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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 2 31/10/14)
« Reply #40 on: October 31, 2014, 05:11:47 PM »
LOOOL.... What a very fast update... I wish that I could do that too....

Unfortunately, I'm currently busy at my college life..

But in any case, I give my best to update..

I just need a motivation.. *looking at Kumiyuri picture* :wub: :wub: :wub:

Waiting for your next update...  :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 2 31/10/14)
« Reply #41 on: October 31, 2014, 09:18:15 PM »
Churi's finally awake isn't she! :w00t:
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Gomen, I like teasing people ;)
I don’t know if I have feelings for her but Akane already confessed… So I don't have a chance...
You and your teasing XD
Its clearly Milky :nervous
I'm sure she will find someone that she will love :D, she can't betray Akane :smhid
Update soon :twothumbs

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 2 31/10/14)
« Reply #42 on: November 01, 2014, 02:45:06 AM »
I'm just like.
This is the first AKB fanfiction I've read in about half a year now.
And I am just like
OOOORAAAAAH FURUKAWA!!! in the beginning
And then..
FURUYANAGI FOR THE WIN!!!! GO! GO!!!!
And then...
OTL my babies... No, Furukawa!!!!
And now I'm like...
OMG.... what will happen next...
Dun...dun... dun...
Furuyanagi is epicness.

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 2 31/10/14)
« Reply #43 on: November 01, 2014, 11:33:35 AM »
@Shinoki, Hi :3 Long time no see~ I've been addicted to these two lately anyway XD FuruYanagi is epicness. End of. XD
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Miyuki’s POV

I hope she’s alright with this...

I don’t know if I have feelings for her but Akane already confessed…

I was so busy with paperwork and business proposals that I didn’t know my phone rung beside me. It was the hospital…

“Ohayo. Is this Watanabe Miyuki speaking?”

“Hai.”

“We require you to come here as soon as possible, it’s about Takayanagi Akane-san.”

“Eh?! I’ll be there as soon as I can.”

If it’s about Akane-chan, it’s going to be either good or bad… I rushed to the hospital in hope that she isn’t dead or anything….

Sometimes I worry for her, you know. She does things people won’t normally do. Like, for instance, talk to her bird, Papi-tan.

But things like this worry me a lot. Especially if she’s in a coma…

“Furukawa-san, what’s happened to her?”

“Ah, Miyuki-chan… Good news, this is most certainly a miracle...”

“Eh?”

“She’s woken up.”

“Honto ni?!”

“Un, you can come inside and see her if you wish.”

“Hai, arigatou.”

I walked inside to see her, seemingly fine.

“M-Milky...”

“Akane!!!” I had to go hug her, but resisted myself because of her injury.

“H-How’s A-Airi?” she said, stuttering between coughing and talking the same time.

I flinched at the name. Why does this hurt so much? 

I know Akane and Airi are dating but…. Something in my mind tells me to fight for her…

“She’s doing fine.”

“Oh, okay.”

We were talking about various things for a while, before a loud thud emitted throughout the room. Furukawa-chan appeared.

“Airi-chan!”

“A-Airin...”

“Churi...Churi, you’re alive!”

Well, I hope they have a happy life together…

“A-Airin..Are you okay?”

“Yes, but it felt so empty without you.”

“I-I’ll see you guys around then.”

I left the room, leaving them to their own devices. I wondered, why is it whenever someone does something to the one they love, they always end up hurt?
« Last Edit: November 01, 2014, 12:50:12 PM by MaYukiIsLife »

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 3 1/11/14)
« Reply #44 on: November 01, 2014, 12:48:26 PM »
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I left the room leaving them to their own devices. I wondered, why is it whenever someone does something to the one they love, they always end up hurt?

hm...this is deep...

glad that churi's finally awake~! :yossi:

saa...! whats gonna happen now?! :w00t:


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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 3 1/11/14)
« Reply #45 on: November 01, 2014, 12:52:25 PM »
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I left the room leaving them to their own devices. I wondered, why is it whenever someone does something to the one they love, they always end up hurt?

hm...this is deep...

glad that churi's finally awake~! :yossi:

saa...! whats gonna happen now?! :w00t:

I'm the master of deep words XD Idk why but yeah, non-intentional deepness.. Yep, FuruYanagi have reunited, but what about Milky ;)

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 3 1/11/14)
« Reply #46 on: November 01, 2014, 01:27:05 PM »
but what about Milky ;)
She can have Nana :lol:

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 3 1/11/14)
« Reply #47 on: November 01, 2014, 01:31:56 PM »
but what about Milky ;)
She can have Nana :lol:

I want myself some Furuyanabe love triangle loving XD



When Churi crys, I cry too.....  :cry:

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 3 1/11/14)
« Reply #48 on: November 01, 2014, 03:13:53 PM »
Somehow, I feel there's a Miyukiyanagi here...  XD XD XD

FURUYANAGI ROCKS~!!!!  :lol: :lol: :lol:

Waiting for your next update..  :) :) :)
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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 3 1/11/14)
« Reply #49 on: November 01, 2014, 03:15:19 PM »
Somehow, I feel there's a Miyukiyanagi here...  XD XD XD

FURUYANAGI ROCKS~!!!!  :lol: :lol: :lol:

Waiting for your next update..  :) :) :)

Nah bro, AirinMilky cuz later on their gonna have dinner together XD But yeah, Milky's trying to manipulate them both :3 Either that or it's Takayanabe~ I like the sound of that better~

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 3 1/11/14)
« Reply #50 on: November 01, 2014, 05:55:31 PM »
Every day, I kept visiting Churi. I had to. She needed me, and I did her. I took the time to talk to
her, before going to work.

 But today was different, I had to basically go on a date with Miyuki and I can feel that it was going to be tense and awkward.

“Moment of truth...” I knocked on her office door, waiting for her to come out…

Suddenly she was in front of me, in a beautiful dress. But she had a weird request for me…

“Can you crossdress?”

“EH?! Why?!”

“Maybe because I want you to. Plus when you visit Akane, wouldn’t she be surprised?”

“You sure?”

“C’mon~ DANSO! DANSO! DANSO!”

“A-Alright then… If you want, you can come to my house, I need to get dressed..”

“Yay~ I’m gonna get to see Furukawa’s house~~~”

“Honestly, it’s nothing special...”

Before I knew it, I instantaneously held her hand which made her blush slightly.

I took her to my car and suddenly I felt more tension than before.

“Eto… Airi-chan?”

“Hai?”

“If.. If you were to marry someone who would it be? Answer me honestly.”

“Eto… Someone with your personality but with Churi’s kindness...”

“Wait… Who?”

“Akane, it’s the nickname I gave her...”

It was so tense, I couldn’t even concentrate on what she was saying Before I knew it, we arrived. Her eyes were just wide with awe and shock.

“EH?! Sugoi, you said it wasn’t anything special, it’s a flipping mansion!”

“Eh, I just didn’t want to show off… Come with me then, Miyuki-san...”

“Drop the honorifics, call me Miyuki or better yet, call me Milky.”

“Hai, Milky...”

My heart… It’s beating more than I could ever imagine…
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Btw, for reference, I have pics for Airin's "suit" and her house too ^_^ Idk which house suits her the most but I will discuss this with Ruka :3 Plus her danso will be the same as the one in Ebi-Calcio, but with a suit instead :3 Her danso in the first episode was so strong too bad she didn't get anyone DX

P.S.S! This will hopefully (?) be a 5 parter~

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 4 1/11/14)
« Reply #51 on: November 01, 2014, 06:26:48 PM »
Danso! Danso! :onioncheer:
I wonder what Churi would say, if she found out that her girlfriend went on a date with her best friend?  :sweat:
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“Maybe because I want you to. Plus when you visit Akane, wouldn’t she be surprised?”
Makes sense, plus Airin doing Danso is amazing :mon star:
Eh, is Airin starting to have feelings for Milky? Love triangle going on here  :hehehe:
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Her danso in the first episode was so strong too bad she didn't get anyone DX
I know right, she looked so cool I wish she could have gotten someone  :mon determined:

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 4 1/11/14)
« Reply #52 on: November 01, 2014, 07:30:56 PM »


Just for reference, this is what Airin's house looks like :heart:

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 4 1/11/14)
« Reply #53 on: November 01, 2014, 08:08:44 PM »
“You ready?”

“Un...”

Milky was jumping up and down happily as I slowly opened Akane’s hospital room door.

“Airi?”

“Yo, Akane.” I spoke in a cool, manly voice.

“A-Airin, what are you wearing?”

“It was some stuff that I had in my house. What do ya think?”

“Uh...” I could tell she was speechless. Honestly, even I didn’t know what to think. I swear I haven’t worn this in at least 3 years.

“Yea… figures. Milky made me wear this.”

“Hey! I asked you to crossdress, I didn’t pick anything!”

“Uh, yes, you did. I was like: “Which one do you want me to wear?”, you picked the first suit you could see!”

“Mou~ Airin~”  Oh, man. My heart started beating 10 times as fast as before…

“Airin,” I turned and saw Akane smiling, “Honestly, you should do this more often.”

“EH?! Umm… Sure...”

My god… From now on, I swear this is going to be one heck of a rollercoaster ride…

Wait… Why is Akane’s nose bleeding… What?!

“Churi?!”

“D-Don’t worry, this happens often.”

“Oh...” I happened to murmur that at the right time.. My father came up to me and tapped my shoulder.

“Ah, Takayanagi-chan.”

“F-Furukawa-sensei?!”

So, now she knows….

“I heard you’re going to dinner with Miyuki-chan.”

“O-Otou-san?!”

“W-Wait… Airin? So this is why you were crossdressing? So you could get Miyuki’s attention?!”

“N-No! I swear!”

Miyuki… This is all your fault...

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 5 1/11/14)
« Reply #54 on: November 01, 2014, 08:40:08 PM »
No wonder why Milky was speechless, Airin's house is amazing :mon lol:
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I swear I haven’t worn this in at least 3 years.
Eh, so Airin's been doing it in the past before? :dunno:
Uhh, Churi is starting to misunderstand.  :depressed:
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“Mou~ Airin~”  Oh, man. My heart started beating 10 times as fast as before…
Exactly who will Airin choose in the end? :mon exhaust:
How will she explain things to Churi about having dinner with Miyuki. :mon whimper:
Thanks for the chapter, update soon :mon bye:

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 5 1/11/14)
« Reply #55 on: November 02, 2014, 02:05:13 AM »
The house....
show-off :lol:

Yeah... Lets Danso :yossi:
Wonder what playing in Churi mind that make her nosebleed :mon lol:

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“W-Wait… Airin? So this is why you were crossdressing? So you could get Miyuki’s attention?!”

“N-No! I swear!”
and here comes the drama

How will she explain things to Churi about having dinner with Miyuki. :mon whimper:
Yup.. and can she explain to Churi or Churi don't want to listen to Airi...

waiting for next

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 5 1/11/14)
« Reply #56 on: November 02, 2014, 02:53:59 AM »
man, her house is big!

no, churi, dont misunderstand~! :(

ps: are you gonna put a pic of airi's danso..? wanna see~ :inlove:

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 5 1/11/14)
« Reply #57 on: November 02, 2014, 03:31:03 AM »
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL  :lol: :lol: :lol:

Waiting for your next update....  XD XD XD
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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 5 1/11/14)
« Reply #58 on: November 02, 2014, 11:32:02 AM »
ps: are you gonna put a pic of airi's danso..? wanna see~ :inlove:



Innocently cute and handsome :inlove: That made me sound gay for a girl who crossdressed DX

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 5 1/11/14)
« Reply #59 on: November 02, 2014, 11:38:51 AM »
ps: are you gonna put a pic of airi's danso..? wanna see~ :inlove:



Innocently cute and handsome :inlove: That made me sound gay for a girl who crossdressed DX

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