Author Topic: Oh The Games We Play (Read 48376 times)

Mikan · « **Reply #140 on:** February 04, 2007, 05:48:24 AM »

Hmm ok. Well Im glad that they still have feelings for each other because I mean thats completely normal. Falling in and quickly outta love is rather hard. So that I like. I enjoy Yossui torment (muhahah!)

What I makes me worry is how quick you just moved. I felt a little rushed in these past 2 chapters. Some parts were going slow and steady and fine while some kinda just went BAM and happened. Those BAM moments were usually Rika Yossui moments...and I suppose by rushed I mean they reveal too much too quickly. .. Remember I am running low on sleep and food so this could all be delusion and my crankiness coming out. See what others say.

What I look forward to:
Games! Oh the wonderful games that they play. Makoto was..overly Makoto and my god its gonna make things cool. She is such a cutie. I almost pity her love. And yes, I also think the way you wrote her speech was groovy.

Ah, Yuuko moments are always a classic no matter where you are. Im glad she features in this story. I know mentioning this is random but I felt like I had to say it

(to subconciously put the thought in your head to write her as a frequent character, lol. She pretty much is one though..so whatever)

Sorry I havent written up that other comment. I tried but it kept not sending. So Ill try again later.

Where's my Aya?

freya86 · « **Reply #141 on:** February 05, 2007, 01:47:31 PM »

[crybaby mood] NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Poor Rika (even if she slapped Yossi) ... my Ishiyoshi

[/crybaby mood]

Okay, back to normal now

Seriously, I'm sure I'll enjoy this story no matter where it might be going, I just really love your writing

Another party coming up, woo-hoo!!!!! You kept your promise, you deserve a big hug, so ... *hugs*

arina_shinh · « **Reply #142 on:** February 05, 2007, 02:13:17 PM »

okay, now i need to imagine the whole scene the right way.... this story based on present appearances of Yossie right? like the one you had in your avatar... or was it before? cause as i read your fic, i imagine Yossie when she was during 'chokkan' time... haha....

okay, back to teh story.... i kinda feel sorry for Rika. Yet, I'll hate Yossie if she ignore Miki... Please give me something unexpected.... hope to read more or your fics....

Owaranai_sLaVe · « **Reply #143 on:** February 05, 2007, 09:45:11 PM »

Damn... i really thought I would get some sort of mud/jello wrestling

Haha, kidding. That's a little bit too much even for the flow of this story. Then again, you have been surprising me, so yeah, I guess it wouldn't be such a big deal if you managed it xD

...I really thought Yossui was gonna say something harsh after letting go of Rika's hand and whispering to rika. Something like " No, it doesn't" And BEM, leave Rika.
*yes, I'm quite a dramatic person when writing or speaking at times*

-Owaranai_sLaVe

Yuuyami · « **Reply #144 on:** February 05, 2007, 10:02:22 PM »

Oh ho... What now :] Yossie rejecting Rika completely must definitely have significance of liking Miki more now that she has taken care of Yossie and whatnot. This 'game' that they have is apparently turning into something more :] Much like how a plot of Final Fantasy comes out ( "Normal" journey, something disrupts the "normal" journey, then they have to take an entirely new journey overall.)

I definitely look forward to the Yomiki lovin'

But as usual, I take interest in what type of character Rika is going to become as a result of this. :]

<3

len.chan · « **Reply #145 on:** February 05, 2007, 10:29:14 PM »

obviously, Miki has another interest more than have fun with the bet and it seems that she's going to protect Yossi no matter what. I like that. I really like Miki taking care of the others

and about the Yossi/Rika moment.. I'm with Slave... I'm sure I'd haven't been so diplomatic XDXD

Blizzard · « **Reply #146 on:** February 06, 2007, 12:36:09 AM »

At the start of the chapter, I was almost afraid that Yossui was going to think it was Rika next to her! But she didn't, phew! That whole first scene was really pleasant and touching.

I bet Makoto has something planned. Yuko is most likely just going to be herself. :ONkekeke:

The last part with Rika, Yossui unintentionally leaned towards Rika, correct? You said Yossui pulled back hastily and was almost embarrassed, which I don't think would happen if it was intentional. I just want to make sure I'm reading it correctly.

Like always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the great work! :ONluvluv2:

C60533 · « **Reply #147 on:** February 06, 2007, 02:25:57 AM »

Nice fic you got goin here. :ONglasses: and YUKO IS ACTUALLY GOING TO PAY FOR DRINKS??? :ONshock: What would we do without her?

The suspense is mouting...:evil:

JFC · « **Reply #148 on:** February 06, 2007, 07:22:02 AM »

Yep, DEFINITELY thinking that the theory I put up on page 9 is somehow involved.

stefy · « **Reply #149 on:** February 06, 2007, 02:43:24 PM »

awww Yomiki so saweeett... but did Rika do such a bad thing to deserve such treatment from yossi and miki?

Mikan · « **Reply #150 on:** February 06, 2007, 11:35:17 PM »

Dispite the GOD AWFUL pain Im in Im going to write another message here to you...

It seems you get a fare share of large comments. Or maybe its just recently..

Who knows it might be a growing craze!!!!

Yuuyami · « **Reply #151 on:** February 06, 2007, 11:46:48 PM »

Quote from: Mikan;302325

Dispite the GOD AWFUL pain Im in Im going to write another message here to you...

It seems you get a fare share of large comments. Or maybe its just recently..

Who knows it might be a growing craze!!!!

Well you know, since the other great stories have either ended or on hiatus or lost their touch or something...

Oh the Games We Play is like, the new awesome pocky for us <3~!

-Hugs Je-san- WE LOVE YOU!!!! :]

haidokun · « **Reply #152 on:** February 07, 2007, 06:23:40 AM »

serves you right rika for slapping yossui! :ONscolding:

“Tomorrow night.” Yuko repeated a glint in her eyes, “Drinks are on me Yo-chan.” yuuchan is upto something. hehehehe :ONkekeke:
don't forget the chicken breasts, yuuchan! :ONwahaha: (FYI. from an episode of utaban.)

i'm more of a yossie fan than miki. but if when the fight between rika and miki i'll root for miki. :ONhee:

Mikan · « **Reply #153 on:** February 07, 2007, 02:28:50 PM »

*wonders if Yuuyami's comment was a private stab at Mikans habit not to finish things*

For ur information im in a lot if pain anf couldnt write if I wnted too. stupid one hand typin...

Oh and Jen Im gonna put some blame on u for being such a darn distraction..

Yuuyami · « **Reply #154 on:** February 07, 2007, 08:52:43 PM »

No no, I was directing it at stories, but I wasn't thinking of Doki Doki when I wrote it xD

Hiatuslacuna · « **Reply #155 on:** February 08, 2007, 04:41:50 AM »

“Does that excite you Rika-chan? Does my touch send a tingle through your body you can’t understand but don’t want to let go of?”

... How do you come up with such masterful wording?
I cant explain it really. Its like wow. And then some...

C'mon, I wanna see an evil Rika..

jenmoshka · « **Reply #156 on:** February 11, 2007, 06:26:35 AM »

Mikan · « **Reply #157 on:** February 11, 2007, 01:24:57 PM »

Notice: Jenmoshka is currently unavailable the moment she is busy touching umbrellas

Mikan · « **Reply #158 on:** February 11, 2007, 01:25:50 PM »

Notice: Jenmoshka is currently unavailable at the moment as she is busy touching umbrellas

jenmoshka · « **Reply #159 on:** February 11, 2007, 05:03:16 PM »