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« Reply #420 on: December 08, 2006, 06:53:13 PM »
hi! i1m new here! ^^
but i know this fic from len's blog!!
(but i didn't comment cause i'm not sure about my english! XO)
and..... yeah! this fic is great!!! i love it!!
congratulations!! and GAMBAREEE!!

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« Reply #421 on: December 09, 2006, 11:27:01 AM »
God damn that was powerful!!! And then Yuko came out... man!

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« Reply #422 on: December 09, 2006, 12:17:47 PM »
Damn, I haven't been keeping up as much as I would have liked, and ended up missing out a lot. I read everything I missed just now, everything to do with Maki getting close to Erika and all that. Just... wow at Yuko making such a strong appearance at the end. I would definately have to agree that she'd be more scare as 'calm angry'. Good work, and keep it up! I'm looking forward to what Yossi and Rika might have to say to eachother after this. :?

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« Reply #423 on: December 09, 2006, 01:48:27 PM »
Ishiyoshi's return!!!!

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« Reply #424 on: December 10, 2006, 05:48:08 AM »
Evil Miyo makes me cry.... T_T

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« Reply #425 on: December 10, 2006, 03:55:13 PM »
uoh! this is amazing.. and to commemorate the 10.000 visits I've made a little gift to all that people who made it possible.



you can put this after the cover (which is comming soon, I promise). I hope you like it.

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    hi! i1m new here! ^^
but i know this fic from len's blog!!
(but i didn't comment cause i'm not sure about my english! XO)
and..... yeah! this fic is great!!! i love it!!
congratulations!! and GAMBAREEE!!


hi! wellcome! I'm happy that your first post was here ^_^
and don't be afraid to post because of your english, mine isn't so good XDXD

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I'm looking forward to what Yossi and Rika might have to say to eachother after this.


aah... this one is going to be difficult...

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    Evil Miyo makes me cry.... T_T


I know I know.. but It had to be that way..

weeell... I hope you don't have to wait long for the next part.. see you!

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« Reply #426 on: December 10, 2006, 07:27:42 PM »
I hope Yossi and Rika can be friends after what ever will happen XD

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« Reply #427 on: December 10, 2006, 08:21:26 PM »
Now that the truth be told... Will Yossie be torn upon returning to Rika? Or shall Rika be forgiving and allow her happiness? Because Rika's bound to at least lose the bitchy personality after a confrontation like that. I'm looking forward to the Shicchin plot advancement, and I also hope that like Maki, (that is, if Rika chooses to allow Yossie her freedom) Rika will be able to move on and find someone else to love :]

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« Reply #428 on: December 10, 2006, 08:34:26 PM »
But has Maki really moved on. That's a kind of feeling that stays with you for a long time. If Rika does stop being psyco and manipulative and stays out of the way, she would still feel some pain seeing someone else with Yossie.

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« Reply #429 on: December 15, 2006, 01:28:55 AM »
O_O
OK, now it's oficial: this is my favourite fanfic!!!! >_< I love it!

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« Reply #430 on: December 15, 2006, 09:22:18 PM »
gomeeen neeee. :ONkneelbow:
I'm really sorry... I would like to post this befoe but I caught a cold and I've been a bit disconected this week. But, to compensate, this chapter is a little longer XDXD


***57***


“You’re kidding me…”

Eri crossed her arms and refused to believe what Gaki-san just said.

“I’m serious” answered Risa “People say that that’s why Nakazawa-san organized that reunion”
“And what happened with Miyo-chan?”
“Let fly your imagination, Sayu”

The three girls turned her heads slowly to look at the woman standing at the center of the room. She really looks serious, not angry but menacing, with her eyes fixed in the crow around her and paying attention to every conversation in the room. Conversations that were beginning to get her pissed of.

“Silence!”

The shout made all the murmurs disappear. Most of the girls held her breaths fearing to make any noise that could bother the eldest member.

“That’s better” said Yuko relaxing a little her face expression “Now that everybody’s here…”
“Leader isn’t here!” shouted Reina.
“Miyo-chan and the kids are missing too” pointed Eri who immediately regret what she had said and glued her eyes to the ground.
“They’re not coming” answered Nakazawa trying to remain calm “Yocchan and Miyoshi have some… things to attend. And for the kids.., they are out of the problem, at least for now”

Yuko waited a minute for any question that could interrupt her but seeing that nobody dared to open her mouth she smiled and began to talk again.

“Most of you must know about the little incident with Erika. This reunion is to prevent that something like that happens again. We are a big family, a family where everybody have to respect each other if we want to stay together and if, anybody, someway, dare to hurt that unity, I’ll take charge personally” Yuko made a pause and look at the girls around her and some of them looked away to avoid eye-contact “But…” she continued “There’s something that can destroy a family more than anything…” this time Yuko’s eyes where fixed in a single girl, the one with a pink sweater and the sad expression in her face “…a secret”

At that word, Ishikawa raised her head and her eyes met with Yuko’s.

“A secret is the most dangerous weapon in a war, and the last thing we need is a battle between members. So, here and now, I want to know everything. Who’s gonna start?”

The girls in the room looked at each other in silence, waiting for someone to be the first to say something but, as expected, nobody wanted to begin. The generalized though was like ‘that woman went totally crazy requesting something like that’. Of course, no one dare to say it out loud.

Seeing that nobody was going to start, Yuko sighed.

“Ok then. If it’s going to be easier.., I’ll make the questions and everybody’ll answer at the same time. This way nobody will feel embarrassed for being the first”
“Hey, obaachan had a nice idea!” joked Yasuda next to her.
“Honey.., shut up. Well, first question”

Nakazawa took some seconds to look at each girl and analyze their faces before speak again.

“How many of you had sex with another Hello! Project member?”

Everybody looked at everybody in shock. What kind of question was that? Even Kei, that knew her girlfriend very well, didn’t expect something so direct to start.

“Raise your fucking hands!” shouted Yuko impatiently.
“Ok, ok…” they heard a voice coming from one of the corners of the room. Then a sigh and a raised hand “Everybody knows me so, there’s no reason to hide it”

Seeing Maki raising her hand answering Nakazawa’s request, one by one, the rest of the girls raised their hands too. Yuko wasn’t surprised of many of them, but others were as shocking for her as for everybody.

“I don’t know… I feel like if I was left out of the party” said Nono, who was standing in a corner with another few girls that hadn’t raised their hands.
“I understand you” nodded Mari “You know there’s something going on but.., so many? I mean… Even Kaorin! She never told me!”
“Hey, at least you don’t have one of your best friends involved in a plot against another member…” sighed Yui looking down at the floor.
“Yeah, your right, that’s worst”

Yuko smiled satisfied, but she knew that the next step was going to be more difficult.

“Ok. That was easy. Now I need the same sincerity with the next question” she moved her eyes upon every girl’s face trying to read some of their thoughts before asking “How many of you are in love with another member?”

This time just a few hands remained raised and a lot of jaws dropped to the floor with the answer. Just a few people expected to see Gocchin’s hand raised, Miki’s and Rika’s answers weren’t a surprise at all, and for Ai-chan and Risa.., Gaki-san was the most surprised seeing the hand of her girlfriend raised.

“That’s… true?” she asked feeling how some tears were beginning to form in her eyes.
“Yeah. Why are you crying?
“Yo… you never told me…”
“Really?”
“I thought that you just… you know… wanted just…”
“Oh” usually Ai-chan had needed a clearer answer to understand what was happening but this time she realized immediately what the problem was and then her face changed from surprised to and affeccionate expression “You thought I was with you just because of the sex?” she smiled “You know there’s Goto-san for that, right?”
“That’s true!” shouted Maki from the other side of the room, getting with that a death glare from someone that was at her side with her hand still raised.
“Then, say it” continue Risa looking at her girlfriend “I need to hear it from you”

Ai-chan moved her head from one side to another looking at all the girls around, expecting an answer. Then she fixed her eyes on the younger, put her hands on Risa’s cheeks and wiping away the tears she made sure that every single word was clearly heard for everyone.

“I-love-you”

A lot of ‘aaaw’ and ‘how cute!’ filled the room. The two girls where staring at each other giggling and whispering words that just them could hear, and wasn’t paying attention at the people around.
 
“Nakazawa-san, can we skip to the next question?”

Yuko looked at the girl who had made the request and suddenly realized something.

“Shiba-chan…” said the older smiling “why do you have your hand raised?”

Obviously, nobody else in the room had seen that until Nakazawa said it. Then, all the girls turned to her and she felt the heat on her cheeks rising.

“Oi! You never told me!” exclaimed Maki standing at her side “Who is it?”
“Baaaka!”
“What have I done now?”
“You are so… so… stupid!”

Gocchin jumped back at Ayumi’s shout. The peaceful Shibata, the one that always remains calmed no matter what, had shouted and called Maki Goto stupid. Of course, no one understood why she had done that. Nobody could even imagine the truth.

Why is she so blinded?



To be continued in the next chapter...

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« Reply #431 on: December 15, 2006, 09:41:58 PM »
Wow! Sugoi!
The part with Risa and Ai was really cute^^
Come on MakI!! open your eyes!!^^
Great I'm exited for the next chapter aaand
Get well soon len!:ONwhistle:

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« Reply #432 on: December 15, 2006, 11:34:59 PM »
Have to agree with Gomaki :MKlove2:  

Hope you feel better now, len.chan :ONhee:

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« Reply #433 on: December 15, 2006, 11:37:38 PM »
Hey~ Len get well soon ya.

Nice update. Somehow I find Yuuko quite a busybody. :D

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« Reply #434 on: December 15, 2006, 11:40:39 PM »
Lol, Maki the sex machine.

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« Reply #435 on: December 16, 2006, 03:18:27 AM »
Man, this keeps getting better and better!  :pen_clap:   I hope you're feeling better len.chan.  I can't wait for the next chapter!

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« Reply #436 on: December 16, 2006, 06:16:18 AM »
It's nice to know that Ai and Gaki are serious about their relationship. And I'm REALLY happy about Kaori having sex with another member. Who was it?

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« Reply #437 on: December 16, 2006, 06:16:40 AM »
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Lol, Maki the sex machine.
I was thinking the same thing. Funny thing is how she's smart and intuitive about some things here in this story, and yet completely clueless in regards to other things in this story. :lol:

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« Reply #438 on: December 18, 2006, 07:21:08 AM »
~Love is in the air~ lalalala

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« Reply #439 on: December 18, 2006, 11:46:01 PM »
thank you guys. I'm feeling better now ^^

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It's nice to know that Ai and Gaki are serious about their relationship. And I'm REALLY happy about Kaori having sex with another member. Who was it?


whoever you want XD I haven't thought about anyone in particular.

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    Lol, Maki the sex machine.

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I was thinking the same thing. Funny thing is how she's smart and intuitive about some things here in this story, and yet completely clueless in regards to other things in this story.


hell yeah! XDXD well.. she didn't make it with all the raised hands, you know? but yeah... she likes action XD
the fact that she's clueless about Shiba-chan feelings she usually have to deal just with her own feelings and that's enough for her XD

now...


***58***

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Seeing how upset was Ayumi getting, Megumi took her friend from the shoulders and try to calm her down. But it was too late to do something. Shibata yelled something at her fellow Melon member and return her attention to Maki.

“I shouldn’t have let you step into my life; I shouldn’t have let you touch me. You are the biggest mistake of my life and even so, I can’t stop thinking about you!”
“Shiba-chan… I…” tried to say Maki a bit disconcerted.
“Wanna know what makes me angrier? Your undying love for Yoshizawa. She left you years ago but you keep your heart closed and your eyes blinded for anybody who try to reach you” at that point, Ayummi’s eyes began to overflow “Can’t you see that you’re hurting people being like this? That you’re hurting me?”

Silence. Shibata wasn’t expecting an answer but at least some reaction, but all that she got was a stunned face looking at her, totally clueless.

“Don’t worry” she said more relaxed “It’s my fault for letting you do this to me. I knew how you were and I kept playing with fire…” Then she turned to Yuko totally defeated “Nakazawa-san, If you don’t mind, I’d like to leave now”

Yuko just nodded at let the girl leave the room. She wondered if all that questioning about their feelings it wasn’t too much. Shiba-chan looked really bad and she left Gocchin in shock. The others…, probably were too surprised to feel anything.

“Well.., maybe we should end this conversation here…”
“I’d like to say something” said Aya interrupting Yuko.
“Ok, go ahead”

Matsuura cleared her throat and made some steps towards Rika before speak.

“Rika-chan… I lied to you. I never wanted to help you with your plans”
“Then… why…?”
“Gocchin thought it could be a good way to discover that big secret that Yossi and you were hiding. If you trusted me, maybe there would be a way to protect Miki from you and, someway, a felt as if I was getting a little revenge for what you did to me too…”

Ishikawa wasn’t surprised at all. After what happened, Tsunku could fire her and she’d still feel nothing. There wasn’t a way that a few words could hurt and already devastated heart.

“Gocchin, you don’t have anything to say about this?” asked Yuko.

Maki looked at her elder, then at Rika and then at Yuko again.

“Yes” she said resolutely with a new glittering in her eyes “I have to go”

She just finished the sentence and ran out of the room. Nobody dared to ask, nobody dare to hold her back. She had always been a free spirit running wild against the wind and it could hurt to step between her and whatever she wanted.

“I guess this is the end of the meeting. Everybody can leave now”

While the girls were leaving the room, Miki took her cell-phone and pressed Yocchan’s number. She waited for an answer but nobody picked up the phone at the other side.

“Probably she’s still with Tsunku” she heard Yuko saying.
“With… Tsunku?”

Nakazawa could feel the worried tone on Miki’s voice. A meeting with her boss it was very usual being a leader of Morning Musume but, with the later incidents, she couldn’t blame Fujimoto for being worried. The fact is that she knew why Yossi went to talk with him. She had talked with her and asked for some advice before doing anything but Yuko wondered if it was a good idea to tell Miki about it.

“Yocchan.., she’s in trouble because of what happened?” asked suddenly another voice behind Yuko.

Two girls in love and worried were more than that Yuko could handle in a single day.

“Ok… We talked this morning” said Nakazawa finally “She’s tired and needs some time. That’s why she went to see Tsunku. She wanted to leave before anyone could notice it…”

But anybody was hearing her anymore. The two girls had left the room as if their life were in it leaving Nakazawa with the words in the mouth.

“These girls… They’ll never learn…”
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