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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume (New R.I latest chapter)
« Reply #440 on: August 03, 2008, 02:22:33 AM »


J F M A M J

“Not in our language,” Sayumi said mildly.
The three violet pieces were:

J M P

Hitomi sighed. “It’s one of those where you have to figure out the next in the series,” she said. “Apparently relating to time. Any thoughts?”

this reminds me of math....................and related to time so...............ah i'm confused!!!!
if we dont get this, what will happen to them???: :(:(:(

OUU I GOT IT!

J anurary
F ebruary
M arch
A pril
M ay
J une

so from the 3 etxra choices it's JULY THATS NEXT! J!

J uly!!!

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume (New R.I latest chapter)
« Reply #441 on: August 03, 2008, 03:13:15 AM »
^ OMG GENIUS
>__> I couldn't figure that out arg  :err:      I'll just agree with High-King

I've been pretty worried about the title as well... Eri vs MoMusu
I DON'T WANT GAKI-SAN TO DIE!!  :pleeease:

pleeeease don't tell me that everyone's going to be infected, leaving Eri to fend for herself T_T
Don't worry, it's good fics like these that make me happy
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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume (New R.I latest chapter)
« Reply #442 on: August 03, 2008, 03:16:23 AM »
Hitomi Yoshizawa
Compound, Block D (Test Room)
October 9, 9:46 PM



Reina grinned suddenly, a triumphant light in her eyes. “The letters stand for the months—January,
February, March, April, May, June—July. It’s J, the last letter is J.”

“Brilliant,” Hitomi said. She started to place the tiles in the indentation as Reina nudged Sayumi with her
elbow, still grinning.
“And you thought I was just another yankii.”

As usual, Sayumi didn’t bother answering.

Relieved to be through the second test, Hitomi pushed the last
piece into place. There was a faint click and the rainbow lowered very slightly, perhaps a millimeter.
From above them, a gentle chime sounded from a speaker, this one hidden by a fluorescent bar.

“That all I get?” Reina quipped. “No parade?”
Hitomi stood up, smiling tiredly. “I felt the same way with the other
one. We should get moving, see how Ai and Koharu are making out—“

“Interesting way of putting it, leader,” Reina said, chuckling. “Nice one.”

It took Hitomi a moment to get it, though Sayumi rolled her eyes almost immediately— then scratched at
them. When she took her hand away, Hitomi saw that her right eye was extremely bloodshot. The left
was also slightly discolored, though not as badly. She noticed Hitomi's scrutiny and smiled at her, shrugging.
“I irritated it somehow. It itches, but it’s fine.”

“Don’t rub it, you’ll make it worse,” Hitomi said, leading
them toward the door. “And have Ai take a look when we get across.”

They walked back into a connecting corridor and started for the back exit, Hitomi steeling herself for
another dash across the compound. By her count, they’d managed to take down three of the Trisquads in
full; three men outside of the boathouse and a fourth on the run to the first building, then Reina and
Sayumi’s five between blocks C and D.

Useful information, if you happen to know how many of the squads there were to begin with.
She ignored the inner sarcasm as they reached the metal door, Sayumi leaning back to turn off the over-head light.

They pulled out weapons and took deep breaths, preparing—and Hitomi felt a familiar sensation wash
over her, one that she’d experienced before in tight situations but had never been able to name. It wasn’t
a feeling so much as a state of existence— and although not a religious woman, it was the closest thing she’d
found to a belief in fate, a sense that there were patterns at play beyond the realm of human influence.

Whatever was going to happen, whatever was already happening even as they readied themselves to
step back outside—all of the deciding factors were now firmly in place, interlocking like pieces of a
puzzle. She felt it with a certainty that denied reason. It was as though a great wheel of chance that
determined outcome, that would show them life or death, success or failure, had been set into motion
and was now spinning toward its inevitable conclusion—only instead of slowing down, the wheel would
turn steadily faster, speeding up as it revealed to them what the cosmos had planned.

In the past, she’d often found comfort in the sudden awareness of that spinning wheel, the undefinable
sense that the outcome had been decided and all anyone could do was watch it unfold. When she’d been
a child and her father had been on one of his drunken, abusive rampages, the belief in a bigger picture had
sometimes been the only thing that saved her from total despair.

This time, though ...
this time, it felt like a
terrible thing, a dark and whirling carnival ride that they had boarded by mistake, not realizing the truth
until it was too late—that they couldn’t go back, and there was no avoiding whatever lay ahead.
We hang on, then. We do what we can.

Hitomi stepped to the door, flicking the Beretta’s safety off. Whether or not they had any control over
what was to come, Ai and Koharu were waiting.

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume (New R.I latest chapter)
« Reply #443 on: August 03, 2008, 03:31:32 AM »
Koharu Kusumi
Compound, Block B (Test Room)
October 9, 10:07 PM



The test room was quiet except for the soft hum
from the machines marked with blue numbers, nine through twelve, and the occasional rustle of a turning
page as Ai went through Ryoko’s journal.

Koharu sat on the edge of a table and watched Ai read, Koharu's thoughts restless and uneasy as they waited for the others to show up. Koharu's torso ached mildly, both
from the small caliber round she’d taken earlier and the anxious build of worry for Reina and Sayumi.

After a quick look at the other rooms in the building, they’d both agreed that the test room was the place to
wait. It seemed that block B of the compound was mostly devoted to surgical aspects of the
bio-weapons research, the rooms all white and steel, ominously stark and unpleasant. Although the
building was as stuffy and warm as the others they’d been in, Koharu had felt a physical chill as they’d
passed the empty operating rooms—as if the chambers themselves had taken on the characteristics of the
virus creatures.
Cold and lifeless and some-how mindlessly black with purpose. .. .

Ai looked up, her eyes flashing with excitement.

“Listen to this:
‘”They’re still waiting for our feedback on expansion ever since Chin revved up the amp time. ‘We’ve
got the space for up to twenty units, but I’m going to hold strong on a max of twelve; we wouldn’t be
able to concentrate on training more than four squads at a time. Matsuura said he’ll back me up if there’s
any hassle.’”

Koharu nodded, half dismayed and half relieved by the information. They’d already knocked one of the
Trisquads out of the running, plus seriously wounded or killed a couple of the individuals on another
team; that was good. On the other hand, it meant that there were still a couple of the squads roaming
around out there—
· unless they’re currently “engaged” with Hitomi-san and the others. . . .

Koharu scowled inwardly, grasping for something else to think about.
“Do you know what that means, ‘revved up the amp time’?”

Ai nodded slowly, worry creasing her brow. “I’m pretty sure she means that Niita sped up the
amplification process. Amplification is the term for a virus’s spread through a host.”

That didn’t sound like something she wanted to think about either. By some unspoken agreement, they
hadn’t talked about the possibility of Reina or Sayumi being infected since Hitomi had left.
“Wow... You find anything else in there Ai-chan?”

Ai shook her head. “Not really. She mentions something called 'Ma7s' a couple of times, but
nothing more specific than that they’re a virus experiment that didn’t work. And she’s definitely kind of
a jerk.”

“Kind of?”

Ai smiled briefly. “Okay, that’s an understatement. Ryoko’s a money-hungry, amoral bastard.”

Koharu nodded, thinking about the partial report they’d found on the Trisquads—and for that matter, the
very existence of the facility. Calling the virus victims “units,” setting up operating rooms and aptitude
tests to run them through like rats in a maze—
· it’s like they can’t acknowledge that they’re performing their experiments on human beings, on
real people....


“How could they do this?” Koharu asked softly, as much to herself as to Ai. “How did they sleep at
night?”

Ai gazed at her solemnly, as if she had an answer but wasn’t sure how to say it.

Finally, she sighed. “When you specialize in one field, particularly when it’s a field that demands linear thinking and a
very defined focus on only one tiny element of something—it’s kind of hard to explain, but it’s
frighteningly easy to get lost in that single element, to forget there’s a world outside of that element.
When you spend your days looking into a microscope, surrounded by numbers and letters and
processes... some people get lost. And if they were unstable to begin with, the ambition to pursue that
element can take over, making everything else unimportant.”

Koharu saw what she was getting at and was
impressed anew with how thoughtful Ai was, how clearly she communicated herself....
... all that and a smile that lights up a room; if— when we get out of this, I’m gonna be closer to her. Or
I’ll at least find out if she feels the same way...

There was a sound from somewhere in the building, footsteps.

Koharu pushed herself off the table and walked quickly to the door.
She leaned out into the corridor and heard Hitomi’s voice calling through the empty block.

“In the back!” Koharu shouted, then waited, anxiously watching the corner in the hall for Hitomi to walk
into view, Reina and Sayumi both healthy and smiling beside her. Ai moved to stand next to Koharu,
and Koharu saw the same concern and hope written across her delicate features.

Instinctively, she groped for Ai's hand, feeling a tingling jolt as their fingers touched, half expecting her to
pull away—but she didn’t, leaning against Koharu's taller frame instead as she held her hand gently, her skin soft and warm
on hers.

Reina’s booming voice preceded her down the corridor, loud and full of bright good humor. “Get your
clothes on, kids, you’ve got company!”

Ai dropped Koharu's hand quickly, but the look that she flashed Koharu more than made up for it—a sweet and
wistful expression that made Koharu's heart skip a beat—but there was a maturity there, too, a realization of
the circumstances they were in, an acknowledgment of priorities.
No more until we’re out of here.

Koharu nodded slightly, and they turned to wait for the others.
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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume (New R.I latest chapter)
« Reply #444 on: August 03, 2008, 04:04:23 AM »
Ai Takahashi
Compound, Block B (Test Room)
October 9, 10:13 PM



Ai COULD STILL FEEL THE LINGERING warmth of Koharu’s hand in hers as Reina, Hitomi,
and Sayumi walked around the corner, Reina grinning broadly.
“Sorry to crash, but we figured you girls could use a little chaperoning,” he said. “Nothing like young
love, though, am I right?”

As the three stepped into the room, Ai struggled to quash the blush she felt creeping up on her,
suddenly feeling horribly unprofessional. All they’d done was hold hands, and only for a second—but
they were in the middle of an operation, in hostile territory where even a moment’s lapse of
concentration could get them killed.

Reina must have picked up on her embarrassment. “Ah, don’t mind me,” she said, her grin fading. “I’m just
giving Koha-pink a hard time, I didn’t mean anything by it—“ Hitomi interrupted, shooting Reina a pointed
glance.
“I think we have more important things to discuss,” she said evenly. “We need to update, and I
have a few things I’d like to go over.”

She nodded toward the journal Ai still held. “They found the room, but didn’t touch anything. Did you
find anything else useful?”

Ai nodded, relieved by the news and glad for the change of subject. “It looks like there are only four
Trisquads, though the entry that mentioned it is a few weeks old.”

Hitomi looked relieved. “That’s excellent. Reina and Sayumi had another encounter outside of D, managed
to get five of them— that means there may only be one team left.”

They pulled chairs away from the small tables that lined the walls, forming them in a loose semi-circle in
the middle of the room. Hitomi stayed standing, addressing them solemnly.

“I’d like to do a quick recap, to make certain we’re all on the same page before we go any further. In
short, this facility was used for virus experimentation and has been taken over by one of the
researchers for reasons unknown. The other workers have been killed and the offices purged of
incriminating evidence. Ai believes that the biochemist Niita Tomoko is responsible, and the fact
that the grounds are still being patrolled suggests that she’s alive, somewhere in the compound—though I
don’t feel we should concern ourselves with trying to find her. We’ve already completed two of the tests
given to us by Dr. Matsuura, through notes, and my hope is that the ‘material’ he has hidden for us will be
the evidence we need to formally charge the government with criminal activity.”

She folded her arms and started to pace slowly as she talked, glancing between them. “Obviously there’s
already plenty of proof that illegalities have occurred here; we could leave now, wait it out for Risa and Eri and
 turn the matter over to international authorities. My concern is that we still don’t have enough hard evidence on Japan’s
involvement— other than the computer system’s software and the journal that Koharu and Ai found,
the government’s name isn’t on anything, and both of those could be explained away. My feeling is that we
should continue with the tests and find whatever Dr. Matsuura meant for us to have before we evac— but I
want to hear from each of you about it first. Musume or non-Musume- this isn’t an authorized op, we’re not
following orders here, and if you think we should go, we go.”

Ai was surprised, could see that the others felt the same by their expressions. Hitomi had seemed
so certain before, so enthusiastic about their chances. The look on her face now told a different story.

She seemed almost apologetic about wanting to continue, and looked as though she wanted for one of them to
suggest otherwise.
Why the change? What happened?

Reina spoke first, glancing at the rest of them before looking at Hitomi. “Well, we’ve made it this far! And
if there’s only one more group of zombies out there, I say we finish up!”

Ai nodded. “Yeah, and we still haven’t found the main lab, we don’t know why Niita did
this—whether she suffered a psychotic break or is actually hiding something. We may not find out, but it’s
worth a look. Plus, what if she destroys more evidence after we’ve gone?”

“I agree,” Koharu said. “If this crazy scientist lady is as deeply involved with our government as it looks, we’re not
going to get another chance. This may be our only chance to dig up a connection. And we’re
already so close, the third test is right here— we do that one, we’re one step away from finishing.”

“I’m up for it,” Sayumi said softly.
At the strained sound of her voice, Ai turned to look at her, noticing for the first time that Sayumi
didn’t look so good. Her eyes were bloodshot, her complexion almost a pallor.

“Are you okay Sayu-chan?” Ai asked.
Sayumi nodded, sighing. “Yeah. Headache.”

Must be a migraine, she looks like hell. . . .

“What is it, Hitomi?” Reina asked abruptly. “What’s eatin’ you? You know something you’re not telling us?”

Hitomi stared at them for a moment, then shook her head. “No, nothing like that. I just—I have a bad
feeling. Or rather, a feeling that something bad is going to happen.”
“Little late, don’tcha think?” Reina said, grinning.
“Where were you when we got here? And I'm the one who can't remember anything...”

Hitomi half-smiled in response, rubbing the back of her neck.
“Thank you, Reina, I’d almost forgotten. So, it’s decided then. Let’s solve our next puzzle, shall
we? Oh, Ai, take a look at Sayumi’s eye while we’re at it, it’s giving her some trouble.”

They stood up and moved toward the back of the room, for the table in the northwest corner marked with a blue
nine. Koharu and Ai had already looked when they’d found the room, though there was no clue as
to what the test was—a small, blank monitor screen with a ten-key hooked to it sat on the metal table, an
enigma.

Ai motioned for Sayumi to sit on the chair in front of test ten, the purpose of which also escaped
her— it consisted of a circuit board wired to a plank and what looked like a pair of tweezers connected
to it by a black wire.

She bent down to take a look, frowning. The Musume’s right eye was extremely
irritated, the pale brown cornea floating in a sea of red. Her eyelid had a bruised, swollen look.

Ai turned to ask for Hitomi’s flashlight—and saw that as Hitomi sat down in front of the scheduled test, the
screen flickered on, several lines of type appearing in the center of the monitor.

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume (New R.I latest chapter)
« Reply #445 on: August 03, 2008, 04:12:42 AM »
: R E A D E R : :   I N T E R A C T I O N :
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Hitomi Yoshizawa
Compound, Block B (Test Room)
October 9, 10:38 PM



“Some kind of motion sensor—“ Koharu started to say, but Hitomi held up her hand suddenly, reading
aloud what had appeared on the screen in a rapid, anxious voice.

“ ‘As I was going to Saint Ives, I met a man with seven wives—the seven wives had seven sacks, the
seven sacks held seven cats—the seven cats had seven kits; kits, cats, sacks, wives, how many were
going to Saint Ives?’”

There was a digital readout on the screen, showing 00:49 and counting down. In the time it had taken
Hitomi to read the question, eleven seconds had already ticked off the clock.

Hitomi stared at the screen, her thoughts racing furiously as the team leaned in behind her. Tension
radiated from them, and Hitomi felt a sudden prickle of sweat break out across her forehead.

Don’t count, that was the clue. But what does it mean?

“Twenty-eight,” Reina said quickly. “No, wait, twenty-nine, including the man—“

Koharu cut her off, talking just as fast. “But if they had seven kittens each, that
would be forty-nine plus twenty-one, seventy, seventy-one with the man.”

“But the message said don’t count,” Sayumi said. “If you’re not supposed to
count—does that mean don’t add, or—wait, there’s the man with the wives and the speaker, that’s
another one—“

Thirty-two seconds had elapsed. Hitomi’s hand hovered over the key pad.
Think! Don’t count, don’t count, don’t—

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Authors note: I'll end the R.I tommorrow! Remember Matsuura's hint: Don't count! Good luck!

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume (LAST TEST! R.I chapter!)
« Reply #446 on: August 03, 2008, 04:15:42 AM »
I know that answer! the answer is ONE..

one person was going to ST. Ives :)

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« Reply #447 on: August 03, 2008, 04:24:55 AM »
^whoa that was quick! here's an update for a prize!

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Hitomi Yoshizawa
Compound, Block B (Test Room)
October 9, 10:40PM

 

“One,” Ai said quickly. “ ‘As I was going to Saint Ives’— it doesn’t say where the man with the
wives was going. That’s what it means, the clue— don’t count anyone except the one who was going to
Saint Ives!”

Yes, it makes sense, a trick question—

They had twenty seconds left.

“Anyone disagree?” Hitomi asked sharply.
No answer.

Hitomi hit the key, entered it—
· and the countdown stopped, sixteen seconds to spare. The screen turned itself off. From
somewhere overhead, the now familiar chime sounded.
Hitomi exhaled, leaning back in the chair.

Thank you, Ai!

She turned around to tell her as much, but Ai was already bending to examine Sayumi’s eye, fixated on
her patient.
“I need a flashlight,” Ai said, barely glancing around as Reina handed hers to her. She turned it on, shining
it into Sayumi’s eye as the rest of them looked on silently, watching them.

Sayumi didn’t look well; there were dark circles under her eyes, and her skin had gone from pale to almost sickly.

“It’s pretty inflamed ... look up. Down. Left and right? Does it feel like there’s something rubbing it, or is
it more like a burn?”

“Actually, more like an itch,” Sayumi said. “Like a mosquito bite times ten. I’ve been scratching it,
though, that might be why it’s so red.”

Ai turned off the torch, frowning. “I don’t see anything. The
other one looks irritated, too . .. did it just start itching all of a sudden, or did you touch it, first?”
Sayumi shook her head. “I don’t remember. It just started itching, I guess.”

A look of sharp, almost violent intensity flashed across Ai’s face. “Before or after you were in
room 101?”

Hitomi felt a cold hand clutch at her heart.
Sayumi suddenly looked worried. “After.”

“Did you touch anything while you were in there, anything at all?”

“I don’t—“

Sayumi’s red eyes widened in sudden horror, and when she spoke, it was a breathless, quivering
whisper. “The gurney. There was a bloodstain on the gurney and I was thinking about—I touched it.
Oh, no, I didn’t even think about it, it was dry and I, my hand wasn’t cut and oh my God, I got a
headache right after my eye started itching—“

Ai put her hands on Sayumi’s shoulders, squeezing
them tightly. “Sayumin, take a deep breath. Deep breath, okay? It may be that your eye just itches and you
have a headache, so don’t jump to conclusions here, we don’t know anything for sure.” Her voice was
low and soothing, her manner direct.

Sayumi blew out a shaky breath and nodded.

“If her hand wasn’t cut...” Reina started nervously.

Sayumi answered her, her pale features composed but her voice trembling slightly. “Viruses can get into
the body through mucous membranes. Nose, ears ... eyes. I knew that. I knew that but I didn’t think
about it, I—wasn’t thinking about it.”

She looked up at Ai, and Hitomi could see that she was struggling to maintain her composure. “If I
am infected, how long? How long before I become . .. incapacitated?”

Ai shook her head. “I don’t know,” she said softly.

Hitomi felt as though a raging blackness had enveloped her, a cloud of fear and worry and guilt so vast
that it threatened to overwhelm her ability to move, even to think.
My fault. My responsibility.

“There’s a vaccine, right?” Reina asked, her dark gaze darting between Sayumi and Ai. “There’s a
cure, wouldn’t they have a shot or something here if someone got it by accident? They’d have to,
wouldn’t they?”

Hitomi felt a sudden surge of desperate hope. “Is it possible?” she asked Ai quickly.

The young Musume nodded, slowly at first but then eagerly. “Yeah, it’s possible. It’s probable, they
created it—“ She looked at Hitomi seriously, urgently. “We have to find the main lab, where they
synthesized the virus, and quickly. If they developed a cure, that’s where the information would be. ...”

Ai trailed off, and Hitomi could see what she’d left unspoken in her troubled gaze; if there was a
cure.
If Dr. Niita hadn’t taken the information there, too.
If they could find it in time.

“Matsuura’s message,” Koharu said. “In that note, he said we should destroy the lab— maybe he left us a
map, or directions.”

Hitomi stood up, her hope building. “Sayumi, are you feeling well enough to—“

“—Yes,” she said, cutting her off, standing up. “Yes, let’s go.”

Her red eyes were bright with fervent intensity, a mix of despair and wild hope that made Hitomi’s heart
ache to see.
God, Sayumi, I’m so, so sorry!

“Double time,” she said, already turning for the door. “Let’s move.”

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume (LAST TEST! R.I chapter!)
« Reply #448 on: August 03, 2008, 04:28:40 AM »
haha just got caught up on your story
whoaaa ...
plot's getting intense ...

sayu T.T;
please let there be a cure >_<;

haha the reader interaction got answered before i could answer it @___@;
anyways(:

update soon ^^
takagaki = <3 (:

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #449 on: August 03, 2008, 04:14:55 PM »
Sayu can't die! Or become a mindless zombie! She and Eri still need to see each other again!
What happened to Eri, Risa and Aya anyways?
Hopefully they can find a cure for Sayu.
This is getting fervent...

Keep the updates coming!


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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #450 on: August 03, 2008, 07:46:51 PM »
:: sighs ::
I knew it was going to happen, but I hoped it didn't..
Nuooooo Sayuuuu!!! Don't turn zombie!! T_T

Haha, the KohAi pairing is a little odd, and sudden, but I don't mind ^^;
It's certainly different o.O" but yeah, mission first, relationships later.. that is, if they can survive of course.
:: kicks self for cursing them :: crap, forget that!!

Ah... I actually don't want to know what is happening to Eri at the moment..
My greatest fear is finding out that Gaki-san dies  :fainted:
and also, something tells me that Aya is going to turn insane sooner or later >__>

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #451 on: August 04, 2008, 05:33:52 AM »
Reina Tanaka
Compound, Outside (heading towards block E)
October 9, 11:00 PM



They quickly jogged for the front of the building, Reina’s jaw clenched, her thoughts a grimly determined
loop of angry intention.
No way some goddamn bug is taking Sayumin down, no chance, and if I find the bastard who set this
nightmare up she’s Dead, capital D, Dead meat. Not Sayumi, no way in hell....


They reached the front door and silently drew weapons, checking them, tensely impatient for Hitomi to
give the signal.

Sayumi, always so cool and collected in times of stress, had a shocked vagueness about
her, like she’d just been kicked in the gut and hadn’t yet managed to take a breath. It was the same look
that Reina had seen time and again on the faces of disaster survivors during segments of the evening news—the
haunted disbelief in the eyes, the slack and terrible blankness of expression that spoke of a yawning emptiness deep inside.

It hurt her to see Sayumi like that, hurt her and made her even angrier. Sayumi Michishige wasn’t supposed to look like that.
“I lead, Reina in back, straight line,” Hitomi said softly.

Reina saw that Hitomi looked almost as freaked as Sayumi, though in a different way. It was guilt gnawing at
their leader, she could see it in her reluctant gaze, the tight set of her mouth. Reina wished she could tell Hitomi
that blaming herself was wrong, but there wasn’t time and she didn’t have the right words for it. Hitomi
would have to take care of herself, just as they all would.

“Ready? Go.”

Hitomi pushed the door open and then they were slipping through, back into the gentle hiss of waves and
the pale blue light of the moon. Hitomi, then Sayumi, Koharu, Ai, and finally Reina, crouched and
running across the packed dirt of the open compound.

There was darkness and the scent of pine, of salt, but Reina’s S.W.A.T. mind wasn’t telling her anything she
didn’t already know as they pounded through the shadows. There was only anger, and fear for
Sayumi—
-making the sudden blast of M-16 fire a total surprise. Shit!

Reina dove for the ground as the thundering rattle opened up to their right, saw that they were just over
halfway to block E as she rolled and started to fire. Then the air was filled with the blast of nine millimeter
rounds, crashing over the steady pulse of automatic rifles.
Can’t see, can’t target—

She found the muzzle flashes at three o’clock and jerked the Beretta around, squeezing the trigger six,
seven, eight times. The stutter of orange white light blocked the shooters from view but she saw one of the
flashes disappear, heard the clatter decrease—
· and a rage overtook her, not the “S.W.A.T. mind” but a blinding, screaming fury at the diseased
attackers that far exceeded any she’d ever known.


They wanted Sayumi to die, those numb, brainless
nightmares wanted to stop them from saving her. Not Sayumi. NOT SAYUMI.

A strange, feral howl beat at her ears as she pushed away from the dusty earth and then she was standing,
running, firing. Only when she heard the shouts of the others, the Berettas except for her holding fire, did
she realize that the howl was coming from her. Reina ran forward, screaming as she fired again and again at
the things that meant to slow them up, to kill them, to claim Sayumi as one of their own. Her thoughts were
no longer words, just an endless, formless negative— a denial of their existence and what had created
them.

She charged ahead, not seeing that they had stopped firing, that they were falling, that the shadows had
fallen silent except for the thunder of her semi and the scream that poured from her shaking body. Then she
was standing over them and the Beretta had stopped crashing and jumping, even though she still pulled the
trigger.

Three of them, white where there was no red, decayed flesh bursts covering their pitiful, wasted forms.
Click. Click. Click.

One of them had a face that was a mass of puckered scar tissue, twisting white risers of gnarled skin
except for where a fresh, bloody hole had punched through its forehead. Another, one eye spattered
against its withered cheek, pooling viscous fluid in the rotting cup of its ear.
Click. Click.

The third was still alive. Half of its throat was gone, tattered to pulp, and its mouth opened and closed
soundlessly, opened and closed, its filmed dark eyes blinking slowly up at her.
Click.

She was dry firing, the scream dying away in her ragged throat. It was the sound of the hammer falling
uselessly against hot metal that finally released her from the rage—that, and the slow, helpless blink of the
wretched thing at her feet.
It didn’t know what it was. It didn’t know who they were. Once it had been a man, and now it was
rotting garbage with a gun and a mission it couldn’t possibly understand.
They took his soul. . . .

“Reina?”
A warm hand on her back, Sayumi’s voice low and easy next to her. Koharu and Hitomi stepped into view,
staring down at the gaping, blinking shell of humanity in the shaded moonlight, the last remnant of an
experiment in madness.

“Yeah,” she whispered. “Yeah, I’m here.”

Hitomi trained her Beretta on the monster’s skull and spoke softly. “Stand back.”

Reina turned away, started walking back for their last destination with Sayumi at her side, Ai’s slight
form in front of her. The shot was incredibly loud, a booming crack that seemed to shake the ground
beneath their feet.
Not Sayumi, oh please not one of us. That’s no way to go out, no way to die—

Then Hitomi and Koharu were with them and without speaking, they broke into a jog for block E, moving
quickly through the emptiness that had claimed the night.

The Trisquads were no more—but the disease
that made them might even now be coursing through Sayumi’s body, turning her into a creature with no
mind, no soul, doomed to a fate worse than death.

Reina picked up speed, silently swearing to herself that
if they found this Dr. Niita, she was going to be awfully goddamned sorry that they did.

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #452 on: August 04, 2008, 05:37:31 AM »
Haha, the KohAi pairing is a little odd, and sudden, but I don't mind ^^;

Yeah- I was thinking- what pairs should I have? Since other stories have the usual pairs, I figure putting in a black sheep now an then would give my readers a new experience, so to speak XD

What happened to Eri, Risa and Aya anyways?

Aw- I wish I can say- but I can't! :P I'll give a little update to their status though: they're miles, and miles, and miles, and miles away from Rockfort. :)

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« Reply #453 on: August 04, 2008, 05:48:35 AM »
Ai Takahashi
Compound, Block E
October 9, 11:17 PM



THE E BLOCK WAS NO DIFFERENT THAN THE
first four they’d encountered, as bland and industrial and stale as the rest of them, a study in concrete
efficiency. They moved quickly through the stuffy halls, turning on lights as they went, searching for the
room that held the final clue to Dr. Matsuura’s secret.

It didn’t take long; almost half of the structure was
taken up by an indoor shooting range, where Hitomi had found boxes of loaded M-16 mags—but no
rifles to go with them. Reina had asked if she should retrieve the Trisquad’s weapons, which Ai
promptly vetoed. The rifles were hot, probably crawling with virus.

Like Sayumi’s blood by now, streams of replicating
virions bursting from cells, searching for new cells to
attach to and use and destroy....


“Here!” Koharu called from farther down the winding corridor, and Ai hurried toward her, Sayumi
and Reina not far behind.

Hitomi was already standing with Koharu by the closed door, the red, green, and
blue triangles a sign that they’d hit on the right room. Koharu’s gaze seemed to seek her out, but was blank
of all emotion except worry. She didn’t mind, noted it only absently. Sayumi’s infection, Reina’s insane run
at the Trisquad—there wasn’t room in her for anything but the need to find the lab, to find help for
Sayumi.

Koharu opened the door and they filed inside, Ai continuing to watch Sayumi closely for signs
that the virus had progressed—and wondering what she should do with the information she’d picked up
so far about the amplification time. She didn’t really have any doubts that Sayumi had been exposed, and
knew that no one else did, either—but what should she say?

Do I tell her that it might only take hours? Do I pull Hitomi aside? If there’s a cure, she has to get it
before the damage is too great, before it starts to fry her brain—before it dumps so much dopamine into
her that she stops being Sayumi Michishige and becomes. . . something else.


Ai didn’t know how to handle it. They were already doing all that they could, as fast as they
could, and she didn’t know enough about the virus to assume anything. She also didn’t want to see
Sayumi any more terrified than she was already. The Musume was doing her best to control it, but it was
obvious that she was on the edge of a breakdown, from the desperation in her bloodred eyes to the
growing tremor of her hands.

And the Trisquads had almost certainly been injected with much larger
amounts than Sayumi had been exposed to; maybe she had days....

.. .first symptoms in less than an hour? Don’t kid yourself. You have to tell her, to warn her and everyone
else of what could happen. Soon.


She pushed the thought aside almost frantically, looking around at the room they’d entered. It was
smaller than the test chambers they’d come across, and emptier.

There was a long meeting table pushed
to the back, a half dozen chairs behind it.

In the front of the room was a small shelf coming off the wall,
only a few feet long and a foot deep. There were three large buttons on the flat surface, red, green, and
blue. The wall behind the shelf was tiled in large, smooth gray tiles made from some kind of industrial
plastic.

“That’s it,” Koharu said. “Blue to access.” With barely a second’s hesitation, Hitomi walked to the
counter and pushed the blue button—
· and a woman’s voice spoke coolly from a hidden speaker above, startling them. It was a
recording, the bland tone eerily reminding Ai of the final moments of a popular hollywood action movie, a
triggering system tape.

“Blue series completed. Access reward.” One of the tiles behind the shelf slid away, revealing a dark
recess set into the concrete.

As Hitomi reached into the hidden space, Ai felt a surge of frustrated
anger and disgust for Japan, for what she realized they had done. It was despicable. All those tests, all
that work— set up to dole out treats to virus victims.

Get through the red series, good dog, here’s
your bone. . . and what was their reward, for making it through the tests? A piece of meat? Drugs, to
ease their hunger? Maybe a brand new weapon for them to train with? Jeez, did they even understand
what they’d been doing?


She saw the same curled sneers of horror and disgust on the faces of the others—and saw the same
growing dismay as they watched Hitomi pull a single tiny item from the recess, what looked like a credit
card with a slip of paper stuck to one side.

They gathered around her as she held the item up, her dark
gaze heavy with an almost manic disappointment.

It was a light green key card, the kind used to open
electronic doors, blank except for a magnetic strip—and the scrawled words on the small square of
paper said only:
LIGHTHOUSE-ACCESS 135-SOUTHWEST/EAST.

“Handwriting’s the same as on Matsuura’s note,” Koharu said hopefully. “Maybe the lab is in the
lighthouse. . . .”

“One way to find out,” Reina said. “Let’s go.”
She seemed angry, the same look she wore since their
discovery of Sayumi’s exposure to the virus. After watching her charge the Trisquad outside, Ai
almost hoped that they’d come across Dr. Niita;
Reina would tear her apart.

Hitomi nodded, slipping the card into her pocket. The fear and guilt that she felt were obvious, playing across
her features in a constant, twitching mask. “Right. Sayumi . . . ?”

She nodded, and Ai saw that her already pale skin had taken on a waxy tone, as if the top layers
were becoming translucent.
Even as she watched, Sayumi started to scratch absently at her arms.
 “Yeah, I’m good,” she said quietly.

She has to know. She deserves to know.

Ai knew it couldn’t wait any longer.

Choosing her words carefully, aware of their limited time, she
turned to Sayumi and spoke as calmly as she could.

“Look, I don’t know what they’ve done with the
virus here, but there’s a chance that you could start to experience more advanced symptoms in a
relatively short amount of time. It’s important that you tell me, tell all of us how you’re doing, physically
and psychologically. Any changes at all, we need to know, okay?”

Sayumi smiled weakly, still scratching at her arms.

“I’m really really really scared, how’s that? And I’m starting to itch all over. . . .”
She turned her red eyes to Hitomi, then to Koharu and Reina before looking back at Ai.
“If—if I start to act... irrationally, you’ll do something, won’t you? You won’t let me— hurt anyone?”

A single tear slid down one pale cheek, but she didn’t look away, her wet, crimson gaze as firm and
strong as it had ever been.

Ai swallowed, struggling to sound confident and reassuring, awed by the bravery she saw in
Sayumi’s eyes—and wondering how much longer that bravery would hold up beneath the roar of the
virus running through her veins.

“We’re going to find the cure before it comes to that,” she said, and hoped that she wasn’t telling Sayumi
a lie.
“Move out,” Hitomi said tightly.

They moved out.

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #454 on: August 04, 2008, 06:33:05 AM »
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Ai almost hoped that they’d come across Dr. Niita;
Reina would tear her apart.
Heck, even I would tear her apart!! (let's just hope that there isn't someone I know named Niita or something close)
=.=" Why does it feel like those tests aren't going to help, please tell me otherwise
You left at quite the cliffhanger *cough*again*cough*
so does that mean you're gonna go back to Eri and Gaki-san??

Aw- I wish I can say- but I can't! :P I'll give a little update to their status though: they're miles, and miles, and miles, and miles away from Rockfort. :)
USO!!! Are you serious?!?! Where the heck are they going?!?!

good thing I like about this fic [well... everything's good but the main one] is that you update so damn fast
I love it ><
gives me something to read and not rot away with too much free time (or in my case, procrastination time)

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #455 on: August 04, 2008, 10:02:23 AM »
I just love this fic, it's so well written and paced... and the last several chapters are getting better and better. You've got me addicted. I just recently caught up in reading the whole thing, and I'm glad I did.

And Ai... you cradle robber.  :mon misch:

Seriously though, it feels natural the way you are developing it. So I don't "mind" either.

I'm really feeling for Sayu right now, I hope something can be done.

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #456 on: August 04, 2008, 12:46:44 PM »
man the last couple of chapters were so well written...they made my eyes all moist  :gmon tears:, I didn't expected that to happen..fear and suspense I expected but not tears  :cry:

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #457 on: August 05, 2008, 07:16:16 AM »
Hitomi Yoshizawa
Compound, Outside (heading towards lighthouse)
October 9, 11:36 PM



The grounds of the facility were on a definite gentle slant, rising to the north, but as they left the E block
and started for the towering black structure that perched over the cove, the curving slope became much
steeper. The rocky soil angled up sharply, maybe as much as a thirty-degree incline, making the half kiick
walk into a hike. Hitomi ignored the strain in her back and legs; she was too worried about Sayumi and too
busy tearing away at her own incompetence to bother with physical discomfort.

They were closer to the shimmering waters of the cove than they had been since climbing out of them,
and the cool, whispering breeze off the moonlit sur-face would have been pleasant on some other night,
in some other place. The swaying ripples of soft light and the soothing murmur of waves were almost a
mockery of their desperate situation, such a sharp contrast to the chaos inside of her that she found
herself almost wishing that there were still Trisquads roaming around.
At least then this would feel like the nightmare it is. And I could do something, I could fight back, defend
them against something tangible. . ..


Ahead of them, the rising land curled around to the east, dropping away to a foaming sea far below. The
cove itself was fairly calm, but the sound of waves smashing against the cliffs grew louder as they hurried
on, approaching where the ocean met towering, cave-riddled rock walls.

Reina had taken the lead, Sayumi
next and then the two other team members. Hitomi brought up the rear, dividing her attention between
the compound to their left and behind and the dark structures ahead.

Directly in back of the lighthouse was what had to be the dormitory, a long, flat building almost twice the
size of the concrete blocks they’d left behind. They hadn’t come across quarters for the Rockfort
workers anywhere else, and it had the look of a bunkhouse—designed for sleeping and eating, no
thought given to aesthetic appeal. They probably should check it out, but Hitomi didn’t want to waste a
moment in their search for the lab.

The thought brought on another wave of guilt and angst that she tried unsuccessfully to block out. She
needed to be effective, to get them to the laboratory as quickly as possible without floundering in her
doubts and emotions—but all she kept thinking, kept wishing was that she’d been infected instead.

But you’re not, some tiny part of her whispered, Sayumi’s got it and wishing is pointless. It won’t cure
her and it will cloud your ability to lead.
Hitomi ignored the small voice, thinking instead of how badly she’d
screwed them all.
Who was she, to lead a fight against the government, to clean up the corruption and bring
honor back to Japan? She couldn’t even keep her people safe, couldn’t plan a simple covert
op— couldn’t even battle the demons of self-doubt and horrified guilt that raged inside of her.

They neared the lifeless dorm building, Reina slowing to let the rest of them catch up. Hitomi saw that her team
was tired, but at least Sayumi didn’t look any worse. In the gentle light of the swollen moon, Sayumi seemed
pale and somehow fragile. The deathly pallor she’d worn beneath the fluorescents had translated into a
soft, porcelain cast, the redness of her gaze turning to shadow. If Hitomi hadn’t known better . . . Ah, but you
do.
How long now, before that milky skin starts to peel, to flake away? How long before she can’t be
trusted with a weapon, before you have to restrain her from—
Stop it!

She let them catch their breath, turning to get a better look at the lighthouse less than twenty meters
away—and felt her stomach clench, her heart shudder suddenly for no reason that she could have
explained. It was an old lighthouse, a tall, cylindrical outdated building, weathered and dark and as
seemingly deserted as the rest of the compound. Looking at it, she experienced the feeling she’d had
earlier of impending doom, of options closing down behind them and the spinning wheel of darkness
ahead.

“Come on,” Reina said briskly, but Hitomi stopped her with a hand on her arm, shaking her head slowly.
Not safe. That tiny voice again, familiar yet strange. Hitomi stared at the looming tower, feeling lost, feeling
uncertain and out of control as the wind swept over them, the waves pounding the cliff.
They were waiting. It wasn’t safe, but they had to go in, they couldn’t just stand there—
· and it hit her suddenly, a clear realization of what it was that had gone wrong in her mind. What
was really wrong. It wasn’t her competence, it wasn’t her ability to think or plan or fight. It was something
far worse, something she might have noticed much earlier if she hadn’t let herself get so wrapped up with
guilt.

I stopped trusting my instincts. Without the security of the others behind me, I forgot to listen to that
voice—so terrified of making a mistake that I lost my ability to hear, to know what to do. Every time the
fear hit me, I pushed through it, I ignored it— and I made it that much stronger.


Even as she thought it, as she believed it, she felt the blackness of doubt lift from her exhausted thoughts.
The guilt eased back, allowing a kind of clarity to filter through—and with it, the tiny voice inside took on
a power that she’d almost forgotten it could have. It’s not safe, so hit the door fast, two in low, the rest
high and covered outside—

All of this flashed through her mind in seconds. She turned to look at her team, Morning Musume, watching her, waiting for
her to lead. And for the first time in what felt like an eternity, she knew that she could.

“I think it’s a trap,” she said. “Reina, you and I go in low, I’ll take west—Ai, I want you and Koharu
to stand on either side of the door and fire at anything standing; keep firing until we call clear. Sorry,
Sayumi, you’ll sit this one out.”

They nodded all around and started for the deep shadows that surrounded the ominous tower, Hitomi in
front, finally feeling as though she was doing something useful. Maybe that spinning destiny was too vast,
moving too quickly for them to deny— but she wasn’t going to let it run them over without at least putting
up a fight.

Sayumi deserved that much. They all did.

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« Reply #458 on: August 05, 2008, 08:14:01 PM »
Sayumi Michishige
Compound, Lighthouse
October 9, 11:56 PM



Sayumi hung back as they moved into position, leaning against
the back wall of the large building behind the lighthouse to watch. She felt winded by the climb up the hill,
winded and strange and there was a buzzing in her brain that wouldn’t go away, wouldn’t let her fully
concentrate. . ..
... getting sick. Getting sicker, fast.

It scared her, but somehow it wasn’t as bad as it had been. In fact, it
wasn’t really that scary at all. The initial terror had gone, leaving her with only a memory of the adrenaline rush, like a whiff of a bad dream.
The itch was distracting, but not exactly an itch anymore.

What had felt like a million bug bites on her skin, each separate and distinct and screaming for relief, had- connected. It was the only way she could think to describe the sensation. They had connected, had become a thick blanket over her body that crawled and squirmed, as if her skin had come to life and was
scratching itself.
It was weird, but not exactly unpleasant—

“Now!”

At the sound of Hitomi’s voice, Sayumi focused on the sudden action in front of her, the buzzing hum in her head making it all seem strange, speeded up somehow.
The door to the lighthouse crashing open, Hitomi and Reina leaping into the blackness, bullets flashing and booming. The high, whining rattle of an
M-16 inside.

Koharu and Ai, ducking and firing, out and in and out again, their bodies blurred by speed, their Berettas dancing like black metal birds. It was happening so fast that it seemed to take a long, long time for it to stop. Sayumi frowned, wondering how that could be—
• and then saw Hitomi and Reina step back out into the blue light of the moon, and realized that she was happy to see them.

Even with their strange and distorted faces, their long bodies that moved too
quickly. . .
. . . what’s happening to me. ..

Sayumi shook her head but the buzzing only seemed to get louder—and she was afraid again, afraid that Hitomi and Reina and Koharu and Ai would leave her behind.
They’d leave her behind and she wouldn’t have anyone to, to— ease her mind.

That was bad.

Hitomi was in front of her, staring at her with eyes like wet, dark cherries.

“Sayumi, are you okay?” At the look on her round and pointed face and the
sound of softness in her voice, Sayumi felt happy again, and knew that she had to tell her the truth.

With a tremendous effort, she found the strength to say what had to be said, her voice coming out of the crawling body and the buzzing, sounding as strange to her as the wind.
“It’s getting worse now,” she said. “I don’t think right, Hitomi. Don’t leave me.”

Reina and Ai, their hot, hot hands touching her, leading her away and to the darkness of the open door. Her body worked, but her mind was clouded by the trembling buzzing hum.

There were things she wanted to tell them, things that drifted through the cloud like flashes of pretty pictures—
but the building they moved her to was dark and hot, and there was a body on the floor holding a rifle.

Her face, Sayumi could see. Her face wasn’t strange; it was white, white and curling, textured like the buzzing and the crawling. It was a face that made sense.

“I got the door,” Koharu said, looking up and grinning, white, white teeth. “One-three-five.”

There was a keypad next to an open hole, stairs leading down, and Koharu’s teeth disappeared, her flat face wrinkling.

“She's—“

“We have to hurry.”

“Hang on Sayumin, hang on, we’ll be there soon—“

Sayumi let them help her, wondering why their faces looked so strange, wondering why they smelled so hot and good.

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« Reply #459 on: August 05, 2008, 08:18:16 PM »
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Sayumi let them help her, wondering why their faces looked so strange, wondering why they smelled so hot and good.

:shocked: That's not a good thought at all, Sayu!


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