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Offline Yhuiii

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HATRED (Prologue)
« on: March 11, 2015, 02:47:43 AM »


A woman sitting in a hospital bed, holding her strong hands. Her face was pale. An incident that happened a few hours ago back distorted in her brain.

"Oneechan.., Please don’t..." Said a woman as she clutched her arm.

"You want to make us die? Let go of me!" The other woman said as she attempted to force her sister’s hand who tightly gripping her arm.

"P-Please…." The wind kept blowing hard so as drawing the boat they were on to keep running right and left coupled with increasingly strong ocean waves.

"Argh….Stupid kid. I hate you!" Said the woman, slowly release the grasp of the hand of her sister in her arms. As soon as her sister's hands off of her arms, their boat back shaky.

"No... No.. It's not my fault, " said the woman, her hands clenched tightly.

This idea suddenly jerking into my mind I had to write it before I forget. I know I still have a lot of fic that must be updated.. but first I'll try to update Gomennasai today somehow i felt no inspiration :bleed eyes: please be pantient :)

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Re: HATRED (Prologue)
« Reply #1 on: March 11, 2015, 03:46:49 AM »
Yo!!! Kojiyuu and mariharu love triangle....

Offline cisda83

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Re: HATRED (Prologue)
« Reply #2 on: March 11, 2015, 08:49:46 PM »
From Below picture I see Yuko and Mariko as guys fighting over Haruna

From Top picture I see Yuki and Jurina as guys with Rena and Mayu

I was not so sure if whom I see were Jurina and Mayu

Well... whatever it is... looking forward to see the start of the story

Also wanting to know who was the older sister and the younger sister...

From that prologue... I concluded that the younger sister didn't survive

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the prologue

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Offline KashiwagiRena

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Re: HATRED (Prologue)
« Reply #3 on: March 11, 2015, 09:05:14 PM »
Kojiyuu and mariharu triangle love  :luvluv1: :luvluv1: ,can't wait the next update :D

Offline Raizel

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Re: HATRED (Prologue)
« Reply #4 on: March 14, 2015, 03:05:41 AM »
Yes new fic from Yhuiii-san..  :on woohoo:
Who are the sibling?? :dunno:
Jurina as a guy.. :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
Is it wmatsui and mayuki or jurimayu and yukirena???  :hehehe:
Can't wait for the next update.. :kneelbow:

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Re: HATRED (Prologue)
« Reply #5 on: April 26, 2015, 11:49:33 AM »
Please continue author san ...

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Re: HATRED (Prologue)
« Reply #6 on: April 26, 2015, 03:31:19 PM »
there are yuki, mayu, rena, jurina, e.... yuko, kojiharu, mariko-sama, and sae? eh...?!
would it be mayuki wmatsui or yukirena jurimayu with marikojiyuu love triangle and sae?
woah, cant wait!
Yo, i'm sastio! i like to read fanfics! :)
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Kashiwagi Yuki, Matsui Rena, Yagami Kumi, Okada Nana, Shinobu Mogi, Thalia, etc.
overall, i like all members hehe

every pairing is fine, as long as i enjoy :)

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