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« Reply #20 on: November 16, 2006, 06:56:17 AM »
:pen_shocked: :ONshock: :panda_omg2:  I like these emoticons...

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« Reply #21 on: November 16, 2006, 06:59:33 AM »
Yeah, it's gonna get emo :D
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« Reply #22 on: November 16, 2006, 08:27:53 AM »
Nacchi ... :cry:

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« Reply #23 on: November 16, 2006, 11:35:45 PM »
More reviews or I'll quit writing D:

Chapter six (or sex if you perfer)

'I hope Abe-senpai is alright...' Hagiwara Mai made her way down one of the many identical corridors of the hospital. She had just been to the store to buy some flowers for Natsumi, who was currently uncouncious in one of the identical hospital beds. Yuko had refused to leave Natsumi's side, so Mai had obeyingly fufilled her senpai's orders.

She could hear voices from inside Natsumi's room.

"Nacchi, please.. Don't do this to me.." Yuko sounded as if she was crying. Mai wanted to comfort her, but she knew better.

"Yuu..chan..?" Natsumi's voice croaked.

"Oh, thank God," Yuko sobbed. Through the crack in the door, Mai could see the two embracing. "I'm so glad.." she hugged Natsumi tighter. "I thought.. I thought I was going to loose you.."

Mai felt a lump in her throat, it was touching.

"Yuu-chan.." Natsumi moved forward, raising her head to the height of Yuko's, their faces inches from eachother.

"Nacchi..." Yuko squeezed Natsumi tighter.

They were moving closer.. closer..

Mai knew she shouldn't be watching, but it was like a car crash -- she just couldn't turn away.

Even though she was only ten, she was not stupid. She knew they were going to kiss eachother. She wasn't going to stop them, either. Mai truly loved Yuko, but if Yuko loved Natsumi and vice verca, she was going to have to live with it. Because she knew, if she truly loved her, she would have to accept Yuko's true feelings.

Their lips were touching now.

Yuko slid her hand down Natsumi's hospital gown, pushing the two back down onto the bed.

Mai could feel her face growing hot.

"Yuu-chan.. I.. love you"

"I know"

"I'm sorry, what's your name, ma'am?"

One of the doctors had walked it.

Yuko scrambled off the bed, looking flustered.

'Oh no..' Mai thought. 'They can't tell Doctor their real names..'

"Both of yours, if possible, please."

Silence.

"Zawanaka Yoku." Yuko replied.

"The patient?"

"Ame. Ame Natsuko."

Mai giggled. A little too loud, unfortunately, for the doctor heard her.

"And you are?"

"Haara Ai"

"Zawanaka Yoku, Ame Natsuko, and Haara Ai? Funny, you look familiar..." with that, the doctor left.

"It wouldn't be safe to reffer to eachother by our real names," suggested Yuko. "We need to come up with new nicknames."

"Yoo-chan sounds odd.." Nacchi laughed. "Zacchan? Deverted from Zawanaka?"

"That works,"  Yuko smiled. "--Natsucchi." she added quickly.

"Er- Zawanaka-senpai?" Mai wasn't sure what to address her as.

"-san," Yuko corrected her. "Senpai would be too suspicous."

Mai just realized she was holding the flowers still. "Ame-san.. Zawanaka-san wanted me to give you these.."

"Zacchan?"

Yuko blushed.

"Thanks," Natsumi smiled.

Yuko blushed more.
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« Reply #24 on: November 17, 2006, 01:48:44 AM »
I rofl'd...

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« Reply #25 on: November 17, 2006, 01:58:26 AM »
I love how you reversed Yuko's name XD Zawanaka Yoku... XD

The kiss was touching :]

But Mai accepts it? Now I'm half-expecting Yuko to do something with her too XD

Write more <3

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« Reply #26 on: November 17, 2006, 09:56:47 AM »
Moar

chapter seven

It had been two days since Abe Natsumi (or, as she was commonly reffered to, Ame Natsuko) had been released from the hospital. Nobody in Hello! Project aside from Nakazawa Yuko and Hagiwara Mai knew, however. Natsumi touched her lips and traced around them with her index and middle finger.

'Yuu-chan..'

Natsumi remembered when they had first met...

* * *

It was a cold and windy night. The eleven finalists of the Sharan Q Female Vocalist Audions were backstage, getting ready to perform Heike Michiyo's new song, GET, infront of a couple of thousand people and the judges: Sharan Q themselves.

Abe Natsumi shivered. "I wish I had some money so I could go and buy a hot drink.."

One of the other finalists were standing over her, holding two hot chocolates in either and. "Ah! You're--" it was embarrising, forgetting somebody's name.

"Nakazawa Yuko," the woman replied, handing one of the hot chocolates to Natsumi. "here. Drink this." she smiled.

Natsumi blushed. "Thank you."

She raised her arm and pressed the cup to her lips, sipping the warm, soothing liquid.

"No need to thank me," Yuko smiled and began to walk off. "Well, see you around!"

Natsumi wanted to call her back, but she couldn't think of anything to say, except: "Good luck!"

Yuko stopped in her tracks and turned back to Natsumi. "Thanks! You too!"

That smile..

That heart-warming smile..

This feeling Natsumi had never felt before...

* * *

Natsumi hugged herself. She was glad she and Yuko had lost, because they had formed Morning Musume, and spent mmore time together, until Yuko graduated.

Incidentally, she still felt the same was about Yuko. Except now, she knew what that feeling was: love.

But Yuko and Mai had been together that day.. what did that mean? Did Natsumi have competition?

If Yuko was happy, she would have to move on.

'Well,' she thought to herself as she dozed off on the couch. 'At least there's always Kaorin..'


I HAVE NO IDEA WHERE I'M GOING WITH THIS D:
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« Reply #27 on: November 17, 2006, 01:00:04 PM »
LOL at your "I HAVE NO IDEA WHERE I'M GOING WITH THIS D:"

You could go crazy and include the most crack couples possible XD

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« Reply #28 on: November 17, 2006, 05:54:51 PM »
Quote from: Shoko;236977

'Well,' she thought to herself as she dozed off on the couch. 'At least there's always Kaorin..'


XD LMAO

Please bring other crackpairings as side stories

I like :heart:

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« Reply #29 on: November 18, 2006, 01:58:08 AM »
Yes, crackpairings are love <3

chapter eight

"So. Let me get this straight." Yuko, Natsumi, and Mai had decided to confront Kaori about what happened. "Yuu-chan was on a date with Maimai, when Nacchi ran into them, and stalked them. Of course, Nacchi denied it was her, called Yuu-chan an 'old hag', Yuu-chan got mad and chased Nacchi, Maimai followed, Nacchi ran out of breath and fainted, and Yuu-chan and Maimai took Nacchi to he hospital, which she stayed in for a couple of days. Of course, you three did the wise thing and came up with pretend names."

"Yeah," Natsumi muttered guiltily.
"I'm sorry, Iida-senpai!" Mai apologized.
"Nacchi shouldn't have called me and old hag though."
"Sorry," Natsumi replied, her face looking like 'D:'.
"No need to apologize," Yuko looked away and stared at a spot on the wall.
"You're blushing" Kaori teased, a superior look on her face.
"I AM NOT!" Yuko retorted.
"Maimai!"

It was Airi.
"Airin?" Mai looked at her fellow ºC-ute member.
"Have you forgotten, we've got a recording today!"
"Oh.." Mai looked longingly at Yuko. "Sorry, I forgot." she laughed. It must not have been very convincing, for Airi shot her a quizitorial look.
"Okay then, let's go! The other's are waiting in the studio!" Airi grabbed Mai's wrist and led her out the building.
"See you later, Nakazawa-senpai!" she called out.

"Who was that?" asked Kaori. "I always get the Kids mixed up."
"Suzuki Airi-chan," Yuko replied. As the leader of Hello! Project, she had to know her kohai. "Claimed by the fans and press to be the most talented."
"Why wasn't she placed in that other group, Berryz Koubou, then?" asked Natsumi, who didn't follow the Kids at all.
"Because Tsunku-san thought she'd do better in ºC-ute, being younger and all.."
"But Yajima Maimu or whoever is older than some of the Berryz members, yet she's in ºC-ute!" Natsumi retorted.
"Yajima Maimi-chan, like Suzuki-chan, was thought to do better in ºC-ute than in Berryz," Yuko sighed. "I don't know, but what I DO know is that Tsunku-san's word is law."
"And that Kanna-person was originally an Egg, right?" asked Kaori.
"Yeah," said Yuko. "Aihara-chan, however, was seen as 'talented' by Tsunku-san so she was placed in ºC-ute."
"Murakami-chan graduated recently, didn't she?" asked Natsumi. Megumi was one of the few Kids who's name she knew off by heart.
"Yeah, to continue her schooling,"
"Isn't that the same with most members?" asked Kaorin.
"Hmmm," Yuko said. "I guess..."

BORING CHAPTER. Sorry, I have writer's block D:. But um. Next chapter, chapter nine, will be a ºC-ute centered chapter!
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« Reply #30 on: November 18, 2006, 04:12:16 AM »
I suddenly noticed that you placed me in your beloved signature :] I feel loved now ~<3

Nonetheless, I like how they were pondering the existance of C-ute's members, good for a filler chapter, haha.

I suggest that you plan everything ahead of time so that you wouldn't get writer's block :]

-hopes the hardhat will be put to use as well <3-

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« Reply #31 on: November 18, 2006, 06:14:40 AM »
This is so cute/lovely. I'm really enjoying this.

And let me say, when it came to the "Well, there's always Kaorin" part, it just made be giggle because a book I read has a male Iida who is a warlord and an Abe who is one of his retainers. ^^,,

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« Reply #32 on: November 18, 2006, 06:16:19 AM »
Wow...this story is amazing!!!Can't wait to read more!
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« Reply #33 on: November 18, 2006, 06:24:22 AM »
LOL
yay crack pairings!!!

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« Reply #34 on: November 18, 2006, 07:17:01 AM »
@Yuuyami: Well, I <3 your fanfic, and you obviously like mine, so like, yeah :P

chapter nine

"Maimai?" Airi walked over to Mai and sat down on the bench. "You okay?"

No answer.

"Maimai?"

"Oh? Airin.. yeah?"

'This isn't like her.. she's usually perky...' Airi thought. "Hmm.. nothing, you just seem.. I don't know.. different today. I was just worried."

"Who? Me? No, I'm fine, really!"

Again with that unconvincing smile.

"Yeah, alright then..."

"I'll be going now, see you!" Mai stood up and walked off.

"Byebye!" Airi called out. "She's so not alright..."

She could talk to Maimi about it.. their leader might be able to help.. Even though Airi knew she shouldn't interfere, however there was something about her.. something about Mai..

* * *

"Oiiiiiiii, Yassui!"

"Airin? What is it?" Yajima Maimi was making her way down the stairwell, and Suzuki Airi had just called out to her.

"It's.. Maimai.." Airi panted.

"What about Maimai?" Maimi asked, interested yet sounding impatient.
"Is it just me, or did she seem different today?" asked Airi. "You know, not herself.."
"Yeah, she did.." said Maimi thoughtfully. "I have no idea where I've seen that behaviour before.. somewhere, but.."
"Ohhhhhhh, whatcha talking about!?" Chisato teased.
"I'll talk about it later," Airi muttered to Maimi. "The others don't need to know."
"We better go, Berryz Koubou are supposed to have a recording session today, too," said Erika.
"How do you know?" asked Saki. "You're not a member for one thing.."
"Yurina told me," Erika replied.
"Too late, they're here!" Kanna was standing on her tip-toes and peering out the window.

Then an idea struck Airi. Maybe she could talk to the Berryz Koubou girls..
"Airin, c'mon!" Chisato called out.
"I just remembered, I left something in the studio!" Airi replied.
"Okay then!"

"Totally!"
"Oh. My. GOD!"
"No freaking way!"
"Oh gosh, really!?"
"Huh? Suzuki?"

"Eheh.. I was wondering if I could talk to you about something.. or, actually, someone.." Airi grinned nerviously.
"What about?" asked the tall, almost living sky-scraper Kumai Yurina.
"Well.. it's about Maimai.." Airi dived into an explination of Mai's sudden change in behaviour. The girls listened in amazement.
"It's so obvious, Airin!" Tsugunaga Momoko squeaked. "I can't believe you haven't figured it out!"
"Momocchi, don't be mean!" Tokunaga Chinami punched her softly on the arm.
"Sorry, sorry!" Momoko sighed. "But come on.. think about it.. it's so obvious!"
"Would you care to share your insight to the matter?" Sudou Maasa raised an eyebrow. "And besides, WHAT is so obvious?"
"Well, this sudden change in behaviour, or as I like to call it, 'talking a turn on the Emotional Express'."
"Emo-- what!?" the other girls stared at her.
"She's in love, silly!" Momoko smiled.
"EEH--------------------!? LOVE----!?"
"That explains it," said Saki.
"I can.. see were you're coming from," Risako nodded.
"But the question remains," Yurina pondered. "Who is she in love with?"
"When I went to get her, she was with Nakazawa-senpai, Iida-senpai, and Abe-senpai. She seemed to want to stay with them."
"Hmm.."
"She was also supposed to be meeting Nakazawa-senpai in Harajuku a couple of days ago.."
"Nakazawa-senpai?" Yurina blinked.
"No way.."
"But Nakazawa-senpai is always with Abe-senpai," said Chinami. "They've always been close.."
"Girls, we need to get this done today!" the person in charge of the recording called out.
"Sorry!" the girls chorused together.
"Well, I'll be going now," Airi made her way out the door. "Sorry about that!"
"It's fine," said Saki. The other members nodded.

'Nakazawa-senpai, huh? I wonder.. what will Abe-senpai think of this..'
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« Reply #35 on: November 19, 2006, 01:37:04 AM »
I don't know any of the Cute kids... But I enjoyed anyway!

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« Reply #36 on: November 19, 2006, 01:46:56 AM »
OH NOES! They're catching on! :o

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« Reply #37 on: November 20, 2006, 03:46:18 AM »
I'm sick, so no new chapter today, BUT

It seems as though Tsunku has been reading my mind:



<3333333
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« Reply #38 on: November 20, 2006, 06:02:41 AM »
Quote from: Shoko;239091
I'm sick, so no new chapter today, BUT

It seems as though Tsunku has been reading my mind:



<3333333


yes, hella cute :P

I hope you get better soon (for the sake of these crackpairings XD)
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« Reply #39 on: November 20, 2006, 06:07:39 AM »
Yes :3

So far, the crackpairings ARE:
-Yuko/Maimai
-Yuko/Nacchi
-Nacchi/Kaori
-Maimai/Airin


There was also some implied Yurina/Erika, dunno if anyone caught that.


Chapter ten should be up tomorrow -- I'm lazy and unwell D:
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