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Good evening guys, Its been a while since I last posted, and I would like to apologize for posting another thread, since I never once actually completed a chapter story, however this would be rather short, around 5 chapters, I would try to complete it as soon as possible.

Children story and Zorxie-chan storytelling hasn't been abandoned, I have far too much ideas to passed it away.

Bloodshed would also be starting, sorry again for the delay.

But here is another Zorxie-chan chapter story: Homeless (I hate using the word homeless, it's rather rude, but that's the only name I could think of)

Any mistakes please, message me, I would give you guys a kiss in return if you want:P

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Homeless: Prologue


Living in Gliendale, wasn't particularly special, I have lots of friends from school, but none really made me felt a connection, Neither my best friend nor my peers, they were all great, but I wasn't myself around them.

My attitude and persona is completely different when I am around their diameter, maybe its the standard to uphold.

However I do feel a connection towards a homeless person, she would always be sitting near the mall, a paper-bag over her head, holes for eyes, and huge baggy clothing, probably to disguise from unnecessary attention.

I would frequently passed by her and waved a greeting, she would do the same, but no words were ever exchanged, due to my shyness.

But I knew she was rather glad, whenever we crossed path, as her bag would move in a weird motion.
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Our relationship changes after a normal day at school ended, I purposely went over to her area, for the first time, finally having enough guts to actually have a conversation.

Skipping along and praising my nervous heart, I finally caught sight of her blurred figure in the distant, a group of people were there as well.

Finding it odd, I rushed over, sensing trouble. She was savagely harassed by a gang of youngsters, shouting and kicking her, blaming her for dirtying the land.

I screamed at them, and took hold off a metal piping resting on the ground, chasing away those hooligans, they ran away like the little cowards they are.

Those bastards and bitches [Pardon my french]

She sat there, as if nothing had happened, looking at me, with her visible, black marble eyes.

"Thank you" her voice was gentle and smoothing, like a imaginary princess would have sounded.

"No worries" I squatted beside, bubbling rage erupts as I inspected her bruised exterior "Are you fine?"

"I'm fine, you don't have to worry"

Anxiety enters my mind, as I feared for her safety, but a bright idea struck away the negativity "Would you like to carry out a request?" I smiled

"What's it? May I ask?"

"Just answer with a yes or a no" I gently spoke, my pounding heart eager to release the news.

"Okay, I hope"

"I seem to have a spare room in my house, and I would love if you would be sheltered from abuse"

"Ermm... but that would be a burden, I must ungratefully decline"

"But I insist"

"...If you insist, I guess" She sequel excitedly like a young girl,

"Let's go" I helped packed her belongings along with her, and held her hand firmly, but she unintentionally brushed it away and stared with apologetic eyes.

"Sorry" She bowed, her hands placed over her chest "I'm really filthy and smelling, I haven't showered for months, I wouldn't want you to stink"

I chuckled accidentally at her cute worries, and wiped away my tears "Here" I grabbed tightly against her will "Let's go"

A bright sparkle ignited from her eyes, as she followed me back.

-Thanks and comment are appreciated-
« Last Edit: January 14, 2014, 10:47:43 AM by ZorxCemoon »
Once upon a time, There lived two beautiful girls.
One named Watanabe Mayu.
Another named Kashiwagi Yuki.
They fell in love with each other and married.
The end.

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Mayuyu :heart: Yukirin


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Re: Homeless: Chapter one [Couple to be revealed in the next chapter]
« Reply #2 on: October 31, 2013, 01:10:46 PM »
That was really awesome

Hoping for AtsuMina

Tnx for the story ^^

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Re: Homeless: Chapter one [Couple to be revealed in the next chapter]
« Reply #3 on: October 31, 2013, 02:05:00 PM »
its sad  :cry:

and i hope its atsumina too  :fainted: :fainted:

Edit : btw, just follow what your heart said  :smoke:
« Last Edit: October 31, 2013, 05:28:56 PM by blakwhite »

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Re: Homeless: Chapter one [Couple to be revealed in the next chapter]
« Reply #4 on: October 31, 2013, 05:27:08 PM »
I have a feeling it's KojiYuu but dunno. Interesting start. :D
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Re: Homeless: Chapter one [Couple to be revealed in the next chapter]
« Reply #5 on: October 31, 2013, 08:42:37 PM »
Are you talking about Glendale, Arizona?

Just clarifying....
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Re: Homeless: Chapter one [Couple to be revealed in the next chapter]
« Reply #6 on: November 01, 2013, 11:26:35 AM »
I'll go with the public and say that it's hopefully nothing too mainstream.

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Re: Homeless: Chapter one [Couple to be revealed in the next chapter]
« Reply #7 on: November 01, 2013, 10:07:30 PM »
An interesting beginning

I wonder which couple are they

Wmatsui, or Mayuki or Atsumina  :?

I'm so eager to know who are they

Please up date  :bow:

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I'm hoping its AtsuMina  :heart: *finger crossed*
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That poll of yours...

I hope I choose Mayuki. :prayers:

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one piece is atsumina right?
doraemon???
pokemon is mayuki (not quite sure)
strawberry panic is wmatsui (not sure too)
avatar is saeyuki?? LOL i'm not sure all but as for atsumina i'm pretty sure is one piece
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I would really be mad if I picked Strawberry Panic as my favorite anime, but my favorite couple, AtsuMina, won't be it X3
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i though mayuki is doraemon since doraemon is a cyborg and nobita is kind of yuki
and pokemon is kojiyuu???
and yeah one piece is atsumina YEAH

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i though mayuki is doraemon since doraemon is a cyborg and nobita is kind of yuki

Somehow that makes sense. :stunned:

I voted for pokemon without any reason! :on shady:


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i though mayuki is doraemon since doraemon is a cyborg and nobita is kind of yuki

Somehow that makes sense. :stunned:

I voted for pokemon without any reason! :on shady:

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DAMN IT then, I knew I should have picked one piece, GAH! why did I pick my favorite anime for? *shakes head*
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one piece is takamina favorite anime and manga if i'm not wrong,so choose one piece as atsumina is quite right

doraemon~ gek geki san analized make sense so maybe is mayuki

and strawberry panic is wmatsui,maybe the vibe of yuri from their katafai make sense too

pokemon?? kojiyuu since pikachu always so clingy toward his master so maybe it them

avatar? it's confusing me a lot ang ...ang ang i don't know



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ah cotto!! i knew it now!!

avatar is michan! ang! yeah


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im still intrest you know :3, im just waiting for update LOL XD

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