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Re: Royal Love [Chapter 3 part 1] 2/12| Mayuki, Wmatsui and many other pairings
« Reply #60 on: December 02, 2012, 05:23:16 PM »
@DC2805: They are identical twin :) They look alike, but still have sone difference so Jurina, Mario and Mayu could distinguish them. But their own parents don't regconise that or they are just too baka and carefree to know that.

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Re: Royal Love [Chapter 3 part 1] 2/12| Mayuki, Wmatsui and many other pairings
« Reply #61 on: December 02, 2012, 07:39:47 PM »
The pictures catches my attention!
I'm loving it,
Mayu falling for yuki of course
and there's twins gahhhhhh
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Re: Royal Love [Chapter 3 part 1] 2/12| Mayuki, Wmatsui and many other pairings
« Reply #62 on: December 02, 2012, 07:57:21 PM »
Poor Yuki... Mayu is so cold

Aaaaah why is it too interesting???
Mayuki = Cutest couple



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Re: Royal Love [Chapter 3 part 1] 2/12| Mayuki, Wmatsui and many other pairings
« Reply #63 on: December 02, 2012, 08:03:04 PM »
Huehuehue just wonder what Kai thought to deeper their relationship? Heheuehuehue like the teaser said... Put them o them same room?

Wanting the next part desperately *.*

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Re: Royal Love [Chapter 3 part 1] 2/12| Mayuki, Wmatsui and many other pairings
« Reply #64 on: December 02, 2012, 08:08:49 PM »
nice update!!
Kai is too simple minded it's funny  :)

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Re: Royal Love [Chapter 3 part 1] 2/12| Mayuki, Wmatsui and many other pairings
« Reply #65 on: December 03, 2012, 02:39:24 AM »
Ermehgerd! Update soon! > w <

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Re: Royal Love [Chapter 3 part 1] 2/12| Mayuki, Wmatsui and many other pairings
« Reply #66 on: December 03, 2012, 11:49:45 AM »
Mayu is a genius ^^
The banding scene is so hilarious hahaha!

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Re: Royal Love [Chapter 3 part 1] 2/12| Mayuki, Wmatsui and many other pairings
« Reply #67 on: December 03, 2012, 03:48:57 PM »
@DC2805: They are identical twin :) They look alike, but still have sone difference so Jurina, Mario and Mayu could distinguish them. But their own parents don't regconise that or they are just too baka and carefree to know that.

Thanks! I guess the king is too baka and the queen is too carefree!  XD XD XD
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I like it~ :) Looking forward to the next chapter :lol:

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Great... lots of ikemen picture here and there...

The story is getting more and more interesting. Thank you

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Sorry about the long waiting period. I lost my inspiration of this fic in the middle since comedy is not my specialty. This is actually my first comedy so it may not good like you expected. Once again, I'm really sorry. Also I'm busy with my university application form and requirements so I may not have time to update.

Because I don't have time so spelling and grammar errors haven't been edited yet. Once again, I'm sorry and please pardon me for my mistakes. Thanks for your supporting and your precious time for my stories.

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Chapter 3: Royal Meeting [Part2]








In front of the court hall, a young man was walking alone around nervously in front of the  door. He was wearing a smoky grey suit, black shirt and a red tie. His hair was combed neatly, adding more charm to his handsome white face. He kept looking at his watch, fixing his suit then his hair and repeating from the beginning. He was too nervous that he even didn’t notice a girl in black suit was approaching him. She stood next to the door and watched the guy walking in a circle silently.

When she started feeling dizzy, she shook her head and smacked the guy on his head.

“Oi! Stop walking around already! You’re Takahashi Ren, the charming, brave and vigorous prince of Japan! Don’t be such a chicken like that. They’re just your parents.”

Rubbing his head, the prince then turned his gaze to the girl and pointed his finger to that girl angrily.

“Hey watch your action! I’m your prince, remember?”

“Yes, your Highness.” Jurina bowed down reluctantly.

“Gahhh!! How can you be so calm like that???” The young man facepalmed.

“What is the point to be nervous like that?”

“Hello! We’re tlaking about my parents here, Jurina! They are my parents so there is no way that we can trick them with this disguise! How can’t they distinguish their own children?” Ren, or Yuki dressing in Ren’s costume, showed his overacting reaction.

“You have to trust your fiance, Ren-sama.” Jurina smirked. “Just follow her plan and everything is fine. And seriously, stop acting like Yuki already. You just make it more obvious to regconise the difference between you twin.”

“First of all, she is not my fiance. She’s Ren’s! Secondly, I’m Takahashi Yuki, not that stupid heartless irresponsible prince. And finally, how can you trust a stranger so soon like that? What if her plan doesn’t work?”

“Literally, you’re Ren now so she’s your fiance. Yes you’re still Yukirin but if you don’t want your parents to punish you for tricking them like this, stop being the Reaction Queen and act like a cold charming Ren please.” Jurina pinched Yuki’s cheek, causing her to yelp in pain. “And don’t underestimate her like that. She’s smarter than her look. Haven’t you read her profile that I told you to do last night?”

“Yeah?” Yuki massaged her cheeks to soothe the pain.

“Oh god...” Jurina facepalmed. “You really should know your fiance more.  OK, I’ll summarize her profile for you, lazy head. Watanabe Mayu, the oldest child of the Watanabe family, daughter of the president of Akiba Entertainment, the biggest company in Japanese showbiz. Despite of her age of 18, she is a smart and talented girl. She is already graduated Tokyo University, musical and business degree. She is currently the top model for Playboy magazine and the owner of the biggest Danso cafe in Shibuya. If Watanabe-sama wasn’t engaged to you, she would become the heir of Watanabe family and take over her father’s company.”

“OK... That is quite a lot.”

“It’s not enough though, it’s just a short summary. And seemed that this profile itself isn’t enough to know that girl well.” Jurina shrugged.

“Yeah yeah, whatever. The main point is I need to collaborate with her and finish this mess soon. So I could quickly go back to my free life in America.”

“Then stop complaining like an obaa-chan already. You’re just 19.”

“And look who is talking. You’re younger than me but you never respect me like a sempai.” Yuki pointed at Jurina.

“7 months younger doesn’t make a big age gap, Yukirin.” Jurina stuck out her tongue.

“Having fun, Ren-sama? Jurina?” Suddenly, a voice cut them off, making both jump back in surprise.

“Mario-san/sama?” Both Jurina and Yuki jumped in surprise and yelped at the same time.

“I think you may want to be more careful next time, Ren-sama. Luckily that no one is here except you two but I can’t make sure that will happen again if you two keep talking about this in public.”

The butler shook his head slowly.

“My mistake, Mario-sama. I promise I won’t let that happen again.” Jurina bowed apologetically.

“It’s fine but keep your guard up. We all can get into a big trouble if The King finds out.”

“I’ll keep that in mind, Mario-sama.”

“My apology for making you waiting, Ren-sama.” The butler bowed at Yuki.

“It’s fine, Mario-san. How is Watanabe-san?”

“Watanabe-sama is on her way here.” The butler smirked and nodded at Jurina. “It’s pitiful that Ren-ouji-sama doesn’t want to marry her. Watanabe-sama is a real beauty.”

“I agree, Mario-sama. It’s such a waste.” Jurina nodded back.

“Ne, what are you two talking about?” Yuki raised an eye brow and looked at the two strange people.

“Take a look by yourself, Ren-sama.” Jurina giggled. “She’s coming anyway.” The young guard pointed at a direction, gesturing Yuki to look.

Yuki followed her best friend’s guide in curiosity. Right after that, her jaw touched the ground. Walking across the garden was a girl, a traditional Japanese princess with a line of servants following behind. Dressing in a luxurious beautiful cherry pink kimono, hair was tied up in a royal but yet simple way with yellow flower hairclips. Under the golden sunlight, the person shone in splendid breath-taking beauty. With moderate speed, the person walked aristocratically to the prince, who was currently frozen and attracted by the angel in front of him.

Standing next to the prince, the young guard chuckled at the ridiculous look of her best friend. Yuki’s mouth still opened widely as if she wouldn’t even notice a fly might go inside her mouth.

“Ren-sama, please watch yourself. You’re drooling.” Jurina joked.

The prince immediately snapped out of his fantasy and raised his hand up to wipe his drool. But he found nothing so he glared at the girl next to her in disbelief.

The girl laughed. “Hahaha, just kidding. But watch your manner, Ren-sama.”

Yuki was about to smack the girl’s head but a soft chuckling rang in her ears, making her to turn back to its owner.

“Good morning, Takahashi-sama.” The girl in kimono smiled and bowed at Yuki.

In a moment, Yuki thought her heart had jumped out of her chest because of that smile.

“Good morning, Watanabe-san...” She replied, her eyes completely locked on the beauty in front of her and her cheeks turned pink. “You’re... beautiful...”

“Thank you. You’re charming and handsome too, ouji-sama.” Mayu giggled at the awkward and embarrassed prince. “We can’t make the King and Queen wait for us any longer, can we? Shall we go now?”

“Ah... Alright.” Yuki politely took Mayu’s hand and slowly led her to the court hall.

After announcing the presence of the prince and his fiance, Jurina and Mario, at the same time, opened the doors and bowed lightly while Yuki walked inside along with Mayu in her hand.

Sitting in the middle of the Court Hall were the King and his wife right next to him in suit and kimono. They were solemn but they welcomed the new couple with their warm smiles. When the young couple was only 1 meter away from The King and Queen, both saluted in respect. At the same time, the doors of the court hall was closed. Mario and Jurina stood next to it and watched the others silently.

After a few seconds, Yuki and Mayu straightened their back. And then, Yuki noticed that her parents were staring at her. She gulped, afraid that the plan was ruined. She felt uneasy and scared but the person next to her acted calm even though she was worried too. Mayu hoped that the King and Queen wouldn’t know about this trick.

All of sudden, the King chuckled.

“Don’t be so tense, Ren. You don’t say that during those days we were away, you have done something stupid again, right?”

“O-Of course not, Father.” Yuki quickly replied and sighed in relief mentally. “But actually...Ren did... The most stupid thing he could ever think of...” She thought.

“But I have to say that you changed a lot, Ren.” The King raised an eyebrow. “Did you get a new haircut? You look... less wild than before...”

“H-Hai. I did get my hair cut.” Yuki gulped. “At least my father isn’t so dense and stupid like my brother.”

"Hmm... That looks good on you, Ren. Ah, it's been a long time since I last met you, Mayu-san. You've grown up to be such a beautiful lady." Then the King said to Mayu who was standing next to Yuki.

"Thank you for your compliment, your Highness." Mayu smiled lightly.

"I can see that you have met my son. I hope he has been good to you."

"Do not concern, your Highness. Ren-ouji-sama is really good to me." Mayu replied with a smile.

Yuki hissed quietly when she heard Mayu’s reply. She was the one who had been tortured during past days. Even though she wanted to tell the truth but she still needed to act if she still wanted her head connect to her body.

"I'll always treat my fiance well, Father. Believe in me." Yuki faked a smile.

“You should do that. I hope you two get along well.” Kai smiled.

“And Watanabe-san, if you have chance to talk to your parents, please send our bless to them for us.” The Queen, Atsuko, said warmly.

“Yes, your Highness. I shall please your wish as soon as possible.”

“Good. You can go back to your room now. We won’t disturb your moment together anymore.” Atsuko smiled.

“Please excuse us.” The three quickly saluted then left the court hall.






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The triple actresses sighed in union when the doors of the court hall was closed by the General Butler. Yuki wiped away thw sweat on her forehead and then turned to look at Jurina disbelief.

“Want to train to get stronger? Jurina, seriously, that’s the lamest reason I have ever heard.”

“Oi! I couldn’t think of anything better! But the King still believes that anyway.”

“Shhhh! You idiots please quiet down. The King and still hear us!” Mayu said quietly.

“Watanabe-sama is right. Please keep your voice down.” Mario placed a finger on his lips, gesturing the others to stay silent. “Ren-sama, you and Watanabe-sama don’t have any other work until tomorrow so you can take a day-off for today.”

“Oh good. I really need to rest.” Yuki sighed in relief.

“And Watanabe-sama, your new room is done so Jurina will show you.”

“Thank you, Shinoda-san.”

“I shall take my leave now. I still have to do some works. Jurina, escort them.”

“Hai.”

When the butler left, Yuki immediately went to a direction, ignoring the other two. But before she could take the second step, a voice stopped her motion.

“Where are you going, Takahashi-sama?” Mayu said.

Yuki turned around with an annoyed look.

“Go to my room of course. I don’t have anything else to do with you when you have Jurina already.”

“Too rude for a prince to treat his fiance.” Mayu hissed.

“Oi. First of all, I’m not Ren the gentle prince. Second, you’re not my fiance for the next decades, cyborg!”

“As if I want to marry you, baka Hime.”

“Whatever. And Jurina!” Suddenly, angry Yuki called her name which made the mentioned girl jumped from her place. “Go find that stupid prince and bring him back here ASAP!”

“Y-Yes, Yuki...” Jurina sweat dropped because she could see black aura in Yuki’s eyes and she didn’t dare mess with the black side of the princess. “Let’s go, Watanabe-sama.”

Mayu giggled quietly then followed Jurina. But before they walked away the court hall, a guard in black suit came and called for Jurina.

“Matsui-san, the King is summoning you.”

“Hai. I’m coming.” Jurina replied then turned to Yuki. “My apology, Ren-sama. I have to go now so do you mind escorting Watanabe-sama to her room on your way, please?”

“Sure sure. Whatever. Just go before my father gets angry.” Yuki waved her hand reluctantly.

“Thank you, Ren-sama.” Jurina smiled and bowed then she followed the guard to meet the King.

“What a day...” Yuki sighed then walked away. “You’d better to walk faster. I don’t wait for you.”

Mayu slowly shook her head and gave a cold glare to the prince but Yuki ignored it. The cyborg girl walked behind, mumbling quietly but enough for Yuki to hear every single words.

“What a manly prince. At least your brother knows how to treat girls nicely.”

Hearing this, Yuki immediately stop her steps and turned around. Mayu also stop her motion and was startled by the angry look of Yuki, who was acknowledged by her kindness and calmness in any situations.

“Listen carefully, cyborg.” Yuki said in a low voice. “I’m not the prince. I’m a girl. I’m the princess so I have no responsibility to act like a real prince in front of you. Furthermore, if my brother was so manly and charming like you said, he would never run away from this in the first place like a coward and face it like a real man. Snap out of your dream already. This is reality. This is what you get so accept it.”

Surprised by the princess’s sudden reaction, Mayu was speechless for a second before her shocked face turned back into her usual emotionless face.

“I’m not dreaming anything, Yuki-hime-sama.” Mayu replied in a mono tone then started walking forward, passing by Yuki who remained looking at one direction from the beginning. “But if I am, I will dream of you getting defeated by Kamen Raider and myself getting saved from you, Black Marimokkorin. Well... At least you are better than Marimokkori that you don’t have that erec thing.”

“Oi! You!” Yuki was pissed off and yet embarrassed at the same time when she heard the “erect thing” word. Her cheek was flush when she was thinking about the real Marimokkiri with his famous erect thing...

“I’ll go alone to my room. The servants have showed it to me this morning so I’m not bothering you anymore, Ren-sama.”

Mayu replied automatically and kept walking, ignoring the killing gaze of the person behind her.


“Black Marimokkorin? Not only Jurina but now that cyborg calls me by this name also. Do I really look like him?” Yuki’s eyebrows furrowed. In a moment, she looked down at her pants, where the “erect thing” should be if she did have one. She blushed again and hit herself in the forehand. “What was I thinking? I’m a girl. 100% girl. Disguising as my brother doesn’t make me have that thing! Geez that cyborg gave me weird thoughts...”

Yuki hissed in anger and went to another direction, trying her best to avoid the other girl. She decided to go to her room, to be more exact, Ren’s room. She passed through the Royal Garden. Its natural and fresh beauty didn’t help to soothe the anger of the princess. When she reached her room, five of the servants were standing in front of the hall way and waiting for her.

“Good day, Ouji-sama.” All the servants bowed in union.

“What are you doing in front of my room?” Yuki asked in surprise.

“Ouji-sama, we were ordered to move your things to your new room. The King has assigned for you a new chamber for your engagement.” One of the servant answered.

“A new chamber? My Father?” Yuki sighed. “OK fine. Just lead me there. I really need a long rest now.”

“Hai, Ouji-sama. Please come with us.”

The servants walked away with Yuki following behind. She was too tired and angry that she didn’t even notice where she was going. She closed her eyes while her feet were automatically walking forward. Footsteps were the only thing that were heard currently until Yuki finally realised something was odd when she heard noise from an opposite direction. It sounded like there was another group of people coming to her. But she didn’t care much and kept her eyes close until the servant that was in front of her said.

“Ouji-sama, we have arrived.”

Yuki opened her eyes and saw that they were still in a hallway, a different one that she wasn’t familiar with.

“Huh? Where is my room exactly?” Yuki looked around, observing.

“It’s at the end of this hallway, your Highness. We aren’t allowed to go there with you so we can only guide you here. Please take your way ahead, Ouji-sama.” The servant bowed.

“Fine... Wait a minute...” Yuki was about to move but then an image caught her attention. The cause of her rage was coming to her calmly. “The hell?” Yuki looked at the girl in kimono and hissed.

The girl, followed behind by several other servants, took a notice of the person in front of her. Although, her cyborg emotionless face was unchanged.

“Ouji-sama, we meet again. How nice.” Mayu said sarcastically.


"Oi! You cyborg, don't follow me!" Yuki said angrily.

"Watch carefully, baka ouji-sama. This way is my room. You are the one who is following me."

"This way is my room too!"

"Whatever baka."

Mayu replied coldly then walked away to her room, ignoring the dumbfounded prince and the servants were watching them from the beginning. Yuki wanted to say something back but her throat was blocked by fury and anger that no words could escape her dry wind pipe. Instead, virtual smoke was escaping from both of her red ears; her face looked like a TNT bomb that was waiting to explode. The servants witnessed everything but none of them dared say anything when their prince was completely furious.

None of them dare tickle the prince’s nerves, except for one person.

“Ren-sama? Why is your face look like a Red Marimokkori?”

From nowhere, Jurina approached the prince with a confused smile.

“Oi Jurina!! Stop calling me Marimokkori or I’ll seriously cut off your head!” Yuki pointed her finger at Jurina’s neck.

“Woah woah, calm down Raging Tomato-san.”  Jurina raised both of her hands in defeat. “What happened?”

“Nothing. Just a cyborg got on my nerves.” Yuki sighed.

“You shouldn’t bother much about that.” Jurina giggled and whispered into Yuki’s ear. “Besides, the plan is going well since now the servants know that you and Watanabe-sama don’t get along well.”

“Yeah yeah, whatever. I’ll just go to my new room and have a long sleep until sunset.”

Yuki walked ahead when Jurina followed behind. A mischievous smile bloomed on the younger girl secretly. The young royal guard was about to say something but she changed her mind and stayed silent until Yuki stood in front of the door of her new room.

“Seriously, I will kill God if he gives me another deadly surprise today. I just need to rest.” Yuki mumbled. At the same time, she opened the door and her jaw immediately dropped. Her mouth and eyes opened widely while her gaze was locked on the figure stood in front of her. Silent surrounded the chamber in few seconds before Yuki managed to catch her words.

"Hey! Why are you here?" She asked in surprise.

"I'm asking you the same question. Why are you here?" Mayu, who was also in shock, asked back.

"This is my room."

"But this is also my room. Mario-san told me so."

"What? What's this nonsense?" Yuki ruffled her hair into a mess.

In the moment, Jurina’s voice rang in her ears.

"What do you think, Yukirin? Of course you two are staying in the same room since you two are soon-to-be-engaged couple. The King just gave that order to us."

"WHAT?!?!?!?!" Both Yuki and Mayu shouted in unison.

“Until the announcing meeting of your engagement, you two are going to stay in this chamber. I think the King wants you to get along with each other.” Jurina scratched her cheek.

“Oh God... Just because I drew beard on one of your statue when I was young doesn’t mean you have to be mean to me!!!” Yuki groaned in desperation and bumped her head onto the wall.

“... I’m fine with staying in the same room with this idiot since she is a girl so no worries. I’m not afraid of losing my purity at night.” Mayu shrugged then sat down on one of the chars in the chamber.

“Oi! Who is the pervert in here? I’ve not even touched you but you already took my breastginity!!!! I should be the one who is worried about losing purity at night.”

Yuki moved her head away from the wall and stared at Mayu.

“Oh really, Black Marimokkorin? I don’t think you’re that innocent.” Mayu scoffed back.

“At least I’m not a hentai otaku!”

Jurina stood silently and watched the couple fighting and arguing with each other like cat and dog. She facepalmed herself literally. A heavy sigh escaped her throat.

“Oh boy...” She mumbled under her breath. “This is getting more complicating... I don’t think it’s a good time to tell them about ‘that’... Well first thing first. I have to bring Ren back home.”

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Hey, Sayuki, no need to apologise...as long as you continue to update story we are more than happy!
By the way, thanks for the update! I am excited to read how the story goes, can't even wait to reply to show my gratitude (lol) even before I go read the story... XD

ok, here i go reading the story now  :P
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My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute!
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Thanks for the update!!
So Yuki and Mayu will be in the same room. Fun times :fap
What's "that" thing that Jurina hasn't told them? Getting curious here ;)

Good luck with your university applications!!

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It SO GOOD!!!!

Really funny!!! Yuki and Mayu hates each other... So funny :lol:

The parents XD Don't recognize her daughter...

Yuki like Mayu... Because she always have her jaw down :w00t: 
Mayuki = Cutest couple



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Mayuki in the same room XD
who will sleep on the floor I'm sure it's Yuki  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
 This chapter made laugh so much I can't stop laughing  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
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Offline nori

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Its been a while Sayuki-san, glad to see your still updating   :D
Even though you say this is your first attempt at comedy I seem to be giggling quite a lot, and then what is "that" Jurina is talking about  :grin:
Anyhow thank you for the update, and good luck with the university application  :)

Offline BbSis

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Oh yeah! This update was so nice! I hope nice things happen with this two sharing a room^^ heuehuehuehue *pervgrin*

Don't get demotivated! You have a nice story line here o/ And also, don't be too much worried with the comedy, it will come to you naturally while thinking about your fic. Maybe something you don't think it's funny ended up being funny for others.

Keep up with the story, pleaaase!!! 

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Sorry about my lack of activity... I'm kinda stuck in life...

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It started in a wedding (MariMii + usual couples) - ongoing
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Offline cisda83

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Well Kai is being lied to probably easier.. but to lie to Atsuko would be hard right..?

Mayu and Yuki are always arguing with each other...

They are supposed to live in one room together?

Why Kai wants to see Jurina...?

Well more mysteries... great fic... Thank you

Can't wait to see the next

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Offline Amakuchi

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ERMEHGERD! I WUV THIS! UPDATE SOON, SAYUGAL! OR ELSE, IMMA FLOOD YOU IN FB! XD

JOKE. TAKE YOUR TIME TO DELIVER ANOTHER AWARD-WINNING CHAPTER TO US! d(> w <)b

SAYUGAL, WE WUV YOU! XD

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