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Author Topic: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 9 8/11/14)  (Read 22227 times)

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 4 29/10/14)
« Reply #20 on: October 29, 2014, 11:00:19 PM »
“Churi! Please… Please wake up...”

I slowly opened my eyes and saw Airi, sitting near a hospital bed, crying. I tried calling to her, but she didn’t hear me.

I reached out, tried to touch her… but my hand went right through her chest.

That’s when I saw… the person in the hospital bed, connected to all sorts of life support machines, was… Was me….

“Churi...” her tears flowed down her face, as if it were a waterfall. I couldn’t stand seeing her in pain… Physically and mentally…

Through those two years, I’ve realised my love for her. Now, it might take longer for me to love her as much as I can…

Meanwhile….

Airi’s POV

Akane….

“Airi-chan,” Someone called my name from outside, “It seems you have a deep connection with one of my students.”

“Otou-san...”

“It’s been a while.”

“Un..”

“Takayanagi-chan has suffered major injuries, which could cost her, her life.”

“Eh?”

“She may not recover. There is a small chance of her regaining consciousness.”

“No… It can’t be..!”

“I’m sorry, Airi,” he tried to comfort me, which didn’t work, “She was one of the most hardworking students I’ve had in at least 20 years.”

The phone on the bedside table rung. I picked it up and saw the Caller ID.

“Rena...”

I answered it, instantly hearing her worried voice.

“Airi-chan?”

“Ohayo, Rena-chan.”

“Are you okay? Were you caught in the earthquake?”

“Yeah, kinda...”

“EH?! You alright?”

“Yeah, I’m just in crutches. My girlfriend suffered the major injuries...”

“Wait? You have a girlfriend? Why are you in crutches?”

“Her name’s Takayanagi Akane and I’m in crutches because I have a bad leg injury.”

“I’m coming to you. What room?”

“348.”

She then hung up and after an hour, she came and hugged me tight.

“Dear Lord, I was so worried about you!”

“Gomen ne, Rena...”

She then turned to look at pale girl in the bed, showing sympathy for me.

“So this is your girlfriend~”

“Un…”

“She must’ve been really brave. To save you the way she did.”

Then we heard a knock on the door. We saw two girls come in. Both in suits.

“Uh, does Akane-chan know you two?” A cute girl asked us.

“Me? No, but my friend Airi here does!”

“E-Eh? Uh, y-yeah…. She confessed to me earlier on...”

“EH?! Akane never told us--”

“Wait… You know when you were preparing for your case whilst I was preparing for that big conference?”

“Oh, naruhodo~ So you’re that Furukawa Airi, she’s been telling us about~”

“Hai, yoroshiku onegaishimasu.”

“Ah~ Watanabe Miyuki desu yoroshiku, nee?” The taller, cuter girl introduced herself.

“Yamada Nana desu~”

“Akane-chan must’ve wanted you to stay alive for her to do that...”

There’s no point in living anymore,  when you’re not around….

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 5 29/10/14)
« Reply #21 on: October 29, 2014, 11:11:50 PM »
CHURI!!!!!!!! :on blackhole:

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There’s no point in living anymore,  when you’re not around….
wargh.. don't lose hope Airin.... :pleeease:

hope she not do something stupod like suicide :on freeze:

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 4 29/10/14)
« Reply #22 on: October 29, 2014, 11:12:26 PM »
Chapter 4 -
Eh! What did Churi get hit by?! :shock:
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Something bad waiting to happen when we least expect it...
Something bad did just happen :on cloudeye:. Did she get hit by a falling object?  :dunno:
Churi can't lose Airin or the other way around, they both need each other :depressed:. Just when they got together something happens to the lovers :farofflook:

Chapter 5 -
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There’s no point in living anymore,  when you’re not around….
Airin, you better not go suicidal again :on freeze:
Furuyanagi better not give up on their love for each other :mon whimper:
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“Airi-chan,” Someone called my name from outside, “It seems you have a deep connection with one of my students.”
Oh, seems like Churi's teacher was Airin's father.  :mon sweat:
Rena got to meet Churi, she would have enjoyed talking to her. :hee:
Milky and Nana visited and got to meet Airin :mon fyeah:
Thanks for the update :on drink:

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 5 29/10/14)
« Reply #23 on: October 29, 2014, 11:24:42 PM »
Gomen, minna. Since I'm a writer known for my angst.... Yeah this happened..
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@River1721 She got hit by a falling object, yes~


Churi can't lose Airin or the other way around, they both need each other :depressed:. Just when they got together something happens to the lovers

Airin, you better not go suicidal again :on freeze:

Furuyanagi better not give up on their love for each other :mon whimper:

Oh, seems like Churi's teacher was Airin's father.  :mon sweat:

We'll see~   :cry: Me cried when writing dis....
Yeah as for how that happened.... You'll see later on~
Yes, Rena would've loved to talk to Churi :heart:
Milky and Nana would want to see Churi if she was in the state she was in~

@MYJR Hopefully she doesn't :(

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 5 29/10/14)
« Reply #24 on: October 30, 2014, 12:41:40 PM »
whatever it is i just hope airi wont go all suicidal again bcoz of churi! :cry:

i want to read but too scared to read the next one, ah~ :panic:

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 5 29/10/14)
« Reply #25 on: October 30, 2014, 07:47:57 PM »
Luckily this chapter doesn't have anything bad happening, but... A surprise~
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It was 3 months since Akane was hurt….

I happened to get two jobs, one in animation and another in Miyuki’s firm.

I tried my best to not think about those events but….In the back of my mind, I feel as traumatised as ever.

It was all my fault. If it wasn’t for me, she wouldn’t be in this state…

I..I just have to live through the pains of life.

Today was just another normal day, though it wasn’t boring, it was just tedious.

“Airi-chan!”

“H-Hai, Miyuki-san?”

“I was wondering if you were busy with anything~”

“Oh, I am but I will gladly take some time to help-” Miyuki cut me off to say something that kinda made me surprised.

“Let’s just go to dinner, you and me~”

“Eh?! Eto, I have to finish three storyboards for an animation company...”

“Oh, okay. I’m sorry for asking.”

“N-No, Miyuki-san. I-It’s fine, how about tomorrow at… 7pm?”

“Umm… Alright then. You pick me up, yeah?”

“S-Sure...”

I had a lot of things on my mind. But I wasn’t going to say them out loud. I lied to Miyuki. I just can’t do anything today….

“M-Miyuki-san? May I please go home?”

“Yeah, since you’re busy~”

“Hai, arigatou, Miyuki-san.”

I started walking home, remembering those few months of me seeing her. From her kind words, to her sacrificing an arm and a leg for me...

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 1 30/10/14)
« Reply #26 on: October 30, 2014, 08:56:08 PM »
*relief* glad nothing happen to airi :deco:

whats the surprise, cant wait!! :twothumbs

ps, i wonder why airin's having 2 jobs. is it to occupy her mind or finding money for churi's hospital bill..?

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 1 30/10/14)
« Reply #27 on: October 30, 2014, 09:09:07 PM »
*relief* glad nothing happen to airi :deco:

whats the surprise, cant wait!! :twothumbs

ps, i wonder why airin's having 2 jobs. is it to occupy her mind or finding money for churi's hospital bill..?

Well, it's kinda already been stated in the chapter (MilkyAirin dinner date (?))

I won't answer the last question, I'll let you figure it out :heart:

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 1 30/10/14)
« Reply #28 on: October 30, 2014, 09:16:14 PM »
Well, it's kinda already been stated in the chapter (MilkyAirin dinner date (?))
that's only a gist of it~ :P

I won't answer the last question, I'll let you figure it out :heart:

the usual teaser.. :D maa, waiting for the next one~

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 1 30/10/14)
« Reply #29 on: October 30, 2014, 09:44:58 PM »
Eh, does Milky have feelings for Airin?! :mon star:
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I happened to get two jobs, one in animation and another in Miyuki’s firm.
Airin's definitely meant to go to animation :mon determined:
No wonder why Miyuki and Airin seem to be in good terms with each other.  :mon fu:
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I started walking home, remembering those few months of me seeing her. From her kind words, to her sacrificing an arm and a leg for me...
Is Airin talking about Churi's situation here? Has Churi became disabled? :dunno:
Thanks for the update, can't wait for what happens next :tama-heart:

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 1 30/10/14)
« Reply #30 on: October 30, 2014, 10:14:55 PM »
Eh, does Milky have feelings for Airin?! :mon star:
Airin's definitely meant to go to animation :mon determined:
No wonder why Miyuki and Airin seem to be in good terms with each other.  :mon fu:
Is Airin talking about Churi's situation here? Has Churi became disabled? :dunno:
Thanks for the update, can't wait for what happens next :tama-heart:

Well, I kinda used an old fashioned phrase there  :nervous and not really~
Eh~ Maybe Milky does have a few unrequited feels for the otaku :3
But this teaser will show you kinda what happens~
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As I was walking, I felt a faint presence behind me.. I don’t know who or what it was but it seemed strange.. I heard the faint sound of wings flapping in the wind…

A bird?

“I love birds. They’re so carefree...”

“Churi...”

I looked behind me to spot a yellow bird….

Wait… I saw a tag on it’s left foot and as I went closer.. I saw something written on a small collar.

Papi-tan belongs to Takayanagi Akane.

Eh? She owns a bird?

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 1 30/10/14)
« Reply #31 on: October 30, 2014, 11:08:37 PM »

Papi-tan!!!! wohoo......

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 1 30/10/14)
« Reply #32 on: October 30, 2014, 11:13:42 PM »

Papi-tan!!!! wohoo......

Well then...



I come back at you with this XD



And this XD

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 1 30/10/14)
« Reply #33 on: October 30, 2014, 11:26:58 PM »
FURUYANAGI~!!! YAHOO~!!!!! *runs everywhere*

Waiting for your next update..  :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 1 30/10/14)
« Reply #34 on: October 30, 2014, 11:29:25 PM »
FURUYANAGI~!!! YAHOO~!!!!! *runs everywhere*

Waiting for your next update..  :lol: :lol: :lol:

Arigatou, Minamiyuki-san :heart: I'll be waiting for the next update of Need for Speed too~ How about PM me when you're about to update I'll update at the same time XD Hopefully~

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 1 30/10/14)
« Reply #35 on: October 31, 2014, 12:11:06 AM »
You and your teasers :mon fyeah:
Papi-tan!! :mon XD: Will Airin bring Papi-tan home or back to its owner? :dunno:

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 1 30/10/14)
« Reply #36 on: October 31, 2014, 06:45:00 AM »
....ah~ cant wait for the next one! :cathappy:

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 1 30/10/14)
« Reply #37 on: October 31, 2014, 02:22:49 PM »
As I was walking, I felt a faint presence behind me.. I don’t know who or what it was but it seemed strange.. I heard the faint sound of wings flapping in the wind…

A bird?

“I love birds. They’re so carefree...”

“Churi...”

I looked behind me to spot a yellow bird….

Wait… I saw a tag on it’s left foot and as I went closer.. I saw something written on a small collar.

Papi-tan belongs to Takayanagi Akane.

Eh? She owns a bird?

I honestly should bring it back to it’s owner… But I don’t want to get reminded…. Of that day…

Why, why does life have to be cruel?!

“Airi… Gomen.”



Her voice… Why can I hear her voice inside my head?!

“Why can’t I forget about her..?” I murmured before I picked up the bird and turned the other way to go to the hospital.

I just can’t leave her when she needs all the help she can get.... Not when she helped me…

I heard a buzzing sound coming from my pocket. I took out my phone and realised the caller ID was from Miyuki-san. It was a text...

Airi-chan!
Come to the hospital, ASAP!
There’s a certain someone who wants to see you~
P.S You're still coming to dinner tomorrow~
- Milky

Eh? I-It can’t be… Otou-san said there’s a small chance of her waking up….
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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 2 31/10/14)
« Reply #38 on: October 31, 2014, 04:51:05 PM »
...why does airi hears voice in her head?

someone wants to meet her..is it churi~??! :inlove:

waiting for the next one~! :deco:

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Re: Manazashi, Sayonara (FuruYanagi Fanfic Chapter 6 pt 2 31/10/14)
« Reply #39 on: October 31, 2014, 04:57:07 PM »
Gomen, I like teasing people ;)

I don’t know if I have feelings for her but Akane already confessed… So I don't have a chance...

I think you can already guess who it is~

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