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The Hello! Project Fanfics => H!P Fanfics => Topic started by: rndmnwierd on June 17, 2010, 03:24:15 AM
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B&B is not on hiatus and not forgotten, but I've been in a Tanagaki mood and inspiration-less on B&B so I came up with this. I'm going to be posting these mini chapters every night, so, urgh, enjoy, I guess?
The Life and Times
Chapter 1 : The Secrets that Bind Us
Reina quietly entered the room, trying to be as inconspicuous as possible. They’d been given a thirty minute break from rehearsals and she was still tingling from her latest encounter with her lover. Risa’s voice, panting her name as the older girl pushed her up against the wall in the bathroom stall, echoed in her head, doing nothing to calm the blush she felt on her face.
She retook her place next to Jun on the couch, gaining an amused, knowing look from the Chinese girl, “Did you have fun, Tanaka-san?”
“Fun?” she played the innocent, failing completely when Jun snorted at her in yet more amusement.
“Two years and you guys are still in the honeymoon stage. You think you aren’t obvious to those of us who know about your relationship? Sneaking off together every chance you get, geez.” she complained good naturedly.
Reina could only shift against the lingering stickiness in her pants, unable to think of a single thing to say in her defense. In retrospect, she didn’t think they’d been fooling anyone but themselves, but still, did Jun have to mention their activities so casually? “Whatever.” The yankii finally mumbled, turning away in embarrassment.
“Hey, now.” The Chinese girl continued, “I didn’t mean anything by it. You guys keep on doing what you do, nobody will say anything.”
The damage had already been done, the teasing words having a much deeper effect than the exchange student had meant and Reina felt herself brooding. It had been Risa’s hesitance to tell the others that had kept them from announcing their relationship to the other members, except for Ai, who was surprisingly perceptive when it came to the two of them, and Jun, who Reina had begged for help from to get them together in the first place.
This newest comment had sent the yankii back to thinking about telling the others about her feelings for Risa. There was no reason for them to hide this from their extended family, she was a hundred percent positive they’d have everyone’s support. Well, ninety five percent positive. Okay, so she wasn’t entirely sure if they would be accepted, but she wanted to let her love be known. Reina just wasn’t the type of person who was comfortable hiding the things that were important to her. The only good thing was the thrill of sneaking around and even that was wearing thin after two full years of it.
Reina was, not for the first time, feeling like a dirty little secret instead of Risa’s proper girlfriend and she didn’t like that feeling one bit. Shaking her head, Reina scolded herself for her thoughts, she thought she was passed this kind of thinking. Her and Risa had been through this drama ages ago and she definitely did not want a repeat performance. So she was back to square one and aching to find her lover for some comfort.
A few minutes late, Risa made her way back into the studio, looking like a breath of fresh air to Reina. The yankii waved her over and when the older girl was within arms reach, she wasted no time in tugging her down to sit sideways on her lap.
Giving a startled laugh, Risa looked down at the head that was buried against her shoulder, “Tanakacchi, what’s wrong?” But Reina refused to speak, only shaking her head stubbornly and winding her arms tightly around her lover’s waist. Risa immediately turned on Jun, “What did you say to her?”
Wide eyed, the Chinese girl waved her hands in surrender, “Nothing! Just… Nothing!” The weight of Risa’s gaze made her scramble for a better explanation and she reluctantly divulged her careless remark, “I just said that you guys were being…. Obvious.” Risa flushed brightly, then smacked Jun on top of her head. When she felt the girl was significantly cowed, she began to stroke Reina’s hair.
Soon, the other members began to file in, but Reina wouldn’t release her grip and Risa started to fidget. Feeling her tense up made her thoughts from earlier come back full force and a heavy feeling formed in the pit of the yankii’s stomach. “Let’s tell the others about us.” She whispered, gaining both girls’ instant attention.
“Eh? What?” The reaction queen could barely keep her voice down, “Now?”
“Today. After practice. Let’s tell them.” Risa jumped to her feet so that she could face her lover, her expression telling Reina all she needed to know. The yankii stood as well, frowning at Risa, then walked across the room to join Ai and Lin, who’d just entered. The atmosphere was tense for the rest of practice.
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Beautiful!!! Haven't read any Tanagaki in a while now!!!!! I kinda missed writing about them and I'm glad that someone still has the love for Tanagaki like I still do.
I am thrilled that you are writing again since B&B hasn't been updated and it seems like there is a draught of writers nowadays.
I am wondering if this will be like the Young Lovers thing you have going (in which there hasn't been any updates on either) *hint hint nudge nudge* BTW are there any new chapters???
I will definitely be reading this every night if you plan on posting every night. :thumbsup
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XD
I gotta admit it~ You got me liking TanaGaki~! :P
I'll be stuck (stickily lol) to the computer every night for the update!
:D
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why do u make something that's a riled up mix so good~???? :bow: :bow:
i cant wait to read tomorrow's if u're doing this everynight X3 epic job rndy X3 :twothumbs
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WOO~!! Rnd is writing again! *slides in and strikes a pose*
Did I ever tell you I enjoy your fics and your writing? I do. I think your fics and writing is really good. ^___^ You're getting better too. You weren't bad though, but improvement is good. What I mean is that I enjoy your writing even more. You seem to be the only one who makes TanaGaki dealable with me since I really don't like any Reina pairings. I'm still open to any fic because as long as the fic is good then I'll read it no matter what the pairing is. I look forward to read more of this fic! The start already is interesting. I'm sensing some TanaGaki drama! I love me some drama! Even if it ends bad. lol
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Tanagaki, hmm I feel like writing about them aswell after reding this chapter!
Poor Jun getting told of by both Reina and Risa :roll:
It looks a good setup, Reina who is proud of her love for Risa and dosn't care who knows against Gaki who don't want to tell anyone, trying to protect her carrer or something else?
Wonder what kind of part Jun and Ai will play in this fic?
Good chapter :twothumbs
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*looks at title* :huhuh
*suspicious*
hmm....this better mean they live to be old grannies!
*puts lid back on paranoia jar*
Good start~ I like it so far. :k-wink:
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You deserve an award for being awesome. I miss B&B but I love Tanagaki because somehow it just works. :wub:
I wonder how JunJun helped Reina with Risa as mentioned, I'm pretty curious about that tale.
Looking foward to more~
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ohhhhhhh good!! :twothumbs tanagaki is new for my but i like jojo , i wait the next chapter :lol:
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SUSPENSE!!! :shocked
I think I'm gonna like this one :thumbsup
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@FaqU - I think you and I are, like, two of the three Tanagaki shippers in the world. :lol: No new chapters for the Guide, but I have an idea. I just haven't felt like writing perv lately for some reason. And every night, so don't touch that dial!
@Baby Sticky - Stuck, lol :lol: I'm glad I got you to like them, they needs more love.
@Kakarikowaiwai - Cause I'm awesome?*buffs nails against chest* XD
@Junkie-chan - I imagined you doing Lin Lin's LinLinman pose. :lol: Aww, thanks, I'm blushing here. And I hope I got better, cause if I got worse then, urgh... :lol:
@oddball - Oh, please do write about them yourself. I'm always looking for Tanagaki fics! Yeah, poor Jun, just an innocently teasing comment got her in trouble with MamaGaki.
@Sukoshi - :lol: :lol: I don't think they're going to die any time soon. :lol: :lol: So don't worry.
@Niner - I accept awards in the form of cash. :D XD Hmm, I might have to write a side chapter or something, but don't hold your breath.
@gab - Well, Tanagaki is pretty rare, I guess, but there's just something about them, right?
@Swtme - I hope you'll like it! XD
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Chapter 2: To Err is Human
A couple days later, Reina was sulking on her couch when her mother called her to the door, “Reina, one of your friends is here to see you.” Rolling her eyes, the yankii went to the door to see not just any friend, but her girlfriend standing there, looking pitifully at her above her face mask, hands behind her back.
“Oh, it’s you.” Reina said, not encouragingly, “What do you want?”
Without a word, Risa presented her with a large bag, motioning her to open it. Reaching inside, Reina pulled out a large, metallic accessory tree. It sparkled with many shiny rhinestones as Risa had apparently deco’d the crap out of it and it held many funky designs that the older girl obviously put a lot of time and thought into. It was also adorned with an assortment of earrings, bracelets and necklaces, all in Reina’s specific taste.
When she only studied the object passively, Risa let out a nervous giggle, “When I told her what I was planning on doing with it, my sister began to affectionately refer to it as ‘The Tree of a Thousand Accessories.’” The response was just a raised eyebrow and the older girl looked down, “I thought it would be more meaningful than flowers.” Feeling her eyes well with tears, Risa mumbled passed the lump in her throat, “I’m sorry, excuse me.” And turned to escape.
Reina was quicker and dropped the empty bag to grab her lover’s arm with an exasperated sigh, “Come in, stupid.” she murmured, dragging Risa into the apartment and back into her room. Once she’d locked the door, she turned to find her lover covering her eyes, sniffling quietly. “Why are you crying?” the yankii whispered, setting the deco tree down on her desk and embracing Risa, “I forgive you already.”
“This time, but we’ve had this fight before and we’ll probably have it again.” she sobbed, clinging tightly, “Unless we finally tell the others and our families.” she said lowly, causing Reina’s breath to catch. They pulled back to look into each other’s eyes, “I’d do anything for you, you know.”
“I know.” the yankii replied and they shared a sweet kiss. “Why don’t we start with my family?”
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XD yes yes u are~ lol
a tree of 1,000 assesories?? XDD that's cute~ maybe that's why risa look so long to update her deco...didnt want anytone to know she made that for reina..... WAIT! WHAT AM I SAYING?!?!?! *thinks takagaki thoughts and looks at her sig for 10 min* ok....so i wonder how tanakachi's family will take this??? hm~~~?
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Lol Linlin man pose? I don't think I've seen that pose. I'm curious to what it look like now! XD
I see a new chapter! This time it comes with no strange pose, sorry. XD Ah if only it weren't so short! Your fics always make me wish they were longer and went on forever. XD I'm not saying you should do that because you'll only put yourself through hell and torture. I'm already doing that by making TTCL. O.O I had no idea it would be that long to be honest though.
Anyway! Before I completely go off the trail I'll comment about the new chapter. I thought Reina and Risa's interaction with each other was so cute! You also seem to write them in character well too so that's a big plus! I can picture them saying the things you wrote especially Reina calling Risa stupid. XD I found the whole thing so cute! ^______^ :heart:
I cracked up at the mention of Risa's deco stuff. I had a good chuckle out of it because I pictured something completely covered in like glitter and shinny beads it's barely recognized. XD That's was a really nice touch you added. It also made it seem like something Risa might do to cheer up someone she cares for. The end though holy crap! O.O What will Reina's parents think?! What will they do?! When are they going to tell them?! I'm guessing right now? *slowly enters a state of panic* What will happen?!! :panic:
I'll look forward to the next chapter! Bring on the drama! I know I'm going to regret this later! XD
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OMGAWD!!
I totally want to see this "Tree of a thousand accessories"!! :w00t:
Even tho it was a short chapter, I felt like my soul got sucked into the emotions going around in there :O
I think I held my breath from the time Risa gave her the tree and didn't realize I was holding it until the end of the chapter :nervous
By then I wanted to scream because of the SUSPENSE!!!!! :panic: at the end :grin:
Makes me want to find a someone and secretly date them until I can't handle it anymore, wanting to tell everyone about my gayness :cry:
XD
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wow TanaGaki incredible although poor Jun taking it from both of them XD
nice story so far
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Aww Risa is so sweet!!! :wub:
Thats better Reina start with small groups at a time, good thinking that girl
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Correction we WERE 2 of the 3 Tanagaki shippers in the world, after all this, I believe you will convert more :thumbsup
The chapter was soo cute :wub: and definitely imaginable and suitable considering the fact that Risa loves to decorate things and the fact that Reina indeed likes sparkly, shiny things.
I guess Risa realized that it means a lot to Reina to disclose their relationship out to the public eh? That's good though because it shows how much Risa cares about Reina being happy and probably realized that Reina had held it in for the past 2 years as it is. Reina's already taken a step back by agreeing to not disclosing and now it's Risa's turn to step down.
Wonder what Reina's family will say??
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Whoops, I forgot to update last night. Bad me! :lol: :lol: Here's a double chapter to make up for it.
Chapter 3 : C'est la vie
“So.” Jun asked Reina several days later, “How did telling Niigaki-san’s parents go?”
The yankii scoffed, “Better than telling my mom. Neither of them screamed, threw anything or took a swing at her. In fact, her sister even gave me a hug and her dad had The Talk with me. He’s pretty scary for such a placid guy.”
The Chinese girl laughed at her expression, “So, are you guys going to tell the others tonight? Is that why you invited us all out to dinner?”
“Yes and I’m counting on you and Ai to give us back up if needed, in fact, Risa’s probably having a similar conversation with her right now.” They glanced across the room to see the two in question with their heads bent together, seeming to have a serious discussion. They were quite close together, actually, something that Reina noticed right away. The two friends leaned backwards finally and grinned at each other, Ai reaching out to take Risa’s hands in a supporting grip. They exchanged a few more words before they met in a friendly hug, Ai patting the younger girl on the head.
It took Jun’s restraining hand on her shoulder for Reina to realized that she’d been halfway out of her seat, jealousy burning in her gaze, “Woah, there tiger. Calm down, it’s just Ai-chan.” She laughed, keeping the yankii still with her grip, “You must really love her if you’re tempted to go clobber sweet Ai-chan for getting too close.” Reina just nodded in agreement.
Chapter 4: Carpe diem
Later in the evening, after a filling meal in the VIP rooms at one of their mutual favorite restaurants, the musume girls sat back and laughed and conversed together, relaxing after a hard day at practice. Reina tried her best to concentrate on the words of Aika, next to her, but found herself distracted by the tight grip Risa, on her other side, had on her arm. Unable to help herself, she turned her full attention to her lover, seeing her sharing an intense look with Ai across the table.
She knew that they shared a peculiar relationship, close to the point of not needing words to communicate and always knowing what the other was thinking, but still without an even remotely sexual element. Still, she couldn’t help but be jealous of their closeness, that was just how she was. She watched Risa tilt her head to the side and Ai responded with raised eyebrows. When Risa nodded, Ai smiled encouragingly and stood up, instantly gaining everyone’s attention.
“Gaki-san, was there a reason you invited us all out to dinner tonight?” she asked theatrically, before sitting down to Risa’s grateful gaze.
The bean took her cue, standing and pulling Reina up with her, “Actually, there’s something very important we have to tell everyone.” She took in a shaky breath and Reina squeezed her hand in support, “Reina and I are dating.” Risa blurted, eliciting a few gasps around the table. Everyone was silent for a moment and the yankii pulled her lover a little closer to her.
Finally, after a long silence, Sayu grinned and turned to Eri, holding out her hand. “Man.” The turtle complained, digging in her pocket for some bills to place into the open palm, “You’re always right.”
“About time, guys.” The satisfied bunny smirked, “The only thing I couldn’t figure out was how long you two have been going out.”
“You knew!?” Reina exclaimed, earning herself a flat look from her fellow rokkie, “You knew and you bet on it?”
“Please, did you think you two could hide something like that from someone you’re both close to? And of course I made a bet! When I told Eri, here, she didn’t believe me.” She pointed to the sulking turtle.
“She even guessed you would announce it tonight.” Eri grumbled for a few seconds longer before smiling brightly, “But really, I’m happy for you guys” Her acceptance sparked a round of nodding and murmured agreements from around the table. The couple sat back down in relief, assaulted on either side by questions which they were happy to answer.
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@ Kwakawai - XD XD Oh you know you love when I write Tanagaki, don't deny. :lol:
@Junkie-chan - Hmm, I was thinking, hmm, I don't know how to explain it. One hand on her hip and one in the air straight out at an angle? Does that make sense? Oh, and the panic in your comment made me rofflecopter.
@Swtme - I'm glad I had such an effect on you!
@kuro-kun - Thanks :D
@oddball - Small, but important groups.
@FaqU - Tanagaki will one day have it's own shrine, like the other major canon pairings, completely with fanatical worshippers :lol: :lol: To this, I swear! XD
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Aww I wanted to comment before you update :cry: 2 chapters no less :banghead:
I was like "wtf Risa! 2 years! It's Tanaka Reina for god sake!" but the accessory tree was kinda sweet...so score for TanaGaki :lol:
Better than telling my mom. Neither of them screamed, threw anything or took a swing at her. In fact, her sister even gave me a hug and her dad had The Talk with me.
I take it Mama Tanaka went yankii on the girls? XD I wonder what The Talk was about :lol:
It wouldn't be Reina if she didn't go all jealous with anyone who gets close to her Risa :lol: It's cool how the girls reacted to the news but Sayumi totally rocks! Lol Can the rokkies be any cooler? :lol:
E: New page! Gets!
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lol i had a feeling that u forgot last night XDDD i was planing to ask about that lol and yes...if ur the one writing tanagaki i can read it and know the worl is right cus there's usualy some friendly takagaki-ness involved someway XD
anyway~!!!
for chapy 3 i felt pretty bad for reina ^^; i thought her family would be the more loving one about it ^^; then again i guess she's still treated as a princess at home eventhough she's an adult lol
and why must reina be jellous of AI-CHAN of all ppl.......*wants more cute takagaki moments* i clearly want the jeallousy fire to burn up into a ball of flames XDD
chapy 4
yay~ more cute takagakiness~~~~ :otomerika: lol and good to see that the girls are ok with it XDDD
LOL at eri and Sayu's bet though....pretty funny XD
well keep it up ne~~~???? :thumbsup
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Hell yeah you owe use TWO chapters now! That just means more for us to read and I mean that in a good way! ^___^ Woo~!! More updates! *insert cheese-y pose here*
Is it bad that I wanted to see the arguement when Reina told her parents she was dating Risa? Which reminds me! I'm probably jumping around now, but I have a question! Does this mean that Reina was kicked out of her house?! Maybe she was even disowned!? O.O Sometimes...I scare/worry myself. >_<
I'm just going to assume none of this happened because Reina didn't mention this in the 3rd chapter. I'm glad that Risa's parents took it well though. Poor Reina though. It's probably because in her household everyone's a yankii and they gotta be all tough! XD So when Reina told them they went all yankii on her!
Another thing! Is it wrong of me to find the TakaGaki interaction in this fic cute? Even cuter than the TanaGaki interaction? If Risa suddenly went to Ai I would support that! XD I probably like TakaGaki too much. It's nice to see how close they are as best friends since usually they are paired together. I like that we get to see them as friends together.
Now for the 4th chapter! I was worried a little when Risa was going to tell the girls that she's dating Reina. I thought some of them would be against it and tell Tsunku while the other half would be okay with it. I'm glad to know they're all fine with it. Again, I worried myself. XD
Sayu and Eri betting on Reina and Risa was funny. For a second though you had me thinking that Sayu pulled her hand out from the table to show she was holding Eri's hand. Then that would mean they are dating! O.O I got so happy! It's so sad when I read it again and realized they weren't togther. T____T It's just wishful thinking! *shoots you with a kameshige ray gun to send kameshige beams your way* Why not?! XD Reina is already with Risa. The other rokkies will be so lonely!
Well...you could put Sayu with Ai. I've had a interest in this pairing ever since I started reading Sayu's blog. Which reminds me! I have to go see if there are any new post in her blog that are translated! XD
That last bit was not important, so moving on! Both chapters: :thumbsup
They made me happy! ^_^ I'll look forward to some more chapters. Oh another thing! Near the end of the 4th chapter I had this cute image of all the girls talking with each other, smiling, laughing as if the news about Reina and Risa dating was no big deal. It shows that they care for their members so much. :love:
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XD Apparently, I'm not stuck on computer enough and miss out 3 chapters~ lol~
Chapter 2.
awwwwwwwwwww.... :( when Risa is sad~ it's always really heart-breaking~ haha..From the usual mature girl who drop back to a little girl~ like she is suppose to be anyway~ haha
Risa had apparently deco’d the crap out of it
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Chapter 3:
Haha.. Ya.. I think Reina's parent kinda does not really care for her as much... usually don't they remember their daughters best friend names (I mean Risa as a girlfriend must have drop by pretty often...)? lol.. or am i thinking too in depth~ lol~ XD
her dad had The Talk with me. He’s pretty scary for such a placid guy.
haha.. I saw on Risa's blog that her dad even put on her sister's wig for one of the shot. LOL~
Reina reina reina is always the jealous girlfriend, ain't she? XD
Chapter 4:
but found herself distracted by the tight grip Risa, on her other side, had on her arm.
Omake: Reina: Gaki-ha. My hands.... (Idea taken from Kokoro no Uta...haha~)
as expected of Sayu~ always the one with the..........bad (evil) ideas... haha.. and turtle always fall for it.. XD they are the best comedy duo~ haha..
XD
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@baddie - Okay, just because I feel like it, here's what telling Reina's mom was like, in a nutshell.
Reina: Uh, mom, this is not just my friend, this is my girlfriend.
Reina's mom:(http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd137/Rndmnwierd/assplode2.gif) I'm going to kill you now.
Reina: :panic: RUN!!
@ kool beatbox - Yeah, I'm having fun with your name again, sry. XD And of course I have to include friendly Takagaki. I think I'm incapable of doing otherwise :lol:
Hmm, I always kinda pictured both families as pretty laid back, but I needed drama in the story. XD Not saying that Reina being jealous of Ai is any indication of upcoming drama or anything like that....
@Junkie-chan - Hmm, I saw another Lin Lin pose, this time the one with her hand in an 'L' shape against her chin + cheesy grin XD XD
Ah, disowned? Kick out? We'll see.
The only Takagaki in this fic will be friendship wise, unfortunately. :lol: Maybe another fic, since these are pretty much my two main pairings.
*is shot by Kameshige ray gun* Urgh! I'm melting! Melting! Oh, wait, no I'm not, but now I'm having these strange thoughts of turtles and rabbits... Together.... killing the other members, maybe? :twisted:
Yeah, I had that image too. :D
@Baby Sticky - Lol, maybe you were too stuck to the computer to write a reply?
Like I said in another reply, I kinda of think of their families as laid back, but I needed some antagonists, so not in my world.
Your omake made me lol, I love that line.
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Chapter 5: A House with Glass Walls
Reina relaxed in front of the television with Risa curled into her side, both focused on some comedy show playing. After the blow up with her mother, Reina had suddenly found herself homeless, but her girlfriend wouldn’t allow her to get a hotel room, she insisted that Reina stay with her in Yokohama. And after the Niigaki’s took everything so well, even Risa’s mama wanted her to stay, provided she sleep on the couch.
The yankii was surprised that she wasn’t feeling at all awkward in cuddling in front of the bean’s parents and sister, glancing around the room at the others, she noticed no one was focused on them as if they were completely normal. It was a nice feeling, almost like she was a part of the family. Pretty soon the show was over and everyone was getting ready for bed. This was another new experience, as Reina’s family usually just went to bed whenever and did their own thing at night.
She watched everyone say good night to each other, plenty of hugs to go around, receiving a pat on the head from Papa Niigaki and even a hug from Mama Niigaki, before everyone filed down the hallway, leaving the lover’s to themselves. When their eyes met, Reina let out a wolfish grin, “Alone at last. Whatever shall we do?”
Risa just laughed at her, “How about you help me move the table?” The yankii chuckled and stood to help.
“You know, I could get used to this togetherness thing.” She spoke as they worked, moving the table to the far corner and beginning to pile the couch cushions on top of it, “My family hasn’t done anything like it since we left my Pops in Fukuoka.” Risa paused in grabbing some blankets out of the hall closet and they shared a look, “I’m sure he knows by now. I’m sure my whole family knows.” Reina plopped down heavily on the pulled out pull-out and the bean quickly joined her, pulling the big fluffy blankets around them.
Risa wrapped her arms around her lover, pulling her so that she rested against her shoulder, “Try not to think about it too much, Reina.”
“How can I not? I should have known my mother would react like that, but, stupid me, I completely ignored the warning signs. I mean, is it really so wrong of me to want to share my happiness with those I’m closest to?” she felt herself start to tear up, “I want for you to be as much a part of my family as I am your’s.”
“I’m sure that your mother will come around. She’ll realize that nothing is worth losing her only daughter over and call you up to apologize. I know it.” Risa tried to reassure the wounded yankii.
“Maybe she will, but how long do you think that will take? Weeks? Months? Maybe even years?” The older girl had no answer for that question and could only hold her lover as she cried.
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@baddie - Okay, just because I feel like it, here's what telling Reina's mom was like, in a nutshell.
Reina: Uh, mom, this is not just my friend, this is my girlfriend.
Reina's mom:(http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd137/Rndmnwierd/assplode2.gif) I'm going to kill you now.
Reina: :panic: RUN!!
Hmm so I'm guessing she had a bazooka or the likes of it with her? :huhuh Cause that would explain the tremors felt :P Yeah I'm lame :lol: *cue: booing effects*
even Risa’s mama wanted her to stay, provided she sleep on the couch
Yeah can't have the girls do something naughty on the bean's bed XD But...that doesn't mean they can't sleep together on the couch :twisted:
Reina plopped down heavily on the pulled out pull-out and the bean quickly joined her, pulling the big fluffy blankets around them.
Point proven :twisted: On side note, aww shhhoooo shweeettttt :wub:
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@baddie - Bazooka? Yankii Mama don't need no bazooka! :lol: Glad you liked. :D
Chapter 6: Another Day, Another Dime
A few days later, Reina sat yawning at the kitchen table, listening to the faint moving around of the other occupants of the apartment in the background. Her lover had cheerfully gotten her up at five in the morning, made sure she was awake, dropped her in the kitchen and then abandoned her to take a shower. If she wasn’t so damn tired, she might be a little pissed, but at this point she couldn’t even really care. She was vaguely aware of saying goodbye to the Niigaki parents before sinking back into her drifting state.
“Are you asleep?” A youthful voice snapped her back into the present and Reina looked up to see Risa’s sister, Juri, peering at her curiously. She grunted in response, eliciting laughter, “Not much of a morning person, huh?”
“I don’t see how you guys can be up at this ungodly hour and still be so happy.” The yankii complained as the younger girl took a seat across from her. It was like talking to a younger, taller Risa; there were differences, of course. Juri had long, naturally black hair and more and noticeable freckles across her nose, but the similarities were uncanny. They had the same soft, brown eyes; the same cute, button nose; even their dental structure was the same. The were polar opposite personalities, though; where Risa’s eyes shown with sweet innocence, Juri’s burned with an eager knowledge, when Risa gave a broad grin, Juri happily sneered. They may have looked alike, but they carried themselves so differently that it was almost impossible to mistake one for the other. In fact, in the short time they’d known each other, Reina had decided that the girl was more like her than her lover.
“Yeah, I know. I hate it, but I have to be up for school.” Juri lamented, blowing a puff of air upwards to ruffle her bangs, “I’d rather take night classes or something.”
“How old are you? What grade are you in?” Reina questioned curiously. They’d talked a lot, but this subject had never really come up.
“I’m seventeen and finishing up my second year of high school.” Juri replied easily.
Reina nodded, “Ah, you’re almost out, then. Another year, right?” the sister bean nodded, grinning, and the yankii returned the look, “That’s the same as my brother.” Her smile faded some.
Juri was silent for a moment, before broaching gently, “Do you miss your family much?”
Nodding solemnly, Reina replied, “Yes, very much.” they fell into a contemplative silence, broken when the yankii turned a curious eye to her new friend, “Does it really not bother you? Your sister and I?”
The sister bean shook her head, “I mean, it’s weird to see anyone cuddling up to my sister, but our parents have always taught us tolerance and acceptance of alternative ways of life, whether different religions or different orientations. I guess Nee-san’s just taken those lessons more to heart than I have.” She joked and Reina giggled at her waggling eyebrows.
“Trading me in for a younger model already, Tanakacchi?” came a welcome voice from behind as Risa entered the kitchen. Before she could even turn around, Reina felt a kiss dropped on top of her head before her lover walked over to ruffle her sister’s hair.
“Ew!” Juri exclaimed immediately following the question, “No offense,” she directed at Reina, who shrugged, “But ew!” She swatted at Risa’s hands before trying to smooth down her slightly wavy mop.
Risa just laughed, “Well, Mama and Papa headed out to Okinawa already for the weekend, so it’s just the three of us for a couple days.” She winked at her yankii wolfishly behind Juri’s back, eliciting a blush.
“So, what’s for breakfast?” The younger bean questioned eagerly, turning to her sister with a grin.
Risa scoffed, hands on her hips, “What? Why do I have to cook? Your arms aren’t broken!”
“Oh, right.” Juri winced, “Maybe it is better that someone else do the cooking.” she turned away to hide her mischievous smirk and Reina had to struggle hard not to laugh when Risa’s face grew red.
“What is that supposed to mean?! There’s nothing wrong with my cooking!” The bean exclaimed loudly.
“Well, maybe it’s better if Reina-san do the cooking while Mom and Dad are away.” The youngest offered appeasingly.
Reina snorted quietly, getting in on the joke, “Yeah,” she sucked in a hiss of breath through her teeth, “Maybe it is better.” she sized her lover up appraisingly.
“You know what?! I am going to cook now.” Risa stomped her feet and shooed them out of the kitchen, “Go on! Juri, finish packing for school! Reina, sit down!” she commanded, sending them both into hysterics. She stomped back into the kitchen and Juri made her way back to her room, giving Reina some time to calm herself.
When she had finished laughing, the yankii made her way through the swinging door and back into the kitchen, seeing her lover setting out some ingredients for what was apparently going to be an omelet. She crept up behind her while she was at the counter and wrapped her arms around Risa’s waist from behind, making her jump, “Just me.” Reina reassured in a husky whisper, turning her lover around and trapping her back against the counter.
They shared a gentle kiss, Risa reaching up to thread her fingers into Reina’s hair and using the leverage to pull her closer. The kiss deepened until they were making out hungrily for a long moment. When they broke apart, both were breathless, but smiling, “Now that’s a good morning kiss.” Risa exclaimed in a sigh as they rested their foreheads together.
“Hey,” Reina began, neither noticing the kitchen door creeping open and a small head peering inside, “Since you’re cooking breakfast, why don’t I cook dinner for you tonight?”
“Tonight?” Risa questioned, pulling back some to tilt her head to the side.
“Yeah.” Reina confirmed, “We can ask Juri-chan nicely if she’ll go have fun with her friends tonight, maybe spend the night out,” here she winked at her lover, causing her to blush, “and I’ll fix something for you. We’ll make it a date.”
“Well, I don’t want to make it seem like we’re pushing Juri out.” Risa said worriedly.
“Hmm, how about I treat all three of us to karaoke tomorrow, too?” Seeing her lover still wasn’t convinced, Reina smiled at her, “Look, if she doesn’t want to go out, then I’ll just take you out to a restaurant. It’s no big thing, either way, I get a date. Just, that’s it.” Risa playfully smacked her on the arm.
“Pervert.” she quipped with a grin that turned into a gasp when warm fingers stroked her stomach underneath her shirt.
“You weren’t calling me that when I had you bent over that kitchen table two months ago.” Reina growled into her lover’s ear, taking a light nip while she was there. A clearing throat made them reluctantly part and they turned to see Juri standing at the door with her arms crossed.
“I would like breakfast sometime today, thanks.” she said, raising her eyebrow at them. When she left, Reina followed her out, throwing one last lingering look over her shoulder. “Well, I’ll get out of your hair tonight, but you better make good on your karaoke promise tomorrow.” Juri stated as soon as she was out of ear shot of her sister.
“You heard that?” Reina asked in surprise.
“Yeah, but if Nee-san asks, I already had plans.” Juri grinned cheekily.
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Man how did I miss so many chapter? :?
Enjoying the story tho, especially Phyco Mrs. Tanaka :bleed eyes:
Juri is funny, hope you keep her in the story
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So Juri is like a Reina in Risa's body? :O Cool! It's like getting two for the price of one. How can I get to know her? XD That's an awesome trick to get Risa do the cooking :lol: Mind if I use it? :P2 One thing for sure, I doubt I will ever sit at that dining table ever again if my sister ever did any frisky business there :bleed eyes:
Oh but a home date for TanaGaki (again awesome Juri for being understanding). Heehee somehow I have a feeling it's not gonna be just a simple dinner and movie? :P
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lol ubber cute rndy XDDD juri's pretty sneaky XDDD i guess she's like risa's evil younger twin XD
and poor reina misses her family so much >.< i hope they come to their heads soon and let her back home~!
great job again rndy~~ cant wait for the next one~!
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Baby Tree!
Chapter 5:
even Risa’s mama wanted her to stay, provided she sleep on the couch.
XD oh well.. like Baddie mum says~ She sleeping on the couch doesn't mean Risa wun join her there~ :P
Chapter 6: Juri is the perfect evil younger sister..haha.. i mean.. isn't it always the younger one that is more scheming? LOL~ *put up hand* I am! :P
She winked at her yankii wolfishly behind Juri’s back, eliciting a blush
lol~ the bean had that in her too XD
“Go on! Juri, finish packing for school! Reina, sit down!”
HAHA~ Reina is so whipped~ i just got this feeling~ haha..
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Damn it! I missed commenting on two chapters sorry! >_< :doh:
I'll try to make this comment a little short this time and not like the length of an essay this time! XD
And that pose you mentioned is more of a Eric Kamezou pose! XD I guess it would be closer for me since I do wear glasses. XD I need them to read this screen.
Anyway, let me start with chapter 5. What else can I say though? It was really cute. We get to see more TanaGaki intereaction and bonding and I always do like to read parts like that. ^_^ I'm glad to see that Risa's parents took Reina in, but I know she must be so sad that she has to live with someone else because she's no longer wanted in her own home. T_T I'm sure Reina's mom will come around. If not, then can't Risa's parents help?
Now on to chapter 6!
Ah we see Risa's sister! She's interesting and funny. I hope we can see some more of her?
By the way near the end is this chapter hinting...a perv? :hehehe: :mon lol: :mon misch:
Jus~t saying! XD But it's nice that Reina wants to treat Risa to dinner and have a romantic date with her. Isn't Reina such a big softy?! lol I'll look forward to another chapter!
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Dang! A whole weekend to themselves huh? :) What ever will they do in this time length :roll: :drool: :twisted:
SCRABBLE~ :D
Ahh~ haha Juri, you sly dawg :mon misch:
It's like I'm a drug addict and rndm's fics is my crack!
I need MORE! :panic:
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@oddball - Glad you're enjoying and don't worry, Juri will keep popping up.
@baddie - Ah, I just realized that I made it seem as if Juri had heard the part about them doing the naughty on the table. She didn't, but I could imagine the trauma if she had. :lol: :lol:
@cocoa bean - :lol: :lol: I'm so amusing myself with thinking up new nicknames for you. :lol: :lol:
@Baby Sticky - Yeah, Juri's the scheming one, but she tends to use her evil powers to help her sister, rather than hindering her. Such a good little sister. :lol: And Reina is whipped, Risa's got her on a short leash.
@Junkie-chan - :lol: Now that you mention it, I realized that is the Eric pose, but I just re-watched a dvd magazine where Lin did it and I lol'ed. Hinting a perv? Hmm, not really. XD More like I'm hitting you guys with the perv sledgehammer. But I don't think I'm going to write one yet, maybe later.
@Swtme - Strip Scrabble, maybe? Ask and ye shall receive. Usually. ;)
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Ch. 7:
Just a Little Love Lots of Horny Sex
Reina sighed contentedly, her worn out lover nestled sleeping peacefully in the crook of her arm. After their wonderful date, they had retired to the bedroom to have very loud and energetic sex for many hours. It was the first time in three weeks they’d been able to be together like this and Reina had made sure to show her appreciation for the bean again and again and again, she grinned to herself, and again… And again.
Chuckling quietly at her thoughts, she turned her attention back to the snoozing Risa, taking in her angelic expression and sweat soaked bangs. She was so lucky to have this wonderful person who was just as head over heels for her as the yankii was for the bean. There was no way she deserved someone so kind and caring, so thoughtful and innocent. She was beautiful, inside and out; Reina gently pulled the covers away to further take in her appearance, naked skin still dotted with a little bit of sweat from their previous strenuous activity.
Sitting up, the yankii pushed away the blanket, unbothered by the warm, still air of the room. Risa rolled onto her back, unintentionally giving Reina a better view of her worked over body. The yankii let her eyes roam the still form from top to bottom, taking in her shortened locks and small face, relaxed in slumber, her slim neck and shoulders. She took in her small, perky breasts, flat belly and flared hips down lower over one of her favored parts and lower still to trim thighs and toned calves and dainty feet.
Laying back down, Reina stretched her form out over top of Risa’s, making sure not to put too much pressure on the other girl. She sighed, placing a light kiss on the light colored strands, “I really love you.” she murmured to the sleeping form, trailing kisses down over her forehead to each eyelid, “I love it when you look at me,” her lips fell on the button nose and then over to each ear, “I love it when you listen to me talk about nothing and everything important.” a barely there touch smoothed across plush lips, “I love it when you kiss me.”
She traced kisses over a smooth shoulder and down an arm to Risa’s hand, where she planted a butterfly kiss on the inside of her wrist, “I love it when you hug me,” her lips moved into her palm, “And when you hold me.” the trail moved around to slide against soft knuckles, “I love when you touch me,” and up to kiss each fingertip, “and especially when you scratch me.”
She repeated the process on the other hand before kissing her way back up to an exposed neck where her lips made contact, “I love to hear you talk and sing,” she planted a few kisses in quick succession, “I love it when you sigh and moan my name.” a small bite elicited a jerk and one hand coming up to drowsily grab her shoulder. She moved lower, dragging a tooth against the protruding collar bone, causing a moan to sound. She grinned, “I love that noise.”
Kissing lower, she made her way to a hardening nipple, “Do I even need to tell you how much I love these? You should know since I can’t seem to keep my hands off them.” When she began to lick and suck, another hand wound it’s way into her hair. Her own hand came up as if of it’s own accord to grasp the other breast, “See?” she murmured around the flesh in her mouth.
After a while, she began to kiss even lower still, nibbling on a known ticklish spot that sent another jerk through her lover as she settled lower still, Risa’s thighs spread wide, “Reina.” she moaned huskily, “Please.”
With an even bigger grin, the yankii moved down to her favored place, her last words muffled between the legs wrapped around her head, “And I definitely love to make you scream.”
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How's that? :P
EDIT: Fixed chapter title :lol:
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Think your title of this chapter is a bit misleading, Lots of Horny Sex may have been better :drool:
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and she was still tingling from her latest encounter with her lover. Risa’s voice, panting her name as the older girl pushed her up against the wall in the bathroom stall, echoed in her head
:shocked :shocked :shocked HOLY COW!!! :mon blood:
Reina could only shift against the lingering stickiness in her pants
My blood pressure's rising :dizzy: :mon blood:
Okay, so she wasn’t entirely sure if they would be accepted, but she wanted to let her love be known.
That's what you want to do when you're deeply inlove
The only good thing was the thrill of sneaking around
This is so true XD
Risa immediately turned on Jun, “What did you say to her?”
Someone's in trouble XD
Risa jumped to her feet so that she could face her lover, her expression telling Reina all she needed to know. The yankii stood as well, frowning at Risa
Lovers Quarrel :mon fyeah:
Reina pulled out a large, metallic accessory tree. It sparkled with many shiny rhinestones as Risa had apparently deco’d the crap out of it
Why am I laughing at this? :lol:
“I’d do anything for you, you know.”
The power of love :love:
“Why don’t we start with my family?”
Okay, that's scary :D
They glanced across the room to see the two in question with their heads bent together
I hope they're kissing XD lol kidding :D
“You must really love her if you’re tempted to go clobber sweet Ai-chan for getting too close.”
It's the Smoking HOT Ai
seeing her sharing an intense look with Ai across the table
Passion and Lust.?. :P sorry :D
Sayu grinned and turned to Eri, holding out her hand. “Man.” The turtle complained, digging in her pocket for some bills to place into the open palm, “You’re always right.”
:lol:
She pointed to the sulking turtle.
How lovely to imagine :D
Reina had suddenly found herself homeless
:lol: That's funny
provided she sleep on the couch.
There are always other ways to you know :D
The older girl had no answer for that question and could only hold her lover as she cried.
Hmmm
“Well, Mama and Papa headed out to Okinawa already for the weekend, so it’s just the three of us for a couple days.” She winked at her yankii wolfishly behind Juri’s back, eliciting a blush.
Time for some blood transfusion :on bleed: and dehydration :drool:
“Just me.” Reina reassured in a husky whisper, turning her lover around and trapping her back against the counter.
Oh gosh, is it starting.?. :on_hot:
neither noticing the kitchen door creeping open and a small head peering inside
lol someone's eavesdropping :lol:
“We can ask Juri-chan nicely if she’ll go have fun with her friends tonight, maybe spend the night out,”
OMG :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
“You weren’t calling me that when I had you bent over that kitchen table two months ago.”
OMG I so could imagine Juri's reaction :wahaha: :wahaha: :wahaha:
A clearing throat made them reluctantly part and they turned to see Juri standing at the door with her arms crossed.
Oh boy :mon fyeah: Go girl, go and bite them :lol:
Well, I’ll get out of your hair tonight, but you better make good on your karaoke promise tomorrow.”
How considerate :D
After their wonderful date, they had retired to the bedroom to have very loud and energetic sex for many hours
OH EM GEE :mon blood:
Reina had made sure to show her appreciation for the bean again and again and again, she grinned to herself, and again… And again.
Damn, lots of again right there :D only means lots of ahem :twisted:
naked skin still dotted with a little bit of sweat from their previous strenuous activity.
:mon blood: :mon blood: :mon blood:
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:imdead: Super :imdead: Sweet!!! :imdead: and :imdead: Hair :imdead: Raiser :imdead: and :imdead: Nipple :imdead: Erector :imdead: lol :imdead:
*Goes to get some cold water*
:bow: :bow: :bow:
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Awww man, I haven't commented on the last few chapters but rest assured I have caught up with reading and am ready to comment :thumbsup
I am not surprised that Sayu would bet on the whole thing and would actually be correct about it because she does give me the image that she can be perceptive when she needs to be and of course only the turtle would be so oblivious and actually bet with Sayu :mon lmao: Surprisingly with Reina's yankii character, I wonder why she wouldn't be like :shifty: "Give me my share of it"
I didn't actually think that Reina's parents would go :mon mad: and actually thought it would have been Risa's family that would be like :mon duh: and :mon annoy: It's good that Risa's family is understanding but you can't blame Reina for wanting her own family to be just as understanding.
So Juri is a mix of Reina and Risa?? Where can I get one??? I have a feeling that Juri will use this to her advantage when the parents are away from the home "You pay for my expenses for the day and you can have the house alone" kind of deal you know??? Also a bit weird because she totally watched Reina and Risa have a makeout session, eavesdropping and all, don't know if that is necessarily a good thing or a creepy thing :mon cweepy:
What no perv scene??? :mon pissed:
Especially when you have this teaser :mon ehh:
This is like begging for the perv scene :mon blood:
It's cute though I must admit how Reina kisses her way "down" and mentions the things that she loves that involves those certain body parts but seriously I agree with oddball, the title should be changed considering they went at it for how long and how many times? :mon dunno:
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my god woman....what do u want from me XDDD u change my name every time, you give me lovely previews of stuff, u talk to me, u give me ideas, so why the hell must i beg u to just stop making teasers and make the perv already! :scolding:
wait meaybe yelling like this wont get me the perv XD :depressed:
either way it's sweet to see reina be so thankful eventhough i wouldnt think wearing out your body, sweating alot and lossing u voice from yelling is the best way of saying "thankyou" ^^;
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u know i'm joking right? RIGHT? XDD
:gmon tears:
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Yay another update! I missed it last night though. T_T Oh well, it's morning so I just read it anyway to catch up. The title made me chuckle. You know...from reading it though I still find it kind of cute and romantic? XD I'm too much of a romantic person! >_< It was still pretty hot though! How dare you just leave off from there like you did in that chapter! >_< It makes me want to know what will happen in the next chapter. It's safe to say that if Risa's parents find her or her sister they won't throw a fit and kick them out. That's a big relief, but I think Risa's sister would tease them. XD I bet ya Risa's voice is messed up though! That'll be funny to see how the others would react to it. Risa would have to write on a marker board for a day. XD
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yay finally caught up after two days of doing stuff around the house
the last chapter was really hot :thumbup
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OMG blood loss... :dizzy: :mon blood:
I LOVE your story. I'm not a fan of TanaGaki but you just might have made one out of me :cow:
can't wait for MORE!!!!!! :luvluv1:
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@oddball - Fixed! :D
@KZ - a long comment! Glad you're enjoying the story and especially the last chapter. XD
@FaqU - I'm sure Juri didn't mean to see as much as she saw. She was just curious, like a little kitty we all know.
@ Beamu of Cute - Who said Risa's the one to lose her voice, maybe Reina's the screamer.
@Junkie-chan - Lol, I wonder how Risa would explain losing her voice. Maybe when someone asks, her and Reina exchange a look before the yankii proudly smiles, "I'm that good." :lol:
@kuro-kun - Thanks! :jphip:
@SarangAi - A convertee? Yay! XD Thanks so much!
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Chapter 8: Routine Bonding
“What are you doing?” Reina turned away from the bathroom mirror at the voice, finding Juri peering at her with a raised eyebrow. It was a few days after their karaoke night, where Reina had dominated the microphone(and bought all the snacks and such) despite a sore throat, and the three had settled back into their normal routine. The yankii was becoming used to the ‘early to bed, early to rise’ lifestyle and her face washing ritual had moved to two hours earlier than her normal time.
“I’m cleansing my face.” Reina explained, placing two wet, square pads on her cheeks, “I actually get acne very easily, so I have to take care of my skin.”
Juri chuckled, “Those things look silly, though.” Reina grinned; she knew how she looked, bangs pinned back messily with long clips.
“That’s the price you gotta pay.” she shrugged, “Hey, why don’t you try it? I’ll let you use my stuff.”
“What? Really?” the sister bean contemplated, looking over the various bottles on the counter, “Well, okay, I guess.”
“Alright,” The yankii handed her a small elastic ring, “Tie your hair back.” she instructed, reaching for some extra clips. As Juri pulled her hair into a loose bun, Reina clipped her bangs back clear of her face. “Turn on the faucet to a warm setting.” she continued, moving some bottles around in a specific order. “Here.” she pulled the towel that was hanging around her shoulders off and draped it over Juri’s neck, “So you won’t get your collar wet.” she explained.
“Okay, wet your face first, then use this bottle, just a little bit should do. This is a cleanser, it will clear away any dead skin and dirt as well as open up your pores for this little bottle.” Reina lectured easily, gesturing to the next in line, “This will clear up any clogged pores and existing blackheads and this last bottle will help prevent any future break outs.” She pulled a small tube out of her gold bag and held it up, “If you have any problems areas, existing pimples and such, you can use this after everything and it works overnight.”
“Wow, you’re like a drugstore.” Juri commented before splashing water over her face to clear away the suds from the first cleanser, “What about those things on your cheeks?” She picked up the second bottle and began to apply it.
“It helps to keep my skin soft and moisturized without being oily.” Reina continued to coach the younger girl through the routine, until another head poked into the bathroom.
“Here you two are.” Risa exclaimed, raising an eyebrow at their close proximity, “What are you doing?”
“I was just teaching her about skin care my way.” Reina took out two square pads and ran them under some water. When she deemed them damp enough, she placed them gently on Juri’s cheeks, “Take them off when they dry out.” she instructed, before accepting a kiss from her lover, the bean slipping her arms around Reina’s waist possessively. The yankii had to laugh at her, leaning closer to nip her ear playfully, “I’m not going anywhere.” She reassured while she was close.
Juri watched them with an amused eyebrow, “Jealous, Nee-san?” Risa gave her a dirty look, then a confident smile.
“Nope, no reason to be.” The sister bean laughed and held a hand over her heart in mock hurt while Reina let out a low ‘Ooooh~!’ “Now come along, you.” Risa commanded, dragging the yankii out of the bathroom by her collar, Reina’s lilting laughter echoing down the hallway.
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:lol: :lol: :lol:
Risa jealous oh hell yeah :lol:
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I thought you dun like girly stuff :P It's very detailed :D :k-thrilled:
“Wow, you’re like a drugstore.”
:lol:
before accepting a kiss from her lover
Ain't that lovely, a kiss in front of a family member :love:
a long comment! Glad you're enjoying the story and especially the last chapter. XD
My blood was almost all drained. I'll send my hospital bill just in case I need blood transfusion in future chapters :yep: XD
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Yay another chapter! I see the TanaGaki domestic-ness! XD It's really cute! You know...after thinking about this chapter a little more Risa's sister is like their child. XD That's funny, but also cute. TanaGaki love child?! O.O
The end of this chapter though hehe... :hehehe: :mon misch:
I'm sure you know what I'm mentioning/asking. XD I'll look forward to another update! ^_^
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lol poor reina she had to pay fir the snaks too and on a sore throat? dang XD and mini sibling rivalry...well mostly 1-sided XD its cute to see risa a bit defensive enventhough its only her younger sister ^^;
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After chapter 7 I was really worried about the title of this chapter :lol:
love it how Risa is jealous of her sister, very cute :wub:
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Sweet, innocent, little Risa being possessive, getting jealous, and dragging yankii Reina out by her collar? :O
What an awesome thing to imagine :roll:
Your fics are always so sexy and cute :wub: just how I like em :D
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@kuro-kun - Like Risa said, no reason to be jealous. :P
@KZ - My blood was almost all drained. I'll send my hospital bill just in case I need blood transfusion in future chapters
:lol: :lol: Am I going to have to change my name and move to Mexico?
@Junkie-chan - Nope I have no idea what you're asking for :D . But you make me imagine Tanagaki with a baby, or maybe even a couple of tykes running around.
@Kawaii Pie - Well, she did offer~!
@oddball - Lol, thanks!
@Swtme - Aw, another thanks!
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Ch. 9: Trouble in Paradise
Risa absently flipped through a magazine with one hand, the small book resting on her raised knee. Her other hand was draped cross Reina’s shoulders, the girl sleeping with her head nestled in the crook of her lover’s neck. The older girl let out a sigh, craning her neck down to look at the yankii, feeling tears drying on the collar of her shirt from the girl’s previous bought of crying. Wet tracks were still visible on her youthful features and her eyes were red and swollen.
Risa hated to see her lover like this, but there was nothing she could do except hold her and kiss away those tears. She felt helpless to assuage her sadness, especially since she knew the only cure would be for Reina’s family to make positive contact with the girl. The little yankii sorely missed them and was so afraid to talk to them, fearing more rejection and possibly some abuse, that she wouldn’t even go over there to gather her clothes and things.
Attention falling completely away from her magazine, the bean stared down at her girlfriend, studying her pretty face, slim frame and borrowed pajama wearing form. She was so intense in her study, she didn’t even notice her father had walked into the room until he cleared his throat, “Risa.” he said after she’d jumped in surprise, “It’s time for bed.”
“I- Dad,” Risa pleaded, “Can’t Reina just stay with me tonight?” When he solemnly shook his head, the bean furrowed her eyebrows, “Please, dad, she’s already asleep and she’s really not feeling good, she needs me.”
“No, now wake her up.” His tone brooked no arguments and Risa became incensed at his lack of consideration for them.
“Come on dad, that’s not fair.” she complained quietly, still aware of the sleeping figure on her side.
“Life’s not fair, now wake her.” He said flatly and Risa’s eyes burned with anger.
“What if it was mom? What would you do then?” she shot at him, trying to make him see things from her point of view.
“Your mother and I are married.” He replied without a pause.
“Oh so the stipulations of us sharing a bed are marriage?” The pissed off bean parried, voice beginning to raise.
“Yes, once you two are married, you can do whatever you like.” Her father nodded and Risa scoffed.
“Right, so you mean marriage, which may never happen between same sex couples in this country in my lifetime and isn’t even recognized if it happens in other countries, is the only way we can ever share a bed?” Her voice rose sharply at the end of her question, before lowering to an angry whisper, “She’s already sleeping, dad, it’s not like I’m going to wake her up to do the naughty with her later.” His face turned red, a vein popping out on his forehead in his outrage, but before he could launch into whatever he was going to say, another voice spoke up.
“Risa,” Reina said quietly, sitting up and rubbing her face, “It’s okay.”
“I’m sorry, “The bean said apologetically, her anger disappearing in an instance, replaced by her previous worry over her lover, “I didn’t mean to wake you.”
“I know.” The yankii nodded, smiling weakly, “You shouldn’t argue with your father, it must be hard enough for him to have someone intent on courting his daughter staying in the same house. You don’t need to make things harder by talking back.” She climbed out of bed and leaned down to plant a kiss on top of Risa’s head, “Good night.” she murmured, smiling lovingly at the older girl. Then she turned to her father and bowed to him, “I’m sorry for causing trouble. Thank you for letting me stay here.” Then she left the room.
A tense atmosphere was left behind and Risa, anger deflated by her lover’s attitude, stared at her father in defeat. He, taken aback by Reina’s gratitude, could only stare back. Finally, after a long moment of silence, Risa rolled over to turn her back to him and pull the blankets over herself.
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That perv chappie was totally :mon crazyinlove: That was sweet and hawt at the same time lol
I'm glad you include Juri in another chapter. I like how Reina was reassuring the bean before she even gets jealous. But somehow I have a feeling that Juri has a bigger role in their relationship in the future. Not sure if it will be a good thing though.
Reina was acting very mature when she stopped Risa's argument with daddy. I mean, come on dad. What's the worst that can happen from sleeping together? Either one getting preg? Sheesh :roll:
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aw~ so eventhough papa gaki's "ok" with they're relationship, he's still not ok? ^^; geez i hate parents like that lol just let the poor little kitty sleep one night! that's all! nothing bad will happen! and good for risa to defend her girl~!
reina was ubber mature too~ poor thing >.<
keep it up rndy~ and i'm liking some of these nicknames XD :P
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Man another good chapter.
It's intresting too see an accurate portrail of a family's reactions to same sex, relations, especially in Japan where they are not as liberal as other countries (its not a criticisum just a fact!)
but for the sake of the story they should sleep together, please Risa's dad, please? :wub:
Im suppose its O.K. Risa's dad just getting his head round the idea, right?
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Papa Gaki needs to losen uppp :angry:
lovely chapter, can't wait for more! :inlove:
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:lol: :lol: Am I going to have to change my name and move to Mexico?
Hmmm... You can camp out at the Tulum Beach :D With air from everywhere, it'd be refreshing :twisted:
“Life’s not fair, now wake her.”
XD
“Your mother and I are married.”
I still see her father as a broad minded person in this :D
Yes, once you two are married, you can do whatever you like.”
Dad is okay with her princess marrying another princess, ain't that lovely :luvluv1:
Right, so you mean marriage, which may never happen between same sex couples in this country in my lifetime
Arg.
“She’s already sleeping, dad, it’s not like I’m going to wake her up to do the naughty with her later.”
OMG! :shocked lol If I was the father, not sure what I could do with that remark XD
“I didn’t mean to wake you.”
Father's vein can explode now XD
Finally, after a long moment of silence, Risa rolled over to turn her back to him and pull the blankets over herself.
XD Sorry dad, time for bed :lol:
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New chapter! Woo! *slides in again* I won't give you a pose this time! XD
First off, why is it that everytime I try to catch the update first before everyone else that it's posted when I wake up the next day!? Do you live like in the other side of the US than me? XD I even stay up pretty late to get it! Ah it doesn't matter. I'm just sayin that stuff. I'm glad to get any update anytime! ^_^
Now, for the new chapter! Aw, so Reina came to Risa and cried about how her family's anger got to her? I feel bad for Reina! Her damn parents needs to come around or I'll have to give them a good beating! Well...I wouldn't do that and in reality I can't, but still! Someone should do it! That or her mom needs to be chained and tied to a chair to talk with Reina. I say chained because during the talk her mom will not be able to get up and strangle Reina.
So, moving on with that thought! Risa really does care for Reina. I think that shows in this chapter. She was even willing to argue and yell at her dad for her. O.O Although I didn't like him in this chapter with how he acted towards Risa's request. He seemed like a real jackass. His excuse was pretty stupid! They have to be married to sleep in the same bed. =_= Is that just me or does it seem old fashion? Besides, same sex couples aren't even allowed that right. T_____T That's not fair! So it's like they'll never get to sleep next to each other then. I don't know if I'm the only one who thinks this, but will Risa's parents now cause a problem between Risa and Reina's relationship? I really hope not or I'll be really damn angry. >_<
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Just bad breaks for them and Risa's dad is an asshole :banghead:
oh well at least they still stay together :)
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You know, I do think that Reina hit the nail on the head about Risa's father who I actually do not think was overreacting. Perhaps he's not entirely okay with the relationship but I think he's reacting as Reina said, as any father would to his daughter's significant other staying over. In fact, his insistence that they not share a bed would probably have been stronger if Reina were a boy.
I actually find it refreshing, that he's taking the relationship seriously in this manner and not discounting it as something not real. lol, it's that he acknowledges Reina is a threat to his daughter's virtue... which I'm sure he prefers to believe she still has. ^^; If he wouldn't let a boy stay in Risa's bed, Reina should be no different just because she's a girl - it's not all just about pregnancy issues.
Though I do feel bad that Risa can't support Reina at this time but despite what she said... you KNOW there are fic where they would wake up and get it on. :P
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Wow~ :O
Well said my friend :thumbsup
It really is sad that Risa can't comfort Reina like she wants to :cry:
And as much as I wanted them to get it on, :twisted: I can see where dear ol' dad is coming from. :yep:
BUT! I'm still looking forward to the more intimate chapters :roll: :twisted:
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@baddie - Lol, thanks! Juri may or may not play a part, after all, she's Risa's family. Doesn't your family play a part in your life?
@Kawabunga Beam! - Niigaki Papa suffers from the 'No one will ever be good enough for my princess' gene. Really, I've heard of worse.
@oddball - Thank you and you're exactly right!
@Sarang Ai - I agree and thanks!
@KZ - Well, then send the bills to Tulum beach (I won't be there, but...) XD Your comment made me chuckle in places.
@Junkie-chan - Still an energetic entrance! Ah, I started posting in the morning, sorry, I live on the east coast, though. I wanted to post before I go to work or bed, but I forgot and the n I stay up all night XD Chained! XD Yeah it's old fashioned, but he's just over protective of his daughter. Jeez, that's better than what my friend said he do to his daughter's boyfriend if he ever had one. Shotguns and marshes in the backyard were involved. Maybe even a car battery. Besides, if they ever were married, Niigaki Papa would just change his tune to, 'Not in my house, you won't!'
@kuro-kun - Exactly! They still have each other!
@Kuji - You probably get this chapter better than anyone and I appreciated reading your comment, especially since the last line made me lol. Thank you.
@Swtme - Oh trust me, they will still be getting naughty with each other!
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Ch. 10:Planning for the Moment
“I wish you wouldn’t let my father push you around so much.” Risa lamented as she sat across from Reina during a break in rehearsal. It was something that had been on their minds since the other night and they finally decided to sit down and talk about it, though maybe now was not the best of times, it was really the only time they could be relatively alone nowadays. Their hands rested on the table top between them and the bean was lightly playing with Reina’s fingers. The other members were scattered about, some in the room on the couch, a few being silly in the corner. Lin and Aika were laughing around at the other end of the table.
“He’s not pushing me around and I think his rules are perfectly fair. He just doesn’t want any hanky panky in the house. Lord knows if I had my way, we’d do it every waking moment.” They giggled quietly, Reina flattening out her hands so that Risa could trace the lines on her palm.
“I guess so, but that doesn’t stop me from being upset at him sometimes. I mean, he’s treating us like kids who have no self control. You and I are both adults and we’ve been together for so long now, I think we’re perfectly capable of sharing a bed and not having sex.” The yankii nodded in agreement and they fell into a comfortable silence.
After a while, Reina grinned shyly, “You know what’s coming up pretty soon?” They shared a look and Risa nodded, “Well, I’m making plans on the 19th,” she emphasized the date, to the bean’s amusement, “And I’m hoping to avoid the disaster that was our last anniversary, so I’m telling you in advance that we are definitely going to have dinner at a location of my choosing, which I will not tell you where, because it’s a surprise. Also you might call me a pervert when you find out.”
Risa gave her a knowing look, “It’s not a love hotel, is it?”
“No, of course not, I have a little bit of class, after all. It’s not the park either,” she stated, causing them to both laugh, “But I wanted to know if there’s anywhere you had planned so that we can work out our schedule for the day.”
“Well, there is one place I’ve always found particularly romantic that I want to go and we can walk there from my apartment. Dinner is up to you, though, so wherever we go if fine. I don’t even care if it is the park again, or a love hotel,” she murmured with a blush, “As long as you’re there.” Reina smiled warmly and intertwined their hands, lifting them up to gently kiss the back of Risa’s knuckles.
Just happening to glance down the table, Reina noticed that they had the attention of their two youngest kouhai’s and as she couldn’t read their looks, she immediately became defensive, “Do you guys have a problem?” she said in her sternest voice.
Aika and Lin exchanged a quick, startled glance before vehemently denying the accusation, “No no no! Of course not!”
“Then what’s with that look?” They exchanged another look, a bit more terrified this time. Full on Yankii Reina was a scary sight to behold and she was looking at them as if the only thing keeping her from beating them over the head with something was Risa’s grip on her hands.
“I- well, it’s just that,” Aika ventured uneasily, “It’s a little strange to see you two being so… Lovey dovey.”
Risa’s laughter interrupted the next thing Reina was about to say, “Tanakacchi, really, don’t be so hard on them. It must be pretty weird to see their senpais, who showed no inkling of interest towards one another, in such a relationship. I know I would think so if I were them.” Lin and Aika joined in her laughter in relief at her coming to their rescue, “But, I know that they couldn’t possibly have any problem with us,” Suddenly, Risa’s voice dropped to a dangerous tone and her eyes narrowed and darkened, her gaze seeming to shoot the flames of Hell itself at them, “Right?”
“Right, right. Yeah, absolutely.” They hastened to agree. If there was anything more frightening than Reina’s often seen explosiveness, it was Niigaki’s rare rage.
Her smile turned back to it’s usual intensity and she giggled at them, “Great, now why don’t you guys run along?” The hachiki members couldn’t scramble out of their chairs fast enough.
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aw~ so risa's still upset with papa gaki hm~? lol well i wouldnt blame her XD
and what happened during their last aniversery to be so disasterous? did like every H!P memeber known to man just happen to walk in on them? XD i wonder where it is? maybe it is a love hotel but it's just a normal hotel on the outside until u go in XD my japanese teacher said that usualy love hotels are pretty obvious to see XD like one her sister had went into was a catsle^^;
yankii reina ftw~! but a glaring risa(with fires in the eyes included) is even more epic XDD i would never want to see that up close XDD poor linka XD
can't wait for the next one~ X3
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Reina is really understanding of Risa's dad isn't she, Risa is still pissed at him tho :lol:
Hmm Aniversary coming up, why do I feel as thought it all wont go smoothly?
Yankii....Risa :O whats up with that?!? :lol:
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AHAHAHA!!!
:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
Poor hachikis. Risa probably almost made them poop their pants XD
*sigh...funny stuff.
Aww~ their planning a romantic anniversary :wub:
well...Risa is anyway. :roll:
Can't wait to find out where this so called pervy place Reina's talking about is :jerk: :drool:
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poor hachiki's :lol:
I am also curious of this um special place and rare rage indeed :twisted:
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Lord knows if I had my way, we’d do it every waking moment.”
:drool: It's kinda cold but my blood is starting to boil lol
“It’s not a love hotel, is it?”
:lol:
“As long as you’re there.”
Celebrating an anniversary alone is lonely :grin:
They exchanged another look, a bit more terrified this time. Full on Yankii Reina was a scary sight to behold and she was looking at them as if the only thing keeping her from beating them over the head with something was Risa’s grip on her hands.
Whoa :on lol:
“But, I know that they couldn’t possibly have any problem with us,” Suddenly, Risa’s voice dropped to a dangerous tone and her eyes narrowed and darkened, her gaze seeming to shoot the flames of Hell itself at them, “Right?”
OMG :wahaha:
The hachiki members couldn’t scramble out of their chairs fast enough.
Poor kiddos XD XD XD
Very nice to wake up and read a very entertaining update :yep: lifts the mood up :yep:
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Ch. 11: Waking Sleeping Beans
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Reina's not always the instigator, really!
Creeping into the bathroom, Reina paused at the sight that greeted her; Risa, relaxing in the tub, arms draped over the side and head resting back against the porcelain, dead asleep. She’d been in for quite a while, causing Reina to go looking for her in the first place, and this was pretty much what the yankii expected. Seeing her uncovered body through the water , Reina felt a mischievous smirk take over her face and kneeled down next to the tub.
Gently, she traced her fingertip around Risa’s earlobe, down her jaw and across her lips, lingering there for a moment before continuing downward. Her questing digit ran over protruding collar bones, causing her sleeping lover to twitch slightly, and dipped into the warm water, finding the swell of a perky breast and a hardening nipple.
A hand lifted out from the depths of the tub and landed heavily on her shoulder with a splat. Reina looked up into Risa’s half lidded eyes and smirked, dipping her other arm into the water passed her elbow. The bean choked off a loud moan when the second hand made contact. Giggling quietly, the yankii sealed their lips together, muffling any other sounds that tried to escape.
For a long time, the only sounds filling the bathroom were the water sloshing against the side of the tub and Risa’s silenced sighs. Finally, the older girl reached her peak and slumped backwards against the tub, Reina wrapping her arms around her as best she could in the awkward position. When she came back to herself, Risa let out a puff of breath, “Whew, what a way to wake up. You never seem to get tired of doing that to me.”
“No,” Reina grinned, “I don’t think I’ll ever get tired of it. There’s just something about doing naughty things to you until you wake up with that sexy moan of yours that turns me on.” She chuckled at the flush that spread visibly across her lover’s upper half. They shared another kiss before Risa shooed the yankii out of the bathroom with warnings to watch out for her parents.
When she entered the living room, only Juri was there and the younger bean gave her a funny look at her appearance, “Uh, I guess you found my sister.” she stated, raising an eyebrow.
Reina tilted her head to the side in confusion, “Well, yeah, is it obvious?”
The eyebrow dropped into a flat look, “Your lower arms are wet, your hair is dripping and,” She squinted, “Is that a watery handprint on your shoulder?” Eyes going wide, Reina scampered off to Risa’s room to change her shirt.
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hehe love the way Reina tries to get Risa up and always ends well :wub:
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Damn, that's funny XD XD XD
Seeing her uncovered body through the water
HAR HAR lol I sounded like an old pervert XD The blame's all pointed in you :yep: XD
finding the swell of a perky breast and a hardening nipple
:drool:
For a long time, the only sounds filling the bathroom were the water sloshing against the side of the tub and Risa’s silenced sighs.
:on bleed:
“Whew, what a way to wake up. You never seem to get tired of doing that to me.”
OMG XD
before Risa shooed the yankii out of the bathroom with warnings to watch out for her parents.
Damn XD
That was so damn hot. I really need some cold beer atm but hmmm it's one of the 'not allowed' for intake thing, arg. But screw that I'm gonna go and get a can *runs*
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Damn, that's funny XD XD XD
:lol: :lol: :lol:
That was so damn hot. I really need some cold beer atm but hmmm it's one of the 'not allowed' for intake thing, arg. But screw that I'm gonna go and get a can *runs*
Phew get me one as well Hell, maybe I'll go dunk meself in a cold bath :mon dive: And imagine the Tanagaki's scene in there lol
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LOL I could get to like this Juri girl... :D XD
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lol so when i read this title i thought "FINALY RISA'S GONNA TAKE CHARGE!" :mon thumb:
but of corse i shouldnt judge things by the title lol
and reina dose take whatever chance she gets to have her bean dosent she xD
and reina never even thought that water leaves traces? XDDD at least of all pp juri found out.....guess that means reina's whipped by little bean now too? XD knowing their "secret" ? lol
you know i'll say keep it up~~ X3
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Good lord!
I should NOT be reading these kinds of chapters at work :twisted:
That's what I call a surprise awakening :drool:
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C7. Just a Little Love Lots of Horny Sex
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Reina can be a sweet sweet girl.....~ That is.. if she wants to~ haha.. and depending of who is the receiver of that sweetness~ haha..
C8. That is some details explanation~ Haha.. u do that?? I was~ WAS hardworking enough to do those..but only for a week or 2? LOL~ laziness kicks in~ and WALA~ it's collecting dust in my cardboard.. XD
“Now come along, you.” Risa commanded, dragging the yankii out of the bathroom by her collar, Reina’s lilting laughter echoing down the hallway.
- lol.. Reina is pretty happy that she is whipped~ XD but then again~ it's cute seeing Risa jealous... it's rare isn't it? XD
C9. Awwww....any Daddy would have reacted in father bean's way... It's true that daddy dotes on daughter more and protects them... No Daddy likes to give away his princess to an unknown (ok..maybe not very unknown.. a stranger perhaps?) bum that is homeless and staying in their house~ even though the current bum is Reina.. HAHA~ I made Reina sound bad~ but anyway, If the person can't even take care of herself how can he entrust his princess to her? At least papa bean is taking all this seriously~ :) would have been worst if Nana was a guy.. and lastly, your gf's daddy is always correct.............until you got her hand in marriage! LOL!
C10. You and I are both adults and we’ve been together for so long now, I think we’re perfectly capable of sharing a bed and not having sex.”
- i bet all the side lookers have their hands in the air to doubt on that.. LOL~
“It’s not a love hotel, is it?”
- Just hotel? Inn? Resort? XD
I don’t even care if it is the park again
lol~ Reina brought her to a park last yr? XD
If there was anything more frightening than Reina’s often seen explosiveness, it was Niigaki’s rare rage.
- LOL~ calmer they are, the scarier they will be~ XD now they all know why Risa is in charge~ even though.. Reina seems to be the one out in public more often. :roll:
C11. Waking Sleeping Beans
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Reina's not always the instigator, really!
i lol at the title~ now we had double the hands in doubt on that.. :P
See! and the story tells it all~ The bean was just sleeping and Reina imagination can run wild too XD
XD are you gonna get Juri a gf too? <- totally random..but i think it would be interesting! LOL~
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@kuro-kun - Thanks. :D
@KZ - Even if you sound like an old pervert, that's fine. :lol: You can keep blaming me for the sounds coming from your mouth. :twisted: Why is beer 'not intake' able?
@baddie - The monkey emote is so cute. :lol:
@SarangAi - -I'm quite fond of her character as well. I'm might have to post a sequel to this or something later. Lol, maybe after I've written everything that's on my list first.
@Kawai~wai~! - Even Reina admitted it, she like's to do the naughty with her girl. (or at least, i made her admit it XD )
@Swtme - Lol, well, it's not NSFW. Now, if I had said, "She slowly pushed her *bleep* into her *bleep*" then you probably should wait. :lol:
@Baby Sticky - !
:O I've been spotted! *under the box!*
As for Ch. 8 I, too, suffer from laziness and an empty wallet, so while I know all about this subject and have used this knowledge in the past, alas, no longer do I keep up with my skin's health. Though I really should, since I don't wear make-up or anything like that.
Hmm, Juri a gf? No, I don't think so,(she's straight, after all) but maybe the bean will play matchmaker to her sister? :P
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Ch. 12: A Precursor to What is to Come
“Uh, mama? Papa?” Risa broached the two timidly. Tonight was her and Reina’s anniversary and she needed to ask permission to stay out all night. “Um, Reina and I are going on a date in Tokyo and I was wondering if it was okay for me to stay there tonight?” she clasped her hands in front of her and batted her eyelashes innocently.
“No, be home by ten.” Her father responded without looking up from his papers. Both Risa and her mom turned to give him a look.
“Come on dad, please?” she looked down shyly, “It’s our anniversary tonight.”
“Oh well, if that’s the case,” He began in a cheerful voice, which then flattened lowly, “Absolutely not and be back home by nine.”
“Dad!” Risa began, only to be silenced by her mother raising a single hand to stop her.
“Dear, don’t you think you are being too harsh on them?” She asked gently, resting a hand on his arm.
Turning his flat look on his wife, the only male in this branch of the family raised his eyebrows, “You know what they’ll get up to, don’t you?” he asked bluntly, eliciting a blush from his daughter.
“Of course I know, but it’s a special night for them, after all, an anniversary, by definition, comes only once a year.” Niigaki Mama tried to persuade, but he simply gave a stubborn look, “Come now, they are young and in love, they will do what they want regardless of what we say, but I think it’s better to give them this one night, than to force them to find some way around our rules.” She batted her eyelashes in an eerie mirror of the action her daughter had previously tried, “We were like them once, hating how our parents tried to smother our relationship.”
“Yes, it’s a long standing tradition that I intend to uphold. Now I understand why your father hated me so much.” he sighed gruffly, turning away from them both. Risa turned hopeful eyes on her mother.
“Go. Have fun and be back by a decent hour tomorrow.” The bean’s eyes lit up and she darted away before her father could even speak up. The remaining two shared a look, neither pleased with the other, “We’ll talk about this later.
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A short(er than usual) chapter today, not much goody goodness, I guess this is my filler/plot chapter?
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YEAH YEAH YEAH Mama Gaki! :cow: *WOOT*
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You can keep blaming me for the sounds coming from your mouth. :twisted:
:mon huh: For instance.?. XD
Why is beer 'not intake' able?
Part of the diet :D
“Um, Reina and I are going on a date in Tokyo and I was wondering if it was okay for me to stay there tonight?”
She's looking for trouble XD
“It’s our anniversary tonight.”
OMG! More trouble :lol:
“Absolutely not and be back home by nine.”
:lol: :lol: :lol:
“You know what they’ll get up to, don’t you?”
So dirty minded father :roll:
but I think it’s better to give them this one night, than to force them to find some way around our rules.
Yay! Mama Niigaki's supportive :mon money:
She batted her eyelashes in an eerie mirror of the action her daughter had previously tried
XD
Now I understand why your father hated me so much.
I'm not a parent but I so can understand him :grin:
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lol XD poor risa XDD her dad gives hope only to crash it in the same sentence! XDDDD and mama bean is just the same~ XD guess that's where the looks and actions come from? XD
risa kinda just dug her grave a little deeper there, but good thing she's got her mom on her side lol XD and this next chapter better be long for this one being short >.<
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yes filler :P
hmm I wonder if they have something :twisted: or keep it all PG XD
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Ch. 13: "I Propose a Union~!"
“You know, I have yet to be up here.” Reina said as she eagerly looked out the window of the huge Yokohama ferris wheel. The car was steadily making it’s way towards the top and the couple was curled up together inside, taking in the amazing view of the city lights at night.
“I don’t usually go, either.” Risa agreed, slightly distracted. Her mind was half on the date and what resided in a small box in her pocket and half on her father’s disapproval of tonight.
“Something on your mind?” The yankii, always in tune to her lover’s moods, picked up on this right away.
“Well, it’s just that,” Risa began, leaning backwards to pull Reina in against her shoulder, “I was thinking about how our whole relationship has seemed to be one big struggle, from the misunderstandings that brought us together in the first place, to the fiasco of our first anniversary, to the day to day struggle of hiding from everyone and now the pain of and from our respective families.” Reina wondered if she should be worried because the words Risa was saying and the actions of holding her so close and now stroking her hair were in direct contrast to each other. “It’s seemed like we’ve done nothing but fight and struggle to get where we are now. And I don’t think it’ll stop any time in the near future.”
“But,” The yankii ventured, “Even normal relationships are like that.”
“True and our situation is as unique as it gets, I guess, so it stands that it should be twice as hard for us.” the bean agreed with a nod, “Well, I was thinking about all of this and how I would have never thought myself capable of getting through these tests intact, when it dawned on me exactly why I can stand being put through all this.” She shifted and brought Reina up to face her lovingly smiling face, “I will never be happier anywhere else than in your arms. If my family were to disown me, if we were forced from Morning Musume, even if the world itself were to ridicule me, I could stand it because at the end of the day, I can come home to you.” She removed that distracting box from her pocket and opened it to show her lover the contents; Reina gasped, “And I know, without any doubt in my heart, that I could continue to face anything life threw at me if you were by my side. Tanaka Reina, will you be my wife?”
The stunned yankii found herself with her breath caught in her throat, staring at a golden ring with a good sized diamond at the center, surrounded by much smaller insets of sapphires on one side and emeralds on the other. Completely speechless, Reina could only nod, tears forming in her eyes from happiness, and lunge forward to meld their lips together in a passionate kiss. When they broke apart finally, Risa slipped the ring onto Reina’s finger.
Looking down at her new accessory, the yankii chuckled. “What?” Risa asked, tilting her head.
“It’s just-” Reina grinned and shook her head, “Nothing, you’ll see later.”
Ch. 14: "I Accept this Union~!"
After a short ride on the train, the two found themselves on a quiet street in Tokyo’s business section. There was nothing said between them, nothing that needed to be said, and they held hands contentedly. Reina led them down the sidewalk, for once quite confident about where she was going, and they soon stopped in front of a rather large hotel.
Risa began to laugh, “Well, it’s definitely more classy than a love hotel.” They made their way into the lobby and to the elevators, where Reina hit the button for the very top floor, “A penthouse suite?” the bean asked incredulously, but her lover merely smiled and said nothing. They got to the top and the yankii pulled out the keycard to the door in front of them, letting them inside.
The suite was enormous, basically a large apartment, equipped with a full kitchen and dinning room, living room and master bedroom, as well as a guest room and a jacuzzi tub in the main bathroom. Risa would find this out later, when she explored the suite, but for now, the only thing she noticed was the elaborately set up dinning room. A cart was paused in the middle of the room, seeming to hold a full course meal on it, complete with a server to cater to them and a chilled bottle of wine. The table was adorned with a simple dark red table cloth and a single candle stick held inside a slim glass casing.
“Oh Reina, this is amazing.” Risa breathed as her lover led her into the room and held out her chair for her.
“Only the best for the best.” The yankii quipped charmingly, seating herself. That was the server’s cue to bring out their still steaming food. They ate daintily, more interested in each other than anything else, until dessert came. Both were flushed from the wine and Reina couldn’t keep the grin off of her face as the lids were lifted off the rich slice of chocolate cake. When Risa looked down at her plate, she noticed an extra adornment resting on top of the dessert.
Her breath was taken away by the small gold band, the top design twisted into the infinity symbol and inlaid with a sapphire and an emerald. When her voice finally did come back to her, she giggled breathlessly, “I guess we had the same idea.”
“Yes, that’s what I was laughing about earlier. Similar stones and everything. Great minds, huh?” Reaching out, Reina plucked the ring off of the cake and held it in front of her lover, “Speeches have always been more your thing than mine and I‘ve always been more blunt, so, I love you. Will you marry me?”
“Yes!” Risa exclaimed, still breathless as Reina slid the ring on her finger. They stood and met next to the table in what would be a precursor to many more passionate embraces that night. The server, smiling broadly at the sweet scene, took their plates away and wheeled everything out unnoticed, making sure to hang the ‘Do Not Disturb’ sign on the door.
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A double chapter today, to make up for my lack of time.
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Right Catch up time!
Chapter 11: Reina is a perv! :drool: nice too see Risa enjoyed it though.
chapter 12:
“No, be home by ten.” Her father responded without looking up from his papers. Both Risa and her mom turned to give him a look.
“Come on dad, please?” she looked down shyly, “It’s our anniversary tonight.”
“Oh well, if that’s the case,” He began in a cheerful voice, which then flattened lowly, “Absolutely not and be back home by nine.”
Ha Ha typical dad! :lol: Looks like Risa's Mum is going to have a word with Dad :angry:
Chapter 13: WTF! MARRIAGE?!? didn't see that copming!
Chapter 14: Reina got the penthouse suite, nice! Aww Reina was going to ask Risa too marry her :wub:
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WOAH I DID NOT SEE THAT COMINGGGG :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
HA i like the server XD
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“Even normal relationships are like that.”
True or even worse
“I will never be happier anywhere else than in your arms. If my family were to disown me, if we were forced from Morning Musume, even if the world itself were to ridicule me, I could stand it because at the end of the day, I can come home to you.”
:wub:
Tanaka Reina, will you be my wife?
Oh Goddess of Goddesses :fainted:
“It’s just-” Reina grinned and shook her head, “Nothing, you’ll see later.”
A match perhaps.?. :grin:
“Well, it’s definitely more classy than a love hotel.”
XD
she noticed was the elaborately set up dinning room
Hmmm
the top design twisted into the infinity symbol and inlaid with a sapphire and an emerald
My previous guess's close :D
so, I love you. Will you marry me?”
:grin: :grin: :grin:
‘Do Not Disturb’
:shakeit:
I wonder what Papa Niigaki will do :kekeke:
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lhgvsaCu igek yvuc YES! XD thats epic XDD but i wonder what mama and papa gaki will say? XD i guess the papa time bomb will erupt ^^; but this is cute~ great minds think alike XD
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^ i second on the time bomb :lol:
now I have a feeling of something that might cause a downfall soon, then again my stories is like that somehow someway (I like them :lol:)
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OMG! TANAGAKI! :w00t:
I totally love this pairing :mon squee:
I been waiting for someone to do a story with this two. It's so rare but totally work together. and is the only way i can tolerate Gaki XD
I been totally like this the whole chapters :luvluv1:
I totally love it!! ^^
And OMG! when Risa asks Reina to be her wife that was soooo :luvluv2: and then Reina did the same :wriggly:
it's all Papa Gaki's fault, he gave them the idea ¬¬*
C'mon Papa Gaki!! where's your authority :scolding:
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My post is so bipolar XDDD
Again, awesome story can't wait to read more ^^
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awww cute scene TANAGAKI :wub: hahaha they become wife and...husband lol!! this is so sweet :thumbup
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@oddball - Hmm, I seem to have surprised a few people with the proposal thing :sweatdrop:
@SarangAi - Another surprised person~! Lol, that server knew what was up!
@KZ - Papa Niigaki is already not happy, but what he doesn't know, won't hurt him~
@KaWOAH THERE! - <--I'm a loser, sorry. :sweatdrop: Papa? Kaboom? Mama? Might want to help pick out dresses before realizing that the girls are going to have a very looong~ engagement.
@kuro-kun - It'll have a happy ending, so to speak, but yeah, a little drama coming up.
@StephanyLee - :lol: I guess I should have pegged you as not liking Gaki too much, considering the girls that are in your favorite pairing are quite often tagged to the bean, irl and in fanfics. :lol:
@gab - Wife and... wife? :lol:
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Ch. 15: To Explain a Little History
“Oh, it was so romantic, Juri!” Risa exclaimed to her sister the next day as the younger girl gathered in Risa’s room with the two lovers. The sister bean grinned as Reina turned bright red, “Candle lit dinner, an endearingly sweet proposal and then she pampered me like a princess for the rest of the night.”
“Well, I wasn’t the only romantic one,” The yankii defended with a pout, “Your sister here proposed to me at the top of the ferris wheel, to the backdrop of the city at night.” The sisters lay next to each other on the bed on their stomachs, Juri closely examining Risa’s ring, and Reina stood leaning against the wall at the foot of the bed.
The yankii watched on warmly as they chattered excitedly, rather liking the familial feeling the scene gave off. “So,” Juri began, “I’ve heard you guys mention the ‘disaster that was your first anniversary.’ What exactly happened?”
The lovers exchanged a look, Reina nodding for Risa to start the story, “Well, we almost broke up.” The bean began, “It started out as a simple misunderstanding on the dates.”
“I counted the twelfth of June as our anniversary, because that was when we confessed to each other, and Risa counted the 19th, our first date.” Juri nodded in understanding, switching her attention back to her sister as she began to speak.
“Well, as such, we decided to set up on different days, I with Ai-chan’s help and Reina with Jun’s, the only two who knew we were dating. Well, whilst Reina was doing whatever she was doing with Jun, I happened to walk in on a very context sensitive conversation.” The lovers shared another look and the yankii came around to sit next to her on the bed.
“We fought.” Reina picked up, “Things were said that shouldn’t have been, it was mostly my fault.”
“It was both of our faults.” Risa countered, “We both said things that we didn’t mean and we walked away angry. We didn’t speak for nearly a week and when she came to apologize, Reina walked in on Ai-chan and I in, what was in retrospect, a very compromising position. It was just an accident, I fell and Ai-chan tried to catch me, it was like a scene out of a bad drama.”
“We still hadn’t made up for our earlier fight and this definitely didn’t help. We fought again and a lot of insecurities came out and things were picked at that didn’t even really matter at all.” the yankii narrated next, looking shamed, “We agreed, rather angrily, that maybe we needed a break from each other. Maybe permanently.”
Juri looked on the telling with wide eyes, “What, really? I can’t imagine you two ever fighting like that. You seem to get along so well, even before all the love that’s involved.”
“Well, we probably fight with each other the least out of the other members, I even fight with Ai-chan and Kame more, but we’re still human. Anyway, we didn’t speak again for a long time, even the other members started to notice.” Risa continued, “One day, I get this phone call, telling me to come out to the park nearest my apartment, who do I find waiting for me at a picnic table with a flashlight and two boxes of Chinese take out? It was the most romantic apology I’ve ever seen and you and I both know how many k dramas I watch.” She tilted her head back to tug Reina down for a quick kiss.
“You know,” Juri said, ignoring that act, “I think I remember that. Nee-san got so quiet and she would hardly eat anything. We were all worried about her.”
“Trust me.” Reina said, Risa’s arms threaded around her waist, “I was just as heartbroken.”
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Author's note: I have nothing to say, I just wanted to type some nonsense.
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Aww thats's all nice, intresting too see that they had had fights in the past, makes the relationship seem a bit more reel!
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YAY for K drama and Chinese takeout!!! :cow: XD
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@gab - Wife and... wife? :lol:
hahahaha yeah...i'm sorry...wife and wife lol!!! :shakeit:
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ah background stuff comes out hmm interesting :lol:
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Ah, I'm just posting to say I won't be able to update tomorrow. I'm going to be babysitting all damn day, away from my computer.
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D: no~~~~~~~ hope the kid dosent attack u with cute-ness?
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Ch. 16: Kaboom
The house was deathly silent when the lover’s entered after work one day; usually when they came in, the rest of the family was enjoying some show or another on the television in the living room, but not today. “Hmm, seems like only Papa is home.” Risa said cautiously, observing his shoes at the doorway.
They made their way into the apartment, Risa peeking through the kitchen doorway to find her father sitting at the table with a displeased look on his face, “Risa, I would like to speak to you. Now.” She pulled back to share a look with Reina, indicating silently that she should probably escape while she could.
Creeping into the kitchen, the bean stood nervously, awaiting her father’s next words. Without delay, he pulled a box from where it had been sitting next to his feet and slammed it on the table. Immediately, Risa’s face flamed, “Where did you get that?!”
“Your room. Would you care to explain how it got there?” The ‘it’ in question was a very large, pink strap on sex toy, complete with unopened box.
“I, it’s mine!” Risa shrieked, lunging forward to grab the object, “I bought it, so I kept it in my room! Why were you going through my stuff anyway?!”
“Because I’m your father!” He roared, standing up and banging his hands on the table, “And you have been completely unruly since-”
“Since when??! Since Reina came to stay with us?!” Risa screamed back, clutching her prize to her chest, “Just because I won’t submit to your every whim when it comes to her, you think that gives you the right to search my room?!”
“That girl is a bad influence over you! I want you to quit seeing her!” He commanded and Risa shook her head fiercely.
“Never. Besides, if anyone’s the bad influence, it’s me! She didn’t even know about this and she would probably blush when I suggest it. If Reina’s anything, she’s my savior, because she’s finally given me something worth fighting you over!” Risa voice lowered to a cold anger as she glared at her father. “I’m out of here and I’m taking Reina with me.”
Without another word, Risa turned and stormed from the kitchen, “Niigaki Risa, if you walk out of that door, you’ll be grounded for the next six months!” her father called out after her, but she didn’t even pause, just ran, Reina trailing behind her and snagging their shoes from the entranceway.
She ran all the way to the street before she stopped, panting slightly in exertion; Reina wasn’t far behind her, quite a bit more winded. It took her a moment of standing on the warm pavement for Risa to realize she was barefoot, having neglected to put her sandals on before she left, though she still clutched the troublesome box to her chest.
When she finally caught her breath, Reina bent down and laid the bean’s shoes at her feet, standing back up to stomp her own boots back on fully. Risa smiled gratefully and slipped her sandals on, taking the yankii’s hand in her own as they began to walk down the street. It didn’t take them long to make their way into a familiar park and to a well known picnic table. They sat side by side, still holding hands.
“I guess it’s time for me to move out, huh?” Reina stated the obvious as Risa gave her a guilty look, “No, it’s okay, I was kind of expecting it sooner or later. What was it you were fighting over anyway?”
The bean handed over the box, watching her lover’s eyes widen and her face turn pink, “I wanted it to be a surprise.” Risa sulked.
“I, uh, I’m definitely surprised.” Reina stuttered, “Is this my ‘bad influence?’” she inquired ironically.
“Oh, you heard that?” The bean said, lowering her head, “Look, I’m really sorry-” she started, only to be cut off when Reina waved her hand.
“Don’t apologize for someone else.” The yankii instructed, reaching into her pocket and pulling out a single key, “This is the key to my new apartment in Tokyo.”
“What? New apartment?” Risa took the gift gingerly.
“Yes, something Aika said to me a few months ago made me start looking and I finally bought this one three days ago. I was going to surprise you with it over dinner, maybe invite you over for a slumber party.” The yankii grinned weakly.
“Well, I’m definitely surprised.” Risa mimicked, “Let’s head there before we miss the last train. Is it furnished?”
“Uh, no. I wasn’t expecting to move out quite so soon, so we’ll have to get a futon or something to sleep on tonight.” Reina shrugged at her lover‘s look, “Yeah, I know, but just for tonight.”
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Step siblings. They're so cute~!
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the papa bomb exploded o.o dang i could understand papa gaki's reasons for being pissed though...like one min ur daughters litesiningto u and then as soon as she's in a relationship she starts getting rebelious ^^; but that still didnt mean that he had to find THAT!....i would die if that happened XDD i wonder what led risa to do that lol
and sweet~ that means tanagaki could do it night and day with no inturuptions lol but i guess now papa gaki's going to be kinda like reina's mom and do nothing with risa for a while? why do i feel that juri will have to do like sneak visits cus she misses her sister? lol
lol how old are ur step-siblings? XD it seems they were good to u?
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KABOOM is RIGHT XD
well, a thumbsup for Risa for letting her pervy side get the better of her... :twisted:
thumbs up for Reina for getting the apartment :twothumbs
AH something's wrong with me :D :inlove:
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Phew get me one as well Hell, maybe I'll go dunk meself in a cold bath :mon dive: And imagine the Tanagaki's scene in there lol
I forgot to quote this one the last time I commented in here but I was :lol: when I read it :D OMG my age is showing XD *hands baddie two bottles and bows as an apology*
Ch. 15
The sister bean grinned as Reina turned bright red
I wish I was Juri :D
‘disaster that was your first anniversary.’ What exactly happened?”
No ahem.?. :O lol
“Well, we almost broke up.”
<insert Risa's EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH here>
t was just an accident, I fell and Ai-chan tried to catch me, it was like a scene out of a bad drama.
Risa, are you sure it was just an accident.?. XD sorry can't help it when the TakaGaki in is kicking :grin:
picnic table with a flashlight and two boxes of Chinese take out
:lol: but still very sweet :yep:
She tilted her head back to tug Reina down for a quick kiss.
Aww :wub:
“I was just as heartbroken.”
This one's one of the most romantic lines I've so far read :heart:
Author's note: I have nothing to say, I just wanted to type some nonsense.
I didn't see any nonsense, where was it.?.
Ch. 16
to find her father sitting at the table with a displeased look on his face, “Risa, I would like to speak to you. Now.”
Uh-oh tsk tsk tsk
indicating silently that she should probably escape while she could.
:lol:
The ‘it’ in question was a very large, pink strap on sex toy, complete with unopened box.
Okay... ummm... no comment
“I’m out of here and I’m taking Reina with me.”
OMG :panic:
make their way into a familiar park and to a well known picnic table.
The flashlight-take out dinner :D
They sat side by side, still holding hands
SUweeeeeet
“I wanted it to be a surprise.”
Seriously, do they really have to use that one.?.
“This is the key to my new apartment in Tokyo.”
Yay! A more comfortable love-nest :D
“Yeah, I know, but just for tonight.”
Hmmm... She's grounded for a half year, I wonder what will happen after the night
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Wow such a nice present :twisted:
Poor Reina though because of Papa Gaki :(
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Great was just doing some nnocent reading before ing to bed and noe all i can think of is Reina and Risa with a strap on, hmm no sleep for me then :bleed eyes:
Hmm Risa's dad seemsto be getting worse towrds them than better, at least Riena's got an appartment so they can stay somewhere else
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I was under the impression Risa's family were cool with the relationship....and then Papa Gaki starts blowing up :panic:
At least Reina has her own apartment now, which they can have fun furnishing and decorating together :D
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Ch. 17: Plan B
Reina rubbed her neck, feeling an ache that just wouldn’t go away. Hands suddenly gripping her shoulders made her jump, but she relaxed when she saw Sayu behind her, the older girl beginning to massage her muscles for her. “Your neck still bothering you?” the other rokkie inquired gently.
“Yeah, just can’t seem to get used to sleeping on the floor. The futon’s too thin.” Reina complained, sighing as the knots were worked from her neck.
“Why don’t you buy a bed?” Sayumi said flatly, “That might solve a problem or two.”
“Well, I want to get my own bed, but I’ve been procrastinating on going back to my old house to get my things.”
“Wait, you mean you haven’t gone back since you moved out? What have you been doing for clothes and stuff?”
“I bought new ones.” Reina shrugged at her friend’s incredulous look, “Anyway, I want to ask Risa to help me get some stuff, but maybe it would be better to ask you guys.”
“Why us?” Sayu paused her ministrations to face Reina seriously.
“She’s been kind of depressed and I don’t know how to cheer her up. I told her that she should call up her father and make nice with him, but she said the only way he’d accept her back was if she broke up with me and there’s no way she’ll do that. Not that I want her to, but she’s still torn and I hate to ask her to choose between me and her family. So things have been a little tense between us. I mean, I want her with me, but how can I ask her to practically break into her house and steal back her own things?” The yankii let out a miserable sigh.
“Well, you could just say it like that.” another voice spoke up, the two rokkies spinning around to find their leader and sub-leader had walked into the room. “You don’t have to beat yourself up over this, it’s my choice to make and I decided when we first got together.” Risa continued, coming over to stand before her lover.
“I just know how much it sucks to not have your family by your side.” Reina whimpered quietly, “I don’t want you to have to feel that too. It’s not fair.” She stood and was embraced by the bean.
“I do have my family by my side.” Risa whispered into her ear.
“Yeah, you still have us, Rei.” Ai said, gaining a flat look from Risa that clearly stated ‘Look you, lay off the affectionate nicknames in my presence, got it?’ Ai had the grace to look chastened.
“And we’ll happily help you break into your old house when nobody’s there, right guys?” Sayu further stated, eliciting raised eyebrows and reluctant agreements.
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OMG I had JUST rewatched the Mujack episode where Sayu and Mittsi massages Reina RIGHT before I read this chapter XD XD XD
Is Sayu planning to break into their house? she would~ :twisted:
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aw~ D: poor risa>.< and this is whenre kaito reinya comes in XDDD just let her do the job for u XDD and it looks like risa's even giving ai dirty looks now? wow~
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Sayu at the end XD
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Girls in black with ropes and binoculars and all, not to mention they are Musumes, that would be lovely XD I so could imagine Sayu being so girly and not so capable (or something) sneaking in :lol:
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OMG I had JUST rewatched the Mujack episode where Sayu and Mittsi massages Reina RIGHT before I read this chapter XD XD XD
ME TOO!!!! hahaha , Sayumi is devil jojojo :twisted:
MOREEEEEEE :thumbup :panic:
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You seem to have a great time babysitting your step-siblings :)
Soooooooooo has Reina tried the new toy from Risa? (had to ask :twisted:) I mean, they do have their own love nest now :lol:
“Yeah, you still have us, Rei.” Ai said, gaining a flat look from Risa that clearly stated ‘Look you, lay off the affectionate nicknames in my presence, got it?’
Girl you are killing me with this. Gaki actually jealous of Ai? *inner TakaGaki wailing* But is it just me but Gaki is jealous of Ai's nickname for Reina but not Sayu touching the yankii?
“And we’ll happily help you break into your old house when nobody’s there, right guys?” Sayu further stated, eliciting raised eyebrows and reluctant agreements.
Leave it to the devilish bunny to give the best idea :lol:
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So there's a bitof tention, hmm must be hard to choose between your family and your love.
Nice too see that the MM girls support them but Sayu the robber :lol: that i would like to see
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Sorry for not being around, I'm getting ready to move, so I will not be able to post for a few days. Just as soon as everything is set up, I'll be back!
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ah~ so ur finaly moving~? hope u dont forget anything~ and u know i'll be waiting for u~ i'll even count how many chappies u owe us when u come back :lol: the current count is 3 chappies XD
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^ YEAH I like that idea. keep counting.
when you get back, you just might have to spend a couple days as a computer hermit... :twisted:
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Oh snap!!! I haven't commented in ages it seems, but rest assured I have caught up.
With the many chapters that I haven't commented on, I don't really know where I should start so I'm gonna comment on the parts that made the greatest impact ;)
Ch 8 - Reina and Juri bonding and showing us how high maintenance Reina is XD Gives Risa props for her totally confident remark as well as her way of dragging Reina.
Ch 9 - I was expecting Risa's father to be strict in terms of the rules around the house but I kinda agree with Risa in the sense that the girl is sleeping so isn't it more of a drag to wake her up just to tell her to go to bed??? Another option could be that Reina stays in the bed and Risa moves to where Reina was sleeping that way it satisfies her father and could have avoided the argument.
Go Risa Go!!!!! Show him what you stand up for :lol:
Awwww Reina to help the situation as well as to show the old man that she doesn't intend for her presence to be the reason for the breakdown of the father/daughter relationship. Scheme perhaps???
Ch 10 - Sure go scare the kids!!!! You couldn't even decipher their looks and your yankinism goes up!!!!
Ch 11 - Is it just me or has all the hot scenes all been Reina being the initiator and the one giving??? Risa should have just grabbed her right there and then and return the favour because she is "turned on" but then again the parents might be around.... that makes it Reina 2 vs Risa 0 so far.
Ch 12 - Risa's mom finally speaks out in favour of her daughter :cow: I kinda want to see how the argument goes and see who wins :lol:
Ch 13 & 14 - I absolutely adored the proposal they had :wub: I guess they have been hanging around each other so much that their tastes are quite similar in contrast to their actual personalities.
Ch 15 - This explained their previous anniversary but more details on what was this "context sensitive conversation" like? :twisted:
and what was this "compromising position?" :twisted: XD So at the end of the day, Reina was the one who apologized and saved their relationship. We know from Juri statement a mini summary of how hurt Risa was but what were the details of Reina's heartbreak :angry: tell me, I want to know!!!!!!
Ch 16 - Didn't expect Risa to buy a strap on though, thought it might have been something Reina would own. I did foresee that Risa's father would find something or catch them at one point in time and everything will go downhill, however to say Reina is a bad influence, meh I'm debating.
I am kinda leaning towards Reina bought the apartment so she can have her way with Risa without always having to hide or worry about parents. Wait a minute, Aika said something??? What did she say????
Ch 17 - Uh oh!!! The MM girls are united and ready to take on the mission of breaking and entering, let's hope they don't get caught and then Risa's father will call the cops and tada next headline for the newspaper is "MM breaks and enters!!!! What other dirty business are they doing??? Where did the nation go wrong??" :lol:
Surprisingly, Risa wasn't jealous at how Sayu was massaging Reina, considering the fact that when Sayu was massaging Reina on MuJack she looked like she really REALLY enjoyed it.
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Ch. 18: The Great Heist, part 1
Reina felt quite exhilarated as she crept quietly through the front door of her former living space, the other members at her back. They had hired a truck and driver to take the furniture and stuff across town to her new apartment, it was just up to them to get it out of the house. Many looked around in awe, as if they had entered a mystical place, the legend of Reina’s Home, such as it was.
“Wow,” Jun Jun breathed, “Tanaka-san’s house.”
Reina rolled her eyes, “Yeah, yeah, I should have just left you out.” Jun pouted at her words, but wisely kept silent. Suddenly, as everyone was quietly exploring, the yankii let out a giggle, “I was thinking,” she revealed at everyone’s questioning looks, “It would be hilarious to clean out the whole house while they’re gone.”
They headed back to Reina’s room to get to work, “Okay, we don’t have any boxes, so we’ll just have to take everything as is.” Risa spoke up, looking to Ai to continue.
“Well, why don’t we four,” she pointed to her, Sayu, Eri and Lin, “work on the closet and the rest of you start carting off the stuff in the room?” Everyone agreed to the plan and got started, the closet crew taking handfuls of hangered outfits and taking them to the truck. Jun opened a drawer on one of the dressers and laughed.
“Even your panties have skulls on them.” she giggled, holding up her find. Before Reina could even find it in her to blush, Risa had smacked the older girl over the back of her head and snatched the little piece of clothing back.
“I’ll thank you not to handle my girlfriend’s unmentionables, Jun.” the bean growled to the chastened girl.
“Ah, right, sorry. Maybe you should take that drawer.” the panda scurried over to hide behind Aika, the younger girl rolling her eyes and gesturing her to help move the couch. Between the eight of them, it didn’t take long to clear out the room and soon, the only thing left was the bed. Amidst the chaos, Reina quietly sat down on the last piece of furniture, observing the bare room.
Risa and Ai exchanged a look, silently communicating to each other, “Alright guys, why don’t we take a break?” The leader suggested, starting to usher the others out of the room.
“Yeah, raid the fridge while you’re at it.” Risa told them, shutting the door behind them after one last meaningful look to her fellow gokkie. Taking a seat next to her lover, the bean placed an arm around her shoulders, “You okay?” she asked softly.
Instead of answer, Reina asked a question of her own, “Do you remember our first kiss after we started dating?”
Deciding to humor her lover, Risa patiently answered, “We were sitting on your couch in here, talking, and then you leaned over and kissed me. As I recall, that was also the first time you initiated a kiss.”
“And the first time you told me you loved me?” Reina continued, looking at the floor.
“Also here, we had been fighting, not long after we started dating. You were going to walk out the door and I was standing behind you. I grabbed you arm and said it, and that I didn’t want to lose you.” The bean gently cupped Reina’s chin, turning her to meet her eyes.
“And the first time we made love?” The yankii whispered, watching a flush rise up from Risa’s collar.
“On this bed.” Risa responded in the same, quiet tone, “You were so gentle and you tasted so good.” Now they were both blushing.
“That’s just a few examples of all the good memories I have here, with you and before you. I’ve lived in this apartment for almost six years and I haven’t seen my room this bare since we moved in. I’m leaving all these memories behind.” Reina explained and Risa nodded in understanding.
“But you still carry those memories with you, here,” she touched the yankii’s temple, “and here.” she rested her hand over Reina’s steadily beating heart. “And we can make new memories in our new home. A new first kiss,” she pressed their lips together, pulling away just enough to breathe her next words against Reina’s lips, “And a new first ‘I love you,’” Another quick peck followed, “we can even have a new first time.” They kissed again, before Risa pulled away with a grin, “We can do that one a few times, if you want.”
Reina laughed and wrapped her arms around Risa’s waist and back to hold her close, their lips coming together passionately. When they finally broke away, they stayed close together, foreheads touching, Risa cupping Reina’s face. They smiled and the bean opened her mouth to say something when the door to the room opened and a young man poked his head inside.
“Um, nee-chan? Why is there a pop idol group trashing our kitchen?” He didn’t seemed surprised at all to catch his sister being intimate with another girl and Reina froze at his appearance, hands still wound around her lover.
“Kyosuke?” She murmured, untangling herself and standing, “What are you doing here? Shouldn’t you be at school.? Wait,” she realized, hands going to her hips, “if you’re cutting class, boy, I’m going to beat you!”
“I’m not skipping, sis,” he hastened to assure her, hands held up in the surrender position, “school is closed today for repairs. Some seniors thought it would be funny to blow up the east wing for senior prank yesterday.” he explained, “How have you been, Niigaki-san?” he asked the still seated girl, smiling pleasantly.
“Oh, uh, I’ve been fine.” she wasn’t expecting the question and returned the pleasantry rather robotically, “How about you? How’re your studies?”
“Oh, they’re good, preparing for college already. I’m still trying to decide on good schools in the area, but I should be fine wherever I choose.” The rather charming teen smiled crookedly, making Risa feel at ease. She had always liked the boy, treating him much like a younger sibling; since she didn’t have a brother of her own, it was an interesting experience.
“Wow, I can’t believe you’re going to college soon, seems like you were just starting high school yesterday. You know, you’re the same age as my sister, maybe you two would get along well.” Risa looked to the side, plotting the possibilities in her head, while Kyosuke laughed sheepishly.
“Um, sis, my birthday’s coming up soon, you know? Are we going to do lunch like always?” He asked hesitantly.
Reina relaxed her arms and smiled brightly at her brother, “You better believe it and I’ll make a scene like I do every year, so be prepared.” It was tradition for her to march into his school at lunchtime on his birthday and drag him out of the classroom theatrically, just to give everyone something to talk about.
“Good, now let me help you guys take this last piece out to the truck.” Kyosuke returned the smile and they got to work again.
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I'm back! (And skipping comment replies again, heh, I'm lazy) Enjoy!
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hey u know homuch chappies u owe??? 5....thats all i will say XD
dang it pretty much seems that everything importiant happened in reina's room XD and is it me or is risa getting more and more posessive over reina? and her brother's so cute~~~ XD and a new tanagaki in the mix?? hm~ XD
hope ur move went well^^
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Oh, I owe? What if there's not five chapters left? 8) Maybe I'll write up a sequel with Risa the matchmaker and her exasperated lover. XD
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if you're going to end this before 5 chapters, you BETTER end it in a good way!!! XD
btw, that was such a cute chapter~~ I think I wanna see the entire momusu burst into Kyousuke's school :wub: :D
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Ah nostalgic feelings for them
^ that would be interesting :lol:
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Jun finally managed to make it into reina's house! :lol: and see her panties :lol:!
Poor Reina dosn't seem totally happy about leaving but I suppose she can get trough it because of Risa!
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the legend of Reina’s Home
:lol:
“Yeah, yeah, I should have just left you out.”
Damn :lol:
“Even your panties have skulls on them.”
OMG :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
Risa and Ai exchanged a look, silently communicating to each other
TakaGaki love :wub: lol
“But you still carry those memories with you, here,” she touched the yankii’s temple, “and here.” she rested her hand over Reina’s steadily beating heart. “And we can make new memories in our new home. A new first kiss,” she pressed their lips together, pulling away just enough to breathe her next words against Reina’s lips, “And a new first ‘I love you,’” Another quick peck followed, “we can even have a new first time.” They kissed again, before Risa pulled away with a grin, “We can do that one a few times, if you want.”
You're very romantic, you know that.?. :)
“Um, nee-chan? Why is there a pop idol group trashing our kitchen?”
:lol:
It was tradition for her to march into his school at lunchtime on his birthday and drag him out of the classroom theatrically, just to give everyone something to talk about.
Awww, Me wants to see that :w00t:
“Good, now let me help you guys take this last piece out to the truck.”
lol I thought he's going to stop Reina XD Very cool brother :D
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Ch. 19: The Great Heist, part 2
The next day found the group repeating the process of breaking and entering in a certain home in Yokohama; this time, greeted by two, small females watching tv in the living room. Nervously Risa shuffled in, Reina gripping her hand and the others at her back, to face her mother and sister, curiously staring at her from their places, “Uh, hi.” she started, “I came to get my stuff.”
“I see you brought an army of movers, too.” Her mother stated, standing and walking over to her oldest child. Placing one hand gently on Risa’s shoulder and the other on Reina’s, she smiled, “Let us help too.”
Relieved beyond words, Risa could only nod, blinking back tears as she embraced her mother. Juri got up to join them, throwing her arms around a surprised Reina first, before dragging all four together in a group hug.
If moving went quickly with eight people, it went even faster with ten and soon, once again, the only thing left was the bed. Much like Reina had before, Risa sat down on the edge of the bed and stared around the room, taking in the blank floor space and lack of color.
Sensing the atmosphere, the other musume filed out, except for Ai and Reina, whom sat down on either side of the bean. “Ah, it looks so weird now. You’ve lived here forever.” Ai started bluntly, gaining a chuckle from her longtime friend.
“I would like for you to leave your bed here.” Risa’s mom stated, gaining an inquisitive look from her daughters, “Just in case anything happens and no matter what your father says, you are always welcome here, both of you,” she nodded at Reina, who smiled, “and as such, I want you to have a place to sleep if you ever need to come back here.”
Once again touched, Risa stood and embraced her mother again, choking off a sob. Juri joined the hug and the three Niigaki women stood together. Reina exchanged a glance with Ai, rolling her eyes playfully and gaining a chuckle, in reality, both were glad that this visit had worked out the way it had. Everything seemed a little less bleak now.
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Very short this time, but I'm still happy with it.
One more chapter to go before this telling ends, but the story is never over.
@SarangAi - Well, the last part I wrote is short, but I think you might like it.
@kuro-kun - Geez, maybe I need an omake, huh? :lol:
@oddball - Yeah, that's right. :D
@KZ - You're very romantic, you know that.?.
:oops: Aw, yeah, I guess i'm just a big softie at heart.
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ah mama gaki is understanding good thing
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Risa's mom is all kinds of cool!
The bit about leaving Risa's bed in her perants house was very moving :cry:
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Ch. 20: And they lived.
Reina’s cry echoed in the room, bringing a satisfied smirk to Risa’s face as she crawled up rest against her side. She was constantly amazed by just how sensitive her lover’s sensitive parts were; once she got started, it was easy enough to bring her to multiple peaks. Kind of like now, she thought with an evil grin.
Waiting for Reina to catch her breath, Risa absently played with the yankii’s new necklace, she had gotten a chain to put her engagement ring on and now it rested near the center of her chest. ‘Closer to my heart.’ Reina had told her. The bean had merely moved her ring to her right hand, content enough to show it off.
After a long moment, Reina let out a sigh, arms enclosing around Risa’s waist, “Mmm, it’s so nice not having to keep our voices down.”
“I’m sure our neighbors would appreciate it if we didn’t cut loose,” Risa laughed huskily, “But you know how much I love to make you scream.” she grinned saucily at her yankii’s blush.
Pressing her lips to Risa’s neck, Reina kissed her gently, “This was a great first time.” Her lips trailed downward over the older’s collar bone, giving a nip. They shifted so that Reina could lean over Risa, resting on her forearms on either side of the bean’s torso. Her ring dangled in between Risa’s breasts, the warm metal making a secondary trail down over quivering belly and trembling thighs, finally pausing as it’s owner did.
Risa’s moans and cries filled the room as Reina stroked her flame higher and higher. Finally, fireworks went off and they cuddled together in the aftermath.
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This is it, the end of my telling, the last chapter that I wrote. Geez, I always have trouble ending stories and chapters, so I dunno. When I started this little project, I set out to create a moment in time type story, which is why there is no real closure to the TanaGaki couple. Does Reina ever make up with her mom? Does Risa's dad ever grudgingly accept that his little girl isn't so little anymore? Do they ever go public when they leave Momusu? How does their life together turn out in the future? I don't know, I would like to think they have a happy ending, that they keep their romance fresh and playful and passionate. I would like to think that they squabble over whose turn it is to cook or take out the trash, that they get a house with a white picket fence and a few cats. Maybe they even find a way to have kids and get married. The point is, only time will tell and time is all they have. And maybe they don't live happily ever after, because even normal couples struggle, but they lived.
@kuro-kun - A foot back in the door, so to speak. Maybe from there, she can work out something with her father?
@oddball - Ah thank you very much, I was hoping to have that effect.
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^ yeah questions unanswered :)
well I won't say you need to have a definite ending but somehow as long as they end up together
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ah~! that's it~? just leave it up to us to find a conclusion?? lol
its a verry good story in the end though and i loved the whole thing~ now~ i must wait again for another epic work from u~
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Wow yay great to get an ending to a fic! XD :D This was some nice chapters ^^ Thanks for writing! :w00t: :)
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I actually think it's wonderful how you made it a "moment in time" story.
that WAS a pretty sweet ending~ loved it :wub:
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Damn I'm kinda sad it's over. Oh well, maybe I'll go read your Guide for the TanaGaki domestic lives :twisted: (speaking of which, will there be an update for that? XD)
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“I see you brought an army of movers, too.”
:lol:
Very nice mama and sis :yep:
Reina’s cry echoed in the room, bringing a satisfied smirk to Risa’s face as she crawled up rest against her side
:? :mon blood:
“Mmm, it’s so nice not having to keep our voices down.”
Damn :on bleed:
Oh it's over :O
What I like about this story’s the family involvement, very realistic. And of course the :drool: :on_hot: :on bleed: :mon blood: :imdead: :D
Very awesome :yep: as expected from a great writer like you :yep:
Damn I'm kinda sad it's over. Oh well, maybe I'll go read your Guide for the TanaGaki domestic lives :twisted: (speaking of which, will there be an update for that? XD)
Like what baddie said :D
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That was a great climax....... :drool: Im mean ending :lol:
good fic, I enjoyed reding it :twothumbs
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one down, roughly 600 more fics to go.
i teared up towards the end. no, i don't say things i don't mean like, lol, when all i'm doing is smirking at the screen. i actually teared up at fluff. god, i'm exhausted.
Pop quiz from a single read-through
My 5 favorite things (over and above the things already commented about) were:-
1) Getting conned into cooking breakfast- man, Risa is so easy
2) Risa/Niigaki Papa interactions: just for the record, i would never have said "do the naughty" to my own dad.
3) niigaki's rare rage- having seen her made-for-tv rages, i can only assume that a real rage would actually make me want to pick her up and cuddle her- right before i start spurting arterial blood from my neck stump where she bit my head off.
4) the penthouse, i approve. GJ, Reina.
5) Risa getting more upset about the strapon surprise being spoilt than by her dad finding it
And this takes the cake- its like out of a Wild West prairie drama, complete with Southern slang:-
“I’ll thank you not to handle my girlfriend’s unmentionables, Jun.” the bean growled to the chastened girl.
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