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« Reply #340 on: October 06, 2006, 04:11:34 AM »
Let's see...Maki and Shiba...mmmmm...


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GoShiba?  ShiMaki?   Shicchin?

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« Reply #341 on: October 06, 2006, 10:00:51 AM »
Maki and Shiba completely threw me off! But still, good for Maki! :P

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« Reply #342 on: October 12, 2006, 07:25:16 PM »
I'm not going to left this fic to go to the second page so, here's 46th XD

About the Maki&Shiba-chan thing... I don't know why but I feel really well writing about them together... it's weird 'cause I'd never thought about it before :roll:


***46***


To see Ishikawa’s face in front of her so early in the morning it was like a signal to Miki that this was going to be one of these days that better you didn’t wake up from the bed. Of course, there was only one thing that Rika-chan would want to talk about with her.

“How’s Yocchan?”
“She’s… fine” answered Miki who instantly remembered how that girl was kissing her girlfriend just two days ago.
“Aah… I’m glad to hear that ‘cause she was looking pretty bad when I saw her”
“When did you see her exactly?”

Fujimoto knew that it was that what Rika-chan wanted, for her to play along with the game.

“Yossi came to my home the night after the earthquake ‘cause she wanted to check if I was ok” seeing the reaction on Miki’s face Ishikawa couldn’t help but smile deviously “Oh, she didn’t tell you?”

The younger didn’t answered and just look at the ground, something that Rika-chan took as an opportunity to dig more into the wound.

“Well, it was a big surprise to see her at my door. I thought that she was with you. After all, Yossi’s your girlfriend and you should be taking care of her, right?”

Miki had enough of that conversation and left Ishikawa behind without saying a single word. Fujimoto knew that she shouldn’t trust whatever Rika could say but she couldn’t help but think about it. How she should feel? Guilty because she left alone Yocchan that night or angry ‘cause her girlfriend went to see the enemy without telling anything?

It was time to have a serious talk with Hitomi about some things.



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“You’re sure I have to do that?”
“Yes”
“But… It must have another way…” said Gocchin almost begging.

Shibata look at the younger with a funny smile in her face. It wasn’t usual to see Maki complaining about something like a little kid.

“Come on, don’t tell me now that the great Maki Goto is scared of that girl…”
“I’m not scared! It just…”
“What?”
“She’s not my type”

Ayumi couldn’t belive that Maki was talking seriously.

“You’re not doing that for pleasure, remember?”
“I know, but it would help” Gocchin looked at her and crossed her arms “If it’s so easy why don’t you do it?”

She didn’t expect that question and for a few seconds her mind was blank.

“Because I… ‘cause… I’m… I’m not into that, ok?!” she said finally blushing a bit “Besides, aren’t you the irresistible one here?”

Maki seemed to react at Shibata’s words and began to recover her confidence.

“Ok, I’ll do it, but with one condition”
“What do you want?” asked Shibata fearing the answer.
“You”
“What? Why?!” said the older blushing like never before.

Maki smile with mischief and leant to meet the other girl’s eyes, staying just a breath away from her.

“Because even if you’re not into that, you’re pretty good at it”

Ayumi didn’t know what to think anymore but there was something she was sure about. Gocchin always got what she wanted.

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« Reply #343 on: October 12, 2006, 08:25:54 PM »
This is geting more interesting with every new chapter!!! Thanks Len.chan!

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« Reply #344 on: October 12, 2006, 09:18:55 PM »
YoMiki fight in the future? o-o -wears hardhat-

Though, Maki x Ayu is cuuuuute <3~!

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« Reply #345 on: October 13, 2006, 12:06:55 AM »
Bitch!Rika to the non-rescue!

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« Reply #346 on: October 13, 2006, 05:34:28 PM »
YAY! New chapter!
Ou god. I really think that there will be some kind of fight between Yossi and Miki..

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« Reply #347 on: October 16, 2006, 06:37:51 AM »
Shibata and Gocchin have a plan :o Man, the story's getting real good now with all the stuff going on, can't wait till the next chapter as always :D

We do need a pairing name for Shibata/Gocchin XD

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« Reply #348 on: October 16, 2006, 04:49:48 PM »
OMFG!! How can I keep missing this story!! It never shows up as new! Goddamn it. I almost forgot how much I lvoe reading this.

A bitchy Rika is so well done. Ah, she makes my blood boil. I love the scenes with Miki and Rika in them. The tensions always thick :D

Ahhhh!! Yossui and Miki confrontation????? *runs and hides* this is gonna be ugly.

Irresistable Gottsuan? Yeah, I can believe that. Ah, she is a cutey :D Recently she has stolen my heart.

A pairing with Shibata? Hmm...ok. Thats new ^^ the first name that came to my ehad was also Shicchin..well done, you have given birth to a new pairing

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« Reply #349 on: October 16, 2006, 07:05:23 PM »
Shicchin! Shicchin! Rhymes with kitchen!

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« Reply #350 on: October 17, 2006, 06:36:12 PM »
Yay, read your story in one loooooong late night session and the last three chapters during lunchbreak, I just couldn't stop reading, it's a amazing piece of creativity.

I dunno really what to say that hasn't been said before so I just say: I love your fic and wait patiently for the next chapter.

Oh, and I wonder what Erikas role and motivation is. Is she only after Rika, or has she a bigger more evil plan that she's playing out in the background... ;)

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« Reply #351 on: October 23, 2006, 06:50:09 AM »
hahaha I love Shicchin as a name to Maki & Shiba-chan pairing XDXD


***47***


“Yocchan, wait!”

Hitomi turned to see Ayaka running towards her breathless so, she stopped and waited for her friend to arrive next to her.

“Hey” greeted Yossi with her usual smile.
“H-hey”
“Why the rush?”
“I wanted to catch you before you disappear again” said Ayaka recovering finally her breath “What’s up with you?

The younger looked at her friend as if she didn’t know what was talking about.

“Mai and I haven’t seen you for weeks. Where have you been?”
“Here…”
“Anyway… You think it’s normal that your best friends have to know thanks to other people that you’re dating someone?”

Ayaka was going to continue with her questions when Yossi saw her girlfriend appear at the end of the corridor. At the moment she saw the look on Miki’s face she knew that something wasn’t right.

“Can we talk in another moment? I… have to go” asked Yocchan leaving her friend behind and going to meet Miki.

The older couldn’t do anything more than nod and let her friend go.

“You’re busy?” asked Fujimoto to her girlfriend.

Yossi turned her head a moment just to look how Ayaka was leaving resigned and then looked again and Miki.

“For you, I’m always free” she said smiling.
“Perfect, ‘cause we have to talk”


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“They’ve been together all day” said Ayumi feeling defeated “There’s no way for you to go closer Erika without Rika-chan suspecting about it…”
“Then, distract her”
“I have to remember to you that I asked for your help ‘because she doesn’t hear me anymore?”

Maki sighed resigned and took her cell-phone from her bag.

“All right, then…”
“What are you doing?” asked Shibata.
“Plan B”
“And plan B is…?”
“Stop asking and watch what those two are doing”

Gocchin turned her back to Ayumi and moved away some meters to have some privacy for her call while Shiba-chan kept asking herself what that plan B was about and with who was Maki was talking.

“Hi? It’s Maki”

Hey. Something happened?

“Not yet” answer Gocchin “But I need you to do something”

Ok, tell me.

After a few minutes, Maki hanged up the phone and returned with Shibata.

“And now what?” asked the older.
“Just wait and see”

Then, they could hear a ring coming from where the two Biyuden members were and saw Ishikawa taking her cell-phone. After a quick talk, she said something to Erika and left her finally alone.

“How…?” asked a surprised Shiba-chan.
“I told you, don’t ask” answered Maki who began to walk towards Erika “Now it’s my turn”
« Last Edit: October 23, 2006, 07:21:18 AM by len.chan »

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« Reply #352 on: October 23, 2006, 07:04:35 AM »
NEW CHAPTER!!! :w00t:


Ooooooooooo...looks like Rika's not the only one who can scheme. :twisted:

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« Reply #353 on: October 23, 2006, 10:18:15 AM »
Oh gahh, now look at what you made me do XD

Now in love with Shicchin pairing ~!

So now you better write about them too~!

Wonder what Maki schemed :]~!

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« Reply #354 on: October 23, 2006, 08:13:06 PM »
Erika! XP Shicchin!

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« Reply #355 on: October 23, 2006, 08:45:07 PM »
LOVE Shicchin!!! (So it's settled for Maki x Shibachan Pairing, Shicchin?)

Wonder what Maki is up to...hope she'll sort things out with Erika for everyone's sake.

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« Reply #356 on: October 23, 2006, 09:44:59 PM »
YAY!
Go Maki, go XD  

Who is the mysterious person...:D

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« Reply #357 on: October 30, 2006, 05:32:19 AM »
For bluekinko Im printing all the stories off and making special folders for them for her birthday/graduation present. I was wondering if you had a full front cover I could use?

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« Reply #358 on: October 30, 2006, 06:29:08 AM »
^ I don't have any cover.. but I can do something if you want. When do you need it?

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« Reply #359 on: October 30, 2006, 08:21:33 AM »
Uh Later december mid January :D ITs a while away so you have plenty of time I suppose

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