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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
« Reply #60 on: November 29, 2008, 06:33:02 AM »
Nonsense! I will always comment! xD Erm, on Wordpad? I don't normally use that, but when I went to check the colors on it, it was really limited... You can't exactly find Reina's and Linlin's colors on there. :doh: But Reina's color is close to aqua, just a bit deeper. Linlin's is close to teal, but kinda lighter. I hope that helps. :sweatdrop: I'm not the best with this kind of stuff - I tend to just end up confusing people even more...

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
« Reply #61 on: November 29, 2008, 07:44:18 AM »
Chapter 8

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*KOHARU/LINLIN TALK*
Not that hard for Linlin to figure out what Koharu's thinking. :)



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"I wonder how I feel about Junjun." Linlin continued, causing the both of them to fall silent, both unsure of what to say. They had all gotten closer together, so being the new friend that she was Koharu thought she should help Linlin as a friend.
"You get jealous when she gives her attention to other people don't you?"
The other girl nodded slowly but tilted her head slightly in confusion. "That's true, but I wonder why I didn't get jealous about Mitsui sleeping over at Junjun's..."
Awww...:(



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"Linlin that's not good, you forgot the 'san' again."
"OH NO, why do I keep doing that??" both of them lightened up and began laughing, some people who were walking by would look at them strangely, but they didn't care.
Oops. :P



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"Linlin" Koharu called the other girl, causing her to look up at Koharu.
"Hm?"
"We're friends now, so whatever problem we'll tell each other okay? It's difficult being alone all the time." Koharu smiled when she saw Linlin smile brightly at her.
"YES, we are good friends! I'll try to help you as much as I can!"
The miracle girl just laughed at the other girl, "its okay, you don't need to physically help, just talking with me is helpful enough."
Linlin hugged the girl beside her, "Don't worry, I'll be there for you!"
They both laughed freely, allowing their sadness to slowly fall away.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...
:hee:



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Both hands were under the cold water as Mitsui-san had not yet removed her hand from Junjun's arm. A peaceful silence came and the only sounds they could hear was the rushing water. Unknowingly, Mitsui-san's hand had crept down to reach the other girl's hand and Junjun unconsciously intertwined them. Both of them just stood there, the warmth of each other's hands countered the cold temperature of the water. However after awhile Junjun finally seemed to process the mood it was turning into and became afraid. She quickly let go of the hand and turned the water off, heading for the dining table.
Uh-oh...does Junjun suspect/know that Aika "likes her-likes her"? :O



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"I was going to say sorry."
"For what?"
"Uh..."
"Is this about avoiding me all the time?"
'So she noticed' Junjun mentally face palmed.
"Well I'm fine with it, as long as you tell me a reason why you have been avoiding me." Aika said while smiling sweetly, Junjun instantly declared that a devil's smirk.
Oooooooo... :shocked:

Well, looks like one way or another, Aika just might find out where she stands with Junjun.



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"Is it because I'm not really an adult yet and I'm much younger than you?" This caused the tall girl to look up, and look straight at Aika in the eyes. Looking deeply into it, she could see the reflection of herself in the glistening dark brown orbs.
"Is that why?" Junjun didn't really direct the question at the other girl; it was more of a question directed to herself.
Or not.  :-X

By the looks of it, Junjun's still not sure herself of where she stands/how she feels.



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"Are you going to sleep with me tonight?" Junjun could not phrase that any better and did not understand how odd that question sounded due to her lack of Japanese vocabulary, but somewhere in the back of her mind, she knew that question was a little awkward. Aika severely blushed, for being a 16 year old girl; it was much too early for her to be having thoughts like that. Junjun blushed too and quickly clarified herself.
"I mean, I can sleep on the sofa if you want..." Aika shook her head at the tall girl, causing her to trail off.

"I'm sleeping with you tonight."
Okay, we need to know exactly what Aika meant by that.
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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
« Reply #62 on: November 29, 2008, 12:54:05 PM »
 :shock:
Woo, Aika! She's just going all in! She's got a lot of guts. Let's hope it pays off!

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 8 - Nov 27]
« Reply #63 on: December 10, 2008, 07:06:23 AM »
I don't know if I will be converted to a MiJun fan. Only time will tell... But I am thinking about pairing Jun2 with someone else. I think you're gonna get a big shock if I write it out.

Oooohhh I wanna see that vid!! If you put it up be sure to link it. Korean girls do seem very fashion savvy don't they? Wow, your friends and you make up a little United Nations :lol: It must be fun having friends from so many countries. You wouldn't need tour guides when you travel to their home countries in the future :P

Awesome title btw, Cinderella and the Samurais :D

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
« Reply #64 on: January 22, 2009, 02:28:21 AM »
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Um.. >__> How long has it been? 3 months?
I now understand the feelings of writers that tend to just leave their fic behind
However, I got inspiration! All of a sudden >__>
It kinda became a ritual for me ever since I started writing this fic, to stare at my laptop for awhile and think about the storyline before I sleep
So eventually I got something
It's another long chapter >< but its still not long enough to make up for a 3 months absence


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Chapter 9

"Both of you... ugh... please get out, I need time to think."

Both she and Gaki-san were kicked out of Ai-chan's room as she said that. Reina knew that no matter how much time Ai-chan got to think, the result will go in her favour for sure; Reina was as cocky as ever.
Outside the hotel room the two girls stood; Gaki-san glared at Reina, while she gave an innocent look back.
"What?"
"Stay away from Ai-chan." and with that, Gaki-san stormed off to where the elevator was. The short girl just stared and watched as her Sub-leader practically stomped her way through the hallway. When she could no longer see the other girl she slowly began walking in the same direction. She needed to get down too, and she sure as hell was not going to walk down the stairs. She needed to go by elevator, but she didn't want to be in the same elevator as Gaki-san. So with slow steps she advanced to where the elevator was.
She bitterly thought about what Sayu and Eri might have been doing then but quickly shook those thoughts away. It seems she was about to go into that horrible depressed state again, but she didn't want that, she was hoping chasing after Ai-chan would cure her.

   The ding of the elevator was heard and she entered it, thankful that it was empty. She pressed 'Lobby' and leaned her back against the walls of the enclosed space. She let out a loud sigh, her mood and thoughts were beginning to catch up to her.
"Reina did a bad thing..." She softly chided herself and forced herself not to cry. The mad rush of going over and breaking Leader and Sub-leader up was slowly wearing off, and in its place left regret. She shouldn't regret, and she repeated these words in her mind in a silent mantra.
There was no one to see her in this state so her confidence slowly drained away and her head drooped down. From an outsider's point of view she probably looked like a broken doll.
It took so long for her confidence to build up ever since she entered Morning Musume. Her outer personality was quite different from her inner one, but with her determination she finally got to be where she was now. The news of a backstabbing friend and her crush now the girlfriend of that backstabbing friend blew away her confidence with a bowling ball and there was no machine to put the pieces back together.
Another sigh, and this time she looked up at the blinding lights that filled the area.
'If there is a God, he's totally torturing Reina for fun.'
The familiar soft bell tone of the elevator was heard again.
"Okay Reina, get it together, its public time." And as the doors of the steel box opened, behind those doors stood a confident young girl who strode out in a calm and determined fashion. There was no room for the weak Reina, what she needed was the strong part of her that never regretted her actions.

So Reina decided to head to the mall.
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Was she dreaming?
"Sayu~ Say 'Aaah'"
"Aaah~"
"Bagu"
If she was, she never wanted to wake up. The two girls giggled at how foolish they were acting. They wandered the mall doing various 'date' things. Michishige Sayumi was so happy, she could die at that very moment and have no regrets.
"Whoa Sayu! Careful, don't trip." Okay, maybe it was better if she didn't die; however, she really was happy, never in her life would she have pictured this moment. Both of them held a bowl of ice cream and were walking frivolously like two high school girls.
"Eri say 'Aaah'" The other girl obliged, opening her mouth and allowing the cold substance into it.
"Mango!" Eri looked at Sayumi with a bewildered look, one with questioning eyes. Sayumi laughed, knowing what the girl wanted to ask.
"Yes, I know, I hated mango, but after that one drink I had that was apparently mango juice I started trying foods I didn't like."
Her girlfriend grinned at her, causing Sayumi to look at her with a slight apprehensiveness.
"What?"
"Nothing~"
"Eririn~ Tell me~" Sayumi went over and shook the girl lightly on the shoulder. Eri flashed another grin at her.
"I just felt that you're becoming so mature, that's all."
"Haha, what are you? My mother?" Eri stopped laughing immediately and looked at the girl beside her with wide eyes.
"I hope not, because then it would be impossible to be your girlfriend." They're eyes met, Eri grinned her goofy grin and Sayumi smiled, looking at Eri with loving eyes. This girl may not look like it, but Eri was extremely thoughtful and knows exactly how to cheer people up.

"Haah~" Eri had finished her ice cream and was now a little less energetic.
"Tired?" Sayumi asked, she couldn't eat ice nearly as fast so she still held her bowl. She stared at the other girl, telepathically asking if she wanted to sit down. Eririn nodded and as if she could actually read Sayumi's mind, she led her to a table and sat down. They sat at one of those tables in food courts, except they had one side with a bench like seat, which Eri immediately sat in and stretched. Sayumi headed for the chair across from the turtle but she felt something cling onto her arm stopping her from doing so.
Sayumi looked at Eri questioning, but all the other girl did was pout and tug at Sayumi's arm a few more times. It took awhile, but Sayumi understood what Eri wanted.
"Guess it can't be helped, although I wanted to sit across from you so I could see your face." Sayumi sighed and sat next to Eri, earning a grin and a hug from the other girl.
Sayumi couldn't help but smile too, Eri was a very clingy person, but in a way Sayumi herself did not like to be ignored. So in the end everything all worked out.

"Michishige-san?"
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   Well, Aika was now a fairly happy girl. She had woken up to the warmth of the tall banana loving girl. Although, since it was a twin sized bed, the two of them had to sleep really close or else one of them would have fallen off the bed. Aika's face felt a little hot as she thought of the close proximity the both of them slept together. Both of them happened to sleep very late and wake up fairly early, so Aika's plan of making breakfast went down the drain. However, it seemed Jun acknowledged that forcing Aika to stand back and watch was an impossible thing to do, so they agreed to cook together.
Aika stayed at Jun's until lunch, the both of them playing games and randomly searching up things on the internet. Jun even showed Aika a Chinese Aika fansite, she was happy to know that she had a fanbase in China but she was also happy at the fact that Jun even searched it up.
Jun, ever since last night she has been calling her Jun for awhile now. She would call out 'Jun' for no reason, earning a look from the other girl, then she would grin back, telling her she was bored. She felt a little bit foolish but it was funny to see the reaction Jun had every time she did it.
Aika's stomach growled and she averted her eyes from the tall girl in embarrassment. Jun laughed when she heard it; she went over to Aika and patted her head.
"I'm hungry, too lazy to cook, let's go to the mall." and with that the both of them put on their jackets and headed out.
Aika wasn't sure when, but somehow their hands met and held onto each other tightly, as they swung lightly while walking. Aika felt Jun shiver and she moved in closer, their arms now brushing against each other. Suddenly it didn't seem so cold anymore, and Aika was feeling particularly hot around her face.

   It was warm when they walked into the mall, the warm air rushed at them the moment they opened the door causing them to separate arms. However, their hands clung on tightly. They walked around slowly, momentarily forgetting their reason for coming, but then this time Jun's stomach growled, reminding the two of their previous task. They quickly walked to the food court, finally separating their hands to go to different food stands. Aika stood in line; her hand feeling rather lonely since it was split from the other girl's hand. She looked at her left hand and gave it a small rueful smile. She knew it was ridiculous, but she told her hand she understood the loneliness it felt.
Just as she put her hand back down and looked around to see if the crowd advanced any further she saw Jun walking towards her. She waved, looking at her slightly confused.
"I already order, I'm waiting for it to be made." Aika noticed her mistake and corrected her. Jun just waved it away and replied, "Its fine" and then latched her hand onto Aika's again. She had opened her mouth to scold her but quickly closed it at the body contact. She grinned inwardly, hiding her smile because she knew she would probably look like a grinning fool if she freely smiled.
The crowd advanced and they both finally got their order.

"Where should we sit?" They skimmed the area for a good seating place but then Aika noticed Michishige-san and Kamei-san. "Jun...” she said as she nudged the other girl. Jun saw what she was pointing at and nodded. The both of them headed to where their two senpais were sitting.
"Michishige-san?" Aika called out, earning her the pig-tailed hair girl's attention.
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She whipped her head to look at the two that called her name. "Oh hey, it’s Aika-chan and Junjun!" She exclaimed at the realization of who they were.
"Good morning Kamei-san and Michishige-san" They politely bowed despite the fact that Junjun was older than the both of them; well it was a Japanese custom to show respect to their senpai's she supposed. Eri urged them to sit down but Aika-chan waved her hand, "Actually we were planning on eating at a separate table." Aika-chan spoke before Junjun could have a word in; leaving Junjun with an open mouth. She closed it but gave a rather hesitant nod. Eri gave them a cute pout and then lazily hooked her arm with Sayumi's; leaning back and signaling for Sayumi to do all the talking. The girl thrown in the sudden spotlight stared at her with an incredulous look.
Then Sayumi stared back at the standing two, her eyes then narrowed and saw their close proximity.
"You two are rather close...” She said softly enough for the two of them to hear. Junjun shifted awkwardly and then quickly put some distance between herself and Aika-chan.
"I'm going to find a table!" She announced, and then she left, leaving a rather annoyed Aika-chan staring at Sayumi. She stared back at the younger girl; her eyes unrelenting.
"Why were you two together anyway?" 'And so early too' she thought, her gaze bore into the standing girl. There was a moment silence but then Aika-chan sighed and broke the short staring contest.
"I slept over at her place." She stated; and Sayumi felt the side of her mouth form a smirk.
"Oh?" She could feel the devil side in her take over, "And you two didn't do anything weird together I hope?" This earned the bunny a blushing Aika-chan.
"I... We didn't do anything weird, why would you think that?" Sayumi had already predicted her reply, so she was ready to answer.
"Oh I don't know, seeing how you like Junjun so much, I wouldn't be surprised if you pushed her onto a bed~" Aika-chan's face flushed into a deeper shade of red, if that was even possible, and she shook her head so furiously it looked like she would give herself whiplash soon.
"Michishige-san! I-I... “, she seemed at a loss for words; most likely torn between denying Sayumi's statement and actually admitting she liked Junjun but they didn't do anything.
   Sayumi found out that Aika-chan liked Junjun a long time ago - if half a year counted as a long time ago - but she watched the younger girl in frustration since there were so many opportunities for them to get together. However, as much as she found it cute if the two were to hook up, she also knew about Koharu's feelings for Aika-chan. The mess was almost as bad as the mess the Rokkies had. She was just glad she knew where Linlin stood (at least, she thinks she knows).
"Look," Sayumi could tell the younger girl gave in, "I do like Jun, which by the way, how in the world did you find out? But we didn't do anything weird," everything would have been a perfect explanation and a rather boring teasing topic at that point but Aika-chan continued, "we just slept in the same bed that's about it."
Well that caught Sayumi and Eri's attention, "Wait who's Jun? JUNJUN? Since when did you start calling her that?" Eri asked quickly with Sayumi shaking her head at the typically slow thinking of the turtle.
"Both of you slept in the same bed huh?" Realizing her slip-up, Aika-chan's face, which finally went back to its normal color, turned beet red again.
"Um, I'm going to go eat with Jun now... I'm kinda hungry.. Bye Michishige-san, Kamei-san!" and before they knew it, Aika-chan ran off to where Junjun was sitting.

"Aaah~ There goes our latest entertainment~" Sayumi leaned back in her seat, noticing the look Eri was giving her.
"You're so evil sometimes that it's kinda scary Sayu~" She couldn't help but grin at the girl beside her, noticing the smile Eri gave her.
"Well, that's okay, because I'm still the Number one cutest girl in the whole world."
Eri laughed at the reply, "That doesn't make any sense!"
They both laughed and joked like this for awhile.
The whole day was like any other day when they hung out together, and that was amazing; they were off in their own world, enjoying the days as they come. That was the way of the turtle and the bunny.
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   High-king had rehearsal that day, since a live was coming up soon, and after an hour of grueling practice it was time for their photoshoots. Ai sat in a white sofa chair, going over dance moves in her head as the other group members posed and took pictures. She thought about a lot of other random things such as life questions in which she was sure Risa would have looked at her weirdly. She was so into her train of thought she did not see the short glitter-loving girl walk up to her. Before she knew it, fingers were snapped in front of her face, breaking her from her reverie.
"Geez Ai-chan, you can be very unwary of your environment.." Reina sexily circled the chair Ai was sitting on, making her gulp unconsciously as she dreaded what may happen to her. "Any thoughts about us lately?" the wonky-eyed girl said as she stopped in front of Ai and rested her hands on each armrest. Ai was getting highly nervous as she realized Reina just blocked off her exit and she was trapped.
"Look Reina, I don't want to do anything bad to Gaki-san...” Instead of a frown, Ai was given a smirk instead, she definitely felt trouble.
"That still doesn't really answer my question, and I'm pretty sure Gaki-san wouldn't want you to stay with her out of pity," the girl laughed, and then she drew in her face close to Ai's. Reina moved her face to Ai’s ear, causing the trapped girl to shiver from the breath she could feel from her ear, "do us a favor and let me make all the fantasies you've had about us true. That way you can cut Gaki-san's grief and tell her before she develops too much hope." Ai could feel the heat spread from her ear to her face; it was true that she would sometimes have rather perverted fantasies between her and Reina, but she felt as if she would regret it if she gave in. Was lust the only thing stopping her from denying Reina?

   Before Ai could think any longer Reina's face moved in. She gave out a gasp, allowing Reina to thrust her tongue into her mouth, eliciting a muffled moan as the tongues battled for domination. They went at it for awhile until they needed air; their mouths separated and they panted a bit from all the action. The standing girl soon grew tired and so she got on the chair as well, her knees hugged Ai's hips as Reina sat in her lap. When Reina got comfortable she gave Ai a lustful wonky-eyed stare, and with that they were at it again. Their hands roamed each other's bodies, being mindful that they were in public. The fact that they were doing something so forbidden in public only added to the adrenaline rush. Ai couldn't help but moan loudly as she felt a hand trying to intrude its way underneath her bra. She could feel Reina smirk against her mouth and that made Ai angry. There was no way she was going to lose to the younger girl, so her hands found their way to Reina's pants which was already open on the top button. All she really had to do was just zip the pants down and she would have total control. She could feel the girl on her lap move in closer, her body right up to hers. Before she had a chance to get her fingers around the zipper she heard one of the staff members call out to Reina.
"Tanaka-san! It's your turn now!" Their lips finally separated, Reina laughed at the slight frown Ai seemed to be carrying.
"Seems like you enjoyed that, maybe we should continue this some other time, better tell Gaki-san all about it." the girl got off of Ai's lap and she made her way to the set. Ai watched as Reina left, collapsing on the chair when she did. The back of her neck rested on the side of the sofa chair.

'Risa' she thought; her eyes closed as she visualized the image of the girl, 'I'm so sorry...'
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:stoned:
Best start working on the next chap >__>

Before, I planned on leaving it at Michishige's POV, but then decided to add in Takahashi's in the end cuz I wanted to end with a little action.
So it kinda feels like I have to start from scratch again
I haven't exactly edited this chapter o__o"
I made sure to spell check it, but.. there may be some grammatically incorrect sentences XD
In all my previous chapters I would read through and edit every once in awhile, 1) to remember what I wrote 2) to edit
but yeah, this one and I think the last one, I just went through it once I think
Hopefully it isn't that bad, but I'm pretty sure once I read through it again on another day I'll probably be like "What the HELL was I trying to say?!?!"

Also, I finally got the Cinderella video from my friend,
I subbed it so people can actually understand what was going on
before I knew it I got over 30 views tho o.O" which is weird.. but anyways, If you wanna see it go ahead
I'm not gonna spam this place to advertise it XD

youtube.com/watch?v=hV8rEAMCt3c (not using URL because a very large off topic video will just show up :P)

I got a scanner.. like.. yesterday :lol: so I think my next update will be a picture..
お楽しみに~
 :byebye:
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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 22]
« Reply #65 on: January 22, 2009, 07:53:10 AM »
Chapter 9

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*RISA-REINA*
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo....boy.  :huhuh

Sounds like Reina's got some self-doubt. :O



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*KAMESHIGE DATE*
Awwwwwwww...:wub:



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"Michishige-san?"
What the? :?



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   Well, Aika was now a fairly happy girl. She had woken up to the warmth of the tall banana loving girl. Although, since it was a twin sized bed, the two of them had to sleep really close or else one of them would have fallen off the bed. Aika's face felt a little hot as she thought of the close proximity the both of them slept together.
Junjun = :sleep:
Aika = :shy1:



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Aika stayed at Jun's until lunch, the both of them playing games and randomly searching up things on the internet. Jun even showed Aika a Chinese Aika fansite, she was happy to know that she had a fanbase in China but she was also happy at the fact that Jun even searched it up.
Oh, I wonder when Junjun came across that one?  :roll:



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Aika's stomach growled and she averted her eyes from the tall girl in embarrassment. Jun laughed when she heard it; she went over to Aika and patted her head.
"I'm hungry, too lazy to cook, let's go to the mall." and with that the both of them put on their jackets and headed out.
Wait a sec...the mall? Did Aika bring a change of clothes? It'd be kind of awkward if she didn't and had to explain why she was spotted and had to explain why she was still in the same outfit she wore the previous day.



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They quickly walked to the food court, finally separating their hands to go to different food stands. Aika stood in line; her hand feeling rather lonely since it was split from the other girl's hand. She looked at her left hand and gave it a small rueful smile. She knew it was ridiculous, but she told her hand she understood the loneliness it felt.
Just as she put her hand back down and looked around to see if the crowd advanced any further she saw Jun walking towards her. She waved, looking at her slightly confused.
"I already order, I'm waiting for it to be made." Aika noticed her mistake and corrected her. Jun just waved it away and replied, "Its fine" and then latched her hand onto Aika's again.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
:wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly:



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They skimmed the area for a good seating place but then Aika noticed Michishige-san and Kamei-san. "Jun...” she said as she nudged the other girl. Jun saw what she was pointing at and nodded. The both of them headed to where their two senpais were sitting.
"Michishige-san?" Aika called out, earning her the pig-tailed hair girl's attention.
So it was Aika then.... :-X

Two words: DOUBLE DATE!!! :rockon:



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"You two are rather close...” She said softly enough for the two of them to hear. Junjun shifted awkwardly and then quickly put some distance between herself and Aika-chan.
"I'm going to find a table!" She announced, and then she left, leaving a rather annoyed Aika-chan staring at Sayumi. She stared back at the younger girl; her eyes unrelenting.
"Why were you two together anyway?" 'And so early too' she thought, her gaze bore into the standing girl.
Sayu = :mon misch:
Junjun = :mon whimper:
Aika = :mon mad:
Sayu = :on asmo:



Oh Sayu, you little she-devil you. :lol:



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Sayumi found out that Aika-chan liked Junjun a long time ago - if half a year counted as a long time ago - but she watched the younger girl in frustration since there were so many opportunities for them to get together. However, as much as she found it cute if the two were to hook up, she also knew about Koharu's feelings for Aika-chan.
Yeah, Sayu's a lot more observant than a lot of people give her credit for. :yep:



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She was just glad she knew where Linlin stood (at least, she thinks she knows).
But not even Linlin is entirely sure, is she?
:mon huh2:



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"Aaah~ There goes our latest entertainment~" Sayumi leaned back in her seat, noticing the look Eri was giving her.
"You're so evil sometimes that it's kinda scary Sayu~" She couldn't help but grin at the girl beside her, noticing the smile Eri gave her.
Oh the fun that can be had by being evil. :twisted:



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*REINAI AT HIGH KING PRACTICE*
:mon bleed2:



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Before she had a chance to get her fingers around the zipper she heard one of the staff members call out to Reina.
"Tanaka-san! It's your turn now!" Their lips finally separated, Reina laughed at the slight frown Ai seemed to be carrying.
DAMMIT!!!!!   :angry:



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"Seems like you enjoyed that, maybe we should continue this some other time, better tell Gaki-san all about it." the girl got off of Ai's lap and she made her way to the set. Ai watched as Reina left, collapsing on the chair when she did. The back of her neck rested on the side of the sofa chair.

'Risa' she thought; her eyes closed as she visualized the image of the girl, 'I'm so sorry...'
:pen_cry:

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
« Reply #66 on: January 22, 2009, 08:31:34 AM »
LOL JFC you're so fast ><

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Wait a sec...the mall? Did Aika bring a change of clothes? It'd be kind of awkward if she didn't and had to explain why she was spotted and had to explain why she was still in the same outfit she wore the previous day.
WAIT I GOT THIS ONE!!
Well, they had practice before right? >__>
and they all brought bags
People bring a change of clothes when they go to dance practice don't they?
Besides! whats wrong with wearing the same thing for two days straight only?? XD

(as you can see, trying to BS my way through a plot hole :lol:)

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I agree, good to know that I'm not the only one that thinks that

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
« Reply #67 on: January 22, 2009, 08:58:50 AM »
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Yeah, Sayu's a lot more observant than a lot of people give her credit for.
I agree, good to know that I'm not the only one that thinks that

I think that Sayu is quite smart, but she never shows it as the character she plays is "dumb." Although it does slip past once in awhile and that's when I go :o

Hope Ai-chan will be able to make up her mind soon!!! Or else she's gonna lose them both.

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« Reply #68 on: January 22, 2009, 12:12:13 PM »
Awww, the fragile glitter-loving girl..  :ptam-cry: Rei-cham~ *hugging hugging*
She's trying to run away from here heart aches.  :on speedy:

KameShige Raburabu~  :ptam-glow:
Aika and Junjun~ hihihi. so cute XD

RenAi  :ptam-aww: :ptam-aww: , mahn..Rei-cham sure gets Ai going. haha.

me wants to see wats next~  :ptam-glow:

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
« Reply #69 on: January 22, 2009, 03:00:38 PM »
im so not liking this one..........i need tagaki! its my morphine sulfate! you know what i mean! while GAM is my oxygen and and mii-rii is my digoxin so that my heart could pump well! too much medical terms!  :glasses: anyways.....my point was that,,,,,,,,,,you can't be doing this thing.......poor RISA!  :frustrated:




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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
« Reply #70 on: January 31, 2009, 02:08:25 AM »
Sorry I didn't comment when you posted this chapter. I was busy studying for my exams... (My scores were all over the place, but I managed to keep up my current grades. :sweatdrop:) Anyways...

Oooooooh lordy. o___o;; Let's see, where's that chart I had ever so long ago... *digs it out* ...Well, I found it, but it looked bad, so Imma refine it a bit since I have CS3 now. :3 (I made it a bit smaller, too... But I can make it bigger again, too. I just didn't want it to be too big for the page. Lol.)



I hope I didn't miss anything...

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
« Reply #71 on: January 31, 2009, 03:10:46 AM »
ah my apologizes too but I just have to comment =D

awww I want to give Reina a hug...but then messing up TakaGaki is so  :O  Though I can see it as a positive thing if it helps Ai chan figure out her true feelings.  Reina's right...staying with Gaki out of pity is bad.

but putting that aside, I think I want to melt right now~  Kameshige~  :wub:

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"You're so evil sometimes that it's kinda scary Sayu~" She couldn't help but grin at the girl beside her, noticing the smile Eri gave her.
"Well, that's okay, because I'm still the Number one cutest girl in the whole world."

Hehe my favourite line~

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
« Reply #72 on: January 31, 2009, 03:17:51 AM »
You cann't make that to Risa T_T

Damn, was so god ._.

I like perv things xDDDDDD *don't look at me like that, I know you too like that <o<* xD
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God!! She knows she's HOT!

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
« Reply #73 on: January 31, 2009, 04:54:28 AM »
@Fenrir: Woot! That makes the 3 or us then XD
When she accidentally let slips her real side, I think it shocks all of us ><

@ringo-hime: Haha :lol: I think Tanakacchi is a fragile girl, but the way she's going about is wrong..
>__> although I'm not one to talk, I was the one that wrote this LOL

@ayase909: O__O" Oh no that's not good! :: brings you to doctor ::
B-but... I didn't want this to happen either >< I don't even like RenAi!!!

@ShikyoxYaiba: lol it's okay Shicchan, I understand you had exams ^^; So I'm guessing you did okay?
LOL OMG It's the chart again XD
After looking at it myself I realized just how messed up it's gonna be by the end (if I get that far that is :lol:)
Oh, and there's no Eri because her brain is too hard to decipher cuz it's all in Erien XD :: lame ::

@Sukoshi: o__o" Are you apologizing.. because you're commenting?? If that's the case you should apologize more XD
lol Tanakacchi is kinda a.. love/hate type feeling isn't it??
helping Takahashi figure out her feelings... ^^; I guess that's one way of looking at it :P

@Haruka: :: shifts-eyes :: I-I do not!! >< I don't know what you're talking about!!
And I'm sorry for hurting Niigaki-san like that X___X trust me, it hurts me as well.. :P


Found my printer cable! (dad took it =.=")
So I scanned a picture I drew in my sketchbook
It has that... tan-ish color cuz that's the color of the pages =.=" remind me never to draw in my sketchbook if I'm planning on scanning it..

In any case
Here's a picture of disgruntled Tanakacchi ><

Wow, I feel like.. my drawings were so bad then.. (this was quite awhile ago)
bah.. I should redraw stuff and on paper this time >__>
[Oh, how do you resize pics??]

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
« Reply #74 on: January 31, 2009, 09:42:56 PM »
Well at least you CAN draw. I have the drawing ability of Eri. Except just slightly better. ¬¬ And I did okay on my exams - failed one (well, 78% is fail to me) but managed to keep an A in the class. Some were "eh" and some were pretty good. I think I have all As. I think. .___.

But the nice part is, now I have time to write again! *runs off to write* Still waiting on the next chapter to see if I need to fix the chart again. XD

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
« Reply #75 on: January 31, 2009, 09:53:52 PM »
Hey!  :inlove: good pic =D

I Like it *Q*

I have Mikitty's draw abilities xDDDDDDDDDDD


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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
« Reply #76 on: February 01, 2009, 08:29:53 AM »
can I say more per... I mean update the soonest possible time.?.  :grin:

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 9 - Jan 21]
« Reply #77 on: February 02, 2009, 10:16:43 AM »
Well at least you CAN draw. I have the drawing ability of Eri. Except just slightly better. ¬¬ And I did okay on my exams - failed one (well, 78% is fail to me) but managed to keep an A in the class. Some were "eh" and some were pretty good. I think I have all As. I think. .___.

But the nice part is, now I have time to write again! *runs off to write* Still waiting on the next chapter to see if I need to fix the chart again. XD
You must be a genius Shiichan. So many As...I can only dream about those.

@KizuRai: Hey that drawing is really good! I love how you drew Reina's cloths. I can totally imagine her in them. I can't believe you updated, I was waiting for so long. When I saw you did I literally jumped up for joy. Now, would you please get such bursts of inspiration again soon? *pleading*

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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 10 - Mar 3]
« Reply #78 on: March 04, 2009, 01:42:06 AM »
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YAY!! I UPDATED BEFORE 2 MONTHS!! XD

Now for me to continue this habit >< so I can finally finish this damn story LOL :lol:

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@Shicchan:   :: shock :: that's a.. lot of 'A's' you've got there o____O" mind sharing me half of your brain so I can pass physics and math?

@Haruka: LOL Mikitty's drawings aren't that bad.. they're just... simple
that means, your drawings are probably just simple too, it's fine, everyone has the innate ability to draw  :)

@kRisZ: XD I'm not sure when the next time I'll write a perv is.. might be the next chap or it might be 2 chaps later..
although, I will say that I'm planning on ending with quite a bit of action :D

@lil_hamz: thanks ^^; I drew it thinking of Tanakacchi haha
and bursts of inspiration? Well.. actually my last burst of inspiration left me an outline for the story, so I think I might be all set.. that is.. if something doesn't go horrible wrong of course :lol:

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Chapter 10

"Tanaka-san?"
Reina looked up and stared into the clear eyes of her kouhai. "Need something?"
Satisfied in getting her attention, the younger but taller girl backed her face away and looked at Reina with worry, "It's nothing like that, I was just wondering if you were okay, you seem kinda down."
She smiled knowing that there were people that cared for her, "There's nothing to worry about Koharu."
Koharu nodded, looking like she wasn't fully convinced, but wasn't going to pester her about it either.
"Just remember that we kouhais will be there for you if you need it." Reina's smile grew wider.
"I'll remember." Koharu then went off to Aika's group where they talked about various food related things. Reina stared at the group, she marveled at the harmonious relationship between the 7th gen and 8th gen. She wanted things to be okay between the GoRokkies as well but-- well in all honesty she wasn't one to talk since she was the one that included the 5th gen into the whole mess between them 6th gen. But really, despite all that, she wanted everyone to work well in a group, contrary to her rebellious-like outer image.

   They were all together for a T.V. shooting, so people were rushing around, some rehearsing their script, and some getting their make-up done. She watched as the people went back and forth, her eyes suddenly blurred everything. Her body felt weak and her head was swirling. Reina supported herself with a wall and eased herself into a chair. Koharu was right about there being something wrong with her, but there was no way she was going to tell the younger girl her worries. Reina had not been eating much lately, as much as she likes eating, and no, she wasn't on a diet either. She hadn't been sleeping very well either, and her body was probably feeling the effects of her recent unhealthy lifestyle now. There was a reason for it, ever since her mad rage and her trip to the mall, she has not been well since. Half of her felt regret, the other half felt immense jealousy. Her trip to the mall was supposed to help her not think about the Eri and Sayu couple. But when her feet brought her to the food court; that was when she saw the two being all close. Eri even licked some sauce off of Sayu's face!
She held her head in pain again; this was getting to be too much for her. However, maybe if she felt enough pain, it will keep her mind off of Eri; somehow it was working.

   She held her head in between her hands, a pose one would rarely see of the confident girl. Maybe she should pay Ai-chan another visit, maybe she'll forget Eri. There were so many 'maybe's' that swirled within her head, and the more she thought about them, the more her head hurt, and the more her head hurt, the more nonsensical her 'maybe's' turned into. She was vaguely aware at this point that she was probably doing much more harm than good, but she couldn't stop, whether she wanted to or not.
Reina groaned aloud, no longer caring if others heard her, she had to act all happy again once the camera turns on again, so all she wanted to do was possibly curl up into a corner and just stay there. Her thoughts were slowly blurring together, and she couldn't help but feel a small sense of relief, as her mind becomes so encrypted to her that she could no longer access the recent things she has done.

   Somehow, the staff managed to capture her attention as they told her about the filming starting again. She plastered on a rather practiced smile and nodded as she headed for the stage. There she locked eyes with the leader. The blurred thoughts in her mind managed to piece together somehow and 'Ai-chan's place' processed in the Yankii's mind. She walked over to the leader, trying to walk as normal as possible without tripping over her own feet, and stroked Ai-chan's arm lightly. She watched as the sharp expression of the leader dropped to an alarmed one. She looked around and seeing as how nobody was paying any attention, briefly whispered into Ai-chan's ear.
"Hope your schedules free tonight."
The woman's face quickly turned into a light shade of red, but being the serious leader that she is, quickly shook it off and asked her to get into her position. Reina sighed loudly, showing her displeasure, but complied nevertheless, and slowly walked into place.

Soon everything became fairly quiet and everyone waited for the cue of the cameraman and director. The lights outside the stage dimmed and the filming started. This was Reina's life, full of fake and unobtainable things.
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   Linlin stretched her arms into the air as much as she can, today had been a rather long day for her. It felt like the beginning of the year was slow for Morning Musume, but TV appearances and such suddenly popped up everywhere. When the filming finished she watched everyone practically fan out and do whatever they wanted to do. During the filming however, there were a few random things that caught her eye.
Such as the weird glances Takahashi-san was giving Tanaka-san and the guilty looks she gave to Niigaki-san. Niigaki-san looked like in utter pain when the camera wasn't on her and she knew Kamei-san caught it. Michishige-san looked like Michishige-san but a guilty look would cross her face every so often whenever she caught sight of Takahashi-san staring at Tanaka-san. Mitsui-san and Junjun acted the same as usual, same for Kusumi-san. Although Mitsui-san and Junjun did seem a little closer than usual, and Linlin did feel slightly annoyed but she just blew off the growing feeling as if it was nothing.
Either way, it was all a big mess, and she was amazed that the directors didn't even notice the tension on the stage. Linlin needed some time off; she sighed as she mentally told herself, but she didn't want to relax alone, she was the type to stick to others. She saw Kusumi-san staring at Michishige-san and began to worry for her friend. She walked up to the tall girl and tapped her lightly on the back.
"Kusumi-san?" She lightly called; the girl whirled around and stared at her.
"Linlin? Oh hey, you want to get something to eat?" well that wasn't exactly what Linlin had in mind but she felt hungry after thinking about it.
"Sure!" The two grabbed their things and they both left the studio.

"By the way, Kusumi-san are you okay?" Linlin asked as they sat down in a quiet family restaurant.
"Hm? What do you mean?"
"I mean, I saw you staring at Michishige-san..." Kusumi-san looked as if she was caught red handed and coughed.
"Uh..."
"I thought you liked Mitsui-san?" the girl began to look alarmed as she waved her hands in front of her face and shook her head.
"I do! I don't like Michishige-san that way; I'm just worried about her." Well it seems like even Kusumi-san noticed to atmosphere during the filming.
"Is there something wrong with Michishige-san?" She knew it was bad to pry, but she was already on the subject, it would be hard to back away at this point.
"Well I'm not sure... but her smile was kinda fake."
"You noticed that but you didn't notice the glances?" Linlin asked incredulously.
"What glances?" If there ever was a time to face palm, it would be now.
"Are you planning on asking her about it?" She tried to bring them back on topic since she felt that it would be bad if she gave any false information from something she just observed from.
"Mmmm.... I don't know... I'm worried 'cause Michishige-san took care of me when I first joined Morning Musume, but I wouldn't really know how to approach it if I were really to ask." Okay, well now Linlin was starting to get a little curious over what's happening in their group.
"I can ask with you, I'm worried about Michishige-san too" 'and all the other senpais as well' she added in her mind.
"Okay!" Kusumi-san's mood went up again and her voice returned to its normal high-pitched voice, "It's a good thing we're friends Linlin!"
Linlin grinned at the comment, "Yay~! I'm glad I could help!" she replied, but their voices were raised without them knowing and the people around them had to shush them. They quickly grabbed their menus and fell silent; slightly embarrassed from their outburst.
"So when should we ask her?" Linlin asked the girl sitting across from her.
"Uh... We'll get around to it sometime." Linlin laughed, well at least Kusumi-san was temporarily relieved of her worries, and she supposed it was good to worry about the present rather than the future.

In the end, it was all good.
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   It has been a few days already, and Aika could feel the growing distraught atmosphere of the once cordial group. But out of all the members in their group, she was more worried over one tall banana-loving girl. She could see the worry Jun held for Kamei-san, and actually Aika should be worried too. As a kouhai, it was probably the right thing to ask Tanaka-san what was up with everyone. However, there were two girls she knew the problem of, and their problem had to be fixed soon. The growing relationship between her and Jun was causing displeasure for the KohaLin two. She didn't really want Jun to know why those two would throw flaming glares at them whenever Aika would wipe food off Jun's face or Jun would fix Aika's hair. She knew Jun was the type to wish everyone happiness so knowing that two people disapproved of their unconfirmed relationship would cause Jun to back away from Aika immediately and cause a large setback in Aika's plans.

Jun and her were hanging out for the billionth time and Jun seemed to notice the multiple expression changes Aika was going through.
"You okay?" Jun asked, looking at her with concern.
"I'm fine." She smiled in reply but the look on Jun said she didn't believe her. "Really, I'm fi--" Jun pulled her into a hug; words of counsel would not work with her lack of vocabulary, so actions spoke louder than words.
Jun let go and looked Aika in the eye, "Want to talk about it?" Aika lost herself in those eyes, ones that showed genuine concern for her, and ones that desperately searched for the cause of the worry. She felt herself losing her will and eventually spoke.
"Can we talk about it when we get to your place?" Jun smiled and patted her on the head.
"Sure."

   Jun's place felt as familiar as ever to Aika now. She practically knew where all the utensils happen to be. Okay, that's a little creepy, but she's been over at Jun's place a lot of times now. They got in and hung their coats; Aika walked over to the couch and sunk in it whilst sighing. Jun looked at her and just laughed.
"You were so polite the first time you came over, now look at you, you're making yourself at home it seems." Aika just grinned back and shifted to make some room for the other girl. Jun walked over and sat down beside her.
"So what is it that's been bothering you lately?" Aika stared at her hands on her lap; she wasn't entirely sure where to start. Should she start with a confession or should she tell her about Koharu and Linlin? She figured she should talk about those two and see how Jun reacts.
"Actually... lately have you noticed any hostility towards us...?" She earned herself a blank look from Jun so she continued, "From Koharu and Linlin I mean..."
"Oh!" Jun seemed to think for a bit, probably recounting the times where Koharu would look like she wanted to kill her. "I noticed a few times already, do you know why?" Aika bit her lip, hesitant to speak any further and Jun seemed to notice.
"Its okay" she started "you don't have to tell me." Aika shook her head violently; she didn't want to back out of something she started.
"Can we call those two over? I want to clear everything up..." The tall girl seemed a little startled from the sudden request but complied nevertheless. She went over to grab the phone and then Aika could hear her talking.
She was speaking in Chinese so Aika knew it was Linlin; after awhile Jun hung up and joined her on the couch again.
"Koharu and Linlin are coming over." She smiled at Aika as she said so almost as if to reassure Aika that everything will be fine. She was nervous though, what if everything she observed was all false? What if Koharu and Linlin were not jealous and it was all just paranoia on her part?
So many 'what ifs' flashed across her mind in panic, but suddenly she felt a hand upon hers and she looked at it. Jun was telling Aika in her own way that she was there.

   The doorbell rang and Jun went to open the door. The two that just came in complained about the cold and quickly told Jun to close the door. Aika got up, she wasn't sure why, but she got up and gestured the two to sit down on the couch. This allowed both her and Jun to stay standing; in her mind it was better in terms of interrogation.
"So what's up?" Koharu's energetic voice filled the room. Jun was in the kitchen getting drinks so it was just Aika standing, and she wished in her mind for Jun to quickly rejoin her. When the taller girl of the group came back Aika breathed a sigh of relief. 'Okay' she thought 'now where to start?'
"Um... Koharu..." she began but trailed off soon after. A long paused elapsed and Jun glanced at Aika and then looked at Koharu.

"Kusumi-san, why have you been glaring at me lately?" Jun asked bluntly, shocking basically everyone in the room. Koharu had a deer in headlights look and she whipped her head to Linlin, whom looked rather speechless. Aika thanked Jun, and with the ice broken she thought she should add in something else.
"Linlin has been glaring at me lately as well, is there a reason for that?" The two put in the sudden spotlight could only open and close their mouths in protest.
"Well..." finding the words to speak again Koharu began to rebut, "You two have been getting awfully close to each other, what's with that?" 'Bingo' this was what Aika was looking for, she was right, they were jealous.
"That doesn't have to do with anything; two people can get close and become good friends. But you two are constantly glaring at us for no reason--"
"That's not true! There's a reason!" Koharu cut Aika off abruptly to dissent, but what she didn't know was that Aika was anticipating this.
"Oh? And what might that reason be?"  Koharu was caught off guard and let slip vital information, because of this, there was no backing out for her now. Aika felt like Michishige-san at that moment, but merely made a mental note to stay away from the mischievous bunny for awhile until she was 'Aika' again.
"That's..." she muttered under her breath but then looked up into Aika's eyes, "I don't like the fact that you're getting so close to Junjun!" she quickly blurted out. Aika felt as if she won, but after looking around the room she noticed the worried expression Jun had on.
"Jun...?" She started but Jun was staring right at Linlin.
"You too?" She asked the small girl, but Linlin could only avert her eyes.
"I'm... not sure...”

Koharu stood up and grabbed Aika by the shoulders and shook her hard. "I love you Mitsui! Why won’t you love me back?!" Okay, she wasn't really expecting this but figured there must be a way to fix it.
"I don't like you that way Koharu, we can be friends, but that's about it--- don't give me that look please..." Koharu had a sour look and she stared angrily into Aika's eyes, and for the hundredth time, Aika wondered if it was a mistake to confront them. Thankfully Jun saw the danger and pulled Koharu away from her.
"Kusumi-san, you can't force somebody to love you."
"I can and I will!" She said as she stared Jun down, then she looked at Aika, "Eventually you'll return my feelings Mitsui, I'll do everything I can to make you forget Junjun." Aika's eyes turned wide at that last comment, she didn't want Jun to find out about her feelings this way!
"I'm sorry, I think we have to go, please excuse us." Linlin dragged Koharu to the door, grabbed the coats and the two of them left leaving her and Jun awkwardly alone.

"Please disregard what Koharu just said, she's just--" She began but was cut off again, what was with people and cutting her off today?
"I want to know the truth."
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 :err:
Ugh.. you know..
I did an outline the last time I updated..
so I thought, "Okay, I can finish this fic easy~"

but then around Linlin's POV
I was like "Wait... where.. is this heading..??"
then halfway through Mitsui's POV it was "OMG WHAT HAPPENED?!?! ...Okay.. how do I fix this??"
Whilst trying to fix it,
Koharu turned insane on me.. =_="

I swear, characters turn to life when you give them a personality in your story!
I felt like I had practically no control over them whatsoever <_< they just did whatever they wanted to do
I'm so angry that my outline was practically no use..
I'm wondering if there's any hope of bringing this fic back on track o_O"

Well, wish me luck on updating again,
I want to finish this, but without forcing myself (is that possible?)

maybe I'll get a sudden LARGE burst of inspiration when I go to Morning Musume's concert on March the 20th :D
let's hope that becomes the case.. okay~
 :byebye:
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Re: Morning Musume's Love... Circle? [Chap 10 - Mar 3]
« Reply #79 on: March 04, 2009, 02:54:45 AM »
KizuRai I didn't know you made a fic! I remember reading this a while ago, but I kinda forgot everything! ahh sorry about that! *pouts*  :sweatdrop: I will read it again from the beginning so I can comment properly.

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