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Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina fanfic] - COMPLETED
« on: April 28, 2012, 10:38:47 PM »
Hi. I'm new here. I've been reading the fanfics here. And now I decided to post my story. This is my first story. It could be boring and sorry for that. Well here it is, hope you like it. And sorry for my bad english. :D

Why can’t you love me back?
                                                               Chapter  One
We’ve been together for 6 years.  We’ve become very close throughout the years. You are the Leader and I’m the Ace. We always hug and joke around. You are so funny and kind hearted. You are the perfect “boyfriend”. You are so beautiful and you have e perfect small and thin body. Every time I hug you I can feel the warmth of your body and every time I do it, I don’t want to let you go. Everyone in the group teases you for your boyish style and that inside you are a boy. And in front of them I act like I agree with them, but inside I think you are a very attractive young lady. “I want you all for myself”. Both of us live alone and sometimes you come to sleepover at my apartment or I come to sleepover at yours. At my apartment you have your own pajamas and clothes. You come and I cook for you. You eat my dishes with pleasure and every time with a smile on your face you say: “It’s delicious. Thank you Atsuko.” When you call me, “Atsuko” I feel like my heart skips a beat. And every time you are around me I want to kiss you so much. But I’m so scared that you will reject me. I love you. Minami can you love me back? Do you love me?
Today we have a recording for AKBINGO! We will be playing dogball. And we’re on the same team. I am so happy I could be so close to you. The first Mechaburi is “Getemono Ryori”. Right after the game starts you have been hit by the gorilla… Oh I’m sorry by Akimoto Sayaka. She is such a monster. Hehe. I’m so disappointed I wanted to play with you more. The you sit to eat and you are so scared. I’m so worried about you. After you ate it you looked so pale. I got close to you and asked:
“Minami, are you ok?” I said with a worried face.
“Yeah don’t worry, Acchan”?  you said with a smile.
My heart skips a beat again and I look at the ground.
“Acchan, are you ok? Minami asked me with a worried face. “Yeah, I’m ok. Don’t worry about me.”
After we were done recording for the day I went to change in the dressing room with everyone else. But I was so tired for the whole day that I couldn’t stay on my feet. Then I sat on the chair next to me and laid my head on the table right next in front of me. Then you came and asked me with a worried face and half – shouted: “Atsuko, Atsuko, Atsuko, are you ok? Atsuko? I lift my head and I look at you. You look like you are about to cry. I was so shocked and I couldn’t answer you. I was so happy that you were so worried about me. Then I saw a tear coming from your eye. You came closer and kissed my forehead and said: “You don’t have temperature, so you not sick. But you look so pale. Are you tired? After the kiss I was even more shocked, but then I came back to reality and got the courage to answer.
“M – M – Minami. Don’t worry I am ok.” I answered you while blushing.
“I’m so glad you are ok. You really scared me you know? She said while smiling and holding my hand.
 “I – I’m sorry, Minami” I said and look right down at the ground. “Don’t be so nice, Minami
“Ok, let’s go to your apartment. I’ll stay over tonight” she said smiling.
“You don’t need to. I’m fine”.
“I know I don’t need to, Atsuko. But I want to.” She said still holding my hand tight.
Please stop
We took a taxi to my apartment. And Minami is still holding my hand.” Please, Minami. Let go of my hand.” We reached my front door and she let my hand go so I could take out my keys. We got in and Minami sat on the couch. She looks tired..
“Do you want something to eat? Are you hungry? “
“Yeah, I’m starving. Make me something delicious.”
“What do you want me to make for you.”
“Everything you make is delicious, so everything is fine, Atsuko.”
A smile formed on my face. She is really kind. I’m so in love with this girl. I want to tell her, but I’m so scared she will reject me. I love you, Minami. I want to be with you until the end of my life.
“Okay, then I’ll will make you favorite.”
“Okay. In the mean time I will go take a shower”. “Okay, well you know where your clothes are.”
“Un”. She is so shy. I thought to myself and my face got really red. I would really love to go in with her. I am such a perverted. Hehe.
“Minami, the dinner is ready.” I said while my face is bright red.
“Okay, coming.”
 She then walks down the stairs with her pink pajamas and her wet hair. She looks so beautiful, especially with her hair down. She should be with her hair down more often.
“Mmm smells good”
“Here you go, your favorite Katsudon”
“Omg, I love you so much, Acchan.” She says and kissing me on the cheek.
I look away so she couldn’t see my red cheeks.  My heart hurts when I hear those words, because she doesn’t feel the same love I feel for her. Don’t say that, Minami. You don’t know how much it hurts.
“How is it, Minami”
“Ah, oshii, Atsuko. You are a great cooker. You will be a great girlfriend”
“Don’t lie. I’m not that great of a cooker”
“No. It’s true. Whoever you date, will be a lucky guy.”
Right after I heard those words a tears falls from my eye. I try to hide it because I will only make her worry and I really don’t want her to worry about me.
“Atsuko. Are you ok?”
“Yes, Minami.  I’m ok, eat your food.”
 “No, you are not okay, you are crying. Did I do something wrong?” she said while whipping my tears from my cheek.
“No, no. You didn’t I just can’t hold it anymore.”
“What’s wrong. You know you can tell me everything. We are best friends, remember?”
No don’t say that. I don’t want to be your friend, Minami. I want to be more than you friend. I want to be you lover. I started to cry. I just couldn’t keep it in me anymore. I want to tell her how I feel. I want to tell her I want to be more than her friend. I know she will probably reject me. But keeping this feeling  in me hurts more..
“Minami. I’ve been keeping a secret from you.”
“What is it, Atsuko.”
“I’m such a coward. And you might hate me for what I’m about to say.”
“Atsuko, you are not a coward and I will not hate you. I couldn’t hate you. You know that”
“We’ve been together for 6 years now. And I’ve always……” I started to cry even more. I couldn’t speak I was so nervous and scared.
“Calm down, Atsuko. You don’t have to tell me if you don’t want to.”
“No I have to. It’s tearing me apart. I have to tell you what I feel”
“I don’t understand. What are you talking about?”
“Minami, I have always loved you. Since the day I saw you at the audition. I love you. I love you more than a friend. I want to be your lover. I want to with you forever.” tears rolling down my eyes.
“Eh, Atsuko. Are you serious? Don’t joke around with stuff like this.”
“No. I’m not kidding. I love you, Minami. Please believe me.”
She looks so shocked. She looks down and looks like she is going to say something. My heat is beating so fast. I feel like I’m going to die if she rejects me.
“Atsuko……” she said with a sad face . Now I really regret telling her, she is going to hate me.
“Atsuko, I’m sorry. I can’t accept your feelings. I love you too, but only as a friend and nothing more."
“Why, Minami? Why can’t you love my back?
Something snapped in me. I just couldn’t accept her rejection. I love her so much and I want her. I want her mine…
“I’m sorry, Atsuko. I’m really sorry.”
“Minami..”
I start to move closer to her. “I love you, Minami”. Then I move close and closer and now our lips are only inch away. “No, Atsuko. Don’t”. She steps back, but I wrap my arms around her waist. She couldn’t move anymore. “Atsuko..Don..” She couldn’t finish her sentence because I sealed her lips. I kiss her. I can feel her warm, soft lips. But she doesn’t respond my kiss. Then turn my head to the right so I could kiss her easier. I play with her lips. I suck her upper lip then I slowly open my mouth and I try to put my tongue in her mouth. But she still doesn’t respond the kiss. She closes her mouth so I couldn’t put my tongue in her mouth. Then I break the kiss and look in her eyes but she looks away. I turned her face to face me. And then I forced her to open her mouth so I could kiss her passionately. I don’t want to do this. I know she will hate me but I want her to become mine. I push her down and now I’m lying on top of her. I kiss her again and break it and look in her eyes  again. She is crying. “Please, Atsuko. Stop. I don’t love you” I couldn’t bare it. It hurts like hell. “I’m sorry, Minami. I can’t stop. I love you and I want you mine. I said as I star to kiss her again. She still doesn’t respond the kiss. She tries to escape but I push her really hard to the ground. I kiss her chin and then move down to her neck. I lick it, kiss it. “Stop, Atsuko. Please..”  I hold both of her hands so she couldn’t escape. With my other free hand I start to unbutton her top. I touch her stomach and move my hand up and squeeze her breast. Although they are small I could feel their warmth. It’s so nice. “I love you.” I say as I star to undo her pink bra. ”Atsuko. Please stop. I don’t love you. There is someone else I love.” I stopped all of my movements and looked her in the eyes. She looks so sad and scared. I started to understand what big mistake I have made. “ I’m really sorry, Minami. Please forgive me.” I’m such an idiot. I’ve hurt her so much. What did I do?
“Please, Minami. Don’t hate me.”
“I told you I could not possibly hate you. But I won’t ever forgive you.
“Minami. Don’t say that. You don’t mean it, right?”
“I do mean it. I don’t want to see you again.”
She got up and changed her clothes. She put on her shoes and left. And I’m just sitting on the floor and crying. She loves someone else…..
“Minami. I’m sorry.”   


TBC
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Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina]
« Reply #1 on: April 28, 2012, 11:18:00 PM »
Nooooo!!!! My atsumina :cry:
This is good, you shouldn't stop its really interesting :twothumbs
But the big questions are, who is the person that minami loves? What will become of atsuko and minami?
The story's piqued me interest, please continue, and i can't wait for your next update :cow:
« Last Edit: April 29, 2012, 12:09:46 AM by ilovecandiedapples »

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« Reply #2 on: April 29, 2012, 12:27:09 AM »
What happened to my Atsumina??  :mon scare:  Taka!!! How can you be in love with someone else!!! :angry:

and Acchan.. why did you stopped?  :mon mischief: You should just make Taka as yours instead of regretting later on..  :mon evillaff:
« Last Edit: April 29, 2012, 07:36:14 AM by Flean »

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Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina]
« Reply #3 on: April 29, 2012, 03:30:16 AM »
Bakamina, Can't you just stop bein' Dense? :yawn:
I don't even know The Reason why Takamina Love someone else when she just care about Acchan... :smhid
I knew it... This is gonna be a Love Polygons Between AtsukoxMinamix...Tomochin? :bleed eyes:
But, You will end it with AtsuMina, anyway... Because, The Title Explains Everything... :P

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Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina]
« Reply #4 on: April 29, 2012, 03:44:13 AM »
Hueeeeeeeee...
What's happen to my AtsuMina ?   :cry: :cry: :cry:
Minami~  Acchan loved you !!  :cry:


it's so interesting !! waiting for next chapter...   :bow: :bow: :bow:

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Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina]
« Reply #5 on: April 29, 2012, 06:46:31 AM »
*jawdropped*
one sided atsumina? it'll be interesting..

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu,,,, update please!! :D
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« Reply #6 on: April 29, 2012, 07:49:41 AM »
OMG!! Sexaddichan ATTACK!!.. come takaboy we know you love this girl...

Minama dont say that SHE IS IN LOVE.. just she says that doesnt love atsuko.. but i have hopes of course..

interesting fics... please keep going..

and make takabaka be jealousy for make our atsuko suffer ..
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Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina]
« Reply #7 on: April 29, 2012, 02:38:40 PM »
                                                       Why Can’t You Love Me Back?
                                                                    CHAPTER TWO
I couldn’t sleep well last night. All I could think about was you and what I did to you. I cried all night. Today we have a recording for “Puccho”. We have to pass a gum mouth to mouth. I hope I can do it with you. But you probably don’t want to do it with me. I got to the recording studio and went to the dressing room to change and do my make - up. When I got there you had already changed and now you were doing your make – up. I slowly walked to you and stopped behind. I wanted to talk to you and apologize for last night. You realized I was standing behind you and turned back to face me. Then our eyes met and you quickly looked away.
“Minami, can I talk to you?”
You quickly got up and walked away from me. “Minami. Please.” Then you stopped and looked me and with a cold voice said: “No. I don’t want to see you or talk to you.”. “Minami.”
Then we met with the director and the staff and they explained us what we are going to do and with who. I was really disappointed to find out I was not your partner. It was Tomochin. But you looked happy. We started recording and first was your turn. I watched carefully. Here it is. Tomochin passes the gum to your mouth and your lips touched. I felt so jealous. But for some reason you felt so embarrassed and happy. Your face was all red. The moment Tomochin saw how shy you were she smirked. Why is she smirking. She likes when you are all shy.
“Acchan, what’s wrong.” Suddenly a familiar voice approached me.
“Ah, Micchan. I’m fine.” I force a smile on my face.
“Come on, Acchan. It’s me. I know you. Tell me what is going and why are your eyes so red and swollen.
I burst in tears. “I did something horrible to Minami. She hates me.”
“Wait. What did you do. And Takamina would never hate you.”
“Last night I confessed to her and she rejected me…”
“Wait, you did WHAT?”
“And I just couldn’t accept her rejection and I did something I can’t forgive myself for.”
“I knew you two were close, but I didn’t know you loved her.”
“After that I snapped and kissed her forcefully. She didn’t respond it but I didn’t stop.”
“Oh my God. What did you do, Acchan.” Said Micchan with a shoked face.
“I know. I’m so sorry.”
“But she rejcted you. I didn’t knew about you but I was sure she liked you. But she is just so dense, so I thought she just didn’t realize her feelings for you.”
“I thought she liked me too, Micchan..”
“I know, I know. Calm down everything  will be okay. Just go and talk to her.”
“I tried she said she won’t ever forgive me and that she doesn’t want to see me.”
“She really said that. I can’t believe that Takamina could say something like that.”
“No.  It’s my fault.”
“It’s ok. Just go and try to talk to her again.”
“But she doesn’t want to.”
“Then make her.”
“Un, I’ll try.”
“Yoshii. Let’s record that CM.”
After the recording was over I went to find you. But you were nowhere to be found. Then I saw Sayaka in the dressing room.
“Sayaka, have you seen Takamina?”
“Ah, Takamina went home.”
“Alone at this time?”
“No. She went with Tomochin.”
“Oh… Okay, thanks Sayaka.”
I took my phone from my bag and called you. But no answer . I try again and again but still no answer. “Minami.”. Then I decided to email you.
Minami. Where are you I want to talk to you
Right after that I took a cab and went to her apartment. I rang the doorbell but no answer. Then I remembered that I had a key in case something happened. I took out the key and slowly opened the door. I searched for you on the living room but you weren’t there so I went to your bedroom. The door was lightly open and I heard your voice from outside the room. The light was on and you weren’t alone. Are you with her, Minami. I slowly picked and saw you on the bed with her. You had a serious  look on your face while she was smirking.
“Are you serious, Takamina?” she said while laughing.
“I’m serious, Tomochin.”
She slowly moved closer to you. And then..
“Okay, then say it again, Takamina.” She is still moving closer.
Minami is so nervous. But she got the courage to speak.
“Tomochin…” A short pause.
“Yes, Takamina?” Now their faces are only inches away.
“I love you. Please be my girlfriend…”
“I’m so happy, Minami.”
And finally they are kissing. I’m standing and just watching. I can’t believe, Minami is kissing her with so much passion. A tear rolls down my chick. Then, Tomochin pushes, Minami down on the bed and now she is on top of her. Minami wraps her arm around, Tomochin’s waist. Tomochin continue to kiss her as she moves her hands up and she touches, Minami’s breast. Minami let’s out a little moan as, Tomochin squeeze her little warm breast the I could still feel with my arm. She then moves down and kiss her neck. She starts to bite it and mark it. After that she start to lick it as Minami let’s out a little moan again. Tomochin smirkes again and moves to give Minami a short kiss on the lips and then kisses her nose, then her chin, then her eyes. Minami moves her arm around Tomochin’s neck…
“I love you, Tomomi…”
“I love you too, Minami. I’ve always loved you.”
Then she kisses her lips again but this time with passion. I could see their tongues battling inside Minami’s mouth. Tomochin moves her hand up and starts to undutton the cute pink shirt of Minami. She unbuttons the first, then the second, then the third as Minami’s cute bra covering her small, cute breast is exposed. I bursted  in tears. I couldn’t take it anymore. I tried to run away but tripped and fell on the floor right in the room. They were shocked I was there.
“Acchan..” said Tomochin with a worried and meanwhile shocked face.
“I’m sorry for the interrupting..” I ran away. I wanted to get out of there as soon as possible.
“Acchan, wait…”
“Don’t, Tomomi..”
“But…”
“No. All I want now is YOU. I love YOU”
“Are you sure you don’t need to chase her, Minami. Are you sure you don’t love HER?”
Minami smiles and answers..
“I’m sure. I don’t love HER!”

TBC 


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Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER TWO
« Reply #8 on: April 29, 2012, 02:51:52 PM »
Okay, Just because of this Fics, I'm starting to Hate TakaTomo... :P
What did you do to Acchan, eh? :bleed eyes: I already knew it... Love Polygons is just not right... :smhid Takamina, I'm sure you'll Love Acchan, someday... :yep:
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« Reply #9 on: April 29, 2012, 02:59:26 PM »
What!! Why must you make Acchan saw all those things!!!  :banghead: OMG!!! My heart so hurt for Acchan!!  :bleed eyes:

Taka!!! How dare you do this to Acchan!!!  :angry: I'm so furious right now!!! argh!!!  :banghead:

I need to cool myself down with some AtsuMinaness!!!  :panic:  I need to update to calm myself down!!!  :catglare:

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Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER TWO
« Reply #10 on: April 29, 2012, 04:52:58 PM »
TakaTomo is hawt! LOL
poor Acchan..

but...

I'm kinda confused why Tomochin care for Acchan?
“Acchan..” said Tomochin with a worried and meanwhile shocked face.

i mean.. Takamina loves Tomochin. Tomochin loves Takamina.
Yet in the middle of their hot moments, Acchan interupted them.
but Tomochin asked Takamina if she loves Acchan?
“Are you sure you don’t need to chase her, Minami. Are you sure you don’t love HER?”

is Tomochin loves Acchan? LOL

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Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER TWO
« Reply #11 on: April 29, 2012, 08:19:20 PM »
TakaTomo is hawt! LOL
poor Acchan..

but...

I'm kinda confused why Tomochin care for Acchan?
“Acchan..” said Tomochin with a worried and meanwhile shocked face.

i mean.. Takamina loves Tomochin. Tomochin loves Takamina.
Yet in the middle of their hot moments, Acchan interupted them.
but Tomochin asked Takamina if she loves Acchan?
“Are you sure you don’t need to chase her, Minami. Are you sure you don’t love HER?”

is Tomochin loves Acchan? LOL

and thx for the update~!

Wow could be?... I dont think about it but with your comment could be and now all have a explanation.. if Tomochin are in love for acchan.. and know that acchan love takamina but takamina lover her.. so she can take revenge for acchan with takamina.. or god.. could be...

We know you love acchan minami but you are so confused.. maybe you need to make takamina jelousy with a big rival..
she need to figured that she is in love for acchan..

Sorry for all takatomo fans.. but I ship atsumina so much.. gomen ne
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Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER TWO
« Reply #13 on: April 30, 2012, 01:53:30 AM »
Oooh this is getting really interesting now.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
But poor Acchan that she had to see that.
I'll say "I love you" to the person I love
Even if these feelings aren't returned, saying "I love you" to the person you love
That is the most beautiful thing in the world

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« Reply #14 on: April 30, 2012, 02:47:25 AM »
Oh, God. You will hate me for the next chapter. Which by the way I wll update tommorow. :)

Nani!!!  :mon wtf:  NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! :mon scare:   omg!!! I need to ran away from all these miseries!!!  :mon runcry:

my atsumina!!!  :mon ref:  please don't torture us!!!  :mon cry:

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Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER THREE
« Reply #15 on: April 30, 2012, 04:35:28 PM »
                                                                           CHAPTER THREE
I still couldn’t forget what happened last night. The picture of Minami and Tomochin doing it was still fresh in my memory. It’s already morning and I still haven’t fallen asleep. Then suddenly my alarm rang. I have to get up and go to the theater. Today we have a practice. I don’t what do go. They will be there. I don’t want to see them. I got up from the bed took a shower and changed. I looked in the mirror and I saw myself. I look like a ghost because I haven’t slept. I will make Miichan worry again. It’s already 10 o’clock. I have to hurry or I will be late. Now I am in front of the dressing room and I can hear Minami’s voice. She sounds happy. Of course she is with the person she loves. The moment I opened the door and went into the room Miichan saw me. She then ran to me worried.
“Acchan, are you ok?”
“Yeah. I’m fine. Don’t worry.”
“No. You are not fine. I can see it.
“I told you. I’m fine.”
“Come on. You honestly think you can lie to me?”
“I’m sorry but really I’m fine.”
“Your eyes are red. You haven’t slept right? What happened?”
I started crying. When she asked me I remembered last night. I couldn’t help but cry. The person I love is in love with someone else. I lost my best friend.
“I saw them, Miichan…”
 “Saw who?”
“Minami and her…”
“Who? I don’t understand.”
“Minami and Tomochin..”
“What were they doing. Tell me what exactly happened.”
“Minami confessed to Tomochin..”
“WHAT?”
“She love her, Micchan.”
“Did Tomochin reject her?
“No. She loves her too.”
“I can’t believe it. Tomochin is in love with Takamina. And then what happened?”
“They started doing it. I watched. I just couldn’t move. I was too shoked.”
“Oh my God. You saw all of that. I’m sorry, Acchan..”
Then Miichan hugs me tightly. I can feel her warm body. I hug her back and continue to cry. I hide my face so they couldn’t  see me. When we were done changing, Minami gathered us..
“Everyone. I want to tell you something important.”
Then Tomochin moves to stand next to her.
“Are they going to…” said Miichan with a shocked face.
“I’m sure you will be shocked from what I’m about to say.” Everyone seems surprised.
“Me, Takahashi Minami and Itano Tomomi are dating.”
Everyone is thrown in shock. All start to whisper. I’m even more shocked then them. I can’t believe what I’m seeing and hearing.
“So, yoroshiku onegaishimasu.”  Said Tomochin as they both bow.
“Now, let’s start practice.” Said Minami with a very happy voice.
I didn’t want to practice at all. I didn’t want to see them.  But then suddenly SHE runs to Minami and slaps her. Everyone stopped all of their movements and looked at them. When I turned around and saw the person who was slapping Minami. I couldn’t believe my eyes. Like me she is also Minami’s best friend. Then she started crying and was barely speaking, but  she found the courage to do so. Everyone trembles in anticipation of what she is about to say.
“Takamina...” She said with a trembling voice.
“What are you doing?” Minami was very angry with her.
“Minami, calm down.” Tomochin tries to calm her down.
“How can I calm down. She just slapped me. Tell me why did you do it. Did I do something wrong?”
“Why her, Takamina. WHY? She shouted and then ran away.
“Haruna, wait.” A curtain person then tried to stop her.
“Don’t , Yuko. Just let me go.”
“Let me come with you.”
“No, Yuko. I don’t need you. I need HER.”
Well now everything is messed up because of those two. They should’ve kept their relationship to them self. Haruna never came back to rehearsal with us. And Minami didn’t even try to chase her. You’ve changed Minami. What happened to you. What happened to the person I loved and still love.
“Acchan, let’s go somewhere.”
“Miichan.. Where are we going.”
“To the rooftop.”
“Eh. Why are we going there?”
“I want to talk to you.”
“About what?”
“You will see..”
Right now I really needed a good friend and place to go without them. But when I looked at the clear blue sky I couldn’t help but to cry. It reminded me of Minami. I love her so much. But why can’t she love me back. Why, Minami. What happened to you.
“Acchan..”
“What is it, Miichan?”
She then moves her right hand up and wipes my tears. She has so sad eyes and looks like she is about to cry. But I don’t understand why. Then she moves closer and kisses me. It was a short kiss full with emotions. Then she looks straight in my eyes and said something I didn’t expect.
“Can’t it be me, Acchan. Can’t I be the person you love.”
“Eh, what are you saying, Miichan?”
She looks so serious. But I don’t get it. But the next thing that she said..
“I love you, Acchan. Why can’t you love me back?”
“But, Miichan. I love…..”
“I know but can you try to love me. Can you try to forget her. I can’t watch you crying over her. My heart hurt, Acchan.” Then she kisses me on the lips again. For some reason I respond. Somehow I didn’t want to lose her too. But at the same time I imagine it’s Minami.
“I’m sorry, Miichan. I…”
“At least try. Please.”
“But all I will do is hurt you.”
“I know. I’m prepared for that. But my love for you is stronger than my fear. I’m ready.”

TBC

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Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER THREE
« Reply #16 on: April 30, 2012, 05:00:59 PM »
wow, so complicated huh? haha

so haruna loves takamina too?

aaah.. takatomo is not bad but I would like to see atsumina lovely-dovey  :(

hope you update soon! wonder what will happen next~  :deco:


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Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER THREE
« Reply #17 on: April 30, 2012, 05:03:23 PM »
OMG what did you do? Takamina its a idiot for that its the first tima that i hate her so much

But if its not enough you meanie destroy my favorite otp ...  My kojiyuu noooooo! Why... You can destroy any other couple but mu kojiyuu aww god

And last but nit lest miichan and her suddenly confession but in this case i dont blame if the Person that i love is so heat broken im gonna do something for make her feel better

Aww acchan your so confused

Minami you are an idiot need to fix all this mess right now

Ok now im mOre calm so i can say this... Amazing chapter and amazing fic just please please fix it
 
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Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER THREE
« Reply #18 on: April 30, 2012, 05:09:32 PM »
Just what happened here..  :angry: I can't continue this..  :smhid  just not good for me and my psychological health..  :banghead: 

I shall do something for my AtsuMina!!  :twisted: justice will prevail!! LOL  :lol:

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Re: Why can't you love me back? [AtsuMina] UPDATED! CHAPTER THREE
« Reply #19 on: April 30, 2012, 05:58:29 PM »
Woah, It's just getting Complicated... :yawn:
A rival has appeared... again... Now, Haruna love Takamina too? :shocked Takamina sure is lucky... being loved by many pretty girls... XD
I know she had to choose over them... and Takamina already decided to go with Tomochin... and left the others... :catglare:
Poor Acchan... Crying all night without even slept... If I'm Acchan, I'll definitely gave up in Love Thingy... Because, It just so hurts... When we confessed, And got rejected... That's just sooo... Embarassing! :bleed eyes:
Hm, You add some rivals again... :O2 i don't know if you will add some later, But please Just let it be AtsuMina... I really want to read AtsuMina's Fanfics right now...
Taka is just for Atsuko... No one else... AtsuMina is just so... Perfect! like Kojiyuu too.
I'm kinda happy there's Yuko... I'm sure KojiYuu would happen sooner or later... :thumbup
No, no, no... No AtsuMii... Things just gettin' out of control (in your fic)... :panic: You add a unofficial pairing... LOL. Ugh, I'm just getting sick...
I'm sure Acchan won't Accepted Miichan's confession... or maybe she will?
Maybe, Acchan doen't accepted Miichan's confession but just tried to love her? LOL. And then, Takamina will get jealous? Nah... It won't happen... :peace: That's just my instinct...
Hey, I'm not complaining, okay... just some emotion impingement... :P 
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