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Offline Yhuiii

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« on: February 10, 2015, 01:28:30 AM »
I’ve decided to delete all of my stories because I haven’t been active for a while, and I don’t have the time to finish them. Thank you to everyone who read and supported my work, I really appreciate it.
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Offline Louise-sama

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Re: Now You See Me (Prologue)
« Reply #1 on: February 10, 2015, 02:16:01 AM »
I wonder how Mayu is related to the Jurina or Rena. Hehe.
About your English, you just have to consider proper subject-verb agreement and you'll be fine ^_^
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Re: Now You See Me (Prologue)
« Reply #2 on: February 11, 2015, 08:57:04 AM »
kyaaa...she's so cute & Beautiful.. heheheheh :inlove: :inlove:  :panic: :panic: :inlove:
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Re: Now You See Me (Prologue)
« Reply #3 on: February 11, 2015, 11:26:10 AM »
Is this story gonna telling about a ghost's (Jun) life?
This Jun asking Mayu's help to solve the case of his death? And if Mayu can't help Jun, she'll be taken to another dimension with Jun by force huahahah~

Don't think too much about this comment, I'm just a kid who watching too much movies. But if you want to make a story like this.. You have a same taste with me, bro 8)
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Re: Now You See Me (Prologue)
« Reply #4 on: February 11, 2015, 11:37:01 AM »
Is this gonna be angsty? If yes, I am all for it  :ding:

I am curious now, if Jun (that is found dead of overdose) is really dead, pretending to be dead or is it Jurina's brother of some sort? I have a lot of questions in my mind.. How Mayu is related to Jun? Why the men were chasing her? She is ojousama? Maybe she ran away from home? Maybe she is Jun's sister? God, I wanna read first chapter already  :frustrated:

And your grammar is good, good luck on writing stories and welcome I guess?  :hee:
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Re: Now You See Me (Chapter 1) [Feb,12 2015]
« Reply #5 on: February 17, 2015, 05:16:47 PM »
Ah.. So yuki is rena's ex boyfriend and now rena is jun's girlfriend, right ?
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Re: Now You See Me (Chapter 2) [March, 11 2015]
« Reply #6 on: March 11, 2015, 10:41:08 AM »
Ah.. I understand now
So complicated lol
Btw thanks for update author-san^^ can't wait for next chapter ><
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Offline Raizel

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Re: Now You See Me (Chapter 2) [March, 11 2015]
« Reply #7 on: March 11, 2015, 01:17:31 PM »
Author-san.. Please update soon... :luvluv1: :luvluv1:

Poor Jun.. :fainted:

And let it be jurimayu...  :wriggly: :shy2:
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Re: Now You See Me (Chapter 2) [March, 11 2015]
« Reply #8 on: March 11, 2015, 03:41:35 PM »

 :luvluv1: :luvluv1:

why to short author-san :fainted:
But it's ok as long as you keep update this :shy2: And i will be waiting for it :wriggly:
oww JuriMayu :wriggly: then Mayuki i think it will gonna be exciting story..(^_^) ganbatte author-san
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Re: Now You See Me (Chapter 3A) [March, 13 2015]
« Reply #9 on: March 13, 2015, 12:20:17 PM »
Oh.. Yhuiii-san new update thanks.. :ding:
What's the meaning of Sae's cold smile? So curious.. :glasses:
Those photo.. :luvluv2: :on bleed:
Btw, where is Jun?? :tantrum:
I hope you'll write more about jun and mayu..   :farofflook::kneelbow:
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Re: Now You See Me (Chapter 3A) [March, 13 2015]
« Reply #10 on: March 13, 2015, 01:25:12 PM »
Thank's for the update :wink:
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