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Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui Reply and Sorry
« on: November 11, 2012, 03:58:16 PM »
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Hello minna !!!! I am a new writer (but not a new reader XD), it is my first time writing a fanfic...I am so sorry for my weird grammar, my weird sentence and other weird things with my English. I am not very good in English... :nervous
I start to write because cmze-san says that she read my fanfic (even if it is boring, right? Cmze-san? XD I feel I oblige you! :smhid )

Mayuki fanfic!
Yuki: is a man (Danso Yuki :wub: ). He is the grandson of a CEO of a company that earns millions. (At the start Mayu don't know this)

Mayu: is prodigy student and she finish her studies.

I know they do not have a lot of description.

INDEX

Chapter 1


Married?!

 I am 18 years old, my name is Watanabe Mayu. I am a girl, who is intelligent more than a simple people, it is why I am graduating n on my university right now. Yes you are impressed, I have 18 years old and I finished my studies, that why I say I am clever.

I search a job, but nobody want to hire me because I am too young. Yes, I am young for the job what I want to do. Actually, I don't know what I want to do. I'm sorry!!
My parents it is not here with me, they are in another country in the world. They left me alone with nothing, I live with a friend but it is long time I stay with her. I don't want to bothering her more!

My friend who is really weird wants to put me with a guy... Don't you think she is weird?

Alalalalalala! And now I go to a “date” with a foreign. She know him because she speak with him (in internet) before planning it. She said that she was put herself in my place to respond what I supposedly respond. Is she an idiot? Yes, I think.

I am in front of the cafe... Why accept this plan? Because she said she fired me from her house if I don't go to the date. She is so naughty!
I enter in the cafe and I see him. He is sitting at a table near the window overlooking the road.
He is exactly like what he was in the picture.

He is handsome like ikemen. When I see a picture of him I was loved his face. He have a small face. He have a little cute black eyes and when I look it I see he is gentle I ignore why. He has a long but in the great size nose, a little mouth with a pink lips. His hair is not like what it was in the picture but he look handsome with this too. His black hair is made of wick back up soon at the top of skull, which gave the impression that he was disheveled. He still left fringe which was split into several parts. He certainly tall because he have a long arms and legs.

He sees me and give a sign to join him. I sit and I feel a bit nervous because for me he is just a foreign. We are in the silent for some minutes.
Eventually, he begins a conversation.

“You are really like in the photo” he smile and put my hand. “Introduce ourselves once again because now we meet each other in flesh and bones” I look at him and I though he is really cute. Why?! Why?!
 “I am Kashiwagi Yuki, 21 the man who talk with you in the internet” he grinned and hold my hand.

“I am Watanabe Mayu, 18 who think you are very cute” I reply this without thinking. When I realized what I said I blushed.
“What am I saying?” I thought.
---------------Inner Me------Chibi's reunion -----------
Evil Mayuyu: Oi! Mayu-san You said that without thinking. Are you an idiot?
Gentle Mayuyu: Don't says she is an idiot! Angry!
Evil Mayuyu: Why? She is!
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri~! Oshiri~! :love:
G & E: Stop say it!
Oshriri Mayuyu: Oshiri... (ok...) :(
Master Mayuyu: Can you stop speak please! Yuki are going to speak.
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 I heard him laughed.
“You are cute too you know.” he smile to me I think now I am like a tomato because I feel I flushed a lot.

After our introduction we order what we want to eat. We talk a lot and I have fun with him, my friend was not wrong he is really gentle and funny. However, I believe a weird thing with him but I continue to enjoy the repast.

We finish our meal and it is the time to separation but at moment he told that he want to take me somewhere he loves. I don't know why but I accept.
He takes me in a park, it have a lot of kid and he become to play with them. I says to me to join them. The kids are cute so I join them.

Some time after, the sky is dark and the children are left. We are alone in the park sitting on the bench. I look at him I think he is handsome in the dark. I started smiling. Suddenly he looks at me and stand up. He walk up in front of me and he places his head in front of mine, he puts his arms around my head and his hand puts on the back of the bench. I freeze.

What he want to do? He want kiss me? But it is the first time we meet!
His head is closer, his lips are to an inch of mine.
-------------Inner Me------- Chibi's reunion -----------
Evil Mayuyu: Just slap him! NOW!! :twisted:
Gentle Mayuyu: No push him gently!!
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri! :yep:
Gentle Mayuyu: *up a thumb* Arigatou Oshiri-chan :)
Evil Mayuyu: Why! Oshiri-kun! :angry: You little b-
Master Mayuyu: Shut up Evil-chan! I am for push him gently Boss
Mayu: Thank you Master Mayuyu! :)
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 Abruptly I push him away and I run. After some meters I stopped and I say
“I don't want to see you anymore! I am not an easy girl so go away”. I run once again.
What the hell! He is an idiot!!! That is why I do not like men! They think we can kiss a girl like that. No! Aaah! It is remember me a bad memory.
I stop run.
“Where I am?” I say. I look at my wristwatch it is around 10pm.

Three guys come to me. The first guy is tall. He has short hair in a brush blond color. His face had a scar on his cheek in the shape of a star. It has small round eyes black. A forked nose with buttons. It looks like a zombie because of its hollow cheek. He wears a gangster is required: black leather jacket, black leather pants, gloves, chains, ear piercings. The other guy look like this too but they have a different hair color and style. I don't love the men like that. I think they don't use the bathroom. Burk!

“Hey! Girl! Are you the Watanabe Kazuki's daughter?” I realized who they are. They are the gangster who seek my parents because my parents have a debt.
I said before that my parents are in the other country it is because of them! But I hate my parents because they left me with them!

I run away. “Hey! Come here little...!” They are after me.
“Why? Why? I have a parent like that!” I shouts because I know now I have not got a hope.
I run in a dead end. I turn around
“What are you going to do with me?” I say
“I don't know” one of guy says smiling “Use you? Sell you? Kill you? I don't know!”
I stiff and I step back but it have a wall. They smile like a crazy man and they move towards me. I close my eyes. It is the end, why I don't let this guy kiss me if I was know today is my last day I let him kiss me. I am such stupid.

Suddenly, I heard screams of pain and when I open my eyes Kashiwagi Yuki was here. He took my hand and we run away. He take me in a car and the chauffeur starts the car. I takes my breath.
“thank you...” I say to him. He look at me.
“Have you got a problem?” he sees me with a dark eyes.
“Y-yes they purchase me because my family have a debt of them” I answer
“Where are your parents” he asks with a worried face
“I don't know...” I murmur.
“I see...” he turn his body toward a window of the car and begins to think.

He turn to me again, take my hand in his hand and he says
“I have a deal”
“Huh?!” What a deal? In this moment?
“Become my wife and I will pay your debt when your mission is clear.”
“What? A mission”
“Yes, I protect you of them and...”
“Wait! Why wife and not girlfriend”
“Because I need a wife” He answer nonchalantly.

--------------Inner Me------- Chibi's reunion -----------
Mayu: Who is this man? He is so weird! He need a wife! He is just 20! So weird! so weird! So weird! So wei-...
Evil Mayuyu: Slap him! :twisted:
Gentle Mayuyu: No! Don't use the violence :smhid
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri! :yep:
Evil Mayuyu: Why? He is is just a sex maniac! :angry:
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri! :shocked
Gentle Mayuyu: He save us! :(
Evil Mayuyu: Then we will give our body for it!?
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri...  :O
Gentle Mayuyu: N-no... *ears down like a puppy*
Master Mayu: What do you want to do Boss?
Mayu: I don't know... Ask him a few questions and then we can know what he want to do. And if he is a ma-
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“You have ten minutes to think about” He interrupt my though
“W-wait it is too weird I don't understand and I don't know y-”
“Then it will be how you pay me back to saved earlier.” Oh! No! Now I can't refuse.
“If I don't want-”
“I leave you with these guys” He answer with no emotion. I cry in myself.
“I don't have a choice I accept your deal”
“Great!”
 “But what is the mission?”
“Stay with me until I became the boss of the company my grandfather”
“What? it will take time because you are young”
“No my grandfather was become a boss of the company in 18 years old”.
“Ahh......” I don't have any reply but why he need a wife to become a boss. It is too weird! I don't know how much I said/though “it is weird” today.

“We are here” the mechanic voice says.
 “Ok! Now we are in my home” He says behind a big building”
“What you will not take me to my home?”
“No! Now my house is your house, tomorrow we going to married. But now I am tired so we going to sleep in our bed” He smile to me and go in the building.
“O-our b-bed?!!!!”I shouts, I'm so shocked I could not move. He returns and came to me. I am still shocked. He smile then he takes me with a bridal style and he takes us to the interior of the building.



What do you think?... It is a little( or more) boring.... Sorry! Arg! I think it is boring but I want know what do you think.
And if you get upset because of my grammar errors and other errors PM me :)
Wow My heartbeat is going more faster... I am scared of your opinion... KOWAI! (I am afraid!)
COMMENT PLEASE!
« Last Edit: July 10, 2014, 09:27:14 PM by Chanaline »
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Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 1-
« Reply #1 on: November 11, 2012, 04:12:02 PM »
wow an other Mayuki I'm in haven!!!!  :halo:
hello Chanaline I know you sometimes you comment on my fic  :)
 so en you re not new I say it again welcoooome!!  :welcome
I like your fic very much it's an excelent ;)
it's rare that we find Yuki asd the guy  :nervous but I love this cool Yuki  :inlove: oups if Mayu find I'm in love with she will kill me  :rofl:
okey and about grammar don't worry we are all not that good in english even me it's not my first languge  :catglare:
about my fics are all inspirated by reading cmze-san fics it give ispiration  :cathappy:
PS: I thought you mistzke that cmze-san is a girl  :nervous  so say she not he  :sweatdrop:
oeky I think I have to go now I have a maths exam tomorrow bye good luck in this fic I'm waiting for the next !!  :thumbsup
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Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 1-
« Reply #2 on: November 11, 2012, 04:17:27 PM »
ANOTHER MAYUKI FIC!!!!  XD XD XD
Wow, thought Yuki is cool almost in every Mayuki fanfic, "he" is even cooler when "he" is a guy (I mean the danso Yuki, I've never seen Yuki danso before except for one CM that some AKB members do the danso). And he needs a wife  :lol: :lol: :lol:
I think it's a great fic. Waiting for the next chapter.

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« Reply #3 on: November 11, 2012, 04:26:27 PM »
This was hilarious to read!! I'm waiting for their night time *wiggles eyebrows*  :rofl: :rofl:

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Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 1-
« Reply #4 on: November 11, 2012, 04:26:45 PM »
It's good~ I love the storyline. And I love the chibi Mayu xD Especially Oshiri Mayu <3 It's so cute~

Even though there are some grammar errors but I still understand the main idea. Maybe you should find yourself a beta reader or a co-author, just to make this story epic!!! It's a good storyline, to tell the truth :)

Thanks a lot, Chanaline-san. I"m looking forward to your next chapter

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« Reply #5 on: November 11, 2012, 04:53:56 PM »
M-mayukiiiiiiii!!!!

This is interesting! mou~ they are already geting married! yeyyyy!

Kissu~kissu~kissu~
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

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« Reply #6 on: November 11, 2012, 05:29:36 PM »
Woah! Chanaline-san, your fic is awesome!!

This is the kind of plot I've been looking for!

As you're a reader of my fics, I will also be a reader of yours~

Hope you'll update soon! MaYuki madness is coming back to me :3
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« Reply #7 on: November 11, 2012, 05:45:04 PM »
Eh,actualy its really interesting!

I love this kind of story too,The storyline,the character

Well, i love mayuki pairing,so yeah i like it

Hope the next update,and its not boring anyway,thank
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« Reply #8 on: November 16, 2012, 01:49:23 PM »
Hello chanaline-san, I'm your new reader :D
Interesting story! It's so poignant XD, I mean it is for Mayu, being abandoned by her parents.

Yukiboy needs a wife!
Well Mayu if you don't want Yuki, I'll take him :lol:

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« Reply #9 on: November 17, 2012, 02:44:10 AM »
Woot! ANOTHER MAYUKI! ME LIKEY! HAHAHAHAHA! I HAD MY ASS LAUGHING AT THE INNER MAYU! XD
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'LL FOLLOW YOUR THREAD! m(_ _)m

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Thank you everyone!!!! A lot of people like Oshiri mayuyu when the idea of Oshiri-chan come, I wasn't think you like her as you like her XD

@mo-chan: Me too... I was in heaven when you wrote your Mayuki fic. English is not my first language too... Cmze-san is really a fantastic writer because she have a lot of idea and she write in a correct English!
I think Mayu, right now, don't care if you love Yuki... (After maybe...) And THANK YOU!

@clubhappy: THANK YOU! Yes, you are right Yuki is cool almost in every Mayuki fanfic... I love it XD ! Yuki danso... When I saw the Yuki's danso in the CM. I think that she was like a intelligent man... (I can not express it in English...)

@sakura_drop_:THANK YOU! Is it really hilarious? Aaaaah... Oshiri  Mayuyu is so cute, right? Night time...

@Sayuki: Oshiri Mayuyu... Why do you love her? Because she is cute? I want to find a beta reader but it is complicated and I want to have an epic story XD. You like the storyline, me too! THANK YOU for your advice! :thumbsup

@yuukimoko: Mayuki!!!! They getting married, yes! Wahahahaha!

@ChuuuPuffss: I was looking for this plot too but nobody write it. So I started to write it! Wakakaka! Mayuki madness!!

@kurogumi: THANK YOU! I love Mayuki pairing too!

@javs: Oshiri Mayuyu is a strange character... Chibi's reunion is funny? THANK YOU! Because when I wrote the Chibi's part I was think that was boring...

@anzai48: THANK YOU! the word "poignant" remember me something (maybe nothing) XD He needs a wife but maybe it hides something! No just kidding!! Wahahahahah!

@Amakuchi: Really? you had your ass laughing at the inner Mayu???? (XD I don't understand what is it mean XD) I understand that you have a fun time when you read my fic so I'm so happy! THANK YOU!






Chapter 2: The Beginning of everything



We are in the elevator. I am still in his arms. I had to put my arms around his neck to not falling. In the trip nobody speak. I feel a bit nervous because it is the first time that I enter in a man's house.
But why? He don't take me to my house... After all we don't know each other. I'm scare because he may be a pervert and do something weird.
The elevator stop at 48th floor.
When the doors opened, a little room is in front of me with a single door on the other side of the room. He moved to the door and opened it. Now I can see a big lounge with a big TV which is against the wall. On the ground it have carpet with a little glass table.
At the right, I can see the kitchen and a long corridor. My eyes finally see the large window where we can see a beautiful view of the city. I stop the description.

He enter in his house, and he go near the lounge. He dropped me off on the couch and he sit next to me. The silence... No noise. Suddenly he broke the silence “I want to finish what I wanted to do before” he murmur but I hear it. I do anything but inner me...

--------------Inner Me------- Chibi's reunion -----------
Evil Mayuyu:  :shocked Oh my god! Do you hear him?
Gentle Mayuyu: No!
Evil Mayuyu: Don't lie! I know you hear him because I hear it!
Gentle Mayuyu: Yes but why he says it then he can do it without saying anything?
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri... 8) *think about something*
Evil Mayuyu: He is an idiot! It is simple! :)
Gentle Mayuyu: See his face.
Evil Mayuyu: **Look at the Yuki's face**  :huhuh He seems hesitate!
Gentle Mayuyu: I think if he was a sex maniac, he do it unscrupulous.
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri! :w00t: **The other chibi look at her** Oshiriiii. Oshiri. Shiriri. Oshiriririri!  :inlove:
Gentle & Evil: Oh! What are you saying about in this time!?
Master Mayuyu: Oshiri-chan **sigh** Why are you look at the Yuki's butt in this time? And how can you see his butt?
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri. :inlove: Oshiri. :love:
Gentle, Evil & Master: Butt maniac! :smhid
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri  :wub: **start to make an oshiri form with her hands and jump with a big smile** :D
Mayu: What was that chibi's reunion? :smhid

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I look at my shoes. I don't want to meet his eyes. Why? I don't know! Maybe is because I think about his butt?!
Suddenly, he take my hand. I realize that we are in the dark. He gets up.  He pulls me to him and he hugs me. What? Just weird!
He snapped his fingers and the light will illuminate. I am impress! New technology or not!
He let me go “I go to the bathroom, during this time you can visit the house/apartment.”
Then he entered in a room. This is the bathroom, I think.

I go in the corridor and it have five door.
I opened the first door, it is the bedroom. A long and large bed is in the room. The room is sumptuously decorated. All is in the white, blue and red color.

I go to the next room, it is a workroom with an office with computer. The dominant color is brown.
Why? I visit without fear?

Next room, an another bedroom but it have a single bed.
The next is a fitness room, it have a lot of a fitness machine. Weight. Dumbbells. Cross Trainers. Treadmills. Rowing Machines. Exercise Bikes. Cross Trainers. Weights. Gym Equipment.
It is a gigantic room! He can't use all of fitness machine!

The next room is the most weird. It is the weapons room!?
Yes! A weapons room! Firearm and cold steel decorate the room.
Katana, Submachine gun, AK47, Colt 1911, M16,  AKM-59, HK MP5K, naginata, kunaï, dagger, ammunition, chains with dagger...
What is it?
I panic, who is this men? A terrorist? I don't move. I am here during more than 5 min.

A hand tapped my shoulder. I jump and I freeze. Someone closed the door. He grabbed my waist and turned me around.
I'm scare! Why? Why was there so many weapons?

He laugh “You discover my collection. I love the weapon! My grandpa buy a lot for me and in the other country! I have almost all of world weapon. You can't see that it is really dangerous.” he says smiling.
So he just collects only. I'm reassured.

All of a sudden, I realize he is only dressed in a bathrobe. I look other way. It's so embarrassing.
He puts his hand under my chin and he move my head. Then he look in my eyes. His eyes is black but I can see he is lonely.
 His face approach to mine. There was only one centimeter when a ringing is heard. It is my ringing.

I push him. Saved by the bell. I reach my purse on the couch and I get out my phone.

“Hello?” I say
“Hello? Mayu?” the voice says
“Yes. What do you want? Miichan” I ask
“Where are you?” she asks angry “it is 11pm, do you know?”
“Yes, I'm sorry, I have a little problem, the guy with I have a date took me at his home” I say calmly
“WHAT!?” she shouts on the phone
“He took me at his home” I repeat
“...” The silence is here for a few second. “why did you accept?”
“I hadn’t got a choice. It is your fault! Make me to meet a guy I don't know anything about him!” I shout.

Yuki grab my phone and terminates the call. “You don't know anything about me although I speak a lot with you?”

I gulped “I'm sorry, but it was not me. It was my friend.” I said, trembling.
He scare me! What is it? A black aura!?

--------------Inner Me------- Chibi's reunion -----------
Evil Mayuyu: **Trembling** What is it? :panic:
Gentle Mayuyu: I-I d-don't know!
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri! **big smile** :lol:
Evil Mayuyu: how can you smile? :shocked It is a dangerous situation!
Oshiri Mayuyu: *put a finger on his chin and rocking his head on the side* Oshiri? :?
Gentle Mayuyu: she don't understand!
Oshiri Mayuyu: **sends flying kiss to Yuki** Oshiri!!  :heart:
Gentle Mayuyu: She is crazy! :smhid
Master Mayuyu: I think- ** The other chibi except Oshiri jump and cried in surprise** Sorry... I think it is because she loves his butt.
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri~!  :deco:
Gentle and Evil: What the hell!? :angry:
Mayu: Why don't you search a solution of this problem?

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He advances towards me. “I want something for forgiving you”
“W-what do you want?” I stutter
“Kiss on the lips” he says smiling
What? It is my first kiss! I don't want to let to him my first kiss!
“Is it your first kiss?” he asks. I look other way “I see”
 
He grabbed my shoulders and he smile. He put his lips against mine. I try to remove but it keeps me strong. When he move his lips. He is not aggressive as I thought. He is gentle. He move his lips slowly. My phone is still ringing but I can't move. Sorry Miichan!

When he broke the kiss I feel the warm go away. He takes my phone and he removed the battery.
He smile “We must go to sleep, tomorrow is an important day.”

He takes my hand. I am red I know it. He take us in the room with the big bed. He search something in the closet. He gave me the garment for sleeping.

“I go out and so you can change your clothes when you're done go in the bed and sleep” he says.

I hear him scream in the pain but I don't care he is just a cruel man! He took my first kiss!
I go to the bed, I put myself under the blanket and I start thinking.

I don't forgive him! I don't want!

Meanwhile

Yuki POV

Oh! no! What am I doing? I steal her a kiss! But she was so cute. I couldn't resist.

I walk on a puddle and I slip. The puddle is here because I am still wear bathrobe and earlier I was not dry. I fell hard on the ground and I scream in the pain. My head hit the ground. I grabbed my head in the hope of alleviating pain. I return in the bedroom and I moved into the other half of the bed at a reasonable distance from Mayu.
I don't want her to hate me more!

--------------Inner Me------- Chibi's reunion -----------
Black Yukirin: Wahahahah! it is good she hates you! wahahaha! :twisted:
White Yukirin: Oh no! What are you doing?? :(
Singer Yukirin: Lalalalalala~!  XD Lalaaaaaaaaa~!
Black Yukirin: Ohoh! it is rare that Singer-kun is with me! *High five* :twothumbs
White Yukirin: You, both of us are just idiot! :yawn:
Black Yukirin: ;) Don't be jealous! eheh!
Singer Yukirin: Lalalalaaaalaa!
Master Yukirin: Go to sleep NOW! >:(

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A/N: Boring... The end is bad. I know. Now it is complicated to continue hahahaha! Yuki pov! A big fail with this chapter Aaaah~! I am a so bad writer! Sorry! I feel that everything is zero. Other authors can put feeling but I can not do it ... I need something!

It looks complicated for their future married life. Thank you! COMMENT PLEASE!!!!!!

PS:Yuki's chibi is a boy too!
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« Reply #11 on: November 20, 2012, 12:15:25 AM »
Wow! what should i say first?!?  :shocked

I'm loving it man Yukiii is hot!! :w00t:

wait a minute before that "Yes i'm a girl!"  :cathappy: how can u say my englisb is good.. i'm such an english terrorist! :rofl:

<back to the topic>

This is so cool!  :D

Yuki kun needs a wife.. NICEEEEEE!!  :wub:

Oshirii!! they kill me for so much laughing!!!  :rofl:

Omg i can't wait.. That wedding is going to be amazing!!  :wub:

Mayu please don't hate Yuki kun... he thinks ure cuteee!!  XD

Please update soon!!! THIS IS GREAT!!!  :bow:

Btw: i didn't notice the first chapter sorry!! :( but now i'll pay more attention so i can comment in every chapter!!  :nervous


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« Reply #12 on: November 20, 2012, 06:32:05 AM »
@cmze: I know that you are a girl!! Sorry for before! :cathappy: The wedding is going... I don't know XD and THANK YOU for your comment! :thumbsup I am really happy! :D And if you are an English terrorist, what am I?
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« Reply #13 on: November 20, 2012, 06:45:58 AM »
ohhhhh~ Yuki must really marry Mayu!! kyaaaaa!!!


I love them together....*sigh* so perfect.
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

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« Reply #14 on: November 20, 2012, 06:52:51 AM »
@yuukimoko: ahah! :) you are right! Yuki must marry Mayu!

I have a question: is it normal that when the reader comment the subject return to the name of chapter 1?  :?
How can I change the name of the topic???
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« Reply #15 on: November 20, 2012, 10:01:15 AM »
You can change the name from the first.post you made on this topic.

You press to correct the teaser or what was it and were you wrote the title. From thereit changes everywhere.
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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The next is a fitness room, it have a lot of a fitness machine. Weight. Dumbbells. Cross Trainers. Treadmills. Rowing Machines. Exercise Bikes. Gym Equipment.

The next room is the most weird. It is the weapons room!?
Yes! A weapons room! Firearm and cold steel decorate the room.
Katana, Submachine gun, AK47, Colt 1911, M16, AKM-59, HK MP5K, naginata, kunaï, dagger, ammunition, chains with dagger...

Wooo... So cool...
I'm imagining somekind like My-Husband-Is-A-Gangster type of story...  XD
Will they ever get the chance to use that weapon?
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« Reply #17 on: November 22, 2012, 02:56:15 PM »
an other chapter  :cow:
it really make me laugh when mayu is confused and she like Yuki's buttb :rofl:
I thought Yuki is cool and sometimes scary  :lol:
but I think now he is kinda cute and stupid  :lol:
Yuki kissed Mayu!!!!  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
I can't wait for the next  :deco:

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« Reply #18 on: November 22, 2012, 04:17:20 PM »
YukiMAN!! I don't know what to say except..... :fap :fap :fap :fap :fap :fap

The gym and equipment and stuff is a bit intimidating...I wonder if Yuki is super fit or sth, please describe his body...ahaha. Wonder why he wants to get married so desperately.

Thanks!

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« Reply #19 on: November 22, 2012, 06:00:35 PM »
This is so cute :P

All the shocking thing for Mayu hehehe :twothumbs

Please continue Chanaline-san :inlove:


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