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« Reply #520 on: October 11, 2006, 07:23:42 AM »
Lol. yes...you all do that...re-read :D

I did and I was thinking "wtf is this..."

Anyway the dream with Reina in it happens and when she wakes up she sees a note asking her to go to the cafe

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« Reply #521 on: October 11, 2006, 08:10:26 AM »
I'lll ask Makoto if I ever see her. Hey, maybe I should use a mental detector to track her bucket down XD

I'm thinking maybe Reina's dream has something to do with what her relationship with Maki might become. When people find out about it everyone wants her to give it up except for one person. I don't know who that is yet though.

A random thought, I love the part about Sayu obsessing about not being invited to the party :lol:

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« Reply #522 on: October 11, 2006, 07:39:46 PM »
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Lol. yes...you all do that...re-read :D

Damn you...:P

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« Reply #523 on: October 11, 2006, 11:29:13 PM »
....Holy... that was....very.... Good thing you explained that! I would have NEVER figured it out. Now I understand A LOT better.

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« Reply #524 on: October 12, 2006, 05:19:39 PM »
Guess what...I lost the chapters I had for today.

So no update until tomorrow where I will have the time to re-write the WHOLE DAMN THING !!! AHHH I HATE COMPUTERS!!!

Anyway,...what you have to look forward to!

Girls without pants!

W feature!!

GAM Action!

Adventure of Bucket-head!!

I suppose I could write a small thing now because I feel so guilty for not backingup properly. This is from a sub-doki doki project called UDD (untold Doki Doki) its the stuff that happened but you never heard about. The title of this untold story is Target Yossui. It details the events that occured when Yossui was the target for the games.

-Untold Doki Doki-
UDD: Target Yossui


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Its a particularly warm night but thats not the reaons Im awake. And its not because the terrible two are making a racket in the next room. Its something else.

I cant stop thinking about her.

Her charm. Her laugh. Or the way she rolls her syllables so roughly off her tongue and past her full lips.

It drives me crazy because I know I shouldnt be thinking like this. For a number of reasons.

But what drives me even crazier is the thought that she might actually feel the same way....




And thats enough for today :D

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« Reply #525 on: October 12, 2006, 05:37:13 PM »
Wow, ebil computers are, yes? They're all out to get us. And we shall all wait patiently for the next update, because W, pantsless girls, GAM, and buckethead are worth it!

Target Yossui = Squee! >~<

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« Reply #526 on: October 12, 2006, 07:58:32 PM »
Waits with popcorn the UDD:popcorn:

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« Reply #527 on: October 12, 2006, 08:06:36 PM »
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Waits with popcorn the UDD:popcorn:


me too

Let's do a party here too waiting for UDD! XDXD

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« Reply #528 on: October 12, 2006, 09:16:07 PM »
Yeaaah~! -wears hardhat in case flying projectiles decide to burst forth-

Can't wait for UDD and the future chapters <3

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« Reply #529 on: October 13, 2006, 01:55:52 AM »
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Guess what...I lost the chapters I had for today.

So no update until tomorrow where I will have the time to re-write the WHOLE DAMN THING !!! AHHH I HATE COMPUTERS!!!
*stares up at the sky with fists clenched into the air*

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO~!!!!!!!!!

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« Reply #530 on: October 13, 2006, 02:11:24 AM »
OMG....I FINALLY CAUGHT UP TO THIS THING!! just started reading this after hearing how good this fic is, and i have to say...I TOTALLY AGREE!!! :thumbsup
[sticks hand up] I, jafeijai, now pledge myself to the Cult of Mikan...ness :bow: XD [chant: HONTO NICE BODY BODY!!]
and I mustn't forget bluekinoko...the CREATOR OF DOKI DOKI!! :bow:
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« Reply #531 on: October 14, 2006, 09:05:13 AM »
Im so pissed off today!! I wrote a hell of a lot and AGAIN it all went down the drain!!
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Glancing at the clock she saw that she had only 5 minutes to get these girls to the apartment. Yossui switched the Oba-chan Mobile into 4WD mode as she jumped the sidewalk and cut across the park for the second time that night.

Screams and prayers from the passengers filled the vehicle as it became air born, shooting through a hedge and joining up with a road.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Yuuko packed the last box away and went to answer the knock at the door.

"I knew you could do it" She smiled at Yossui, plucking a twig from the girl's hair.

Yuuko opened the door wider, inviting Melon Kinenbi, W, Yuki Maeda, Mai, Ayaka and Nakai in.

Alcohol was quickly brought out and exchange. Yossui found herself again in the hallway with a mysterious beer in her hand. This time she was thankful. By damn, did she need it.

She removed the cap and took a swig. "Ahhh...."

Yuuko's door opened and Matsuura came flying out curtesy of Yuuko's foot.

"Why cant I come!" She pleaded.

Yasuda, the unoffical sub-party co-odinator, waved her finger. "You know why you are ban! Boss'es orders!"

The door was slammed shut on the soloist. She turned slowly to walk away, peeling her fake goatie and sideburns off. "Well, it was worth a try"

Yossui couldnt help but ask. "You ate her chicken breasts, didnt you"

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Kaorin dealt the cards out for the 5th round.

It was tradition to play atleast one round of poker at the beginning of each party. The tradition had started only 6 parties ago but it was a tradition none the less.

Mari raised her hand in the air to pose a question. "If I have 4 kings, is that good or bad?"

The room groaned.

Megumi threw her cards on the ground "Im out then"

"Yeah, me too" Ayumi tossed her hand aside.

Mari watched as the room folded before speaking out. "Uhh, I actually had 1 pair. I was just clarifying the rules...But now that I have your attention can we play a different game"

Kaori took off her poker hat and wiped the sweat from her brow. "Like what"

"I dont know. We can think of something"

Yuuko left the room for a moment and came back with an envelope. "Dont worry, I have a list for such occasions!"

From inside the envelope she produced an old tattered piece of paper with well over a 100 different things to do when under the influence. Beside each was a mark that meant absolutely nothing to anyone else execpt the 1 generation.

Yuuko ummed and erred her way down the list.

"Dack-a-thon!!" Yasuda exclaimed, pointing to activity number 132 on the list.

"What on earth is that?"

Mari retrieved the smaller, newer envelope from the next room labeled - dack-a-thon- and stood on the coffee table to read it allowed.

"All participants in a dackathon must make two teams. The two teams must collect a hot pair of pants from a member of each generation, a sub group, soloist and a complete stranger.
A referee is selected to stay at the finish line and wait for the return of these teams and their booty..."

Ayumi interjected. "It doesnt really say booty, does it?"

"Shhh!!"

Mari cleared her throat and continued reading. "Participants must not be caught by authorities and each team member must arrive with their group at the finish line for an offical end to the game to be called" Mari lowered the paper. "Ok so any questions?"

Ayumi raised her hand. "What defines hot pants?"

"It means they have to be removed from the body and taken to be concidered 'hot'...anymore questions? Good!"

"Let's get teams underway" Yuuko shook up a box containing two different coloured sticks and handed it around. "So...who's on who's team?"

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« Reply #532 on: October 14, 2006, 02:17:56 PM »
Oooh, Dack-A-Thon sounds like a very interesting game :] Looking forward to that and the UDD~! <3

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« Reply #533 on: October 14, 2006, 04:03:40 PM »
Miki was caught in a state of half conciousness. Dipping in and out of sleep, dreaming for a moment and rolling over sleepily the next. The covers lay twisted at her feet but the air streaming down from the heater kept her warm. She stayed like this for what seemed like hours.

In the dead of night, it started to rain. Lightly at first, the droplets growing bigger and louder as time drew on. The sound of the water hitting against the glass eventually woke Miki up. She stretched out her feet, curling her toes and let out a refreshed "aahhh!". Checking the alarm clock she had another 8 hours of sleep left. Nothing made her happier.

She fluffed up her pillow before rolling over and wrapping her arms around the man sleeping next to her.

Wait.

Rewind.

Miki sat up and tried to remember the last moments before arriving home at her room and whether or not alcohol was involved. As far as she could recall, she was completely sober. So...who the hell was this guy?

She pulled the covers down a little further to get a better look.

"Well atleast he's cute"

The mystery man scrunched up his nose and grumbled. A hand shooting up from under the covers and pulling Miki into a hug. Miki gave an uncharacteristic squeal and wiggled away.

The stranger grumbled, opening his eyes a crack. "Huh, what's up?"

Miki leant back and turned the beside light on. "Aya?"

"Whaaaaaat?" She covered her eyes from the harsh light.

"Are..Are those PV props?"

"Could be.." Aya replied sleepily, peeling off the side burns and sticking them on Miki's face like eyebrows.

Miki gave a frustrated sigh as ripped the props off, including the goatie still on Aya's chin, and stuck them to the wall.

"Arent you taping a CM or something tomorrow"

Aya rolled over allowing Miki to cuddle her from behind.

"Yeah, I can still find my way from here..oh and Miki?"

"What?"

"Did you change your number?"

"Uhh...no"

"Mm, ok...DoCoMo must be having problems again"

Miki let her hand casually slid up Aya's shirt and over her breast. "Yeah probably"

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« Reply #534 on: October 14, 2006, 04:17:09 PM »
Ayamiki is looooooove XD You nearly gave me a heart attack saying it was a guy o_o... Aya's so mischevious XD I can so totatlly picture Miki with thick eyebrows! Mame would've been jealous :]

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« Reply #535 on: October 14, 2006, 04:37:12 PM »
-Untold Doki Doki-
UDD: Target Yossui


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"Everyone look here" Kei adjusts the focus.

I would look but my eyes are caught else where. Im looking at her again and Im almost too focused on stealing glances at her that I completely forget cameras are still rolling and Kei is still talking.

I smile back at the camera Kei is holding and try to focus on that but my eyes keep wanting to look back down at her. My eyes continue to wander.

Yuuko turns in time to see me staring. She winks at me and sides up next to me. Hooking me around the shoulders and planting a kiss on my cheek.

My stomach does a flip and I cant believe she is doing this. It even takes Kei by surprise. She lowers her camera for a moment and I feel all eyes on me. I start to sweat.

Im glad when Mari steps in to defuse the situation by latching on to my side, the only thing she can reach, while Yuuko moves back out of sight.

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« Reply #536 on: October 14, 2006, 04:46:40 PM »
:]~!

GO ON <3

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« Reply #537 on: October 14, 2006, 04:52:16 PM »
Write in the Perv competition and I'll write another UDD. :D

For all of you who dont know - there is a competition in the Perv fiction section. Go check it out and give it a go. Any perv is good perv XD

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« Reply #538 on: October 14, 2006, 06:05:07 PM »
God, you can't imagine how glad I am that Doki Doki is back, but what the hell happened with ReinaMaki??

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« Reply #539 on: October 14, 2006, 06:09:43 PM »
I really love this story

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