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Re: One-Sided Love
« Reply #20 on: December 29, 2012, 05:42:58 PM »
What!? Don't tell me Riku likes Mariko-sama??  :mon huh:
In the end, Mariko-sama probably falls for Kuu...   :mon evillaff:
I dont like Ray x Kai!!  :mon fire:
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Re: One-Sided Love
« Reply #21 on: January 09, 2013, 01:40:40 AM »
Wah... hasn't been reading your fic for a while... and you already updating twice... sorry...

As usual... your update contains more and more mysteries.

It's getting more and more interesting... Thank you

Kuu and Mariko fake date.... Kai and Ray is going steady.... which is good.

Erm... Riku and Yuko's dating seem to be a bit strain... what's going to happen...

I hope Riku is not going to be with Mariko... coz' Kuu would be very pitiful. I mean I think Kuu has always had feeling for Mariko for a long time.

He's a player... to make Mariko jealous... or may be just to get her attention. Erm... curious...

Anyhow... looking forward to your next update.

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Re: One-Sided Love
« Reply #22 on: January 18, 2013, 11:51:34 AM »
A/N: First sorry for waiting my next chapter, I’ve really been busy this pass few days due to university activities. Second, Thank  You for reading and I appreciate all of your comment. Third, Thank you very much for always commenting in my every chapter. Their names are:
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One-Sided Love 05
Announcement:
Good Morning Everyone! I have a good news to each of you. Today, we have a two popular people who will be transferred in our university. That’s all. Thank you.
After the announcement, the crowd is now crazy talking about the transferred student.
“Oh my God!” Kuu said or rather panicking which  Mari-chan thought is a bit odd and she decided to ask the playboy.
“Do you have any idea about the principal’s announcement?” I asked with a creepy smile.
“Eh?” Kuu said surprisingly.
“N-No I don’t have ANY idea on what the principal says, Hehe That’s right!”Kuu said nervously which Mari-chan suspicious even more.
“Are you sure?” Mari-chan said while her face is very closed to the Gachapin’s blushing face which Mariko amused.
“If you say so, I will give you the Benefit Of The Doubt” Mariko said while crossing her arms in her chest and they headed to their respective classroom.

Classroom:
“Class! Attention! Please!” The Sensei said to her students.
“You will have a new classmate” the class is now quiet.
“Please introduce yourself” he motioned to the two girls.
“Hai” the two said in unison.
“I am Maeda Atsuko-desu!”
“You can call me Acchan, Please to meet you” Acchan bowed.
“tsk”
“Itano Tomomi, You can call me Shibuya, Nice to meet you!!!” Itano said while her eyes gaze intensely to someone like Gachapin.
“Rude” Mariko thought.
“Okay, Maeda-san, sit beside Takahashi-san and Itano-san sit beside Minegashi-san and Kasai-san” Sensei said
“Hai---“ the two said

Kuu POV

Oh! God! Why in the world she is now my classmate in this university! I will be dead!
What I am gonna do? Mari-chan.......

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While walking gracefully, Shibuya smirked at tensed Kuu. “Hello Kuu!” Shibuya said in a seductive way. Mariko only raised an eyebrow while Acchan seems worried but she is interrupted by the sudden voice of a midget.
“Nice to meet you! Maeda-san, I am takahashi Kai!” kai said with his killer smile that any girl will be whipped like our Diva.
‘U-Uhh, Okay, call me Acchan”
“Okay!” kai said while grinning
“Okay, were friends”
“Deal?”
“okay! Deal”
While the one girl is very jealous.


Discussion: General Psychology
“Today we have an argument or rather a debate, the girls and boys should be separated”
After that the left side corner are the girls while the right corner are the boys.
“Okay, class, our topic today is about........”
“Girls VS. Boys: Who are more superior?”
“the crowd is now noisy due to their opinions about the topic”
“Shinoda-san,  what is your opinion?” Mariko stand up looking to theirs classmate who are intently gazed at her
“Well, according to the Psychology books that I read, Girls excel in memorizing. Rather a poem, song or etc.” After she said that she received a round of applause.
“Very good! As I Expected from a Shinoda” Mariko only smile at the compliment.
“Sensei, I have to say to bring the Pride of the boys!” The crowd of boys seemed to agree on what Kuu said.
“Well, (He used Mari-chan’s statement to annoyed the taller girl) if the girls  are excel in memorizing, the Boys are Superior in abstract thinking!” Whoo! Whoo! Kuu-san! Your the Best!
“But... Girls talk earlier and have a wider vocabulary than the boys!” Mariko countered which Kuu encountered on saying
“Boys don’t have a Wide vocabulary but boys are very GOOD in Math or numbers! Which is why, there are more man  in engineering industry!”
The two are now arguing that you can saw in their eyes that they will tear each other in pieces on the heated argument. The class did not surprised when Mariko held the collar of Kuu which is now grinning crazily only Acchan and Shibuya are surprised.
“okay! Okay! The two of you sit down and the debate is now over and you can have a lunch break”

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“hey, Mari-chan! Wait for me!” kuu said while running to Mariko
“What?!” Mariko hissed.
“What’s your problem?”
Before Mariko answered they hear someone talking to each other, the second popular couple in the university, WMatsui couple.

--
“Rena-chan, I Love You” while hugging Rena’s waist.
“Eh? Stop that Jun, we are here in the public place” Rena said blushingly
“I don’t care, please Rena-chan” Jun said with puppy eyes and a cat smile while wiggling his invisible tail like a very cute puppy.
“Wow! He’s very cute!” Rena thought to herself and unconsciously she hug him which Jun startled by the sudden affection of her girlfriend
“What’s wrong? You don’t want it? Rena asked but she’s starting to giggle
“Hehehe! Are you mad?” Although she’s giggling like crazy, she said it with a seductive voice
“Rena is now dominant that rarely happened” kuu said
“N-No I’m not mad, Rena-chan”
After that they are kissing passionately.
--
“Wow! They are so sweet! I hope we are the same with the two young lovebirds” said the not tall handsome guy while the taller girl rolled her eyes.
“It will not ever happened”
“Hmmp! You are so cold to me Mari-chan!”
“Whatever”
End of Chapter 05

 

 

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Re: One-Sided Love
« Reply #23 on: January 18, 2013, 12:48:00 PM »
Yeey! Chapter o/ it's a pleasure to read you story^^

Is Mari-chan jealous? *.*

Tomochin o/ hehe get her Kasai!

Nhya, please don't get me wrong I love Acchan but, nooo she is gonna mess up with KaixRay ;.; I don't want that ;.;

Thank you for the update o/

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Re: One-Sided Love
« Reply #24 on: January 18, 2013, 01:24:24 PM »
men tomtomo marikuu kaiacchan junrena

all my favourite pair XD

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Re: One-Sided Love
« Reply #25 on: January 22, 2013, 01:28:38 PM »
Interesting interaction as always for Mari and Kuu...

Oh oh... don't tell me it's going to be Atsuko, Kai and Ray... fight again...

Ah... Shibuya... and Kuu what's going on with them

Well can't wait to see the next one

Thank you for this update

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Re: One-Sided Love
« Reply #26 on: January 27, 2013, 10:02:25 AM »
nee, finally acchan heree !! It can bring a "little" war since kai getting close with ray. Getting more interesting in heree X3
kuu mariko really made they own war, i'm curious with tomochin role in kuu mariko relationship.
Jurina really cute, i can imagine her face. Thanks for the update !

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Re: One-Sided Love
« Reply #27 on: January 27, 2013, 01:29:18 PM »
YES!! YES!!

ACCHAN VS. RAY!!!!  :inlove:

I missed reading this one!~

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Re: One-Sided Love
« Reply #28 on: February 10, 2013, 11:08:25 AM »
One-Sided Love 06

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*Lunch Time

Kai POV

“Do you want to joined us for lunch Maeda-san?” I asked her politely and I think she’s blushing?

“Y-Yes if you don’t mind?”

“Yes, I don’t mind same with Ray, Is it Okay Ray?” I smirked to her while she only rolled her

“O-Okay”
“What will be your order, Acchan?”

“Eh?”

“I mean Maeda-san, but I want to call you Acchan? Okay?” I smiled

“Uh, Okay, fine with me”

We eat and talk happily that I didn’t know that my girlfriend, Ray leave us alone

“Ray-san leave us? Is it okay? I think you should go after her”

“I think she needs to find herself”

“Let’s go to our class” I stand up and help Acchan to stand

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Kuu POV

The sun’s ray strikes on my very handsome face. I smiled at that thought of mine when I hear someone shouting my embarrassing nickname. I only pout.

“Gachapin”

“What?!” I snapped at Mari-chan who’s one of her eyebrow raised and she crossed her arms over his chest

“W-Why do you call your handsome boyfriend that damn nickname?!” I said to her

“Why? You  didn’t  like to call GACHA-“

“Cut it off! I definitely not like that it!”

“Your such a sadist girlfriend!”

“Why did you say?” She growled at me

“N-Nothing?” I gulped when she heard me say that I will be surely dead because Sado will resurface and I didn’t stop her to beat me like hell

“Anyway, why you suddenly called me for?” I asked and I think she is nervous?

“How do I put this. Uhm, I will leave Tokyo tomorrow morning”

“WHAT??????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

“Will you please calm down!” Mari-chan shouted to me

“How I supposed to calm down when you will leave Tokyo tomorrow?! That is very important! You said it to me last minute!

Your such a cruel girlfriend! I know we are pretending to be lovers, but I am also one of your best friend! For God’s sake!”

“What are you talking about?!” She also snapped

“I am talking about is your damn departure! Last week, you told Riku and Ray but me? You didn’t tell me! Although we are spending together that time and you’re not care to tell me? Am I really your best friend? Or I am your toy that you fun teasing me every time we saw each other?

*SLAP!

“I don’t know what’s wrong with you, Kuu?!” She walked away but tears are flowing in her beautiful face

“Mari-chan, I’m sorry, I love you” I said it in a whisper and I was crying right now and this is my first time crying for a girl


TBC...

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Re: One-Sided Love
« Reply #29 on: February 10, 2013, 12:55:04 PM »
Ah... Kai is very bad.. he doesn't care about Ray at all...

Keep ignoring her while having fun with Atsuko.... Kai is such a dense and being insensitive jerk without realizing

What's Ray going to do...? Don't hurt Ray please.... even if I like AtsuxKai... I also like RayxKai pairing too.

What's going with Kuu and Mariko? Why Kuu keeps making Mariko angry all the time.... I thought Kuu supposed to be a smooth talker....?

Now doesn't seem to be the case....

Thank you for the update

I can't wait to see the next update

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Re: One-Sided Love
« Reply #30 on: February 12, 2013, 12:32:03 PM »
Oh! Kai is such a player ;.; I wonder what Ray will do about it ><

Kuu! don´t be so overreactive! Go and ask Mariko her forgiveness!!!

continue o/

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Re: One-Sided Love
« Reply #31 on: February 12, 2013, 08:27:25 PM »
I just finished catching up in this fic Kuu is just pissing off Mariko every way possible

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Re: One-Sided Love
« Reply #32 on: February 13, 2013, 05:53:44 AM »
yeah more marimii please

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Re: One-Sided Love
« Reply #33 on: February 15, 2013, 12:12:36 PM »
<----THIS GIRL RIGHT HERE IS STARTING TO LOVE MARIMII.

Nice Update!! I Love it!!

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