As soon as he was gone Risa snatched up a nine mm pistol and a small 22 cal. rifle and a case of ammo, as well as a handful of targets, and headed down to her favorite lane at the very end of the range. Soon she was set up and happily pumping bullets into the defenseless targets.Woah..a trigger happy Risa in there... :mon scare:
pausing in closing her wallet when her eyes landed on the single photo that resided there. Affectionately, she traced the face of the girl in the picture with her, as she did every time she saw the picture.
Lin jerked awake when the plane suddenly started to move, realizing belatedly that she had fallen asleep in her seat and that the plane had begun take off without a hitch. Sighing, Lin wiped the tears that were beginning to form in her eyes, next stop, Narita International.
She looked at the picture she’d removed from her hard hat, smiling tearfully at the girl in the photo, “I miss you.” she whispered, before she put the photo in the pocket and walked away from the sirens gathering behind her.
“Ah that’s so sweet.” Eri replied loudly, watching Reina instantly turn red, “I knew you were a big softy.” There were a few chuckles spreading around them and Reina scowled at the room at large before turning sideways in her chair with a ‘humph.’There goes Reina's "reputation" :lol:
The bonding scene was abruptly broken by a file landing on their shared desk, courtesy of their captain, “Glad you girls are getting along. I have the perfect assignment for you.”I have a bad feeling about this :twisted:
“Now I can put this together in peace.” Instead of searching for borders, she simply started fitting together as many pieces as possible. “Everything will soon come together.”Oooooh so is Koharu the ebil one here? Seems like everyone are pieces of her chess game :twisted: I'm loving this story more & more :twothumbs
“Call me Reina.” At Eri’s surprised sound, Reina felt the need to clarify, “Uh, well, we are partners, so we might as well get comfortable with each other.”
“It’s beginning.” Koharu barely acknowledged the voice of one of her trusted servants, so absorbed in sorting the pieces of her jigsaw puzzle. After a while, the man cleared his throat and left.
@len - New fic gets two otome Rikas? lol Everytime someone says 'Gaki with guns' (aside from the alliteration that makes me chuckle) I always think of that old photobook with Rika dressed in that short black number and pointing pistols at the camera. Oh, so hot. :drool: Again, Koha will be a lot later.
“I’m so awesome.” She mumbled to herself in Chinese
“Yes, Ishikawa-san.” He answered back professionally.
Every time Risa saw it, she forgot her anger and heartbreak and wondered if she’d done the right thing. She traced their smiling faces, lost in her memories.
“Yes, that’s right. Niigaki-san has already agreed to work for us, if you come-” Ai cut him off by grabbing the lapels on his jacket and shaking him.
“Where is she!? I want to see her!” the girl she’d been searching for for four years was so close, she couldn’t help herself.
“If you come with us,” the man started pointedly, ignoring her shaking him, “you can see her.”
“I’m in.” Ai slammed the door in his face and went back inside to get ready.
this is no where near as boring as I originally though it would be.Boring? You kidding right? Me want more :on hypto:
She finished with a cheerful smile and Risa couldn’t help but think she was cute.I can't help but go uh oh at this...Now potential TakaGakiKame?
When she was finished with her little mini rant, Risa finally paid attention to the reaction of the other girls. Ai was staring at her like she was an alien, the two cops had their jaws dropped, the bigger Chinese girl and Sayumi were looking at her with a new measure of respect and the last two girls just looked confused. “Uh,” Risa turned to Ai sheepishly, “If that’s alright with you Ai-chan?”
She finished with a cheerful smile and Risa couldn’t help but think she was cute.
Risa’s feelings came back in an instant, her love and her anger, and she couldn’t decide which one she wanted to feel more.
Except for Ai who seemed to only focus on Risa herself. That deep gaze conveyed many things to Risa that made her blush and pale at the same time and at once
“Okay then, now that that’s settled, what to you propose we do next Ai-chan?” Risa almost laughed when she turned to face Ai again, the older girl had a perfect deer in headlights expression, brown eyes wide and mouth formed into a small ‘O’.
She finished with a cheerful smile and Risa couldn’t help but think she was cute.
“She’s got type O blood.”
“Eri. Please.”
“She’s from Fukuoka.”
“Eri, stop it.”
“Oh! She likes ribbons!”
Now potential TakaGakiKame?No! Absolutely not!.....Well, maybe.... No! Bad! *smacks own hand*
will more OG members appear????Oh god, don't tempt my brain, if I added more, I might potentially stab myself with a fork. It will be impossible to keep track of this.
Eri's always cute and I don't think that Risa was seeing her like more than a silly and cute girl, but it could be interesting if Kame'd show up some interest in Gaki-san later and Risa played along...Yes! That's it! But, hmm, you have given me an interesting idea... Maybe, perhaps I can work with that.... Yes, yes, I can see it...
The crimes the girls done fit them as well.I'm glad you think so, I had the crimes and I thought hard about which girl got which. Then I added new ones for Ai and Risa!
A love triangle possibility.?.No! I couldn't! ...Could I?
As for the puppet leader suspicion,
While she was distracted, Jun took this opportunity to steal food off the wonky eyed girl’s plate, passing some to Aika next to her as well.:stuffed:
“What? What happened?” Her innocent curiosity made laughter break out around the table and she turned to Risa with puppy dog eyes.:mon huh2: So Aichan!
Risa commented, flinching when she felt Ai grip her hand gently. She almost let go but then paused and after a second of thought, allowed the touch.More TakaGaki! :gmon love2:
Eri exchanged a glance with Reina, “Maybe we could do something about that? They’re right, they have to eat somehow.”
“My cheeks are adorably chubby. Your nose looks like you were left in the test tube too long!”
but before she could apologize she felt her breath leave her, courtesy of Eri’s fist buried in her gut.
Sayumi slowly took her seat, now looking concerned at the girl across the table from her
Amazingly, the two partners grinned at each other like nothing had happened.
Ask and ye shall receive!
Quote from: lenglad to help you XD XD
Eri's always cute and I don't think that Risa was seeing her like more than a silly and cute girl, but it could be interesting if Kame'd show up some interest in Gaki-san later and Risa played along...
Yes! That's it! But, hmm, you have given me an interesting idea... Maybe, perhaps I can work with that.... Yes, yes, I can see it...
“Ah, you got the bacon, you cannibal.”Sayu making friends? XD
I bet they could break out of that hotel if they wanted to. Since doing that has to be at least less difficult than taking out mob bosses. The thing is I bet that they're not going to bother trying, they have a fairly good deal going with the cops anyway.;)
High possibility TakaGaki
Can ask for more?Of course!
i expesialy loled at eriWould it be bad if I said, "Me too?"
Sayu making friends?Lol, in the way only Sayu can!
@Kuji - Ah, the lawmen wouldn't have let her.The lawmen are the ones I was suggesting she'd scam. They're the only ones at the table with money after all, besides Ai. ;D
...
Exploding chips? Then how would they get any work done?
close up of the brick building across from them
Aika suddenly had a thought, how was she going to get down?
They were going to get away with this, robbing a police station!
Lin’s heavier desktops.
“Where have you been?! I’ve been worried sick about you!” Risa felt a sense of déjà vu; hadn’t she said the same thing to the other girl once? How odd to hear her own words being used against her so many years later. She felt something cold grip her heart, the last time she’d said that to Ai was just before the older girl broke her heart.
Then Lin strapped herself in and held on for dear life, half afraid that Jun would drop her.
Risa sighed, watching Sayu shut the curtain on her window. She turned to her own room, time to face the music, Ai was waiting.
Lin instead went to the security room to erase the footage of them in the building and then she decided to have some fun with intercom system.
“This is God.” She said in a deep voice, startling her companions in the evidence room “What you’re doing is wrong! My computers are over in the corner.” she added quietly.
Ditto here XDQuoteLin instead went to the security room to erase the footage of them in the building and then she decided to have some fun with intercom system.
“This is God.” She said in a deep voice, startling her companions in the evidence room “What you’re doing is wrong! My computers are over in the corner.” she added quietly.
That's it, I love Lin XD XD XD
but i think i cant realy imagine risa with a tatto...Yeah, not in real life anyway. :sweatdrop:
“I’m not cold, I just need a drink.” Risa tilted her head in confusion, “Let’s go down to the bar.”Erm is this what I think it is? :O
Ai turned to the bartender, “I’ll take a fourth drink and a Jack and coke for my friend.” She ordered, intending to teach Risa how to sleep tonight.Doesn't sound good to me :(
Ai, sitting up in bed and holding a pillow to her chest
“I love you
Now that we’ve found each other again, I’m not going to let you go so easily this time
“I’m not cold, I just need a drink.”
Finally I got it into my head to blow up the house where we’d first met
She ordered, intending to teach Risa how to sleep tonight
It seems with this conversation though that no matter how cute Kame is or how irresistable Sayu's charms are, Ai's got a pretty good hold on Risa.
girl who was quietly conversing with Ai on her lap
"What? You mean kill them?” Ai asked in surprise, turning to face her. Risa nodded, “I don’t think I’m okay with that.”
lover’s quarrel
About five minutes later Eri stomped out of the bathroom, holding her belly protectively, Reina called out after her laughingly
“Can you at least bring me some clothes? I’m going to take a shower.”
The lawless girls watched the show in amusement.
Back then you were only knee high to a grasshopper, but I guess that hasn’t changed much.”
Reina was obviously bored and Risa obviously fascinated
“He does love Reina very much.”
Kusumi dono??Haha, caught that, did you?
"...Will you help me after all of this is over, no matter what happens?”
Eri and Jun winced at his cry and Ai came running into the room, “What the hell was that?!” Risa ignored them and poked the man’s broken arm sadistically.
With one swift move, Risa planted her foot and jerked his arm until it broke violently at the elbow.
turning around to give her companions an innocent look, “What?”
“Here you go and remember, you fell. Or I’ll be back.” the last part was said menacingly and he nodded fearfully.
“Well?!” Ai yelled, unable to bear the quiet anymore, “Say something!”
“Uh, he’ll live.” Risa replied, almost turning her statement into a question.
“Well, what did you want me to do? Ask nicely and then give up when he refused?
Risa burst through the door and lunged at the man, driving the piece of glass deep into his neck. He instantly dropped his weapon and the weight of her tackle sent him to the floor, where she proceeded to slice open his throat in a vicious jerk.
Her bullet sailed into the second gunman’s barrel, causing his gun to backfire and explode in his hand.
Reina realized she was actually waiting to be called on, “What?” She finally asked, pointing at her.
“Of course not.”
“I’m sure she’ll be thrilled.” Risa responded sarcastically, “I’ll make a necklace out of it.”
I will do whatever I can to keep Ai safe.”
“I always wanted to be a dancer.”
Before she realized what was happening, the same aged girl was asleep in her arms
You are really fanning my Risa addiction you know?*fans some more*
Is Kame gonna lose the use of her legs and not be able to dance anymore?:lol: :lol: :lol: I don't know why I found that so funny.
*GakiKame sap*:on_puddle:
:on blackhole:[insert flushing toilet sounds]
*Buys
- Liquid cooling CPU (For Lin)
- Flat Screen HD TV (For Gaki-san)
- Leather Gloves (For Jun)
- Umei (For turtle)
Isn't it sort of funny how Eri the cop has no objections to the supreme beat down Risa gave the bad guy but Ai does?:whistle:
That's probably why Risa told Ai to enter last.Actually, yes.
mostly I just see Risa and Kame becoming really good friends and Ai being paranoid - she does seem a bit high strung in this fic and the violence isn't helping her keep a cool head either. ^^;<.< >.> <.< We shall see...
Okay, that’s hmmm but yay powerful womanHmmm? Why, hmmm?
Eww... good for him.?.Shock value right there!
Badass Risa is awesomeThe necklace might actually make an appearance now, since I was just joking before.
Lovely. Ai waking up with this...If she wakes up...
QuoteLovely. Ai waking up with this...If she wakes up...
QuoteLovely. Ai waking up with this...If she wakes up...
:lol: :lol: I just couldn't resist.:shockedQuoteLovely. Ai waking up with this...If she wakes up...
*waits for the next chapter* <insert finger ticking emoticon here> :grin:
“Of course just me. I can’t, in good conscience, ask anyone to kill, most especially you. You’ve already taken a life, I can’t let anymore stains be on your soul.” The group was a little surprised by her sincerity, Reina more so than the restI like how she's worried that any of the others end like her. Well, you see a good leader there, but I'm worried that she could end doing something stupid to prevent that from happening (most likely to Jun, who seems to have become like a kouhai to her?)
“Oooo.” Aika sounded from somewhere to her left. Reina looked over to see the girl shoving stacks of money into her pockets.
“Aika, put that back, now is not the time.” Reina threw a pen at her and it bounced off her shoulder.
“Hey, anytime is the perfect time for a thief.” The younger girl said haughtily, causing the cop to roll her eyes.
“Isn’t that the new Morning Musume song?” Aika wondered aloud about the ringtone.
as if someone had deliberately kissed the spot as she slept
so it had to have been the same aged girl.
there’s almost no way to get in or out with our lives intact
“I think that maybe, you and your gangster boyfriend are in need of a place to live.” Turning to Jun, Risa gave her a pointed look.
“Eh?” Jun suddenly found herself at the center of attention. “ME?!”
throwing her arms outward as if to give the house a hug.
“We break all the bones in their bodies or just their legs or arms. Or we could cut the time in half by me just killing everyone with a silenced weapon.”
“but she has more uses to me. I mean, look at that body.”
The landlord looked as she jumped up and down in the kitchen, just able to peek at her panties underneath the short skirt, “Oh.”
reaching up to squeeze the con’s breasts.
“Jun!” She let out a very not-in-character screech, but Jun only silenced her with her lips.
From the door, the landlord shifted on his feet to a more comfortable position, a creepy smile spreading across his lips.
Down in the office, the three girls paused simultaneously at the strange sounds that were issuing forth from their comms. They exchanged embarrassed looks and turned back to their searching with renewed vigor.
“Sayu, Jun, take the room and get down here, pronto. When you leave the building, turn left and we’ll pick you up at the far corner.” Risa ordered, but the sounds didn’t stop. She felt herself flush even deeper, “Uh guys. You don’t need to stall anymore.”
“Sorry.” Jun’s voice whispered over the ear piece, “If I stopped now it would just be cruel.”
“Uhh…” Risa winced at a particularly high pitched squeal from Sayumi echoed in her head.
Suddenly her eyes widened and Reina prepared herself to grab the wheel, “Ai’s awake?”
“Good, that’s good. Wait, annoyed?”
“Well, if she’s annoyed, I guess that means she’s fine.”
“And besides all that, I don’t like to give repeat performances.”Yeah where's the fun in that?
"Isn’t that the new Morning Musume song?” Aika wondered aloud about the ringtone.:hiakhiakhiak:
“First, though, who’s hungry?”With the $$$ Aika "found", I'm guessing a feast is in order?
Also, just a heads up, there will be no Jun/Sayu as a serious couple. Although they did become a little closer due to this....Damn! Why oh why? Oh well, it was fun while it lasted :on bleed:
Risa hung up the phone with a snap. “First, though, who’s hungry?”
because one can't never reach perfection:yep: True dat.
awwwww~ y not a serious couple for Jun/Sayu~ lol~I gots plans. O0
Why do I find that funnyBecause you just imagined them dying horrible, painful, comical deaths?
omg that's cuteI always think of a sleepy, pouting Ai holding a red blanket and crossing her arms stubbornly, saying, "No!"
Hmmm Eri left a thank you print on Risa, interestingYes! :theking
It's a wonder how they can actually concentrate looking for the documents.Embarrassment is a good motivator.
I wonder who's in the lineup in their world.'I love Africa' is.
"April's Fools" but I thought "April no Aho" sounded cooler.Oh! April's Fools! I was like, what does April's Idiot mean? :lol:
Eri left Risa her mark.For some reason, when I read that, I imagined Risa glowing in the dark.
I wonder how Lin would react if she know what happen.Her head would explode. Like, "Jun and Sayu did what now?...!"(http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/assplode2.gif)
OMG!!! Was it really Eri who kissed Risa. It's gonna be one hell of a twist if it were someone else.Yes dear. Although if it wasn't, what kind of sick plotline could I come up with? Ghost of Christmas' Past? Random cat burglar? Nakazawa Yuko? :lol: :lol: :rofl: I just amused myself!
But I would much prefer a TanaShige couplingMe too...
*stares at clock and counts down the next 7 days**pushes clock forward* Will update either later tonight or tomorrow morning.
“Ai-chan.” she called out, immediately getting a relieved look out of both girls for different reasons.
like a beautiful flower in a hurricane.
One was a non fiction about the life of an abused child, the second was a psychology book and the last was a beginner’s Korean guide.
here, hanging in front of her, was a sticky note. It said, “Enjoying my books?” and there was a pencil attached for her to reply with.
“We wrote back and forth faithfully every night.”
“That’s actually pretty romantic.”
That’s where I first met my future mentor, the man that killed my brother.”
“I guess, though because of that, we usually tried to steer clear of each other in real life. One night I came in and there was five keys hanging inside the cabinet, she told me to stop picking the locks and just take her spare sets.” The gunner laughed lightly, “We were just kids, but I thought it was nice anyway.”
Risa wept for her innocence and her blood stained hands, for the time apart from her home and heart, for her self imposed anger and her defensiveness that hadn’t been there before.
“Risa-chan, we have to go.” the older girl called out, hearing sirens begin to close in on their position.
As if she had just realized she wasn’t alone, Risa looked up startled, “Oh, hi. I guess this wasn’t the most ideal time to meet, huh?”
“Come on, I’ll take you back to my house for a while.” Ai pulled her to her feet and started to lead her off.
“You got shot dear, congratulations.”
“What do you mean by ‘took care of?’ You didn’t kill, did you?” Risa felt like rolling her eyes, but instead she just gave Ai a flat look. “You did! Even after I said not to.”
Surprisingly, Ai’s doe eyes welled up with tears, “You can’t kill anymore, Risa. You can’t.” The gunner leaned down to wrap her arms around the distressed woman.
“I’m sorry.” Ai sobbed into her hands, “I’m sorry I couldn’t protect you.”
Before she knew what happened, she was the one sobbing into her hands with Ai trying to comfort her. She was crying so hard, like a child; it felt as if she didn’t, she would just explode from the pressure that was built up from years of bottling up her feelings. Feelings she could only share with the woman holding her.
Risa wept for her innocence and her blood stained hands, for the time apart from her home and heart, for her self imposed anger and her defensiveness that hadn’t been there before. She finally let go of all that was holding her back and leaned forward to kiss Ai deeply, feeling the woman respond in kind. The held each other desperately, sharing in their pain and sorrow, finally together again.
don’t you agree that she’s so cute when she’s mad?”Hell yeah! XD but nothing for Ai to be jealous for. Gaki still belong to her XD
“Good morning! You look like crap!”
“Thanks, and good morning to you too. You look like you got laid.”
A knock at the door drew their attention away from their merriment and Lin let a still groggy Ai into the room. The older girl immediately sought out her girlfriend, curling up onto her lap cutely, seeming to fall back asleep as soon as her head rested comfortably on the gunner’s shoulder.
“I hate you guys!”
“I’ve never seen you look at someone so intensely. Should I be jealous?”
“You can sleep with me, Sayu.” Eri offered, lifting her blankets encouragingly.
As she got closer, she took notice of their puffy, red eyes and wondered what they had been talking about before she’d shown up
“Milk, warm please.”
‘Could you please step aside while we destroy your life’s work?’”
“A phone call might be just the thing you need to set yourself on the right course. A simple chat will do wonders.”
What really amazed her, was that most of them still seemed to have innocence left. Even Jun, who had killed, and Ai, who was truly an adult.
A knock at the door drew their attention away from their merriment and Lin let a still groggy Ai into the room. The older girl immediately sought out her girlfriend, curling up onto her lap cutely, seeming to fall back asleep as soon as her head rested comfortably on the gunner’s shoulder. Lin and Risa seemed at a loss for a moment, frozen staring at the new addition in confusion. Finally, the gunner gingerly wrapped her arms around the bundle on her lap and settled down more securely in the chair, while Lin reclaimed her seat on the bed.
lifting Ai and placing her in Lin’s vacated bed,
“Good morning~!” she sing songed cheerfully, completely deflating the younger girl’s anger.
Sayumi and Reina were the two most frequent culprits, fighting like cats and dogs all day and the con still trying to sneak into the cop’s bed every night. Reina began to get used to the constant interruptions of her sleep schedule and they began their own routine of Sayu climbing in behind her, Reina waking up and then kicking her to Eri’s bed, where the con stayed the rest of the night.
@Baby Sticky
but I couldn't find it like that to buy.-> u mean you cnt find the dvd that have the original voice with subs?
There is a sequel to it? I didn't knowIf you liked the actors in the first one, it's worth a look at least. There are some cool parts.
u mean you cnt find the dvd that have the original voice with subs?Yes, that's what I meant.
cry at what part? Which THAT part???The part where the older sister dies.<--- Highlight for answer.
@Hammy-san - Eww, green tea frappuccino, you can keep it, please.
Reina is very popular, isn't she IRL too?
Ah, don't bang your head! Would it make you feel better if I said I'd maim someone in the face? Two people? Though I'm not saying who...
I rather like Linx2 and I think she's actually pretty close to Ai and Risa, their characters just mesh well. And isn't Reina so awesome when she doesn't come between Takagaki?
Actually, I don't take anything to help me sleep, though I(think) heard somewhere that Reina likes milk? Maybe?
Ooooh, who's gonna get hurt in the face?There, they got hurt in the face! I didn't say it would be one of the girls. Please don't kidnap me, I can't write in a cupboard.... :sweatdrop:
They shared a quick kiss and Risa sighed happily
The con gasped lightly in surprise at the action, but quickly regained her composure and tightened her hold on the cop, happily hugging her. Both girls fell into a comfortable sleep soon after.
Ai popping in some ear buds and beginning a light dance routine and Risa heading over to the weights.
Eri had finished her warm up and apparently decided to challenge Ai to a friendly dance competition, as both girls now gave their undivided attention to each other. Risa’s eyes widened as she watched one of them sway and twist and then the other match them move for move.
Risa sounded like she would rather chew glass than do that again.
“Maybe we should rescue Reina?” Eri suggested lightly, as though she didn’t care either way.
“It’s time.”
“Now, I know the cops have at least basic pistol training, so that’s what they’ll get. The rest of you, feel free to choose something.”
Sayumi, who had grabbed a large machete, volunteered
Her soft touch and teasing hands caused Reina to flush brightly, much to the older girl’s amusement, “Why Reinya,” she asked as she secured the straps between her breasts, “is your heart beating faster?”
“I haven’t had this much fun in a while.” Sayumi grinned dangerously at her companions and the cops understood Aika’s fear.
Jun met Yasuyuki’s jab with her own fist, her spiked knuckles sinking perfectly between his joints.
Her knife swiped down and hacked into his left ear, nearly cutting it off.
“They may have more useful info. Plus Ai would be mad.”
“What was that? I don’t speak yankii.” Aika teased her with a grin.This lines are familiar and I love on how you used it. :twothumbs :twothumbs
“Oh, the other yankii doesn’t understand? What a shock!” Jun threw in off handedly, eliciting more laughter.
“I’m not a yankii!” The thief cried, scandalized.
“You’re right, you seem more country.” Eri agreed, getting in on the joke.
“I’m from Shiga! I’m not country or yankii!” Aika defended in vain, the others paid her no mind.
“Ah, a country yankii!” Jun declared, clutching her stomach in merriment.
Aika smacked her hard on the arm, “I jus’ told ya, I’m from Shiga, damn!” her response drew the loudest reaction of all.
They shared a quick kiss and Risa sighed happily- :wub:
The younger girl felt herself blush, her own body temperature rising. She found herself paralyzed under the strange feelings that assaulted her and instead of kicking Sayu out of her bed for the ninth night in a row, she leaned back into the loose embrace the girl had her in.- At first i thought... awwwww.... how sweet.... later on....
“I haven’t had this much fun in a while.” Sayumi grinned dangerously at her companions and the cops understood Aika’s fear.- ............. :on freeze:
“Ouch, that guy managed to burn me with his cig.” Reina rubbed her forearm gingerly where a small welt was forming.- I was already thinking how Sayu might help her on this one =X
But the Tanashige parts makes Badsaints a happy girlAhaha, yeah. *rubs the back of head* Though they're not getting off so easy.... And Ai is like a puppy? More like a lion hiding in the grass, waiting for her moment to strike.
You know what, after you show how they look on there "working clothes", it somehow gave me an urge to draw them. I dunno if I got the time but well see. I can't promise that one though.*puppy dog eyes* Prease?
Question: How dangerous are you~? Seems to be quite familiar with weapons and stuffs*adopts a gruff tone* Well, I killed a man once, but they never caught me. In fact, I'm still running and I'm writing this under mah bridge by the over pass. It's so cold tonight and the desktop is so heavy. So, so heavy.
Yup, Reina has herself quite the admirer, doesn't she? Will she be able to handle all that potential psychoticness?QuoteThe younger girl felt herself blush, her own body temperature rising. She found herself paralyzed under the strange feelings that assaulted her and instead of kicking Sayu out of her bed for the ninth night in a row, she leaned back into the loose embrace the girl had her in.- At first i thought... awwwww.... how sweet.... later on....Quote“I haven’t had this much fun in a while.” Sayumi grinned dangerously at her companions and the cops understood Aika’s fear.- ............. :on freeze:
Risa fired off a round, the recoil nearly making her drop her revolver and the report sounding loudly throughout the entire warehouse. The man’s head closest to her exploded with the impact of the magnum round,Watermelon vs. 50 caliber S&W M500 500 magnum (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RoW8nHIVuRk#normal)
“I haven’t had this much fun in a while.” Sayumi grinned dangerously at her companions and the cops understood Aika’s fear.BE afraid Aika.. be VERY afraid! It's the narcissistic bunny we're talking about... XD
The con gasped lightly in surprise at the action, but quickly regained her composure and tightened her hold on her cop, happily hugging her. Both girls fell into a comfortable sleep soon after.
Risa’s eyes widened as she watched one of them sway and twist and then the other match them move for move.
As the next song started up, Ai let out a low groan and began to fall, clutching her side. Eri was quick to catch her, face transforming into a look of concern and Risa was up and running before it even registered that she had sat down.
“400,000 yen too much, but some of it’s to keep Ai from getting too bored.
“And Ai? I-” Risa paused, suddenly aware of her audience, “I’ll see you soon.”
As Reina was driving, she had to get someone to help strap on her own holster, but before Eri could reach her, Sayumi, who had grabbed a large machete, volunteered. Her soft touch and teasing hands caused Reina to flush brightly, much to the older girl’s amusement, “Why Reinya,” she asked as she secured the straps between her breasts, “is your heart beating faster?” her fingers lingered longer than necessary, finally snapping the cop out of her daze.
*Sayu action*
“Why didn’t you kill them?” Reina asked bluntly. Risa put away her various weapons, looking down to hide her face.
There, they got hurt in the face! I didn't say it would be one of the girls. Please don't kidnap me, I can't write in a cupboard....
adopts a gruff tone* Well, I killed a man once, but they never caught me. In fact, I'm still running and I'm writing this under mah bridge by the over pass. It's so cold tonight and the desktop is so heavy. So, so heavy.
Yup, Reina has herself quite the admirer, doesn't she? Will she be able to handle all that potential psychoticness?- *Digs Reina a grave*
I could install a light in the cupboard. Will that be better? Or I'll feed you with loads of green tea fraps if you don't update sooner- LOL ~ a few weeks later.. you might see rndmnwierd turning into a green tea plant.. THEN... I'll help you change the lights into some better UV lamps~
tomorrow we begin to huntaction begins!
Yup, I plugged the power cord into my ear and rubbed a balloon on my head until it turned on, lol.- LOL~ Cannot help but laugh at the image~ rubbing a balloon on head :mon lmao:
Reina brought the previously occupied pillow to her chest to hug, smelling the older girl’s familiar shampoo on the fabric.- She just wants to be with her.. ;) anyway~ Drunk Reina is pretty cute too
“What else can I spend my money on? I don’t need anything else, but to make you happy.” Risa pouted, sad her gifts were being refused, “I know you’re bored being here all day while we go out.”- Forgot this.. it's just too cute to see Risa like a kid trying to make Ai-chan happy~ :P
Everyone was neutralized, only one deathErrr that's a very diplomatic way of putting it. I'm thinking of the watermelon at the part where Risa blows that guy's head off :lol:
As soon as she entered Lin’s hotel room, Risa made a beeline for her girlfriend, engulfing her in a tight embrace. Ai let out a small squeak as she was squeezed, but returned the hug with just as much vigor. “Welcome back.” she greeted softly.
“I don’t know what Sayu did, exactly, but the other’s seemed a little afraid of her on the ride back and she was the most covered in blood. She didn’t kill anyone, though I heard the ones she dealt with lost the use of their legs.” The gunner reported nonchalantly.
“Because I can?”
Ai shoved away the very tempting PSP.
The break in mood sent Risa nearly rolling off the bed. “Wanna try out the Sports Resort game?”
“You’re welcome to join me.” she proposed seductively, causing a blush to appear on the cop’s cheeks.
“I will, Sayumin.” Eri said
Reina stared at the line again. “Honeymoon? She’s married?” The yankii felt a strange hollowness in her chest that she certainly didn’t like, “She’s married.”
“Go ahead and cry, you’ve deserved it today.”
Reina angrily sipped at her beer, sitting at the hotel bar later that night. She was still mulling over the information that she’d learned,
She thought back on the exchange she’d heard between Sayu and Jun at the apartment.
“Where’s your shadow?”
“Not like this, Ai. I want you to be lucid when I finally make you mine.”
Satisfied that the cop was going to wake up with a terrible hangover and be confused about where the rest of her clothes were
“Why do you say that as if it doesn’t matter!? You’re married and carrying out a fling with Jun Jun and whatever it is you were trying to pull on me!
“I don’t know what the others like, but how about we just tell them to do whatever? You and me can go on a date or something.”
“I don’t think so, not here. Now come and sing with me Gaki-san.”
“Goodnight guys.” They parted ways at Reina’s door, the youngest giving each a kiss on the cheek. They were all feeling a little bit more friendly than usual.
Just having some fun.” Reina slurred easily, bringing her wet fingers to her lips. She knew, even in the darkness, that the con could see her every move and she grinned wickedly at the taste of the whitish liquid on her fingertips.
Letting out a slightly disgusted and horrified, but mostly indignant noise, Sayu stormed out of the room, leaving the yankii chuckling in her wake.
The only tension seemed to be between Sayu and Reina, with the con refusing to make eye contact and Reina giving her a self-satisfied smirk every once in a while.
hose two plus Eri seemed to be having a group discussion without actually talking about the same things and it was quite amusing to watch the turtle girl be caught in the middle.
Risa was running towards the back room.
not bothering to wipe away his blood and brain matter from her face
From now on, it’s kill or be killed. No exceptions.
“Look look! I got a PSP and a DS and lot’s of games and a big screen TV and a Wii and a 360 and a PS3. And movies! And some horror books, too!” Risa explained excitedly, waving the novels around.all those stuff are really tempting but I'm still go For Lin's PC. :lol: :lol:
@cogi_yoshi - Are you hoping for a rokki orgy or something? XDAhahaha... not really... but then.. if you make it like that... :bow: :bow: :bow:
*Please refrain yourself from any violent.*Does violent blushing count?
- LOL~ Cannot help but laugh at the image~ rubbing a balloon on headStatic electricity, baby. He who masters that masters the world. XD
What? Nobody dropped any complaint yet? Well little me will be the first then. *Takes a deep breathe* Here it goes....I just imagined you banging your head against the keyboard, lol. :lol: But yes, Reina is trying to convince herself that Sayu's scum! Cause she does illegal things and that's bad. Don't worry, though, after a few more arguments, maybe I'll give them a break. Enjoy the mental torment and be glad I don't off someone, yet, muahahaha.
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Errr that's a very diplomatic way of putting it. I'm thinking of the watermelon at the part where Risa blows that guy's head off:lol: :lol: Diplomatic, yeah, but also a little cold.
And Reina...!!!!!Uh, yeah, that's pretty much it. Although you bring up an interesting point.
Think WELL before letting your feelings take over you!!! Gaaahhh... But then again, maybe she's just confused because she's starting to fall in love with the bunny. And she's just desperately finding some 'bad things' about Sayu so that she will not fall in love with her. Although she doesn't have the right to accuse her. After all, her father's doing bad things too.
Although she doesn't have the right to accuse her. After all, her father's doing bad things too.Reina's father is like a constant black mark against her character. When people find out about this, they transfer the sins of the father to the child when, really, Reina is an individual. What her fathers does is the reason she's so wary of other criminals and why she's so adamant about hating them.
Does violent blushing count?- Even when i'm a baby?! Looks like you have been around the block~ LOL~! =X
Static electricity- One that can power up a desktop? Teach me please~
I'd die if I had to even lay eyes on another beer.- I will~ I got it so bad once that just by smelling Martell (Ain't i a little too young to be drinking sure an old man liquor?) turns my tummy~ but recently i fall for Sambuca :wub:
“I’m not okay with killing, but I trust you.” The simple words were all the younger woman needed to hear and a small, relieved smile graced her face.- She's like an anchor isn't she? To anchor our bean-transporting tanker firmly in place from what the brutal sea have to offer in her young life.. ;)
The gunner just nodded and they shared a look, “Maybe you shouldn’t.” the same aged girl finished forlornly, frowning for a second.- ohhh~ what is our little turtle trying to imply? Could it be that the government might not hold their end of the bargain? or just simply or turtle might like the bean? XD
Nor had that stopped Ai from thinking about doing ‘it’ with Risa, just that both had an unspoken agreement to wait until the bean was older.- Ain't it worth the wait? The bean is smoking now~~~ Roasted~ XD
She was strong and had no qualms about defending her beliefs, even against someone she loved.- *Throws Ai a shot again~* Anchor with strong will ;)
“No, I haven’t. I’m not sure I should, I’m still mad at him and I’m sure he’s still mad at me, so why bother?”- Reina Reina Reina~~~~~ Talk to your daddy soon~ Daddy always dote on daughters more.. and its true~ Anyway..even if he is mad at you (Was he anyway??), you just have to cry... i'm sure he will be freaking out and be all over you~ Maybe you can tease the big man~ XD
It really should only have taken a couple hours at the most, but they had kept pausing to make out heavily.Oh yeah! :inlove:
Enjoy the mental torment*Grab a jumbo-size popcorn* Oh don't worry, I will :twisted:
and be glad I don't off someone, yet, muahahaha.Oh Do it! Do it! :twisted:
@KrisZ - Jeez, so much to respond to and I'm too lazy to do some massive quoting. I'll just say thanks you so much and I'm glad you found so many things to comment on. I promise I won't be so half-assed next time.
“Please, I need your support. I need you to say you’re okay with what I have to do.” Risa was nearly whispering, feeling the pressure of everyone’s eyes on her.
“I’m not okay with killing, but I trust you.” The simple words were all the younger woman needed to hear and a small, relieved smile graced her face.
Beside her, Eri had awoken with a start and was staring at the hysteria on the ground with wide eyes.
It really should only have taken a couple hours at the most, but they had kept pausing to make out heavily.
Except that it didn’t. Ai was so distracted, she kept dying in every battle and fudged up a very important quest line.
“What do you mean ‘not affected?’ How could I not be when my partner is out there shooting lunatics with a lunatic by her side!
“That’s good, but just a couple of weeks? Eri’s hasn’t even fully healed and it’s been over a month now.”
“Call your father and make up with him before he dies.”
When they parted breathlessly a moment later, Ai kept her arms wrapped around the younger girl’s waist, “Welcome back.”
“I’m home.” Was the tired response.
The demolitions expert blushed at the memories. The younger woman made her feel like an awkward teenager again and she meant that in the best way possible. They had never taken that last step to cement their relationship, but that hadn’t stopped them from trying everything else they could do together. Nor had that stopped Ai from thinking about doing ‘it’ with Risa, just that both had an unspoken agreement to wait until the bean was older.:mon bleed2: I think you should write a pervy chapter for them when that happens.. :grin:
BTW, don't get too excited about that orgy, I gots plans for them later.Ok.. I won't.. *takes in some valium* :D
She glanced at the impressive electronic set up that her and Risa had put together over the past few days. It really should only have taken a couple hours at the most, but they had kept pausing to make out heavily.
- She's like an anchor isn't she? To anchor our bean-transporting tanker firmly in place from what the brutal sea have to offer in her young life..That's a very good metaphor, I like that. :yep:
EDIT: Page 11 GETS! i got your 200th comment post.. plus its my 100th post~Man, how's that for lucky?
Can Risa live in the end and have a somewhat normal life with Ai? I mean, she has a lot of blood on her hands. Although everyone of them deserved it.Ah and we come to the underlying problem. I think both of them are slowly realizing this, though their feelings are strong and both still hold the naivety of first true romance, they haven't quite figured out that love does not conquer all. Sometimes, real life gets in the way or you have to really change yourself and your habits, especially such bad ones. I still have a lot in store for them.
Ahhh, now I see what you mean:yep: :yep:
BTW can I just call you kz? I think I've typed up your SN in every way except the right one. KriSz kRiSz KrIsz KRISz. I'm facepalming myself over here!
I had a dream of B&B last night. I must really be suffering withdrawal symptoms for not getting an update :PWhat was the dream about?
When you say you have a lot in sore for TakaGaki, I wonder if more will be on the fluff side or the tragic/angst side :doh:
Whichever it is, I can't wait to read more. When I'm deprived of fics to read I'll just re-read yours and re-live the awsomeness :thumbup
(Is Miyoshi in this chapter Erika from v-u-den?)That, is completely up to you. :twisted:
In the confusion, the group scaled the f- I was back from all the celebration at around 5am.. I read the story even i was just a little tipsy~ Then when i got to this part.. I was like...
“I want to help also. I’m not saying I condone it, nor am I changing my beliefs, so don’t worry about that, but I know that it’s something we need to do. I’m not scared for you anymore, because I know you can handle this with our help. So let us.”- Risa is the Bean-Shaped Kite.. Ai-chan is the flyer.. Tightening and releasing....soaring in the unknown..but all in all... the bean is still connected to the ground through her.. *Whoop! I such a good sweet talker!* XD
Down the block, eight girls in high spirits crowded in a van to watch the fireworks.- Yay! New Year Fireworks for them too!
The gunner gave a wolf whistle, playfully nudging the younger girl, “Oh, trying to look sexy for Tanakacchi?”- Reina is getting jealous too! :mon olympics: <- Probably Sayu is reaching the finishing line soon too.. LOL~ Anyway.. I'm trying to learn wolf whistle recently..for what uses? I don't know~ LOL~
“Has anyone ever told you you’re scary?” Risa said- Me!
“In fact it was so great, we’re going to do it again. Bye.”
Someone began to play a techno beat on their phone and Sayumi perked up from her embarrassment, turning to Reina with a wicked grin. Immediately, the yankii scrambled to hide behind her partner, “Don’t you dare!”- LOL~ super funny! and Reina is getting jealous~~~ it's definitely a good thing! XD
Just as Ai reached for the hem of the other shirt, a knock sounded heavily at the door.
“There’s no need, I’ve already thought of some.” Ai spoke up, surprising the rest. “Hey, I’m leader, right? I gotta come up with something.”
Down the block, eight girls in high spirits crowded in a van to watch the fireworks. They knew they were successful when they could see the explosion wipe his large house off the map
she giggled vapidly, her black pigtails bouncing.
a half eaten bagel shoved in his mouth as a gag
Over Miyoshi’s shoulder, she saw Ai and Risa across the room. They seemed to be kissing passionately, but Ai caught her gaze over the gunner’s shoulder and Aika knew they were keeping an eye on her.
Looking down at herself in confusion, Aika saw what appeared to be blood oozing sluggishly from a puncture on her arm. She was drugged, she realized belatedly as the older woman nearly carried her into the apartment building, and the thief felt fear.
“Well I’m still leader aren’t I? And I’m pulling rank on you, sub-leader. I’m not going to let you go through with any plan until Aika is one hundred percent again!” Ai stood up swiftly and the gunner followed.
“Fine, I will! And I’m not coming back! I’ll take care of this on my own. I don’t need you or anybody else!” Risa snagged her coat, wallet and keys on her way out, slamming the door almost hard enough to drown out Ai’s parting words, but not the thud of something heavy colliding against the thick wood.
Quote“What have I done?”Quote“I just want to get away before I do something I’ll regret later. More than I already do.”
“Yes, a drive sounds good. Here, I’ll drive.” And without so much as a warning, Risa reached out and smashed in the back window of the nearest car, not even flinching when her knuckles started to bleed. In no time, she was in the driver’s seat, hot wiring the little coup and Eri was staring at her wide eyed. The car suddenly purred and the gunner let out a grim cry of triumph. “Well, get in.” she ordered the stunned cop.
Grabbing onto her left ear tightly, the cop began to do something she’d never done willingly before now. She prayed.
“Mind over heart. Mind over heart. It was drilled into me. And now the only thing I want to do is listen to my heart. I want to listen to my Ai. And I’m afraid to die.” Her shoulders sank low in defeat,
“How am I supposed to find happiness if I don’t take the chance the heart has given me? If we were to die tomorrow, I would forever regret not being with you like this and not showing you how much I love you. Let’s make love, Ai. Now.” Not needing to be told twice, the older woman wrapped her arms around Risa’s shoulders and tugged her down to meet her lips.
“Risa!”
Awkwardly, they changed into sleeping clothes and climbed into bed, for once, not cuddling together. Neither could get their minds off what they’d just heard and what it implied.
The con’s loud moan resounded in the room and both girls froze when the forgotten occupant of the other bed stirred.
“Oi! Stop having sex and open up!”
“In fact it was so great, we’re going to do it again. Bye.”
inally, the lovers left their room, Risa, with her head held high and a smirk on her face, and Ai, blushing and clutching the gunner’s hand. When they entered the war room, they were greeted with cat calls and wolf whistles from the rowdy group. Risa seemed to ignore them and shamelessly pushed the reluctant Ai down into a chair before she climbed possessively onto her lap.
a grim smile coming over Risa’s face. “Jun?” she called, placing one hand to her ear. Static crackled on the other end for a moment before the older girl’s voice answered back quietly. “Are you hiding?”
“Yeah, Lin’s up and hacked into the security measures so that she could help me. Is it done?”
“Yes, it’s done.” And with that, Risa fell to the floor, unconscious, blood trickling from her ears.
GAH!!! I was hoping you wouldn't cut off the chapter at any crucial moments but you did!!!Haha, sorry, it was too tempting not to.
Reina should just confess already. It's obvious she was boiling when she saw that JunSayu moment.Hmm, maybe next arc. Or I could extend the tension indefinitely. :twisted:
Koharu's appearance,I'm surprised someone remembered her. I promise, she won't show up in the second arc, either.
Eri gaining importanceYou don't think Eri's important enough? Good, good. :pimp:
TanaShige finally making some headway?Maybe, we'll see.
Oh you really know how to torture your readers.I do try, thank you. :lol:
I need to go mark out the date on my calenderI will update sometime in January 2010, so just write over the whole month. XD
QuoteI was like F? Field? Floor? Fred? Fried? Fries? WHAT?!?!? I could NOT believe you ended like that.Yes, I know I freaked some people out, but it makes me laugh when I see it and think of all ya'll's reactions.QuoteI had to go through like ten over pages to read the first part. Blame the mini screen on my phone. Man I'll hate to see my bill for this monthGeez, don't spend more money on my part. :lol:QuoteSo anyway, I just had to tell you how much I appreciate you posting on New Years.Believe it or not, it was the most fun I had. :sweatdrop:QuoteOh yeah and to show my appreciation, I have a Midnight trailer up in my thread and its dedicated to you. Yes, the awesome you:heart: :heart: :heart:QuoteOMG MY FREAKING PANCAKES WITH BLUEBERRY JAM AND MAPLE SYRUP!!!!! <-- Yes it doesn't make sense.I love it, though! :lol:
No words that describe how fantastic this chapter is. Btw, congrats for breaking the forumHaha thanks. :oops:
Jun had her first kill for Aika and I like the small detail you put in like how Jun was looking at Aika when she kill that b****.Thank you again, I really had a good image in my mind about that scene. Like, "It's personal, because it's you who's in danger."
Why do I get the feeling that you are "torturing" us Tanashige lovers on purpose?Probably because it's true. XD
And they now owned the group too,There will be more on that later.
especially Reina (but she can always turn to Sayu to take her mind off things:yep:
Yay! :rockon:Leader Ai is finally taking some charge. We all know she's got it in her.
Whoa! Ai's first. I don't know if I should be happy or whatYou should probably worry, but I haven't decided yet.
The Devil Sayu :twisted:Everytime I think of this Sayu, I always see her about ten years down the road, married to an overbearing husband and then poisoning when he least expects it. :twisted:
XDLike a boss!
Two in one goWell, they needed to blend in, after all. :lol:
Aika calling Jun's name was heartbreakingThank you *bows*
Very cute XDI toyed with the idea of a car accident,(just for some angst after their harsh parting words) but I changed my mind at the last minute.
I find their verbal war cute :lol: but my heart cringed at this part
Damn :cry:Apparently this worked just as well.
She's just unconscious right?Maaaaybeee....~
AND THAT TOOK MY WHOLE HALF DAYHaha, hope it was worth it.
Caught some fireworks?Ha, I wish. but some neighbors had some going off.
I was back from all the celebration at around 5am.. I read the story even i was just a little tipsy~ Then when i got to this part.. I was like...Yeah, sorry about that. I didn't even notice until later. :sweatdrop: Then I just decided to keep that as it was because it amused me.
The group scaled the f? "F"?! What "F"?!
- Risa is the Bean-Shaped Kite.. Ai-chan is the flyer.. Tightening and releasing....soaring in the unknown..but all in all... the bean is still connected to the ground through her.. *Whoop! I such a good sweet talker!*Again, nice metaphor. :yep:
- Yay! New Year Fireworks for them too!:lol: I didn't realize until you said that, but it's true!
AIKA almost got Raped!I just like torturing that one. Sorry~ :P
Never thought the bloody part could be so cute as wellYeah, real life is gross. XD
- Oh~ and Gaki-san is all cool with the reply!Gaki--> :pimp:
- LOL~ super funny! and Reina is getting jealous~~~ it's definitely a good thing!I admit, I had fun with it!
What's happened to Risa??? Please don't kill her. Please... *begs*Ah, it's okay, it's okay. I won't kill her.
I mean literally for an Estrea-level chapter.No, no ,no, not at all. I could never be that good. Thank you very much.
WHY MUST YOU MAKE ME LIKE THID RNDY?!?!?!You know you love it. XD
TakaGaki argument got me, that was pretty intenseAh, thank you. I promise, more killing in the future!
I know you haven’t been eating or sleeping since she went into her coma.
“You think she’ll be up by Christmas?” she asked, needing to be reassured.
“Maybe.
And if she’s not, we’ll just have to go decorate her like a tree.”
“Final Fantasy Tactics.”
She never noticed the younger girl return the grip slightly, fingers flexing weakly in her grasp.
Sayu chimed in late with an ‘Eririn!’ causing Eri to laugh- Ohh~ this is soooo cute :wub: Very Sayu-thing to do~ And a very Jun thing too~ XD
“And many more~!” Jun sang deeply into the silence that followed
I wished for some singing lessons for you guys- and more lol~
“H-Hello? Daddy? M-Merry Christmas.”-Reina finally finally called her daddy! I can imaging her speaking this in a few tone higher than usual ~
Ai back to the cold comfort of intoxication- :(
I'm taking a break now!- Rest well! :)
weird thoughtNo, I kinda see what you mean.
:OMG: I haven't been commenting here in a while nee??? But I'm all caught up now.Thank you, I'm quite pleased with myself.
First and foremost, :mon firecrack: for breaking the forum limit, (I actually didn't know there was a limit to begin with :sweat:)
Yup, Ai killed someone. It gets easier the more you do it...
Wow a lot has happened since I last commented like the multiple :onionwhip: scenes and :on beatup that come with them. Of course we can't forget Ai's first major involvement where she blows up a friggin mansion since her first injury.
I needed to bring her and Jun closer and get rid of the sub-boss at the same time. For some reason, I got it in my head to take down Aika's confidence in herself a little. I think I might do something with that later. Or just use it to torture her some more.... Bad me, bad!
Aika almost getting raped :on redcard: how could you????? But I am conflicted because if Aika wasn't almost raped then the development of JunAika :luvluv1: wouldn't happen but damn Aika almost getting raped?????? I almost felt like :gyaaah: when Aika was screaming for her saviour and she was getting :scolding: and beat up for not saying the proper name. I almost did believe that her companions won't get there in time
Which describes Takagaki pretty well.
Risa and Ai's argument - What can I say, nothing ever really goes well when 1) there are different opinions and 2) when neither party is willing to let up their own choice of action.
I feel like rooting for Ai for taking Aika's condition into consideration but Risa does make a point, all of them except Ai and the cops are bound together because of a task, and in exchange they are given freedom. I don't think they remember this point, the criminals have totally forgotten that the quicker they finish this task the faster they can live their lives again without living in fear or running away all the time. They can go out in the open as they are once more. If the targets are gone from the country, your task in not complete and you go back to where you were, so in that sense Jun would be back in that cellar away from freedom and definitely away from Aika. Sayu would be locked up as well away from the fun she is having now and destroying anymore chances she gets from Reina because Reina will snap back into reality as her character is portrayed. She may be a jealous one but she also decided to be a cop for a reason, if Reina wasn't stuck with these criminals, these TanaShige moments will never occur and might not continue. Question would be if Reina is willing to throw her positive background that she has slowly developed away for a criminal. Ai would have never met Risa again if they weren't bound by this assignment, if they fail Risa will go back to jail for god knows how long and Ai would have to wait and communicate through a glass wall. Risa has been fighting for so long and so hard to finish the task and has done a lot in helping everyone achieve a certain goal has she not??? Yes she is on the unemotional side but logically speaking emotions can wait, your targets won't. Because of these reasons I can't say I am not rooting for Risa's argument, heck I might have done the same she did, minus the coming back to Ai's side part that is.Ah, you see the connections, "If" and "Then" again and again. Everything has a reason.
Perhaps Aika's brush with violation will make her stronger instead of weaker...With a little help, of course.
Props to Aika for standing up against her fears and facing life as she should be instead of running away. :on woohoo: and to JunJun "Kill that m*tha f*cker!!!!!" You sure made JunJun one cool, manly person in her rescuing mission, the image is still in my mind and I can totally image the scene. NICE~~~~ :on GJ:
See, the thing about that scene, is that it takes forever to write and describe, but happens in a matter of seconds. It played in my head again and again until I wrote it out in slow motion. Sorry if it was a little complicated.
The latest fight scene was all over the place just like a movie scene, where something is happening on the side so the audience takes a look at whats going on for a few seconds over there, while something else is happening at the other side in which we all zoom in to the happenings there. My mind was all over the place :dizzy: at how many different positions and actions you were placing in the same place.
Well, maybe if the group had all mutinied, Risa might have gone along with the celebrations willingly. I mean, they do deserve a break, after all, and Risa needed the time to get the gang in order. Also, don't be so hard on Ai, she's doing her best for being thrust into a completely unfamiliar situation and then having such a blow to her heart like Risa falling into a coma. I like to think Ai's a bit of a pessimist, so she truly worries that Risa won't wake up. So I gave her this great support system in the form of Reina and Lin Lin. They'll hopefully be able to nudge her out of her depression long enough to finish getting the illegal affairs in order and then start the hunt for Tanaka-dono. Ai is perfectly capable of being just as ruthless as Risa, she just hasn't really shown it yet. I mean, no one really blames her for being sad, but they won't forgive her if she wallows in it.
What killed me though is that Risa was put into a coma, that totally sucked because she has really been the one that they all trusted to guide them through and make the plans. For the others this could be a good thing because they can finally relax hence celebrating Eri's birthday :on BDay:, Christmas :mon santa4: and new years :mon santa2: whereas if Risa was awake god knows how that was going to happen. But really did you have to put Risa in such a long coma???? Look at how Ai turned out??? She's in the worst condition ever...what will her reputation be like???? How do you expect others to trust her leadership skills when she is dwelling and not doing anything with a newly acquired gang??? She barely has the focus to finish what Risa started!!!! I mean seriously, Ai crying over a Risa that is not awake does not really help her in any way, you should realize by now what Risa's intentions are and fulfill them in case Risa does decide to leave this world. Make the woman proud...WOMAN!!!! MAKE HER PROUD!!!!! :farofflook:
All in good time.
Reina calling her father...will she finally tell her father to give up everything he has used his life to develop??? Will it really be the clash of father and daughter??? Reina's determination was softened before, will she soften up at the very last moment??? My personal guess, she will because everyone knows that at the end of the day, blood is thicker than water, there is no way Reina can pull through her own guilty conscience seeing upfront her father being killed by the ties she has created with this lot. It'll hurt her even more wouldn't it??? Your friends being the killer of your father??? However, because Risa says the Reina's father loves her alot will he be willing to give up everything just to regain a daughter??? That would also mean the Risa wouldn't have to kill someone that she once respected right??? :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers:
Again, all in good time. I think the relationships will really start to play out in the next arc, at least, that's the plan. I mean, most of the girls have only known each other for a few months. The really only have the kind of bond that pops up between soldiers who are in war together and dealing with attraction is tough enough, but love doesn't even begin to factor in for anyone other than Takagaki. And Eri and Reina were only partners for three months before they got this assignment, I can't remember if I mentioned that somewhere before.
I wonder where Eri will fall in because every relationship that I saw prospects such as Gakikame and Tanakame, Eri seemed like she would be a third party in the relationship but yet not. Maybe I am overthinking it because at the moment the relationships that are seem to be developing or developed and still not clear: Takagaki, TanaShige and JunAika but then I wonder if TanaShige will ever be because of Sayu's past???? Reina was always comfortable with Eri and although Eri doesn't show signs that she minds Sayu coming on to Reina, at one point in time I wonder if Reina felt anything for Eri??? Same with the JunAika situation, I mean at one standpoint it seems like Aika just trusts Jun as a companion, an older sibling but she also admires Reina and maybe hopes for more???? Takagaki may be official but Eri's close relationship with Risa in which they like to talk and understand each other must not be overlooked...Eri seems like she knows for a fact that Risa loves Ai and vice versa but can it be at one point in time because Eri understands Risa more than Ai, that feelings start to develop??? We must not leave out TanaJunShige either, because Sayu seems to be the playful character and is fully aware of the impact her actions have on Reina, does she really have feelings for Reina or is this all just for fun and games??? I sense that she doesn't have many friends in life, so her uneasiness about losing Reina could be that she doesn't want to lose a friend, a friend where she can mess with her mind ;) Sayu's concern for Jun can be misleading of course because Sayu's con ways in the past is where she uses her assets to get what she wants isn't it??? But even more so, is Sayu just making sure her skills are as sharp as ever??? Will Reina finally know the truth or just let her jealousy be her final flaw??? Don't diddle-doddle anymore Reina, you obviously are affected by Sayu so just get up to her and :ondick: her already!!!!! By the way, after Reina does Sayu she should find out if Sayu is only playing onegai :kneelbow:
I don't want them to be likeable at all. I want them to scream "Bad People! Corrupt Agents!" and I want it to seem like they only consider the girls playthings.
I wonder what is hidden behind Rika's attitude...I mean she seems so sarcastic that I'd be upset if I were in Ai's shoes, like "WTF do you want??? Stop beating around the bush and just talk to me!!!!" You know??? Yossie's character I wouldn't mind, all serious and skeptical about Ai's choice of action but Rika's slight smile might piss me off in a situation where I am worrying about my companion and here you are showing no remorse for those that are helping you out and giving me this bull crap about what I should be doing and who is watching me
Oh I set some traps, but I hope you can't find them. :twisted:
Could it be??? Risa might be showing signs of waking up from her :sleep:??? Or are you trying to trick us??? Giving us false hope that she will be waking up but in reality she falls back into a coma or a dream perhaps???? :on study: desperately trying to read in between to see if there are any traps for us readers
@FaqU - Holy crap, are you okay? That's the longest most thought out comment yet!
Yup, Ai killed someone. It gets easier the more you do it...
I needed to bring her and Jun closer and get rid of the sub-boss at the same time. For some reason, I got it in my head to take down Aika's confidence in herself a little. I think I might do something with that later. Or just use it to torture her some more.... Bad me, bad!
Perhaps Aika's brush with violation will make her stronger instead of weaker...With a little help, of course.
See, the thing about that scene, is that it takes forever to write and describe, but happens in a matter of seconds. It played in my head again and again until I wrote it out in slow motion. Sorry if it was a little complicated.
Well, maybe if the group had all mutinied, Risa might have gone along with the celebrations willingly. I mean, they do deserve a break, after all, and Risa needed the time to get the gang in order.
Also, don't be so hard on Ai, she's doing her best for being thrust into a completely unfamiliar situation and then having such a blow to her heart like Risa falling into a coma.
I don't want them to be likeable at all. I want them to scream "Bad People! Corrupt Agents!" and I want it to seem like they only consider the girls playthings.
Oh I set some traps, but I hope you can't find them. :twisted:
I remember what I wanted to say for the previous chapter but forgot. The answer to that question was answered in this chapter so there's no need for me to mention it again.:thumbup Alrighty then!
Isn't Risa out for too long a time? Especially since that knock to the head shouldn't be too serious. Are you just trying to make Ai feel that her girlfriend is too important and that she should think twice before arguing with her again next time?Well, I'm not sure if I'm going to touch on it later, so I'll just say it now: Risa took a hard blow to the head and suffered a concussion. Now, normally, if you rest and take it easy, there shouldn't be any problems, as long as you don't sleep, but Risa ignored the warning signs of headaches until it got so bad that it actually distracted her, but no one could tell.
Just three little innocuous instances that could be easily seen as something else. Maybe I was a little too subtle with it, but it's too late to change it now. Anyway, then she charged into battle like a maniac an pushed herself jaringly, making her injury worse. She's lucky she didn't suffer brain hemorrhage and die.QuoteRisa repeated for the third time, cringing in pain when her head throbbed.QuoteThe gunner held a hand to her head for a moment, eyes closedQuoteNodding, the gunner holstered her pistol, shaking her head as blood began to sluggishly flow from her nose.
Ai going back to the bottle. This was expected. Without the one person who could support her through the uncertain times and with the stress of being the one everyone looked to for instructions, Ai needed to find some way to release all that emotion.Exactly!
The call between Reina and her dad wasn't too detailed. Are you going to tell us more about what happened later?Probably.
And nope, I don't think Eri is important as of now. She would be getting a bigger role in the next arc?Maybe, I might leave her as pretty unassuming, just for the hell of it.
Awww, I would have wanted to read a car accident after TakaGaki's big fight. Although you decided against it, how about writing a short piece as an extra side plot? It could be a standalone of sorts.Sure, I'll start that right after the Takagaki perv.
You want a break right? If I send you a box of Kit Kat chocs, would that do the trick?I like Reese's, please! :grin:
Hope you don't mindNot at all, it's rather stimulating to read.
hint hint Takagaki love making hint hintHaha, no kidding.
You wouldn't grr But why Aika's confidence??? Why not someone elses??? I recall each person has their own sad story no? JunJun and Aika shared their stories between each other and it's not like they haven't suffered enough in their lives. Also I don't think Aika has the biggest ego in her own capabilities, if anything I feel like she only took the assignment because she wanted to prove to herself and others that she can do more than just climb walls and steal things.Oh, no, Aika's very quiet and it would seem as if she doesn't have a big ego, but that's totally far from the truth. I touched on it in her introduction that the reason she got caught was because she got too comfortable with her skills. She started thinking that she was invincible and that nothing could touch her when they gave her this chance because they needed her expertise. She's just good at hiding it.
Bad you!!! Bad, bad you *shaking my finger at you**whimpers* :mon baby:
I'll be waiting for it that's for sure...er...just to make sure we're on the same page, who's help were you thinking aboutJun of course and Reina, too.
I don't see a problem with it, it made me anxious as to who is where, doing what and when, like it made my head turn but in a good wayThank you.
But that's the thing, they will be celebrating except Risa because she would be too darn focused on what their next moves will be that she really wouldn't be enjoying herself. It would be like her body is there at the party but her mind isn't.But maybe she would have seen how much fun everyone else was having a been drug along into it as well.
I'm not trying to be hard on her, in fact I wanted her to pick herself up and be the leader that they all trusted her to be, the solid ground that Risa had seen in her, for her to be that guide that she has been for Risa to be transfered to the others. Like Eri was concerned and I doubt that it was just her, most likely all of them are concerned about her personal welfare and it hurts to see that but even more so I wish for her to stand up and shine through this darkened time. Sorry if I am portraying myself as being hard on AiNo, I see your point, but Ai doesn't think of herself as that capable. I mean, she'll get the job done, but later, when she looks back on it, she will always see where it could have been better. But isn't that why we love her so much?
I think you've done just that in my books with Rika's character, not so much with Yossie maybe because I am still seeing Yossie as the reliable leader she use to be. So her reactions and facial expressions seem pretty normal and don't really give off the "the girls are only playthings" in my eyes. But that could just be me....Actually, Yossui was the one who was smiling, I reread your last comment and it seemed as though you thought Rika was the smiling one. Which she was, but Ai couldn't see that behind her...
Game on???:lol: We'll see.
you know, i went back and reread the whole story again. And I noticed something I didn't before. Jun's closest people (pre-story) were her boss and boss' daughter. Are they going to be important characters? or just a detail in the story?
Wakey wakey Gakisan!!
She's lucky she didn't suffer brain hemorrhage and die.
Maybe, I might leave her as pretty unassuming, just for the hell of it.
Sure, I'll start that right after the Takagaki perv.
I like Reese's, please! :grin:
I was asked why Eri didn't have a love interest in this fic. And I replied that you ever mentioned that not all of MM was gay so that could mean that Eri won't be involved in any of the relationships. Am I right?First of all, who asked you? Someone on here? And second, no, Eri will probably not have a love interest. At least, not one of the girls, but I doubt I'll create a guy just so Eri won't be lonely.
YEAH!! *throws confetti*Still, don't hold your breath, I can't be held responsible if you pass out. :lol: :lol:
Just tell me how and I'll get on it right awayI will except cyber peanut butter cups!
Awww, I would have wanted to read a car accident after TakaGaki's big fight. Although you decided against it, how about writing a short piece as an extra side plot? It could be a standalone of sorts.although it's gakisan who ran out..QuoteSure, I'll start that right after the Takagaki perv.
*pulls out flashlight* Time to put my lurker illumination stick to use!
I have an awful and probably pervy image of Ai doing things to Gaki while she's still in a coma as a result of all that drinking:lol: :lol: XD
by Miyoshi whom I've imagined being Erika from v-u-denOriginally it was going to be her, then I was like, I'll just make it ambiguous. Hell, it could be Miyoshi Chinatsu, if anyone actually remembers her. :lol: :lol:
Sorry about that. Hope it's somewhat readable. Can't wait till the next chapter. And the accident fic. And the perv, which reminds me that I keep forgetting to ask for access. Don't keep Gaki asleep too long.I'm actually on my way to write after I go through the forum. Promise!
*Comes back out of the shadows* Can somebody get me something to eat. I'm starving.*Makes a cyber sammich for your virtual stomach* It's the best I can do or now. If I mailed it, the turkey would go bad. :lol: :lol: :lol:
Lurker, you say? *pulls out flashlight* Time to put my lurker illumination stick to use! *shines the light in the corner, watches lurkers scatter* Aww, come on guys, comments aren't so bad. XD- LOL~ This is super funny! maybe i should try that too... i'm sure i have some on mine too *pouts*
*Makes a cyber sammich for your virtual stomach* It's the best I can do or now. If I mailed it, the turkey would go bad. :lol: :lol: :lol:
XD Now, show me some more love.
That was the last thing she needed in her mind today, that vexing con truly bothered her
It would be so much easier to fight him if she could just find it in her to be angry at him.
That’s what I’ve been thinking about, pain. And how much pain I’m going to cause you when I tell you that I want to break up with you.” It was said bluntly, almost terrifyingly tactless, a harsh remark that was quite rare from the kind and gentle girl.
She watched through a façade of calm, own heart shattering, as the only person that made her truly happy, ran from the dilapidated house.
“The way it’s going to work is this; I will pay you what I’ve said and if you’re a good boy, you’ll slowly earn a raise, let’s say every six months. If you displease me, I’ll lower your pay and if you reach below zero, you’ll pay me. If you are a productive member of this contract, you could well earn three times as much as Takashi was paying you.”
“That was scary!!” She cried, crocodile tears soaking the fabric of her gloves. Jun and Saki exchanged a look, half concerned, half exasperated.
“Well, only about thirty left to go, Takahashi-san.” Saki replied cheerily, eliciting more wailing.
The con suddenly realized that this was a bit more serious than she had anticipated and that flee reaction reached out to her again.
The hacker and hitter darted circles around the rapidly dizzying Ai.
Sitting up in bed, hair mussed, face pale, but smiling brightly was none other than an alert Niigaki Risa.
lolYes 'bothered'. :yep:
He's daddy that's why
Aika's past is :shocked :(
Ouches again. Why.?.It's just a flashback, it's all a flashback.
WhoaGood actress.
OMG CuteBut forever a big softy.
Lol, cowardMore like, she's realizing that her playmate has real feelings. And she doesn't want to deal with them.
:w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :mon money: :mon money: :mon money: :gmon twirl: :gmon twirl: :gmon twirl: :mon roll: :mon roll: :mon roll: :on gay: :on gay: :on gay: :mon fyeah: :mon fyeah: :mon fyeah:*Gets back under the whip* Soon hopefully.
NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE :tama-laff:
If you displease me, I’ll lower your pay and if you reach below zero, you’ll pay me.- Ideal~~!
Reina - Finally she met her Daddy! Her daddy is quite a sweet man..ain't he? Daddy just got a thing about daughters I really hope she will not have to end up killing him though... If inevitable...Rather under her hands than others. ~Like Risa said, he's a good man, but a bad guy.
Does Daddy-Reina knows that his daughter is gay? <- lol~ I just thought of this question....
Did Daddy-Reina drove the CUTE coup there? LOL~ <- Sorry about the weird questions.. but if he did~ it will be really sweet and cute..
Aika-Aika is still very young, she should be allowed to wallow in her self pity for a while, but don't worry, I'll have someone knock some sense into her later.
*Knocks on Aika's cocoon* Aika.... you there?
*Digs* Aika~!
*Digs further* where are you?!
*Spits out strings of silk* AIKA?!
So horrible...to watch your only kin...chocking to death by her every own blood...and the fact that Aika was too young to even understand it just saddens me more~ sob~
Glad that you include the fact that Aika is indeed very close to her sisters~~
Ai - I'm glad that Reina was there for her... Probably others are too..but i guess Reina is kinda closer to her than others~ :) Where as Risa had Eri being closer to her! Weeeeeeee! <- randomDon't forget about Lin. Hmm, I'll have to focus on her some now...
It's so cute~~~~~~ of Ai-chan to be acting all soooooooooo bad-ass (She did a fine job anyway!) and ended up wailing in the van~ LOL~
Sayu - Why is the girl fleeing anyway? Confused and unsure of how to handle crying Reina?She doesn't like having to handle any emotions like that.
Jun/Lin - complicating relationship ya? But actually Jun is quite concern about Lin~ Plus it's so cute that Jun decided to hide near Ai-chan... She is sooooo big.. and Ai-chan is so tiny... haha~ the whole scene is cute to imaging~~Jun has a big heart, she can't stay mad at Lin long once she gets to know her.
RISA IS AWAKE!XD
i feel bad for reina, cus the truth of her actualy helping to kill her dad is finaly hitting her, plus you can tell that they love eachother,and if he wasnt a bad guy they would be the best family ever.... poor tanakachiYeah, I even felt a little bad writing it. :sweatdrop:
poor mittsi too! why do u mess with the puppy~????? >.< it was so heart breaking feeling her regret to not save her sister (i-i)I can't help it, I was having fun writing her background... :twisted:
yay~ CAPITAN~! SHORT PPL UNITE~!*coughhighkingcough*
LOL at after ai got into the van XDDDD she's too cute X3I lol'd myself at the thought. The sound I was thinking of was the wailing she made at Yossui's graduation. XD
LOL at junko and linko clearly fighting like siblings XDDDI labu JunLin.
MAME'S UPYeah, I couldn't torture myself any longer, so...
thank you X3 XDDD are u gonna add her new short hair into this storry too? XDDDEh? I actually... *lightbulb!* That's a good idea! I think her new hair is so sexy when it's flat and her bangs cover half her face. :drool:
I'm having a lot of mixed emotions right now.Yeah, I really wanted to, but I ran out of ideas...
First, and most important of all, RISA'S AWAKE!! :banana: :muffin: :strawberry: :taco:
I thought it was too soon for her to get out of her coma and I thought you would drag it out for a couple more chaps (just to make Ai suffer a little bit longer hehehe), but we can finally get to see some more TakaGaki lovin'. :twisted:
Second, Reina and Big Papa Tanaka - hilarious and sad at the same time. I could imagine that scene at the cafe as though it was straight out of an anime. Big, scruffy, burly man with a serious face one moment, the next he's grinning with crescent moon eyes, all giddy to see his little girl.I saw this image in my head a lol'd
It must be really tough on Reina to have to take down her father whom deep down she really loves. Hope Sayu just admit that she really likes Reina and comfort her at this arc of the story.<.< >.> <.<
BTW shouldn't the numbers on Reina's new coup be 07 (0 being "Rei" and 7 being "Na")?You can do it either way. Re=0 I=1 Na=7
Fifth, no wait...Third, poor Aika. Horrible, horrible childhood. All these "mistakes" of her must be crushing her. Hope JunJun can snap her out of it. That is unless she stop with her love/hate relationship with LinLin (Hiding under Ai, what was she thinking? :lol:). If Aika stays in that cocoon of her, what's she gonna turn into. :DAika just needs a good push, but her wallowing is actually part of the lot, not just me saying, 'I dun wanna write her anymore.'
Fourth, surprised to see Captain here. Nice to see here help Ai with what to do while Gaki was asleep. Will we get to see any other kids appear, either in Takashi's gang or in the other two gangs?Perhaps, we shall see. I wonder if anyone can figure out who the second Kid that will appear is?
And finally, No. 9, Ai trying to act like a tough negotiator. XD :lol: :lol: :lol: Good thing she has Saki and Jun beside her or else she would be freaking out all the time and speaking in her Fukui accent.Hmm, I hope everything works out too. This story is kinda writing itself.
Hope things turn out all right for the girls as well as Reina's dad, but then again I don't know what to expect when you update.
My 100th post goes to you cuz you're just that awesome.:wub: :wub:
homg... CAPTAAAAAAAINNNN~Lol, don't get your hopes up too much about Masaa making an appearance, I don't really know anything about her. :sweatdrop:
Yay for a Saki appearance now if the rest of the kids were to show up I wanna see Maasa pounding people's faces with Junjun. ...yeah. o.o
Reina's reunion with her father was pretty touching but the fact that they're on opposite sides suck. D: Seeing how Reina's her dad's unquestionable favourite, I wonder if her brothers resent her much. If they're fighting each other for leadership, then they surely hate the fact that if she'd just wanted it then their father would have given it to her.Ah, noticed that, did you?
I LOL'd when Risa just suddenly woke up with perfect timing to break up the squabble. Though I was under the impression that coma patients woke up in phases, the dramatic effect of a sudden awakening works pretty much as well as it does in the movies here. Artistic license.Yeah, I know. Cliched, but it works. Besides, she kind of has been waking up in phases, just the no one has noticed... Yeah, that's my excuse.
Glad she's back even if Ai's been doing a good job of things - she really got that official good. I loved when she sic'd Junjun on him.I love that movie, I was actually picturing her as a perfect untouchable lady, sitting there, knees together in a tight conservative skirt and a vest with maybe a faux fur collar and a little tiny handbag with church gloves on. Oh, and those annoying little round hats with a few little flowers and half a veil hanging off the back and her hair up in a tight bun. Maybe even with glasses perched on her nose. All white, of course.
(Somehow, when you described Ai in the white outfit, it made me think of the "Computer Angel" in the movie So Close.)
OMG how could I not comment earlier?! *Badsaints kicking her own butt :shakeit:*I know, I'm definitely not a Tanakame over Tanashige girl. Blame Alo Hello for that.
My heart really goes out to Reina. Poor kitty :cry: At least Sayu is there for her (just don't tell her that Sayu almost ran away :P) But she's there by Reina's side and so TANASHIGE RULES! :lol:
Aika is still dealing with her own issues, isn't she? [...] I'm curious though. Is she then linked to Papa Tanaka? Does she knows Reina's connection to Papa Tanaka? I mean, Tanaka is a common name in Japan :O Yajima Erino??? XDMaaaybe...
Captain! :w00t: Just the right person to be Ai's advisor XDJust what I was thinking. XD
It's so sweet of Jun to worry about LinLin being alone though she didn't want to show her soft side to Jun. Kinda like love-hate tsundere sister relationship? Hmm am I making sense? :lol:Yes, quite.
And RISA IS AWAKE!!! :cow::yep: :yep:
Hi there. I know dude. I've never been here for a long time. something really came up and that's the reason why I haven't check the story. Sorry. but the good news is I have progress on the promise I've made. I dunno when I'll be able to finish it.Better late than never, I always say. Don't stress yourself, I understand that real life gets in the way. When you do get finished, I'm looking forward to the pic! :heart: :heart: Thanks a lot!
Seeing how responsive your reader means that you are doing great. Please keep it up.
P.S. Which shot? The new one? It was part of the Morning-Musume-is-dating-the-wall set. Lucky wall. -_-; I asked kawaii beamu to make it into a siggie. It is teh awesome.
My head is too filled with why Ai dreamt of breaking up with Risa:twisted:
What have you got up your sleeve for this ill-fated/start-crossed/angsty couple? *excited*Do I need to put a devil emote again for you to get my drift? :P
QuoteWhat have you got up your sleeve for this ill-fated/start-crossed/angsty couple? *excited*Do I need to put a devil emote again for you to get my drift? :P
“You know, this is going to get real old, real fast.” Risa said as she struggled to lift her body up. When they finished, Risa flopped backwards, sweaty and panting. “I think I need another shower and not in a good way.”
Crawling up next to her, Ai wiped her forehead gently, “I’ll call the doctor now.” She reached for her cell phone.
“Seems like Mama and Papa need some grown up time.”:w00t:
You were crying for me to come back, telling me how much you needed me and loved me. All I wanted to do was come back to you.This line is soooo tooth-aching sweet :wub:
“Seems like Mama and Papa need some grown up time.”Favorite line of the chapter.
“Look, just because we’ve had sex, doesn’t mean I’m comfortable with you being in here while I pee.”Okay, maybe this is my favorite line. :lol:
“Meh, I hate doctors. Pompous bastards think they know everything when they’re wrong half the time anyway.”I totally agree with Gaki on this. Makes me thankful that I didn't want to study medicine unlike some of my relatives and family members. :yep:
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“Make fun of me all you want, but I’ve had bad experiences with doctors.”
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“I’m not afraid! I just don’t trust them. They only want your money, so they’ll do or say anything to get you to come back. Just like a mechanic, except for people.”
Risa only had eyes for the stunned Ai, standing in the middle of the room with one hand over her mouth and tears pouring down her cheeks.:heart:
Risa opened her arms in invitation and Ai wasted no time crawling into them, straddling her lover’s waist and sealing their lips together passionately.So fast but :wriggly:
“Seems like Mama and Papa need some grown up time.”:inlove:
They had a staring contest for a few momentsHohohoho
Crying loudly in relief, Ai buried her face into Risa’s neck, feeling hands running smoothly down her back. “I’m so glad-!”I'm glad too :on woohoo:
Risa had barely finished speaking before Ai had sealed their lips together again.:on bleed:
They exchanged uncomfortable looks, “Go away.”:lol:
She was soon seated and another uncomfortable silence descended, “I’m pretty sure I don’t need your help with this part.” The gunner said dryly and Ai left the room with a blush.Cute :nya:
“Do you want to take a bath with me?”:drool:
When she turned back around, the gunner had stripped down and was sitting where she had crawled to the corner, gathering up some bottles. Ai felt a jolt run through her, but shook her head against it. Now was not the time for naughty thoughts, Risa was too weak to try anything now. Shedding her own clothes and placing them in a neat pile next to the gunner’s, the older woman helped her lover be seated before sliding up behind her. “I’ll wash your back for you.” she offered.:imdead:
“I’m just going to relax for a while.”Can't take the heat XD
She watched with particular interest when Ai dropped her towel, standing naked for a moment:imdead: :imdead:
“You know, if you really want me to not jump your bones, your not doing a very convincing job.”:lol:
You know, this isn’t what I had in mind when I pictured you and me sweaty on the bed.”:imdead: :imdead: :imdead:
“I wanted to meet you! The sister of my brother, my family! I just wanted a family!” Her tears rolled down her cheeks and over Jun’s hand.Ouches :(
Jun used the grip on Lin’s throat to pull her forward, into an embrace, feeling her arms immediately wind around her tightly. She could only hold the younger girl as they both cried.:cry:
“Wheelchair? You know, chair with wheels and all that.:lol:
She almost wanted to sleep as well, but she feared that if she didn’t keep watch over her lover, the younger girl would somehow fall back into her coma, so Ai stayed vigilant, staring at Risa’s face and studying her for any changes.:wub:
Smiling sadly, the head of the clan patted the boy on the head with his massive paw, a gestured saved for his two youngest, “I know I can count on you to do what you think is right, you take after your sister, after all.”Hmmmm
“Seems like Mama and Papa need some grown up time.”- XD
“Yes. At first, I couldn’t tell what you were saying, so I began to run towards where I thought you were and eventually, your words became more clear and louder. You were telling me about your day and about something amusing Lin Lin or Tanakacchi said. You were crying for me to come back, telling me how much you needed me and loved me. All I wanted to do was come back to you.”- Her beam of light in the darkness.. :)
Leaning back comfortably against her lover, Ai placed her hands on her arms, lightly tracing her tattoo.- But i like how A-chan (sweetly) traces Risa's tattoo ~
“You know, if you really want me to not jump your bones, your not doing a very convincing job.”- Even if she was dressed, she can be very unconvincing too! XD
“Well, I know my ‘sub-leader’ would never do that with me if I had one!” Saki just laughed harder at the demo expert’s pout.
A large mat was set out and a mirror was propped up securely against the wall, the demo expert stood in front of this, studying herself critically as she danced:wriggly:
Risa hadn’t seen her do this since that one morning where they had run into Eri, so she was unprepared for the sheer power that her lover exuded as she moved to what must have been a particularly energetic beat.Hmmm
The gunner imagined the little drop must have rolled between her lover’s breasts and felt the overwhelming urge to lick it off of her.OMG :drool:
Finally, Ai spun around and froze when her own orbs landed on the darkened eyes of the gunner.I bet it's darker than the moonless night :D
Risa pulled herself close enough to latch her lips onto the older woman’s sweaty neck, sucking and biting gently on the sensitive skin.Must be salty :grin:
“Just wait two weeks, okay? Two weeks.”How about one week :grin:
“Reina has smaller breasts than me!”:lol: Good one Sayu :lol:
“Say it, or else.”:twisted:
“I love you, Ai. You’re too good for someone like me. I love you so much. I’m sorry that I’m a bad person.”:wub:
“Don’t say that, you’re not a bad person. There’s no way I’d fall in love with a bad person.” Lovingly, Ai tucked the gunner into bed, crawling in next to her. Risa was asleep before she realized it.
Sneaking another glance at the con, Reina met her dark orbs and both blushed, looking away.Shy already XD
Before it even registered in her mind that they were training automatic weapons on them:mon freeze: but they're siblings :scared:
To halt the on coming rant, Reina sealed their lips together, stopping the con mid sentence. She felt the older girl melt into her and pulled away, sure of her attention, “I still think you’re beautiful.”Nice move :D
“So, did you guys have fun?” Risa asked nonchalantly, gaining three glares.XD XD XD
Saki slowly packed up, pretending to be engrossed in her task, but really listening in on their gossip.lol
Both girl’s looked surprised by the slap, Sayu clasping a hand over her mouth and Reina’s eyes widening, head staying turned to the side.Ouches
“It’s not like hide and go seek, it’s like we find you and we kill you.” Lin gulped at the way Jun cracked her knuckles, “So try to do well, alright? Now, go.”XD XD XD
“It’s my way or the highway.”Me likes :rockon:
Saki sat in the darkened corner, looking as creepy as possible, short hair shading her face and cleaning her nails with a dangerous looking knife.Again :rockon:
“By careful out there, Turtle-chan, you never know who your enemies are until it’s too late.” She warned and Eri shivered at the tone of her voice.
To halt the on coming rant, Reina sealed their lips together, stopping the con mid sentence. She felt the older girl melt into her and pulled away, sure of her attention, “I still think you’re beautiful.”
For just a second, the smile faded from the cop’s face, before coming back at only half power, “No, Risa, you’re the good friend.”
“Just wait two weeks, okay? Two weeks.”:whistle: *waiting*
She couldn’t help blushing at how dashing her lover looked, carrying her to the shower.- Ai-chan with short hair + Prince image pops out~ XD
“Reina has smaller breasts than me!” Sayu called out instead, eliciting a growl and harder tickling- LOL~ makes me remember the video that Reina commented that Sayu's breast ain't that big either~ :lol:
“I love you, Ai. You’re too good for someone like me. I love you so much. I’m sorry that I’m a bad person.”This totally broke my heart :(
“I’ve been watching this dramatic crap all day! Please get me out of here! I’ll do paperwork, anything!”<- Major LOL~! :lol: I actually raised my eyebrow too when reading about Risa's conclusion.. I saw the video on the left thumb thingy too XD It was so random of her at that point of time.. lol
>.> I've been lurking for a while.Oh really now? :huhuh
well many people are busy or get suddenly busy.I have been unbearably busy. Funny how busy sounds like lazy. :P
I got the feeling that JunJun likes LinLin? Or maybe She likes LinLin and Aika? Well crap...a love triangle then?No. Just, no. This story is already convoluted enough, don't tempt me. 8)
Like is there some bigger reason for Sayu's reaction to Reina starting to reciprocate her attentions, other than soap opera drama (lol)?Well, when you put it like that, I'll have to think of something. XD
WHAT IS THIS HISTORY?:twisted:
Why was Eri acting sort of strange with Risa and making that you're the good friend remark?:twisted: :twisted:
Risa's little moment where she looks up at the ceiling and hates on the powers that be for listening to her and making something happen.When I though of it, I chuckled and had to put it in.
HmmmWhat? What 'Hmmm'?
but they're siblingsSibling rivalry to the max.
Pervy Risa, staring at Ai dancing. It is a mesmerizing sight, although personally I find Eri is a more awesome sight to behold when it comes to dance :P *rans away*XD Honestly, sometimes Risa out dances them both, although Eri and Ai are the two best dancers.
See what I mean by pervy Risa? She's still wanting it when Ai specifically told her to wait XDWouldn't you be turned on by a private show from your hot girlfriend? Unintentional though it was.
Well, since you are in little bits, why a super duper tube of glue help? Or do you prefer tape?I like duct tape. :D
Oh why must you torture them so?!It's fun :twisted:
Then again, they will make it through this just like they made through the past few months...right?Well, Reina's gotta have a queen for when she takes over the underworld, right?
Could be hotter though, if you know what I meanWhat if they were in a burning building? :?
her father is not a Kamei?I'm not sure if I mentioned it already, but she's adopted. I'll put that in there again later.
ABCD BROTHERS:lol: Omg, I'm glad someone noticed that. It helps me keep track of who's who.
- LOL~ makes me remember the video that Reina commented that Sayu's breast ain't that big either~
It was so random of her at that point of time.I know, I was like, 'Uh, WTF mate?' but it's cute.
was it all plan that you already knew Koharu is going to graduate hence she is the only one missing (so far..only a little news) from the current line up in the story? haha.. or was it all coincident?All a coincidence. I actually started this before the graduation announcement. I just find it difficult to write Koharu, so I didn't want to have to deal with her.
Update...soon... or else... *insert uber evil smirk right here*Lol, uh wait, you are kidding right? :sweatdrop:
Eh... Gakikame and SayuJun as of now (JunRei had an impact on me and thus caused me to start my fangirling in the beginning... however that market is kinda small, therefore semi died down in me... plus GakiKame made an appearance one day... sometime during my fangirling over MM)Ah ha, pretty much nothing this fic centers around. Except for the slight mention of SayuJun earlier and the onesided Gakikame that everyone is convinced that they see. :roll:
Kidding? Who said anything bout kidding?! :D This ain't no joke, doll *Pulls out the newly bought throwing knives and starts twirling* Update...Ehe heh hehe, *tugs collar* Gotta go to work now! *whoosh*
(Just kiddin... I procrastinate (or used to procrastinate) on updating stories too... *laughs*)
Ah ha, pretty much nothing this fic centers around. Except for the slight mention of SayuJun earlier and the onesided Gakikame that everyone is convinced that they see. :roll:Yeah, I know. However, the plot's too intriguing for me to stop reading, even if the pairings aren't my fav. :P And the whole 'convinced I see GakiKame thing'... works for me! :wub:
he heh hehe, *tugs collar* Gotta go to work now! *whoosh*
Sayu's there, she's just in disguise, squint at the Eri pic, she's a lamp. Lol, no I'm kidding.Sorry I'm quoting this one... but damn :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
Sorry for not commenting beforeLike I always say, better late than never!
^ Oh me! Me! I was totally suprised by what Panick and I call "The Shimijima" (because it sounds like a funky dance XD ). That made my brain explode a little but in a good way. Risa needs to get back into the action! As much fun as it is to have Risa confined to a bed. 8) Heh, I enjoyed TakaGaki's different opinions on TanaShige but I'm with the bean on this one. :3
Please feel like updating sooner. :P *leaves offering* (http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo337/illogicalisms/other/cookie.gif)(http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo337/illogicalisms/other/cookie.gif)(http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo337/illogicalisms/other/cookie.gif)
“And I…” Reina paused, pulling back a little to stare into Sayu’s now open eyes. Her own dark orbs conveyed a million feelings that neither could name exactly.
“Do you want me to fight her or try to eat her?”my god~ lol
Lin Lin between them, cuddled into Ai’s side and sporting a black eye.XD
“I can’t believe she did that to me. I thought I had a docile little kitty on my hands, only to find out that big housecat was actually a wild cat!”nice description XD and it proved that Risa's advise was right~ haha.
@Beecubed - You read the whole thing in two days?! Holy crap!
Thanks for the praise, though I'm not sure how I feel about the pressure, lol, but I'll do my best.
Risa really does dominate, but she's my personal fav, so why not ;)
Ah, thanks for more praise, you know, I could really get used to all this ego stroking. XD
Thanks so much for your review, it was really thought out well. Kind of embarrasses me to think someone put that effort in for little ole me. :oops:
“And Lin, pretend Aika is a cheeseburger.”
The two were curled up together on the bed watching a movie, Lin Lin between them, cuddled into Ai’s side and sporting a black eye.
“Ah, you never did get the whole story did you? I was living there because Ai freaked out on me when I kissed her. It took a whole month for her to let me come back, but when I did, I told her I loved her every chance I got. At first, she was surprised and I thought she might just kick me out again, but she didn’t. It took months before she stopped getting that wide eyed deer in headlights look when I said it.” Risa recalled with a smile.
“When she got used to it, then I stepped it up; I kissed her, on the cheek at first and whenever she wasn’t paying me any attention, which was often. Ai was a spacey kid.” The gunner chuckled, eyes getting cloudy in her memories, “The first time, well, second time I kissed her on the lips, I thought she was going to hit me, but instead, her face just turned completely red.”
The bean slowly came into consciousness, groggily becoming aware of herself and her position laying face up in bed. Just as her eyes began to flutter open, a soft pressure against her mouth caught her attention. Instinctively, she moved her lips, feeling the warmth try to mimic her actions. Finally, she realized just what was going on and focused on Ai’s face right in front of her.
Startled, she broke away, panting lightly, “Ai? What-?” but she was cut off when those lips fell upon her own again. This time, much more awake than before, Risa threw herself into the kiss, overjoyed when Ai responded in kind and even poked her tongue out to run across the bean’s lips. Before things could get too heated, the older girl parted from Risa’s mouth.
“I love you, too.” she said simply, before diving back in again.
“And I…”
“You look like Reina just trapped you in the hallway and did naughty things to you.” When the con turned wide eyes to her, Eri matched them in size. “She did?!”
Please don't tell me this was one of the reason they broke up:whistle:
“Ai, no matter what you say, I’m going to do as I please. You’re my lover, not my keeper, it’s not your responsibility to tell me what I can and can’t do.”Whoa!
What’s more was that she wasn’t sure if she felt uneasy because she didn’t think two girl’s should be together or if she actually felt the same way and was afraid of what other people would think.Hmmm... nee
Now, she was just an actor playing a part, she was no longer Takahashi Ai, whose heart belonged to Niigaki Risa, now she was Takahashi-dono, who had work to do.Eh?!
And Lin, pretend Aika is a cheeseburger.”Damn :lol: :lol: :lol:
“Do you want me to fight her or try to eat her?”Holy cow :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
she didn’t even get a chance to chuckle before she was tackled to the ground by a possessed Aika, fists flying.Now, that's ouches :lol:
Rubbing the back of her head sheepishly, Reina followed, looking down at the unconscious hacker, “Whoops, my bad.”XD XD XD
“Yes, get her alone tomorrow and corner her, state you feelings bluntly and honestly, take charge. She’ll melt, but it will take her time before she’ll come to you. Keep it up, let her know that you’re waiting, get up close and personal if you have to, but don’t go farther than she’s comfortable with or it will scare her away. The trick is to be in control while letting her feel that she is.”Nice :D
It took months before she stopped getting that wide eyed deer in headlights look when I said it.Very lovely :D
“The first time, well, second time I kissed her on the lips, I thought she was going to hit me, but instead, her face just turned completely red.”She knows how to move :D
“I waited six weeks before I did it again, then a month, then two weeks. Eventually, I was kissing her every day until I got into the habit of waking her up with a kiss in the morning.”Hmmm... very educational :D
“That’s so sweet.”Indeed :wub:
Sayumi averted her eyes from the dark, intense stare that came from the cop across the breakfast table, keeping up a conversation with Eri next to her.Now, she's working FIGHT~O! :onioncheer:
The con moaned and Reina released her, backing away a step, one hand lingering to caress Sayu’s cheek. Then she turned and walked away, leaving the con mostly stunned at the event and wanting more.Very clever XD
“You look like Reina just trapped you in the hallway and did naughty things to you.” When the con turned wide eyes to her, Eri matched them in size. “She did?!”:lol: :lol: :lol:
“We’re going to get some lunch,” she said, placing the hacker’s cell phone on the floor about twenty feet in front of her, “Call us when you get free and we’ll pick you up something.”Tsk tsk tsk :lol:
“Jun! I’m free! I want cake! Buy me cake!” she demanded of the older girl before hanging upVery innocent :D
Lin was too happy to argue; her first field mission. How exciting!Really innocent... Reminds me of Dancing, Sing, Exciting :D
They’d been standing rather quietly before, savoring the tension between them:D
“Can’t you see!? They wanted us out of the manor! They’ll attack the manor now! They’ll attack…” she choked on her words, sending a panicked look to the group, “Risa.” she finally breathed out, as though pained.:scared:
“Kill them all!” She ordered cruelly, marching out farther into the yard, the others not hesitating to follow her order.She's now killing people :(
Saki ‘s eye’s widened when she saw the window. The other girl was intent on throwing her out of it!:shocked
“It’s alright, we still have the hotel.” Risa explained, smirk on her bloody face, still dragging the short sword behind her, glinting red in the sunlight, “And soon, we’ll have a new manor to play around in. The Tanaka manor will be ours!” she pumped her fist in the air, the sword flashing, and the rest of the gang cheered.:cheers
@B^3 - LONG REPLY IS LONG!! :panic:
Again, thanks mucho for the praise. I loves it. :wub:
I have the rest of the arc planned out, basically, but I keep tweaking a few things here and there that inspire me. I have a little notebook and in that I have the basic scenes of each chapter written down in short hand. Some things are written on the side sideways, some stuff is crossed out and yet other stuff is written over. It's a mess, pretty much XD
I'm interested in seeing some of your fics up here. If you write as well as you reply, you'll probably put us all to shame!
Yeah, I probably should recap, but the problem is.... I can't always remember what I wrote before... :sweatdrop:
So I usually have to skim read my stuff while I'm writing the next chapter, since I think I've contradicted myself in a couple spots already.
I'm hoping to reveal past Takagaki slowly like this, with random flashbacks and such. It's my lazy way of avoiding a side story. XD XD
Reina will maybe get to finish what she was going to say someday. Or maybe I'll just drag it out a while. :lol:
I'll see what I can do about more drama, maybe you might get more than you can handle in the last arc...
I love your replies. :wub: :wub:
the two relative rookies exchanged a look...
“A decoy?” Saki murmured
“Can’t you see!? They wanted us out of the manor! They’ll attack the manor now! They’ll attack…” she choked on her words, sending a panicked look to the group, “Risa.” she finally breathed out, as though pained.
The manor itself was riddled with bullets holes and blood, bodies hung half out of windows and the front doors were blown right off. The whole third floor was engulfed in flames, smoke pouring from every broken window. The girls saw suited men chasing down housemaids, laughing all the while as if they were playing a game and then shooting them in the back when they got too tired........
Ai shook her head and took aim at the nearest Tanaka member, shooting him in the head and watching it explode like an overripe melon, “Kill them all!” She ordered cruelly, marching out farther into the yard, the others not hesitating to follow her order.
Ai gasped, taking in the sight as her lover was dragged on her knees painfully to kneel in front of Akio. Blood poured sluggishly from numerous wounds across her body, her left sleeve was ripped off and dark bruises marred the lightly tanned skin of her upper arm, slashes criss-crossed her torso and thighs, showing more bruising beneath her clothes. Her head hung low and one hand weakly grabbed onto the eldest son’s wrist.
Ai could barely hear him, eyes locked so intently on Risa as they were, begging her silently to lift her head and let her know that she was alright. As if sensing this, the gunner jerkily raised her eyes from the ground, something that seemed to be with colossal effort, and made eye contact with her lover. She had a shallow cut on her jaw and eyebrow and there was a gash on her lip, but she’d never looked so beautiful to Ai than at that moment. Slowly, Risa shook her head in the negative, begging the demo expert to not give up.
Without any warning, Risa reacted to the sound, whipping her seemingly useless arm around to grip the sword hilt that was sheathed on his belt. In a smooth motion, she brought it high behind her head, blade skyward, and Akio gasped as they hair in his grip suddenly went limp with nothing now attached to the other end. Risa continued her arcing motion, the sword sinking into his gun hand and knocking his shot astray, his bullet and thumb flying to the side.
“It’s alright, we still have the hotel.” Risa explained, smirk on her bloody face, still dragging the short sword behind her, glinting red in the sunlight, “And soon, we’ll have a new manor to play around in. The Tanaka manor will be ours!” she pumped her fist in the air, the sword flashing, and the rest of the gang cheered.
“Let’s finish cleaning up the rest of the trash.”Cool line XD
“No, I lived on my own for a while. Believe it or not, most street people take care of their own, kids especially stick together in large groups. Kids are also the most violent.” she finished ominously, dropping her hand from her ear.WOAH~ A shocking revelation from Eri. :O
Saki shrugged and before either could say anything else, the sound of glass breaking caught their attention and they looked up to the unconscious body of a guard fly from the second story.LOL! I love the signal :lol: it's so creative~
“Can’t you see!? They wanted us out of the manor! They’ll attack the manor now! They’ll attack…” she choked on her words, sending a panicked look to the group, “Risa.” she finally breathed out, as though pained.OMFG! :mon wtf: I KNEW IT WAS TOO EASY! I think my heart stopped and went into major panic mode when I got to this line. :frustrated: Way to keep up the suspense~ :cow:
Ai shook her head and took aim at the nearest Tanaka member, shooting him in the head and watching it explode like an overripe melon, “Kill them all!” She ordered cruelly, marching out farther into the yard, the others not hesitating to follow her order.I seriously love all this graphicness. You are really amazing for coming up with all these scenes! And, personally I like this cruel and cold-hearted Aichan that's killing people and blowing people's brains out. :P It adds more pizazz than just knocking em out cold. No more Mr. Nice Guy. Even though it would hurt them... for cruelly killing others :(
“Mercy?” Ai scoffed, “Would you show us any? Have you?” She kicked him over onto his back to glare at him in the eyes, wanting him to see his killer fully before she pulled the trigger and pumped three rounds into his heart.Oh gosh, I really love this line. Sadist Aichan...mmm...
“She was quite adamant, you know. ‘Ai-chan will come for me.’ she insisted to me again and again, no matter how many times I hit her and cut her. She must love you very much, but she was right, here you are. And now you’re going to die.”:gyaaah: NOOOO~ Gakisan!!! Aichan loves you! Don't give up and let that guy kill you!
Slowly, Risa shook her head in the negative, begging the demo expert to not give up.Noo... :cry: I knew it would come down to this. ACK. If I was in Risa's position, I would advise Aichan to not give up either, cuz people like that are heartless and even if you do give in, they'll kill you. :smhid
Akio cried out as the captive he thought he’d beaten into submission twisted around on the balls of her feet and thrust his own sword into his gut, his air choking off in pain, “You were right about one thing, Akio.” Risa hissed, turning the sword painfully and pulling with all her strength to slide it through his soft belly, “I do love her, very much.”OMFG! CRAZY AWESOME SKILLZ! :mon woo: I love this line too. lol. Actually, there's a lot of lines that I love, but if I quote them all then... it'll be too long, yeah. ahaha.
Ai lunged forward and embraced her bloody lover, sharing a short and sweet kiss, “Let’s finish cleaning up the rest of the trash.”Another line that I love. :nervous I like how Aichan called em trash. :lol: It's too cool. This line's like one of those in them action movies near the end when the sun is setting or something. lol.
She felt nothing except a sense of satisfaction.:mon freeze:
Reina and Sayumi were exchanging flirtatious looks and touches on one side and Ai couldn’t help but roll her eyes.Very lovely :D
“Bringing down buildings is my expertise, after all.”Time to show off :bounce:
shot the second man point blank in the face.
“Watch where you’re going, midget!”:lol:
their first kiss had been in a jail cell.Ain't that lovely XD
She should feel bad, she should feel like a bad person, but she didn’t. She felt nothing except a sense of satisfaction.
They had deserved to die! She should be awarded for ridding the world of them.
Reina and Sayumi were exchanging flirtatious looks and touches on one side
Ai almost gasped at her lover’s dramatic appearance, her chopped hair was cut to just below her jaw and dyed a deep brown, so dark it was almost it’s original black color, but with noticeable highlights. She was wearing stretchy black, formfitting pants and a light blue tank top covered by a vest that matched her pants. Her tattoo stood out strikingly on her bared arm, the rotting dragon seeming to shimmer strength as it was slowly devoured by the parasitic snakes that weaved in and out of his body.
black and light blue fedora
“Get me some blueprints.” Ai suddenly piped up from her position leaning forward with her elbows propped on her knees and fingers steepled together in front of her face, “Bringing down buildings is my expertise, after all.”
There was something missing in her eyes that was only lost with your first kill.
Eventually, love blossomed on both sides and they’d gotten together, becoming partners in crime quite literally. They’d beat up dead beats together and gotten arrested together, their first kiss had been in a jail cell.
“No thanks.” She waited until his fingers touched the cold metal of her weapon and recognized the feel before she pulled the trigger. The bang echoed on the aluminum walls of the small shack they were in and the other people around came crowding over. Hyoki screamed as his crotch exploded n red and fell back onto the dusty floor. “Ah, that’s satisfying.” Risa smiled, rising slowly and turning to address the writhing man. “Now, fuck you, Hyoki! You’re the little bitch now!” she growled, her face morphing into a cruel mask as she raised the pistol to his face and blew him away with a well placed shot between the eyes.
“I’m sorry.” she whispered as she walked towards the frightened man. He began to slowly shake his head back and forth, pleading for her not to end him. ‘He has a family,’ a part of her pointed out, ‘he has loved ones, something you will never have again. He deserves to die for being so happy when you can’t be, he deserves it!’ It growled and she latched onto it’s words, taking any justification she could get, not matter how much she didn’t believe it.
The explosion was magnificent, a mini mushroom cloud licking the sky before dissolving into flames, the building practically disintegrating from the force. It was brilliant and fierce and exhilarating and Risa pulled her lover close to her side as the group stood on the rooftop of another building to watch the fireworks. No matter how many times she saw something like this, it always got to her a little.
“Great job, baby.” The gunner whispered into Ai’s hair, feeling an appreciative squeeze on her behind for it.
He began to laugh, but cut himself off with a gurgling couch
Firstly, interesting chapter title :PActually, wanna know a secret? The titles are the lyrics from a song I like. I hadn't done titles in the beginning, but I decided to do it for one chapter and I picked a lyric that matched, then the next chapter had the next line that happened to match. Then I had a lightbulb and went back to edit my posts and it all happened to lay out evenly. Ironically, most of the titles match the chapters. Though the next chapter might not.... Or maybe it will. If you can find the song, I'll steal you a dino cookie. XD
I kind of like to make assumptions as to what the chapter may be about from the title alone, but it sure is difficult sometimes! >.<
*sadistic/scary Ai-chan comments*This will play out later. Hopefully I can make it satisfactory.
Awww, why no details?Yes. Yes I could have, but I didn't. :twisted:
You could've spent a few more sentences elaborating that, rndm...
She sounds so sexay...Can you tell I'm a Risa fan? I've actually thought about this a lot, her character, I mean. All it is, is nature vs. nurture. I truly believe she has the potential to be bad ass, just as Sayu has the potential to be a little psycho and that Ai has the potential to change herself to suit the circumstances, even these. Things just manifest them in different ways due to our life experiences, the things we're taught as children and the things we see others close to us do.
Does that have anything to do with the title of the story?I...have no idea what you could mean. :sweatdrop:
I've been waiting for a while for Ai-chan to put these delicious demolition skills to use!I've been trying to think of some way to make her pwn, but it's just not coming to me. :nervous Maybe next arc I'll have something better.
Our poor Gaki-san has been through soooo much. That must have been a real pivotal point in her criminal life - to kill scum is one thing.. but to kill somebody entirely innocent is on a whole other level. Look at all the justification she had to make for herself just to push forward and commit the evil deed.Risa is regretful for a reason. She was a bad person, she did bad things; she killed two hundred something people and maybe not all of them deserved it. People hire snipers/mercenaries/weapons experts for many reasons, sometimes petty reasons. I imagine that she has a lot of innocent blood on her hands, not because she wanted to be a killer, but because she felt she had no other choice. And even though she's 'free' of Doro-san, she still thinks there's no hope for herself.
Gaki-san was the prominent one in this fic, and I enjoyed reading about her past. She's been pretty badass for a while now, huh? As expected from someone who's pretty much grown up in such a dark, underworld kind of environment. I can really see where a real chunk of her drive is coming from now too, with her mentor's death. I hope Gaki-san is able to fulfil herself in every respect by the end of the story. I'm sure you will give her that satisfaction!I was trying, at first, to get everyone in equally, but my love isn't exactly equal, so my favorites shine through. :sweatdrop: Gaki and Ai and Takagaki are the ones that I've put the most thought into, so of course they have the most and best, but I'll try better to give everyone a little closure. Or not give them closure. I haven't decided yet. :twisted:
Again, congratulations on the fic birthday, and here's to another year (hopefully?) of Black and Blue. *cheers*Gosh, at this rate, I'm sure it'll be another year before I finish this. :lol: And thank you for another long and apparently inspired review. :D
Sayumi grinded up against a good looking man on the dance floor:drool: wait, man? I take that :drool: back lol
She didn’t even notice Risa and Ai close by, practically making love in public, lips sealed together and hands wandering.OMG :inlove:
half dead and bearing a note, his tongue long cut out.Poor man
she cut herself off when she spied the lovers with their hands shoved down the front of each other’s pants, completely oblivious to the world around them.Oh gosh :imdead:
“Idiot! Who’s cares if you don’t like to!? Get out there with her before someone steals her away!” The turtle criedI miss the Turtle :(
“You can have sex, can’t you?!”
Eri grabbing Reina’s sides and pulling her almost uncomfortably close so that they could roll their hips together rhythmically:on_hot:
“Come on, handsome.” Eri giggled, tugging him away, “You’re mine.”Pull his nails out lol
“Stay with me in my bed tonight.” Reina offered in a voice that really made it sound like a commandYay! Go Reina :onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer:
When they realized what they were hearing, they scrambled for the television remote to drown out the noise.:lol: :lol: :lol:
…she spied the lovers with their hands shoved down the front of each other’s pants, completely oblivious to the world around them.
“You can have sex, can’t you?!” The older girl cried out surprisingly, spinning around and eliciting a fierce blush. When Reina tentatively nodded, she continued, “Then you can dance. Now, let’s go!”
When they realized what they were hearing, they scrambled for the television remote to drown out the noise.
This was her specialty, two swords, and the only person who had ever bested her when she had these particular blades was her father.
Risa grabbed a chair and flung it at the scarily grinning Chion
With a sickening crack, his leg bent backwards and his upper body fell forward as the broken leg collapsed under his weight. Jun turned and swung with all her might and Daisuke’s head rolled to a stop against the wall. The hitter turned away with a satisfied smirk as the rest of him hit the ground, blood spurting out as his heart continued to beat for a moment.
Reluctantly, the female lieutenant did so and the hitter grabbed her in a choke hold, squeezing her neck until her struggling ceased and she fell limp in her arms. “Don’t worry.” Jun hurried to ease the horrified looks she got from her companions, “She’s just knocked out.”
“I can’t believe someone as pathetic as you is about to end my life.” She couldn’t help letting loose on him, seeing his face darken.
Ai, where was Ai?
Before he could even begin to struggle, a naginata blade slashed down swiftly and chopped the appendage off below the elbow.
Ai was glaring at him with all the strength of her anger, twisting the pole arm and bringing it up on the backswing, the blade embedding itself in his throat.
“My brothers are dead. Fuji’s probably going away for a while, but I can at least visit him. I don’t want to kill you, papa. I don’t want you to die.” She sobbed, falling to her knees and throwing her arms around him, ignoring the blood that seeped from his wounds.
“Me? Oh, I’m Kusumi Koharu!” she gave a peace sign and grinned cutely, “And I have a proposition for you.”
“I want your help to kill my father.” Koharu said, her smile never faltering.
"No! You know what is a serious problem? All those fucking coconuts!" Ayaka yelled from her seat on the left side of the table.
"You know, I though the same thing '99. Fucking Coconuts." Yuuko declared.
THE MADNESS WONT STOP UNTIL WE GET CLOSURE *shakes fist in the air*
Oddly enough, that doesn't ruin the song for my giant cock...
Chapter 25: What the hell are we going to do with all these coconuts?:lol: That's so epic XD
Her left arm was in a sling, forearm and shoulder bandaged tightly:gyaaah: Poor Bean
Rika clapped her hands, face stretching into an innocent smileLook at that, so Rika.?. :D
Risa sighed and looked down at the name on the folder: Kamei Eri.:scared: What's that for? :scared:
Grinning from ear to ear, Risa stood and moved to embrace the demo expertLovely :wub: :wub: :wub:
Ai shifted a bit more forward, straddling one of Risa’s legs while pushing one of her own up against the apex of the gunner’s thighs, eliciting another moan.Okay, I just had a shower and so I'm cool but hmmm, I need to turn the ac on :on_hot:
hey probably would have gone quite a bit farther had Saki not chosen that moment to burst into the roomNOOOOooooooooo!!!!! :angry1:
to deal with the next home improvement crisisI love this line :D
she’d been trying to figure out the payroll of her legitimate business, but it was like staring at Russian to her. “I hate numbers!Employ me! :on woohoo: lol
her lips moving silently as she worked out the math in her headYay! Go Sayu! :otomerika:
Eri wasn’t used to having a lot of close friends, so knowing what she would eventually have to do made her feel physically ill. She wanted to cry, she wanted to hide. She really wanted to throw up.Aww Eri, don't beat yourself up, maybe your hunch is wrong :(
“You’re burning up, Kame!” Risa cried, hand touching her forehead and cheeks. “Let’s get you into bed.”All the more confused, I'm sure :(
How could she choose sides? How could she hurt the ones she loved?If you really had to, choose them :angry:
Ai stretched, preparing to do her morning dance routine:w00t: I wanna watch!
It was quite early, but Risa was eager to make this a normal routine, watching her sexy lover workout was high on her list of things that made her happy.
Ai gave her a quick nervous look out of the corner of her eye, just a small shift, before she let out a breath and focused on the mirror in front of herCute :wub:
Thinking about that made a familiar heat fill her and she nearly faltered, but then she allowed the memories to wash over her pleasantly. By the time the song faded out, Ai was filled with the urge to hold the gunner.Then hold her already! Hurry :angry:
She clicked off her music and turned around with determined eyes, meeting Risa’s own dark gaze as she stalked closer. In no time, they were wrapped around each other, lips sealed together, hands wandering. Risa couldn’t keep her hands off Ai’s abs, loving the feeling of the sinewy muscles contracting under her fingertips at every touch, and the demo expert returned the favor by slowly massaging the gunner’s behind.:on_hot: :on bleed:
something small and round suddenly crashed through their window and slipped under the bedWTH!!!!!!!!!!!! :scolding:
grenade explodedCan we kill that grenade :ptam-kill:
Let’s show him what it means to go to warYay! :onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer:
“He sold my sister off and killed my mother and himself in a blaze of glory.”Ho! That's something
Then again, maybe her insanity would be an asset.I love the bolded word :D
“Maybe we need to be the goods, huh?” she glanced at the con, who seemed to be considering this idea seriously.I love how the leader thinks :fap
That was a good sign. Or maybe a bad one.lol I wanna know the result :w00t:
I'm baaaack~! It only took me a year to finish this chapter! :lol: I hope it doesn't disappoint. :sweatdrop:XD
Frowning, Reina studied the picture; they seemed very professional in their official shots, but it still made the cop feel jealous. “You’re so expressive.” A voice from her left startled her, “It’s amusing to watch.”I missed your Sayu. This gave me a warm fuzzy feeling. The mundane and quiet nature of this scene was absolutely perfect. And the fact that it really has been a long time since we've seen them interact like this IRL (not in fictime). It's almost like watching a TV series where that one scene you'd been waiting for forever pops up and your heart melts and you kick your feet up and grin like an idiot.
“What do you want done with her?” the gunner asked gently, finally gaining a questioning look. “I mean, it’s your call. Do you want to take her out yourself, do you want to spare her? I could even get rid of her from here if you want.”Gah. So exciting. I demand a TV series to be made out of this.
She saw the wheels turning in Sayu’s head as she weighed the options in front of her, “Leave her to me, then. I’ll take care of it one way or another.”
About that time, the older woman let out a loud groan, “Zombie! Kill it!” She shouted, scampering back to Risa’s side like a frightened puppy.AHAHAHAHAHAAA! It's 5am here and I laughed loud enough to startle my dog into barking. Where is Ai when you need her to deck ManoEri in the face?
The gunner had never really been into that sort of thing, though, so she declined their offers.
Chapter 28: Alpha and Omega
This was also something that was becoming routine; the two had a lot of time on their hands now and that usually translated into one of them finding the other in the middle of the day to make love wherever they could lock the door.
“That’s a great idea!” Kusumi bellowed, grinning brightly at his daughter, “Let’s all eat first!” Shaking her head at his change in demeanor, the gunner wondered if the man was bipolar or something.KY is genetic.
“A whole lot of poison!” The girl giggled, “I have the cooks in my pocket, too~!” she began to skip out of the room, a symphony of violence playing around the house.Crazy Koha *shudders* It occurs to me that I have never done this (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TamperingWithFoodAndDrink) here.
the two had a lot of time on their hands now and that usually translated into one of them finding the other in the middle of the day to make love wherever they could lock the door.How are locked doors a hindrance to your motley crew?
“A whole lot of poison!” The girl giggled, “I have the cooks in my pocket, too~!” she began to skip out of the room, a symphony of violence playing around the house.
Fimmsicle
“Ha! I’d have an easier time herding cats.” The yankii replied, hurrying to catch up with the con.
After a bit of a struggle, she finally made her way out into the bedroom, pausing to take it the sight there; Sayu, Reina and Eri were curled up together, laying sideways on her bed, the three cocooned in blankets with Eri in the middle.
Blinking incredulously, the gunner breathed out a strangled, “What? You mean, we’ve been drinking for more than two weeks!?” She let out a loud groan, “What the hell, how?!
“More likely, she stayed for the pantry.” Risa joked, “KonKon doesn’t drink, but sweets are another story.”
“Ah, I’m sorry, I was just going to come back later, but then I found a cake… And some donuts and then some cookies.” She sheepishly rubbed the back of her head, “I couldn’t help myself.”
She became aware of a lot of weight pressing down on top of her and focused her gaze on the two bodies sprawled against her. Neither were her lover, though she doubted she’d done anything untoward with Aika and Lin.lol!! but nekkid is always better. Also, an inflatable raft.
After a moment, the door popped open and a light colored head of long hair came into view, slowly crawling out of the pile of food inside.Ahahaha. This was too funny.
“What? You mean, we’ve been drinking for more than two weeks!?”
t seemed they were determined to get her to take even a tiny hit of weedYep, just like undergrad :lol:
Chapter 26: When life gives you lemons...Sell them and buy some booze :D
Finally, she reached the last page where a picture of Sayu at fourteen and a young man who seemed only a few years older were photographed shaking hands. The next picture was their wedding.Whoa
6km away.Pretty far
eavesdropping Risalol
“That girl down there in the suit? That’s my sister…”Hmmm
“I mean, it’s your call. Do you want to take her out yourself, do you want to spare her? I could even get rid of her from here if you want.”Eh?
There on the ground was Aika and Sayu’s sister, both still. Blood pooled on the dusty concrete beneath them.Noooo
“Hey, no sleeping on the job!”lol
“Mano Erina?”Eh? She was somewhere at previous chapter, yeah.?. will look it up later
wiping at her face like a mother trying to clean off her errant childCute
In front of them was a large rectangular table, at which sat the elder Kusumi, his seven remaining lieutenants and Koharu, all were laughing and conversing happilyEh.?.
“Plan B, daddy.”Evil daughter lol
Luckily for them, their better halves were much smarter than they werelol
Beginning to tug off Ai’s shirt, Risa let herself focus on the woman in her arms. Everything else could wait, she thought, but life had no habit of waiting for anyone.Yay!
the best way to fight off a hangover was with more alcohol.Ain't that true.?. Been hearing that a lot lol
but the woman was rougher and always left marksRough is good xD
unaware of eyes following after them from a crack in the door.Dare.?.
Then, their whole world descended into chaos.Whoa
Eh? She was somewhere at previous chapter, yeah.?. will look it up laterWas she? *can't remember own continuity...*
Was she? *can't remember own continuity...*She was not.?. XD
Children of the SunNice
under the moon’s guidance
stars watching over two warring heavenly bodies
She told us her name was MikiMiki-sama!!! Kicks ass!!! :inlove:
They said we need to leave.Nooo
The smell of chloroform filled her head and then, everything went black.
Eri’s dark gaze.No!!! Not Eri! :panic:
In the middle of the room was a small, locked, fiberglass case filled with wires, what looked like classic dynamite and attached to a digital timer that slowly counted down from a little over 17 minutesJoder!!!
Lin’s almost comical surprise, the red stain quickly spreading across the hacker’s blouse:shocked
I’m just a little cold. I’m just cold.:fainted:
Lin Lin was dead.:frustrated:
“No! No!” Ai screamed, “Keep trying! Maybe it will work! Maybe it will work!”Lovely AiGaki moment but painful to imagine :depressed:
“Ai.” Risa said sadly, “Ai, you know it won’t, she’s gone.”
When Jun began to move away from Lin’s body, Ai lost it. “No! You’re as good as killing her if you don’t try! You’re as good as killing her!” Then she just degenerated into screaming Lin’s name again, almost unintelligible through her sobbing.Ouches!
Don’t talk bad about my partner.” Reina mumbled, reaching up to her mouth and removing a small keyEririn!
nails first and faster than she thought the other girl capable ofOuch!
The only bright side the gunner could see was that, being so close, she would at least die instantlylol
About three more caps in, though, a familiar presence came and sat next to her, toned hands reaching into the box and expertly disarming the explosive sticks.:gmon twirl:
“Good night, Eri.”WHAT THE F*CK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 I was happy reading that ~@@~ Six Months Later ~@@~
“I asked her to marry me. She said no."
:tantrum:
“I’m an idiot.”
Eri’s bleary gaze was barely visible from it’s place in her blankets.Lovely to imagine :love:
“I can’t even find her sober anymore, not even in her sleep.”Aw :(
Ai had retreated, deciding to focus on tracking down the hacker’s killer and Eri:shocked Nooo!
When she realized that she wasn’t alone, she’d taken on this deer in headlights look of surprise and fright locking eyes with the otherAw, poor Eri :cry:
followed by the sound of skin hitting skin.OUCHES!!!
there was the sound of shattering glass farther in the room. Now Saki half stood from her desk, prepared to intervene, but hesitant to do so. She flinched at another loud crashing soundWhat's happening in there.?. :shocked
There were no more alarming sounds coming from the room, so Saki slowly sat back down, eyes still glued to the doorway.All the more reason to be alarmed, yeah.?.
Suddenly, a loud cry more sexual in nature echoed from inside the room.
so that’s why it got so quiet…:lol:
attered clothes barely covering her torso with blood dripping heavily from one handSH*T :shocked
older woman’s swollen lipsMade me giggle :grin:
the bite mark on her shoulder, her bruised neck and ripped up clothes barely covering her decencyResults of a rough ahem :drool:
When Ai looked up, she had tears in her eyes, “I’m an idiot.” The older woman confessed quietly.Good sign.?. Like she's now facing reality and ready to move forward.?. I hope
her lips were swollenYay! :grin:
deep scratches that raked down her shoulder blades.Again, Yay! lol
“I asked her to marry me. She said no.”Tsk!
Eri had helped and Eri had needed her in return and Risa felt so gratefulEri, Eri, no Eri, okay Risa!?
maybe that’s why she wanted to kiss herOH-MY-Ggggggggggggg!!!!! That is so unacceptable Risa! :OMG:
Eri tumbled away from her, “What are you doing?”Good job Turtle!!! :onioncheer:
Just, I don’t feel that way for you and even if I did, I would only be a replacement for her. That’s not fair to either of us.”Good thinking! Yay! :deco:
Feeling like an ass, Risa stood and pulled her shirt back onHmmm
She couldn’t help feeling like she’d lost two important people today.Aw~ :gmon tears:
and Sato is, well, something…”
“Well, your ‘last coma‘,” Lin curled her fingers like quotation marks, “was just a thinly veiled plot device the author used to get you out of the picture long enough for Ai to come to understand how to do what was needed for the business to thrive.”:lol: