JPHiP Forum

The Hello! Project Fanfics => H!P Fanfics => Topic started by: oddball on June 01, 2010, 03:26:27 PM

Title: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 33 NEW!!! (OUT 11/11/11)
Post by: oddball on June 01, 2010, 03:26:27 PM
Right my first fanfic, dont expect the greatest story known to man, or wota for that matter, tho any advice would be welcome!

Please be gentle.......


Mixed Emotions

Chapter 1


Miyabi Matsuyaki wanted to sleep, her room-mated already done so and as such was blissfully unaware of Miya's problem for however much she wanted to Miya could not go to sleep. Lying on her bed Miya summarised that the main problem was that she was cold, perhaps she was coming down with something?, and this was making her feel uncomfortable and so  unable to go to sleep.

They had all been in Chii and Maa's room earlier celebrating the end of the final concert of the current Berryz Kobo tour, most of Berryz had time off starting tomorrow but unfortunately Buono   had a meeting the next day so Momo had excused herself early, Miya had excused herself a little while after, as she was not feeling great it seemed like a good idea, Risako and Yurina had left with Miya, the two youngest member going back to the room they shared with Saki.

Miya stared up at the ceiling, her thoughts turning to the girl who was sharing with Rii and Yurina. Saki Shimizu, Captain off Berryz Kobo, one of the best dancers in all of H!P, always kind and caring to everyone and a girl she was very close too.

Miya's feelings for her Captain were confusing to her, she had all ways been close to Saki since they had first met and they all ways spent a lot of time together,as they had got older Miya started to have thoughts about weather or not she had romantic feelings towards Saki or if she was just a close friend ,the Berryz members often teased Miya and Saki about how they acted like a couple around each other, but the only member Miya had told about her truly confused feelings for Saki and that she might actually like her was Chii her best friend, Miya also has a suspicion that Momo new what Miya was thinking, her fellow Buono member and friend had a way of knowing what was going on in her mind. Miya was interrupted by her thoughts by a quiet knock at the door.

“Captain, what are you doing here?” Miya asked quietly, going back into her bed.

“Well, I came to see if you were all right” Saki whispered entering the room and sitting on the end of Miya's bed “You seemed unwell earlier so I was worried about you” Miya's heart lept at that, her Captain was worried about her, but knowing how much Saki could worry she decided not to go into too much detail.

“It's O.K. Captain, I just feel a bit cold, don't worry about it” Saki didn't respond too what Miya said straight away as if she was having an argument in her own head, eventually she looked at Miya and smiled 'Well then, I will just have to warm you up then wont I?”

Before Miya could say anything Saki had jumped into Miya's bed and had snuggled up next to her “Better?” Saki asked, Miya, who had suddenly lost the ability to speak muttered something unintelligible in response. Saki giggled quietly at Miya's response “Well goodnight then”

Y-You're saying here?” Miya said regaining her ability to speak, blushing madly at the girl now pressed up against her hoping that the darkness could hide how red she had gone.

“Well I'm settled now besides...I-I'm comfortable here” Saki replied a slight nervousness in her voice as if she was surprised at what she had just said. Miya's heart was pounding so fast now she was surprised that Saki couldn't hear it, too Miya it felt as though there was a loud drum where her heart had once been “O-Okay then..Goodnight, Captain” she managed to stutter out as she and Saki settled down.

Miya soon felt totally relaxed to Saki, there was a warmth now in Miya's body which was not just to do with the heat she and Saki now shared, it was as if Saki had also warmed her soul as well as her body as if Saki, by just being there, had taken all of Miya's troubles away.

“Thanks... Saki” Miya said quietly kissing the sleeping girl gently on the forehead before gently falling asleep.

More to come soon!......I think :?
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look....
Post by: abok on June 01, 2010, 04:48:08 PM
Saki and Miya Fic!!!

Miya is confused about her feeling towards Saki??? :?

i wonder what will happen next.... :?

continue updating please..... :D
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look....
Post by: AmyYan on June 01, 2010, 09:37:41 PM
Woog Wooh......
MiyaSaki fic.... :fap
NatsuMizu.... :inlove:
Oh my.... :panic:
My no.1 pairing..... :thumbsup
and, btw, Miya is confused about her felling for my Captain..... :doh:
tell her Miya.. :twothumbs
@oddball: love your fic :wub:
and I'll waiting for chapter 2... :nervous
and more... XD

Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look....
Post by: kuro808 on June 01, 2010, 10:29:13 PM
interesting fic man

MiyaSaki is quite a good couple, keep up the work
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look.... chapter 2 now up
Post by: oddball on June 09, 2010, 04:12:30 PM
Wooo Chapter two is hear :cow:

Thanks for all those who commented :twothumbs


Chapter 2

Maimi Yajima , leader of C-ute, sat quietly in the café watching the girl sitting opposite her, they hadn't spoken yet, apart from ordering their drinks, both of the girls thinking through what they had seen a little while earlier.

*flashback*

It was a hot day and the two girls heading down the corridor were looking forward to the drinks that they were going out to get, neither of them knew however that as they turned the next corner they were going to be in for a big surprise...

“What the?”
“Oh my....Wow!”
“UAAARRRHHH!!!”
“USO! Man scream!”

“W-What are you two doing here?”
“Um, we're going to get a drink Takahashi-senpai”
“Right well...Carry on then”
“Yes Ma'am, lets go Airi”

Maimi grabbed Airi's hand and let the rather shocked girl away from the scene they has just witnessed.

*flashback ends*

Maimi once again looked at the girls she had brought to the café, Airi still looked to be in shock by events that had taken place earlier. Maimi knew that Airi was aware of all girl relationships, Airi knew about Chisa and Mai and they were at it like rabbits... well more like Chisa and Mai actually, they were worse than rabbits, so Maimi wondered why Airi had been particularly shocked by this particular event.

“I can't believe Takahashi-senpai and Niigaki-senpai” Airi said snapping Maimi out of her thoughts “I-I mean right in the corridor and everything....with grabbing a-and...tongues!”

“Well it's not like you haven't seen girls kiss before” Maimi replied smiling at what Airi had said “I mean look at Chisa and Mai, sometimes I wonder where they get all their energy from...”

“I know that!” Airi said, interrupting Maimi “And I don't really want to know where Chisa and Mai get all their energy for....for that!”

“That?!” Maimi said, now laughing as Airi gave her a pout “Well if you know about ...that?” Airi gave Maimi a nasty look before she continued “why do you have a problem with Takahashi-san and Niigaki-san making out?”

“Well its because... because it's like watching your Mum and Dad kiss!” Airi replied indignantly

“I though Momo and Miya were your Mum and Dad” Maimi asked trying not to laugh too loud. It was true, Momo did often refer to Airi as her and Miya's 'baby'

“Don't say that!” Airi pouted “I'm not a baby!”
Maimi smiled kindly at Airi, she new that Airi really disliked being called a baby especially since she had turned sixteen, fortunately Maimi new the reason behind why Momo referred to Airi in that way.

“I know your not a baby, and so do Miya and Momo, they call you that because they are proud of your career and the young woman you have become, just like I am”

Airi gave Maimi a cheeky smile “I know, I just all ways like you telling me how great I am and that your proud of me”

Maimi laughed at what Airi had said “Well in that case I will tell you any time you want”

“Thanks Maimi” Airi said “You know it means a lot to me right?” as Airi said this she started to blush a little

“Yeah I know” Maimi said smiling at the girl sitting opposite her. It was a lovely moment, or would have been if it was not interrupted by Airi's mobile alarm going off.

“Oh right my Buono meeting” Airi said smacking her forehead “sorry Maimi I gotta go!”

“Don't worry” Maimi replied kindly “Do you want some company on the way?”

“No it's O.K., you're close to your home here anyway aren't you” Airi said giving Maimi a big hug before going to leave “See you later!”

“Bye!” Maimi waved to Airi as she exited the door of the café

Maimi sighed as she sat back down in her chair as her thoughts turned to the girl to who she had just waved goodbye too. Airi Suzuki, one of the golden girls of H!P, star of C-ute and Buono and the girl that Maimi Yajima was head over heels in love with.

If someone had asked Maimi what she liked about Airi and forced her to tell the truth, Maimi's answer would be the horribly clichéd 'everything' but it was true, she loved Airi for her goofy personality, her kindness, her crooked teeth, her eyes, her nose, her lips, her...well, you know.... never mind, her slightly worrying obsession to kappa's, well maybe not so much the whole kappa thing but defiantly the rest of it. Maimi liked to think she loved Airi Suzuki because she was Airi Suzuki, it was all she needed.

Maimi had often thought of telling Airi how she felt about her but she was afraid, afraid that she would lose Airi if she told her the truth about how she felt about her. Maimi wasn't even sure if Airi liked girls, she was all ways worried to directly bring the subject up in-case Airi figured out that Maimi was asking for them to date. The conversation they had had just now hadn't helped, Airi seemed as though she didn't really want to talk about lesbian relationships, though Maimi had to admit she wasn't sure how much she wanted to talk about what Chisa and Mai got up to

“Maybe one day” Maimi said quietly to herself as she left the café and headed home

please enjoy, then coment!
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look....
Post by: kuro808 on June 09, 2010, 07:50:06 PM
Airi XD freaking out over the TakaGaki

Maimi holding back her feelings

Impressive fic so far good job
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look....
Post by: rndmnwierd on June 09, 2010, 09:48:36 PM
Okay, honestly I had just scanned through the first chapter, since I don't normally care for Kids!Fics, but I do like the couples introduced so far, so I'll keep reading. After all, you had me at Takagaki. So keep up the good work.
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look....
Post by: abok on June 10, 2010, 06:45:21 AM
So Miya is confused about her feeling towards Saki and Maimi is holding her feelings towards Airi inside.... :wub:

This is a good chapter and i really like it.....

Chisa with Mai are together??? and you have TakaGaki too.... :wub:

Good job and please continue..... :thumbsup
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look.... chapter 3 now up
Post by: oddball on June 16, 2010, 03:02:13 PM
Thanks for the comments!

@Kurosawa: Yeah poor Airi freaked a little  :lol: it may soon become apparent why!

@Rndmnwierd: Ha well I will just have to put more Takagaki in then!

Here's chapter 3 then...

As she walked back to UFA headquarters Airi reflected that her day was going well so far, she all ways enjoyed spending time with Maimi even if the topic of conversation had been a little odd, Airi still couldn't quite believe what Takahashi-san and Niiigaki-san were doing, to Airi it seemed as though they were trying to such each other's faces off!

Fortunately for Airi, Maimi was there to rescue her from the shocking(and in Airi's mind quite disturbing!) scene. Airi had all ways liked Maimi, they had been close for as long as Airi could remember, even more so after Erika had left, to Airi it seemed as though Maimi showed a different side of herself to her, one that she was sure that others did not see, Airi wasn't sure why, she had all ways seen Maimi like an older sister who looks out for her no matter what, Airi wondered if it was possible because Maimi saw her like a younger sister who she could share her troubles with, Airi shrugged her shoulders perhaps it was something else, to her Maimi was Maimi and that was all that mattered.

Airi arrived early for her Buono meeting and with nothing better to do, sat down and waited for the others to arrive. Airi loved being in Buono, it was everything she hoped it would have been and more, of course Airi still loved being in C-ute but Buono was something different. Airi loved the music style and loved the more rock based outfits, it also meant that she could spend time with with Momo and Miya. To Airi, Momo was a great friend, she seemed to all ways be happy and you couldn't help but be infected by it. Momo was also a great leader for Buono too, a constant source of support and kindness which all ways manages to make Airi feel comfortable. Momo has her serious moments too however, Airi felt as though there was a switch in Momo's head that, when turned on, made her into some sort of determined little machine that could sort out any problem. Airi had her thoughts interrupted when the person she had just been thinking about walked trough the door.

“Airi, How's my little Kappa?”

“Momo! It's good to see you!” Airi said running over to Momo and giving her a big hug which Momo returned “I missed you guys”

“It's good to see you too Airi, we missed you too” Momo replied smiling kindly at Airi

“How was your tour? Did it go well?” Airi asked keen for information on what Momo, Miya and the other Berryz had been up too.

“Of course it went well” Momo replied with mock arrogance “I was there” Airi giggled at Momo's joking around.

“By the way” Airi asked still laughing “Where's Miya? I thought you guys would come together?”

“Dunno” replied Momo now with a concerned look on her face “she's been a bit down recently so perhaps she's getting some medicine or something to perk her up”

Before Airi could ask anything else about Miya, their manager walked into the room “Good morning everyone” she said looking around the room “No Natsuyaki-san?” Neither Momo nor Airi  had to answer that question however for at that moment Miya entered the room.

“Sorry I'm late” she bowed to the manager

“It's all right please sit down”

As Airi watched Miya sit down next to Momo her thoughts turned to the other member of the Buono trio. Miya in many ways was the opposite of Momo, where Momo was hyper and comical on the stage Miya carried herself with a calm, adult-like grace which Airi found captivating, to her it seemed as though Miya gave of this aura, as if saying that she belonged to be on the stage. Airi knew that behind the adult-like persona however was a normal girl, Miya was actually a quiet person, kind and caring who seemed to all ways be around when you needed her the most, Airi all ways half thought that Miya had two different personalities and that she switched between them, one for on the stage or being filmed by a camera and one for when she was with her friends.

Looking over at Miya, Airi decided that what Momo said about her having a cold or something must be accurate as Miya really did look rough and Airi began to worry about her. All trough the rest of the meeting Air kept glancing over at Miya too see how she was getting on, Miya was quiet trough out the meeting, something that was unlike her which made Airi get more and more worried.

Finally the meeting came to an end. Momo stayed behind to talk to the manager leaving Miya and Airi to leave on their own. Miya was walking in front of Airi, who could see just how down Miya still looked. Airi really wanted to make Miya feel better and on impulse ran up to Miya and hugged her from behind.

Miya stiffened when Airi hugged her “Airi! What are you doing?” she asked in a slightly shocked voice.

“Oh Miya I'm worried about you, you seemed so down through the whole meeting, I'm worried that you may have cold or something, I-I don't like to see you like this” Airi replied quietly, resting her head on Miya's back.

Airi felt the tension in Miya's body drop away, Miya didn't say anything at first she just simply let Airi continue to hug her. After what seemed like an age to Airi, Miya finally spoke up “Thank you for caring Airi, it means a lot to me, I think I just need some rest.”

Airi quickly decided on the best thing to do “Come on Miya, I'll take you too your dressing room” she said gently to Miya

“You don't have to” Miya replied looking slightly dizzy.

“Don't be stupid, look at you!” Airi said more forcefully then she meant to, in a gentler voice she continued “Please Miya just let me help you”

“O.K., O.K.” Miya replied trying her best to smile at Airi “I can't really ever say no to you anyway”

“Don't worry I'll look after you” Airi said trying not to blush at what had just been said to her as she helped  Miya towards her room.

Kinda a bit of a filler chapter, needed to get Airi's feelings in for story progression tho! Part of the learning curve I guess?
Title: FANFIC! The last place you look.... chapter 3 now up
Post by: oddball on June 16, 2010, 03:09:06 PM
Sorry was trying to figure out how to say you had put up a new chapter in main topic post...NOOB ALERT :banghead:
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look.... chapter 3 now up
Post by: kuro808 on June 16, 2010, 08:28:25 PM
^ There is a modify button in the first post

Airi is so cute asking Miya :wub:
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look.... chapter 3 now up
Post by: rndmnwierd on June 17, 2010, 03:07:53 AM
I love how Airi's all sketched out about Takagaki. :lol:
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look.... chapter 4
Post by: oddball on June 23, 2010, 04:57:03 PM
@ Rndmn: yeah Airi is quite innocent in this fic!

Chapter 4

Finally! Saki thought to herself as she eventually managed to escape from her meeting with the Berryz Kobo manager. Saki fully understood the importance of these meetings but the Berryz Captain really doubted that they needed to be the day after the of their concert tour, she new it was all part of the responsibility of being the Captain but surely they could let her have at least one days rest?

Yawning as she went down the corridor Saki comforted herself with the fact that she was not the only Berryz’s member who had to suffer a meeting today. Somewhere in the building Momo and Miya, along with Airi of course, were in a Buono meeting organizing their new mini-concert tour. Knowing that their meeting was due to finish at about the same time as hers, Saki headed towards the room that the Berryz used when they were in UFA headquarters hoping to meet up with her band mates.

Saki often wondered how Momo and Miya coped with being in both Berryz and Buono, for her personally it was enough being in Berryz, but then she did have the extra responsibilities of being Captain to cope with. She knew that both girls were happy in Buono but she worried about their workloads, to Saki it seemed as though both girls had so much on that it seemed impossible that they had any time to do anything else like eating or sleeping, Saki comforted herself that she at least was not being to overbearing, she had talked to Maimi about it and the Leader of C-ute had admitted she also worried about Airi in the same way. Saki was especially worried about Miya at the moment; the girl defiantly was coming down with a cold or something.

Saki had to admit, that she had been thinking a lot about Miya recently, she knew that the other girls teased Miya and her about being like a couple but it didn’t really bother her, or Miya, they had all ways done most things together and Saki felt as though that would never change. There was something that Saki found relaxing about Miya, she couldn’t quite put her finger on what it was but every time she was around Miya, Saki’s world became a little bit better. It had been on impulse that Saki had gone to Miya’s room last night, she could see that Miya wasn’t well Saki had know her for too long to be fooled Miya’s attempts to hide it from her however she had only gone to Miya’s room too see if she was all right but it had become much more.

Saki didn’t know what forces were at work in her mind when she decided to get into the bed with Miya and she surprised herself more than anyone when she did it, the odd thing was that Saki felt so comfortable there. Something about being that close to Miya just seemed so... right to Saki that she had started to question her feelings towards her close friend. NO! Saki shook her head as if that made it more definite, I don’t love Miya, she’s my best friend, that’s why it’s so nice being around her like that; it’s just something that friends do, right?

Eventually Saki came to the Berryz’s dressing room and opened the door, only to quickly shut it again. Saki’s heart skipped a beat at what she had just seen. Miya was asleep on a couch in the room but she wasn’t alone in the room, Airi was in there also, asleep in a chair next to Miya, her head resting on Miya’s stomach. Saki didn’t know what to think, it wasn’t like her or Miya were dating, she had just told herself that she didn’t have feelings for Miya, they were just friends……

“Then why am I so angry!” Saki said to herself before walking away from the room.

Airi awoke to the sound of what she thought was a door shutting. At first she panicked that someone had come in the room and found Miya and her, but as no-one was there the noise must have been something else. Airi couldn’t quite believe that she had woken up with her head resting on Miya’s stomach, it had been nice however, her head gently moving up and down to the rhythm of Miya’s body had been incredibly relaxing to her. Looking down at Miya she was surprised to find that she was also awake, looking bleary-eyed at Airi, probably awoken by the same noise that Airi had heard.

“W-Was I asleep?” Miya asked, sitting up and yawning as she did so.

“Yeah you looked so tired that I thought it best to let you sleep” Airi replied trying hard not to blurt out how cute Miya looked with bed hair.

“Why is my tummy warm?” Miya asked slightly confused.

Airi had been worried that this may come up but managed to stumble out an answer “Well I fell asleep too and…and I was resting my head there… It was comfortable and, and it felt nice” Airi said turning a deep shade of red.

Miya giggled a little before replying “Don’t worry it feels kinda nice” patting her stomach, Miya looked direct at Airi before continuing “Thank you for being here, I felt as though I was able to sleep with you here” Miya leant over and Gave Airi a hug.

“I-It’s O.K.” Airi replied, she had gone so red that she was surprised that steam wasn’t coming out of her ears, fortunately Miya didn’t notice, or she didn’t care.

“I’m gonna head home” Miya said “I think I may need to rest up for a few days”

“I’ll go with you” Airi replied a little too quickly “Just in case” she added lamely.

Miya paused for a few seconds looking to Airi as though she might refuse before simply saying “O.K.”

As they headed of towards Miya’s house Airi grabbed hold of Miya’s hand and held onto it. Airi started to panic at what she had suddenly had the urge to do, even more so when after Miya just looked at their entwined hands, however Miya looked at Airi and gave her a smile and squeezed her hand letting her know that it was all right. Airi was amazed at how reassuring that little gesture was too her, she felt as though she was the one being comforted, rather than her comforting Miya, which was her original intention. The rest of the walk to Miya’s house was in silence simply walking down the street hand in hand, neither girl needed to say or do anything, them being there for each other was what the both needed at the time. When they got to Miya’s house both girls said their goodbyes.

“Thanks for Today Airi, will you get home O.K.?”

“Yeah” Airi replied “I don’t live far away from here remember”

“Oh Yeah” Miya said looking a bit Embarrassed “Well take care” she said pulling Airi into a hug “Thank you for caring about me”

“That’s O.K.” Airi said “what else would I do?”

They said their final goodbyes before Maya entered her house giving a final wave to Airi. Finally stopping waving back, Airi slowly started to walk back to her own home, with a final look back at Miya’s house she said “Of course I care  for you Miya, I love you!” before sadly carrying on her way home.
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look.... chapter 4
Post by: rndmnwierd on June 23, 2010, 06:48:26 PM
MiyaAiri? Gotta say I like SakiMiya better, but, no, not but, that was a statement. :lol:
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look.... chapter 4
Post by: abok on June 23, 2010, 06:57:56 PM
Airi love Miya??? :shocked

Oh my god!!!! :panic:

what about Saki then??? :banghead:

what about Maimi???!!! :banghead:

no!!!! :bleed eyes:
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look.... chapter 4
Post by: kuro808 on June 23, 2010, 08:34:04 PM
 :lol: the MiyaAiri thing was a nice twist although poor Captain :(
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look.... chapter 5 (New!)
Post by: oddball on July 01, 2010, 05:23:13 PM
Just a general thanks for the guys that are commenting it's very much appricated :twothumbs

here's the new chapter just finished it before I go away for the weekend! :sweatdrop:

Chapter 5

Miya led down on her bed and stared up at the ceiling. It had taken her a few days to recover from the fever she had caught and during that time Miya had been in bed recovering, bored to tears as she had nothing really to do, yesterday evening however Miya's mother said that she was better and could go and see her friends, Miya, after being stuck in bed for near on three days, just wanted t have some fun and so she called the one person who she knew that she would have fun with, however that person was running late and Miya was getting bored of waiting.

“Miya you in there?”    Chinami Tokunaga, Miya's lifelong and best friend, said bursting into the room

“You know you usually wait for a response before entering you idiot!” Miya replied smiling, she was truly happy to see her best friend, even though it had only been a few days since they last saw each other she had missed her.

“Yeah, Yeah” Chinaimi replied nonchalantly “But it's O.K. 'cos you love me” she continued jumping onto Miya's bed.

“Ow! That was me you landed on!” Miya shouted, hitting the now laughing Chinami with a pillow.

“Well you said you would go shopping with me so get UP!” Chinami shouted the last word as she stood up and started to jump up and down on Miya's bed starting to chant as she did so

“Shopping, Shopping, Shopping, Shopping, Shopping!”

“All right, all right I'm up” Miya shouted over the noise laughing at China mi's antics “Now stop destroying my bed, this is how the last one got broken!”

“Sorry Miyabi-sama! Please forgive me oh mighty one!” Chinami said giving Miya a ridiculous little begging for mercy routine at which Miya couldn't help but laugh and soon after chinami joined in the laughter.

“Come on then lets go” Miya said, Chinami gave a cheer, grabbed Miya by the hand and dragged her out of the house.

Miya had all ways liked shopping( she hadn't got the reputation in being the fashionable one in Berryz for nothing) and was keen to find a new outfit for when they returned foe work next week. They were in one of Miya's favorite shops and she soon found something she liked and went to try it on while Chinami waited outside. When Miya re-appeared Chinami couldn't help but stare at her friend.

“Wow Miya, you look so pretty!” Miya simply smiled at the compliment whilst examining herself in a mirror, she had chosen a simple white dress with a denim jacket that was the same length as the dress, with a belt to hold it in at the middle.

“Well if you like it Chii I'll have to buy it then” Miya replied smiling a Chinami before heading back in to change. When she came back out she went over to where Chinami was waiting

“Well what about you?” Miya asked

“Me?” Chinami asked confused

“Yes, you” Miya replied “We have to find something nice for you too” Miya started to wander round the shop again “Yes, yes, these and these” Miya said to herself grabbing some clothes of the racks and handing them to Chinami

“I'm not sure if...” Chinami started before Miya cut her off

“Look just trust me O.K.” Miya said quietly to Chinami “I'm your friend I know you will look good in these”

“O.K” Chinami said before going in too change.

When Chinami came back out she saw Miya smiling at her, seeing the nervous look on her friends face however, Miya pointed towards the mirror and said 'See for yourself”

Chinami's breath caught in her throat when she saw herself in the mirror. Miya had chosen a pair of short denim shorts with a colorful flowery top, Chinami could not believe how pretty she looked.

“I thought it would suit your short hair” Miya explained unsure if Chinami had liked what she had chosen “Well I think you look pretty” she added.

Chinami turned towards her friend and laughed “Well if you like it Miya” copying Miya's response to Chinami complementing her clothes earlier, Miya spotting the teasing remark laughed.

“Come on, lets go pay and then go get some lunch, I'm starving” Miya said

“Sounds good” Chinami replied, taking one last look in the mirror before going to change.

They went to a restaurant that they often used, though the food wasn't the best the place was usually quite and the staff were friendly and unobtrusive and so the girls tended not to be bothered. After thy had finished their lunch and the waiter had taken away the plates Chinami started up a conversation with something that had been on her mind.

“So” she said with an inquiring tone “did you buy that dress too look good for Saki?” Miyabi was so shocked by the question that she spat out a bit of the juice she had been sipping on.

“Why do you ask that?” Miya asked while cleaning up the split juice with a napkin.

“Well you did tell me that you had feelings for Saki right?,” Miya nodded her head cautiously “I was just wondering if you decided you actually liked her or not yet” Chinami asked then added “You now you can tell me anything right, you know you can trust me.” trying to comfort the obviously conflicted Miya

“Of course I will tell you Chii, your my best friend” Miya replied gabbing hold of Chinami's hand to reassure her. Chinami looked at Miya and saw that the girl was trying to find a way to talk about her feelings towards Saki, Chinami waited patiently for Miya to speak

“I-I think I might” Miya said very quietly

“Might?” Chinami encouraged her friend to go on

“Might like her” Miya said, beginning to smile, as if a great weight had been lifted off her shoulders , she continued “I can't really explain why to you Chii, it's just, that I feel so secure when I'm with her”

“Yes it was the same for me” Chinami said very quietly so that Miya couldn't hear

“Pardon, what did you say, I could hear?” Miya asked thinking that Chinami had spoken too her

“Nothing” Chinami replied and decided to quickly move the conversation along “So you do love Saki eh?” Miya blushed but nodded in response “Now all you have to do is tell her!”

The sudden look of fear on Miya's face made Chinami laugh “Well maybe one step at a time, at least you know you love her now, we will worry about how to tell her later”

Miya ran over to Chinami and gave her a hug “Thank-you Chii, your the best friend in the World, you know that right?”

“Yeah, I know” Chinami said smiling at Miya and hugging her back. “I wonder if I should tell her?” Chinami thought to herself sadly as they left the restaurant and headed home.
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look.... chapter 5 (New!)
Post by: rndmnwierd on July 01, 2010, 06:26:30 PM
MiyaSaki! :thumbsup

Who is it that Chinami likes?
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look.... chapter 5 (New!)
Post by: Maimi_Yajima on July 01, 2010, 08:22:34 PM
yatta!! MiyaSaki!! :heart:  :wub:
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look.... chapter 5 (New!)
Post by: kuro808 on July 01, 2010, 10:03:21 PM
Chinami is such a good friend but having a feeling of who XD
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look.... chapter 5 (New!)
Post by: abok on July 05, 2010, 11:56:44 AM
i wonder who chii like.... :?

i hope it's not miya or captain... :banghead:

next chapter please.... :D
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look.... chapter 6 now up!
Post by: oddball on July 09, 2010, 05:36:10 PM
Thanks for all the comments guys they are very much apprciated! :thumbup

Alot of support for MiyaSaki hmm we will have to wait and see what happens! here's chapter 6 for you guys!


Chapter 6

“And one, and two, and three, and, No, No, No! Airi Suzuki your wrong again!” Airi lowered her head to the dance instructor who, after a difficult lesson, was losing her patience. Maimi had noticed that Airi had been out of sorts for the last few days, not ill or anything like that, it just seemed as though Airi was having a problem with something or someone, today had been worse, she had made a lot of mistakes during practice, many more than usual. Practice was nearly at an end and Maimi decided that she would speak to Airi after-wards and get her to talk about what was bothering her.

“O.K. That will do for today” the dance instructor said, leaving the room first, obviously displeased with the way the lesson went, Nakky chased after her wanting to ask something about the dance. Maimi made her way over to Airi who was silently packing away her belongings into her bag.

“Airi whats the matter?” Maimi asked quietly, putting a hand on the younger girls shoulder.

“It's nothing” Airi replied quietly, close to tears

“Airi” Maimi said kindly “You know you can tell me anything right? That I'm all ways here for you?” Airi nodded sadly before Maimi continued “So please tell me what's wrong, I hate too see you like this!”

It took a while for Airi to answer, she stood up and turned round to face Maimi “I-It's hard for me to say Maimi but I like...tongues”

“Tongues?” Maimi asked completely confused by Airi's response before she noticed that Airi wasn't looking at her  but past her. Maimi turned around too see Chisa in Mai locked in a passionate embrace kissing and, for want of a better word, groping each other at the other end of the dance studio.

“Oi! You two, find a room!” Maimi yelled at them

“Good Idea!” Chisa yelled back before dragging Mai out of the room.

“I like girls” Airi said quietly. Maimi stood still in shock, not believing that the girl of her dreams had just told her the one thing she really wanted to know.

Airi,thinking that she must of said something wrong went to dash past Maimi and leave the room, fortunately Maimi was to quick for her as she grabbed hold of the younger girl and pulled her into a hug, as soon as Airi was in Maimi arms she began to cry.

“Oh Maimi, what am I gonna do?” Airi wailed crying onto Maimi's shoulder

“It's O.K. Airi don't cry” Maimi stroked Airi's hair in an effort to calm the girl down

“But you must hate me” Airi said, still crying

“Hate you!, why would I hate you?” Maimi asked, surprised at what Airi had said

“Because I like girls and you shouldn't like girls” Airi replied trying to break out of Maimi's hug

Maimi struggled to keep hold of Airi but she did and gave Airi a kiss on the forehead, Airi stopped fighting immediately.

“Airi you silly little kappa, I don't mind if you like girls” Airi looked up at Maimi, her face still wet from tears “You said it yourself not long ago that you love who you love, so what if it's a girl, the feelings are still the same”

“You really mean it?” Airi asked quietly

“Yes I mean it” Maimi said smiling down at the girl looking up at her “It's fine Airi because I like girls as well” Airi's tearful face turned into one of shock.

“Maimi? I...wow!” Airi stuttered out in response to what Maimi had just said. Maimi laughed at the surprised girls response.

“So it's not like your the only one, look at Chisa and Mai they don't mind and we saw Takahashi-san and Niigaki-san at it the other day, you remember?”

Airi nodded and smiled, wiping the tears from her eyes “Your right Maimi, I'm sorry for being silly”

“It's all right Airi its not silly, I struggled with it at first too” Maimi reassured Airi

“What made you like girls?” Airi asked Maimi, curiosity on her face

“Well there's this girl I like” Maimi said “She's very pretty, but that's not the reason I like her, I love her smile, the way she is all ways fun to be around, the way she all ways makes me feel better, the way her eyes seem to sparkle. Basically I suppose you could say I love her for being her, nothing more, nothing less.”

Maimi knew full well that she had just described her true feelings towards Airi directly to Airi but it Didn't matter to her. Maimi knew it was something that Airi needed to hear, perhaps this was the right time to tell Airi her feelings?

“Airi was smiling at what Maimi had said “the girl you were talking about is very lucky Maimi, for someone a special as you to love them so, I wish someone will love me like that one day”

“Oh Airi, the girl I was talking about it's....” before Maimi could say “you” she was interrupted by two girls entering the room.

“UAAARRRHHH!!!”

“USO! Again?”

“Takahashi-senpai, Niigaki-senpai, what are you doing here?”

“We could ask the same to you two” Risa replied, raising an eyebrow at Airi and Maimi who were still hugging. The two C-ute members quickly pulled apart blushing as the did so

“A-Anyway me and Risa need this room to.....practice, Yes, practice....dancing so can you please leave” Ai said turning bright pink.

Maimi and Airi quickly exited the room and sped off down the corridor, Maimi looked at the girl walking along,smiling, next to her “please be patient Airi” Maimi thought to herself “One day I will have the courage to tell you!”
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look.... chapter 6 now up!
Post by: rndmnwierd on July 09, 2010, 08:20:41 PM
Quote
she was interrupted by two girls entering the room passionately kissing and groping each other.
Fixed XD J/k j/k


Ah, they came out to each other, yay! Now Maimi just has to find a way to tell her how she feels, preferably before some kind of misunderstanding occurs.

And Takagaki love, lol, not conspicuous at all there guys.
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look.... chapter 6 now up!
Post by: kuro808 on July 09, 2010, 09:23:41 PM
yeah seemingly TakaGaki needs practice....(goes off in Iverson tirade)

Ah Maimi likes Airi and Chisaot and Mai can't keep anything off each other XD
Title: Re: FANFIC! The last place you look.... chapter 6 now up!
Post by: oddball on July 14, 2010, 03:43:37 PM
@ Kurosawa 87 and Rndmwierd: A bit of TakaGaki revenge for the second chapter as Airi and Miya intturupted one of their uh 'moments'  :lol:

@ Kurosawa 87: Yes Chisato and Mai are allways horny in this fic, I have just allways got that vibe from them  :wub:

@ Abok: see here's the next chapter as promise

Chapter 7

Saki sat down on the bench in the park and relaxed, she had not had a tiring day, in fact quite the opposite, most of her day had been spent doing a whole lot of nothing. It was the last day before the Berryz girls returned from there post-concert break and Saki was determined to get as much relaxation as she could before returning to her busy work schedule. The day had been absolutely beautiful, the sun had been out all day and, as Saki watched the sunset from her vantage point, she thought there was very little that could make her final day any better.

“Hey Saki” the girl next to Saki said

“Yes Momo” Saki replied, not really paying attention to what her friend was saying

“It was a nice day wasn't it?”

“Yes”

“And this sunset is really pretty”

“It is pretty yes”

“I bet you would really like to see it with Miya?”

“Yes”

“.....”

“.....!!!”

It took a while for Saki's mind to catch up with the conversation she had just had, when she realised what she had said she turned towards Momo to try and explain herself but to her horror she saw that Momo had a big smirk on her face.

“I knew it!” Momo exclaimed “There is something between you!”

“There isn't” Saki replied hastily “we're just good friends that's all”

“Right so you were being her 'friend' when you sneaked into bed with her the last day of tour?”

“Y-You weren’t asleep?” Saki asked wondering how much Momo had seen

“No”

“Oh...... Well then you know that Miya was unwell, I was worried for her health, it was my duty as Captain to make she was O.K. And comfortable” Saki felt as though this was the most uncovincing thing she had ever said in her life, unfortunatly for Saki, Momo picked up on this strait away.

“Just as a Captain eh?” Momo asked innocently “Are you sure?”

“Y-Yes”Saki stuttered

“Saki that didn't sound very convincing” Momo replied quietly

“What do I think of Miya?” Saki thought to herself, she and Miya had all ways been close, they had been friends for as long as Saki could remember but recently Saki had begun to feel like there was something else, extra feelings she now had towards Miya, feelings she had not had since long ago with a person she wasn't sure she was truly over yet.

“Oh Momo, I don't know, I think maybe but I'm not sure....I wonder if what I really feel for Miya you know?”

Momo looked at Saki before replying quietly “Is it because of her?”

“Maybe Saki mumbled back

“Saki you have to let that go!” Momo sighed in frustration towards her friend “she got over it and moved on, it wasn't like it was messy or anything so why can't you get past it?”

“I-I'm not sure, maybe because I care too much” Saki said sadly

Momo sighed again and looked at her friend in despair, it had been a few years since that relationship had ended but Saki had never moced on from it, Something that Momo planned that Miyabi could help her with.

“Does Miya Know?” Momo asked knowing that if Miya knew about it it would only complicate matters

“No your the only person other than the two of us that know” Saki replied “I could never bring myself to tell Miya back then, even though I wanted to”

Looking at her friend Momo decided that the past had probably been talked about enough for one day, deciding to now contiue with her original plan of getting Saki and Miya to date. Momo had decided that they were the best thing for each other and had been quietly working behind the sences to try and get them together for some time now

“Have you seen Miya recently” Momo asked getting the original coversation back on track

Saki blushed before answering “Yes we met yesterday”

*flashback*

Saki was lying on her bed reading a book, it was quite late in the evening but it was still quite bright out so Saki had yet to close the curtains in her room, after a while she heard a tapping on the window, believing it to be the wind at first she ignored it but when the tapping started again, this time more loudly she turned round to see what was making the noise.

“Miya?!” Saki was rightly surprised to see Miya outside her window, standing on her balcony, as she went over to let her in she noticed the marks on Miya's clothes. “Why did you climb up the side of my house?”

“To thank you” Miya replied smiling at Saki

“For what?” Saki asked confused

“For this” Miya replied holding up a letter “It was really nice of you to write when I was ill, it made me feel better”

Saki found herself blushing at what Miya had said “I-It was nothing, I know you like getting my letters so I thought it may cheer you up”

“Well it did” Miya replied smiling “So how have you been?”

They talked for hours on absolutly any topic they could think late into the night, even though Saki usually worried about having girls in her room late at night, she didn't with Miya it just seemed, right, that she was there. Eventually Miya had to leave

“Well its about time I leave” before Saki could do anything Miya had started to climb down the balcony

“Why go that way?” Saki asked slightly worried for Miya's saftey

“Dramatic Effect, it makes it like a movie” Miya repiled laughing “Goodnight my Princess”

Saki started to blush again “I'm not calling you my prince” she shouted after Miya but the girl just laughed and waved in response. Saki went back inside her room and led down on her bed and smiled.

* flashback ends *

Momo squealed in delight “You wrote her a love letter!, and she called you her princess how cute”

“She was only joking” Saki replied “She didn't really mean it, and it wasn't a love letter than you very much!”

“Yeah but you liked her calling you princess didn't you” Momo asked excitedly

Saki grinned sheepisly back at Momo “Well it was nice to be called a princess by Miya”

“So perhaps you do like her?” Momo asked trying to force a confession out of Saki

“Maybe....Maybe I do1” Saki said surprising herself somewhat

Momo clapped in delight “See was that so hard?” Momo was obviously happy at her friends confession.

Saki smiled at Momo reactions “Thanks for today Momo, thank-you for giving me a kick”

“Its' O.K. Saki what are friends for” Momo replied happily “Come on lets go”

as the headed of home Saki too one final look at the setting sun “Perhaps Momo is right Miya” she thought to herself “Perhaps I am ready to move on, with you”
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 7(new) now up!
Post by: kuro808 on July 15, 2010, 12:13:28 AM
haha ah Miya appreciating the letter but still a little conflicting yet for Captain
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 7(new) now up!
Post by: rndmnwierd on July 15, 2010, 01:50:56 AM
Quote
“Dramatic Effect, it makes it like a movie” Miya repiled laughing “Goodnight my Princess”

That is so freakin' cute! I love MiyaSaki. Can't wait for more matchmaker Momo.
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 7(new) now up!
Post by: abok on July 19, 2010, 05:44:41 PM
momo is the match maker for berryz... :wub:

i wonder who will be the match maker in C-ute.... :?

Saki better hurry up before Airi confess to Miya and make things complicated....
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 8(new) now up!
Post by: oddball on July 20, 2010, 04:21:48 PM
^
Thanks for the comments guys  :twothumbs. Dont worry we haven't seen the last of Momo yet!

Chapter 8

Miya sat down on one of the sofa's and sighed in relief. She was in one of the communal rooms in UFA, it had been her first day back after the break and Miya was glad that it was nearly over, its not that she wasn't happy to be back but Miya all ways seemed to find it hard to get back into a working ethic, with a sigh she completely relaxed herself into the sofa.

“Well that's hardly a ladylike position”

“Miya smiled at what the girl had said “And you would know all about being a 'lady' with your boys haircut would you?”

Laughing the girl replied “It's good to see you Miya”

“You too Maimi, you too”

Not everybody thought that Miya and Maimi were good friends but, they were. A few years ago those people who thought that the were not very close would have been right, it was a chance meeting between the two that would change the level of the friendship to what it is today.

*flashback*

Miya could hear the sound of crying coming from inside the room, she had no idea who it was but the person inside was obviously in some distress so Miya decided to go check on who it was

“Hello?” Miya said tentatively as she opened the door

“M-Miya?” came the reply from the tearful girl, surprised with Miya's entrance to the room

Miya recognised the voice right away “Maimi! What's the matter?”

“Oh Miya!” Maimi wailed running over and hugging Miya and crying into her shoulder “It's awful what will I do?”

“What's awful?” Miya asked slightly startled by Maimi's reaction

“I-I like Airi” Maimi said still crying into Miya's shoulder

“Well I like Airi too” Miya replied confused “I know she can be a bit hyper at times but.....”

“No! I mean I really like Airi” Maimi said emphasising what she meant.

“Oh.....OH!” Miya said after finally catching on “Why is that bad?” she asked

“Because she's a girl and an Idol and it's all wrong!” Maimi said as more tears fell onto Miya's shoulders

“Well that's O.K. because you're a boy anyway” Miya joked trying to lighten the mood, Maimi chocked out a laugh through the tears “You laughed Maimi, it can't be that bad” she continued poking Maimi in the cheek.

Maimi was still upset however and did not appreciate Miya trying to lighten the mood, she pulled out of her hug with Miya “I don't even know why I'm telling you Miya” she said angrily, we're not even really good friends so don't bother butting into my business” she said angrily before heading towards the door.

“I like girls too” Maimi paused, her hand resting on the handle of the door “In fact I think I may even be falling in love, with Saki” Miya said quietly, on the verge of tears showing how hard it had been for her to say that to Maimi

“Miya” Maimi's anger had disappeared at her friends confession and she ran over and gave Miya a hug.

Hugging her back Miya said “It's O.K. To like girls Maimi, and its not like you're the only one, the idol thing is something we have to live with, we made that choice long ago, yes I do worry what would happen if I did end up dating and was discovered but if I loved the person I was with, and they loved me I could make it through, no matter what happened, as for the moment, Maimi, I am here for you”

“Thank you Miya” was all that Maimi said back, it was all she needed to say.

*flashback ends*

Ever since that day they had become much closer as friends, helping each other through the hard times but also the good times and soon they were able to talk to each other about pretty much anything.

“So, how's your Saki-Waki then?” Maimi asked smiling

“Saki-Waki?” Miya asked horrified at what Maimi had called her Captain “Don't call her that it's weird!”

“Aww is that because it's her pet name that only you can call her?” Maimi asked laughing

“Shut up! I don't have a pet name for Saki and if you are interested in not teasing me for five minuets, I think things are going a bit better”

“Really?” Maimi asked becoming excited “Are you gonna ask her out?”

“Maybe....soon” Miya said smiling sheepishly

“I'm really happy for you Miya” Maimi said hugging Miya

“Thanks” Miya replied  happily “So, how's your under-age love affair going?”

Maimi went bright red “She's not under-age she's sixteen, and I wouldn't do anything if she didn't want to do it, besides I'm only eighteen it's not as though I'm old.”

Miya laughed at what Maimi had said “Joking, joking” she said “but seriously any progress?”

Maimi sighed “Not really Miya, I just can't seem to tell...”

“Miya!, Maimi!”

“Airi” Miya said recovering first from the kappa interrupting them “How have you been?”

“Miya!” Airi said running over and hugging Miya tightly “I'm glad you're O.K., I was really worried about you!”

“I wasn't dying Airi!” Miya said patting the top of Airi's head “But thanks for caring”

“I sent you texts every day” Airi said still wanting to show how concerned she was for Miya

“More like every five minuets” Miya replied laughing

“Err, I hate to interrupt “ Maimi said, trying to keep any trace of jealousy out of her voice

“Maimi, don't worry I hadn't forgotten about you” Airi said running over and hugging Maimi who immediately started blushing, Miya just smirked.

“I hate to break this little love in up, but I do need my band-mate back”

“Saki?” Miya asked confused before realisation hit her “Oh crap!, singing practice!”

“Yes, oh crap indeed” Saki replied smiling at Miya and grabbing hold of her hand “come on lets go”

“O.K” Miya said trying not to blush but failing “By the way Maimi, I would hurry up and get on with what you were stalling over, you don't want to leave it too late!” Miya ran off down the corridor with Saki

“Hey Maimi, what was Miya talking about?” Airi asked as she waved goodbye to the two berryz members

“Oh nothing, just some stuff to do with banking” Maimi lied, she knew full well what Miya was talking about

Airi nodded her head in acceptance “It's good you and Miya are such good fiends” she said

“Why?” Maimi asked, interested as to why Airi should bring up her friendship with Miya now

“Well it's just that you two are two of the most important people in my life and it's nice to see that you are also close. It makes me happy to see the people I care about like each other as well”

“Yeah we get on well, she was really there for me at a tough time in my life” Maimi replied

“Tough time?” Airi asked looking worried.

Maimi smiled at the younger girl “Don't worry about it, one day I will tell you what it was all about but not just yet”

Airi seemed comforted by what Maimi had said “Well as long as you're O.K. Now” she said holding onto Maimi's arm “Now....take me fore cakes!”

Maimi laughed at the younger girls impudence “How can I refuse a demand like that?”

“You can't” Airi replied giggling  “I'm irresistible”

“Yes you are” Maimi said quietly to herself

“Pardon?” Airi asked thinking that Maimi was speaking to her

“Nothing Airi, come on, lets go”
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 8(new) now up!
Post by: rndmnwierd on July 20, 2010, 04:47:52 PM
Poor Maimi, she has no idea. Miya doesn't either I guess. Oh, the drama!
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 8(new) now up!
Post by: kuro808 on July 20, 2010, 07:46:08 PM
“Well that's O.K. because you're a boy anyway”
XD XD XD

more interesting parts up ahead eg? :lol:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 8(new) now up!
Post by: oddball on July 23, 2010, 04:48:07 PM
thanks for the comments guys, here's chapter 9!!!


Chapter 9

“Maimi are you O.K.?”

“Hmm, sorry, what?”

“Are you O.K? You seem a bit out of it”

“Yeah I'm fine Airi, I was just thinking”

Maimi and Airi were in the C-ute dressing room with the rest of the girls from the group, they had just finished practice and were changing to go home. Maimi found it ironic that it was Airi who had gotten her out of her thoughts as it was Airi that Maimi had been thinking about.

It had been a week since Maimi had  seen Miya and she could not get what her friend had said to her out of her head. She knew that what Miya had said was right, she couldn't stall any longer seeing the progress that Miya and Saki seemed to be making had shown Maimi that you can make progress with a relationship if you put your mind to it. Maimi however still got that nagging feeling in the back of her mind when she thought about asking Airi out, it replayed the same worries that Maimi had over and over again, what if she says no?, what if she hates me afterwards? What will other people think? “NO!” Maimi thought to herself “Miya is right dammit, I need to get on with this, lets do it!”

“A-Airi”

“Yes Maimi?”

“let's go out to dinner, my treat”

“Cool, that's really nice of you Maimi”

“No Worries Airi, it's a pleasure to do it for you”

“Hey Chisa, Mai, Maimi is taking us out to dinner, you coming?”

“What? No! I didn't mean.....”

“Of course we'll come it sounds like fun, Nakky you'll come to won't you?”

“I only meant for....”

“Sure why not, it has been ages since we've all gone out together as a group”

“It was supposed to be just me and...”

“Great! It's going be fun us all going out together isn't in Maimi?”

“Yes....just what I had hoped for”

Maimi didn't really want to admit it but she actually had a great time at dinner, she had all ways found it fun to hang out with the other girls in her group and Nakky had been right, they hadn't done it in a long while. Maimi had no time during the meal to talk to Airi one on one and so, in an attempt to talk to her on her own, she offered to walk the younger girl home, an offer that Airi gladly accepted

“Thanks for dinner Maimi, it was really nice”

“That's O.K. Airi” Maimi replied, her purse was a lot lighter than at the beginning of the evening, she decided that she would just have to grin and bare it, stupid Chisa, eating as much as a horse!

“And it's really nice of you to walk me home, it's not really even on your route is it?” Airi continued

“I don't mind, besides I'll be happier knowing that you are home safe” Maim said

Airi linked her arm through Maimi's “Aww Maimi you are my protector like all ways”

Maimi laughed “Airi I'm your friend not your bodyguard or something!”

“Well perhaps I should hire you as a bodyguard then” Airi replied giggling “You can't cost that much”

“And what make you think I would work for you?” Maimi said, going along with the joke

“Because you love me!” Airi had said it jokingly but it didn't stop Maimi from blushing, fortunately for her Airi seemed not to notice the change in her friends complexion.

It did not take much longer for the girls to make it to Airi's street, as they got a little closer to the Suzuki home Airi started to giggle

“What's funny?” Maimi asked confused as to what Airi found amusing.

“I was just thinking that us walking arm in arm like this my parents might think we are a couple or something!”

Maimi tried to compose herself as much as possible, this was quite hard to do Maimi figured when your heart was beating very fast “ Well then, if we look like a couple I shouldn't ruin the act” she said not totally sure what she was saying herself

“What do you mean?” Airi asked, it was her turn to be confused

Maimi leant down and gave Airi a kiss on the cheek “I think that’s how couple say goodbye isn't it?”

Airi had turned bright red the moment that Maimi had kissed her “Y-Yes I think so, g-goodnight Maimi” she said still surprised at Maimi's actions

“Goodnight” Maimi replied watching Airi go into her house before walking away, a stupid grim forming on her face as she walked away
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 9 now up!
Post by: abok on July 23, 2010, 05:59:39 PM
poor maimi...

her romantic dinner plan was ruin....  :nervous

i hope airi know what maimi had been trying to tell her.... :roll:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 9 now up!
Post by: rndmnwierd on July 24, 2010, 03:00:36 AM
Go Maimi! Make heart flutter, baby! I'm pumping my fist in the air, btw, like an idiot. :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 9 now up!
Post by: kuro808 on July 24, 2010, 05:54:25 AM
Maimi is slowing catching on but the resistance to act upon it seems cute XD
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 9 now up!
Post by: Maimi_Yajima on July 24, 2010, 08:27:14 AM
i love a YajiSuzu!  :heart:  i like this chapter.  :heart:  :heart:  :heart:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 10 now up!
Post by: oddball on July 30, 2010, 05:12:40 PM
Thanks for the comments again Guys, We will just have to wait and see what happens between Airi and Maimi wont we. as for this chapter back to Saki and Miya!

Chapter 10

Miya looked into the cup of coffee that the waiter had put in-front of her and wondered why she and Saki had come here. Saki defiantly had something on her mind, Miya had known the girl long enough to know that when she had something important on her mind she went very quiet and Saki hadn't said much apart from ordering her drink, Miya also knew that you could never force Saki to talk about it before she wanted to so she waited patiently until the time when Saki decided to talk.

Miya suspected that Momo had a hand in getting Saki to 'ask' her out for a coffee, she wondered how much Momo and Saki had talked about her and her relationship with Saki, the way in which she had ended up in this café with Saki made Miya suspect that Saki may of said something to get Momo interested in the both of them.

*Flashback*

“Miya!”

“Hey Momo, what's up?”

“Saki was wondering if you would like to go have a coffee with her?”

“I'm sure Saki could as me herself”

“Well she had to stay behind and she didn't want you to leave before she had the chance to tell you so she asked me to do it”

“But Saki asked to to wait for her, that's why I'm still here”

“Look, do you want to go for a coffee with Saki or not!?”

“Fine just tell her I said yes”

“Hey Momo, hey Miya”

“Saki! Miya said yes to going to have a coffee with you!”

“When did I.....”

“That's good isn't it Saki?”

“Um, yes?”

“Great, well don't let me hold you up”

“Momo you don't have to push us towards the door!”

“Super, that's nice, well bye you two”

*Flashback ends*

Looking back at it Miya decided that she would have to have a word with Momo about her 'help', she knew that her friend was only trying to help out, the problems was that Momo had the subtlety of a brick trough a window and sometimes you needed to approach things in a more delicate manor.

“I had a talk with Momo the other day” Saki said, finally deciding to speak

“Really? I don't suppose you talked about us at all did you?” Miya replied smirking

“Possibly a little” Saki said meekly

“A little?” Miya questioned

“Well maybe a bit more than a little, possibly a lot”

“Oh dear!”

“She's only trying to help Miya”

“Yes, that's what's worrying me!”

“She, um, seems to think that we should go out on a date” Saki said nervously not looking a Miya but at the cup in front of her

“I thought she might” Miya replied, wondering where Saki was taking this conversation

“I-I think we should to!”

Miya's heart skipped a beat, was Ski asking her out? Miya had been so worried about how to ask Saki that she never even thought of the possibility that that Saki would be the one to ask her, in all honesty, it didn't really matter to Miya now.

“Saki, a-are you asking me out on a date” Miya asked, wanting conformation

“Y-Yes” Saki replied nervously, not sure if Miya was going to say yes or not

Miya smiled “So where are you taking me?”

Saki looked up at Miya “You want to go on a date with me?”

“Saki, I've wanted to ask you out for a while, I just have never...”

“Been able to say it right?” Saki finished Miya's sentence for her “I-I think I want to spend more time with you Miya so I had to say something to you, even if it was stupid”

“It wasn't stupid” Miya said taking hold of Saki's hands “Can't you see I happy you asked? Surely the fact that I am happy you asked is more important than the way you asked anyway?”

Saki smiled at Miya 'You know, you can be quite romantic when you want to be”

“I try my best, my princess” Miya said laughing

“Not that again!” Saki replied also starting to laugh “Why did you climb up onto my balcony, aren’t you afraid of heights?”

“Not afraid” Miya replied “Terrified!” both girls started laughing again

“I don' know Miya, you can do some dumb things sometimes” Saki said

“It's your fault Saki! You make me want to do stupid thinks to make you happy” Miya replied blushing

Saki blushed a bit as well “See you can be romantic when you try”

“I'm a fast learner” Miya replied, the two girls laughing yet again as they got up to leave the café

“You better be taking me somewhere nice by the way”

“Miya!”
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 10 now up!
Post by: kuro808 on July 30, 2010, 07:55:47 PM
 :wub:

That is really cute, although romantic in a funny way
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 10 now up!
Post by: rndmnwierd on July 30, 2010, 08:37:44 PM
That actually is terrible romantic, in a real world kind of way. I'm so glad MiyaSaki are together now. Hmm, I'm sure there will be complications later, somehow.
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 10 now up!
Post by: oddball on August 04, 2010, 05:37:53 PM
thanks for the comments as usual

@rndm: Yeah I wanted their relation ship in this fic to be very donw to earth, I allways get the felling this is the way it would be! :P


Chapter 11

“Maimi can we have a word with you?”

Takahashi-san, Niigaki-san, what’s the matter?”

“Nothing Maimi” Risa said “We just wanted to talk to you about something, that's all”

“O.K. then” Maimi agreed wondering what it was her senpai's wanted to talk about

The trio ended up in one of the rooms used by Morning Musume, the room was empty suggesting that all of the other girls were either not at headquarters or were busy doing something else, Maimi suspected that Risa and Ai knew this room would be empty.

“What did you want to speak to me about?” Maimi asked as the girls all sat down

“Well you see, when two people like each other very much they get these....urges” Ai explained

“Urges?” Maimi asked confused

“Yes, to um, Kiss each other and stuff”

“What like when me and Airi found you in the corridor that day?” Risa started to ssexy beast but one sharp look from Ai was enough to make her stop

“Yes quite, anyway we just wanted to say that it is important for you to be careful when your an idol and your in a relationship, especially a same-sex one, Hello! Project can't afford to loose and Idol like you Maimi so please don't get caught doing anything stupid OK?”

“Takahashi-san, who are you talking about?” Maimi was baffled, why was Ai giving her relationship advice when she wasn't even in a relationship?

“Why you and Airi of course” Ai replied as if it was the most obvious thing in the world

“But Takahashi-san, me and Airi aren’t even dating we don't.....”

“Don't be daft!” Risa interrupted “The only reason you aren’t dating is that you are both too dumb to figure out you should be together, everyone else know your gonna end up a couple even the Eggs!, the problem is the only to people who haven't realized it yet are you and Airi!”

“You need to tell her Maimi” Ai said quietly “I know it's hard but you need to do it before it's too late. Airi needs you to tell her how you feel, she may not fully understand the feelings she has for you but she will realize them when you tell her your true feelings”

“That's why we were giving you relationship advice” Risa added “because even if you are a dummy we believe in you, and in Airi”

“Takahashi-san, Niigaki-san I don't know what to say”

“You don't need to say anything to us, say it to Airi!” Risa said, smiling at Maimi

“Thank you guys” Maimi said grateful that her seniors cared about her so much, and for the advice they had given her

“It's all right it's part of out job” Ai said “Now off you go, me and Risa want to, um, do some...things”

Maimi was all too happy to leave before Ai and Risa got started with their 'things', she wasn't expecting to find a friend of hers sitting down by the door to the room she had just been in.

“They're right you know”

“Miya! You scared me half to death!” Maimi shouted, realising how close Maimi was sitting to the door she asked “Were you eavesdropping on my conversation?”

“Yes” Maimi said unashamed “And Takahashi-san and Niigaki-san are right”

“But you were eavesdropping!”

“Yes I was, I'm sorry, now don't change the subject, they are right about you and Airi and I've told you the same as well all you have to do is....”

“I know Dammit!” Maimi said “I just don't know how to say it”

“Just ask her out to a park or something and just tell her” Miya suggested

“Well it's easy for you to say” Maimi complained “It's a lot harder for me to do”

Miya sighed “look, I know you are worried that Airi may say no, and I won't lie there is all ways a chance she will say no, but she will never hate you, you know Airi she could never hate you!”

“She won't hate me?

“Of course you idiot think for a second!”

“You're right” Maimi said “Sorry”

“There's no need to be sorry” Miya replied “As long as you call her now”

“Now?”

“Now!”

“Fine, this won't work you know” Maimi said getting her phone out to ring Airi

“Maimi, what's up?” Airi asked answering Maimi's call

“Oh hey Airi, um, you see, we...” Miya poked Maimi in the ribs to get her back on track “wouldyouliketogototheparkwithme” she finished speaking to fast to make proper sense

“Sorry what did you say?” Airi asked unable to understand what Maimi had said at all

Maimi took a breath before asking again “Would you like to go to the park with me?”
“Oh that's what you said” Airi said sounding happy “I'd love to Maimi, its been ages since we've done anything like that, are you free tomorrow?”

Yeh, tomorrow sounds great!” Maimi replied “see you there at the gates, say 7ish?”

“Sound's good to me!” Airi said “Look I gotta go Maimi, I'll see you tomorrow”

“Bye” Maimi said before hanging up

“See that wasn't so hard” Miya said patting Maimi on the shoulder. Maimi just kept looking at her phone, worrying Miya a little “Um, Maimi?”

Maimi looked at Miya, a panicked expression on her face “How am I going to tell her? I have no Idea!”

“Just make something up, as long as you get the main point across it's fine” Miya reassured her nervous friend

“Sorry Miya, you're right, I can do it!” Maimi said more confidently then she felt inside

“That's the spirit” Miya cheered, playfully giving Maimi a light punch on the arm “Come, on I'll get you a drink, it looks like you could do with one!”
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 11 now up!
Post by: rndmnwierd on August 04, 2010, 11:53:00 PM
Quote
Risa started to ssexy beast but one sharp look from Ai was enough to make her stop
Omg XD

I love the different ways Takagaki go about giving advice. Unfortunately, it's not Maimi Airi's into. Which definitely sucks for Maimi. Maybe there's still hope, though, right?
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 11 now up!
Post by: kuro808 on August 05, 2010, 05:31:27 AM
lol so maimi finally got to say it, yay!
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 11 now up!
Post by: abok on August 05, 2010, 03:33:04 PM
way  to go Ai-chan and Gaki-san.... :thumbsup

i hope Maimi and Airi will be fine.... :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 11 now up!
Post by: Maimi_Yajima on August 11, 2010, 03:01:58 AM
wow ... two chapter.  :lol: Thank you.  :)
TakaGaki giving advice to Maimi? um ... it´s unusual.  XD  however it´s interesting.  :)
Maimi poor  :cry: I have a question,  :lol: Maimi kiss to airi, now i wonder, Airi felt something for that kiss?
I´m sorry ,  writer.  but I'm curious.  8) So, I really like the interaction of Saki x Miyabi,  :wub:  they´re funny and sometimes a bit clumsy, it´s funny and cute.  :heart:

good chapter,  writer.  :)
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 11 now up!
Post by: badsaints on August 12, 2010, 03:01:07 PM
Not a Kids fan, but you got me hooked from first chapter on :thumbsup Not to mention the occasional cameos from dorky TakaGaki (not to mention hawt) is a major plus :lol:

Interesting story :twothumbs So now Saki like Miya and vice versa? A confession is on the way right? XD But oh shucks, Airi like Miya too? Poor Maimi :O
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 11 now up!
Post by: oddball on August 18, 2010, 05:22:54 PM
Man it's been ages since I updated, First I found out about the graduations of Eri Jun and Lin which knocked me back at bit, it's hard loosing your 3 favorites in a group you know and Jun is probably my favorite overall so I was In a bit of shock so didn't write for a bit, then My sister came home from Australia where she now lives so time was lost to spend some with her but finally, we have chater 12 ready  :sweatdrop: just in time as well, Im go on holiday for a few days tommorow!!!

@badsaints: glad I got you hooked  :D Don't worry TakaGaki are not finishe yet!!!

@Maimi_Yajima: giving advice is what mums and dads do right :roll: We may soon see what Airi thinks about that kiss. :panic:

@abok: Well lets hope that TakaGaki have help at bit, Maimi's got a crunch moment coming up.....

@Kuro87: Now all Maimi has to do is tell Airi she likes her.....

@rndmnweird: you will have to wait and see :P

Anyways thanks for the comment's here's chapter 12

Chapter  12

Chinami sat on her bed reading a magazine, or at least trying to, the problem was her attention kept on being taken away by her rather nervous friend, who at this moment was pacing up and down in her room.

“Chii what am I going to do?” Miya asked nervously

“Stopping being so nervous would be a good start” Chii replied continuing to read the magazine in her hands

Chinami had been surprised when her mother had shouted up to her that Miya was at the door, she knew her friend was having her first official date with Saki tonight, Miya had pratically destroyed Chii's hearing when she had shouted the news to her jubilantly down the phone. When Chinami saw the look on Miya's face however she knew just why she had come over at such short notice, this was one of the very rare times where the all ways cool, all ways composed Miyabi Natsuyaki was actually nervous.

“What is I can't think of anything to talk about?” Miya asked making Chii pause her reading one again

“Miya, this is Saki we're talking about, you know, the girl you speak to most of the time” Chinami replied before continuing on reading

“Yeah, of course, you're right” Miya said moving over to inspect herself in Chii's Mirror “I do look OK don't I?”

Chinami looked up from her magazine “You're asking me for fashion advice? The great fashion setter Miyabi Natsuyaki is asking me for advice!”

Miya looked at friend who was dressed in a pair of jog pants and an old Berry tour t-shirt “Good point”

“Hey I'm only dressed like this because I'm staying in tonight” Chinani's response got a 'yeah right' look from Miya making her decide it would be a good time to get a little bit of revenge on her friend.

“Look do you want my advice or not?” She asked Miya before turning the page of her magazine “Hey look, top ten dating tips!”

“Really!” Miya said excitedly moving to grasp the magazine off of Chinami

“No, only joking” Chinami replied laughing at Miya's expression

“Chii don't tease me like that! I'm finding this hard enough as it is” Miya said pouting

“Sorry, Sorry” Chinami replied “You wanted my advice on how you looked, Miya I think you look amazing, I'm sure Saki will like it” she added trying to reassure her friend who seemed to be getting only more and more nervous.

“What if I tell a joke and she doesn’t find it funny?”

“Miya I don't.....”

What id I spill a drink on her?”

“Miya if.....”

“What do I do if I fart?! What if....”

BAM! Chinami slammed the magazine down on her bedside table stopping Miya mid-sentence “Now I have got your attention will you please just listen to me. First, stop thinking stupid things it's not helping anyone, secondly this is Saki we're talking about, just be yourself, that's all she wants remember there's no point in trying to make a good first impression with her, Saki know what you are truly like and she like you for being that person, nothing else, not the way you talk, how funny you are, what you wear, no Saki likes you for being you, nothing more, nothing less”

“Chii” Miya said quietly her eyes starting to fill with tears “I know I'm being silly, it's just I really don't want to mess this up!”

Chinami sighed “I think you may need this more than me” she said getting up and taking something out of her desk draw and handing it too Miya

“A good luck charm?” Miya asked wondering why Chii had given it too her

“I don't think you need it myself” Chinami said “But it might give you some confidence so take it with you tonight”

“Thank-you” Miya said quietly wiping the the tears from her eyes

Chinami started to giggle “Miya you've just messed up your make-up silly!” walking over to Miya and wiping away the smudges around her eyes with a finger

“God I look a mess” Miya said looking into Chinami’s mirror, “Can I borrow some make-up?”

“Sure” Chinami replied

A few moments later Miya had re-done her face and was looking all pretty again “OK that should do” she said to herself turning round to Chinami to get her opinion

“Very nice” Chinami said guessing what Miya was after before running over and giving Miya a hug “You OK?”

Yeah I feel better now” Miya replied “Look I better be going, I'll be late for Saki”

“Yeah you can't be late, I'll see you off” Chinami replied heading downstairs with Miya

When they reached the door Miya turned round “Thanks for tonight” she said moving in and hugging Chinami “It really meant a lot to me”

“Don't be daft that's what I'm here for” Chinami replied slightly embarest as she hugged Miya back “Remember you'll be fine, now go get your girl!”

Miya smiled “Yeah I will, see you later” she said heading off down the street

“Hey Miya” Chinami said “Don't fart” Miya went red with embarrassment at what she had said earlier as she just nodded at her friend in response. Chinami giggled at Miya's embarest reaction “Good luck!” she shouted watching Miya as she headed off down the street as she closed the door.

Chinami leant back against the now closed door and took a deep breath, Miya was really confusing her at the moment, Chinami knew full well that they would only ever be friends but....

“Why does mu heart beat faster when I see her sometimes?” Chinami asked herself before slowly going back upstairs to her room.

Miya walked away from Chii's house and into the city, as she walked she slowly moved a hand up to her heart.

“Why is my heart beating so fast?” she thought to herself as she continued to walk “Nerves! That's it, I must be nervous about meeting Saki” she told herself as she headed off for her date.

Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 12 now up!
Post by: abok on August 18, 2010, 05:46:21 PM
this is bad......  :smhid

chii is in love with miya??? :shocked

oh god.....  :banghead:

looks like a storm is coming on their relationship..... :sweatdrop:

where's yurina when we need her???she should be the one dating chii (hahaha...just kidding) :lol:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 12 now up!
Post by: rndmnwierd on August 18, 2010, 06:08:00 PM
Lol, Miya is so cute, getting all nervous over her date. Chii to the rescue, I guess~!

Quote
“Why does mu heart beat faster when I see her sometimes?” Chinami asked herself before slowly going back upstairs to her room.

Miya walked away from Chii's house and into the city, as she walked she slowly moved a hand up to her heart.

“Why is my heart beating so fast?” she thought to herself as she continued to walk “Nerves! That's it, I must be nervous about meeting Saki” she told herself as she headed off for her date.


...
...
...

Oh my god, nooo~! Not potentially messing up my MiyaSaki!! D:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 12 now up!
Post by: kuro808 on August 19, 2010, 07:34:56 AM
Well I guess avoid trouble and adds more but it adds an intriguing twist to the story

can't help saying it from the guy who has miyarii in his fic XD
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 12 now up!
Post by: badsaints on August 25, 2010, 07:33:35 AM
The nerve wrecking experience of "first" date :lol:


Yabai! Chii also like Miya? :huhuh Poor Miya XD Who to choose~ Who to choose~ *whistle*
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 12 now up!
Post by: Tundra Wind on August 25, 2010, 09:24:53 AM
Wow, forgot to comment after I read this  :doh:

*clears throat* Nnnoooooooooo.  :banghead: I was hoping in the past chapters that Chii liked somebody other than Miya. I approve of MiyaxChii but only when it doesn't mess with MiyaSaki.  :P

I like how Miya has so many suitors in your fic. I'm interested in seeing who ends up with who.  :yep:  :wub:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 12 now up!
Post by: oddball on August 27, 2010, 11:54:39 AM
I am an Idiot, I go t visit my my and what do I forget...yes the chapter I was going to post!!! :doh: :banghead:

Still I will start work on the chapter after it so expect two in short succesion next week!!!
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 13 now up!
Post by: oddball on September 01, 2010, 03:48:15 PM
You know I could probably write a story on what went wrong while writing this, I lost it, found it, forgot it, had alot of it wiped when my computer crashed, forgot it again... but finaly it's done, sorry for the wait.

On the plus side I should have another chapter done later this week, as long as nothing eles goes wrong that is...... :panic:

@ Abok hmm yes Miya's life may start to get a bit more complicated, as for Yurina.....

@ Rndmn&Kuro87 hmm I wonder what Chii's part in the Miya/Saki plot is..... :panic:

@ Badsaints this chapter will show you how the date goes, enjoy!

@ Tundra nice to have you along for the ride, also read Rndmn and Kuro's comment above

well here we go.....

Chapter 13

Miya looked into into the water around the fountain at which she and Saki had agreed to meet. Miya for the first time she could remember has arrived to something before Saki and without much to do while she waited had inspected the fountain, it had not taken her long to spot the coins in the bottom of the pool in which the fountain sat, thrown in by people hoping that the wish they made afterwards would come true. Miya who was not usually a superstitious type but today she was contemplating the idea, Miya thought that she could probably use all the help she could get for her date tonight, before she could act on her idea, a voice called out to her

“Miya!”

Miya turned round to see Saki walking towards her. “Come on Miya” she thought to herself “get of to a good start, say something clever”

“Um....Hi” Miya managed to stutter out in response “Nice going idiot” she thought to herself  angrily

“Hi yourself” Saki smiled at    Miya “You ready to go then? The restaurant is only over there” Saki pointed to a restaurant just over the street from where the fountain was

“Yeah lets go” Miya replier nervously clutching onto the good luck charm that Chii had given her as they headed towards the restaurant

It did not take long for them to be seated and soon both girls had a menu in front of them and were deciding what to have

After a few minutes Saki peered over the top of her menu and asked “Do you know what you want yet Miya?”

“I-I um, was going to order what you had” Miya admitted embarrassed at how silly what she just said might of sounded

“Oh” Saki said looking down into her lap “I er had the same idea as you, I was going to order what you had”

“Well is there something on the menu you want?” Miya asked, Saki nodded in response “Well why don't we say what we want at the same time and then decide between them”

“O.K. lets do that” Saki said agreeing with Miya's plan

“On three” Miya said “One, two, three...”

“Noodles!” both girls said at the same time, it took a while for them to realize that they had just both said the same thing causing both girls to start giggling

“Noodles it is then” Saki said calling over the waiter to order the food

Soon both girls were enjoying their noodles,  both were to hungry to talk at first but something was sticking out of Miya's bag caught Saki's attention.

“Miya is that a charm you have in your bag?” Saki asked curious at what Miya would have one

“Yeah” Miya replied getting the charm out of her bag “Chinami gave it to me, it's a good luck charm, she um, she said that I may some extra help on this date” Miya turned slightly red after saying this and hid her embarrassment by eating another mouthful of noodles

“A good luck charm?” Saki asked still slightly confused “Were you hoping to get lucky tonight?”

Miya nearly choked on her noodles after hearing what Saki had said, it took a while for Saki to realize what she had said and the girl had gone red with embarrassment.

“Miya I-I'm sorry, I-I didn't mean that, I mean its not that I don,t want to, I just meant....”

“It's O.K. Saki” Miya said after recovering from her choking cutting of Saki's ramblings “Don't worry about it, I just was surprised at what you said”

Saki looked down dejectedly at the remains of her food “Sorry” she said quietly “You must think I'm an idiot”

“Why would I think that?” Miya asked confused at what Saki was getting at

“Because, because I'm so nervous” Saki said sadly “I must look like a fool stumbling through this dinner and everything and you've been so calm and everything”

“Do you know why Chii gave me this charm?” Miya asked “It's because I went over to her house before coming here because I was so nervous about tonight that I couldn't even think strait, I was worried that I would say something stupid, worried that you may not laugh at one of my jokes, worried if you would like what I'm wearing, worried that I wouldn't make you happy” Miya paused to grab hold of Saki's hands not caring who would see “So you see I'm nervous to Saki and I think you are no fool, you're Saki my Captain and even if you were a fool I don't think I would care because you would still be you and I can't really ask for more than that”

Saki looked up at Miya, a smile on her face “I made the great Miyabi Natsuyaki Nervous?”

“Yeah you did!” Miya replied “Don't tell anyone” she joked causing Saki to giggle

“Thank-you” Saki said after the giggling had died down “for saying such nice things about me”

“It's only the truth” Miya replied blushing

“Now that was a corny line, I've been waiting for one all night” Saki said starting to laugh

“Sorry to keep you waiting” Miya replied joining in the laughter

Soon afterwards they had paid for their meal and had headed out of the restaurant and back towards the fountain where they had met earlier that night.

“By the way Miya, what were you looking at earlier in the fountain?” Saki asked

“Coins” Miya said simply

“Coins?” Saki asked “for wishes”

“Yeah” Miya replied “I was going to wish for the date to go well but you turned up before I decided if I was going to make it or not”

“A wish eh” Saki said getting a coin out of her purse “sounds like a good idea” she went over to the fountain and threw the coin in

“What did you wish for?” Miya asked coming over and standing next to Saki

“This” Saki stood up on tip-toes and kissed Miya gently on the lips

Saki looked up into Miya's eyes and waited to see what reaction Miya would give her,as though she was moving in slow motion Miya raised a hand to her lips

“You kissed me?” Miya said in a shocked voice

“Thinking that Miya did not like the kiss Saki turned away to leave, tears forming in her eyes but she felt a hand grab hold of her wrist, slowly Saki turned around and looked at Miya's hand on her wrist and slowly looked up again at Miya's face. Thinking that Miya was angry at her Saki tried to explain what she had done

“Miya, I'm sorry I didn't mean.....”

Saki was interrupted by Miya's lips pressing against her own,, it was only the shortest of kisses but it told Saki all that she needed to know, she looked up at Miya seeing her with a huge grin on her face made Saki start to smile also, she offered her hand to Miya, which she accepted, and the two walked on, hand-in-hand, fingers entwined

“You know at the start of this date I wanted to say something really clever” Miya said in a conversational tone

“Like what?” Saki asked wondering what Miya might of come up with

“Well when I saw you at the start of the date and I was by the fountain I was thinking of throwing a coin in and saying something like, 'I didn't know wishes worked that fast, I wished for an angel and here you are'”

Saki looked up into the face of her new love and smiled “I think overall I actually preferred the Um.....Hi” both girls burst out laughing as they walked down the street, still hand-in-hand.
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 13 now up!
Post by: rndmnwierd on September 01, 2010, 03:59:58 PM
So~ cute! The last lines made me lol. I'm glad it went okay, now, drama! :panic:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 13 now up!
Post by: abok on September 01, 2010, 04:10:49 PM
an update!!!! XD

i've been waiting and this chapter is definitely worth the wait.... :D

miya and saki are so sweet and loving together.... :wub:

but i'm getting anxious about maimi and airi.... :nervous

i wonder what will happen when both of them go to the park..... :?
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 13 now up!
Post by: kano-chan on September 02, 2010, 12:30:05 AM
OMG! This is so cute! :wub: :inlove: Butbutbut I think I want Miyairi! :heart:

About Maimi and Airi's date, perhaps Airi would tell her that she likes Miya....? :twisted: :D

Sorry people! :on speedy: But I always see MiyaSaki couple and I just want to see Miyairi this time. :mon whimper:

Can't wait for next update!  :twothumbs
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 13 now up!
Post by: memory on September 02, 2010, 03:35:19 AM
miya and captain romance.... :heart:

i really hope that both of them will be together until the end... XD i dont want anybody to ruin miyaXcaptain.....   :twisted: i hope maimi will be able to confess to airi.... :panic: and i hope airi didnt freak out when maimi told her that.... :panic:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 13 now up!
Post by: kuro808 on September 02, 2010, 07:15:21 AM
Miya's line was actually really cool and yet I guess she didn't have to try so hard XD
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 13 now up!
Post by: badsaints on September 05, 2010, 10:54:31 AM
Quote
“Were you hoping to get lucky tonight?”
I know Captain didn't mean it that way but :lol: :lol: :lol:

Quote
“Miya I-I'm sorry, I-I didn't mean that, I mean its not that I don,t want to, I just meant....”
So she does want it? :lol: :lol: :lol:

Quote
'I didn't know wishes worked that fast, I wished for an angel and here you are'”
Cheesy~ Thank God she didn't say it XD


Does this mean they are official? :w00t:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 13 now up!
Post by: oddball on September 06, 2010, 05:20:15 PM
Thanks for all the comments guys, as usual they allways help!

@Rndmn: Don't worry, drama will be coming..... :panic:

@Abok: You're about to find out about Maimi and Airi.......

@Kano-chan: Hello, welcome to the fic!!! :thumbsup Miyairi eh? you will just have to wait and see  :twisted:

@ memory: hello aswell! Thanks for reading! As for your comment, we will just have to see who ends up with who, wont we.... :twisted:

@Kuro87: I kinda got it into my head that Miya would try to act all cool infront of Saki but fail, thats why she says these types of lines  :lol:

@badsaints: I think its fair to say that Saki got a bit flustered by Miya XD thou perhaps she wanted more than to kiss Saki.... :oops:

Well as you canguess from the commets your about to have an Airi/Maimi chapter, enjoy!...

Chapter 14

Airi looked up into the face of the girl walking ext to her and wondered what was going on in her mind. Airi had happily agreed to meat Maimi in the park, she all ways enjoyed the time she spent with her leader but tonight Airi could tell that something was not right as Maimi, who usually couldn't stop talking when she was with Airi hadn't said a word since they had greeted each other at the entrance of the park. Judging by the look on her face Airi had decided that Maimi was deep in thought,as if she wanted  to ask her something  but wasn't quite sure about how to say it.

Airi wondered if it was about kiss on the cheek that Maimi had given her the other day, instinctively Airi's hand touched the cheek that Maimi had kissed . It had been weird having Maimi kiss her, as far  as Airi could remember Maimi had never been that bold in front of her before so to suddenly receive a kiss, even if it was only on the cheek,  was quite a surprise to her, what was really weird however was that it had made Airi feel all warm inside, just like she felt every time she saw Miya, she had wondered if perhaps she had stronger feeling for Maimi then she ever realized but she had quickly dismissed the idea, she loved Miya, of that she was sure and anyway Airi new that Maimi had no feelings past friendship for her.

She had seen how Maimi and Erika had been when the now model had been in C-ute, Airi could tell that Maimi had strong feelings towards Erika, just like she did towards Miya and knew that Maimi must love Erika, defiantly Maimi was extremely upset when Erika left and Airi assumed that this was because she had lost the girl she loved, Airi had actually never spoken to Maimi about this, as she was sure it would upset her friend to talk about it, but had decided that the best thing to do was just be there for Maimi when she needed it and to help her get over Erika.

Maimi had grown to be like a big sister to Airi, all ways looking out for her and protecting her, perhaps that's why she had felt warm after Maimi had kissed her, because she had a true friend who would be there for her no matter what and who would take your troubles away whatever they may be. Airi wondered then, why it had been so hard to tell Maimi about how she had fallen in love with Miya, she had wanted to tell Maimi so many times but every time she seemed to have an opportunity to do so, she just couldn't bring herself to do it and Airi didn't know why it just felt...wrong telling Maimi about how she loved someone, perhaps tonight that would change she thought to herself but first she wanted to see what was on Maimi's mind.

“You know you can tell me, don't you Maimi” Airi said to the girl walking next to her, still lost in her own thoughts

“Hmm, what?” Maimi replied, too lost in her own world to properly hear what Airi has said

“What's on your mind?” Airi asked again

Maimi, who by now was back from being lost in her thoughts wondered how Airi had know that she had been thinking about something “How do you know I have something on my mind”

“Because you haven't said a word since we met” Airi replied “plus you have that look on your face, the one you all ways have when your deep in thought”

“I have a thinking face?” Maimi asked surprised, she had never known she made a specific face when she was thinking

“Yeah like this” Airi said giving Maimi an impression of what she looked like

“Do I really do that?” Mimi asked, worried after she seeing the face that Airi had made

“Yeah but it's O.K., I think I'm the only one who's noticed it” Airi replied reassuring Maimi “Besides I think it's cute” at this Maimi blushed a little “So are you going to tell me what's on your mind or not?”

“Maybe later” Maimi said looking for a way to change the subject quickly, fortunately she soon found one “Oh look, a carousel!”

Airi's face lit up “Really where?” she asked looking around for it, when she saw it she squealed in delight “Can we go on it Maimi, please?”

“Sure” Maimi agreed, happy that for the moment she had gotten away from the topic of ow to tell Airi she liked her, Airi clapped excitedly when Maimi agreed as she dragged her over towards the carousel, they quickly paid the man running it and got on just a s the ride started.

“I loved these when I was little” Airi said as they went round on the ride patting the horse she was riding on “I all ways liked to pretend that I was a princess and that there was a prince who would come and rid off with me into the sunset” Airi looked down at the floor of the ride before continuing “I suppose that now I like girls there will be no prince who will come for me know” she said sadly

“I suppose that depends on how you decide what makes a prince” Maimi replied looking strait ahead “A prince to me is someone who is there to protect you, someone who will be there for you no matter what, someone who is devoted to you and loves only you, is being a man part of being a prince, to me, not so much, so perhaps your prince is still out there somewhere, waiting for you”

Airi looked at Maimi a grateful look on her face “Thank you Maimi, you all ways seem to know what to say to make me feel better, the words you said were so lovely”

Maimi smiled at Airi “It's all right, I'm glad I could make you feel better” she said “For I want to be your prince Airi” Maimi thought to herself

Soon the ride had finished and the girls got off and thanked the man before continuing on their walk around the park, as they walked they came across a bench overlooking a pond, the evening light shimmered of the surface of the pond giving the area a magical look “It's the perfect place to tell her” Maimi thought to herself

“Lets sit down for a while Airi” Maimi said pointing out the bench to the younger girl

“O.K.” Airi replied simply as they sat down on the bench next to each other

For a minuet or so neither girl said anything as if both of them were building up the courage to say something “I need to tell you something” both girls said at the same time

Maimi smiled at Airi “It's O.K. you go first”

“Thanks” Airi replied standing up and looking at the pond “You remember when we talked about me liking girls?” Airi asked

“Yes, but you're fine with that now aren't you?” Maimi asked, confused at why Airi would bring this topic up

“Yeah I'm fine with it, it's more what I said. It's not that I like girls but rather that I fell in love with one girl, a girl I've been close to for many years, someone who's been there for me for a long time, I just never knew what I felt for then is love”

Maimi began to dare to believe that Airi was talking about her “Airi, who do you mean?” she asked almost to worried to speak

“Miya” Airi said quietly, still looking at the pond “Maimi, I'm in love with Miya”

“Miya?” Maimi asked quietly tears starting to form in her eyes “You love Miya?”

Airi nodded, for some reason she couldn't bring herself to look at Maimi “I-I want your blessings Maimi, I love Miya, but I want you to be happy with it if we ever start dating, I don't want you to be a stranger in my life Maimi, whatever happens”

Maimi wiped the tears from her eyes before getting up from the bench, moving over to where Airi was standing she put a comforting hand on the younger girls shoulder “Airi, I could never be a stranger to you, I will all ways be here for you and-and if you love Miya then I will support you, she's very lucky to have someone special like you love them Airi”

Airi turned around into Maimi's arm's and hugged her “Thank you, I don't think I would have been brave enough to even admit I like her without you by my side, it means a lot to me Maimi, truth be told you mean a lot to me too”

“You mean a lot to me too Airi” Maimi replied returning the hug that Airi was giving her “so much that I will let you go for your happiness” she thought sadly, tears once again beginning to form in her eyes. Maimi was unwilling to let Airi go from the embrace they were in and so the two stayed locked together for some time, if Airi minded she did nothing to complain about it

“We better start heading home” Airi said after a while, finally breaking the hug between them “My parents will start to worry otherwise”

“Yeah lets get you home” Maimi said sadly as they made their way out of the park and of towards Airi's home

The walk to Airi's house was done in silence, a silence that was definitely awkward and not in the least bit comfortable, fortunately for both of them the walk to Airi's house did not take that long so the silence did not have to be suffered for that long, given time to think Airi suddenly remembered that Maimi had something she was going to tell her.

“Maimi, you said earlier that you have something you wanted to tell me, what was it?” she asked

“It doesn't matter Airi, it can wait till another day” Maimi replied quickly, making Airi give her a funny look, to avoid further questions Maimi continued “Go inside quickly, your parents are probably waiting for you”

“O.K. Maimi, goodnight and-and thank-you for tonight” Airi said before hugging Maimi and rushing into the house

“How can I say that I love you after all that you said” Maimi said to herself after Airi's door had closed, tears now flowing freely from her eyes as she could no longer hold her emotions in check, the love of her life loved another, she had failed to tell Airi how she felt and this was the punishment she had to endure “Why does it have to hurt so much” she asked herself as she tearfully made her way home, a final thought crossed her mind about the girl who Airi loved, who she knew must of stolen Airi's heart from her “Damn you Miya!”

After greeting her parents Airi made her way up to her room and laid down on the bed, she was pleased that she had told Maimi about how she liked Miya, it had taken her long enough to do so she thought, but something was bothering her “Why does it feel that I've done something wrong?” she asked herself confused as she readied herself for bed.

Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 14(New) now up!
Post by: Maimi_Yajima on September 06, 2010, 05:43:48 PM
oh...
it´s a chapter sad.. poor maimi.  :cry:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 14(New) now up!
Post by: rndmnwierd on September 06, 2010, 06:03:01 PM
Oh noes! Airi told her feelings to Maimi! :O Poor Maimi!
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 14(New) now up!
Post by: memory on September 06, 2010, 06:14:12 PM
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! :panic:

this can't be happening..... :panic:

Airi told Maimi about her love for Miya first..... :panic:

looks like the conflict will start now..... :banghead:

poor Maimi.... :cry:

she's hurt now.... :cry:

what will happen between her and Miya after this??? :panic:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 14(New) now up!
Post by: abok on September 06, 2010, 06:20:40 PM
Oh god.... :shocked

this can't be good.... :smhid

i hope Maimi will not do anything to Miya.... :panic:

poor Maimi..... :cry:

she think of this as a punishment for her.... :cry:

this chapter is too much sadness..... :cry:



Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 14(New) now up!
Post by: kuro808 on September 07, 2010, 04:41:54 AM
Airi is in love with Miya and now what will happen between her and Miya once she confess to her but Miya is with Captain :panic:

That is how I feel right now
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 14(New) now up!
Post by: dark-atrox on September 07, 2010, 10:05:26 AM
GO KAPPA! :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: ruin the relationship of Miya and Captain! kidding~ :nervous

i like Buono! so, I'm Airi and Miyabi fan..... XD XD XD

Go for the twist :P and make Miya confuse ;) even more with her feelings..... :twothumbs

Everyone can see that Miya has a soft spot for the girl loving Kappa.....ne?  :lol:

oh well, dont kill me (other readers :nervous)
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 14(New) now up!
Post by: kano-chan on September 08, 2010, 12:16:59 AM
Sorry, but yes! :twisted: Poor Maimi, but I really want Miya with Airi. :P

And Maimi better not damn Miya! :cry:

I don't know, but it's still kind of sad. Miya still likes Captain... :(

Don't kill me! :mon curtain:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 14(New) now up!
Post by: ayase909 on September 08, 2010, 02:42:36 PM
i say, go Airi! confess to Miya..... :onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer:

look at this pic:  :bingo:

(http://picroda.jphip.com/hp/jphip03116.jpg)

arent they cute!?  :nya: :nya: :nya:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 15(New) now up!
Post by: oddball on September 15, 2010, 01:21:06 AM
Ha Intresting to see the ractions to chapter 14 half think that is sad that Airi told Maimi that she liked Miya while the other half are glad that she did :nervous all I will say is there are a few more twists to come in this story yet....

P.S. Thanks for all those who posted they are all appriciated, as they were all along the same lines it was easier to make a general response :P

anyhow, enjoy the new chapter....

Chapter 15

The two girls stood in front of the door, they could both hear the chattering coming from the other side of it, perhaps even some of it was about them, both of them knew however that there was no way of knowing for sure until they opened the door and went into the room it lead to.

“Do you think we may get in trouble?” Miya asked the smaller girl standing next to her

“Trouble?, what for?” Saki replied

“Well, you know, for us, being together” Miya said looking at her new girlfriend

Saki smiled at Miya “Would you care if they did?”

Miya laughed quietly at what Saki had said “Probably not no” she said before looking back at the door and letting out a sigh “They're going to know aren't they”

“Yes” Saki said, she did not have to think about the answer, they had all know each other for so long that most of the time they could read each other like books, they would know, if not Momo would of most likely told them by now, Saki smiled at the thought of Momo, she seemed happier than both Miya and Saki now that they were together.

“They-they won't mind will they?” Miya asked nervously, something that Saki noticed

“Worried?” Saki asked, stroking Miya's arm

“I just don't want them to be mean to us, to you” Miya said looking down

“Are you worried they might tease us?” Saki said smiling at Miya, she had never realized how cute Miya could be sometimes “don't worry Miya, I will protect you” she continued to say making Miya smile

“Well if you're going to protect me then I hope they do tease us” Miya replied making Saki roll her eyes in amusement

“Are you ready then?” Saki asked, both girls focus moving back to the door

“Yes” Miya replied, grabbing Saki's hand and holding it in her own

“So what happened to us being discreet then?” Saki was amused by Miya's willingness to show their feelings for each other at work, something they both agreed they should try and avoid if possible.

“As you said they will probably know anyway” Miya replied “I think I would prefer to meet them hand-in-hand with you”

“You say some corny things Miya, you know that don't you?” Saki commented smiling

“Yeah, but I know you really like to hear me say them to you” Miya replied smirking

“True, true” Saki said laughing “It's nice to see you know me so well”

“Well you really should know the girl you like” Miya replied making both Saki and herself blush

“Now your making us both blush” Saki nudged Miya jokingly, who just smiled dumbly back at her “Well lets go in then” she continued and before Miya could reply she opened the door and led them both through it.

All faces in the room looked up at the two people who had just entered the room and burst into applause with the occasional wolf-whistle thrown in for good measure, both girls began to blush again.

“Thanks guys” Saki said giving Miya a hug which got a small chorus of squeals from some of  the girls

“Finally!” Yurina said

“It's about time” Risako added

“Momo, why are you bowing?” Maa asked as the girls attention moved to the smallest berryz

“Well it's thanks to me that Saki and Miya are together so I thought I deserved some of the applause” Momo replied haughtily

“Surely it's more up to them?” Yurina asked

“Yeah, what did you do” Maa said, looking questioningly at Momo

“Annoy us mostly!” Miya replied getting a nudge from Saki and a odd look from Momo

“I got these two to go on a date” Momo replied to all the girls “We all know these two idiots won't of got round to asking each other without a bit of a push!”

“She has a point” Risako commented “I mean, we were all wondering when it was going to happen”

“Exactly” Momo said “I just helped things along a bit”

“Kept on kicking us both more like” Saki said smiling at her friend “but thanks Momo”

“Yeah thanks Momo, I think we both needed it” Miya said patting Momo on the head

“Don't pat me on the head Miya-chin!” Momo pouted at Miya

“And don't call my girlfriend Miya-chin” Saki retorted causing the girls to once again squeal in delight as Miya and Saki turned bright red.

“Aww so cute!” Risako said

“Saki your so sweet” Yurina clapped her hands together in joy

Miya was so relieved in the groups happy acceptance of her and Saki's relationship that she had not realized that one member of the group had not joined in with all the commotion until she noticed her sitting on her own out of the corner of her eye, leaving Saki to talk to the others she headed over to talk to her friend, who Miya could now see had this odd little smile on her face, as if totally bemused by today's events.

“Hey Chii” Miya said snapping her friend out of the little trance she was in

“Oh, hey Miya” Chii replied smiling at her friend “Congratulations by the way”

“Thanks” Miya replied looking down at Chii “So, are you going to tell me what's bothering you?”

“Nothings bothering me Miya, what makes you think that?” Chii replied, less convincingly then she would of liked

“Chii, I've know you for too long, I can tell your bothered by something” Miya said sitting down opposite Chii “So, what's up?”

“Well, it's-it's just weird” Chii replied awkwardly

“Weird?” Miya was confused at what Chii meant

“You and Saki together” Chii explained unable to look at Miya as she did so “It's just a bit, well you know, even though I was expecting it, now that it's happened I, um, can't quite believe that it has”

Miya smiled at her friends odd response “I know what you mean, I feel the same way, it all feels a bit unreal to me” Miya looked at Chii “But that's not what's really bothering you is it?”

“N-No” Chii said quietly “You-you won't forget me will you Miya?”

“Chii, what on Earth do you mean?” Miya asked

“It's just that, now your with Saki and all, and I know this is a bit selfish but I-I'm just worried you will spend more and more time with Saki and less with the rest of us, less with me” Chii answered looking at the floor “Sorry, this all probably sounds silly to you”

Miya grabbed hold of Chii's hands “Chii how can I forget you, and the others?” can't you see you mean a lot to me as well? I will all ways spend time with you, whatever happens”

“Thank you Miya” Chii replied looking a lot happier “I happy to hear you say that, it-it means a lot to me”

Miya stood up “No worries, just remember that I'm all ways here for you” she said giving Chii a reassuring squeeze on the shoulder “Right” she said to the room in general “lets go get some lunch!”

All the girls chorused their agreement and soon had grabbed their things and headed out towards the lunch hall, Chii, looking a lot happier now, walked in front of Miya and Saki(who were hanging slightly back from the rest of the group) talking to Yurina.

“What were you and Chii talking about?” Saki asked Miya when they were out of hearing range of the others

“Hmm, oh she was just a bit worried that I wouldn't spend much time with her now that we're together”

“I don't think I could split you and Chii up, I don't think I hear the end of it!” Saki said happily at Miya “If you could find some time for me that would be nice, I mean I am your girlfriend after all” she continued jokingly making both herself and Miya laugh.

Chii turned round to the sound of laughter, looking at Miya and Saki, happy in each others company.

“It's nice to see them together finally isn't it Chii?” Yurina commented, she had also turned round to the sound of the laughter

“Yeah it is” Chii replied smiling at Yurina “Come on lets leave them too it”

“I wish we could be like that one day Chii” Yurina thought to herself as she carried on down the corridor next to the girl she liked

Chii was also deep in thought as she carried on down the corridor leaving Miya and Saki behind in their own little world, she raised her hand to her heart, it had been beating fast, just as it had when Miya came over to her house before her date with Saki, it beat especially fat when Miya held her hand, it was almost if she...

“No I Couldn't” she said out loud

“Hmm, couldn't what?” Yurina asked hearing what had been said

“Nothing Yurina, sorry I was just thinking out loud” Chii apologized quickly as Yurina gave her a funny look. Chii took a deep breath realizing how close she had been to saying out loud what she was thinking

“I can't love Miya....Can I?” 
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 15(New) now up!
Post by: dark-atrox on September 15, 2010, 06:22:01 AM
Lol... :lol: i really like how the girls are pinnng over Miya!  :twothumbs

how about making a story where all the berryz after Miya.....that would be amusing! XD

Like a story about Momusu, they're pinning over their leader.... :rofl:

I still say.....GO Airi,  :cow: i want to see her confess to Miya.... :yep:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 15(New) now up!
Post by: rndmnwierd on September 15, 2010, 06:32:17 AM
Poor Chinami, she doesn't even realize Yurina is waiting for her right beside her. It's getting crazy now. XD Though, I'm super glad for MiyaSaki!
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 15(New) now up!
Post by: ayase909 on September 15, 2010, 06:48:22 AM
seems like happy MiyaSaki couple.... :on freeza: :on freeza: :on freeza:

poor chii though :bigdeal:......can't blame her, Miya's chou kakkoi! :onionwhip: :onionwhip: :onionwhip:

i agree with kano-chan :glasses:...as much as i like Maimi, she shouldn't make any drastic actions that might hurt Miya.... :smoke:

nice.....(though im not a SakiMiya fan! :on ksweat:)
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 15(New) now up!
Post by: kano-chan on September 15, 2010, 07:22:29 AM
Uh oh....what's going to happen now? MiyaSaki seems to be getting closer and closer. :mon unsure:  XD

Poor Chii...I hope Miya would know about her feelings, but create no chance for it. :wth Is that evil? :twisted:

Yes, Airi should go and confess. :twothumbs But before that happens, Miya should fall for her at least a little or something. :gmon bang: Cuz' what if she rejects???! :mon scare:

But oh noes, cuz' then Captain would be so damn hurt. :mon hanky: But I think she'll be fine cuz' she's got Maimi. :mon misch:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 15(New) now up!
Post by: kuro808 on September 15, 2010, 09:05:44 AM
Yeah the more complex it gets when everyone wants Miya and yet others get hurt along the way, sigh

anyways, I guess its just a way to make it happen for MiyaSaki
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 15(New) now up!
Post by: badsaints on September 15, 2010, 05:52:08 PM
I didn't realised I missed chapter 14 :kneelbow:

Phew...while I'm happy for MiyaSaki, I can't help but feel bad for Airi & Chii :( Oh the problem of being Ms Popular :P Plus Maimiiiiiiiiiii!!!! :cry:

Why do I get the feeling it will not be smooth sailing all the way for this Berryz couple? :panic:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 15(New) now up!
Post by: abok on September 15, 2010, 07:01:34 PM
Yurina's in love with Chii!!! :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: just like i hope for.... :on woohoo: :on woohoo: :on woohoo:

but Chii's in love with Miya..... :depressed: :depressed: :depressed: not what i hope for.... :tantrum: :tantrum: :tantrum:

looks like it's going to be a tough road for Miya and Captain..... :sweat: :sweat: :sweat:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 15(New) now up!
Post by: memory on September 17, 2010, 07:43:44 PM
Miya and Saki in trouble!!! :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated:

too many person love Miya!!!! first Airi and now Chii??? :scared: :scared: poor Maimi and Yurina....  :fainted: :fainted: :fainted:
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 15(New) now up!
Post by: oddball on September 29, 2010, 05:38:40 PM
Well it felt like as though it has taken me forver to get this chapter done, due to a mixture of me re-writing a bit of it and also be major busy at the moment, should be able to get them out a bit more regulary for a while now so hopefully there will be another chapter early next week as well!

@dark-atrox: Yeah Miya does seem popular  XD I suppose it's like real life however not all the pairings fall so easily into place.....

@rndmnwierd: I know, It didn't look like it would get as crazy as this when I first started to write this  :lol:  Yeah poor Chii, her mind is elsewhere at the moment, she and Yurina arn't done yet however.

@ayase909: You're in the Miya/Airi camp then?  :lol: this chapter will show you a bit of how Maimi is feeling.....

@kano-chan: Sorry but you may have to keep guessing for a while, don't want to give to much away do I?  :? It's fair to say that Chii is definatly a bit confused at the moment however....

@kurosawa87: Don't forget that it may also get tough for Miya! You are right however, things are definatly getting more and more complex!  :panic:

@badsaints: no worries about missing chap. 14, I do it all the time as well :doh:, Which berryz couple do you mean.... dun, dun, duuunnnnn!  :P  :panic:

@abok: I though you might be glad at Yurina/Chii  :D as for Miya and Captain, we will just have to see won't we....

@memory: yep you're right, too many people love Miya, I think it's safe to tell you that not all will be plain sailing.....

Thanks for the comments as allways guy, I really do appreciate it (I'm getting a few more noe as well which makes me happy!  :grin: ) Here is chapter 16 for you....

Chapter 16

Maimi had never noticed it before but Airi did act differently around Miya then with anyone else, perhaps it was because Airi had told her about liking Miya or perhaps it was because Maimi had never really looked for it before but there were things Airi did around Miya that she didn't do with anyone else, it wasn't massive changes just little things like leaning further in then she needed to when talking to Miya or playing absently with Miya's hair, Maimi wondered how she had missed these things in a girl she claimed to know so well, perhaps, she thought, her feelings for Airi made her not see them.

Maimi stabbed angrily at her food with her chopsticks , she was sitting on a table alone in the food hall,  there had been room on the table with Airi, Miya and the others but Maimi felt as though she couldn't face sitting with either of the two girls at the moment, she reflected on the mixed blessing that both girls were at Buono practice today.

Maimi's attention moved to the girl sitting the other side of Miya, Maimi wondered if Saki knew anything of Airi's feelings towards Miya, to her credit, Airi never flouted the fact that she liked Miya, in fact Maimi guessed that she was the only person Airi had told about liking Miya, including the girl in question, perhaps Saki saw nothing to be worried about, especially because she knew how close Miya and Airi were and the fact that she was unaware that Airi like her girlfriend, beside at this current moment in time Saki's attention had been taken by JunJun who was entertaining the others sat around the table with a story which seemed to involve a lot of Jun's food flying in random directions around the hall.

“Maimi, what's the matter?”

Maimi looked round to see that Nakky had sat next to her on the table, a concerned look on her face

“Why do you think something is wrong Nakky?” Maimi asked wondering how much her friend and fellow C-ute member could read into the situation

“Well you've been stabbing your food for a good few minuets now so I just thought that something must be bothering you, well that and the fact you're sitting on your own, I mean usually you would sit with Airi, Miya, Saki and the others” Maimi looked at Nakky and wondered if the girl had all ways been this astute or if she had just recently picked it up

“I just felt like sitting on a quieter table today that's all” Maimi replied grumpily

Nakky looked at Maimi for a few moments, wondering if she should continue to quiz her leader about her sour mood, looking at the expression currently on Maimi's face she decided against continuing with her investigations

“Well I'm glad you sat on a different table today” Nakky said cheerfully

“Glad?” Maimi had no idea why Nakky would be glad about this

“I like sitting with you” Nakky replied before quickly moving on, like she had said something she had not meant to “Besides, however much fun it is to sit with our two love-birds over there” Nakky said pointing to where Chisa and Mai were sitting on a table in the corner of the room alone “It's quite nice to get away from them every once in a while, all they ever do at lunch is feed each other and giggle a lot!”

Maimi looked round to where her two band-mates were sitting “I didn't know you could feed each other with your tongues” she said raising an eyebrow

“What?” Nakky turned round too see what Maimi was talking about “Oh God! Don't they know other people are trying to eat!”

“Looks like they're both eating something as well”

“Maimi that's gross!” Nakky exclaimed as Maimi laughed at the expression on Nakky face.

“Sorry, Sorry” Maimi apologized still chuckling to herself as she started to eat some of her food.

Both girls ate in silence for a while, Maimi must admit that she had cheered up slightly after talking to Nakky, it had made her forget about Airi, if only for a little while, she was still grateful to Nakky for the distraction.

Nakky suddenly put her spoon down in her bowl of Curry and looked at her friend “Maimi, do-do you like Airi?”

Maimi paused, placing her chopsticks on the side of her plate before looking at Nakky, who could not meet Maimi's gaze “What make you think that?” she asked cautiously

“You just seem to be happier when your with her, like your World is a better place because of it” Nakky said simply.

A sudden anger started to rise up inside Maimi, why did Nakky feel as though she should get involved, why should she care about who she loved, why should she care that Maimi's heart had been broken by the very girl she was now discussing, why should she care that Airi loved Miya and not her, even though Miya had done nothing to deserve her love.

“Why should I tell you, it's none of you business!” Maimi said angrily before storming out of the hall

Nakky sighed as she watched Maimi leave “So Airi does have something to do with it” she said quietly before continuing with her meal “I wonder if she knows”

Maimi's angry display had not gone totally unnoticed in the hall “What's up with Maimi lately?” Miya asked no-one in particular

“Hmm, sorry?” Saki asked, overhearing what Miya had said

“Well, don't you think Maimi has been acting a bit, well, odd recently?”

Saki nodded “Yeah, something bothering her for sure, I wonder if it's got something to do with Airi” Saki indicated to the girl sitting the other side of Miya who was deep in conversation with Momo “I think she's been a bit off recently as well”

“I dunno about Airi, but something is defiantly bothering Maimi and I'm going to find out, if it's something to do with Airi I'm sure she will tell me”

“Just go careful” Saki warned Miya “I don't think it would be good to get on her wrong side at the moment”

“I'm her friend, I wouldn't do anything to make her upset” Miya said starting to clean away her plates

“Leave it” Saki said “go after her now, I'll clear this all up and catch up with you”

“Thanks” Miya rubbed Saki's shoulder before rushing off to catch up with Maimi

“Saki, where's Miya going?” Saki turned round to see a concerned looking Airi, who had obviously noticed Miya rush off and was worried about her friends sudden exit.

“She remembered she had to see out manger about something” Saki lied, it did the trick however as Airi nodded gratefully at the explanation and went back to talking to Momo “Sorry Airi” Saki thought to herself as she cleaned the plated away “But you may be the cause of this problem and I don't want you to get involved”

Maimi had calmed down considerably since she has left the food hall, she felt guilt that she had gotten angry at Nakky, she was only trying to be nice and Maimi knew she would have to apologize to her friend, deciding like there was no time like the present she turned around to see the one girl she didn't want to coming strait towards her.

“Maimi, good I found you” Miya greeted her friend smiling

“Well done You!” Maimi replied sarcastically

Maimi frowned at her friends rude response “Maimi what's wrong with you, you've been acting really weird the last couple of days”

“You damn well know what's wrong with me!” Maimi shouted her anger suddenly flaring up again

“I-I don't know what your talking about Maimi” Miya responded, taken aback by Maimi angry outburst

“Don't lie to me!” Maimi shouted as she pushed Miya, who, not expecting the attack, fell to the floor

“Ow! Maimi what the hell!?” Miya shouted her own anger rising

“I'll tell you what's wrong with me you slut!” Maimi shouted angrily, rushing over to Miya and dragging her to her feet using her shirt collar

“That's enough you two!” A voice shouted before dragging the two girls apart, both girls looked down into the face of an an angry looking Reina

“Miya!” another voice shouted “Maimi what are you doing?” Saki had appeared to see the end of the fight and now rushed over to Miya who was standing still in shock.

“Go home Maimi and cool down” Reina ordered Maimi, who paused as if tempted to take on the Yankii of Morning Musume but walked away instead, after she gave one final glare towards Miya.

Reina watched Maimi leave before turning to talk to Miya and Saki “What was all that about? I swear buy the look of thing Maimi was trying to take the role of Yankii away from me!”

“We-we don't really know Tanaka-san” Saki replied, Miya was still to shocked to speak

“Well you better find out soon, I don't think anybody wants a pissed of Maimi walking around for to long do we?” Reina said before taking her leave “Oh congrats you two by the way” she winked at the two Berryz before continuing.

Saki watched Reina leave “How on Earth does Reina know about us?” Saki shook her head at Morning Musume member “Something must really be bothering Maimi for her to act like that, right Miya?.....Miya?”

Instead of answering Miya had broken down into tears “Saki, I-I don't know what I've done wrong, Maimi's really angry at me and I can't figure out why, I must really of hurt her somehow!”

Saki rushed over to her girlfriend and hugged her “It's O.K. Miya, she just really upset about something, not at you, I'm sure she will regret it and apologize” She better apologize or there will be trouble, Saki thought to herself

“Saki, you-you don't think I'm a, a slut do you?” Miya asked quietly through the tears

“Don't be silly of course your not, Maimi was just taking her anger out on you by saying nasty things that she didn't mean” Saki soothed Miya by stroking her back

“But I can't help her, I want to help but I don't know how” Miya said, still crying

Saki just clung onto Miya for a while successfully calming her down before continuing their conversation “Why not ask Airi?”

“A-Airi?” Miya asked wiping tears from her eyes

“She may know what's bother Maimi, it's worth a try at least” explained Saki

“You may be right, we'll see her tomorrow” Miya said, who had stopped crying and regained some composure

“No, not we, just you” Saki said looking at the confused look on Miya's face she continued “She seems a lot more open when she is just with you, I don't know if it will be the same if I am there so I think you should go on your own”

“As long as your sure?” Miya said and Saki nodded in response “Lets get out of here” Miya said and the two walked away hand in hand

Saki looked up at Miya and hoped that this problem would all go away soon and things could get back to normal, she couldn't shake the feeling that Airi had something to do with Maimi's mood and she hoped that Miya could get Airi to tell her what exactly was bothering their friend. Saki was confident that Miya could persuade the younger girl to tell her what was on her mind, whatever that may be, perhaps, Saki thought, all Miya and Airi needed was some time alone.






Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 16(New) now up!
Post by: rndmnwierd on September 29, 2010, 05:55:06 PM
Poor Maimi, usually so sweet, guess she just can't find any other way to deal. On a brighter note, I so wanna see her try to take on Reina. I know Maimi towers over her, so I think it  would be hilarious to see Reina win.
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 16(New) now up!
Post by: kuro808 on September 30, 2010, 02:16:03 AM
Hmm Maimi is really bothered by Airi being in love with Miya and Miya gets the grunt of the damage and the only way is to have Reina to straighten her out, perfect chapter
Title: Re: The last place you look.... chapter 16(New) now up!
Post by: ayase909 on September 30, 2010, 09:10:22 AM
yo! author-san  :whistle:..... to answer your question, yes, Im  from the Miya-Airi camp!  :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: abosulutely.... :bingo:

First....you seemed you made Miya a wimp here  :on freeze:, just broke down and cried :on speedy:....i know she just wants to be a good friend to Maimi :on cny1: and let the other girl express her anger  :on shady:......demo  :farofflook:, demo  :farofflook:, its Miya-sama yo! she's the epitome of coolness :onionwhip: :onionwhip: :onionwhip: and yankii-ness :on cigar: :on cigar: :on cigar:....LOL

anyway! i hope Nakky could be a help to Maimi too... :glasses: :glasses: :glasses:

For the next chapter Im hoping to read some confessions from Airi to Miya.... :shifty: :shifty: :shifty:

This would make the situation more 'interesting' :hehehe: and I hope if Airi will confess, Miya shouldn't just brushed off the girl's feelings :err: :err: :err:....i really hope she wouldn't! :on chew: :on chew: :on chew:

Well, this is  a nice update author-san!  :on GJ: :on GJ: :on GJ:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 16(New) now up!(Used to be the last place you look)
Post by: oddball on September 30, 2010, 05:19:46 PM
Thanks for the replys guys I will get round to answering them but this post is to announce, as you would probably have allready seen, the name change of this fic!  :?  :O  Originally my story was gonna work out different then what it is now going to do, leaving the old title of the Fic looking a bit silly and not really much to do with the story anymore so I decided it would be best re-name the story to ...........

Mixed emotions!  :o  Which makes alot more sense to the story now, apologies for any confusion  :panic:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 16(New) now up!(Used to be the last place you look)
Post by: abok on September 30, 2010, 06:23:31 PM
Poor Maimi.... :fainted: :fainted: :fainted: Poor Miyabi..... :fainted: :fainted: :fainted:

Looks like Maimi could not handle this situation very well considering that she called Miya "slut"..... :err: :err: :err: Her heart was so crushed that she could not think right anymore.... :on cloudeye: :on cloudeye: :on cloudeye:

i really hope that Airi will confess to Miya too... :sweat: :sweat: :sweat: Cause at least Miya will know the reason for Maimi's anger and maybe she and Saki could think of something... :smoke: :smoke: :smoke:

so you change the tittle??? :glasses: :glasses: I think that this new title is really suitable for your story too.... :on GJ: :on GJ: :on GJ:

great chapter oddball-san....  :on GJ: :on GJ: :on GJ:

Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 16(New) now up!(Used to be the last place you look)
Post by: memory on October 01, 2010, 09:21:41 PM
oh no!!! :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated:

maimi hates miya now!!! :depressed: :depressed: :depressed:

thank good that reina was there to stop maimi from doing something that she might regret later.... :sweat: :sweat: :sweat:

i agree with abok-chan and ayase too.... i hope airi will confess and maybe miya can think of something to clear things up..... :err: :err: :err:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 16(New) now up!(Used to be the last place you look)
Post by: kano-chan on October 03, 2010, 08:52:21 AM
Oh, Maimi, how dare you? :angry: She called Miya a "slut" and was about to hurt her! :mon fire:

It's not Miya's fault and she knows that! :mon pissed:

Miya's got coolness, but she ain't yankii. 8)2 She's Kawaii. :wub: Don't cry Miya, it's okay!  :cry:

Airi would probably figure it out. :roll: She couldn't be THAT dense. :huhuh
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 16(New) now up!(Used to be the last place you look)
Post by: oddball on October 08, 2010, 04:35:30 PM
Thanks for all th posts guys !!! yet again the new chapter is up later then I sid it would be so sorry about that!  :doh:

@Rndmn: A Reina vs Maimi battle, hmm intresting.....

@Kuro: Yeah Miami just isn't sure how to deal with Airi liking Miya so she acts stupidly, I just had to get a Reina cameo in somewhere, she may even come back at a certain point!

@Ayase: Well it's pretty obvious who your cheering for  :lol: Miya is not a wimp here, she is just totally shocked that Maimi is suddenly super pissed at her and seems to hate her when Miya just dosn't know why...

@Abok: Thanks very much, yeah poor Maimi it must be hard for her to come to terms with it all, especially because Maimi belives that Miy has betryed her in some way, It's also har for Miya as she is not sure why one of her best friends is really upset at her!

@Memory: Hmm hate is such a strong word, I do fear that Miya and Maimi may have to have a confrontation at some point!  :panic:

@Kano: Yeah Miya got it pretty rough in this chapter! Airi is not dense just innocent....

enjoy chapter 17 guys....

Chapter 17

“So tell me again why I'm here?” Miya asked the small, hyper girl opposite her

“This is a planning meeting to get two lovesick girls together  involving you and me, the Match-maker General of Hello! Project”

“Match-maker General? Seriously Momo what are you talking about?”

“Well I got you and Saki together didn't I?”

“No, you forced us to get a coffee together which is something we probably would of done anyway!”

“Which led to......”

“Momo, are you really suggesting that you are some sort of cupid because you got me and Saki to got have a coffee, which as I have all ready said, we would of done anyway, and that this single thing started a chain of events which led to me and Saki to start dating?”

“Nice to see you finally get it Miya” Momo said  smiling at her friend

Miya looked at the honest expression on Momo's face and decided that she would not be able to argue Momo out of her convictions and so gave the argument up.


“Fine” Miya sighed “Who are you talking about getting together?”

Momo gave Miya a surprised look “Why, Chii and Yurina of course”

“Chii and Yurina!?”

Momo rolled her eye's “Seriously Miya, I know you and Saki have been of in your own little world recently but surely you have noticed that Yurina has been like a love-sick puppy around Chii recently”

Miya gave Momo a blank look, she had no idea what Momo was talking about, perhaps the girl did have some special dating powers, Miya thought to herself.

“Well, if you haven't noticed anything in Yurina than surely you have noticed that Chii has been acting weird?” Momo asked

“Yeah, ever since me and Saki started dating” Miya agreed “I wondered if it had anything to do with us being together or something”

“Why do you think that” asked Momo

“I dunno, she's just been, different around me compared to what she usually is, we still talk loads and stuff, it just seems as though she's really disappointed about something”

“It's probably because she wants to be with Yurina like you are with Saki” Momo said quickly “Now, back to our plan”

“Don't force it Momo, Chii and Yurina aren't like, well, me and Saki I suppose, they will get round to it themselves when the time is right if there is anything between them”

“But....” Momo started before Miya cut her off

“No plots Momo!” she scolded the smallest Berryz “I will have a chat with Chii about it and see what she says, if she's not interested however I will leave it there!”

“Fine” Momo said sulkily “You won't mind if I talk to Yurina then will you?”

“Just don't get her to do something daft or force her into anything” Miya warned

“I won't” Momo promised “You trust me right?”

“Course I do Momo, you are my friend you know” Miya replied smiling as Momo beamed back at her “Now, I gotta go find Airi”

“Ehh! Airi! Why?” Momo asked surprised

“Well I wanted to spend a day out with her to talk to her about what's wrong with Maimi of course, Saki said it would be better if I spoke to her alone” Miya replied, confused at Momo's surprised response

“Oh yeah, right, you really don't know what's up with Maimi?” Momo asked sounding relieved

“No, we were hoping Airi may know, Saki said she tends to be more open when I'm around” Miya was still confused about Momo behaviour since they had started to talk about Airi and so decided to ask Momo a question “Why are you acting weird since I mentioned Airi Momo? Is there a reason I shouldn't see her or something?”

“No, no, no!” Momo replied quickly “It's just that, well, I think Airi has something that she perhaps hasn't told anyone herself, it just worries me what it may be, that's all”

Miya laughed at Momo concern “Don't worry Momo, if something is bothering Airi, she will tell me” she said grabbing her things “See you around Momo”

“That's what I'm worried about” Momo said quietly as she watched Miya leave the room

Miya found Airi in the C-ute dressing room, she new that going there may mean that she might have to see Maimi but she felt that even though Maimi might still be mad, she probably wouldn't try and attack Miya again, fortunately, she had passed by Nakky on the way over and she informed Miya that Maimi had the day off, much to Miya's relief, even if she would not admit it.

“Hey Airi” Miya said opening the door to the dressing room and looking around “No one else in?”

“Miya!” Airi said happily running over to the berryz member and giving her a hug “It's good to see you!”

Miya laughed at Air's reactions to meeting her “You are all ways happy to see me aren't you?” she said hugging Airi back before sitting down on a couch.

“Sorry” Airi said sadly, sitting down next to Miya “It must be weird for you to have me hug you all the time and stuff”

Miya put her arm round Airi's shoulders “No, I really like it, it's nice knowing someone is all ways that happy to see you”

Airi smiled and rested her head on Miya's shoulder “We haven't spent much time together recently have we?” she asked Miya

“Funnily enough that's kinda why I'm here” Miya said as Airi lifted her head of Miya's shoulder, giving the girl her full attention “You see Airi, I've got the day of tomorrow and I got told that you had it off as well so I was wondering if you would perhaps like to spend the day with me?” Miya asked, she wondered why she felt so nervous, it's not like she's asking Airi out on a date or anything, she thought to herself.

“Miya, I'd love too” Airi said clapping her hands “It’s been ages since we spent the day together”

“Good, well, I will see you in the morning then, I'll get you from your house at say ten in the morning?”

“Sounds good” Airi replied smiling at Miya

“Super, well I gotta go, I've got dance practice soon!” Miya said giving Airi a final hug “I'll see you tomorrow O.K.?”

Airi hugged Miya back so tightly that she felt as though she was being crushed “Thank you Miya, I'm so happy that you can spend some time with me”

“I'm happy to spend some time with you too Airi” Miya replied prising herself out of Airi's grasp “See you around”

Miya left the dressing room and walked down the the corridor with a smile on her face, there was something about being with Airi that just made her smile and she was truly looking forward to spending the day with her tomorrow, she also knew that because she would have a fun day with Airi tomorrow it would be just that bit easier to get through dance practice. Miya also felt nervous about having to talk to Airi about Maimi's problems, she hoped that Airi would be able to tell her why Maimi seemed to be so angry at her, Saki had said that  Maimi wasn't angry at her, just that Miya was in the wrong place at the wrong time but Miya new different,she knew Maimi well enough to know that she would be that angry with a random person, she knew that Maimi was angry with her, she just hoped that soon, perhaps with Airi's help, she would be able to find out why.

Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 17 now up!(Used to be the last place you look)
Post by: kuro808 on October 08, 2010, 07:28:55 PM
I wonder what would happen if Momo did put Chii and Yurina together..... :nervous  I guess this is going to be a good way to know, good job for this chapter
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 17 now up!(Used to be the last place you look)
Post by: rndmnwierd on October 08, 2010, 11:25:58 PM
Oh man, why do I have a bad feeling about the MiyAiri interactions? Remember Saki! Remember! :panic:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 17 now up!(Used to be the last place you look)
Post by: kano-chan on October 10, 2010, 07:57:35 AM
Omg... Sounds to me like Miya might like Airi too. Captain... I don't want anyone to get hurt. :( And then there's Chii and Yurina. Gahh! :banghead: I hope everything goes well!
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 17 now up!(Used to be the last place you look)
Post by: abok on October 10, 2010, 07:58:59 PM
matchmaker Momo is on the move again!!!! :wriggly: :wriggly: and this time, it's Chii and Yurina!!!! :ding: :ding: :ding:

i've got a bad feeling about Miya's opinion towards Airi.... :err: :err:

please don't make Miya fall in love with Airi too..... :frustrated: :frustrated: please don't crush Captain's heart..... :fainted: :fainted: :fainted:

i really hope Momo will succeed with her mission to make Yurina and Chii a couple..... :sweat: :sweat: at least one problem will be solve.... :depressed: :depressed: :depressed:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 17 now up!(Used to be the last place you look)
Post by: badsaints on October 15, 2010, 08:33:07 AM
There's this nagging feeling that tells me the MiyaAiri date will only create more drama surrounding Miya. Its hard being Ms Popular :lol:

On side note, fuuu...matchmaker Momo XD
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 18 now up!(Used to be the last place you look)
Post by: oddball on October 20, 2010, 04:23:15 PM
Right Finally got the new chapter here for you guys!!!

@Kuro: Yes Momo's new 'mission' will start in this chapter....

@rndmnweird: And we are getting ever closer to Miya and Airi having their day out together......

@kano-chan: yes I think Gahh! :banghead: sums things up pretty well at the moment  :lol: all I will say is that you cant make the omlette without breaking a few eggs....

@Abok: Yes Momo has decided on her new plan of action, quite why she is doing this may become apparent later on, the question is will her efforts all be in vain or not???

@badsaints: Yep you gotta love Momo  :lol: Your right, it is hard being ms popular but then that's life sometimes.....

Chapter 18

Chii stretched herself out as she left the dance studio, she and Yurina were the last two to leave, for some reason Momo had talked to both her and Yurina till the others had left before she herself had rushed out of the room leaving the two of them alone. Chii looked up at the girl walking next to her, she had gotten a lot closer to Yurina recently, never realizing how much she actually enjoyed being in the older girls company, Chii reflected, with a degree of sadness, that Miya was the one responsible for her deeper friendship with Yurina, she was sure that Miya spent as much time with her as she could but, now that Miya was with Saki, more of their free time was taken up together, time that Chii and Miya would of spent together in the past leaving Chii to spend more of her free time with others. Not once had Chii thought to put any fault on this situation on Saki, she knew that it was no fault of her Captain but Chii had taken to wondering recently that if she could of gotten get her feelings for Miya sorted out sooner then perhaps, if she did indeed love her, things would have been different.

“Hello, Chii you still with us?”

“Huh?, What?”

“Geez, you must have been in deep thought” Yurina replied giggling “You looked like you were sleep-walking or something”

“I was thinking about Miya and Captain” Chii said “I dunno it's still a bit weird for me” Chii was surprised at how easily she admitted what she was thinking about to Yurina, there was just something about the girl that made Chii want to be honest with her.

“Is it because you miss spending as much time as you used to with Miya?”

“What makes you say that?” Chii asked cautiously, afraid that Yurina may have figured out her confused feelings towards Miya

“Because you've been different since Miya and Captain started going out, I just figured that because you and Miya are so close that it must be something to do with missing her a bit”

“I suppose I do miss her a bit” Chii admitted “It's like I would ring her up to do something and in the past she would all ways say yes but now, she's usually with Captain in stead”

“They have just started going out Chii, of course they are going to spend lots of time together and it's not as though she ignoring you or anything but you know, if you ever need someone for anything or just someone to hang out with I-I'm all ways here for you, if you need me” Yurina blushed slightly after she had finished talking, to her immense relief Chii did not notice

Chii was smiling however when she replied “Well if you're all ways around for me then lets go watch a movie, there's one on I want to see and I was going to go with Miya but she's busy tonight so, if your not busy, would you like to come with me?”

“I-I'd love to” Yurina replied nervously, a happy smile on her face “Just let me grab my things and I will be with you”

O.K. I'll wait in our room” Chii said as Yurina nodded and headed off down the corridor

Chii made it to the Berryz's room a couple of minuets later and sat down on a sofa and setted into waiting for Yurina, she was oddly surprised at how happy she was that Yurina had said yes to going to the movies with her, she wondered if she should of mentioned Miya but Yurina seemed not to mind and Chii was keen if possible, not to bring the topic up again, besides she and Yurina were only friends.

“Chii? What are you doing here, I thought you had gone home?”

“Captain?” Chii said standing up “Sorry I was waiting for Yurina”

“There's no need to be sorry silly” Saki said sitting down on the sofa, getting Chii to sit down with her in the process “So Yurina Eh?” she said, nudging Chii

“It's nothing like that, we're just friends besides we're only going to see a movie” Chii replied defensively

“I'm not sure friends blush that much”

“What do you mean?”

“Well” Saki said looking slyly at Chii “I walked past Yurina on the way here and she was as red in the face as a tomato, I wondered why but now I know”

“L-Look it's probably because she was warm or something”

“Warm?, more like hot under the collar!”

“Captain don't tease!” Chii pouted but seeing her leader giggling showed her that Saki was only joking around “Meanie!” she pouted once again causing both girls to giggle this time, after it had died down both girls took a moment to catch their breath.

“Saki, can I ask you a question?” Chii said, using her Captain's name, something she had not done in a while

“Sure, what is it?” Saki asked aware that Chii had used her name, realizing it must be something important

“Why did you break up with me?”

It was a question that Saki had know that one day she would have to answer truthfully but had all ways been worried about doing so, especially because of the answer she would give. It was there secret, and Momo's eventually as well, the only 3 people to know that once upon a time she and Chii had dated. Saki had really liked Chii, the girls happy, care-free attitude had attracted the attention of the more Serious, caring personality that Saki possessed herself, Chii, she all ways said, made her smile, truth be told she still did . Saki had truly enjoyed her time with Chii but to Saki something just felt as though it was missing, like there was a missing piece in the jigsaw puzzle that was their relationship

Sometimes Saki wondered if she would be happier if she had stayed with Chii, she was unwilling enough at first to ask Miya out because of it and Saki still wasn't sure she had fully gotten rid of her feelings for the girl sitting beside her but through all their time together Saki, though happy, felt as though what she felt wasn't true love, something she felt as though she may of found with Miya. Momo had said that Chii had moved on, it seems that she had too with Yurina and Saki was glad, she now felt less guilty dating Miya because she now knew that Chii had someone else as well.

Saki had yet to tell Miya of her and Chii's relationship, she knew she would have to one day but the girl was so involved in both her and Chii's life and had been for many years, including when they were dating, that she wasn't quite sure what the best way would be to tell her, she was even involved in the reasons why Saki broke up with Chii, though that was no fault of her own.

“I told you when we broke up didn't I?” Saki said, still holding onto half a hope that she may avoid the real reason

“I mean the real reason Saki” Chii replied “I'm fine with knowing, it's all in the past between us now anyway”

Saki sighed before answering “It seems such a stupid reason now but.... well, I though that you and Miya loved each other”

“In love with Miya!?” Chii asked, stunned by Saki's answer

Saki nodded “ It seems silly now but at the time you two were so close and I was young and foolish and I suppose I was a bit jealous of you two as well, I have learnt that you and Miya are just really good friends, something I did not see back then but after we broke up, me and Miya started getting closer and in the end I fell for her”

“I think perhaps it was more than just me and Miya” Chii said after a while “I think perhaps we both figured out that, all though it was good, it didn't quite feel right... I don't mean that I regret going out with you Saki, don't ever think that!”

“I have never regretted it either” Saki said smiling at Chii “Besides it's not as if we aren't friends now is it?”

“Yeah, good friends” Chii replied giving Saki a hug “Thank you for telling me”

“Truth be told I should have told you a long time ago, I'm sorry”

“Hey no regrets remember” Chii said making Saki smile

The door to the room swung open and both girls looked to see who had interrupted their talk “Chii, I'm ready to go..... Oh, hello Captain”

“Hello Yurina” Saki replied before turning to Chii “Well off you go then!”

“Do you want to come too Captain?” Yurina asked politely

“No thank you Yurina, I'm out with Miya tonight”

 “Don't get too lovey-dovey” Yurina joked making Saki blush

“Come on Yurina lets go” Chii said getting up from the couch and heading towards the door with Yurina “see you around Saki”

“Bye” Saki waved cheerfully at the two girls as they left the room

“What where you talking to Saki about?” Yurina asked as they walked down the corridor, she asked not out of jealousy but curiousness

“Oh, about her and Miya”

“Do you feel any better about it now?” Yurina asked, remembering her conversation with Chii earlier

“Yeah a bit” Chii replied “I suppose you could say I learned something interesting”

“Interesting?”

Chii laughed at the enquiring look on Yurina's face and tapped her nose “It's a secret” she said mysteriously

“I want to know what it is” Yurina pouted giving Chii a pleading look

“Don't give me puppy-dog eyes” Chii said giving Yurina a mock telling-off “Maybe I will tell you after the movie”

“Well then lets go!” Yurina said grabbing Chii by the hand and dragging her towards the exit of the building

Chii smiled at Yurina's excited response “I'm sorry Yurina but I can't tell you yet” she thought to herself sadly” How can I tell you that Saki may have figured out long ago something that I am perhaps too afraid to admit myself, the fact that I am in love with Miya!”
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 18 now up!(Used to be the last place you look)
Post by: kuro808 on October 20, 2010, 08:47:31 PM
So Saki and Chii used to date and thought Chii and Miya liked each other, and when she realized it wasn't the case, she asked Miya, and I guess the Yurina and Chinami relationship is going to blossom :)
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 18 now up!(Used to be the last place you look)
Post by: XcuteX26262X on October 20, 2010, 09:12:12 PM
An update!!!
Sorry for being a silent reader, I just don't like commenting (because my English sucks!) but today, i'm going to be brave and post my first comment on this fic...
I really like this story, it's so interesting.
--
Quote
“They have just started going out Chii, of course they are going to spend lots of time together and it's not as though she ignoring you or anything but you know, if you ever need someone for anything or just someone to hang out with I-I'm all ways here for you, if you need me” Yurina blushed slightly after she had finished talking, to her immense relief Chii did not notice
:wriggly:

Quote
“I'm not sure friends blush that much”

“What do you mean?”

“Well” Saki said looking slyly at Chii “I walked past Yurina on the way here and she was as red in the face as a tomato, I wondered why but now I know”

“L-Look it's probably because she was warm or something”

“Warm?, more like hot under the collar!”
hehehe


Quote
“I told you when we broke up didn't I?” Saki said, still holding onto half a hope that she may avoid the real reason

“I mean the real reason Saki” Chii replied “I'm fine with knowing, it's all in the past between us now anyway”

Saki sighed before answering “It seems such a stupid reason now but.... well, I though that you and Miya loved each other”

“In love with Miya!?” Chii asked, stunned by Saki's answer
Omg! she knew!

Quote
” How can I tell you that Saki may have figured out long ago something that I am perhaps too afraid to admit myself, the fact that I am in love with Miya!”
:stunned:
--

I can't wait until the next update~ :tama-excite:

Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 18 now up!(Used to be the last place you look)
Post by: abok on October 20, 2010, 09:33:52 PM
AN UPDATE!!! :on woohoo: :on woohoo: :on woohoo: i've been waiting.... :hee: :hee: :hee:

looks like this story is getting more and more complicated!!! :dizzy: :dizzy: :dizzy:

first, Airi and Captain, and now Chii too!!!! :depressed: :depressed: :depressed:

so, Chii and Captain used to go out and the reason for their break up is Miya..... :shock: :shock: :shock:

How can I tell you that Saki may have figured out long ago something that I am perhaps too afraid to admit myself, the fact that I am in love with Miya!”
NO!!!! :on blackhole: :on blackhole: :on blackhole: Chii love Miya too.... :stoned: :stoned: :stoned: What will happen to Yurina now??? :on cloudeye: :on cloudeye: :on cloudeye: Please don't separate these two oddball-san..... :tantrum: :tantrum: :tantrum: are you trying to get even with me or something??? :sweat: :sweat: :sweat:

i hope everthing will be fine.... :err: :err: :err: so until the next chapter come out, i'm gonna try wait patiently..... :on drink: :on drink: :on drink:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 18 now up!(Used to be the last place you look)
Post by: rndmnwierd on October 20, 2010, 10:27:15 PM
Miya's magnetism strikes again. Hopefully Chinami will get over her, but until then, poor Yurina doesn't stand a chance.
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 18 now up!(Used to be the last place you look)
Post by: kano-chan on October 25, 2010, 01:26:48 AM
Whoa! SakiChii used to go out?? :shock: I was like where did that come from?! :shocked

My gosh! Too much! What's going to happen with MiyaSaki, MiyAiri, and YuChii??! :panic:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 18 now up!(Used to be the last place you look)
Post by: oddball on November 01, 2010, 05:29:34 PM
WOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! New chapter time Boys and Girls!!!  :cow:

@Kuro87: Yeah part of the reason Saki dumped Chii was because of Miya and Chii's freindship which was very strong and Saki mistook it for them being in love, what she dosn't realize is that Chii now actually does like Miya! Don't worry it will all pan out!, I think  :?

@XcuteX: Thanks for making your first comment, glad to hear you are yenjoying the story!  :D

@abok: Sorry the time it took to update  :sweatdrop: Yeah it's getting quite complicated, it will all work out in the end (I hope :panic:) Yeah poor Miya has them stacking up dosn't she, as for Miya being the reason they broke up is only partly true, Saki thought that Chii loved Miya and Not her at the time and so dumped Chii to keep her and Miya happy....

@Rndnm: Yeah Yurina may not have an easy ride now that Chii has her eyes on Miya, but we shall see.....

@Kano-chan: Yeah a bit schoking isn't it, what makes it worse is that Miya dosn't know her girlfriend and her best friend used to date, af for all the pairings.... I'm not sure either  :P

thanks for the comments guys!!!  :twothumbs

Chapter 19

“What was it you said about it not raining?” Miya asked, water dripping from her hair and off her clothes as she stood in the doorway of Saki's house

“Oh it wasn't that far to my house” Saki replied, she too was soaking wet

“Yes but there was a lot of rain!” Miya said smiling at her girlfriend, she had actually enjoyed running through the rain, hand in hand, with Saki, in an odd way Miya had found it very relaxing.

They had gone out for a meal earlier that evening and despite what Miya believed to be pretty conclusive evidence, i.e the big gray clouds in the sky, Saki had assured her that it wasn't going to rain at all. In the spirit of dramatic timing the rain had the decency to hold off until the moment they left the cover of the restaurant and, thanks to Saki's rather mis-guided weather prediction, they had not brought umbrella's out with them, so an impromptu, and if Miya was honest, romantic dash through the rain to Saki's house.

“Oh come on Miya, don't say you didn't enjoy it a little bit” Saki said throwing Miya a towel

“Yeah it was fun” Miya replied before starting to dry her hair with the towel “You know it's a shame your parents aren't in tonight” she continued, her voice now slightly muffled by the towel “I wonder what they would of said about us coming in like a couple of drowned rats!”

“Knowing them the would of laughed” Saki said shaking her head “Now lets get you out of those wet clothes and get to bed!”

Miya raised an eyebrow at what Saki had said, Saki took a moment to realize what she had said, and then turned a deep shade of red.

“Miya, sorry I didn't mean.....”

“Well, well, well” Miya said, interrupting Saki “so the plan has finally been shown!”

“P-p-plan?”

“Yes I see it now, get your parents out of the house and then set up a date when you know it's going to rain then wait for the rain to come before walking home without an umbrella so I get wet and give you an excuse to get me out of my clothes and use me!”

“Miya, that's just silly, it was only a slip of the.....” Saki's defense was cut short by Miya kissing her on the lips

“Silly” she said, kissing Saki again “You're just to easy to tease sometimes”

“Miya, you had me worried, I wondered what on Earth you were talking about” Saki replied pouting at Miya before a playful smile came across her face “Now, as you were mean to me you will have to make it up to me somehow...”

“Oh” Miya replied seductively “What did you have in mind?”

Saki motioned for Miya to come towards her, which the girl obediently did, when she was close enough Saki grabbed Miya, pulled her in tight and kissed her, Miya herself began to push back, deepening the kiss, her tongue soon asked entry past Saki's lips, something that she was more than will to happen, the ensuing tongue war ended in a conclusive victory for Miya, something that Saki was not in the least worried about, after what seemed like an age, the girls pulled apart for air.

“You know” Saki said, her breathing slightly heavy “That didn't seem like much of a punishment for you”

Miya Laughed “That was your choice of punishment not mine, besides you love me too much to properly punish me”

“I do, I really do” Saki said seriously, wanting Miya to understand she really meant it

“Miya looked into Saki's eyes as she stroked some stray hair away from the girl's face “Thank you” she said simply, to Saki it felt as though it meant much more

“Come on” Saki said quietly “Lets get up to bed”

A few minuets later both girls were in their night clothes after properly drying off from the rain, Miya of course had borrowed some clothes from Saki, and were snuggled together in bed, enjoying each others warmth.

“Saki” Miya asked after a while “Are you worried about me going out with Airi tomorrow?”

Saki moved herself from her position of being enclosed in Miya's arms to look at her girlfriend “Why would I be worried about it?” she asked confused

“It was just something Momo said when I was talking to her the other day” Miya explained

“She's probably worried what might happen id Maimi turns up or something” Saki guessed, secretly she was wondering what Momo could be worried about

“Hmm your probably right” Miya said “I suppose at the moment It would be good to see me out on a, uh, if you will excuse the word 'date' with Airi”

“You don't have to call it a date” Saki pouted

“Well, what should I call it then?” Miya asked innocently, for some reason Saki felt as though Miya was leading her on but answered anyway

“I dunno, how about..... outing?”

“What on Earth is an outing?, sounds like something old people would do!”

“Well now it's what you and Airi are going on instead of a date!”

“Aww, do I detect a bit of jealousy  in my dear girlfriend” Miya said poking Saki in the cheek

Saki swatted away Miya's finger with her hand “I am a bit actually, yes” she replied “especially because I'm stuck in work that day when I would rather be out with you”

“Aww so cute!” Miya said happily, kissing Saki on the tip of her nose “I would rather spend the day with you too but I need to find out what's the problem with Maimi”

“Has Airi not said anything about it?” Saki asked “I mean she more than anyone would know that Maimi has been a bit off”

“I don't think Maimi's really been talking to Airi much recently” Miya said sadly “Apparently Airi's tried to ring her a few times and Maimi isn't answering and it being very curt with her when they are practicing and things”

“So, you reckon that Airi might involved in all this somewhere then?”

“I think so, perhaps something happened between her and Maimi, I just hope I can find out what it is, I want to have Maimi back to her normal self”

“Why does it bother you so much, what's troubling Maimi that is?” Saki asked quietly “I have wondered because of how worked you seem to be over it”

“Because she's my friend”  Miya replied as though it was the most obvious answer in the World “I'm worried because she seems so upset, I just want to see her happy again”

Saki smiled sweetly at Miya “You know that's really like about you Miya, even though you kinda have this image of being all cool and stuff on the stage, you are actually one of the most caring people I know”

“It's the same for me” Miya replied looking at the ceiling of the room “You are all ways caring for me and the others, the worries we have are shared by you as if they were your own, for someone to worry so much about problems that aren't even their own, well, that person must be very special”

“Miya” Saki said, tears forming in her eyes

“That's sort of why I'm so worked up about this whole Maimi thing” Miya continued “I don't want you to worry about it because you worry about all our problems as it is, I didn't want you to worry about this one as well”

Saki wiped the tears forming in her eyes at Miya's words and reached over and cupped Miya's cheeks in her hands and made the girl look at her “Silly Miya! Silly, beautiful, stupid, kind, loving Miya” Saki paused to kiss Miya “How can I ever worry, when I'm with you”

Miya smiled at Saki “I thought I was the one with all the corny lines” she said, kissing Saki back “But thank you for saying such wonderful things about me”

“Nothing but the truth” Saki said stroking Miya's hair “Now I really think we should get some sleep don't you Miya?....Miya?”

Saki looked at Miya, the girl had quietly fallen asleep in her arms, she stroked a few stray hairs away from Miya's face before kissing her on the forehead “I love you” she said quietly to the sleeping girl before snuggling down next to her, never relinquishing the hold she had on Miya. Saki's thoughts turned quickly to Momo “I wonder  why she's so worried about Airi and Miya being together, I wonder what she knows” she thought to herself before gently drifting of to sleep, still holding tightly onto Miya in her arms.
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 19 now up!
Post by: rndmnwierd on November 01, 2010, 06:08:51 PM
You know, instead of easing that feeling of dread, this chapter actually worsened it. Saki will be so hurt if Miya leaves her. :panic:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 19 now up!
Post by: kuro808 on November 01, 2010, 09:18:18 PM
I do wonder if Maimi caught them in a supposedly an outing and the MiyaSaki shall never die this way :nervous
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 19 now up!
Post by: kano-chan on November 02, 2010, 06:25:04 AM
Oh no! I just started to like MiyaSaki more! :O I really can't choose between MiyaSaki and MiyAiri anymore. :panic: This couple seems so sweet! I think I want MiyaSaki together... :heart:

Why do you have to make this couple so cute?? :wub: You're pulling me away from MiyAiri couple! :O

 :panic: Can't decide. :panic: Too much. :shocked **dies** :skull:

**Came back to life**  :grin: I shall wait for next update. :D
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 19 now up!
Post by: oddball on November 16, 2010, 05:12:42 PM
Finally a new Chapter, Wow this took a while didn't it?  :sweatdrop: All things just came together to conspire against me ever finishing, too much to do at work, the new Call of Duty, the paper draft being slightly chewed on by a Springer Spaniel (who thought he was helping) and then sat on by a Labrador (who was just being a labrador) but finally I got it all down and now it's ready to go:

@Rndmnwierd: sorry about worsining your feeling of dread, I just felt like I needed some Miya/Saki loving  :nervous

@Kuro87: Ha don't worry, Maimi's not finished with Airi or Miya yet......

@Kano-chan: I've moved you away from Miya/Airi  :panic: Mind you I had a crisis myself when it came to choosing the final pairings for this fic(I must of changed then like 5 times) so you are not alone!

Chapter 20

“I'm gonna kick your ass!” Maimi told the person sitting next to her as she flexed her arms

“We'll see about that!” the girl replied, copying Maimi and flexing her arms

“Ready”

“Yes, me and Princess Peach are going to whoop you!”

“I still say you were thinking of Momo when you chose her”

“Oh ha ha Maimi”

beep, beep, beep, BEEP!

“Yes! What a start!”

“What the? You rammed me!”

“Deal with it!”

“I'm trying to.... what the? You're 1st already?”

“Yes, what was it you said about whooping me?”

“Shut up you! Oh great! Now I'm in twelfth!”

“Girl's, dinner's ready” A woman's voice sounded from the kitchen downstairs

“O.K. Mum” Maimi shouted back. Turning off the Wii as she did so “Well Nakky, after you, I wouldn't want to leave you behind after all”

“Wow Maimi, I wish I was as funny as you” Nakky replied sarcastically as they both headed down the stairs to the kitchen.

“It's only curry I'm afraid” Mrs Yajima said to the two girls, Maimi's father was already seated at the table, “I'm sorry Saki dear we weren't expecting you

“It's fine Mrs Yajima, I'm sorry for troubling you for just turning up like this”

“Oh it's no trouble dear” Mrs Yajima replied happily “I was just saying to Kenta here that we haven't seen you in a while”

“Nor Mai and Chisato” Mr Yajina added “there are always so funny”

“They have other things on their minds now” Nakky replied darkly

“Oh? Like What?” Mrs Yajima asked as she put the food on the table

“Each other mainly” Maimi replied looking over a Nakky “let's just say that if they came over you would need to keep a bucket of cold water ready!”

“Ah to be young and in love” Mrs Yajima said laughing at what her daughter had said  “The real trick girls is not to fall in love with the romance but with the person” she continued, going over to hold her husbands hand

“Mum! Dad! Don't get all mushy at the table, I'm trying to eat here!” Maimi scolded her parents, embarrassed by their affection in front of Nakky

“I think it's sweet” Nakky replied happily

“Hey don't side with them!” Maimi complained to her friend as the table burst into laughter.   

Fifteen or so minuets later both girls were sitting contentedly on their chairs, both having cleaned their plates of all the food that was on them

“Thank you Mrs Yajima, it was very tasty” Nakky said

“No problem Saki, glad you liked it” Mrs Yajima replied from the sink where she was already washing some of the dishes

“Yeah, thanks Mum”

“No problem dear”

“Look how heavily it's raining outside” Mr Yajima commented, looking out of the kitchen window “Saki why don't you just stay the night and save anyone going out in this?”

“No, it's all right Mr Yajima, I'll be O.K.”

“Nonsense” Mrs Yajima joined in the conversation you can't go out in this weather and it's not fair for you parents to go out in this to collect you, I'm sure they won't mind you staying the night”

“You might as well stay Nakky, we've both got work in the morning anyway, you can come in with me” Maimi added

“I-O.K. Then” Nakky said getting out her phone “I'll just give them a call now”

“While you're doing that Maimi and I will get some bedding for you” Mrs Yajima replied

A couple of minuets later, with Nakky's parents more than happy to let their daughter stay the night, both girls were once again in Maimi's room, this time laying down a makeshift bed for Nakky.

“Thanks for coming over today Nakky” Maimi said handing her a pillow “I haven't had a good time like this for a while”

“That's sort of why I came over” Nakky replied fluffing up the pillows “Because I've been worried about you”

“Worried?”

“You just haven't been yourself Maimi, you've been really down and I don't like seeing you like that, I only say this because I care about you!”

“Nakky, I'm glad you care but I'm fine, don't worry about it” Maimi mumbled in response

“Maimi, is it, is it to do with Airi?” Nakky asked quietly

“............”

“Maimi, do you like Airi? Nakky asked, more sternly this time

“Yes” Maimi replied, almost in a whisper

Nakky smiled sadly, Maimi confirming what she thought to be true “But?”

“But, but she loves someone else, she told me as much” Maimi replied dejectedly, standing up and facing away from Nakky and looked at the rain hammering against the window in her room “You think I would just move on right? But I can't, I try and act colder towards her but the truth is that I still like her even though she though she has told me that she like someone else and not me, I-I just can't let her go Nakky”

Maimi was turned round by Nakky and pulled into a hug from the younger girl “You can't help who you love Maimi, none of us can!” she said holding tight onto Maimi “If you really like Airi that much then I am sure she will see it in then end, as long as you don't give up and keep believing in yourself that is”

“Thanks Nakky” Maimi said “I'm sorry for acting like an idiot”

Nakky smiled at what Maimi had said “Maimi, you will all ways be our idiot”

“Thanks” Maimi said pouting “Nice to see I'm so well respected by my juniors”

“Of course we respect you, it doesn't change the fact that you are an air-head however, but don't go anywhere yet, we still want you as our air-head for a while yet” Nakky said honestly

“Thank you” Maimi said seriously “Really Thank you, now come on lets watch some TV or something before we go completely emo!”

“Sure” Nakky agreed, laughing at what Maimi had said

It took about half an hour or so until Nakky gently drifted of to sleep, he head resting on Maimi's shoulder, smiling slightly, Maimi turned of the TV and gently moved the girl to where they had set up her bed and made her comfortable “Thank you Nakky” Maimi said quietly to the sleeping girl “I've been so busy in my own business with Airi and everything else that I didn't think about you and the others but you are still worried about me, I'm so lucky to have you all a friends, I hope one day I can show you how much you all mean to me” Maimi pulled the covers over Nakky to keep her warm and comfortable before she climbed into her own bed and settled down. “Perhaps you haven't stolen Airi from me yet, Miya” she thought to herself before drifting off to sleep.
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 20 now up!
Post by: kuro808 on November 16, 2010, 07:38:19 PM
Nakky really got down on her, but I guess without trying to confront her, she made sure she felt comfortable and admitting to the problem, GJ Nakky!
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 20 now up!
Post by: abok on November 18, 2010, 06:25:01 PM
Nakky smiled sadly, Maimi confirming what she thought to be true “But?”

looks like Nakky has hidden feelings for Maimi or i'm just getting paranoid.... :nervous :nervous :nervous

looks like our old Maimi is back with a new spirit!!! :D :D :D

and i can't wait to read about Miya's "outing" with Airi.... :panic: :panic: :panic:

i hope Miya will be fine and i hope she'll be able to sort out this problem... :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:

update soon oddball!!! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 20 now up!
Post by: oddball on November 26, 2010, 05:16:03 PM
Chapter 21 is here in time for you to enjoy over the weekend.... well at least something for you to read over the weekend anyway.

@Kuro87: Yeah Nakky knows the best ways to get stuff out of Maimi, I think that Maimi may come to find out just how much she dosn't appriciate Nakky....

@Abok: Miya/Airi outing coming up... Now! Yep Maimi's out of her sulking stage, we aill see if fighting back is such a good thing however....

Chapter 21

Airi looked up at the imposing metal structure laid out before her, she wasn't totally confident she she would enjoy this particular venture, it was true that Miya and herself had spent most of the day at this amusement park and they had gone on everything from roller-coasters to Bumper Cars but this ride, Airi thought, may be a ride to far for her, something that Miya, who was standing next top her, seemed to pick up on as well.

“You O.K. Airi?”

“I uh, well it's just this ride, I dunno it just might be to much for me”

“But you've been on every other roller-coaster and you've been fine on them”

“Yes but this is the worst one by far and, well, it's the name of the thing as well”

“What's wrong about the name?”

“It's called DEATHBRINGER! Miya! Why call a roller-coaster that? Surely that's just asking for trouble

“Airi it will be fine, trust me” Miya said patting Airi on the back “Hey look, it's our turn to get on”

It too a couple of minuets for both of the girls to be strapped into the carriage they had gotten into , Miya kept on checking on Airi and she could tell the girl was nervous looking about being on this ride, Miya smiled to herself, she knew that probably the only reason that Airi was on the ride was because earlier in the day she had told Airi earlier in the day that this Roller-coaster was the one she really wanted to go on.

Airi was all ways like that, Miya reflected, doing things she usually wouldn't do to make her happy, she supposed that Airi was like that with everyone, never the less Miya was pretty confident that Airi would like the ride when it got going but she though it would be good if she did something to try and calm Airi's nerves.

“Airi, give me your hand”

Airi gave Miya a funny look but she still stretched out her arm closest to Miya so that she could get to her hand,. Smiling at the girl next to her Miya reached out and grabbed hold of Airi's hand in her own and held onto it tight.

“It's going to be fine Airi, your going to be fine, you'll like it when it gets going” Miya comforted her companion

“I'll be O.K.” Airi replied “Just promise me one thing”

“What's that?”

“Just don't let go of my hand!”

Miya smiled at Airi “I promise, until you say I can let go I will hold onto your hand” she gave Airi's hand a reassuring squeeze as the ride set off.

About 5 or so minuets later the two girls were walking towards the exit of the Theme Park, Miya was in high spirits after having a thoroughly good time on the roller-coaster, Airi on the other hand looked as though she could do with a bit of a lie down.

“That was Awesome!” Miya said happily “Wasn't it fun Airi?”

“Hmm, oh, yes, yes, um, just one thing Miya”

“Yes?”

“Please, whatever else happens, never, ever, take me on that thing again!”

“Airi are you O.K?” Miya asked concerned buy the younger girls response

“Yes, I'm fine Miya, it was just, well I was a bit scared on the ride” Airi responded looking at her own feet

“Airi, I'm sorry, I didn't realize how much you didn't want to go on that ride, I just though you were a bit nervous, not that you were really scared” Miya apologized “You should of said something though Airi, we wouldn't of gone on it then”

“But Miya, you really wanted to go on that ride and I didn't want to spoil it for you by not wanting to go on it”

Miya let out a sigh “Airi, nothing is fun for me if we are doing something you don't like or don't want to do, I don't like seeing you upset or scared so promise me you'll tell me if you don't want to do something O.K.? Even if everyone else wants to do it and you don't tell me and I will stay with you”

Airi smiled to herself “Thank you Miya, you know, I think I'm very lucky to know you”

“I'm lucky to know you too Airi” Miya replied, embarrassed

“You're not that luck to know me Miya” Airi said “I'm not that special”

Miya stopped walking and looked directly at Airi “You're special to me”

“Really?” Airi asked, looking back at Miya

“Really” Miya responded smiling

Airi did not reply but began to blush and she looked away from Miya to try and hide it, it was then that she noticed something she had not realized since they had left the ride

“Um Miya” she asked

“Yes Airi?”

“You're-You're still holding my hand”

“Of course I am” Miya said “Didn't I promise you that I wouldn't let go of your hand until you said I could”

“But, well, I thought”

“I promised you didn't I Airi? Not to let go?”

Airi found herself blushing Again “D-do you mind if I ask you to keep that promise for a bit longer?” she asked sheepishly

Miya raised her hand, the one that had Airi's in it “Until you say so I won't let go”

“Thanks Miya” Airi said as Miya smiled back at her

The two girls walked on in silence, Air was just enjoying the moment, walking along hand in hand with Miya was something she had wanted to do for a while, she once again looked at the hand in hers, there was something reassuring about having Miya hold her hand, Airi did not mid that no words were being spoken to her, to her it felt as though all the communication they needed was in the simple act of them holding hands, Airi did not fool herself that this would ever happen at work so she was glad that Miya was here with her now, she glanced over to her companion who looked as though she was deep in thought, about what Airi could not tell.

“Airi?” Miya suddenly asked “Would you like something to eat?”

Airi was still thinking about what could be on Miya's mind when the girl in question had spoken to her had not her what she had said “Hmm, sorry?”

“Do you want something to eat?” Miya asked again

“Oh! Yes that would be nice” Airi replied happily “I'm quite hungry actually”

“Good, now where to go...” Miya said, more to herself than anyone

Airi though for a few moments before an idea came into her head “I know a place” she said “I've been there quite a few times, it's nice”

Miya smiled “ Well if you say it's nice it must be, lead the way”

About fifteen minuets later Miya and Airi were sat in a small café with warm drinks in front of them, Airi sipped her drink nervously as Miya cast an appraising eye around the small establishment

“It's very nice here” she said to Airi “how did you find out about this place?”

“I-I come here a lot with Maimi, she's the one who found this place” Airi answered

“Maimi eh?” Miya replied “Is she, is she still acting a bit, well, weird at the moment?”

“She um, she still isn't talking to me like she used to” Airi paused as a waiter was coming over to deliver their food, when the girls thanked him and he left Airi continued “It's like she is trying to not talk to me specifically”

Both girls sat in silence for a while, just eating their food, eventually Miya asked “You, er, haven’t said anything... unusual to Maimi recently have you Airi?”

“No, not really” Airi replied, she looked as though she wanted to say more but decided to have another mouthful of food instead. Miya also started eating again , she knew the girl across from her well enough to tell that she was building up to tell her something so she would wait for Airi to tell her rather than force it out of her.

Soon enough Airi put down her chopsticks “Miya, there is one thing that I told Maimi, something I don't think she was totally O.K with”

“What was it you talked about?” Miya asked, trying to encourage her friend

“We, we talked about you Miya”

“Me?” Miya asked surprised “What have I got to do with....”

“Why did you not tell me you were dating Saki Miya?” Airi asked, interrupting the older girl

“What? Well I thought everyone knew, you knew didn't you?”

“Yes, yes I knew”

“Then why ask why I didn't tell you if you all ready knew?”

“I would of preferred if you had told me in person”

“Why Airi? Is it that important?”

“It is to me yes” Airi replied quietly

“I'm sorry Airi, I didn't think it was that important to you, If I'd known then of course I would of told you” Miya said holding onto Airi's arm “But Airi, what has this got to do with Maimi being annoyed at you?”

“Because, well because I think she thinks I want to break you and Saki, her friends”

“What? Airi am I missing something here? Why would you try and......”

“I love you Miya”

Miya said nothing in return, her eyes wide with shock, so this was why Maimi was mad at her, this was what Momo was worried about, Airi must of told Maimi that she lover her and not Maimi and perhaps Momo knew all along about Airi's feelings for her, Miya tried to clear her mind and say something.

“Airi I....”

“I know I shouldn't love you but I can't help it, even though you are dating Saki, even if it costs me all of my friends, even if you will all ways like Saki, I-I just can't give up on you Miya!”

“Do you, do you really love me that much?” Miya asked amazed by the conviction in Airi's confession

Airi nodded “I've liked you for such a long time Miya, I just was never brave enough tell you, but then you and Saki started going out and I knew that I had to tell you my feeling, even if it was cruel to tell you after you had just started to date another I just needed you to know how I felt before It was too late, I'm sorry”

Airi quickly got up and dashed out of the café, tears forming in her eyes. Miya had half-started to reach out and grab Airi before she could leave but something made her stop, perhaps it was the shock, she thought. After Airi had left Miya sat quietly in the café desperately trying to think everything through.

How could she of missed it? Miya cursed herself for never realizing that Airi liked her,they had been a part of each others lives for so long and yet she had never guessed, never thought that Airi had feeling for her all the while mistaking it for just a close friendship.

Miya sighed as she got up and paid for the food before leaving the café Saki would surely ask how things had went, could she tell her the truth, would she be angry? Miya was unsure but she felt as though her girlfriend should know, and that she should be the one to tell her, perhaps it would be best is she talked to Momo first, the girl seemed to have an idea about Airi liking her so perhaps she could help Miya with Saki as well.

She also knew that at some point she would have to confront Maimi at some point and it was a meeting she would not look forward too, she could see why Maimi would be angry at her but she would have to explain to her what had gone on, and perhaps tell her the whole truth this time. Airi would perhaps need Maimi back by her side soon, one way or the other, truth be told Miya would like to have Maimi back as her friend as well.

Miya looked up at the sky staggered by the days turn of events, at that moment, an odd though came into her mind, something she did not fully expect.

“Airi likes me!” Miya said quietly to herself a strange little half-smile on her face before continuing on her journey home.
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 21 now up!
Post by: XcuteX26262X on November 26, 2010, 06:06:39 PM
Quote
“Why did you not tell me you were dating Saki Miya?” Airi asked, interrupting the older girl

“What? Well I thought everyone knew, you knew didn't you?”

“Yes, yes I knew”

“Then why ask why I didn't tell you if you all ready knew?”

“I would of preferred if you had told me in person”

“Why Airi? Is it that important?”

“It is to me yes” Airi replied quietly

“I'm sorry Airi, I didn't think it was that important to you, If I'd known then of course I would of told you” Miya said holding onto Airi's arm “But Airi, what has this got to do with Maimi being annoyed at you?”

“Because, well because I think she thinks I want to break you and Saki, her friends”

“What? Airi am I missing something here? Why would you try and......”

“I love you Miya”

Oh my god!  :shocked

Quote
“Airi likes me!” Miya said quietly to herself a strange little half-smile on her face before continuing on her journey home.

A strange little half smile on her face???

...Oh no!!!

Please tell me that i'm not imagining things  :panic:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 21 now up!
Post by: kuro808 on November 26, 2010, 07:41:35 PM
Miya seems to be in more of dilemma, I guess she has to think about it, before saying her story, but the last part was quite interesting for a twist :nervous
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 21 now up!
Post by: kano-chan on November 27, 2010, 12:52:44 AM
Iiyaaa~ Airi confessed! And she said she can't give up on Miya. Am I supposed to be happy?  :roll: I don't know anymore! MiyaSaki was such a sweet couple, but it seems that Miya might have a liking for Airi too... There's definitely going to be trouble! :panic:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 21 now up!
Post by: abok on December 04, 2010, 12:08:40 PM
ok... :(

now i'm getting worried and upset.... :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:

Airi knew that Miya is dating Saki but she refuse to give up.... :panic: :panic: :panic:

“Airi likes me!” Miya said quietly to herself a strange little half-smile on her face before continuing on her journey home.

what's with this reaction from Miya??? :angry: :angry: :angry:

i just hope my guess are wrong.... :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:

update soon oddball-san!!! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 21 now up!
Post by: oddball on December 22, 2010, 06:00:11 PM
Holy Moley! It's been way to long since I've updated through a mixture of having Flu/ the graduations/ Chritsmas build up and my Birthday my time has not been fully commited to writing, not sure what will happen over the Christmas/New Year period but I may get a chapter out, if not I will definaty get back to it proper in the new year!

apologies for making you guys wait  :bow:

@XcuteX26262X: sorry I'm afraid you got it right, Miya did have a little smile on her face  :w00t:

@kuro: Yeah Miya is thrown a bit off gaurd by Airi's confession, we may soon find out why..... but not quite yet....

@abok: Airi does fell bad because she know that her feeling for Miya will upset Saki but at the same time she just believe that she can't give up her own feelings, we will find out the reasons behind Miya's reaction soon!

Chapter 22

“You know I swear our dance lessons are getting harder” Chii said as she led out full length on the sofa in the dressing room the Berryz girl's were using

“Perhaps it's because you're getting old Chii?” Risako said sitting down at a table across the room

“She's not too old, she's just a weakling” Maa replied as she sat down next to Risako

“Perhaps it's just because she's uncoordinated” Yurina added smiling at Chii as she sat down in a chair next to her

“Hey!” Chii pouted, throwing a pillow at Yurina causing Maa lo laugh

“Aww, Chii only got upset at Yurina and not us!” she said

“And why would that be?” Risako asked, playing along with the game Maa was playing

“Because Chii Looovvves her!”

“You-you shut up! Yurina may not even like me so don't make fun of something you are not even sure about!” Chii replied, slightly flustered

“Oh yeah? Then why is she blushing?” Maa asked

“Why you!”

“All right Kids settle down!” Saki stepped into the conversation “You all remember to play nice now!” she continued as Maa stuck her tongue out at Chii

Chii gave Maa a dirty look before rubbing the back of her neck and looking at Saki “What I really want to know is how Miya picked such a good day to have off”

“You've had days off when the rest of us have had tough days too Chii” Saki replied

“Your only saying that because she's your girlfriend” Chii replied, jokingly pointing an accusing finger at Saki who stuck her tongue out at Chii in response. At that moment, the door opened and and Momo walked in the room

“What's the matter with you Chii, are you dying?” she asked

“She's just moaning about Miya having a day off because she's old and weak!” Saki said giving Chii a smirk as the rest of the room burst into laughter and Momo sat down next to Risako

“Well Miya does have all the Buono stuff to do on top of what we do as Berryz so I don't think you can complain too much, besides you can't help it if your lazy!” Momo said

“Lazy?!” Chii said as the room burst into laughter at her expense again “What's this, get Chii day?”

“Yes?” Momo guessed making 5 of the seven occupants in the room laugh even harder

“I-I don't think Chii's lazy, she all ways tries really hard” Yurina said quietly through the laughter, though she was sure she was the only one who heard them, Chii was glad for Yurina's words of support.

“Whatever guys, I for one would prefer to be relaxing at home rather than having to have a lesson like the one we just had!” Chii said, trying to move the topic of the conversation on

“Miya's not at home” Saki replied “She went to the amusement park”

“What! On her own?” Yurina asked

“No, she went with Airi” Saki answered

“Airi!?” Momo asked slightly surprised “Why would she go with Airi?”

“What, apart from them being friends since, like, forever you mean?” Saki replied looking strangely at Momo “Why is there a problem? Miya said you talked to her about Airi as well”

“No, no problem” Momo replied quickly “It's just I all ways think they are plotting against me for when we do Buono stuff that's all”

Risako let out a sigh “Miya is so cool when she does her Buono stuff” she said dreamily, the rest of the girls all turned to Risako and gave her a funny look “.......What?”

“Right, well, now that Rii has finished with her fan-girling over Miya, I'm off home” Maa said getting up and heading over to Yurina and giving her a big hug “Love you” she said quietly to the taller girl “Bye everyone!”

“I'll go with you Maa” A red-faced Risako said, leaving the room with the other girl

Momo, who had taken out her phone and was halfway through sending a text, completed her task before getting up “I should probably get going to” she said collecting her things together but rather then heading to the door she made her way over to Yurina instead.

“I'm sorry Yurina you're right, Chii isn't lazy but I think perhaps, in one thing at least, she may be very lucky” she told the taller girl before winking at Chii and leaving

“Why does everyone have to interfere and make fun?” Yurina said to herself quietly, looking down at the floor

Chii, though she had not been supposed to, had heard what Yurina had said, looking at the girl next to her Chii decided that she had to do something for the taller girl.

Picking up another pillow she once again threw it at Yurina making the girl look up “Hey Yurina” Chii said happily “I'm hungry, want to get something to eat?”

“Yurina's expression changed almost instanly 2Yeah that would be great, I'm kinda hungry myself” she said beaming at Chii “I just need to pick something up from our manager first, you dodn't maind waiting do you?”

“Of course not” Chii replied as Yurina quickly got up

“Back in a bit!” she called as she left the room

“That was very sweet of you” Saki, who had gone unnoticed for a while by the two girls, said quietly

“I, only asked her out to eat Saki, nothing special”

“I think perhaps, it was special for Yurina” Saki replied gently

“What do you mean by that​?”

“That you are kind without thinking about it, that Yurina likes spending time with you and that you don't realize the feelings she has for you, much the same as I did, before asking you out”

“It's nothing like that Saki” Chii replied defensivly “It's well, it's Miya”

“Miya? Chii what are you going on about?”

“Well, with you and Miya now dating I think she's decided not to spend much time with me so...”

“Do you miss spending time with Miya?” Saki interrupted her friend

“I...” Chii half though about lying to Saki but she had a feeling that the girl infront of her all ready new the truth of the matter “I do miss Miya yes” she admitted “Sorry”

Saki smiled at her friend “There's no need to be sorry, in fact I think I should be the one to say sorry to you” She said moving to sit down next to Chii “I've all ways been envious of the friendship you and Miya have,something I think perhaps Miya is aware of, though she never speaks to me about it but I think she is not seeing you so much so I don't become jealous or anything, I do know that she misses you though Chii so don't worry, I will tell her to give you a call O.K.?”

“Thanks Saki” Chii replied, pleased that at least in some ways Miya missed her, looking at Saki she decided to ask a question that had been on her mind for quite some time though she had never had the chance to speak of it “Saki, um, what's it like, dating Miya I mean?”

Saki looked at her ex her face unreadable. Chii was about to apologize for asking but just before she did, Saki decided to speak “It's, well, it's hard to explain Chii, most of the time it feels as though our relationship is the same as it was before we started dating but then Miya will kiss me or just simply hold me and I know, that even though things may look the same between us, it all means so much more now, that there's something more between us, something that perhaps is very special”

“I think that perhaps you and Miya are very lucky to have each other “Chii said quietly, not looking at the girl sitting next to her “thanks for telling me Saki”

“That's all right Chii but why did you want to know? Don't you like me and Miya dating?”

“No, no, no it's not like that, it just, just that I needed to know I suppose”

“Because of us?” Saki asked

“In part, yes, I just wondered if it was different for you, seems like it is”

“Chii, we had something special to and I have never once regretted dating you but that is in our past now, I have something special with Miya now, something that perhaps you may be beginning to feel for Yurina.

“Something special, perhaps your right” Chii replied before fully realizing what it was that Saki had finished her sentence by saying “Wait!, something special between me and Yurina, no, no, no, no”

Saki laughed at the flustered girl “Yurina likes you” she said “And I think that you have feeling for her, just that you haven't realized them yet”

“Yurina is a really nice girl” Chii said cautiously “But I just don't think I fully have those feeling for her, I can't say that my heart will fully belong to her”

“You mean you like someone else? Chii who do you.....”

Saki never got to finish her question as Yurina had opened the door and entered the room “Hey, sorry to keep you waiting Chii, you ready?”

“Yeah, lets go” Chii said cheerfully getting up and standing next to Yurina “See you around Saki”

“Bye Saki”

“You two have fun” Saki said waving the two girls of as they left the room

Yurina and Chii walked side by side down the corridor, the taller girl looked down at the girl she liked, seeing that, once again, she was deep in thought. She had gotten used to this from Chii recently so Yurina knew that it was best to give the girl time to think through the things in her head before talking to her so patiently waited for Chii to finish going through whatever it was on her mind “I just wish you would tell me what's troubling you Chii” Yurina thought to herself

“Idiot!” Chii thought as she walked along, she could not belive how close she had come to admitting that she may have feelings for Miya to Saki of all people, especially after what Saki had told her about her relationship with Miya, Chii felt bad because of it, but however guilty she felt towards Saki she just could not let her feelings for Miya, whatever they may be, go. Chii looked up at the girl next to her and felt a warmth in herself, Momo was right she thought, she was very lucky to have Yurina, the girl all ways managed to make Chii smile and she could not help but be honest with the tallest Berryz member and Chii felt as though she could trust Yurina with anything “just like Miya” Chii though

“Hey Yurina” she said getting the girls attention “Thanks, for being my friend”

Yurina smiled down at Chii “Thank you for being mine” she replied simply, Chii felt as though it was all that needed to be said

Saki slowly packed away her things as she though about what Chii had said, she had definatly bee puzzled by Chii asking about Miya and wondered why she was interested in finding out what dating her girlfriend was like. Saki was sure there was more to it than mere curiosity and more importantly who could this other girl in Chii's heart be? She and Yurina lookwd so good together and she was all ways so happy around they girl so why was Chii not fully interested in Yurina? Unless, unless.....

“Chii still can't have feelings for me can she?” Saki mumbled to herself quietly as she picked up her bag and went to leave the room with thoughts flying through her head

“Like I may have for her” she said quietly leaving the room and closing the door.

Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 22 now up!
Post by: gracula on December 22, 2010, 06:44:39 PM
i was just looking for something of yours to read.  :P

Moments of Win and other LOLness.

1) Miya scaling the wall (and back down the hard way again)
2) Momo the Matchmaker
3) note to oddy: girls don't fart. they don't even have to worry about farting. what are you talking about?
4)
Quote
“Well when I saw you at the start of the date and I was by the fountain I was thinking of throwing a coin in and saying something like, 'I didn't know wishes worked that fast, I wished for an angel and here you are'”
if it was any other girl but natsuyaki, i'da laughed and then slapped her.

Story development suggestions: Understanding!Saki = Pimp!Miya = group orgy secks
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 22 now up!
Post by: kano-chan on December 23, 2010, 04:43:38 AM
Whoa! Is it just me or does that very last bit totally indicated something??? :panic: :panic:

Saki still likes Chii? Is that it? Am I making a mistake? This can turn things around 360 degrees! It'll give MiyAiri AND MiyaChii a chance! :grin: :( :w00t: (happy or sad?)

I thought Saki loves Miya a looooooooooot! :shocked
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 22 now up!
Post by: kuro808 on December 23, 2010, 06:17:20 AM
The tile makes more sense with the story moving along and I wonder if Saki will admit or Yurina step up to claim her, or all of the above  :lol:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 22 now up!
Post by: XcuteX26262X on December 24, 2010, 09:47:53 AM
Quote
“Chii still can't have feelings for me can she?” Saki mumbled to herself quietly as she picked up her bag and went to leave the room with thoughts flying through her head

“Like I may have for her” she said quietly leaving the room and closing the door.


:stunned:


Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 22 now up!
Post by: oddball on January 14, 2011, 01:19:19 PM
I have returned from the wilderness and have finnaly finished my next chapter, Man what an epic struggle this was, a mixture of the Xmas period and just being so damn busy in the first couple of weeks really held me back from writing, hopeful I'm over the worst of it now so I should be able to become a bit more consistant in getting chapters out.

Sorry to keep you guys waiting!

@Gracula: Thanks for finding me out! of course girls don't fart, it was just a slip of the tounge!  :P

@Kano: Well Saki says she really likes Miya......... lets not forget though that she and Chii used to date  :panic:

@Kuru87: Yeah, thats why I changed the title a while back, I said it would make more sense, hmm things are getting confused arn't they?

@Xcute: or possibly  :mon mad: instead   :lol:

anyways enjoy!


Chapter 23



Miya felt uneasy standing outside this particular house , on reflection she though that this was totally understandable considering where she was, she wondered how the girl would react, especially know she new the reason behind the troubles between them but she needed to talk to her about it, she wanted her to understand. Miya took a deep breath and pushed the doorbell.

“Miyabi, nice to see you dear”

“Oh, hello Mrs Yajima I've er...”

“Come to see Maimi, yes I though you might of come round soon” Mrs Yajima smiled at Miya

“Yes, well, we've um, got things to talk about” Miya mumbled in response

Mrs Yaima nodded in understanding “Well you better come in dear” she said “Maimi, you've got a visitor” she shouted up the stairs after Miya had entered the house

“Who is it?” Maimi asked as she came to the top of the stairs, once she saw that it was Miya she tensed up immediately and threw Miya an angry look before doing the same to her mother and stormed back into her room, slamming the door as she did so.

“Oh dear” Miya said sadly giving a deep sigh “Still angry at me then”

“I would take that reaction as a yes dear, but I will tell you that she wont get angry a people she doesn't care about” Mrs Yajima said gently, patting Miya on the shoulder.

“I hope so Mrs Yajima, I really do”

“Did I hear a door slamming? Oh hello Miyabi”

“Hello Mr Yajima how are you” Miyabi said bowing to Maimi's father

“About to go out” Mrs Yajima replied, giving a look to her husband

“Am I?” he asked trying to read the look in his wife's eyes “Yes out, for dinner right?”

“Yes for dinner” Mrs Yajima smiled “Well lets go then dear” she said grabbing a coat for herself and her husband and ushered him out the front door

“Um, Mrs Yajima”

“Yes Miyabi”

“Thank you”

Mrs Yajima gave Miya a quick hug “Good luck”she said quietly before leaving the house

Miya let Maimi's parents leave properly before she slow began to climb the stairs,  she knew too well that the girl whose room she was going to was still mad at her but at least now she knew the reason why at least now she could persuade Maimi to see sense, well she hoped she could anyway

Miya knocked on the closed door of the room “Maimi, I've come to talk to you”

“Go away!” Maimi shouted through the door “I don,t need to talk to you!”

“Please Maimi, I really need to talk to you, it's important, for me and for you”

“Yeah, well, good for you” Maimi replied angrily

“Maimi, I know you must be upset but if you would just listen to me...”

Miya was interrupted by Maimi suddenly opening the door and pushing Miya who ended up stumbling back a few steps “Upset?” she shouted “Did you even bother to figure out what it is I'm upset about, do you care?”

Miya let out a low growling sound, a look of anger on his face, she charged towards Maimi and started to push the shocked C-ute leader back into her room before finnaly pushing her down onto her own bed

“Of course I care dammit” Miya yelled gabbing hold of Maimi's shirt “And I know why your pissed off with me now too, you see I went out with Airi the other day and she confessed to me”

“And what? You've come to gloat?” shouted back grabbing Miya by the collar with one had whilst the other tried to prise Miya's hands off her “Come to tell me you've added Airi to your ever glowing list of lovers”

“Do you know why I went out with Airi that day?” Miya asked still shouting at Maimi fought her way back to a vertical base from the bed “It was to try and find out what was bothering you, but then Airi confessed and I was so shocked that...” Miya got no further as Maimi had slapped her hard across the face, hard enough in fact to send Miya falling to the ground.

“And what, you did nothing Miya, nothing to stop her or tell her otherwise or perhaps bother to mention that she is the love of my life!” she asked still shouting, her hand raised over the girl she had just slapped “Because we both know that you want her, that's the real reason you couldn't reject her, unless there's some other stupid excuse you want to come up with?”

“I used to like Airi, that's why!” Miya yelled, Maimi stood frozen to the spot as Miya got up from the floor and standing in front of Miya, breathing heavily, seeing the stunned look of disbelief and defeat on Maimi's face her anger slowly faded like the mark that Maimi had made faded from her cheek she smiled sadly before continuing

“Airi was the second person that I had liked, I won't bother explaining why to you as it was for the same reasons as you and yes we are close but love?” Miya shook her head “I never felt that she loved me whatever my own feelings were at the time but  yesterday, she ended up confessing to me, I was so shocked at what she had said that I couldn't say anything before she had run off, I haven't seen her since, I haven't told her yet that she still hasn't figured out what I did so many years ago”

Maimi could only look at Miya in disbelief as she shakily sat down on the edge of her bed struggling to take in what her friend was saying. Miya saw the look on Maimi's face  and chuckled to herself quietly before sitting down next to the confused girl

“You know, I never really like you much in the past” she said looking at Maimi “It was jealousy you know, it was all over the relationship you and Airi had, you were just so close to each other, the way she acted towards you, so natural, so care free, I wanted to have that feeling to, sometimes I though you were doing it just to annoy me, silly right?”Miya let out a sigh before continuing

“You remember that day, the day  I found you crying and you told me that you liked Airi? Truth be told I was looking for you I was so determined to tell you how I felt about Airi but then we met and you admitted your love for her”

Miya started to pick at the edge of the cover on Maimi's bed “I wasn't sure you see, if you loved her or not but then I found you crying and you admitted your love for Airi and I knew that you two were destined to be together, your love for her was, well, special and I knew, more than Airi did herself, that she loves you though she still hasn't figured it out yet and who was I to get in the way of that?”

Miya suddenly got up and walked over to look out the window to the street below “I promised myself that day that I would get you two together, a promise I made to you as well, a penance if you will, for getting in between you two for to long, it's a promise I intend to keep Maimi but for that I need the old Maimi back”

Miya turned round to look down at the girl sitting on the bed, Maimi was just staring at the floor, not moving an inch

“If you want to talk” Miya said felling she would not get a response from the girl “Just come find me, it's your decision now Maimi, I hope you believe me and I will tell you that we all miss you”  Maimi stayed staring at the ground, Miya took one last look at her friend before shaking her head and turning away towards the door, she had only gone a few steps however before she heard footsteps behind her and a pair of arms wrapped themselves around her waist.

“Maimi? What....”

“No Miya don't say anything” Maimi interrupted “Just let me hug you, please”

Miya began to relax as Maim strengthened her grip around the other girls waist, they could have been there for seconds, days or hours Miya wasn't sure “I'm sorry” a voice said from behind her

“I'm sorry, for what I did, for how I acted” Maimi said as Miya turned round to face her “I can't defend what I did to you but when Airi told me she liked you I just got so confused, I wanted Airi to be happy but I wanted her to be happy with me, I wanted to let her be happy with you but I also hated you for taking her from me, I wanted to fight you for her all because. Because...”

“You love her?” Miya asked

“Yes” Maimi looked down at the floor tears forming in her eyes “Can you ever forgive me Miya, for doing what I did to you back then, for what I did tonight”

It was Miya this time who pulled Miami into a hug “It's not your forgiveness I want Maimi, it's you, I want my friend back, we all just want you back”

“Will you still help me Miya?” Maimi asked “To confess to Airi?”

“I think that's something you have to do on your own Maimi” Miya replied wiping the tears from Maimi's eyes “But I will be beside you all of the way”

“You're right Miya, it's my responsibility I got to do it in my own way” Maimi paused “But if I start  to falter, give me a kick won't you”

“Does this mean your back?” Miya asked hopefully

Maimi looked at Miya “Yes” she said simply, a genuine smile spreading across her face, Miya smiled back and gave her friend another hug

“Glad to have you back Maimi, I missed you”

“I missed you too Miya, I really did”

“Ah, Maimi, you're gonna make me cry” Miya said wiping some tears from her eyes

“Sorry” Maimi said laughing at her friend, do you want a drink of something, I think we could both do with something right?”

“Please” Miya said “I must admit my throat is parched!”

“Perhaps some tea then” Maimi said as she lead Miya down the stairs

Both girls sat around the table in the kitchen as sipped their tea, Miya cradled her cup in her hands a satisfied look on her face. Maimi however put her cup down on the table

“Miya you know you talked about the day I told you about my feelings for Airi, well that day you told me that you liked Saki, when it was really Airi that you liked, does, does it mean that you...”


“That I don't like Saki” Miya finished Maimi's question for her, she smiled as she put her cup down on the table as well

“Truth be told when I said it no, I didn't like Saki like that, she was my best friend so it seemed like a logical choice to say to you”

“But” Maimi began to say before Miya interrupted her again

“But, the funny thing is that I started to spend more time with her after Airi and well, I fell for her, I just totally fell for her, I can't really explain why, it's like something clicked in my brain and I saw what I had been missing for all those years, the person who had all ways been beside me, I'm happy, with her”

A look of relief came across Maimi's face “I'm so glad, I was just thinking, I mean what you said about Airi and all, well you know Saki is my friend too so, I, um, just wanted to be sure” she explained awkwardly

Miya laughed at Maimi's clumsy response “Don't worry I like her” she said patting the C-ute member on the arm “Speaking of which I best be going, she will be waiting for me at her home”

“Oh, right well I'll see you out” Maimi said accompanying Miya to the door

“So, I'll see you tomorrow then?” Miya asked as Maimi opened the door for her

“You sure will” Maimi replied pulling Miya into a hug

Miya hugged Maimi back for a while before breaking it and looked up at Maimi “You should know that Airi may be a bit upset with you” she warned “You must talk to her tomorrow O.K.?”

“I deserve Airi to be mad at me” Maimi said sadly “But I will talk to her I promise”

“Good” Miya replied happily “Well, see you around then” she said waving to Maimi as she left

“Miya” Maimi suddenly called out

“Yes Maimi”

“Nothing, nothing, well it was just something you said, about Airi being the second person you liked, I've only just realized that's what you said, It's just that, um, was there another before Airi, a person you liked I mean?”

Miya looked at Maimi and gave her a quick smile and a wink “Goodbye Maimi” she said before walking off

“Bye” Maimi replied before closing the door confused “If it wasn't Airi or Saki, then who was Miya's first love?” she asked herself before walking back upstairs, once she was in her room she took out her purse and looked at the picture inside “Airi, I'm sorry, please wait for me”
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 23 now up!
Post by: XcuteX26262X on January 14, 2011, 01:54:39 PM
Quote
“Nothing, nothing, well it was just something you said, about Airi being the second person you liked, I've only just realized that's what you said, It's just that, um, was there another before Airi, a person you liked I mean?”

Miya looked at Maimi and gave her a quick smile and a wink “Goodbye Maimi” she said before walking off

Don't tell me Miya liked Maimi before Airi...
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 23 now up!
Post by: kuro808 on January 14, 2011, 02:07:52 PM
Miya solves the rift between her and Maimi but somehow Miya is a more of a mystery than I think   :nervous
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 23 now up!
Post by: kano-chan on January 15, 2011, 01:35:19 AM
**Beginning of convo** No Maimi, I know you are NOT going to lay a finger on Miya.. :mon taichi: **slap** Aaahhh! You slapped my Goddess! How could you??? :angry:

Ah~ So Miya liked Airi back then too! But Airi was second... I had a thought that it could have been..Maimi. :shocked: But what if it's Chii or someone else? :roll: Gah, I'll stop with the assumptions now. :panic: ;)

And oh my gosh! Is Saki going to hurt Miya?? :tantrum: Miya said she really loves Saki in this chappy and Saki better not be cheating with Chii or something. Please noooo~ :pleeease: :mon prayer:

huh....but wait, Chii likes Miya now and seemed to be moving on to Yurina... :hiakhiakhiak: haha, that's good enough for me! XD

Anyway, that was a nice make up! :twothumbs

Awaiting next chapter~ :heart:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 23 now up!
Post by: dark-atrox on January 15, 2011, 08:00:51 AM
i hope it was risako she feel in love first.....Miya that is..!  :lol:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 23 now up!
Post by: eruchan on January 15, 2011, 08:19:13 AM
well.... it's good that the problem between miya and maimi is resolved  :)
who's miya first love? is it maimi?  :roll:
the title is appropriate i think... airi likes both maimi and miya... looks like saki still have feelings for chii  :sweatdrop:
i think it can develop into something more confusing  :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 23 now up!
Post by: gracula on January 20, 2011, 11:05:20 PM
So Maimi gets her shit together. Good.

Quote
Maimi replied before closing the door confused “If it wasn't Airi or Saki, then who was Miya's first love?”

Gross speculation: Maimi.
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 23 now up!
Post by: oddball on January 28, 2011, 05:16:27 PM
Thanks for the comment guys, here's chapter 24 ready just in time for the weekend! Alas my release have been quite random recently, maybe things will improve next month but it's still a bit of a when I can write I do but I've just been so darn busy situation at the moment!  :sweatdrop:

@ Xcute + gracula + dark-atrox : We will see who it was, this dosn't stop the H!P kids having a guess though.......

@ Kuro87: Yes Miya's character is quite complex when you peel away the outer layers, and we still have more to find out about her...

@ Kano-chan: I know that Maimislapped Miya but they made up so that's ok right?  :nervous as for who was Miya's first love and what will happen to Saki, well I wouldn't want to spoil it for you would I?  :P

@ eruchan: Yeah Maimi and Miya are back on the same page though I wonder if that will be a good thing..... yeah don't worry the confustion may not of ended quite yet.....

P.S. @ gracula: if I was giving my chapters titles I would of so name the last one "Maimi get her shit together"  :lol:

Chapter 24

“She'll be in today you'll see” Nakky said to the other three girls sitting around the table.

“Nakky, you said that yesterday as well you know” Chisa replied

“Yeah, well, I'm really sure today” Nakky answered back, looking determined

“Whatever” Chisa said turning to the girl sitting opposite her “Have you heard anything Airi?”

“......”

“Er, Airi?”

“Hmm, yes, what were you saying Mai?”

“It wasn't me talking to you” Mai replied giving Airi a funny look “It was Chisa”

“Was it” Airi asked totally lost “Are you sure?”

“Airi what is the mater with you today, you're so spaced out at the moment?” Chisa asked, concerned.

“Nothing, nothing, just got a lot on my mind” she paused “sorry”

“It's nothing to be sorry about” Mai said rolling her eyes

“perhaps it is” Airi said to herself sadly, even though all could hear what she said

“Airi” Chisa said cautiously “Is this about....”

“Maimi!” Nakky yelled, standing up with a large smile on her face, the other three girls turned round to see their absent leader standing in the doorway behind them

“Um, hello” Maimi said sheepishly bowing down to the group in front of her

Airi suddenly stood up and quickly made her way over to Maimi “Nice to see you” Airi quickly bowed to her leader before speaking again “Um Bye” she said before running from the room.

“Airi wait!” Maimi called out too the fleeing girl, she glanced back at the other and her eyes met with Nakky's who gave her a quick nod, nodding back Maimi set off after Airi.

Airi was not sure why she was running but it felt as though she was doing the right thing, as soon as she has seen Maimi walk into that room her toddy had been desperately telling her to leave, to move away from that place where her emotions threatened to overflow, to run from the girl who, with her absence from Airi's life, had brought many difficult feelings to her mind.

Airi heard a voice call out from behind her as she ran through the crowded corridors, though who ever the voice belonged to and what they said meant nothing to her, she made for the stairs as if they would become an escape route from this World. She heard the voice behind her again but she did not turn round, she kept her mind focused on climbing the stairs wishing, in an odd way, that they could last forever.

A door came  up and as Airi burst through it she felt a breeze begin to gently caress her face, slowly becoming aware of her surroundings she realized that she had ran all the way to the roof , the voice called for her again, she recognized the voice this time but then again who else would it of been? Taking a deep breath, she walked over to the railings around the edge of the roof and looked out onto the City.

Maimi ran through the door and skidded to a halt when she Airi at the railings, she took a moment to regain her composure before making her way over to Airi

“Um,hello Airi” she said nervously, slowly closing the distance between herself and the younger girl who said nothing in response

“I didn't know you could run like that” Maimi said, trying a different approach but still getting no reponse

“It's nice to see you” Maimi said honestly “I, I missed you and I'm sorry, sorry for the way I've been behaving recently”

At Maimi's last words Airi spun round to face Maimi and rushed up to her “Do you even know what you should be sorry for?” she yelled

“Airi I...”

“You left me Maimi!” Airi cut off her leader “When I really needed you Maimi, you weren't there!”

“If you'd let me explain....”

“You know I really struggled over whether I should tell you about Miya or not but in the end I thought, hey it's Maimi, she'll understand, she'll side with me no matter what, but what happens, you dissapear, you don't answer any of my calls or texts and recently you hardly even speak to me at work”

“Please Airi just....”

“You know what the funniest thing is though Maimi?” Airi asked interrupting Maimi once again “I ended up confessing to Miya anyway but I could tell from the look in her eye that she did not share my feelings, I felt so awkward, I just ran away” Airi turned her back towards Maimi and hung her head “The thing is though all that I could think about afterwards was you, I wanted to go and see you but you had left me” Airi said as she began to cry “I was lost Maimi, I wanted to see you but I thought that you did not want to see me, I-I..”

Airi felt the arms embrace her, a familiar feeling or warmth and reassurance that, truth be told, she had longed for these last few days, the emotions inside her could take no more and they boiled over into uncontrollable tears as she desperately clutched back at the girl holding her.

Maimi gently lifted the crying girls head up towards her own and gave her a soft kiss on the lips, calming the girl “Airi I make no excuses for what I've been like lately because there are no excuses to give, I was wrong in how I treated you and I wish I could go back and change that but I can't” she paused to wipe some tears from Airi's eyes “All I can say now is that I am hear for you now, if you want me and that if you do, I wont leave you again”

Airi looked up at her leader, a few tears still in her eyes, and lifter a hand to her lips “Maimi, you-you kissed me!” she sounder surprised now, rather than angry or upset

“Sorry” Maimi said quickly believing that she had done something wrong “I only did it to calm you down it didn't mean anything else by it, um”

“No, no it's O.K.” Airi replied just as quickly before wiping the last tears from her eyes “Well, I er, I better be going, practice and all that, well, bye”

Airi walked quickly towards the door leaving a confused Maimi rooted to the spot, when she got about halfway to the door, Airi suddenly stopped.

“You promise right?” she asked Maimi “That you wont leave?”

“Yes” Maimi replied, turning to face the girl who's back was now facing her.

“Good” Airi replied without turning round as she quickly headed through the door and out of Maimi's sight.

Maimi slowly walked back down the stairs that she had chased Airi up, she wasn't sure what to think at the moment, she was glad that she had apologized to Airi, in doing so a great weight felt as though it had been lifted from her shoulders however Maimi wasn't really sure if Air had actually forgiven her or not, and what was Airi talking about, wanting to see her after telling Miya she liked her, especially as she never got to hear a response from Miya, when did that ever make sense?

“Hey!”

Maimi jumped in surprise at the voice and turned round to see who had caught her off guard “Geez Nakky you scared me half to death!”

“Sorry” Nakky replied “I came to see how things were going, with Airi. I didn't mean to scare you”

“It's O.K.” Maimi said “I probably should not of been in my own world any way, I was just trying to think things through”

“About Airi” Nakky asked as the two girls started walking

“Yeah” Maimi said letting out a sigh

“Did it, did it not go so well?” Nakky asked quietly

“I-I don't really know” Maimi replied not to sure how to answer the question Nakky asked her properly

“Don't really know?”

“Well, I think she has forgiven me but at the same time I think she is also still angry at me” Maimi tired to explain “at least, I think so anyway”

“Did you tell her that you liked her?” Nakky stared at her leader as if testing her

Maimi looked away “Um, no, I mean she still has feelings for Miya and all, well possibly anyway, so I didn't want to bother her today”

“And Airi still hasn't figured it out for herself?” Nakky asked this more to herself than Maimi but there was no mistaking the dangerous tone in her voice

“No she hasn't, but perhaps it's my fault rather than hers”

“Your fault?, what about this is your fault?” Nakky replied angrily “But of course, you still love her don't you, even though she doesn't deserve it from you!”

“I can't help who I love Nakky” Maimi said gently

“Neither can I!” Nakky shouted grabbing Maimi by the hand and pulling her into an empty room

“Nakky?” Maimi was shocked by the outburst “Why....”

“Why? Why?” the younger girls voice rang in Maimi's ears “I tell you why Maimi, it's because I'm tired, tired of watching you chase after a girl who doesn't see the obvious, tired of watching you get hurt by her, tired of the fact that whatever anyone else tries to get your attention your eye's stay fixed on Airi even though she shows nothing in return”

“Nakky, I, I don't know how to explain it I just...”

“Well I know how to explain what I feel Maimi, it must hurt, right? The way Airi is with you, why must you all ways have to feel hurt Maimi when you could feel love, from me!”

Nakky went to turn away and leave the room, Maimi couldn't quite believe what she had heard, Nakky loved her? She had to say something to the girl, try to explain.

“Saki wait!”

Nakky paused “Saki?” she said letting out a laugh “It must be serious, for you to call me that” she got to the door and reached out for the handle “I like you Maimi, as you said you can't help who you like and well, I like you, there's no need to chase me, or feel the pain of me not loving you because I am all ready here Maimi, all I'm doing is waiting, waiting for you” Nakky gave Maimi a sad little smile before leaving the room.

Maimi looked at the door for a while before putting her head in her hands, Nakky liked her, she felt almost cruel, all those times she had talked to her about Airi and she had never even noticed the feelings that Nakky had for her, what made it worse was that even though now she knew, Maimi could not pay back the love that Nakky had for her, however futile it may be, she still only liked Airi, but then.....

“Why could I not say it to Nakky?”
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 24 now up!
Post by: eruchan on January 28, 2011, 07:00:30 PM
new chapter! :D
i'm glad maimi finally come back to her senses and apologize to airi  :D
OMG Nakky confessed  :shock:
well... i suspected her liking maimi, but now it's getting even more confusing  :dizzy:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 24 now up!
Post by: kuro808 on January 28, 2011, 08:28:12 PM
We shall add Nakky to the pot and let's see what we come out with :lol:

At least Maimi is back to herself.... I hope :nervous
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 24 now up!
Post by: kano-chan on January 28, 2011, 10:41:05 PM
Amazing how the characters and their feelings are all over the place now. I don't even know where to start. :shocked Now I'M all over the place. :panic:

Captain having feelings for both Miya and Chii. Chii likes Miya. Yurina likes Chii. Miya likes Saki and a bit of Airi?(and some mysterious person..) Maimi likes Airi, but Nakky likes Maimi! Where is this going?? :on blackhole:

So back to this chappy.. :roll:

Maimi tried calming Airi down with a kiss on the lips? :lol: She hadn't even confessed yet. XD

And once again, the very last bit makes me wonder. Is there a reason why Maimi couldn't tell Nakky that? :mon dunno:

Could it be...? :? :O

Okay, done. Now I'm going to wait. :grin:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 24 now up!
Post by: gracula on January 29, 2011, 09:17:22 AM
And Chapter 24 shall be 'Emo Airi is Emo'.

Quote
Nakky paused “Saki?” she said letting out a laugh “It must be serious, for you to call me that” she got to the door and reached out for the handle “I like you Maimi, as you said you can't help who you like and well, I like you, there's no need to chase me, or feel the pain of me not loving you because I am all ready here Maimi, all I'm doing is waiting, waiting for you” Nakky gave Maimi a sad little smile before leaving the room.

This evoked bad memories for me- when a girl tells you that, you have to chase after her or else! Maimi! Get your shit together!
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 24 now up!
Post by: abok on February 07, 2011, 05:46:56 PM
Looks like what i've been fearing about is true... :panic: :panic: :panic:

Nakky really love Maimi... :shocked :shocked :shocked

looks like things are gonna get more and more complicated.... :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:

God... :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: but i'm glad that Maimi and Airi are ok again and no matter what, i hope Airi will realized that she also have a feeling for Maimi... :nervous :nervous :nervous

Sorry for the comment ok... :bow: :bow: :bow: Update soon... :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 24 now up!
Post by: oddball on February 15, 2011, 04:57:44 PM
Chapter 25 now finished, again I apologise the rather sparodic release of my chapter at the moment, it's just been a bit of a stuggle to find time to work on them at the moment, but I battle on and hope that I will be able to get a little more regular in my releases soon!

@Eruchan + Kuro87: yeah poor Maimi, gets past some of her problems with Airi but Nakky adds a whole new set of problems into her life!  :doh:

@Kano-Chan: Nice little summary of the relationships  :lol: I get all over the place with the relationships as well sometimes and it's my fic!  :doh: Maimi and her spur of the moment kiss  :lol: yeah Maimi herself wasn't sure what she was doing either and as for Nakky, well......... we'll se wont we  :P

@Gracula: Ah, apologies for the bad memories!  :bow: as for Maimi, we will have to see what she does

@Abok: You were worried about Nakky liking Maimi, perhpas you weren't the only one who was worried.... but yes you are right, things are still getting pretty complicated!


Chapter 25

“Ahh I love Sundays” Miya exclaimed as she led down on Saki's bed

The owner of the bed, that Miya was beginning to rearrange to  her own likings, looked up from the book she was reading on the chair by her desk and shook her head at the girl who was now nestled in a pile of pillows and bedding “Only Sundays that you have off” she said “and not that I'm happy to see you but why is there a specific reason for you to come over and trash my bed?”

“Miya sat up sending a couple of pillows falling to the floor “Why? Because I haven't seen my darling girlfriend in ages so I thought to myself “I must go see Saki” so here I am” she said dramatically

“Miya, I'd hardly call, what, about a day ages” Saki said putting her book down and moving over to the bed

Miya led back down on the bed before speaking “But to me Saki, every moment away from you feels like an eternity”

“And every time I hear you say something so cheesy I want to throw up!” Saki replied sitting down on the bed next to Miya, smiling at her girlfriend

“Hey that's not very nice is it?” Miya said pouting “It took me ages to think of that!”

“ages?”

“Well, two minuets anyway”

both of the girl began to laugh as Saki picked up the two pillows of the floor and led down next to Miya, grasping one of her hands in hers as she did so

“So, my girlfriend who hasn't seen me for an eternity” Saki said “Did you plan anything to do today or are we going to just lie here?”

“Well, is lying here such a bad idea?” Miya purred, a cheeky smile on her face “Besides, if we go out I can't do this” Miya leant over and gave Saki a kiss on the lips

“True” Saki replied happily as she snuggled up to Miya.

It was odd, Saki thought, how natural the romantic behaviour between herself and Miya has become, she smiled to herself as Miya wrapped her arms around her body, odd it may be but if it meant that she got held like she was now then it was defiantly nice at the same time.

“You know we should probably go do something” Saki said after a while

Miya groaned in response “Do we have to?”

“Isn't there anything you feel like doing?” Saki asked

“Err, I'm doing it” Miya replied indicating the mess of bedding she had collected around her

“And there's nothing you need?” replied the Berryz Captain attempting to pull her fellow member out of her lethargy

“No, all I need is right here” Miya replied happily puffing up one of the pillows

“Aww, are you talking about me?” Saki enquired in a cute voice

Miya looked at Saki, an amused expression on her face “You? No, I was talking about the pillows”

“Pillows, I'll give you pillows!” Saki grabbed a pillows from behind her and threw it at Miya

“Oh it's like that is it” Miya started to get up “fine!” pouncing on the girl next to her and soon straddling the surprised girl, knees either side of her waist and pinning her hands above her head

Miya gazed down at the girl smiling back up at her, she carefully entwined her hands in Saki's and leant down to kiss the girl laying under her, feeling the gentleness in the kiss Saki looked up at Miya as if to question why she would be kissed in such a way

“Thank you Saki, for being who you are, for liking me, for us being together doing things like we are now”

Saki gently began to stroke her girlfriends arm “I could same the same to you Miya, but what's brought this on, something is troubling you, isn't it?”

Miya slowly got off of Saki and moved to sit down on the edge of the bed. “Yes there is” she said smiling sadly “You know that I spent the day with Airi right?” Saki nodded allowing Miya to continue at her own pace “Well she told me something that I never saw coming, that I never expected”

She looked at her hands, clasping them together in her lap as if she was praying “She, she said that she liked me”

Suddenly sitting upright in the bed Saki shouted out “She confessed to you!?” shocked at what Miya had said

“Yes” Miya said quietly, not wanting to look at Saki “I didn't know what to do, she ran off right after she told be, I couldn't say anything to her

“So you didn't reject her?” the mixture of anger and concern of Saki's face was obvious to Miya

“I know you should be angry at me Saki. I wanted to say no but she seemed so desperate, that even though I was dating you she wanted to tell me her feelings. I like you Saki, I really, do but I couldn't just refuse Airi like that, I care for her too, she's like a little sister to me, I just didn't want to hurt her feelings”

“Miya” Saki said gently, any traces of anger fading with Miya's explanation

“It's my own fault really, perhaps I led her on too much, perhaps I needed to make things clearer for her”

“Miya, did you, did you used to like Airi?” Saki asked nervously

“Yes, a long time ago, back when you were...” Miya paused “when you were not the person you are to me now, back before I knew my true feelings for you.” she turned round to look at Saki “I used to have a foolish crush with Airi but Saki I fell in love with you”

“Miya I...”

“I just didn't want to hurt you or Airi, I'm sorry Saki” Miya said facing away from Saki once more

Saki quickly crawled over to Miya and hugged her from behind and gently kissing the girl on the ear “It's all right, I understand”

“You-You do?” Miya asked, relief  sweeping across her face “So, your not upset or worried”

“You like me right Miya?” Saki asked turning the girl round to face her.  Miya nodded and as she did so Saki leaned in to kiss the worried girl in front of her “Then it's all right isn't it”

Miya stared intently into the eyes of the girl who had just kissed her, a smile beginning to form on her face she soon lunged towards Saki to initiate a kiss of her own, the force of which made Saki fall back onto the bed with Miya landing gently on top of her, their lips not parting for a second. Saki readily accepted Miya's tongue when it forced it's way fast her lips and collided with her own as the two deepened the kiss as if nothing else in the World mattered at that moment, perhaps, Saki thought, it didn't. Miya softly broke the kiss moving to give Saki a quick kiss on the cheek before resting her head on her girlfriend's chest.

Saki smiled contentedly and began to stroke Miya's hair “I suppose this was why Maimi was angry at you then?”

“Yeah” Miya replied “Airi had told her before she confessed to me, well, that's what Maimi told me anyway”

“You spoke to Maimi? When?”

“A couple of nights ago, before I came round to see you remember” Miya said “we had a talk, sorted a few things out”

“And are friends again” Saki asked. Miya simply smiled and nodded in response

“No wonder you were grinning like an idiot that night!”

“I was grinning because I got to see you” Miya replied in a sugary sweet voice

Saki bopped Miya on the head “That's just awful” she said while Miya gently chuckled to herself

“Miya, can I ask you something?”

“Hmm”

“Why did you tell me about Airi?”

Miya moved from off of Saki's chest and sat up, making Saki do the same, taking hold of her hands as she did so

“Because I wanted to be the one to explain it to you” she said glancing at Saki “I wanted to be true to you, I kinda thought that with the way things were with Maimi and Airi and everything that you would most likely find out one way or the other so I though it best that you should hear it from me”

Miya tightened her grip on Saki's hands “I wanted you to understand you see, to explain things to you properly because I don't want to lose you”

Saki looked longingly at her girlfriend, releasing her hands from Miya's grasp and placing them on her cheeks “Miya, you won't ever lose me!” she said kissing her once more

Miya smiled happily  at the girl opposite her “Pinky promise?” she said, holding out her smallest finger

Saki giggled at Miya's sweetness “Pinky promise” she replied hooking her own round Miya's

“Saki, Miya” A voice called from down the stairs “If you two are planning on emerging from that room at any point now might be a good place to do it as lunch is ready”

“Coming Mum!” Saki shouted back before grabbing Miya's hand and heading down the stairs.

Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 25
Post by: eruchan on February 16, 2011, 12:06:38 AM
an update!  :D
yay for miyasaki moments  :heart:

Miya led back down on the bed before speaking “But to me Saki, every moment away from you feels like an eternity”

“And every time I hear you say something so cheesy I want to throw up!” Saki replied sitting down on the bed next to Miya, smiling at her girlfriend
miya so cheesy... and saki's not buying it XD

so, are we back to emo nakky-maimi-airi for next chapter?
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 25
Post by: kano-chan on February 16, 2011, 12:38:01 AM
Cute MiyaSaki moments! :inlove: Wow, Miya is such a good girlfriend. :w00t: She pretty much told Captain everything, but Captain wasn't being very honest, was she? ;) Even though she said Miya will never lose her, but what about her feelings for Chii? Miya still doesn't know about ChiiSaki, right? :smhid And since they only use the word "like", things might really change..  :O Maybe we'll end up with MiyAiri after all?! :twisted:

Oh my... Which couple am I rooting for?? :banghead:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 25
Post by: kuro808 on February 16, 2011, 05:35:25 AM
Hmm I guess clarifying the facts with Saki and the hope that it shall be solved, hopefully XD
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 25
Post by: gracula on February 16, 2011, 12:26:35 PM
Quote
“Miya sat up sending a couple of pillows falling to the floor “Why? Because I haven't seen my darling girlfriend in ages so I thought to myself “I must go see Saki” so here I am” she said dramatically

ooh- playgirl pimp Miya.

Quote
Miya led back down on the bed before speaking “But to me Saki, every moment away from you feels like an eternity”
Oookay... maybe not so much.


Nooo! Miya shouldn'tve told. Now Saki will keep thinking about it forever. Good girlfriend, lousy girl instincts.
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 25
Post by: oddball on February 26, 2011, 02:26:22 AM
Chapter 26 is here for you guys to enjoy! I may get one more done before next week when I going on holiday for a week, can't really promise much though as I may be mega-busy with work and I know I will be when I get back so I may not update for a while but I will get the next episode up ASAP I promise you guys this!

@Eruchan: no Maimi/Airi this chapter, that's the nest one, still we got, well you'll see in this chapetr.....

@Kano: Funnily I sometimes struggle to root for couple as well and I'm writing the fic!  :doh: As for Miya and Saki, well I dont want to spoil it do I!  :P

@Kuro87: Yeah Miya wanted Saki to know before she found out, we will wait and see how Saki knowing this may effect things......

@gracula: Yep that's my Miya, all ways so cheesy  :lol: Miya told Saki for a reason, though perhaps that is not yet clear.....

enjoy chapter 26 guys

Chapter 26

Chii looked at the tall girl as she inspected every inch of the room they were in, she couldn’t help but smile at this, it was exactly the same thing Miya had done the first time she had been in Chii's room as well

“you know, my rooms not really that interesting Yurina” she said to the girl who continued to inspect the room

“Well this is the first time I've been here” Yurina replied defensively “Besides I was amazed that you are even more scruff at home than you are at work”

“Are you saying my room is a mess?” Chii asked noticing some used shirts on the floor and trying to kick them under the bed

Yurina, spotting what Chii was doing smiled, seeing a half full cup of juice on the side she picked it up wrinkling her nose at it's contents. Showing Chii the mould that had formed on top of the liquid she said “A mess? Of course not”

“Well, I'm cleaning it, I just haven't got round to it yet” Chii quickly snatched the cup of Yurina and placed it down on her bedside table

“Just this bit it seems so far” Yurina said, pointing to an empty space on Chii's windowsill which stood out in the otherwise messy room

“Well, it seemed like a good place to start”

“Really?” said Yurina, looking at the pile of clothes on the floor which, moments ago, Chii had tired to hide under her bed

Chii quickly gathered the clothes back up off the floor and ran to put them in the washing basket down the hall an embarrassed look on her face

When Chii made it back to her room she saw that Yurina had made her bed for her, she could not remember the last time it was so neat

“Yurina that's amazing, how did you make it so neat that quickly?”

“I dunno, it's a knack I guess, I've all ways been good at this sort of stuff”

“Remind me that when I move out of home to make you be my house-mate” Chii said sitting down on the bed

Yurina smiled “I'd like that”

Chii ran her hands over the cover of the bed “Thank you Yurina, really, really, thank you”

“Chii, it's just a bed I don't...”

“No, not just the bed for everything you've do for me recently”

Yurina also sat down on the bed “You don't need to thank me Chii”

“I know I don't have to Yurina but I want to” Chii replied holding on to one of the tall girls hands

“You've been so kind and considerate to me recently and I know I haven't been the best of company for you but still you have been there for me, no matter what, I just want you to know that I grateful to you”

“I know Chii” Yurina looked at Chii's hand in hers “Listen Chii, I just want you to know that I will all ways be here for you if you need me” she said, leaning in and kissing Chii on the cheek

Chii very slowly raised a hand to the cheek that Yurina had just kissed “You-you kissed me?” she said a confused and slightly shocked expression on her face

“It, it was only a kiss on the cheek” Yurina stammered, now blushing over her earlier actions “I mean it's not as though I kissed you on the lips or anything” she continued giggling nervously

“No, no you didn't” Chii felt herself slowly leaning in toward Yurina, her gaze fixed on the other girls lips, she could see that Yurina was doing the same, they were so close now, close enough to feel each other breath on their faces.....

Bang, Bang, Bang

Chii jumped up to her feet, taking deep breaths as she did so “I, um, better go see who that is at the door, yes, right going” she blurted out before leaving her room

“I'll, er, come too” Yurina said, more to herself than anyone as she got up to follow Chii

there was another knock on the door as Chii made her way down the stairs “All right, all right” she complained to the unknown visitor as she got to the door and opened it

“M-Miya?”

“Hi Chii” Miya greeted her friend smiling before noticing the figure walking down the stairs “and Yurina I see, sorry I didn't interrupt something did I?”

“No” Chii and Yurina shouted together before looking at each other embarrassed, making Miya smirk

“No eh?” she said raising her eyebrows “anyway can I come in or do you want to leave me to your, ah, nothing?”

“Actually Miya I was, er, just about to leave” Yurina said grabbing her coat

“Re-really” a confused Chii asked “You're leaving?”

“Yeah, things to do and stuff” Yurina mumbled “Well see you later Chii, Miya” quickly waving to the two girls she headed out through the open door

“Yurina” Chii called, following her out of the house and grabbing hold of her hand, using it to turn the tall girl round.

“Yes” Yurina asked a rather sad look on her face

Chii leant up and kissed her on the cheek “Take care” she said sweetly as Yurina looked at her, eyes wide with shock

“I, um, yes-yes leaving now, er call you later, or something” Yurina said, her cheeks burning as she did so, Yurina quickly bowed to Chii before heading of down the street

Chii smiled as the girl walked away, watching her for a while before heading back into the house. She shut the door and turned round to see that Miya was not there, Chii sighed, no matter, she knew where Miya would be, she made her way upstairs to her room and looked to where she knew Miya would be, and there she was, just like all ways, sitting up on the windowsill where she had sat for as long as Chii cared to remember.

“So” Miya said looking out the window from her perch “You and Yurina eh?”

“I-I'm thinking about giving it a go with her” Chii said quietly not really wanting to look at Miya but unable to look away

Miya nodded as she continued to look out the window “Really?” she asked, an odd little smile on her face “that's.... good isn't it?”

“For some reason Chii wanted to shout out that it wasn't good but those words escaped her “She's really been here for me recently you know” she explained instead, like it was some sort of excuse “Yurina really cares for me too” she added, well that at least was true

“Will you be happy with her?” Miya asked, her gaze moving from the view outside to look directly at Chii as if she was trying to read her mind

“I believe so yes” Chii replied, almost hating herself for saying it to Miya

Miya jumped down from her seat on the window sill and ran over to hug Chii “Congratulations, I'm happy for you” she said happily, ruffling Chii's hair

“I haven't even asked her out yet” Chii replied sitting down on the bed “she might say no” you mean you hope she says no her brain added

Miya laughed a liitle as she moved over to stand by the window “Don't worry Chii, she'll say yes”

“You can tell” Chii asked, Miya once again just nodded in response “Oh....good, I'm glad”

Miya looked down at the windowsill she had so often sat on “Chii can I ask you something?”

“What?”

“Why is this ledge all ways clear? I mean the rest of your room is, well it's a mess Chii it all ways has been but this windowsill is all ways been clean for the last couple of years”

Chii looked over at Miya, the girl was gently rubbing her hands on the windowsill as if she was stroking it “It's, well, it's because of the person who sits there” she said eventually

Miya's hands stopped roaming the ledge as she tensed at Chii's words “It hasn't been clear her forever though”

“I know” Chii responded “But I began to feel that if I kept it clean that person would keep coming back, I suppose it was my way of showing that there was all ways a space for them here”

Miya smiled as she sat back up on the windowsill and leant her head back against the window “Thank you Chii”

“Thank you Miya”

“Thank me? For what Chii?” Miya asked leaning forward

“Because you keep on coming back”

“Well why wouldn't I?” Miya asked “You're my bes friend after all”

“I know” Chii replied sadly “It's just, well you haven't been round much lately, I just wondered....”

“It's my fault Chii, it has nothing to do with you” Miya said sternly before softening her expression and contnuing “Mind you that's why I came over, you see me and Saki though it would be cool to get all the girls over to her house for a sleepover as we haven't done one in years, you interested?”

“I'd love to Miya, it will be nice to do something as a team, but, why did you have to come over, you could of just e-mailed me you know”

“Well, the truth is I used I as an excuse” Miya smiled to herself “To come and see you, as you said yourself it's been a while, didn't plan on seeing Yurina here though”

“Miya can I ask you something?”

“Yes”

“Would you, be O.K. If I dated Yurina”

Miya sat down on the bed next to Chii “If you would be happy with her than I would give it my blessings, I just want you to be happy Chii”

“You'd make me the happiest Miya” was what Chii wanted to say but couldn't bring herself to do it “Thanks Miya” she replied instead

Miya patted Chii on the shoulder “Well, I should get going” she said standing up

“Oh right” Chii said “You-you could stay, if you like”

Miya paused as if tempted by the idea “No I gotta go, perhaps next time?”

“Yeah that would be nice” Chii said sadly as she lead Miya to the door

“Well, see you around” Miya grabed Chii and gave her a hug

“Yeah” hiireplied holding tightly onto Miya “Thanks for coming round”

“My pleasure as all ways” Miya said gently stroking one of Chii's arms before realizing what she was doing and stepping away “Well bye”

“Bye Miya” Chii called as she closed the door

Miya heard the door close and took the deep breath she had been wanting to take for a while, her heart was beating so fast.... but then this had happened before after leaving this house

“Again?” she asked herself before heading home

Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 26
Post by: kano-chan on February 26, 2011, 04:26:56 AM
Ano....Eetooo.... Wha..what, wha.... a- :stunned:

I DID NOT just sensed some MIYACHII there... :mon wtf: I don't know what to think anymore. Miya likes Chii..? :mon one: No way, NO WAY. :on blackhole:

I just had a crazy idea...(or not).. Maybe all of the girls should just fall for Miya and become her girlfriends. :mon lol: 

In the end, it's just my own selfish, wild idea. :bleed eyes: XD

Thanks for confusing me even more with this chappie. I must read. :twothumbs
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 26
Post by: kuro808 on February 26, 2011, 05:06:51 AM
Chinami seems unsure to give up on Miya but maybe staying with Yurina will keep her mind off her
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 25
Post by: eruchan on February 26, 2011, 07:37:06 AM
aaa... a miyachii chapter?
Miya heard the door close and took the deep breath she had been wanting to take for a while, her heart was beating so fast.... but then this had happened before after leaving this house

“Again?” she asked herself before heading home
miya falling for chii? MiyaSakiChii love triangle!  :shocked wait... add kuma-chan into it...

chii is so adorable here i kinda rooting for her  :nervous but i don't want miyasaki to breakup
“So” Miya said looking out the window from her perch “You and Yurina eh?”

“I-I'm thinking about giving it a go with her” Chii said quietly not really wanting to look at Miya but unable to look away

Miya nodded as she continued to look out the window “Really?” she asked, an odd little smile on her face “that's.... good isn't it?”

“For some reason Chii wanted to shout out that it wasn't good but those words escaped her “She's really been here for me recently you know” she explained instead, like it was some sort of excuse “Yurina really cares for me too” she added, well that at least was true

“You'd make me the happiest Miya” was what Chii wanted to say but couldn't bring herself to do it “Thanks Miya” she replied instead
this... aw chii  :cry:
chii deserve some love  :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 26
Post by: gracula on February 26, 2011, 05:07:38 PM
Miya Asks For Trouble. Is what this is.  :thumbup, Miya!

Bring on the drama and complications. I have a chart, with their names and faces on it to keep track- no fear.

I'd love to see a Miya mistakenly texts some girl thinking she was another girl and they find out and she ends up in deep shit chapter. But that's just me. Players gotta pay!
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 26
Post by: oddball on March 04, 2011, 05:23:49 PM
Result, got this chapter out before I go on holiday tomorrow  Well, see you guys in a week

@ Kano: Yep, Miya perhaps has her own confused feelings too......

@Kuro: A very nice summary of Chii's position at the moment  :twothumbs

@Eruchan: What Chii really thinks will become apparent, I can see why you may route for her, it's the kinda character I wanted her to be!

@Gracula: Hmm, don't worry Miya may have to explain some things sooner rather than later  :panic: Hmm, I may need to borrow your Chart  :lol:

Chapter 27

It almost felt odd, Maimi thought, to be walking Airi home again, she had done it so often in the past, it hadn't even that long since she had last done it but so much had happened between then and now that it made this relatively regular experience into something which was weird and confusing

In truth she hadn't even meant to ask Airi if it was OK to walk her home, she had just sort of asked, old habits it seems, die hard, what surprised her more was that Airi had said yes, she would of thought that Airi would of said no but then Maimi found it so hard to read what Airi was thinking these days, she had been so good at reading it too.

So hear they were, walking home together just like all ways, well note quite like all ways. Neither girl had said a word since they had left on their journey, when there was once conversations and laughter there was now silence, not out of any sort of dislike but more out of an awkwardness between the to of them. Maimi glanced across to Airi, the girl seemed to be having an internal struggle as if she wanted to talk but wasn't sure if she should, it took Maimi quite a lot of effort not to comment on the cute and funny expressions on the other girls face, especially in the circumstances, Maimi could watch Airi do this for hours, she liked watching Airi, to her there was something calming about it.

“I still haven't forgiven you yet” Airi suddenly said, almost making Mami jump in surprise “letting you walk me home doesn't mean I have OK?”

“Then why let me walk you home?” Maimi asked knowing that perhaps Airi did not mean all of what she said

“I-I don't know” Airi replied looking confused at herself

“You know I'm sorry right, for how I acted” Maimi said

“I know, you don't have to go on about it”

“But I will, till you forgive me”

“Fine” a slightly annoyed Airi replied

“Perhaps if I bought you a crepe you would forgive me?” Maimi said pointing to a vendor across the street

“Maimi, you can't buy my forgiveness” Airi said taking a deep breath “Besides, you-you don't need to anyway”

“don't need to?”

“You don't need to buy my forgiveness because it's all ready been given, I forgave you the other day, it's just I, well, um” she tailed off

“Can I still buy you a crepe?” Maimi asked smiling “as a celebration we're friends again”

“You can buy me one” Airi said quietly “because we were never not friends” she looked up and smiled sheepishly at Maimi

“That does sound better” Maimi smiled back at Airi, offering a hand, which, after a moments hesitation, Airi she took as they crossed the road to the shop

“So” Maimi said a few minuets later as they sat down on a bench and began to eat their crepes “Have you, um, spoken to Miya yet?”

“No” Airi replied toying with her crepe

“I'm sorry” Maimi apologized, scolding herself for moving onto such a difficult subject so quickly but feeling that she had to continue “I'm sorry it didn't work out for you with Miya”

“It's OK Maimi” Airi said, forcing herself to smile a little at her friend “I'm OK that she doesn't like me”

“Are, are you sure” Maimi asked, confused at Airi's sudden acceptance of Miya not liking her

“Yes, yes I'm sure, though maybe I'm not quite sure why” Airi said as if she had confused herself with what she had just said

“Not sure why?”

“Yes, as if, like, my feelings for her were not what I perhaps thought they were” Airi looked at the floor “But I was so sure that it was her I liked” she continued, more to herself than to Maimi

Regardless if she was supposed to hear them or not she had listened to Airi's last words, something stirred in her heart, perhaps there was hope for her? “Come on” she said throwing the remains of her crepe in a bin “lets get you home”

“OK” Airi threw her little eaten crepe in the bin also.

They continued on the walk to Airi's house, falling back into the silence that they had been in earlier on this trip, Maimi thought that perhaps this time however was because the younger girl had too much on her mind, Mami had a good idea what it was that was probably bothering her and she thought it would be best for Airi to talk about it even though she didn't really want to talk about it herself.

“Airi you should really talk to Miya you know”

“I-I don't really want to” Airi kicked a small stone on the ground

“But Airi....”

“She'll just confirm things by saying no and then what, she probably wont want to be my friend any more, so what's the point?” Airi interrupted

“Do you really think Miya would just stop being you friend like that?” Maimi asked the younger girl “You know she wont, that's not Miya, go talk to her Airi, to resolve this issue, if not for you then for Miya, this has been a problem for her to you know”

“I know” Airi said sadly “I know I should speak to her, it's just, well, I'm just scared OK” she looked over to Maimi “I don't suppose you could be there, when I talk to her”

Maimi smiled “I can be there for you both before and after Airi but you need to sort it out with Miya on your own I'm afraid”

“But, but she probably hates me know”

“Don't be silly!” Maimi snapped “Don't cheapen Miya like that you know she's a good person, better than disliking you for something like this,besides, she cares for you to much so she wont abandon you, unlike, unlike me” Maimi hung her head

“You didn't leave me Maimi” Airi said quietly

“But I did though didn't I?” the C-ute leader replied “I left you when I should have been there for you”

Airi looked into the eyes of the sullen looking girl in front of her and, to Maimi's great surprise, smiled at her

“Then, I suppose the important thing is that you came back, to be here for me now”

“Airi I....”

“I will speak to Miya, I promise Maimi, you're right it-it has to be sorted out, one way or another, all I ask is that you be here for me Maimi”

“I will Airi, be here for you, I wont leave this time”

“Good” Airi said simply as the two girls carried on their way

The silence had once again returned to the pair but this time it was different, gone was the awkwardness of the earlier silences and in it's place was a feeling of contentment that perhaps, even after their recent troubles, Airi and Maimi were still friends, though perhaps, Maimi thought, it was more that Airi had admitted to her that had never not been friends that made her feel warm inside.

“Well, here we are” Airi commented as they reached her house “Thanks for walking me home”

“My pleasure” Maimi replied “as all ways”

“See you around” Airi replied beginning to turn away before Maimi pulled her back into a hug

Airi paused for a fraction of a second before wrapping her arms around Maimi and hugging her back, they stayed like that for a while, until Airi looked up at Maimi

“You know I almost thought you were going to kiss me there again” she said jokingly

Maimi blushed “Yeah that would be silly wouldn't it” Maimi said gazing down at the younger girl

“Yeah, silly” Airi mumbled, for some reason she was moving closer to Maimi

“Yeah” Maimi followed Airi, moving towards her, they were so close, close enough to...

Airi seemed to snap herself out of the trance that she was in which seemed to bring Maimi out of hers as well

“I, uh, see you tomorrow” Airi stammered before quickly dashing into her house and shutting the door

“Er, what, oh!” Maimi said, not fully sure what had just happened, had they nearly kissed, kissed! For goodness sake, where had that come from all of a sudden “what was all that about?” she asked herself

Airi ran upstairs to her room and led down on her bed, had she? No, no she couldn't have, could she?, I mean it felt as though they were just about to, but, with Maimi?”

“What was all that about?” she wondered

Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 27
Post by: eruchan on March 04, 2011, 06:33:02 PM
Aww.. Sweet maimi/airi..
Looks like maimi pushed airi to resolve the miyairi tension..
Hope miya and airi become close friends again.. Miya is so sweet with airi in the theme park, just like an older sister :)
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 27
Post by: kuro808 on March 04, 2011, 07:23:36 PM
well i guess both are trying to mend the pieces and I don't know how Miya will be taking it
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 27
Post by: kano-chan on March 05, 2011, 07:36:45 AM
Wow, I don't believe this, but even though I'm not a fan of other couples that doesn't include Miya in this fic(just fandom), I was hoping they would just kiss! :wub:

I wonder who, exactly, Miya will end up with.
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 27
Post by: gracula on March 10, 2011, 03:27:38 AM
Quote
“What was all that about?” she wondered

What *was* that about?

Maimi! Airi! Grow a pair and just kiss already.
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 27
Post by: oddball on March 24, 2011, 05:41:40 PM
Right Chapter 28, sorry for the wait, a mixture of Holiday, catching up with work after holiday, the Japanese disasters and the release of Shogun 2 Total War and Dragon Age 2 kind of kept the deadline back

but eventually it has arrived enjoy!

@Eruchan: Yes though Maimi wants to show Airi that she loves her she feels as though she owes alot to Miya and so wants her and Airi to be friends again.

@Kuro87: Yes quite how Miya truly feels about this hasn't quite been shown, though she may not be the one with the biggest issue about this....

@Kano: Really  :lol: glad I could broaden your horizens a bit with some other couples!

@Gracula: Well yes it's safe to say that little Airi is confused, perhaps a nice chat with Miya may sort things out, what do you think?

Chapter 28

Saki sat down and watch the two girls across the room chatting to each other. She had waned Chii and Miya to go back to how they were before she had started dating Miya, it seemed that whatever was bothering Miya about seeing Chii had perhaps been solved and perhaps the pair of them were getting back to the way they used to be.

The problem however was that Saki was now not sure that she wanted them spending time together any more. It was true of course that Saki had kept telling Miya to go see Chii but maybe, she thought to herself, deep down in her heart she perhaps did not want them being as friendly as they had been.

Saki knew herself that it was guilt, her own guilt in fact that wanted to keep the two of them at more of a distance, not out of jealousy for the two girls, not this time but because of her own feelings for both of them. Everyday she felt lucky to be with Miya and was happy that Miya was with her but recently, when she had been with Chii, old feelings had stirred and had asked the question if she was as truly over Chii as he once had been.

“It's nice to see them friendly again” A voice said next to Saki, making her jump

“Jeez Momo you scared me, don't sneak up on me like that!” Saki scolded the smallest Berryz member

“Sorry Captain but it was kinda your own fault, going off into your own World like that”

“I suppose that's true” Saki replied trying to work out Momo's logic

“So, what's on your mind?” Momo asked her Captain

“What makes you think I have something on my mind?” Saki asked defensively

Momo gave Saki a look

“Oh come on, don't say this is down to your 'amazing powers of deduction' ore something like that” Saki mocked

“No” Momo replied “I know  because I've been your friend for years and I've learnt to tell when something is bothering you”

“Oh” Saki simply said, now feeling slight embarrassed at what she had just said about Momo

“So as I said, what's bothering you?” she glanced over to where Saki had been looking “are you and Miya O.K.?”

“No me and Miya are fine , it's, well you know I was worried that Miya and Chii seemed to becoming distant with each other?” Momo nodded “Well now I'm not so sure I want them as friendly with each other as they used to be”

“They haven't been getting too friendly have they?” Momo asked slightly panicked

“No” Saki replied looking at Momo “what makes you say that?”

“Oh nothing, I just assumed because you mentioned both of them, that, well......” Momo tailed off

Saki sighed “It's not them Momo it's me”

“You?” Momo asked, giving her friend a questioning look “I don't understand”

“It's just that recently, I've been questioning myself, I was sure that Miya and I were perfect but I now I feel as if some part of me won't let me get rid of the feelings I had for Chii”

“Felling for Chinami!” Momo asked, incredulous at Saki's revelation “Saki it's a weird time to be questioning if you still have feelings for Chii isn't it?”

“I know it's bad” Saki replied sadly “I really like Miya and I feel it's her I want to be with but at the same time, when I see Chii and talk to her, sometimes my heart wavers”

Momo's expression softened after she heard Saki's words “She was your first love” Momo said gently “it's only Natural that you still have some sort of attachment towards her but when I look at you and Miya I see two people who were mean for each other

“Meant for each other?” Saki asked “Can you really say we are?”

“I talked to Miya once, about going out with you, you know what she said? She told me she felt like one of the luckiest girls alive to be going out with someone so kind and gentle and loving”

Saki's heart, despite the situation, skipped a beat “She, she said that about me?”

Momo smiled “Yep, she's fallen for you right enough”

Saki once more looked over to where the two girls on her mind where laughing and chatting “she told me about Airi you know”

“She did?” Momo asked slightly concerned “What did she tell you”

“She told me how she used to like Airi and how she began to fall for me instead and how, on that day they went out, Airi said that she liked her and hoe Miya rejected her, for me”

“Not many people would say that to their girlfriends” Momo said “You're lucky Saki, to have someone who trusts you that much in a relationship”

“No that's not what I mean, well yes it's great that Miya trusts me so much but what I mean is that, well, I was thinking of telling Miya that I used to go out with Chii”

Momo looked at Saki, seeing if she could read anything from the other girls expression, she could not “That's something you and Chii have to decide between the two of you, though you may be willing to tell Miya, Chii may well have her own reasons for not wanting Miya to know” she replied

“Perhaps it may still be for the best if she doesn’t know” Saki said quietly “I'm afraid that if she ever finds out she will never forgive me for telling her, we are her two best friends and we never told her, how cruel would that be to take?”

“You both had your reasons for not saying anything at the time” Momo said sternly “And it's not like she was the only one who didn't know, nobody did, even I only found out by accident!”

“I suppose but....”

Momo stopped her old friend from saying any more “Miya told you about Airi because she trusted that you liked her enough to see that she still liked you, do you think that someone who thinks like that would be upset at you if she was ever told?”

“I-I guess not” Saki said looking over to her girlfriend “I'm lucky to have someone like Miya aren't I”

“Yes you are” Momo replied “But then she's lucky to have someone like you”

“Thanks Momo, you're all ways so kind to me” Saki said leaning over and holding Momo's arm

“Well some one has to look after you, spending all your time trying to care for the rest of us and no time to worry about yourself”

“Well you guys are like my family” Saki smiled “So of course I worry about you all”

“Family Eh? Does that make me the Dad?”

The two girls looked round to see Miya and Chii smiling down at the pair of them

Momo scoffed “Some Dad you'd be!”

Miya laughed “Your probably right Momo, still at least I would have a cute wife”

Saki blushed “Miya don't say things like that, it's embarrassing!”

“Speaking of family” Momo said coming to the aid of her friend “It's nice to see the two of you back to goofing around with each other, it felt a bit odd without you two being idiots together”

“Oh come on, it's hardly like things changed, we didn't even have a falling out or anything like that” Miya replied putting her arm round Chii

“I'm with Momo on this one” Saki said looking up at the pair “Things did change for a while, it's nice you sorted whatever it was out”

“Well, whatever, everyone's happy so it's all good” Chii said perhaps a bit to happily nudging Miya “Any way, were heading off now, are you two gonna join us?”

“No we're OK” Saki said as Momo gave her a look “We'll see you guys later on”

“OK then” Chii replied before turning to Miya “Come on Miya, Yurina can't wait forever”

“Yeah” Miya replied distractedly, her attention on Saki, she, like Momo had sensed something in her mood. She went over to Saki and crouched down in front of her “I'll see you later” she said trying to reassure her girlfriend

“Yeah, see you later” Saki replied, a smile of sorts on her face

Miya looked both ways, checking to see who was around before quickly moving in and kissing Saki on the lips before heading off with Chii.

“You know, I've all ways thought it reassuring in a way when those two are together” Momo said as the pair walked off

Saki also watched the pair on their way, her lips still tingling slightly from Miya's kiss “Yeah, they've all ways been close haven't they, I suppose they probably all ways will be”

“But Maybe some part of you doesn't want them so close?” Momo said gently, reading Saki's mind “I mean your ex and your current girlfriend being so close, don't you find it hard sometimes?”

“You don't know the half of it” Saki thought to herself

“It's probably worse for Chii” she told Momo “I mean her best friend is dating her ex girlfriend”

“Perhaps” Momo replied thoughtfully “But, from what I can see, she seems to have Yurina now, just as you have Miya” Momo stood up pulling Saki with her “Both you and Chii are happy now, Miya is the right girl for you, Chii is her friend and you are right, that won't change but to be fair to her she understands that you and Miya love each other and is happy for you both”

Momo grabbed her bag from a locker “I can understand your doubts Saki but believe in yourself, and in Miya”

Saki stood up and hugged her friend “You're right Momo, I suppose I will just have to work on it!”

“That's my girl” Momo said patting Saki on the back

“Yeah, Yeah” Saki replied, see you later

“Well I better be off” Momo said “Later”

“Bye”

Saki watched Momo leave and went to get her things, believe in Miya? Saki wondered why she found it so scary, to put so much trust in Miya, was she afraid of the consequences of doing so or was being with Miya all a mistake? Saki touched her lips, the lips that Miya had so recently kissed, no it could be a mistake...... right?

“Oh Miya what am I doing?” she said to herself as she lef
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 28
Post by: kuro808 on March 24, 2011, 05:47:57 PM
Seems Saki is questioning her motives again and in the end Momo keeps her in the present and don't let her worry too much but there is a lot out there to worry about for all :nervous
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 28
Post by: shenlog on March 24, 2011, 06:35:40 PM
Capitan should stop questioning herself  :banghead:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 28
Post by: kano-chan on March 25, 2011, 02:36:27 AM
Captain! What do you mean by "it's a mistake"??? :angry:

Oh gosshh...Now we're going in circles. :panic: I hope Miya doesn't get hurt! :(

This chapter made it sound like it'll be MiyaSaki, but we still don't know yet, do we? :roll:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 28
Post by: Airidoki on March 30, 2011, 06:03:12 AM
 :( Saki is confused
I do not understand  :bored:
because Miyabi is beautiful and cute  :wriggly: :nya: :shy2:

Update! please! :mon pray2:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 28
Post by: gracula on April 04, 2011, 04:18:29 PM
oh noes.

never a good idea to have your current and ex girlfriend socialize. they start comparing stories.  :lol:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 28
Post by: oddball on April 21, 2011, 12:02:01 AM
Hey guys, relly quick post to say the new chapter is here  :w00t:

alot later than I wanted it out too I might add, well things have been crazy for me so far this year but I wanted to give something to you guys before I head off for easter.

sorry about not replying to your comment but I'm in a big rush to get stuff done, may reply to coments after easter......

Have a good easter and enjoy the chapter:

Chapter 29

“Could I have a word with you?” It sounded like what a teacher would say to you after you had done badly on a test or something, Airi thought, like you needed to be reprimanded for something but it was no teacher who was wanting to talk to her, it was Nakky.

Airi was glad that Nakky had sought her out however, she had been keeping a sort of distance from her meaning they hadn't really talked in a while, something they had done regularly enough in the past, Airi had come to the conclusion that she must of annoyed Nakky in some way and though she did not really know what she had done to possibly upset her friend it seemed as though she perhaps wanted to talk about it.

“I have something I want to tell you” Nakky said, breaking the silence between the two girls

Airi looked at her friend “What is it Nakky, you seem to be upset with me, I was so worried, have I done something wrong?”

“N-no” Nakky was taken aback by the concern Airi was showing for her “It's just that, I've been worried about how to admit this to you, I mean, she's your best friend and all”

“My best friend? You mean Maimi?” Airi asked confused “She hasn't upset you has she?”

“No it's not that, well yes it involves Maimi but....”

“What is it Nakky” Airi said, trying to comfort her “You can tell me”

“I like Maimi”

Airi was stunned by what Nakky had said, she never realized Nakky felt that way about Maimi, she knew they were quite close but never though that she liked Maimi like, well, like that, how did she miss it and why, why did knowing this feel so bad to her, almost as if it hurt?

“I-I never knew, I don't know what to say” Airi muttered still trying to take in this shocking news and how she felt about it.

“I've liked her for a while now” Nakky replied smiling “I just thought it best that you know that, I'm planning to ask her out”

“You've liked her for a while?” Airi asked almost in a daze before all of Nakky's words sunk in “Eh! Your going to ask her out” she asked in a panic

“Yes, she's all ways been so kind to me, she makes me feel special, I know she hangs out with you a lot but your just friends right? I feel as though I can be more than her friend, give her more than a friend can, I can give her my love.”

“Yes just, just friends” Airi echoed Nakky's words not keeping up with the other girls conversation. I mean, it's not like I ever had feelings for Maimi right? Airi asked herself, it's not as though I gave my love to her, I threw my own away.

“Do, do you think Maimi likes you back” Airi asked, she did not really want to know but, at the same time felt as though she needed too

“I believe she does” Nakky replied looking at Airi “I think she's happy to be loved, she deserves to be loved”

Happy to be loved, Airi thought, had she been so foolish as not to notice any of this in Maimi, no, foolish was not the right word, more like selfish, to selfish to care for Maimi's problems, to selfish to care about how she truly felt, Nakky had seen it though and probably Airi should be happy for them but...

Why does it hurt so much?

“Airi?” Nakky spoke bringing the girl out of her conflicting thoughts “Are you all right?”

“I'm, I'm happy for you” Airi said quietly

“Is that all you can say?” Nakky asked, a sad little smile on her face “Even now is that all you feel?”

“Nakky I don't understand”

“I think deep down you do” Nakky replied letting out a sigh “It has all ways amazed me that you never realized it, perhaps it's because you didn't want to I don't know, maybe you were afraid of her feelings, what it meant for the two of you”

“Nakky, what are you telling me, who's feelings, what do you mean?”

“I think perhaps you do understand, perhaps you just don't wan to see it”  Nakky replied

“See it? See what?”

“That Maimi likes you” Nakky replied, almost as a whisper “That she's liked you since pretty much the first day she met you, that even though you broke her heart by telling her you liked Miya she still loves you”

“Maimi, she-she likes me?” Airi asked in disbelief, a sickening feeling hit her stomach “I never knew, I never realized...”

“No you didn't” Nakky stated “Will you give Maimi to me though I wonder, will you give her to someone who will love her in return?”

“I-I......”

“Airi? Nakky? Good, I finally found you two I've been looking everywhere” The pair turned round to see Maimi standing in the door way of the room

Maimi soon saw the look on Airi's face and began to move forward towards the girl concerned “Airi what's the matter?” she asked gently

“I'm sorry Maimi, I'm so sorry” Airi said, tears forming in her eyes as she ran from the room

“Airi, Wait!” Maimi called out after the fleeing girl, she looked over questioningly to Nakky, who would not meet her gaze, before running after Airi.

Airi ran down the corridor, the tears blurring her vision. How cruel could you get? She thought to herself, all those years and she had not realized that Maimi liked her, that she must of put her leader through so much pain, how could she treat her friend like that?

It felt so much more than causing a friend pain though, Airi felt as though she had betrayed more than just the friendship she had with the girl, that there was something more that not only had really hurt Maimi but also herself a little as well, but what else was there?

Airi ran round a corner, still not really thinking where she was going and collided with a girl coming the other way sending them both toppling to the ground.

“Ow! Hey watch where you're going idiot!” the girl shouted before getting a proper look at who had run into her

“A-Airi?” the girl asked, spotting the tears on her face “Airi what's the matter?”

That voice, Airi though through her clouded mind, a voice she found so kind and caring, Miya's voice

Airi grabbed hold of her and wept, any control of her emotions went in the secure grip of Miya's arms as she cried on the girls shoulder

“Airi, what is it, why are you so upset” Miya tried to ask through the tears but Airi did not answer she just continued to cry on her shoulder. Unable to get the girl to speak, Miya began to stroke Airi's hair in an attempt to calm the younger girl down.

“I'm here Airi, I'm here” she said gently as Airi continued to cry.

~  ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Maimi kept running, she had seen Airi round the corner and she was sure the distance between the two of them was becoming shorter, she did not call out to the younger girl as she feared that it would only encourage Airi to keep running, no she would have to catch her “I have to catch her” she though to herself.

She stopped dead however once she had gone round the corner herself. Breathing heavily she looked on at the scene of Airi crying on Miya's shoulder, the Berryz girl gently stroking her hair with a bewildered look on her face.

Maimi stood there in shock. Airi was so upset, upset enough that it even hurt Mami to see her like that, she wanted to know what the problem was and why it had caused Airi to run from her.

Maimi eventually caught Miya's eye, and the girl, who was facing Maimi gave her a look, a look that all but said “Why is Airi so upset?”

“I wish I knew Miya, I wish I knew” Maimi though to herself as she shrugged her shoulders in response to Miya's questioning glare, her attention went back to Airi, she had stopped crying now, perhaps thanks to Miya's care “It should be me though” Maimi thought once again “I should be the one caring for her”

Composing herself she began to move towards Airi but was stopped by Airi shaking her head. Maimi fortunately knew Miya well enough to read the message in that little action; not here, not now, every bone in her body wanted to ignore Miya's advice, to run forward and hold the girl she liked but no, her head overruled her heart on this occasion she trusted Miya's advice besides there was another person she could ask about why Airi was so upset. Maimi nodded to Miya before having one last look at Airi, before heading back the way she came, this time with sadness in her heart.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Somehow Maimi knew that she would find Nakky in the same room that she had left her in. The girl in question was sitting down, looking at the floor as if it was the most interesting thing in the World. Maimi walked in and sat down opposite her friend.

“I know what your going to ask” Nakky said, not looking up from the floor

“Well” Maimi asked, a hint of anger becoming apparent in her voice

“We-we talked about you” Nakky replied nervously “About how I have feelings for you but that it isn't me that you like”

Maimi's eyes widened in shock “Nakky, please, don't tell me that you told Airi that I, that I....”

“That you like her, yes Maimi I did” Nakky interrupted the older girl, now looking right at her “I told Airi that you like her Maimi”

“Why Nakky? Why did you tell her?” Maimi said angrily “You knew I didn't want her to know, I wanted to be the one to tell her my feelings when I was ready but no, you go and tell her for me, you think I wanted that? How do you think that made Airi feel? How do you think I felt?”

“And what about My feelings?” Nakky snapped, loosing her temper also “How do you think I felt watching you chase after Airi who was too self centred to see your love? How do you think I felt all those times you talked to me about how you felt about Airi when I had feelings for you? What do you think it feels like knowing the girl you like will keep chasing after someone no matter what?

Nakky sighed, taking time to regain her composure, Maimi stood there tears falling down her checks, Nakky had told her that she had liked her but listening to what she had said she knew that she, just like Airi, had never seen the feelings of a girl close to them.

“What do you think it feels like” Nakky asked “Letting you go?”

“Let me go?” Maimi asked, wiping away her tears “Nakky what do you mean?”

“I told Airi” Nakky replied, ignoring Maimi's question “I told Airi because I believe that it had to be anyone but you, I think she needed to see what she had put you through, to perhaps realize not only your feelings for her, but her feelings for you”

Nakky stood up, looking down on the still seated Maimi “I'm sorry if I made you upset at telling her, I really am but I did what I though was best, for both of you. I want you to both get on with it you see, It's hard enough for me as it is”

“Hard for you?” Maimi asked, still trying to take in events, was Nakky telling her to go after Airi?

“I knew that I had very little chance with you, against Airi, remember when I confessed to you? I knew then that you would all ways love Airi, never me, we would be no more then friends, so what better for me to do as your friend than to get you and Airi together” Nakky explained, tears began to fall from her eyes “Don't wait to long though Maimi, it's hard enough as it is, waiting for you to be together” Nakky did not look at Maimi again as she went towards the door

“Nakky wait” Maimi called to the departing girl, she had to say something though she did not know what

“Please Maimi, let me go!” Nakky said softly  through her tears

Maimi cried silently as she watched Nakky leave the room, she felt sick, not only had she failed Airi she had also failed Nakky, what made it worse was that she never seen the pain she had cause Nakky yet still the girl had done what she thought was best for her. Maimi shut her eyes “I promise I'll make things right Nakky, for Airi, and for you”
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 28
Post by: eruchan on April 21, 2011, 02:43:20 AM
Airi is so dense   :doh:
Nakky have to tell her straight on for her to realize Maimi likes her  :nervous
Ah Nakky, poor girl... I think it's best she tells Airi, since YajiSuzu is just so dense and will keep continue as friends until god knows when...  :lol:
Now... How's Maimi going to chase after the Kappa  :P
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 28
Post by: gracula on May 12, 2011, 10:06:34 AM
ahhh! angst aplenty. I gotta tell you though, I'm starting to lose track of who's who (grac is a HP!Kids noob) but I will update my chart.  :lol:

I like the twist now- really looking forward to what Maimi'll do.
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 28
Post by: oddball on May 20, 2011, 07:24:33 PM
Hey guys, finally got another chapter out to you guys, sorry it's taking so long at the moment but i have all sort's of things a happening at the moment but know I should be getting back to something a bit more like nornal so may get more chapters out to you soon!!!

@ Grac: LOL yeah I know it's confusing, things may start to pan out soon though... I think!!!

@ eruchan: Yes Airi is a bit dumb and perhaps Nakky telling her was the best thing, whatever it may of cost Nakky...

Chapter 30

Miya walked silently alongside the girl she was escorting home, there was no way she was going to let her walk home on her own, not after what had happened earlier in the day. She felt as though she should try and talk to the girl, even though she felt there would be no response however words failed her at the moment as if her companions lack of words was somehow infectious, she would just have to hope that her presence was enough.

“Miya” said a tiny voice next to her “Could you, could you...... hold my hand?”

“Of course I will Airi” Miya replied , quickly grabbing hold of the younger girls hand

“Thank you” Airi said before falling silent once more. Miya had hoped that perhaps Airi would begin to speak more fell silent also, still unable to say anything she felt may help her friend , instead she gently squeezed the hand in hers and just hoped that it would perhaps make up for the lack of words.

The silence carried on the the entrance to the Suzuki household where Kyoko Suzuki greeted them “Hello Miyabi dear, I wasn't expecting you” she said smiling at her guest, her expression changed however once she saw the look on her daughters face “Airi are you all right?”

“She's just very tired” Miya answered for her “She has a really tough day today, that's kinda why I'm here Mrs Suzuki”

“My poor baby” Kyoko said, soothing her daughters hair “Thank you Miyabi, you are all ways so kind to her”

“It's no problem Mrs Suzuki”

“Well lets go inside, why don't you take Airi to her room whilst I make you both a warn drink?”

“Thank you Mrs Suzuki”

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Miya sipped some of the hot chocolate that Mrs Suzuki had made for her, Airi held her cup in her hands staring into it's contents as if what was in it was the most interesting thing in the World. Miya had hoped that getting Airi home would of gotten her talking about why she was so upset earlier but it seemed not to be working, though she was still unsure quite what to say Miya felt that she had no choice but to say something.

“Airi I.....”

“Am I a bad person?”

Miya blinked, thrown by Airi's question “are you a what?”

“Am I a bad person”

“Of course your not Airi, what makes you say that?” Miya asked

Airi put her cup down on the table beside her before looking over to her friend

“I do selfish things Miya, I told you that I like you when you all ready have a girlfriend before just running off and leaving you and, and” Airi stood up and moved to her bed and sitting down on it, tears coming to her eyes

“I never realized Miya, I was so absorbed in my own troubles and wants that I never saw how she felt about me, how I hurt her by not noticing”

“Airi, who are you talking about?” Miya felt as though she new the answer to her question, even before she asked it

“Maimi” Airi said quietly, confirming Miya's thoughts “I never realized she had feelings for me and all the while there I was telling her how much I liked you, how cruel can you be?”

“But is it me you still like?” Miya asked gently “Perhaps the reason you are so upset is because you feel as though you have hurt the girl you truly love?”

“I-I.... I just don't know Miya, I don't know what to think any more” Airi replied hiding her face in her hands

Miya looked over at her friend and sighed, desperate times it seemed may indeed call for desperate measures. Standing Up she crossed over to where the young girl sat on the bed, grabbing Airi's hands she waited until the girl was giving her full attention towards her before she spoke.

“Airi, I'm going to do something that if anyone else gets to hear about will lead to very serious trouble for you”

“Miya stepped back a few paces and took a deep breath “Kappa, kappa, kappa, kappa, kappa, kappa, kappa, kappa, kappa” Miya dance around the room doing the silly little dance that Airi liked until she saw a little smile appear on the face of her young friend

“Ah ha!” Miya exclaimed , pointing at Airi “I knew there were still smiles in you!”

Miya moved back across the room and sat down next to the now slightly perplexed looking girl

“It's true that Maimi likes you Airi, she has done for a while”

Airi was surprised at this information “You Knew?”

Miya smiled a little at Airi surprise “Yes I knew, in fact I think I was the first person she may of told, To this day I'm amazed at how sure she was that she loved you, even back then”

“But that's just it Miya” Airi said sadly “I-I don't know what I really feel for her, Now I just get so confused by it all, how I feel for her..... and how I feel about you”

“Airi however much I want to help you that is something that you have to figure out on your own, the only thing I can say about that is to trust your heart, it will see you right in the end”

“What if my heart chooses you?” Airi glanced at Miya, as if she feared the answer

“If that's what ends up happening we will cross that bridge when we get there” Miya replied answering a question that she did not really want to “But I think perhaps your heart my lie else where”

“Was it like this for you then Miya, with the confusion and the doubts” Airi asked “when you started dating Saki I mean”

Miya paused before she answered, as if she was carefully forming an explanation in her head “The truth is Saki was, Saki wasn't the first girl I liked” Miya chuckled a little she she saw Airi's shocked expression “Yeah, seems a bit hart to believe now doesn't it?”

Airi nodded at Miya's question before the older girl continued  “Well this other girl she.... well it never got very far with her, besides she liked someone else and I had a massive crush on this other girl for a while but, well, I think she liked someone else too”

“You liked two girls before Saki?” Airi was confused by what Miya was telling her “Well I mean you and Saki all ways looked so close, even before you liked started dating properly I just assumed that, well, you know?”

“We were all ways dating?” Miya finished the sentence “I suppose we did, we had all ways been friends and perhaps looking back at it we should have been more than that earlier, thing is though I never realized the way I truly felt about her until just before we began dating”

“You had to figure out you liked her?”

“Well not so much that I figured it out, it's just that I was to daft to realize it sooner but for some things Airi, it's never too late”

“Never too late huh” Airi mumbled to herself, fiddling with the cover of her bed

“No Airi, never” came the gentle reply from the girl next to her who had heard what Airi had said, weather she was supposed to or not

Checking her watch Miya stood up “Well I better be going, it's getting late” she turned round to face Airi and kissed her on the forehead “Don't worry Airi, things will turn out all right, you'll see”

Miya turned to leave but was stopped by Airi holding onto her hand “Miya wait” she called out “I-I wanted to tell you that I'm sorry, for suddenly saying that I liked you and then running off afterwards I....”

“It's all right Airi, there's nothing to forgive” Miya replied smiling at her friend “Now look Airi I better be going I've got....”

“Miya”

Sighing Miya answered her friend once more “Yes Airi?”

“Thank you” Airi said awkwardly “You all ways seem to be here for me when I need you”

“It's all right Airi besides, what are friends for” Miya paused before continuing “You know though, I think someone else has really been around for you too, maybe you just didn't notice them?” Miya stoop up “Well, home time” she said before opening the door and heading down the stairs quickly followed by Airi

“Who do you mean Miya?”

“Ah, that's for you to find out” Miya winked as she put her coat on

“If I haven't noticed up till now how will I ever notice?” Airi asked as she followed Miya to the door

“Oh I think if you really think about it you will, especially now” Miya hugged Airi and headed out of the house.

“Someone there for me?” Airi asked herself as she waved Miya good bye before heading back into the house and up to her room, then it came to her “Maimi! Of course I never realized , you were there for me all along weren't you” she thought “Something else I never realized, until now”

Miya sat in the back of the Taxi looking out of the window at the scenery as it passed her by

“Your a special girl Airi” she thought to herself “The truth is that you will probably never know that on that day, I nearly said yes to dating you but my future is not with you, I realized that then, I hope you realize who your future should be with Airi and that you find your own happiness, perhaps though, there is one more thing I can do, for both of you...”









Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 29 NEW!!! (OUT 20/5/2011)
Post by: kano-chan on May 21, 2011, 12:32:35 AM
Wow..It's been so long since I've read. :roll: I don't recall knowing this, but I'm not sure if I knew about the other person that Miya liked before she dated Captain. :huhuh

Oh well, so Airi is still kinda confused about her feelings for Miya and Maimi. :O I really thought MiyAiri was cute here~ :wub: Miya was so sweet. :heart: I'm still a bit indecisive about the two couples ;), but it sounded like Miya wants to help Airi and Maimi get together.
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 29 NEW!!! (OUT 20/5/2011)
Post by: eruchan on May 21, 2011, 05:57:37 PM
aww... MiyAiri so cute together... Miya is so nice to her..  :heart:
the Kappa dance  :lol:
hmm... I wonder who are the two girls Miya like before she dated Captain..
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 30 NEW!!! (OUT 20/5/2011)
Post by: oddball on June 03, 2011, 12:19:06 AM
Hey Gang, well here we are, a new chapter up, and just in time before I head of for My oldest sisters wedding, so enjoy this whislt I'm away!

@Kano : Well it's no lie that poor Airi is confused over it all, wonder if anyone else is though?......... I mean as you say Miya is being very sweet......

@Eruchan: Perhaps you may just be about to find out, there are reasons for Miya being nice to Airi as Miya did have a crush on her in the past(this is in the story) but she is over it....

Chapter 31

Saki surveyed the mess in what had once been her parents nice, clean kitchen. It was amazing what seven girls could do to a room with enough snacks and drinks at their disposal she though as she randomly moved bottles around, still it could have been worse, like the time the C-ute girls had come round too, Saki was sure that her parents had never really recovered from what they came home too, their poor oven had never been the same after whatever Miya and Airi had attempted to cook in there emerged from the oven looking like bits of coal, Saki had not used the oven tonight but there was still enough mess to clear up, well it could wait till the morning now....

Saki felt a pair of hands grasp her around the waist “Guess who Saki”

“Miya, I'm sure your supposed to put your hands over my eyes when you say that you know”

In response Miya pulled Saki into a tighter hug before answering “Hmm, I think I like my way better” as she kissed Saki on the back of her neck.

Saki smiled to herself “Yeah, I think I do too”

Miya looked down at the bottles that had been re-arranged and sighed “Saki you can't be thinking of clearing up can you?” she said, moving her hands to grab hold of Saki's

“Don't do the clearing up, Don't do the clearing up, Don't do the clearing up, Don't do the clearing up,” Miya sang as she clapped Saki's hands together for her.

“All right, all right” Said replied over Miya's continued singing “I wasn't going to anyway”

“Good, didn't want you spending the rest of the night in here” Miya said happily

“Well let's go back to the other room then” Saki went to leave but Miya did not let her out of her grasp “Er, Miya?”

“I said I didn't want you spending the time in here, I didn't mentions anything about us though did I?” Miya rested her head on Saki's back

“Well Can I at least turn around?” Saki asked, nodding, Miya loosened her grip on Saki so she could turn around before bringing her back into the hug

“Well your certainly in a good mood” Saki commented, relaxing in her girlfriends embrace “Something good must of happened”

“No, not really” Miya said deepening her voice “Well not quite yet anyway”

“Not yet? What do you....”

Saki's question was answered by Miya kissing her full on the lips, replying to Miya's actions Saki soon felt Miya's tongue asking for entry, something that Saki readily agreed to, letting Miya explore what felt like every corner of her mouth, eventually the two girls pulled apart, after catching her breath Saki looked up at the girl in front of her

“O.K. Miya now I know something good happened”

“It most certainly just did” Miya replied seductively giving Saki a look than made her feel as if she was melting

Trying to think of what it could be that had please Miya before she completely turned to a puddle it dawned on Saki what it might just be “I assume that the chat you had with Airi went well?”

Despite herself Miya broke into a large smile “Yep, I think she finally is beginning to figure out what Maimi truly is to her”

“Well it certainly took her long enough” Saki said, amused by her girlfriends happiness “So their little saga should be over soon?”

“I hope so” Miya replied “There are other things in my life I need to concentrate on”

“like what?” Saki asked

“Well....” Miya began to lean in towards Saki once again

“Miya, Saki what are you..... Oh! Sorry!”

the two girls pulled apart to see an embarrassed looking Chinami standing in the doorway of the kitchen.

“Geez Chii! You nearly scared me to death” Miya said grabbing Saki's hand “Well I suppose we better get back in there” she said to Saki.

“You go first Miya and make sure that everyone is O.K.” Saki replied letting go of Miya's hand “As your here Chii can you give me a hand with these snacks?”

“Sure” Miya replied, smiling at Saki as if to reassure her “don't be to long” she called out as she walked past Chii, toughing her arm as she walked past and out to the other room.

Chii moved into the kitchen and grabbed a packet of nuts and began to pour them into a spare bowl “You know I'm sure Miya could of helped with these”

“I want to tell her Chii, about us”

Chinami slowly put down the bag she was holding “do you think she really has to know” ahe asked “Won't it just hurt her? Perhaps make her angry at you?”

Saki smiled “Miya will understand Chii, I trust her in that, she has been so honest with me, I just feel as though I should be honest with her on this”

“It's not guilt is it?” Chii asked “Miya has been honest with you so you feel as though you must tell her about us?”

“Maybe in the end guilt does play it's part” Saki replied gently 2More than anything though I want her to know, from us, it will be better I think if we tell her, truthfully Chii I wished we had told her from the start but it is too late for that so perhaps it's right that she gets to know now, it will be better also if it comes from us know, rather than Miya finding out on her own”

“But who would tell her Saki?” Momo surely wouldn't and as far as I know she is the only one who knows, surely this is a case of what you don't know can't hurt you!”

Saki looked at Chinami “Don't you trust in Miya Chii? She is your friend, your best friend, do you really think that she would hate you for what happened between the two of us in the past? What is it that makes you so keen for Miya not to know?”

“It's not Miya hating me that bothers me Saki, I just don't want to see her hurt with this” she replied sadly

“Silly Chii, always so caring, even in this” Saki said kindly “She wont be hurt Chii, she will understand and be trusting, in both of us”

Sighing Chinami walked over to Saki “Very well Saki, I will put my trust in Miya, and in you, If you are determined to tell her then I suppose it's O.K.”


“Thank you Chii” Saki hugged the other girl “It means a lot to me”

“Well you know, that's me, always here to help” Chii replied with a forced happiness which Saki either missed or perhaps more likely ignored “Come on lets go to the other room” Chinami picked up a couple of bowls, as did Saki as they headed out into the other room.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Miya woke with a star, she sat up groggily to see the other girls asleep around her on the floor with Saki lying next to her in the bed. Miya wondered what had woken her when she felt a chill in the air, surely no breeze had woken her though, they had not even left a window open.

It was then that she noticed that in fact not quite all the other girls were, unlike her, asleep. The space where Chinami had been sleeping was empty and adding that to the chill she had felt in the air she had a pretty good idea where her friend might of gone.

Getting out the bed a quietly as possible so as not to wake anyone, Miya grabbed a blanket and made her way to the door that lead to the balcony of Saki's room, the curtain had opened slightly, probably as someone had disturbed it and through that gap Miya could see Chii sitting on the wooden floor, looking at the night sky.

Chii turned round when she heard the door slide open “M-Miya I'm sorry, I didn't wake you did I?”

Choosing not to answer Chii's rather obvious question, Miya offered her friend the blanket “Here, it's getting quite cold out now”

“Thank you Miya” Chii replied wondering if Miya was going to ask why she was out here or not, still it was quite cold so the blanket was very welcome

“Couldn't sleep?” Miya asked sitting down next to her friend

“No” Chii replied realising that Miya was delicatly trying to get round to why she was out here “I was just, well I had things on my mind, to many things to sleep with anyway” she said hoping that Miya would leave it at that, unfortunatly it seemed as though Miya would not let it go.

“Anything you can tell your friend about?” Miya asked

“Miya I'm not sure I can, perhaps you should know, maybe you have the right to but I'm not sure I want to tell you” Chii felt guilty saying this to Miya but it wasn't her place to tell Miya what was on her mind.

“You don't want to tell me?” Miya asked confused and, Chii thought, a little hurt “What could you not want me to know?”

Chii looked at Miya trying to think of a way to explain to her friend without giving it away “It's more that I think I can’t tell you on my own”

Miya turned Chii so that she faced her “Is this about you and Saki Chinami?”

“What makes you say that?” Chii asked panicked that Miya may figure there was something between them.

Noticing her friends expression Miya replied “Don’t get worried Chii, I’ve always known”

“Known?”

“That you and Saki used to be a couple”
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 31 NEW!!! (OUT 2/6/2011)
Post by: kano-chan on June 03, 2011, 03:44:41 AM
Maybe the other person Miya used to like was...Chii? :O

Miya is so understanding~ :wub: Being a good girlfriend to Captain and a good bff to Chii. :) I like how Chii was concerned about whether telling would hurt Miya's feelings. :heart: How caring. And I want to know more about what Captain is feeling for Chii now. ;)

Were you suggesting something in your reply?  :roll: :grin:
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 31 NEW!!! (OUT 2/6/2011)
Post by: kuro808 on June 03, 2011, 07:04:29 AM
sorry for not replying earlier, well at least I caught up :nervous

The story still holds up to the title, and it has been an experience through your story :)
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 31 NEW!!! (OUT 2/6/2011)
Post by: oddball on June 29, 2011, 12:59:06 AM
Man, finally get this chapter out, leaving it behind and not being able to get at it for a couple of weeks really hasn't helped and I have a major busy schedule on the way so not quite sure when the next one will be ready but here at least is a new chapter to be going on with!

@ kano: was I sugessting anything in my reply... possibly!  :lol: As for Miya, she is definatly understanding tough there are reasons why.....

@Kuro: Glad you caught up buddy!

well here we are with Chapter 32!!!

Chapter 32

Miya hurried along the corridor back to the dance room, she felt s bit foolish, leaving her bag behind but at least it would give her a chance to hunt down her wayward friend. Miya had been so  deep in conversation with Momo about Buono that she had not realized that Chii, and Saki for that matter, were nowhere to be found, this caused a problem to Miya, more than just seemingly loosing your best friend she was also staying at Chii's house tonight as her own parents were away.

As she approached the door to the room, which was slightly ajar,  she noticed voices coming from inside, one was Chii's and Miya suspected that she had stayed behind to ask the instructor something but once she heard the other voice she knew that this was not the case.

“Chii..... I, I have something to tell you” Said the voice, which belonged to Saki. Miya though that at least had tracked down both her friends but wondered why they had both stayed behind to talk rather than leave with the rest of the group, her curiosity got the better of her as she crouched down by the door to listen to the conversation.

“Saki can't it wait, I'm supposed to be meeting Miya you see” Chii explained and despite herself Miya smiled at her friends loyalty.

“It's important Chii, please”

“O.K. Saki” Chii said gently, if it's that important to you

“I like You Chinami”

Miya could not believe what she had just heard, Saki liked Chii? She had never noticed that this pair had any feelings above that of band-mates and friends but it seemed as though Saki had greater feelings for Chii then she had realized but surely Chii would of told her if she liked Saki?

“I... I like you to Saki” Chii replied quietly looking down at her feet before slowly lifting her head and leaning in to kiss the girl in front of her.


~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~  ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

“You never spoke to us about it to any of us, in the group I mean” Miya said to Chinami “So I figured you wanted to keep it a secret so I said nothing about it either”

“You-you knew all that time, you knew about me and Saki” Chii could not help a feeling of guilt wash over her, all the time Miya had know and kept silent for the both of them, even though they had not had the decency to tell her, their best friend.

“Yes I knew” Miya replied in a slightly distant voice “And quite the shock it was too”

“Miya I'm so sorry, we wanted to tell you, we really did but we, well......”

“Had reasons not to tell me?” Miya asked “I understand Chii, it must have been hard for both of you back then to be in a relationship, it's hard enough now, besides” Miya said looking down at Chii “Perhaps I should be the one apologizing to you”

“Apologize?” Chii asked confused “what ever for?” in truth Chii was disappointed that Miya was not angrier at her, perhaps it would show she was maybe a bit jealous of her

“When I started to date Saki I, I tried to avoid you Chii” Miya spoke not looking at her friend “I knew you two had dated and I worried about how you would feel so I kept my distance from you. Thing is though I wished I hadn't because I missed having you around but I was scared Chii, I thought that you would hate me for liking Saki, I thought that, I thought that maybe you still had feelings for her......”

“Miya I could never hate you!, surely you know that!” Chinami said reaching out her hand top grasp hold of her friend “Come here”

Chii got Miya to sit down next to her on the ground throwing some of the blanket over her once she was seated so that it now covered them both.

“The feelings me and Saki had” Chii started after a while “They, they were not those of love, not really, we enjoyed our time together but really we, we never really got very far, perhaps there was a part of ourselves which held us back from both really committing, as it was we both parted a friends at the end of it and that's all we are now Miya, is friends, maybe in reality we were never more than that”

“I realize that now Chii” Miya replied smiling sadly at her friend “I was just so worried about it in my own mind that I didn't see it sooner, I just wish that I had seen it to begin with though”

Chinami looked longingly at the girl sitting next to her “I think Miya that perhaps we all wish that we had realized some things earlier then we actually did, I suppose the real trick is to at least realize then eventually”

“That is most certainly true Chii, I'm glad that I finally spoke to you about this, I think, I think perhaps that I realized it early enough, It must be hard, to realize something that you should of done too long from when you should of, I wonder if perhaps sometimes it is too late”

“Too late eh” Chii replied “I wonder if that's true, I hope not Miya, I really do”

“Me too Chii, me too” Miya shifted uncomfortably under that blanket “Chii... Thank you”

“Thank me?” Chii asked slowly “What for?”

“I-I dunno really, for being you I suppose and for putting up with me”

“For being your friend you mean?”

Miya nodded in response “Yes, I suppose that's what I mean but I dunno Chii, sometimes I feel as though I should be thanking you for more”

Chii gave Miya a sideways glance “Perhaps, that's what I should be saying to you Miya” She smiled gently at her friend “You remember when you asked me about the bit of windowsill I kept clear in my room?”

“Yes”

“Well, I kept it clear Miya because it was were you sat, those times when you waited for me to get home”

“Chii I …... That was a long time ago” Miya mumbled

“I know Miya but I still remember it fondly, when you were waiting it didn't matter what my day was like, you just met me with a smile, even if I was late you still waited, even if I was angry at you for something you still came, when I was sad you where there and even on the day I-I broke up with Saki was a day you were there, greeting me with a smile that made things seem a little better, I always felt lucky Miya, to have you as my friend”

Chii close the space between the two of them and rested her head on Miya's shoulder “Thanks Miya, for being you, for being my friend”

Miyabi shut her eyes as she rested her head on top of the girls next to her “Thank you too Chii”

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Yurina led back down on her makeshift bed on the floor, she had originally been disturbed when Chii had woken her earlier, she had watched as the girl who had been sleeping next to her had got up and gone to the balcony.

She had not been sure, whether to go see her friend or not, Yurina had sensed earlier that evening that something was on Chii's mind but without fully knowing what it was Yurina was unsure if talking to Chii about something she knew nothing about was a particularly good idea.

Just as she had made the decision to risk it and go see Chii, she heard the noises of a second girl getting out of bed, risking a glance behind her she saw that it was Miya who had awoken and it seemed as though after a while, she to noticed that Chii was not in her bed , it did not take long for her however, to begin creeping over to the balcony, with a blanket in hand to talk to her friend.

Curious about the events out on the balcony Yurina had watched , through a gap in the curtains, the two talk and eventually rest their heads on each other under the blanket, Yurina looked at the two and understood then what it was that had been making Chii be a bit odd recently, it was Miya, it was where Chii's feeling's lay, Yurina realized, with Miya and not with her.

She heard the door to the balcony open as the two girls came back into the room, Yurina laid back down on the bed, not wanting them to notice she was awake, she shut her eyes, even though she felt as though she would not get much sleep this night, as a tear rolled gently down her cheek.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Miya and Chinami picked their way across the room quietly until they made it to where Chii was sleeping

“Goodnight Miya” Chii whispered, hugging her friend before carefully getting back into her bed and, with one final smile towards Miya, shutting her eyes.

Miya stayed to look at her friend for a moment, she suddenly has the strange urge to reach out and brush the hair away from Chii's face but, she managed to fight against the urge and instead, slowly got up and silently got back into bed next to Saki.

“Sorry Chii but it's too late for that” Miya though to herself as she shut her eyes and drifted off to sleep.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Miya walked slowly away from the room, stunned from what she had seen happen inside, she felt a wetness on her face and it took Miya to realize that this was because she was crying.

“No” she thought, angrily wiping the tears from her eyes, she should be happy for her two friends, she shouldn't be upset that they have gotten together but why did it have to hurt so much?

Fresh tears rolled down Miya's cheeks, perhaps she told herself, things would be better this way, at least she didn't have to be rejected by the girl she had had feelings for since so long ago, no, all she could do now is love the girl in her own way, by making sure she was there for her however difficult it would be.

Miya looked sadly back down the corridor, her eyes still wet from the tears, she saw the new couple exit the room they had confessed to each other in and walk off in the opposite direction to her, hand in hand as they went.

“Please be happy” Miya thought as tears once more came as she went on her way.

“Miya wait!” she turned round to see Chii chasing after her down the corridor, of course, she had forgotten that she was supposed to be staying at Chii's tonight with all that had happened. Turning away from Chii, Miya took a deep breath to regain what composure she could

“Hey, thought I'd lost you” Chii said happily as she approached Miya's side, looking at her friend and the sad look on her face she guessed that Miya was upset that Chii had not been with her “Sorry Miya, I had to sort something out”

“It's alright Chii, there's nothing to forgive”

“Miya? Are you, are you OK?”

Miya forced a smile as she looked back at her friend “Yeah I'm good Chii, just a little tired”

“Oh, OK” Chii did not look as if she fully believed her friend but she new better then to press Miya if she did not want to explain further.

“Look, Miya, you know, you know I'm always here for you right?” Chii asked awkwardly,”that wont ever change”

“Me too Chii, I'll be there for you too, always” Miya replied unable to look at Chii fearing that she may well burst into tears once more.

Chii smiled as she grabbed hold of Miya's arm “Well that's good then” she said happily “let's go home shall we?”

Miya nodded as Chii began to drag her down the corridor towards the exit, glancing down at her friend she wondered how things could of ended up like this, realising that she would have to let something precious to her go so that it would not hurt her or anyone else.

“I'm sorry I but I have to let you go, we can only be friends now, we must only be friends now but please, please be happy in your love.... Chinami”

Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 32 NEW!!! (OUT 28/6/2011)
Post by: kuro808 on June 29, 2011, 05:45:31 AM
very difficult for Miya to accept the relationship between Chii and her, although there seems to have a compromise
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 32 NEW!!! (OUT 28/6/2011)
Post by: gracula on June 30, 2011, 08:21:31 PM
Something tells me the ship might not have sailed away completely for all your various characters and their old flames. (Or in Miya's case, the ship sunk right at the jetty at the get-go and bits of it are lingering like so much flotsam.)

Sorry, if I am incoherent. Focus is shot to hell because I misplaced my glasses and I am too lazy to go looking for it. [/granny moment]
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 32 NEW!!! (OUT 28/6/2011)
Post by: abok on July 03, 2011, 09:35:31 PM
Hey oddball...

Sorry for the lack of comment.... i've been very busy....

Looks like the story is getting intense by every chapter!!! Yurina's hurt, Saki's doubt, Chii's feeling, Nakky's sacrifice, Airi's confusion, Miya's love life and Maimi's resolve!!!

Maimi's finally going to do the right thing and i hope the right thing is confessing to Airi.

So Miya used to love Chii in the past and she probably still love her now!!! What will happen to Saki now??? Oh my God... the conflict with each character...

i have a question for you oddball,i've been reading this fic back to refresh my memory and i wonder what will happen to Match Maker Momo.... i mean, she have been trying to get everyone together and i'm wondering, doesn't she have her own love??? Just curious though....

Can't wait to read next chapter!!!   

 
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 32 NEW!!! (OUT 28/6/2011)
Post by: kano-chan on July 11, 2011, 12:12:53 PM
 :panic: :panic: :panic: What is there to say? Their feelings are so complicated. Or maybe there were too many things that went on... I need to refresh this MiyaChiiSaki part.. Miya used to like Chii. ChiiSaki happened. Now there's MiyaSaki. Saki has feelings for..Chii still? Miya might still like Chii a bit..? And Chii likes Miya. It makes me dizzy! :panic: :bleed eyes:

But I love it! XD
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 32 NEW!!! (OUT 28/6/2011)
Post by: oddball on November 11, 2011, 04:56:58 PM
Man it's been to long but finally an update, jsut had so much on in my life that wrting had to take a Place towards the back, still can't quite up to where it was but wanted to get a chapter out there and I hope the next one will be along soonidh too, well sooner than the last one anyway!!!  :sweatdrop:

Chapter 33

Airi stared down at her phone, it must of looked as though she was texting someone, or at least looking at something on her phone, the truth was that it was all a display so that she did not have to talk to the girl opposite her, the only other person in the room.

Airi had always found it so easy in the past, to talk to Maimi but ever since she discovered Maimi's true feelings for her suddenly something that was once so easy had become one of the hardest things for the young C-ute starlet to do, every time she though of talking she became afraid of what she might say to her leader. Why though? She thought continuing to look down at the now blank screen on her phone, more than anyone Airi had been open with Maimi about her feelings in all things, was it guilt? A guilt from knowing the truth about Maimi's feelings for her?

She glanced at the girl in question, who was flipping through the magazines on the table with little interest, even after all she had put Maimi through, of how she has told the girl who loved her of her feelings for another,  she still felt a warmth when she looked at and was with Maimi. Airi's mind went back to her conversation with Miya, had it always been Maimi that she had truly liked but had never realized it? Miya had said that she would figure it out herself and she had right? When thinking about it Maimi had shot like a bolt into her mind, it was if Airi had suddenly figured out the final clue in a puzzle with Maimi being that piece that made it all make sense. Perhaps more than the guilt then, Airi was now worried about blurting out her feelings for Maimi every time she spoke to her leading to more silences between them.

Airi shut her phone, closing her eyes as she did so, maybe now though Maimi's feelings for her had gone, they should be, Airi thought, after the pain she had put her though they certainly deserve to be gone. Airi new that it would be hard but really there was only one way to know for sure, time to be brave. She took a deep breath and opened her eyes....

“Um, Maimi”

“Oh Hello” Maimi replied before Airi could say anything else “I thought it must have been a no talking day or something, the way you were acting”

“No, nothing like that” Airi replied, any momentum that she had built up about asking Maimi about her feelings had gone with Maimi's friendly comment

“Still, must have been a fascinating text” a slight smile came to Maimi's face “You were looking at it for over twenty minuets!”

“I'm sorry Maimi” Airi blurted out suddenly

Maimi paused, taking great care in placing the magazine she had been reading back on the table as if it might explode “Sorry” she asked gently “for what Airi?”

For not, for not realizing, not noticing...........” Airi stumbled on her words

“How, how I felt” Maimi finished Airi's sentence for her, so quietly that only Airi could just about hear it

“Yes” came the reply, just as quiet “I never saw it Maimi, I feel a fool for not doing so but now Maimi, now I am afraid, afraid of whether those feelings are still there for me because I.... Maimi, I...” Airi tailed off unable to finish

Maimi's hands shook as she lifted them up to take Airi's hands in hers “Airi... are you, are you saying that you li....”

A gentle tapping on the door stopped Maimi before she could finish her sentence, both girls looked at each other for a few moments as if they had both just come out of some weird trance.

“I'll er, get the door shall I” Maimi mumbled realizing that she still had Airi's hands in hers she let go before going to open the door.

“Morisaki? What are you doing here?” Maimi asked, confused to why the UFZS girl was suddenly knocking on the C-ute door, even in this building to start with.

“Um, hello Yajima-san, Suzuki-san, I'm sorry to bother you but, but I was hoping to see Nakajima-san” she replied quietly, not looking at Airi or Maimi

“I'm afraid she's not here Saki-chan” Maimi replied apologetically “come in though, perhaps me and Airi can help?”

“T-Thankyou Yajima-san”

“It's allright” Maimi replied guiding the girl to the table “and it's Maimi, not Yajima-san and I'm sure Airi would be happier wothout the -san as well”

“Yes, Airi's fine” said girl replied still not fully recovered from the quick changing of events and on the unfinished  question that Maimi had been asking.

“So Airi and Maimi it is” Maimi said kindly, glancing over at the other C-ute member for a split second before turning back to their visitor “Now what is it you need to see Nakky about?”

Mori went a deep red “Well I don't really need to see her about something, it's just, well, I wanted to tell her something”

“And what's that?” Maimi prompted the younger girl

“That.....that I like her”

“Sorry Saki-chan, I didn't here that”

Saki took a breath before continuing “I like her, I like Nakajima-san”

“You like Nakky?” Airi exclaimed unable to quite take in what the girl had said, a quick look at Maimi told her that she was surprised as much as she was

Saki nodded, looking at both girls reactions she decided that perhaps she needed to explain further “It's been since we were both in 'Fashionable' together, being with her during that time I, I grew to like her”

“But that stage play was quite a while ago Saki-chan” Maimi said “why are you only telling her now?”

“I was afraid” she replied, hanging her head “I didn't want her to hate me, to think I was weird, to loathe the idea of me liking her like that”

“But something changed?” Airi asked quietly feeling, like she was sure that perhaps Maimi was too, that this story was feeling very familiar

Mori nodded “ Yes, because in the end I realized that the worst thing that could happen would be to lose my chance” she replied “I kept on thinking that If I said nothing then the chance would pass me by and I would never know, one way or the other”

“Well why don't you start by asking me out for a coffee or something first then?”

Mori stood up, knocking the edge of the table as she did though sending the various items on the table to scatter “Nakajima-san!” she cried out before realizing the mess she had made on the table “Oh I'm sorry!”

“How long have you been there?” Maimi asked as she and Airi helped the panicked Mori sort out the mess she had created. Nakky had obviously got into the room whilst both she and Airi and been fully focused and all 3 of them had their minds elsewhere

“Long enough” she smiled, quickly glancing at Airi before turning her attention back to the girl who had unwittingly already confessed to her “So” she asked “Were you going to ask me something?”

Saki, upon hearing this dropped the contents of the make-up bag she had just cleared up back onto the table “W-Was I?”

“about a coffee perhaps?”

“Oh, yes, um, well then....... Wouldyouliketogoforacoffeewithme?”

Nakky smiled at Mori's nervousness “Close enough, it would be nice to go for a coffee with you, lets go”

“Huh?” Mori stood there stunned by the sudden turn of events

“Go on” Maimi gently nudged the girl, who, on the contact, seemed to snap out of her state of shock and went over to Nakky.

“T-There's a nice place I know, er unless you were thinking of somewhere” Saki asked nervously

“No, I'd like to go to the place you were thinking of” Nakky said taking Mori's hand in hers “let's go!”

Mori could only nod dumbly at nakky, her eyes fixed on the hand now holding onto hers as she allowed herself to be lead from the room

Before closing the door Nakky gave one last glance to the rather confused girls left in the room before saying to her new date “See, that wasn't so hard was it?” Mori smiled at that as the door closed behind her but both Maimi and Airi knew, in their own ways, that it was more likely that that comment was for them.

“Well that was different” Maimi remarked after a while, breaking the silence.

All Airi could do was nod, her thoughts on the words that Morisaki had said earlier “I kept on thinking that if I said nothing she would pass me by” she shuddered, remembering the look that Nakky had given them, their eyes had only met breifly but it felt as though it had been for an hour or more, Airi knew that nothingneeded to be said, the look had said it all, such a simple thing, that meant much more.

“Airi, you still there?” Maimi asked, waving her hand in front of her ace's face “Lost yu there again”

“You won't” Airi said softly

“Won't?” a confused Maimi asked “Won't what?”

“loose me Maimi, I won't let you pass me by!”

“Airi...........”

“Sorry just me being silly” Airi said, throwing all her stuff into a bag before rushing to the exit
“I'll see you soon” and with that, she was gone.

Maimi looked at the door, cinfused by Airi's sudden change of mood but somehow, what Airi had said to her, it had made her heart beat faster.
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 33 NEW!!! (OUT 11/11/11)
Post by: kuro808 on November 11, 2011, 07:22:03 PM
long time no update and still the drama between Maimi and Airi, then you add another character which is awesome :thumbup
Title: Re: Mixed Emotions.... chapter 33 NEW!!! (OUT 11/11/11)
Post by: gracula on December 05, 2011, 05:04:11 PM
i'm baack! you wouldn't believe the amount of unread threads i had to wade through to finally get here.

so glad you're continuing with this. I had to reread from the beginning to remember the storyline (esp now that i'm more familiar with the Kids)

Airi fessed up at last. Can't wait to see what's happening with Maimi/Airi.  :P