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« Reply #160 on: September 17, 2006, 07:57:29 PM »
Happy yet sad, eh? Hmm, I'm thinking its not because of Ai and Reina, well that may be part of it, but because KonKon and Mako's graduations, but happy because it was such a good night, and a good memory. :D Either way, great chapter. ^^- The way you made everyone fit in the photo was great, I could picture it really well. (I laughed at picturing Reina trying to squeeze between Eri and Sayumi.) XD
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« Reply #161 on: September 18, 2006, 12:56:51 AM »
Yeah! Great chapter! And of course, being the perv I am, I was kind of dissapointed there was no more ferris wheel madness (imagine if all 7 went wild...^^)
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« Reply #162 on: September 18, 2006, 03:18:40 AM »
I cant believe i didnt realize u updated this >.O I missed commenting on the Kameshige-ness. *slaps self in the head* It was sooo cute! I love u for doing it ^_^. And this chapter was good as well. "The lines are blurred!" part was perfect...it being the title and all. Bravo *thumbs up*

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« Reply #163 on: September 18, 2006, 05:51:06 AM »
Another heartwarming chapter lil_hamz. I'm going to cry if you tell me that it's the last chapter.:cry:

But it's not right? Wonder what surprises you have for us next. :)
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« Reply #164 on: September 18, 2006, 08:07:40 AM »
Yay, an update!

So I wasn't the only one that got a weird impression that it might be the last chapter, especially with that "the lines are blurred" line.. but I hope it's not, and it better not be :evil: XD  Anyways, heartwarming chapter... I actually almost spit out the water I was drinking in the beginning when Mako-chan said they should all have some fun :P

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« Reply #165 on: September 18, 2006, 09:55:02 AM »
Chapter 26 was weird XD but so fun to read !

i don't know why but "Sayumi grabbed anyone she could" made me laugh :D
"The world seemed to stop spinning as the group watched the duo in slience, lost in their own world. For Sayumi, this was the best birthday present she could ever receive - Kamei Eri."
so cute......yet so weird XD....i have the same feeling as wordsworth
" in front of the other go/rokkies?"

Chapter 27
“Well since the couple here already started demonstrating what we can do, let’s all have some fun tonight!”

omg no pliiiiz XD

"“Wait wait, before we all lose ourselves, which I believe will happen soon enough, lets take a group photo.”"

awsome XD XD XD

"Picking up a yellow glitter pen sticking in the pen holder of her desk, Risa scribbled across the photo in her nicest handwriting what they had yelled out earlier.

“The lines are blurred!” For this was two generations that really didn’t feel awkward together despite the difference in ages and seniority.
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:o

i had the same feeling as TydusArandor and wordsworth, when reading the last part i thought it was the last chapter too...:cry:
well...at least it looks like a end of story...but you are going to post another one right ?:D
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« Reply #166 on: September 18, 2006, 10:20:05 PM »
Ah! Didn't realize you updated >
Love 26 and 27 so much! Though the diary thing is suspenseful O_O; -puts on hardhat for a bump of the story?-

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« Reply #167 on: September 19, 2006, 01:24:33 AM »
Chapter 28


Dear diary…

We just celebrated Sayu’s birthday. The surprise party we had planned for her went incredibly well. Everyone was really happy and we all enjoyed each other’s company.

One thing that really touched me was what Sayumi said. She had one of her rare mature thoughts and ‘shared’ her party with Makochin and KonKon. Looking at her and Eri, I’m glad they get along so well. I do hope they will always be so blissful together.

Makochin and KonKon will be leaving us soon and even though I’m sad to see them go, I’m thankful it’s for what they believe in. And I have no doubt that both will find what they are looking for and become stronger in the process. I wish them the best of luck in their endeavors.

With their leaving, I’m grateful to have Ai-chan and Tanakachi by my side. The three of us might be different in many ways but together it just feels so right. For some reason, I know we will become even closer with time.

I cried a lot when Makochin and KonKon’s graduations were announced, but now I have decided to keep a smile on my face. I believe what the gokkies have is very strong and will not change even if we are apart. I won’t forget the times we shared so until we get together again, I’ll be waiting. I will always be waiting…

Gokkies deshita!

Sincerely,
Risa



Before she closed the diary, Risa looked at the picture again then slipped it between the pages of the book. This photo will become one of her most prized processions. It will constantly remind her of all the joy that being in Morning Musume has brought her.  



[Hallway]

Supporting Sayumi down the deserted hallway, Eri tried hard to keep the girl from falling by half pulling and half dragging her to her room.

Exhausted by all the exercise Sayumi was giving her, Eri decided to bring her back to her own room instead. It was much nearer to where they were.  

By the time Eri got Sayumi into her bed and managed to take her boots off, she was already panting like crazy.

“I knew I should have tagged along on Mako-chan’s jogging trips.”

Knowing that she was probably drenched in perspiration from the night’a activities, Eri was just thinking of taking a nice long soak in the tub when Sayumi pulled her down onto the bed.

“Why are you wearing this? Don’t you hate wearing them?”

Sayumi’s hand was clinging onto the polka-dotted tie hanging loosely around Eri’s neck.

“I do hate wearing them. But you said you liked me in a tie and since it’s your birthday and all…..  ”

Eri let her sentence trail off as she began to get really hot under the collar. They were in bed, their position was awkward and the tie just made matters worst.

Wrapping her arms around Eri’s neck and pulling her closer, Sayumi breathed deeply in the scent of Eri’s hair. It smelt so good she almost felt like she was floating.

“Sometimes I’m glad you’re not really a guy. I know you will have tons of girls falling at your feet and I just can’t stand the thought of that happening.”

It was the first time Eri saw Sayumi heavily blushed and with eyes threatening to close any second, she was sure it was the effect of all that liquor the other girls had forced her to drink earlier. But for some weird reason it ignited Eri’s burning desire to kiss her.

“Do you know how important you are to me? I don’t think I can live without you Eric.”

With that, Sayumi pulled tighter on the tie with her left hand and went for Eri’s shirt next. She wasn’t sure if the alcohol she had consumed was the source of her new found boldness but it was nice seeing two Eris once in a while.

I’m lucky to have you.”

Whispering softly into Sayumi’s ear with a contented sigh of her own, Eri slipped her hand under Sayumi’s blouse and made contact with the silky bare skin beneath before reaching for the zip on her mini skirt…


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rndmnwierd: Well...that too XD

stefy: Everyone's having these coughnaughtycoughthoughts :P

Saikami: "It was a good night, and a good memory" I like the way you wrote that :)

Tanachan: There might not be anymore Ferris Wheel Escapades but there will be others in time XD

KrazyForKamei: Here's another chance to comment on the nice KameiShige action XD  

wordsworth: No need to take out the hanky, its not the last....yet :P

TydusArandor: I didn't think that by incorporating the title would seem like it was the last chapter. Oops my bad :lol:

ChrNo: Wow Risa's Diary eh, that's a good one. I never thought of it. See there are so many geniuses on this forum :)

Yuuyami: Me puts on hardhat too :D *bump*
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« Reply #168 on: September 19, 2006, 02:56:28 AM »
*giggles uncontrollably* Kameshige... :oops:

you know what's funnier, on this week's show guess who's in the main segment? Tanakahashiigaki XD

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« Reply #169 on: September 19, 2006, 04:31:48 AM »
Aww Risa, we're all sad... :cry:

Yay, Kameshige! Love Love!

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« Reply #170 on: September 19, 2006, 05:15:29 AM »
Quote from: DO Me DO Me
Tanakahashiigaki XD
Try saying THAT 5 times fast! :lol:

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« Reply #171 on: September 19, 2006, 06:42:09 AM »
"Gokkies desuta!" its deSHIta..
anyways awesome chapter.... the kameishige part was sweet!
but i think you finished the chapter too early haha..

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« Reply #172 on: September 19, 2006, 09:11:48 AM »
Quote from: lil_hamz

One thing that really touched me was what Sayumi said. She had one of her rare mature thoughts and ‘shared’ her party with Makochin and KonKon.

thinking of how egocentric Sayu is , it's hard to imagine her doing those kind of stuffs XD

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“Sometimes I’m glad you’re not really a guy. I know you will have tons of girls falling at your feet and I just can’t stand the thought of that happening.”


so true XD

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“Do you know how important you are to me? I don’t think I can live without you Eric.”.

i guess in a way she would love to have a boyfriend heh :D

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« Reply #173 on: September 19, 2006, 12:23:03 PM »
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"Gokkies desuta!" its deSHIta..


I hate to be picky, but you can write it like that. My third year Japanese friend already yelled at me for saying otherwise -__- So you can have 'Mosi Mosi!' or, you know, Desuta.

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« Reply #174 on: September 19, 2006, 12:55:11 PM »
Gokkie love all the way!!! We will miss Mako-chan and Konkon too Risa. They will not be the only ones who will get stronger with their departure but the other members that they will leave behind as well.

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The three of us might be different in many ways but together it just feels so right. For some reason, I know we will become even closer with time.


I smell another escapade in the works, but hey this trio is really funny to watch, just like in the recent H!M.

The ferris wheel incident was hot. Please make the KameShige encounter as hot or even hotter :D

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« Reply #175 on: September 19, 2006, 09:19:50 PM »
Oooh, I like where this is going :] Write more! -tries saying Tanakahashiigaki but ends up saying 'Takanahashika' - O_____o; -is struck in the head with lightning, BUT IS OKAY! HAS A HARDHAT- :]

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« Reply #176 on: September 19, 2006, 09:24:17 PM »
Woa o_O I'm late. This is what I get for being sick. -.- But nonetheless! A great chapter, yet again! Yay for Kameshige! :heart:
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« Reply #177 on: September 19, 2006, 10:14:24 PM »
This was grreeaatt. Thank you 100000 times for the Kameshige! YAAAY! (I want more though) *is selfish* teehee. I'm also curious as to where the Tanakahas....er...yeah that 3-way-coupling is gonna turn out

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« Reply #178 on: September 24, 2006, 10:26:12 AM »
Chapter 29


“Now for part 2!”

Eri kicked off the blanket and jumped out of bed all of a sudden and raced towards her closet situated at the other side of the room.

“There’s a part 2?”

Pushing herself up to a sitting position, Sayumi watched with wide eyes at Eri who has started flinging clothes out of her closet in bundles.
 
“Ermm Eririn, what are you doing?”

“Come sit here and wait a while.”

Eri waved Sayumi over and made her sit inside the rather tiny wardrobe as she continued tossing out shirts, blouses, jackets and shorts onto the increasing pile on her bed.

Now sitting cross-legged on a small mountain of what she assumed was jeans, she had her leg tangled up with a towel, or bathrobe.

“You know this is weird right?”

“It’s really exciting. You’ll see.”

Grinning a really wide smile, Eri flung out more of her clothes onto her bed and onto the dresser chair that stood beside the bed before climbing in next to Sayumi, and squashing her in the process of trying to close the door.

“Aren’t you going to throw these out too?”

Motioning to the pile of clothes in a mess beneath her, Sayumi asked and tried to rescue her leg, which was falling asleep from numbness.

“There has to be some left in here for it to be fun.”

Eri explained plainly and crawled nearer to Sayumi by feeling in the dark.

“Have you tried doing it in a dark closet before?”



[Reina’s Room]

The moonlight that shone through the double glass doors of Reina’s balcony fell on the face of the figure lying on her side on the bed. Reina was sitting up as she admired how beautiful and peaceful Ai looked like this. The girl had what looked like a satisfied smile on her face as she slept.

“You’re so beautiful. It’s true.”

Reina leaned down and kissed the tip of Ai’s nose lightly, careful not to wake the tired girl up. Playing with the hair framing Ai’s face, Reina was completely immersed with contentment.  

She still couldn’t believe Ai was hers even though you would have to kill her before she would ever admit it to anyone. Her pride would never let her and it had always been her nature to show only her tough side.  

“I really love you.”

Lying down now snuggled close to her companion, Reina put an arm around Ai’s waist and proceeded to fall asleep like this. It wasn’t a very comfortable position for her but it didn’t matter. Being close to Ai like this was what did.



[A Week Later]

With only two days left before Asami’s graduation concert, things had gotten depressing at recordings and the atmosphere at the apartment block was just as miserable.

It was probably the time to not do anything stupid but Sayumi didn’t know what she was about to do soon would be the start of a whole chain reaction.



[Sayumi’s Balcony]

It was eleven o’clock at night and Sayumi has been watching her for the past 30 minutes from her balcony. Convinced that it would be fairly safe to approach her at this time of the night, the girl decided to put on a coat and go downstairs.

At the ground floor, Sayumi cautiously tiptoed up to her fellow rokkie who was sitting quietly in the swimming pool.

“Reina.”

Sayumi called out to Reina in a low voice but the reply she got wasn’t the low key one she was hoping for.

“Wha….WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!”

“Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.”

Putting her index finger at her lips, Sayumi urged Reina to keep quiet.

“Keep it down will you, it’s eleven at night!”

“GOD Sayu, you scared the crap out of me! So you know it’s freaking late now too do you. Why the hell are you sneaking around calling my name like that?”

Reina was annoyed, really annoyed with Sayumi for interrupting her little moonlight dip. Her mood was all ruined now.

“I needed help on something.”

“You couldn’t pick a better time could you.”

Reina’s yankee mode was apparent but Sayumi wasn’t the least bit deterred. She was determined to get what she wanted tonight.

“Sorry about it but I needed some er…. lessons on how to…. make Eri happy.”


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DO Me DO Me: I saw that! The three of them were so cute especially at the bit when Risa fed Reina that candy :D

rndmnwierd: No MaKonno soon :cry:  Oh so ‘Desuta’ is acceptable too?

JFC: I did and got my tongue all tangled up :lol:

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stefy: Ah I see. Thanks for letting me know. I already edited it. My Japanese ain’t great :P

ChrNo: As much of a narcissist Sayumi is, I still think she’s a nice girl :)

Yuuyami: Hardhats are good to have on eh. They are safe and durable XD

Saikami: Hope you are feeling better now. Its horrible being sick :(

KrazyForKamei: I’m curious how it will turn out too. I haven’t thought about it yet ;)
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« Reply #179 on: September 24, 2006, 01:38:47 PM »
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XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD


:ROTFLMAO:

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[Reina’s Room]

:o ...:( ...:D

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:o
can't wait XD


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what does she mean :o

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