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« Reply #180 on: February 21, 2007, 06:47:41 AM »
ho damn... I was taking that as in an abusive type thing or like schemeing on them and making them suffer the thoughts of his plan. Maybe I did realize it and totaly forgot when Miki's flippin' awesome self shot the guy dead. Oh yeah, props for Reina. how they thought of this plan is still interesting xD. Well on the bright side, at least Miki has a parner for broken arms (i.e. yossui)... ^_^;

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« Reply #181 on: February 23, 2007, 12:10:27 AM »
Risa Niigaki
  Unknown City
  October 8, 8:44 PM
 
  Risa reached the outskirts of the city with her feet aching, but decided that a quick rest was going to have to wait.
 
  No idea what, or even where this place is, but still, be happy it’s a city…
 
  The jog into familiar city concrete and sidewalks did a lot to soothe her still rattled nerves; she passed a battered car earlier on the desolate road, but chose to ignore it; she was close to the city anyway.
 
  As Risa hurried down the sidewalk, still occasionally glancing upward, towards the tower, she got her first hint that something was very, very wrong. In the first few blocks, she was mildly surprised, by the fifth, she found herself slipping into a state of shock. It wasn’t just strange, it was impossible.
 
  Shrugging it off, she turned a corner, running in the middle of the street now, and suddenly comes upon on what looks like to be the first real city street. Looking amass her surroundings attentively, she noticed the buildings outnumbered empty lots. There were several expresso bars and cheap diners, as well as a ‘bargain’ movie theater, which reminded her; Tokyo had a similar street, and that place was the most popular hang-out for the cities’ well-endowed nightlife.
  She hesitantly glances at her watch.
  At ten till nine, shouldn’t this place be littered with life?
 
  Of the mostly single or two-story brick shops and all the restaurants that lined the street, Risa saw that almost all were dark- and in the few that boasted some light, it didn’t look like there was anyone inside. There were plenty of cars parked along the narrow street, and yet, not one person that she could see.
 
  The whole city, it seemed, was totally deserted.
 
  Just where the heck is everybody?
 
  Her mind grasped for answers as she jogged down the silent street, searching desperately for a reason- and for some way to alleviate the sweaty anxiety that had once again settled over her. Maybe there was some kind of event going on, a church function, like a spaghetti feed. Or perhaps the city had decided to take up Oktober fest and tonight was the big kick-off.
 
  Yeah, but everybody at the same time?
 
  It was then that Risa realized she also hadn’t seen a single, moving car on the road since she’d arrived.
  Not one.
  And with that thoroughly unsettling realization came the next- less dramatic, but distinctly more immediate.
 
  Something smelled bad.
  Something smelled like shit.
 
  Jeez, has to be a dead skunk around. And apparently it ate nattou- threw up on itself before dying.
 
  She’d already brought herself to a walk now, and had planned to take a left at the corner, just a block ahead- but it was that horrible smell and the total absence of life giving her a serious case of the creeps. Maybe she should stop, check things out inside one of the lighted buildi-  
  “ Oh, hey…. “
  Risa grinned, relief flooding through her confusion. There were a couple of people standing at the distant corner, practically right in front of her. The streetlight was out on their side, but with Risa’s superb vision, she could see them in silhouette clear enough- a couple; a woman in a skirt and a big man wearing work boots.
 
  Risa starts to jog, careful not to run too fast- she didn’t want to scare them away with a ‘crazy-girl-dressed-in-a-steward-uniform’ act. As she got closer, she could see by the way they moved, heading in the opposite direction from her, that they had to be monumentally drunk. Both of them staggered into the shadows cast by an office supply store, and out of sight.
 
  “ Uh-oh… “ Risa whispered. She lengthens her stride, hoping to catch up.
 
  Must’ve come out from one of those bars back there. A pint or two too many, but as long as they have a cell phone, or can direct me to a police station, that’s good enough for me. Boy am I going to feel stupid when they tell me that tonight’s the big free concert or the all-you-can-eat town barbecue...
 
  Almost giddy with relief, Risa whips around the corner and squinted into the heavy shadows, looking for the pair. Not too far ahead, she spots them in a darkened alley and quickly ambles in their direction.
 
  “ ‘Scuse me~ “ Risa says loudly, overpowering her forced wheeze as she gradually comes to a walk, making sure not to follow to closely.
 
  They ignore her. With their backs turned, they continue to stroll along the alley.
" What the... " Risa murmurs under her breath.
  She slows down, a bit hesitant now, but still manages a speed that gradually closes in on them.

  “ Um, excuse me..! “
  She waits.
A small frown overtakes her, wondering why they haven’t at least turned around.

 
  Quit dibble-dabbing Gaki- get their freakin' attention!
 
  “ Hey!! “ Risa shouts, forceful this time.
 
  Nothing.
 
  Maybe they can’t hear me, she told herself, and almost believing it too, until she realized she was only a good twenty feet away.
  I don’t have time for this-
  Feeling a hint of desperation, Risa quickly scuttles toward them, placing her hand on the females shoulder. Her mouth opens to speak when-
 
  -when a thick, warm liquid substance, bonds with her hand. She quickly recoils away, frenzied by the familiarity of it.
  Her wet palm grossly chills by the cold night breeze; the thick matter oozing between her fingers as she rubs them together.
  Even in the darkened alley, she didn’t need light to validate what it was.
  She’d felt this before.
  The thickness, the warmth, the faint stench.
 
  Blood.
 
  Risa flurries her eyes at the pair, whom are slowly turning around, suddenly well-aware of her presence.
 
  “ Oh- oh my god… “
 
  Risa can’t believe her eyes. She quickly takes a step back, unexpectedly forgetting about the whole situation that brought her here in the first place.
  The woman groans; the sound alone churned Risa’s stomach, and, by reflex, she quickly turns to run.
 
  T-this has to be a nightmare- It has to be a freakin' nightmare!
 
  Through the shadows, the darkened dusk, the blackened night- she saw something.
  Something, she wished she didn’t see.
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« Reply #182 on: February 23, 2007, 01:12:31 AM »
Uh oh, Risa's delirious! :o

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« Reply #183 on: February 23, 2007, 01:46:44 AM »
I have an idea about where they crashed, but I'm not too sure about it.  And that actually led to another thought about the whole storyline, which I'm sure is wrong too.  So I'm just going to sit on these thoughts for a bit and see what happens.  :P  

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« Reply #184 on: February 23, 2007, 04:44:54 AM »
Why the hell do I keep thinking the word "zombie"?

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« Reply #185 on: February 23, 2007, 11:03:15 AM »
:oWell hell, this just went in a direction I wasn't expecting.
And right when I figured out why Eri would decapitate Risa.

Oh well, it makes for better(but more frustrating) reading when you can't see what's coming.

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« Reply #186 on: February 23, 2007, 10:41:46 PM »
Miki Fujimoto
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October 8, 9:15 PM

 Silence.
Miki opens her eyes.
Everything seemed so… slow.

 She found herself standing in the middle of a war-torn city street.
Everything was still.
The empty cars, the empty buildings, the empty sidewalks- the only movements were the trash, scattered all around her, being blown away by faint squalls of air.
Bricked buildings tower over her as precipitous mountains border alongside in the far distance.
The colors around her come across as gray, dark. Almost as if the city itself was fading into a blackened hole.
 
Miki gazes up.
It was daytime, but...cloudy. The rigorous clouds appeared...unusual. They moved swiftly across the sky, almost as if it were being fast-forwarded, rather then the ground, which seemed to be in an eerie, slow motion- including herself.

 A soundless gust of wind, blows across her dark long hair- entangling it into the air as if it were soft silk.

 Miki utters something, but-

 -she doesn’t hear a thing. The world around her, including herself- is hushed.
Noiseless.

 Suddenly, a bright light appears from above, coming from a nearby tower that loomed over the whole city.
Surprised by the intensity, Miki stares.
She can’t look away.
As the light grows brighter, it seemed to swallow her into a white abyss; surrounding everything around her.
The intensity hypnotized Miki. It felt like the light was carrying her, floating her towards itself.

Miki smiles. Her eyes begin to roll back towards her head; and she seemed to be at peace- not scared, or even happy, but rather, a neutral bliss.

 And that’s when she hears it.

 Exaggerated footsteps, not of one, but of many, echo loudly into her ears. Almost immediately, the engulfing light, the neutral bliss fades away.
She was back on the street, still engulfed in a gray, slow motion, except this time…

 Hitomi.
Sayumi.
Kusumi.
Ai.
Reina.
Risa.

 They all stood just ahead of Miki, scattered across the street.

 All of them, they looked like hell. Hitomi’s face, mostly covered in dark red grime- Sayumi’s entire upper torso, bandaged in white cloth, with a prominent blood stain- Kusumi’s hair, disheveled and cluttered- Ai’s clothes, tattered and ripped- and Risa… There was something different about Risa.
Her eyes.
Her eyes are gone.

 Each and every one of them exposed blank faces, complete with an eerily stare-

 -when suddenly, a violent flash of light, strikes like lightning- and immediately, they all start shouting at her; a noiseless portrayal, filled with expressions of worry, panic, regret, but most of all, fear.
A chill runs down Miki’s back. The sight of all their emotion, their feelings, their desperate but silent shouts; raced trepidation amongst her mind.
Miki tries to say something in response, but once again, silence.
In the end, there was just, silence.

Dead silence.

 She starts to step towards them, but that’s when it happened again-
-a violent flash of light; and immediately, still in a gray, slow motion, they start running in the opposite direction, anxiously sidestepping cars and loose trash. Their slowed footsteps, once again echo into Miki ears. She tries to follow after them, but realizes, she can’t move. Her legs wouldn’t budge.
Miki was trapped.

 She could only watch.
Watch her friends, run away from her.

 As the girls and footsteps fade away in the distance, only two remained in sight.
Sayumi, and Hitomi.
Feeling confused and distraught, Miki cups her hands over her mouth to yell, knowing it'd be useless to, when suddenly-

-Sayumi abruptly stops, and turns around, an expression of regret overtaking her face as she starts to dash back towards Miki.
Hitomi, running just a few feet behind Sayumi, spots’ this gesture, and immediately grabs her, stopping her in place. Miki watches as Sayumi fights to escape Hitomi’s hold.

 She screams something at Hitomi, frantically pointing over in Miki’s direction.
Hitomi looks over briefly, but shakes her head negatively, and retains her hold.
Miki gazes attentively, trying her best to read Sayumi’s slowed lips.

 E...R...I

Suddenly, the violent flash of light strikes again- and with that, Sayumi and Hitomi are no where to be seen.

  With the immediate realization of something behind her, Miki somehow regains control of her legs, and turns around. Laying her eyes on-
-
Eri.

Standing right in front of her. Making complete eye contact with Miki.
She wore a grim expression, but somehow, her... eyes were different. Staring into them, made Miki feel immensely uncomfortable- it felt like her soul was being sucked into Eri’s eyes.
Miki’s faint heartbeat can be heard now, rather then the demanding silence.

 Eri’s eyes- somehow they paralyzed her, and that feeling of neutral bliss overcomes Miki once again, only, there was no tower light.
Just, Eri’s eyes.
Her dark brown eyes.

 Eri starts to smile.
The feeling of bliss increases substantially, unexpectedly making Miki’s heart flutter. Miki wanted to shout, but, her mouth wouldn’t open. An invisible force seemed to seal it tight. Eri’s smile grows, as a pain overcomes Miki- an intense pain she’d never felt before. It ripped inside of her, gnawing at her heart; as if someone were tearing off her flesh piece by piece.

 Her eyes, still entangled with Eri’s, struggled to stay in its’ sockets- that same invisible force seemed to be tugging at her eyes, harder, and harder by each passing second. By now, Miki's faint heartbeat had grown into a violent pounding bass; each beat shook her ribcage and eardrums.
Eri says something, in silence, and slowly brings her index finger to her mouth, as if she were playfully shushing Miki-

-then the violent flash of light, and suddenly, she was gone.

Once again, Miki is all alone.
But, the pain remains.
With the deafening silence.
The horrible silence.

Gaining control of her body, she falls to her knees, quickly attaining a tight grasp on her chest. But, it didn't help.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             
With the pain rising, Miki clenches her teeth; but that’s all she was able to do- all she was able she could do, hoping to distract herself from the numbing pain inside of her.

And, the slow motion.
Time seemed to excruciate with the pain, amplifying it, ten-fold. At this point she just wished it would end.
As her body starts to spasm and collapse-

-Miki smiles, her eyes begin to roll back towards her head; and she seemed to be at peace- not scared, or even happy, but rather, a neutral bliss-

 -the bliss of death.
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« Reply #187 on: February 24, 2007, 12:59:12 AM »
That's a WTF moment right there. How did she die?

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« Reply #188 on: February 24, 2007, 02:48:37 AM »
erm...what just happened...? I'm confused...

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« Reply #189 on: February 24, 2007, 03:25:05 AM »
lol hahahhaaahhaha xD
always BORED!! :doh:

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« Reply #190 on: February 24, 2007, 03:43:58 AM »
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

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« Reply #191 on: February 24, 2007, 05:18:48 AM »
WAH?! USO! This can't be right!! Miki~~~:ONshock:

wah..what is going on here?  First Risa is in a city on the island which is in the prison? :ONdunno:

and and...then

MIKI just died?! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! :ONfrustrated:

oh the last chapter made me think of something!  If there was a Hitomi wota in the story, I wonder if the other girl is a Eri-look-alike!

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« Reply #192 on: February 24, 2007, 08:38:12 AM »
YOU
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EFFING surprised me with that last line..... I thought it was some sort of premenition dream... BUT it's a dying preminition dream! You cant kill the hero! Or well, one of them seeing as Yossui is the other hero.... Yossui needs her ;____;

And I REALLY thought the whole time that ... they were zomebies. I mean deserted town, people walking sluggish, etc etc.

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« Reply #193 on: February 24, 2007, 04:59:00 PM »
Miki . . . . O_O




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« Reply #194 on: February 24, 2007, 06:49:30 PM »
Quote from: glcorps2002;314959
Why the hell do I keep thinking the word "zombie"?


Same here. My first thought was ghost/zombie town?

The phrase "get down on your goddamn bellies!" was funny to me. Though I really shouldn't be laughing at all. The past 3 chapters were a mixture of :MKsniffle: :ONfainted: :ONfrustrated: :ON@_@: :panda_omg2: .

First I was angry that Sayumi lost the chance but when she came through I felt her concern for the other members. All the physical torture the girls had to go through made Risa's situation seem slightly better. But that's gonna change soon isn't it? I was hyped when the @^*&(*())(@#$^%$ man got shot but please don't let Miki have to pay the price for it :ONcry:

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« Reply #195 on: February 24, 2007, 08:01:04 PM »
?! *givesaconfusedlook*

Did i come into the right thread?

Ok ok let us think carefully, the rest are at one end, only miki and eri is on one side. Sayu tries to warn miki of eri (?). But yossi knows miki's destined to die so she pulled sayu back to save her (?)

no eyes means dead (?) risa's case and now miki...

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« Reply #196 on: February 24, 2007, 09:59:32 PM »
Finally caught up on all the updates.

But all I can say is, WTF!?!? O_O Weren't we all just being happy that the bastard got killed?! WTF IS GOING ON! I actually caught up last night and then I got so freaking scared I couldn't go to sleep ><;.

Btw, the font and color really works great here!

Putting together the latest three chapters' timestamps:
Oct 8 7:45 PM - Bastard gets killed
Oct 8 8:44 PM - Gaki-san in the weird city thingy
Oct 8 9:15 PM - Miki's "incident", don't know what else to call it.

Is this really even a dream!? Dreams have timestamps!? WTF HAPPENED WITHIN THOSE HOURS!? :ONfrustrated:

I'm sure this will all be explained soon, but I'm still confused as hell :doh:

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« Reply #197 on: October 20, 2006, 10:39:37 PM »
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Eri Kamei

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October 11, 1:49 AM



Eri sprints through the thick lush of trees.
The thick raindrops exploded onto her skin.
Her legs hurt.
She could barely see.

Eri’s desperate gasps for air echoes all around her. Frantically, she glances behind her. The violent sound of rushing footsteps follows close behind. Eri pounds her legs harder.
She knew it wasn’t her footsteps.

I’m being chased.

 An isolate field of tall dead grass comes into view. Holding her breath as best she can, Eri slowly takes refuge. The footsteps grow louder.
Oh my god, I’m being chased.

 She waits.
Her lungs scream for oxygen, but she manages to contain it. Eri peers through the grass, hoping to catch a glimpse.

“ Huff… Huff… “ Eri wheezes.

Shut up, Eri! Shut up!

 The footsteps stop. The only thing she hears is her heart, thrashing in her chest.
Silence.
Horrible silence.

Suddenly, a hand peers through the dead grass. She watched as her chaser came into full view. Eri froze. It was a woman; her face covered in what seems to be tears… and blood. Through the woman’s faint silhouette, Eri spots something gripped in the woman’s hand.

A severed head.

“ You've killed Risa... and now I have to kill you. “ The woman said. She drops the head, making a grotesque sound as it plummets to the ground.

Run Eri, run!
 The woman edges closer, revealing a butchers knife in her other hand. For a split-second, Eri manages to get a second glimpse of the woman. She recognizes a face.
An insane face.
A face she once knew. The woman violently raises the butcher’s knife to strike.
Eri squeals. She braces herself, hoping to die painlessly.

Hitomi Yoshizawa. She’s come to kill me.
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« Reply #198 on: February 25, 2007, 08:21:49 AM »
Hmmm... meo... I was just brainstorming here, so if it seems confusing,  just dont mind this.

So, I was wondering, is there a link between Eri's dream of Yossui wanting to kill Eri for killing Risa to Miki's death dream preminition and Risa's current situation?

{breaking it down}
In Eri's dream, Yossui was going to kill Eri for killing Risa. And Risa right now seems to be in a town of zombies where she can be potentially killed and turned into a zombie herself. And in Miki's death preminition dream, Risa had different eyes, almost like dead.
So does that mean that Miki's dream will come true and Risa will become a zombie, and Yossui find out and blames Eri... not sure why... and wants to kill her?

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« Reply #199 on: February 25, 2007, 01:49:53 PM »
I timed it according to my battery. 72 minutes. Good story. You have this cool knack for writing I love it. Look forward to more.

Btw, maybe it was just me but the last chapter was in gray. I dont know if you did that deliberately but whatever...actually it had an interesting effect on my reading. Kind of made it surreal..which suited because that chapter was pretty off the wall

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