's the most popular girl in our school since she transferred here. So, tell me... Do you like her?"

"W-What?! She's pretty but... you clearly know that it's always been you who I really liked!"

Mayu-chan faced away, I saw her blushed a little.

"G-Grow up, Jurina... having crushes are so childish..."

"Why is it hard for you to believe that my feelings for you are real?"

"We were only middle schoolers back then... We're too young! We don't know what we're doing. You can easily change your mind anytime... and... I'm afraid for that to happen." She explained herself.

"Change of mind is easier than change of the heart. Look, I'm not a kid anymore! I can handle things on my own now. I won't change unless you gave me a concrete reason for me to. And please stop treating me like your younger sister!"

"Jurina..."

"Mayu-chan, I suffered enough when you left me. So, please... I beg you... don't ever leave me behind again!!!"

"Baka... I'm one year ahead of you. Ofcourse, I'd still graduate first!"

"How about you flunk your subjects and repeat another year?"

She pinches both my cheeks hard.

"I-IIITAI!!!! I'm just joking!!!! Stop it... my face hurts..."

She then stopped and stared at me.

"If I leave you behind once more... will you come and follow me again?"

The way she asks that question... it suddenly makes my heart pound harder.

"Because... I'm willing to pause my time and wait for you to catch up." She finishes.

"I'll grow up fast! Just wait! I'll soon catch up and we'll be together!" I answered.

"What if you stopped and get tired of coming after me? Then maybe... I'll turn around and come back for you. I wonder if you'll be able to wait for me."

"Mayu-chan... why do you always think of complicated things? You just have to trust in me. It's just as simple as that. I will wait for you no matter what..."

Her eyes got a little teary because of what I said. Oh, no... I don't want to make her cry.

"If you won't come back, then I'll hunt you down! I swear to find you wherever you are!" I warned her.

"I don't know if that sounds romantic or creepy..." She finally smiled.

"Ofcourse, it's romantic!" We laughed and continue to walk again. Then I notice the guy from earlier. "Speaking of creepy, isn't that guy from your class?"

"Right... it's Jiro-kun. How did you know him?"

"I bumped to him earlier, I saw him went inside your classroom."

"He's my classmate. He's known in our class for being head-over-heels in love with Kojima-senpai. I heard he tried to confess to her last year, but he was dumped."

"There's no way Kojima-senpai will like that creep!"

We tried to look at him closely. He's holding a camera on his hand, he's about to take a photo of something... at... the bus stop? I wonder what it is... And then. OH MY GOD.

"Isn't that Seito kaichou and Maeda-senpai?! And they are K-KKKISSING??!!"

"SSSSHHH!!! Lower your voice..."Mayu-chan puts her hand to cover my mouth.

And that Jiro guy just took their photo!!! "Mayu-chan, he's running away!!!"

She tried to run after him to stop him.

"Jiro-kun!!! I saw you took their photo!!! Delete it now!!!" Mayu-chan told him.

But he just ignored her and continued to get away.

"JIRO-KUN!!!!!"

Damn it! He got away with their photo! What should we do now?

"Mayu-chan, we must tell this immediately to Seito kaichou!"

"We definitely should!!! Or else this will ruin her..." She sounded so worried.

"I didn't know you'd get this worried about her..." I said.

"Jurina, I forgot to mention. Jiro-kun... He's actually... the main photographer of our school newspaper team."

TBC

i remember when i wrote of atsumina talking about their dreams together (ch 12)
i felt the same sad feeling when writing the scene where jurimayu talks about their plans, too
maybe because... maybe because... (sob...) :cry:
and jiro (ch 10)... he's still alive lol

thanks for reading! :)
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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.17 08/12/2014 JuriMayu Special!
« Reply #162 on: August 12, 2014, 04:16:32 PM »
Ah, JuriMayu moment, kawaii~ :cathappy:

Can't wait to see next update! :heart:
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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.17 08/12/2014 JuriMayu Special!
« Reply #163 on: August 12, 2014, 06:50:01 PM »
Mayu and Jurina were so cute... Mayu was so insecure and thought that Jurina was just a child... Ah... JIRO... the stalker... is he also trying to win photography award or something?

Or to get attention from Haruna... or just looking for some scandal for the popular people?

What would Atsumina do about the photo... when it was published on the newspaper?

Would others accept their love for each other?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.17 08/12/2014 JuriMayu Special!
« Reply #164 on: August 13, 2014, 08:41:32 AM »
What do I mean is, I hate big troubles ...

Do you get it?? Oh, well nevermind me XD XD XD

Oh, is Jiro-kun from the dorama Mendol?!?

Yatta, I know it!!!

Great update!!
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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.17 08/12/2014 JuriMayu Special!
« Reply #165 on: August 13, 2014, 11:36:53 PM »
 :mon scare: So this is the problem?? there won't be any if that certain jiro-kun didn't show up!! Duh  :angry1:
thanks to jurimayu, i like them in this story  XD
i hope mayu can stopped jiro for whatever bad thing he is going to do, she's his classmate and a student council member too, so yes i hope for that...
this jiro doesn't a main photographer, but an absolute stalker!!
then what will takamina do if she know about this?
i guess it's the time for the 'sad' part of atsumina relationship  :cry:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.17 08/12/2014 JuriMayu Special!
« Reply #166 on: August 15, 2014, 03:59:07 AM »
to much happiness for atsumina but always the drama
update soon pls
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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.17 08/12/2014 JuriMayu Special!
« Reply #167 on: August 22, 2014, 05:51:34 AM »
@Ruka Kikuchi: thanks for liking my jurimayu here... but i think you already know who mayu is, right? lol
@cisda83: jiro will explain himself... but expect another trouble for the next couple hehe
@IamNot_Glad: yup i got his character from mendol... actually he already appeared on my first kojiyuu special chapter
@Justqle: yeah, sad part as it is... but i believe this is only the initial challenge of atsumina's relationship
@triela: uhm, i'm afraid there's more drama to come :(

and to all my readers, thank you for reading this as always! :bow:

When the Time Stops
Chapter 18

'We have a feeling that Maeda-senpai and you... will going to face a big problem.'

Mayu-chan and Jurina-chan told me that they both saw me and Atsuko kissing earlier at the bus stop. But that's not the big problem they're talking about. What's even worse is that a member of the school newspaper team took photos of that kiss. I never thought things will turn out like this. What should I do now?

"Minami, dear... Is there something bothering you?" Mom called my name.

We're having dinner now and my parents noticed that I'm not touching any food on the table. I think I lost my appetite, how can I eat if I know that those photos can leak anytime by now? What if the whole school already knows about us?

"Minami, is there a problem? You know you can share us about anything." Dad said.

Right. My parents will surely find it out soon, too. If they'll know about me and Atsuko, I'd rather tell them myself than let them hear it from other people. But should I ask Atsuko first before I tell them? I think there's no time left for that, and so I decided to finally confess them.

"Mom, Dad... I have something to tell you." I speak in a serious tone.

"Okay, we're listening." Dad answered.

"What if... I'm in love with someone in school?" I asked nervously.

"I think there's nothing wrong with loving someone, as long as you don't neglect your studies." He said.

"I mean... what if... it's with a girl?" I continued.

I got a silent reaction from my parents, they just looked at each other. I expected they'd be surprised with my sudden confession.

"You see... Atsuko and I are special to each other." There, I finally said her name!

"Minami, dear..." Mom had spoken again. "When I was your age, I also admire other girls. But admiration is different from love. You're still young. Maybe you treat Maeda-san in a more special way than your other friends because you admire her. Don't worry honey, it's just a part of growing up." She explained.

I'm not sure if my Mom took it seriously because after that, she just went to the kitchen to refill the food on the dining table. It's like what I said is no big deal after all. I wanted to tell her that I'm a hundred percent sure that my feelings for Atsuko is not just admiration.

"Minami..." Dad called my name. "You've been a good daughter and I witnessed how you grew up. You never wanted anything so much. That's why I told myself that when you find something you truly wanted, I will support you on that no matter what. I know your Mom was just a bit surprised, since this is the first time you opened up yourself to us."

"I understand... Hey, Dad. Atsuko and I are having some trouble at school about us, and I don't know how to handle things like this."

"I have no idea on what's going on with you two and also who am I to judge? All I know is that... if someone is really important to you, you should take care and protect that person at all cause." He answered.

"Thank you, Dad! I'll take that as an advice. I'll go to my room now."

"My Minami is a grown-up kid now, ne? That Maeda-san, I think she's a good girl." He said before I went upstairs and I smiled at him.

I laid on my bed and checked my phone. Missed calls? Atsuko had been calling. How can I possibly tell her about what happened? Oh, she also sent a message.

To: Minami

Minami, are you asleep already? You're not answering my calls.

From: Atsuko

What should I reply to her? She doesn't have to know what happened yet. I don't want her to worry about this. I'll just try to fix our problem tomorrow first.

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The following day after class, I went to visit the newspaper team's office. Mayu-chan and Jurina-chan both accompanied me. We went inside and saw Jiro, the photographer guy, sitting there on his space.

"Jiro-kun, we need to talk to you." Mayu-chan said to get the attention of her classmate.

"Actually, I'm already expecting you to come." He calmly answered, and then he looked up at me.

"So, I believe you already know the reason why we came here." I spoke to him.

"Yes, Seito kaichou. It's because of these..." He puts the photos he took on his table. "But I'm afraid I cannot help you." He politely said.

"How come you can't help her?! You're the one who took those photos!" Jurina-chan angrily told him.

"As a member of this school's newspaper team, it's my duty to search for new stories and write them down." He defended.

"Is it also your duty to ruin a person's image?" Mayu-chan asked in an irritated voice.

"Why are you so protective, Mayu-san? Don't tell me you're into girls, too?"

"O-Ofcourse not! I'm here to protect the name of the student council." I saw Jurina-chan's face reaction with Mayu-chan's answer.

"Don't get me wrong. I'm not against with that kind of relationship. I promised our editor-in-chief to submit something interesting for our next issue and I'm dead if I don't keep my word. This is my chance to prove our team that I'm not worthless as they think. They always say there's nothing inside my head but Kojima-senpai."

"You mean, Kojiharu?" I asked.

"I know she's a close friend of yours, Seito kaichou. I never thought I'd discover something else by stalking her. Then one time, I heard about your romantic relationship. I followed you since your popularity and Maeda-senpai's are hot in the eyes of the school now. The student council president and the star of the drama club are going out. This will be a big news to everyone." He explained.

"I understand your hardwork, but it's not right to step on other people. I don't mind my image to be destroyed. But please spare Atsuko. You know that the drama club will be having a school play soon. Her name and her dreams will be at risk if people see these photos." I begged him.

"Maybe if there's something else as interesting as this, then I'd be keeping this little secret of yours. Please also understand, Seito kaichou. I'm just doing my job. So, if you'll excuse me, I have to go now. You may keep these copies." He stood up heading to the door.

"By the way, no one has seen the photos yet. The new issue of the school newspaper will be published in two weeks. But I have a deadline of submission before this week ends." He said before he finally went out the room.

In the end, I failed to retrieve the photos. I cannot force him. This is my fault after all because I was too carefree. I took the copies with me and the three of us went back to the student council room.

"What should we do now, Seito kaichou?" Mayu-chan asked worriedly.

"I'll take the blame. I'll tell people I stole that kiss and Atsuko doesn't have any idea that the thing will happen. I'd do anything to clean her name."

"I understand that's how much you want to protect her more than yourself. But no matter how we look at these photos... the kiss doesn't really seem forced. Right, Jurina?"

"Ah, right..." Jurina-chan answered less energetic than usual.

"Jurina, you've been quiet since..."

"It's nothing..."

"Jurina-chan?" I noticed her eyes were turning red.

"Can you please excuse me, I remember I have to go to dance club's rehearsal now." Jurina-chan walked out the door and left us.

"Mayu-chan, is she alright?"

"Don't worry about her, she'll be okay. Worry more about your situation." Mayu-chan answered. I'm sure she knows why Jurina acted like that.

Mayu-chan and I tried to plan on how to deal with the issue we're going to face. I requested an early turn over of the student council president position to her. She said she's not ready yet for such a big responsibility, but I assure her that I'll be helping her to prepare.

"Minami..." It was Atsuko's voice. I turned around.

"A-Atsuko!? What are you doing here?" I was surprised to see her in our office.

"I was worried because you weren't answering my messages nor my calls. Is there something wrong?" She asked.

"I guess, I'll leave now so that you guys can talk." Mayu-chan closed the door before she left us.

"Minami? What's the matter?"

I have no choice but to already tell her. It's time for her to know what's happening. I let Atsuko see the pictures.

"W-What... B-But how did this..."

"Apparently, a member of the newspaper team has been following us. He took those photos." I interrupted her. "But don't worry, I'll make sure your image is safe. If these photos were released, then all you have to do is deny them. I'll cover it up for you."

"You're telling me to deny you? Deny us?" Her tone sounded higher.

"You have an upcoming school play and people will come to watch you. With that, you'll have the chance to be the actress you want to be someday.
You have dreams, Atsuko. And I won't let anything to interfere it." I explained.

"I have dreams and you don't? Are you forgetting that you're the school council president!"

"I already told you, your dream is also my dream! Before you, I don't have anything else. I don't care if I lose my position as the student council president or how people will judge me if they knew. The important thing for me is to be able protect you!"

"I don't understand... I thought we're both in this together! Why are you putting all these on yourself alone?"

"Because I love you! I love you too much that I'm willing to give up everything for your sake!"

"You really think my dream is more important to me? Minami, I never knew that's how shallow you think of my love for you."

"Atsuko... that's not true."

"Everyone will see these photos soon and you wanted to take all the blame? What made you think I'll let you do that alone? The school will know, our parents will know."

"About that... I already confessed my parents about us."

"You did what!?"

"It's better to tell them myself before they hear it from other people."

"And you didn't ask me first before you act?"

"Why? What's wrong with that?"

"What if they didn't approve of us? What if they force to separate us?"

"But, Atsuko. They didn't."

"Minami, baka!!!" She's now crying infront of me.

"Atsuko, I'm sorry. I thought you'd be happy if I tell them about us... so we won't be hiding anymore..."

"It's not the point!!! Do you know how much it scares me to lose you? I can't even imagine being separated from you!"

"I understand. It scares me, too."

"Then let me fight with you, Minami... We can make anything happen as long as we're together, right?"

"I-I'm sorry, Atsuko. But I can't put you into risk. Just let me handle this, okay?"

"So, you're already decided then. Fine, do what you want. Make your decisions alone. Since you don't consider my feelings after all." She left after she said those words.

I wanted to follow her but I can't. What have I done? It was so painful that my mind's getting blank. I don't know what to do anymore.

"Takamina?" Someone entered the room and called my name.

"K-KOJIHARU.....!!!!!" I ran to Kojiharu and my tears started dropping down my face. I feel getting weaker, I needed someone to lean on.

"All I wanted is to protect her... I can't understand... What did I do wrong?" I cried out.

Kojiharu let me cry on her shoulders. I went on for I don't know how long it'd take before my tears stop. This is the first time I had a real fight with Atsuko. No... no... please don't let her break up with me... I'd die if that happens.

"Takamina..." Kojiharu called my
name again. "Everything's going to be fine... I promise."

TBC

hope a little drama won't hurt :nervous
around 4 chapters left i guess hehe

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.17 08/12/2014 JuriMayu Special!
« Reply #168 on: August 22, 2014, 12:14:52 PM »
@Ruka Kikuchi: thanks for liking my jurimayu here... but i think you already know who mayu is, right? lol

Ah, sou desu ne.... :nervous Oh well...

This is so sad... :cry: What's going to happen to Atsumina~?

Are they going to break up??? :panic:

Please update!!!!
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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.18 08/22/2014 Update!
« Reply #169 on: August 22, 2014, 03:29:49 PM »
Well I understand that Minami wanted to protect Atsuko... but Atsuko was sad not because of Minami wanted to protect her more that Minami did not want to face everything together

Like the relationship is tilling to one side... heavier on Minami... Minami needed to sacrifice more... Atsuko wanted everything was discussed and concluded together...

Also Atsuko had always liked Minami much much earlier... So she was scared to lose Minami...

Oh... what's going to happen with their relationship?

Would Atsuko be able to make Minami see her point of view?

Would they put a stop to their relationship?

What would Atsuko's parents reaction when they know about Atsumina's the true nature of their relationship?

What will Haruna do to help Minami?

Would Haruna try to talk to Jiro about his creepiness?

What would Yuko do to help Haruna?

I think Jiro is trying to put his name there.... so Haruna would pay attention to him

Also Jiro might use this to get Haruna to go out with him... by blackmailing her friends?

Poor Jurina... for hearing Mayu said... that she was not into girlxgirl relationship...

Would Mayu do something before killing her relationship with Jurina?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you for the update

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.18 08/22/2014 Update!
« Reply #170 on: August 23, 2014, 07:03:39 AM »
Two update coming!!!
Im so happy  :mon lovelaff:

What a complicated situation they have.
But i admired takamina courage for confess her relationship with acchan to her parents  :thumbup
I wonder if my atsumina can handle all  :?
But wait! Is that jiro guy like kojiharu?
Ah~~~ i have feeling that this problem will done with kojiharu's help  :mon dunno:
I agree with u that little drama wont hurt but if u dare separeted my atsumina....  :mon wtfmm: :mon evil:
Hehehe! Kidding author-san but please dont separate them  :mon pray2:

Please continue it and bring me some lovey dovey atsumina moment ^^
Love u author-san :heart:  :luvluv1: :on slopkiss:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.18 08/22/2014 Update!
« Reply #171 on: August 26, 2014, 10:23:12 PM »
@Justqle: yeah, sad part as it is... but i believe this is only the initial challenge of atsumina's relationship

yeah this is only the initial challenge for them but it sad to know they'll break up in the end  :mon cry:
i'd die too if that happens
NyanNyan please help takamina :cry: anyone please..........  :mon waterworks:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.18 08/22/2014 Update!
« Reply #172 on: August 27, 2014, 01:14:28 PM »
Of course, it is hurt~  :smhid :smhid

It's my Atsumina though   :oops: :oops:

But having a little (just liitle okay?  XD XD) won't really hurt

I know they will end up together ( :lol: :lol: OTL)
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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.18 08/22/2014 Update!
« Reply #173 on: September 02, 2014, 02:11:52 PM »
Woaaaaah! I didn't know that the great ainivel-san is from the Philippines!  :dunno:

KABAYAN! \(>o<\) LOL.

Anyways, back to the story....

So yeah, at first I saw your OS of KojiYuu... I was like, OHMYGOD, KOJIYUU! :luvluv2:

But then, the AtsuMina!  :frustrated:

I hope everything will be back to normal, I hope Takamina will solve her problems as soon as possible.  :on cloudeye:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.18 08/22/2014 Update!
« Reply #174 on: September 07, 2014, 02:13:18 PM »
minna, gomenasai for the late update again.. i admit i've been a lurker for the past three weeks.. my mood swings back to reading mode.. it's funny that zenpen was already finished inside my head long time ago, i'm just having a hard time writing it down lately... hontou ni gomen!!! :bow:

anyways, it will be pov of my 4 main characters on each of my 4 remaining chapters.
so let's start off with yuko-sama! :thumbsup

@Ruka Kikuchi: sorry for the wait... ima isogashii kara... chotto taihen :cry:
@cisda83: you got nice scenarios there... thank you for sharing your thoughts
@ryu201: are you gonna hate me for real? :shocked oh no i'm dead lol... eventhough i'm the writer i still can't turn back their time and edit what happened... their past and present won't change but their future... hmm we'll see about that
@Justqle: nyannyan's a good friend, that's her character here :)
@IamNot_Glad: i love it when you said they'll end up together... makes me guilty lol just kidding
@ChibiRine: kabayan! lol :nervous how nostalgic. the last time someone called me that way was during my stay in japan. feels like i'm in a foreign country again hehe! anyways, just right on time my next chapter is about your fave couple! so enjoy ;)

When the Time Stops
Chapter 19


Why is everyone busy but me? The senior students are now talking about their university choices and the course they'd be taking. The others who were already decided, started preparing for their college entrance exams. While my friends? They are occupied with some other things. Takamina and Aachan aren't in good terms with each other now. They weren't talking to each other for the past two weeks. I wanted to ask Takamina what's going on with their relationship but each time I approach her she just walks away. And besides, Nyannyan told me to give Takamina her needed space since she's having a hard time. Speaking of Nyannyan, she acts a bit odd lately, too. Eventhough she's always with me, she's never letting go of her phone and secretly messaging someone. Everytime I try to peek on her messages, she always hide them from me. It makes me curious and a little jealous of whoever she is texting. Finally, the class for today has finished.

"Yuuchan, you may go home first today. I just have something else to do." Nyannyan said before she hurriedly went out our classroom.

She didn't even let me say something first. I tried to follow her to know what's keeping her busy. I guess she's meeting someone. Does she have a boyfriend now? WAIT, WHAT THE..... That boy! He's the person who gave her a letter last year!

"Nyannyan?" I showed up.

"Y-Yuuchan!! W-Why are you still here!?" Nyannyan's really surprised to see me now in front of her. "Oh! Do you remember Jiro?"

How can I possibly forget him? I'm the one he asked to give his stupid love letter to you!

"Hisashiburi, Oshima-senpai! Good news! Kojima-san just agreed to finally go out with me!" The boy excitedly told me.

Did I hear it correctly?! Good news!? You got to be kidding me!!

"Tomorrow will be our first date!" He continued with a wide smile.

God, I'm speechless. Tell me this is just a nightmare!! Anyone please wake me up now!!!

"Yuuchan, Jiro will walk me home today. If you want you can tag along, since we have the same way." Nyannyan invited me casually.

Nyannyan... how could you say something like that...

"Ah... I, uhm... actually meeting Takamina... maybe she's already waiting for me..." That was just a lie to excuse myself.

I ranaway from them immediately. What the heck going on?! The last time I checked we're still okay and everything, and then now she's going out with that jerk!? I went straight to the student council office.

"Takaminaaaaa!!!!" I cried out as I went inside.

"She's not here." Watanabe-san was the only person in the room. "Please lower your voice, this is the student council office."

"Where is she?" I asked.

"I guess she went home early. She's not feeling well." She answered.

"I see. Hey, can I stay here for a bit? I don't want to go home yet." I asked for her permission but she just ignored me while holding a newspaper on her hand. "Why are you alone here? Where's your freshman friend?"

She showed me the latest issue of the school newspaper.  Woah, what's this? Matsui Jurina is all over the newspaper. Looks like she's popular now.

"That brat... fan service is definitely not her thing... I can't believe she agreed to make herself public! What the heck is she thinking..." She's now talking to herself.

"Did you guys have a fight, too?" I asked curiously.

"No, we're fine. I don't mind if the latest issue is a total hit to all the girls in this school and her popularity increased more. I don't even care if she's busy enjoying the company of her fans. Yeah, just like I said we're TOTALLY FINE."

This girl is funny. What she's trying to say is contradicting from what her face is showing.

"Why are you looking for Seito kaichou, anyway?" She asked.

"It's about Nyannyan... She's going out with that boy!!!"

"Boy who?"

"The one who asked me to give her a love letter just right after our field trip last year."

"Don't tell me it's Jiro-kun?"

"He is! Eh? Why do you know him?"

"He's my classmate. I see... I think I get it now... makes sense..."

"What is it?"

"Hmm, nothing. Why are you worrying so much? If you know Kojima-senpai that well, all you have to do is trust her. That's one thing I learned from Jurina."

"I do trust Nyannyan! I just don't trust that boy!" I shouted and Watanabe-san kept quiet for awhile. Then I speak again.

"Even if Matsui-san trusts you, do you think you can trust yourself? You'll never know if someday you'll meet someone else, and still break her heart even you don't intend to. It seems to me that she loves you more than you love her."

"Why are you talking to me like that? Have you ever fall in love? Do you love Kojima-senpai?" She raises her voice.

"L-LLLOVE?!" That question caught me off guard.

"See? You don't even know how you feel for her."

She's right. How would you know if you're in love with someone?

"Jurina and I already faced many things ahead our way. Love for a friend is different from romantic love."

"How can you tell the difference?" I asked.

"Well... there are things that you share only between the two of you."

"Share? Oh... did you and Matsui-san... uhm... did it?"

"D-DID WHAAAT?!" Watanabe-san's face is now bright red. How cute!

"Skinship! Or more than that..."

"Love is not just about those kind of things! You, pervert!!!"

"Hey, calm down! I'm just asking! Poor Matsui-san... After you took away her innocence, now you're denying her..." I teased a little more.

"Are you thinking that she isn't also my first?! There's even no one before or after her!"

"Wow! So, you guys really did it! When? Back in middle school?"

"A-Aaahhhh!!! S-Shut up!!! Darn it... Why am I suddenly saying these kind of things to you! I'm going home! If you want to stay here just don't forget to lock the door before you leave!" Watanabe-san took her things and walked out the door.

She just left? What an interesting girl. She's really cute when she's embarassed.

As I arrived home, I went straight to my room and lay on my bed. I looked at the photoframe on my desk. It was a picture of Nyannyan and me with a shrine background taken by Takamina last year during our fieldtrip. Nyannyan is really beautiful... I looked so happy when I'm with her... so I wonder... LOVE? I do know that I like Nyannyan very much. But... is this feelings already love? That's why I need to find out.

The next day, I decided to stalk their date. This place is one of Nyannyan's favorite, I'm sure they'd be here somewhere.

"Tell me! What am I actually doing here?!" I tagged someone along with me.

"You're here to accompany me, Mayu-chan!" I answered her.

"When did I give you permission to call me by my first name?"

"We're already friends! Just call me by my first name, too! Remember, I know your little secret..." I grinned.

"Now, you're blackmailing me!"

"Oh, come on! Just this once! When the time comes and you need me, I'll promise to help you no matter what."

"I bet that time won't come. Who says I'll be needing any help?"

"You'll still never know." Finally, Nyannyan and her date showed up. "Look, I knew they'll come here!"

"You dragged me to stalk Kojima-senpai?!" Her voice went too loud.

"S-Sshhh!!!" I covered Mayu-chan's mouth.

"Yuuchan??" Too late, Nyannyan already saw us. Looks like we've been found.

"Mayu-san! I didn't expect to see you here." Jiro greeted his classmate.

"Well, uhm... we're just hanging out... right, Yuko-san?" She told him.

"Yeah... hehe... sort of..." I backed her up.

"Jiro, will you excuse me for a moment? I just need to tell Yuuchan something." Nyannyan grabbed me to the side.

"Yuuchan, what are you doing here? I didn't know you're now friends with Watanabe-san." Nyannyan said.

"Hey, it's not like what you think! I just asked her to lend me a company. To tell you the truth, I went all over here to check if you're okay."

"You followed me?"

"I-I'm sorry... It's just that all of a sudden you're dating someone and you didn't even tell me what's happening to you... I was surprised to know..."

"You're now sounding like my mom. Why do you need to know every single thing I do?"

"Nyannyan, I can't just entrust you to that guy or to anyone else... because..."

"Because...?" She asked back. I saw her eyes are waiting for an answer.

"Ofcourse, because I'm your friend!" Did I answer it wrong? She looks disappointed.

"You know what, Yuuchan? You're actually right. You're just my friend, that's why I believe you have no right to interfere with my personal life. I'm going back now." Nyannyan left me and went back to that guy.

My knees felt weak. I wanted to tell her don't go to him. But she's right, who am I to tell her what to do? I'm just her friend. She's free to choose whoever she wants to go out with.

"Yuko-san?" Mayu-chan went near me.

"It hurts." I said and I was about to cry.

"It does. Because you love her... more than a friend." She answered. "And now that you know what your true feelings are, I think it's time for you to tell her before it's too late."

"But I don't know how to... She might not even talk to me anymore." I'm such a coward.

"Say, is there something you do that she really likes?" Mayu-chan asked.

"I think there's one thing." I responded.

"What is it?"

"She enjoys it when I sing songs for her."

"Wow, you're a singer?" She sounded surprised.

"No. I only sing alone or when she's around."

"Then maybe I have an idea. Tell her to meet you at the music room right after class."

-

"You think she's coming?"

"Relax, Yuko-san. I know she'll come." Mayu-chan said as she tests the piano keys.

"I'm nervous. It's my first time to sing with accompaniment."

"Is that the real reason? It's okay to commit mistakes. I'm not a good pianist, too. You don't need to be perfect. Just think that she's the only audience like you used to have. She'll love this, you'll see."

Mayu-chan's idea is not really bad. I didn't know she has a romantic side. I'm thankful she's helping me, but I can't stop myself from being nervous.

"Yuuchan? Are you here?" Nyannyan finally arrived.

Upon hearing her voice, my heart began pounding so hard. Mayu-chan started to play the first keys of my song, and then I sang.....

♪The sound of the camera shutter
Get the hugging pose ready
Below the cut corner
There is an imperfect happiness
Afterwards I asked myself what is love.♪

Nyannyan's eyes met mine. I can see she's a little surprised. I know she's not expecting that I'd do this for her.

♪Take another picture
To preserve the memory
My thoughts are wandering
In the end we are at the dock
Crying in each other’s arms.♪

I'm serenading her like a lover would do. I'm still a little nervous. But Mayu-chan is right, it feels like there's only the two of us here.

♪The cloudless sky
The dream that is too short
We chose this journey
If breaking up is this peaceful
It’s the soothing atmosphere.♪

Did she just gave me a smile? I really hope she likes it, eventhough the song I chose is a bit sad. But this is how I feel right now.

♪Maybe we won’t be so sad.
I thought we said we’d be together.
I took the sadness here to see it clearly.
When the night turns to day, what is left?
My heart is tortured.♪

She's staring deep into my eyes. Listen to what my heart is saying, Nyannyan... I'm singing for you... only for you...

♪The sound of the camera shutter
Get the hugging pose ready
Below the cut corner
It is really miraculous
Why did I cry?
It still hurts sometimes.♪

The song was finished until it's last note. Nyannyan is speechless. I can see her teary eyes.

"Nyannyan... there's something I wanted to tell you..." I've finally spoken.

"What is it... Yuuchan?" There's that look in her eyes again, like she's patiently waiting for an answer.

"Nyannyan... I... I..."

I know she's still waiting but I'm so afraid that I might answer it wrong again. What should I do? I couldn't say it...

"If there's nothing you'd say then I guess I should go now. Jiro's waiting for me outside."

"Nyannyan, wait!!! Please don't leave..."

"Why, Yuuchan? Tell me why I should stay?"

"Because I... I..."

I still couldn't say it. My tears are now falling down. I hate myself. I'm a hopeless coward. Nyannyan turned her back on me and started to walk away. She then paused and said...

"If there's one thing I like about Jiro... He's true to his feelings. He doesn't make me guess or assume of what he feels for me. He's not playing around, Yuuchan. He's serious about me."

She left with those painful words stabbing my heart. What does she mean by that? That I was never serious about her? I fell on my knees. "Nyannyan... I love you..." These are my words left unsaid. I cried.

"Yuko-san..." Mayu-chan tried to help me get up. "I'm sorry, my plan didn't work out. Maybe, this is not yet the right time."

"I couldn't tell her after all, Mayu-chan. It's not your fault. What she said is right. What I just do is play and never get serious. I'm just the same old me, a good-for-nothing person. I'm not worthy of her!!!" I stood up and ranaway.

"Yuko-san! Where are you going!"

It hurts so much... I ran... and ran... heading nowhere... I don't know where to go... all I know now is this pain and how it hurts me way too much. Nyannyan is the only one who can take this away from me... but I blew off my chance to be with her! God please, I'd do anything... just to make this pain disappear. Now that I know that my rival is not another person. My true rival is me.

TBC

oh, yuko... maybe mayu's right...
the right time is yet to come :(
let's dig into kojiharu's mind next chapter

thanks for reading! :)

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.19 09/07/2014 Kojiyuu Special
« Reply #175 on: September 07, 2014, 02:42:21 PM »
ah... yuko was unable to confess her feeling toward Haruna when she understood her true feeling

Would Yuko be able to be true to herself?

Why did Yuko unable to confess?

Did Haruna really go out with Jiro or just trying to get Jiro to let go of the picture of Atsumina?

Would Atsumina be able to get back together?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.19 09/07/2014 Kojiyuu Special
« Reply #176 on: September 07, 2014, 03:25:51 PM »
So you're saying that they will not end up together?!?  :OMG: :OMG:  :frustrated: :frustrated:

After all the hardships they met  :cool2: :cool2:  :grr: :grr:

Uwaah, why u so cruel

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.19 09/07/2014 Kojiyuu Special
« Reply #177 on: September 07, 2014, 03:33:22 PM »
Homaygahd, you updated! *saves le comment spot* I will edit my comment later or tomorrow hehehe. :)

@ChibiRine: kabayan! lol :nervous how nostalgic. the last time someone called me that way was during my stay in japan. feels like i'm in a foreign country again hehe! anyways, just right on time my next chapter is about your fave couple! so enjoy ;)[/b]

THANK YOU FOR THE KOJIYUU SPECIAL!  :mon inluv:

At first I'm happy because I thought this update KojiYuu will be lovey dovey until....

WAIT, WHAT THE..... That boy! He's the person who gave her a letter last year!

ME


"Y-Yuuchan!! W-Why are you still here!?" Nyannyan's really surprised to see me now in front of her. "Oh! Do you remember Jiro?"

How can I possibly forget him? I'm the one he asked to give his stupid love letter to you!

"Hisashiburi, Oshima-senpai! Good news! Kojima-san just agreed to finally go out with me!" The boy excitedly told me.

Did I hear it correctly?! Good news!? You got to be kidding me!!

"Tomorrow will be our first date!" He continued with a wide smile.

ME


God, I'm speechless. Tell me this is just a nightmare!! Anyone please wake me up now!!!

"Yuuchan, Jiro will walk me home today. If you want you can tag along, since we have the same way." Nyannyan invited me casually.

Nyannyan... how could you say something like that...

"Ah... I, uhm... actually meeting Takamina... maybe she's already waiting for me..." That was just a lie to excuse myself.

I ranaway from them immediately. What the heck going on?! The last time I checked we're still okay and everything, and then now she's going out with that jerk!? I went straight to the student council office.

"Takaminaaaaa!!!!" I cried out as I went inside.

ME


"Why are you talking to me like that? Have you ever fall in love? Do you love Kojima-senpai?" She raises her voice.

"L-LLLOVE?!" That question caught me off guard.

"See? You don't even know how you feel for her."

She's right. How would you know if you're in love with someone?

CAUGHT YOU RED HANDED YUKO!


I didn't add the others because I might end up being dramatic

YUKO! Y U NO RELEASE YOUR LOVE FOR HARUNA?! :tantrum:

*cries* Thank you for the update!

I will look forward to the next chapter! :on gay:

But that reminds me, Haruna is inlove with Yuko right? :hehehe:

Plus, I think Haruna will stop Jiro because of the kissing incident.....

HARUNA! PLEASE DON'T BREAK YOUR SQUIRREL'S HEART! :mon cry:
« Last Edit: September 09, 2014, 12:09:18 PM by ChibiRine »


油断した私がハートときめかせたせいねその目に見つめられポーっとしてしまった

君を見つけたらどんな言葉を掛ければいい?その姿 見とれて僕はきっと立ち尽くす人混みと喧噪の隙間愛する人と出逢えたことだけでしあわせになる

スキャンダラスに生きて行こうそれが私たちの生きる道やりたいことやって行こう一度の人生だ

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.19 09/07/2014 Kojiyuu Special
« Reply #178 on: September 07, 2014, 04:09:33 PM »
 :cry: :cry:
Y u do this to us!?  :cry:
Okay. Let me tell my wild theories....

What if... Haruna dating Jiro to see if Yuko's love for her is real or not??
Or what if...... Haruna dating Jiro because she will plan to delete that kiss picture of AtsuMina??

Those are just my wild theories....... I am probably wrong....

Update soon please!!!  :banghead:
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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.19 09/07/2014 Kojiyuu Special
« Reply #179 on: September 07, 2014, 04:51:03 PM »
Mou~ please don't worry. Kawaii kouhai~ :3

It'll be okay. I understand you busy. *pat pat* Okay?

We're coming so close to the end, huh? 4 more left!!! :panic:

Can't wait to see the rest! :heart:
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