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Offline Blizzard

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« Reply #100 on: January 26, 2007, 01:25:11 AM »
I agree with Mikan.  I really like the caring Miki.  :ONluvluv2:   But I'm sure she'll be her ass-kicking self when she "sets Rika straight." :ONscolding:  That'll be a must see (read, as it were).  

I must say though, I really like all the drama.  And this is so much better than a soap opera because this is so much more realistic.  (I don't watch soaps, but an old roommate of mine did, and unfortunately, I somehow ended up getting a daily summary from her.  Crazy stuff man, crazy stuff. :ON@_@:  But if I'm wrong, don't shoot me!)  Even so, I'm sure there will be some comic relief popping up here and there, probably thanks to Yuko and Kei.  For example, why was it just Yuko that Yossui ran into in the hall?  Did she leave Kei on the roof? :ONdunno: Just kidding, it's too much fun not to.  Besides, those two have kind of grown on me lately.  

Anyways, jenmoshka, (can I call you jen for short?) don't worry about it if you can't update as frequently as you have been.  You've been undoubtedly awesome with your updates, but everyone knows that life gets in the way of fun.  We'll be here whenever you get a new chapter posted!  Of course, we might have the shakes and other withdrawal symptoms, :ONtantrum:  but we'll be here none the less!
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« Reply #101 on: January 26, 2007, 01:32:00 PM »
Aaaah, Yossi and Miki :MKlove2:

I feel sorry for Rika... I don't know why, since I thought I would hate her after what she did to Yossi... O_o

And don't worry about not being able to finish your chapters as fast as for now:)
We can wait. ...Maybe:ONxD:
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« Reply #102 on: January 26, 2007, 02:21:11 PM »
I was rather worried our talking would put off the next chapter but looks like it didnt.

[EDIT]This comment on Miki was removed because Im a moron and we discussed it ^^ For the record Miki didnt cry[/EDIT]

*Moves with the crowd* yep this is 100x better than any soap drama. I mean...this has plot AND characters under 30! (well...Yuko's not but she is a hot woman so its a different matter)

Wow. You know, I think Im going to have to post a short review today. Im really sorry from the bottom of my heart. I just cant think of anything else I wanna say that doesnt repeat myself...

Oh well...I'll sum it up with a simple "LOVE U SO FREAKING MUCH!!"
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« Reply #103 on: January 26, 2007, 05:03:46 PM »
Wah!! I love you for writing this fic!!!

Love the scene in the rain!! I have fall in love with Miki kindness.... how she was worried about Yossie, how she took care of her, and how she thought of to set Rika straight....

Was it in the chapter about what happen to Rika and Yossie in the past? I know they broke up because, erm, uh, because Rika wants to save her image? I thought I read it, maybe I forgot....

Anyway, my best scene were...

1. Rika slap Yossie
2. Yomiki in the rain...
3. Coming soon in your next chap...

Keep up the awesome work!!
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« Reply #104 on: January 26, 2007, 06:11:37 PM »
This fic just became a lot darker with the latest chapter.
I sort of had a guess that when Yossi ran away that she would go to the roof and see the naked Yuko and Kei. Well, that almost happened. xD

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Anyway, my best scene were...

1. Rika slap Yossie
2. Yomiki in the rain...
3. Coming soon in your next chap...


Good selection, I like those too. Predicting future. :D
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« Reply #105 on: January 26, 2007, 06:37:44 PM »
The rain scene is absolutely perfect to draw *_____________*;

Yuko and Kei are the moodmakers of the story, yes? Love how Yossie and Yuko pass by like nothing's happened xD!

And wow at the argument. The commentors have said Rika's a bitch that time xD But I'm freaking different, I could already tell that Rika regrets doing that and will somehow try to make up in the future. However by the time she gets around to doing that, I bet Yossie and Miki will be together by then.

I love how you portray Miki's kindness throughout that chapter <3 But I do recommend that you don't go overboard with that kind of thing, because Anger-management -> Kind-person in one or two days is quite a fast jump o_o; So keep it gradual <3 You can choose to ignore this suggestion though, because I don't mind if you keep going like that xD

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« Reply #106 on: January 27, 2007, 08:41:35 AM »
“Baka!” Miki cried at Yossui from underneath her umbrella as she took the silent woman into her arms and held her in a tight hug. “I was worried about you!” Miki pulled her jacket off with one hand and draped it over Yossui’s shoulders before taking the woman by the hand, leading her home.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww    :ONluvluv1:

i totally love that scene. hahaha!

when turning a corner she ran straight into, and subsequently knocking over, a naked Yuko.

:ONkekeke:  ooh a naked yuko...

rika slapping yossui!    :ONtemper:

waaahhh a sick yossui!    :ONcry:

nicely written and i love this story. ^^
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« Reply #107 on: January 27, 2007, 05:54:44 PM »
Ah~ Miki and YOssui in bed, no matter how clean that was, it's still.... heartwarming :D really, that was dramatic though.

Oh and, yes, it is crack. Now wheres my serve, woman?!

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« Reply #108 on: January 27, 2007, 07:29:02 PM »
I haven't been up to date with my reading >.O

Anyway...

Naked Yuko?! O.O :D~~~

Anyway again...

This last chapter was SO cute. I love the two sides to Miki. I hope she gets with Yossie. That would make me a happy panda.

When they were in bed and she was stroking Yossie's back I was in total "awwww" mode. I want to hug them both then push them together so they kiss...and continue doing other things...I'd leave during that part though
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« Reply #109 on: January 28, 2007, 07:26:32 AM »
Haven't really been here, but I'm back.  I'm love Ishiyoshi. Yomiki is not in my list of canon couples. I may have to change that....

Love Miki's character, she roXors. Yossui is prolly dead on. Rika would probably never date a girl in the first place, but we all smudge the truth there anyway.

Good Job, keep going, and I'll be lurking.
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« Reply #110 on: January 28, 2007, 07:55:34 PM »
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« Reply #111 on: January 28, 2007, 07:59:06 PM »
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« Reply #112 on: January 28, 2007, 08:17:14 PM »
Oh ho... Yossie is not going to let go that easy, eh? I think it's the traumatization speaking rather than her sickness. Nonetheless, I hope she feels better eventually; I'm pretty sure Miki will see to that. Let's just pray that Rika doesn't go berserk over Yossie like she did in Len.Chan's When Love hurts, because that's going to give Yossie and Miki on hell of a time X_X;

Miki! Heal Yossie soon! ;_;
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« Reply #113 on: January 28, 2007, 08:56:47 PM »
Lovely new chapter(s) (since I didn't get around to commenting on the last one)!

Seriously, there's not even a part I could single out, I loved everything :heart:

Of course, your Yuko/Kei makes me squeal, but I guess that's no big surprise ^^
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« Reply #114 on: January 28, 2007, 10:45:38 PM »
Ishiyoshi! XP
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« Reply #115 on: January 29, 2007, 06:20:01 AM »
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« Reply #116 on: January 29, 2007, 06:24:16 AM »
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« Reply #117 on: January 29, 2007, 06:44:32 AM »
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“Thank you for everything Rika…I love you so much…” Yossui’s voice trailed off weakly as she closed her eyes and let the warmth of darkness take her.

Miki flinched at Yossui’s words, even though she knew it was the fever talking for the leader, it struck a pain deep in her heart.

Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooh I smell dramatics a-comin'! :D
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« Reply #118 on: January 29, 2007, 07:30:23 AM »
Yet another awesome chapter!  You even managed to squeeze an infamous 'spaced-out Kaori' moment in there.  That gave me a good laugh!  As for the last few lines, definately some drama coming.  Your "incredibly loyal" portrayal of Miki is definately shining through.  Keep up the great work!  :tfr9a7wg:
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« Reply #119 on: January 29, 2007, 04:36:08 PM »
okie dokie... thanks for the explaination....

Now back to the story....

Aha... S.h.o.r.t and .h.u.r.t....
As I read what Yossie said in her state of unconcious, something stab my heart.... twice.... it hurts!!

First, the pain Yossie gone through.... to learn to let go, that's when it really hurt....

Second, the pain Miki felt right when Yossie said Rika's name. To learn that the one you love is in love with somebody else.... that hurt even more....

can't wait for your next chapter!! and get hurts again!!! lol, i love sad-but-happy-ending story.... haha... THISISAWESOME!!!!
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