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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: silllythings on April 09, 2011, 11:56:48 PM
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Decided to upload my short stories here. My pairings tend to be rather random, hope you don't mind.
Will keep first post as an index!
1. Unagi's Love Story (BlackUnagi) http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29062.msg878843#msg878843 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29062.msg878843#msg878843)
2. I Promise (AtsuYuu)
Part 1: http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29062.msg878898#msg878898 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29062.msg878898#msg878898)
Part 2: http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29062.msg879176#msg879176 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29062.msg879176#msg879176)
3. Return to Say I Love You (Mayuki) http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29062.msg910541#msg910541 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29062.msg910541#msg910541)
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This was the first short story I wrote. I wrote this last year after watching Majisuka for the umth time and then Yokohama concert for the umth time.
Majisuka Story, Featuring the following Pair...
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Unagi's Love Story
Sitting on the beach under the beautiful night sky, listening to the sound of the fire crackling in the background, Unagi is definitely enjoying life right now. She is afterall sitting only mere inches away from her. Someone she never could have imagined talking to let alone date. It has been a while since those early encounters. The memories of them certainly bring a bright smile to Unagi’s face.
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A while ago…
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Unagi was running with two paper bags filled with hormones. It was her turn to buy the food, and she was running late. Carefully trying to balance the two bags while running was proving to be very difficult, every couple meters a package would drop. She would have to stop, pick it up and try again. She finally got a good rhythm going as she runs up the driveway leading up to the gates of the school. She was so concentrated in keeping everything in the balance that she failed to notice the big crack in the pavement ahead.
SPAT
“OUCH!”
Unagi fell faced down onto the pavement and all the packages of hormones littered everywhere.
“ugh….”
While laid down, she lifted her head and quickly glanced around. No one was around.
Oh good, at least no one saw that thought Unagi
She got up, and crouched down to pick up the lone hormone package to the right of her. She then swayed to the left…
“EH?????”
All the packages have disappeared from the driveway.
Unagi swung left and right, thinking she must be seeing things, but to no avail, there was nothing on the ground.
What happened to all the food?
Unagi then felt a presence behind her and turned around to take a look. She glupped and slowly lifted her head upwards.
“BLACK-SAN!!!!”
Unagi stood up immediately. She was now standing face to face with Black. This was the closest she has ever gotten to a Queen member.
Black shoved the two bags filled with the fallen hormone packages into Unagi’s arms.
Black said in her usual low voice, “You’re always so clumsy Unagi.”
Unagi didn’t know how to react and stood frozen. In a second, Black had disappeared from in front of her. By the time she turned around, she could see that Black was already halfway through the school yard heading towards the school.
Unagi thought for a moment. Did Black-san just say I’m always so clumsy? Always?
She snapped out of her thought and said “oh shit, the Team Hormone members are so going to kill me, I’m so late”. She resumed her stride towards the school.
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In the Classroom
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The Team Hormone members had stopped giving Unagi grief over being late with the food as they started chowing down the food.
Wota: Umai!
Bangee: Ummmmai!
Akicha: honto ni Umai!
Mukuchi:……
Unagi was too deep in her thoughts thinking about her previous encounter with Black to process the tastiness of the food that was inside her mouth right now.
A random student yelled, “The Queens are coming!!”
All the students in the classroom ran towards the hallway windows, Team Hormone likewise ran towards the doorway.
They glanced down the hallway to see Shibuya, Torigoya and Black walking with authority.
Akicha said, “Their aura is just amazing!”
Unagi looked to see that Shibuya was pushing random students down onto the floor, Torigoya was giving the stare downs to other random students as she strolled past them and then there was Black. Black was walking with her arms crossed with her back perfectly straight. Her face was emotionless.
As the Queens were approaching, Team Hormone members bowed down and said immediately “Thanks for your hard work.”
Unagi looked up to see that Black had moved from her usual centre position and was walking right by the Team Hormone members. Unagi, who was standing right at the doorway realized Black was looking straight at her, normally Unagi would immediately look the other way but for some reason, she didn’t. Their eyes connected. For a second, it almost seemed like Black was about to say something to her but that rain of thought was broken by Shibuya who was karate kicking a student that was too slow getting out of the way of the oncoming Queens.
Black kept on walking along with Shibuya and Torigoya and Unagi was left to wonder. The other Hormone members returned to their usual spot around the grill but Unagi remained by the door staring at the now empty hallway.
Wota yelled, “ Oi, Unagi, what’s wrong with you today? You’re so spacey.”
Unagi snapped out of it, “Oh, nothing. I didn’t sleep well last night.”
Unagi decided it was just some random occurrence with Black and she was just imagining things. She went about tightening her Yanki jacket around her waist when she noticed there was a piece of paper slipped inside.
EH? Unagi thought. She made an excuse of needing to go to the washroom to the other Hormone members and dashed out of the classroom.
When Unagi was clear from anyone, she opened the note.
[Would you be interested in seeing the night sky with me?] Black
Unagi pinched herself. “OWWWW, so I’m not dreaming this.” She smiled.
She wandered around the hallways wondering how the heck she could let Black know she was interested. She found herself outside, staring at the outdoor stairway that leads up to the top floor of the school which of course contains another set of stairs which would eventually lead to the headquarters of the Rappapa.
This is crazy, what am I doing? Unagi thought.
At that moment, the metal door at the top of the stairway swung open. It was BLACK.
Black noticed Unagi at the bottom of the stairway and cracked a smile. Before Black or Unagi could say anything, a voice came from behind Black.
“Where are you going?”
Unagi panicked and ran as fast as she could back to the corridor of her classroom.
I must be crazy! What was I thinking? Unagi wondered.
“Black, where are you going?” questioned Torigoya as she appeared in the doorway.
Seeing that Unagi ran away, Black was disappointed.
“Ah Damn it, Torigoya”
“What did I do? Why are you yelling at me?” Torigoya pouted.
“Argggg!” Black stormed down the stairs.
“Wait, wait for me”
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Team Hormone spent the time after school by the steps off the bridge like usual. It was dark by the time they decided to head home.
As they walked through a dimmed alley way, a mysterious voice appeared…
“When the sun crosses path with the moon, petals will scatter and void the peak. Blindness will emerge victorious… tomorrow..”
The Team Hormone members froze.
“Buu…buu, Black-san!” Wota stuttered.
“Ehh???” Bangee and Akicha said in unison.
Wota quickly yelled out “Black-san, thanks for your hard work, if we did anything to disrespect you in any way, we’re really really sorry and didn’t meant it” and bow down.
“We’re really sorry” Akicha, Bangee, Unagi followed with a bow.
Unagi subconsciously just followed the leader, but having the highest IQ out of the Team Hormone members, she was trying to figure out Black’s message.
Wota whispered to Mukuchi, “Now is a good time to say something.”
Mukuchi opened her mouth but nothing came out.
Wota yelled, “Mukuchi is sorry too”
While waiting in the darkness, Black smirked.
Petals will scatter? At the peak? Blindness will emerge victorious? Ah Ha! I got it. Tomorrow at Sundown, on Blossom Hill, by the monument in memory of a blind soldier who helped his squad win a battle.
The Team Hormone members started to run away, Unagi turned to look back.
Black emerged from the darkness and looked at Unagi.
Unagi smiled at Black and gave her an OK signal. Black nodded.
“Unagi, what are you doing?”
Unagi turned her head towards the members and yelled “Coming!”
She looked back and was slightly disappointed to see that Black was no longer there.
Ah well, at least I’ll see her tomorrow.
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As Unagi was walking towards the monument, she was feeling nervous, over the top nervous but also slightly excited.
“Hungry?”
“Ah!” Unagi yelped.
Unagi turned to the side and saw Black, who was hiding in the shadow of the trees.
“I don’t think I’ll ever get used to you popping out of no where like this.” She said nervously.
Black smiled. “I thought you might be interested in eating Takayoki.” She showed Unagi the bag she was holding.
Unagi smiled and said, “Absolutely.”
They sat on a nearby bench and enjoyed the takoyaki.
As darkness falls, the view of the town below surprised Unagi.
“Wow, the view is beautiful. I never knew about this outlook point.”
“I come here all the time.” Black replied.
Unagi nodded. “I can see why. I can just sit here and watch all night.”
Black looked up at the sky, and said to Unagi , “I should have checked the weather forecast before asking you out tonight, I don’t think we’ll be able to see any stars with this cloud coverage.”
Unagi happily said, “It’s ok, I guess we’ll have to save that for another time!”
Black gave Unagi a look.
Unagi thought Uh oh, did I say something stupid, why is she looking at me like that? But she also looks kinda happy? Oh what should I do? Um, quick, change the subject.
Unagi then went on and on about food. She of course did most of the talking for the rest of the evening. Time definitely seemed to go by faster when you are having fun. Unagi looked at her watch and said, “Crap! It’s so late, I have to go home.”
“I’ll walk you.”
Unagi nodded.
They reached the underground tunnel and Unagi stopped. She has always hated walking through this tunnel but it was also the most direct path home. Usually, there were at least a few lights that worked, and so she’ll just run through it as quickly as possible but it appeared those lights have broken down as well. The tunnel was now pitched black.
Black kept on walking and was at the entrance of the tunnel when she realized Unagi was no longer by her side. She turned around and noticed the fear on Unagi’s face.
Black walked towards Unagi and grabbed her hand.
Unagi was completely shocked but she felt the warmth of Black’s hand and walked forward with her. Although she couldn’t see a thing in the tunnel, she wished that the tunnel could go on forever.
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Back on the Beach
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As Unagi and Black were sitting by the fire, they are actually not alone on the beach. At some distance away, Wota, Bangee, Akicha and Mukuchi were all trying to get a better view of the two.
Wota said in disbelief, “ I can’t believe what I’m seeing.”
Bangee who couldn’t contain her excitement said loudly, “ Unagi is seeing Bu(muffle).”
Wota and Akicha quickly jumped to cover Bangee’s mouth.
While the two struggled to contain Bangee, Wota questioned Bangee, “Are you trying to get us caught?”
Suddenly, in a stern voice, Mukuchi said “Two people are trying to enjoy the presence of each other, just shut up and leave them alone.”
The three Hormone members stood wide eye looking at Mukuchi.
They nod and replied in unison, “ Hai!”
Mukuchi then flashed her usual cute smile and turned around. The other members followed.
During that same moment, Unagi was chatting away when Black suddenly turned around to the area where the other Hormone members had been hiding previously.
Unagi questioned, “Black-san, is something wrong?
Black turned her head again towards Unagi and just shook her head. Black then stared at the fire.
Without looking at Unagi, Black said, “My name is Yuki.”
That statement caught Unagi by tWotal surprise. Though they had been dating for awhile now, she had still been calling her Black-san, I mean, she’s a Rappapa Queen after all. Any disrespect would mean death, and in Black’s case, literally, death.
Unagi said surprisingly, “ uhhh…Yuki?”
Black replied “No one has called me that since my parents passed away.”
Unagi sensed the sad undertone in Black’s voice. However, she’s been with Black long enough to know that unless Black tells her, she won’t get much out of her. As much as Unagi wanted to know more about Black’s past, Unagi decided to leave the issue alone.
Unagi leaned closer towards Black and kissed Black on her cheek.
The kiss caught Black off guard.
“Well, I’ll call you Yuki from now on.”
Unagi then snuggled right up to Black.
Black smiled, she’s been doing a lot more of that lately. She wrapped her arm around Unagi and pulled Unagi even closer to her.
The End.
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Wrote this Christmas fic last year, pairing is AtsuYuu
“I Promise” - Part 1
2am in the morning. Yuko’s cellphone rang.
Half asleep, she answered “Moshi, Moshi”
“Sorry to wake you up Oshima-san, it’s Ken from Odaigi Bar calling. We are preparing for closing and your friend is still here and won’t leave.”
“I’ll be right there, sorry for the trouble.”
Yuko jumped out of bed, changed her clothes and quickly left her apartment.
Yuko entered the bar and quickly waved to the bartender. She walked over to Atsuko who is slouched over on the couch.
She pulled Atsuko up. “Hey there, let’s go home.”
“I don’t want to go home yet.”
“You don’t, but there are people here who do.”
Atsuko opened her eyes to glance at Yuko for a second. She mumbled something incoherently.
With Atsuko’s arm around Yuko’s shoulder, Yuko forced Atsuko up. Atsuko was too drunk to stand up properly and all the weight fell onto Yuko. Yuko guided Atsuko towards the exit.
“Sorry for the trouble, just put her drinks on my tab.” Yuko said to the bartender as she left the bar.
The bartender smiled and waved back.
They finally made it to Atsuko’s apartment. Yuko managed to open the door while still holding onto Atsuko.
She walked inside to find Atsuko’s apartment in a mess again. It was just last week when Yuko cleaned it up.
Yuko sighed.
She plopped Atsuko onto her bed. Yuko managed to change Atsuko into her pyjamas and left her to sleep.
Yuko looked around the apartment, stuff was everywhere, takeout containers were littered on the floor. She shook her head and started to pick the stuff off the floor.
Yuko grabbed a picture frame that was face down on the floor. She looked at the picture of the happy couple with sadness.
“Minami, it’s been 6 months since you left. Atsuko needs you. I don’t know what to do to help her.” Yuko whispered as tears started to roll down her cheeks.
Yuko wiped her tears and placed the picture frame back onto the bookshelf. She continued to clean up the apartment until early morning.
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Sitting at her office desk, Yuko yawned.
“Late night again?” Haruna asked as she placed a cup of Starbucks onto Yuko’s desk.
“Oh Haruna, you’re a life saver. Thanks!” said Yuko as she took a sip.
“I thought she was getting better?”
“Tomorrow is Christmas. No surprise Atsuko has fallen off again.” replied Yuko.
“I don’t know what else I can do for her Haruna.”
Haruna sighed and placed her hand on Yuko’s shoulder.
“I don’t know either but you can’t just drop everything for her, you have a life too Yuko. Are you coming to the Christmas party tomorrow? ” Haruna asked hoping that the answer is yes.
“Probably not. I want to see if Atsuko feels like hanging out together.”
Haruna pouted and walked back to her desk disappointed.
Yuko looked at the picture that was on her desk. It was from last year’s office Christmas party. She looked at Atsuko. She was smiling so beautifully thought Yuko.
(Flashback – High School Days)
“Merry Christmas Yuko!”
“Merry Christmas Atsuko!”
“Let’s always spend Christmas together!” Atsuko said to Yuko as she hugged her.
“Promise?” Yuko asked Atsuko while in her embrace.
“I promise!”
(End Flashback)
Looking at the happy Atsuko in the picture, Yuko wondered if Atsuko would keep her promise this year. Even though the last two years, her Christmas was spent with Atsuko and Minami, at least she was still together with Atsuko.
Yuko had been calling Atsuko all day, just to make sure she’s ok. The phone kept ringing but no answer. Dejectedly, Yuko sent Atsuko messages instead.
Astuko, still in her bed, knew her phone had been buzzing nonstop for the last few hours, but she had neither the energy nor the urge to get up. Her head was also pounding like crazy.
She rolled around to look at the clock on the night table. She noticed there was a glass of water with two aspirins sitting on the table.
“Yuko…”
Atsuko took the pills and got up to grab her phone.
She flipped open her phone.
[10 missed calls]
[10 news messages]
They were all from one person only. Yuko.
Atsuko started reading the messages.
1st Message: 10:04am Call me when you get this.
2nd message: 11:11am Obviously you can can’t call me If you’re still sleeping.
3rd Message: 12:28pm Lalalala. You’re still sleeping?
4th Message: 2:22pm This is not funny woman. How much sleep do you need?
5th Message: 3:01pm 3pm already. Still sleeping or are you just ignoring me?
6th Message: 3:35pm I’ve decided that you are simply ignoring me.
7th Message: 4:18pm It’s not good to ignore your best friend! (>o_o<)
8th Message: 4:45pm Haruna says hi and why she didn’t message you herself I don’t know why.
9th Message: 5:30pm Leaving work soon and you still haven’t called me.
10th Message: 6:00pm I’m coming over now! Good thing I have your key. Ha!
Atsuko smiled. She can always count on Yuko in making her smile. In some ways, she wished Yuko would stop being so nice to her, especially in the last few months. Yet, Yuko just kept doing what she does best, being there for her no matter where or when. That hasn’t changed since their first encounter in kindergarten…
(Flashback)
Atsuko has always been bullied by that Yuka girl in the class. She was always mean to Atsuko and made her cry all the time. One time, when Yuka was bullying her again, Yuko appeared in front of her suddenly and pushed that girl down onto the floor and said “Leave Atsuko alone, I won’t let you hurt her again.”
(End Flashback)
Atsuko laughed to herself thinking about that incident, she has never forgotten what Yuko said that time. Yuko’s mom like to remind Yuko of that story too and what Yuko said during the parent-teacher meeting.
“I won’t let anyone hurt Atsuko!” Yuko said when the teacher asked why she pushed Yuka down.
Atsuko has heard the story many times too, but she never gets tired of hearing it. Atsuko chuckled at the thought of 5 year old Yuko telling the teacher that. They’ve been best friends since that day.
Her thoughts of happiness soon turned to sadness as she saw the picture of her and Minami during her birthday in the summer.
“Minami…” Atsuko began to cry again.
“I miss you so much.”
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I actually really loved the atsuyuu pairing. Please update it soon! (:
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@Arakawa - I like the pairing too! but I'm still a KojiYuu fan :wub:
“I Promise” Part 2
The apartment door flung open to break Atsuko’s thought.
“Honey, I’m home!”
Yuko entered with her usual bright smile.
“Silly, you don’t live here.” Atsuko replied with a weak smile.
“What?! I practically live here!” Yuko dropped her bag by the front door and sat down next to Atsuko.
“I bought dinner. Your favourite curry!” Yuko said while showing Atsuko the food.
Yuko can tell Atsuko had been crying again but decided to ignore that fact and kept the mood light.
“How’s your head?” asked Yuko
“Fine.”
“Well, let’s eat, I’m sure you’re hungry.” Yuko said while getting up to grab some plates from the kitchen.
Yuko sat down on the floor and they started to eat the curry.
“So, what should we do tomorrow?” Yuko asked breaking the silence
“Yuko…”
“Ya?”
“I want to be alone.”
“It’s Christmas, we should at least hang out.”
“No, I just want to be alone.”
“Atsuko, I…”
“YUKO, Just leave me alone! Please, I just want to be alone.” Atsuko screamed at Yuko.
Shocked by what Atsuko did, Yuko didn’t reply. She stood up, grabbed her bag and opened the front door.
With tears in her eyes, she said to Atsuko, “I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to make you mad, I just want you to be happy, that’s all.” Yuko shut the door and left.
Atsuko immediately started to sob.
“Oh what have I done?”
“Minami, first you leave me and now I force Yuko to go away. What am I doing?”
“What am I doing?”
Atsuko just laid on the floor by the couch.
Time was ticking way and Atsuko remained on the floor.
Her phone suddenly buzzed.
She opened her phone.
It was a message from Yuko.
‘Merry Christmas Atsuko!’
‘It must be midnight’
Seeing the message from Yuko made Atsuko cry again.
All of sudden, there was a large white glow in the room. It was so bright that Atsuko had to shut her eyes.
When she opened her eyes, there was someone familiar standing on top of her and staring back at her.
“MINAMI????”
“Yo!” Minami waved.
“I must be dreaming!” Atsuko said as she pinched herself.
“OW! That hurts!”
“But that’s impossible, Minami, you’re dead,” exclaimed Atsuko.
Minami chuckled and said, “Yes, but before I explain, can you at least get off the floor.”
Atsuko immediately complied and sat on the couch. She didn’t take her eyes off Minami.
Minami sat down next to Atsuko.
“I’m here as a spirit because the local kami-sama had enough of Yuko praying every day for me to return so you can be happy again. So, kami-sama found me and sent me here to see you so Yuko would stop bugging him.”
“Yuko? Kami-sama?” questioned Atsuko with a very confused look.
“Yuko has been going to that shrine up the street every single day for the past 5 months now, wishing for your happiness” explained Minami.
“Yuko…” Atsuko tailed off from her sentence and gave Minami a big hug.
“Minami, I missed you soooo much!” cried Atsuko.
“I know, I know Atsuko, but it’s time to move on.”
“I…”
Minami let go of Atsuko and stopped her from saying anything further, “I don’t have a lot of time here, so I’m just going to say what I have to say.”
Minami looked at Atsuko and said, “Atsuko, deep in your heart, you have always loved Yuko, you love her a lot more than you have ever loved me.”
“Minami…” Atsuko wanted to say something but Minami wouldn’t let her.
“No, let me finish first. If I hadn’t shown up, maybe you would have realized that you love Yuko as much as Yuko loves you.”
“What are you so afraid of Atsuko?” Minami asked. “Yuko isn’t going to wait forever. Haruna is all over her. One day Yuko is just going to give into Haruna. And then what, Atsuko? You’ll regret not telling Yuko your true feelings.”
“I know you love me, the last two years were the happiest times of my life, but I’m not here anymore. You have to continue to live Atsuko.” Minami said and hugged Atsuko again.
Atsuko started to cry in Minami’s embrace.
“Tell Yuko how you feel. You’ll feel better about yourself. And I know you’ll make Yuko very happy too Atsuko.”
“Minami, I never thought I could see you again.”
“Me neither, you’ll have to thank Yuko for being so persistent to annoy the local kami-sama,” laughed Minami.
“I have to go now, Atsuko.”
“No wait, Minami, please don’t go.”
“Atsuko, don’t be afraid, take that step.”
There was a bright glow in the room again, but this time, Atsuko didn’t close her eyes. She kept her eyes on Minami as the bright white light started to surround Minami.
“Ohhh, one last thing, Merry Christmas Atsuko!” Minami said before her and the white light disappeared.
“Minami…”
Atsuko stared with disbelief.
‘Maybe it was really a dream?’
Atsuko remained on the couch wondering about what just happened and what Minami said.
“What am I going to do?”
Atsuko spent the night thinking.
It was already 7am when she finally had enough courage to reply back to Yuko.
She messaged Yuko – [Yuko, meet me at the playground of our kindergarten school. I will wait for you until you show up.]
Atsuko grabbed her jacket and left for the playground.
The air was crisp but it was a beautiful Christmas morning. Atsuko arrived at the playground and sat on the swing set. It felt a lot smaller. She swung back and forth a bit and continued to look at her watch continuously. She was worried Yuko might not show up considering how mean she was last night. Soon though, Atsuko noticed someone running very fast towards the playground.
“Oi, Atsuko”
Atsuko got off the swing set as Yuko approached the playground.
“Atsuko, are you ok? Is everything alright?” questioned Yuko while panting really hard.
“I should ask you that Yuko, how fast did you get here?”
“Ha, I think I broke my own record “ smiled Yuko.
Atsuko laughed.
“Yuko, the weirdest thing happened last night, and I’ll tell you about it later as I have something really important to say right now.”
Yuko had a concerned look on her face but decided to let Atsuko continue.
“I’ve been afraid all my life, not wanting to return your love because I was scared I would end up losing you if it doesn’t work out. I was selfish. Yuko, you have been my hero since the day I met you on this playground. I didn’t even know you were in my class yet you came to my rescue. You haven’t stopped protecting me since that day. I don’t know what I did to deserve your love, but Minami is right, I have to take that step. I won’t let Haruna take you away from me. You’re too important to me.”
“Ha? Minami? What…” Yuko couldn’t finish her sentence because Atsuko’s lips were firmly planted on hers.
Atsuko was waiting for a reaction from Yuko from the kiss but there was nothing. Atsuko was about to panic and pull away when Yuko finally wrapped her arms around Atsuko’s waist. Yuko deepen the kiss before pulling her head back to look at Atsuko while still embracing her.
Atsuko had the brightest smile on her face.
“See, that’s the Atsuko I fell in love with on this playground. You’re just so cute with that smile.”
“Yuko, you were 5 years old.”
“I know. I’m a genius!” chuckled Yuko.
“Merry Christmas Atsuko!”
“Merry Christmas Yuko!”
“Let’s always spend Christmas together!” Yuko said to Atsuko and kissed her again.
Taking a quick break from their kiss, Atsuko asked Yuko, “Promise?”
“I promise!”
The End
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Omgg that was good haha :)
The part with minami made me laugh. You should keep writing c:
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nice fanfic... :twothumbs
it's my first time reading a atsuyuu fanfic ... :hehehe: but is good... :on GJ:
i laugh too when i read this part... :wahaha:
“MINAMI????”
“Yo!” Minami waved.
“I must be dreaming!” Atsuko said as she pinched herself.
“OW! That hurts!”
“But that’s impossible, Minami, you’re dead,” exclaimed Atsuko.
Minami chuckled and said, “Yes, but before I explain, can you at least get off the floor.”
hope you write more atsuyuu fanfic...
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nice fanfic... :twothumbs
hope you write more atsuyuu fanfic...
Thanks! AtsuYuu pairing isn't that popular but if an idea pops up, I might consider writing it!
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Thanks!
welcome!! :welcome
AtsuYuu pairing is that popular but if an idea pops up, I might consider writing it!
ahhh... :bingo: but it is really my first time reading atsuyuu fanfic... :depressed:
hope you can make soon.. :onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer:
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I meant to say the pairing is not popular~ :cry:
But I really really like the way I Promise came out.
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I meant to say the pairing is not popular~ :cry:
But I really really like the way I Promise came out.
i'm really really sorry :kneelbow: i misunderstand it... :fainted: please forgive me...:on cloudeye:
me too... :on GJ: i really like you're I Promise... :luvluv1:
:prayers: hope you write more fanfics... :shy2:
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Wow! The UnagixBlack pairing is surprisingly cute! Team Hormone makes it even more fun to read! Thanks for your hard work! I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work!
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Something I wrote awhile ago. I changed writing style for this story just to try it out. Thanks for reading.
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Return to Say I love You
(Mayuki)
“Yes, I know I know.”
“I promise I’ll have it ready for next Monday.”
“Mayu, I can’t keep pushing the date, the publisher is already not happy, I want to see your drafts TOMORROW!”
“Wait..” Click
SIGH…
I looked down at my blank pieces of paper. It’s going to be a long night…
I turned the TV on for some background noise. I started drawing some lines on the paper when suddenly the sound from the TV became very clear.
Let’s welcome our guest on tonight’s show…. Kashiwagi Yuki-san. Clap Clap
I turned around and stared at the TV. There she is…Yuki. Beautiful Yuki. Oh alright, I admit it. I knew she was going to be on the show, that’s why I had turned the TV on. I “subconsciously” watch every TV show she goes on. I have attended all her live concerts and I have every one of her singles, albums, dvds, etc. I, Watanabe Mayu, am still madly, truly, deeply in love with Kashiwagi Yuki.
Yuki graduated from AKB48 a few years ago. I left a year after her. We went our separate directions, she continued on to become an idol singer/actress and I’m now working towards becoming a successful manga artist. We have occasionally met up (few and far in between) and have kept in touch with each other through mail, but it’s not the same as when we were together in AKB. She still treats me like her younger sister. If only…
My thoughts were interrupted by the TV…
Host: “Fan mail time. This letter is from Risa-san.”
Yuki: “Risa- san, Thank You”
Host: “Yukirin, I have been a big fan of you since you entered AKB48. Your latest single, ‘For You’, is one my favourite songs ever. Do you still keep in touch with former AKB members?”
Yuki: “I do. For example, Watanabe Mayu.”
I frozed.
She said my name. ME! She said my name. Of all the people she could have picked like Sae, Hacchan, she said Mayu. She thinks about me!
Host: “How long has it been since you graduated from AKB?”
Yuki: “Almost 3 years now.”
Host: “Is there a moment when you would think, ah, I miss those times.”
Yuki: “When I’m in my own dressing room, sometimes I feel like something is missing. It’s too quiet.”
Host: “So you miss the chaos?”
Yuki: “Yes, I do. I also miss the companionship of the other members.”
I watched the whole interview. She’s mesmerizing as usual.
I looked down at the paper.
Oh crap! I did it again. I drew Yuki on my paper. I stuck it on the board along with my other Yuki drawings. I’ve got to stop doing this.
I did my best to focus on my drawings. I managed to draft out the chapter outlined. I looked at the clock.
[4:48]
I yawned. It’s just a draft. They’ll come back with changes but at least I got something done.
I went to the kitchen to make a fresh cup of coffee.
“I can’t believe my owner is living with so much regret.”
Huh? Did I hear someone talking me? I must be imagining things. The lack of sleep is getting to me. Right? Must be.
“Hello. Watanabe Mayu. I’m talking to you!”
I must have fallen asleep and this is all a dream. Any moment now, I’m going to wake up. I pinched myself.
“OW!”
I hear a chuckle from behind me.
I hesitated to turn around as I know there is someone standing in the room with me.
What should I do? Grab a Knife! That’s right, I’m in the kitchen.
“A knife ain’t gonna help.”
What? How is it possible that this person knows what I’m thinking about.
I turned around, “Who do you think….WOAH!”
“You’re Frank! The title character in my manga series.”
Oh god, I’ve gone crazy.
He chuckled.
“Correct. I am Frank. And you’re not crazy. You created me.”
OK. I’m sure of it now. Either I’ve knocked my head real hard or I’m dreaming. I was working on my next chapter and I fell asleep. Must be.
“No, you’re not dreaming.”
Oh great, he can read my mind. What is this? Can’t I have my own thoughts?
“Ok. That’s enough. Let’s get down to business.”
“What business? Why would my own creation have business to discuss?”
“Because I’m tired of you living with regret and it’s affecting your storylines. No offence, I’m an awesome character but the story development has been rather bland.”
“What regret? I’m pursing my dream of becoming a manga artist. And I do take offence, are you not satisfy with your story?”
“Whatever. What about Yuki?”
“What about Yuki? She’s pursing her dream too.”
“God, you’re so frustrating.”
Frank walks over to the bulletin board covered with drawings of Yuki. He points to the board.
“I mean this…”
“You’re always wondering what if. Always regretting not telling her how you felt about her.”
I frowned. “So what? Thinking about her isn’t a crime!”
“Ok, I can see this is not going anywhere so I’m just gonna do it.”
“Huh? Do what?”
He smiled. THAT smile. The smile that I draw whenever Frank is scheming. Uh oh.
“I’m going to send you back to the past, and you decide if want to do something about your feelings for Yuki. You won’t have a lot of time but that’s what you get for giving me crappy powers.”
“EH? What are you talking about it?”
Everything went black. Oh my god. What is going on? This is weirdest dream ever. Or maybe the worst nightmare ever?
Suddenly I’m standing the middle of the hallway. A very familiar looking hallway. This is not possible, I’m back in Shibuya AX?!?!?
I was walking along the hallway by the cafeteria when I heard Yuki’s voice from inside the room. I stopped myself from entering when I heard someone else’s voice too. It was Sae’s.
Yuki: That’s enough. Stop it Sae. Hehehe.
Sae: You know I love you right?
Yuki: haha. Yah, I love you too, but what does…
I ran from the door. I always thought I lost out because I never told Yuki how I felt. But I was wrong. Yuki never felt the same way about me. It was always one-sided.
Tears began to roll down my cheeks. I fell to the floor and started sobbing.
“Mayu, what’s wrong?”
I looked up. Yuki put her lunch tray topped with food down on to the floor and gave me a hug. She looked at me.
“Mayu, why are crying? Please tell…”
Through my sobs, I started blabbering away.
“All this time, I thought I lost out cause I never told you how I felt. But now I know, it wouldn’t have mattered. I love you so much, I still do but you never felt the same way about me. All this time, I kept wondering if I should have told you that I love you…”
Suddenly, everything went black. Yuki disappeared. I was no longer at the Shibuya AX venue.
Oh no! I ran out of time! Already?!?? Frank needs to upgrade his power pronto.
Things started to spin.
“Noooooo.”
I opened my eyes.
Eh? I’m back in my room, sitting on my bed.
“Mayu, what’s wrong?”
Eh? Did I hear right? Did someone say something to me? Frank? NO, it was a woman’s voice.
I looked to the right. There’s someone in bed with me.
EH???
A sleepy looking (but so cute) Yuki was staring at me with a concerned look on her face.
YUKI?!?!?! Wait a second! Why is Yuki here? Why is Yuki in bed…with…ME???
“Mayu?”
Yuki sat up. She placed her hand on my forehead. I looked at her and shook my head a little.
“I’m ok.” I finally managed to say.
Suddenly, flashes of the past appeared in my head. The clouds covering the memories of the past disappeared. I’m remembering what has happened in the last 4 years. It wasn’t as one-sided as I had thought.
“Nightmare?” Yuki asked me still with a concerned look.
I’m smiled at her. “No, more like the best dream ever.”
“Eh?”
I kissed her on her lips to assure her that I’m fine. She smiled at me. There it is. Her beautiful smile.
Behind Yuki, a ghostly looking Frank smiled and winked at me before disappearing.
Maybe I should give Frank a girlfriend…
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ohh time travel!! XD
nice oneshot :D
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Ah... ♥!!!
please write more! I love it~! :D
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MaYuki always make my day~ :cow:
Thanks for updating~ :thumbsup
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BlackUnagi : random pairing XD but your BlackUnagi fanfic is so cute
Atsuyuu : omg, so sweet..one of my fav pairing :heart:
Mayuki : :twothumbs
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Oh man, all of your stories are awesome! I re-read the AtsuYuu and still found myself shedding a tear. Such a wonderful story! The latest one was cute but I got confused midway. I'll read it again. XD
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^LOL i agree. the middle part is confusing. The original middle section was different but I changed it to this instead.
I finished this story more than a month ago and wasn't really happy with it which is why I hadn't posted it. I ended up not wanting to change it again so I left it as such and posted it.
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Mayuki !!! >//<
Mayuyu you should give Frank a GF really keke
He's deserve it !!!
I love Mayuki !! arhhhhh Pleas write this couple again >//<
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Good job Frank ;) Mayuyu should definitively give him a girlfriend
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Oooh!!!!!! :w00t: Mayuki is soooooo awesome!!!!!!!!!!!! :twothumbs
:twothumbs Frank is the best~!!!!!!!! :heart:
:cow: Mayu give him a girlfriend XD
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this is soooooo nice!!! You're a genius!! please update soon!! can't wait for your next fic!
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Uwah... Mayuki :twothumbs