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Title: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 10 - Mar 3]
Post by: KizuRai on September 07, 2008, 04:38:54 AM
 :depressed: eh.. well.. this is my first fic, and I think a few of you might have seen me, but I've been a total lurker around the fanfiction parts
Well, I've been meaning to post one up but I've always been afraid that I might not be able to finish it, and/or it might not develop well (the story).
Ah but, I'll of course try to write and get this story done, but it might be long..

Also, just to get people thinking (cuz I know all of you love a good guessing game) there are a few mysteries concerning about the story itself (anything that strikes as odd or something might be on purpose) just point it out (cuz if it's not on purpose I'll have to fix it :P)
I suppose that's my sad attempt at keeping the interest of my audience.. If I get any that is.. XD

Concerning the title, it's like a warning, as in, the story is very messed up so beware. It's not a love triangle, nor a love square anymore, there's so many lines everywhere that I just called it a Love Circle
Also, Warning: there will be lots of Turtle-loving going on :glasses:

Enjoy~

Chapter One

   For Morning Musume the days were normal. It was hectic as usual, what with their crammed schedules and physical practice with non-stop dancing. Life was normal all in all. However outside the happy, perfect facade the girls had to give, many things such as relationships - especially relationships actually - were a factor to their daily lives. And it wasn't just one member either, everyone had problems, nobody really clicked perfectly with one another, friends had problems too.
Takahashi Ai for one was a quiet person, keeping most of her thoughts to herself, keeping herself closed. That was one of the main reasons why she had troubles really connecting with someone.
   
   Ai was on her way to her next appointment; her schedule was more crammed than usual now that she was leader. She was given a break in between but she figured she might as well go there now before she was actually late. This was typical in a sense, as Ai was as punctual as ever, even more so now that she was leader. However, as much as she wanted to get through the next thing on her to do list, her stomach pushed all those things down and 'eat' ended up on the top of that list.
On her way she walked by the Hello! Project lounge the place where practically everything happens. People usually walked by and it was a good place to chat and relax; so Ai, seeing as how there was nobody there at the moment, thought it would be a good idea to eat there, then when she was done she can be on her way without taking any detours. She took out her lunch from her bag, eating rice and zoning out soon after. Her eyes unconsciously wandered from person to person as they walked by, nobody bothering to wave and acknowledge she was there as they were busy as well.

Suddenly her mind was reeled back and her hazed eyes abruptly focused on one particular person, Niigaki Risa. Her mind then went into overdrive, she wanted to talk to Risa, yet... what was it that was holding her back?

   As if feeling her gaze, Risa was about to turn around and greet Ai before she got attacked from behind by an over enthusiastic girl. Eri had jumped Risa from behind and was taking her away from Ai. If looks could kill, Eri might have died then. How long has it been since her and Risa talked? Much too long apparently, if Ai didn't know better, she would think that their relationship was on a very thin line.
Why have they not talked like old times, why is everyone getting in their way? So many questions, and one overall answer, Ai had pushed Risa away, this was her punishment.

"Gaki-san let's go eat, I know a good place!!" the taller of the two jumped excitingly and dragged Risa by the arm.
In Ai's mind she wants to call the girl 'Risa', showing that they were closer than anybody else. But reality was harsh, and they seemed to be ripped apart farther each time they got close - one step forward and a giant leap backward it would seem. Ai was forced to call Risa 'Gaki-san' like everybody else, not really setting herself apart from others.

As Risa got dragged away, Ai noticed that she looked back; their eyes locked for... who knows how long. Probably less than a second, but that was all that was needed, as it felt almost as if the distance, the air in between them was heated. She saw longing in Risa's eyes, and could easily guess that her eyes probably showed the same thing.
   
She looked away as did Risa, but her body still remembered the feeling, was it wrong to feel this way?
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   A girl locked away in her room, tortured by her own thoughts. She has gotten so well at faking innocence in front of the camera that she hasn't been thinking much of it. Off camera made her tone down the happiness as she was still around her fellow co-workers. When she finally is alone however; she becomes a black hole, depressed and dark.
What was the reason for such a thing? Tanaka Reina has thought countless times what this depression may have originated from. Every time it seems to point at a particular turtle.

"Dammit...” the thought of Eri again made her pound her pillow as she rolled around in her bed. What happened to the times of when they would discreetly hold each others hand or hug for no particular reason? Now she was constantly with Gaki-san, leaving both her and Ai-chan annoyed.
Reina could obviously tell that she wasn't alone in this matter as Ai-chan would just stop doing whatever she was doing, even if it was just a split second, when she sees anyone get intimate with her Gaki-san. She smiled ruefully at this; Reina herself was unsure whether to show how she felt. She was afraid Eri would just be fed up with her, as she knew that Reina is pretty bad as a jealous girl.

   What... was it exactly that made them drift apart? It seems that four years ago Eri and Gaki-san were already grouped together multiple times in shows or segments. Is it because they were so similar, or was it because they were the same age? Speaking of which, Sayu would sometimes be in that group too, talking of various things, but nevertheless, Eri and Gaki-san are together far too often to her liking.
"Okay." she said to herself, she sat up with a new vigor, she was going to break those two apart.
"No wait" she stopped herself from getting up, what would be the point in doing that? For one, Eri would just get mad at her, ruining any chance of a friendship renewal, and two, what if she just hanged with Sayu again? Reina wasn't all that worried about Eri's recent relationship with Junjun as it just seems like Eri was being a big sister to her, ironically enough.
"Reina got it" once again she blurted out what she was thinking, her voice cutting through the dead silence of the room. She was going to get Ai to realize her own feelings for Gaki-san, this way; it removes any possibility of Gaki-san protesting to when Reina takes Eri away. Reina wanted to confess quickly, but knew she had to have patience in things like these.
As much as she hated taking so much time, she had to first renew the relationship she once had with Eri. Then at the right time confess and find out how Eri felt about her. If everything becomes useless at that point, if she doesn't feel that way, what will she do?

Forget it, think about it when it actually happens,  if worse comes to worse she'll just lock herself in her room again and do what cats do, sleep it off.
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>_>

Oh yea, I should probably mention that the first 3 chaps will just be like an intro, basically nothing will really happen, it's just to let you guys get the feel of the people and their personalities and such.

I tried my best to get into character and such when I narrated their point of view.. kinda..
well yea okay, I'll work on the next chapter then.. btw should I space more? cuz I kinda write in large walls of text in case you haven't noticed ><
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: ShikyoxYaiba on September 07, 2008, 05:26:23 AM
... OH DANG. xD Eri's and Gaki-san are stuck in another love-shape. For some odd reason Eri often seems to be in the center of these. ._. Is it cuz she hangs out with everyone? O_o

Anyway, you're story is off to a great start. I can't wait to see another update. As far as spacing goes, I find that the way you do it now is fine. :) Good luck writing!

EDIT: I just noticed the thing at the top of your post. Turtle loving, eh? Well then I'm gonna love this fic... xD
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: hikariyuki on September 07, 2008, 05:43:21 AM
yay!!! my favorite people and my favorite pairings! well i prefer eri/sayu more but its coool!
full steam ahead!! :cow:

you have indeed inspired another lurker to come and speak.

seriously though, eri pretty much latches onto everyone. she's just that awesome. our awkward little turtle..so cute.  :lol:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: JFC on September 07, 2008, 08:15:27 AM
So then...

Aichan - :heart: :heart: :heart: -> Risa
Risa - :heart: ? :heart: -> Aichan
Reina - :heart: :heart: :heart: -> Eri
Eri - :heart: ? :heart: -> Risa


Reina should just team up with Aichan, since it's not likely the latter will let herself do anything bold enough to "reclaim" Risa since she's leader now. She needs some yankii help. :D
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: KonaKaga on September 07, 2008, 02:08:08 PM
Love circle? This will be very interesting :)
I'm wondering; will there actually be two people who like each other or will they all like someone else who likes someone else etc?
I'm sure it'll all work out in the end....right? I guess I'll have to wait and see about that...
Heheh, GakiKame :wub: Nothing and no-one can get in the way of their love! :twisted:

Excellent job for your first fanfic! I can't wait to see how you develop your own style.
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: anuskyna on September 07, 2008, 09:09:37 PM
woaaah, that's so interesting, i love the way your express their feeling so good! keep writinnnng~~ ^^ :wub: :wub:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: KizuRai on September 08, 2008, 02:02:27 AM
 :luvluv2: wow comments o.O"
lol the thing is.. Kamei isn't my fav member.. she's close to it, but she isn't.. I guess it is cuz she hangs out with everyone huh..
>< JFC is already keeping track huh??
and LOL KonaKaga, stop trying to spread the GakiKame love >__> I may seriously get converted one day!!

and yay, I got 1 lurker out, now 166 more to go XD

Chapter 2

I'm late...
Was the only thing that ran through the mind of Mitsui Aika as she quickly ran inside the H!P headquarters. Left... she ran past a few people, some a little angry for almost bumping into them but a quick 'sorry' remedied that. These things tend to happen; people just let it go as long as you were polite enough to acknowledge that bumping into people was bad. She saw her ending destination and almost tripped as she grabbed the doorknob and hurried inside. She saw Linlin already in position but the other one...
Ah, there she was, Junjun came from behind Aika; she must have been really late for Junjun to come at the same time. "GOOD MORNING" Linlin bellowed out, her voice ringing in the room, apparently the dance teacher wasn't here yet, thank god. In any case, that girl was too loud, Aika and Junjun nodded silently in reply, going off to the side and dropping their bags off.
"'morning" Junjun said quietly before brushing past her. Aika's face felt a little hot, but she blamed it on the running she had to do to get here on time.
   Junjun and Linlin conversed again in that broken but rapidly improving Japanese. They talked to each in Japanese far more frequently now; they said it was good practice for the language and also they can correct each other without too much of an embarrassment. But Aika was always amazed on how fast Junjun learned Japanese; when she had first joined Morning Musume, she only knew the basics, actually almost nothing at all. Now however, she is able to hold a conversation for awhile, and her accent, it's barely there, and if compared to the strong accent Linlin seems to hold, Junjun sounds quite Japanese.

What's with her these days? Lately, her mind's been going off on how amazing Junjun is, was it admiration? Well, that might be a little incorrect, since if she was going to admire someone it would be Leader or Sub-leader. Maybe it was because they were in the same generation, because, age certainly did not matter in this case. Kusumi-san was the same age as her but there didn't seem to be as much respect as she holds for everyone else, with the exception of possibly Linlin. That girl was a little too hyperactive for her liking, along with Kusumi-san.
The dance teacher came in; Aika shrugged her last train of thought off, 'I guess I just prefer the quiet types'.

   Dance practice was tiring as usual, but she knew that she will improve, and she should work hard to be as good as everyone else and then better. Linlin was good as usual, as expected of a dancer, but Junjun... it isn't because she can't dance, on the contrary she's as good as everyone else, but her height makes her seem a little awkward when she dances, which was probably why the dance teacher looked a bit distressed.
Ah but, practice is done and Aika wanted to go out and eat. Should she ask if Junjun wanted to eat with her? They were all hungry; they just danced for an hour, so Aika is sure Junjun is going to eat somewhere. But she can't just only ask Junjun, Linlin will want to go along too...
"Good bye~ Thank you for the hard work~"
Unexpectedly Linlin sped out the door leaving just her and Junjun. "Where's she going?" Aika didn't really expect an answer but she got one anyway.
"Her parents are coming over from China, she is..." she trailed off, her face slightly scrunched up as she thought for the right word, it seems her vocabulary is still lacking, but that was acceptable enough, the first part anyway.
"I see, well; since it's just us two, want to go eat?" Aika heard herself and realized she sounded a little too hopeful, but she did want her to say yes, for more reasons than one. It's never fun eating alone, today was no exception. If anything, she would feel even lonelier if she was rejected.
"Sure!" was it just Aika or... did Junjun sound exceptionally happy about the idea. No, she was reading much too far into that one power filled word. Obviously people looked forward to food, there's no other reason.
They both walked to a nearby restaurant, they're here because Junjun said she heard that the place was good. She didn't say who but Aika didn't give too much thought into it. It was a quaint, bright place, and the chairs and tables were modern and it looked like a good parfait could be ordered from here. They picked a spot, one that was against the wall with a comfortable leather sofa seat.
"I wonder if they have spaghetti...”
"Let's see." Junjun grabbed the menus and handed one to Aika, both scanned the foods almost hungrily. "This looks good." she laid her menu down and pointed to it, Aika leaned over, it indeed looked good.
"I found the spaghetti, okay; let's have this and this... Oh, I'm going to get a parfait!" Junjun seemed to think for a moment, probably contemplating if she should get one too.
"Mitsui-san, get a big one, let's share~" Aika had to admit, she liked the idea, it seemed reasonable and if one person didn't like it the other could eat it; also, they both couldn't eat all that much, so a medium sized parfait was a good idea for the both of them to share.
"Haha, good idea, let's get one with a banana." Aika grinned, slightly teasing the older of the two; Junjun seemed to understand and faked annoyance in that cute way of hers.
Just then they heard familiar voices, she looked to Junjun and saw that she froze.

"I told you this was a good place."
Her eyes betrayed a look of hurt. At that point it became a little obvious who was beside their seats. It was probably Niigaki-san and Kamei-san. Niigaki-san's voice is pretty hard to mistake, whereas Junjun's reaction to the voices made the other person Kamei-san.
She seemed to shake her shock off after a bit and smiled at Aika, it seemed... it was forced, but it seemed a bit rueful. Aika realized it was probably Kamei-san that recommended the restaurant, hence the look of hurt. Aika was well aware of the feelings Junjun had for Kamei-san; they were together a lot when Junjun first joined. It was only natural for somebody scared, inexperienced, and so far away from home to grow attached to the first person to show kindness. However, Aika was also sure that Kamei-san treated Junjun like a little sister even if it was the other way around. 'I guess, age in terms of... experience?' Aika thought, it was cut short when a waitress came by and asked if they were ready yet. She nodded and chose the stuff that she and Junjun had agreed upon.

She looked back at the older girl; does she want to be the rebound girl? If only she befriended Junjun early on too, but at that time she was just as scared as her. Before anything, the first step should be to figure out her own feelings. What type of relationship does she want with this other girl, and, is it all right for her to like another girl?
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"Thank you for the hard work!" Kusumi Koharu bellowed out to the rest of the staff members.
   Her popularity continued to grow along with her workload. There were many times where she wished she wasn't called the 'Miracle' because it only made others shun her, yet there were those that tried to be kind and she, herself attempted to play around with the whole Miracle image. She was thankful for the new generation, where they do not know about the whole attention thing. It was only natural for a senpai to be busy in their eyes.

She was especially happy that she had somebody the same age as her that came in, as she had entered Morning Musume at the minimum age so she was the youngest. However now she wasn't alone and Koharu attempted to talk to Mitsui.
When Mitsui first joined, Koharu saw that she was alone and shy; she so wanted to just converse with her. Reality was harsh though and Koharu was too busy with the whole anime flow and gaining popularity that it made it impossible to just chat with Mitsui normally.

Afterwards it seemed that Mitsui was rather... too attached to Yoshizawa-san and ended up even more depressed when their past leader graduated. The two Chinese girls that ended in the same generation were not much help either as they were still learning the language.

One problem was solved and that only created a bigger mess to the Mitsui issue. Koharu was glad that Mitsui could voice act in the same anime as her, she did not realize however at the immense amount of embarrassment and skepticism coming from the quiet girl.
'We finally have time to hang out with each other!' was what Koharu thought, but she was clearly mistaken as it almost seemed as if Mitsui had avoided the hyperactive girl.
Koharu would try to play it off thinking that the other girl was just busy or shy, so her first attempt was to get closer to Mitsui. Of course, that didn't end well.  Afterwards, she always saw Mitsui around the others, and she was clearly getting closer to the other members, laughing and joking along now.
Hopeful, Koharu attempted to talk with Mitsui again; the result ended up with the girl nodding along and listening to what Koharu had to say. 'She's such a good listener' was what Koharu believed.

Their personalities were completely different but hey, opposites attract right?
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okay, for some reason I love Mitsui/Junjun pairings, but I've NEVER seen anybody write one T_T so I got fed up waiting and now present my own (hopefully it catches on?? ><)

also.. I'm sorry for making Koharu's pov so.. short whereas Mitsui's is so frickin' long o.O" well I guess it levels out..
2 Reasons why Mitsui's train of thought is so long,
1) I think.. she probably thinks a lot.. and 2) her and Junjun are my fav members XD (in case you couldn't tell)
yay for cynical Mitsui~
Also, sorry if it's been really boring so far :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: lonewind on September 08, 2008, 03:54:02 AM
 :wub: wow i just read the two chapters and i'm liking it! lol
love the new pairing of Akia/Junjun and now Koharu???? nice! :)
wow Ai liking Risa, and Risa and Eri and Reina like Eri. i feel Sayu is a little left out :( (could it be another new pairing?)
either way i'm really liking the way this story is going! keep it up!!! :wub: :wub:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: ShikyoxYaiba on September 08, 2008, 04:24:54 AM
DON'T YOU DARE CALL YOURSELF BORING. D< This fic is amazing, even if it's only the first two chapters. I'm loving the amount of turtle love you seem to stuck here. xD Junjun and Reina (and maybe even Risa?) like Eri. Then there's Ai to Risa, Mittsi to Junjun...Koha to Mittsi...dang. I'm really liking this. XD (Probably due to the massive circle...shape...thing you've created.)

Absolutely loving it. Keep updating. (While I try to finish my own work and continue writing. Curse you education system! T_T)
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: JFC on September 09, 2008, 07:51:11 PM
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>< JFC is already keeping track huh??
Trying to. :P



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"'morning" Junjun said quietly before brushing past her. Aika's face felt a little hot, but she blamed it on the running she had to do to get here on time.
Oh really now?   :grin:



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Kusumi-san was the same age as her but there didn't seem to be as much respect as she holds for everyone else, with the exception of possibly Linlin. That girl was a little too hyperactive for her liking, along with Kusumi-san.
No argument here. XD



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"I see, well; since it's just us two, want to go eat?" Aika heard herself and realized she sounded a little too hopeful, but she did want her to say yes, for more reasons than one. It's never fun eating alone, today was no exception. If anything, she would feel even lonelier if she was rejected.
"Sure!" was it just Aika or... did Junjun sound exceptionally happy about the idea. No, she was reading much too far into that one power filled word.
:w00t:



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Obviously people looked forward to food, there's no other reason.
Of course not.  :roll:



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Just then they heard familiar voices, she looked to Junjun and saw that she froze.

"I told you this was a good place."
Her eyes betrayed a look of hurt. At that point it became a little obvious who was beside their seats. It was probably Niigaki-san and Kamei-san. Niigaki-san's voice is pretty hard to mistake, whereas Junjun's reaction to the voices made the other person Kamei-san.
Uh-oh. :O



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If only she befriended Junjun early on too, but at that time she was just as scared as her. Before anything, the first step should be to figure out her own feelings. What type of relationship does she want with this other girl, and, is it all right for her to like another girl?
That's very sensible/logical of her to think that. Better to be sure instead of just jumping in right away. After all, wouldn't want them to make a mistake that could ruin what could be a really good friendship.



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"Thank you for the hard work!" Kusumi Koharu bellowed out to the rest of the staff members.

...

She was especially happy that she had somebody the same age as her that came in, as she had entered Morning Musume at the minimum age so she was the youngest. However now she wasn't alone and Koharu attempted to talk to Mitsui.
When Mitsui first joined, Koharu saw that she was alone and shy; she so wanted to just converse with her. Reality was harsh though and Koharu was too busy with the whole anime flow and gaining popularity that it made it impossible to just chat with Mitsui normally.
Whoa boy.  :-X



So now, we ALSO have:
Junjun - :heart: :heart: :heart: -> Eri
but
Eri - </3 -> Junjun 
:(

Junjun <- ? :heart: ? -> Aika
Koharu - :heart: :heart: :heart: -> Aika


Damn, we've got potential rabu-rabu everywhere!  :yep:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: KizuRai on September 10, 2008, 02:28:03 AM
@ShikyoxYaiba thank you  :kneelbow: I'm kinda the type of person that has low self esteem, so I tend to criticize myself before anybody has a chance too :P

@Shadowolf8 LOL it's great you noticed that Sayu was left out and all, but I love how you didn't notice somebody else left out ><

@JFC omg!!  :shock: JFC's famous long commenting!! I'm honored XD and lol, I'd love to see you list out all the characters like that.. you'll see A LOT of hearts.

Haha, mm.. school really takes up your time doesn't it??  :dozing:  I usually get inspiration in the middle of the night, lol which caused me to almost be late today cuz I was typing till 3am ><


Chapter 3

   A lone girl in a room with multiple objects and a mic in front of her face was hard at work and doing her radio show.
"This is Michishige Sayumi and you are listening to the radio show Konya mo Usachan Peace~" A music played and she waited for her cue to continue on with the script that was lying on the table in front of her. Lately she has been very good at working and she was given her own radio show, to Sayumi that meant a lot.

An hour or more went by and she was finished with the show. After saying "Good work" to all the staff members, she wandered out. What should she do now, call Reina or Eririn? Was that even an option now? As lately they haven't really been hanging out anymore. Well it's always fun with either of them, the turtle can get so crazy sometimes but the cat was just interesting to be around with that it makes it hard for her choose. In all honestly she would rather have the three of them together, the turtle, the bunny, and the cat made the day all that much brighter.
   She sorely missed the days of when she and Eririn would work together, during those times she was so smitten by how cute her turtle acted on Hello! Morning episodes. There was even one time where she had accidentally blurted out something she had been wanting to say for a long time on one of the tapings. Thank god it was in English and nobody seemed to notice, however it's out there and she had mentally kicked herself for it multiple times after.

Lately however, it felt as if she had betrayed Eririn, since she hung out with Reina far too frequently after, doing those 'Date' plays for fun for example. If the old her had seen her now she would have been slapped as before she only had eyes for Eririn. Now she couldn't choose, should she go with the old love or the new one?
   She had been deeply influenced by the whole prince image before, making her go after the well known "Pimp" of Morning Musume, Yoshizawa Hitomi. That crush didn't last very long because Yoshizawa-san just didn't pay all that much attention to her it would seem.
But was that all?

She likes Eririn and Reina, but what part of them is 'Princely', what in the world made her like them? Both of them were very cute for one; even if Reina had a slightly bad attitude and wonky eyes. And Eririn was even more girly than her - acting in that oh so cute way of hers - so absolutely nothing makes them her ideal prince and yet..

Maybe she was finally beginning to understand the concept of love, shattering that Cinderella world image she had held on for so long. Yes, maybe that was it, love, the thing that every girl wonders about, always hoping to find that guy of their dreams.

"Haah...” She sighed, almost laughing at herself; she was naive wasn't she. Well now she was just no longer in the mood to be with anyone anymore; she just wanted to go back home and figure out who she really loved. When that was done she will confess; even if she gets rejected (but that won't happen right?) she will relentlessly chase after her, yes that was her plan.

"Who could resist the world's number 1 cutest girl anyway?" She smiled to herself while heading back home.
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    Niigaki Risa collapsed onto her bed when she finally went back home and up into her room. She was fatigued and didn't bother to change out of her clothes, not yet, she wanted to rest for a bit. She shifted her head to the left, changing her position to a slightly more comfortable one.
To her, the day was eventful, she reflected; she had met Ai-chan and Kame. Meeting the turtle was common now but seeing Ai-chan added a new twist in her day and made it all that much more exciting.

     She had not talked to Ai-chan ever since she was given Leader status which frustrated her to the point of exhaustion at one point. Ai-chan was busy, she understood that, but Risa wanted to help her because knowing Ai-chan, she was probably overworking herself. When Risa was practically pushed away, Risa decided to be cruel and ignore her back. The look Ai-chan gave her this afternoon was the result of it. She saw longing, but amongst that was immense lust and hunger that made Risa blush just at the thought of those deep eyes; she swears she can get lost in them.

   Risa was actually waiting for the right time to attack her Ai-chan when she knew their leader couldn't take anymore. She purposely goes near the other members, becoming intimate or close to them in front of Ai-chan just to get a reaction or just to add to her pressure gauge. Yes, she realized this was cruel, but she was constantly pushed away, and she wanted Ai-chan to understand her own feelings before Risa can show hers. Actually, she already did but the short haired girl was too dense and didn't understand the meaning of her words and actions. Due to that, Risa was partially rejected and now she was using this cruel method as punishment.
   The thing was - yes there came a problem in her plan - she became too close to Kame, really close. And now she wasn't so sure who she loved more. Well, seeing Ai-chan made her on the top of the list again but Kame was close behind.

How does PokepokePu-san feel about her? They have been together for a long time, whether it was due to their similar age or because of their similar personality she did not know. Since they were often grouped together before, and even more so now, it was only natural for Risa to start to notice a few things about Kame.

She was so adorable, and would react in the oddest way at times; it was also fun teasing Kame, and seeing her go insane was always interesting too. It used to be just Risa laughing at random things and other people just looking at her weirdly but now there was somebody laughing along with her.
"Kame... or Ai-chan.. what do I do?.." her neck was beginning to hurt so she got up and turned on the lights which she forgot to do so when she had first entered her room. She then went to her closet to get a change of clothes; she was going to take a shower.

"Speaking of which...” she suddenly started talking to herself, trailing off and allowing her voice to echo in her bathroom.
Speaking of which, she continued in her mind this time, she has been constantly grouped together with Kame lately hasn't she? What with the GakiKame segments, or the GakiKame radio shows, why is that? She's Sub-leader isn't she, why wasn't she constantly grouped together with Ai-chan? Yossy and Miki were! Actually it wasn't just them either, past leaders and sub-leaders always seem to be together.
   She had stripped and was standing under the shower head, steam was starting to appear as warm water poured over her, shrouding her in mist. She desperately wanted this shower time to clear her head and make her relax but instead it made her think even more. Her thoughts were just going around in circles and she wasn't making much progress. She forced herself to stop thinking and just took a shower peacefully.

   Hair wet and feeling clean she sat at her desk, 'I guess it's time to think of what to do tomorrow' she thought. Tomorrow they had dance practice as their next concert was just around the corner. And there, she had to figure out what she was going to do such as who she should talk to.

She suddenly remembered why her and Ai-chan were pushed apart. The rumours about them together got too much for Ai-chan to handle so she suggested to Risa that they should play it safe and not get too close on camera. Because of that, what was just for pretend turned out real and they really did not talk to each for a long time.
Maybe it was time for her to seduce Ai-chan, as it seems like now would be a good time, or maybe she should wait for Ai-chan to attack her instead. But thinking about it clearly, Ai-chan making the first move may take forever for her to do so, so it would be better if she did it instead.

Risa got ready to sleep, her thoughts had tired her out and she didn't want to be late for practice. Yeah, that would be a great start, get Ai-chan mad at her, and on the day she planed to talk to her too, she thought sarcastically.
   Risa smiled to herself, she prayed for her plan to be successful and that the gods were looking after her for tomorrow. She wanted Ai-chan, and hoped Ai-chan felt the same.
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phew, finally got those out of the way.. now for things to actually happen =.="
like I said, first 3 chapters are fairly uninteresting, it's mainly an introduction

For the next chapter I'm trying to crank out words until it gets longer than chapter 2
omg, Mitsui's POV was so long =.="
did anybody notice that so far only 1 day has passed?

Well then.. until a few days later..
I'll get a new chap up soon I guess, for all those lurkers out there.. and few of them happen to be my friends too haha XD
 :byebye:

[Btw, Sayu said "Bye bye darling~" to Eri on one of the eps in 'Eric Kamezou no Maido ari', I get a lot of KameShige material from there lol ><]
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: JFC on September 10, 2008, 04:51:43 AM
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Haha, mm.. school really takes up your time doesn't it??
Only during the day. Besides, it helps one appreciate the spare periods that much more. :)  Of course, it depends on the particular class that I have at the time. There are some that I can just leave completely alone because I can trust that they'll behave and get their work done. Then there are others where I have to constantly keep and eye on them to make sure they stay on task.



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   A lone girl in a room with multiple objects and a mic in front of her face was hard at work and doing her radio show.
"This is Michishige Sayumi and you are listening to the radio show Konya mo Usachan Peace~"
Why do I find it so easy to picture her doing the bunny ears to herself in the radio studio? :lol:


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she was so smitten by how cute her turtle acted on Hello! Morning episodes. There was even one time where she had accidentally blurted out something she had been wanting to say for a long time on one of the tapings. Thank god it was in English and nobody seemed to notice, however it's out there and she had mentally kicked herself for it multiple times after.
Awwwwwwwww. :wub:

Was it the "Meron-meron" gag with Thane Camus? XD



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Lately however, it felt as if she had betrayed Eririn, since she hung out with Reina far too frequently after, doing those 'Date' plays for fun for example. If the old her had seen her now she would have been slapped as before she only had eyes for Eririn.
Eric Kamezou and Princess Sayumi from Maido Airi? :cow:



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Now she couldn't choose, should she go with the old love or the new one?

...

She likes Eririn and Reina, but what part of them is 'Princely', what in the world made her like them? Both of them were very cute for one; even if Reina had a slightly bad attitude and wonky eyes. And Eririn was even more girly than her - acting in that oh so cute way of hers - so absolutely nothing makes them her ideal prince and yet..
Oh....geez.  :rofl:


Add to the mix:

Sayu -  :heart: :heart: :heart: -> Reina

AND

Sayu -  :heart: :heart: :heart: -> Eri


:dizzy:




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Ai-chan was busy, she understood that, but Risa wanted to help her because knowing Ai-chan, she was probably overworking herself. When Risa was practically pushed away, Risa decided to be cruel and ignore her back.
Awwwwwwwwww...:(



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The look Ai-chan gave her this afternoon was the result of it. She saw longing, but amongst that was immense lust and hunger that made Risa blush just at the thought of those deep eyes; she swears she can get lost in them.
Aichan = :mon cute:
Risa = :shy1:



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   Risa was actually waiting for the right time to attack her Ai-chan when she knew their leader couldn't take anymore. She purposely goes near the other members, becoming intimate or close to them in front of Ai-chan just to get a reaction or just to add to her pressure gauge. Yes, she realized this was cruel, but she was constantly pushed away, and she wanted Ai-chan to understand her own feelings before Risa can show hers. Actually, she already did but the short haired girl was too dense and didn't understand the meaning of her words and actions. Due to that, Risa was partially rejected and now she was using this cruel method as punishment.
   The thing was - yes there came a problem in her plan - she became too close to Kame, really close. And now she wasn't so sure who she loved more. Well, seeing Ai-chan made her on the top of the list again but Kame was close behind.
See, the thing about having plans is that you don't always anticipate every possible contingency.




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She desperately wanted this shower time to clear her head and make her relax but instead it made her think even more. Her thoughts were just going around in circles and she wasn't making much progress. She forced herself to stop thinking and just took a shower peacefully.
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...nekkid Risa.
:onionshower: :drool:



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Maybe it was time for her to seduce Ai-chan, as it seems like now would be a good time, or maybe she should wait for Ai-chan to attack her instead. But thinking about it clearly, Ai-chan making the first move may take forever for her to do so, so it would be better if she did it instead.
Indeed it would be better. :thumbsup



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   Risa smiled to herself, she prayed for her plan to be successful and that the gods were looking after her for tomorrow. She wanted Ai-chan, and hoped Ai-chan felt the same.
GANBARE RISA!!! 
 :cool1:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: ShikyoxYaiba on September 10, 2008, 06:11:35 AM
Oh...oh my. Somehow I expected this with Sayu. (I've really noticed how close she's been with Reina in the recent HM@s...) Goodness, there is indeed a major mess now in regards to the members. (Is Linlin gonna be involved too!? Aye...)

So let's chart this out. :D

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/animeobsesedmaniac/MorningMusumeLoveCircle.png

It's a bit big, so I didn't post it as an image. So...did I miss anything? :P (I only marked the ones we know for sure - no guesses.) And as for Gaki-san... Nothing ever goes as planned does it? V_V

Well considering I love almost any Eri-Pairing (XD I'm so bad) this is looking good to me. You've got a knack for this. ;) Keep writing~
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: lonewind on September 10, 2008, 06:36:05 AM
AHH Linlin!! i totally forgot! :( now i feel like a meanie leaving linlin out :( plus i notice if you paired every member up, one is surely going to be left out :(
well anyways like i like Risa pov of things, lol sayu is too funny, keep up the work!!!
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: ShikyoxYaiba on September 10, 2008, 06:59:12 AM
^Unless that person is happy to be alone.

...An ironic twist would be if that's Kamei who ends up alone. :shock: OR MAYBE SHE PLANNED THIS ALL FROM THE START. LE GASP. :mon closeup:

...Jk. XD I'm being so random right now. Aw, KizuRai, look what your fic's doing to me. :P
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: JFC on September 10, 2008, 08:04:04 AM
AHH Linlin!! i totally forgot! :( now i feel like a meanie leaving linlin out :(
Oh man I JUST noticed that! :O

Ouch.
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: ringo-hime on September 11, 2008, 04:58:37 PM
i love this. hahaha >:] love how Gaki-san is using the evil method hahaha.  :lol:
cnt wait.~
GANBARE~ :otomerika:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: WinterAir on September 12, 2008, 01:59:57 AM
nice fanfic ^^ love how you are getting almost everyone involved lol. wow and theres quite a few that thinks bout eri... will be waiting for your next chaper, keep up the good work!
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: KizuRai on September 12, 2008, 05:56:15 AM
 :err:  ......   :dizzy:

Longest chapter, and I think after this one it will take awhile before I can find time to write out the other chapter.
I still haven't written my personal statement.. and I'll be really screwed if I don't  :sweatdrop:
(plus I have things like grad boat cruise and such to worry bout T_T)

buuut~ I liked writing this chapter... I tend to like long chapters >< and I aim for my chapters to get longer and longer~

I see different people commenting now.. you guys have no clue how happy that makes me XD
@JFC: o.O" are you a teacher?!!? If you are then my writing may really seem like crap to you..  :on blackhole:

@ShikyoxYaiba: OMG!!  :shock: lol I was planning on doing that!! (a drawing that will forever remain incomplete..) ah but, there is one thing wrong with it, but other than it, it's perfect. if you move Michishige and Tanakacchi up and put Linlin in the bottom right corner.... haha.. I may have gave away too much.. nevermind, I guess you'll see

@shadowolf8:  :sweat: Haha.. don't worry.. to be perfectly honest while writing this I kept on counting the members to keep track right? When I was counting the point of views I was like.. "How come... I can only think of 8 members?!?!!?
...........
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 OMG LINLIN!!!"
It's cause she's rarely in fics I guess XD

@ringo-hime: haha yes evil Niigaki~ In my mind that girl is secretly evil~ and not as innocent as everyone thinks bwahaha

@WinterAir: thanks for reading!!! Ah, and I've seen you from H!O forums XD

=.=" that was long.. okay here it is!

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Chapter 4

   It was the start of a new day, and it began with Junjun being late, again. She quickly finished up her bowl of rice and raced off to the train station. There she caught the bullet train that transported her near the practice studio that Morning Musume went to. As she ran - her bag constantly falling off her shoulder while doing so - she saw somebody in a black hoodie run in the same direction as her.
Was that... Kamei-san? Figuring it would better if they both showed up late at the same time Junjun yelled out Kamei-san's name, causing the other girl to abruptly stop and squint at her.

"Oh, Junjun, you're late too?" she made it sound like this was perfectly normal and not an urgent situation. Junjun replied with a nod, her mind wasn't in the right mode to speak in Japanese, or more like, that part of her brain had yet to wake up and work.
When Junjun finally got to where Kamei-san was standing, they both resumed going in the direction they were headed except, now they were walking. Even though the back of her mind screamed at her and said 'the members are going to be mad!' Junjun ignored the thought, simply happy to actually spend some time with her senpai.

"You know what? I couldn't find my contacts, so now I'm going to be stuck with glasses for awhile. Do you think that's a good excuse for being late though? Thank gods it's only practice today, I don't want to have to wear my glasses...” Junjun only nodded as she listened to the girl beside her, she was secretly savouring the time she walked beside the shorter girl and would constantly sneak looks at their hands.
'She won't notice anything I don't think...'
"Ahhh~ Leader is gonna yell at us good today...” At that point Junjun snuck her hand in and grabbed Kamei-san's hand, it brought immense warmth to Junjun's body and she felt a large grin making its way to her face.
Kamei-san made a slightly confused face as if asking 'Why so suddenly?' but didn't bother to remove her hand and instead began to swing their intertwined hands in stride to their walking. This made Junjun forgive and forget everything about yesterday, so what if Kamei-san took Niigaki-san out for dinner? Friends do that all the time, there was no use thinking about it too deeply.

The dreaded door appeared after a few minutes of walking, funny, has it only been a few minutes? She stretched out her hand, almost reaching the doorknob before Kamei-san's hand shot out latched onto her outstretched arm, stopping it.
"Waaaaaait! I have to get ready for Ai-chan's yelling...” Kamei-san then began to do breathing exercises, oh my, how can anyone be so adorable? She looked like a little kid getting ready for her first day of school.
"Okay I'm ready, are you?" Junjun nodded, she stopped worrying a long time ago, ever since she met with Kamei-san in the first place. She didn't mind being yelled at since she earned herself some slight alone time with the other girl.
"Okay, re~ady and go." Kamei-san opened the door, as expected, all eyes had turned to them, and more than one pair of eyes appeared irritated.

'Why is Mitsui-san angry?'

Indeed, the usual Mitsui-san, whom was all smiles, appeared just as - if not more - irked as Takahashi-san.
"Can you explain why both of you are late?" It was a stern voice from their leader, she didn't raise it, she didn't need to, it was frightening enough. Both her and Kamei-san hung their head in shame and bowed deeply while apologizing showing that they were sorry. Everyone seemed satisfied except for Takahashi-san whom was going to protest until Niigaki-san put a hand on Takahashi-san's shoulder signalling to drop it. It seemed to work but Takahashi-san looked even angrier than before now.
Everyone just forgot about the subject afterwards and went into their dance formations, later on Takahashi-san soon forgot about it as well.


"Okay everyone, break time."
Groans echoed throughout the dance room; they had danced for over an hour now, everyone was glad for the break as they were all exhausted. Junjun looked over to Kamei-san wanting to see if they can eat lunch together, but Kamei-san was already dragging Niigaki-san out of the room. From the corner of her eye she saw Mitsui-san advance towards her.
"Mitsui~" A look of annoyance flickered on Mitsui-san's face but was quickly replaced with a mock smile as she faced towards the source of the voice, Kusumi-san.
"Junjun, can you come here for a second?"
What Kusumi-san wanted with Mitsui-san was not heard as their Leader called out to Junjun.

"Is there something wrong Takahashi-san?"
"Hmm," Takahashi-san seemed to think for a moment, putting her right hand under her chin and her other hand supporting her right arm, "I think your timing is a little off in Resonant Blue..." Junjun nodded along, she wasn't mad, she knew Leader just wanted everyone to be perfect and if anything, Takahashi-san was making time for Junjun, helping her with her dancing and all.
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"Michishige-san, do you know where Junjun is?" Linlin wandered around with her lunch, wanting to eat with her Chinese counterpart but could not see her and asked the first person she saw.
"Um... I think I saw her in the dance room with Ai-chan." Linlin nodded in thanks and went off to find a table to eat at. She was slightly depressed and lonely but she knew things like these can't be helped. No matter how close she got along with the other members she still liked to stick close to Junjun. Linlin thought of Junjun as a sister and no matter how weird she acted, she didn't get weird looks from Junjun.

   Junjun however, appears to want to stay further away from her because she hated always being grouped together as the 'Chinese girls', Junjun just wanted to be a Morning Musume member. Linlin understood the older girl's feelings and obliged to them, but because of that though, she felt as if she was slowly losing Junjun to the others.

'STOP' this whole thinking thing was depressing her, she looked around and saw the other members. She tried to distract herself from melancholy thoughts and eavesdropped on what the others were talking about.

"Mitsui, are you okay? You don't look so good...” Kusumi-san noted as she looked carefully at Mitsui-san's face. Linlin looked at the latter's face and found that it looked rather... irritated.
"I'm fine." and with that, ended all chance of a conversation, creating an awkward silence between the two. "I'm going to go practice." Mitsui-san announced suddenly, making her way to the dance room and leaving Kusumi-san by herself.

'Bad day for Mitsui-san maybe?' Linlin inquired; there was nothing else to see there anymore so she turned her attention to Tanaka-san and Michishige-san. They were sitting side by side and were silently eating their lunch. Both appeared to be thinking of something and both appeared to be looking at the same thing. Linlin tried to find what they were looking at and saw Kamei-san. She looked back at the solemn two and noted the expressions they wore. Tanaka-san looked frustrated whereas Michishige-san looked conflicted over something, like she was having an internal fight about something.
   This was all very confusing to Linlin as she turned to Niigaki-san and Kamei-san; they appeared normal at least. Everyone, to the exception of those two, seemed very different today. And thinking about it logically, Linlin didn't really want to find out what was wrong, for the sake of avoiding trouble she was going to ignore it and let everyone figure out their own problems.
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   Reina was getting irritated by the awkward silence that had came between the two and resolved to break it. "Sayu," she started, earning a look from the other girl, "we need to talk. Um... how about after practice?" Sayu looked very confused but nodded in agreement anyway.

'Good' she smiled to herself, 'I can finally get my plan moving'. Her first step was to eradicate any sort of competition so Reina can go after Eri with no worries, also she wanted to know Sayu's feelings for Eri because she didn't want to break her friendship with her. She snuck a look at Gaki-san; she was going to have to talk to Ai-chan for this one to go away. Speaking of which, she glanced around the area, where was Ai-chan anyway?
Well that didn't matter as she only wanted to deal with one person at a time, too many and she will get confused.

   What in the world should she say to Ai-chan anyway? Well for starters, she should try to get a way for Ai-chan to express... well anything for that matter. Lately she has been very emotionless and her smiles or expressions always felt fake or practiced. She sighed; this was going to be hard...
"Reina?" the voice broke her out of her reverie, the tied up hair on the side of her head bobbed violently as her body jumped.
"Are you okay? You've been poking your food with a chopstick for a while now, and just now you sighed so suddenly." Sayu really did seem concerned; this once again reminded Reina why she wanted to keep her friend status with the narcissistic girl. Although all those things about Sayu saying how she's the cutest girl in the world has toned down substantially.

"Reina's fine, don't worry about Reina. If Reina was in some sort of trouble-"
"She will talk to Sayumi about it right?" cutting off Reina mid sentence and giving her an earnest smile, Reina couldn't help but smile and nod at the pigtailed girl in return. 'There are times where Sayu rivals Eri in cuteness isn't there...'

"Hey Reina... We should go back; I think break was long over..." Sayu looked nervously around them and saw no one. This raised a few alarms in both their heads.
"What?! Ah, you're right; Gaki-san and Eri are already gone! Let's go!"
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   Risa and Kame were doing the usual things during their break; talking about random things or switching the topic over to how great that restaurant they went to the day before was. All in all, it was the usual day for them, however; Risa remembered her plan from yesterday, causing the girl to suddenly stop smiling and furrowing her brow slightly in thought.

"Gaki-san? What are you thinking about? Care to share?" Risa stared up into those clear, innocent eyes, feeling slightly annoyed that she had to choose between two amazing girls. Maybe she should just go with Kame, since Ai-chan has been giving her nothing but worry lately. Kame is just fun to be around with. But, isn't that just running away from reality? Wasn't Kame just some sort of escape for her as she didnt't really want to deal with the possibility of a rejection. In a way, Kame was safe, and playing it safe was something Risa often did, but sometimes she would regret her decision when she found out what she could have gotten.

"Hello~ Earth to Gaki-san~" The taller of the two girls waved her hand in front of the other's face. Risa's mind was working on what to say; loving that goofy smile Kame seemed to wear.
Risa brought both hands together and held them in front of her face, bowing lightly, "Kame, I'm sorry, I can't go out with you today, I'm busy." The usually energetic girl seemed down after that, with a slight pout, Kame looked at Risa with puppy-dog eyes.
This initiated a groan from the other girl, "Kame~ even if you do that I won't change my mind!" she stated with a slight irritancy in her voice.
"Haha, I know, just wanted to try anyway~"
'Geez this girl' in reality, that look Kame gave Risa just then almost made her change her plans completely. Perseverance was key she supposed, and she needed a lot of 'cute-ness tolerance' when dealing with the turtle.

"Hmm, should we head back now? We wouldn't want Ai-chan to yell at us for taking such a long break now do we?" Risa half asked, it wasn't all that much of a question as it was a statement.
They both agreed that now would be a good time to head back, so they got out of their seats, linked arms and skipped to the practice room. They completely did not realize that Tanakacchi and Sayu were still there talking.


   During practice Ai-chan would occasionally get in front of Risa. 'It's only practice but she still takes it so seriously...’ and what was more, a seriously dancing Ai-chan meant a lot of sexy movements. Risa's eyes would frequently drift down, mesmerized by the motion of the shorter girl's hips as they swayed to the beat of the music. What in the world was wrong with her? It was like her hormones were going insane lately.
"Okay everyone, good work, and Junjun good job!" Everyone followed their leader's example and yelled just about the same thing; Risa yelled it the loudest while picking up her stuff and rushing out the door.
"Where is she going?" She heard somebody ask through the door.
"She's busy; she has to go do something." Kame had answered.

Whatever was after that she did not hear because she quickly scanned the area and found a room. Not really caring what room it was she slipped in and turned on the lights. It was a storage room, many things were cluttered everywhere that where she was standing was the only spot you could actually stand on.
'It's like Kame's room...'
She turned the lights off and had the door opened a little bit, just enough for her to see through one eye, it creaked as she did so. She was waiting for the other members to go by, hopefully leaving one specific girl alone in the room. The doorknob of the practice room turned and the other members filed out. When she was sure they went outside of the building she came out of her hiding place and calmly walked up to the room everyone was just in.

Quietly, she turned the knob and let herself in, locking the door silently. The other girl was busy practicing still and did not notice her presence. She softly put her bags down and readied herself. Aside from the steps of the short girl, the room was silent; she breathed in slowly. The words that came out were sudden and startling, breaking the tranquility of the room.

"Ai-chan..."
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YAY CLIFF HANGER~ lol! for once I'm not pounding my head against my desk because of one!!  :kekeke:

My favourite line in that whole chap
'It's like Kame's room...'
I've been wanting to see her room ever since I heard about the 'Find Waldo: Kame ver~' type thing from the Hawaii tour ><


Oh.. and I think now would be a good time to ask if you guys find anything odd
Just a hint to how I write; even though I write with like zero plan in mind, everything I write somehow ties in with things later on, so nothing is useless!!.
(I'm in like an IB Art class so it's been drilled in me to connect everything)
I am trying to resolve that last person tho.. cuz if everyone pairs together it leaves one person right?? Damn uneven numbers..
I kinda know what to do tho.. and I've written what my plan is in this chapter >< its veeeeery subtle.. ah, but that's not the only oddity
 :hee:
Oh well, until next update then!!
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: WinterAir on September 12, 2008, 06:37:45 AM
ahhh so long >.< can't finish all of it right now, so have to cut it short and read rest tomorrow. finally some linlin in here ^^ lol + the way you put the story is nice, its like we're actually looking into their minds lol, its like we can see how they think ^^. its getting more and more interesting ^^

@KizuRai:
ah really? you've seen me on H!O? ^^ I usually go on H!O more, but recently made an account here, so I thought I'd check out JPH!P too.

EDIT: just finished reading ^^ dang... cliff hanger... haha ur so mean... guess this is ur revenge for reading cliffhangers from other writers? this chapter flowed very smoothly and everything seems set in place and it was easy to understand. just.... now what will happen next with ai-chan and gaki-san >.<
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: ShikyoxYaiba on September 12, 2008, 08:16:56 AM
My chart will be edited when the time comes. >D But as of right now, it doesn’t look like it’s changed… *pauses* Linlin seems to be in the middle for now…will it change? :P And poor Kame-chan seems oblivious too. Gotta say…my heart goes out to Gaki-san and Reina. (Then again, that might be because I’m writing ver.2 of my own fic involving the bean, turtle, and cat… XD)

Thanks for the huge update. It was incredibly nice to read. :) Now if you’ll excuse me, I have to go back to doing my homework…Ew. (For some reason, fics manage to stick themselves in front of my work. Not the world’s best thing…)

*quickly goes to see what would happen if the chart were moved around the way you said it* Once things look a little clearer, I'll update this chart again. :) Your fic was good enough for me to want to make it. Thanks~ <3

EDIT: Oh...I think I see it now. Oh my. .___.;;

EDIT2: I just realized...you said JFC's a teacher?! *had no idea*
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: ringo-hime on September 12, 2008, 02:02:32 PM
OH i love this..theres just so much complications XD
hahaha.
orsm~
cnt wait~
ganbare~ :otomerika:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: kRisZ on September 12, 2008, 03:46:22 PM
interesting  :yep:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: Blubber-Nugget on September 12, 2008, 09:08:45 PM
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I kinda know what to do tho.. and I've written what my plan is in this chapter >< its veeeeery subtle.. ah, but that's not the only oddity

@__@ I'll never spot it.

WAIT! I FOUND IT!
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'Bad day for Mitsui-san maybe?' Linlin inquired;

Theory: Everyone is PMSing at the same time. At the end of the week they're going to have a giant gang bang XD

I highly doubt that that's the plan...but some of us can always hope, right? :twisted:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: JFC on September 12, 2008, 09:09:09 PM
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@JFC: o.O" are you a teacher?!!?
You didn't know? :lol:



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If you are then my writing may really seem like crap to you..  :on blackhole:
Don't worry, it's pretty. Believe me, I've seen FAR worse. :roll:



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Was that... Kamei-san? Figuring it would better if they both showed up late at the same time Junjun yelled out Kamei-san's name, causing the other girl to abruptly stop and squint at her.

"Oh, Junjun, you're late too?"
Eri and Junjun both late. Not surpirsed. :D   



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When Junjun finally got to where Kamei-san was standing, they both resumed going in the direction they were headed except, now they were walking. Even though the back of her mind screamed at her and said 'the members are going to be mad!' Junjun ignored the thought, simply happy to actually spend some time with her senpai.
I really wanted to go "JUNJUN CHANCE!!!" at this part.
:mon sweat: 



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"Ahhh~ Leader is gonna yell at us good today...” At that point Junjun snuck her hand in and grabbed Kamei-san's hand, it brought immense warmth to Junjun's body and she felt a large grin making its way to her face.
Kamei-san made a slightly confused face as if asking 'Why so suddenly?' but didn't bother to remove her hand and instead began to swing their intertwined hands in stride to their walking.
:wriggly:



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"Okay, re~ady and go." Kamei-san opened the door, as expected, all eyes had turned to them, and more than one pair of eyes appeared irritated.

'Why is Mitsui-san angry?'

Indeed, the usual Mitsui-san, whom was all smiles, appeared just as - if not more - irked as Takahashi-san.
Uh-oh. Junjun doesn't have a clue about Aika, does she? :O



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"Michishige-san, do you know where Junjun is?" Linlin wandered around with her lunch, wanting to eat with her Chinese counterpart but could not see her and asked the first person she saw.
"Um... I think I saw her in the dance room with Ai-chan." Linlin nodded in thanks and went off to find a table to eat at. She was slightly depressed and lonely but she knew things like these can't be helped.
Awwwwwww.....:(



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No matter how close she got along with the other members she still liked to stick close to Junjun. Linlin thought of Junjun as a sister and no matter how weird she acted, she didn't get weird looks from Junjun.
Awwwwwwwww....:oops:



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Junjun however, appears to want to stay further away from her because she hated always being grouped together as the 'Chinese girls', Junjun just wanted to be a Morning Musume member. Linlin understood the older girl's feelings and obliged to them, but because of that though, she felt as if she was slowly losing Junjun to the others.
Awwwwwwww.....:cry:



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She tried to distract herself from melancholy thoughts and eavesdropped on what the others were talking about.
Ooooo...this could be interesting. :P



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This was all very confusing to Linlin as she turned to Niigaki-san and Kamei-san; they appeared normal at least.
Yeah, but this is GakiKame, so how normal can they get? XD



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Everyone, to the exception of those two, seemed very different today. And thinking about it logically, Linlin didn't really want to find out what was wrong, for the sake of avoiding trouble she was going to ignore it and let everyone figure out their own problems.
Yeah, probably better that way. If you avoid da shit, you won't get dirty when it hits the fan. :yep:



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"Hey Reina... We should go back; I think break was long over..." Sayu looked nervously around them and saw no one. This raised a few alarms in both their heads.
"What?! Ah, you're right; Gaki-san and Eri are already gone! Let's go!"
Whooops!  :rofl:



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   During practice Ai-chan would occasionally get in front of Risa. 'It's only practice but she still takes it so seriously...’ and what was more, a seriously dancing Ai-chan meant a lot of sexy movements. Risa's eyes would frequently drift down, mesmerized by the motion of the shorter girl's hips as they swayed to the beat of the music.
Oooooooooooooh yeah.  O0



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"Okay everyone, good work, and Junjun good job!" Everyone followed their leader's example and yelled just about the same thing; Risa yelled it the loudest while picking up her stuff and rushing out the door.
"Where is she going?" She heard somebody ask through the door.
"She's busy; she has to go do something." Kame had answered.
Oh? Risa planning something? :?



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Not really caring what room it was she slipped in and turned on the lights. It was a storage room, many things were cluttered everywhere that where she was standing was the only spot you could actually stand on.
'It's like Kame's room...'
:on lol:



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She turned the lights off and had the door opened a little bit, just enough for her to see through one eye, it creaked as she did so. She was waiting for the other members to go by, hopefully leaving one specific girl alone in the room. The doorknob of the practice room turned and the other members filed out. When she was sure they went outside of the building she came out of her hiding place and calmly walked up to the room everyone was just in.

Quietly, she turned the knob and let herself in, locking the door silently. The other girl was busy practicing still and did not notice her presence. She softly put her bags down and readied herself. Aside from the steps of the short girl, the room was silent; she breathed in slowly. The words that came out were sudden and startling, breaking the tranquility of the room.

"Ai-chan..."
/me gasps.

GO RISA!  :w00t:



EDIT2: I just realized...you said JFC's a teacher?! *had no idea*
Wanna know the REAL kicker? Not only am I a teacher, but I'm trained to be an ENGLISH TEACHER!!!

:wahaha:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: ayase909 on September 13, 2008, 08:07:16 AM
i love

TAGaki

but

i also love

GakiKame jejejeje :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: ayase909 on September 13, 2008, 08:08:39 AM
i love

TAGaki

but

i also love

GakiKame jejejeje :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: Sukoshi on September 13, 2008, 11:15:41 AM
Oooo....just read all the chapters.....This story is so cute! 

hehe a love circle~ I like~  (I especially like it since it centers around my favourite turtle)...hmm...I wonder if there will be a kamei pov or are you saving that until the end?  I like to think that Eri's neutral in this...just cause that would be more fun =D  If I did find out who she liked in the circle then I'd have no choice but to support that pairing...XD 

so far I like the Reina and Sayu scene the most....I always like fics where the cat and bunny both fight for the turtle XD  It's just too cute!

anyways keep up the good work!  Can't wait for the next chapter~
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: lollipopgirl on September 14, 2008, 02:36:51 PM
I finally got a chance to read this and I'm glad I have :w00t: The title certainly caught my eye to start with just based on the "... circle?" part, I love how it's so flowing and questioning XD
You write well and I enjoy reading ur style very much... This feels like a serious, comedic parody with all the girls being in love with each other, it's great fun! Eri is so... Eri, incredibly clueless of what's going on around her, or is she? ;)

Being the crazy fangirl I am, I do love how so far it feels like you've gone more into the possibly TakaGaki pairing more so than the others and totally squealed at the end of the last chapter... Sooo glad Gaki is going for it, hopefully Ai doesn't close off as per usual and actually thinks with her heart not her head for once :heart:
As for the Eri pairings, ok so I'm a KameShige and TanaKame fan by heart but I really really love the chemistry between Eri and Jun of late and have being waiting for someone to write about them so i'm hoping it ends with those two, which is highly unlikely but pleeeeease~! :mon innocent:
For the rest of the possible pairings, I can't wait to see what happens with them as well :wub:

I understand them all falling for Eri though, she's my girl of the week I think so I'm fangirl mode over her atm... those lips~! :drool: :mon inluv:
Can't wait to read more of ur writing, great job and keep it up :D
Oh and I noticed the colours for the .... to show the narrators, I LOVE THAT LITTLE TOUCH!!! Niiiiice~!  :otomerika:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: KizuRai on September 18, 2008, 05:21:29 AM
 :farofflook: Yay~ Finally a chapter! The thing is though.. no nevermind, I'll write about that later..
In any case, woot~ new people~ I mean, new commenters~

@WinterAir: lol um.. on that large thread in the fanfiction section done by maiha, I posted on it.. yea I'm DarkRai on there (that's my default online name tho XD) haha, I'm a total lurker on there, with one post at the moment!
@ShikyoxYaiba: that's true >< homework ends up somewhere on the bottom of my list of 'To do' things for some reason..  :bigdeal:
lol, are you sure you see it???? Well.. it'll show itself somewhere in a few chapters later..

@ringo-hime: lol sorry what?!? "orsm"?? what is that??
organism
orgy
orgasm?!?!
no wait.. there's no 'g' in there, lol sorry, that word made me laugh a bit >< thanks for reading tho!! XD

@kRisZ: Thank you  :yep:

@Blubber-Nugget: okay... you have no clue how hard that made me laugh. The first thing I saw when I came home and got on my comp was that comment, and it made me laugh out really loud, then my dad looked at me weirdly and said,
"The first thing you do when you get on your computer is laugh, what's wrong with you?"
T___T, lol but I loved you're theory though honestly..
maybe in another fic~  :roll:

@JFC: :: stares in shock ::
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Wanna know the REAL kicker? Not only am I a teacher, but I'm trained to be an ENGLISH TEACHER!!!
:on shady:
oh, and lol at your different uses of the word 'awwwwwww'

@ayase909: Haha, double post >< try not to click the post button more than once and thank you for reading, I guess I tried to fit in as many common pairings as possible in here so I'm happy that I attracted a few pairing lovers.

@Sukoshi: Ooh, you noticed that, good~ and thank you for reading!!!
oo, and since you brought it up.. [bgcolor=#090000]there's going to be a lot of Rokkie fighting soon so don't worry[/bgcolor]

@lollipopgirl: yay, the title actually caught interest!!
who knows.. Kame is just being Kame I suppose~  :P
haha, sorry but..
[bgcolor=#000000]there will always be something that will get in the way of TakaGaki love isn't there?[/bgcolor]
Yay!! you noticed!! I thought I should add that as a kind of a way of helping people know who the narrator is and also letting people know who is starting the next chapter
(also, it helps keep me on track too..)

I talked too much.. and it only made my post even longer than it already is, so without further ado~




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Chapter 5

   Four girls walked along the sidewalk heading to a cafe; the day was cold so they all huddled together. It was especially cold for them when they just sweated a lot from dance practice a few minutes before. "It's really cold today!" one tall girl exclaimed, the two girls walking in front of her simply nodded; they were too cold to reply.
"Mm, it really is cold." a fairly shorter girl walking along side her enthusiastically replied. She was happy that somebody actually did but her motive was to get the slightly short girl in front of her to talk.
Mitsui seemed like she wasn't paying any attention to the tall girl in the back. Koharu noticed that the short haired girl would occasionally talk with the tall banana eater beside her. Why was that? Koharu thought that she and Mitsui were good buddies.
"Koharu," shocked that Mitsui's attention was actually turned to her, she looked up in reply, "are we close to the place yet?"
"Um... yep really close, it's just over there." Koharu pointed, getting close to Mitsui and putting a hand between her and Junjun.
"Oh I see! Junjun, come, let's go!" ignoring the hand that was obstructing her view of the other girl, Mitsui linked arms with Junjun and they both dashed to the place Koharu had pointed at.
"What?! Ah, wait!! Linlin let's run!!"
"Huh? O-oh okay..." The remaining two chased after the two that ran off first.

   The bell connected to the door clanged loudly as the four girls entered the cafe, panting heavily. A waitress came up to them asking them to follow her to their seat after looking at them oddly. They all sat down on the leather seat, their jackets rubbing against each other and making a lot of noise, on top of that they were all slightly giggling probably from the adrenaline rush.
"Haha, I kinda want a strawberry sundae right now..." Mitsui said while taking her jacket off as everyone else looked through the menu.
Looking at the girl in disbelief, Koharu's voice gradually grew higher as she spoke, "In this weather?! Are you sure that's a good idea?"
"Aww that's so cute." It was a comment from Junjun; causing all heads to turn to her in shock. Koharu noticed then that Mitsui's face turned even redder from before.
'What exactly is so good about that tall banana loving panda?' Koharu thought bitterly. Linlin also seemed to notice the color of Mitsui's face as well and it was obvious that her mood went slightly worse than before.
"Big sis, what are you getting?" Linlin addressed to Junjun in chinese, the rest of the words were in Japanese though.

   The 'Miracle' girl wanted to thank Linlin for her jealousy and thought that now would be a good time to talk to Mitsui whilst Junjun was distracted.
"Mittsi, I heard that your photobook shoot was coming up, how do you feel about it?" Mitsui looked back at her with a shocked blank face like she didn't expect Koharu to know about it, it blew over fast however because she answered fairly quickly.
"I guess I'm pretty excited about it... but in this weather it's going to be cold isn't it?"
"Oh~ Mitsui-san, you're going to have a photobook shoot? I want to see~" as usual, the tall panda dragged her words when she spoke, and suddenly Mitsui looked really embarrassed about the whole thing now. The Mitsui problem was just getting bigger and bigger for Koharu.
"Ah... It isn't really all that special..." Mitsui then sneezed and Junjun was quick to grab her jacket and put it on her.
"I don't think it will be a good idea for you to get a sundae now." she joked. This caused Koharu to grow slightly more bitter towards Junjun than before, her hands still in the position of getting Mitsui's jacket when she had sneezed. The short girl's face seemed to glow in happiness as she smiled in thanks to Junjun.
"Are you guys ready to order yet?" came a voice; Koharu looked and saw an irritated Linlin. Everyone quickly looked at their menus again and started listing off foods. There were some disputes over what to get but the arguments turned out really funny sometimes.

"I want to get this." Linlin pointed at the menu showing the tall panda next to her. Koharu couldn't see because of their half-circle seating position; Linlin was on the opposite end from her.
"You always get that! Get something else; you'll get really fat if you continue eating that!" Junjun sighed when she saw the item that Linlin pointed at and showed it to Mitsui. Koharu didn't get to see but that didn't seem to bother her and she figured it was probably a dessert anyway.
"Big sis that is so mean and I won't get fat because we are always dancing!" Linlin countered.
"You shouldn't eat sweets all the time, it’s unhealthy!" Somehow, that sounded very odd to have come out of Junjun's mouth.
"Oh that looks good!" Mitsui said when she saw the food item, betraying Junjun and going on Linlin's side of the argument.
"It does, doesn't it?"
"Both of you sto~p!!!" Junjun yelled out, holding her arms out in a gesture to stop Mitsui and Linlin from continuing on with the conversation. The two shorter girls giggled in a way like they were expecting this sort of reaction from Junjun. Koharu was on the side watching the spectacle and laughing, to her seeing the 8th gen members' antics felt like watching a show.

   After what felt like forever, they finally came to a conclusion on what to get and called a waiter over. The waiter that came over had a face that resembled a clown and talked with an odd accent; they forced Mitsui to order for them as the other three tried their best to hold in their laughter. Junjun shook violently and snorted from laughter causing the nose of the waiter to flare in disgust, which in turn made the three laugh even harder. Even Mitsui's smile began to quiver from slight laughter.

When the waiter left to input their order Mitsui looked at the other three in a mock pout.
"You guys suck..." she said, initiating laughter from all three girls who couldn't hold it in anymore, Mitsui eventually couldn't help but laugh along with them. The day for them was fun, who knew 8th generation would be amusing to hang out with, lately to Koharu it seemed the 5th gen and Rokkies preferred to keep to themselves, not really allowing the 7th gen member in. So to Koharu, this was refreshing and fun, and plus they were all young (to the exception of Junjun, but she acted their age anyway).

Maybe if everyday was like this, menial ordeals such as relationships won't be such an issue anymore.
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The bunny and the cat stood outside, cold, but refusing to say anything about it. Another one of those awkward silences seemed to have once again come between to two. Sayumi felt like she had to break the silence as the chill was getting to her.
"Reina, you said you wanted to talk to me...?" she started off, hoping the other girl will get the idea and actually start talking.
"Hmm, right... We shouldn't talk here though."
"Where should we go?" the thought of what the very short girl had to say was something she was looking forward to now. If it's secret, then maybe Reina liked her too and was going to confess or something similar. She could think of other reasons, but this one seemed very possible.
"Then... how 'bout my place?" If Sayumi wasn't thinking of anything bad, she was now. Her porcelain like face flushed at the thought, and she mentally shook them away.
"Okay." they were about to head off into the direction of the wonky eyed girl's place but a sudden voice made them stop.

"Gu~ys!! Wait up!" the energetic turtle ran up to them panting slightly. "Wanna hang out?" was the only thing she said, Sayumi realized that the only reason the girl wanted to hang with them after so long was because Gaki-san was busy. The thought was fairly disappointing, 'Are we not nearly as important to you as Gaki-san is?' she thought with a bitter sigh. She wondered if Reina would actually allow the other girl to come along. They still had to talk, albeit she wasn't sure what, but she was sure it was important if it needed to be in private.
"Sure, we're going to my place." the short girl said, shocking Sayumi immensely. It wasn't like she didn't like Eririn anymore; it was because the girl would get in her way. But there wasn't anything she could do about it, and besides, it had been awhile since the three Rokkies actually go together and hung out.
"Yay~" Eri linked arms with both of them so she was in the middle, and dragged them along the path to Reina's. Sayumi couldn't tell if she was happy or annoyed. She was happy that she can now actually talk to Eri after so long, but the cause of this chance made her slightly angry. She was getting frustrated at how easily Gaki-san took their fellow Rokkie member away from them and wondered if Reina thought the same thing.
She glanced at her and noticed that she looked like she was contemplating something. Maybe she was regretting having invited Eri, or maybe she noticed the reason for Eririn's sudden friendliness as well. Reina seemed to notice her glace and looked back, she caught a smile from the younger girl and Sayumi couldn't help but think that she shouldn't think too much.

"Wa~h it's cold!" the girl in the middle of the three exclaimed as she grabbed the two at her sides even tighter. Warmth was coming up Sayumi's left arm, she was grateful for it but at the moment her body was going through a tornado like temperature. Her left arm was really hot, but her right arm was freezing, she was feeling envious of Eri at the moment. After what took most likely half an hour, they finally saw Reina's house. They went up the stairs clumsily since they clung to each for dear life, when they got to the top Reina fumbled slightly looking for her keys. It's always in these moments that give Sayumi a sinking feeling she didn't understand why. When the wonky eyed girl yelled out in triumph that she found her keys, Sayumi too felt relieved.

   When the door was open all three practically rushed inside; absolutely grateful for the warmth of the house.
"I'll go make tea." the short girl stated, leaving the bunny and turtle at the couch. They both nodded, taking a seat on the couch and grabbing the television remote. Eririn searched through the DVD's looking for movies.
"I'm back, awww aren't you the cutest~" startled the two taller girls looked at each other, the voice resembled Reina's but it was very unReina-like. The two looked in Reina's direction and found her baby talking her cats. When they walked close, Reina noticed them and stared at them, her wonky eyes wide open.
"How did you establish your Yankii character anyway?" the energetic girl said in disbelief, she was grinning at the scowl on Reina's face.
"Aww, I would be so happy if you said that to me~" Sayumi joked, and both of them started laughing, it was always amusing to hear Reina say something completely out of her character. They assumed only her cats actually saw their owner's true face. They passed the time playing with the many cats that the girl owned and waited for the tea. As Sayumi looked through the refrigerator Eri had a... scary idea.
"Hey, I can cook something for you guys!"
"No!"
"T-that's okay Eririn..." both of them replied fast, causing the other to pout cutely.
"Fine... Oh hey we can have hotpot!" Eri spotted the frozen meat and some vegetables that could be used as ingredients. They all quickly agreed that hotpot would be good, and neither of them can screw up the cooking part.

The Rokkies talked about random things, enjoying the time they had with each other. Talking like this and hanging out felt nostalgic to Sayumi. Has it really been that long for her to even use the word 'nostalgic'? She wanted to turn back the time, she really wanted to go back to when they first joined, it was frightening but it was fun when they first entered Morning Musume. At that time they would always stick together, now it was like they grew far apart, Reina always with Ai-chan and Eri always with Gaki-san. She hung out with Koharu-chan sometimes, but it was different, she didn't know what, but it felt different. She thought maybe it was the age difference (it isn't all that much different though), or their personalities were just too different. Suddenly Sayumi remembered that Reina had to speak with her, she supposed she could stay at the shorter girl's place until Eririn leaves.
When all three were full, all sighing in satisfaction Eri suddenly stated; "Reina, can I stay over? We don't have anything to do tomorrow anyways, unless, you have something to do...?"
The girl in question shook her head violently in reply, "No I'm not busy, you can stay." that threw Sayumi's plan of waiting for Eri to leave, she shrugged it off though, she and Reina could always talk later.
"Let's watch a movie!" She suggested, the other two nodded and got up to head for the couch. "Eririn did you find a--"
"This one!" Eri held up a DVD in front of their faces. Sayumi realized that Eri might have planned on staying at Reina's all this time since the first thing the turtle did when she came in was search through movies. It seemed to be a comedy movie; they sat down on the couch with Eririn in the middle (she wanted to be warm).

   After the movie Reina glanced at the clock and mentioned it was starting to get late. It was already 1 in the morning and they had a tiring day too. So Eri and Sayumi began to take out the futons and arranged the sleeping formations in Reina's room while the shortest of the three went and got toothbrushes for everyone. Sayumi flopped down on one of the futons, tired from moving things around; she already brushed her teeth and was just waiting for the other two. She looked around the room, there wasn't really anything since Reina quickly cleaned everything up. She got up and went to the wonky eyed girl’s closet, sure enough when she opened it there was a section filled with purple clothing. But ever since Sayumi and Eri found out about Reina's purple wardrobe problem, they brought her out shopping. And so the purple-ness was slowly being overcrowded by other clothing, thank god. Eririn came out of the bathroom first, she used her whole body and laid on the floor motionless, taking two futons; her face was in one of the blankets and her hair splayed out in different directions. Sayumi couldn't help but think that her Eririn had not changed at all, what with her red and white checkered pajamas and all.
"Eririn~" she laughed as she rolled the girl on her side, "You can't sleep like this, you'll catch a cold." The reply she got was muffled but it seemed her words were heard since the turtle got up and into her futon.
"Good night Sayumin~" the girl said cutely; her eyes were already closed and her voice slowly lost its energy.
"Good night Eririn." Sayumi tucked the other girl in and patted her head, she felt like a mother, but it might be because Eri acted like such a child.
Reina came into the room and looked at Eri. "She asleep?" she asked in a whisper. Sayumi simply nodded and the short girl went to her own futon. Reina looked like she was about to sit down but she got up again, her face with an 'I got it!' expression.
"Sayu, I need to talk to you, let's go downstairs." this was it, the thing Sayumi couldn't wrap her head around or think of a possible thing. What were they going to talk about?

   Downstairs in the living room the two girls talked in hushed whispers as they made their way to the couch. But a word had not passed between them ever since they sat down. Sayumi understood that Reina was gathering her thoughts and all, but she still wanted the other girl to think faster. The ominous darkness that covered the other rooms frightened Sayumi a bit and she needed a bit of talking to bring her mind away from her surroundings.
"Um... Sayu..." here it was.
"Yes?"
"Do you... like Eri?" honestly, there was a limit to how straight to the point a person can be, but Reina seemed to just burst right through that limit.
Not really sure how to answer, or even sure if she heard right she asked, "Uh... What do you mean by like?"
Reina then gave an annoyed and irritated grunt, she didn't like using the word 'love'; Sayumi has never really heard her associate that word with a person before, so she knew Reina was uncomfortable, even still, Sayumi still wanted to make sure she understood the question correctly.
"Ugh... I don't mean a friend type of like or anything..." she trailed off and thought for a moment, "A girlfriend, a girlfriend!" she suddenly exclaimed, but then brought her voice back down when she noticed how loud she was. "Yeah, that kind of like."
It seems Sayumi finally understood the question, but she couldn't figure out why Reina would ask. Was it possible Reina was making sure that she didn't like Eri because Reina liked Sayumi? The chance of that was getting possible by the second, and she decided to lie, if she lied, there would be no penalties she figured.
"No, not that kind of like."
"That's good to know." Reina gave a relieved face, almost as if a large amount of pressure suddenly fell off her shoulders. Sayumi was now really expecting Reina to like her, if that was the case, she wouldn't mind, she wouldn't have to choose between her and Eri. Besides, it might actually be a good idea, her and Reina together that is. They could be the parents; Reina as the dad and Sayumi as the mom with Eri as their child, almost like the family-like relationship the 4th gen seemed to have. She started to daydream (or is it night dream?) about the scenario and Sayumi liked the thought very much. However, she was brought back from her thoughts by Reina's words.
The short girl still had something to say, and Sayumi couldn't wait to hear it, so she turned her whole attention to the other girl, letting her know that she was listening intently. Reina took a breath but she didn't seem nearly as nervous as she was before.

"Actually Sayu I..."
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 :on drink:
It's so lame quoting something from my own fic but I really do love this line
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"You guys suck..."
>< it sounds like something I would say though.. I think I based Mitsui too much off of me o.O"

Haha... only two point of views this time, and Michishige's Point of view is NOT finished!
If I had continued on I would have ended up with a suuuper long post >< (damn bunny and her giant wall of... thought(?)!!)
While writing I kept on asking myself, "Whoa.. It's already pretty long.. Shouldn't I end it somewhere??"

Ah but, if you know the theme colors of Morning Musume, you can probably guess who the next narrator is, and.. I hope I can please people with it...
I was going to have Takahashi's POV in here but.. I'm sorry... It was already really long so...
Really sorry for ending at another cliff hanger, I didn't mean to seriously.. T_T
I was actually planning on resolving one cliff hanger and ending with another but.... sorry...
I'll update soon okay?? ><

I.. am having troubles with the next chapter tho, since just writing it makes me hot and bothered >___>
...
Oh my, am I giving away too much?? Well I guess I'll end it here then
 :kneelbow:
Thanks to everyone that reads this though, this is my first fic, so reading comments and seeing people actually reading what I write gives me courage to keep it up.

I think.. the next chapter may come soon, I still have a lot of things to do, but... I'm having fun reading over what I write, since I write in the middle of the night my mind is a total blank (it's easier to switch POV's like that..) so when I read it the next day I can't help but wonder 'what will happen next??' ><
lol I'm such a freak like that I guess..
 :byebye:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: ShikyoxYaiba on September 18, 2008, 05:44:24 AM
Wai~ I just finished reading it. Oh my, Eri's causing lots more trouble. And now the Rokkie triangle (minus Miki) is about to begin. Then there's the Love-Turtle-Bean problem, too. o-o

Take your time with the next chapter - it's never good to rush, I had to take a ton of time to update my own thread. xD School really does get in the way.
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: JFC on September 18, 2008, 07:27:18 AM
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oh, and lol at your different uses of the word 'awwwwwww'
For some reason, at the time, it just seemed the thing to do. :lol:


1st part -
Linlin was so cute calling Junjun "big sis". :oops:


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"You guys suck..." she said,
:mon lmao:



2nd part - /me gasps
Oh boy, preparing for raburabu complications! :o
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: WinterAir on September 18, 2008, 07:42:40 AM
ah~ a cliffhanger... tho I think I know whats gonna happen in that scene lol. But I'm really excited for the next narrator's point of view ^^ really wanna get into more of what she actually thinks.

haha... now it's me that got distracted from h.w/study by this fic... >.< 2 exams tomorrow... but I'm still reading your story, cuz its so awesome that I would risk my grades for it lol
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle?
Post by: ringo-hime on September 18, 2008, 01:35:01 PM
Ohh i love the *th and 7th gen bonding~ feel sorry for Koha

oHH and very cute Rokkie bonding~ ahihi...
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
Post by: KizuRai on November 13, 2008, 06:41:17 AM
 :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook:

My dear god it has been awhile...
I don't really understand why I stopped... maybe because I was so intimidated by all the better writers around me XD
Ah well... too bad for you guys, I'm continuing!! ><
AND I'VE GOT A LONG @$$ CHAP TO BOOT


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Chapter 6

   Hearing the voice of the Sub-leader startled her immensely; one of those low pitched yells seemed to have slipped out. The other girl walked up to her, an odd look was in her eyes. "Gaki-san, why are you here...?" the intense look the taller girl gave her was causing her voice to shake. Also she found herself unconsciously walking backwards as Risa continued walking towards her. "I... thought you were busy?" something in the back of her mind declared that there was something wrong and she wasn't sure whether to run or not.

"I lied."
Before she knew it, her back hit the wall. Risa had her arms up on either side of her, locking Ai between the wall and the taller girl. The plan to run away quickly flew out the window. Ai looked up into those intense eyes and felt herself drawn to them. "Gaki-san..." she breathed out, causing the other girl to look away and stiffen slightly. When she looked back, the intense lust filled eyes were replaced with hunger, as if Ai looked like a piece of meat to Risa. Then Risa went for the kill, going right in and pushing her lips upon Ai's. Risa's left hand made its way under her shirt and rubbed her back whereas the other hand traveled to her stomach, stroking the sensitive skin.
The short girl's mind could not react, did not know how to react, but her body seemed to know pretty well what to do. A moan erupted from her throat and she felt the other girl quickly take advantage of that and slipped her tongue in. A battle for dominance started and Ai was surprisingly losing. After minutes of heated battle they broke apart gasping for air. Another moan came from the back of Ai's throat when she felt the other girl's tongue on her neck. Risa trailed kisses down her neck to her collarbone, causing the skin to burn with each touch.

"Risa..." Without even realizing, Ai was saying the other girl's name; both of them had stiffened at it. Ai looked at the younger girl and saw that she looked back, her eyes filled with what seemed like happiness.
"So... this is what it took for us to get closer?" Risa said laughing, making her blush at the comment.
"I'm sorry for pushing you away like that." Ai lowered her head in apology. Risa just shook her head, putting her hand under the other girl's chin, lifting her head and making their eyes meet.
"I love you." Risa merely stated, her eyes betrayed the strong emotion she held and Ai understood just how much she was loved. She felt her eyes burn and she quickly blinked back the tears that were threatening to come. The taller of the two seemed to notice and pulled Ai into a hug.
"I forgive you for everything because I love you. Ai-chan, let's start over again, but this time we're going to be together." Ai was a sucker for one of those cheesy lines and Risa knew it. Her voice was caught in her throat and she was too speechless to reply, instead, a vigorous nod and more tears were given.
"Silly girl, you still cry at the slightest things don't you?"

   After half an hour of calming words and warming cuddles, Ai felt happiness spread throughout her body. They began to talk after a few kisses and confessions later; it was something long overdue ever since Ai became leader. An hour passed since that make-out session Ai realized after awhile, and she was the one that stopped it too. "Risa," they both agreed that they would be on first name basis when they were alone but they would act normally in front of everyone, "do you want to continue from before?"
Risa gave her one of those exaggerated blank expressions she was so famous for; her eyebrows furrowed in confusion and her head twitched forward abruptly, a soft "Eh?" could be heard. Oh how Ai missed Risa for her lovable reactions, the girl was absolutely adorable when she was confused. Obviously Risa would be confused though, Ai never explained her train of thought, and she suddenly asked a question that had played out perfectly fine in her head.

Realizing her mistake in not explaining, Ai grabbed the back of the other girl's neck, pulling her into a sweet kiss. She broke off quickly though, making the younger girl yearn for more.
"Ai-chan, that was so cruel of you!" Risa flailed her arms to show just how cruel that little move was. The shorter girl grinned in reply, she got the reaction she wanted and was obviously satisfied with her sudden gain in power.

"Want to head over to my place?" She asked slyly.
 At first Risa didn't seem to get it and answered like she normally would, "Yeah sure okay..." but then it finally seemed to process in her head and her eyes widened at the thought.”Oh! Wait... that..." the younger girl blushed furiously, her personality completely different from before.
Maybe their relationship will be just like this, fun and exciting; emotion was in it as much as desire was, that was always a good sign of a long relationship; and of course, Ai wanted to see that sexy side of Risa once more.
They both got up and carried their bags; Risa reached out her hand and grabbed the other girl's. Ai looked up at the girl beside her, she smiled, one that reached her eyes and really sparkled, she was happy after so long.
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"I like Eri... in that way..."

No words could describe just how shocked the cute bunny was; she had not expected such an answer. What she could not understand was why it had to be confirmed that Sayumi didn't love their lovable turtle as well.
"Why are you telling me this?"
Any sort of pleasantries were completely forgotten under the bitterness Sayumi was feeling at the moment. To her it felt like Reina just claimed herself cuter than Sayumi, which was how horrible the situation was.
"I wanted to make sure you didn't like Eri as well, I want to keep everything between us okay you know?"
Well, maybe she shouldn't be that mad, Reina did consider her feelings after all, and it was her own stupid fault for declining she liked Eririn. 'Wait...' there was something disturbing making its way into her mind.

If
Reina and Eri got together, what would happen to her? Before when Eri hung out with Gaki-san, she at least had Reina with her, now what? She didn't want to be alone, she didn't want both her loves gone; she was going to end up as the third wheel!
"Sayu you okay? You look a little pale..."
"I'm perfectly fine, you're just seeing me in a bad light; it is very dim here. Hey shouldn't we head back to sleep? I'm exhausted."
"Ah, you're right, sorry about that."
They both stood up and made their way upstairs, trying their best not to make the steps creak in case Eri woke up.
"'night" Reina whispered, and they both headed to their individual futons.

   For Sayumi it was the worst night in her life, she just could not sleep no matter how many times she forced her eyes closed. They just seemed to open at the slightest sound in her surroundings and the dark was beginning to scare her. What was more; the words from her and Reina's talk repeated itself in her mind.
A sound of movement could be heard from the futon beside her. Her eyes shot open and she saw a figure try desperately to be quiet and head out the door. Sayumi in turn sat up and stared at the digital clock on the desk next to Reina. It was 6:30, that girl was always late half an hour but can always seem to get up early in the morning; so obviously she never overslept, what in the world does Eririn do to keep herself distracted for 30 minutes?

Sayumi pushed all thoughts to the side and got up, not even bothering to be careful since Reina always slept like a log. She left the quiet room and headed downstairs; she heard the refrigerator (or was it refrigeeta in Eri's case?)door being opened. She saw half of the turtle's body from the living room and decided to tease Eri a bit. Quietly, she snuck behind Eririn, waiting for the other girl to finish looking through the fridge.
"There doesn't seem to be anything to eat..." The energetic girl closed the fridge door and turned around.
"Boo!" Eririn screamed loudly, or, almost screamed loudly because Sayumi quickly covered her mouth, muffling the startled girl.
"Sayu~" Eri whined after Sayumi removed her hands, that girl was just too adorable sometimes that it was hard not to tease her. She smiled at the girl; her medium length hair all ruffled and showing no sign of being combed. Eririn was like that, extremely cute without having to try, it just made one want to cuddle her. Sayumi ripped her eyes away from the other girl whom was bringing her shirt up a little too high while she was trying to scratch her back.

"Hungry?" Sayumi asked, she wasn't entirely hungry herself but she wanted to cook for the turtle, plus anything was better than having the other girl cook herself. Eri nodded, yawning a bit and then sitting on the dining chair, waiting for the narcissistic bunny to cook. Sayumi couldn't help but look in disbelief, all she asked was whether or not the other girl was hungry or not and Eri immediately assumed she was cooking. She couldn't tell if Eri was too spoiled or knew Sayumi too well. Well it didn't matter since she was going to cook anyway.

   Sayumi tried some eggs, giving Eri a sunny side up; even though she didn't have much confidence in them, her cooking skills were pretty good. She brought the plate and put it on the table in front of the hungrily waiting girl and then went off to sit in the seat opposite from Eri. She watched in amusement as Eri wolfed down her breakfast, it was a good idea to use more than one egg it would seem. She leaned her head against her palm as her elbow was set against the table top. She... loved Eri right? She did, but was it more than Reina? She was still upset over how Reina indirectly rejected her. Even if the wonky-eyed girl didn't mean it, it still hurt. Eri was for her after all it would appear.

"Sayu~" Sayumi was brought back from her train of thought and the first thing she noticed was how messy the other girl's face was.
"Geez, Eririn~" She grabbed a tissue and began to wipe the pieces of egg from the now pouting face.
"Sayu I can do that myself you know..." Despite what the girl said she stayed still and allowed the food to be wiped off. Sayumi noticed worry in Eri's eyes, it was for a split second but Sayumi recognized it immediately.
"Eri what's wrong?" The other girl was startled for a moment before she replied.
"I should be asking you that. Sayu, you don't look so good, you okay?" The bunny didn't answer for a long time, instead she gestured the girl to sit on her lap. Eri obliged of course, there was no reason for her not to. Sayumi wrapped her arms around the turtle's waist, her head falling on the other girls back, and she deeply sighed.
"What if..." She started, but trailed off soon after. Her words clung onto the air, creating a silence between the two.

"Sayu... We're friends right? Just tell me, I wanna help." Maybe it was because they were friends that Sayumi didn't really want to say her words, but if she didn't Reina will instead and she wouldn't like that.
"Eri I like you, go out with me?" With the thought of Reina she decided to go with the direct approach, the "What if" theory completely unsaid, it is all left to outright rejection or acceptation now.
Eri seemed to take a long time to think, and with Sayumi's arms around the girl she realized that Eri had not moved since. Sayumi's worst fears were starting to show, she did not want rejection, but she much less wanted Eri to be freaked out. She didn't want their friendship to end because of this so she never said anything, but with Reina threatening to take Eri away she couldn't help but act quickly.

"Look Eririn I'm sorry, forget I ever---"
"How long?" The girl in her arms spun around and stared right into her eyes. Sayumi merely looked back in confusion, how long what?
"How long have you liked me?" Eri repeated, making herself clearer as obviously Sayumi had not understood the first time. The bunny took a moment to think, shifting her eyes to the kitchen, looking at it but not exactly. Then she looked back at Eri, a large grin on her face.
"Oh I've fallen for you many times, but the first time was during our training camp, second time might have been our first photo shoot, it was the first time I thought somebody was as cute as me, third time was--" The girl on her lap leaned down and kissed her on the cheek, both stopping Sayumi from talking and causing her to blush to a deep crimson.

"Eririn?"
"Well, I've never thought over things such as love since I have never exactly experienced it..."
"If you did I would be a little surprised and angry." Sayumi added, earning her a smile from Eri as she continued.
"But... I guess we can try and see if this will work." It took a moment for the adorable (now beautiful) girl's words to sink in and make sense in Sayumi's mind. She felt her eyes bulge out when she finally understood what Eririn meant.
"Really?! Th-that means we're--"
"One question," worry began to make its way into Sayumi's mind yet again when she heard this, she just wanted some sort of indication or Eri's way of saying that they were now together, she needed some sort of assurance, and a question might make things worse, "which one of us is going to be the dominant one in this relationship?" The girl practically loomed over Sayumi with a sexy smirk on her face as she asked the question. Any sort of worry instantly flew out the window as the black haired girl heard this.
"Why Eririn, of course it will be me~" Sayumi threw her devilish smirk back at Eri, causing the other girl to pout for a second then realized something and grinned again.
"I guess I'll just have to prove you wrong."
"What--??" Eri bent down to reach for the lips of the girl under her, Sayumi recognized the motion and tilted her head up.

"Ahem..."
The action was almost completed until they were interrupted by a short but rather frighteningly angry girl standing halfway between them and the stairs. They both froze, looking at Reina with a shock from being caught so early into their relationship. Their positioning wasn't exactly going to convince Reina otherwise either; Eri was on Sayumi's lap, her now girlfriend's legs half wrapped around her waist and Eri's arms fully wrapped around her neck. Sayumi didn't look all that much better, her arms rested on Eri's thighs and wrapped around the other girl's waist, almost resting on Eri's butt.
"Sorry did I interrupt something?" Reina looked positively furious, if it wasn't for the years they have known the glitter loving girl, they would have not realized just what level of anger this was. The short girl's eyebrows were simply furrowed together but it wasn't the outer appearance that caused Sayumi great fear. It was what looked like a giant lion erupting from behind Reina, and she felt that the girl would soon start baring teeth if Eri stayed frozen.

"Eririn... I think we should tell her...." She whispered to the girl on her lap.
"Nnn..." Eri nodded, slowly removing herself from Sayumi and Sayumi had to refrain from pulling the other girl back after missing Eri's body warmth. She stood up alongside Eri as they both looked at Reina.
"Reina--"
"You two together or what?" That was so very much like Reina, she never did like slow explanations; she was always straight to the point. Reina had cut off Eri before she could say anything and looked directly at Sayumi as she said it. Sayumi could tell the hint of betrayal in her eyes and she couldn't help but look away, feelings of guilt washing over her.

"We just became a couple; sorry you had to find out like this." Eri apologized; Sayumi was pretty sure that wasn't the main root of Reina's anger, nevertheless, she watched the tough girl's expression soften under the gaze of Eri, making Sayumi feel even more worse than before.
Was this such a wise choice? She asked herself, replaying other scenarios in her head to come up with a better outcome. Then again, everything already happened, there was no going back on it, and Sayumi certainly was not going to suddenly claim that everything was a joke to make people feel better.

There was a long, awkward pause, all parties unsure what to say and afraid to break the silence before them.
"Listen, I have to go somewhere, sorry to kick you guys out so suddenly, but my mom asked me to help her shop for some food." Reina said all this with a smile and an apologetic voice but Sayumi knew she really was just kicking them out. She didn't blame her though, and getting kicked out was better for all of them she believed.
"I understand, don't worry about it, let's go Eririn." She began to head for the door, but noticed that Eri still stood there looking at Reina with an expression Sayumi couldn't tell what it was. Reina had her head turned to the side but her wonky eyes were half on Eri. An odd, inexplicable atmosphere surrounded the two.

"Eri?" That seemed to catch the girl's attention, as Eri looked at Sayumi and smiled.
"Coming~" Eri ran up and latched her arm around Sayumi's, and the two headed out of Reina's place. When they had gone past the stairs and were standing on the sidewalk they both stopped.
"What should we do now?" Sayumi asked, thinking of something for the two of them to do.
"Let's go on our first date then!" Sayumi stared at the other girl, was she serious? Either way though, that still didn't really answer what they should do, but Eri suggesting it was rather surprising.
"Never thought you would ask." the pink loving girl replied, a wide grin on her face and a new spring in her step.

Sayumi finally got Eririn.
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 :sweat:
I had to re-read some parts of my story again to remember all the little details and plots I had planned out...
Well... I tried to remember them, don't think it worked so well though...
Hmm... when I read through the previous chapters I just wanted to scrap it, but screw that!
If I try to rewrite anything I'll just lose the motivation to write XD
So Imma just gonna... go right through with what I had originally planned  :cool1:

I realized lately at all the KameShige pairings floating about the fanfic sections... what is with that?  :lol:
Now... how do you change the title thing for threads?? o.O" :: randomly presses buttons ::
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
Post by: ShikyoxYaiba on November 13, 2008, 08:27:38 AM
Blah. You just distracted me from my Chemistry FRQs for quite a good amount of time. T__T

...But that's okay. AN UPDATE, AN UPDATE!! *dances around happily* And oh dang. Sayu turned around and now poor Reina... TT__TT But...I wonder how this will turn out for Eri. I mean, she says she'll try it out with Sayu, so a lot of things can happen from there on... (And now I feel bad for Junjun, who's left out of this whole Rokkie mess. I mean, she likes Eri, too...right? Too much love for the turtle... But that makes the conflict!~) Next chapter starts with Gaki-san...

Good luck on staying updated. <3
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
Post by: meowz on November 13, 2008, 03:02:18 PM
...Shige-san, that was a bad, bad move.

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"I understand, don't worry about it, let's go Eririn." She began to head for the door, but noticed that Eri still stood there looking at Reina with an expression Sayumi couldn't tell what it was. Reina had her head turned to the side but her wonky eyes were half on Eri. An odd, inexplicable atmosphere surrounded the two.
hm...suspicious
We still don't know what's on Kame's mind do we... Was there one in Kame's POV yet? Will there be one?  :P

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Sayumi finally got Eririn.
Somehow the first thing that popped to my mind when I saw this was...Pokemon :lol:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
Post by: KizuRai on November 13, 2008, 04:58:07 PM
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Sayumi finally got Eririn.
Somehow the first thing that popped to my mind when I saw this was...Pokemon :lol:

LOL Actually yea... made me think of pokemon too.. but there's a significant reason for her words...
I think....
but yea, happy to see people commenting ^^;

lol Shikyo! do your Chem!
and @meowz: so you do lurk... you just don't update your own fic  :(
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
Post by: CrypticShadow8 on November 13, 2008, 09:25:23 PM
Poor Reina :fainted:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
Post by: JFC on November 13, 2008, 09:43:16 PM
Chapter 6
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"Gaki-san, why are you here...?" the intense look the taller girl gave her was causing her voice to shake. Also she found herself unconsciously walking backwards as Risa continued walking towards her.

"I lied."
Before she knew it, her back hit the wall. Risa had her arms up on either side of her, locking Ai between the wall and the taller girl. The plan to run away quickly flew out the window. Ai looked up into those intense eyes and felt herself drawn to them.
Woooooo! :twisted:



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*RISA MAKES HER MOVE*
YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH RISA!!! :muffin:



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"I'm sorry for pushing you away like that." Ai lowered her head in apology. Risa just shook her head, putting her hand under the other girl's chin, lifting her head and making their eyes meet.
"I love you." Risa merely stated, her eyes betrayed the strong emotion she held and Ai understood just how much she was loved. She felt her eyes burn and she quickly blinked back the tears that were threatening to come. The taller of the two seemed to notice and pulled Ai into a hug.
"I forgive you for everything because I love you. Ai-chan, let's start over again, but this time we're going to be together." Ai was a sucker for one of those cheesy lines and Risa knew it. Her voice was caught in her throat and she was too speechless to reply, instead, a vigorous nod and more tears were given.
"Silly girl, you still cry at the slightest things don't you?"
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!
:wriggly:



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An hour passed since that make-out session Ai realized after awhile, and she was the one that stopped it too. "Risa," they both agreed that they would be on first name basis when they were alone but they would act normally in front of everyone, "do you want to continue from before?"
Risa gave her one of those exaggerated blank expressions she was so famous for; her eyebrows furrowed in confusion and her head twitched forward abruptly, a soft "Eh?" could be heard.
Oh HELLZ yeah!!! :cow:

JUST SAY "YES" RISA! :yep:



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"Want to head over to my place?" She asked slyly.
 At first Risa didn't seem to get it and answered like she normally would, "Yeah sure okay..." but then it finally seemed to process in her head and her eyes widened at the thought.”Oh! Wait... that..." the younger girl blushed furiously, her personality completely different from before.
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayum! :hump:



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*SAYU FINDS OUT REINA RABURABU'S ERI*
Sayu = :cry:



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It was 6:30, that girl was always late half an hour but can always seem to get up early in the morning; so obviously she never overslept, what in the world does Eririn do to keep herself distracted for 30 minutes?
MUST...RESIST URGE TO.........MAKE...PERVVY......COMMENT.  :-X



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*KAMESHIGE IN KITCHEN*
Awwwwww...:oops:



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"Sayu~" Sayumi was brought back from her train of thought and the first thing she noticed was how messy the other girl's face was.
"Geez, Eririn~" She grabbed a tissue and began to wipe the pieces of egg from the now pouting face.
Man, someone needs to tell Eri that being so cute can be lethal.   :roll:



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*SAYU CONFESSES TO ERI*
:hip aww:
Dang, it would be so awkward if Reina were to come in right now.



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"Ahem..."
The action was almost completed until they were interrupted by a short but rather frighteningly angry girl standing halfway between them and the stairs.
Oh shit.
:scared:

I so called it.



Poor Reina. 
:hip cry:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
Post by: KizuRai on November 14, 2008, 12:24:31 AM
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It was 6:30, that girl was always late half an hour but can always seem to get up early in the morning; so obviously she never overslept, what in the world does Eririn do to keep herself distracted for 30 minutes?
MUST...RESIST URGE TO.........MAKE...PERVVY......COMMENT.  :-X

LOL go ahead! I was wondering if anybody would >__> Cuz I totally thought of something bad when I reread it haha


Edit:: JFC: is that a Junjun gif there on your sig?!?! :D
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
Post by: Fenrir on November 14, 2008, 02:54:18 AM
All the Takagaki love draws me out from lurking in the fanfic section recently. :lol: I blame Estrea and her angsty Ai. :lol:

Anyways, love the Takagaki :heart: I had a huge grin on my face afterwards. Better stop reading these at work :lol: Keep it up!  :on GJ:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
Post by: meowz on November 15, 2008, 05:33:01 AM
lol Shikyo! do your Chem!
and @meowz: so you do lurk... you just don't update your own fic  :(

eh? But I haven't written any fics XD you must have confused me with someone else
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
Post by: KizuRai on November 15, 2008, 05:54:13 AM
lol Shikyo! do your Chem!
and @meowz: so you do lurk... you just don't update your own fic  :(

eh? But I haven't written any fics XD you must have confused me with someone else

Eh have I?? then geez I feel terribly embarrassed, well you should start one then XD
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
Post by: JFC on November 16, 2008, 12:35:22 AM
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It was 6:30, that girl was always late half an hour but can always seem to get up early in the morning; so obviously she never overslept, what in the world does Eririn do to keep herself distracted for 30 minutes?
MUST...RESIST URGE TO.........MAKE...PERVVY......COMMENT.  :-X

LOL go ahead! I was wondering if anybody would >__> Cuz I totally thought of something bad when I reread it haha
:hump:

'nuff said, I'd say. ;D


Edit:: JFC: is that a Junjun gif there on your sig?!?! :D
Yep. :cow:
It's a "shrunken" version so it's permissible as a sig. The "full" version is about 3x as large (in terms of filesize) and can be found here in the Yorosen thread:
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=14792.msg524599#msg524599
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
Post by: rainer on November 16, 2008, 11:24:55 AM
Finally I've decided to stop lurking around & leave a comment.  :lol:
I love the TakaGaki raburabu moments.  :heart: They make me feel uberly excited for some reasons.  XD

Wrong move for Sayu thou..  :banghead: Poor Reina.  :cry:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
Post by: Sukoshi on November 16, 2008, 12:13:44 PM
wah TakaGaki got together already!  very nice~

Ouch.  Double ouch.  Can't believe Sayu made two bad moves in a row...lying and then betraying Reina.  but at least she got Eri (for this chapter anyways) XD

*waves my kameshige flag around*

poor Reina though...but I think she'll be okay...can't wait to read about her revenge XD
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 7 - Nov 17]
Post by: KizuRai on November 17, 2008, 09:00:06 AM
:sweat: (Have any of you noticed how I always open with one of these guys? :lol:)

Phew... got a chapter out within um... 5 days woo~
well, it's like exactly 0:00 here XD (I use the 24 hour time... no clue why o.O")
I usually just get random urges on updating, I guess today is one of those days
plus I have something to celebrate for ^^

@rainer: OMG another lurker out!! XD
Yeah... talking bout any of my fav pairings get me uber excited too ><

@Sukoshi: lol hmmm... well... not really revenge... more like.. Tanakacchi's gonna go on a rampage?

Wow, so I'm kinda amazed at the amount of people that think Michishige did a bad move XD I have no comment LOL not because I wrote it but because... I'm not sure where I'm going with this  :P
Oh well...

Here's a chapter to celebrate me FINALLY finishing my personal statement and short response!!! ^^;
 :on woohoo:  :on grad: <----(lol whoops, this one is a little too early)

So this time accompanying Mitsui's long ass thoughts is... Niigaki-san's!!! (I'm sure you all figured that one out though :P)
and what's more?? CONFLICT
 

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Chapter 7

The morning sun shone through the window of the hotel room. Birds could be heard chirping in the distance, some were probably on the balcony.

   Risa loved mornings; however, this one morning beat all the rest hands down. This was because not only was the sun shining and the birds were chirping, but also beside her slept a beautiful girl. Risa turned her body to come face to face with the aforementioned girl. Her short -but beginning to grow- hair was splayed over the pillow. Her breathing was slow and steady; her face had a soft and peaceful look. How much or how long Risa admired Ai was unknown, but she felt as if it wasn't enough. She wanted to spend her whole life admiring the girl in front of her. She smiled wider as she saw Ai grip tighter onto her precious red blanket and then softly murmur "Risa..." in her sleep.
   The whole setting felt surreal, she couldn't believe the events that had happened. She replayed the moments from last night; the heated kisses and the um... exploration they did felt like a dream, Risa felt herself blush heavily simply at the thought. They had both agreed that, although they were a couple now, they weren't ready for it just yet. However... Couple! That word alone brought joy to her heart; just knowing that her love was not unrequited and was reciprocated allowed her to sigh in relief. Everything will be okay now, whatever ordeals will be triumphed over by the both of them now, no more solos.
Maybe she sighed a little too loudly because Ai began to stir.

"'morning..." She grumbled; she still sounded half asleep and maybe even a little angry for waking up.
"Good morning" Ai supported her body with her arms and pushed herself up. She was now in a half sitting position, her body facing Risa; her right hand supporting her and her left hand going up to push her hair back. The word 'Hot' repeated itself in Risa's mind and she fully admired the sight before her. She loved how she was allowed to look now compared to the other times in which she would force herself to tear her eyes away from the girl. Ai was especially sexy during concerts too, and it was near impossible not to stare.

"What time did you wake up?"
"Um... a little before you did."
"Thinking?" Risa loved Ai's one word question sometimes, especially when she understood her. It was one of those things where she felt she really knew Ai more than the others. Ai seemed to understand Risa as well, maybe she wasn't correct all the time, but Ai sometimes just simply knew what had gone on in Risa's mind. That should be expected though, they had known each other for more than seven years, but Risa always seems to find new things to admire in Ai.

"Yeah I was," she replied softly "still can't believe everything that happened though..." A soft laugh was heard from the girl sitting beside her.
"I know how you feel; I can finally do this..." Ai half turned her body, bent down and kissed Risa on the lips, afterwards her face lingered there for a moment, the two locking eye contact. "Or this..." Ai's head moved lower and kissed Risa on the neck; she felt her body lurch a bit from the contact and a soft moan escaped from her lips. "Or..." they locked eye contact once more, Ai's eyes flashed a burning desire for something, and Risa knew what that something was. She couldn't help but blush under the stare of the girl above her, she felt naked and vulnerable even. "Well, I guess not that yet, but just this is good enough." Ai brought her head down to capture her lips once more, only this time it was longer and more heated.

   They suddenly heard a knock on the door and Risa groaned loudly; Ai just pouted but smiled at Risa's reaction. She got off the bed and headed for the door, looking through the peep hole. The older of the two then gasped and turned around; her expression pressed a giant panic button in Risa's mind.
"Who's there?" The longer haired girl whispered.
"It's Reina"
"So? Let her in." Risa was confused why the girl would feel threatened over one of their group members.
"No, that's the problem; it's early morning, we're both in our pajamas and... well I don't want rumors to start about us again." Risa couldn't help but wince at the other girl's words. 'Again', it was because of their previous closeness that Ai tried to put distance between their relationship. The reaction queen didn't care much on what other people would say, but Ai didn't seem strong enough to handle all the rumors and teasing. That's why one day they had a talk, and Ai said she wanted some distance.
"Fine, I understand, what do you want me to do?" Risa gave in; she didn't want their relationship to end again.
"Uh... hide here!" Ai ushered the highly apprehensive girl into her closet and closed it. Then she went up to the door, gave herself a little clothes check, and then opened the door.

   Risa couldn't really see much except through the lines the closet door design had. However, she could hear perfectly fine and realized Tanakacchi was upset about something.
"Reina! Are you okay? Were... were you crying?" Ai closed the door when Tanakacchi entered and sat at the edge of the bed. It didn't seem like the small girl wanted to talk, she probably just wanted some sort of counsel. Ai went to sit beside Tanakacchi, worry clearly in her voice.
"Even though I might not be much help, I think it would be better if you told me what was wrong..." There was silence, and Risa didn't really know what was going on. She could only see their torso and could not see either of their faces at all.
She then saw Ai sit closer to Tanakacchi and wrap her left arm around her shoulder. If Risa didn't understand the situation she would have been slightly jealous, but right now her concern was for the usually energetic girl; albeit some of those times were anger, but at least she had energy.
"Ai-chan I..." Tanakacchi finally spoke, and what a horribly broken voice it was too. It was completely unlike the usually filled with confidence voice the leader and sub-leader always heard. It was a voice filled with hurt that made Risa want to cry just listening to it.

   There was silence yet again and then Risa noticed Tanakacchi leaning closer to Ai. There was an unsettling silence after that and for some reason Risa just knew what was happening. She was about to leap out of the closet but Ai beat her to it.
"What are you doing?!" Ai quickly pushed the short girl away and stood up, slightly away from Tanakacchi. The other girl just stayed there, sitting on the edge of the bed unmoving.
Since Ai stood up Risa could actually see her face now, it was filled with shock. Then the Morning Musume leader glanced at the closet with a guilty look. Risa caught this but didn't blame Ai, instead she wanted to jump out and scream, 'Ai's mine!' of course she refrained from doing so.
After awhile Tanakacchi stood up as well, her eyes fixated on Ai. "Look, Ai-chan just listen..." she started as she advanced towards the other girl.
"No wait, Reina. I'm with Ri-- Gaki-san now." A flicker of anger flashed through Tanakacchi's eyes as she heard this. Then she smiled, at least, Risa thought it was a smile, since she couldn't see her mouth very well. The glitter loving girl grabbed Ai's wrist and pulled her onto the bed. Ai gave a startled scream since she obviously did not anticipate such a move; neither did Risa for that matter as she was going through slight shock as well. Tanakacchi took this moment to position herself on top of the short haired girl and pushed her lips onto Ai's.

If there ever was a moment to jump out it would be now, as Risa bursted from the closet startling Tanakacchi. The slightly younger girl screamed and leaped away to the far side of the room. Ai quickly got up with an expression saying, 'My god, I have a headache.'
"Ah, didn't know you were there..." Tanakacchi finally said, obviously still in shock since that was a fairly redundant thing to say.
"Yeah well I was, and I would appreciate it if you kept you're hands off of my Ai-chan." Risa looked towards the girl in question expecting some sort of back-up.
"Gaki-san wait..." was her unexpected reply, and Risa felt a little pain swelling in her chest as she looked away from the two of them in anger. "Reina... do you...?" Ai asked a fairly subtle question to Tanakacchi and Risa's anger only built up.
'Why is Ai asking this again?'
"Yeah I like you, problem?" Tanakacchi was back to her confident self, only she leveled up to obnoxiously cocky now. There was definitely something wrong with her, but Risa couldn't feel sympathy anymore.

   Risa looked at Ai again, noting her expression as she stared at Tanakacchi. There was a small conflict within Ai's mind, Risa could tell. 'Ai, with such a big problem, are we going to lose our relationship again?' She knew Ai had some feelings for Tanakacchi, but also knew a lot of it had to do with lust. She didn't want to lose Ai, especially when they had finally gotten together, but she couldn't change the girl's mind if she really did decide to go with Tanakacchi.

'Why us?'
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   They had decided to crash at Junjun's place since she lived alone, reducing the hassle of over-polite parents and the reserved and awkward attitude they had to give them. It was a nice little apartment that was not too far from the train station for convenience. It was neat and tidy as well, quite an amazing feat since living by yourself tended to lead to laziness.
"Do you guys want something to drink?" Junjun asked as they entered the place; she immediately headed for the kitchen after removing her shoes.
"Orange juice!!!"
"Do you have apple juice?"
"Water..." Junjun looked at Aika with one raised brow.
"Water? Are you sure you don't want something else?" Aika waved her hands in front of her, signaling that water was just fine. Junjun shrugged and gave everyone their respective drinks. An echo of thanks was given to the tall girl in return as she went to take a seat at the dining table everyone seemed to be sitting at.
She took a seat across from Aika and because of Junjun's long legs, accidentally brushed against the thigh of the baby faced girl. Aika quickly stifled her squeak when she felt the movement, but Junjun seemed to notice.
"Sorry..." she quickly said, making sure to tuck her own legs under her chair. Aika couldn't help but mentally kick herself for causing Junjun to take it the wrong way. If anything, she enjoyed that brief skin contact and was rather upset that the girl across from her was making sure it was not going to happen again.

"So what should we do?" piped up the energetic Kusumi-san; the glass cup that used to contain orange juice, empty before her. That girl can get hyperactive on anything besides chocolate it seemed. Aika supposed that maybe it was for the better that there were energetic people around sometimes; since they seemed to balance out the calmer portion of the group, mainly Aika and sometimes Junjun. However, the tall banana loving girl can occasionally get into some heated arguments too, or have sudden bursts of energy, but that was good, in a way she balanced out into a fun person.
'There I go babbling about Junjun again...' she couldn't help but think to herself, shutting off her train of thought.
"I have a Wii in my room, we can play that."
"OH! I want to play Raving Rabbits!"
"Oh my god I love that game!" and with that, Linlin and Kusumi-san both raced to Junjun's room, which they assumed was the one between the computer room and the washroom, but stopped when they got to the doorway.

"What's wrong?" Aika asked, slightly worried from the expression of shock both of them seemed to carry. She joined them and stood at the doorway, peering inside. What she saw was definitely not expected; she saw giant posters of all the current Morning Musume members on the walls and a few photobooks can be seen on the desk. She couldn't help but blush when she saw a picture of herself blown up on the wall as well, and it worsened when she realized which photo it was. Out of all the photo posters the tall girl could get, it just had to be a sexy one. Next to hers she couldn't help but notice though, was the bikini wearing Leader and she involuntarily sighed inwardly.
'So it wasn't just me huh...'
The biggest one was Junjun herself however, and Aika couldn't help but want it herself. The expression of the girl in the poster made Aika feel warm inside, but she also felt a little bit embarrassed to stare at it.

   Overcoming the shock, Linlin went into the room to get the aforementioned game console, which was also the main reason for even entering the room. Kusumi-san seemed to have shaken away from the shock as well since she exclaimed loudly that, "Junjun is like a Morning Musume wota huh?" Aika was about to comment that that was rude until she saw the expression Junjun seemed to wear. It was a mix of amusement and slight embarrassment, but it seemed she was fine with the comment overall.
The two noisy girls grabbed the game console and brought it out into the living room where the television was. Sounds of yelling, screams of victory, screams of loss, and overall loud chatter could be heard from Junjun's apartment until it was 8pm. Halfway through they paid less attention to playing and more for talking. They became much closer than before and seemed to understand each other more.
"Do you guys want something to eat?" Junjun continued to act like the host and took care of everyone. She had gotten up and went into the kitchen, looking through the refrigerator.
"What time is it?" asked Koharu-san, craning her neck around to search for a clock.
"It's already eight! I have to go home..." Linlin said with a sad face, Aika couldn't help but notice and patted her on the back.
"Don't worry; we'll hang out like this again sometime." Linlin looked back at the girl beside her and smiled.
"Ah, Koharu has to go home too or her parents will be angry." Koharu-san said, almost expecting some counsel from Aika as well, but Aika however, chose to ignore the look and gave Linlin one last pat on the head.

"Koharu-san, are you getting picked up?" The girl in question frowned slightly but replied back.
"No, I'm walking with Linlin since I live close to her."
"Oh" was her only response, earning a curious look from Koharu-san, "ah it's just that, my parents aren't at home and I live pretty far, so I was hoping I could catch a ride with you." they spoke on a more familiar term since they understood each other more now.
"Sorry..." Koharu-san apologized with a guilty look.
"No no, it's not your fault don't worry." she gave the girl a reassuring look but then absently looked around, "But, what should I do now?" she asked no one in particular.
"You can sleep over?" someone who hadn't been talking the whole time suddenly spoke and Aika turned to look at the girl. Junjun stood at the doorway of the kitchen, leaning lightly on her side.
"Where?" again, Aika almost kicked herself, it was pretty obvious whose place she meant but she just couldn't process the information right.
"Here." Junjun said simply, she smiled at Aika, telling her not to be so polite all the time. Somehow she must have known that Aika would have politely declined.
"O-okay... thank you Junjun." Aika shyly smiled back, not noticing the growing displeasure showing itself on Koharu-san's face.

"No!"
"Huh?" Both her and Junjun looked questioningly at Koharu-san, not understanding why it wouldn't be a good idea for miss smiles to sleep over at Junjun's.
"I-I...” unable to give a good reason for her sudden outburst, the tall girl shifted her eyes to the floor.”No... It's nothing..." Aika scrutinized Koharu-san for a moment, trying to understand what in the world went on in that girl's head.
"C'mon Linlin, we should hurry, we might miss our train." and with that the two were off.
Junjun went to the door with them and continually waved at them as they left. Aika joined her as well, thinking that it was some Chinese custom; she watched as Koharu-san stalked off while Linlin would occasionally glance back and wave. Linlin gave a rueful smile and Aika wanted to run up and hug her, she looked like a little puppy being separated from her owner and it was too cute to ignore.

   When the two girls were finally out of view Junjun closed the door. She then headed for the kitchen while Aika still stood at the entrance, realizing now that she was alone with Junjun. That thought was quickly replaced however when she noticed that Junjun was cooking dinner; she quickly went into the kitchen to assist the tall girl.
"I'll help!"
"No no, that's okay, you're the guest."
"What? No, that's not right; you did so much for us tonight. I should help out."
Junjun looked at Aika and grinned, and then she patted her on the head, "You're such a good girl."
This stopped Aika right in her tracks, whilst she enjoyed the moment of the contact between her head and Junjun's hand. She quickly broke out of her moment when Junjun used the time to begin cooking. Aika pouted while standing under the doorway of the kitchen, slightly annoyed for being so useless at a time like this. If anything, the baby faced girl wanted to show how good her cooking skills were and get some praise from Junjun on the side.
With a sudden burst of determination she ran and wrapped her arms around the other girl's waist from behind, feeling the girl in her arms tense up immediately from the contact. Aika took this to her advantage and dragged the girl outside of the kitchen and then quickly locked Junjun out of her own kitchen.

"Mitsui!!" forgetting the 'san' after Aika's name due to shock and slight frustration, Junjun could be heard knocking on the door.
"I'm cooking tonight~!" the girl inside the kitchen said with a sing-song voice, causing Junjun to cease all knocking. She must have been surprised at hearing such a carefree and happy Aika since she, herself, was shocked at the glee she exerted.
She couldn't hear Junjun anymore but she could feel that the girl was still in front of the door. Aika felt a little guilty but told herself it'll be okay when she's done, and so she continued to cook and unconsciously hummed as she did.

The girl felt herself grin when she heard a voice humming softly along with her from behind the door.
'Haha, Junjun is so silly sometimes, but I'm glad I fell in love with her.'
With her newly sorted emotions, Aika began to hum freely again.
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Okay........ even though I prefer manly Niigaki (where she takes control)
when I type, Takahashi automatically takes control o.O" no clue why!!! (and no comments saying because she's Seme and stuff!! XD)
mind you though, when I type this out I have no control whatsoever
So I kinda go like "WTF is happening" myself sometimes ^^;

BTW, 7/8th gen are gonna be on for awhile. Why? Because it's morning for everybody else but still friggin' night time for them!!
I can't believe only 2 days have elapsed in total o.O"
(feels like Macbeth... where it's rumored for the events to take place within only 2 days, but I'm not gonna say that out loud or I'll totally sound lame for letting you guys know I like Shakespearean plays)  :ph43r:

Working on the next chap already, I'll try and update within 7 days again XD
 :on hobo:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
Post by: JFC on November 18, 2008, 03:23:16 AM
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*TAKAGAKI MORNING AFTER*
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! :wub:



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*REINA AT THE DOOR*
I guess I can understand Aichan's POV here. She's not the type to advertise everything that's going on in her private life, plus it takes her a while to get comfortable with certain things. She's only recently been able to come to terms with how she feels for Risa and take that next step in their relationship. She's just not ready yet for the others to find out. At the same time, one can also see how Risa would be upset by this. From her POV, it could almost be looked at that while Aichan really cares for her, she also cares about what the others think, so much so that she's scared (or even ashamed) to let them know for fear of judgement or disapproval.



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Risa couldn't really see much except through the lines the closet door design had. However, she could hear perfectly fine and realized Tanakacchi was upset about something.
"Reina! Are you okay? Were... were you crying?" Ai closed the door when Tanakacchi entered and sat at the edge of the bed. It didn't seem like the small girl wanted to talk, she probably just wanted some sort of counsel. Ai went to sit beside Tanakacchi, worry clearly in her voice.
Yeah, just finding out the the girl you confessed your heart to chose to give hers to your other best friend will do that sort of thing to you.



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"Ai-chan I..." Tanakacchi finally spoke, and what a horribly broken voice it was too. It was completely unlike the usually filled with confidence voice the leader and sub-leader always heard. It was a voice filled with hurt that made Risa want to cry just listening to it.

There was silence yet again and then Risa noticed Tanakacchi leaning closer to Ai. There was an unsettling silence after that and for some reason Risa just knew what was happening.
Oshit. Rebound?!? :o



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After awhile Tanakacchi stood up as well, her eyes fixated on Ai. "Look, Ai-chan just listen..." she started as she advanced towards the other girl.
"No wait, Reina. I'm with Ri-- Gaki-san now."
Well, I guess Aichan's gotten over her apprehension of telling the others about her and Risa.  Funny what can motivate people to speak up like that. :P



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A flicker of angry flashed through Tanakacchi's eyes as she heard this. Then she smiled, at least, Risa thought it was a smile, since she couldn't see her mouth very well.
It isn't necessarily that Reina's angry or hurt about Aichan saying that she's with Risa, but think about it, from Reina's POV, she's just gotten rejected for the SECOND time in (presumably) 24 hours.  Though we know that it's not coming from Aichan, it's still like Reina just got a shot in the gut.



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The glitter loving girl grabbed Ai's wrist and pulled her onto the bed. Ai gave a startled scream since she obviously did not anticipate such a move; neither did Risa for that matter as she was going through slight shock as well. Tanakacchi took this moment to position herself on top of the short haired girl and pushed her lips onto Ai's.
Oh boy. I guess Reina doesn't handle rejection well. :o



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"Gaki-san wait..." was her unexpected reply, and Risa felt a little pain swelling in her chest as she looked away from the two of them in anger. "Reina... do you...?" Ai asked a fairly subtle question to Tanakacchi and Risa's anger only built up.
'Why is Ai asking this again?'
Aichan's just trying to get all the answers here, trying to figure out why Reina just did what she did. Risa, on the other hand, is upset that Aichan's apparently not as "gung ho" about protecting their relationship as she is. For Risa, it's almost like it's not as important to Aichan as it is to her.



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"Yeah I like you, problem?" Tanakacchi was back to her confident self, only she leveled up to obnoxiously cocky now. There was definitely something wrong with her, but Risa couldn't feel sympathy anymore.
As I said before, I'm thinking that Reina's using Aichan (most likely subconsciously) as a "rebound" of sorts. While there was possibly some attraction between them, it obviously paled compared to what Reina feels for Eri. Otherwise, it would have been Aichan that Reina pursued/confessed to.



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"Do you guys want something to drink?" Junjun asked as they entered the place; she immediately headed for the kitchen after removing her shoes.
"Orange juice!!!"
"Do you have apple juice?"
"Water..." Junjun looked at Aika with one raised brow.
"Water? Are you sure you don't want something else?" Aika waved her hands in front of her, signaling that water was just fine.
Aika's mind is preoccupied, by the sounds of it.



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She took a seat across from Aika and because of Junjun's long legs, accidentally brushed against the thigh of the baby faced girl. Aika quickly stifled her squeak when she felt the movement, but Junjun seemed to notice.
"Sorry..." she quickly said, making sure to tuck her own legs under her chair. Aika couldn't help but mentally kick herself for causing Junjun to take it the wrong way. If anything, she enjoyed that brief skin contact and was rather upset that the girl across from her was making sure it was not going to happen again.
Aika = :doh:



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Linlin and Kusumi-san both raced to Junjun's room, which they assumed was the one between the computer room and the washroom, but stopped when they got to the doorway.

"What's wrong?" Aika asked, slightly worried from the expression of shock both of them seemed to carry. She joined them and stood at the doorway, peering inside. What she saw was definitely not expected; she saw giant posters of all the current Morning Musume members on the walls and a few photobooks can be seen on the desk.
What? Can't Junjun be a fan as well as a member? :D



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She couldn't help but blush when she saw a picture of herself blown up on the wall as well, and it worsened when she realized which photo it was. Out of all the photo posters the tall girl could get, it just had to be a sexy one. Next to hers she couldn't help but notice though, was the bikini wearing Leader and she involuntarily sighed inwardly.
'So it wasn't just me huh...'
Oh crap, now Aika thinks Junjun likes Aichan?
:dizzy:



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The biggest one was Junjun herself however,
:lol:



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Aika couldn't help but want it herself. The expression of the girl in the poster made Aika feel warm inside, but she also felt a little bit embarrassed to stare at it.
Awwwwwww...:oops:



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"What time is it?" asked Koharu-san, craning her neck around to search for a clock.
"It's already eight! I have to go home..." Linlin said with a sad face, Aika couldn't help but notice and patted her on the back.
"Don't worry; we'll hang out like this again sometime." Linlin looked back at the girl beside her and smiled.
Poor Linlin. It's hard enough when she feels like she's being left behind when everyone goes off into their own little groups at work. Here it was, some time for her to get in on the belonging...and it's time to go.  :(



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"Ah, Koharu has to go home too or her parents will be angry." Koharu-san said, almost expecting some counsel from Aika as well, but Aika however, chose to ignore the look and gave Linlin one last pat on the head.
Ouch.

Koharu at lack of Aika attention = :cry:



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"Koharu-san, are you getting picked up?" The girl in question frowned slightly but replied back.
"No, I'm walking with Linlin since I live close to her."
For Koharu, this probably sounded like Aika was trying to get rid of her or something.



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"Oh" was her only response, earning a curious look from Koharu-san, "ah it's just that, my parents aren't at home and I live pretty far, so I was hoping I could catch a ride with you." they spoke on a more familiar term since they understood each other more now.
"Sorry..." Koharu-san apologized with a guilty look.
"No no, it's not your fault don't worry."
Again....ouch.  :sweatdrop:



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"But, what should I do now?" she asked no one in particular.
"You can sleep over?" someone who hadn't been talking the whole time suddenly spoke and Aika turned to look at the girl. Junjun stood at the doorway of the kitchen, leaning lightly on her side.
"Where?" again, Aika almost kicked herself, it was pretty obvious whose place she meant but she just couldn't process the information right.
"Here." Junjun said simply, she smiled at Aika, telling her not to be so polite all the time. Somehow she must have known that Aika would have politely declined.
"O-okay... thank you Junjun." Aika shyly smiled back, not noticing the growing displeasure showing itself on Koharu-san's face.
Aika = :mon unsure:
Junjun = :monster:
Aika = :mon huh2:
Junjun =  :hee:
Aika = :mon sweat:
Koharu = :mon annoy:



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"No!"
"Huh?" Both her and Junjun looked questioningly at Koharu-san, not understanding why it wouldn't be a good idea for miss smiles to sleep over at Junjun's.
"I-I...” unable to give a good reason for her sudden outburst, the tall girl shifted her eyes to the floor.”No... It's nothing..." Aika scrutinized Koharu-san for a moment, trying to understand what in the world went on in that girl's head.
Look into her eyes, see if they've turned green. :yep:



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Linlin would occasionally glance back and wave. Linlin gave a rueful smile and Aika wanted to run up and hug her, she looked like a little puppy being separated from her owner and it was too cute to ignore.
Linlin = :mon whimper:
Aika seeing Linlin = :wriggly:



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Junjun was cooking dinner; she quickly went into the kitchen to assist the tall girl.
"I'll help!"
"No no, that's okay, you're the guest."
"What? No, that's not right; you did so much for us tonight. I should help out."
Junjun looked at Aika and grinned, and then she patted her on the head, "You're such a good girl."
Junjun meant well when she said that, but given how Aika feels...again.........ouch.
Aika = :on blackhole:



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With a sudden burst of determination she ran and wrapped her arms around the other girl's waist from behind, feeling the girl in her arms tense up immediately from the contact. Aika took this to her advantage and dragged the girl outside of the kitchen and then quickly locked Junjun out of her own kitchen.

"Mitsui!!" forgetting the 'san' after Aika's name due to shock and slight frustration, Junjun could be heard knocking on the door.
"I'm cooking tonight~!" the girl inside the kitchen said with a sing-song voice, causing Junjun to cease all knocking. She must have been surprised at hearing such a carefree and happy Aika since she, herself, was shocked at the glee she exerted.
She couldn't hear Junjun anymore but she could feel that the girl was still in front of the door. Aika felt a little guilty but told herself it'll be okay when she's done, and so she continued to cook and unconsciously hummed as she did.
Junjun = :dunno:

Unexpected? Yes and no. It's not surprising in that Aika wants to impress Junjun here, probably in hopes of getting Junjun to like her more in the same way that she likes her. The way that she's doing it, however, IS somewhat surprising, seeing as how Aika probably has NO idea what Junjun has in her kitchen, and the fact that (given her young age) we don't know how well she can actually cook.



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The girl felt herself grin when she heard a voice humming softly along with her from behind the door.
'Haha, Junjun is so silly sometimes, but I'm glad I fell in love with her.'
With her newly sorted emotions, Aika began to hum freely again.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... :shy1:



Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 6 - Nov 12]
Post by: ShikyoxYaiba on November 18, 2008, 04:24:11 AM
Oh no...oh my... REINA?! :doh: But I feel happy for TakaGaki...though Reina seems like she might but a dent in things. And JunMittsi... :wub: Well, one sided anyway. I bet that room Junjun has is just of all the members and such. In fact, I believe that there's some secret spot somewhere in her house for Kamei's stuff... :ph34r:

Excellent job! I'm amazed that you managed to stay updated... I could never do that... ^^;
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 7 - Nov 17]
Post by: lil_hamz on November 19, 2008, 09:17:49 AM
I'm glad I came to check this thread. It's been some time and I apologize. I wonder what made me click on this today, must be all the 7s in the title (I like the number 7) and the pull of a Risa filled chapter. I just gravitate towards anything Gaki-san you see :P

Well, well, well. Reina, damn...she sure is bold isn't she? And of all times to confess her feelings? Why now when TakaGaki are together? But if it ain't so things wouldn't be fun would it?

I'll be anticaipating your next update and I appreciate the long chapters. Ganbatte~!! :)
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 7 - Nov 17]
Post by: Sukoshi on November 19, 2008, 10:08:24 AM
eeek!  Reina messing with TakaGaki!  And here I thought one couple was set XD  oh how wrong i was.  Predictable is one thing this story is not and because of that it's a lot of fun to read =D

loved the long chapter.  It would have been perfect if eri and sayu also made an appearance but I'm sure that's coming up soon. keep up the good work!
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 7 - Nov 17]
Post by: ringo-hime on November 19, 2008, 11:56:35 AM
HEHE. now Reinas messing with TakaGaki i cnt definitely wait! OMG! XD

weeeee~  :cow:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 7 - Nov 17]
Post by: kRisZ on November 19, 2008, 06:05:37 PM
love circle indeed  XD
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
Post by: KizuRai on November 28, 2008, 06:21:24 AM
 :bigdeal:
LOL Aw man.... I obviously fail at deadlines, I'm like 4 days over the one I made for myself

But here's some interesting news about the life people probably don't give a damn about;
this Friday our school has a Japan Fair and the Japan club and those in Japanese class have to attend and participate
- in other words create stations and what not -

The grade 12's (me this year) always have to do some sort of play, guess which play we decided on (I swear I did not even bother to suggest it, but it was in my head for awhile when I heard that we had to do a play)

CINDERELLA  :on gay:
(lol we should have made it a musical :lol:)

As soon as I found out we would be doing this play I practically laughed like crazy (emphasis on crazy since nobody was a Momusu fan so that's what they thought I was, plain crazy)

I was pretty shocked actually, the irony of it was a little too much; btw last year was Romeo and Juliet

Big downside is the fact that not many people understand Japanese, and need subtitles, so since there are subtitles there's not much freedom in ad-libbing (Which I can be good at even if it is in Japanese, I'm pretty sure a select few in my class feel the same)
Plus the subtitles (AKA flimsy paper with horrible writing) are driving everyone insane.

So that's my rant guys, probably not many people read that but oh well XD


@JFC: Haha yes rebound >< shows what a little rejection can do, and there is absolutely nothing wrong with Junjun being a fan XD

@ShikyoxYaiba: LOL OMG I swear I should have put that!! :: includes a secret extra room in Junjun's apartment :: there should be like levers and locks and stuff XD

@lil_hamz: Well, they can be happy together, but they're going to have to earn it :P Or maybe Takahashi will end up with Tanakacchi o.O" :: gets killed by TakaGaki fans ::

@Sukoshi: Yes well, lately I've been able to predict storylines far too often for my taste, so a little unpredictability wouldn't hurt XD

@ringo-hime: Haha, you're gonna have to wait a little longer though, since this is right now 8th gen.

@kRisZ: >_> At least that came across well~



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Chapter 8


'Stupid Junjun'
Koharu briskly walked to the near empty train station. It was already fairly dark outside and the wind made the girls shiver.
'Stupid Mitsui'
Linlin tried to keep up with Koharu's pace but ended up at least a meter behind her.
"K-Kusumi-san? Why are you walking -- so fast??" Koharu did not hear the girl behind her and continued walking. The tall girl abruptly stopped when she got to the station, causing Linlin to accidentally bump into Koharu's back due to the momentum. These were all ignored by the tall girl however, because Koharu couldn't keep away the thoughts of the possible things Mitsui and Junjun could be doing at this time.

"I wanna head back..." She suddenly said to Linlin, causing the other girl to give her a bewildered look.
"Huh?! Why?"
"I... I'm afraid to leave those two alone together..." she said quietly, her eyes downcast and her bangs hid her face.
"Ah... I see, Kusumi-san, you wouldn't happen to like Mitsui-san would you?" The tall girl whipped her head up and looked at Linlin with a surprised look.
"How--? Linlin you won't tell anyone will you?"
"Of course not, don't worry." The girl gave Koharu a reassuring smile, causing Koharu to calm down.

"I just get so jealous sometimes when I see how Mitsui looks at Junjun..." Koharu started, casting her look to the city lights, "and now Mitsui is sleeping over at Junjun's... I'm afraid of what they might be doing." confessing her greatest fears to the girl beside her, she shifted slightly to her left leg, looking around cautiously at the people around them. Linlin gave a saddened expression beside her.
"I didn't get jealous at that for some reason..."
"Huh?" Koharu looked at Linlin again, not really understanding what the girl meant.

"I wonder how I feel about Junjun." Linlin continued, causing the both of them to fall silent, both unsure of what to say. They had all gotten closer together, so being the new friend that she was Koharu thought she should help Linlin as a friend.
"You get jealous when she gives her attention to other people don't you?"
The other girl nodded slowly but tilted her head slightly in confusion. "That's true, but I wonder why I didn't get jealous about Mitsui sleeping over at Junjun's..." Koharu couldn't help but smile a bit despite the serious conversation they were having.
"Linlin that's not good, you forgot the 'san' again."
"OH NO, why do I keep doing that??" both of them lightened up and began laughing, some people who were walking by would look at them strangely, but they didn't care.

"Linlin" Koharu called the other girl, causing her to look up at Koharu.
"Hm?"
"We're friends now, so whatever problem we'll tell each other okay? It's difficult being alone all the time." Koharu smiled when she saw Linlin smile brightly at her.
"YES, we are good friends! I'll try to help you as much as I can!"
The miracle girl just laughed at the other girl, "its okay, you don't need to physically help, just talking with me is helpful enough."
Linlin hugged the girl beside her, "Don't worry, I'll be there for you!"
They both laughed freely, allowing their sadness to slowly fall away.

"Oh, Linlin! The train is here!"
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   The sweet smell wafted from the kitchen, filling the living room. Junjun, whom was sitting with her back leaning on the kitchen door, closed her eyes and enjoyed the scent. Her stomach rumbled slightly and she couldn't help but rush Mitsui-san in her mind. A little after 10 minutes Mitsui-san opened the door; Junjun had not expected it to be opened so suddenly so she toppled backwards. Good thing Mitsui-san was cautious and somehow knew she was there and took a step back.
Junjun groaned slightly from the head pain, she had hit her head on the floor when she fell. Her eyes were closed as she rubbed the back of her head but she opened them to see a giggling Mitsui-san above her.
"Junjun you okay?" blushing, she nodded in embarrassment and quickly got up.
"Done?" Junjun asked, looking forward to whatever the other girl had cooked up.
"Yup, it's here." Mitsui-san pointed to the two plates sitting on the kitchen table.
"Okay, I'll help." the tall girl took both plates, one in each hand, and headed for the dining table.

"Wait! Isn't it heavy? And that's dangerous, let me help you!" Mitsui-san's words were lost on the girl as she held both plates firmly. After a little while they proved too heavy and with shaky hands, Junjun attempted to put the plates down softly but her left hand moved and the bottom of the plate hit her right arm.
Junjun hissed as she dropped the plates on the table successfully; Mitsui-san rushed over to the girl immediately.
"Oh my god, are you okay?!"
"Yes, I'm fine don't worry." She tried to put up a strong front but the shorter girl in front of her saw through it easily.
"No you're not, let me see it." Junjun wouldn't oblige to the command resulting in some tugs and whines. Finally Junjun lifted her left hand to reveal a large red spot on her arm.
"Oh geez, come here," Mitsui-san grabbed Junjun by the other arm and she softly but forcefully led the girl to the sink, turning on the cold water, and sticking Junjun's arm under it. "You have to put it under cold water for 5 minutes or so."
She nodded slowly, amazed at how mature Mitsui-san was. "Yes mother~" she jokingly said, earning a small shove from her side.

   Both hands were under the cold water as Mitsui-san had not yet removed her hand from Junjun's arm. A peaceful silence came and the only sounds they could hear was the rushing water. Unknowingly, Mitsui-san's hand had crept down to reach the other girl's hand and Junjun unconsciously intertwined them. Both of them just stood there, the warmth of each other's hands countered the cold temperature of the water. However after awhile Junjun finally seemed to process the mood it was turning into and became afraid. She quickly let go of the hand and turned the water off, heading for the dining table.
"I'm fine now, we should eat." Her voice turned out colder than she expected and she didn't want to turn back to see Mitsui-san's hurt expression.
'Why am I so afraid of being close to Mitsui-san?' It was true; every time they got too close it would be she whom always steps away. It wasn't because she hated Mitsui-san or anything - that was definitely not it - in fact, she found the little girl quite interesting and was always amazed on how mature the baby-faced girl can be sometimes.

   Mitsui-san followed after Junjun and both of them sat down to eat. They ate in silence and it was slowly driving Junjun insane. Why was that she can easily befriend anyone in Morning Musume and become very close with them except for Mitsui-san? She looked up from her plate and watched the girl sitting across from her. Mitsui-san's bangs were down and her short hair hid her eyes as she put her face close to the plate. Junjun wanted to apologize to the girl, even if she didn't understand what it was for, she felt as if she had to apologize.
"Mitsui-san..." she began, but the girl in question swiftly looked up and stopped her.
"Junjun, call me Mitsui, or better yet, Aika is fine too. We're friends right?" Junjun thought this through for the moment, indeed she wanted to be friends but could she do it?
"Well, if that's the case, call me mm..... Jun!"
"Jun??"
"Yep!" Junjun grinned at the girl and she received a grin back, it seems they were finally getting closer. She was about to go back to eating before Mitsu---- Aika stopped her again.
"Were you going to say something Jun?" when Aika said her name at the end it sounded a bit awkward,  Junjun assumed it would sound just as weird if she called Aika's name too.
"Oh right," she had quickly forgotten, getting a new nickname seemed to have distracted her, "I was going to say sorry."
"For what?"
"Uh..."
"Is this about avoiding me all the time?"
'So she noticed' Junjun mentally face palmed.
"Well I'm fine with it, as long as you tell me a reason why you have been avoiding me." Aika said while smiling sweetly, Junjun instantly declared that a devil's smirk.
"Well..." Aika looked directly into Junjun's eyes; it felt as if she was looking into her soul, "I'm not sure." Junjun ended lamely, she bowed her head down, breaking the eye contact with the other girl.

   Junjun could still feel the intense stare Aika gave her despite the fact that Junjun's head was down. "I see." was all that Aika had said after Junjun lamely attempted to understand her emotions. Suddenly she was very afraid of suggesting something, and she pushed the thought to the very back of her mind and continued eating. Aika did not continue, and Junjun could still feel the eyes of the other girl following her move.
"Is it because I'm not really an adult yet and I'm much younger than you?" This caused the tall girl to look up, and look straight at Aika in the eyes. Looking deeply into it, she could see the reflection of herself in the glistening dark brown orbs.
"Is that why?" Junjun didn't really direct the question at the other girl; it was more of a question directed to herself. The girl sitting across from Junjun seemed to smile at the tall banana loving girl; Aika seemed to just shine, and Junjun felt warmth just being around her. As expected from Miss Smiles she supposed.
"Jun..." Aika's right hand went to cup Junjun's cheek; the name she called was soft, almost as if in a whisper. "You're crying again." Her voice contained a hint of laughter, but it wasn't at her, it was to reassure her and to calm her down. Before Junjun noticed, her eyes indeed were watery. She was a cry baby, and she knew, but this time she forced herself to stop, her mind yelling to stop crying. It was embarrassing for her to cry in front of someone much younger than she.
She looked away, the thought of being strong firmly in her mind. After a few sniffs she got herself together and looked back at Aika. It was late, and she had to ask the question sooner or later.

"Are you going to sleep with me tonight?" Junjun could not phrase that any better and did not understand how odd that question sounded due to her lack of Japanese vocabulary, but somewhere in the back of her mind, she knew that question was a little awkward. Aika severely blushed, for being a 16 year old girl; it was much too early for her to be having thoughts like that. Junjun blushed too and quickly clarified herself.
"I mean, I can sleep on the sofa if you want..." Aika shook her head at the tall girl, causing her to trail off.

"I'm sleeping with you tonight."
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 :dizzy:
I'm wondering if I'm getting the person's color right =.="
Because it was either Tanakacchi or Linlin, they always seem to switch
and I'm like friggin' color-blind (slightly) so I can't tell shades =.="
Good thing wordpad tells me what color I'm choosing XD

So in case you haven't noticed, I've been working on dialogue recently ^^;
I believe dialogue brings out their personality easier than well... description and narration I suppose.

But I guess I find dialogue slightly more comical than action,
plus action can be a pain as a description XD

I'm sorry if people don't really like 7/8th gen, but I can't leave them one day behind forever.
BTW here's a little Jun/Mitsui-ness from me :twisted:   :lol:

Their colors are really close and both have a calm feel to it
Junjun looked a little nervous around Mitsui in MM DVD Mag.19
There are times when Mitsui sides with Junjun in the 7/8th gen MC's in the Resonant Blue concert (she hasn't sided with Kusumi I don't think...)
(One I really like) In a Haromoni@ ep when they gave Mitsui a really hard memory quiz; Mitsui pulled her jacket too far down and Junjun pulled it up (I couldn't find what was wrong but I guess Junjun got a little over-protective)
You see in the next frame that the zipper is pulled up~  :D

and other little bits that can be seen if you look XD
Okay I'm off~ :byebye:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
Post by: ShikyoxYaiba on November 28, 2008, 08:12:44 AM
Kyaaaa! I'm glad there's a lot of interaction between the 7th/8th gen. ^^ Linlin and Koharu now understand each other, and as for Junjun and Mittsi...well, I guess we'll have to see how that goes. :/ I wonder if Junjun's gonna end up confused now... o_O Mittsi or Eri? xD

Ah, I forgot to mention about the members colors. Reina's is more of a brighter blue and Linlin's is more of a... darker seafoam green. xD (Sorry, I'm actually fairly color specific.) I suppose an example would just be better.

Reina
Linlin
(<--Just a bit more blue/darker.)

I hope that helps. ;) Gosh, that was hard to do by iTouch... xD
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
Post by: lil_hamz on November 28, 2008, 08:24:22 AM
I like reading about stuff that happen in people's lives especially one that is H!P related so feel free to post about it. I wanna know what happens during your rehearsals. Who got to be prince and Cinderella? :D

When Koharu said she didn't need Lin Lin's physical help I cracked up XD
I wonder why I get shivers reading about Jun Jun and Aika. I think it's because I never thought about those 2 liking each other that way. Oh man now you got me thinking :lol:

OMG there was a jacket scene in HM@? Which? Better yet somebody put up the YT link cuz I don't know how to start looking :P
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
Post by: ringo-hime on November 28, 2008, 01:49:02 PM
T-T. gosh. XD

oh well, this chappie is cute~ hehehe.
8th gen <3

kekeke.  :lol: poor Koha and Lin  :O
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
Post by: KizuRai on November 29, 2008, 04:24:34 AM
OKAY OMG,
SORRY THIS IS NOT AN UPDATE BUT I HAVE TO SAY SOMETHING WHILE I'M STILL IN THIS MOOD
AH
...
..
.
sorry caps.. okay, so I just got home after finishing up the play and cleaning up
and I'm gonna go ahead and say, WOW that was exhilarating!!!
(I kinda understand the feeling of being on stage now  :tama-laff:)

The play~ the subtitles~ the sound~ EVERYTHING was PERFECT
even though there would always be something wrong during practice ><
The crowd received everything well and we got the reactions we wanted,
nothing can describe my feeling of happiness/accomplishment right now

So yeah, technically we named it
Cinderella and the Samurais

so it was our rendition of Cinderella (everyone wore Yukatas)
we were warned no cross dressing but I ended up as a samurai anyway XD (thank god)

Well, I'm gonna get it sometime next week (the video; somebody recorded it) and I'll post it up on youtube if any of you guys want to see it
the subtitles did not get recorded in but... is that okay?

Now I really wanna watch Cinderella the Musical now >< I wanna see how fail ours is compared to theirs (obviously)
but still, I'm happy about ours

In rehearsals at least 1 person would always be absent or busy and sometimes we don't have enough people for one or two scenes
or the subtitles were all messed up and some went missing
But during the actual thing, the subtitles were great, the acting was great, nobody forgot their lines

afterwards we were all sweating and it was hell hot (everyone was fanning themselves with uchiwas)
I understand now that Morning Musume sweat so much (or say it was a very hot concert) not just because of dancing so much, but it's also just being on stage as well XD

Haah~
I'm just in my all time high right now :luvluv2:



Now something a little more on topic:
@ShikyoxYaiba: (almost wrote your name as Yabai) lol yeah well... Mitsui is a determined worker and mature and reliable, Eri is impossibly adorable and cheers people up just by being there
Haaard choice really... even for me ><
Haha and about the colors,mind going on word pad and telling me the names of the colors that's for them XD cuz seriously, even though you've put them side by side the colors look the same to me ^^;

@lil_hamz: ^::points to mass of text above:: lol well there you go
the prince  :on asmo: was my Korean friend (very feminine, amazingly knows a lot about hair and makeup, but also exceedingly shy and unspoken)
and there were 3 Cinderellas
(1st one has adequate Japanese, smart, cute, nice, ...uh.. yea... >__>)
(2nd one is a pretty miss perfect, family knows Japanese so her pronunciation was never wrong)
(3rd one is my friend, horrible Japanese, shy.. uh.. on stage only, but she only had a few lines so no problems)
LOL well... Linlin's physical help may screw up things more XD
and YES hopefully by the end you'll be converted into a JunKa (or should I say MiJun?) pairing fan XD

@ringo-hime: Thank you~ haha Kusumi and Linlin may seem excluded, but I really want them to be more helpful and important than they usually are in fanfictions >__<
it's so rare for 8th gen to be featured sometimes!
but yea, thanks for reading





 :sweat: ::notices the lack of comments::
oh well, I can't be like that since I decided to post my story up either way~
but I thank all those that read and comment~ :heart:
:kneelbow:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
Post by: kRisZ on November 29, 2008, 06:30:50 AM
hmmm wonder what will happen next *coughonbedcough*  XD


UL, i'm sure it's fun to watch it 
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
Post by: ShikyoxYaiba on November 29, 2008, 06:33:02 AM
Nonsense! I will always comment! xD Erm, on Wordpad? I don't normally use that, but when I went to check the colors on it, it was really limited... You can't exactly find Reina's and Linlin's colors on there. :doh: But Reina's color is close to aqua, just a bit deeper. Linlin's is close to teal, but kinda lighter. I hope that helps. :sweatdrop: I'm not the best with this kind of stuff - I tend to just end up confusing people even more...
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
Post by: JFC on November 29, 2008, 07:44:18 AM
Chapter 8

Quote
*KOHARU/LINLIN TALK*
Not that hard for Linlin to figure out what Koharu's thinking. :)



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"I wonder how I feel about Junjun." Linlin continued, causing the both of them to fall silent, both unsure of what to say. They had all gotten closer together, so being the new friend that she was Koharu thought she should help Linlin as a friend.
"You get jealous when she gives her attention to other people don't you?"
The other girl nodded slowly but tilted her head slightly in confusion. "That's true, but I wonder why I didn't get jealous about Mitsui sleeping over at Junjun's..."
Awww...:(



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"Linlin that's not good, you forgot the 'san' again."
"OH NO, why do I keep doing that??" both of them lightened up and began laughing, some people who were walking by would look at them strangely, but they didn't care.
Oops. :P



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"Linlin" Koharu called the other girl, causing her to look up at Koharu.
"Hm?"
"We're friends now, so whatever problem we'll tell each other okay? It's difficult being alone all the time." Koharu smiled when she saw Linlin smile brightly at her.
"YES, we are good friends! I'll try to help you as much as I can!"
The miracle girl just laughed at the other girl, "its okay, you don't need to physically help, just talking with me is helpful enough."
Linlin hugged the girl beside her, "Don't worry, I'll be there for you!"
They both laughed freely, allowing their sadness to slowly fall away.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...
:hee:



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Both hands were under the cold water as Mitsui-san had not yet removed her hand from Junjun's arm. A peaceful silence came and the only sounds they could hear was the rushing water. Unknowingly, Mitsui-san's hand had crept down to reach the other girl's hand and Junjun unconsciously intertwined them. Both of them just stood there, the warmth of each other's hands countered the cold temperature of the water. However after awhile Junjun finally seemed to process the mood it was turning into and became afraid. She quickly let go of the hand and turned the water off, heading for the dining table.
Uh-oh...does Junjun suspect/know that Aika "likes her-likes her"? :O



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"I was going to say sorry."
"For what?"
"Uh..."
"Is this about avoiding me all the time?"
'So she noticed' Junjun mentally face palmed.
"Well I'm fine with it, as long as you tell me a reason why you have been avoiding me." Aika said while smiling sweetly, Junjun instantly declared that a devil's smirk.
Oooooooo... :shocked:

Well, looks like one way or another, Aika just might find out where she stands with Junjun.



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"Is it because I'm not really an adult yet and I'm much younger than you?" This caused the tall girl to look up, and look straight at Aika in the eyes. Looking deeply into it, she could see the reflection of herself in the glistening dark brown orbs.
"Is that why?" Junjun didn't really direct the question at the other girl; it was more of a question directed to herself.
Or not.  :-X

By the looks of it, Junjun's still not sure herself of where she stands/how she feels.



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"Are you going to sleep with me tonight?" Junjun could not phrase that any better and did not understand how odd that question sounded due to her lack of Japanese vocabulary, but somewhere in the back of her mind, she knew that question was a little awkward. Aika severely blushed, for being a 16 year old girl; it was much too early for her to be having thoughts like that. Junjun blushed too and quickly clarified herself.
"I mean, I can sleep on the sofa if you want..." Aika shook her head at the tall girl, causing her to trail off.

"I'm sleeping with you tonight."
Okay, we need to know exactly what Aika meant by that.
:dizzy:



Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
Post by: Fenrir on November 29, 2008, 12:54:05 PM
 :shock:
Woo, Aika! She's just going all in! She's got a lot of guts. Let's hope it pays off!
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
Post by: lil_hamz on December 10, 2008, 07:06:23 AM
I don't know if I will be converted to a MiJun fan. Only time will tell... But I am thinking about pairing Jun2 with someone else. I think you're gonna get a big shock if I write it out.

Oooohhh I wanna see that vid!! If you put it up be sure to link it. Korean girls do seem very fashion savvy don't they? Wow, your friends and you make up a little United Nations :lol: It must be fun having friends from so many countries. You wouldn't need tour guides when you travel to their home countries in the future :P

Awesome title btw, Cinderella and the Samurais :D
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
Post by: KizuRai on January 22, 2009, 02:28:21 AM
 :kneelbow: (yes I have to open with an onion XD)
Um.. >__> How long has it been? 3 months?
I now understand the feelings of writers that tend to just leave their fic behind
However, I got inspiration! All of a sudden >__>
It kinda became a ritual for me ever since I started writing this fic, to stare at my laptop for awhile and think about the storyline before I sleep
So eventually I got something
It's another long chapter >< but its still not long enough to make up for a 3 months absence


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Chapter 9

"Both of you... ugh... please get out, I need time to think."

Both she and Gaki-san were kicked out of Ai-chan's room as she said that. Reina knew that no matter how much time Ai-chan got to think, the result will go in her favour for sure; Reina was as cocky as ever.
Outside the hotel room the two girls stood; Gaki-san glared at Reina, while she gave an innocent look back.
"What?"
"Stay away from Ai-chan." and with that, Gaki-san stormed off to where the elevator was. The short girl just stared and watched as her Sub-leader practically stomped her way through the hallway. When she could no longer see the other girl she slowly began walking in the same direction. She needed to get down too, and she sure as hell was not going to walk down the stairs. She needed to go by elevator, but she didn't want to be in the same elevator as Gaki-san. So with slow steps she advanced to where the elevator was.
She bitterly thought about what Sayu and Eri might have been doing then but quickly shook those thoughts away. It seems she was about to go into that horrible depressed state again, but she didn't want that, she was hoping chasing after Ai-chan would cure her.

   The ding of the elevator was heard and she entered it, thankful that it was empty. She pressed 'Lobby' and leaned her back against the walls of the enclosed space. She let out a loud sigh, her mood and thoughts were beginning to catch up to her.
"Reina did a bad thing..." She softly chided herself and forced herself not to cry. The mad rush of going over and breaking Leader and Sub-leader up was slowly wearing off, and in its place left regret. She shouldn't regret, and she repeated these words in her mind in a silent mantra.
There was no one to see her in this state so her confidence slowly drained away and her head drooped down. From an outsider's point of view she probably looked like a broken doll.
It took so long for her confidence to build up ever since she entered Morning Musume. Her outer personality was quite different from her inner one, but with her determination she finally got to be where she was now. The news of a backstabbing friend and her crush now the girlfriend of that backstabbing friend blew away her confidence with a bowling ball and there was no machine to put the pieces back together.
Another sigh, and this time she looked up at the blinding lights that filled the area.
'If there is a God, he's totally torturing Reina for fun.'
The familiar soft bell tone of the elevator was heard again.
"Okay Reina, get it together, its public time." And as the doors of the steel box opened, behind those doors stood a confident young girl who strode out in a calm and determined fashion. There was no room for the weak Reina, what she needed was the strong part of her that never regretted her actions.

So Reina decided to head to the mall.
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Was she dreaming?
"Sayu~ Say 'Aaah'"
"Aaah~"
"Bagu"
If she was, she never wanted to wake up. The two girls giggled at how foolish they were acting. They wandered the mall doing various 'date' things. Michishige Sayumi was so happy, she could die at that very moment and have no regrets.
"Whoa Sayu! Careful, don't trip." Okay, maybe it was better if she didn't die; however, she really was happy, never in her life would she have pictured this moment. Both of them held a bowl of ice cream and were walking frivolously like two high school girls.
"Eri say 'Aaah'" The other girl obliged, opening her mouth and allowing the cold substance into it.
"Mango!" Eri looked at Sayumi with a bewildered look, one with questioning eyes. Sayumi laughed, knowing what the girl wanted to ask.
"Yes, I know, I hated mango, but after that one drink I had that was apparently mango juice I started trying foods I didn't like."
Her girlfriend grinned at her, causing Sayumi to look at her with a slight apprehensiveness.
"What?"
"Nothing~"
"Eririn~ Tell me~" Sayumi went over and shook the girl lightly on the shoulder. Eri flashed another grin at her.
"I just felt that you're becoming so mature, that's all."
"Haha, what are you? My mother?" Eri stopped laughing immediately and looked at the girl beside her with wide eyes.
"I hope not, because then it would be impossible to be your girlfriend." They're eyes met, Eri grinned her goofy grin and Sayumi smiled, looking at Eri with loving eyes. This girl may not look like it, but Eri was extremely thoughtful and knows exactly how to cheer people up.

"Haah~" Eri had finished her ice cream and was now a little less energetic.
"Tired?" Sayumi asked, she couldn't eat ice nearly as fast so she still held her bowl. She stared at the other girl, telepathically asking if she wanted to sit down. Eririn nodded and as if she could actually read Sayumi's mind, she led her to a table and sat down. They sat at one of those tables in food courts, except they had one side with a bench like seat, which Eri immediately sat in and stretched. Sayumi headed for the chair across from the turtle but she felt something cling onto her arm stopping her from doing so.
Sayumi looked at Eri questioning, but all the other girl did was pout and tug at Sayumi's arm a few more times. It took awhile, but Sayumi understood what Eri wanted.
"Guess it can't be helped, although I wanted to sit across from you so I could see your face." Sayumi sighed and sat next to Eri, earning a grin and a hug from the other girl.
Sayumi couldn't help but smile too, Eri was a very clingy person, but in a way Sayumi herself did not like to be ignored. So in the end everything all worked out.

"Michishige-san?"
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   Well, Aika was now a fairly happy girl. She had woken up to the warmth of the tall banana loving girl. Although, since it was a twin sized bed, the two of them had to sleep really close or else one of them would have fallen off the bed. Aika's face felt a little hot as she thought of the close proximity the both of them slept together. Both of them happened to sleep very late and wake up fairly early, so Aika's plan of making breakfast went down the drain. However, it seemed Jun acknowledged that forcing Aika to stand back and watch was an impossible thing to do, so they agreed to cook together.
Aika stayed at Jun's until lunch, the both of them playing games and randomly searching up things on the internet. Jun even showed Aika a Chinese Aika fansite, she was happy to know that she had a fanbase in China but she was also happy at the fact that Jun even searched it up.
Jun, ever since last night she has been calling her Jun for awhile now. She would call out 'Jun' for no reason, earning a look from the other girl, then she would grin back, telling her she was bored. She felt a little bit foolish but it was funny to see the reaction Jun had every time she did it.
Aika's stomach growled and she averted her eyes from the tall girl in embarrassment. Jun laughed when she heard it; she went over to Aika and patted her head.
"I'm hungry, too lazy to cook, let's go to the mall." and with that the both of them put on their jackets and headed out.
Aika wasn't sure when, but somehow their hands met and held onto each other tightly, as they swung lightly while walking. Aika felt Jun shiver and she moved in closer, their arms now brushing against each other. Suddenly it didn't seem so cold anymore, and Aika was feeling particularly hot around her face.

   It was warm when they walked into the mall, the warm air rushed at them the moment they opened the door causing them to separate arms. However, their hands clung on tightly. They walked around slowly, momentarily forgetting their reason for coming, but then this time Jun's stomach growled, reminding the two of their previous task. They quickly walked to the food court, finally separating their hands to go to different food stands. Aika stood in line; her hand feeling rather lonely since it was split from the other girl's hand. She looked at her left hand and gave it a small rueful smile. She knew it was ridiculous, but she told her hand she understood the loneliness it felt.
Just as she put her hand back down and looked around to see if the crowd advanced any further she saw Jun walking towards her. She waved, looking at her slightly confused.
"I already order, I'm waiting for it to be made." Aika noticed her mistake and corrected her. Jun just waved it away and replied, "Its fine" and then latched her hand onto Aika's again. She had opened her mouth to scold her but quickly closed it at the body contact. She grinned inwardly, hiding her smile because she knew she would probably look like a grinning fool if she freely smiled.
The crowd advanced and they both finally got their order.

"Where should we sit?" They skimmed the area for a good seating place but then Aika noticed Michishige-san and Kamei-san. "Jun...” she said as she nudged the other girl. Jun saw what she was pointing at and nodded. The both of them headed to where their two senpais were sitting.
"Michishige-san?" Aika called out, earning her the pig-tailed hair girl's attention.
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She whipped her head to look at the two that called her name. "Oh hey, it’s Aika-chan and Junjun!" She exclaimed at the realization of who they were.
"Good morning Kamei-san and Michishige-san" They politely bowed despite the fact that Junjun was older than the both of them; well it was a Japanese custom to show respect to their senpai's she supposed. Eri urged them to sit down but Aika-chan waved her hand, "Actually we were planning on eating at a separate table." Aika-chan spoke before Junjun could have a word in; leaving Junjun with an open mouth. She closed it but gave a rather hesitant nod. Eri gave them a cute pout and then lazily hooked her arm with Sayumi's; leaning back and signaling for Sayumi to do all the talking. The girl thrown in the sudden spotlight stared at her with an incredulous look.
Then Sayumi stared back at the standing two, her eyes then narrowed and saw their close proximity.
"You two are rather close...” She said softly enough for the two of them to hear. Junjun shifted awkwardly and then quickly put some distance between herself and Aika-chan.
"I'm going to find a table!" She announced, and then she left, leaving a rather annoyed Aika-chan staring at Sayumi. She stared back at the younger girl; her eyes unrelenting.
"Why were you two together anyway?" 'And so early too' she thought, her gaze bore into the standing girl. There was a moment silence but then Aika-chan sighed and broke the short staring contest.
"I slept over at her place." She stated; and Sayumi felt the side of her mouth form a smirk.
"Oh?" She could feel the devil side in her take over, "And you two didn't do anything weird together I hope?" This earned the bunny a blushing Aika-chan.
"I... We didn't do anything weird, why would you think that?" Sayumi had already predicted her reply, so she was ready to answer.
"Oh I don't know, seeing how you like Junjun so much, I wouldn't be surprised if you pushed her onto a bed~" Aika-chan's face flushed into a deeper shade of red, if that was even possible, and she shook her head so furiously it looked like she would give herself whiplash soon.
"Michishige-san! I-I... “, she seemed at a loss for words; most likely torn between denying Sayumi's statement and actually admitting she liked Junjun but they didn't do anything.
   Sayumi found out that Aika-chan liked Junjun a long time ago - if half a year counted as a long time ago - but she watched the younger girl in frustration since there were so many opportunities for them to get together. However, as much as she found it cute if the two were to hook up, she also knew about Koharu's feelings for Aika-chan. The mess was almost as bad as the mess the Rokkies had. She was just glad she knew where Linlin stood (at least, she thinks she knows).
"Look," Sayumi could tell the younger girl gave in, "I do like Jun, which by the way, how in the world did you find out? But we didn't do anything weird," everything would have been a perfect explanation and a rather boring teasing topic at that point but Aika-chan continued, "we just slept in the same bed that's about it."
Well that caught Sayumi and Eri's attention, "Wait who's Jun? JUNJUN? Since when did you start calling her that?" Eri asked quickly with Sayumi shaking her head at the typically slow thinking of the turtle.
"Both of you slept in the same bed huh?" Realizing her slip-up, Aika-chan's face, which finally went back to its normal color, turned beet red again.
"Um, I'm going to go eat with Jun now... I'm kinda hungry.. Bye Michishige-san, Kamei-san!" and before they knew it, Aika-chan ran off to where Junjun was sitting.

"Aaah~ There goes our latest entertainment~" Sayumi leaned back in her seat, noticing the look Eri was giving her.
"You're so evil sometimes that it's kinda scary Sayu~" She couldn't help but grin at the girl beside her, noticing the smile Eri gave her.
"Well, that's okay, because I'm still the Number one cutest girl in the whole world."
Eri laughed at the reply, "That doesn't make any sense!"
They both laughed and joked like this for awhile.
The whole day was like any other day when they hung out together, and that was amazing; they were off in their own world, enjoying the days as they come. That was the way of the turtle and the bunny.
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   High-king had rehearsal that day, since a live was coming up soon, and after an hour of grueling practice it was time for their photoshoots. Ai sat in a white sofa chair, going over dance moves in her head as the other group members posed and took pictures. She thought about a lot of other random things such as life questions in which she was sure Risa would have looked at her weirdly. She was so into her train of thought she did not see the short glitter-loving girl walk up to her. Before she knew it, fingers were snapped in front of her face, breaking her from her reverie.
"Geez Ai-chan, you can be very unwary of your environment.." Reina sexily circled the chair Ai was sitting on, making her gulp unconsciously as she dreaded what may happen to her. "Any thoughts about us lately?" the wonky-eyed girl said as she stopped in front of Ai and rested her hands on each armrest. Ai was getting highly nervous as she realized Reina just blocked off her exit and she was trapped.
"Look Reina, I don't want to do anything bad to Gaki-san...” Instead of a frown, Ai was given a smirk instead, she definitely felt trouble.
"That still doesn't really answer my question, and I'm pretty sure Gaki-san wouldn't want you to stay with her out of pity," the girl laughed, and then she drew in her face close to Ai's. Reina moved her face to Ai’s ear, causing the trapped girl to shiver from the breath she could feel from her ear, "do us a favor and let me make all the fantasies you've had about us true. That way you can cut Gaki-san's grief and tell her before she develops too much hope." Ai could feel the heat spread from her ear to her face; it was true that she would sometimes have rather perverted fantasies between her and Reina, but she felt as if she would regret it if she gave in. Was lust the only thing stopping her from denying Reina?

   Before Ai could think any longer Reina's face moved in. She gave out a gasp, allowing Reina to thrust her tongue into her mouth, eliciting a muffled moan as the tongues battled for domination. They went at it for awhile until they needed air; their mouths separated and they panted a bit from all the action. The standing girl soon grew tired and so she got on the chair as well, her knees hugged Ai's hips as Reina sat in her lap. When Reina got comfortable she gave Ai a lustful wonky-eyed stare, and with that they were at it again. Their hands roamed each other's bodies, being mindful that they were in public. The fact that they were doing something so forbidden in public only added to the adrenaline rush. Ai couldn't help but moan loudly as she felt a hand trying to intrude its way underneath her bra. She could feel Reina smirk against her mouth and that made Ai angry. There was no way she was going to lose to the younger girl, so her hands found their way to Reina's pants which was already open on the top button. All she really had to do was just zip the pants down and she would have total control. She could feel the girl on her lap move in closer, her body right up to hers. Before she had a chance to get her fingers around the zipper she heard one of the staff members call out to Reina.
"Tanaka-san! It's your turn now!" Their lips finally separated, Reina laughed at the slight frown Ai seemed to be carrying.
"Seems like you enjoyed that, maybe we should continue this some other time, better tell Gaki-san all about it." the girl got off of Ai's lap and she made her way to the set. Ai watched as Reina left, collapsing on the chair when she did. The back of her neck rested on the side of the sofa chair.

'Risa' she thought; her eyes closed as she visualized the image of the girl, 'I'm so sorry...'
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:stoned:
Best start working on the next chap >__>

Before, I planned on leaving it at Michishige's POV, but then decided to add in Takahashi's in the end cuz I wanted to end with a little action.
So it kinda feels like I have to start from scratch again
I haven't exactly edited this chapter o__o"
I made sure to spell check it, but.. there may be some grammatically incorrect sentences XD
In all my previous chapters I would read through and edit every once in awhile, 1) to remember what I wrote 2) to edit
but yeah, this one and I think the last one, I just went through it once I think
Hopefully it isn't that bad, but I'm pretty sure once I read through it again on another day I'll probably be like "What the HELL was I trying to say?!?!"

Also, I finally got the Cinderella video from my friend,
I subbed it so people can actually understand what was going on
before I knew it I got over 30 views tho o.O" which is weird.. but anyways, If you wanna see it go ahead
I'm not gonna spam this place to advertise it XD

youtube.com/watch?v=hV8rEAMCt3c (not using URL because a very large off topic video will just show up :P)

I got a scanner.. like.. yesterday :lol: so I think my next update will be a picture..
お楽しみに~
 :byebye:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 22]
Post by: JFC on January 22, 2009, 07:53:10 AM
Chapter 9

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*RISA-REINA*
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo....boy.  :huhuh

Sounds like Reina's got some self-doubt. :O



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*KAMESHIGE DATE*
Awwwwwwww...:wub:



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"Michishige-san?"
What the? :?



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   Well, Aika was now a fairly happy girl. She had woken up to the warmth of the tall banana loving girl. Although, since it was a twin sized bed, the two of them had to sleep really close or else one of them would have fallen off the bed. Aika's face felt a little hot as she thought of the close proximity the both of them slept together.
Junjun = :sleep:
Aika = :shy1:



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Aika stayed at Jun's until lunch, the both of them playing games and randomly searching up things on the internet. Jun even showed Aika a Chinese Aika fansite, she was happy to know that she had a fanbase in China but she was also happy at the fact that Jun even searched it up.
Oh, I wonder when Junjun came across that one?  :roll:



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Aika's stomach growled and she averted her eyes from the tall girl in embarrassment. Jun laughed when she heard it; she went over to Aika and patted her head.
"I'm hungry, too lazy to cook, let's go to the mall." and with that the both of them put on their jackets and headed out.
Wait a sec...the mall? Did Aika bring a change of clothes? It'd be kind of awkward if she didn't and had to explain why she was spotted and had to explain why she was still in the same outfit she wore the previous day.



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They quickly walked to the food court, finally separating their hands to go to different food stands. Aika stood in line; her hand feeling rather lonely since it was split from the other girl's hand. She looked at her left hand and gave it a small rueful smile. She knew it was ridiculous, but she told her hand she understood the loneliness it felt.
Just as she put her hand back down and looked around to see if the crowd advanced any further she saw Jun walking towards her. She waved, looking at her slightly confused.
"I already order, I'm waiting for it to be made." Aika noticed her mistake and corrected her. Jun just waved it away and replied, "Its fine" and then latched her hand onto Aika's again.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
:wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly:



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They skimmed the area for a good seating place but then Aika noticed Michishige-san and Kamei-san. "Jun...” she said as she nudged the other girl. Jun saw what she was pointing at and nodded. The both of them headed to where their two senpais were sitting.
"Michishige-san?" Aika called out, earning her the pig-tailed hair girl's attention.
So it was Aika then.... :-X

Two words: DOUBLE DATE!!! :rockon:



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"You two are rather close...” She said softly enough for the two of them to hear. Junjun shifted awkwardly and then quickly put some distance between herself and Aika-chan.
"I'm going to find a table!" She announced, and then she left, leaving a rather annoyed Aika-chan staring at Sayumi. She stared back at the younger girl; her eyes unrelenting.
"Why were you two together anyway?" 'And so early too' she thought, her gaze bore into the standing girl.
Sayu = :mon misch:
Junjun = :mon whimper:
Aika = :mon mad:
Sayu = :on asmo:



Oh Sayu, you little she-devil you. :lol:



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Sayumi found out that Aika-chan liked Junjun a long time ago - if half a year counted as a long time ago - but she watched the younger girl in frustration since there were so many opportunities for them to get together. However, as much as she found it cute if the two were to hook up, she also knew about Koharu's feelings for Aika-chan.
Yeah, Sayu's a lot more observant than a lot of people give her credit for. :yep:



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She was just glad she knew where Linlin stood (at least, she thinks she knows).
But not even Linlin is entirely sure, is she?
:mon huh2:



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"Aaah~ There goes our latest entertainment~" Sayumi leaned back in her seat, noticing the look Eri was giving her.
"You're so evil sometimes that it's kinda scary Sayu~" She couldn't help but grin at the girl beside her, noticing the smile Eri gave her.
Oh the fun that can be had by being evil. :twisted:



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*REINAI AT HIGH KING PRACTICE*
:mon bleed2:



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Before she had a chance to get her fingers around the zipper she heard one of the staff members call out to Reina.
"Tanaka-san! It's your turn now!" Their lips finally separated, Reina laughed at the slight frown Ai seemed to be carrying.
DAMMIT!!!!!   :angry:



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"Seems like you enjoyed that, maybe we should continue this some other time, better tell Gaki-san all about it." the girl got off of Ai's lap and she made her way to the set. Ai watched as Reina left, collapsing on the chair when she did. The back of her neck rested on the side of the sofa chair.

'Risa' she thought; her eyes closed as she visualized the image of the girl, 'I'm so sorry...'
:pen_cry:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
Post by: KizuRai on January 22, 2009, 08:31:34 AM
LOL JFC you're so fast ><

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Wait a sec...the mall? Did Aika bring a change of clothes? It'd be kind of awkward if she didn't and had to explain why she was spotted and had to explain why she was still in the same outfit she wore the previous day.
WAIT I GOT THIS ONE!!
Well, they had practice before right? >__>
and they all brought bags
People bring a change of clothes when they go to dance practice don't they?
Besides! whats wrong with wearing the same thing for two days straight only?? XD

(as you can see, trying to BS my way through a plot hole :lol:)

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Yeah, Sayu's a lot more observant than a lot of people give her credit for.
I agree, good to know that I'm not the only one that thinks that
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
Post by: Fenrir on January 22, 2009, 08:58:50 AM
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Yeah, Sayu's a lot more observant than a lot of people give her credit for.
I agree, good to know that I'm not the only one that thinks that

I think that Sayu is quite smart, but she never shows it as the character she plays is "dumb." Although it does slip past once in awhile and that's when I go :o

Hope Ai-chan will be able to make up her mind soon!!! Or else she's gonna lose them both.
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
Post by: ringo-hime on January 22, 2009, 12:12:13 PM
Awww, the fragile glitter-loving girl..  :ptam-cry: Rei-cham~ *hugging hugging*
She's trying to run away from here heart aches.  :on speedy:

KameShige Raburabu~  :ptam-glow:
Aika and Junjun~ hihihi. so cute XD

RenAi  :ptam-aww: :ptam-aww: , mahn..Rei-cham sure gets Ai going. haha.

me wants to see wats next~  :ptam-glow:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
Post by: ayase909 on January 22, 2009, 03:00:38 PM
im so not liking this one..........i need tagaki! its my morphine sulfate! you know what i mean! while GAM is my oxygen and and mii-rii is my digoxin so that my heart could pump well! too much medical terms!  :glasses: anyways.....my point was that,,,,,,,,,,you can't be doing this thing.......poor RISA!  :frustrated:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
Post by: ShikyoxYaiba on January 31, 2009, 02:08:25 AM
Sorry I didn't comment when you posted this chapter. I was busy studying for my exams... (My scores were all over the place, but I managed to keep up my current grades. :sweatdrop:) Anyways...

Oooooooh lordy. o___o;; Let's see, where's that chart I had ever so long ago... *digs it out* ...Well, I found it, but it looked bad, so Imma refine it a bit since I have CS3 now. :3 (I made it a bit smaller, too... But I can make it bigger again, too. I just didn't want it to be too big for the page. Lol.)

(http://i442.photobucket.com/albums/qq142/ShikyoxYaiba/Fics/MorningMusumeLoveCircle.jpg)

I hope I didn't miss anything...
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
Post by: Sukoshi on January 31, 2009, 03:10:46 AM
ah my apologizes too but I just have to comment =D

awww I want to give Reina a hug...but then messing up TakaGaki is so  :O  Though I can see it as a positive thing if it helps Ai chan figure out her true feelings.  Reina's right...staying with Gaki out of pity is bad.

but putting that aside, I think I want to melt right now~  Kameshige~  :wub:

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"You're so evil sometimes that it's kinda scary Sayu~" She couldn't help but grin at the girl beside her, noticing the smile Eri gave her.
"Well, that's okay, because I'm still the Number one cutest girl in the whole world."

Hehe my favourite line~
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
Post by: Haruka on January 31, 2009, 03:17:51 AM
You cann't make that to Risa T_T

Damn, was so god ._.

I like perv things xDDDDDD *don't look at me like that, I know you too like that <o<* xD
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
Post by: KizuRai on January 31, 2009, 04:54:28 AM
@Fenrir: Woot! That makes the 3 or us then XD
When she accidentally let slips her real side, I think it shocks all of us ><

@ringo-hime: Haha :lol: I think Tanakacchi is a fragile girl, but the way she's going about is wrong..
>__> although I'm not one to talk, I was the one that wrote this LOL

@ayase909: O__O" Oh no that's not good! :: brings you to doctor ::
B-but... I didn't want this to happen either >< I don't even like RenAi!!!

@ShikyoxYaiba: lol it's okay Shicchan, I understand you had exams ^^; So I'm guessing you did okay?
LOL OMG It's the chart again XD
After looking at it myself I realized just how messed up it's gonna be by the end (if I get that far that is :lol:)
Oh, and there's no Eri because her brain is too hard to decipher cuz it's all in Erien XD :: lame ::

@Sukoshi: o__o" Are you apologizing.. because you're commenting?? If that's the case you should apologize more XD
lol Tanakacchi is kinda a.. love/hate type feeling isn't it??
helping Takahashi figure out her feelings... ^^; I guess that's one way of looking at it :P

@Haruka: :: shifts-eyes :: I-I do not!! >< I don't know what you're talking about!!
And I'm sorry for hurting Niigaki-san like that X___X trust me, it hurts me as well.. :P


Found my printer cable! (dad took it =.=")
So I scanned a picture I drew in my sketchbook
It has that... tan-ish color cuz that's the color of the pages =.=" remind me never to draw in my sketchbook if I'm planning on scanning it..

In any case
Here's a picture of disgruntled Tanakacchi ><
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y72/Dark_Rai/Untitled-2copy.jpg)
Wow, I feel like.. my drawings were so bad then.. (this was quite awhile ago)
bah.. I should redraw stuff and on paper this time >__>
[Oh, how do you resize pics??]
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
Post by: ShikyoxYaiba on January 31, 2009, 09:42:56 PM
Well at least you CAN draw. I have the drawing ability of Eri. Except just slightly better. ¬¬ And I did okay on my exams - failed one (well, 78% is fail to me) but managed to keep an A in the class. Some were "eh" and some were pretty good. I think I have all As. I think. .___.

But the nice part is, now I have time to write again! *runs off to write* Still waiting on the next chapter to see if I need to fix the chart again. XD
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
Post by: Haruka on January 31, 2009, 09:53:52 PM
Hey!  :inlove: good pic =D

I Like it *Q*

I have Mikitty's draw abilities xDDDDDDDDDDD
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
Post by: kRisZ on February 01, 2009, 08:29:53 AM
can I say more per... I mean update the soonest possible time.?.  :grin:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
Post by: lil_hamz on February 02, 2009, 10:16:43 AM
Well at least you CAN draw. I have the drawing ability of Eri. Except just slightly better. ¬¬ And I did okay on my exams - failed one (well, 78% is fail to me) but managed to keep an A in the class. Some were "eh" and some were pretty good. I think I have all As. I think. .___.

But the nice part is, now I have time to write again! *runs off to write* Still waiting on the next chapter to see if I need to fix the chart again. XD
You must be a genius Shiichan. So many As...I can only dream about those.

@KizuRai: Hey that drawing is really good! I love how you drew Reina's cloths. I can totally imagine her in them. I can't believe you updated, I was waiting for so long. When I saw you did I literally jumped up for joy. Now, would you please get such bursts of inspiration again soon? *pleading*
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 10 - Mar 3]
Post by: KizuRai on March 04, 2009, 01:42:06 AM
 :onioncheer:
YAY!! I UPDATED BEFORE 2 MONTHS!! XD

Now for me to continue this habit >< so I can finally finish this damn story LOL :lol:

Comment replies:
@Shicchan:   :: shock :: that's a.. lot of 'A's' you've got there o____O" mind sharing me half of your brain so I can pass physics and math?

@Haruka: LOL Mikitty's drawings aren't that bad.. they're just... simple
that means, your drawings are probably just simple too, it's fine, everyone has the innate ability to draw  :)

@kRisZ: XD I'm not sure when the next time I'll write a perv is.. might be the next chap or it might be 2 chaps later..
although, I will say that I'm planning on ending with quite a bit of action :D

@lil_hamz: thanks ^^; I drew it thinking of Tanakacchi haha
and bursts of inspiration? Well.. actually my last burst of inspiration left me an outline for the story, so I think I might be all set.. that is.. if something doesn't go horrible wrong of course :lol:

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Chapter 10

"Tanaka-san?"
Reina looked up and stared into the clear eyes of her kouhai. "Need something?"
Satisfied in getting her attention, the younger but taller girl backed her face away and looked at Reina with worry, "It's nothing like that, I was just wondering if you were okay, you seem kinda down."
She smiled knowing that there were people that cared for her, "There's nothing to worry about Koharu."
Koharu nodded, looking like she wasn't fully convinced, but wasn't going to pester her about it either.
"Just remember that we kouhais will be there for you if you need it." Reina's smile grew wider.
"I'll remember." Koharu then went off to Aika's group where they talked about various food related things. Reina stared at the group, she marveled at the harmonious relationship between the 7th gen and 8th gen. She wanted things to be okay between the GoRokkies as well but-- well in all honesty she wasn't one to talk since she was the one that included the 5th gen into the whole mess between them 6th gen. But really, despite all that, she wanted everyone to work well in a group, contrary to her rebellious-like outer image.

   They were all together for a T.V. shooting, so people were rushing around, some rehearsing their script, and some getting their make-up done. She watched as the people went back and forth, her eyes suddenly blurred everything. Her body felt weak and her head was swirling. Reina supported herself with a wall and eased herself into a chair. Koharu was right about there being something wrong with her, but there was no way she was going to tell the younger girl her worries. Reina had not been eating much lately, as much as she likes eating, and no, she wasn't on a diet either. She hadn't been sleeping very well either, and her body was probably feeling the effects of her recent unhealthy lifestyle now. There was a reason for it, ever since her mad rage and her trip to the mall, she has not been well since. Half of her felt regret, the other half felt immense jealousy. Her trip to the mall was supposed to help her not think about the Eri and Sayu couple. But when her feet brought her to the food court; that was when she saw the two being all close. Eri even licked some sauce off of Sayu's face!
She held her head in pain again; this was getting to be too much for her. However, maybe if she felt enough pain, it will keep her mind off of Eri; somehow it was working.

   She held her head in between her hands, a pose one would rarely see of the confident girl. Maybe she should pay Ai-chan another visit, maybe she'll forget Eri. There were so many 'maybe's' that swirled within her head, and the more she thought about them, the more her head hurt, and the more her head hurt, the more nonsensical her 'maybe's' turned into. She was vaguely aware at this point that she was probably doing much more harm than good, but she couldn't stop, whether she wanted to or not.
Reina groaned aloud, no longer caring if others heard her, she had to act all happy again once the camera turns on again, so all she wanted to do was possibly curl up into a corner and just stay there. Her thoughts were slowly blurring together, and she couldn't help but feel a small sense of relief, as her mind becomes so encrypted to her that she could no longer access the recent things she has done.

   Somehow, the staff managed to capture her attention as they told her about the filming starting again. She plastered on a rather practiced smile and nodded as she headed for the stage. There she locked eyes with the leader. The blurred thoughts in her mind managed to piece together somehow and 'Ai-chan's place' processed in the Yankii's mind. She walked over to the leader, trying to walk as normal as possible without tripping over her own feet, and stroked Ai-chan's arm lightly. She watched as the sharp expression of the leader dropped to an alarmed one. She looked around and seeing as how nobody was paying any attention, briefly whispered into Ai-chan's ear.
"Hope your schedules free tonight."
The woman's face quickly turned into a light shade of red, but being the serious leader that she is, quickly shook it off and asked her to get into her position. Reina sighed loudly, showing her displeasure, but complied nevertheless, and slowly walked into place.

Soon everything became fairly quiet and everyone waited for the cue of the cameraman and director. The lights outside the stage dimmed and the filming started. This was Reina's life, full of fake and unobtainable things.
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   Linlin stretched her arms into the air as much as she can, today had been a rather long day for her. It felt like the beginning of the year was slow for Morning Musume, but TV appearances and such suddenly popped up everywhere. When the filming finished she watched everyone practically fan out and do whatever they wanted to do. During the filming however, there were a few random things that caught her eye.
Such as the weird glances Takahashi-san was giving Tanaka-san and the guilty looks she gave to Niigaki-san. Niigaki-san looked like in utter pain when the camera wasn't on her and she knew Kamei-san caught it. Michishige-san looked like Michishige-san but a guilty look would cross her face every so often whenever she caught sight of Takahashi-san staring at Tanaka-san. Mitsui-san and Junjun acted the same as usual, same for Kusumi-san. Although Mitsui-san and Junjun did seem a little closer than usual, and Linlin did feel slightly annoyed but she just blew off the growing feeling as if it was nothing.
Either way, it was all a big mess, and she was amazed that the directors didn't even notice the tension on the stage. Linlin needed some time off; she sighed as she mentally told herself, but she didn't want to relax alone, she was the type to stick to others. She saw Kusumi-san staring at Michishige-san and began to worry for her friend. She walked up to the tall girl and tapped her lightly on the back.
"Kusumi-san?" She lightly called; the girl whirled around and stared at her.
"Linlin? Oh hey, you want to get something to eat?" well that wasn't exactly what Linlin had in mind but she felt hungry after thinking about it.
"Sure!" The two grabbed their things and they both left the studio.

"By the way, Kusumi-san are you okay?" Linlin asked as they sat down in a quiet family restaurant.
"Hm? What do you mean?"
"I mean, I saw you staring at Michishige-san..." Kusumi-san looked as if she was caught red handed and coughed.
"Uh..."
"I thought you liked Mitsui-san?" the girl began to look alarmed as she waved her hands in front of her face and shook her head.
"I do! I don't like Michishige-san that way; I'm just worried about her." Well it seems like even Kusumi-san noticed to atmosphere during the filming.
"Is there something wrong with Michishige-san?" She knew it was bad to pry, but she was already on the subject, it would be hard to back away at this point.
"Well I'm not sure... but her smile was kinda fake."
"You noticed that but you didn't notice the glances?" Linlin asked incredulously.
"What glances?" If there ever was a time to face palm, it would be now.
"Are you planning on asking her about it?" She tried to bring them back on topic since she felt that it would be bad if she gave any false information from something she just observed from.
"Mmmm.... I don't know... I'm worried 'cause Michishige-san took care of me when I first joined Morning Musume, but I wouldn't really know how to approach it if I were really to ask." Okay, well now Linlin was starting to get a little curious over what's happening in their group.
"I can ask with you, I'm worried about Michishige-san too" 'and all the other senpais as well' she added in her mind.
"Okay!" Kusumi-san's mood went up again and her voice returned to its normal high-pitched voice, "It's a good thing we're friends Linlin!"
Linlin grinned at the comment, "Yay~! I'm glad I could help!" she replied, but their voices were raised without them knowing and the people around them had to shush them. They quickly grabbed their menus and fell silent; slightly embarrassed from their outburst.
"So when should we ask her?" Linlin asked the girl sitting across from her.
"Uh... We'll get around to it sometime." Linlin laughed, well at least Kusumi-san was temporarily relieved of her worries, and she supposed it was good to worry about the present rather than the future.

In the end, it was all good.
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   It has been a few days already, and Aika could feel the growing distraught atmosphere of the once cordial group. But out of all the members in their group, she was more worried over one tall banana-loving girl. She could see the worry Jun held for Kamei-san, and actually Aika should be worried too. As a kouhai, it was probably the right thing to ask Tanaka-san what was up with everyone. However, there were two girls she knew the problem of, and their problem had to be fixed soon. The growing relationship between her and Jun was causing displeasure for the KohaLin two. She didn't really want Jun to know why those two would throw flaming glares at them whenever Aika would wipe food off Jun's face or Jun would fix Aika's hair. She knew Jun was the type to wish everyone happiness so knowing that two people disapproved of their unconfirmed relationship would cause Jun to back away from Aika immediately and cause a large setback in Aika's plans.

Jun and her were hanging out for the billionth time and Jun seemed to notice the multiple expression changes Aika was going through.
"You okay?" Jun asked, looking at her with concern.
"I'm fine." She smiled in reply but the look on Jun said she didn't believe her. "Really, I'm fi--" Jun pulled her into a hug; words of counsel would not work with her lack of vocabulary, so actions spoke louder than words.
Jun let go and looked Aika in the eye, "Want to talk about it?" Aika lost herself in those eyes, ones that showed genuine concern for her, and ones that desperately searched for the cause of the worry. She felt herself losing her will and eventually spoke.
"Can we talk about it when we get to your place?" Jun smiled and patted her on the head.
"Sure."

   Jun's place felt as familiar as ever to Aika now. She practically knew where all the utensils happen to be. Okay, that's a little creepy, but she's been over at Jun's place a lot of times now. They got in and hung their coats; Aika walked over to the couch and sunk in it whilst sighing. Jun looked at her and just laughed.
"You were so polite the first time you came over, now look at you, you're making yourself at home it seems." Aika just grinned back and shifted to make some room for the other girl. Jun walked over and sat down beside her.
"So what is it that's been bothering you lately?" Aika stared at her hands on her lap; she wasn't entirely sure where to start. Should she start with a confession or should she tell her about Koharu and Linlin? She figured she should talk about those two and see how Jun reacts.
"Actually... lately have you noticed any hostility towards us...?" She earned herself a blank look from Jun so she continued, "From Koharu and Linlin I mean..."
"Oh!" Jun seemed to think for a bit, probably recounting the times where Koharu would look like she wanted to kill her. "I noticed a few times already, do you know why?" Aika bit her lip, hesitant to speak any further and Jun seemed to notice.
"Its okay" she started "you don't have to tell me." Aika shook her head violently; she didn't want to back out of something she started.
"Can we call those two over? I want to clear everything up..." The tall girl seemed a little startled from the sudden request but complied nevertheless. She went over to grab the phone and then Aika could hear her talking.
She was speaking in Chinese so Aika knew it was Linlin; after awhile Jun hung up and joined her on the couch again.
"Koharu and Linlin are coming over." She smiled at Aika as she said so almost as if to reassure Aika that everything will be fine. She was nervous though, what if everything she observed was all false? What if Koharu and Linlin were not jealous and it was all just paranoia on her part?
So many 'what ifs' flashed across her mind in panic, but suddenly she felt a hand upon hers and she looked at it. Jun was telling Aika in her own way that she was there.

   The doorbell rang and Jun went to open the door. The two that just came in complained about the cold and quickly told Jun to close the door. Aika got up, she wasn't sure why, but she got up and gestured the two to sit down on the couch. This allowed both her and Jun to stay standing; in her mind it was better in terms of interrogation.
"So what's up?" Koharu's energetic voice filled the room. Jun was in the kitchen getting drinks so it was just Aika standing, and she wished in her mind for Jun to quickly rejoin her. When the taller girl of the group came back Aika breathed a sigh of relief. 'Okay' she thought 'now where to start?'
"Um... Koharu..." she began but trailed off soon after. A long paused elapsed and Jun glanced at Aika and then looked at Koharu.

"Kusumi-san, why have you been glaring at me lately?" Jun asked bluntly, shocking basically everyone in the room. Koharu had a deer in headlights look and she whipped her head to Linlin, whom looked rather speechless. Aika thanked Jun, and with the ice broken she thought she should add in something else.
"Linlin has been glaring at me lately as well, is there a reason for that?" The two put in the sudden spotlight could only open and close their mouths in protest.
"Well..." finding the words to speak again Koharu began to rebut, "You two have been getting awfully close to each other, what's with that?" 'Bingo' this was what Aika was looking for, she was right, they were jealous.
"That doesn't have to do with anything; two people can get close and become good friends. But you two are constantly glaring at us for no reason--"
"That's not true! There's a reason!" Koharu cut Aika off abruptly to dissent, but what she didn't know was that Aika was anticipating this.
"Oh? And what might that reason be?"  Koharu was caught off guard and let slip vital information, because of this, there was no backing out for her now. Aika felt like Michishige-san at that moment, but merely made a mental note to stay away from the mischievous bunny for awhile until she was 'Aika' again.
"That's..." she muttered under her breath but then looked up into Aika's eyes, "I don't like the fact that you're getting so close to Junjun!" she quickly blurted out. Aika felt as if she won, but after looking around the room she noticed the worried expression Jun had on.
"Jun...?" She started but Jun was staring right at Linlin.
"You too?" She asked the small girl, but Linlin could only avert her eyes.
"I'm... not sure...”

Koharu stood up and grabbed Aika by the shoulders and shook her hard. "I love you Mitsui! Why won’t you love me back?!" Okay, she wasn't really expecting this but figured there must be a way to fix it.
"I don't like you that way Koharu, we can be friends, but that's about it--- don't give me that look please..." Koharu had a sour look and she stared angrily into Aika's eyes, and for the hundredth time, Aika wondered if it was a mistake to confront them. Thankfully Jun saw the danger and pulled Koharu away from her.
"Kusumi-san, you can't force somebody to love you."
"I can and I will!" She said as she stared Jun down, then she looked at Aika, "Eventually you'll return my feelings Mitsui, I'll do everything I can to make you forget Junjun." Aika's eyes turned wide at that last comment, she didn't want Jun to find out about her feelings this way!
"I'm sorry, I think we have to go, please excuse us." Linlin dragged Koharu to the door, grabbed the coats and the two of them left leaving her and Jun awkwardly alone.

"Please disregard what Koharu just said, she's just--" She began but was cut off again, what was with people and cutting her off today?
"I want to know the truth."
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 :err:
Ugh.. you know..
I did an outline the last time I updated..
so I thought, "Okay, I can finish this fic easy~"

but then around Linlin's POV
I was like "Wait... where.. is this heading..??"
then halfway through Mitsui's POV it was "OMG WHAT HAPPENED?!?! ...Okay.. how do I fix this??"
Whilst trying to fix it,
Koharu turned insane on me.. =_="

I swear, characters turn to life when you give them a personality in your story!
I felt like I had practically no control over them whatsoever <_< they just did whatever they wanted to do
I'm so angry that my outline was practically no use..
I'm wondering if there's any hope of bringing this fic back on track o_O"

Well, wish me luck on updating again,
I want to finish this, but without forcing myself (is that possible?)

maybe I'll get a sudden LARGE burst of inspiration when I go to Morning Musume's concert on March the 20th :D
let's hope that becomes the case.. okay~
 :byebye:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 10 - Mar 3]
Post by: writerjunkie on March 04, 2009, 02:54:45 AM
KizuRai I didn't know you made a fic! I remember reading this a while ago, but I kinda forgot everything! ahh sorry about that! *pouts*  :sweatdrop: I will read it again from the beginning so I can comment properly.
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 10 - Mar 3]
Post by: KizuRai on March 04, 2009, 04:02:44 AM
@Writer(I need to find a nick for you seriously..):
LOL that's okay! ><
as long as you know it exists now

lol well... I've been thinking my fic is pretty boring really, but I don't want to just leave it unfinished
so no matter how boring I'm planning on finishing it :lol:

you can take your time on reading though..
cuz.. my chaps are pretty long
(you know.. me.. and.. writing.. equals.. walls of text ><)
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 10 - Mar 3]
Post by: Haruka on March 04, 2009, 08:13:21 AM
I love this love circles xD

And all the Drama this is getting =3

Hope you continue T_T

Cause I really following this fic 8)
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 10 - Mar 3]
Post by: writerjunkie on March 04, 2009, 10:45:55 PM
Ok I read it all! mannn this thing is all crazy! It's like an endless love circle! It boggles my mind lol I like it though. I love how everything is turning out. It is NOT boring! *glares at you* It's fun to read and keeps you wondering. Will there even be an end to the love circle?! lol Things keep twisting and get more confusing. I like it. I hope you update soon! You're making everything turn out nicely I think. as for a nickname...hmm...well on this other site they call me Issa so I guess you can call me Issa or Issa-chan like my friends at school call me. I've taken a liking to that name. I find it very affectionate and I like that.
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 10 - Mar 3]
Post by: Sukoshi on March 04, 2009, 11:01:50 PM
Yeah it's not boring at all!  I love this crazy circle.  I especially love the GoRokkies circle.  A Reina gone crazy is a very amusing thing indeed =D  I hope Risa starts fighting for Ai chan soon or else the kitty cat is going to have her way and then no one's gonna be happy.  Can't wait for either some Risa vs Reina or Sayu vs Reina action =D
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 10 - Mar 3]
Post by: KizuRai on March 05, 2009, 01:41:53 AM
@Issa-chan: <-- :: points at it ::
you sure you gonna be okay with me calling you that? cuz once I get into the habit of it, I won't suddenly switch back you know XD
and I can't believe you read all that!! ><   
I hope I update soon too LOL

@Sukoshi: lol yeah...
but I think I've completely lost control now, and its whatever goes now for them I swear..
I have no clue if Tanakacchi's gonna stay with Takahashi
or if Niigaki-san is gonna go all psycho or not
(hopefully no more characters will go insane.. Tanakacchi and Koharu were hard to fix already..)
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 10 - Mar 3]
Post by: ShikyoxYaiba on March 05, 2009, 01:59:21 AM
Yay!!! An update! *cheers* Like I said after the very first chapter, I'm loving this love circle. :D I wonder how things will turn out...

Btw, have we ever had Eri's PV in any of this, or is she just more of a bystander to it all? o_O *goes back to check*
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 10 - Mar 3]
Post by: Haruka on March 05, 2009, 04:29:01 PM
Yay!!! An update! *cheers* Like I said after the very first chapter, I'm loving this love circle. :D I wonder how things will turn out...

Btw, have we ever had Eri's PV in any of this, or is she just more of a bystander to it all? o_O *goes back to check*

I want an Eri's Point of View too xD

This could kill Reina u_u but stole Risa's GF mmm...

I want a fight  *Q*.... in OIL.... in Bikini's xDDDDDDDDDD
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 10 - Mar 3]
Post by: JFC on March 06, 2009, 06:44:04 AM
Chapter 10

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Koharu nodded, looking like she wasn't fully convinced, but wasn't going to pester her about it either.
"Just remember that we kouhais will be there for you if you need it." Reina's smile grew wider.
Awwwww...such a good kouhai. :)



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*REINA'S CONFUSION*
Damn, she's been putting herself under so much stress over this that it's now affecting her physically. :o



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The lights outside the stage dimmed and the filming started. This was Reina's life, full of fake and unobtainable things.
Lonliness really sucks sometimes. :(



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*LINLIN-KOHARU TALK*
Observant kouhais to the rescue, maybe? :?



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   Jun's place felt as familiar as ever to Aika now. She practically knew where all the utensils happen to be. Okay, that's a little creepy, but she's been over at Jun's place a lot of times now. They got in and hung their coats; Aika walked over to the couch and sunk in it whilst sighing. Jun looked at her and just laughed.
"You were so polite the first time you came over, now look at you, you're making yourself at home it seems." Aika just grinned back and shifted to make some room for the other girl. Jun walked over and sat down beside her.
Awwwwwwwwwwww...:oops:



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*AIKAJUN & LINLIN-KOHARU*
Holy crap Koharu.
:stunned:

Well, at least now they know...I guess.

Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 10 - Mar 3]
Post by: gab98 on August 27, 2009, 07:35:51 AM
woo this love circle is great, i want more!!!  :mon look: :mon crazyinlove:
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 10 - Mar 3]
Post by: rndmnwierd on August 28, 2009, 07:17:57 PM
KizuRai-san should hurry up and post, this is so dramatic and I just love how it seems to take on a life of it's own. Instead of circle, it should be paradox or parallelogram or something, lol.
Title: Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 10 - Mar 3]
Post by: Sora-chan on August 08, 2011, 04:23:03 AM
Mouuu~~ I hate when i read a really good one and its not completed..Hopefully you come back and complete it one day :) onegai!