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Offline Takahashi Atsuko

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It started with a kiss: Chapter 11 (Complete)
« on: May 04, 2013, 05:12:31 PM »
Hello guys i'm going to post the first cap today :)

Im veeeery sorry for my bad english xD

                                  Chapter 1

 ” It’s all for today ” i said.
Most of them sat on the floor, the others started to plan what their going to do tomorrow.
” Ne Takamina what are you planning to do tomorrow?” asked Yuko.
” Nothing special…”
” Do you want to go to my house? NyanNyan and the others are going too, we’re gonna party all day!”
” ok, i’ll go ”
” Iiieeeeeeiii it’s going to be fun!” she said ” NyanNyan! Where are you?”
” Yuko you never leave NyanNyan alone! ” i said ” really i can’t understand you…”
” You’ll never understand until you fall in love with someone, when you love somebody, you just want that person to be always by your side, and you give everything you have to make her happy” she said.
Everybody in the room stoped, nobody belived what Yuko just have saied.
” Uau Yuko! That was incredible! You’re inspired!” Said Miichan.
” Yeah Micchan’s right!” Said Maeda who is with Miichan ” where is Haruna? I can’t belive she didn’t heard that!”
I know Maeda since AKB started, i would like to have her friendship like i’m the capitan and she is the Ace, but we never talked, we’re never together, never anything… Everybody have her friendship, but i don’t , i never had done anything to her, i’ve already thought that she don’t like my position in AKB.
I really can’t understand Yuko, i’ve never falled in love with someone , i don’t know what is love, i’ve never fell him inside me…
” I’m here” Said Haruna ” Yuuchan that’s so sweet ” she walked and embrace Yuko.
The smallest girl take advantage to kiss the tallest girl passionately, Haruna had correspond without grumble like she always do.
” Seriously guys! Go get a room” protest Miichan.
Sudently, Mariko embrace Miichan and murmured something to her. I can’t hear what she said but Miichan became red like a tomatto…
I sigh and i started to leave the room, when they start with that kind of topic i always leave, it’s not the kind of theme that i like to talk about.
” Takamina were are you going?” asked Yuko.
” Home”
” Why does she leave everytime we talk about love? ” asked Mariko.
I didn’t say anything. I don’t mind when they talk about love and do that kind of thing in front of me, just when they talk about that i don’t know what to say and when they do that i don’t know what to do.
In the next day, i went to Yuko's house. They’re all enthusiastic with Yuko's small party.
“Ei guys! Let’s play true or concequence!” said Sae.
Oh no…
” Sae OMG you’re a genius! So guys who wanna play?” asked Yuko.
” Me!!” said Miichan.
Everybody acept and even haruna did the same.
I look at Haruna with a killer look, i was betrayed by her, she never accept this kind of game!
” Takamiiiinaaaaa” said Miichan.
” You’re going to play with us, right?” asked Tomochin.
I sign, there was nothing i could do… ” Okey…” i murmured.
” That’s it Midget!” said Yuko.
” Don’t call me that!” i grumble.
” Let’s start!” said Sae.
We sit together at the floor.
” well who is gonna start?” aked Mocchi.
” Me!!” Said Yuko ” NyanNyan! True or concequence?”
” True”
” Is true that you love me?” asked Yuko with puppy eyes.
” Nop”
Everybody knows that Haruna had fall in love with Yuko, she’s just pretending that doesn’t happend.
” C’mon what’s the concequence?” asked her.
Yuko smiles, that’s not a good think.
” Kiss me “
” Eehh??? That concequence is not acceptable!” grumbled Haruna.
” C’mon Haruna, it’s just a kiss” said Acchan.
She gave Acchan a killer look.
She sigh ” okey, i will do it”
Now Yuko is in front of Haruna, their very close to each other, we can see that they can’t wait for the touch of their lips.
It was just a simple touch, but was enought to let Haruna very blushed.
” Now it’s my turn!” Said Kojipa.
The game last the entire day , the only thing that i have done was let mocchi sit on the middle of my legs.
” It’s my turn again ieeei!! ” Said Yuko " Takamidget true or concequence?"
Oh no...
" True"
" It's true that you've already fall in love with a guy?"
Nobody never asked me that, anyone knows my life before i enter to AKB.
" No"
" Ieei concequence" said her looking at Acchan.
I admit that i didn't understand that look until Yuko said:
" You've to give Acchan an adult kiss!"
" Eh?!?!?!?!" we both shout.
"But...But!"
" But nothing Takamina! It's just a game!" said Yuko.
" In front of you?" i asked.
" Of cours!! Haruna and i did the same!"
" C'mon Takamina! It's just a kiss!" said Miichan.
" Yeah! My first kiss!" i murmured.
" You never kissed anyone before?" asked Tomochin.
" Nop..."
" C'mon Takahashi, let's do this " said Maeda.
" Wait a sec! From now, you have to call her Takamina, and you have to call Acchan! You're not gonna hive your first kiss to a person you call by the last name, right?" asked Miichan.
" Can i?" i asked.
" Yes..."
We're both get up and now i'm in front of her.
For some reason, i feel butterflyes in my stomach and i felt my heart beating so fast is like he want to get out of my chest.
I was very nervous, i didn't know what to think or do, until her lips toched mine. In that moment i leave the world behind, and i felt like just we existed.
Her sweet lips on mine, moving passionately telling silent words.
I felt her tongue asking for premission to get in and i give her. Now our tongues are having a passionately fight inside our mouths. We kiss with so much desire, we didn't wanted to stop, but we have to do that to breath
I'm still under her embrace, my head is in her chest and i can feel her heart beating like crazy....
TBC....



It was boring right? Sorry ;(


« Last Edit: August 10, 2013, 02:47:36 PM by Takahashi Atsuko »

Offline Sydney W

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Re: It started with a kiss ( Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Saeyaka...)
« Reply #1 on: May 04, 2013, 05:18:50 PM »
Go ahead. Let us (readers) read your fics

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Re: It started with a kiss ( Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Saeyaka...)
« Reply #2 on: May 04, 2013, 05:43:07 PM »
WOOHOOO~~~ SaeYaka~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!  :love: :wub: :deco: :heart: :heart: :heart:

I'll be wait the first chapter!  XD XD XD

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Re: It started with a kiss ( Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Saeyaka...)
« Reply #3 on: May 04, 2013, 05:47:07 PM »
Really...

Yeah... another Atsumina...

Can't wait...

Thank you for the fic...

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Re: It started with a kiss ( Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Saeyaka...)
« Reply #4 on: May 04, 2013, 05:47:48 PM »
I cant wait please update soon
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Re: It started with a kiss ( Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Saeyaka...)
« Reply #5 on: May 05, 2013, 05:45:40 AM »
I didnt expect yuuchan will say something like that...  :shocked
Hahaha XD :) so sweet  :inlove:
And nyannyan being tsundere again XD
Thanks for the kojiyuu scenes!! More pleasee! Haha :thumbsup :inlove: :bow:



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Re: It started with a kiss ( Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Saeyaka...)
« Reply #6 on: May 05, 2013, 06:02:48 AM »
wow I love your fic  :D can't wait for the update :lol:

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Re: It started with a kiss ( Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Saeyaka...)
« Reply #7 on: May 05, 2013, 08:00:23 AM »
Yuko so sweet  :heart: keep it up squirrel!  :otomerika: AtsuMina way to go  :twothumbs

Please continue  :)   :bow:

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Re: It started with a kiss ( Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Saeyaka...)
« Reply #8 on: May 05, 2013, 12:08:30 PM »
so this is why you wrote the title " It started with a kiss "

interesting please write  more and if you could please update nowwww hehe
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Re: It started with a kiss ( Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Saeyaka...)
« Reply #9 on: May 05, 2013, 02:28:07 PM »
oh yeah~ More Atsumina~  :farofflook: hehehehe Takamina's first kiss taken by Acchan! woooot~!  :on lol: and to add to that the very first kiss is an "adult kiss" lol  :nya: gah...can't wait to see what happens next~  :ding: looking forward to the next update!  :kneelbow:

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Re: It started with a kiss ( Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Saeyaka...)
« Reply #10 on: May 05, 2013, 03:13:11 PM »
Already kissing in chapter one..woohoo...oh yah no wonder the title is "It started with a kiss".. haha!
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    Sorry for my bad eng xP


            Chapter 1 part 2
 


 ” I’m sorry ” i said even so i realize what just appened.
” Eh… Etto… I’m sorry too” she said.
” Takamina, for your first kiss you did it very well!” said Yuko.
I didn’t give her an answer. I sat again with Mocchi in the middle of my legs and i hide my face on her back.
” Ahahahaha Takamina is shy!!” Said Miichan.
” She’s not the only one” said Haruna.
We looked to our Ace who was sat  trying to hide her face on her legs.
” Acchan you’re shy too?” asked Tomochin.
” It… Was my… First kiss too…” She murmured.
” What??? My dear and pretty wife gave her first kiss to capitan midget?? ” shouted Miichan.
Everybody laughted of her reaction. The game continued but didn’t last much because it was dinner time. I steel can feel my face a little warm, but i can’t understand what was that feeling that i felt when she kissed me. Her sweet lips on mine, everytime that i though that, my wishes to kiss her again grow up… Hold on a sec! What the hell i’m i thinking? Seven years without one word and suddently because of a simple kiss, it wasn’t a simple kiss! It was my first kiss damn it! The first kiss should be with the most important person to us, right?
" Takamina!" shouted Haruna.
" Hmm?"
" Don't hmm me! I've been calling you for awile and you didn't answer" said her " what's wrong?"
" Isn't that obvious NyanNyan?" asked Yuko " She was thinking about her first kiss"
" Eh? No i wasn't!" i grumble.
" Forget Midget, you face tells everything" joked Miichan.
" Leave her alone, didn't you though a lot of your first kiss? " asked Tomochin.
" Yeah... I think so... But i though a lot because my first kiss was with Haruna..." said Yuko.
We heard the sound of ringbell. Yes! I was safe... For now...
" The pizza is here ieeeei!" said Yuko.
We started to eat. They were talking about singles solo.
" Ah, Takamina, what's the date of the release of your solo?" asked Mocchi.
" In two weeks, 3 April"
" Jane Doe isn't it?" asked Haruna " i saw one picture oc you on your Jane Doe mode and Takamina that person is not you!"
" Yeah, she's right! What did they done to you? You're so diferent and..." said Tomochin.
" Sexy! " said Miichan.
" I've heard the lyric before, it's so beauthiful" said Sae.
" So romantic" joked Yuko.
" In Jane Doe, she's singing in the point of view of a man, even in the songs takamina have her Boyish side!" joked Miichan.
Everybody laught.
After the dinner, they started to leave, everybody lives near except me, Miichan and Acchan.
I was with Haruna in the kitchen, Miichan and Yuko were at the living room playing Playstation 3.
" Ne Takamina, what did you felt when you kissed Acchan?" asked her.
Were it como the topic again.
" I don't know how to explain" i said " butterflyes in my stomach, a heat-wave passed by my entire body, i felt my heart beating like crazy, for a sec i forgot everything like just we existed... Ne Haruna do you know what was that feeling ?" i asked her.
"Yeah i know, but you have to discover by yourself" Said her.
She already felt this feeling before...
I sigh.
" Well, i think i'm going home" i said "it's late, tomorrow we have a lot of things to do and i need to rest"
" I understand, i'm gonna stay here tonight, see you tomorrow" said her.
" Bye Harunyan" i started to leave but before i shouted:
" Miichan, Yuko i'm going, see you tomorrow!"
" Goodbye Takamidget " they shouted.
I leaved Yuko's place and i started my long road to home.
During the entire way, my first kiss didn't wanted to get out of my head. A lot of couples passed in front of me, everybody looked very happy together, they were with the light in the eyes and a big smile on face.
I sigh.
Acchan... What are she doing at this moment?
I walked by a dark and hide street, i was a bit afraid but i didn't return.
" Let me go! " i hear a girl screaming.
I run trying to found were that voice came from, and for my surprise it was:
" Acchan..." i murmured.
She was without her t-shirt, a man was grabing her by back and the other man was trying to kiss her.
" STOP! " i screamed.
The man stoped and look around to see were the voice came from.
" DON'T TOUCH HER! " I screamed again.
" Ehehe, and what could a midget like you do agaist me?" he asked.
I started to run and kick the man's face who fall down in moment, of he's mouth come out a bit of blood.
" What the hell?" said the man who was grabing Acchan.
He let her go and tryied to punch me but i easily avoid him and i give him a staggering blow.
" Minami WATCH OUT! " screamed Acchan.
I turn around and the first man kick my face, but i didn't let my self go down. He tryied to give me another kick but i grabed his leg and kicked the other leg and the man fall down.
" shit let's get out of here!" shouted the other man.
And they run away.
" Acchan!" i said running to her.
" Oh minami!" she hugged me tighly.

Tbc....


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Re: It started with a kiss ( Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Saeyaka...)
« Reply #12 on: May 05, 2013, 04:06:12 PM »
Yesh! Takamina is the hero!
Visit my FFs:
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[Short OS] "Puppy" Love (Pairings: JR + YH)
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My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute!
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yey...yey...yey...another atsumina fanfic....
 :) :) :) :)
takamina is so kakoi to save acchan.... :heart: :heart: :heart:

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yeyy she falls slowly in ove with atsuko

goooo takamina dont let someone else touch your girl  :P :P :P

miichan: you are the man  yes she is hehe

update soon

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ohh the kiss! yeah minami is the man (?) :B love it!

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Congratulations Atsuko-chan, your first fanfic. I love this fanfic, continue translate your fanfic, you will get more fans, and more popular you going be.

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Takaatsu!!!! What a pleasure to see you here! Good job o/

I already said I liked your fic o/ but I like your fic hehe

Welcome! :welcome

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