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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , Renayuki Chapter 6
« Reply #40 on: April 14, 2015, 03:05:59 PM »
thank you for all your positive comment :D
i'm really happy all of you like this
and this is the next chap
i hope you can enjoy this
and seems like you forget someone here :wub:

chapter 6


"Otou-san, Mayu has come back"

"Mayu???" frozen , "Mayu has come back? My beloved daughter has come back , what should i do now? should i look happy ? or the opposite? What should i do?"

"Otou-san , hurry come here"

"Okay" go to meet them

"Mayu.."

"Otou-san , i'm back"

"Welcome back Mayu" warm smile

"Arigatou" cold face

"Hello auntie, uncle" jurina greet happily

"You must be jurina right? long time no see, please come in and make this your house" her mom said

"Thank you aunt"

"Mayu, show more happy face, no one will know what you are thinking if you put that face on" jurina whisper

"Seriously?? This is my original face!!"

"Really? then put some smile" Mayu put her smile , weird smile

"Okay, forget it, your original one is better"

"You are making fun of me"

"Sorry"

Okay , the family sit together and Jurina just looking at them wondering who is going to talk first , but no one talk.

"Etoo , just make it simple all , we came back to ask for help from you but Mayu is just to shy to even talk with you. The End."

"Jurina!!"

"What?"

"Baka!!!!"

Mayu mom chuckling , "Our little Mayu is being shy? that's really rare to see"

"Momm!! stop it , i'm not a child anymore" , jurina show a warm smile to mayu

"What help did you want to ask?" Mayu father start talking with a serious face

Mayu also put a serious face, "This is about Yuki, Kashiwagi Yuki"

"They are really father and daughter , they even have the same serious face" jurina said out loud and mayu mom chuckling again.

"Jurina!!" blush

"Okay, i will stop"

"You are a good mood changer jurina-chan"

"Hehe , i just don't really like an over serious talk"

"Okay. So what's wrong with this Kashiwagi yuki?"

"Someone want to kill her."

"And then?"

"I want you to help me beat the culprit , they may be the same person that beat Jurina in the past."

"If that for Jurina it's okay , but why should i help this kashiwagi?"

"Cause i beg you to help me" sadness on her eyes and mayu mother realise why.

"Otou-san, let's just help her , this is your what your daughter want to do"

"Um.. , Okay then." go to his room

"Dad!"

"What is it?"

"No, nothing."

"Mayu, Jurina , have you eaten yet?"

"Nope" jurina answer

"I will go make something for both of you , go rest first"

"haik."

"Mayu, don't you think this is rrally normal?"

"Well, this is what it supposed to be"

"But , i think it will be more ecxiting"

"Sorry , but your imagination won't come true"

"Ehhh~~....." pouting

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"Yuki, do you feel better?"

"Um... , actually i didn't feel anything anymore, the doctor really did their job"

"Good to hear"

"But, when can i go out from hospital?"

"I'm getting really bored at here"

"I'm not sure , do you want something?"

"I want manga and game and some snack"

with notebook on her hand and glasses put on , "Manga, Game, Snack, other?"

"Maybe only that for now"

"Okay Mam, i will go buy it"

"okay"

"Wait!! , what did you mean for now?"

chuckling, "Just joking Rena , that's all i need at here"

"Oh, okay" go out

"Hmm.. , i wonder why Mayu-kun didn't come to see me..." sitting like a statue , "Wait!! why Mayu? Something might went wrong on my head." go to sleep

30 minutes later

"I can't sleep...................., what should i do now? i can't stop thinking about him!"

walking around her room with a serious face

"I knew it! Must because he has the same face with that girl , yes, must be that!" grin

"Hi Yuki" someone go in seeing yuki have a weird face put on and weird pose

"Anoo.., Yuki?"

"Eh? H-haik?" embrassed

chuckling , "What are you doing earlier?"

"i just do some practice"

"Practice? what practice?"

just smiling , "etoo.. , why did you come here?" try to change the topic

"Oh, i just come to see you and want to give you this"

"Thank you, what is this?"

"mp3 player , i have fill it with akb song, you like them right?"

"Really? thank very much"

"No problem. So, are you okay?"

"You can see it pretty much, i'm really okay"

"Good"

"Yuki, i'm back"

"Oh , Rena! where's my game?"

"Here , oh , hi Tetsu"

"Hi Rena."

"Yuki, i will go now , take care"

"Okay, thank you for visiting me"

tetsu go out from the room

"Yuki.."

"Yes?" playing her game

"When will you break up with him?"

no answer

"Yuki?"

"Nooo.....!!!!!!!!"

"What happen?" shocked

"I lost at level 50" depressed

"Seriously? did you hear to what i ask?"

"No, what is it?"

"Forget it, i have something to tell you, but not now"

"Um, okay?"

silent...

"Rena, why did Mayu-kun and Juri-kun didn't come?"

"They? why?"

"No, i just wondering, they're officially our friend right?"

"Yes, Lucky! Mayu send me email asking about you"

"Reallly?? what did he say?"

"Are you okay or not"

"Just that?"

"Yes"

"I see.."

"Why are you looking that down?, You miss them that much?"

"N-no"

"Souka.."

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"Japan! i miss this place so much. Where is he? he must take me to home , i don't know where did he live"

"Nii-san , i'm here"

"I think you didn't want come to pick me up"

"I'm not that sadist right? my brother come here , so i should see him"

"Wait, You don't know?"

"Know what?"

"About why i came here"

"You are just going to go here for awhile right?"

"No"

"Then?"

"I'm moving to japan"

"Eh?"confuses "Ehhhhhhhh?????" shocked

"Why are you being that surprised? Dad didn't tell you anything?"

"Shit, Lend me your phone"

"Here"

"Dad! , I don't want to live with this shit" hurry end the phone call

"W-what?I haven't say anything" trying to call back

"Why the hell should i live with you here?" almost throw the phone

"You shitty brat , i'm your big brother , don't go yelling like that to me" chop his head

"Ouch! you just bigger some minutes than me!" chop back

"Awww!! you still call me Nii-san" chop back again

"Arggghhh!! stop this , you want to sleep or not?"

"Of course i want"

"Then don't do something i don't like, you are going to stay at my place" smirk

"Tch!."

"Good boy" patting his head

"Stop it" slap his hand away

"Miyazawa Sae -kun , please act good at here"smirking

"shit! I hate you dad , i really hate you" depressed

at their home

"Did someone call me earlier?" drinking wine

"Wut? Dad!!??" both

"Yo"

"When did you come here?"

"Dunno , maybe 10 minutes ago."

"What ? How?" sae really surprised

"I u-use Rocket"

"B-but you don't have this house key right?"

"Tetsu, i'm your dad"

"So , what?"

"S-so that"

"Do you want something to eat?"try to change the topic

Both his son give him glare , and confused look too

"W-what?"

"Weird!" both said

"Hey, don't go around saying your father weird"

"We are not going around i'm sure"

"Haha, right , Nii-san is true" laughing

"Since when did you both working together like this? it's rare and a good sight"

"We are not!" both looking away

"Come on, don't be shy"

He just given a glare by both his son

"Okay , fine! Do whatever you like, i'm going to search that girl"

"What? who?" sae ask

"Who ? of course she"

"i know she , so who is she?"

"But you said you know she, don't ask anymore"

"wait , i don't know. Who?"

"Your little brother might knew it"

"wut? who?"

"i don't have a choice than. She is Kashiwagi Yuki right?"

"How can you know her?" sae put a serious face

"You interested with this?" evil smirk

"Don't dare to lay a finger on her! or i will kill you even if you are my dad!"

"Oh... i'm scared~" act like he is really scared

"I'm not joking dad"

"I'm not joking either" serious

"I will not let anything bad happen to yuki too , remember that" Tetsu said and then both go to their room

"Zannen ... , i have start my move sons."



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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , Renayuki Chapter 6
« Reply #41 on: April 14, 2015, 04:06:42 PM »
Ehhhhhh amaaaazing. Wait what tetsu is bad and his father is badest lol.





Hehehehe yukirin weird pose,  cant wait for more update sooon

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , Renayuki Chapter 6
« Reply #42 on: April 15, 2015, 05:07:03 AM »
Tetsu and his dad are bad guys what about Sae is he on good side or bad side?

Rena knows everything about Mayu and Yuki now and Rena is the second queen?!?

Wow so many amazing things going on

Update soon

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , Renayuki Chapter 7
« Reply #43 on: May 15, 2015, 09:50:53 AM »
Finally i can updatee...
something stuck up on my brain and i can't write
i have to wash my brain later :lol:

@wmatsui fanfic: Maybe Tetsu and sae is on good side

@kirozoro: thanks for reading, here's the update

Here the chapter 7 hope you enjoy it

"What's with Dad? what did he want to do with Yuki?"

"Don't know either, i just hope he won't do anything bad to Yuki"

"What did you mean by that?"

"What?"

"Why dad want to do something bad to Yuki?"

"T-that.."

"Hurry tell me!"

'If i tell nii-san , Dad will know it right? Then He will hurry kill Yuki? No , i won't let it happen , i can't tell nii-san about this.'

"I don't know"

"Tch , if he really lay a finger on her , i will kill him!"

"You can't do that"

"Why?"

"C-cause He is our Dad" actually not because that

"Hell I don't care."

"Anyway, i have a news ,  wanna know?"

"What is it?"

"Good or bad one first?"

"good"

"I have a girlfriend"

"Wow , theres someone who like you? incredible , and the bad ones?"

"She is Yuki"

"Oh , Yuki , good for you"

..........

"Wait , What????? You and Yuki is a-"

"That's right"

"How can you..." lost energy

"You have LOSE"

"It's not even a game , i just come here and i have lost?"

"Right!"

"Won't say any congratulation for me?"

"Congrats , but how ?"

"How ? i confess and she accept , simple"

"How long have you go out with her?"

"6 months"

"What??? t-that means.."

"Mean what?"

"You and Her _ K-kissu"

"Nope"straight face

"Eh? no ? 6 months already?"

"Yup"

laugh , "Hahahaha , Dummbbb , you haven't kiss her ?"

"Everytime i tried always failed!"

"That's mean she's not for you , and that's mean i still have a hope"

"You have so much rival , you will lose"

"My rival only you , i won't lose"

"Only me? You will know when you go to school tomorrow"

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"So , i can go out already?"

"Yup , and you can go to school tomorrow"

"Yes!!!"

"And , don't eat too much ice cream"

"Haik! finally i can go out from this place"

"It's not like you have been for a long time" smiling
"I feel like i have been here for a month , i will pack my thing"

"Don't need to, i have do it"

"really? thank you, and lets go home"

"Okay"

at home

"So , why there's no one at home?"

"Your mom have something to do , so she can't go home till next week"

"What? next week?That long? where did she go to?"

"I don't know"

"Ehhh........"

"Right , and i will go home now , see you"

"Wait wait waitt"

"What?"

"Stay with me"puppy eyes

"What? why?"

"I don't like being alone at here"

"My house is just next to you"

"Pleaseee........"

"Can't help with it" staying

"Yatta!"

Night~

"And, why did you sleep with me?"

"Cause, i don't like to sleep alone?"

"But you usually sleep alone"

"A-anyway , let's just sleep", she says that , but she is the one who didn't sleep and only looking to Rena sleeping face who is actually not sleeping.

"Till when did you want to staring at my face?" rena said still closing her eyes

"I-i am not" move her head to the other side , closing her eyes and smiling. Suddenly she feel a hand hugging her.

"Rena? Fall asleep already" look to her face again , "So cute.., Wait, what do you think about Yuki? come to your sense! she is your bestfriend, and you like someone already, don't think like that! wake up Yuki!!" think to herself

"Maybe i'm just too sleepy"

The morning~

"Ohayou Yu-"starled

"Ohayou Rena"

"What happen to you? you didn't sleep?"

"I can't sleep"

"Why?"

"D-dunno"

"O kay , then hurry."

"Hurry for what?"

"For school of course, i will make breakfast, so hurry take a bath and don't forget your book"

"How about you?"

"I can do it faster than you think , so hurry"

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"Nii-san , WAKE UP!!!!"

"5 minutes"

"You have say it more than 10 times , hurry wake up , i don't want to be late at school"

"What time is it?" say lazily

"6.50"

"Whatt????why don't you wake me earlier? i just have 10 minutes to go to school"

"I have try to wake you , but you didn't want to , so i will go first . If i wait you i will get late. bye"

"That boy!!" angrily prepare himself and wondering where did his father gone to.

"So they want to leave this house alone? I don't care anymore" running at full speed to school. And luckily he arrive without late.

"God really save me for my first day.Tetsuu!!"he saw tetsu

"Oh ,,niisan you didn't get late, amazing"

"You , that , the house, theres no one. Dad is not at home and i don't have the key to lock it" really tired

"Don't worry, i will call dad later"

"I'm really tired , you should wake me even if it kills you"

"I don't want to kill myself for waking you up"

"Oi Tetsu" someone call him

"Hi Ken"

"Ehh?? There is two tetsu, whats wrong with my eyes?"

"Nothing wrong Ken , he is my twin brother"

"You have a twin?"shocked

"Yup , Miyazawa Sae"

"Yo , Sae."

"Nice to meet you"

"So , how can i tell which one is tetsu or sae?"

"Easy , You can't saw it?" , scanning Sae from top to bottom

"Nope"

"God. Can't you tell from how we dressing up?" looking to Sae

"Pfftt , Okay . Now i know how" , sae got confused

"Anyway Sae , your brother is really lucky"

"Why?"

"He got a beautifull girlfriend, well her friend is more beautifull thought"

"Did you mean Rena?"

"Yup. How can you know?"

"T-tetsu tell me that once"

"Really? okay , see you around Sae"

"Is Yuki really that famous at school?"

"Yes , but she didn't realise it. Cause she always together with Rena and think only Rena is famous there."

"Rena have a boyfriend?"

"No , but , theres someone she like. That's what i hear"

"Oi , That's them , i will go and say hello to them"

"Wait!"

"What?"

"See that"

Juri and Mayu appear from nowhere

"Yo! Rena, Yuki"

"Morning Juri"

"So, are you okay now Yuki?"

"I'm perfectly okay"

"Did you hear that Mayu? she says she is PERFECTly Okay"

"I can hear it, you don't have to say it again"

"You keep worrying about her , i'm just helping you" chuckled

"Jurii!!"

"You really being that worried?" Yuki ask

"Well , yeah , um.."

"Arigatou gozaimasu" bowing

"Y-you don't have to bowing , We are friend right?". Yuki give a warm smile to mayu.

"Jurina" mayu whispering

"What?"

"I'm going to have a nosebleed"

"Why?"

"Her smile is killing me"

"Hang in there"

"Okay"

*******

"So , who is that two handsome boys?"

"Also just come to this school"

"And?"

"I don't know why but they are really close with Yuki and Rena"

"And?"

"They are our rival"

"Even thought you are her boyfriend?"

"She don't even like me a bit!"

"Then why she want to be your girlfriend?"

"She is just too kind , thats all the reason"

"But... , the rival is just too big , i can't beat them"

"I don't know what to say anymore, let's go to class"

*******

"Mayu-kun , are you okay?"

"Not really, I-i mean i'm okay"

"I think we should go to class now"

"I will pass , Bye"Juri said and rushing to go but Mayu can catch her

"You are not going anywhere , you should go to class"

"But , i don't want to". Mayu give juri a fake smile

"Okay, i will go"

Rena walk behind them and thinking about what Yuko said to her. She just can't look at them and wondering, wondering if they are really a girl or not and decide not to ask anything.

"Rena, did Yuko said something to you?" jurina ask

"Hm? N-nothing." Jurina realise Rena have been acting a little weird

"Sou..."

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'I wonder why i keep feeling something weird inside my body...But i dont want to go to hospital anymore, it's boring to sit at there everytime. Should i say this to Rena? Maybe no. Better dont think too much , probably just some side effect from the doctor medicine. Yupp!! probably because that.'

"Kashiwagi Yuki.. , What did you want to do after this? can you escape from me?" evil smirk

After school

"Yuki , let's go home"

"H-haik"

"Yuki? are you okay? did you feel pain again?"worried

"N-no, i'm really okay"

"Sou... , but tell me if you feel pain again , okay?"

"Okay"

A week has past and Yuki still feel the pain even bigger, she want to tell Rena about this but they have to prepare for their test so she didn't want to make anyone worry about her. Sae still hasn't talk to Yuki and Tetsu think about broke up with yuki but he hasn't do it till now cause some reason.

sigh a little "What should i do from now on? Dad have a bad plan , big brother have a problem with himself and me!, i dunno what to do right now"

"Why should i fall for a girl who i want to play with? aren't that mean i have gone crazy?" he continue to thinking

"I should tell everything to nii-san afterall" planning to go search for sae but he suddenly hear his father talking to someone

....
"Have you do what i told you to?"

"I have done it sir, and Yuki must have feel really hurt inside her body"

"Good job Rena , when she go to the hospital , kidnap her and bring her to me. Understand?"

"Yes"

...
"What the-- , Rena? What is she doing here? don't say that.. , i have to hurry told niisan"

"Sir, seems like your son here our conversation"

"Don't worry about them, i can do anything to them. Just do your job and act like usuall when you meet my son"

"Hai" bow and go

"Shit , where did that stupid brother gone to? just right when i realy need him , he disappear"

"Tetsu, what are doing? you look pale"

"D-dad"

"I'm just searching for nii-san"

"Your brother? since when did both of you being that close?"

"I d-dunno , i have to go now dad"

"Tetsu, forget about what you her and see if you want to live in peace. I don't have any mercy even if you are my son"

"Why did you do all of this?"

"This is all for both of my son sake" grinning

"What have you done to Rena?"

"Rena? I didn't do anything to her" smirk , tetsu give him a glare

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"I wonder how can i kidnap her when her family and friend is there?"

grin , "I can do it somehow,don't have to think that much"

"Rena!!"

"What?"

"What did you want to do with Yuki? You are her bestfriend right? why did you want to do this?"

"What are you talking about? i dont have a bestfriend. Aren't you on your dad side?"

"No!I want to protect Yuki,i'm her boyfriend"

"Now you act like one, Bye" go away

"Oh, Rena, Hi!" , rena didn't reply him

"Tetsu, whats wrong with her?"

"Where did you gone to?"

"Just walking"

"Why did you disappear at the bad time only? right when i need you!"

"Eh?why?what happen?"

"Dont know!" walk away

"O-oi , Tetsu!"

"Dont follow me , go away!"

"Whats with him? Is he on his period now?"

"I'M A BOY!"

"He heard it? He has a sharp ear"chuckle and he continue telling himself, "I shouldn't let Tetsu know about what Dad want to do to Yuki"serious eyes

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'Where did Rena gone to?Today is holiday, There's no way she will go to somewhere without telling me. And Mom is not here too , i'm alone~'

^Door Bell ringing^

"Who is that?" go to open the door

When she open the door, she only saw an old man, actually she can't saw his face, his face is full of his own hair x.x

"Ano... , Who are you searching for?"

"Yuki-channnn.."

"Eh?"confused

"You have being a grown up girl now , how old are you?"

"I'm 16"

"How long have i leave this house , i really miss you and your Mom"

"Eh? Ehhhhhhh??????????" shocked, "Dad? its you? What happen to you dad?"

Chuckled , "Just a mask"put off his mask

"Dadd!!" hug him

hug back "My daughter have become this big huh"

"I really miss you Dad, where did you gone to?"

"I did say for work right?"

"But you left really long , Mom and Rena really miss you too"

"Ohh , Rena miss me too?Is she here now?"

"I dont know where she gone to"pouting

"Souka...I have bring a bag of present for all of you though"

"Really? What did you bought for us?"

"Wait till your Mom and Rena got back" Yuki start crying like a baby

"What's wrong Yuki?" really worried

"Don't leave us again Dad" said between her cry

smile, "Dont worry, Dad wont leave you anymore. Stop crying, that ruin your beautifull Face." Yuki nodding

"Seem like my daughter have a boyfriend, right?"

"How can you know?"

"I'm your Dad"

"Well... , his name is Miyazawa Tetsu"

"M-miyazawa?" kinda shocked

"Yes, What's wrong?"

"N-nothing , he is a good boy right?"

"Yes , but..."

"But?"

"But i dont like him , i like someone else"

"Ehh? Who?" excited

"I dont know her name"

"Her? a girll??"

"Y-yes, and i feel the same for Rena too"not looking to her father

"I see..., are you sure its love?"

"I don't know, i just start feeling weird when Rena around, my heart beat really fast like when i saw the other girl that i like"

"Ohhh.... My daughter is a player" grin

"D-dad, i'm not! Thats why i say this to dad, i dont know what to do. But, is it okay for me to like a girl?"

"Follow your Heart Yuki, they will tell you when the times come, and hurry break up with Miyazawa, you are just breaking his heart if you stay like this"

"Okay"

They wait for Rena and Yuki's Mom to got home till late night

"Yuki, What if Rena become a bad person?"

"What did you mean Dad?"

"i'm back"

Yuki hurry aproach them"Mom!Rena!, hurry come here" both confused

"Whats wrong Yuki?" her mom ask

"Dad has come back"

"Darling?"

"Good evening Mrs.Kashiwagi, I'm home" her father make a cool voice which only get a laugh from his wife

"Welcome back" warm smile

"Rena, where did you gone to?" whispering

"i'm just walking and buy some stuff"

"You use all day just for that?" , rena didn't reply her

"Uncle, welcome back"

"Ohh , Rena, you have become really beautifull, Do you have a boyfriend?"

"Dadd!!"

"Gomen gomen"

"Give us the present now" Yuki said excited

"What time is it? tomorrow i will give it, both of you hurry go to sleep. You still have a school" act strict

"I dun want to" pouting

"Let's go Yuki,be a good girl" Rena pat her head and Yuki follow what Rena told her to do

"Oyasumi" both rena and yuki said and go to their room

"Do you know Yuki like someone?"

"Of course"

"Do you ever think that Rena is a bad person"

"What are you talking about? i never think like that, she is a good girl"

"Actually.."

He say everything about what he done outside and what he found. Yuki father and mother is a Profesor and her father were doing some research about the magic world and also with her mother too but her mother do the research at home and they are really shocked with what they have found.
At first, all researchers didn't believe what they want to do and told them its just something a kid will believe. but they still keep searching about magic world for years and they can discover something. But they didn't tell anyone about what they found cause its really shocking them too.

"I see... i never thought about that before, i wonder will Yuki get shocked if we tell her everything"

"The worst is, i'm scared that she will hate what we founded" both of them look really down

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"Rena.."

"Hm?"

"Dad really have come back"

"Yes." sitting at bed while playing her phone

"Aren't you being too cold to me? whats wrong?" sad face

smile, "I'm not, i just a little tired, go to sleep kay?"

"Un.", suddenly rena kiss her cheek

"Have a sweet dream" , yuki reply her with a smile

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"Jurina, i think the enemy has start their move even before we become a magician"

"I see.. , then how can we fight them?"

"Thats why i ask my father to help"

"And why is both of you act really cold?"

"Thats how we used to do"

"Weird, why cant you talk like how you talk to your Mom?"

"I dont know" show a sad eyes

"So, have we know who is the enemy?"

"I'm still trying to figure it out, i think has a twin son around our age. Thats the only thing i know right now"

"How can you know his son instead himself?"

"I do some research, but his background didn't being mentioned even his name is unknown. Theres only have his photo and telling that he has twin sons and already divorce with his wife"

"Let me see his face, who knows i can remember something when he attack me"

Mayu open her laptop and trying to open back through her search history

"Weird, why is the page being deleted?"

"What? he know we were checking him"

"Yup and somehow i have a really bad feeling already"

"Rena and Yuki"

"This is really bad, we should hurry start our move" Mayu and Jurina can feel it, something really bad gonna happen soon






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« Reply #44 on: May 15, 2015, 01:06:08 PM »
  :cry: :(  :panic:  :banghead:    :bleed eyes: 


What is going in why did Rena trying to kill yuki??didn't she love her and she is her best friend.



please don't make something hurtful i hope you don't.


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« Reply #45 on: May 15, 2015, 09:37:26 PM »
OMG what is happen to Rena?!?

Why she doing this to Yuki???

Mayu and Jurina hurry up and help/rescudd them!!

Update soon

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , Renayuki Chapter 7
« Reply #46 on: May 18, 2015, 02:04:52 PM »
what miyazawa dad did to yuki? what he want?
seriously rena....why you did that to yuki? dont you love and care her? why you join the bad side? whats on your mind, rena?? :cry:
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« Reply #47 on: May 26, 2015, 07:39:00 PM »
Here i amm...
Rena?? I wonder too what's on her mind now.
Maybe she will tell us soon
Soonnnn.. , but not now XD
Enjoy this chap, if there's something weird, just leave any comments. Thank you~


Chapter 8


"Dad, do you know who is our enemy?" Mayu ask

"I have someone in mind"

"Who?"

"He is magician too, just like us. Miyazawa Kenta"

"Miyazawa?" both me and jurina shocked

"Yes, He have twin sons too,Miyazawa Sae and Miyazawa Tetsu"

"Whattt??" we got even more shocked

"How can you know its them?" Jurina ask in shocked face

"Every Magician know him and what he want to do. He want to kill Kashiwagi and drink her blood to become an immortal magician"

"Why Yuki?" Mayu said while holding back her anger

"She is the former Queen of the Magician world, but she died and being born again as kashiwagi Yuki"

"Dad,She is only the former Queen right? why they want to kill Yuki?"

"She still have the Queen blood, she even can use her power if she do some training"

"Please tell us everything you know, Dad"

The father still hesitating at first, but seeing how bad the condition have been, He tell Mayu and Jurina all the thing he know , about Yuki , about why Miyazawa Kenta want to kill her, everything! He really did tell everything.

"Dad, you really have to help Yuki, she mustn't die"

"Miyazawa is a strong opponent, i dont know if i can beat him or not"

"Please, this is you daughter last request, i won't ask anything from you, just please save Yuki, she mustn't die" Mayu look really hurt

'What kind of father that will let his daughter keep being in pain like this? After all the thing i have done to her, i must at least help her for this problem. But.., can i do it? i'm not strong enough to beat Miyazawa now.'

"Mayu, dad can't help much cause i'm not strong enough, Miyazawa have been really strong since the last time i fought him,but there's someone who can help us"

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'Why did Dad want us to search this person? What should i say to Jurina if she ask who is them? Should i just say they are the parents who make her become like this and then abandon her? No! absolutely no! This will really hurt herself'

"Mayu, is this the place?" jurina ask while looking around the house

"This is a big house" she continue

'God, can't you help me just this time? i don't know what to do anymore, i don't want to hurt Jurina, but i want to save Yuki, this is just too cruel'

"Mayu, should we call the person?"

"W-wait!"

"Why? we should hurry right?"

"Because..." i don't know what to say to her, but suddenly someone call Jurina

"Jurina? it's you right,Jurina?" a women around 40 years old with her teary eyes go out from the house, yeah, she is her Mom.

"Yes, you know me?"Jurina say

"This is me, your-" she want to say she is her Mom, but i cut her word

"Maam, can we talk?"

"Yes?" She let us in, i see her house is really big and theres a wide garden, there is a lot of flowers and there is a pet too,  both dog and cat. Jurina look really happy, she likes pet and she like to plant flower. But recently,  she didn't plant any, we are really busy.

"Mayu, don't you think this house is really amazing?"

"Y-yeah"

When we are in her house,  she let us sit and go to make some drink for us. I saw no one at here, not until he go out. Yup,  Jurina father and i see a girl next to him.

"Ju-rina? Jurina! its you right?" He say right after he saw us sitting here

"Yes? You know me?" Jurina say with confused face,  i know i can't cover it up anymore.

"What are you talking about? I'm your Father,don't you remember me?"

"Uncle, She had Amnesia" i said

"What? Amnesia? How?" He got really

"Someone attack us, and Jurina got a serious injury on her head,  they hit really hard on her head"

"Who did that?" He seems like he is going to angry,  but he hold it.

"We are not really sure yet, but Miyazawa Kenta is the suspect"

"Miyazawa?"He look really angry

"Dad, calm down" the girl say

the girl beside him just call him dad? Jurina have a sister? But she look around our age, that time she didn't have any sibling, is she Jurina little sister? But they didn't look alike. Wait! Have i ever seen her before?

"Juri--" i try to ask Jurina if she remember her or not,  but i saw her crying

"Dad,  why did you leave me? Why you didn't raise me as your daughter
 Why? Do you know my life is really hard without you and mom?" She said while crying

This is the first time i see her crying after a long time,  she cried really hard, she let all out, all the pain she feel all this time.

"Jurina..." i want to cry too, but i will just make it worse

"Jurina, i'm really sorry, but if we didn't do that, they will kill you"

"Uncle,  who want to kill Jurina?"i ask

"Miyazawa group" aunty come out and serve us the drink

"Jurina.. We love you, but we have no choice" she hug Jurina

"Mom.." hug back

Jurina didn't cry anymore, she smile from her heart, she is happy to be able to meet her family.

"Dad didn't get any hug?"

When Jurina just want to hug her Dad, suddenly she stop. And looking to the girl that keep silent from the start and now just looking at us with a blank stare.

"Dad, who is she?" Jurina ask

"She is your little sister. Yuria, say hello to your big sister"

"Hello nee-san"

"Mayu, have we meet her before?" Jurina whisper to me

"That's what i want to ask, she look really familiar, but i can't remember anything"

"Same with me, i can't remember anything. Weird."

"How old are you Yuria?" Jurina ask her

"i am 16"

"Eh?" both i and Jurina confused, she is in the same age with us

"Kizaki Yuria desu, nice to meet you"

"Kizaki? not Matsui?" i got more confused

"Dad, we are in the same age, how can she become my little sister? and her name is not Matsui?"

"We adopt her years ago" her Mom said

"Ah... i see..."

Like this, we chat for hours but not about Miyazawa or other about magic world, we talk about how family should do, and i can see Jurina is really happy. But.. this Yuria girl, i don't know why, i can feel something weird from her, from how she look at Jurina, it's really different but i can't tell.

"Mayu, how about you and your Family?" suddenly aunt ask me

"H-hm? We look really fine"

"Mom, she lied" Jurina say

"What? w-why should i lie?" i ask her but she ignore me and tell all thing that has going on with me to aunt, about how i and my father talk to each other.

"Mayu, actually your Father really love you, we know Him really well, he do that to save you too" uncle did say this, but i just can't agree, afterall my father have make us become a magician and we don't want that

"He didn't change you to a magician, in fact he try to change you to a normal human together with Jurina"

"What?" i can't understand what he say at all

"Both of you were born as a magician with a strong blood, no one can change that, this is your fate, we try all we can, but we only able to stop your blood generate till you are 17"

"Dad, what did you mean by blood generate?" Jurina ask

"Blood generate can only happen to strong magician like both of you, but you have to be a magician that fight with people from you born till now"

"Fight? from the time we born?" both me and Jurina really can't get it

"Cause you are both a strong magician, you have to train your body and you have to fight. When you just born you can fight a little animal like dog or cat, if you didn't do that your blood will protesting and make you suffer from pain"

We saw this as a terror, this is really terrible, we have to fight or kill since we are still a baby, this is just too crazy.

"We know this will happen, so we do all the experiment to help both of you, we know you hate this, but your blood will generate again when you are 17" i saw uncle crying, he hate this too.

"We are really sorry that we can't help our daughter, we are powerless" even aunt is crying too, i want to go home to apologise to my parents.

"Dad, what you do is enough, leave the rest for us, we won't killing and we will become a great magician" Jurina didn't want to worry her parent

"Uncle, aunt, i have to go home now. Jurina, i will come here and discuss everything tomorrow" i hurry run at with all i can to go home.

I'm crying all the way, thinking that i have hate my parents all this time while they didn't do something bad at all, i really have hurt them , i'm really a bad daughter, i want to say sorry to them. Sorry for what i have done all this time.

"Mom,Dad, i'm really sorry" when i say this suddenly it's raining hard, i still try to run at my full speed, the rain keep falling and make all my clothes wet. It's really cold but i still running till when i arrive, i open the door, both my mom and dad welcome me.

"Mayu, you will get cold,  hurry take a shower,  mom will give you a hot tea later"

"Mom,Dad uncle has tell me all" i say with a low voice, i didn't have any energy left.

"I'm really sorry for always hating you, i always think that i am like this cause what you done, i'm really sorry" i start to cry again.

"It's okay Mayu, this is just a misunderstanding,  we know that,  dont have to blame yourself" Mom and Dad give me a warm gaze.

"Now, you should hurry take a shower before you get sick,  okay?" Mom said

"Un.." nodding

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The next day

"Mom, Dad, i feel not really well, can i stay home for today?" Yuki look really pale

"What happen? Did you feel something again?" Her Mom ask

"No, i just feel not really well" Yuki said with a low voice

"I see, it's okay, but we will bring you to doctor later" her mom continue

"Hai.." Yuki go back to her room to rest

'I wonder why Rena leave really early, did she has something to do at school? Why she didn't tell me anything? She don't even talk much lately. She act really cold to me,  I hope she didn't have any problem' Yuki keep thinking till she fall asleep.

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.School.

"Let's see who is absent today" the teacher start calling their name one by one

"Juri?" No answer

"Juri, Mayu, Rena, and Yuki, where did four of them gone to?" Ask while looking at the absent book

"Sensei,They didn't come to school, we didn't saw one of them from morning" one of the student answer her

"Something must have went wrong" she murmur to herself and then go to the principal room

"Principal, four of them didn't come today" she said

"Rena, Yuki, Mayu, and Jurina?"

"Yes, but who is Jurina?" She ask

"She is Juri."

"Juri?  But Juri is a boy right?" Confused

"No, Mayu and Jurina is a girl, i will explain it to you later, now let's see what happen" he open his television and what he saw is what Rena, Mayu, Jurina and Yuki doing. He have a hidden camera everywhere just to stalk four of them and no one have realise that before, even the teacher don't know anything.

"P-principal, what are you doing?" She ask

"What? I am stalking my students right now,you may go now"

"H-hai"go out from the room

"Now, what did you want to do.. Rena?" The principal said to himself and smirking

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'I wonder what is Yuki doing right now, did she eat well? Did she rest well? I hope she is okay, and hope this bad feeling going to disappear soon' Mayu is one her way to Jurina house right now

'Why is the weather keep being really cold, come on i hate cold, anyway this is not winter yet' she continue to walk

'Finally i have arrive at Jurina house'

Jurina suddenly come out even before i go in,"Mayuu!! We should hurry go, Yuki is in danger!!"

"What?Yuki? What's wrong? What happen?" Mayu got really worried

"Save the explanation for later, we have hurry go to Yuki house. Drink this and think about Yuki house"

"What is this for?"

"Helping us to teleport, just hurry , don't ask too much" Jurina teleporting first leaving Mayu behind

"Okay, drink and think about Yuki house and--" she succesfully teleporting , but..

"Where am i?" Mayu said while checking where is she right now

"Welcome to my place Watanabe Mayu" someone with a heavy voice talk to her, but don't know where is that Person.

"Who are you? Where are you? Where is it?" Mayu said with her serious face

"I'm right behind you Watanabe-san" Mayu try to punch that person with her left arm ,but he move too fast and right now he is standing right in front of her.

"Who are you?" Glaring at him

"You have saw my photo once right? Even though it's blur" grinning

"Y-you.." Mayu give him a hard kick, he didn't dodge it at all but he looks like didn't feel anything too.

"W-what are you" Mayu feel scared, but she didn't show it.
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"Where is Mayu?" Jurina think to herself, She is at Yuki house right now, but she
saw no one. She check all the room, there's really no one. When she just think to go, she saw a paper on the kitchen table.

/Rena, we take Yuki to hospital near here, she didn't feel well/ written on that paper, they leave message for Rena.

"Where are you Rena? Why did you do this?" Jurina leave the paper and hurry go to the hospital. She has so much problem to think, all is mess up on her head.

"I hope Mayu is okay" Jurina said to herself.

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"Don't need to feel scared, if you just sit here quitely, i won't kill you. Just don't interfere my bussiness" he said

"How can i end up being here? I supposed to go to Yuki house, how can i being here?"

"I just messing your thought a little with my telepathy and change your thinking line"
He said.

"How can you do something like that?" Mayu ask again.

"I'm a magician too right? Why bother ask again? Also, don't bother try to get out from here, this is the dimension i creat by myself, you can't go out except i take you."

"You devil Man!! Just you see,  Jurina won't stay silent when she know this, just you wait!!!" Mayu said with angryly.

"Jurina? I'm not scared of her, do you know the reason why i hit her head and make her get an amnesia? It's to make her weak."

"What did you mean? So you are the one who attack us afterall!! Why did you do that?"

"Watanabe-san, both you and Matsui Jurina really don't know anything about magic world huh? How can you take the queen and second position? This is really nonsense. But don't worry, i will take that position from you soon."

"What do you mean we don't know anything? What thing that we don't know?"

"Why should i tell you? Just don't do something unnescessary, or i will kill all your friend." With that he gone

"Miyazawa!! Waitt!!!!" Mayu shout, but already too late, he has gone to the real world.

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"Where is her room..." Jurina is searching for Yuki room, she know the number but can't find it.

"Where is 16..." she murmur to herself

"Wait! Something is wrong, why is there two room with 19 number? Don't tell me.." She try to turning the nine and the luck is on her side, it can turn to six, which mean that is Yuki room.

She open the door slowly without any noise, she think it will disturbing Yuki and her parents.

"Excuse me.." Jurina said , "Yu-" Jurina got shocked

"Yuki? Where is she?" Jurina hurry go in and saw both Yuki parent is on the floor unconscious

"Uncle, Auntie, are you okay?" Jurina try to wake them but she can't, so she hurry call the nurse and doctor.

"What's wrong Jurina?" The doctor is Yuko

"Yuko-san, please hurry treat them, i have to search for Yuki now?"

"Wait, what's wrong?" Yuko ask

"It has start, and Mayu is seperated from me too, i have to hurry."

"I will search for Mayu" Yuko remove her cloak,  "Hurry call for another doctor, call kojima sensei, i have an emergency thing to do" said to one of the nurse, the nurse hurry do what Yuko said.

"Let's go Jurina" Yuko said.




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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , Renayuki Chapter 8 Updated
« Reply #48 on: May 26, 2015, 11:28:09 PM »
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And please update ASAP...xDD
« Last Edit: May 27, 2015, 02:49:33 AM by kuro_black29 »
Live in the land of mist..nahh just kidding..
Live in the land of Wmatsui and Mayuki...
World of fantasy..World of Lalaland~

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , Renayuki Chapter 8 Updated
« Reply #49 on: May 27, 2015, 06:15:54 AM »
wah! yuki is gone *panic* what will gonna happen to them now. can't wait 4 D next chapter.

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , Renayuki Chapter 8 Updated
« Reply #50 on: May 28, 2015, 12:44:07 AM »
 :P hehehehehe without my comment i don't think author will continue this fic xd so yeah i Should comment *giggle *

I'm sure that Rena have something in her mind yes im sure, hope jurina can save mayu,what if yuki become queen again xd.

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , Renayuki Chapter 8 Updated
« Reply #51 on: May 30, 2015, 04:07:11 AM »
The turn u made changed the atmosphere of the whole story. :-B
Great move author-san. ;-)
And the comedy scenes u made here n there catch my heart. LOL. <3 <3
Take ur time n update pliz..
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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , Renayuki Chapter 9
« Reply #52 on: June 06, 2015, 03:45:07 PM »
Minna~
Here i come with the next chap
Maybe in this chap will be a little boring
But i hope you still want to read it
I will make up on chap 10
So, here..



Chapter 9


"Where is this? White room? What place is this?" Calmly Sitting on a chair infront her

"Kashiwagi Yuki, Hi" a girl with black jacket and black jeans , also wearing a black hat.

"Eh? Who are you?" Yuki Confused

"You really want to know who am i?"

"Well, no, just tell me what place is this." Yuki said with innocent look.

"Seriously? Are you joking with me?" The girl said

"Why should i joking? I just want to know where is this place."

"Okay, this is your world."

"Eh??? Really?? I have a world? Sugoii.." Really excited

"I can't believe that you are the former queen of the magic world" the girl feel really depressed.

"You don't have to worry about anything Yuria. I have my own plan and i know everything. Just teach me how to use my power." Stand up from her chair with a serious look.

"Okay. Wait!!! You know everything???" Shocked

"Not actually everything, but Yuko have tell me some, so i'm good with that." Yuki said still with her serious face

"Yuko..!? When did she tell you? And why did you act innocent?"

"I wonder when..., i don't remember it. I act innocent cause i want to wait, wait for what will they do to me. I know you will bring me here too, so i'm really relaxed."

"You are really the former queen Yuki" Yuria show a grin

"Don't talk too much, this place and the earth have a different time right?"

"Yes, here a month mean a day in earth, you can learn how to use your power at here, but i'm not the one who gonna teach you. Rena will do it." Yuria said

"What? Rena?" She don't know anything related with Rena , Yuko didn't tell her anything about Rena.

"I have my own thing to do on earth"

"Oh yeah, help them, i will come back with my full power, but.. Rena? Where is she?" Still confused

"She will come later, she have a mission too you know?"

"From who?" Yuki ask

"From someone who always help us to protect the queen and second position" Yuria explain

"And who is that?"

"I don't know , i never meet that person. I will go now, have fun with your practice." Smirking and disappear in a second

"Weird.. Why is she smirking? But still... All this thing really shocking me, Mayu and Juri is a girls and they will take the position as the second and Queen. While i am the former queen.. But just wait a minute! Who is the former second? No one told me that before.
And Juri real name is Jurina? Matsui Jurina is the name that Rena have mention before right? But Jurina is not a boy.... I'm really confused....." Still waiting for Rena

"Where did Rena go to anyway? I don't see her since morning and my stomach still felt kinda hurt. Yuko-san should have give me more strong medicine." She added

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"Yuko-san, do you know where is Mayu right now?"

"If she missing when teleporting, there is only two option. She imagine the wrong place or someone use telepathy to interupt her mind" Yuko said

"Mayu probably will not imagine the wrong place, i'm sure it's because someone interupt her mind. And i'm quite sure it's Miyazawa. Can you search for Mayu? I have to search for Yuki now." Jurina said

"Where did you want to search her?" Yuko ask

"That- , I don't know too." Depressed

Yuko Let out a little sigh,"I know it, let's search for Mayu instead, Yuki is safe, i told someone to take her and teach her how to use her power. She is former queen right?"

"Ehh? Why didn't you tell me earlier? What about her parent?"

"I didn't tell you cause i forget to, i'm being too focus on Mayu. About her parent... I don't know who did that."

"I see.. , then where is Mayu?"

"Cause we are really sure that Miyazawa is the one who take her, i'm pretty sure too that Mayu is not in this world. My underlings said that she might be at another dimension now."

"Another dimension? You make me have a headache , i don't understand what you mean at all." Jurina look really confused

"You don't know dimension? Seriously? Is your Amnesia really that bad? You used to be the genius girl." Yuko said

"Talking about amnesia, when will i get back my memory?"

"Let's talk about it later. Let's go to my place first, we will check where is Mayu location right now."

"Will she be okay?" Worried

"Believe in her, she is someone who will act cool and cold all the time, she is 100% safe!"

"I don't know what's the connetion with her attitude." Confused

"Etoo.... Let's go" Yuko and Jurina go back to Yuko place or maybe i should say her quarters.

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Other doctor take care of Yuki parents. They look really fine but they just won't wake up. The doctor that take care of them is related with Yuko. She is Yuko right hand, she know everything about Yuko and what Yuko done, of course she is a magician too.

"Doctor, are they okay?" A girl ask

"They are okay, but who are you?"

"Jurina parent told me to look over uncle and auntie, i'm Yuria" (that's a lie.)

"Yuria-san, did Yuko told you to come her?" The doctor ask

"Eh? Why you know?"

"I'm Kojima Haruna"

"Kojima-san? Kojima..?" Try to remember , "Ah... Hai, Kojima-san, Yuko has told me about you before."

"Good. They are really okay, but seem like someone inject something to them and make them can't wake up."

"Yes, Yuko told me to say this to Kojima-san"

"What is it?"

"Code blank, if i'm not wrong."

"Code blank? I see... Then they will be okay, they will wake soon"

"Ahh.. Anyway, what is code blank mean?" Yuria ask

"That? You see, Yuko really like to send message with code like that to me. It mean she has done something before what the culprit do to Yuki parents" Kojima said

"Which mean?"

"She has predict all the thing that will happen till now, so don't worry, she has done her job"

"I see.., Kojima-san.. Why Yuko didn't be the queen or second? She is really strong thought."

"Cause only the one who born with different blood that will become the queen and second. Everyone that choosen can born with that, but not Yuko. She has the normal blood." Kojima added

"But she is really strong right?"

"You know what? Her power won't surpass the queen and second real power, she is the strongest among us with normal blood. But, not the one with different blood."

"I see.. She is kinda like a third?"

Shocked, "Ye-yeah, i will leave first, don't let your guard down, enemy will come anytime."

"Hai, Kojima-san."

Kojima leave the room, Yuria just sitting and looking to the window and wait for Yuki parents to wake up.
Actually the third position did exist. The magic world have a hidden rule, and that rule said that the Magic world will being leaded and protected by 7 protectors. That seven protectors is The Queen/King and 6 under that include second, third, fourth, fifth, sixth and seventh. All of them must have different blood. But, till now only Yuki, Rena, Jurina and Mayu that born with different blood. Jurina and Mayu born after some years The formers died, the magic world being controlled by Yuko for awhile. They won't take the protector position if Rena and Yuki still alive, Remembering they have been killed and being born again as half different blood. Yuki and Rena born as half different blood cause they are former Queen and second, it's their fate that they can't be a complete human. Jurina and Mayu will turn out to be the same with the former. Fate decide all.


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"So, Yuko-san , where is your house?" Jurina ask

"This is my place." Jurina saw nothing, she only see yard with green grass all place, not have any building.

"Did you mean your place is this wide yard?"

"Close your eyes for a second, don't open it till i tell to." Yuko said

"Hai~" Jurina do as what Yuko told. Yuko scatter some golden magic powder to the grass, she just add a little of the powder. Suddenly something appear, it's a really big Mansion. Yuko told Jurina to open her eyes, after she do , her mouth wide opened just in seconds. She really amazed with the gorgeous Mansion, she can see sport car, and a there's a lot of them with different colours. All she can say is 'Amazing'.

"Let's go in." Yuko said

"H-hai". They walk in , Jurina realise that the place is really quiet, but she is still in outside.

"Don't worry, this is my place, you can do anything you want" Yuko suddenly speak up

"Really? Anything? Then may i ride your car later?" Jurina say excited

"Sure, why not? But do it after all problems solved." Yuko strictly said

-Inside the mansion-

Jurina keep questioning why the mansion looks really quiet, she don't see much people at there, only some maid standing and welcome them. Suddenly 2 big man come and talking to Yuko, Jurina can't hear their conversation.

'Wait!!! Did i just see bodyguards? Is she a yakuza or what? But we are magician right? So why i see a bodyguards that look like Yakuza's?' Jurina confused, Yuko know what Jurina might thinking about and said

"I'm not a Yakuza, just a magician with a doctor job. Let's go." Yuko chuckled

"I'm confused" Jurina said

-somewhere inside the mansion

"Minna, let me introduce you our -going to be- new Queen of magic world"
' Yuko said as we arrive at this Amazing room. They have a high technology computer, they have a... Robot? What's with all the modern thing? Yuko-san sure is rich, with all this thing. But why there is so much workers and tables?? This is not an office right?'

All of the worker stand from their table just right after Yuko speak. "Welcome Matsui Jurina-sama" all of them greet and bowed to Jurina to show their gratitude(?). They sit back after the greeting. Jurina really spacing out with all the Amazing thing that Yuko have.

"Jurina, snap back won't you?" Yuko said

"H-hai" snap back

"Have you check where is Mayu right now?" Yuko said to the workers just like how a boss do.

"Yes, she is at other dimension just like what you said Yuko-sama." one of them reply while the other keep typing their computer fastly.

"Have you predict where ecxatly is the place? Tell me the coordination" Yuko said

"Yuko-sama, we can't write down the coordinate, the dimension creator lock and hide the coordination, and we can't break it. The creator put more than 20 walls, and we can't break the last one." Another one said

"This is bad." Yuko go to their table and try to break the wall password, she try for more than ten times, but she can't.

"This is really bad, did we have any clue for the password?" Yuko ask

"Yes. The clue is 'count THE ADDED NUMBERS'."

"What? Only that? How can we know the number then?" Yuko look stressed.

"Yuko-san, let me try.." Jurina said

"Jurina? Okay." Yuko let her try. Jurina fill the password with three numbers. And surprisingly, the password is correct, all of them got shocked, she can break it just in one try.

"How can you do it?" Yuko ask

"Easy, he said to count that three words , so i count each word and it is 3.5.7, Miyazawa is really stupid. He give too much hint." Jurina said

"Ah.. And we can't even realise it, we are the stupid one here." Yuko said

"Anyway, hurry see the coordination."Jurina said

Yuko and Jurina remembering the coordination so that they can teleport to the place. But they drink the different one. Not all the juices can teleport to a really far place, Yuko and Jurina drink the rare one, but Yuko have quite much of them. The juices that Jurina and Mayu drank earlier only on Medium power. Mayu can go there cause Medium one is enough to go there, but Yuko prefer to drink the rare one, for safety.

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"I wonder if Yuki and Jurina is safe or not." Mayu said while trying to search for way to go out from the dimension.

"There's no way you can get out from here." someone said to Mayu from far not showing her face.

"Who are you? Show yourself." Mayu say cautiously with her fighting position.

"Don't worry, i won't fight you , just stand at there and hear to what i want to say." The girl said as Mayu release her fighting pose.

"Fine, hurry talk." Mayu said

"You.., don't ever try to help Yuki."

"Why? What are you talking about? Why can't i help her?"

"You love Yuki right?"

Mayu shocked with the question "Who are you?"

"Just do what i said Mayu." The girl voice heard kinda sad

"Where is Yuki? Are you Miyazawa underling? What did you want to do with Yuki?"

"Yes, i'm.. Miyazawa underling." There's a little pause when she said it

"Where is she?" Mayu looks angry

"You, when you get out from here, come back with your full power and fight Miyazawa if you want to save Yuki. Come back here with Jurina and fight Him at your full power as a magician with different blood. But right now, you don't dare try to save Yuki." She said the last sentence with a serious voice

"Why i shouldn't help Yuki now?" Didn't get any reply from the girl

"Hey, answer me." Mayu said as she try to look at the girl. The girl plan to go now, but she step forward and show her face to Mayu. She gave a warm smile and gone. Mayu feel powerless, shocked and can't believe what she saw.

"We will come back with our Full power." Mayu said.

"Mayu!!!!"

"Hm? Jurina? This is her voice.. So i will go out from this place afterall, wait for me Yuki." Jurina and Yuko come and take Mayu back to the earth. Mayu didn't tell them what happen earlier. She decide to keep it for herself and tell them when  the right time come.







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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , Renayuki Chapter 9
« Reply #53 on: June 06, 2015, 04:06:07 PM »
Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~

can't wait for ur update author san~

yeahhh....go mayu..be stronger~..so the underling must be rena right~ :'(
Jurina, haha...u should try to be a hacker or something..lol/

Thanks for the update~
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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , Renayuki Chapter 9
« Reply #54 on: June 06, 2015, 09:12:05 PM »
So r they going to train?!?

Omg cant wait to see how r tgey going to get stronger and beat that guy

Update soon

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , Renayuki Chapter 10
« Reply #55 on: July 20, 2015, 10:26:12 AM »
Chapter 10

Sooooo, i don't know what i'm writing anymore T.T
Please just kill me *stabbed*die*



"So, why till now there is no one? How long have i been at here?" Yuki said with an annoyed tone, she is really bored at there alone, she is only there for some hours though.

"I almost forget About this, but why Rena gonna teach me? Did she know something about magic world? Don't say that... she is the former se-cond?"

"Okay, Yuki, you should relax yourself. Don't think about anything , just think about your power and what you want to do" Yuki said to herself.
She is trying to relax herself , but something come to her mind. Mayu face cross her mind and she just realise that Mayu might be the ice cream shop girl, the girl that she secretly like.

"They have the same face... Right Yuki?" Talking to herself ,

Yuki 2: "But she is really cold you know? She Didn't look like what we thought before."

"Even though she is really cold, but i still like her angelic smile. But why she act as a boy with Jurina?"

Yuki 3: "That's a questionable question."

"All of You didn't help me at all, just go away." Try to make her illusion gone

Yuki 2&3 : "Wh-what are you doing? We are part of you, don't make us disappear"

"Don't care, just gone from my sight." Pull away her illusion with her hand

Yuki2&3 : "*sigh* Just don't forget about your feeling for Rena too" both the illusion disappear

"Rena?? Both of you are just making it worse.." Depressed, she is not sure for her feeling too, she like both Mayu and Rena.
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"So, Rena, how have you been doing lately?"

"You see, now i'm going to beat Yuki and bring her to you. But i need some time"

"Why you need time? You can bring her here just in second right?"

"Let me ask you first, where is my parents?" Rena ask

"I keep them safe in my secret place, if you just bring Yuki here, i will give you your parents." Miyazawa said

"Okay, i need some time to beat her, i know Yuko must have do something to her. So i will beat her badly first and make her weak."

"I see, okay, but do it faster. You can go now"

"Hai, buy don't come there, i don't want anyone disturb me." Rena bow and go to Yuki place, she didn't use teleporting yet, she is walking really slowly and a smirk formed on her face before she do teleporting to Yuki place.

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"Yuko-san, Jurina, would you believe me just this one time?"

"For what?" Jurina ask to Mayu who is only thinking about how to get stronger right now

"Let's go save Yuki when we can use our full power."

"What? Why? But Yuki will be in danger." Jurina said

"Nothing will happen, just believe me this once."

"But-" Yuko cut her word

"Jurina, why don't you listen to her? I will help both of you to gain your full power. I promise" Yuko said

Jurina look to Mayu who is really look serious, she let a little sigh and decide to do what Mayu want ,"Okay, how you want to train us Yuko-san?"

"I don't know.." Said with innocent face, Mayu and Jurina shocked after hearing that.

Yuko let a little chuckle , "Just kidding,I have plan all thing. Follow me" Yuko make a sign to follow her

"Where did we have to go? This place is just a wide yard." Mayu ask

"Mayu, Yuko-san use magic to hide her place." Jurina say

"Right, close your eyes both of you" Yuko tell them to and did the same as Jurina come for the first time to there. The mansion appear right after

"You can open your eyes, let's go" Yuko said
 As Yuko walk inside, the other two just standing there shocked and staring at the mansion. Yuko realise they are not following her.

"Urgh, we don't have time for staring combat let's go. I think Jurina has seen this before, why you still shocked?" Yuko ask

"Yuko-san, why did your mansion keep getting bigger and bigger? How come i'm not shocked :'D" Jurina said

"P-please don't mind that let's just go inside and start our training." Yuko said trying to throw the mansion topic

They went inside the mansion, but when they are inside, Jurina notice that the place didn't look alike with the one she saw earlier. This mansion is really big but there's no one inside anf she saw nothing but gun, knife and etc.

"Yuko-san, you don't have something to explain?" Jurina said, Mayu look confused but she didn't ask

"Well, can we leave the explanation for later? I want to explain everything together in one time."

"Everything? There's something you haven't told us?" Mayu finally talk

"Yes.. It's not the right time." Yuko said as she stop walking, "Okay, you will training at here"

"What should we do?" Jurina ask

Yuko suddenly put a serious face, "You should beating each other, the one who win will fight me and i will tell you how to get your full power."

Mayu and Jurina both shocked then they are looking each other.

"Yuko-san, That's impossible, i didn't want to fight Jurina"

"Then, you won't know how to get your full power. You want to save Yuki right?"

"Yes" Mayu look down

"Then hurry up fight, both of you can fighting right? I will be watching from here"

"But i can't fight Jurina" Mayu really didn't want to do it

"Jurina, can you fight Mayu?" Yuko ask

"I can't"

"Friendship can't be used at the magic world, if you can't fight each other then i will fight both of you. But i don't know you will die or not. I can't control myself right now."

Who said friendship can't be used? Friendship and love is everything" Jurina said with serious look

"We will change the magic world" Mayu and Jurina both and put their fighting pose

"Oh.. You want to fight me. Okay, get ready" the atmosphere change so sudden right after what Yuko was saying.

Yuko power is Fire, she can control her fire really well, she can hold something with her fire without burning it, but her fire can break a hard metal and something like that, cause she can control it. She can turn her fire to a black fire, the most destructive fire, everything will become a dust if it get burned by the black fire and the everything include human too. Yuko never use the black fire before.

Yuko prepare her fire, but the fire just can't hit them  "Dammit, i can't fight both of you yet." Yuko said

"What?" Both Mayu and Jurina

"Come on guys, i'm not a bad person. My fire just won't hit you till you get your full power, that's why i tell you to fight each other" she make a peace sign

"Why don't you tell us earlier?" Jurina said

"I almost forget about it, hehe" Yuko said with her stupid smile formed

Both Mayu and Jurina fall down, "How can you forget something like that" both said with unbelieving look

"Gomen gomen, let's start , fight fairly with all you can" Yuko said

"Hai, i won't go easy on you Jurina" smirk

"Me too?" Her punch and kick is ready for Mayu , Yuko is standing watching them with some popcorn(?)

 Mayu is the first to attack. She land her punch on Jurina stomach, but it didn't hit her, Jurina grab her hand first.
"Is this all you have?" Jurina kick her stomach and make her fall

"Tch, i'm just warming up" Mayu stand up carefully while grabbing her stomach, she feel a little pain. The fight keep continue like that, Jurina keep kicking and Mayu keep punching, even Yuko can't believe they will fight for this long.

*panting* "I wonder how we will end this fight" Jurina said with a really tired voice

"I w-wonder too" Mayu also look tired

'If they keep like this, their power won't come back. Should i fight them? But i can't do it' Yuko keep thinking with her serious face

"I will fight them" suddenly a girl come and said that to Yuko

"Haruna?" Yuko look a little surprised, "When did you come back?"

"After i make sure Kashiwagi parents are okay" she said

"Yokatta..." Yuko said relieved ,"But why you want to fight them?"

"It's obvious, cause you can't fight them" Haruna said

"Nyan Nyan.." Yuki said with teary eyes and try to hug her, but Haruna already preparing to fight.

"Wait a second. NyanNyan?" Jurina said stoping their fight

"You and Yuko-san is on a relationship?" Mayu ask

"Seem like that?" Haruna said while put off her wristwatch

"Okay, you will fight with Haruna" Yuko said

Haruna power is one from five element.
Yuko: Fire
Haruna: Water
Xxx: Air
Xxx: Earth
Xxx: Metal
Not only five people who have the 5 elements power, but this five people is on the strongest level of the power. Also, there's 3 power that always helping them.
Xxx: Healing
Xxx: Can see the Future
Xxx: Mind reader / telepathy / Mind controller

"But, can her power hit us? Even your fire won't hit us" Jurina said

"Haruna is different. She can fight without using her power, i always fight with my power" Yuko said explaining.

"I see..." Both said

"Um.. Where is Haruna-san?" Mayu ask Yuko, Haruna just disappear from their eyes

"Here" Mayu and Jurina turn around to see Haruna and ..*punch*

"Eto.. Haruna, i think you hit them too hard" Yuko said

"Why?" Confused with her innocent face

"They are fainting" point to Mayu and Jurina who is laying on the floor now

"Eh? I just start warming up. Yuko, don't you think something is wrong with them?" Yuko go to see them

"Indeed, you hit them too hard, now their blood will  regenerating then they will become our new queen and second." Yuko said , "But they will feel really hurt inside their body for days" she continue

"Can't you just hit them from the start?" Haruna ask

"I don't know they will fainting from one punch" Yuko said, "Maybe they faint cause they have reach their limit from their fight too"

"Let's just wait, after they wake up,  you should teach them some martial arts they are still suck at it" Haruna

"Aren't they are good enough?" Yuko said

"Nope,  their movement is still bad"

"Then why don't you train them? Your fighting is better than me"

"Yuko, i have a job. My patient is not just one person"

"Hehe,  okay. Give me a hug"

"Don't wanna" , Yuko eyes look teary

"NyanNyan.."

"Okay okay,  don't cry" Haruna give her a tight hug

"Hehe, how about a kiss?"

"No."

"Nyannyan didn't want to kiss me" pouting

"Okay okay." Haruna lean closer to kiss Yuki lip but she kiss her cheek instead, that only make Yuko pouting more

"Mou..NyanNyan"

"Hehe" giggling
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"Hm.. i can hear someone walking toward here,  but why i feel really unsafe? But my body told me not to go anywhere,  why?" Yuki talk to herself
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"Yuki" Someone call her name

"... Tetsu?"

"Yuki!! Are you okay?" Tetsu said

"Hai, i'm okay. But why you are here?"

"Let's talk later, let's go out from this place first" Tetsu said

"Tetsu, don't you dare take her away. Your father won't let you do it" Rena said right after she come

"Don't come near here. You want to hurt Yuki right? I won't let you do it" Tetsu said as he try to protect Yuki from Rena.

"Tetsu-kun, what are you talking about? That's Rena, why should she hurt me?" Yuki ask innocently

"This is a long story, but she is a bad person. She is my father underling"

"Huh?" Yuki got confused

"Nii-chan, you have to fought Rena" Tetsu said to her twin, Yuki didn't realise Sae is there.

Rena turn back and saw Sae is there preparing to attack her with a big sword, she hurry back away before she got hit by Sae, his power is Metal, he can change his part of body to metal and also how it will shaped, he just use his hand and change it to big metal sword.

"Not bad, who thought you to use your power?" Rena ask

"Huh? We are a magician, a mage, we can use our power anytime we want. As long as it's for a good thing" Sae said

"Tch, just if you are not his child, i would have kill you" Rena said seriously

"Don't look down on me Rena, i'm not weak, if Tetsu and i both fight you, you might lose"

"What is Tetsu power?" Rena ask

"His power is really a helpfull power, right Tetsu?" Sae ask Tetsu without moving his eyes from Rena

"Tch" Rena disappear

"Did she gone?" Sae said

"Seem like that" Tetsu said

"Thanks God..., now let's hurry go back" Sae look really scared

"Sae-kun, why you look really scared? And what happen right now?" Yuki really don't know anything about Rena

"Drink this"Tetsu give her the teleporting potion

When they are back, they hurriedly go to see Yuki parent.

"Ne, how long have i been at the magic world?" Yuki ask

"I don't know, but you just gone for some hours" Tetsu said

"Aren't that mean i should have been at magic world for a really long time?"

"Maybe my father reset how the time work. It's his own dimension afterall" Tetsu said

"I see, did Yuko-san know you come to save me?"

"Who is Yuko?" Sae ask

"She is the one that have been controling the magic world while the queen and second not there"

"We should meet her later, but where?" Sae ask

"You may come with me later to meet Yuko. Hi Yuki, feeling good?" Haruna suddenly enter the room

"Kojima-sensei? You know where is Yuko?" Yuki ask confused, she know haruna cause she is a doctor at there, of course she don't know Haruna is magician too.

"Of course, she is my squirrel" Haruna said jokingly, but seem like Yuki know the meaning, except for the two idiot boys.

"Y-yuko is a squirrel?" Sae said

"How can a squirrel control magic world?" Tetsu continue

Yuki let out a sigh, "What a stupid boys." Haruna chuckles
 
"Your parent will get up soon, don't worry Yuki."

"Yeah."

"Wait, Yuko is really a squirrel? Tell us?!" Tetsu and Sae look really confused, but there's no answer. :lol:




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Hahahahahah Yuko is squirrel Lol,  why you make Rena weak here, make her strong thanks for update

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME? stop
« Reply #57 on: August 21, 2015, 05:10:48 AM »
Firstly
Sorry to everyone who read my fic :kneelbow:

I can't continue the fic cause some problem
And also i don't think i can write fanfic anymore
Remembering my writing is not good too XD
But really it's not only because that  :lol:

Here i want to say thanks to the readers who read this
Really thank you :kneelbow: :on GJ:

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ?
« Reply #58 on: August 21, 2015, 05:27:51 AM »
:shock: e?! Nande?!
What happened?? This fic is one of fics I read even before I joined JPHIP. . .why?? :cry: :cry:
N u said u won't write fic anymore? :cry:
I'm shocked n sad when reading this but what can i do? I mean, everyone have their reasons behind decisions, and i'll respect yours..
But, to be honest, personally, i'm sad..
Well, at least i'll say thnk u for writing this fic, really really thnk u.. :kneelbow: kneelbow: :kneelbow:
i don't know the reason u r stopping, but I, sincerely hoping that u r doing fine...
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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ?
« Reply #59 on: August 21, 2015, 06:14:22 AM »
Really?? I'm really sorry for that :cry:
But thank you for understanding  :)

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