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« Reply #100 on: August 30, 2006, 10:08:10 AM »
things are getting interesting with this love triangle... i don't think i can wait any longer for their love triangle plot to thicken.

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« Reply #101 on: August 30, 2006, 08:09:36 PM »
Chapter 21


Eri pushed Sayumi backwards onto the floor gently and began enjoying her prize. The music from the speakers providing the perfect pacing for them.

Nothing was said for the next fifteen minutes until the two came up for air.

“I think we should… join Mako-chan and Kon-chan on their… jogging routines.”

“What? Why?”

Sayumi only managed to croak out two words before starting to pant again.

Sweeping the stray hair that had fallen across her forehead, she wiggled onto her side to face Eri who was lying barely two millimeters away.

“If this is how long we can… keep this up…. Doesn’t it say…. something about our stamina…. or something?”

Eri was catching her breath back quicker and was now able to pull herself up into a sitting position. She looked down at Sayumi, waiting for her response only to be met with a burst of giggles.

“You’re so funny Eririn. You say the weirdest stuff!”

“What? It makes sense… doesn’t it?”

Eri blushed when Sayumi laughter augmented until she was hysteric with laughter.

“Sayu, stop it.”

Eri poked at Sayumi trying to make her stop but the girl was already defeated in fits of laughter on the parquet floors.



[XXX Amusement Park]

“Let’s take the Ferris wheel.”

Ai pointed at the looming steel structure above them and gestured excitedly.

“That’s boring.”

“BORING!”

Risa and Reina both protested in unison. The two younger girls loved thrilling rides and the Ferris wheel just didn’t fall into that category.

“I promise it’ll be worth it.”

Ai said mysteriously with a glint in her eye. The tone in her voice was not lost on the girls.

In fact, their innate common sense had set the alarm bells in their heads ringing. They were well aware that a naughty Ai equates to an extremely HAWT Takitty.

Thinking for a second, Reina bit her lower lip and let her sentence trail off while tapping her temple with her forefinger.

“Well I suppose….”

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wordsworth: Woah imagine that, Eri being your tutor. I think I might fail all my subjects so I can get extra tution :P

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« Reply #102 on: August 30, 2006, 08:22:33 PM »
haha cute, Eri and her randomness...perhaps that's why she's doing Hakkan! CM now to, you know, work on stuff. *hint hint hint* ;) :lol:

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« Reply #103 on: August 30, 2006, 08:32:20 PM »
Need...More. :evil: Ouch ^^; I love it so much, it's addictive. XD Eri is so cute with her randomness.

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In fact, their innate common sense had set the alarm bells in their heads ringing. They were well aware that a naughty Ai equates to an extremely HAWT Takitty.


XD XD XD Love it. :D I laughed so hard.
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« Reply #104 on: August 30, 2006, 11:56:46 PM »
Haha, Actually, I've been following the story since you started it, as a lurker ^^; So now that I finally have an account, I have to say this first:

XD I LOVE YOUR STORY XD

Only caught a few grammar errors here and there, but nothing drastic! :] I look can't wait til you update! Love Triangle takes a turn on the Ferris Wheeeeeeel? :] ?!

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« Reply #105 on: August 31, 2006, 12:05:45 AM »
:heart: :heart: :heart: *starts pulling out her hair* Argh, I can't take! I need my next fix!

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« Reply #106 on: August 31, 2006, 02:15:56 AM »
Ah. More is always good! I'm glad you updated! I was having withdrawls...

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« Reply #107 on: August 31, 2006, 10:02:48 AM »
Damn, you're such a tease. Naughty Takitty ... mmmh :heart:

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« Reply #108 on: September 01, 2006, 04:51:27 AM »
Lol. My mind as imagined me, standing in a amusement park looking up at a ferris wheel. At the carrage in particular that is rocking and swinging even though the wheel isnt moving :P

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« Reply #109 on: September 01, 2006, 05:01:46 AM »
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Lol. My mind as imagined me, standing in a amusement park looking up at a ferris wheel. At the carrage in particular that is rocking and swinging even though the wheel isnt moving :P


Nice job. You engraved the image in my head too. Thank you! :]

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« Reply #110 on: September 01, 2006, 05:05:11 AM »
Can we expect another "special" chapter? :P

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« Reply #111 on: September 02, 2006, 08:21:54 PM »
Chapter 22


[At the Bottom of the Ferris wheel]

“Which of you two are going together?”

The man operating the machine asked eyeing the three girls suspiciously. He was sure he had seen them somewhere before.

“Oh it’s fine. We can all go on the same carriage.”

Ai told the man solemnly. After he nodded his head to acknowledge and looked down to tear at the tickets she had handed him, Ai turned around to the two standing behind and shooed them off towards the awaiting carriage.

While Risa and Reina were seated down together on one side of the glass carriage waiting for Ai to join them, Gaki decided to watch Ai intently through the glass walls.

“What do you think she’s up to?”

“Who cares? She said it’ll be worth it.”

And when Ai suddenly flashed Reina’s infamous winking pose at Risa after catching her glaze, the gears in Niigaki’s pretty head started turning in overdrive.

“She’s still talking to the man outside. Something’s definitely going on here.”

Shrugging her shoulders and giving Risa a ‘whatever’ expression, Reina couldn’t be bothered to join in with Risa’s guessing game. She was more concerned with what followed Ai-chan’s impish look earlier.

The machines roared to life after Ai finally entered and the carriage swayed from side to side as it made its climb up the 27th stories it was said to reach.

The view from the carriage was breath-taking, nevertheless the ride was in silence until almost 25 stories up when Ai suddenly unzipped her suede knee-high boots.

“What are you doing?”

Risa exclaimed when she saw Ai removing her outer jacket too.

“We’ve got 20 minutes before the wheel starts up again.”

That was all Ai said before the three felt a slight rocking and the carriage they were in whined to a halt right at the top of the wheel.

“Oh I get it! I can’t believe you’re that slow Gaki-san.”

Reina clapped her hands in delight. She had caught on quickly and started removing her own boots.

Gahhhh…. Am I missing something here? You two…”



By now Ai has finished removing most of what she had on. She reached over to where Risa was sitting and pulled at her jacket tugging the girl over to where she was.

“Shut up.”

Risa was cut short by Ai’s tongue smashing into her own mouth and whatever words she had planned to say quickly became muffled sounds.

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DO Me DO Me: The Hakkan CM was great news for me. I haven't got the chance to watch the new H!Ms but I can imagine the chemistry between KameiMame ;)

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« Reply #112 on: September 02, 2006, 09:25:21 PM »
Yay an update! -jumps for joy!- Another awesome chapter!

So what I'm seeing is, Ai making out with Risa... with Reina looking on? o___O; Jee, I wonder where this is going! :L_________
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« Reply #113 on: September 02, 2006, 09:34:53 PM »
YAY NEW CHAPTER!!! :D!! Damn...I can't read it right now tho' :cry: I'm at a freinds house, so I don't have time! >.< I will once I get home tho'!!!
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« Reply #114 on: September 02, 2006, 10:21:22 PM »
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« Reply #115 on: September 02, 2006, 11:39:48 PM »
I love this story. I'm glad I finally started posting cuz u deserve some praise. Finally a story with Kameshige <33 *waits patiently for next update*

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« Reply #116 on: September 02, 2006, 11:44:08 PM »
is Ai-chan trying to profest her love to Gaki-san infront of Reina! or is she just goin make-out wit both of them!!! :w00t:

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« Reply #117 on: September 03, 2006, 03:10:22 AM »
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Yay an update! -jumps for joy!- Another awesome chapter!

So what I'm seeing is, Ai making out with Risa... with Reina looking on? o___O; Jee, I wonder where this is going! :L_________


-nods- YES! We DO think too alike. XD I was thinking the same thing! I finally bugged my friend enough so that she let me read the chapter! -jumps for joy-
:drool: Reina, Ai, and Risa. 20 minutes on the top of a ferris wheel, eh? Saikami likes. :drool:
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« Reply #118 on: September 03, 2006, 05:11:16 AM »
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DO Me DO Me: The Hakkan CM was great news for me. I haven't got the chance to watch the new H!Ms but I can imagine the chemistry between KameiMame ;)

I love Kamemamemememe... *gets tongue tied* :P they're a great duo but I don't see them as a couple. So don't let Eri hurt Sayu anymore. :lol:

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« Reply #119 on: September 03, 2006, 08:06:07 AM »
Is it perv time? C'mon, you know you want a cookie... *waves cookie temptingly*

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