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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 8 (10/8/11)
« Reply #140 on: October 08, 2011, 12:58:39 PM »
Rena's first cameo  XD XD XD hooray! :yossi:
Jurina's crazy driving skills amazed me :yep: even Captain Sayaka become apprehensive :lol:
And its expected that there's no dull moment when the perverted squirrel was around her Nyan-Nyan :twothumbs


PS: Actually like the bitchy Eguchi... :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: (hey it ryhmes :lol:)
Her role that is...its perfect for her! :thumbsup
Thanks for the fast update yo! :twothumbs
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 8 (10/8/11)
« Reply #141 on: October 08, 2011, 01:20:41 PM »
OMG OMG OMG :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t:

THIS IS GOING TO BE A FCKING SICK RESCUE MISSION :cow: :cow: :cow:

I'm so excited for everything!!! XD XD XD XD XD XD XD

though there's no Atsumina moment in here, the preparation and everything made up for it!!!!
and THANK GOD those higher ups aren't stupid!!!! PLEASE kill that egubitch already!

I SO CAN'T WAIT ANYMORE!!!! XD XD XD XD
I WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER NOW!!!!!


PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!
AWESOME CHAPTER AS ALWAYS :bow:
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 8 (10/8/11)
« Reply #142 on: October 08, 2011, 02:04:13 PM »
WOOO~!!!  XD

W Matsui going to be reunited?!  :inlove:

PLEASE UPDATE SOON~!!  :bow:
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 8 (10/8/11)
« Reply #143 on: October 08, 2011, 02:14:08 PM »
wohoo. awaiting the mission.

and Jurina as the crazy drive, love it.  with Rena appearing,  WMatsui please!

kinda miss the 'Yuu-chan, language!'  that wasn't in the chapter 8. hahahahaha
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 8 (10/8/11)
« Reply #144 on: October 08, 2011, 05:02:50 PM »
F**ck yeah for rescue missions! *fists pumps*

I was actually wondering why Jurina was driving but then I realized how epic driving is when you don't have your drivers license. So much more efficient in many ways BD I'm sure Rena-chan would applaud it!

Speaking of Rena....dkjgnjanbejgakdmglkakgmlamd WMATSUI  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: Must have, MUST HAVE  :heart:

ZuZu, badass rescue mission next?  :dunno:

You are so awesome, did I ever tell you that? ;____;

Update soon!  :heart:

P.S...I would totally fangirl too if I saw AKB like that BD Badass gear and everything  :heart:
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 8 (10/8/11)
« Reply #145 on: October 08, 2011, 05:03:47 PM »
Kuumin and Yui~

And Rena's gonna be in the next chapter~! \o/

Ah too many things I love about this chapter, one of them being Jurina driving like a madman cause of GTA lol I can understand though

Is there gonna be some action next update?
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 8 (10/8/11)
« Reply #146 on: October 08, 2011, 08:57:41 PM »
Yui-tan  :vv:
And Rena-chan come soon  :k-great:

Everyone go together to save Acchan  :luvuluvu:

Update soon please  :tama-laff: And next time Atsumina !!!  :tama-yeeaah:

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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 9 (10/10/11)
« Reply #147 on: October 11, 2011, 01:03:56 AM »
R I V E R

Chapter 9
(Posted 10/10/11)

Warning: Mild language and violence ahead.

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A/N: Thank you for continuing to read! \ ; 3 ; / I hope this rescue isn't disappointing you guys so far orz Nevertheless, thank you for your very helpful and motivating comments :D Your support is very appreciated!

I wonder if the end is near...
« Last Edit: January 22, 2016, 06:51:04 AM by Divine Vengeance »
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 9 (10/10/11)
« Reply #148 on: October 11, 2011, 02:21:44 AM »
LOL at SAE  :cow: :cow: :cow:
YAH MIICHAN !!! GO CRAZY!!! MAKE A LOUD BANG
BEWARE OF TOMORAGE :P

TAKAMINA TO THE RESCUE!!! I was I bit disappoint to Acchan and Takamina's reunion as I was kind of expecting it to be little more dramatic :P
But no worries, It's all GOOD!!! I STILL LOVE MY ATSUMINA MOMENT!!!!

Now I just hope they made it out there alive!!!
Hurry up people!!! Rescue Atsumina and the others!!!

I can't wait for more!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP XD XD XD
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 9 (10/10/11)
« Reply #149 on: October 11, 2011, 05:37:51 AM »
Aww thank god they save Acchan!

Run you guys!

nice chapter btw.  :heart:
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 9 (10/10/11)
« Reply #150 on: October 11, 2011, 05:42:44 AM »
NO. WHY'D YOU STOP? ADFADSFS

Naw I'm just kidding but I needed this to end my very weird night. You write action scenes pretty well I must say.

But dang that is a close call rescue, can't wait for the next update~!
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 9 (10/10/11)
« Reply #151 on: October 11, 2011, 05:57:17 AM »
and.. the kiss?? atsumina kiss??
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 9 (10/10/11)
« Reply #152 on: October 11, 2011, 09:28:48 PM »
Waaa So many things happen !! This is great  :tama-lotsaluv:
Atsumina reunion  :luvuluvu: but I want a kiss when they come back !!

Please don't make us worry like that anymore Acchan !  :tntrm:

Update Soon !!  :luvuluvu:
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 9 (10/10/11)
« Reply #153 on: October 11, 2011, 09:33:15 PM »
Atsumina save!! and Kojiyuu + Mari-sama moment :ding:

update soon :oops:
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 9 (10/10/11)
« Reply #154 on: October 12, 2011, 11:42:24 AM »
Yay!!! It's the war!!! I want more explosion!!
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 10 (10/13/11)
« Reply #155 on: October 13, 2011, 01:08:41 AM »
R I V E R

Chapter 10
(Posted 10/13/11)

Warning: Mild language and violence ahead.

A/N: Obligatory Sathday in other people's timezones update.

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A/N: Thank you for continuing to give wonderful comments ; v ; I hope this chapter is up to your expectations orz Thank you as always for your support!
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 10 (10/13/11)
« Reply #156 on: October 13, 2011, 01:32:40 AM »
YUKO, ohhh you really need some NyanNyan discipline  :P :grin:
You  and your Oshiri sister Mayu-chan :lol:

YAH Mayu-chan, Renachan GO for it!!! Kill those bastards :twisted:
and you too Chiyuu Kill those insects for hurting your tomochin.... and lol she's actually alot more scary than Tomochin :P

and you even added Nachu here......

Takamidget overprovective to Her ace, well its understandable since it's Nachu :P

AHHH They have finally completed their mission and it's time for the egubitch to know her place!!! :angry:

VERY AWESOME CHAPTER :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

UPDATE ASAP XD XD XD

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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 10 (10/13/11)
« Reply #157 on: October 13, 2011, 01:38:33 AM »
Thanks for the update! Mindblowing action as always. I love this story. Have been following it closely since the day you posted the first chapter :thumbsup
River is my all-time favourite PV from AKB48 so you can guess how happy I was when I first saw your story. It's amazing how you seamlessly weave humour into such a serious plot. You've got the characters' behaviour and interactions down pat too. Keep up the great job. I'm looking forward to your next update!
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 10 (10/13/11)
« Reply #158 on: October 13, 2011, 02:55:43 AM »
WOW , too much action! I love it!  8)2 8)2  :w00t: :w00t:

LOL Yuko will always be Yuko  :smhid ,LOL yea she need discipline from her Nyan nyan after this miss mission  XD

Takamidget being so protective to Acchan  :wub:

Tomomi~rage is scarier that Tomochin  XD

Please update soon! i love it!  :heart:  8)2 8)2
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 10 (10/13/11)
« Reply #159 on: October 13, 2011, 03:06:49 AM »
oh my . you are really the divine. :twothumbs :twothumbs :bow:
the fics is getting more and more interesting .  :twothumbs
notice Yuko has a bit of control in her language.. (wondering how Nyan Nyan is going to discipline Yuko :? )
Hope all the injured can recover fast.


That egu better let her suffer.  :x :x
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