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This is the first story, Hope you liked it.
If you are wondering why this story is so weirdly written, because, I tried to type it like a childens' book.
But apparently it's worse than a actual detailed story.
If it doesn't look like a kid story, that is because it is really hard, you could try:)
Would you like the detailed version?
Going to minecraft now, hope I didn't disappoint anyone.
Any request please Pm me or comment. (same goes for complaint)
Would you guys like me to create a Minecraft story?




Acchan visits the dentist


Acchan has been a very naughty girl.

She had eaten all her delicious candies from Halloween, although her mother advised her not to.

Therefore, her cheeks swelled and her tooth hurts.

“Oh my! Looks like we would have to visit the dentist today” Her mother said.

“But… I don’t want to visit the dentist! They are scary!” Acchan wailed.

“Don’t be silly honey, Dentists don’t bite” She assured

“Pinkie promise?”

“Yes, Pinkie promise”

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They arrived at the clinic.

Their neighbours were there too.

“Sweetie, why don’t you play with Takamina, while Mommy talks to Aunt Kashiwagi”

“Okay Mommy”

Acchan left for the kid’s corner, and found Takamina there.

“Hello Takamina” She greeted

“Hello Acchan, It’s nice seeing you here”

“Do you mind if we play together?”

“Yes, Please”

They build castles, battled dragons and married princesses.

But eventually the fun has to stop.

“Sweetie, It’s time to say good-bye” Takamina’s mother said.

“Acchan, looks like I have to go, thanks for the fun-time” Takamina kissed her cheeks.

“Good bye, Aunt Watanabe” She added to Acchan’s mother.

They left for her dental check-up.

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Acchan continued playing with herself, she felt the need to go to the toilet.

“Mom, I am going to the toilet”

“Please don’t be long, It’s soon your turn”

She searched for the toilet, but she got lost.

"Where am I"

She found a wooden door and entered.

“Hello, anybody there?”

The room was dark, only a red light at the corner.

Acchan bravely entered and walked towards the light.

She saw something on a chair.

It was laying down on the floor.

Acchan came closer and saw it.

It was Aunt Kashiwagi, her head was leaking red water.

She felt scared.

Acchan tried to run, but knocked against a bed.

She fell on the floor and looked.

Takamina was on it, her jaw was broken off.

Her teeth and gums tore away.

And her face was sliced to half with a floss.

Acchan eyes widen, when she felt a hand on her shoulder.

She looked around and saw a person in white coat.

Her coat was dirtied with red ink.

A piece of meat was on her hand.

“Can’t wait for your check-up?”

“Well don’t worry, please have a seat”

-More to come- If you liked it- Thank you:)



« Last Edit: January 04, 2014, 02:14:00 AM by ZorxCemoon »
Once upon a time, There lived two beautiful girls.
One named Watanabe Mayu.
Another named Kashiwagi Yuki.
They fell in love with each other and married.
The end.

Yukirin :heart: Mayuyu
Mayuyu :heart: Yukirin

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Zorxie-chan~

What the hell did I just read?!!! It started off sooo cute and the Atsumina interaction was adorable (even though it could of been longer) and then suddenly Minami got sliced in half bleeding... wtf? Though I can see why you write it, its for halloween, huh? lol, so are you continuing this Acchan dentist story or are you gonna write something else?

anyway, love you too  :heart: update soon :)
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Is takamina seriously dead!?  :grr: :grr:
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Is takamina seriously dead!?  :grr: :grr:

Maybe she is having lunch?

Yea she is dead x.x sorry to Atsumina fan

HOORAY!

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*sudden appear + Picit bontot Ashu* What's Hooray for?!! Hah?!! *angry + get back sulking + waiting for this account to be deleted*

dont delete your account ryuukaaaaa  :angry1: :angry1:

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nice story.. :hee:

Is takamina seriously dead!?  :grr: :grr:

Maybe she is having lunch?

Yea she is dead x.x sorry to Atsumina fan

HOORAY!

hohoho...I can't believe you're so joyful with Takamina's death....how cruel... :on voodoo:  :grr:

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Hope you guys like the story, please give it a 'Thanks'.
I am going to bed now, next chapter would be announce soon.
Any request or recommendation please comment or simply PM, you will be credited
Love to all the readers and good friends, and family:P. Enjoy

P.S. I wanted it to be really detailed, but I tried to make it so easy, that even babies could understand, "Some".


Mayu's new doll


Mayu got a doll for her birthday.

She really loves it.

She named her 'Kashiwagi Yuki'

They would play games together.

And they even had tea parties.



One day, She lost her doll.

She searched everywhere.

But it was lost.

She cried and cried for days.

Till her mothers found her doll.



She was again happy, but still she wasn’t.

There was something wrong.



One day, after school.

She came back home.

Her mothers were not in the living room.

They were not in the kitchen.

They were not in the bedroom too.



The only place left

Was the toilet.

She went inside.

And found her two people in the tub.

They were not moving.

They were bathing in red water.

She wanted to come closer.

But she saw her doll.

She was standing up.

A knife was on her hand.

Another doll was there too.

But it was tore apart.

“Mayu, don’t worry, your parents are working”

“Let’s play together!”


Both mothers are 'Jurina and Rena', that is why, there is WMatsui.
More to come-Please 'Thanks' would appreciate it :)  :heart:
Once upon a time, There lived two beautiful girls.
One named Watanabe Mayu.
Another named Kashiwagi Yuki.
They fell in love with each other and married.
The end.

Yukirin :heart: Mayuyu
Mayuyu :heart: Yukirin

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WHAT THE.........  :nervous
my hat is off. saluting.

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OMG! what i just read!!

something really scary
thanks ...

i like the horror storys

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This is a Halloween special, but it has already crossed but nevermind:P

Hope you'll enjoy it, and have a good night sleep.

Don't be afraid to give a 'Thanks', hehehehee.

Read my Zorxie-chan storytelling and Homeless, soon updating, going to sleep, *Yawns*   :heart:



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Haunted Washroom: WMatsui and Kojiyuu.



Standing at the front of the entrance, has completely turned the tables around, from a light mood environment to a consumed aura.

It was rumored to be haunted, a true school history that hasn’t been revealed.

The interior was emitting those field with darkness lurking its inside, everything in visible sight was impossible, except for a rope that attached itself around the top piping, dropping into the middle cubicle.

I wished I wasn’t doing this’ I thought, but at the back of my mind, I clearly knew why.

Being the schools’ biggest bully and money extortioner has forced me to uphold a certain standard that was appropriate for it.

Taking a deep inhale of oxygen, I stabilized my notorious titanium heart, hoping it would boost my courage.

But as soon as a footstep was taken forward, an ominous white object flew across the ground, and disappear, I flinched an inch backwards, the sudden occurrence has depleted my courage by a handful.

I rubbed my eyes, hoping it was only an illusion of my imagination, but I certainly wasn’t sure.

Fortunately for me, I was still remaining the rest and forward another footing.

“Has your heart readily prepared itself for out revelation?” A spooky whisper echoed, it finally tangled my courage, my heart beating rapidly and breathing was made almost impossible.

That was the last straw for me and turned my body around, trying my best for escape, only to view the disappointing faces of my peers.

“What happened to you, Yuko” They shouted with absolute displeasure staining their faces.

Unwanted complaints and blabbering has made it clear that I couldn’t back off from this stunt, as I rushed in with a single thought.

Once inside, I tried switching the lights open, but it wouldn’t even flicker, not even the slightest bit.

I stood inside waiting for my eyes to adjusted, remembering their tone and I knew I had to continue further and gather a form of evidence in order for them to forgive me for that shameful performance.

“Yuko, come back!” Their shouts were hazy, but I could literally feel the urgency, but I didn’t care as I walked in-between the cubicles and started pushing the doors open, they were all empty, but as I was about to grabbed hold of the middle.

The door at the end, mysteriously opened along with the creaky window, a shaft of light projected inside it.

Moving over, fingers crossed, fortunately all that was present was a piece of note, brightly lighted by the ray, begging to be read.

Following the calls, I firmly grabbed hold of it, bloodstains were the ink.



We were once friendly students

Nothing outstanding nor unique about one another

Beside having the same surnames.

Slowly we became friends and later lovers.

But the bullies found our similarity as an object for their senseless pleasure

It started out with amateur torments and verbal abuse.

However they eventually took it up a notch.

We were dragged out of class against will

I was tightly held back watching as they sexually abuse my girlfriend.

I struggled to be her saviour but I was a failure.

They finished their deed and release me, laughing.

I felt rotten from the core, as I was too weak to help her.

So we did it, the only solution that solved the entire problem.

They had their chances, but they blew it.

Now I’m with her, guarded away from harm".


If you are interested, your next exciting dare would be to open the doors that the rope has chosen
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Although the letter could be evidence enough, I would have to ascend the standard to completely erase the pitiful memory, so I agreed.

Curious but yet apprehensive, I mechanically moved my palm over the knob, but it slams opens phenomenally , what was inside frightens my heart further.

A dead body hang suicidal from a rope, a knife she held, below her was bottles filled with blood, organs and other internal component were neatly set, as if a ritual.

Each and every bottle has a name plastered onto them, ranging from missing students from the past.

Behind her, there was another body, but it was impaled onto the wall, a smirk never leaving her face, her eyes widely open.

My entire being went wiggly, but I knew I had to escape, so I rushed with all my might towards the only exit, only to face the sealed door, the locks clicked.

I tried smashing the doors, but it wouldn’t bulge, suddenly a twisting sound sounded along with gushing, looking shakily back, red liquid were flowing profusely out of the tap, and were soon flowing the ground.

Having a dad as a plumber, had implanted knowledge of fixing in to my brain, therefore I opened the bottom-shelf and paralyzed, shivering in horror.

Making this nightmare stop! Please!, I screamed my lungs dead, starring at the bodies inside, the piping were draining their bloods.

"Help us" They were still half dead, their fingers all tore apart.

“Yuko, Open up!” My girlfriend shouted from beyond, I banged the doors loudly and tried twisting the knobs again, but to no avail.

“Call help, Honey” I ordered, as a hand patted my shoulders, my body felt drowsy and I used my final burst of energy to flip around.

Honey, I love you” I mumbled my last breath, before everything went blank.


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The police came after sensing the urgency in Haruna’s tone, thus rushing in with tools for emergency, firstly they tried opening with a bobby pin, but it mysteriously broke every time.

Therefore they resorted to using the door ram, but yet again to complete failure, giving up hope on today, they rested their tools but the doors suddenly unclicked.

Immediately they went in and pulled the doors, it was still stuck by an anonymous object, using greater force it finally got off, a long stretch of what seems to be an intestine

“Officer, should we go in?” A frighten amateur spoke, her legs were almost unable to support.

“What are you afraid of, ghost?” She dragged them inside, flashing their torchlight.

They began kicking down the doors from the first to the last, but at the center, they found bottles of blood scattered on the ground, nothing else were found.

‘Oshima Yuko’
Once upon a time, There lived two beautiful girls.
One named Watanabe Mayu.
Another named Kashiwagi Yuki.
They fell in love with each other and married.
The end.

Yukirin :heart: Mayuyu
Mayuyu :heart: Yukirin

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 :shock: YUKOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOo

 :sweatdrop: I almost shouted it aloud.
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Re: Childrens' stories [Horror] Haunted Toilet Updated 3/11
« Reply #12 on: November 13, 2013, 04:34:43 PM »
Here's another chapter, really tied up with work.

Sorry to anyone that has requested for me to do a story, but it would have to wait.

Has it been a long time, since anybody saw my ugly face?

Please support this story Homeless:Mayuki

Please give it a 'Thank you' or a lovely 'Comment', but most importantly enjoy reading.




[Tomochin's Birthday, WMatsui | Mayuki]

Today’s little Tomochin’s Birthday.

She would be 7 years old, a big girl now.

And big girl means big celebration.

So Aunt Kashiwagi and Aunt Watanabe decided to throw her party at their house.

Every of her friends were invited, but some couldn’t make it.

That makes Tomochin really sad.

But there were delicious food and cakes to cheered her up.

There were chicken, beef and pork.

There were even sweet strawberry juices too.

But most importantly there were presents, for her.

They ate the food, sang her birthday song, before making a wish.

Afterwards, she unwraps her presents

She got a Teddy bear from Mommy Rena.

She received a Stuffed doll from Mommy Jurina.

But Aunt Kashiwagi’s present was the most special of them all.

It was a Halloween suit, wherein looks just like her friend, Acchan.

There were holes for eyes, and a zipper for the back.

If only Acchan was here to see this, she thought.

But she couldn’t let sadness ruin her day.

She continued munching down the meats, and not long later, they have all been eaten, squeaky clean.

But Tomochin and her friends are still hungry, so she asked Aunt Watanabe, whether she could wipe up another badge of food.

She said she could, but would need some of her friends, as helping hand.

Everyone volunteered, but sadly, only a handful was chosen.

A moment of dancing and singing later, food could be smelled from outside.

And finally they were out.

Tomochin excitedly ate the food, and drank the juice.

It was so delicious that she had to asked Aunt Kashiwagi about the recipe, since Aunt Watanabe was busy.

“Aunt, how’d Aunt Watanabe make her food so finger licking good?” She asked.

“Well, that’s our secret, but she couldn’t have made them without your friends”
Once upon a time, There lived two beautiful girls.
One named Watanabe Mayu.
Another named Kashiwagi Yuki.
They fell in love with each other and married.
The end.

Yukirin :heart: Mayuyu
Mayuyu :heart: Yukirin

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Re: Childrens' stories [Horror] Tomochin's birthday 13/11~WMatsui | Mayuki<3
« Reply #13 on: November 13, 2013, 07:39:58 PM »
 :mon suspect:
Thank your friends for a meal Tomochin. :sweatdrop:
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Re: Childrens' stories [Horror] Tomochin's birthday 13/11~WMatsui | Mayuki<3
« Reply #14 on: November 16, 2013, 11:38:58 PM »
Woah, that was awesome.
I get it...

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Re: Childrens' stories [Horror] Tomochin's birthday 13/11~WMatsui | Mayuki<3
« Reply #15 on: November 17, 2013, 05:14:51 PM »
hahahahahahahahahahaha with out your friends hehehe

thats so fuck$%&ng scary haha imagine she said that with a creepy smile...

so good

thanks!!

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Re: Childrens' stories [Horror] Tomochin's birthday 13/11~WMatsui | Mayuki<3
« Reply #16 on: November 19, 2013, 02:57:34 AM »
Hey I read your stories and I really like it, so I told my friend to read it and she likes it, too. Your stories are all simple but effective in delivering the point :D
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Re: Childrens' stories [Horror] Tomochin's birthday 13/11~WMatsui | Mayuki<3
« Reply #17 on: November 19, 2013, 03:03:18 AM »
That was a good story :nervous
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Re: Childrens' stories [Horror] Tomochin's birthday 13/11~WMatsui | Mayuki<3
« Reply #18 on: November 20, 2013, 10:34:30 PM »
:mon suspect:
Thank your friends for a meal Tomochin. :sweatdrop:

interesting story, except i need a minute to understand where are the "meal" from XD
hehe sorry for my minus...
i think it's enough see ya at your next update
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Re: Childrens' stories [Horror] Tomochin's birthday 13/11~WMatsui | Mayuki<3
« Reply #19 on: November 22, 2013, 04:55:21 PM »
@Zita: Would you like to join her for dinner too:)

Yes but I don't want to help with cooking..................Well I just want to eat a cake.
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