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Secret of GAM
« Reply #60 on: February 25, 2007, 04:10:45 AM »
An update! It's good to have you back. ;)

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Secret of GAM
« Reply #61 on: February 25, 2007, 08:15:10 AM »
okaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaeri!

Nice chapter. Snuggles and warm embraces. Love is great, isnt it..

and hizzah for 3rd singleeeee

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Secret of GAM
« Reply #62 on: February 25, 2007, 09:05:48 PM »
Wooo! this is fic of the month for a time now and I can see why it was chosen! :panda_love:
Sorry to not read it before.. I hads to be away from the forum for a little time....
But, yey! This is great! And most of all, I'm glad you're feeling better!
keep it up, please! ^_____^
I needed to put al least four letters... ¬¬'

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Re: Secret of GAM
« Reply #63 on: April 04, 2007, 08:54:52 AM »
It has been a month and when will the next chap come up???

This is so good to be true that Aya and Miki finally fall in love with each other, so sweet  :)
GAM= Great Aya and Miki

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Re: Secret of GAM
« Reply #64 on: April 28, 2007, 09:47:41 PM »
Long time no seeeeeeee~ :D

Hope you are all doing well? I'm totally fine! ;D Well...I'm still at the clinic lol :-\
But I think I will get out of there soon  :D I will try to write the next chapters tomorrow! My weekends are too short  >:( I will give my best and try it!!! Hope you are still looking foward to my story! :-\
Hopefuly a new update tomorrow ;)

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Re: Secret of GAM
« Reply #65 on: April 29, 2007, 09:42:12 PM »
Sweet, it's so good to hear that you're doing well :). Looking forward to that next chapter XD

Nacchi... kawaii XD

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Re: Secret of GAM
« Reply #66 on: May 04, 2007, 07:48:57 PM »
Hey, its my first here in the fanfics room.
And ur fic is the first one i read as im a GAM's fan...hehe
I just finished the chapter 2.
I really like it...
Miki-Aya are sweet and cute  :heart:

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Re: Secret of GAM
« Reply #67 on: June 01, 2007, 12:26:06 PM »
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Hey, its my first here in the fanfics room.
And ur fic is the first one i read as im a GAM's fan...hehe
I just finished the chapter 2.
I really like it...
Miki-Aya are sweet and cute 

Thanks  :wub:

Sooo well I'm out of the clinic YAAAAAAAAAY~  :lol:
I love it to know that I can be here everyday now~ :D And now I got more time again for writing! I really missed writing when I was in the clinic...my head didn't want to release ideas in that time! :angry: :cry:
Yaaah well just wanted to tell you that I'm back again  :P

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Re: Secret of GAM
« Reply #68 on: June 01, 2007, 02:43:55 PM »
WELCOME BACK!!! :rockon:

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Re: Secret of GAM
« Reply #69 on: June 21, 2007, 08:10:07 PM »
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Hey~^^
Finally I've got the next chapter finished! I think it might be a good start again.
Well my writing is still a bit...hmmm well not so good :cry: Ok sorry that it took so long, but I really had so much to do. 
I hope I can make a weekly update or more updates in a week.
What I want to say is that there is no end in the moment of the story. And that I had planned to make a Secret of GAM  Miki Version when the Aya version is finished. So I hope you like the idea and I thank you all for your support!!  :heart:

Ok enough talking! Here it is~
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Chapter 16
“メリー クリスマス”
Merry Christmas


 few sun strains were shining thru the curtains.
I was lying on my belly, still sleeping lightly. After a while I sensed my Miki shifting nearer. When I felt that her hand came under my shirt, stroking my back softly, I turned my head to the right side.
A soft “Good Morning.” Came to my ears.
I smiled and opened my eyes.

My eyes coughed her only a few inches away from me. She looked cute with messy hair and a sleepy face. Slowly she climbed on top of me.
“Morning.” I replied soft and smiled.
Miki stretched her arms, making a “Mhh….”sound.
“Slept well?” I asked.
“Yep.” She answered playing with my hair.
She bends down and kissed me. I returned her kiss softly.

Somehow things changed. Our behaviour was different.
We touch us in other ways than before.
Sometimes, my head was telling me things that frightened me.
This feeling inside me…that says that I should do more…
The way she is playing with me is turning me on. I gently swap places with her and wanted to kiss her more.
Just when I did…the telephone rang…
Miki blushed and covered herself with the blanket.
Talk of bad timing…
I sighed and answered the phone…

“Yah…?”
“Good Morning Matsuura san, I just wanted to say that your Taxi to the airport arrived.”
“Uhm…thanks…”
“We will wait for you.”

The reception hung up the phone.
I scratched my head and looked over to Miki.
“Sorry…”
“F-for what?” she quickly replied.
My head went red.
She smiled, “Taxi arrived?”
I nodded. Well…at least the whole trip to Hawaii was very relaxing and good.

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Sweet Home…Sweet Home.

Over the whole flight my mind was on Miki.
My eyes took a peep over to the girl who was sitting on the sofa, watching some TV Programs.
I walked quietly to the window, not trying to disturb Miki from watching TV.
The sky was clear outside and the bright lights of the town were reflecting against the window.

“You are so quiet aya…is everything alright?”
A pair of arms appeared around my waist and a little Miki looked into my eyes.

“Do you not want to watch your TV program to the end…?” I whispered.
She smiled and rested her head on my chest, “Nah…”
“Hmm anyway…Mikitty erm…you know…Christmas is soon…” I sighed and tipped my chin on the top of her head.
“Uhm…I would love to spend the night with you…”
My heartbeat went faster. Christmas Eve with Miki? Oh yeah!

“Of course! Err I mean…I would like to spend it with you too…if you erm…want to?”
Miki smiled, “Good. You know…Christmas with the other girls...is boring.”
I pinched her cheek and giggled. Miki stared at me and said nothing.

‘You have so beautiful eyes…’

“I love you.” She whispered and hugged me tight.
I returned her hug, “I love you as well…”


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 Sigh.
One day before Christmas…and I…have still…NO present for Miki!!!
It’s hard to find something for her…I’m not so lucky…
I’m walking around in Ginza since 10.00am in the morning. There must be something!!
Something special…

“Can I help you madam?” a friendly and young shopkeeper asked me.
“Erm…I’m looking for a present for my girlfr…errr bo-boyfriend!” I stuttered.
“We have some Rings for men over there. Do you want to have a look?”
“Er did I say b-boyfriend?! Sorry I’m quite confused because I didn’t buy a present for my best friend.” I quickly shot back.
The shopkeeper looked irritated but smiled like she had the right thing. And yes! She had it!

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My heart was bouncing fast when I heard the doorbell rang.
Quickly I jumped to the door and opened it. My jaw dropped to the ground.

“Hey.” Miki giggled.
“H-hi!” I stuttered back, “You look damn beautiful!”
She was wearing a nice red glittery dress that ended at her knees.
Miki blushed and came into my apartment. My legs were shaking a bit.

‘What now?!’

Like she could read minds she came closer and hugged me.
She smelled really nice…”How are you?” she asked me and looked up.
“F-fine and you?”  I asked back.
“Fine as well~”
“So, I panned everything…do you want to hear my little list for tonight?” I asked and watched Miki while she sat onto the couch.
“Sure.” She smiled and crossed her legs.

“Ok. 1st of all I’d made a Christmas cake, a strawberry cake. I’d like to eat it with you. 2nd, we can exchange our presents and chill out a bit. 3rd, I will take you to a date. We can walk in the streets and parks of Tokyo a bit. Might be romantic?” I paused and blushed.
Miki giggled, “Good ideas. And…what do we do after our little walk?”
Suddenly she had a smirk on her face.
I scratched my head, “Er…well yeah. I haven’t thought about that yet…ha…ha…ha”

“Yah, so first the cake hm?”
I nodded, “I will go and get it, wait a sec.” I headed into the kitchen.

***

There we were. Sitting on the floor and eating my yummy Christmas strawberry cake.
“It’s delicious!”
“Glad you like it! Ah Miki…say Aaaaaaaaa~” I took the strawberry of my cake and held it between my thumb and index finger.
“Aaaaaaaaaa~”
Miki began to giggle while she chewed the strawberry.
“Uhm. Now you~” she laughed and fed me with a strawberry as well.
I grinned. Her childish giggling made me happy. She was so cute.
“Hey…” she put her index finger under my chin and moved my head nearer to hers.

We kissed us. Her lips tasted like strawberries. And to be honest…the kiss was better than the cake…
“Hey Miki…let’s exchange our presents yeah?” I whispered.
She nodded and smiled.

“Merry Christmas Miki~” I said cheerful and gave her a little package.
“Oh~!!” Miki looked surprised and happy when she saw the golden Ring.
“I love you.” I whispered and kissed her on to the cheek.
“I love you too…and I think you will be surprised now…” she said and gave me her present.
It was wrapped into the same paper like mine.
I opened it and yes! I was surprised!
“T-The same ring?” I laughed, “Now we have something matching again hm?” I smiled.
“Yeah, I had to think about you when I saw it…” she said and blushed.
 I giggled.
“A-Aya could you put it on my finger?” she asked me.
“S-sure!” I took the ring and carefully put it on her ring finger.
“Thanks~ Erm…can I…too?”
I nodded. She took the ring she bought me and put it on my ring finger as well.

“Yaaaay~” we both giggled and hugged us.

***

It was about 11:00p.m when we walked around in a park near my apartment.
It was really cold. Miki was shivering really strong. Somehow the scene remembered me of Hokkaido… I put my right arm around her shoulders and held her closer to me.
“You’re ok?”
She smiled and nodded. Her cheeks were red because of the cold.
“You were right Aya…it is romantic outside here…even it’s a bit cold but your body is so warm…I can feel your heartbeat…it’s relaxing…” Miki stopped, closed her eyes and shifted nearer. My body got warmer and warmer.
“Aya…the new year is coming nearer and nearer…”
“Uhm…”
“Please let me be still a part in your life then too…”
“I will…I will take care of you…no matter what happens…you will be in my heart. You are my love and my best friend.”
She just wanted to say something but…

“A- Hey look! It’s snowing!”
“Ah really!” I replied and looked up.
“Beautiful…”
“Yeah…That’s even more romantic…”
“We are really lucky, right?
“We are…we really are.” I smiled and put my arm around Miki again.

“C-can we go back again? I’m freezing…” Miki stuttered.
“I thought my body is warm?”
“It is! But, I want to go to your place again…It’s nicer there…No hard park bench but a really really nice and warm bed!”
“Oh I see. Ok then let’s go!!!”

***

Miki was right a warm bed is nicer than a park bench.
We cuddled ourselves under the blanket. Nothing is nicer to cuddle with the most be loved to finish a romantic day.   
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Re: Secret of GAM
« Reply #70 on: June 21, 2007, 08:18:05 PM »
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww they got each other the same present! :wriggly:

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Re: Secret of GAM
« Reply #71 on: July 19, 2007, 05:39:27 PM »
I'm still alive! :lol:
Just wanted to post a little pic that I made and say that I am working on 2 chaps a few days now^^
Finally I got some ideas!



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EDIT: Oh damn xDDD I just read thru my Story "H!P Lovers" again and I'm so embaressed now xDD I wrote the story in a totaly crappy way xD Maybe I should edit the whole story when I'm finished with this one here? Anyway it's embarissing XD  :rofl:
« Last Edit: July 19, 2007, 07:02:31 PM by Gomaki »

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Re: Secret of GAM
« Reply #72 on: August 10, 2007, 03:13:34 PM »
Ahem...
Lol I will be away from tomorrow until next saturday.
I will be on holiday with my family. I'm really looking forward to it!
My sister will take her laptop with her so I can work on my chapters when I'm bored.
The only bad thing that we have no internet at the place we stay  :imdead: If there will be no Internet Cafe I will die :banghead:

Ok so I hope I will get those two very difficult chapters finished until saturday^^
I hope there are still people who like my story :?

Okay then, see you next saturday! And I think that I can post one chapter then ^_^

BYE BYE~  :byebye:

SORRY SORRY x_x I could hit myself for beeing so lazy lately...
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Re: Secret of GAM
« Reply #73 on: August 10, 2007, 10:46:00 PM »
^ Have fun!  :byebye:

JPH!P :heart:'s kuro808, Fushigidane, ChrNo, Jab & marimari. Always.

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Re: Secret of GAM
« Reply #74 on: August 12, 2007, 11:39:16 AM »
Woohooo yay~ somehow we actually do have internet xDDD

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^ Have fun!  byebye

thanks!^^

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Re: Secret of GAM
« Reply #75 on: August 15, 2007, 12:43:56 PM »
Ahaha....lol...
I will be back tomorrow, plans have changed xD
Naah any way... one chapter is finished but I still have no plan when to post it. the chapter number is still undecided.
And chap 17 isn't finished yet. But maybe later or tomorrow if I'm not too tired then.
Damn...one stupid thing followed by another  :err: :fainted: :depressed: :mon POd:

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Re: Secret of GAM
« Reply #76 on: August 18, 2007, 12:05:18 AM »
Aahh...after reading fics that makes my eyes all swollen, :k-sad:this fic is a NICE change. Happy and sweet, at least atm. Want to read MOREEE please!!! :luvluv2:

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Re: Secret of GAM
« Reply #77 on: August 18, 2007, 01:04:25 PM »
Glad you like it :D
You will get more soon because I am now working on Chap. 17. There is also a veeeeeeeeeeeery long one, but it has still no title and I don't know when to use it. I think it would be Chap. 19 :roll:
But it will take a while because Chap. 17 is a bit difficult...

By the way...I've got one question XD
It's about chapters with naughty lines^^''
How 'dirty'  XD*cough* can they be to post in here?
Or do I have to post them in my Fiction Blog again? :P
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Re: Secret of GAM
« Reply #78 on: August 18, 2007, 07:13:30 PM »
Probably safer to just post them on your blog and then link the page here. :D

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Re: Secret of GAM
« Reply #79 on: August 19, 2007, 05:47:18 AM »
get back soon, i just started reading your story today and could not stop eheh...
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