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I've only recently found out about H!P but I decided to write fanfics since H!P are so amazing. :nya:
Anyways, I put KonaKaga's Greenroom since I lack the mind at the moment to think up anything interesting; hopefully something will come to mind (ideas are welcome). I'll just be posting one-shots and maybe shorts here but anything long will be posted seperately. :)
Well, here's a piece I wrote a couple of months ago (before I knew about H!P) and I found it today and thought that it sounded like TakaGaki, maybe even KameShige.
Comments are always welcomed! Enjoy!
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Colour
She brought colour to my life. She helped me, one who was blind to the beautiful colours of the world. Memories, feelings and emotions; I can feel it all now.
She saw past my exterior and opened up my heart which I had closed. I had shut it off so long ago, but she was patient, slowly healing me. I began to feel again, something I thought could never happen. I was hesitant showing emotions, but she knew what I was feeling, always by my side, holding my hand.
Whenever she smiled at me or simply said my name, I could feel the latch around my heart loosen, steady loosening. Every moment I treasured, never wanting them to disappear.
Everyone thinks that we are a couple, always together, always worried for the other one. In a way it is true, we’re connected heart to heart, mind to mind.
Because of her, I am who I am. She never asked for anything in return, just that I was happy. I do everything I can to make it up for her. She told me that I didn’t need to do anything, just that I was happy. I simply smiled and told her, “I’m doing this because I want to…this is what makes me happy.”
She smiled back, then embraced me.
“I love you.”
“I love you too.”
It was then that my heart was free, free from the past. Because she had given me the one thing no-one else did…love. It was with this simple sentence that tied us together forever. I’m so thankful that she rescued me, for what I feel can not be explained with words. I love everything; the world is now filled with bright colours.
Surely...surely the world isn’t such a dull, gray, cold place, you know?
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Welcome to the life of a H!P fan!
Your fic is really cute!
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Welcome to the life of a H!P fan!
Your fic is really cute!
Thanks!
I'm a fan of yours so it's really great to hear that! :wub:
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:wub: awww that was just a lovely short fic! looks like you got another fan! :lol:
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Thanks!
I'm a fan of yours so it's really great to hear that! :wub:
Aww! You're sweet! Well, I'm now a fan of yours so keep writing! :heart:
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Ooooh <3
How adorable
I've always been a fan of vague, abstract writing xD It's refreshing to see this sort of writing again after so long.
I look forward to your future works :3
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:wub: awww that was just a lovely short fic! looks like you got another fan! :lol:
Thanks :D
Ooooh <3
How adorable
I've always been a fan of vague, abstract writing xD It's refreshing to see this sort of writing again after so long.
I look forward to your future works :3
I'll try and make some more of these types of fics then! :grin:
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It was a really nice and cute fic :wub: It definitely had the TakaGaki vibe XD I was imagining the two of them while reading it :hee:
I'm looking forward to your next stories :D
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It was a really nice and cute fic :wub: It definitely had the TakaGaki vibe XD I was imagining the two of them while reading it :hee:
I'm looking forward to your next stories :D
Domo :heart:
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wow, that was :love:
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weeeee!!! :love:
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just lovely :wriggly:
their feelings are so cute and pure :shy1:
keep writing fanfics!
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This is rather well written! I keep imagining it was TakaGaki when i read it too XD
Lookin forward to more fics from you! :muffin:
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I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!! SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!
was it from Ai's POV? Cause she seems more reserved than Risa so I would guess she was the one talking about her heart slowly yet steadily putting down it's wall and opening up to Risa.
I loved it! Write more! It was really great! First of all, I noticed no errors. Second you created a lot of mystique and didn't give away too much. Third I love the abstract-y-ness of it like Yuuyamy pointed out. And did I mention no spelling mistakes? Lol, this cannot be your first fic! Seriously!
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wow, that was :love:
weeeee!!! :love:
This is rather well written! I keep imagining it was TakaGaki when i read it too XD
Lookin forward to more fics from you! :muffin:
Thanks you guys! :heart:
I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!! SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!
was it from Ai's POV? Cause she seems more reserved than Risa so I would guess she was the one talking about her heart slowly yet steadily putting down it's wall and opening up to Risa.
I loved it! Write more! It was really great! First of all, I noticed no errors. Second you created a lot of mystique and didn't give away too much. Third I love the abstract-y-ness of it like Yuuyamy pointed out. And did I mention no spelling mistakes? Lol, this cannot be your first fic! Seriously!
Well if you were reading it as TakaGaki, then yes it was from Ai's POV. Thanks, I usually have quite a bit of spellign (<--See! I just noticed it now! XD) mistakes. Technically (yes, we're going technical O_o) this isn't my first fic, it's my first H!P fic though. I wonder if that counts or not.... Anways, I'm glad that you enjoyed it SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!
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and I'm glad that you're glad that I enjoyed it! Because I really did enjoy it
THAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT MUCH!!!!!!~ ;) cya around, and I knew you were a veteran! Even though you didn't write HP ones! Cya around though kido, I hope you keep it up!
And I like how you left it up to the imagination. For example, someone might interpret it as them just being good friends. Whereas someone like Pikapikapika would imagine they went home affter this and did it...................a lot! XD I don't blame him though (and that's probably what started it, we've been letting him too loose XD, maybe we should put him on a leash....or at least make him wear clothes when he rolls around in the jphip pature XD jks jks, don't hate me Piks!)
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I like you already :P Both because of this fic (TakaGaki :heart: what more can you ask for?) and cuz you are a KameMame fan. Bean + turtle FTW seriously XD Please write more soon, I'll be looking forward to reading :)
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I like you already :P Both because of this fic (TakaGaki :heart: what more can you ask for?) and cuz you are a KameMame fan. Bean + turtle FTW seriously XD Please write more soon, I'll be looking forward to reading :)
Thanks, and here's the next fic =3
I just kinda came up with this fic when me and my family were driving around and it was sunny (the sun makes me happy :heart:) and I was listening to one of my "thinking" songs and this idea popped up into my head. Anyways, onwards with the story!
Her Final Wish
She was never meant to die, please believe me Gaki-san, it was never part of my plan. My jealously and rage took over me and now, this was the consequence. As you stood over her coffin looking down at her body for the last time in the flesh, the grief on your face was evident. It was almost unbearable to look at. The only person that you ever loved was now gone forever, never to hold you, to laugh with you, to cry with you, or to love you. Every second of my life is now filled with remorse and sadness; I can never forgive myself for what I did to the both of you, ever. Sayumi appeared by my side, our eyes meeting.
“No-one can ever replace her and now she’s gone.”
She walked over to you, pulling you into a hug as she too began to mourn. I felt tears prick at my eyes. Did she think that I didn’t know that? No, she knew perfectly well, she was just trying to confirm it to herself. The distant look in her eyes showed that off.
I stood in the same place, never moving. Many people came and went, each saying their final words to her then respectfully moving out of the way for others. I so desperately wanted to say something to her, but what would I say? Sorry for killing you? I winced. Why did she have to die? Why did she have to be so perfect…for you? I was so jealous that you two were perfect for each other in every single way. I had wished that she had died. I regret for have ever thinking that, for now that she was really gone, nothing will ever be the same again. I cannot bring her back, no matter how hard I wish. I again winced as I heard you whimper out her name. You were one of the people who were hit the hardest by her death. You were one who had shared souls with her and now that she was dead, so was a part of you. Suddenly the words from her will popped into my head; she had left you in my care. I weakly smiled; she was still her same old careless self, even in death. She knew exactly how I felt yet she never once said or did anything against me, even when I was so cruel to her… I felt a lone tear scorch down my cheek. In that one tear all my feelings were packed. I quickly wiped it away; I had to be strong for you, and for her. She always trusted me and I would not let her down.
I slowly began to walk towards you, my legs feeling heavy. With each movement a memory flashed through my head. She really was beautiful. She made both long and short hair look stunning. She made strange outfits look like something from a princess’ wardrobe. I stopped. The room was unusually quiet. Looking around I realised that even former members had come. It seemed like everyone had someone else’s shoulder to cry on. Makoto was clutching onto Yoshizawa’s clothes, tears flowing while Yoshizawa held one arm around her, biting her lip, holding back a torrent of tears. Even some of the first generation had appeared. But Gaki-san, you were the only person who didn’t have a shoulder to lean on anymore, because the one person that you could lean on was no more. I couldn’t let that be anymore. I gently pulled you into a hug and a new bout of tears sprung from your bloodshot eyes. I held you even closer as I felt your body shaking.
“Everyone will miss her; she was one of a kind. I’m sure that she’s going to keep smiling wherever she is, watching over us all,” I said reassuringly into your ear. Somehow it was as if I was reassuring myself because if she was not happy wherever she was then I would never be able to live on.
You looked up into my eyes only for a mere moment, yet it was if I in that small amount of time I had been able to search through your heart because unplanned words just tumbled out of my mouth.
“I won’t ever try again, I promise.”
I wasn’t sure if you heard me but I was sure that she was listening. But it didn’t matter, because what I said was true; I would never try again to make you love me and I would never lose to the monster inside of me. I looked up and past your shoulder to where she lay serenely. I closed my eyes.
“I’m sorry and…goodbye.”
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Was that ok? I hope so, I've re-read this fic like 50 times just to make sure it was good and had no spelling mistakes :sweatdrop: I wonder who you thought was narrating and who died... I was thinking of writing a part 2 and it would be from Gaki-san's POV and you would find out who is who, but I'm not sure, what do you guys think? Do you prefer cliff hangers or an answer to your minds? XD Let me know :D
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OMG Kame killed Ai-chan (whether it be actual murder or just blaming herself)! :o :shocked:
Holy crap, I can't believe you killed my Ai-chan like that, you broke TakaGaki :cry: :( Now I'm looking at your sig thinking "damn you Kame!!! :mad: :angry:" :P
Your writing was very touching, i almost cried! I really really really want a Gaki POV please, thats gotta be challenging for you to write but worth it ;)
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Holy shit!!!! :cry: Kame!!! I will hunt you down! I love you but Ai-chan!!!!! :OMG: :gyaaah: :pleeease:
I think I love you, Konakaga!!! Your writing is really good! And I vote for a gaki POV!!!! Gotta hear as many sides of the story as possible!
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you...you killed Ai chan!? :OMG: *shakes head at Kamei chan* you may be my favourite but you aren't allowed to kill others off!! *stares at the real culprit...Konakaga* You should be glad that you are such an excellent writer so naturally we'll have to forgive you for this one XD
Anyways that was really good...I too shall ask for the gaki pov or maybe even an Ai chan pov...you know..before she actually died...
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ok, my idea, an Ai POV! Now that's gonne be tough! lol, GJ, keep it up, I hope Ai comes back to life oro soemething, maybe she can come back as a ghost to tell Gaki to get over her....::'( still sad though.
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:cry: no......:err: no..... :pleeease: NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Ai-chan!!!!!
why must you write soo beautiful and sad! :cry: Eri....why??? Why must you hurt Risa like that..... :mon hanky:
i was literally on the verge of tears!
but it was very well written. :kneelbow:
@ lollipopgirl ur sig, really brought me to tears after reading that and seeing that pic. :'(
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:stoned: :OMG: :dizzy: Ai-chan has died! No...Why?!...Ai-chan!!! :gyaaah: and why Kame said that she had done that?... :fainted:
Somehow I feel like she is blaming herself and she hasn't really killed Ai-chan by stabbing or something...I hope so cos if not then... :shifty:
And honestly I would like to hear both Ai's and Gaki's POV XD
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@lollipopgirl and shadowolf8 You guys really got to me because I never thought that I could make anyone come close to tears or actually cry with my writing, so big hugs for you guys :wub:
@everyone else (Sorry for the bad classing >.<) All of you seem to be in a slight depression after reading part 1 of the fic :( So to make it up I wrote part 2 :D I hope you'll like it, I don't think that it's as well written as part 1, but it's longer.
Her Final Wish
Gaki’s POV
It wasn’t until you died that I realised just how much I loved you. I had never been able to express my never ending love for you, and now I’ll never be able to. Your smile, your laugh, your scolding…it’s all gone. Yet, I can still hear your sweet voice echoing in my ears. It’s as if there had been a recorder in my head for every time you talked.
“Gaki-san.”
I felt the reservoirs behind my eyes unleashing. I would never hear you say my name again, and I would never be able to reply. As each one of my tears fell to the floor in front of your coffin, I could feel my heart tearing apart. Why did you of all people have to die? You didn’t deserve that! You were still so young… You had always said that you couldn’t wait to get married and settle down, with me. I can never forget the blush you had when you had said that; you were so shy. I remember that one day you had asked me why I had picked you; why I hadn’t picked her. Simply, there was no way I couldn’t fall head over heels for you. Even if you were strange sometimes, that only added to your appeal. Sometimes your innocence was just so sweet that I could feel my teeth rotting, but you could also be so sexy that it was as if one was in heaven. The one thing that I never understood was why you picked me. There were so many other people that you could have been with if you had wanted to, yet you never once doubted your love for me. I never doubted my love for you; I just couldn’t express it as well as I wanted to.
I remember the day you confessed to me; it was the best day in my life. We had finished recording the PV for Aruiteru, and we were all staying in a beach side hotel for the night. We hadn’t really hung out much around that time so I thought that it would be a great chance just for us to chat again, and it seemed like you had been thinking the same. We both went for a stroll on the beach together after dinner. The sun was sitting on the horizon comfortably, radiating out a beautiful orange that filled the clear sky. It was almost as if God had been watching over us, not letting anything get in our way. Your nervousness was evident because you kept fidgeting with your bangs and you avoided eye contact. I thought that maybe you were just being your shy self but my heart was racing; something about the atmosphere was different. We stopped in front of the waves, watching as one disappeared into the next as they washed ashore. I looked up at the mesmerising sky.
“It’s a really beautiful evening isn’t it?” I asked.
You nodded your head, watching a lone cloud, illuminated by the sun, drift by.
“G-Gaki-san,” you said nervously, your voice shaking.
“Yes?”
“I-I’m like the sun and you’re the moon.”
I looked at you, your head still looking up and ahead.
“Why’s that?”
You turned to face me, our eyes meeting and your face flushed.
“Because I’m falling for you,” you said.
I felt my face go tomato red and my heart skip several beats.
“U-U-Uhh…” I stuttered out. The moment I had been waiting for had arrived and I had no idea what to say.
“I love you Gaki-san,” you stated. I could see the shyness in your eyes but at the same time I saw the determination. I took a deep breath and softened my wide eyes. I felt tears beginning to fall from my eyes as I smiled at you.
“I guess I really am the moon then, because the moon always falls for the sun in turn,” I said. You looked at me in disbelief for a couple of moments before leaping into my arms and crying.
“I love you too,” I too stated.
I couldn’t help but smile sadly at that memory, because it had been from that day that we had both taken an oath in front of the seemingly never ending sky and ocean, that we would be together forever. I felt the smile on my face vanish. We had taken an oath that we would be together forever, but now you were dead! Gone forever! I whimpered out your name. I’m so sorry, I couldn’t save you. If I had been quicker to understand what you meant that night when you said you loved me more than life before walking out of the door. I didn’t understand! I didn’t understand why you were so loving that night! I thought that you were just feeling really lovey dovey. Suddenly, I felt myself being pulled into a hug; it was her. I felt more tears fall from my eyes as I again recalled our moments together. No matter how much I wished you were there or how much I wanted to hold you in my arms, you would never come back. But what else could I do when wishful thinking was all that I had left?
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I felt my heart cringing as I looked through some of your stuff. Your death still stabbed a fresh wound into my soul. I was surprised to find a diary that you had owned. I guiltily flicked through the pages; I suddenly came across the date that you had died. My eyes shot open as I read; you had addressed that entry to me.
Dear Gaki-san,
If you’re reading this then I am probably dead. I’m so sorry; I’m dead even though we made an oath together underneath that beautiful sunset. Yes, I remember that, it feels as if that it was yesterday. I just about chickened out of telling you how I felt; I thought that you would reject me. Actually, I had been avoiding you at that time because I was so scared that I would blab out my feelings to you. I’d have never thought that I could be so happy. You’ve made life everything it is for me. Everything that you share with me turns a little darkness into light. Just the smile on your face makes me melt inside. You are an angel; something I’ve always wanted to protect. I can’t imagine how life would be if we had never met. I would never be the person I’m proud to be today. I will always love you, please don’t forget that. I know what you’re like, but I will request that you please find someone else to love. I know that you love me, and I love you; all I want is for you to be happy. If you don’t find someone else to go through life with, then you’ll never smile with your heart. I’ll be watching you always; I’ll never leave your side, so please, fulfill my final wish. I’ll never forget you.
P.S – I attached my most precious pictures of us ^_^
P.P.S – I also attached a song I wrote.
I had never realised it, but my tears had stopped, as if they had understood your wish. Looking down on my lap, I found the pictures and song that you had mentioned, which had fallen out. Picking up the photos, I couldn’t help but bite my lip. Gently placing them down to the side, I picked up the song. I took a deep breath before beginning to read the words out loud to myself.
“Every time I close my eyes,
I still see you.
Every time I look at you sleeping,
I can’t help but smile.
It’s like you were sent from above.
Not even I can understand why you love me.
I’m not good enough for you,
Yet, just your reply is enough to make me soar.
I want to be there for you when you cry,
I want to wipe away your tears.
I want to be the one,
Who holds you in the night,
And says “I love you.”
I miss you every second we aren’t together,
Yet, I would wait forever if it meant that we could meet.
I just wish that you understand how much I love you,
Because I know how much you love me,
Even if you are slightly shy about it.
I never realised how hard saying goodbye was,
Until I met you.
For now that I must say it,
I can’t say it directly.
But I know that I must,
Otherwise I will regret it.
I don’t want to say it as if it's forever,
Because I know that one day,
We will be together again,
So I’ll just say it temporarily.
See you soon.”
I tasted blood on my tongue; I had increased the pressure my teeth had been placing on my bottom lip. I couldn’t help but let a few tears fall from my eyes. I couldn’t stand how we couldn’t be together, even when we loved each other so much. I wiped the tears which fell. I again picked up the pictures that you had picked of us. I smiled looking at them. I would continue living on, even if it meant that you weren’t there in the flesh, because I knew that you were in my heart and you wanted me to live life to the full. Carefully, I put the pictures and your song inside your diary, and placed it back inside the box I got it out of. I stood at my desk side, looking at a picture of you that I had framed. I picked it up and gazed at it for several moments before placing it face up in my top drawer. My final tears for you escaped.
“See you soon, Kame.”
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So, who got surprised by the ending? When I was reading all of your comments everyone thought that Eri killed Ai but it was really the opposite way around ;). Oh, sorry if there are any spelling mistakes >.< Now, just to wait and see what people thought (especially now that Ai's alive). Anyways, that's Her Final Wish over, look out for the next story!
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... that was so ... ... beautiful... :cry: you made me cry with that diary thing...
... ... i love you!!!
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:cry: yep i almosted cried again! :) but it was written so beautifully and touching! :heart:
but the ending still shocked and confused me :?
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damn it i knew it was Ai who killed KAMEI!!! :OMG: :OMG: :err: :fainted:
:fainted::fainted::fainted: WHY KAMEIIIII?!!!! :OMG::OMG::OMG:
happy crying to me.. :cry:
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No crying for me this time coz before I read it I saw that it was Kame who died so I was still thinking it was Ai, thus the no tears :P
It was still very beautifully written, but seeing I'm not that big a GakiKame fan and waaay more a TakaGaki gal, all i hope now is Risa runs to Ai regardless :lol:
Kame is so sweet though :heart:
You better keep filling as with great stories, your writing is wonderful and the style of it (first person) is my favourite kind :D
I can't believe the reason I thought it was Ai is because I forgot Eri had short hair for a while :oops: :rofl:
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AWWWW! :cry: That was adorable! But so sad at the same time. I think Kame is (was?) a great girlfriend to want Gaki to be happy. When you really love someone, you should always want them to be happy, especially when you're gone. The diary thing was so sweet. Man, it's probably deeper than anything that I write.
I really love this! You're a great writer and keep it up! :wub:
But it was rather shocking about Ai-chan..... :O
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wah so it was Ai chan who did it! For a split second during the first chapter I thought it was Kamei who died because of the descript of her hair..the long and short...I always think of Eri first when it comes to short hair...but that feeling quickly passed...then I went back to thinking it was Ai chan... I wonder how kamei knew she was going to die....it better not have been suicide cause that's just...ugh...oh well I bettert let these questions slide and wait for your new stories (cause I think I'm in character death denial XD )
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:cry: and the twist (Eri Ai) was :P XD
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Okay, I must be extremely morbid because the biggest thing on MY mind as I read that wasn't whether it was Aichan or Eri (though I have to admit, I fell for it), but rather...after finishing it all...."how"?
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I was taken aback by the ending! Maybe it's because of the first chapter and everyone went TakaGaki.. XD Maybe you can put in a part 3 like how did Eri kill Ai and quarrel over Risa or something..I anticipate more tears :cry:
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.....when her tears stopped.....mine started......and where hers have stopped.....mine still haven't :'(
I love you but I really hate you right now! Why did anyone have to die you big bully? Would you like it if I killed....no one! Because I don't kill after dinner!
But it was beautiful. Beautifully written. No spelling mistakes that I remember. And the end was made kind of obvious when I put the clues together when she was recounting the night they got together. It was the bangs that tipped me off but the spacyness and shyness that fully gave it away. Ai didn't have bangs around that time, and she should have been not shy with Risa. Mainly cause dude it's Ai! Lol jks. I thought hang on, if it's not Ai who could it be? And then the crazy talk totally gave it away.
If you write more (after you survive the yoghurt bombing) can you like not kill anyone please? *puppy face*
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So, Ai-chan is alive! Thank God! :mon fyeah: Ano... I mean...poor Kame :cry:... :mon sweat:
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Am I the only one who didn't realize it was Eri who died until the last line? Damn, I'm really slow. The short hair, innocent and strange features can all apply to Ai too in a way. And in the first part where Sayumi went up to the narrator also made me think it was Eri. I should've known though, you are a KameMame fan :P
What I still don't understand is, how did Eri know she was going to die? And when Risa said "See you soon, Kame" does it mean she's gonna kill herself? Gahhhhhhhhh I need to read more. Please say you will write again. I clicked the topic notification feature so this time I won't miss reading your works.
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@sweety I don't know why, but I only seem to be good at writing angst/drama type of fanfics, that means that it usually involves someone dying or something like that. Whenever I try and write like an "and they lived happily ever after" one it always seem to come out really cheesy. With that said, I tried a happier one, so let's see what you think :)
Just a little note to say:
1. Some of you are wondering about how Eri died in HFW, all I'm going to say is that it wasn't suicide; and Risa won't commit suicide. I'm going to let your minds decide how she died :P
2. I've been having some writers' block lately so it might take a bit longer than usual to get some stories up... unless someone's willing to help out :sweatdrop:
3. My exams are on Wednesday and Thursday so don't expect to have another story posted next week :( Sorry about that, but I'll try and work on one as soon as exams are over. Anyways, the week after next Summer holidays start so I'll have more than enough time to write :D
Sky High
I could feel my heart thundering and my nerves shaking as I arrived outside of your house. I was about to do something that would change both of our lives forever. I placed my trembling finger on the door bell and retracted it after it had done its job. My legs began to feel like jelly, but you saved me by opening the door. I felt all of the fear flow out of me just by seeing you. You looked so…angelic. I felt my face flush as you smiled at me innocently.
“You look stunning,” I complimented.
It was your turn to blush, your face lighting up.
“T-Thanks, you look amazing as well,” you said back.
You stepped aside from the entrance and let me in. I stepped inside and took off my shoes. I felt myself relax even more when I looked around your house; it was like my second home now.
“When did your family leave?” I asked. You had mentioned that I could spend the night since your family had gone to go visit relatives for the weekend; you had decided to stay behind since you had seen your relatives recently.
“About an hour ago.”
An hour ago? The house looked absolutely spotless.
“Did you clean the house?” I asked. You shyly nodded your head.
“It’s amazing, and even more surprising considering how messy you are,” I teased.
“Mou, Gaki-san! I’m not that messy!” you playfully protested, pouting your lips.
“Hai hai, I’m sorry.”
I gazed at your lips, longing to feel them on my own again. I leaned forward and placed my lips on your own. You let out a small squeak of surprise but quickly recovered and kissed me back. I felt my wings extending. Our bodies touched as you pulled me closer to you. At this rate I was going to hit space, so reluctantly I pulled my lips away from yours. There was still something I had to do.
“You seem really loving tonight,” I teased.
“I can’t help it, it’s just us two in an entire house for a whole night,” you explained smirking. I felt my ears turn red; you were so shy sometimes yet you could be so deviant as well.
“So, Gaki-san, shall we watch a movie?” you questioned.
“Sure. Which movie?”
“Anything that you want to watch.”
“Do you have Titanic?” I asked.
“Of course, let’s go!” you stated before gently grasping my arm and pulling me through to the living room.
After the movie and tears had finished we turned off the TV and lay in each other’s arms.
“Ne, Kame,” I said before I could change my mind. I was going to do it.
“What is it?”
“We’ve been together for 6 months from today, right?” I asked.
“Yeah, why?” you asked curiously, lifting your head off of my chest and looking up at me.
“Y-You love me, right?”
“Of course I do, more than life,” you replied.
“I know this may seem rather hasty b-but there is something I want to ask you,” I confessed.
“Ask me anything.”
I took a deep breath before continuing. I looked into your eyes; they glowed so mystically yet they were so warming. I felt my courage building up even though I hadn’t even planned what I was going to say. I got down on my left knee in front of you.
“Have you ever flown Kame? Have you ever felt the pure air flow through your hair? I have, all because of you. You made me see what was beyond the closed world underneath the clouds. I can never forget the exhilaration in my soul as I soar into forever. You helped me to learn how to break free from my past; one of a broken heart. Each day you were there by my side, making sure that I never destroyed my wings; even when they had already been damaged. You were so patient, healing me and my wings. You held me when I cried, you made me smile when I was sad and above all, you loved me. You loved me like she never could. There is something different about you from anyone else, something that I can’t put into words because no word in any language would be enough. Just you calling my name makes me feel alive. Without you I know that I would fall, because now that I have you, I’d never let you go. I can’t even imagine my life if I had fallen, I’m so thankful for having you by me. Just you standing by my side brightens the world. When you kiss me it’s like your giving me a piece of heaven, something I will always treasure. But, I want to repay you in some way for everything that you have done to me. I want to be the one that rescues you when you fall. I want to show you the eternal sky in which I fly. I don’t think that I’ll ever be able to do as much as you did for me, but I’ll never stop loving you. Because, I’ll be your every tomorrow and I’ll always be there,” I said.
You stared at me in shock, tears streaming down your cheeks. You seemed to know what I was going to ask next. I pulled out a small box from my pocket. Opening it up, I smiled.
“Kamei Eri…will you marry me?”
You didn’t move; the shock too much. I winced. You suddenly got up off the sofa and ran upstairs to your room, tears falling behind you. I felt my heart shake; I had ruined everything. I hung my head and let a few tears escape, but I wiped them away and stood up. Even if I had destroyed our relationship I had to make sure that you were ok; no matter what, even if it was at my own expense. I placed the box back in my pocket and headed upstairs.
Stepping into your room I heard you; you were in the closet. I guess old habits die hard. The sound of you whimpering stung my heart like poison. I had made you cry.
“K-Kame?” I asked. You whimpered again. I decided to do what was best; I went into the closet with you. It was dark, but I could make out you and your features.
“Kame, I’m sorry,” I apologised. You leapt into my arms, fresh tears falling.
“You don’t need to apologise, Gaki-san,” you said. My eyes shot open.
“W-What do you mean?”
“I was just so overwhelmed with happiness, I have been waiting for this day and now that it actually happened I’m just so…so…” you stuttered out. I kissed you on the lips trying to calm you down. Separating, our eyes met and so did our souls. I pulled the small box from my pocket again.
“Kamei Eri, will you marry me?” I asked again. You smiled so sweetly.
“Yes!” you exclaimed before connecting out lips. I felt tears of pure joy fall; we were the happiest people on earth and the funny thing about it all was that we were in a cramped closet. We broke apart, a saliva strand extending between us momentarily before disappearing. You grinned at me then leaned forward and whispered in my ear,
“You take me sky high.”
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So, too cheesy? Just right? Awful? Let me know! This fic felt different when I was writing it compared to when I was writing HFW...as if it was missing something ;) Well, it's always different when an author reads their work compared to when someone else reads it.
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awwww Yeah!! lol i like it! you scared me for a bit when Eri ran off though! :shocked: but it was good! :wub:
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That was so cute!!! Aww, I guess you're kinda turning me into a GAKIKAME fan! :shocked: I've been a die-hard Takagaki for so long...it's just weird. But this fic made them seem so cuteeee! Great job! :inlove: For some reason, the saliva strand made me giggle! When I started reading this, I wasn't sure what was going on. But when Gaki proposed, I was like :w00t:!! Never would have guessed! Love thisss! Can't wait for an update, take your time!
For the record, in HFW, I thought Ai killed her! Not indirectly but literally like stabbed her or something!
And I'm still forever a Takagaki fan but you've broadened my horizons. XD
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YAY! GAKIKAME! :wub:
it was so good it brought me to tears! :cry:
and goodluck on your exams :muffin:
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I was :wub: and :wub: and :wub: and :O and :( and :cry: and then I read this *points below*
Stepping into your room I heard you; you were in the closet. I guess old habits die hard.
damn, that was :lol:
it's very nice :yep:
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Cheese is good. :)
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@strawb3rrykream Woo hoo! Broadened horizons for the win! XD
Well exams are over ^_^ Hooray! I decided to write a quick little fun fic since I felt like it and cause I thought that it might be nice to take a break from the more angsty, detailed writing :P
Bathroom Device
Inside the Kame house hold…
22:16
Stepping into Eri’s bathroom, face wash armed, Risa gasped.
“What’s wrong, Gaki-san?” Eri asked appearing behind the gokkie.
“I didn’t know you had one of these things!” Risa exclaimed shocked, pointing to an object that was plugged into the wall on the opposite side of the room. Eri pouted her lips.
“You don’t need to sound so surprised. I can work technology just fine!” Eri protested.
Risa smiled, ’Alien technology,’ she joked to herself.
“Wow, you must have used it a lot if you need to charge it,” Risa commented. Eri blushed.
“But it’s fun, and it’s charged now!” she weakly defended. Eri unplugged it and showed it to Risa.
“It feels amazing and it’s so strong,” Eri said, clicking a switch on the bottom. It began to vibrate.
“I’m so jealous,” Risa whined, longingly looking at the object.
“Do you want me to show you how to use it?” Eri offered. Risa energetically nodded.
“Well, first you need to relax your whole body,” Eri explained, taking several deep breaths after.
“Wet it, and then add some paste.”
Eri slightly wetted the item before taking some paste from out of a tube and placing it on the end.
“You have to position it carefully before putting it in. Also, you have to be careful about where it touches and how strongly, you don’t want to hurt any sensitive skin…”
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Kame’s Bathroom
22:32
“And that is how it’s done!” Eri declared smiling; she was obviously very pleased.
“That took 15 minutes!” Risa complained.
“So?!”
“I could do that in 5!”
“There are some people who can do it for the entire night! Anyways, how would you know? You don’t even have one.”
“Just you wait and see! When I get one, we’ll do this together! I’ll show you how good I am at this sort of stuff!” Risa declared.
“I’ll be waiting for that day,” Eri said before walking out of the bathroom, back to her room. Risa turned to face herself in the mirror and smirked.
‘I’ll beat Kame, and her stupid electric toothbrush!’
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Yup, I guess you can consider me a Gakikame fan now!
When I started reading this, I had a feeling this "bathroom device" wasn't what it seemed! XD
I'll add to this comment when I return home in like 15 minutes!
edit: When Gaki mentioned about using it a lot, though, I had a glint of hope!
“You have to position it carefully before putting it in. Also, you have to be careful about where it touches and how strongly, you don’t want to hurt any sensitive skin…”
My favorite part! :twisted:
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"Alien technology". :lol:
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ELECTRIC TOOTHBRUSH!!! XD XD XD
Man, you got my hopes up too. Lucky for you this was funny. :D
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i knew it was an electric toothbrush!!! but i was hoping it was somehing else :twisted:
man... that was really hot... i love how you phrased everything...
“That took 15 minutes!” Risa complained.
for cleaner teeth, fresher breath
“There are some people who can do it for the entire night! ....”
... really? ... i gotta meet someone like that... *dental demonic possession* :twisted: but wouldn't that strip off the enamel of the teeth and cause them to look yellow? :twisted: *dental demonic possession over* man... i feel like a dentist...
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OH man that was HILARIOUS!! :lol: GakiKame and an electric toothbrush. I didn't think of that at first but somehow I knew it wouldn't be kinki XD
Congrats on having your exams over! Now you have more time to write :P Hee hee.
I don't think I commented on Sky High yet. It was so darn adorable and sweet it made me all mushy inside. And nope, it wasn't cheesy. Even if it was all's good cuz it's GakiKame :wub: And that is a good thing when it comes to KameMame. I resent turning into mush unless it's for them or TakaGaki :D Good job! And more please *pleads*
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LOL at the the ending.. and i also thought it was another device..
I like your comedy style.. keep on the good work... :yep:
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Alien Tech!! LOLx.. XD
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Ahh! Sorry that it's taken so long to update, I'm that kind of person. :sweatdrop:
Oh, just a thanks out to the people who voted for me in Fic of the Month! It's greatly appreciated. :oops:
The Final Countdown?
Maybe I should just die…there’s no reason for me to live anymore; you’ll never be mine and it hurts so much. I can feel the gaping hole of emptiness in my heart growing bigger. Just the sight of you and her together drives me closer to insanity. I stared out at the vast blue of the sea in front of me. My toes were hanging just off the edge of the cliff. I gazed down and watched as countless waves crashed against the rocks below.
“Mmm, 50 metres, maybe?” I estimated out loud to myself. If I jumped from the right place I could land on the jagged spikes of stone. I winced at the thought but still the thought of losing you was more painful. I could feel my whole body beginning to shake as I began my mental countdown.
10, 9…
Time had already begun to slow down.
8, 7, 6…
Hot tears began to fall from my eyes as the past 5 years of my life flashed by.
5, 4…
Your smiling face shone in my mind.
“Maybe in another life.”
3.
A breeze passed; silence. I begin to lift my foot.
2.
Rushing footsteps.
1.
“Sayu!”
I felt myself beginning to fall, my eyes wide open in shock. You were there. Looking up I saw you jump off the cliff after me where I had been moments before.
“Eri…” I whispered out, my voice getting lost in the whistling wind.
I felt your arms warmly embrace me. You positioned us so that we were falling backs first, you underneath. I realised what you were doing, but too late before I could do anything. We hit the water hard, you receiving the worst hit; you had broken the water to protect me. I was thrown out of your arms and under the waves. Pain surged through my left leg; I had injured it on impact. I fought my way to the surface taking several deep breaths after surfacing.
“Eri!” I screeched out.
Turning my head back and forth I scanned the water for you, the fading light making my search harder. My heart was about to burst out of my chest; you couldn’t die. I breathed in deeply before diving back under the water. The salty water stung my eyes but I ignored it. I saw your body floating downwards slowly. I swam towards you at full speed. Grabbing you around the waist I began my ascent back to the surface. My lungs began to scream in agony from lack of oxygen, if I didn’t get air quick the both of us would die. Bursting above the waves I desperately inhaled. Quickly turning to you I realised that you were unconscious. There was no way you were going to give up so neither would I. Holding onto you I struggled back to shore. I weakly dragged you out of the water and gently placed you on the sand.
“Eri, please wake up,” I panted out. I lay on my hands and knees next to you, water dripping off of me.
“You can’t die…Please, just say something. Anything!”
You coughed quietly.
“S-So much for me b-being a t-turtle, huh?” you joked smiling at me. I felt tears falling from my eyes again as I pulled you into a hug.
“Don’t you ever do that again!” I ordered.
“You’re saying that to me? Why did you jump off of the cliff?” you asked.
I froze.
“Sayu?”
I unlatched my arms from you and kept them at my sides. I turned my head away.
“We tell each other everything, Sayu, so why can’t you tell me this? We’ve always been together,” you said dejectedly.
“I’ll tell you but there are going to be so many consequences,” I sighed out.
“We always work through them though, don’t we?”
I weakly smiled, you were still yourself. I brought my gaze to meet yours.
“I love you, Eri,” I stated.
You stared at me but quickly smiled and hugged me.
“I guess this is a problem isn’t it?” you sadly asked.
I nodded into your shoulder.
“That’s why I jumped, because I know that we can never be together because you have Gaki-san to love.”
“I’m so sorry, Sayu. I’m so sorry,” you apologised your grip around me tightening.
“It’s ok.”
“No, it’s not! I left you all by yourself!”
“I know that you never meant to.”
“Please don’t do this ever again. I need you, I really do. You’re always at my side; I wouldn’t be myself if you weren’t there.”
I heard you sniffling.
“Please, Sayu, I need you.”
I nodded; even if I could never be the one who you loved I guess be the best at whatever came next.
“Promise me.”
“I promise that I will never try to do this again,” I vowed.
We continued to hug for several minutes. You sneezed.
“Cold?”
You shyly laughed and nodded. I smiled.
“Did you hurt yourself?” I asked.
“Surprisingly no, but my back and legs kind of hurt,” you admitted.
I picked you up and placed you on my back.
“Yay! Rabbit back!” you excitedly squealed.
“Honestly, you still act like your shoe size,” I teased.
“But this is fun!”
“Hai hai.”
We both laughed as we made our way back to the hotel. I may have been cold on the outside but I was warm on the inside. These moments that we spent together will never leave my memory, ever. The hole in my heart will slowly heal but you will always be my number one; always and forever my Eri.
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“Honestly, you still act like your shoe size,” I teased.
:lol:
This was so sad at the beginning but it turned happy in the end. I was afraid of who it was gonna be. I can't believe Eri jumped with her! I was like :shocked: nooo!!! I'm glad they both lived and are friends still! Sayu didn't get how much she means to Eri. But now she can see that Gaki isn't replacing her. They have entirely different roles in Eri's life. The love is different. One is romantic and one is friendship. :heart:
I'll be waiting for your updates! :)
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Wow wow wow, ur awesome! :D
I'm still not feeling the GakiKame (i'll never let u convert me :P) but i adore KameShige & I almost cried when Sayu jumped :cry:
Maybe Ai & Sayu should get together & mend their broken hearts together, awww :heart:
I've said it before to Hamzy and now I'll say it to you, STOP TRYING TO KILL OUR GIRLS YOU BIG MEANIE :angry:
But don't stop writing :D (I even read all ur GakiKame fics coz I like you so much ;))
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cool.
i love this.
XD
KameShige! :wub:
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So, I've decided to have a bit of fun and a challenge at the same time. I've written down the Morning Musume girls' names on a piece of paper, each corresponding with a number; 9 names, 9 numbers. I have also randomly chucked in Miki's, Rika's and Yossie's names. So 12 names, 12 numbers.
This is where you guys take part! Hooray!
I'll write 3 chapters which means 3 pairings, so the first 6 numbers I receive will be the pairs. You can submit up to 2 numbers. You can also submit up to 2 ideas for the chaper to be based upon (either an actual mini plot or the name of the chapter).
So your post would look something like this:
I pick the numbers 5 and 6.
For ideas:
1. [Name1] spills food all over herself, [Name2] sees this and comes over to help. Blushing ensues.
2. (Title) I Guess I Shouldn't Have Touched
Or something along those lines. If you are submitting a title then please indicate so. If you are submitting an idea and need to use names please use them as Name1 and Name2 as you do not know who is who. I must have at least 6 idea submissions if I am going to use them. If I get 6 or more then I will write them on pieces of paper and randomly pull them out of my magical lobster slippers. Once I feel that there are enough submissions then I will post saying that I won't accept anymore. I shall then set to work :D
I can only hope some impossible pairing doesn't come up in an even more impossible situation :bleed eyes:
Say like Rika and JunJun and to make it even more impossible JunJun gives Rika a balloon because she had an extra in her pocket...O_o I kinda doubt that you guys will submit something as random as that, but you never know XD
If you have any questions feel free to ask!
I'll be waiting for your submissions! :D
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Ohhh this sounds like so much fun :D
Alrighty I say numbers 3 and 5 and the title is "Surprised by these feelings inside...".
Let my lucky numbers not steer me wrong :lol:
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lol i'll play!!
ummm let's go numbers 8 and 9! and the Title is "Our little game"
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I've decided to change the game a bit, I'll just go with the suggestion you give for the plot or title. This means that you can only submit a plot OR a title. I hope that the fics will come out alright :sweatdrop:
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Whooooo! This sounds fun! XD
Ok, I pick numbers 2 and 10. Title is "First Touch" :twisted:
Good luck! Don't be nervous! :D
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Since I have received six numbers I'm not going to be accepting anymore! Look forward to the fics!
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:cow: yeah!! :lol: can't wait to see who the members are and what new pairings that may occur :twisted:
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Sounds like one of those "Madlibs" exercises that some teachers give to their classes. :lol:
Can't wait to see it. :)
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Aww I'm too late for the title suggestion. I guess I'll just comment on the fic then.
I have to say I was going nuts when I read someone was going to kill herself. I was so tempted to scroll down and see who it was but I couldn't tear my eyes away from reading :D In the end both girls were fine, which was good otherwise I might do something drastic XD
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Aww I'm too late for the title suggestion. I guess I'll just comment on the fic then.
I have to say I was going nuts when I read someone was going to kill herself. I was so tempted to scroll down and see who it was but I couldn't tear my eyes away from reading :D In the end both girls were fine, which was good otherwise I might do something drastic XD
Lol you were going to find out what happened anyways XD
After I finish writing the fics that I'm working on I'll make sure that people who didn't get to submit titles, ideas and numbers get top priority next time. So be sure to come back for the submissions! :D
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Ugh, I'm not really all that happy with how this one-shot turned out, I thought that it would be easy to write but I guess I though wrong. :sweatdrop: Well this is using the numbers and title that lollipopgirl gave me :) I hope that it's not too bad... I also apologise for it being short >.<
Surprised By These Feelings Inside…
I wanted you to give all of your attention to me. I wanted you to look only at me. I kept talking to you so that you would have to look at me, yet somehow your attention kept going back to Kame. Maybe I’m just boring to you; maybe I’m just another senpai. Still, I tried. It’s amazing how well you and Kame get along; you even called her “aho”. You must be pretty good friends if you say that to a senpai. I could feel my jealousy bubbling up in my stomach. After I had finished talking to you, you would only give a short answer and turn and look at Kame. It’s not that I dislike Kame or anything, not at all! I really like her; I’m just kind of jealous at how easily she makes friends and the amount of them. I guess that it’s not really a big deal but I still can’t help but want to get your attention. You’ve really made me realise my feelings towards certain things JunJun; I’m really surprised by these feelings inside. Sometimes I still try and catch your attention but I don’t really do it as much now. I guess I can’t win at everything, after all, I can’t beat Kame at being “the ultimate aho”. It’s much more fun being the “reaction queen” anyway.
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Again, my apologies :sweatdrop: I'm gonna try and get the other two stories posted before I go on holiday on Tuesday. I'm going to Niagra Falls for 2-3 days then I'm going to Maine for a week :w00t: I hear that it's a great place to go shopping :D I'll still have internet connection though according to my mum so I'll keep in touch =3 Anyways, time to go and try to write the next story!
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:wub: i liked it, it was good in my opinion. i want to say that lollipopgirl's pairing was Junjun and Risa? plus don't rush urself ok? :) its ok if you post the next stories after you leave.
but i have to say Lucky!! lol going to Niagra Falls and Maine!
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I can only hope some impossible pairing doesn't come up in an even more impossible situation
Say like Rika and JunJun and to make it even more impossible JunJun gives Rika a balloon because she had an extra in her pocket...O_o I kinda doubt that you guys will submit something as random as that, but you never know
damn, that one's a good one :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
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Well I'm in Maine now and I have wi-fi! :wub: This isn't a part of the user interaction series; I wrote this as part of a deal with lil_hamz (I want that next chapter! XD). A different type of style from what I usually write but I hope you'll give it a shot. I might upload some pics after this holiday, I haven't decided yet. Ugh, I'm still having trouble writing the user interaction ones, please forgive me! Don't send Miki-sama after me! I'm too young to be groped!
Give Me Something!
“So, as their senpais I want you to give them advice and tips,” Tsunku said facing the members of Morning Musume. The members of the fifth, sixth and seventh nodded their heads in understanding.
“I have provided each member’s latest photo book for reference; please use them to your advantage. That will be all, you are dismissed.”
Tsunku quickly left the meeting room, rushing to his next meeting. The members were left in short silence before they got to work.
“Ok, Mitsui, JunJun and LinLin, are you all ready to learn how to get through your first photo book?” Ai asked the eighth gen members.
“Hai,” they all replied.
“We should look at my book first!” Sayumi energetically exclaimed holding her PB in one hand, “after all, I am ichiban kawaii!”
Everyone’s expressions faltered.
“Let’s just do hers first so that way we can get the narcissist out of the way,” Risa joked. Sayumi stuck out her tongue playfully at the gokkie while everyone else nodded in agreement. Picking up Sayumi’s latest PB, all of the members gathered around and began to give out tips to the newest gen.
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Ai picked the final PB off the desk at which the girls sat; MAPLE.
“How come mine came last?” Eri moaned.
“It just ended up like that, it’s not the end of the world,” Reina explained. Eri didn’t seem satisfied with the answer but went along with it anyway. They flicked through the pages and many praises were given to Eri. In return, Eri explained many things about her shoot.
“You have to feel comfortable with yourself, with the camera, with your surroundings; everything. If you feel uncomfortable you won’t be able to give 100%. Also, you need to be connected to your surroundings, that way your personality comes out really well in the photos, it shows that you and the place became one,” Eri told her kouhais. They nodded in awe; they had never realised that they had to do more than just pose right and get the expressions correct. The older members of the group stared at Eri in amazement. Eri looked at them confused, her head cocked to the side.
“What?” she asked.
“That was really good advice, and it came from you,” Risa replied.
“What’s that supposed to mean?!” Eri exclaimed. Sayumi laughed.
“Nothing,” she said. She quickly grabbed Eri’s PB out of the leaders and Reina’s hands, taking a look at the PB for herself. She stopped on the page where Eri was in a black bikini looking over the edge of a wooden boat into water.
“Kyaa~ Eririn is so sexy!” Sayumi squealed.
“I’ve got to admit that this is a really sexy picture, Eri,” Reina agreed. Risa took the book out of the bunny’s hands and studied the picture.
“Really?” Risa asked.
No matter at how Risa looked at it she just couldn’t imagine Eri being all sexy. She could only imagine Eri as her usual bubbly self or…well, being Eri.
“It’s a really expressive photo,” Ai complimented.
“Mou, Gaki-san,” Eri whined.
“I just can’t see Kame being all sexy though since I’m used to seeing her all Eri-like,” Risa commented.
“Well I can see where you’re coming from,” Reina said.
“Gaki-san can’t see me as being sexy?” Eri mumbled to herself.
“Aww, no need to feel so down Eririn,” Sayumi hummed, giving her best friend a quick hug.
“I just guess Kame isn’t the sexy type to me,” Risa stated before laughing nervously.
“I’m sorry I’ve got something to do, please feel free to continue without me though. I’ll see you all tomorrow,” Eri informed the members before leaving the meeting room suddenly.
“Ahh, Kame!” Risa called out, trying to stop the rokkie but to no avail. The door shut. Risa let out a sigh.
“Maybe I insulted her…”
A silence fell.
“I’m sure she’s fine,” JunJun suddenly spoke. The other members smiled.
“Yeah, she probably does have something to do, I’m sure she mentioned something about it to me the other day…” Reina trailed off trying to recall anything important.
“Plus Eri’s always smiling so there’s no need to worry,” Sayumi said.
“I agree, it wasn’t your fault Gaki-san,” Ai reassured.
Risa weakly smiled before saying, “You’re all probably right.”
“I’ve learnt so much, thank-you for sharing your knowledge with us,” LinLin thanked, bowing in respect. Mitsui and JunJun copied.
“It’s no problem, it’s out job as your senpai’s anyway,” Ai kindly said.
“Since we’re here in Yokohama is there anything fun to do around here to kill some time?” Koharu asked.
“I’ve heard that there’s a new café around here, anyone else wanna go?” Reina offered. Everyone agreed to go.
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“Are you sure that you’re ok? You’ve been out of it ever since Eri-chan left,” Ai asked Risa again as they arrived outside of Risa’s room.
“Yeah, I’m sure, I’m probably just tired, thanks though Ai-chan.”
Ai nodded her head obviously not believing the fellow gokkie but deciding not to push the matter further.
“Remember, I’m always just at the other end of the hall if you need me.”
Risa once again thanked Ai and said goodnight. Locking her door Risa yet again sighed.
“I wonder if Kame’s ok…” she said to herself. Shaking her head Risa decided to take an early shower.
Appearing out of the shower Risa was wearing nothing but a bra and panties. It was the height of summer and even at night time it was hot. The door was locked so Risa didn’t need to worry about uninvited guests. Anyways it wouldn’t bother her if another member saw her in only her undergarments; she had gotten changed in the same room as them before and she had worn bikinis in front of them so being caught in her panties was no big deal. Turning out all of the lights in her room, Risa climbed into her bed and began to drift off to sleep.
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Blinking, Risa woke up to the sound of something locking. Her arms were above her head. Someone was at the headboard of her bed, locking Risa’s arms above her head in handcuffs. Her eyes adjusted to the darkness, Risa eyes shot open in shock when she realised who it was.
“Kame?!” Risa gasped out in disbelief.
The figure stopped and smirked.
“What are you doing? Why am I in handcuffs?” Risa asked.
Silence.
“Are you angry at me?”
The figure shook its head.
“Why would I be angry at you?” Eri questioned.
“Well, because of what I said earlier today…” Risa trailed off.
“I’m not angry at you,” Eri stated. Risa let out a sigh of relief. That’s also when she realised her friend’s attire.
“Kame, why are you only in girls boxers and a bra?” Risa hesitantly asked. Again Eri smirked. Risa’s heart rate increased. Suddenly Eri climbed on top of Risa and positioned herself above the girls’ waist, straddling her. Risa felt her cheeks flush a deep scarlet; she was thankful that the room was dark. Risa took in a sharp breath when she felt one of Eri’s hands lightly brush against her toned stomach.
“K-Kame?”
“Don’t worry, I’m not going to hurt you,” Eri breathed out into Risa’s ear. Eri reached over the side of the bed and grabbed a bottle. Risa stared at Eri in confusion. Eri popped off the lid of the bottle and began to spray some of the contents onto the girl underneath her.
‘Whipped cream,’ Risa said to herself.
Eri put the bottle back onto the ground. Before Risa could register what was about to happen she felt something warm and wet go over her stomach. Risa gasped out; Eri was licking the cream off of her. She felt the tongue go again but incredibly slowly. Risa felt her whole body heating up at the contact. Her breathing began to change. At first Eri had been licking the cream off the top part of Risa’s stomach but as the cream began to disappear she had to begin to travel lower to get more. Risa’s breathing soon became heavy. Eri smirked as she heard the girl panting and the legs beneath her beginning to rub together. Risa looked down to where Eri was and the sight only increased Risa’s body heat. Eri’s body was placed over her own; the girl leaned over to lick off the cream, her cleavage very visible. Eri looked up and smiled at Risa deviously, a sparkle in her eyes.
“Am I sexy now?” Eri whispered out.
Risa nodded embarrassedly.
“What?” Eri teased.
“Y-Yes,” Risa huskily replied.
Eri began to lick off the final two rows of cream left on the girl. These two rows were directly above Risa’s panty line. Risa felt herself giving in. She let out a moan.
“Hmm, what was that?” Eri playfully asked.
“M-more,” Risa breathed out, “E-Eri.”
Shock passed over the younger girl’s face for a moment; Risa was addressing Eri by her first name. A smirk appeared on Eri’s face but this time it was from ear to ear. Obliging, she began to lick. Risa bit her lip, holding back a moan from the tantalisingly slow licking she was receiving. She felt the warm tongue trace small circles, tasting her. Both girls were old enough to know what they were experiencing their waists slowly grinding together. The only noises in the dark room were the laboured breathing of Risa and the wet sound of Eri’s tongue. Risa knew that all of the cream had been licked off when she felt her panties being pulled down slightly. Risa’s pulse sky rocketed. She felt one of Eri’s nails gently scraping across the skin under her stomach. Risa let out a little squeal. Eri let out a small giggle. Lightly snapping Risa’s panties Eri patted them afterwards and got off of Risa. Staring at Eri in shock Risa suddenly began to grasp at what had just happened. She opened her mouth to say something but nothing came out. Eri picked the whipped cream off the floor and began to leave the other girls bedroom. Before she closed the door she turned back to face Risa.
“Sweet dreams, Risa,” Eri said, sexily whispering out the name.
The door clicked closed. Risa didn’t move a muscle for several minutes before coming back down to Earth. She began to bring her arms back down when she realised that she couldn’t.
“Hey, I’m stilled locked up! Kame!” Risa yelled, desperately flopping about while she did. Then out of the corner of her eye on her bedside table she spotted a key.
“That’s not my key…”
Then she saw a little note underneath the key.
Opposable thumbs can’t help you now, can they?
-Eri
A little picture of a turtle was then drawn underneath.
‘I have no idea what goes through that girl’s head sometimes…’ Risa thought to herself.
Stopping her mind from contemplating the matter she quickly got it back to the task at hand.
“This isn’t fair!” she whined.
‘Give me something!’ the back of Risa’s mind screamed.
Outside of Risa’s bedroom Eri quietly giggled to herself before slinking her way back to her own room.
Several minutes later silence fell upon Risa’s room.
“Mou, she could have at least made the handcuffs furry or something…”
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:drool: AHHHHHH! That was sooooo hot!!!! :twisted: Whipped cream.... :inlove: I don't even like whipped cream but damn... :twisted: That's hella funny, that Eri left her locked onto the bed. She wanted furry handcuffs!!! :w00t: That's kinda kinky... XD
Oh, and I just read the other one too. It was cute. Jun Jun :shocked:
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Oh man, I wanna know what happens the next morning when the others try to find Risa. :rofl:
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Whoa!!! that was :twisted: HOTT!!!!
i'm curious as JFC i wonder what happen the next day??
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Who says Tutles cant be sexy?!! XD
so hawt. :D :wub: :wub: :wub:
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Hee hee, I LOVE this story :hee: I could totally imagine Risa going all "Ehhhh, how is Eri sexy?" in my mind. You captured the girl's reactions well. Oooh and the part where Eri trapped Risa on the bed and did all those naughty little things....GAH...*dies* You have officially killed me. Now you have to bring me back to life with another good KameMame fic you hear? :P
That's a good question JFC. I wonder too. Imagine if Ai-chan found Risa :hehehe:
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:lol: very nice :yep:
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Several minutes later silence fell upon Risa’s room.
“Mou, she could have at least made the handcuffs furry or something…”
LMAO! that was a GREAT way of ending it.
I feel bad for Gaki though LOL, I feel bad for the handcuff wearers whenever they're left wearing them. Their poor hands LOLOL but in a way... Gaki deserved it. Eri can be sexy whenever Eri wants to be sexy dammit! What's gonna be super interesting is the next morning when they find her like that... :rofl:
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:drool: AHHHHHH! That was sooooo hot!!!! :twisted: Whipped cream.... :inlove: I don't even like whipped cream but damn... :twisted: That's hella funny, that Eri left her locked onto the bed. She wanted furry handcuffs!!! :w00t: That's kinda kinky... XD
Oh, and I just read the other one too. It was cute. Jun Jun :shocked:
:O You don't like whipped cream?!
Well if you liked the story even though you don't like whipped cream, then I'm happy XD
Hee hee, I LOVE this story :hee: I could totally imagine Risa going all "Ehhhh, how is Eri sexy?" in my mind. You captured the girl's reactions well. Oooh and the part where Eri trapped Risa on the bed and did all those naughty little things....GAH...*dies* You have officially killed me. Now you have to bring me back to life with another good KameMame fic you hear? :P
That's a good question JFC. I wonder too. Imagine if Ai-chan found Risa :hehehe:
Another one shall be coming soon, so I'm expecting an update on GA? :roll:
Hmm, who knows what happened the next day? :twisted:
I might write a couple of diiferent 'next days'... I'm not too sure. It's kinda your guys decision.
LMAO! that was a GREAT way of ending it.
I feel bad for Gaki though LOL, I feel bad for the handcuff wearers whenever they're left wearing them. Their poor hands LOLOL but in a way... Gaki deserved it. Eri can be sexy whenever Eri wants to be sexy dammit! What's gonna be super interesting is the next morning when they find her like that... :rofl:
LOL thanks!
@kRisz, ringo-hime, shadowolf8 and JFC: Thank-you! I'm glad that you like it ^_^
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Ok, so here's the next installation of the user interaction! Sorry that it took so long, I had it written down on paper but I was too lazy to type it ^_^; Please forgve me. This is from shadowolf8's selection. Enjoy!
Our Little Game
We had both agreed not to let any romantic feelings develop between the two of us. I agreed easily. I was only focused on getting one person’s attention; Goto Maki’s. You had been the same.
Looking back, I realise that it was because of that one episode…
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“Jajang…couple.” Abe said after she flipped over a piece of paper on a stand next to her, “Okay, let’s start!”
Reina wore a long blonde haired wig and Yossie wore a short brown haired wig. Both sat down on a prop bench, Yossie placing her arm around Reina’s shoulders. The Morning Musume girls’ could be heard squealing.
“In a relationship for six months, an envious couple.” the narration voice spoke out “Today, the two of them came to the beach.”
“The ocean’s so beautiful,” Yossie commented.
“Yeah, it is beautiful,” Reina agreed.
“There’s only the two of us here.”
“Yeah.”
“Are you shivering?” Yossie asked, turning to Reina. Reina wiggled. Again, the girls squealed.
“But it’s because we’re so close to each other,” Reina explained. Yossie took Reina’s in her own, smiling.
“The girlfriend accidentally found out now that he’s a playboy. Those two started to fight on the side of the ocean.”
Reina released her hand from Yossie’s and turned to face her.
“I want to clear things up with you,” Reina said in a slightly harsh tone.
“What, what, what?”
“You cheated on me didn’t you?”
“Me?”
“Last time I saw you walking with another woman,” Reina accused.
“You probably saw the wrong person,” Yossie weakly defended.
“No, I saw it!”
“Than how about I show you my cell phone?” Yossie proposed.
“No need.”
“There isn’t a single girl’s name in here except for yours,” Yossie stated.
“No, I wanna break up with you.”
Yossie placed her hand on Reina’s shoulder and said, “Wait a second...”
“No.”
Reina stood up.
“Why?” Yossie asked.
“I hate you. Let go of me,” Reina demanded. Yossie repeatedly tried to hold Reina’s hand but was always shaken off. Standing up, Yossie began to look down at Reina.
“It’s found out that this is the girlfriend’s only suspicion. Those two went back to being intimate with each other.”
“Having you worried, it’s my bad,” Yossie apologised to Reina. Holding out her hand and taking Reina’s in her own, Yossie hugged Reina. Laughter rang out all through the studio. Holding each others hands, they faced each other.
“You’re the only one I like,” Yossie stated.
“You’re the only one I like too.”
“The boyfriend then finds out that she’s a playgirl.”
“Is there something wrong with me?” Yossie asked angrily.
“What do you mean by that?”
“Last time, you and that guy… in the convenient store… In the convenient store, drinking from the same can, right?”
Reina placed her hand over her mouth in shock.
“I did not do that,” she defended.
“That counts as an indirect kiss!”
“So what if it’s an indirect kiss?”
“I don’t accept that!” Yossie folded her arms, turning away from Reina.
“During this fight the fact that he is moving to Hokkaido is made. The sudden breakup…”
Reina laughed, the situation was getting more ridiculous. Yossie turned back to Reina.
“Sorry…truthfully, I don’t want to go either…”
“You’re really going?”
“I have my own dream,” Yossie replied. Laughter.
“Actually, here is Hokkaido. The two of them live closer to each other than before, as neighbours.”
Yossie stood there, finding the right words to say. A short silence passed.
“Hotaru,” she said, giving Reina’s character a name.
“Because having you come here with me… Let’s have a small coffee shop, just the two of us.” Yossie again held Reina’s hand and held it up.
“Yeah,” Reina agreed.
“Then, we’ll take care of “him”,” Yossie continued, making it like they already had a kid. Staring at one of her hands as the child, Yossie said, “We’ll take care of him together. Our baby.”
“From relationship to marriage, it’s been 3 years. Right now, having absolutely no feeling towards each other, the husband and wife.”
Reina and Yossie were in an embrace, but separated at the new situation. Yossie walked away from Reina and sat down on the bench.
“Food, is the food done yet?” Yossie asked, crossing her legs.
“Why don’t you go make it yourself?” Reina demanded.
“Bring it out already.”
“I’m tired as well.”
“Stop being so annoying. I work so hard and then come home.”
“Why don’t you eat outside then come home,” Reina suggested, annoyed.
“Newspaper, how about the newspaper?”
“We don’t have a newspaper at home.”
“Hurry up and go get it.”
“Go get it yourself.”
“Miso soup isn’t hot either,” Yossie complained.
“If you don’t wanna drink it then don’t drink it.”
“Then, I’m leaving this family,” Yossie stated.
“Go ahead,” Reina said.
“Really?”
Yossie stood up.
“Then you get out.”
“Why?”
“Time’s up!” Abe announced.
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Even if it wasn’t exactly a major moment, it had been because of that scene that I began to feel differently about you. Suddenly, it wasn’t Maki’s attention I wanted anymore; it was yours. I wanted us to be exactly like the couple we acted out that day. Okay, maybe not exactly; who the hell would want such a dysfunctional relationship?!
I wanted to the one you held; the one you loved. Our secret practise dates became more to me. My heart would always race whenever we snuck to the movies. I was so happy that you were paying attention to only me. When we would say goodnight to each other after you walked me back to my house, I could really see the Mr. Moonlight part of you coming out. But my happiness was short lived. You and Maki became even closer and we stopped going on dates. Then, one day, you confronted me.
“Reina, we can’t date anymore.”
I felt my heart breaking right then, but I wasn’t going to cry in front of you.
“Let me guess, she’s going out with you,” I said, not letting any emotion show.
“Yeah, how did you know?”
“It’s obvious to tell by the way you two have been acting around each other lately,” I stated. A short silence followed.
“I’m sorry, Reina,” you apologised. I could feel tears trying to break free, but I wouldn’t let them; not yet.
“It’s ok, your better for her than me. Anyways, I’ve fallen in love with someone else,” I said. You looked at me in shock.
“That’s great! Can you tell me who it is?”
I shook my head.
“Well, I’m always open ears whenever you want to tell me. I wish you the best of luck with this person, hopefully they’ll return your feelings,” you blessed, smiling. I inwardly winced.
‘If only you knew…’
“We can still hang out though. Want to go the movies or something?” you offered.
“I can’t, I’ve got some business to attend to,” I declined. You pouted.
“Aww, that sucks, but I understand. Let me know if you want to hang out though.”
“I will.”
“I’ll go and see if anyone’s free since you’re busy. I’ll see you on Monday!” you called out. I waved as you left. As soon as you were out of sight I ran. I didn’t care where I was going just as long as I was by myself. My eyes and throat burned, but nothing compared to the burning in my heart. The more I thought about you, the more the pain increased. Even if I tried to get you out of my head, my heart wrenched from the lack of you. It was a no win situation. I fell to my knees in an abandoned park. Our chapter of life together was now over. It was the end of our little game.
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Just in case no-one's seen the scene I'm talking about in the flashback here's a video!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O8UhEmzghLA
That was the main highlight of the episode basically XD
Oh! Prepare for a completely unexpected pairing tomorrow! I decided to write it for my birthday (4th August). I bet no-one can guess it! NO-ONE! Muahaha! but really, I doubt anyone will get it right XD I don't think I've ever seen a fanfic about these two, maybe I'll make a break in H!P fanfic history! :w00t:
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:( aww that was really cute and sad. but i liked it! lol score one of the members i got was my all time fav! :wub: aww it's your birthday tomorrow? well
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! i just had mine too (Aug 2nd)
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:( aww that was really cute and sad. but i liked it! lol score one of the members i got was my all time fav! :wub: aww it's your birthday tomorrow? well
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! i just had mine too (Aug 2nd)
Thanks!
And Happy Be-lated Birthday! :heart:
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Aww, that was cute! I was wondering when our user interaction stories were gonna be coming back. I love that video! Yossy.....*shakes head* She just doesn't know the effect she has on ppl, or maybe she chooses to ignore it!
Happy Birthday! :tama-apeshit: And can't wait for the new pairing! :D
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Here's the el birthday special! I hope you enjoy it!
Oh btw does anyone know any good horror movies? My brother, a friend and I are going to do a horror movie all nighter tonight! XD One of the movies we're going to watch is The Ring. I've never seen it before so.... :w00t: And I hate horror movies XD
Onwards with the story!
Innocence
It was fun because no-one suspected us. It was fun because no-one knew. It was fun because I learnt. It was fun because I was with you.
Those were my last words to you, and between us. I wish I had said something more, something better, but I guess that’s all that I could have said. When we were together everything was simple and fun, and we didn’t want it any other way. There was no point in making good-bye complex.
To be honest, I wasn’t surprised when you got caught smoking; you had told me prior. I warned you but at the same time I sympathised. Being a teenage idol wasn’t as great as it looked. Sure, there were those amazing moments but there were just as many depressing ones. We didn’t keep things back from each other; after all, all we wanted to do was help the other. You told me. You told me. You cried. I held you.
“You’re really a good person,” you had said. I smiled.
“Only because of you,” I informed.
Even though you had graduated and were working hard in W, we still met. Not as much as what we would have liked, but it was better than nothing. I remember out last meeting. We discussed everything from our future’s, how we became what we were, our love interests to how Tsunku used more cosmetics in a month than the entire of Hello!Project in a year.
“Can I kiss you?” you asked.
I opened my eyes in shock but quickly smiled and shyly nodded. Our lips stayed locked together for just over 30 seconds before we broke apart. You licked your lips.
“I can still taste it; your innocence. Promise me you’ll never lose it,” you begged.
“I promise.”
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“Oi, Kame! Moshi moshi? I can see the lights but no-one’s home!”
Eri snapped out of her thoughts to find herself face-to-face with Risa. Eri felt her cheeks turn red.
“Are you okay? Your face looks flushed…” Risa trailed off. Placing their foreheads together, Risa attempted to take Eri’s temperature. Not moving an inch, Eri felt her face heat up more.
“Well, I don’t think you have a cold…” Risa pulled her head back, “be careful though, we need you for the musical.”
Eri nodded shyly.
“Oh yeah! You have a visitor,” Risa informed.
“A visitor?”
“Well, more like an old friend. The rest of us talked to her earlier but you weren’t there.”
Eri furrowed her eyebrows in thought.
“Doraemon?” Eri guessed.
“Kamei-chan, aho?!” a voice accused playfully.
Eri snapped her head in the direction of which a very familiar voice came.
“Kago-san!” she exclaimed. Kago smiled.
“I’ll let you two talk,” Risa said. Turning to Eri she said only loud enough for her to hear, “I’ll be waiting for you in the cafeteria. You promised to be Cinderella to help me practise, remember?” Risa winked. “I can’t wait,” she said before leaving.
Eri took a couple of seconds to process what had been said before again flushing and unconsciously licking her lips.
“Are you two dating?” Kago asked.
“No!”
“You’re sure?”
“Yeah…” Eri sighed out.
“You like her, don’t you?” Kago asked rhetorically.
Eri stuttered, only the beginning of words coming out.
“I thought that you grew out of your shyness,” Kago teased.
“I did, it’s just that…well, it’s Gaki-san…” Eri tried to explain.
“It’s ok, I understand.”
Eri smiled thankfully.
“I just dropped by today to see how you were all doing with rehearsals,” Kago explained, “You’ve all really grown up.”
“So have you.”
“Thank-you.”
Eri and Kago continued to chat for over 20 minutes, time seeming to fly by.
“Those days were fun…” Kago sighed out.
Eri was about to console Kago, when the older girl cut her off.
“Can I have one more kiss?”
A silence followed, Eri rolling over the question in her mind.
“…yes.”
Not even a second passed from when she answered, Eri felt Kago’s lips on her own. And just as quick as it had happened, it was over.
“Yup, just as I thought,” Kago confirmed aloud, after licking her lips several times, “I can’t taste your innocence.”
“B-But I-I’ve not…yet…you know?” Eri embarrassedly said. Kago burst out laughing.
“I don’t mean like being a virgin! I mean your heart. You’ve fallen in love, and I have a pretty good idea who with,” Kago said.
“Oh…” Eri let out a sigh of relief.
“A believe a certain ‘Gaki-san’ has caught your heart, am I wrong?” Kago asked, smirking. Eri blushed and lowered her head so that her bangs were covering her face.
“I guess your shyness never left, just hid away,” Kago commented, giggling after she finished. Eri mumbled to herself shyly.
“Well, I’m not going to keep you from your crush any longer. Just tell her how you feel, I’m sure she feels the same, I can tell,” Kago said.
Eri stood up and locked gazes with Kago.
“I never got to thank you for helping me break out of my shell, so I’m going to thank you now.” Eri bowed deeply. “Thank-you so much.”
“No problem. Now get going,” Kago gently ushered.
Eri looked at Kago for a few more moments before nodding and beginning to walk out of the room. As she walked further away from Kago, her own words popped into her head.
‘It was fun because no-one suspected us. It was fun because no-one knew. It was fun because I learnt.’
Eri closed the door behind her, the sound echoing down the empty hallway. She turned left and headed to the cafeteria where Risa was waiting for her.
“All done?” Risa asked, standing up when she spotted Eri.
“Yup.”
“Ready to go practise?”
“Whenever you are,” Eri replied. Eri then stepped forward and entwined one of her hands with Risa’s. She smiled. Risa looked at Eri in confusion first but then smiled back, a light blush appearing.
“Watashi no oji-sama,” Eri shyly said.
“Zutto, watashi no ohime-sama,” Risa said back.
Alone in one of the rehearsal rooms, Kago whispered out 8 simple words.
“It was fun because I was with you.”
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HOLY CRAP!!! XD You're right, I've never heard of that pairing! Great job with it, though! Love the "tasting" of the innocence! So cute. And of course, the lovely Gakikame at the end! :heart:
Sorry, I'm not a horror movie person! :P
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! :heart:
When I read the smoking part I was like "EH?! USO!!!", you certainly shocked me :P
I have a tendency to read ahead when I know something big is coming up but I tried really hard and amde sure I didn't do that this time ;)
Don't ask me why (coz I can't answer) but I have a really hard time pairing Kago (and Tsuji) with any of the girls... I just can't get into pairing them with another girl, weird... but I adored the innocence of this pairing and it did work for me coz of that, niiice job! :D
I even enjoyed the GakiKame :o :wub:
I want more new pairings, this is fun lately :w00t:
As for the horror movies, depends on what actually class as scary, like for me, I've seen the Japanese "The Grudge" and thought it was really really funny XD But I recommend it! (& Yet I find ET scary)
As for American movies, I don't know what you've seen but here is a list of some of my faves off the top of my head:
Valentine, Urban Legend (the first one, the others are kinda meh), Final Destination (all three of them :heart: ), Wrong Turn, Darkness Falls, Jeepers Creepers, When a Stranger Calls (that one actually DID scare me) and good ol' fashioned Scream is worth it for a laugh too.
I might be too late for the movies, but I recommend them anyway and HAPPY BIRTHDAY :gmon heartu: :gmon flowers: :gmon bang: :gmon love2:
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HOLY CRAP!!! XD You're right, I've never heard of that pairing! Great job with it, though! Love the "tasting" of the innocence! So cute. And of course, the lovely Gakikame at the end! :heart:
Sorry, I'm not a horror movie person! :P
Thanks ^_^
XD I'm not a horror movie person either, but that's why I'm going to watch them!
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! :heart:
When I read the smoking part I was like "EH?! USO!!!", you certainly shocked me :P
I have a tendency to read ahead when I know something big is coming up but I tried really hard and amde sure I didn't do that this time ;)
Don't ask me why (coz I can't answer) but I have a really hard time pairing Kago (and Tsuji) with any of the girls... I just can't get into pairing them with another girl, weird... but I adored the innocence of this pairing and it did work for me coz of that, niiice job! :D
I even enjoyed the GakiKame :o :wub:
I want more new pairings, this is fun lately :w00t:
As for the horror movies, depends on what actually class as scary, like for me, I've seen the Japanese "The Grudge" and thought it was really really funny XD But I recommend it! (& Yet I find ET scary)
As for American movies, I don't know what you've seen but here is a list of some of my faves off the top of my head:
Valentine, Urban Legend (the first one, the others are kinda meh), Final Destination (all three of them :heart: ), Wrong Turn, Darkness Falls, Jeepers Creepers, When a Stranger Calls (that one actually DID scare me) and good ol' fashioned Scream is worth it for a laugh too.
I might be too late for the movies, but I recommend them anyway and HAPPY BIRTHDAY :gmon heartu: :gmon flowers: :gmon bang: :gmon love2:
I'm glad that I shocked you!...I think O_o
I can see what you mean by you can't imagine them with any other girls. It's probably because they're those girls that everyone loves but they're always seen as friends with. Plus, since they were more care free and trouble makers it's hard to them seriously in a relationship? That's how I view it... sort of like my view on KameShige :-X
XD It's a good thing that you're enjoying this! Maybe I should make some more one-shots?
Oh, thanks for the recommendations! It's not too late yet, so thanks! :wub: :mon lovelaff:
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Well I decided that I should take some pictures of my birthday presents, because I am VERY pleased with them :D (I have no idea how to do thumbnails so you'll have to live with the bigger pictures :sweatdrop: sorry 'bout that).
(http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/I_Like_Chocolate_Milk_With_Strawberries/P8050016.jpg)
So one of my friend's went to China 4 months ago and came back on the third and she got me 2 mechanical pencils, an eraser and some very snazzy posters (which you shall see). The moose is from when we went to Niagra and my brother somehow managed to secretly buy it without me noticing O_o I applaud him XD I named the moose "Mulder".
Oh, I only noticed within the past hour, but there is some 'chinglish' on the eraser.
(http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/I_Like_Chocolate_Milk_With_Strawberries/P8050017.jpg)
On the side it says "HAVING ME DIDN'T HE"
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what?
He's pregnant with me? O_o
Oh, and that little pacman thing with a cross through it in the bottom right has the words "Please Not Edible" underneath.
Here's is the main event!
My friend in China told me about this shop near her house and she said that they made posters, pillow cases, stickers, mouse pads etc. And you could give them a picture and they can make them into whatever you want! So she asked me if I wanted anything for my birthday and I was like :w00t: Chyea!
I sent her four pictures, but one of them couldn't be made into a poster because it was too small to expand, so I got two posters (one double sided). I bet some of you probably know what I got... :oops:
This is the double-sided one.
(http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/I_Like_Chocolate_Milk_With_Strawberries/P8050018.jpg)
(http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/I_Like_Chocolate_Milk_With_Strawberries/P8050019.jpg)
This is the seperate one.
(http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/I_Like_Chocolate_Milk_With_Strawberries/P8050020.jpg)
Was that predictable?
I guess I can't help it when it comes to those two :wub: :luvluv1: :shy2:
The one that I couldn't get made into a poster was this one:
(http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/I_Like_Chocolate_Milk_With_Strawberries/396fa5.jpg)
And it's one of my faves too! :-\
Oh well, I still have the other 3 pictures :inlove:
Oh!!! There is a spirit thing in one of our photos of the American Falls! It looks like a young boy.... my brother says that he sees a French man with a moustanche, which I can see as well, but OMG the boy!
(http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/I_Like_Chocolate_Milk_With_Strawberries/P7170018.jpg)
Can you spot the boy?
(Below is circled)
(http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff35/I_Like_Chocolate_Milk_With_Strawberries/P7170018-1.png)
Creepy, huh?
I'm also getting a new iPod for my birthday (30 GB :w00t:) but it's not arrived yet, but I'm going to make sure to pack it full of Morning Musume goodies! ^_^
I forgot to mention the horror movies. We watched Shutter and One Missed Call. Since my bro, two friends and I ended up talking during the movies we didn't get scared, but we enjoyed them. Oh, and in Shutter we all got surprised by the name of the killer girl. Her name was Megumi (like me!) but then I looked at her last name and I was like O_O... it was Tanaka. XD
Anyways, that basically concludes my birthday bonanza special! I hope you had fun looking at the pics! (Well, as fun as that can get...)
I'll try and update with the final part of the User Interaction soon!
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KonaKaga - those are some really cute presents you got- the moose is hillarious; and wow at the gakikame goodness!
On your ipod- you can pack text files onto it- so you know what that means! H!P fanfics on the GO! I did that when I had an ipod, LOL.
As for the young boy... I can't really see it! lol- maybe I'm just not looking hard enough- or maybe I'm just totally checking out the awesome blue SEE THROUGH RAINCOATS!!!
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ah a little late but Happy Birthday! :luvuluvu:
You got some really awesome gifts =D The posters are so nice looking! Too bad about the pic you couldn't turn into a poster...that's my all time favourite gakikame pic XD but perhaps you can get it turned into a keychain =D
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Aww, cute pics, I love the posters! :heart:
I'm glad you had fun too :D
I see misty looking stuff in the water fall but I can't really see a boy :sweatdrop: But I am always bad those sort of things :lol:
Oh, I never thought of putting fanfics on my iPod... I will be now :w00t:
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KonaKaga - those are some really cute presents you got- the moose is hillarious; and wow at the gakikame goodness!
On your ipod- you can pack text files onto it- so you know what that means! H!P fanfics on the GO! I did that when I had an ipod, LOL.
As for the young boy... I can't really see it! lol- maybe I'm just not looking hard enough- or maybe I'm just totally checking out the awesome blue SEE THROUGH RAINCOATS!!!
I was thinking of doing that actually, but I didn't know if I could! Thanks for letting me know! I'm going to make sure to definiteley put Eri vs. Morning Musume on it XD
LOL those raincoats were big! And they were kinda useless; when we went under the falls because the wind blew them and my t-shirt sleeve got wet and the water spread down my entire right hand side, and my hair was completely soaking!
ah a little late but Happy Birthday! :luvuluvu:
You got some really awesome gifts =D The posters are so nice looking! Too bad about the pic you couldn't turn into a poster...that's my all time favourite gakikame pic XD but perhaps you can get it turned into a keychain =D
Thanks.
I can't get it turned into a keychain though, since my friend's come back here. She came back the day before my b-day :sweatdrop:
Aww, cute pics, I love the posters! :heart:
I'm glad you had fun too :D
I see misty looking stuff in the water fall but I can't really see a boy :sweatdrop: But I am always bad those sort of things :lol:
Oh, I never thought of putting fanfics on my iPod... I will be now :w00t:
:shock: No-one can see the little boy! Maybe I'm crazy... :dizzy: But I can't be since my family can see it! Hmm... Maybe it's a family ghost? I doubt it since I've not heard of any little boy...
I shall wait until someone else sees it! XD
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I read the post yesterday but didn't have any time to comment. Cool presents! Really love the second poster! But they are all so cute~ Lucky!! :mon star: Aww, the one you couldn't get would be so adorable!
As for the little boy, I can see the top half of the face, but that's about it. But I can see where the French guy comes in. (I think I see a mustache!)
Enjoy your iPod!!! And I'm glad you didn't get scared by the movies.
WHOOOO! My user interaction!
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I read the post yesterday but didn't have any time to comment. Cool presents! Really love the second poster! But they are all so cute~ Lucky!! :mon star: Aww, the one you couldn't get would be so adorable!
As for the little boy, I can see the top half of the face, but that's about it. But I can see where the French guy comes in. (I think I see a mustache!)
Enjoy your iPod!!! And I'm glad you didn't get scared by the movies.
WHOOOO! My user interaction!
YUSH! Someone can see it! XD Well at least part of it!
:sweatdrop: Sorry that it's kinda been a wait for you to get your user interaction story. :kneelbow:
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Hey hey, I love all your birthday presents. But the best one had to be the posters (GakiKame FTW :P) The Ipod comes close though XD The pic which couldn't be printed is one of my fave KameMame pics too. Aren't they just so adorable in it?
I know I'm soooooooooooo late in wishing you happy birthday. But I'll make it up to you. I have an idea for another fic, KameMame (are you jumping for joy yet)? :lol: I wish I could write it faster but the words just aren't coming. It should be worth the wait though :D
KonaKaga5600 (1 month ago) Show Hide 0 Marked as spam Reply Where's 2:20 from?
Was this you? I don't really check my YT account much but that bit was from one of the HM. Those 2 were bean & turtle-napped by the big pink bunny and made to go to one of the themeparks. Along the way, while travelling in the bus, Eri fell asleep and Risa woke her up by making a funny noise. The manner in which Kame woke up was incredibly cute!! Oops, I was gushing wasn't I? :P
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Hey hey, I love all your birthday presents. But the best one had to be the posters (GakiKame FTW :P) The Ipod comes close though XD The pic which couldn't be printed is one of my fave KameMame pics too. Aren't they just so adorable in it?
I know I'm soooooooooooo late in wishing you happy birthday. But I'll make it up to you. I have an idea for another fic, KameMame (are you jumping for joy yet)? :lol: I wish I could write it faster but the words just aren't coming. It should be worth the wait though :D
KonaKaga5600 (1 month ago) Show Hide 0 Marked as spam Reply Where's 2:20 from?
Was this you? I don't really check my YT account much but that bit was from one of the HM. Those 2 were bean & turtle-napped by the big pink bunny and made to go to one of the themeparks. Along the way, while travelling in the bus, Eri fell asleep and Risa woke her up by making a funny noise. The manner in which Kame woke up was incredibly cute!! Oops, I was gushing wasn't I? :P
I lurve the fic! As you can tell by my comment :oops:
Yup, that's moi =3 Thanks for letting me know!
There's never too much gushing when it comes to GakiKame! :P
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So here's the final story from the user interaction! And you thought that it would never come XD This is using strab3rrykream's numbers and title. It's a bit short, but not as short as Surprised By These Feelings Inside...
First Touch
Your touch was such a rare thing to me and every time it felt like the first. Shivers of excitement run through me, but there is also something else, something I can’t explain. You know this and you tease me with it. Your hand gliding against my back during dance practise. Your body tantalisingly close to mine in a line-up.
“Is there something wrong, Ai-chan? You look distracted,” you said to me, smirking. I try to look annoyed but my blush gives me away. You begin to walk towards me, your hips swaying hypnotically like a pendulum. Running a finger over my shoulders, you slowly circle me.
“Ahh! Mikitty, what are you doing to my Ai-chan?!” Risa’s voice suddenly calls out from nowhere. I quickly separate myself from you. Risa runs over to me, placing her hands on my shoulders and looking me in the eye. I hear your cackling, but in the distance.
“Ai-chan! Are you okay? Did she do anything?”
I shake my head.
“She really didn’t do anything?”
“She didn’t do anything,” I reassured.
“If you say so…I came to get you because your photo shoot starts in five minutes!”
“Oh, thanks.”
“No problem. Now let’s go!”
Risa grabbed my hand and began to drag me away.
“Don’t space out during the shoot!” Risa commanded in a friendly tone.
I nod my head but I knew that I would be spaced out for the rest of the day. I can still feel your lingering touch on my back and shoulders. Agh, why are you so distracting?! I’ll get my revenge on you Fujimoto! Just you wait and see what Takahashi Ai is capable of!
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WHOOOOO!!!! Thank you so much, KonaKaga!! :heart: Mikitty and Ai-chan!!! :drool: Love how Gaki is so protective! Made my day!!! :inlove:
I wanna see what Ai-chan's capable of!! :twisted:
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OHh. do show us wat Takahashi Ai is capable of! XD XD :twisted: :twisted:
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Just you wait and see what Takahashi Ai is capable of!
DO WANT!!! :rockon:
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Gaki :OMG:
Kameeee :pleeease: don't die pleaseee :tantrum:
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. Ai-chan :hehehe:, show Miki how is the second PIMP :mon nyah: :wahaha:
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“Ahh! Mikitty, what are you doing to my Ai-chan?!”
XD
Just you wait and see what Takahashi Ai is capable of!
We're waiting :P
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Ahh! Mikitty, what are you doing to my Ai-chan?!” Risa’s voice suddenly calls out from nowhere.
You got that right dear Risa XD
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Wow, I've not updated in AGES. This moved back to the third page! xDD
:w00t: I get to do the 100th post!
@strawb3rrykream - Hehe, no problem 8)
@ringo-hime & JFC & Blubber-Nugget - I doubt that I'll do a sequel to this but you can always hope!
@Yankii Heart - XD Second PIMP
@lil_hamz - Very right XD
This story is very vague, short and not that descriptive...just to let you know :sweatdrop:
Even I have no idea what to think about this story :depressed:
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Opinion
It hurts to have you so close yet not mine. I want to reach out, pull you in, hold you close and tell you how much I love you. But I can’t, not when you’re best friends with her as well. I’m not going to risk us and I’m not going to cry; I won’t let myself.
Sometimes I lay in bed wondering what you think and what you feel. You’ve been thinking a lot lately, everyone can see that, but what we can’t see are your thoughts. No amount of questioning can seem to get an answer out of you; your lips are sealed.
You barely ate anything when we ate lunch together today. Whatever you’re thinking about sure is detaching you from the rest of us.
“You’ve been spacing out lately. Want to tell me what’s on your mind?” I asked.
“…” You look at me with a blank expression. “…Maybe…”
You pick up your untouched food and leave. Could you be anymore out of character? I sighed and continued on with my meal.
I walked over to my bag, crouching down to take out a bottle of water. As I lifted it up, a not fell. I picked it up, unfolded it and read it.
Come to my room after practice.
I instantly recognised the handwriting as yours. I quickly stuffed the note back into my bag. Taking a giant mouthful of water, I stood back up and went back to practice.
“So, what did you want me for?” I asked.
“I wanted to talk to you,” you replied.
“Oh, about what?”
“I wanted your opinion on something about something; your opinion is important to me.”
“Ok…”
“Ahh…well….” A blush formed on your cheeks. “I-I’ll just say it simply. I like you.”
“...You want my opinion?”
“I’m sorry! Forget everything that I just said!”
“No, no – don’t worry, it’s ok.” I advanced in your direction until I was standing above you. I inched our faces closer. “This is my opinion.”
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... Woah. ._. Well since I connect practically anything to Kamei...I can see this being GakiKame. xD Or maybe SayuEri? TanaKame!? *Eri has too many relationship possibilities. xD* Either way, it's very cute. :)
(Have you read my updated "Answers"? I included a Niigaki POV if you wanna get your dose of a one-sided GakiKame... *smacks self for self-advertisement* Just thought I'd let you know.)
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XD I do the same!
(I read it and loved it! zomg stupid me, I forgot to post @___@ I shall do that now!)
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Because I'm me, I say it's Takagaki~~~ :lol: But it's so cute, no matter who it is. I like their opinion :yep:
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WOOOOOOOOO!!!
:nya:
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The ending to that was just :drool:
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WOW orsm opinion~ XD XD
i lessthan3 this~ ^^
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My opinion is this.... KameMame fic. That is all :P
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Woah, it's been like 3 and a half months since I updated here. It's moved back all the way to the 4th page. You never thought that you'd see this arear again, huh? :sweatdrop:
I don't bring you a story just yet but I am working on one. I made a small OPV for MM's Alo-Hello! 3.
http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=RKdH7QqFDgM
Bad quality. No idea how to get good quality for youtube >_<
I'll update back here real soon, like tomorrow maybe. And I'll be updating SNHTS soon as well.
HAPPY NEW YEAR! :ptam-glow:
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OMFG I was just thinking about you today!!!! :lol: Wondering where the HELL you have been!! Just kidding, I was just missing you, that's all. :heart:
Will watch OPV now!!!
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I HEAR THE MONITOR BEEPING. SHE'S ALIVE. I REPEAT, SHE'S ALIVE!! Jkjk. :P just having some fun. Nice OPV... By they way, since it's relevant to GakiKame, did you notice that, at one point, Gaki-san slapped Eri's waist/abs? XD While they were in swimsuits nonetheless...
Can't wait for the updates. :)
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Ah! you're back! we missed ya =D
Ooo bubbly opv =D GJ!
watching that made me miss making opvs XD I really gotta get my comp fixed so I can make opvs again! but in the mean time keep up the good work!
oh yeah almost forgot. if you originally saved the vid in reasonably high quality then just add &fmt=18 to the end of the code youtube gives you. that way your clip will load in HQ.
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@strawb3rrykream - I'm honoured! XD
@SxY - Yeah! She slapped her then Eri kinda flinched as if it tickled her... :w00t:
@Sukoshi - I love your OPV's :wub: Yeah, I've known about the &fmt=18 thing, so I tried it, but since I had just uploaded it (which took like 2 hours @__@) it didn't work. But when I checked back on my video this morning, it had the 'watch in high quality' button :w00t: Thanks for the help :)
I'll have a one-shot up soon, look forward to it! :D
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Yeah, double-post, I know.... :sweatdrop: At least they're not on the same day.
Anyways, I was planning to have this story up earlier, but my luck sucks. My internet died and then school started (well I suppose that's not really luck) and I got tons of homework... *sigh* and school JUST started on Monday....
WARNING - Swearing (only appears once)
This is a different kind of style for me. Shorter sentences and a grimer story line. I'm thinking of continuing it, but only if I find enough time.
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It’s Not Death I’m Scared Of
I woke up crying in the dead of night. Again. I’ve not had one decent night’s sleep since I found out about her and Reina. I groped about in the darkness, trying to find my bed side light. Fingers brushing over the switch, I pushed down on it, light flooding my room. I winced, my eyes trying to adjust. I blinked several times rapidly. Taking a deep breath I propped myself up onto my hands. I instantly fell back down, hissing in pain. I curled up and cradled my left arm. The wrist still had bandage around it. I bit my lip, trying to distract myself from the pain in my wrist to the one in my lip. I felt a cold sweat begin to form on my back making me shiver. Gathering my strength back, I sat up. I reached over to the side of my bed and grabbed the musky glass of water that sat on the small bedside table. Placing the glass to my dry lips I took a sip. I instantly scrunched up my face – it tasted of dust. I tried to rid my mouth of the taste as I placed the glass back down. My eye twitched. Why did my life suck so much? I lost the one I loved because I was too scared to ruin our friendship. We’ve always been together right from the start. I didn’t want to be the one who ended it because of my feelings. A tear fell onto my cover. I shook my head and shot out of bed. I wasn’t going to start crying again. Nothing good happened last time I did. Another pain surged through my wrist.
I walked through to the bathroom, taking off my bandage on the way. I grimaced at the sight. The cut was still tender, the blood around it crusty. A dry, deep laugh escaped from me.
“This is what my life’s come down to?” I asked out loud. “This is my life?!”
I rested my hands against the sink. Looking up, I stared at myself in the mirror. My pupils were completely shrunken, almost invisible.
“No wonder she didn’t pick me. I’m a complete mess. There’s nothing special about me! There never has been!” I screamed at myself.
Suddenly, a rush washed over me and I grabbed random objects near me and threw them.
“WHY?!”
I tore down the shower curtain and threw it out of the way. My breathing became harsh, only coming is short, sharp breaths. I span around and again saw myself in the mirror. My rage seemed to peak.
“This is all your fault!” I shrieked.
I stormed to my reflection and punched it, destroying the image. Glass shattered all around me, landing on the tiled floor. I slowly retracted my arm. I could see small fragments of glass sticking out from my flesh. I couldn’t feel it. Tears began to fall again; not of pain, but of frustration and the coldness inside of me. I slumped against the wall, slowly sliding down. Each sob racked my body, making me weaker. I picked up a long shard of broken glass which lay next to me. I raised my injured wrist to it.
“I’m back here again…”
I pressed the glass into my wrist slightly, drawing blood.
“But this time it’ll definitely be the last…”
I leaned my head back, not wanting to watch. I began to tremble, my breathing uneasy.
“I love you…”
I sliced the glass fully against my wrist.
“DON’T!”
My head buzzed. Someone rushed into the bathroom. Who?
“STOP IT!”
I felt light-headed, the blood rushing out of me. I felt their hands grab mine. It was a girl; one of the members. Why were they making it hard on themselves?!
“Get away from me!” I yelled pushing the girl away. She fell back but quickly shot right back up.
“I’m not leaving!”
She grasped my shoulders.
“I’ll call an ambulance! Oh god, you’ve already lost a lot of blood,” she mumbled nervously her hands trembling as she dialled 911. She placed one of her hands on me.
“Hang in the-“
“I SAID GET AWAY FROM ME!” I screamed.
I attempted to push her away with the little power I had left but she was ready this time. She barely moved. She held me against the wall, her phone now abandoned on the floor.
“GET OFF!”
We struggled against each other. I could hear my heart beat in my head. Why couldn’t I just die then and there? I gave one final push but her grip was too strong. My rage burst out all at once. I could still feel the shrapnel in my hand. I let out a wild scream and lunged the glass at her. I could feel the glass meet resistance. A gasp. I stared into her eyes and saw the light in them fade. Silence filled the room, almost seeming to echo. I could feel myself return to normal, the rage escaping me. Pain from all of my injuries washed over me at once. I stared down at my hand which held the shrapnel. I let go. It was firmly lodged inside of her. There was a deafening thump as she fell to the tiled floor. My gaze followed her. She twitched.
“Oh shit…”
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Whoa..... :shocked: Let me guess, the narrator is either Gaki or Kame and the other girl is either Ai-chan or Sayu. Me being me, I lean towards the TakaGaki, no matter how tragic. Freakin scary though, regardless of who it is. :( Can't believe narrator did that. I hope other girl is ok. :cry:
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WAAAAH. T____T *sniffle* So sad...
Well, I, being the ever GakiKame-favoring girl, see this through Risa's eyes. :cry: And based on conversation, it might be Kame who came in... But hey, that's just how I'm playing it in my head. :P
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Oh yea! FREAK OUT!!! ehehe.
that was cool!!! freakishly cool!
Gaki-san going crazy. girl who got sth jabbed in her... Ai-chan. y am i such a TakaGaki fangirl? XD
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Sorry for commenting so late KK. I adore the OPV. How long did you spend making it? I watched it first before viewing the full AH3. In fact, I'm watching it right now :)
It's Not Death I’m Scared Of
*Gasps* My first thought of the identities of the 2 girls in the story were KameMame since well, you're the author :P But later I started wondering if it was possible that they were TakaGaki or KameShige. I hope the 2nd girl didn't die. If she did, then I hope they were indeed TakaGaki or KameShige XD Hee hee.
I hope you find time to update this soon. I'm dying to read the next chapter.
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@strawb3rrykream - I was scared when I was writing this :cry: I didn't want to make it that dark but yeah... :bleed eyes:
@SxY - At least I'm not the only GakiKame favourer (is that even a word? :on study:)
@JFC - :mon wtf:
@ringo-hime - LOL I was reading everybody's shoked comments then you made such an energetic one! XD It's good to have such energy!
@lil_hamz - I think I spent in total like 5 hours or less... I can't really remember *scratches cheek* Ehehe... Thanks :oops:
GakiKame = Me? How lucky can one girl get? :w00t:
I hope you're not dying to read the next chapter like the girls in the story. :shocked
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It's Not Death That I'm Scared Of
Part 2
I collapsed onto the cold and bloody floor next to the girl that lay dying. I felt blood rising up my throat, gradually beginning to trickle out of my mouth. The same seemed to be happening to her. She let out a weak cough and blood splattered out. She looked at me, her eyes filled with fright.
“It hurts…” she mumbled out.
I could feel my eyes begin to sting.
“You idiot!” I yelled at her even though I was less than a meter from her face.
“Why did you have to interfere?!”
She gave a melancholic smile.
“Because I don’t want you to die.”
“I want to die!”
“No you don’t.”
I froze. What?
“Yes, I do! You have no right to say that I don’t!”
“What are you denying? We both know that you don’t want to die.”
I gritted my teeth in frustration.
“I think that the pain is too much for you. It’s making you delusional,” I remarked.
Her laugh was cut short when she began to choke on her own blood. She grasped the area around her stomach in pain. Her hands were smeared in blood, the colour so vivid it hurt to look at it.
“You love life too much to want to die. You’ve never experienced real pain until your best friend and secret crush fell in love with someone that wasn’t you,” she said.
The metallic taste of my blood overflowed my senses. I spat it out.
“Your just over reacting; you’ve never known real pain until now.”
“What do you know about pain and suffering?” I asked bitterly. “Have you ever had your best friend abandon you for something else that she found more important? Have you ever felt that pain when she no longer listens at you? There’s no way you have!”
A look of utter pain was plastered all over her face.
“You’re wrong,” she stated, “I’ve felt the pain of my best friend ignoring me. I’ve felt the pain of her drifting away. I’ve felt the pain of watching her suffer and I’m unable to do anything to help her. I know what that pain feels like!” she shrieked.
I stared at her. She’s experienced the same pain as me? But, she’s always smiling. There’s never once been a hint of her pain. She’s always been the one to lighten up people’s days. How…?
“But the most unbearable pain of all,” she started her eyes capturing mine, locking me in their blood-chilling darkness,” …was when I saw her trying to kill herself.”
“Ehh?” I breathed out.
Tears fell out of her eyes.
“Have you ever felt that pain!? Of course you’ve not! You’ve never even once realised what you were doing to me! I’ve wanted to help you so many times but I couldn’t; you would push me off and lock yourself away! You’ve changed, Gaki-san! I’ve become scared of you and I’ve become unsure of myself! We always told each other when something was wrong. Why didn’t you tell me that you were hurting? Why didn’t you let me help you? W-Why, why-“
Her words stopped, her sobs overthrowing them. I listened to her wails of sadness echo in the small bathroom. In that small span of time an invisible barrier had been created between us that was hard to traverse. Even if I tried to say something, the words wouldn’t come out. They disappeared into the air as if punishing me. And that’s when suddenly reality hit me. I had just tried to kill myself, and now I was taking someone else down with me. Someone that I loved.
“What the hell am I doing…?” I asked out loud my voice fading.
I slowly raised my wrist into view. The fresh blood dripped from the gash onto the floor. My arm was visibly shaking; I was about to lose all feeling in it. Blinking hard, I tried to stare past the black and white dots that were floating about in my vision.
“I’m sorry…” I whimpered in a small voice. I looked into her eyes.
“I’m sorry. I’m sorry. I’m so freaking sorry!” I cried out. I grabbed her hand in mine. “I’ve been so selfish. I was just so scared. I knew that I was losing myself! I wanted the happiness to come back! I really did, but I was so far down in the darkness!”
My tears mixed into the bloody mixture as I looked at her emotionless face, her eyes closed.
“I’m so happy…” she breathed out in a barely audible voice. “You’re really mature, Gaki-san. Unlike me…”
She gasped for air.
“What are you talking about? You’re the mature one!”
“…H-Haha…tha-thank-you.”
Her eyes closed again. I felt my head drop back to the ground again, but I never let go of her hand. We lay there dying together; these were our final moments.
I realised that I had never known the true meaning of love until now. I had realised that my friendship with Ai-chan had trapped me in a box; a box that I had only managed to break through now. I didn’t love Ai-chan, and Ai-chan didn’t love me. Well, not like that anyway. She was still my best friend. But now I knew what I didn’t before; love is unconditional. Even if you try to avoid it, it will always come back to keep you company.
I could barely feel the pulse of the girl next to me as I held her hand.
“..I-I..I love you, Gaki-san,” she said, tears falling down her face. I felt a smile creep onto my face.
“I l-love you too.”
I could feel myself fading quickly, but I kept myself going from the gentle squeeze that her hand gave. The sound of sirens filed our ears.
“I’m scared, Gaki-san.”
I squeezed her hand back.
“D-Don’t be. I’ll be with you no matter what. Even if that means searching forever, then I will… You’ve always been there for me, s-so I’m going to always be there for you...”
The sound of many running footsteps could be heard. I felt my eyes begin to close. I tried hard to open my eyes and I was granted with a glimpse of the girl. I smiled as I felt my eyes close themselves for the final time. The door to my room burst open. My breath left me, only one thing escaping my lips.
“Eri…”
That’s when everything began to disappear. I only remember one last thing…
“Paramedics! We received a call about an attempted suicide-…”
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[bgcolor=#000000]Ok, I REALLY need to write something that's not GakiKame V___V
Everyone's probably annoyed at me :sweatdrop:...... :(
I guess you readers must be GakiKame fans though.... I should probably try and reach out to other readers.
OK. Here's my plan.
1) Update SNHTS
2) Write a different pairing fanfic.
I'm not sure what order, but keep an eye out. The one-shot will probably come first. But it'll probably not be a one-shot since I always end up continuing them...O___o[/bgcolor]
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That was deep. :err: I can't believe it. Brain is not functioning properly now. :badluck: I think it's so profoundly refreshing that Kame said all those things though. She's absolutely right. That's one of the things I always think about when I hear about suicide. The ppl are only thinking of their own suffering and not the suffering that they will cause the ppl who care about them if they go through with it.
I want to believe that the paramedics save them. :mon cute:
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it's awesome
I want to believe that the paramedics save them.
me too... so that there'd be a possibility of part 3 :grin:
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;_; WAAAAAAH. More sad GakiKame... Your fic really put the spotlight on mature Eri, though. Great job. ;)
Hey I don't mind that you write nothing but GakiKame/KameMame. But that's just me. :P At least you're going to be experimenting with new pairings. I seem stuck in my Eri-central pairing world. (Plus TakaGaki.) :sweatdrop:
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:shocked
:cry: that was good and sad and deep!
paramedics please save them
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Ok, I REALLY need to write something that's not GakiKame V___V
Everyone's probably annoyed at me ......
Dame! DAME!! DAME!!!!!!!!!
You must continue to write just GakiKame and noone is annoyed at you. If they are I'll steal all of Sukoshi's Hello Kitty dolls and missle them that direction :P This way I can save Shiichan and help you. Good idea no? XD
This chapter was so heartwrenching! :cry: Poor Eri got a hole in her for trying to save the person she loved. Bad Mame for not realizing sooner that her affections were directed towards the wrong person all along. I hope they get a 2nd shot at things. They can't both die!! Not yet! :rofl:
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It's Not Death That I'm Scared Of
Part 2
:OMG: :gyaaah: :OMG: :gyaaah: :OMG: :gyaaah:
Well, if you want to branch out and try new ships, that's cool. It doesn't necessarily mean that you need to stop writing GakiKame. :)
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@strawb3rrykream - Domo. It's Eri's "hatachi" thinking.
@kRisZ - Thanks. Sadly for everbody wanting it, there will be no part 3. I decided to leave it up to your imagination :)
@SxY - LOL, you're not the only one stuck in an Eri-central pairing world! Seems like GakiKame isn't the number one pairing around here, but that only increases my love for them! :farofflook:
@shadowolf8 - :heart:
@lil_hamz - :w00t: Wow, someone's a GakiKame addict! I wonder why...? :P j/k
That laughing emote you added at the end made me laugh :lol:
@JFC - True. I don't think that I'll ever be able to stop writing GakiKame! :oops:
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Jump
My heart was beating so fast and hard that I thought I was going to faint. Each time I looked over the edge I felt dizzy. I kept my hand firmly wrapped around anything that would stop us from falling. Hit the ground from here and you’d die. I felt Eri’s arms tensely wrap around me. I could feel her whole body shake in fear. She buried her head into my shoulder, tears soaking into my clothes. It seemed like at any moment her legs were going to give out. I knew mine were threatening to. I held her to me with my free arm, stroking her back, trying to calm her down. Her whole body immediately leant on me, her head nervously shuffling on me.
“REINA!”
“ERI!”
I could hear the scared voices of our friends screaming out our names. I didn’t want to do this at all, but I had to be strong for Eri. I had to show her that I wanted to be the one to protect her. This was it. Everything seemed to disappear around me and Eri. It was just the both of us in each other’s embrace.
“I believe in you,” Eri exhaled.
Her grip around me tightened and I could feel her grabbing onto my shirt. Our heartbeats were the only noises echoing in our ears. I let go of the wire and wrapped my arm around her. I held her closer to me than I ever had before.
‘All I want is to be with her. I want us to soar forever.’ The thoughts resonated loudly and clearly in my head.
“Even in this sky, I will always be with you,” I stated quietly for only her ears.
We both fell, heading straight for the ground, but we never let go of each other. The air went whistling by us, racing through our hair. She let out two short screams but quickly fell silent. Her eyes connected with mine, our faces only centimetres apart. In that second we had exchanged something; something that was indescribable. I don’t know what it was and I can’t tell if it was good or bad. But something about the way she was looking at me made me lose restraint. I needed to say it now.
“I love you.”
My words seemed to be lost on the wind, her confused expression only embarrassing me.
Suddenly we seemed to slow down. Her mouth opened.
“What…?”
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S-s-s-s-skydiving?? Please tell me that is the case or else they would end up dead =.="
BUT! what actually got me to read this was your title: KonaKaga's Nursery [Jump (Not GakiKame! XD)]
XD the not GakiKame factor was like :: shock :: for me XD
Really good but so short!!
and I have a feeling that Eri might reject Tanakacchi ><
especially with the way she was so confused >__>
Nuoooo I am a firm TanaKame believer <__< :: repeats softly to self ::
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:shocked
:OMG: WHERE ARE THEY!? WHY'D THEY FALL!? UWAAAAAH!!! *freaks out*
TanaKame, hm? I was kinda surprised when I saw "Not GakiKame", but the first thing that came to mind was TakaGaki. xD But I have really good peripheral vision, so I accidentally spoiled myself while reading because I caught the bolded "Reina" and "Eri". :sweatdrop:
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Jump
Jeez, that's a HELL of a way to do a raburabu confession. :O
What the frak are they doing skydiving anyway? :?
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WHAT?!?! :shocked please tell me they're skydiving!!
btw YAY i hope this is a tankamei :wub: fic XD i saw how you put jump not GakiKame lol
but they are a VERY popular pairing :D
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“I love you.”
My words seemed to be lost on the wind, her confused expression only embarrassing me.
:cry:
Suddenly we seemed to slow down. Her mouth opened.
“What…?”
:lol:
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Well, that was...confusing. :lol: First I thought it was one of those suicide-jumping-off-a-cliff things but then everyone else started talking about skydiving. :D So I'm gonna go with skydiving cuz I'm not sure how much more dying of characters I can take before I cry.
The content itself was rather bittersweet. :heart:
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@KK: Hmmmm, I wonder why too. You know you have to claim a big part of the overall credit for it. ALong with Shiichan.
The first thing I thought of when reading 'JUMP' was the girls were bungee jumping! Am I right? :D
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It's Not Death That I'm Scared Of Part 1 & 2
Holy goodness gracious! :o That was... very hard to read, incredibly sad and so very very deep. :(
But I gotta say, the thing that really hurt my heart this when I read it was I realised that I had never known the true meaning of love until now. I had realised that my friendship with Ai-chan had trapped me in a box; a box that I had only managed to break through now. I didn’t love Ai-chan, and Ai-chan didn’t love me.
OMG CRUEL!!!! I thought my heart was about to explode then, and not in a good way :cry:
As much as I hate GakiKame as a pairing, I still read, enjoy and appreciate your fics every time you write them... and to be honest, 'One Week' really made me change my tune :heart: So don't stop writing GakiKame if it feels write, coz if I'm not annoyed by it, then I'm sure no one else is :P
Jump
Short and sweet describes this perfectly <3
I'm glad everyone else said Sky-diving, I would have never thought of that, but it gives it a much lighter feeling so I'll agree with them :P I love how the ending was so abrupt and straightforward with the "What...?", totally made me laugh XD
Oh & I apologise for the bump :oops: I've been catching up on everything I missed and I just couldn't pass up the chance to comment on 'Its not death that I'm scared of' (great title btw!)
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@KizuRai - LOL I'm glad that I caught your attention? XP
@SxY - Yup, you're vision is number one :twothumbs Don't worry, sometimes I spoil stories I read by readin ahead as well :sweatdrop:
@JFC - The question is did she do it to confess? :X
@shadowolf8 - I've never really been a fan of TanaKame but I decided to give it a shot to see if that would make me like them...
@kRisZ - :mon ignore:
@strawb3rrykream - Maybe it is.... :dizzy:
@lil_hamz - Continue reading to find out...
@lolli - OMG you HATE GakiKame?! :shocked Well...I guess it's okay since you're able to read my GakiKame fics :X I forgive you :P
Thanks for bumping actually. I nearly forgot to reply to everyone. I was going to yesterday but things came up... :kneelbow:
Ok, I really don't want to announce this but I have to...
I have exams coming up and I don't have enough time to update this thread and Mechaike Academy at the moment. So, don't expect any updates here for a few weeks.... sorry:cry:
I'll tell you the the deal with Jump though....
[bgcolor=#000000] They were in fact bungee jumping. GJ lil_hamz! *thumbs-up*
I can see why some of you thought sky-diving, I would have thought that too. But then there was the whole thing where Eri and Reina could hear the other members yelling. I kinda figured that the other members wouldn't yell at them if they were right next to them in the plane :X [/bgcolor]
Again, I apologize :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
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Just a small GakiKame video I made one or two months ago. Nothing big. I'll try and post a story ASAP.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KxYUsJ3UlZM
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OMG thats so sad T_T
But damn <o< Kamei's so HOT xD
I want a Kamei for me ._. I know is silly, but I want to xD
I really like the video T_T even if I'm not into GakiKame that much =) I really like it x3
:twothumbs
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:O
Almost sounds like a "farewell." :cry:
I'll try and post a story ASAP.
No rush. Better to have quality than speed. :yep:
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Beautiful OPV~ :inlove: They both look so gorgeous! So sad though... :cry:
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UWAAAAH. YOu had my stomach in knots because of that. Where'd the background music come from? *likes it*
Oh my god. This kind of reminds me of my 2nd fic "Answers". Except it's GakiKame forward. :O I can't wait to see it. Like JFC said, quality over speed. Good luck writing!!
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wah! when i saw the title "OPV - Save Me" I was like...uSO! cause I actually have an unreleased opv file named that XD so I was thinking wow...don't tell me our minds are linked! hehe turns out they are totally different (cause I tend to not make sad stuff...or maybe I just don't know how XD) but after watching yours...the idea intrigues me greatly! You did a really great job setting the mood in the opv. I want to read the story *___*!
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the video looks so good and it's so sad! =( Poor Eri and Risa! The fic looks promising. I can't wait. Do your best. I'm not all that into Gakikame, but I do think they're cute together even though I think Risa should be with Ai. lol I love sad and angst stories. :D
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@Haruka - Let's see...your total comes to all of the money in the world. Would you like to pay with debit, credit or cash?
@JFC - Well, it's done! Hopefully it's good O__O
@strawb3rrykream - *hug* There, there *hands hot chocolate* Drink it all up.
@SxY - Thanks. I replied to you on YT but I'll post the name of the song here as well. It's "Kagami Dake Chigaku Class Ni Nachatta..." from the anime Lucky Star.
@Sukoshi - OMG *glomps* SUKOSHI! :w00t:
Well, there is that saying "Great minds think alike" :P I wanna see that OPV *hint hint*
@writerjunkie - It's weird, lots of people don't seem to like GakiKame all that much yet they read my stories... :huhuh I hope you like the story!
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Save Me
I felt the warm sand gently cuddle my feet with each step I took across it. Here I was, at a beach, staring out at the sunset which had dyed the sky a mellow orange. The calming sound of the waves gently over lapping each other graced my ears. My breath suddenly hitched and I felt my lungs painfully contract. Coughing, I tried to try and clear my air ways. Quickly as it had come, the attack disappeared. Gasping, I gulped in as much air as I could. These attacks were getting worse. I had secretly sneaked out of the house earlier during the day to go and visit my doctor…
Only bad news awaited me. “Tonight” he had said. I felt a tear fall as I crashed onto my knees. Clenching my fists, I punched the sand with all my force. I could feel my knuckles stinging from the impact.
“…why?” I asked out loud. “WHY?!”
I punched the ground again.
“It’s only been a month…” I noted in disbelief.
It had only been one month since I was diagnosed with this illness. The doctors… they didn’t know what I had. They tried everything, but I just kept getting worse. No matter what medication they gave me, the disease was too strong.
“Everyone…”
Thoughts of everyone I had met in my life flashed through my mind. Sayu, Ai-chan, Yaguttsuan, Abe-san, Reina, Gaki-san, Fujimoto-san, Koharu, JunJun, Mittsui-
Gaki-san.
I bit my lip. The one person who was there for me when things got rough. The one person who made me laugh when I was sad. The one person who showed me the world. The one person I loved more than anything. The one person I fell madly in love with. The one person I couldn’t confess to.
Hand shaking, I slipped it into a small pocket that was attached to my white dress. Finding a small piece of paper and pencil I began to write. I tried my hardest to write as neatly as I could with my tears blurring my vision. Why did I have to fall in love? She was making this too hard for me. I looked up at the horizon as I folded up the note. The sun had nearly fully sunken behind the sea.
“It’s time…” I mumbled to myself.
Then, right on que, I could feel myself fading away from the world. Everything began to spin as it lost its colour. The only things that had colour now were my memories.
“Arigatou, minna…”
I was scared. So scared. I didn’t want to die! Why did I have to have this stupid disease?! What did I do?! I felt myself stumble a few steps towards the ocean.
‘I’m scared, Gaki-san… Save me.’
I looked down at the water which ran over my feet. I heard rushing footsteps.
“KAME!”
I turned around. I felt my vision clear for a moment. I instantly knew who it was. I smiled. I could die happy now.
“Gaki-san!” I yelled with what little power I had left.
Suddenly my legs collapsed and I fell into the water. I never let go of the note in my hand.
“KAME!”
A few seconds later I felt her arms around me; cradling me.
“Kame! Oi, Kame! Say something! What’s wrong?!” she exclaimed from a distance of less than 30cm. Sure was like her. I weakly opened my eyes.
“G-Gaki-san…” I croaked out.
“What’s wrong, Kame?! I’m calling an ambulance!” she screamed her eyes brimming with tears. She held her phone to her ear. I slowly raised up my hand.
“D-Don’t, n-not enough time…F-For you…”
She dropped her phone in the sand and took the note from my hand, quickly opening it.
“G-Gaki-san, gomen ne… for never telling you that I’m ill.
There’s no way that I could have; I didn’t w-want you to worry… But most of all, I didn’t want you to lose your smile.
So that’s why please… forgive me,” she read out through her burning tears in a voice that screamed with disbelief.
“Kame, what is this?!” she demanded. I didn’t reply.
“KAME!”
I could only smile at her.
“K-Kame… Kame, Kame, Kame…”
Her tears fell and rolled down my face.
“You can’t go… I love you…you can’t…” she begged, “please…”
“I-I love you to…”
I felt my eyes loll shut. Everything began to fade away… even Gaki-san’s voice.
“Kame, don’t go! I need you! …onegai…”
Everything went white and deathly quiet. The last thing I remember was the soft touch and sweet taste of her lips.
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awww so sad! Damn it! Poor Risa, and Eri. =( yeah a lot of people do tend to read it cuz you're a pretty good writer! lol So they can get past the GakiKame pairing I think. lol I can't wait for the next chapter, if they're is a next chapter. There is right?
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Awwww~~~ :cry: Eri-chan!!!!!!! *cries*
*drinks hot chocolate* Damn, I needed that. :P
I also think ppl read your stories b/c you're good! I know I do. But at the same time, you've also "broadened my horizons" (remember? :grin: ) and I personally don't dislike GakiKame. I think they are cute together and everything, they just aren't my top pairing. Like to me, they're better off as great friends, rather than lovers. :D
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UWAAAAH!!!! :cry: Kame!!! Risa!!! *sobs more and huddles self in a corner* ;_; So...so sad...
Holy crud, no way... It's from Lucky Star? :O Maybe I should have followed that series after all...
Aw, I'm always here to read. GakiKame ftw~ I agree, GakiKame isn't all that popular... I can't help but love them, though. (Then again, I love practically any Eri pairing. Gaki-san just happens to be at the top. Damn it Eri, your relations with other people are just too much! :P)
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I just saying that I have the money to go xD not all the money in the world xD
Cash 8)
But well... close case =3
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T_______________T ERI... DON'T!!!! damn u_u why Eri... why?? T_T I love you too xD
I'm agree with strawb (sorry for the short name) they are pretty cute together but they aren't at the top, just like friends very good ones *.*
Maybe I'm a kind of dreamer... or maybe still a kid... but I just thing that... in the world it will be always exist this kind of friendship, that you could possible give your life for a dearest friend...
I don't know... maybe I'm just a dreamer... x3 don't pay attention to that xD
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I really like how you write... it's quite amazing... but real in some view... or it's just me xD
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wah! when i saw the title "OPV - Save Me" I was like...uSO! cause I actually have an unreleased opv file named that XD so I was thinking wow...don't tell me our minds are linked! hehe turns out they are totally different (cause I tend to not make sad stuff...or maybe I just don't know how XD) but after watching yours...the idea intrigues me greatly! You did a really great job setting the mood in the opv. I want to read the story *___*!
I wanna watch your OPV!!! :D
Save Me
Awww poor Eri...she dies again XD But I liked the story a lot. It's heartwrenching! :cry: Your writing always makes me feel sad and touched at the same time. I'm happy to see you are updating more often. This makes me a happy Hamzy :)
The OPV was awesome too of course. That is a given. I was so sucked into the whole sadness, melody, olden feel of the colors that I sniffed a little. Then for some reason KAME!! in capital letters made me laugh. I'm so sorry cuz that should so not have happen :oops: Write more one-shots please!! I wanna be buried under a ton of your fics :muffin:
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:cry: wow! that was heart wrenching!! :cry:
poor Eri and Risa. right when you were listing ppl, i read over and saw Eri's name wasn't there and then when she said Gaki-san last i was like :shocked 'no!' :cry: Eri can't die!!
idk but i've notice in some of the fics ive read *don't member which ones* Eri seems to be the one is is either really sick or dies :cry: :cry:
lol i thought i'd to point that out XD lol but excellent fic, well written, i love the little note.
Ganbare~~ can't wait to read more from you :wub:
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NUUU!
another death. :cry:
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Save Me
Can't comment too much now because afternoon classes have started. This emoticon pretty much sums it up though...
:pleeease:
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aww, another ouches story for the night :cry:
what will happen to Risa after the I love you too and the kiss.?. :(
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awww...I tried to be prepared because I knew this would be sad....but it was still so sad :pleeease: Eriiiii~
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Quick post before I go to bed:
One Week Epilogue - One Night
Posted on LJ since it's a perv.
http://community.livejournal.com/renairev/76959.html (http://community.livejournal.com/renairev/76959.html)
Night :heart:
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OMFG KONAKAGA!!!! I LOVE YOU!!! XD Haven't read it yet but I'm just about to! :P Need my perv fix, withdrawl for this ain't pretty. XD
Edit: Oh jeez, that was so :drool: I giggled when Eri was feeling weird in "that" area. :lol: And then I blushed like hell for the rest of the story! XD Great job though, it was quite hot. *fans self to ease the redness of my cheeks* :D
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OMG Eri's first time :drool:
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I read it too!!! And boy was it intense. Make me feel so hot!!! The weather is already enough to kill and with this fic too?? GAH........ *dies*
The story was incredibly long, great IMO. And because I was reading slowly to savor it, it really took me quite a bit of time :lol:
Hee hee, I still can't get over how awesome the fic was. I wish you had time to write more :( Why must there be horrible things called school!! *angry* LOL
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O M G
It's been 7 months since I last posted an entry in here :shocked
Thanks to everyone who has ever read my thread and my stories. Looking back now and reading all of them, I feel proud of myself. At the time when I wrote these pieces I couldn't stand the way that they sounded. But once months have passed and I forget about the piece and go back and read it, it always sounds so much better :sweatdrop:
But, I thought that I'd just let you guys know (or whoever is reading this) that I'm planning to write a new story this week.
I'm not going to lie; over the past few months I've lost my enthusiasm in writing and Morning Musume. I've also become a fan of SNSD (Girls' Generation) but I can't stop myself from checking H!O for all the latest updates on what's happening with H!P. I am still deep down a true MM fan. If it weren't for MM I would never know the amount of Japanese I know today, and for that I am truly thankful :oops: (Not to mention how sexy uhhh mouth-watering awesome GakiKame are :P )
For all of my readers out there who have felt abandoned, offended, annoyed, angry in any way by my sudden disappearance, I am honestly sorry :kneelbow:
I'm hoping that maybe I could have the same amount of readers or more who used to read my stories! But for now, my goal is just to fall back into the rhythm of writing again and to make sure that my writing ability is up to par.
If there is any way in your hearts that you could forgive me, then I would be elated :oops:
For now, this has been KonaKaga, hope to talk to some of you later this week :)
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it's alright~! X3*hugs* sometimes people just need a break and need to let the creative-ness come freely^^
and~ i cant wait~! X3
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Wow, you're back, kinda. I definitely missed you, but I understand.
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New reader here... very new H!P fan and I would normally NEVER stray from an IshiYoshi story, but I was interested and your drabbles/ficlets weren't too long, so I decided to check out these other pairings I've avoided all this time...
And have to say I'm very impressed. For a youngster (compared to most of us anyway :nervous), you write really well! Just enough detail; not to little, not too much. Flowing, expressive and just really interesting... regardless of the pairing... (I don't really mind here, since all my attention usually goes to Rika and Yossie... so anything here is fine). I'm really starting to warm up to GakiKame though. :heart:
It's a pity you've lost the same spirit to write... even sadder that you seem to be YET another convert to K-pop (c'mon, seriously, Japanese entertainment > all other entertainment), but glad that you've decided to come back and continue. :cow:
Looking forward to the next update! :love:
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@kawaii beam - Thank-you so much! :D Great to see you again!
@rndmnweird - Thank-you for understanding AND missing me :heart:
@Beecubed - Wow, that really means a lot to me and I'm very pleased that you're starting to warm up to GakiKame! (What's not to love? :twisted:)
WARNING: SWEARING (Just for those that care XD)
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The In-Between
My breath hitched as my eyes shot open and I woke up. I could feel my body go tense, a heavy layer of sweat covering me. I quickly began to try and calm myself by taking deep breaths, but I couldn't get rid of the image. I turned onto my back and placed my arm over my forehead as I stared up at the blank ceiling.
"That dream again..." I breathed out.
Ever since I was young, I've been able to see things that other people can't. Things that aren't really alive, but they have all the traits that define "living". Even though I say 'things', it's more like people. Don't get me wrong, they're not the living dead; far from it. I don't quite know how to explain. They're like a whole other race of being that live with us on this Earth, but we can't see them... except for me. Why? I'm not sure, but it doesn't bother me anymore. I'm so used to these beings that sometimes I get them mixed up with humans. Yes, sometimes I mistake them for humans even though they have some animal features and slightly glow.
"Eri?" I asked out into the darkness of my room.
Nothing happened. I let out a weak laugh and slid my arm over my eyes. Tears fell down my face to my lips where it felt like they tried to get rid of my weak smile. I lay there weeping.
"Who am I kidding? She doesn't even exist," I lied to myself.
More tears fell and I wasn't going to stop them. They streaked down my face, leaving a burning trail.
"FUCK!" I yelled with a tear-stained voice. "FUCK!"
"Risa."
I could still hear her voice reply in my mind. I still remembered her face, every single detail. Her sparkling eyes, her cute little fang, her hair...her lips.
"Why you?!" I screamed.
It had been three weeks since I has last had any contact with her. Two weeks since I found out that she had been taken. Taken by those bastards!
I bit my lip as I remembered what Eri's older sister, Ai-chan had told me.
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As I collapsed onto the sofa, I couldn't get rid of the uneasy feeling I'd been having all day. I had been able to shrug it off for most of the day, but I couldn't help but wonder. Did I forget to do something important? Maybe it was my time of the month.... Once again, shrugging off the uneasy feeling that covered my whole body, I could feel myself slipping away into sleep.
I shivered as I began to dream, it was horrible. I was surrounded by darkness and all that I could hear were the painful screams of a girl...of Eri.
"ERI!!" I would scream.
I could feel her pain seeping into me. My whole body ached, unbearably so. It felt like I was being killed from the inside out. I threw up blood over and over again as each throb of pain weakened me. I wanted to die, to escape the pain, but I couldn't. No matter how much I tried, I couldn't wake up from the nightmare. Not until Eri's blood-stained body flashed in front of me and she screamed, tears pouring down her face.
I screamed as I shot up awake from the sofa. The tears wouldn't stop.
"Eri...no....Eri...." I whimpered. I was suddenly aware of the faint blue glowing figure in front of me. Tears blurred my vision.
"Eri?" I asked out in disbelief.
"Gaki-san!" the voice called out. I instantly recognised it.
"Ai-chan..."
"G-Gaki-san...t-they took her...they took Eri! They found out about you and her, s-so they burst in last night a-a-and..." her lip quivered. I was frozen in place. My blood went ice cold. I felt like I was going to throw up.
"WHAT? WHAT DID THEY DO TO HER?!" I screamed desperately. The dream flashed in my head. Her blood-chilling screams of pain.
"They raped her! Right in front of our eyes! We tried to help her but they bound us and we couldn't use any magic! They began to h-hack off her feline ears and her tail. I-It was horrible....I-I-I..." Ai-chan wailed, her voice cracking.
"N-No..NO!!"
"...I-I-I'm so s-sorry Gaki-san...."
"NO!!!" I screeched.
"T-They're going to kill her."
"NO!! I CAN'T HEAR YOU!" I screamed while crushing my ears with my hands.
It was the worst night of my life.
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"It's all my fault...." I whimpered. "If I just hadn't fallen in love with you. If I just hadn't been able to communicate with you....If I just hadn't existed..."
My body shook.
"If I just hadn't existed," I repeated, "...If I just hadn't existed."
My eyes were bloodshot and stinging, but none of that bothered me. I slowly began to move, edging out of my bed, my whole body aching. I had nothing to remind me of Eri, only my memories. No human camera could catch her image, her beautiful face.
Shivering, I ran from my room, from my apartment, and from my pain. The rain pounded down, drenching me in seconds. My tears merged with the rain. If only I could merge my world with Eri's. I ran out onto the road without any second thoughts.
I wanted this.
No... I needed this.
It all happened so fast. I couldn't feel the pain. Nothing can ever compare to what I felt in my dreams; the slow torture, the blood chilling screams.
I opened my eyes and felt the bitter taste of blood wash over my tongue. I heard the screeching of wheels before all fell silent apart from the slow patter of the rain hitting the tar. The cold rain made me lonely and only one person could fill that empty space. More tears fell. I lolled my head to the side, my last look at Earth as I knew it. My breath hitched. I scoffed. This was a joke, right?
"Now I'm hallucinating, again," I choked out staring at the glowing figure. Those ears, that tail, that figure... They stepped towards me.
"Risa."
Eri's voice replayed in my mind, each time louder. The figure stood above me. As they slowly bent down I could now fully see their face. She was smiling so innocently.
"E..Eri..," I breathed out. She smiled and stood back up.
"Yo," she sweetly greeted.
"Eri...I thought that you were..."
She only smiled.
"Am I dead?" I asked.
She let out a small laugh and shook her head.
"No, Risa, you're not dead," she replied.
"Am I still in the human world?"
Again, she shook her head. So, if I wasn't dead but not in the human world, then....
"Did I transition?"
"No."
"Eri...this doesn't make any sense. If I'm not dead, but not in either of our world's, then where am I?"
She giggled.
"Honestly Risa, I'm here as well, you should be asking "where are WE". By the way, come here, I want to show you something."
"What? Can't you see that I'm lying here dy-" I stopped speaking half-way. I could actually feel my body, and it wasn't hurting. I glanced down to look at my body and I was perfectly fine.
"But- Huh?"
I shoot up, confused.
"EHH?!" I waved my arms about and ran in a circle, trying to make myself believe that I really was fine. "This doesn't make any sense, Eri!" I walked over to her.
"It didn't make any sense to me either," she said before signalling for me to walk over, "until I saw this."
I felt my breath hitch as I looked out off the bridge we had come to be standing on. A huge field of gold was engulfing the land, making it glow perfectly in the warm sunlight. My eyes nearly popped out of my head when I saw my race and Eri's race chasing each other, playing, laughing.
"B-But I thought that I was the only one who could see your race," I stuttered out in disbelief as I heard the joyful laughs of the little children and adults.
"Me too."
Eri took me down to the field of gold and we stood there, a small breeze cooling our skin. Smiling at me, Eri playfully stuck her tongue out at me, enticing me to chase her. I obliged. Catching her, she obviously not running at her full potential, I gently tugged on her arm, causing her to spin and fall down. Embracing her, we both softly rolled down the small hill, laughing. Landing underneath her, I felt a true smile come to my face. I felt a strong, tingling sensation on my hand. It was Eri. We looked at each other, deeply staring into the others eyes. Leaning down, Eri caught my lips with hers in a sweet kiss that had a power that surged through my whole body. We separated and I was shocked to see tears falling from her eyes, but with a smile on her face.
"Risa, we're in the in-between. We can live together here forever," she choked out happily past her tears. I smiled sweetly up at her as I began to stroke her hair.
"Un," I nodded, "RisaEri, together forever."
I placed my hand on her cheek. I beamed the best smile I could and gently pulled her head closer. I leant into her ear and whispered the most important sentence in my life.
"I love you, more than life itself."
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(i_i) so sad and happy at the same time... i'm ubber glad that you're back!*hugs*
and for somereason a cursing risa seemed a bit odd...then again it is risa XD
cant wait for ur next one~! >3<
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You updated!!! :heart:
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It was kind of hard to stomach... especially the part when Ai-chan tells Risa what had happened to Eri... poor Eri.. :cry: I'm a person with much imagination, so while I was reading that I was assaulted with some devastating images there... :(
Talk about gloomy/angst.. you're really good at writing this kind of stuff. >.< Probably a bit emo for me, but the ending more than made up for it.
To finally find a place where they can love each other without fear. The In-Between - I really like that sound of it! But yeah, the ending scene... just.. so sweet. You can sense how much at peace they finally are... awwwww.. :wub:
A greatly written too. Well done! :twothumbs
Looking forward to your next update..
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Oooh this is interesting :w00t: Though I'm not really a fan of GakiKame, I really enjoy your fics :heart:
So Eri is the otherworldly being that Risa can see and later fall in love with. Somehow I can visualise Eri with the ears and tail XD(Ai too! :inlove:)
"I love you, more than life itself."
If this doesn't scream fluff, I don't know what else does :wub:
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Erm I think I want to curl up a little...to be honest, I was feeling queasy during most of the story :sweat:
But! I enjoyed the ending part...though I think they really are dead and in their own idea of heaven.
This story most definitely leaves an impact with all of it's emotions.
(on a random note: the concept of alien-cat-turtle amuses me greatly...reminds me of haromoni Eri with the cute ears XD)
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"They raped her! Right in front of our eyes!
:mon freeze:
"I love you, more than life itself."
:heart: :heart: :heart:
HAPPY HOLIDAYS :mon santa4:
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poor Eri, everyone always totures her. Love the story though!
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ERI~~!!!!!! :cry: :cry: :cry:
I don't know at which point I started to tear but I know I did cuz my vision turned blurry. I'm so happy that you're back :welcome although you always make me cry :P Now I just hope you will stick around for a long, long time and write loads more KameMame fics. You're my only hope for a turtle and bean fic other than Shii-chan and I expect she should be busy with...*ahem* *shhhh* It's a secret ;)
Although they had to stay in the in-between, at least they are together. And this makes a great bittersweet ending. :heart:
KK saikou!! KameMame Saikou!!
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HEY GUYS AND GIRLS :D
How've you all been?
Life has been so busy here... D: And now with school starting again, it's going to be a tough year. All my classes are either advanced or grade 12. Apparently grade 11 is the most important year because that's the year that universities look at :shocked I'll do my best! :panic:
So, this is just a quick little songfic that I wrote. The fic is based off the song "I Wanna Sex You Up" which I heard from GLEE.
Glee Cast - I Wanna Sex You Up (HQ) [FULL SONG] (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Csv2zqfAxeQ#ws)
Hope you like it :D
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I Wanna Sex You Up
Ai let out an exasperated breath, it appearing in a small puff before disappearing. The night was unexpectedly cold and dressed only in a skirt and long sleeve shirt, Ai was freezing. Standing in front of the two floor household, she unconsciously pressed the doorbell. She had been to this house so many times, it was practically her second home. Everything just came naturally to her when she was here. Wrapping her arms back around her body, Ai waited for the door to open. She smiled. She heard the usual sounds of the rushing footsteps down the stairs, the loud thumps as one tried to regain footing after sharply turning towards the doorway. Click. The door unlocked and opened. Ai smiled. An adorably childish smile was shot back at her.
"Come in~" said the relaxed girl. Stepping aside to let Ai in, she hid behind the door.
"Ojamashimasu~" Ai called out.
Stepping in, Ai was bombarded with warmth. Not only from the warm air in the house, but also from the body which had attached itself to her. The door shutting, Ai smiled. Slipping off her shoes, the two girls stood in the doorway. Reaching her arms back, Ai wrapped her arms around the girl.
"I missed you, Ai-chan."
"I missed you too."
Letting go of her grip around the girl, Ai turned around to face her. Before the girl could do anything, Ai placed her lips on hers. A little yelp of surprise was let out, but Ai could feel her smiling. Breaking apart, the two stared in each other's eyes, smiles covering their faces. The girl let out a small giggle before wrapping her arm around Ai's and taking her through.
"Mumz and the family are out," the girl informed. Pulling out two mugs, she began making hot chocolate - a drink that was very well welcomed on a cold night.
"Oh, ok. Your sister is doing pretty well, huh?" Ai replied.
"Of course she is! But then again, she won't stop talking about you... then again, she's always known about our relationship..."
"Well, she's very insightful."
"I guess that's one way you could put it..."
The girl trailed off as she brought over the hot chocolate.
"French vanilla?" Ai questioned. The girl smiled.
"Just how you like it," the girl teased with a wink. Smirking, Ai took a drink. Immediately setting her drink down, Ai let out a little manly scream of pain.
"AHHH!"
"Ai-chan, what happened?!"
"I burnt my tongue..."
Walking right in front of Ai, the girl leaned forward and joint their lips. Opening her mouth, Ai gave the girl entry. Sticking out her tongue, Ai felt the girl begin sucking on it.
'Mmm, she tastes so good,' Ai thought as she felt the girl's tongue explore her mouth. It wasn't until they were both desperate for air that they broke apart. Panting, the girl asked, "I-is your tongue b-better?"
Ai mindlessly nodded, still slightly exasperated. The girl's face turned a bright pink, and she let out a shy laugh.
"Oh, 'I almost forgot'! There's this English song that I wanted you to translate for me..."
"Ok."
The girl smirked. Holding her drink, she began to walk towards the stairs.
"I really have no idea what they're saying~"
"Haha, I'm pretty sure you know a few of the words," Ai replied as she picked up her hot chocolate and followed the girl to the living room.
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Sitting herself and hot chocolate down on the sofa and table, Ai leaned back and relaxed. Popping the CD in, the girl grabbed the remote for the player and sat herself next to Ai. Skipping to the song she wanted, she clicked play.
"A tick tock don't stop (stop to the)
A tick tock don't stop (stop to the)
(Oooh) a tick tock don't stop
(Oooh) a tick tock don't stop (I know you're not going to sing that song)
(Oooh) a tick tock don't stop
(Oooh) a tick tock don't stop (I know you're not going to sing that song)"
Bobbing along with the beat, Ai took an immediate liking to the song.
"Oh, this is a nice song, it's got a good beat and the harmonizing is great," Ai voiced and she remained concentrated on the lyrics.
"Come inside, take off your coat, I'll make you feel at home.
Now let's pour a glass of wine 'cause now we're all alone.
I've been waiting all night so just let me hold you close to me,
'Cause I've been dyin' for you girl to make love to me. (ooh)"
Ai wearily continued to listen.
"Girl you make me feel real good. (ooh)
We can do it 'til we both wake up. (both wake up)
Girl, you know I'm hooked on you, (ooh)
And this is what I'll do... (I know you're not gonna sing that song)"
Ai began to shift in her seat, unsure if she was really hearing what she was.
"Girl you make me feel real good. (ooh)
We can do it 'til we both wake up. (both wake up)
Girl, you know I'm hooked on you, (ooh)
And this is what I'll do... (I know you're not gonna sing that song)"
Glancing at the girl beside her, Ai tried to analyze the girl. She had a pretty innocent smile on, just like always. But, something seemed slightly different about her smile and her eyes.
'Is that lust?!'
"(Ooh a tick tock don't stop) I wanna sex you up.
(Ooh a tick tock don't stop) All night.
(Ooh a tick tock don't stop) You make me feel real good.
(Ooh a tick tock don't stop) I wanna rub you down.
(Ooh a tick tock don't stop) I wanna sex you up.
A tick tock don't stop
A tick tock don't stop
A tick tock don't stop"
Her body heating up slightly, Ai thought about the words of the lyrics and then the girl next to her. Gulping, Ai tried her best to concentrate, but it was getting ever so harder to do. Why did it feel like the girl next to her was getting closer? Suddenly, the girl hugged Ai's arm and smirked up at the girl.
'OH MY GOD, I CAN FEEL HER BOOBS' Ai screamed in her head.
"Let me take off all your clothes.
Disconnect the phone so nobody knows.
Let me light a candle,
So that we can make it better.
Makin' love until we drown.
(Oooh) Girl, you know it feels real good.
(Oooh) We can do it 'til we both wake up. (both wake up)
(Oooh)Girl you know I'm hooked on you.
(Oooh, I know you're not going to sing that song)And this is what I'll do."
The song ended and left the room in a silence.
"So, what were they saying~" asked the girl, with her arm still wrapped around Ai's arm.
"Y-You really don't know?" Ai asked. The girl nodded her head.
"I heard the word "girl" and "I", but that was about the extent of what I got. They said "I wanna sex you up" and "I wanna rub you down", but what do they mean? How do I use them in a sentence?"
There was a pause.
"Can I just use it like "Ai-chan, I wanna sex you up. I wanna rub you down. I've been dying for you to make love to me,"?"
Ai's heart pounded like crazy hearing her say those words.
"Do you really want to know?" Ai asked the girl seriously.
A nod. Taking the remote, Ai pressed play and the repeat button. Standing up, Ai went over to the lights and dimmed them.
"Ai-chan?"
Then next she pulled out the phone plug. Heading back over to the girl, she began to undo her top. The girl on the sofa smirked. Pushing the girl gently back onto the sofa, Ai said one thing.
"THIS is what it means."
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Laying together on the sofa, wrapped in each other's arms, the two girls wore smiles.
"Ai-chan?"
"What is it, Eri?"
"I actually knew what they were singing."
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O.O It's been a while since I've seen you post something and what is this?!! It isn't Gakikame? XD That's a surprise. A very good surprise, of course. I'm glad to see a fic that for once isn't centered around TakaGaki!! :cow: So that's a huge plus in my book. As much as I like TakaGaki it's just starting to get too annoying seeing it everywhere.
I'm glad to see someone else writing some AiEri too! Hopefully, this will encourage others to write them? I find this pairing very interesting. And you've made it enjoyable reading AiEri too. I liked the little details or actions you put in there like the hug. I liked how you showed the cute side to AiEri, but the steamy side too! Cuz we all know Eri can be a sneaky one!! lol ^___^ I enjoyed reading this fic. I wish there was more to read. I hope to see more fics from you. Thanks for sharing this with everyone. :D
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@writerjunkie - I know, right?! But I just felt like it had to be AiEri :inlove: (OMG I know what you mean about TakaGaki :nervous) Thanks :heart:
Also, thanks for everyone who gave the fic a thanks, much appreciated! Even if it's just a thanks or a comment, it means a lot :)
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Sometimes It's The Small Things
Standing outside, the Morning Musume girls shivered in the cold wind. They were shooting scenes for their new single. While the dancing kept them relatively warm, their outfits were rather thin and not suited in any way for the winter weather they were now experiencing. Making small talk, the girls waited for their next shoot. Talking with Ai, Risa couldn’t help but not pay attention due to the girl metres behind. Risa watched as Eri shivered and let out a small sneeze. Finding a quick way to excuse herself, Risa began to make her way over to the sniffling girl who seemed a bit pale.
‘Why haven’t the staff given her a jacket or blanket yet?’ Risa wondered. Usually the staff rushed over to provide the girls with means to keep warm – hey, that’s what they’re paid for, right?
“E-“
Risa started to call out to the girl, but stopped when she watched the girl get rushed away by the staff to her next shoot. Eri however turned around as she walked away. Locking eyes with Risa, Eri questioned if she had called for her. Shaking her head, Risa denied the claim and just smiled.
‘I hope she'll be fine...’
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Finishing her solo shot up quickly, Risa decided to go and look for Eri again. Knowing that girl, she knew that by now she would have a runny nose and be constantly sniffing instead of blowing her nose. But, that being said, Risa herself was rather chilly, even if she was inside. The temperature had only recently dropped and it was always hard to get re-adjusted. Holding her sides, Risa made sure to stay warm in the thick jacket given to her from the staff. Searching around, Risa passed by the other girls doing their shoots and quietly slipped by, not wanting to distract them.
“Where on earth is that girl?!” Risa wondered out loud to herself, not being able to find the sniffling girl from earlier.
Continuing to search around the building, Risa finally gave up after she toured around the second floor. Stopping at the top of the steps, Risa stared out the huge glass windows ahead.
“AH!!” Risa exclaimed as she saw a figure sitting outside shivering.
Rushing down the stairs and bursting out the door, Risa ran over to Eri.
“Kame! What on earth are you doing out here?! It’s in the negatives!” Risa yelled. Looking up, Eri seemed to come out of her trance.
“Ah, Gaki-san, what’re you doing here?” she asked innocently.
“Those are my lines! Why’re you outside?! And why don’t you have a jacket?!”
“Oh, well, the staff lost my jacket, so they went to get me a new one, and I’d already finished with my shoot, so I decided to get some fresh air…” Eri let out a small sneeze.
“Mou, baka!”
Sitting down on the flowerbed edge with Eri, Risa grabbed the girl and brought her right next to her, their bodies touching.
“E-Eh? Gaki-san?” Eri asked confused.
Wrapping her arms and the jacket around the freezing girl, Risa let out a small “hmph” and looked ahead, and not at Eri. Staring at the girl for a few moments, Eri finally couldn't hold it in and laughed. Risa faltered.
“W-What?”
Eri shook her head and a sweet smile appeared on her face. Leaning her head over, Eri rested her head on Risa’s shoulder.
“Thanks.”
A small blush came to the older girl’s cheeks.
“U-..Un.”
The two girls stayed there, sharing warmth and the close contact between them. It wasn’t often when the two just had these quiet moments together.
“Ah, Gaki-san, look!” Eri said, pointing to the sky.
Looking as instructed, Risa peered up. The entire sky was covered in grey clouds. A small flake of snow landed on her nose. Slowly, snowflakes began to fall all over the place, quickly melting away but soon replaced with one of its siblings.
“The first snow, huh?” Risa breathed out gazing out at the grey scenery.
“…You know, I’ve always thought of you like the first snow,” Eri breathed out.
“How come?”
Eri stuck out her hand and watched as small flakes landed. Risa remained quiet, continuing to listen to the girl.
“You’re innocent. You warn people of what’s to come. You’re never strict. You come from the sky, as if an angel. But most of all, you’re important. While maybe not standing out the most, or be the biggest snow storm, everyone always remembers the first snow, where they were, what they were doing, who they were with, but most of all, that feeling of happiness when they see you. I always look forward to the first snow.” Eri shook her head. “No… I look forward to every time we can be together. Sometimes it’s the small things that really make the bigger things.”
Eri turned shyly to her senior, but most importantly, her friend.
“I’m glad that I got to spend the first snow with you, Gaki-san,” Eri confessed. Risa looked at the girl, surprised yet honoured that she would say such a thing. A small blush crept onto her cheeks.
“Mou, you always say embarrassing things,” Risa complained but a smile crept onto her face. “But I’m glad that I got to spend the first snow with you too, Kame.”
Honest smiles were exchanged, blushes never fading. Leaning her head back on Risa’s shoulder, Eri felt Risa rest her head on top of her own.
Somehow, the day didn’t seem so cold anymore.
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That was really cute. :wub: Though pretty bold on Eri's part. Silly turtle, sitting out in the cold, maybe she was hoping Risa would come for her.
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What a coincidence that I was just listening to 'Ash like Snow (Piano version)' when I came upon this story and it's about the first snow~ The Gakikame pair are so cute. Perfectly adorbs. :wub: I like that you can take this romantically or just as a close friendship and it works. When I crave Gakikame fic, I often think of this thread. Haha... so that AiEri caught me by surprise. :nervous Nice to see you posting stories again. ^.^
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The first snow. Awww so cute and sweet. A blushing bean and a turtle who cant take care of herself. Its hard to not love them. KAMEMAME!! Saikou!! *squeals* :D
Welcome back KK *hugs* Now don't you run off again you hear? :)