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« Reply #680 on: January 09, 2007, 08:45:48 AM »
Isnt it jsut strange? It really made me turn laugh...
Is that what I think it is?! Does she have it in other bikini shots? I think I have seen one or two but this is the worst one :D

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« Reply #681 on: January 10, 2007, 02:59:45 AM »
waiting... =^_^=
I needed to put al least four letters... ¬¬'

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« Reply #682 on: January 10, 2007, 08:59:59 AM »
Hmmm 123 was kinda short. Can we expect more? Like in the very near future *repeatedly clicks refresh on the page* :p
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« Reply #683 on: January 11, 2007, 06:52:22 AM »
Sorry to trick you but I havent updated. I actually need your help and I'm willing to pay in Doki Doki Chapters for it...

MR MOONLIGHT INSTRUMENTAL

Im having a shit of a time getting it so Im posted my request here.

PLEAES HELP ME!! *sigh* I...have a singing thing coming up and I chose this but I havent been able to get the instrumental...dont laugh (*^_^*)

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« Reply #684 on: January 11, 2007, 07:00:55 AM »
« Last Edit: January 11, 2007, 07:14:15 AM by Anghellic1 »

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« Reply #685 on: January 11, 2007, 05:00:09 PM »
Wow...that was really fast! Ok so I'll get my focus onto this thread ASAP!!

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« Reply #686 on: January 11, 2007, 06:19:56 PM »
Yossui stood in awe in front of the most beautiful Christmas tree she had seen this season. Its branches were perfectly formed and it gave off a nice pine fragrance that brought on all that nostalgic Christmas feeling. And to top the perfection, it was also the perfect height for the living room.

The only thing was this tree was firmly planted in the shopping centre sidewalk. Its sudden absence would be noticed.

"Got an axe?" Yuuko asked, putting her beer to the side for the moment.

"Yep!" Goto immediately produced an axe. The two other girls exchanged worried looks to which Maki just rolled her eyes. "I found it in the back of the land rover...thought it might come in handy seeing as we are looking for a Christmas tree - stop looking at me like that!"

Yuuko nodded slowly, picking up her beer again. "Oooook, well. I’m going to bring the car around and I'll leave you to hack away at this beauty" She pointed to the tree in reference. "Yossui, you coming?"

Yoshizawa looked from Goto with the axe to Nakazawa with the car keys. Hmmm.

"It's a tough call but I'll think I'll stay here just in case"

Yuuko shrugged and disappeared off into the car park leaving Yossui with an axe wielding drunk.

"So...do you know how to use that" The soberest girl asked.

"Can't be that hard"

Goto loosened her shoulders up and held the potential weapon like a baseball bat. And with one powerful swish she brought the head down into the dirt.

"My bad"

Yossui shivered with fear imagining the axe landing in her shin instead. There was another swish followed by a lop. Goto grunted, pulling the axe back out of the wood and giving it another swing. Lop. Grunt. Lop. Lop. Crack. Thud.

"Can I help you ladies?"

The patrolling police officer shone his torch on the guilty Musume. His hand ready to reach for his gun just in case.

"We were...um." Goto thought long and hard but her repertoire of excuses that could explain why she was in a shopping mall with an axe was rather limited.

"Put your weapon down and hands up...I'm going to have to ask you to come with -"

"Have you cut the damn tree down yet?" Yuuko conveniently reappeared, walking straight past the officer and yanking on the top of the tree.

"Ahem"

Yuuko looked at the girls as if they had made the noise. She raised an eyebrow. "What are you doing? Put your arms down, you look stupid"

"Ahem!"

The policeman tapped the oldest Musume with his baton, getting her to turn around. And much to the surprise of the girls, she smiled.

"Jun! Long time no see!"

"Nakazawa? Wow, I almost didn’t recognise you"

The catch up session went on merrily while those excluded from the conversation waited and wondered when and under what circumstances these two had met.

"Ok well time is money. We'll be off...Say Hi to your wife for me"

"Can do" The officer tipped his hat and proceeded on his patrol whistling what vaguely sounded like Furusato.

Yuuko sighed happily, turning her attention back to girls. "Come on! Get your ass moving, we got a tree to decorate"


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Thanks to my Angel, Anghellic for giving my quick fix~

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« Reply #687 on: January 11, 2007, 06:48:28 PM »
Miki's eye lids felt fat and heavy. They stuck themselves shut every time she blinked and almost refused to open again. Eventually she gave up the fight and blindly made her way into her room before crashing onto her bed.

"Hey" A voice all too close spoke.

Miki flew straight off the bed and onto the floor yet her eyes still refused to open. Once her heart stopping pumping beating loudly in her ears she heard Aya's familiar giggles.

"Are you ok?"

Miki felt her way onto the bed again, absorbing its softness. "Yeh, Im fine. You just scared the life out of me. What are you doing home so early?"

Miki heard Aya's footsteps moving from the dressing table to the window and the sound of the shades being drawn. "I cancelled my plans. I felt like hanging out with you instead"

A warm feeling grew in Miki's heart, showing itself on her lips. She opened her eyes to look back at Aya who hand climbed on the bed beside her. They shared a brief silence before Miki finally realised something was quite out of place.

"Why are you wearing a school uniform?"

Happy that attention was finally drawn to it, Aya sprung off the bed to parade her new movie costume.

"It's for Sukeban. Apparently when the movies over I get to keep it"

Miki laughed out loud. "And what are you going to do with the school uniform? Huh?"

"I can think of a few things..."

It took a while for Miki's sleepy mind to click onto the same track as her friend. But before she could comment Aya had started talking again.

"I got something else today I want you to try on for me"

"Huh Where?"

"I left it in the bathroom. Put it on and come show me"

The smug look Aya held on her face gave Miki reason to believe what ever this thing to try on was, was going to be pink and/or frilly. Or something equally disgusting. With mild curiosity and no real expectations, Miki went to the bathroom and opened up the shopping bag that contained her gift.

"Holy crap"


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Dun dun daaaahhh....
Well, I hope you are enjoying it so far. Dont worry, it will all be over shortly and you can hate me for the rest of your lives about how crappy and weird the ending is....Muahaha!

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« Reply #688 on: January 11, 2007, 06:57:40 PM »
These two chaps were freaking funny XD
wonder what miki has to wear:ONhiakhiakhiak:

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« Reply #689 on: January 11, 2007, 07:16:22 PM »
Nakazawa and a cop? Aya as a school girl? Miki and the mysterious bag? So many question, so few answers.

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« Reply #690 on: January 11, 2007, 11:14:07 PM »
It was nothing Mikan :MKsniffle:

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« Reply #691 on: January 12, 2007, 04:53:34 AM »
Rgh! I have to travel to the heart of the city for a martial arts lesson today but unfortunately I was also called in from work so that means I'll be out until late! Without a doubt I'll be tired and there is a chance I'll crash completely.

What this means for you: Updates will be either tomorrow or late tonight if your lucky

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« Reply #692 on: January 12, 2007, 05:15:13 AM »
:heart: Wow....:heart:
That is about all I can say about this story.  I may be jumping on this bandwagon late but I can't seem to get enough of Doki Doki!! Rock on Mikan! I'm without a doubt up for joining in on the Mikan worshipping :bow: :bow: :bow:
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« Reply #693 on: January 12, 2007, 08:05:38 AM »
First comment here. Took me two days to read this story through. Teenage angst and goofball humor are two things I can't resist, and you gave me both in one fell swoop. Thanks a lot! it Brightened a pretty dull week

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« Reply #694 on: January 12, 2007, 09:00:20 AM »
Tree scene had to be a classic. Yuko just walking around like she owns the place and ordering for a tree to be chopped. But everything turned out in a way that just proves she owns the world! Ho ho ho :ROTFLMAO:

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« Reply #695 on: January 12, 2007, 12:41:22 PM »
iacus your comment warmed my heart. Really though, two days? I want to have it written in hours how long it takes because I think I have read it in about 2 hours. Then again, I wrote it so you tend to skip bits without knowing it

Jenmoshka Thanks for joining the Church of Mikan. Its always good to have new faces and Im glad that you made a comment here

*shakes fist at lurkers* ....I KNOW YOUR THERE!!!

Everyone thanks for your support! I hope I can satisfy you but right now Im going to sleep...oh gosh how I miss sleep...

To Admin if you are listening: Is there any way I can have another poll on this thread?

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« Reply #696 on: January 12, 2007, 07:53:42 PM »
*shrieks* I missed the Doki Doki Anniversary again! Wahh!!

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« Reply #697 on: January 13, 2007, 09:25:23 AM »
Uh... I think it was about four or five hours. I wasn't really counting though.

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« Reply #698 on: January 14, 2007, 01:21:52 AM »
Ahaha~ One thing FINALLY I expected. Yuko actually knowing the entire Japan police force XDXDXD
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« Reply #699 on: January 14, 2007, 10:45:41 PM »
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Yuuko looked at the girls as if they had made the noise. She raised an eyebrow. "What are you doing? Put your arms down, you look stupid"


I almost fell out of my chair I was laughing so damn hard!  :ROTFLMAO:

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