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« Reply #460 on: September 07, 2006, 01:45:59 PM »
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Am I the only one who absolutely loved the Tsunku part??? I think it was absolutely hilarious!!!!


I second that! Reina can be so heartless sometimes *tsk tsk* Do forgive poor Maki will you :P

More TakaGaki for me too!!! *raises hands*

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« Reply #461 on: September 07, 2006, 02:34:11 PM »
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Reina can be so heartless sometimes *tsk tsk* Do forgive poor Maki will you :P

More TakaGaki for me too!!! *raises hands*


MMHMM! But I still love her anyway! Please more TakaGaki!!! -waves both hands franticly in the air- I NEED IT!!!

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Reina took a step forward, standing up straight so she was at eye level with Maki. "It was all a bad idea. I thought even you would be able to see that. Let's forget about it and get on with our work"

She maneuvered herself around so she could unlock the door and avoid the obstruction.

The door slammed shut and Maki was sure she felt her heart break.


I almost cried. :cry: :cry: :cry: Please forgive Maki, Reina!
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« Reply #462 on: September 07, 2006, 03:11:43 PM »
Awww! Poor Maki! Give her another chance, Reina! ;______________;

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« Reply #463 on: September 07, 2006, 08:36:23 PM »
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Yuko stopped trying to put logic into their brains. It hadnt worked in the past and it wasnt going to work now. "You know what...I dont care anymore, If anyone asks Im not responsible for how you two turned out..."


*rofl* She's NOT???? :P

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« Reply #464 on: September 07, 2006, 11:05:41 PM »
Relationships for Dummies :lol: That does seem like something Eri would have. Oh yeah, I think this is my first post in here but I've been following the story for the past month now. It's so hilarious and random. XD

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« Reply #465 on: September 07, 2006, 11:18:11 PM »
Yay! I'm happy beyond words. BTW, can I use a variation of the spin the bottle in my later chapters?

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« Reply #466 on: September 08, 2006, 05:31:45 PM »
I LOVED the ishiyoshi part... i could acctually picture 2 of them there talking about THEIR babys

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« Reply #467 on: September 09, 2006, 04:39:31 AM »
Yep updated a little bit more...

I might be able to write up another part tonight but Im having trouble decided on what is going to happen!!

And yeah Rndmwierd you can use the idea.

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« Reply #468 on: September 09, 2006, 01:31:27 PM »
Aww, married couples, so cute. ^^ Please update tonight! :3 You would be my hero if you did. ^^ I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS WITH REINA AND MAKI!!! :evil: I'm going nuts about it.
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« Reply #469 on: September 09, 2006, 11:54:53 PM »
*melts* Aw, how sweet. Rika and Yossui are so cute!

And thnx! It just might be a while until I figure out a way to put the game in  my story. I'm still not that far into it.

Oh, and you can just call me Rndm. :D

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« Reply #470 on: September 14, 2006, 12:52:56 AM »
Wow, reading from 1-100 took a pretty long time @_@;;.

I obviously can't comment on every single thing, but I can say that I enjoyed every single chapter, all of them are really well done, even when authors were changed. This is also rather addictive too XD.

Very much looking forward to the next update :)

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« Reply #471 on: September 14, 2006, 08:36:47 AM »
Im sorry!

Im working so hard to get everything finished so I can continue writing!! Ever since the start of this month I have been busy with study and family (matter beyond anyone's control)!!

Please be patient
Im so sorry!

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« Reply #472 on: September 14, 2006, 11:59:40 PM »
Ok, it's cool. Good luck with everything.

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« Reply #473 on: September 15, 2006, 12:10:59 AM »
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Ok, it's cool. Good luck with everything.

-nods- yup yup, I agree.
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« Reply #474 on: September 15, 2006, 05:02:14 PM »
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Im sorry!

Im working so hard to get everything finished so I can continue writing!! Ever since the start of this month I have been busy with study and family (matter beyond anyone's control)!!

Please be patient
Im so sorry!


Hope everything gets better for you soon. All ya loyal readers will be here rooting for you :)

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« Reply #475 on: September 16, 2006, 03:53:25 AM »
^ * Nods * Don't worry. You update frequently enough!...>__> coff coff....

We can wait! ^^   Quote lil_hamz: Hope everything gets better for you soon. All ya loyal readers will be here rooting for you =) : Unquote

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« Reply #476 on: September 26, 2006, 05:38:30 PM »
Yeah we can wait^^

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« Reply #477 on: October 07, 2006, 08:50:09 AM »
Sorry I tried to write a hige 100 but it didnt quite work. I was thinking a chapter that included everyone..but yeah..didnt work..oh well...MORE DOKI DOKI!! because as the rndmn say Doki doki does a body good

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“Paaaaarty!!”

Yuko opened the door to their newly acclaimed ‘party room’ to a very psyched up Kei.

”Where da party at?”

Yuko dropped the 6 pack of beer that was thrust into her belly upon entrance on the table, snapping one off for herself.

”Not here yet” She announced, sipping her favourite refresher. “You’re the first one”

Kei slapped her forehead, collapsing on the couch sighing at her own hopelessness.

”How uncool!!” She cried out

”Very…”

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

"Stupid traffic!!" Yossui slammed the steering wheel with her fist, accidentally hitting the horn. A few drivers scowled and one even went as far as to give her the finger. Miki, sitting in the front passenger, was all too happily returned the gesture.

”Jerks” She muttered before slumping back into her seat.

Niigaki poked her head in the front. "I’m bored. Why aren’t we moving?..."

"Traffic jam...accident or something up ahead" Yossui popped open the glove compartment and took out a map, looking for an alternate root.

"Hey Mick, isn’t there a turn off up ahead that'll get us away from this mess?"

Yossui ran her finger along the highway illustrated to represent the one they were currently on.

"Mick? Did you hear me?"

There was no reply.

"I think she's fallen asleep" Niigaki stated, waving her hand in front of Sleeping Fujimoto's face. "Yep, she's out"

"She's no good to me sleeping" Yossui complained throwing the map back at Niigaki for the time being. "Wake up Miki"

Yossui gave her a rather forceful shove with no avail. The napping girl rolled her head from one side to the other before resting it with a slam against the cold side car window.

"Oh for the love of..."

Yossui turned to the panel beside her and pressed the 'down' button for the windows.

Bzzzzzzz

Fujimoto's head slid down in unison with the window frame until disappeared completely, leaving Miki's head resting half outside the car, vulnerable to the night winds.

"Do I dare go further?" Yossui voiced her thoughts.

Niigaki answered with a nod and the fateful 'up' button was pressed.

Bzzzzzzz

The window wound itself up again and took along with it, the head of the touching demon, stopping only when the head was firmly wedged between the glass and the window frame.

With her ass now out of the seat and face smushed in the car window it was by some miracle she didn’t wake up. This girl was seriously out cold.

Niigaki held in her laughter as she leant over the driver’s seat and flicked the windscreen wipers on.

The renegade spurts of soapy water caught Miki right on the face.

"What the hell!" Miki struggled to get her head back in the van. With both Niigaki and Yossui laughing at how well the plan went nobody bothered to wind down the window again.

Fujimoto's fingers found the button to free herself after a minute of random cursing and threats. Brushing her hair back to its normal place she glared at the two pranksters.

Yossui was quick to jump out of the war path by dobbing in her partner.

"Eyebrows did it!"

Miki turned her rage onto the poor gokkie until all her anger was satisfied. She then turned her focus back to the road to notice the traffic hold up.

"Is this what you woke me up for?"

Yossui reached back and took the map from Niigaki's mouth (from where Miki lodged it) and spread it over the wheel again.

"Now...how can we get off this road? It shouldn’t be too long before we can reach this turn of here..."

Miki rubbed her temples. Her patience at it's lowest.

"Outta the way"

Miki changed gears, pulled the wheel hard left and stomped on the accelerator (despite Yossui foot already being on it). The van revved up, mounted the nature strip and zoomed along it, out of sight.

"JESUS MIKI YOU'RE GONNA GET US KILLED!!"

Miki tugged the wheel left and right. Dodging pedestrians and what looked like a duck but could have as easily been a Chihuahua.

The vehicle came to a sudden halt outside the apartment after its detour through 2 local parks, a war memorial and someone's front yard.

Yossui sat in a state of shock, plastered to her seat. Her eyes darted around in disbelief followed by her hands checking all her limbs to make sure they were all still there and she was actually still alive.

"Are you nuts!" She hissed.

Miki yawned and shrugged at the same time. "We're home, aren’t we?"

The exhausted gang bailed out of the van and stubbled inside for a good nights rest.

On the way to the kitchen Yossui passed Makoto watching Tv in the living room. She wasnt able to come to today's performance due to the helmet-impairment. They lied and said she had the flu which everyone bought. What would they think if they knew the truth?

"Hey" Yossui flopped down on the couch beside Makoto.

"Hey"

"What did the nurse say about getting the bucket off?"

"They said they dont know. Nice to see our tax dollars at work for research"

Yossui nodded, wondering if there was a lab somewhere for research on incidents like these.

"If you want some help getting it off, just give me a buzz"

"Thanks"

Yossui's phone started to vibrate. She glanced at the caller ID then back at Makoto "Sorry, gotta take this...Good luck with it...I hope you can get it of soon. I miss seeing your smile"

She playfully punched Makoto's arm and stepped outside to take her call.

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« Reply #478 on: October 07, 2006, 04:20:52 PM »
The whole Miki sleeping thing was absolutely hilarious! Loved the ending where she shoved the map into Mame's mouth, haha! And poor Mako with her head stuck! By the way... for errors, it's route, not root. As for "Mick" Romajizised (?), it still would have been pronounced Miki, after all, japanese words can't end without a vowel, whether it's a foreign name or not, haha.

Hope to see the next chapter sooon~! -puts on hardhat in case something drastic happens, OR Miki-projectiles happen to fall-

HONTO NICE BODY BODY~!

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« Reply #479 on: October 07, 2006, 05:13:04 PM »
OMG Funnier than Bucket head! Imagine being a duck, then looking at a car with Miki in the driver's seat. Seems like a horror movie doesn't it? Your past flashing before your eyes yet?
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