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Chapter One
"The New Girl"
It seems like it was only yesterday, but in fact it was more then ten years ago. Still to this day though, I can't seem to forget the most beautiful girl that I have ever laid eyes on. Takahashi Ai was her name and she was just a little over five-feet tall. If you want me to describe her appearance try to imagine perfection. She was like a goddess in every since of the word. She had the face of an angel with eyes that were just dream inducing, but equally as mesmerizing was her smile that was known to melt even the coldest of hearts, or so I had heard. She even had some of the world's most amazing legs, legs that which if memory serves me correctly, are said to have turned a majority of the female population of the student body into lesbians, and the majority the male population of the student body that were homosexual were quoted as saying that they were willing to convert if they had a chance with her. She was definitely the total package, and are destinies became intertwined on that fateful day.
"Are your sure you have everything? Risa... Risa... Risa!" "Are you paying attention ?" "Yes mom, I'm totally listening to you." As we pulled up to the school, my excitement started to build. Getting excited about going to school may sound strange, but my father was a career military man, so we moved around a lot when I was younger. However, my dad had just reached the terms of service in which early retirement was available, but this new school was going to be the place where I would complete my education, there was no more moving from place to place. The school was very active, upon walking past the entrance to the right the Karate Club could be seen practicing, and the rest of the students seemed like a colony of bees, buzzing all over the place. "Takahashi!, Takahashi!, Takahashi!" I heard some girls shout as they ran past me. "If I want to get a person to like me better, how should I dress?" one girl asked. "Her name is Ai Takahashi, and yes she's the cutest girl in the school, and the most important thing of all YES! SHE IS SINGLE!." "Oh, by the way names
's Renee, Nice to meet ya." "Wha?" is how I responded to Renee. "Her name's Ai Takahashi, she's the cutest in school, and she's single. I thought that would be a good answer to all of your future questions, seeing that your face became as red as a tomato, as soon as you saw her, and is still red even now." To be honest, I was a little embarrassed to admit it at first, but Renee's assumption of the situation was correct.
Chapter Two
"Being Next to a Dream Girl"
Upon entering my new home room, my heart instantly became aflutter and my excitement quickly began to rise. It seemed as though Fate had smiled at me, the planets were all aligned, or something that has to do with the all the mystical things of the universe and destiny had shown me some favoritism, because right in front of my very eyes sitting in the first seat of the very last row quietly reading the book Modern Slang and You was Ai Takahashi. "Well class, let me introduce you to are new classmate." the Teacher said. "Hello, everyone my name is Risa Niigaki. Nice to meet you." "O.K. Risa, let me look for a seat for you so that I can get the class started." I might have been a little bold, but in seeing the vacant seat next to Takahashi I just couldn't resist. "Ah, Professor...there...ah... seems to be an empty seat next to that girl." "Hmmm?" "That girl?" He answered with puzzled look on his face. "Yes, that girl right there" I exclaimed nervously pointing in Ai's direction. "Oh, you mean Takahashi, very well since there is a vacant seat next to her you can go ahead and sit there."
Chapter Three
"Hi, I am Ai"
As I began to walk towards the seat next to the goddess, my heart began to beat with such a tremendous ferocity that it felt as though it was going to leap out of my chest at any moment. Topping things off was my high level of anxiety, just trying to walk in her direction seemed like an eternity. "Niigaki...Niigaki... Miss Niigaki!!!!" I think I heard someone shout. "Huh?" I replied. "Please take your seat next to Miss Takahashi, so that class may began." "Ye...Ye...Yes Sir!" I replied as I hurriedly walked to my seat amid feelings of embarrassment. "That's quite a nice book you have there. Modern Slang and You , it's a good book, but I prefer Totally Rad Slang ." "Hmmm? Totally Rad?" she said. I couldn't believe it, the goddess had just spoken to me, and what an amazingly sweet sounding voice she had, but then. "Totally Rad?...Totally Rad?...Hmmm....Ah, I remember now. I have heard of it before. If I remember correctly Totally Rad Slang was created using phrases from Eighties & Nineties Pop-Culture movies." "Hi, I am Ai." she said with a little giggle. "Huh...Ai?" I stated with a puzzled look. "Yes." she said. "My name is Ai Takahashi, what is yours?" "Risa Niigaki!" I blurted out.
"Well, hello then Risa Niigaki. Nice to meet you. Tell me though don't you think this situation is a little funny?" "Funny, how so? was my response. " "Well, usually when two people meet for the first time they introduce themselves to each other. Then the conversation follows, however, we did the opposite." She said, also with a little giggle. "That's because you all are meant for each other!" I heard Renee interject from the back of the classroom. "Niigaki, are you alright your face is completely red. Are you feeling well." If my face became red from Renee's remarks, you can probably imagine how red it was when Takahashi put her hand on my forehead. "Professor Tsunku! I think we made need to get the nurse! I think something is wrong with Risa!" "I'm fine." I managed to say. "I think I'm just a little too excited about being in a new school, with this being the first day and all." "Sure, she's excited but it's about any of the things she just said, is it Risa?" Renee exclaimed with a slightly devilish grin of her face. "Now, Now Class settle down. After that little incident the rest of the class although rather boring seemed to go by really quickly.
Chapter Four
"Friends"
Before I knew, it was already mid-day and a long with it came lunch time. I must admit, that the morning had indeed been very enjoyable. First, not only had I quickly seemed to become friends with the most beautiful girl in the school. I also learned that we had most of the same classes through out the day. "Come on, this way. Don't worry the other girls won't bite. They are all really cool people." Ai told me as I followed her. "This is our table, right smack in the center of the cafeteria. Let me introduce you to the rest of the Music Club. Of course you already know Renee, but here are the other varsity members: First, there's Jun Jun and Lin Lin they're exchange students from China, then there's Eri, and finally Sayumi." "Oh, and of course I'm Ai" she said with a little giggle. "Alright, she's already giggling when she talks to you, you half-way done." Renee whispered as she was trying to nudge me closer to Ai. The varsity music club was very interesting. Each of the members had a unique style that added to the group both in appearance as well as in diversity with different music genres. "Hey! Hey! Hey! Did you guys here, there's a party tonight!" a girl shouted as she came running up to our table. "YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! PARTY EVERYBODY PARTY! Oh, man this party is going to be off the chain!" Renee shouted with a somewhat large amount of excitement. "A party?" I asked.
"Oh, yes." Ai replied. "Since this is the first day. There's somewhat of a tradition here that was started by a student named King, that always on the first and last days of school a party to end all parties be held. It's been like that since before I became a student here." Still a little full of excitement for the upcoming event Renee spoke. "I don't know about you guys, but I've preparing for tonight for the last four months so I already have my wardrobe planned for the evening." "Nooooo! I completely forgot... what am I going to wear?" Jun Jun exclaimed with a somewhat sad tone in voice. "Don't worry." Renee stated as she winked in my direction and a devilish grin began to form on her face. "Why, don't we all just go shopping after school. The party doesn't start until eight and since we have to be fashionably late, we don't have to actually be there until nine. What do ya say?" "That sounds like a great idea Renee!" they all shouted in agreement. "O.K. since I already my awesome wardrobe prepared I won't be able to join, but how about we break into groups of two to go shopping?" "Who should pair up with who?" I asked Renee.
"Hmmm, that's a good question." She replied as she giggled while looking straight into my eyes. "How about Jun Jun goes with Lin Lin, Eri goes with Sayumi, then the only ones that are left are Risa and Ai. You all can go together. How do those parings sound?"
"Those are great pairings!" I shouted trying my utmost to hide my enthusiasm. "Great, then I guess it's settled then. These are the pairs that we're going to split into after school." With that the bell signaling the end of lunch began to ring. "Hmmm, Risa will it be alright if I meet you at the statue of "Love" after school? Since I'm the head cheerleader as well, I have a few other duties before we can shopping." "O.Kaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyy" I exclaimed in a goofy tone. " I think it's a safe bet to say that even if your a little late, our little Risa here won't mind at all." "Thanks, Renee. See you guys later." Ai said as she turned and went to class. "What a nice backside!" I heard Renee say with a laugh. "Huh?" I replied. " I said what a nice backside. That's what your thinking isn't it Risa? I have to agree with you on that one, Ai does in fact have a very nice bottom, but I think if it's according to Niigaki, then Ai has everything nice, doesn't she?" Renee stated, again with laughter, however, this time it seemed to be a bit more intense.
Chapter Five
"Just the Two of Us"
I would like to say that the rest of the day went by pretty smooth, but for the most part I don't really remember. After the pairings at lunch all I could think about was my "date" with Ai after school. I couldn't wait for school to be over, even though it really wasn't an "official date" I guess technically speaking you could call it a date. Takahashi and I were the only ones shopping together, because the other girls were each going to shop with their designated partner. So it was just the two of us together until the party started. "Finally!" I shouted "It's three o'clock! YAY!" "Wow! Isn't someone a little too excited?" I heard Renee mumble as a few students around her began to laugh. As I waited for Ai thousands upon thousands of thoughts raced through my head. "Risa...Risa...Oh, Risa." I heard in the distance. "YES!" I replied, my voice cracking in an idiotic tone as I trembled from the excitement. "I'm at your command. My sweet princess." "Eh?" could be heard as someone's hand came to grab my shoulder. "Risa are you alright?" "Huh?...Uh...Yes...I'm alright." I said with a nervous laugh as my face began to have a slight rosy color to it. "That's good, I was a little worried since you were just standing giggling and mumbling to yourself." At first, I thought you were just daydreaming, but after calling to you and not getting any response, I became a little worried." I think my imagination may have been playing tricks on me, but I could have sworn that the instant Ai was said she was worried about me I saw a slight hint of crimson appear on her cheeks.
I would describe how our "date" went, but to be honest I don't really remember. As I was walking from store to store it felt as though I was in a dream. Being with her was simply amazing.
Chapter Six
"Party Time"
Once we all had our wardrobes finalized, the only thing left was to go to the party. Since no one in the varsity music club possessed a driver's license, Ai called Mari Yaguchi for a ride, she was our senior by a few years and also a former member of the music club. She was just as beautiful as Ai and was very active many television shows and was said to be dating a very popular baseball player. "So you all are going to the traditional "King" party..." I think all the girls in our group may have been a little embarrassed or something, because there was just an awkward silence. "It's O.K. guys. You don't have to be embarrassed, I too was your age once. Besides, when I was high school I also attended King's party. "It's the party to end all parties" held twice a year." Yaguchi was saying as we drove up the driveway to the front door. "One word of advice for my little juniors." She said with a slight grin. "Make sure to enjoy yourselves and most importantly... don't do anything I wouldn't do." and with a smile and laugh Yaguchi left us at the front door.
Chapter Seven
"Karaoke and the drunken confession"
As we walked through the front door, my excitement began to rise. My senses were bombarded with the amazing sounds of the great music playing, but I think I was more excited being next to Ai. "Welcome to the party." I heard an unknown individual say. "Is that King?" I asked Renee. "No, I'm not King." He replied. "I'm Allen, nobody knows who he is or what ever happened to him. All we know is that he always insisted on having a party on the first and last days of school. It seemed like a good idea so everyone just ran with it, at least that's the legend." This school sure seems to have some of the most interesting people was what I was thinking after hearing about King. "So Ai are you going to defend your karaoke title this year as well?" Allen asked. "Karaoke?" I asked with a perplexed look. "Oh, yes" Renee exclaimed. "Twice a year and at these parties only, anyone can pay ten dollars to enter a karaoke competition, where the winner takes all the money that was collected from all of the entrees. Be warned though that you should only enter the competition if you can sing. Having guts although admirable is not recommended, because your going to go up against some true professionals." "True Professionals" I asked.
"Oh, yes" Renee replied. "You see our school isn't the only one here at the party. King was really passionate about uniting rival schools in order to achieve the "Party to end all parties" status. So every one's here, and your girl Takahashi is the one to beat. She's won every competition since she became leader of the music club." "Are you going to join, this year's competition seems like it's going to be really interesting, not only is everyone from our music club competing as well as the clubs of our rival schools, but there are a few of our juniors that seem to be making quite a name for themselves, a few examples I can think of off hand are Risako Sugaya, Yurina Kumai, Chisato Okai, Airi Suzuki, Erina Mano, and Kanon Fukuda just to name a few. Plus you also have to deal with me." "Are you up to the challenge? Do you have the guts....kid" Renee exclaimed with a smile.
"Of course, I've got the guts as well as the talent!" I told Renee in a loud but still playful voice. "Allen!" I exclaimed. "Sign me up for the competition." "Alright! This is going to be one hell of a competition, let's see what you got newbie." was his reply. "Oh, and one more thing Allen." "Sure what is it Niigaki?" "Ugh... do... you...think...I...ugh...can borrow ten dollars to enter the competition? I kind a, sort a spent all of my money already." I nervously asked. "Sure, I think I can kind a, sort a lend you ten dollars for the competition." He said with a chuckle. With that the karaoke competition was on and boy was it ever though. Renee was not lying with the "true professionals" quote.
All of the girls in the competition had truly amazing voices. With such though competition I barely made it to the finals, however, I was able to make to battle against the defending champion, the goddess I had fallen in love with. "This year's competition sure is pretty though isn't and you still haven't even battled the champion." an unknown voice told me. "I know what you mean, it's really though out there." I responded. "You seem to be a little nervous, here why don't you have a drink...to sort of calm the nerves." "O.K." was my reply. "Hey, Louis!... make sure our friend here, has all of the liquid courage she needs." "Yes, sir!" Louis responded, and just like that the unknown voice was gone. "Drink up newbie, because going up against Takahashi is not a task for amateurs."
"Alright everybody!" Shouted Allen. The final match is about to begin. "Since Takahashi is the defending champion she will go last. Niigaki what's your song?" " Ookii Hitomi" was my reply. My performance as well as the events that happened after, I vaguely remember but according to Renee this is what happened. Ookii Hitomi aijou de sotto KISU shite kakugo nara dekiteru wa furueru hodo anata ga suki "Alright!!! Way to go Niigaki!!!" Renee shouted. "I think everyone will agree that was quite a performance from Risa Niigaki, well done." Allen said on the mic as Ai made her way to the center. "Good job she whispered with a little wink and a smile as she walked passed me." "Alright, Takahashi what song do you choose?" Allen asked. "Yuki/ Ai x Anata > Suki" was her reply "O.K. Ai," Allen shouted "Yuki/ Ai x Anata > Suki...Dj...HIT IT!" Then the music started to play. LOVE hotondo zenzen kaze ga fukunai kumo no nai hoshizora aa anata ni chotto amaetai kara ude wo tsukanda no , "Dang, it really seems to be hot in here, I wonder what's causing it to be so hot?" I thought. "Hey! Niigaki, your girl can really sing can't she. That's why she's leader of the music club." "Dang, Renee it's really hot." I said. "Don't know Risa, maybe it's just you, I don't think it's really hot." was her reply. I don't really remember if it happened exactly like this, but, according to Renee it happened right as Ai sang this verse Ai fun no yuki kakeru anata no toi dai nari IKO-RU suki yo anata ga suki yo , I don't really know if it was the fact that at that our eyes are said to have met at that exact moment or if it was the alcohol, but apparently I ran up to Ai as she was singing. Grabbed the microphone with my left hand then hugged Ai and loudly proclaimed. "I LOVE AI TAKAHASHI!!!!!!!!!!!!" I don't really remember any of that happening, but Renee swears that it did happen and that after that Ai ran out of the room in embarrassment as a hush had fallen over the crowd the moment I was making my proclamation, however, I think it maybe somewhat true though, because there was somewhat of an awkwardness in our communication after that party.
Chapter Eight
"Ai Araba IT"S ALL RIGHT"
I must admit the first few days after the "party to end all parties" trying to have a conversation with Ai was a bit awkward for the both of us. It mostly consisted of "Hello and How are you." Then one day... "Hey Niigaki!". "Hmmm" "What's up Renee?" I answered. "Uh...do...do...you...think...you could meet me at the statue of "Love" after school?" was her reply. "Sure, I guess so." For the rest of the day all I could think about was what was the reason Renee wanted to speak to me after school, and why did she insist on meeting me at the statue of "Love". That was a very special place, for me. It was the place I waited for Ai, before we went on our "date". As I was walking I kept wondering what Renee wanted to speak to me about. When suddenly I heard a familiar voice that didn't belong to Renee say "IT'S ALL RIGHT, Niigaki."
Ai Araba IT'S ALL RIGHT!
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you posted here!!! :onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer:
Gaki-san sure is funny in here.... :kekeke: :kekeke: :kekeke:
Confessing her love to Ai-chan in front of everyone.... :hehehe: :hehehe: :hehehe:
i can't wait to read more from you SunJian-san!! :on drink: :on drink: :on drink:
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Whoa! Reading these eight chapters in one sitting was hella worth it! :twothumbs
So is that the whole story? :O2
I think it's very sweet and interesting! :heart: :yep:
Gaki is Kame-ish in this story isn't she? :lol: And Ai-chan is such a cool character! :wub:
Hope you'll write more! :grin:
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Interesting story here, the story line was very fluid and how Gaki act is quite awesome :nervous
Maybe as a suggestion, you can post the chapters as separate posts, later on
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@abok - Thanks nice to see you here as well.
@kano-chan - Thanks, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story and this is not the whole story. The whole story is actually three individual stories that hopefully can stand on their own, but when put together make one long story. I left out Reina and Aika for that purpose. They are the main characters in "Kimagure Princess" the next fanfic.
@kurosawa87 - Thanks, I'm glad you found the story interesting. Sorry about the seperate post thing? I'm still a little new when it comes to posting. This was my first time ever writing a fanfic, so I still don't know how every thing goes. I'll make different post for the next one though.
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^ No worries, just a suggestion, if it works better for you, its your choice, I enjoy how it is so be proud of that :)
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Ah~ I see, I see.. :yep: I knew there were some "missing" girls... :thumbup That's even more interesting! :twothumbs
Can't wait to read more~ :cow:
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LoL nice story :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
like how gakisan confessed to aichan :w00t:
hope u write more :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Nice story definatly an intresting Idea, it was also like you did it in a song style rather than chapters!
looking forward to more of you work in the future!
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Update: Here's what I have so far on the second fanfic Kimagure Princess. You all will have to forgive any grammical errors becuase I didn't proof read. I'm just posting to give a little preview. I don't plan on posting anymore of the story until it's complete. Tell me what you think.
Chapter One
"Yankii Doodle Dandy"
"Ai araba it's all right." "I have to admit though, I was a bit shocked." "I'm sorry Ai, I just..." "Shhh...It's all right." she replied in a whisper, as she gently placed her index finger on my lips and inched closer to my face while a slight smile slowly began to appear on her. As her eyes closed, and our lips grew closer, an unbelievable sense of both excitement and anxiousness filled my entire being. Centimeter by centimeter our lips grew closer and closer. My tension was rising as a kiss with my dream girl seemed immanent, but then. "NOOOO!!!" "WHAT-A-BURGER!!! HEEL!...HEEL!...OH! LOOK OUT!!!" an unknown voice shouted. "Huh?...Wha...?" was my response. Again the voice shouted. "LOOK OUT!!!" Right as I began to turn all I saw and heard was a massive amount of fur and a dog barking as I hit the ground. "Aika!" I heard Ai say in a stern voice. "I'm sorry." was Aika's reply as her head lowered a little. "I don't know what came over her, she's usually a good dog." She began to say. "I think she may have saw Banana."
"Banana? What's Banana?" I asked. "Banana, is JunJun's cat." Was Takahashi's reply. "JunJun's cat?" I asked. Then suddenly I heard a familiar voice from behind the bushes say. "Dang girls, we've been discovered. So close yet so far away, huh, Niigaki." Renee stated with a giggle as her and the rest of the music club emerged from the bushes adjacent to the statue where they were hiding and observing what had just transpired. In being caught off guard by Renee and the rest of the music club, combined the hilarity that ensued when JunJun began chasing after Banana so she wouldn't cause anymore trouble. I didn't notice Aika leave. "Who was that girl? I asked. "Aika Mitsui a former member of the Tanaka Army ." Renee answered. " Tanaka Army?" I asked with a great look of confusion on my face. "Yes, the Tanaka Army." Ai continued. "The Tanaka Army were a group of girls that originally started out as a gang, but for some unknown reason, they transformed from just an ordinary gang into a club that came to represent the best interests of the students. Their leader was the famous "Tokyo Typhoon" herself Reina Tanaka."
Chapter Two
" Kira Kira Fuyu no Shiny Girl"
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:lol: the chapter was pretty good
well I guess I am willing to wait for the next chapter, take your time :)
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^ I'm glad you liked the preview. I would perfer posting the entire story in one go so that the reader wouldn't have to wait to find out what happens next if they like the story. However, I think I may have to do the seperate post thing because having some trouble when I was uploading the chapter.
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XD See Animals are difficult to work with, even in fics :lol: looking forward to more of the story, don't worry about posting then all together or on their own, either way is good!
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^I'm glad you liked the preview. Oddball and Kurosawa87, if you all don't mind me asking. Since I'm relatively new to fanfics, has there ever been a choose your own adventure type of fanfic. I was thinking of exploring the multiple posting, I think a choose you own adventure. How do you guys think that would sound? What I was thinking was maybe posting a paragraph or two with three options. Then have something like a poll for a week with the options. After the week post some more of the story with the option that had the most votes. I'm not sure if I have enough posts to do something like that or if something like that would be allowed though, but it does sound interesting.
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I think its up to you, and don't depend on the posts, just do what you want to do because a lot of people read the fics just don't reply so it'll be like that.
And to answer your question, I rarely think about that because I tend to lay my foundation down for the fics or one-shots, but be a pioneer, it would only help your writing and the people shall answer in
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Interesting story you have :) The way Gaki confessed to Ai really brought a smile to my face :D
Curious though...is the chapter 1 of 2nd fic a continuation of the 1st one? Or a new story on its own? Either way, I'll be following this thread :P
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@ SunJian
about your idea, I think it could work but you would need to probabably keep to some bounderies so you dont get too many different requests, perhaps you should try a smaller story first with a fixed main couple and simple choice options, so say and TakaGaki story and you can choose where you want to send them on a date for example (i.e theme park, movies) if this seems to work then maybe you can make a more complex one later?
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@kurosawa87- Thanks, I haven't really deicided my style of writing yet, but I was thinking what sort of fic could be made giving the reader choices. I also thought about maybe asking other fic writers if they were willing to have like a collaberation or something. Maybe like I write the first chapter, then another writer reads what I wrote then writes the next chapter going from what I wrote. I wonder how something like that would turn out.
@badsaints- Thanks, I'm glad Gaki's confession brought you a smile. Chapter 1 on the 2nd fic is sort of like a little way to get readers to read the first fanfic. Almost like a little recap, I'm planning on making the 2nd fic a story that is all its own. However, if you put all of the three together you have one long story from different points of view. What I was thinking of doing was something like the orinigal Karate Kid movies. When you watch part two at the very beginning, it starts with the end of part one then goes into part two. Last night I wrote a little of part chapter two. I don't want to give to much, but in that chapter Ai has decribed a little bit of who Reina is. I guess if you think about it in movie terms its sort of like how someone is decribing some thing like, "Then one day this character was walking down the street when..." instead of having the camera stay on the person telling the story. There's a flashback to the time being described and the action takes over from there. That's what I'm trying to go for. Ai's description is just about over then the story is going to go to the events that happened to Tanaka and the formation of the Tanaka Army.
@Oddball- Thanks, but I'm still not sure about going that route, but I am curious to see how a story would turn out if somebody ever chose to go that route
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^ It has happened before but you have to consider how others write and what not, but the best thing is to keep writing, it'll make you more well-known to all the people
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Still not finished, because I have been really busy with work, but thought I'd post a little more of the second fic.
Chapter Two
" Kira Kira Fuyu no Shiny Girl"
"Reina Tanaka...Tokyo Typhoon... What is all this ?" I asked hesitantly. "Yes." was Ai's reply. "Reina Tanaka she first came to school around two-thousand and three, she's currently on suspension though, for posting things on her blog that were deemed "inappropriate" by the schools administration.." Ai continued. "Rumor has that she is the only person in the entire school to remotely have any sort of contact with King." "King...party to end all parties King?" I interjected. "Yes, that King." was her reply as she continued. "It's was rumored that they were dating, but no one really knows for sure. However, if you really want to understand who she is you will have to go all the way back to the first day of school. Everything that happened to her is written on her blog. Let me do a quick search, it may be a little difficult access, since she is currently suspended, but, I think I can still find the entries. Ah here they are, under this titles."
"Where do I begin? I've grown so much over the last few years, it's may be a little difficult to believe that I'm actually the same Reina Tanaka, but I still am. I guess to fully understand, how I became the way I am, you have to go back to my very first day at the new school. I can still remember it well, everything began the on that day. "Ah, welcome back class. I hope you all had a splendid Summer vacation. This year is going to be THE YEAR! I can sense it. There are some new members that are going to join you all, so please give them all a warm welcome. Okay girls please introduce yourself to the music club." is what Professor Tsunku said as he introduced us to the class. "Hello, I'm Eri Kamei.", "Hello, I'm Sayumi Michishige...USACHAN PEACE!!!", "Yo, I'm Reina.", "What's up with that girl?" was heard as the girls spoke among themselves after I had introduced myself. "All right girls take a seat." "Yes, professor." we all said. The rest of the morning went by rather uneventfully, but when lunch time came around things started to get really interesting. It all started when Sayumi, Eri, and I were walking to their table. "Well, well, well, look who we have here!" someone shouted. "Hmmm?" "Keep walking and don't pay attention." Eri told Sayumi. "Hey!" again the voice shouted. "Leave them alone, can't you see their not interested." I told them. "What...what did you just tell me...do you know who I am!" the unknown person shouted in a commanding voice. I let out a sigh as I began talking. "Yeah... I've heard about you, but to be honest...I'm not that interested in who you are, and from their reactions, I don't think Eri and Sayumi are either." "Why you little!" is what I heard him shout, as his hand began to raise.
Chapter Three
" Journey to the I.S.S- In School Suspension and the guy called King"
As soon as I saw him raise his arm, the fight was on. I wasted no time in sending him to the ground. The fight, however, was over as quickly as it had begun. Unbeknownst to us, a security camera had been monitoring the courtyard, and, our situation. The moment a fight seemed immanent, the security guards were quickly dispatched. "It looks like we got ourselves another trouble maker." one of the guards remarked as I was being taken to the principals office. "What were you thinking, miss Tanaka?" is what the principal said as he scolded me. Then he continued. "I'm afraid I have no choice, but to put you in I.S.S. Violence, in either, physical, verbal, or in any other shape or form is not tolerated here at this school. I'm giving you in school suspension, for the remaining days of the week. You are to report to room 406 immediately. Good day, miss Tanaka."
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Poor Reina has to go to detention, oh well I guess she has to establish her reputation before doing anything else
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Here's some of the fic. I think I may end it at chapter 7, but still a little undecided. Anyway here you go.
Room 406 was at the end of the hallway of the south corner of the school. As the guards were "escorting" me to the classroom, all they spoke about was how unfortunate, I was to be going to room 406. From what I had heard upon enrolling in the school was that room 406, was specially reserved for the members of the student body, who were considered to be outcast. Only the worst of the worst were sent there. To be honest, with all the rumors surrounding this class, I was quite surprised to find only one student sitting, reading a book. "Greetings program." he said with a smirk on his face as he turned and faced my direction. "And welcome to room 406." he continued. "So it's you, huh? the new arrival who fought a member of the Zodiac, on her first day here." "How do you know that? Who are you?" I asked. His response to my questions made me wonder just who he was.
Here is what he told me. "Who am I...Who am I...Hmmm, let's just say that I'm just your average everyday student. I like partying, girls, more partying, and definitely more girls. What about you Reina?" "Never mind about me was my response. "Who are these Zodiac, what type of group are they, how do you know them?" I asked hoping to get a quick response. "The Zodiac? They're the schools number one gang. They've been around for years, but only have shown how powerful they are as a group recently. they call themselves the Zodiac, because the founder of the group had a fixation with the zodiac. If I were you I'd be extra careful. That boy you beat up is called Kay, he is the number two or sub-leader in the gang, while his sister is the leader. Since you embarrassed him in front of the entire student body, I have no doubt that she will come looking for you." My response to his warning, at the time may have been a little reckless, but none the less this is what I told him. "Thanks for the warning, Mr. just your average everyday student, but it's not really needed. I can take care of myself. If Kay was sub-leader and I beat him that easily, I don't expect much from his sister." "Fine, you may think that way but remember; just because the brother was easy to beat, doesn't necessarily mean that the sister is going to be a pushover." He said in an angered tone.
The rest of the day went by pretty smoothly. he stayed on his half of the room and I stayed on mine. As the final bell rang and school was being let out, two things could be heard being discussed by the students in the hallway. First, since it was the first day of school, there was going to be a party later in the night, held by King. Secondly, about how Kay was planning on getting me back. "Hey! Wait for me! I shouted at Eri and Sayu as the turned the corner and proceeded to walk down the street. "Reina! Thank goodness, we heard that the principal sent you to room 406." They both stated with an enormous sigh of relief as Eri continued. " We also heard that Kay is planning on getting you back tonight at King's party." I answered them with a smug look on my face. " Thanks for the head's up girls, I heard the same thing from a guy I met in I.S.S. He told me to be extra careful. Let's just have fun tonight, I don't think anything will happen."
Chapter Four
"Birth of the natural disaster"
As we arrived at the party, albeit slightly a little late due to Eri falling asleep and forgetting to tell us were the party was at. There was quite a crowd, and making your way through it was a real pain. Everything was going good until..."Well, well, well, if it isn't miss Reina Tanaka." I heard a voice say. "What the ..." was what I muttered as I began to turn around. "Oh, it's just you, everyday average student something or other guy." "Who did you think I was?" He said with a laugh, as he continued. "Kay, sorry to disappoint you, but, on the bright side; if your looking for him, just look right over there. He's been glaring at you the since you walked through the door. I would suggest that you be very careful for the rest of the party." Feeling a little uneasy after what King had told me, I began to look for Eri and Sayu so that we could make our way home. It was a little after twelve and a little difficult to find Eri, because, word at party was that Eri had managed to get herself a boyfriend. I didn't really know much about him accept that they called him E.M. or Evening something, because he wasn't a morning person; which seemed like a good fit for her, since she liked to sleep. After searching for what seemed like hours, we finally found her nestled in the arms of Evening, both of them sitting on the couch eating popcorn and watching a movie. "Sorry to break you love birds up, but it's a little past midnight and Cinderella has to go." I said with a little grin. "But...but..." was all Eri managed to say as we pulled her away from E.M. and started towards the exit.
"Why are we leaving so early?" asked Eri. "Because that idiot from detention keeps bothering me, and the party really isn't that great." Is how I responded. "That maybe what you think, but I think this was the best party of the year so far." Eri shouted with a smile appearing on her face as she playfully darted ahead of us. "Maybe for you." I said in a sarcastic tone. "But for me and Sayu it kind of sucked. "I know what you mean Reina." Sayu added, "When I do my Usa-chan Peace bit, I usually get about fifty guys who are asking me to go out on a date with them, but tonight it looks like all I managed to get was forty-nine guys asking me for a date. "Tonight was really depressing." I told them as I continued to talk. "Everyone in our group seemed to do good at the party except for me. All I encountered is that guy from detention, and he's an idiot." We had walked a few blocks towards home when someone from behind us shouted. "Well, well, well, if it isn't miss Reina Tanaka!" "Listen, buddy!" I said in an angrily tone as I began to turn around. "I'm not interested in you, and don't worry, I can take care of myself." "We're going to see about that Tanaka!" Is all I heard. I was caught off guard, because, as quickly as I had turned around; I had also as quickly fallen to the ground from a punch to the face. "DID YOU THINK I WOULD LET YOU GET AWAY...DID YOU... after you beat my brother earlier today at school!" "What the...who?" I somehow managed to blurt out still a little dazed, amid a barrage of kicks. "WHO...WHO...after everything that happened. You have the nerve to ask who I am! If you really want to know who I am, I'm Sophie! Kay's older sister! I don't know exactly how I did it, but towards the end of Sophie's rant I somehow managed to grab one of her legs and send her to the ground.
As Sophie began her descent to the ground, I was somehow able to regain my footing and manage to stand. "RUN!!!" I shouted at Eri and Sayu. "RUN!!!" We began to run for our lives, with Sophie and the rest of her gang right on our tails. "Don't worry about the other two, I just want Tanaka! We can deal with the other two later!" Sophie shouted. We ran for what seemed like an eternity, before came to a stop at a dead end street. "How fitting isn't it Tanaka... that you would run right into a dead end street. Get ready, because, I'm about to finish what I started!" Sophie gloated as she slowly began to walk towards us. My muscles began to burn with pain as I slowly raised my arms in a defensive position, preparing myself for the oncoming onslaught. Then suddenly a familiar voice shouted at the gang. "Don't you think that's enough!" I would explain more but my body was so exhausted; that as soon as whoever spoke began to walk towards us I passed out.
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The Sayu part was really funny aww one less male= depressing :lol:
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Here are the final chapters for Kimagure Princess. It may not be what you expect, however, I still hope you enjoy it.
Chapter Five
"Rise of the Tanaka Army"
"Your finally awake!!! It's been three days since the fight." Eri and Sayu both exclaimed as a smile began to appear of their faces. "What...where am I? I asked still a bit drowsy. "Your at the hospital, King brought you here. I don't know what would have happened to us, if he hadn't shown up when did." is what Eri told me. That's just great is what I thought to myself. First, I fought with Kay, then "that idiot" from detention kept pestering me about "watching my back and being careful", then the thing with Sophie, and now bringing me to the hospital. "You know, your quite a handful Tanaka. After all those warnings you still didn't pay attention, and we both ended up here!" King was screaming from the other side of the room. I was kept in the hospital a few more days before being released, just to make sure everything was O.K. Upon returning to school the reaction from the student body was sort of mixed.
"You may want to try and get them back, but I think you should try avoiding them at all cost, because if you try any sort of retaliation towards them, things are only going to get worse." King told me as we entered the building. "I'll keep that in mind this time, you don't have to worry, see ya." I told him with a little grin as I began to head to my home room class. Unbeknownst to King, since he was released earlier than I was; I was approached by a group of younger students who were being bullied by the Zodiac. It seems that they had banded together and wanted me to join them as the leader. I thought, this opportunity would give me a perfect chance to get back at Sophie and the rest of her gang, so I glady accepted becoming leader. We dubbed ourselves the Tanaka Army, and with that the battle for the school had begun.
Chapter Six
"Rival/Survival"
Almost as soon as we had formed, we began to make a name for ourselves by beating other gangs, all while sending a message to Sophie. When Sophie and the rest of her gang had received word about us they began to turn the school upside down. After a few months of fighting, with the Zodiac as well as some of the other gangs that had formed after ours had formed two groups began to clearly stand out above the rest. One was Sophie and the Zodiac and the other was us. The tension in the school was so thick it could have easily been cut with a knife. "What are you doing Tanaka? If you keep going down this path, things won't end well." "It's been a while since hasn't it King. I should have told you as when we came back, but I think that if I would have told you about the Tanaka Army, you would have tried to stop. Am I correct in that assumption?" "Can you blame me, just look at the result." is how he responded.
As much as I was "liking" King's lecture I was caught off guard when Aika ran towards us. "REINA!!!! REINA!!!!" Aika screamed. "Calm down Aika, what's going on." "It's Kanon... while she was shopping... with some of the other girls...she was bragging about how good her legs look...when she caught the attention of some of Sophie's gang and a fight broke out." Aika responded while still catching her breath "A FIGHT!!!! LET'S GO!!!" I screamed out. By the time we had made it to the park next to the mall, the fighting was in full swing with punches and kicks being thrown all over the place. Sophie had arrived at the same time that we arrived, and wasted no time in signaling me out. Even though I had become a better fighter, I was still quite surprised to learn that I was still not much of a match for her. "Look out Tanaka!!!" I heard someone yell. As I spun to avoid getting punched I managed to see that the person who called out to me was none other the King. When it seemed as though the fight started to go in our favor, sirens could be heard in the distance, so we all scattered.
Chapter Seven
"Secret Base"
The next day at school, Sophie wasted no time in causing trouble at lunch. "TANAKA!!! THERE YOU ARE!!! now we are going to finish this. PREPARE YOURSELF!!!" To my relief, once again the fight was quickly broken up, however, in order to ensure that nothing else happened extra security guards were placed both inside and outside of detention. "After school we're going to finish this Tanaka." Sophie whispered as we sat waiting for the school day to end. When the final bell rung, each of us were let out separately, first Sophie, then me. As I was walking towards the door all the students began to gather outside in anticipation of the fight.
"It took you long enough TANAKA!" Sophie said as she started raising her fist. "Alright Sophie, let's dance." Everything was set and the final showdown was about to begin when suddenly. "Whoa, whoa, whoa. Hold up you two." It was King who interrupted us. "What do you want King! Tanaka wants this as much as I do. DON'T INTERFERE! We let you off easy the last few times, but, if you interfere this time...WE'RE NOT GOING TO HOLD BACK, YOU TRAITOR!" "Relax, Sophie." he said in a cool and calm voice. "I'm not going to interfere if it's something that you both want, however, if I may offer a suggestion; why not "postpone" the fight to the last day of school? Don't you think it would be more convenient for the both of you? If you fight now, there is a great chance that both of you are going to get suspended...so why not wait until the last day. That way once the final bell rings, the school won't be able to do anything about it." After much consideration Sophie agreed to wait until the last day for our showdown. "I guess today was your lucky day Tanaka, but get ready cause on the last day I'm going to bring a whole lot pain your way."
"Yeah, yeah, yeah, O.K you have a nice day too. Come on Tanaka I'll walk you home...just to make sure they don't try anything." King told me as he grabbed my hand. "Dang, I didn't think that was actually going to work considering how Sophie is. Maybe, I should try gambling a little more often, huh, Tanaka. What do you think." "Why did you do that?" I asked. "What's your connection to them?" "Connection? Don't you think that it's a little late to be asking such questions considering how things have turned out. However, since I can tell your still a little confused as to my connection to them, I'll tell you. Sophie is my ex-girlfriend and the reason she called me a traitor was because I used to leader of the Zodiac. To make matters worse I'm the one who taught her martial arts. That's why I interfered. I didn't interfere today, I don't think you would have made it very far in the fight.
I'm going to train you to be the best. There's still about five or six months before the end of school. It's not a long time to get you to her level, however, with proper execution of the moves combined with a little luck you should do alright." "Only alright?" I asked hesitantly. "Yeah, but since I'm the one that taught her, I know how she fights better then anyone else. I think you'll be able to do it. So how does meeting me after school everyday at the statue of "Love" sound. If we work everyday, by the time the last day of school comes, you should be somewhat ready. The next after school, I made my way to the statue of "Love" not really sure about what to expect. Upon arriving I was a little surprised to find King leaning against the statue while staring up at the sky as if he was lost in thought. "So you finally made, eh, Tanaka. Follow me, I hope you like running, because, where we're going is about a mile and a half away from here; and, we are going to run there everyday."
We were almost at the mile and a half mark, running towards some woods, when King suddenly shouted back at me. "Almost there! Just through these trees and we'll be there. As soon as we cleared the trees, we came upon a small clubhouse like building that looked sort of familiar. "This building looks familiar." I told King. " It should be." was his remark. "We're back to the school. In fact, if I remember correctly. This is the clubhouse that used to belong to the now defunct student council. If you look over there, you see the courtyard. No one uses this building anymore and it's the perfect place to train. So what do you think, do you like my little secret base?" "You mean you had me run around the school like an idiot!" I told him as me temper began to flare up. "Yeah, I thought it would be kind of fun to go on a run, but, more importantly; I did it to test you a little." After I got over my anger for running around the school, we began the training.
Chapter Eight
"Dead Man Walking"
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The days spent training with King seemed to go by pretty fast. We began to spend a lot more time together. Time other then just the time we used for training; we spent so much time together that the other students began to suspect that we were dating. In those days, it seems as though we somehow happen to become very close, or maybe somewhat more then a "just friends" type of relationship. As we were growing closer to each other, time appeared to stop for us, and the last day of school and all the events that accompanied it seemed very distant. However, we may have just been fooling ourselves, because, in the blink of eye the last day of school had arrived. Most of the day went by without a hitch, and the school was a buzz for two reasons. First, was my fight with Sophie, of course. Second was the end of the year party King was holding. Everything was set, or so it was rumored. At the party is where Sophie supposedly designated as the location of the fight.
Looking back though, it was true though, because instead of the party being held in a house as usual, it was held somewhere within the walls of the school. When the party started to close to finishing. Sophie finally made her way towards me. "Well, well, well, if it isn't miss Tanaka. You ready to get what's coming to ya?" "Don't worry about me, just worry about what I'm going to do to you." is how I responded to her." "Be careful, Tanaka, since I wasn't able to stop you from reaching this point, if you use what we practiced. I'm think that you can win." King told me with as a forced smile came across his face. "Why are you worried? Your not getting all sentimental on me now, are you, by saying things like "I think you can win"? I know I can beat her. I may not have been able to before, but now I most definitely know that I can." After that some what awkward moment with King he grabbed my shoulder, in what I guess was a silent pat of approval as I turned and faced my opponent. Within minutes the fight was on. I had indeed improved thanks to the training with King, but Sophie was still a lot to handle. It was back and forth between us. Sometimes I would appear to have the upper hand, and sometimes it would be Sophie. However, about half-way through the fight Sophie began to lose steam. I'm not sure how or why, but I think those mile and a half runs around the school before we trained had helped me last longer then her. "Alright Sophie, NOW it ends!"
I was about to land the finishing blow and put an end to this when suddenly, "TANAKA!!!! NOW YOUR MINE!!!" is what someone behind me yelled. "GET OUT OF THE WAY YOU IDIOT!!!" is what I heard King say when he pushed me to the ground as Kay plunged the dagger meant for me into him. "NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!" is what I let out in an ear shattering scream as the tears started to roll down my face, and the students began to run. "Why...why...?". "Take...it...easy...Reina." King slowly said as he began to cough. "Take...it...easy...I...knew...something...like...this...was..." "Don't talk, try to conserve your strength." I told him, while resting his head in my lap. "Was...going...to...happen...eventually...that's...why..." "You idiot, why are you talking!" I scolded him, while my tears were flowing like two raging rivers that started at my eyes and traveled down my face. "...My...Kimagure...Princess..." was the last thing King said as the light in his eyes faded. The ambulance arrived a short time later, but by then it was already too late.
Chapter Nine
"A New Generation"
"That story is a little sad." I told Ai and the others as when we finished reading Tanaka's blog entries. "How is Reina still suspended if those events she posted happened a few years ago, though?" I asked Ai and the others still a little confused. "Those events did get me suspended, but the most recent suspension was for something totally different." I heard an unknown female voice say as she approached us. "REINA! Your suspension is finally over?" is what the entire music club shouted when we turned around. "Reina?" I repeated still confused. "That's right, I'm Reina, and you must be Risa Niigaki" she told me with a smile. "I've heard a lot about you miss Niigaki, pleasure to meet you." "I'm sorry." I quickly blurted out. "Don't worry about it Niigaki." was Reina's reply to me as she continued. "So are you guys ready for this new year? My fellow student council representatives are all a buzz with a new batch of freshmen enrolling. Maybe we can get some new members for the music club? Yup... I definitely think that with new additions to the music club...this year will be very interesting."
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Wow King took the dagger and saved Reina but she still got suspended and in the end she moved on from her past... supposedly :nervous
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There was some more of the story, but I left it out because I thought it was getting too long. What I was originally going to write was that Reina was suspended after those events, because Kay and Sophie were related to the principal, who would have conveniently swept all the events under the rug. Then the Tanaka Army would change in order to expose the principal, in another event, which would lead to the suspension that's described at the beginning of the story; but it seemed like it would be too loing and would go too far off, so I left that out. What did you think of the story though?
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I really love it, it was an interesting story, especially how Reina progresses through the story, I hope you keep writing and get yourself into another good story
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I'm glad you liked it. I do plan on writing more, but it's just going to take may a little time to write them. I'm going to finsih off the Ai araba its all right series with the last story being titled Sotsugyō to kind of wrap up everything. That leads me to another question, do you think I was able to achieve one of my goals of having two stories that could be read together as a series or seperately as an individual story. I did have an idea about a story involving Erina Mano called the hand of fate, one with JunJun being an assassin, or maybe one of JunJun and LinLin in a story sort of like one of those Hong Kong buddy cop movies.
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It has worked on me, and if you are going to make a new story make a new thread to prevent confusion
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For the Sotsugyō story I was planning on adding it to this thread since it's part of the series and making new threads for other stories, but I think opening new threads sounds like a good idea.
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For the Sotsugyō story I was planning on adding it to this thread since it's part of the series and making new threads for other stories, but I think opening new threads sounds like a good idea.
Okay I'll be waiting for your additions :)