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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: ayase909 on August 08, 2011, 02:39:37 PM
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Hello! :) Welcome to my thread! :welcome I created links for the previous chapters for easy access to those who just stumbled upon this page! :yep: And to you people out there, yes, I'm talking to you :yep: the fanfics below aren't originally mine. You heard me right, but I didn't plagiarized this or something :sweatdrop:. The thing was, stories below were based from mangas and maybe you already read them. I just happen to have time and put it into words and changed the characters into AKB48 gals. I added some scenes and interactions, and that's all that belongs to me. Thanks for reading this shit, love ya ol! :thumbsup
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YURI CASE NO.1 - LOVE UNDER THE SAKURA TREE
STATUS: Case Closed
PAIRING: TomoTomo
Chapter 1
Chapter 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=30161.msg928999#msg928999)
Chapter 3 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=30161.msg930869#msg930869)
Chapter 4 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=30161.msg948955#msg948955)
Chapter 5 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=30161.msg950940#msg950940)
Chapter 6 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=30161.msg957858#msg957858)
YURI CASE NO.2 - 18x21 SHOUJO-AI TACHI YO
STATUS: Under Investigation (On Hold)
PAIRINGS: AtsuYuu, TakaHaru, AtsuMina, KojiYuu
Chapter 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=30161.msg967834#msg967834)
YURI CASE NO.3 - THE FAVORS
-A Maeda Atsuko Favor-
STATUS: On Going
PAIRINGS: AtsuMina
Chapter 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=30161.msg990806#msg990806)
Chapter 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=30161.msg991635#msg991635)
Chapter 3 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=30161.msg1206983#msg1206983)
Chapter 4 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=30161.msg1209634#msg1209634)
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Since I love Yuri Anime and Yuri couples, especially AKB48 I decided to copy the other amazing writers/authors to have a separate thread of one-shots whenever i feel like writing one. So, bear with me because I'm still new at this.....and gah whatever. If you don't like the story then you all can just ignore this....nanchatte~ :P
Yuri Case No.1: Love Under the Sakura Tree Part I
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Peaceful, quiet, serene, that’s the words rang through my ears as I was lying down under a Sakura tree, eyes closed, trying to bring myself into slumber. To sleep off my growling stomach that was empty since this morning. Yes, I, Itano Tomomi, a second year student majoring in Information Technology was penniless. Nada! Flat broke, in short I was living alone with no enough money to support myself. That is why; sleeping is the only option for me to forget all my problems and my protesting stomach. And right now, I’m-
“I always thought you’re an amazing person, Kasai-san.”
“…Um…I’m sorry…”
-was rudely interrupted from my nap time to find a guy being shot down. Worse thing? I was smack dab in the middle of the spring-time of youth, lying in a comfortable smooth grass just opposite the talking couple. Yay!
“Maybe they’ll go away…” I grumbled to myself as I opened my eyes, clearly pissed off for being interrupted by this stupid couple as the clear blue sky greeted me. The sight was really beautiful and comforting. Urging myself to sleep back, I closed my eyes again to resume my nap time…..or so I thought.
“Are you in love with someone else?”
“No…but-”
Common, this guy was pathetic. Can’t he take the hint the girl doesn’t like him? Let it go and move on so I could go back to sleep, damn it. And I can’t even move because if I did, then it will alert them that their love-love time wasn’t private as they thought.
“T-then-….”
‘Rinnnngggggggg’
Urk! Oh shit. And my damn phone that was sprawled on the ground with my things chose to ring at the moment. Clumsily, I tried fumbling with my phone to turn it off, not wanting to alert the couple they’re not alone out here. But I guess that was too late now.
Sigh.
If only I was a ninja….was my wistful thought as the couple peered over to stare at me, having heard my accursed phone’s non-stop ringing. My eyes meet theirs for a moment but I look away immediately. Now they would thought I was eavesdropping in their conversation. With a resigned sigh, I got up into a kneeling position, my head bow as I said.
“…I’m sorry for interrupting…”
As I looked up, I saw the guy blushing to the roots of his hair, avoiding my eyes.
“Oh! N-no it’s- -forget about it, uhm… see ya.”
And just like that, the guy was off like someone was chasing him. Er- this isn’t my fault, right? The girl already shot him down so he couldn’t blame me for unintentionally interrupting him. Besides I got here first than them. Yeah, it’s their fault not mine.
But when I turn to look at the girl, my inner musings and all my coherent thoughts went flying in different direction as she smiled at me.
Whoa.
“She’s cute….” I mumbled to myself, not aware that I was dumbly staring at her. She giggled cutely, bringing her left hand to her chest as she continued to stare back at me. And realization hit me hard as I finally got my senses back, my eyes widened. She heard what I said. Oh shit!
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“You caught me in a weird moment before. I’m Kasai Tomo~mi…uhmm?”
Tomo~mi?
Now sitting at a nearby bench from the Sakura Tree, we silently agreed to settle the incident that happened just minutes ago.
“Itano…Itano Tomomi.” I introduce myself, glancing sideways. My eyes caught her surprised reaction when she heard my name. But after awhile she smiled, her sweet smile I find to be rather cute like she was.
“Tomomi….same name as me.” She tilted her head, trying to catch my eyes as I nod. Her smile was still in place as she moved closer to sit just beside me. I ignore it and just let her.
“Then……hmm…Tomochin, huh? Thanks, you saved me. That guy just wouldn’t let it go.” Still refusing to meet her eyes I felt my left brow twitch slightly as I heard her call me, Tomochin? She giggled when she said that, clearly not really bothered by the confessions that just happened.
Glancing sideways to regard her, I replied in a dry tone. “He seemed pretty cool though...”
The guy before was kinda look familiar to me and after some several searching in the depths of my memories, the name Naitou Koji pops out from it. Naitou is popular among girls for being the former captain of their soccer team back in high school, and it seems his popularity only increased the time he became a university student. What a waste. And I heard he's rich too. What a total waste indeed.
“Oh….well, I guess.”
Kasai replied, her brows lightly knitted as she looked up to the sky. But in one sudden motion she turned towards me, her eyes gleaming with utmost happiness coupled with her blinding yet sweet smile as she uttered the most unbelievable words that shocked my delicate ears.
“…But I like girls.” And she giggled again, my mouth slightly agape towards her. Hearing no response from me she playfully poked the tip of my nose. I frowned, and she laughed lightly.
“Does that gross you out?”
Clearly since my orientation is straight as a pole. But coming from her, a cute girl saying that doesn’t really affect me like it would affect me under normal circumstances. And right now I felt like I was smitten by her cuteness as I was struggling to answer her question.
“No…it doesn’t gross…me out.”
My eyes locked with hers as those exact words left my mouth. A coy smile appeared on her angelic face as she moves much closer to me.
“Wanna… try it then?”
She asked in a sultry voice, eyes half-lidded as she brought her right hand to cup my right cheek. The sudden contact of her smooth hand to my cheek startled me, but it seems my body has frozen still. Escape was impossible; it was like I was under a spell unable to move as I watched her head slowly descend. I panicked, my brain telling me to snap out and stop the girl… but I didn’t.
And as our lips collided, a strong bolt of electricity run through my body, my eyes closing involuntary as I move my lips in sync with hers. She was kissing me….and I was fully kissing her back. I was kissing a girl….a girl….yet I liked it.
Feeling appalled all of a sudden ‘cause of the unexpected feelings that brought by the kiss, I moved away and did the thing a normal person would do. I slapped her….hard.
“…you hit me.” She stated the obvious, cradling her now warm cheek. Her eyes a little teary as I looked down at her. Momentarily, I closed my eyes and exhaled slowly, urging my rapid heartbeat to calm down.
“Uh-huh…” Was my only reply as I picked up my things from the bench.
“That’s….the first time someone’s ever hit me….I think.” She pouted cutely as she said that, her face portrays like an innocent child who just discovered something new. I bit my inner cheek to restrain myself from growling at her. What’d she expect then after kissing me just like that?
“That’s good then...” I replied sarcastically, turning my back towards her as I begun to walk away.
Now that I’m not under with her spell of the sort, I stopped at my tracts as I turn my head towards her. She was still holding the side of her cheek that I slapped as she looked down at her shoes. Her brows furrowed like she was immerse in a deep thought.
“Y’know, you might think you were just trying things out, but you shouldn’t do stuff like that anymore.” She looked up at me upon hearing my voice and the only reply I got was a smile. That made my blood boils a little and I frowned. Really, this girl is weird. Rolling my eyes off, I walked away thinking about the bizarre encounter I had with this cute girl under the Sakura tree.
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As Itano Tomomi’s figure retreating in a steady pace, Kasai Tomo~mi stands in her full height. Smile still in place as she brought up her cute pink digital camera dangling around her neck, snapping a photo of the girl’s back.
“Tomochin…” She uttered the name in a soft voice, touching her lips that still tingling from the kiss she shared with her.
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“Oh! There you are Tomo.”
A distance away from me was my best friend, Maeda Atsuko. She was smiling brightly as she waved at me. Her cheery mood made me forget about the encounter I had with the strange girl. Strange but…a really cute girl.
“Where were you? Class is about to start, and you didn’t answer my call.” Atsuko frowned, hooking her left arm to mine as she drags me towards our room.
“…Kissing a pretty girl...?” I uttered unconsciously and Atsuko abruptly stopped from dragging me. I mentally kicked myself for slipping out that one as she looked at me with a confused expression written on her face. She’s really adorable right now, by the way.
“Huh? What did you just say?” She asked, her right brow arched towards me. I inwardly cursed as I gave her my best innocent look.
Shaking my head lightly, I let out a laughed. Muttering it was only a joke as I dragged her myself towards our classroom. With that said, the girl’s question rang through my head.
‘Does that gross you out?’
“Definitely not.”
Surprisingly, a genuine smile appeared on my face as the answer to her query comes out from my mouth like it was the natural thing to say considering the circumstances that brought out the situation. And for the second time of the day, I received a confused look from my best friend. And this time, I can’t help but pinched her cheek playfully as her adorableness was tugging at my heartstrings.
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Since I love Chiyuu because she's too adorable and has a sexy cute voice, my first Yuri Case was dedicated to her. XD
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ohhh i know this one but i can't remember the title wee :OMG:
i guess it will come out soon :hiakhiakhiak:
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wahehehe~ the above story was base on a manga i read a long time ago, so yeah. It's no surprise someone will recognize it :cathappy:
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ITS SO CUTE !!!!!!!!!Tomochin so tsundere :lol: please write a sequel XD I want more please :grin:
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Tomotomo!!!!!!!! Yeah a sequel please!!
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wahehehe~ the above story was base on a manga i read a long time ago, so yeah. It's no surprise someone will recognize it :cathappy:
Otsu Hiyori (Maple Love). :3
I like her stuff, you should put a note to say it's based off her work.
Also I like TomoTomo.
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Gyahahahahaha TomoTomo fic :deco:
I like this pairing..... :thumbup
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@blughise Im happy you like my first yuri case :bow: I love TOMOTOMO as well and yes, Tomochin's the tsundere type XD
@kahem Deshou? TomoTomo is quite the cute couple XD, with Tomochin being the tsun-tsun while Chiyuu being or sorta the Yuko-ish type :lol:
@kuji Yes, it was based from the manga Maple Love and i love her work as well. I will say it was based from that manga the next i wrote something like this, thanks for reminding me. :)
@moekare Woohoo! :yossi: another TomoTomo fan. We're eternal comrades from now on. hehe :rofl:
To all silent readers, thanks for reading this. And also to those who pressed the 'thank you' button. :bow: Arigatou :cathappy:
As for the sequel....okay! :lol: But i noticed that TomoTomo fans are rare here and TakAcchan fans are crawling everywhere :lol: I'll write more TomoTomo shots to promote their coupling and KojiYuu as well.... :inlove: Thank you again. :thumbsup
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yo aya-chan! nice fic! tomo~mi like girls than boys :wub:! wow! :inlove:
it's not the end right? ^^
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@khryz421 yes. but i'd like to think that she likes Tomochin above all else XD
DISCLAIMER: This story was base on manga titled Maple Love. I don't own it, except for the additional scenes :)
Yuri Case No 1: Love Under the Sakura Tree Part 2
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Kasai’s POV
I thought yesterday was one of those days I really hate. Shutting down a guy isn’t really easy as they thought and every time I do it, my heart clenched…..…but something interesting happened that made me feel all fuzzy and warm inside. I kissed a girl for the first time. I don’t know why I had done it. And so you know, I’m restraining myself not to squeal right now. You can’t blame me, Tomochin’s really cute. The first time my eyes laid on her, I know it’s her that I’m looking for. She’s my destiny, my fate. Though she slapped me and mind you it really hurts, but just thinking of the kissed we shared erased all the pain I felt. Her lips keep popping into my head, making me groaned in frustrations that our kiss was cut-short.
So today, I promised myself to do everything and no matter what the cost to get closer to the girl who captured my heart. I just hoped she wouldn’t slap me again if ever I tried to kiss her. The thought of kissing her again send warm feelings to my heart, making me let out a girlish giggle.
And so, I’m on a mission to hunt my destiny girl…
“Aha! I had a feeling you’d be back here again.” I smiled in delight as I spotted her. She was lying under the Sakura tree again; an open book was covering her face. Probably to block the sunlight that was streaming through the Sakura leaves. Her other things lay beside her and her cute whitish-pink phone was settled on top of one of her books.
Slowly, she removed the book from her face, looking up at me. I smiled at her. Using all my will power, I restrain myself from jumping at her and drown her with kisses.
“You’ll get sunburn if you nap out here.” I commented as she continued to look at me, a cute frown forming on her face.
“…Kasai….san?” My smile widened hearing her call my name. I’m so happy she remembered it. My respect and love points for her increased for a hundred and ten percent. Kya!
I crouched down to sit beside her and she did the same, getting up to settle in a comfortable sitting position under the Sakura tree. Like yesterday, we’re sitting side by side with only a short distance as a gap. I can’t help but laughed softly as memories of us kissing flooded into my mind.
“Tomochin, you don’t have to use ‘san’ with me.” I said to her while smiling. I was so tempted to grab her hand just beside me, that’s why I played with the pendant of my necklace instead. I don’t want to scare her away so I chanted the words ‘self restrain’ over and over inside my head.
“Did you want something…?” She asked, my smile faltered a bit by her straightforwardness. But I refused to give up, not when the person destined for me was just before my eyes.
“Um…you see…” I trailed off, building up all my courage to say what my mind has been nagging all night. And with one last exhale, I cheerfully confessed to her.
“I think I’ve fallen for you, Tomochin. Please go out with me.” And it was accompanied by my most irresistible smile that guys find hard to resist. It was a do or die situation, no matter what her answer is I’m-
“Oh…..but I don’t like you, so I can’t go out with you.” The smile on my face fell off as she flat out rejected me without batting an eye. I stilled my twitching heart from crumbling into pieces as I mask my surprised with a heartily laugh. She scowled at me, not expecting for me to laugh after being rejected.
“Haha~ You sure are an interesting person, Tomochin.” I wiped the tears from the corners of my eyes for laughing too much. Somehow, it was kind a bit funny and depressing how I was easily rejected. Now I know how the guys felt after I shot them down. Is this the famous thing they called Karma?
“Friends! Friends then…. can we be friends?” I asked after I calmed myself, though deep inside I was praying that she’ll agree to become my friend. I don’t know what I would do if she’ll reject me for the second time.
As I was internally praying to all the divine mercy I can think of, I heard her mumbled the word ‘interesting?’ while looking at me. She was like scrutinizing my whole being, or trying to figure out what I was thinking. I just hope that she wouldn’t think I’m a pervert or something.
“Oh…okay then.” Her affirmation to my request is all I need as I breech the gap between us. Yelling a YAY! as I grabbed her arm to pull her towards me. She was startled and was about to pull away…but stop when she saw what I was trying to do.
“This is to commemorate our friendship….ichi, ni, san, say chii~zu!” And I snapped a picture of us both, using my beloved camera I always carry around my neck.
The picture turned out cute despite it was taken without any warning. She was still very pretty regardless of her obvious discomfort with what my free arm around her shoulder, side hugging her. She was just too cute I can’t help but tease her.
“Ahahaha~ you aren’t photogenic, Tomochin.” I laughed lightly as I looked at our picture. Already, I was planning to print this one and put it in a frame.
“How rude.” She grumbled, her brows furrowed at me.
I think I’m becoming a masochist. I’m dying here right now, Tomochin’s so adorable I might lost control of my self-restrain. Distracting myself from any ill thoughts towards the desirable girl just beside me, I continued to humour her.
“Why? That’s a good thing, y’know? It means you’re more impressive in person.” I guess I can’t help myself from flirting with her a little. I smiled when I saw her cheeks colored slightly as she averted her gaze away, mumbling a simple ‘I see’.
Though she surprised me when she suddenly yanked my hand that was holding the camera. I felt myself blushed as her hand touched mine, and her sudden closed proximity made my heart jumped with happiness. Her face…was just inches from mine that I can feel the warm air when she breathes. Her scent intoxicating me as it enveloped my whole being. And all I can do right now, is just to stare at her beautiful face as she silently looks at our picture.
“You’re right. You’re not photogenic yourself either, Tomo.” She said after awhile, still looking at the picture and is still touching my hand as well. Tomochin called me just Tomo. And she complimented me like it was nothing. Don’t tell me she’s an unwitting flirt?
Despite with her simple words it rendered me speechless and stunned, my heart beating wildly as I rewind those words she said to me in my head. I think I’m going to pass out if she’ll say any heartwarming words to me again.
“? Hey, do you always carry this around with you?” Her melodic voice asking me snapped me out of my stupor. I immediately smiled at her, praying there wasn’t any drool on my face.
“My camera?” I asked back, wanting to hit my head for asking a dumb question when she looked at me with her brows furrowed again. I laughed awkwardly as I put the camera back around my neck.
“Well yeah. I like pictures. I always take photos that made me happy that day, or cute things I ran across.” When I said that, I looked directly to her eyes. Silently conveying that taking her photo just now with me means she made me happy. Even if the only thing she does is frown or scowl at me, it’d still make me happy.
“Like a diary?” She asked again, meeting my eyes. I was impressed she didn’t look away, considering with our close proximity I could just lean forward and catch those inviting lips of hers. Er, bad thoughts.
“Yes, like a diary….Oh hey, Tomochin, don’t you eat lunch? Lunch time just started, right?” Now that I think about it, she’s also here yesterday during lunch time, taking a nap under the Sakura Tree. Is this her special hang-out place? If it is, then it’ll be our special place from now on. The thought made me smile, and thinking I’m going to spend more time with her from now on brought an overwhelming happiness within me.
“…I live alone, and I don’t have any money, so I just nap here during lunch.” That brought down the happiness I felt after hearing what she said.
“What?! But you gotta eat, Tomochin. Let’s go eat lunch. My treat.”
When she said those things, it wasn’t in a self-pity voice but rather in a bored tone. She also wasn’t ashamed of admitting it to me. Knowing these things now, I just can’t sit here and do nothing if I can help her. And so, I grabbed her hand and pulled her towards the school cafeteria, liking the feeling of her hand against mine.
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I enjoyed writing Chiyuu's POV XD I hope you do as well :nervous
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This is great!!! I have read the manga but u turned it into a fanfic that's awes
E!!! Pls update more :D I will check everyday to make sure I don't miss any chapters xD
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finally a tomotomo fanfic!
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YAH Tomo~mi makes me laugh!!! I really like this !!!
Her point of view is so cute and interesting!!!
I'm actaully Atsumina FAn but I'm liking TomoTomo more now because of your fic!!!!
update asap XD
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I'm liking itttt :)
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Yay! A hardcore TomoTomo's fan is here and I love your fanfic :cathappy:
I'm gonna follow this fic till the very end :thumbup
Tsundere Tomochin :heart:
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@jehovachiabi - I'm glad you like the fanfic version of Maple Love XD and thank you for the full support. I'll do my best for the 3rd part which is still half-away finish. ahahaha :lol:
@A1 - deshou? A TomoTomo fic should flourish in fanfiction thread. Aren't you guys tired reading the usual TakAcchan? hahaha kidding
@blughise - Well, what can i say, i used my inner girl self while writing Chiyuu's POV :lol: and I'm happy your opening your eyes and mind that besides the famous AtsuMina pairing, TomoTomo exist which more likely resembles the KojiYuu relationship XD Don't worry, I'm working on the 3rd part so you don't have to wait that long...hopefully. :P
@Arakawa - I hope you'll learn how to love this very cute pairing too XD thanks for reading TomoTomo :cathappy:
@Alex.S1 - I'm a hardcore TomoTomo fan, hell yes! XD XD XD and i love you for loving my fics ahahaha kidding :P i also love Tsun-Tsun Tomochin :heart:
And as always, my sincere gratitude to all who read my version of this awesome manga that made my :heart: go doki-doki while reading it XD Thanks a bunch to those who pressed the thank you button (khryz0421, Tejinashi, anoni2, blughise, RenaChii, Alex.S1, immo) :cathappy: to the silent readers and esp. to those amazing people that left a comment. Domo! :love:
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DISCLAIMER STILL STANDS! XD
And as promised, here is the third installation, so help yourselves! :nervous Though I can't say there's more to it so gomen in advance if I fail you :panic:
Yuri Case No 1: Love Under the Sakura Tree Part 3
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Itano’s POV
The other day was a weird day and yesterday was weirder. Weird….but in a good way I think. Well, being kissed and confessed to by a cute girl named Kasai Tomo~mi was very unexpected. But what I didn’t expect was for me to actually like her company. She wasn’t only a pretty face and a jolly girl. The time we spent together made me realized she’s also a bright person, especially when in it comes to photography. Her love for pictures amazes me. She always takes photo randomly, saying she finds it cute and that it made her happy. And before I realized something, she already has lots of stolen shots of me, making me blushed as her reason of taking photos rang through my head. Tomo finds me cute and that I made her happy. Somehow, this little realization made me feel warm inside.
Right now I’m inside the library, sitting in a table with my best friend and our other friend Minegishi Minami as I flip the pages of my book. My thoughts filled not about my research project I was working on but by the enigmatic Tomo~mi. The girl left a big impression on me. Her smiling image flashing in my mind making me groaned in frustrations as I can’t concentrate or even start with my schoolwork.
“Oh! Tomochin! Heya!” I looked up and was greeted by the familiar smile of the girl that filled my thoughts lately.
“Oh…hey, Tomo.” I smiled back, finding it now easy to do so. The smile on her face even brightened when she heard my reply. But I was caught off-guard when she suddenly kissed me on my cheek.
From the corner of my eyes, I can see Miichan’s eyes widened while Atsuko frowned.
“W-what…y-you…-” I uttered incoherently as I frantically looked back and forth between my friends and Tomo.
“Your hair’s in a curly style today. Tomochin’s so stylishly cute.” Tomo’s smile never faltered as she complimented my hairstyle for today, disregarding the fact that she just kissed me in front of my friends.
The only thing I can do? I sighed a resigned sigh as I thank her. And as fast as she appeared, it’s as fast as she disappeared. Saying her goodbye after explaining she’s looking for a book, but not without promising to meet up with me later. Now that she’s gone, I turn to my friends to be only welcome by two sets of different inquiring eyes. I shifted on my sit uncomfortably seeing the frown on my best friend’s face.
“That was Kasai Tomo~mi, right? I didn’t know you two know each other.” Miichan said unsurely, her brows knitted as she looked towards the direction where Tomo disappeared.
“Y-yeah…I made friends with her the other day.” I cough lightly to clear my throat. I don’t know but I suddenly felt –
“You two seemed rather close, considering you just made friends with her not long ago.” Atsuko’s monotone voice clearly says she’s not happy. And she said it without looking at me; her eyes solely focus on her book she was browsing randomly.
“It’s nothing like that at all.” She snorted in response as if mocking my answer. Somehow it doesn’t sit well on me why she’s acting kinda bitchy for some unknown reason. I was about to ask what’s her problem when she suddenly looked up, her left brow arched towards me.
“And Tomochin, huh?” She added, a frown forming on her face as she continued to look at me. How should I reply to that? I mean, does Atsuko doesn’t like my new found friendship with Tomo~mi?
“Uhm…everyone knows she steals her friend’s boyfriend. So, I don’t think it’s good if you associate with her, Tomochin.” Miichan interrupted, breaking the unofficial staring contest I had with Atsuko as we turned to look at her instead. She’s saying that about Tomo while using the nickname she made for me? Miichan realized her mistake and she immediately corrected herself when she received a displeased looked from Atsuko.
“Well, I guess it doesn’t matter since you don’t have one right now anyway…” Miichan chuckled, grinning widely at me.
“Still, I don’t like it.” Atsuko muttered, shrugging her shoulders as she moved closer to me. I scowled at her, not liking that my own best friend doesn’t like Tomo~mi. I was about to ask her why, but stop when she brought her left hand up holding a cute pink handkerchief, wiping my cheek.
“She left a kissed mark on your cheek.” She said dryly and moved back. As a reflex my hand automatically shoots up to my cheek where Tomo had kissed me. I felt like blushing when images of us kissing flashed through my mind. I feigned a coughed and grab the book closer to me. The one I was browsing awhile ago as Miichan snickered at me, her grin still in place. I rolled my eyes at her, making her grin widely.
“But seriously, are you sure that’s not some sort of mistake? About Tomo, that is.” I asked after awhile, trying to act like I’m not interested and was just plainly asking.
“Huh? I heard she even made Yukirin cry the other day.” Miichan replied, looking at her expression revealed she doesn’t like Tomo as well.
“….But she was such a nice girl….” I said without thinking, earning disbelief looks from both of my friends.
“What makes you so sure about that? You only know her for days…” Atsuko’s words hit the nail directly. She’s right; I don’t know Tomo that long. But then, why do I feel…happy when I’m with her? Unable to come up a decent answer from my best friend’s remark, I said the first thing that pops on my mind.
“She treated me to lunch the other day, so she’s a good person.” I lightly laughed at my own answer. It sounded so lame and I felt like I was only defending Tomo ‘cause of the food she bought for me.
“Uh-huh, so she’s feeding the animal….” Miichan said lazily as she yawned, glancing at the wall clock that reads 11:45am. I chose not to respond to that since she’s quite right, so the only thing I do was shrug my shoulder and mumble a ‘whatever’.
“Well, maybe you shouldn’t get too involve with her. You don’t know what she might do to hurt you.” It was the pensive voice of my best friend that stops me from glaring at Miichan as the other girl was grinning at me again. And it was also Atsuko’s voice saying those things that bothered me to the extent I never started anything on my schoolwork.
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“That’s what she said….is it true?”
I was so bothered at what my friends told me, so here I am. In a café near at our university, having my free lunch courtesy by no other than the cute girl I just met few days ago, Kasai Tomo~mi. The girl who keeps popping into my head without warning. Who most likely bewitched me with her enchanting smile.
‘And seduced you with her endearing yet sweet kiss’
My inner self added, reminding me of the incident that would forever engrave in my heart and soul and my mind. Making my cheeks felt warm all of a sudden, and making me choke on the food I was eating.
‘Cough!’ ‘Cough!’
“Tomochin, are you alright?” Tomo was suddenly at my side, rubbing my back up and down. Her soft hand touching my back sending shivers all over my body, and her scent suddenly attacking my nose wasn’t helping me calm down from my coughing fit.
“Yeah…I-Im fine.” I said hoarsely, drinking the water she offered.
“Mou…don’t make me worry like that again, Tomochin. I thought my heart was going to explode seeing you hurt and all.”
She pouted at me, her tone scolding me a little as she cupped my right cheek. When our eyes met I was overwhelmed by her presence and close proximity that I have to look away and also to hide my blushing face. I feign a cough as her soft hand left my cheek.
“I’m not hurt….so, were the rumors true?” I reminded her with my earlier question.
“Oh that?” She giggled.
“It’s because my friend’s boyfriends just go and fall for me. Y’know cause I’m so cute.” And she giggled again, cheekily pointing at her face while donning the cutest smile I ever seen. What a brat.
“I see, must be hard being cute and all…” I replied in a bored tone. Somehow hearing the confirmation directly from her, about the rumors which weren’t rumors after all made me feel…irritated?
“…Tomochin, you were supposed to jump in with a witty retort there.” She whined childishly, grabbing my left arm while shaking it. I groaned, rolling my eyes at her as I pry her hands off of me.
“But now that you asked about it, I actually have taken a friend’s boyfriend just so he’d break up with her. That didn’t go well…” I detect no regrets on her voice as she said that, which a frown made its way to appear on my face.
“Obviously! The last time I checked, stealing someone’s boyfriend is a back stabbing bitches’ job.” That came out from my mouth without warning as I glared at her. Her eyes widened in surprised. I bit my lower lip when I saw the sad expression on her face.
“I know…I’m sorry.” Tomo said softly, her eyes downcast as she looks back at me.
“That just happened once, and I swear to myself not to do it again. Do you…do you hate me now, Tomochin?” Her eyes, her eyes were pleading as worry etched to her cute face. Her voice trembling as she asked that. Hate her? My eyes softened at the pain visible in Tomo’s face.
“No, I don’t hate you Tomo.” I replied softly as I can.
“Really?”
“Yes.”
“Thanks God. I don’t know what to do if you really hate me.” She sighed, slumping her back uncharacteristically on the soft chair were sharing. She closed her eyes as a ghost of a smile appeared on her face.
“Just promised me you won’t do it again.” That is to stop the rumors going around the campus. I know what she did was unforgivable, but people change and you have to give them a chance to renew themselves of-
Suddenly she was up, eyes glinting partnered with a mischievous smile as she leaned closer to me. I stopped myself from moving away, refusing to back down and show that what she’s doing wasn’t affecting me.
“Don’t worry, that won’t happen ever again. Besides, the only one for me now is Tomochin.”
Her voice dropped a couple of decibels, making it sound so sexy to my ears. Her eyes locking with mine I was unable to look away this time. Feeling a déjà vu, like what happened the first time we meet under the Sakura Tree where we shared our first kiss. The thought of it made my heart jump. Is she going to kiss me again?
As her face keeps moving closer, I unconsciously close my eyes. Waiting for those inviting lips to connect to mine….but it never came. Instead, I felt a slight pressure on the tip of my nose, then to my right cheek and finally to my left before she pulled back. Mischievous smile still intact on her face as she looks lovingly at me.
“…I thought we agreed to be just friends?” I asked while scrunching up my nose she just kissed instead of my lips. Whoa…wa-wait, why do I feel frustrated that she didn’t kiss me on the lips? This is bad.
“We are friends…” She giggled cutely, playfully pinching my left cheek. And as you expected, I automatically frowned.
“…It just that…I happen to be in love with you too, Tomochin.” Tomo let out a light girlishly laugh though if you look carefully, she still held that look towards me. The loving and longing look I saw the first time we meet under the Sakura Tree.
“I see…” Was the only reply I could come up while trying to tame the beating of my heart.
Kasai Tomo~mi, we sure do have an interesting friendship. I said to myself as a smile crept to the corner of my lips. Friendship…huh?
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Argh! when i finished writing this i immediately post it up so gomen for the errors :nervous and to those who were disappointed ahahaha :lol:
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admit it already tomochin u also have the same hots for her!!! :lol:
thx for updating :cathappy:
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Thanks for the update!! u are doing an awesome job :D
This story is getting more and more romantic <3
looking forward to the next update~ :twothumbs
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I'm liking and liking them even more now!!!!
Is Atsuko jealous over Chiyuuu?
Are you making a love triangle between the three....that'll be interesting too see,
Though I don't want Acchan to be sad and so give her Takamina here :P SINCE I LOVE MY ATSUMINA :P
update soon
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thanks alot for this update :heart:
If I were Tomo~mi, I'd tease Tomochin as well :))
She's so cute when being teased.
Update again soon :cathappy:
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Another Tomotomo! Yay!!!!!!
Chiyuu don't give up!
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I also think Acchan is jealous lol
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Sweettttt~ :wub: tomotomo are so adorable!!!
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i've noticed that there were more TomoTomo fics
now a days compared before...and that makes me
so happy! XD XD XD oreshii da yo! :thumbsup
keep it up ayachin, and don't leave your readers
hanging... :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
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@anoni2 - if your with a sexy Kasai Tomomi, you can’t help but like her….or love her, ne? XD hahaha and I’m sure you will, even your oshi is the best captain around :lol:.
@jehovachiabi – thanks for the two thumbs-up, here’s three for you :thumbup :twothumbs hahaha but I don’t think its romantic at all (not a romantic person, gomen) will try, but I won’t promise :nervous
@blughise – thank you for liking and liking them more XD hahaha and no, Atsuko wasn’t jealous over Tomomi. She was just being overprotective of her bestfriend :yep:. No love triangle here, that’s not my forte, besides Atsumina fans will go on raged if I break the power couple :P. Hehe
@Alex.S1 – if I were Tomomi, I’d never stop teasing Tomochin as well and woo her till she become mine :inlove: hahaha
@kahem – did I really make Atsuko that jealous? :P Haha then gomen for the misconceptions. The ace was rightfully belong to the captain no matter what happened :yep:. I know all of you agree with this XD haha
@dark-atrox – ah! I’m happy that I made the general happy! :yossi: Wohoo~ and you don’t have to put 3 evil emoticons to threaten me :nervous. I’m sorry for the late update, you know how hectic the schedules of students, ne~? XD
:love:~many arigatou’s to you guys who left a comment and those who pressed the thank you button(anoni2, blughise, Alex.S1, seigus, A1, kahem, khryz0421) (also to the silent readers, I can see ya nyahahaha) very sorry for the super delayed update! :love:
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DISCLAIMER STILL STANDS! :cathappy:
Here's part 4, the turning point of the story, it's a boring chapter so forgive me! haha :bow:
Yuri Case No 1: Love Under the Sakura Tree Part 4
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Itano’s POV
Two weeks had pass since the little incident that happened at the Cafeteria, and the word Friendship keeps echoing inside my head. I don’t know why I was bothered by it. I made it clear that were just friends and she readily agrees, but not without confessing to me again. What should I do? As every day we spend time together I grew more attach to her, looking for her company when she’s busy with her own school projects.
I do admit I’m attracted to her, but I’m still not sure if what we have can be still considered as Friendship. My mind suddenly flashed me a barrage of images of her standing outside my apartment, her disarming smile in place as she held a piece of paper towards me.
“Tomochin, I got some movie tickets. Let’s go and watch a movie together.”
“Okay…”
That happened just last weekend when I was dozing off on my lone couch inside my apartment when she suddenly made a surprised visit. And since I wasn’t doing anything I went to the movie house with her. Where she attached herself to me the moment the movie started till the credits rolled up. Friends do that, right?
“Tomochin, I made lunch today. Let’s eat it together.”
“Okay…”
From time to time, she surprises me with her homemade bento. Tomomi’s a good cook despite she was depicting an aura of a clumsy girl and an ojousama-poi. And often times, I let her spoon fed me. That would make her giggle and tease me to no end. Friends do that, right?
But what made me question my relationship with Tomomi was when she started to become my alarm clocked. Yes, you heard me right. Tomo would send me messages early in the morning, waking me right on time to prepare before going to class. It’s so sweet of her, sacrificing her own sleeping time just to wake me up even when she doesn’t have an early schedule for class like me. Like what happened just this morning…
Incoming Message
From: Kasai Tomomi
Sub: Morning!
You have class first period today, right?
Better not be late, Tomochin. See you later.
Love you!
-Tomo
Friends don’t do that. Even if you two are the best of friends in the whole galaxy, a friend wouldn’t do a noble thing like that every morning. You wouldn’t, right? So now I’m facing this dilemma which the enigmatic Tomomi had cause, but I’m not saying I hate it or I don’t like it. It was just making me confused and bothered. That is why, I need to let this out or I’ll go crazy any moment.
“Oi, can you tell me the difference between a friend and a lover?”
“I’ll tell you if you will tell me why you’re suddenly asking me that question.”
I made a right decision in confronting this nagging feeling about me and Tomomi, but it was an idiotic decision of me that I chose this particular friend of mine to pop that question.
“So, you’re gonna share with me why you suddenly have this fascination of defining words such as 'friend' and 'lover'?” Yuko asked, a split eating grin plastered on her face while wriggling her brows at me.
“I changed my mind; forget I asked you about this.” I sighed, massaging my temple as my friend pouted cutely at me. I think some of my brain cells aren’t doing their job that I let myself soon to be victim of this perverted squirrel.
“Friends and Lovers,…huh?” I grunted, turning my head to deliver a death glare towards Yuko- who was seriously looking back at me? I frowned, where did the playful Oshima go?
I nodded at her query, still unsure to my friend’s sudden change in behavior.
“Well, the bottom line, are you two doing it or not?” Then she suddenly grinned at me, laughing loudly when she saw my face turning into bright red. And just like that, the perverted squirrel was back.
‘Pfwakk’
“Ittaiii…” Yuko screeched, rubbing her right arm that I punched.
“I never raised you to have such a filthy mouth.” I said with gritted teeth, glaring at her.
“Shut up! You never raised me at all.” She pouted again, reaching something inside her bag while glaring back at me.
“I’ll tell Nyan-Nyan what you did to me so she’ll avenge my injured arm.” I rolled my eyes at that. Really, as if Haruna would actually hurt me for lightly punching her arm.
“Whatever.” I replied in a bored tone, glancing outside the window where the Sakura Tree was standing stood still.
“Found it!”
With a cheeky smile on her face, and with her dimples showing, Yuko excitedly showed me her phone.
“And I should be jumping out of joy because you showed me your phone?” I sarcastically asked, flipping my blonde hair that was resting on my shoulder.
“Tsk…tsk…seeing you act like that made me want to help you more-” I rolled my eyes again at her silly remarks.
“-so my brilliant brain told me to look it up in an online dictionary.”
Ignoring my friend who was now busy typing on her phone, my mind was yet filled again by Tomomi’s smiling face. Her childish yet cute voice rang through my ears as she laughed, while her soft hands that often times caresses my cheek and holding my hand was the only thing I can think of.
“Ah! Lovers are two people who are in love with each other. So basically, you could be lovers if you both like each other?”
Even my mind was wandering in Tomomi land, Yuko’s voice still pierce through it, making me remember and think back a certain day…
‘I don’t like you, so I can’t go out with you.’
Picking up the pen on my desk, I started pressing its button spring unconsciously, making a clicking sound over and over again.
‘Does that mean…? But I barely knew her back then…how about now?’ Propping my chin on my right hand, a sigh escaped from my mouth as Yuko still ranting about the different meanings of friends and lovers. Lovers, huh?
“I guess I have to figure out this by myself…soon. But I’m not really sure…” I muttered to myself quietly, another sigh escaped from my mouth when Yuko suddenly nudged me.
“There’s a mixer the day after tomorrow, you’re going too right?”
“Nah, I’d rather stay in my apartment and-”
“There’ll be free food.” Yuko smiled knowingly at me. Damn. She got me with that one. Free food…
“Okay…” I simply replied, twirling the pen I was holding on my fingers.
“And I have a favor to ask, could you invite Kasai too?”
My head quickly snapped at Yuko’s direction upon hearing Tomomi’s name, dropping my only pen on the floor as it rolled at the other side of our table.
“You know Meetan, right?” I nodded.
Of course I know that witch, who wouldn’t? That woman was like every cute girl’s nightmare coming into reality. And the fact she has her eyes on my Tomomi is certainly not a good thing, not at all. This is war, this is wh-wait what?
“Oi Itano, you okay? You suddenly spaced out.”
With a frown forming on my face, I absently nodded to my friend’s query. My heart racing at the revelations I stumbled upon at the depths of my jumbled and confused mind. Just what the hell happened to me all of a sudden?
“I’ll tell Tomo about the mixer.”
After saying those words, I quickly left the room after gathering my things from the table, shoving them in one go inside my bag. Completely ignoring the worried voice of Yuko as she call out to me as my feet unconsciously drags me towards the place where this is all begun, under the Sakura tree where I first met Tomomi.
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Don't worry, you don't have to wait long for the next update...since this fic is coming to an end :lol:
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THANKS FOR THE UPDATE!!! xD Loking forward to the next and hopefully u can do a sequel to it!!! xD
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HOORAY~!~! You finally updated! Took you so long I actually thought that you wouldn't continue T.T
I kept on checking whether there was an update T.T but everyday there was none!
And when you finally updated T.T *cries harder* PLEASE UPDATE MORE!!! And make Tomochin very jealous and be the one to confess :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
Please continue~!
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Yup and I am one of those ATSUMINA fans :grin:
anyways.... it's to see a different side of Tomochin. It's cute to see how she's thinking about her relationship with chiyuu....
I'll be looking forward to the next update....and please if you can make a sequel and this time add the Atsumina on it :P
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ayachin, i'm not threatening you with this emoticon--> :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
...you should've known that it was normal for me to use that :twisted:
and finally you updated :thumbsup
don't make your readers wait, and stop studying for awhile :twisted:
be a bad student for once lol jk :twisted:
PS: continue to spread the virus called TomoTomo :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
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Oh She said 'my Tomomi' <3 Tomotomo!!!
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ayachin, i'm not threatening you with this emoticon--> :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
...you should've known that it was normal for me to use that :twisted:
and finally you updated :thumbsup
don't make your readers wait, and stop studying for awhile :twisted:
be a bad student for once lol jk :twisted:
PS: continue to spread the virus called TomoTomo :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
I agree with evil buddy here :twisted:
Maybe you should stop studying for a while and be a bad student for once :twisted:
lol jk but I think that evil one over there has corrupted me into using this too much :twisted:
Funny how the evil ones are the "medical" ones bwahahha :twisted:
PLease continue to write more!!!! I love to see more of TomoTomo!!! :twisted:
I believe in giving the less popular fanfic pairs more :heart: :heart: :heart: :twisted:
THANK YOU!!!!!!!! :twisted:
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are you sure? jajaj ok im wait...5, 4, 3,2 ...
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I've been waiting for your update for so long
Thanks for the update.
I really want to see the new developments of Tomotomo's relationship in next chapter so update soon.
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nice! please update soon!
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Not really my favorite pair TomoTomo, but I read this fic, and I like it. I look forward to the next chapter.
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@jehovachiabi – a sequel? Ah, are wa muzukashii da! :nervous I’m a lazy person and I barely update so, I let you know if I’ll write a sequel of this story. Thanks for the idea :), the thought did cross my mind actually. Lol :lol:
@karomuwi – AH! I’ve read your stories as well and I love it XD. (gomen for not leaving a comment, I’m a very busy person besides being a lazy one haha :sweatdrop:) I was moved by your words :cry:, lol gomen for making you wait due to my slow updates. People like you motivates me to continue writing this one :cry:, so arigatou! :bow:
@blughise – sasuga! :lol: A loyal AtsuMina fan you are! But I’m glad you’re wasting time to read a TomoTomo fanfic! :yep: And a sequel, eh? And add Takamidget and the Ace? Maybe? Or…I’ll write another fanfic with AtsuMina in them…demo, majority of fics here in our thread were TakAcchan so I was thinking to write unpopular pairs instead! Lol XD
@dark-atrox – you’re definitely threatening me with that icon, kowa!!! :panic: And I can’t do that, if I don’t study I’ll surely fail :cry: –runs away after handing the latest chapter- :cathappy:
PS: And aye! XD General, I’m going to spread the love virus called TomoTomo! –salutes-
@kahem – It needs outside interference for Tomochin to realize she’s helplessly falling with Chiyuu without her noticing…hehe XD
@immortal_K – whoa! :w00t: I also read your stories and I’m a fan of yours! XD(I read your stories during my vacant time at school through my phone so I never have the chance to leave a comment, gomen for that :nervous) and you’re an evil comrade of general? Kowa!!! :panic: I thought the first lieutenant was her only comrade when it comes to evil deeds :nervous. And you’re in a medical field as well? Poor patients, I’ll pray for their souls, lol kidding. :P
PS: I should be the one saying THANK YOU! For reading this silly story! :bow:
@Haruko – I’m pretty sure! If not, then I wasn’t here replying to your comment! Wahahahha :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
(I guess the general’s evil vibes got into me, kowa!!! :panic:)
@Alex.S1 – thanks for reading, and so sorry for the long wait! XD Haha, I’m glad your patient in waiting for my update, so enjoy my lil update, ne? And I don’t know if this update would be on par with your expectations with regards in TomoTomo’s relationship development. :lol:
@haruhi16 – ah new reader! :w00t: Irrashaieee!!! :welcome Thanks for reading this and writing a comment! Bless you! :) Lol
@Kiri-el – I know TomoTomo is an unpopular pair :yep:, but I find them cute! XD Especially when we’re talking about the sexy Kasai :love: chasing and annoying the overly tsundere Itano, ne? :) I hope you enjoy the update, and if not you’re free to tell me! ;)
And thanks to this pipz ---> (karomuwi, blughise, kaizoku_gal, anoni2, kahem, vutt48, Alex.S1) for pressing the arigatou button! And to all who read my story! You guys, rock! Yay! :yossi:
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DISCLAIMER STILL STANDS!!! <--- do i really have to do this every time i update? :nervous It's not like i'm stealing her work, ne? :yep: Besides, I just want to make people happy by sharing this fanfic XD...mou! anyway, please enjoy this short chapter :)
Yuri Case No 1: Love Under the Sakura Tree Part 5
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Kasai’s POV
Ne, have you experience a thing that wherever you look at, may a person or things they sparkle? It was like being grazed by billion of starry stars at night. Sparkling and smiling down upon the people admiring their beauty. Everything was beautiful, just simply pretty. Like the person who was sitting in front of me right now. Tomochin.
I’m so happy right now I can’t wipe off the smile on my face as I stared at my girlfriend eating a cup of chocolate ice cream. She’s so cute. Kya! Okay fine! Tomochin’s not my girlfriend…yet. Yes, I’m not giving up till she become mine and only mine even if I have to bribe her with food just so she would like me back. What a sly tactic, ne? Who cares, no one’s complaining especially not my Tomochin. Te-hee!
…But honestly, whether she likes me or not in the way that I like her doesn’t matter to me as of now. The fact that we spend so much time together, like eating lunch and dinner, studying, and not to mention our unofficial dates now and then were enough to quench my daily Tomochin dose…actually make it every minute Tomochin dose. I can’t help it; she’s so cute I want to be with her all the time. It’s so unfortunate that we don’t share any subjects at all.
“Here, try mine as well.”
Tomochin momentarily stop devouring her ice cream as I held out my spoon towards her. Like an obedient child she leaned forwards and catch the treat with her mouth. Her lips were glistening as I stared at it. I wish it was my lips that touch her own. I giggled at my own delusional fantasy.
“Oishii deshou?”
“Un-oshii.” I smiled. Ara, Tomochin could be such a child sometimes.
You know, the first time I offered to spoon fed her, her cute cheeks burst into bright red. And without thinking I hugged her. She’s too adorable that my self restrain abandoned me in the most crucial time of my life. It was an unforgettable day. But what made it more special was that she didn’t push me or pulled away when I hugged her. Though she didn’t hug me back, her whispering ‘niyoi’ while I’m still hugging her made the butterflies in my stomach went wild. And my heart was suddenly attack by the all too familiar warm and fuzzy feeling. I felt like melting right then. Hmm…my Tomochin.
And look at her now, the pretty blonde destined for me was already comfortable being spoon fed by me.
“B-by the way, a friend of my friend arranged a mixer and she wants you to come and join them.” Was it just me or did Tomochin stutter at the beginning? And why was she gripping the spoon tightly and glaring at the ice cream I bought for her?
“Huh? A mixer?”
“Oh! But you don’t have to go if you don’t want to…” She replied quickly, too quickly if I say. Does she not want me to go with the mixer? If she’s going then I’m definitely going as well. I have to make sure guys from the mixer won’t steal her away from me. What mine is mine, and I really hate it when someone’s claiming something what’s rightfully belongs to me. Especially if we’re talking about my Tomochin here.
“Sure, I’ll go! Oh, but I can’t drink at all-not even a drop. Is that okay?”
“I don’t see why not.”
“Okay, I’ll go. Then, you’re coming too, right?”
“…Yeah...”
I’m glad she’s going even though I really don’t care about this mixer. I’ll just pretend it’s one of our unofficial dates….but why does she look so down all of a sudden?
“Ah! It started raining.” I exclaimed, gazing outside the window. Thoughts of running outside while dragging Tomochin with me made me giggle. I know were already too old to play under the rain, but don’t you think it’s kind of romantic? Like playing chase at the beach showed in romantic movies?
“Argh!...I didn’t bring an umbrella.” My blonde angel growled, snapping me out of my day dreams. I laughed as she dramatically slump her head on our table.
“There, there…” I patted her head and she growled again. Kya! Even her growling is so cute.
“Don’t worry, I have one so let’s walk to the station together, ne?” I beamed my most disarming smile at her, but she only looks at me with a blank stare.
“Do I really have a choice?” She sighed exasperatedly, but smiled when her eyes connected at her unfinished treat.
“Mou…” I pouted at her but she was too busy finishing her ice cream, ignoring me completely.
“Tomo, remind me not to believe in weather reports again…” She grumbled, glancing sideways to glare at the heavy downpour outside. I giggled at her childish remarks. But she surprised me when she suddenly shoved a spoon of ice cream in my mouth.
“Oshii?” She asked while smiling playfully at me.
“-Un.” Was the only thing came out from me as I stared at her smiling face. Somehow, Tomochin has its own way of limiting my vocabularies in times like this. Times when she’s showing her dere side. And I think I just died there, Kami-sama.
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After paying our ordered treats I find myself clinging to my Tomochin the moment we step out the café.
“Cold~”
I whined, clinging more tightly to her. She grunted in response but didn’t push me away. I smiled to myself. I guess the rain has its own perks of helping me get close to my beloved tsundere blonde. Ame ga saikyou! Te-hee!
“Are you just going to stand there all night or what?”
“Oh! Right, right…” I laughed girlishly, bringing out my pink umbrella.
Though I don’t mind standing here all night as long as you’re with me, was what I wanted to say to her. Sounds so cheesy, I blamed Tomochin for this.
As we stepped out under the rain, an idea struck me and I halted in my tracts, which prompted my companion to stop as well. She looked at me, confused. Instead of answering her silent query, I held up my camera. She sighed but nodded, and a smile immediately appeared on my face.
“This is to commemorate our Ai-Ai GaSa!” I singed-song excitedly. My smile widening when I saw a frown forming on her face.
“…Don’t call it that- ” She didn’t get to finish what she’s going to say as I moved closer to her, pointing my camera to us. With that, a smile appeared to her face as I took a picture of us.
“So cuteee~…” I squealed while looking at our picture.
“…-but you still doesn’t look good.” I teased her and she only grumbled a ‘whatever’ before pulling me towards the train station.
“…Uhm..want me to hold the umbrella?” Tomochin asked, her eyes on the ground as we walked. Our feet were making a small splash with our every step.
“Okay, if Tomochin wants to.” I smiled to myself as I handed her my umbrella. She can be sweet if she really wants to. I think I’m going to faint any moment now.
…But wait, just wait. Now that either of my arms weren’t holding anything….this only means one thing. I giggled triumphantly before capturing Tomochin’s arms, locking it on my own. I don’t know if it’s only my imagination but I think I saw her smile, but it was gone the instant I looked at her.
Important fact I learned today. Give Tomochin a false weather report. Te-hee!
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This update was suppose to be posted last wednesday but one of my prof decided to unleashed her bitch's power to us poor students, so more projects thus result to delayed updates :doh: And, and the next update is the last chapter! yay! :D I don't know when's the next update will be up, probably next week. :sweatdrop:
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tsundere is the best ;)
Rain, two people, one umbrella. :wub:
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Of course I read some non-Atsumina fic :P though I pick it randomly or I choose whether the title catches my attention or not........
Anyways!!!!
I LOVE KASAI's POV!!!!! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Its just plain cute!!!!!!! XD XD XD XD
And it's just too bad that you're going to end it with your next update!!!!!
I was kinda expecting more!!!! :(
and like maybe add more scenarios for them to be able to get much more closer and act more loveydovey...........
anyways.... It's sucks when our profs suddenly becomes a jerk/bitch and it hinders us to read or update fics :P
I'll be looking forward to the next update....though i'm sad that its ending!!!! I'm really loving this you know!!! :heart:
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Awww This TomoTomo is sooooo cute!
please update soon!
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new reader!
this is SUCH a cute fic <3
TomoTomo are my OTP <3
and wow, this is really good~
and i've never even read yuri before until this point!
(yaoi fangirl - so i've never actually tried to read yuri. but i guess this converted me?)
anyways~ this is super adorable <3
really love it! <3
can't wait to see the next update!
and ai ai gasa~ *sings the tegomass song*
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escaping from me, eh? though I'm glad u updated :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
and Kasai's really whipped! XD
so, is there going to be a war between Meetan and Tomochin? :twisted:
it pains me that the next chapter is the last one... :(
...but continue to spread TomoTomo love XD XD XD
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OH I see evil general commented right before me again! :twisted:
Yup we are evil comrades bwahahaha :twisted: and those souls we take care of are resting in peace so no issues there! :twothumbs
getting tired of seeing our :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
What? next chapter is the last one? :(
but TomoTomo is so fully of :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
WRITE MORE!!! *attempt to threaten you!* :twisted: :twisted:
THANKS!
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So cute!!!!!!! Tomotomo!!!!
Both are jealous lol
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Message First:
@Kiri-el – hai, hai tsundere is the best XD, especially when dere side is showing :love:. It will surely make you all gaga :inlove:, hehe as for the ai-ai gasa….don’t you think it’s kind of romantic, though a bit cliché? XD
@blughise – Oh, we’re the same; it’s always the title that catches my attention first. But then, it depends on who were the leading characters. :yep: And thank you for loving Kasai’s POV XD. I always enjoyed writing her POV than Tomochin because I have to make it cute, lol :lol:
And if you’re reading this reply, this means I’m going to post the last chapter. I’m still thinking whether to write a sequel or not all lol :rofl:, besides there are lots of great writers out there. I’ll leave it to them to write more fics… :thumbsup
@haruhi16 – thanks for liking TomoTomo :)...I guess somehow I managed to convince some people that TomoTomo pair aren’t that bad…. :twothumbs
@atarashii-michi – new reader?! :O IRrashaieee~ :welcome lol OMG! :w00t: TomoTomo is my OTP as well :love:. Found an eternal comrade, I heart you now :heart:, lol Annnnnnd this is the first Yuri fic you’ve read? Oh wow, I felt honored :bow:. Glad I didn’t turn you away and instead convert you to become a Yuri fan XD (I’m a yaoi fan too :yep:). Arigatou, from the bottom of my kokoro for liking this fic :bow: (though I really sucks at writing a fic) A million thanks again! :twothumbs
@Gen.Atrox – I’m not escaping from you :nervous (shakes head-looking for an escape route :panic:)
And no, there would be no war between Meetan and Tomochin :lol:. I prefer love than war lol. LOVE WARS? :roll: (lamee~ I know :nervous) It’s also saddens me that I have to end this fic, but I really have to, haha. Don’t worry gen, I’ll make a new story to continue spreading the love virus called TomoTomo lol :grin: (lamee~ again I know :sweatdrop:)
@Immortal-K – you are an evil immortal, immortal-K-san, kowaaa!!! :panic: (runs away) don’t take my soul….yet. I still have to graduate :yep:, land a job :yep: and find a good husband :yep: (though I don’t mind dating a cute girl :twisted:) annnnnd I still want to write fics too. I’m not tired of this emoticon --> :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:, actually it’s the contrary. I’m loving it…hahaha Soooo, below is the last chapter, it sucks so don’t kill me. Ja~ XD
@kahem – thanks for following this fic :), I’m glad you like it. A jealous Tomochin is not a good thing to mess with…wahahha :twisted:
(Lurker, Kiri-el, Tejinashi, Alex.S1, blughise, anoni2, haruhi16, atarashii-michi, kahem) <--- thanks pipz, keep pressing the thanks button! And to the Silent readers, thanks as well…though I wish you’d just come out and say hi to me….hehe
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I know-I know :nervous I said that this would be up a week later but turn out to be 2 weeks delayed :nervous gomen for that! So, this is the last chapter, it was written in a rush and I soooooooo don't feel like it's a happy ending so I'm asking you people out there for forgiveness! :bow: But anyway, here's the ending and sorry to disappoint you guys! :cathappy:
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Yuri Case No 1: Love Under the Sakura Tree Part 6
Itano’s POV
This is it, the very day I’m dreading for. The day where I’ll probably hand Tomomi to the witch without her knowing. I was really hoping she would refuse the mixer’s invitation but she said yes, to which completely and my utter dismay. And so here we are, in an all girl mixer. Just what the heck is this? And why is it Atsuko and Miichan are here too?
I glared at Oshima Yuko’s direction, which by the way was pretty busy impressing her Nya-Nyan. That perverted squirrel failed to mention to me that two of my bestfriends are attending this mixer as well. Wait, make that three.
Across the table my other bestfriend sat. Beside her was Shinoda Mariko, the school’s fashion queen. But she would deny it bashfully, saying I’m more fashionable than her. What can I say, I may have no money to buy expensive clothes but I certainly know how to dress in style. Well anyway, they were talking animatedly, while Sato Yukari, Mariko’s buddy would playfully feed Takamina with fries. Ignoring the others, meaning us. Including Atsuko who was sitting beside me, which by the way was glowering at the trio’s direction. I’m just glad she wasn’t acting bitchy when she sometimes joined Tomomi and I at the library to study. Though I can still feel Atsuko wasn’t totally okay with me hanging out with her.
And speaking of that girl…
A glare of my own was directed at where Tomomi was sitting. In between Mariko and that witch who arranged this blasted mixer, Ohori Megumi. The well-known predator that went around the campus to satiate her hunger with young university girls.
A growl rumbled my chest as I inconspicuously observed them at the corner of my eyes. The witch was having the time of her life as she chatted with Tomomi. Letting out a laugh now and then, touching her subtlety. And sometimes learning forward to her while playing with her long wavy hair. Now who said mixers are fun? Because I’m definitely not enjoying right now.
I gritted my teeth when I saw the witch touch Tomomi again.
“If mixers are always like this, I totally won’t mind even if no one was paying attention to me.”
I glanced at my other bestfriend, Miichan, who was busy stuffing her mouth with food after food. She’s right. With all these foods the witch ordered, a commoner like me should be feasting with it in delight. Wasn’t it food the reason why I’m here in the first place? Throwing another glance at Tomomi, I decided to make this mixer worthwhile as I joined Miichan with her and my favorite hobby, which is to eat the food within our reach in our hearts content. Might as well enjoy the evening with food than being all 'jealous' to that witch.
Minutes passed and my unannounced food eating match with Miichan ended with a coughing fit, courtesy by yours truly. I was immersed with my thoughts while eating that when it finally sunk in what I was thinking it caught me off guard. I-I was jealous?
“You shouldn’t eat fast, look what happened.” Atsuko said, handing me a glass of water. I smiled apologetically at her.
“You alright, Tomochin?” Tomomi asked. I blinked. It seems she was about to bolt out on her seat.
“I’m fine.” I replied, waving my hand off to show I was fine. I felt so stupid. I looked down at the table to hide my flush face when I remembered what made me choke on my own food. I’m jealous…
“AH! Where did all the food go? And more importantly, what will I feed my Nyan-Nyan now?” Yuko screeched dramatically, throwing an accusing glare at Miichan, who only grin widely at her.
“Yuuchan…” Haruna painfully smiled while grabbing her girlfriend’s sleeve.
“It’s like a whirlwind had pass through here.” Yukarin commented, pointing at the empty plates.
“More like a glutton-Gachapin runs amok and devoured all the food when we’re not looking.” Mariko said in a bored tone after seeping on her drink. Though her eyes said otherwise as it was like a sharp dagger flying straight towards Miichan’s way.
“Ne Tomochin, did you hear something? Because I didn’t hear anything AT ALL.”
Miichan turns to me, a devious smile planted on her face. I smiled back, whilst a hesitant one. When she received no reply from me she picks up a yakitori, and stuffed it inside her mouth without hesitation. She then turn towards Mariko’s direction while chewing the food loudly, mocking the woman.
“Ugh…disgusting.” The said woman spat, but Miichan only continued to mock her. Grinning triumphantly when Mariko punch the unsuspecting Takamina instead.
“Don’t worry, we can order again. It’s on me so go ahead.” The witch intervened which prompted Miichan to yell a ‘Yosha!’, a happy Yuko who started ordering like a madwoman, a grumbling Takamina while rubbing her arm and-…
“How about you Tomomi-chan? Do you want something? Because if you ask me, I-only -want-chu.” –a blonde me to scoff at the witch who deliberately and shamelessly flirt with Tomomi in front of us, in front of me. It made me wants to gouge her eyes when she winks at her.
Right now, my fidgeting hand wants to reach the cheesecake on the table and hurl it at the witch’s face to wipe the disgusting smile she wears.
“Atleast someone’s enjoying this mixer.” Atsuko who was silent the entire time said in a whisper, stopping me from reaching the cheesecake.
“Tell me about it.” I replied, rolling my eyes. As I did my eyes slowly drifted towards Tomomi’s face.
I noticed she didn’t bring her camera today. Because this isn’t fun? Then she shouldn’t have come at all…well, I did invite her. But looking at her right now, her face flushed and grinning while talking to the witch, Tomo looks like a different person somehow. Was she like this before she met me? A party goer who wasn’t complaining when obviously the witch was taking advantage of her-
I stop mid-rant when realization hit me hard like a bullet train that can’t be stop. Flush? I looked closely at her face, and it’s definitely flush. But I heard her clearly when she said she’ll only drink her favorite vegetable juice when the witch offered her a beverage.
“Wh-what do you think you’re doing?” Takamina exclaimed eyes wide as she pointed at me. I ignored her.
I crawled on top of the table as I reached my right hand towards Tomo’s forehead. Everyone was startled of course, who wouldn’t? But I didn’t pay attention to their gawking faces or gasps as my mind has only one goal. And that’s to know if my guess was correct with Tomo’s flushed face as an indication.
“Tomo…chin..?”
Tomomi looked at me confusingly as I continue to feel her forehead using the back of my hand. Ignoring the odd look the witch was giving me, I pulled Tomo towards me, connecting our foreheads. Her eyes widened in surprised, and her already flushed face brightened even more from what I did. As I’ve correctly guess, this idiot girl has fever.
I heard Miichan snickered at the background, and I mentally note to myself to avoid her as much as possible, starting now.
When I pulled back, our eyes met. Tomomi no longer held the surprised look she had before; instead she was now smiling softly at me. I smiled back whilst an apologetic one as my right hand now unconsciously caresses her left cheek.
“Tomochin…” she whispered, her warm breathe brought soft tingles on my face.
“Let’s go home, Tomo.”
“Un.” She nodded, still smiling at me.
With her affirmation I climbed down the table and stand firmly on my feet. My hand held towards her. From the corner of my eyes, I can see Yuko gaping while Haruna had this small smile on her lips as she looked at me. When Tomomi finished collecting her things, she did the customary bow to everyone and finally reached for my offered hand. With our hands intertwined, we walk towards the door but not without throwing a smirk towards the fuming witch.
“Minami, let’s go home as well.” was the last thing I heard before closing the door behind us.
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“WHAT THE HELL??!”
It was a tell-tale of a shout that Tomomi and I heard as we reach the exit of the famous establishment. It was probably the witch, letting out her frustrations that she didn’t get what she wants tonight. Stealing her prey right under her nose was probably a direct hit to her ego. Like I care, I laughed inwardly.
“Can you walk?”
“…Yeah.”
“…Tomochin, are you mad?” Her voice quiver as she asked.
“Yes, I am.” I replied honestly, squeezing her hand I was holding. Yes, I am mad that she still went to that stupid mixer when she has a fever to begin with.
And after that she didn’t say anything, and silence ensued between us, save for the stomping of our feet on the ground as we walk. We stay like that until we reached her apartment complex, and even after I tucked her on her bed, the awkward silence continue to devour us.
“…Why…”
I started, breaking the deafening silence as I settled myself on the carpeted floor, looking down at Tomomi’s figure under the protection of her blanket.
“…did you force yourself to come….even though you have a fever?”
“I wish you’d just said no.” I sighed when I heard no response from her. She continues to hide under her pink blanket and when I was about to pull it over her head, her meek voice stopped me.
“…B-but…” She squeaked.
“You…still would’ve gone without me, right?” Yes, I muttered to myself, but that was beside the point.
“…Y-you’re-a great girl Tomochin. I was scared someone might have stolen you away and I-I didn’t want that to h-happen.”
I contemplated after hearing her answer. But that won’t ever happen. What’s more important was that she risks her health just for that? I frowned.
“I’m sorry, Tomochin.” A light sobbed reached my ears and the frown on my face instantly vanished. This - this isn’t friendship is it…?
“I-I’m sorry I’m such a nuisance to you…”
And then another sobbed. This wasn’t friendship from the beginning. I felt so stupid to realize this just now. I guess I already have my answers…right here, right now.
“What an idiot! It’s not like I’m all that popular…” I said softly, slightly tugging at her blanket which she immediately held into, refusing to let go.
She’s acting like a child, but I find it cute. She’s so cute I find myself asking why me? I’m sure she has much better girls to choose from, so why did she fall for me? Tomomi’s really an idiot, she’s just too stupid, really….it’s not like I have something to offer beside my good looks, and not to mention my pitless appetite.
She already have everything, this grand apartment complex was clearly enough as evidence or the everyday free food she treats me. She came from a wealthy family, compared to me who has nothing. Realizing another fact about this girl made me felt small. This should make me feel discourage, but no. In the contrary it makes me want to do everything for her……everything.
“Tomo, stop hiding already, come on…”
A smile crept on my face as I spotted a rather huge picture framed hung on the wall near her bookshelf. I was too busy taking care of her before to notice it. Now that I have the chance, my eyes lingered at the picture. It was our picture under the Sakura tree. The very day that marked our friendship…..or so I thought. Below the picture, ‘TomoTomo’ was neatly carved on the frame. It’s beautiful.
“Really, I’m not angry anymore…” Slowly, she moved the blanket down, revealing her tear streak face. She’s still cute though.
She peered up at me.
“Ne Tomo, is there anything you want me to do? If there’s anything you want just tell me.” Looking at her eyes seriously, I managed to say the words I want to say without stuttering like an idiot or worse a complete idiot. Is there a difference? Right now, I really don’t care. What’s important if she understand the true meaning of my words?
“Well then…” She paused, completely revealing herself to me as she moves to a sitting position, kicking her blanket off of her.
“…You, Tomochin.”
My eyes widened at her blunt reply. Seeing my reaction she quickly averted her eyes away from me.
“J-Just kidding! I just wanted to try saying it. Maybe my head’s all messed up cause of the fever.” She laughed loudly, but I can tell she was forcing herself to do so. She was struggling, struggling not to break down in front of me. This has to stop; it’s painful to see her like this. No more denying my feelings for her, it’s time to give what she wants, it’s now my turn to make her happy.
“Okay…” Even I said it in a low voice she heard it clearly, clear enough to make her stop from laughing.
“Eh?!”
“You can h-have me, Tomo. That is, if that’s really what you want.” I looked away when I said that, it was way too embarrassing especially when she was staring at you like a goldfish out of the sea, her mouth slightly hung open.
I peered at her from my periphery, and it seems she was momentarily petrified. She was not moving at all, just staring at me. Gathering all the courage I could muster, I turn towards her. Slowly leaning forward I captured her lower lip with my own. Tasting her lips that kept tempting me ever since we met, her lips that kept hunting me and giving me sleepless nights since the day I got a taste of it. Now that I’m kissing those lips again, the world outside didn’t matter to me anymore. Consequences be damn.
I smiled when I felt Tomomi finally snapped out of her petrified state as she kissed me back with much fervor, encircling her arms around my neck as she pulled me closer to her. I complied and I ended up sitting on her lap, my hands automatically find its own way. One was cupping her cheek while my thumb caresses the side of her lip and the other one was on her hips. I was kissing her and she was returning the kiss tenfold, sending warm sensation on my chest. My heart was beating so fast, beating so rapidly because of her. Can she feel it? With our bodies pressed up together, I bet she does.
“You’ll get….my cold…” Tomomi murmured between kisses, refusing to let go. I can’t help but let out a light chuckle at that. Her action says the opposite thing as she continues to kiss me.
“You’re saying…that…but you’re still….kissing me…” I managed to say even my mouth was occupied in kissing hers; matching the intensity of the kiss she was giving me. But suddenly she pulled away; too sudden to my liking that a frown automatically appeared on my face.
“You’re right…I don’t want my Tomochin getting sick because of me.” She pouted cutely and I felt my cheeks getting warm upon hearing what she said. Normally, I found it repulsive when someone was being possessive, but not with Tomomi not at all. It’d only quicken the pace of my already eratic-heart.
“I-It’s fine….as long as y-you’ll be there to nurse me back.” I shyly smiled at her, and she was back to her petrified state again.
“O-oi, Tomo.”I poked her cheek lightly. She wasn’t responding, but before I could react she squealed loudly and envelope me in a hug.
“W-wha – let go, I – I can’t breathe.”
“My Tomochin is sooo cutee~” She squealed again, ignoring my struggles as she continued to envelope me in a bone crashing hug.
‘Pfwakk’
“Ittaii~…”
She finally let go and I gladly welcome the air to my lungs. She was pouting at me again, her hands rubbing the top of her head. She can be an idiot at times, but that’s make her unique compared to other girls. She can be idiot but still stay cute at the same time, and with that thought in mind I laughed.
“Mou…Tomochin, you’re so mean.” I only grin at her.
“Ne Tomo, want to take a picture? To commemorate when we found out the feeling was mutual?”
At that, both of us burst out laughing, but as our laughters died Tomo pinned me a look that triggers my alarm system. She smiled mischievously while playfully tracing my arms down with her index finger. She smirked upon seeing the little panic attack on my eyes, its either fight or flight. I never got the chance to choose with those options though as she pounced on me. Making us stumbled down the carpeted floor, pinning me down. With her straddling me, escape level is zero to nothing.
“Now where was I before you rudely interrupted me?” She tilted her head cutely, arms crossed over her chest as she looked up at her intricate white ceiling. Finding no answers, which was an obvious fact she turn her gaze down to me. I gulp.
“AH! Of course, what was I thinking…” She giggled cutely, and then her eyes turn into a predatory one.
“Tomochin! I-ta-da-ki-ma-su…!”
I think I just dig a hole for myself here.
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If anything changed since that night (which was only two days ago)…and I’m pretty sure it would forever engrave in my memory, which made me blush every time I think about it, that is…
“Tomochin…..chiyuu!”
I spun around and wasn’t surprised when what greeted me was a pair of lips connecting to my own. I frowned when she immediately pulled back. Without thinking I captured my bottom lip between my teeth as I run my tongue along with it. It’s just a peck but I can taste Tomomi on my lips. So, it’s Strawberry today, eh?
“Don’t do that.” She lightly slapped my arm, scolding me like a child. What did I do?
“What?”
“Biting your lips. You’ve been doing that a lot lately, mou…”
“Why not?” I asked, frowning again.
“Because…” She suddenly kissed me on the lips, erasing the frown on my face. But before I could kiss her back she pulled away, the frown returning to my face.
“…those lips belong to me and I don’t want you to damage it.” She winked playfully, tapping my cheek. And of course I blushed. Really, this girl is so weird.
“So, the mighty Itano finally has an owner eh? I want a master too.”
Do I really have to guess who said that? I groaned. There’s only one person I know who excels in getting under a person’s skin for too much teasing. And I was hoping to avoid her in all cost. Guess it wasn’t my lucky day.
“Well, hello there chicas!” A smiling Minegishi Minami while wriggling her eyebrows greeted us in a…inhuman way? She was like bursting with energy despite the heavy books on her arms. And she was smiling too much, too much to my liking. Something’s telling me she’s up to no good.
“Let’s go, Tomo.”
“I’ll walk you home.”
“Okay.”
I glared at Miichan when she was about to open her mouth, and she instinctively step back. Racing the books she was holding to shield herself of any bodily pains. I hide a smirked, and she smiled awkwardly, waving her hand to shoo us away from her. I’ve heard from Atsuko that Miichan took a beating from Mariko when she decided to puke her guts out inside Mariko’s car. I guess that made the great Minegishi to lay off with her teasings for awhile.
“Well, see you tomorrow TomoTomo combo. Bleh!” I rolled my eyes while Tomomi giggled. Miichan could be so immature sometimes. But I guess that’s what I like in her.
So, has anything changed at all? I glanced down and the answer came to me in a split second.
“Want to hold hands?”
“Sure.” Tomomi quickly replied, coupled with a cute smile that I can’t help but swooned inwardly.
“But don’t you think people will think we’re weird?” She tried wriggling out her hand from me but I held it firmly.
“…the witch is weirder compared to us, besides you kissed me the day we met. And you’re asking this now?” I mumbled to myself, but I think she heard it.
“W-wha – huh?!”
“Nothing….I was just thinking about how cute you are…..even though you’re an idiot at times.” Tomomi instantly blushed upon hearing the compliment. Now I know why that perverted squirrel loves to tease poor Haruna.
“YOU!!!”
A figure suddenly blocked our way, startling both Tomo and I. Her icy glares solely directed to me. I felt Tomomi tightly clings to my arm, frightened at the ominous presence before us.
“YOU, IT’S BECAUSE OF YOU – Auurkk!”
“Gomen ne, we’ll be on our way now. See you around, TomoTomo.” Kojiharu waved goodbye, smiling while dragging Yuko in a choke hold.
“Nyan-Nyan…l-let go. Tomochin s-should-…”
“No. When I said no, it’s a no, Yuuchan.”
“H-hai, Nyan-Nyan…”
“Now let’s go home.”
“As long as you’ll let me touch them.”
“Kyaa!!!”
‘Pfwakk’
“Ittaiee~…”
“Yuuchan, baka!”
“NOoo, Nyan-Nyan! Don’t leave me behind.”
As the couple left the vicinity the girl beside me laughed. “You sure do have omoshiroi friends, ne Tomochin?”
“Yes, never have a dull moment with them.” I laughed along with her. As for the perverted squirrel suddenly going on a psycho mode on me…well, I also heard from Atsuko that the witch made Yuko pay half of the bill after Tomo and I left. It’s not like it was my fault, I wasn’t the one who ordered the foods in the first place. She should’ve blamed herself, and now she’s broke.
“Tomochin, let’s take a picture.” Tomo suggested.
“What? Here?” I looked around and there’s nothing here, except…wait there a second. Is that Takamina and Atsuko sneaking towards the school garden?
“Tomochin…?”
Glancing one last time at the direction where I last saw my two bestfriends, I mentally note to myself to interrogate them later. “Okay, let’s take a picture.”
“Yay! But let’s take the picture over there.”
When I looked at the direction Tomomi was pointing at, a smile readily appeared on my face. It was after all, under the Sakura tree we’re we first met.
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I suck at writing ending parts/chapter, neeeee? :nervous So, YURI CASE ICHIBAN CLOSED! XD XD XD
I'll be hiding for now, thinking of what to write next :yep:
See you around fellas! :)
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It's so romantic... and it is good. Very Good :wub: (and title is perfect)
I'm never reading TomoTomo's, but I love this fic. :)
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So sweet!
Kinda short but sweet. Meetan sure is evil and LOL at Yuko, Acchan finally have Takamina. A perfect happy ending, you did a really good job after 2 weeks of delaying :heart:
Hope you write again soon.
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Tomotomo!!!!!! So sweet!!!!!
I'm still wonder why Acchan doesn't like Chiyuu
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Awwww TomoTomo couple is soooo sweet! I'm inlove again :heart:
You made my day! :) :heart:
Update soon :thumbsup
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I'm glad that I finished a short story :) and to those who bothered to read my TomoTomo cased, a million thanks to you guys.
Your comments were like spare batteries to keep me going, to keep writing AKB fics XD...lol that was so lame :rofl:
Kire-el - I'm glad you find the title perfect, though i thought it wasn't. :nervous And I'm happy to know that your reading TomoTomo fic now, especially the one that i poorly wrote :lol:
Alex.S1 - - It is short and yes, i tried it making sweet as possibly as i can XD I'm a fluff person, no angst, i can't take that. :nervous I know your a Takamina fan, so my next update might want u to kill me....but i assure you, maybe you'll like it...eventually! :twisted:
Kahem - Hmm...Acchan doesn't hate Chiyuu particularly :yep:. She's just feeling apprehended since Tomomi has a bad record of being a flirt and stealing someone's boyfriend...but its a happy ending, so lets not dwell on that, shall we? :lol:
haru16 - I'm happy this update made your day :), well it also made my day with you leaving a comment here XD and im very grateful of that XD
(Kiri-el, Tejinashi, blughise, Alex.S1, kahem, seigus, RenaChii, A1, kaizoku_gal, crazywota, oist) <----- people, thanks! I hope you'll still support me with my upcoming Yuri Case No.2 XD
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After a long absence I'm back with another case XD At first I'm still not sure how to approach the pairings, but after convincing myself that it's okay to experiment once in awhile i made up my mind.... :twisted: so here's go nothing! Don't kill me, ya? :nervous
Disclaimer: This story was base on the manga 2on2 by Hitomi Akihito :)
Yuri Case No.2: 18 x 21 Shoujo-Ai Tachi Yo Part 1
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Maeda’s POV
I can’t believe that six months from now I’ll be leaving my High-school life behind. The turning point of my life where I can truly call myself an adult, facing the real world. A scary thought. Yes, it scared me but it also gives an unexplained excitement at the same time. I know you feel the same way, everyone does. That’s somewhat expected, but with her by my side the uneasy feelings inside me evaporates in thin air like a bubble, like it wasn’t there to begin with. With her encouraging words and comforting smile, facing the real world full of challenges seems not so bad after all. And I think I can make it out alive and successful, as long as she’s with me along the way holding my hand as we walk side by side.
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“Ngn…ngn..” Rolling on my back, a soft moan escapes from my mouth as I rubbed my eyes.
I never felt so relax before; having a good sleep for once without anyone interrupting me was such a pure bliss.
“Hmm…?” –But I felt I’m forgetting something very important that I should do today. Like this very moment.
Looking up at my dormitory’s ceiling I begun to ponder. My eyes squinting at the light sipping through my pink curtains as my thoughts kept running back at the past events that happened last week. I can’t help but smile when her face automatically pops up on my mind. But the bright light of the sun coming in from my window interrupted my thoughts. Oh God! My eyes practically widened as saucers as realization dawned upon me, especially when I saw the time from the digital clock at the table beside my bed.
“Kyaa!!! It’s already this late?” –Leaping from my bed, which surprisingly I didn’t stumble with my sheets, I run towards my closet and grab the first thing my eyes landed on.
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“Sorry Yuuchan, I overslept.” I smiled apologetically at my girlfriend where I was, which slumping on the carpeted floor, panting.
“You don’t have to run all the way here, y’know. Although, I don’t mind seeing you sweaty and all. It’s hot.” I instantly blushed as Yuuchan said those, especially when it was accompanied by a wink.
Oshima Yuko, 21 years old, a University College student majoring in Business. Top student of their class and is a very talented one. To add more, she’s currently the Vice-president of their Company, The Oshima Enterprise, juggling both of her time taking care of their Company while maintaining as the top student. She’s an amazing person, isn’t she? But more importantly, she’s my girlfriend.
“Here you go. I figured out you’ll be needing this once you arrive. One Mocha-choco for my cute girlfriend, Atsuko.” Yuuchan handed me my favorite drink. She was smiling widely at me her cute dimples that captured my heart were showing. It was crazily infectious that I immediately return her smile with one of my own. And my smile widened when she meet me half-way when I leaned in to kiss her.
“Thank you, Yuuchan. You’re the best.” Albeit shyly, I met her eyes as she smiled at me again, playfully ruffling my hair which made my heart melts at the gesture. I’m so blessed and fortunate to have Yuko as my girlfriend. She’s so affectionate and sweet I couldn’t remember a time where my heart pace at a normal rate. It’s always pounding whenever she’s near me, like right now.
As I emptied the glass of Mocha-choco Yuuchan made especially for me I finally settled comfortably on the couch, snuggling closely against her. Were both silent, but this silence wasn’t uncomfortable one.
“What’s wrong? You’re awfully quiet today. You’re usually bursting out of energy talking about your mischievous pranks at school together with Miichan.” Yuuchan playfully pinched my cheek as she said that, earning a cute pout from me.
“Nothing’s wrong. It’s just that I can’t believed that obnoxious Mina-midget.” I scowled remembering what happened earlier this morning at my dormitory room.
“Mina-midget? Your roommate?” Yuuchan chuckled lightly, pinching my cheek again while scolding me not to call people names such as what I did because it’s not nice. But I can detect amusement in her voice so I kissed her cheek as an apology.
Flashback
“Urrggh! I slept too late.” I yelled at the top of my lungs as I struggled to change my clothes as fast as I can. Trying not to fall on my butt as I accidentally step on my clothes I messily discarded on the floor.
“Well, good morning to you too, Atsuko. You seem full of energy despite you just woken up. Miracles do happen I guess, considering you’re not a morning person and all.”
I glared at my roommate, Takahashi Minami. I don’t know what her problem is but she’s always annoying the heck of me whenever she got the chance. Uhm, well I do the same to her. We’re like cats and dogs, always on the opposite side, always arguing. And right now, the annoying midget was standing in her glory. A cup of coffee on her hand while smirking at me. Despite how much I want to wipe the smirk on her face right now, I don’t want Yuuchan to wait for me any longer.
“You’re awful, Minami. I told you to wake me up at nine!!!” –Still glaring at her, I fumbled on my clothes to arrange it properly.
“You never said that. And if you ever did, I’m not your damn alarm clock or your personal maid. You aren’t a little kid anymore so atleast figure out how to wake up yourself.” As much as I hate this, the little girl was right, but I’ll die first before I admitted it to her.
“I.totally.did.” I replied through gritted teeth. “And you’re really awful, you midget.” Picking up my discarded shirt on the floor, I threw it on her face but she skillfully avoided it. But a smirked dance at the corner of my mouth when I saw her winced. Ha! She must’ve forgotten she’s holding a cup of coffee…which is still hot.
“Damn it, Atsuko. Now look what you did, you evil witch. And it’s a brand new shirt. Augghh!!!” I looked at her with my poker face, and I saw her left eye twitch out of annoyance. There goes the round one of our battle, and I win. I suppressed a laughed. She cursed one more time before turning her back to me, placing her coffee on her desk and finally stomping her cute little feet towards her closet, grabbing a new shirt and throwing the stained one on my bed.
“Hey! That’s my bed.” She snorted in reply, peering back through her shoulders when her action earned a reaction from me. Well, actually also to cover my surprised when she faced me shamelessly wearing only her cute pink lacy bra.
“I know, that’s why I throw it there in the first place.” To make things worse, after she put on her free stained shirt she grabbed her coffee again and pour it on my bed staining my whitish-pink bed sheet. My eyes widened and mouth agape at the obnoxious midget who by now smirking evilly at me.
“There, I’m done. I have to go meet a friend, so see you later, Acchan.” A wave accompanied by a wink and she’s gone, leaving me with all these mess. I swear, one day that midget’s gonna experienced a painful death courtesy by me. And there goes our round 2…and nope, I’m not gonna say it out loud.
End of flashback
“Hahaha…that Minami-chan, I’m so jealous of her.” Yuuchan purred while hugging me affectionately from behind.
As I was telling her of the events this morning, she shifted behind me giving me soft flitting kisses on my neck. She must’ve noticed the anger boiling inside me, and the only thing that could calm me down was a slice of cake or a thousand kisses. I’d prefer the latter.
“Hmm….why?” I managed to ask despite her nipping at my neck softly.
“Because, she gets to share a room with you in a beautiful dorm…” – a kissed behind my ear and I failed to stifle the moan that escapes from my throat. Yuuchan giggled and kissed the same spot making me moaned in pleasure again.
“…Yuuchan…didn’t you say…were going to see…a fashion show…sponsored by your…family?” I congratulate myself for finishing a complete sentence despite what my girlfriend was doing to me. Which was attacking my neck with soft kisses followed by nipping at my skin while her left hand drawing circles on my stomach…
“Yes…don’t worry about it. We’re just going to be fashionably late.” –a light laugh emanates from me as I freed myself from my girlfriend to face her. So typically Yuuchan to do that.
“Sorry, I forgot that you’re just only the Vice-president of the company and that they needed you there on time to check things before the show starts.” Yuuchan raised a brow at my obvious sarcastic but playful comment. I mimicked her action which prompted her to grin widely, surprising me when she suddenly captured my lips for a long heated kiss.
“Alright, you win.” With our foreheads still connected, I gave Yuuchan a chaste kiss on her glistening lips before smiling at her, and she gladly returns the smile.
So that’s me, Maeda Atsuko, 18 years old and a senior student whose secretly dating a prominent and well-known figure named Oshima Yuko, who mean the world to me.
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Sooooo yeah, the intro...the next chapter probably a continuation of the intro :nervous
Sorry, I'm a lazy writer so bare with me :lol:
As for the pairings, well...let's just see about that as the story progress :P
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I'll kill you if you don't quickly update (http://i1110.photobucket.com/albums/h456/kiniki902/emo%20soldier/11-1.gif)
Thanks for nice fic :mon innocent:
I like AtsuYuu but I still like AtsuMina more :mon evillaff:
Good luck! :mon determined: hope you update soon :mon star:
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woah AtsuYuu?!?! I LIKE IT!!! <33 so cute!
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Well well well, it's interesting all of this ^^
It smells triangle
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AtsuYuu,well you don't see many of their fanfics around but i like it
this is really cute, hmmm.. can we hope for some atsumina in the future :yep:
i love your story :heart: please update soon!
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atsuyuu wow great
please continue this ^^ arigatou :cow:
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T_T just one question its gonna be atsuyuu¿?
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Hey Guys! :) I know was gone like forever and worse i have to put my Yuri Case 2 on hold cos I somehow lost my draft to that story :nervous Anyways, when I was sitting on my bed doing nothing an epiphany suddenly hit me :lol: and here I am, posting probably the shortest Fic ever in Jphip :rofl: It's an OS and very random and the pairings? :roll: Well, its not what you think...trust me! :yep:
Again, sorry for those who read and left a comment for my Yuri Case 2, I'll try to re-write it :nervous
THE FAVORS
-A Maeda Atsuko Favor-
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Itano Tomomi aka Tomochin groaned for the nth time, grumbling incoherent words as her bestfriend Maeda Atsuko tugged at her blanket. She loves Atsuko, but waking her up at 7:03 in the morning, tis it was also the start of their summer break made her forget of the said love. Thus the result of a howl coming from her floor where the said bestfriend was now soothing the stinging pain on her arm. Courtesy by no other than our not so morning resident Fashion Queen Tomochin.
“Tomo, that was so mean. I thought you love me.” The voice of one Maeda Atsuko was bordering between hurt and being annoyed. Annoyed for she was slapped on the arm unceremoniously and without restraint by her beloved bestfriend. And hurt because..okay, did you really have to ask?
“And I thought you love me too…” Was the sleepy response of the blond. Not even bothering to throw a glance towards her down bestfriend on the floor.
“Yes, I do love you and I thought you do too. That’s why I came here to ask you a favor.” Atsuko pouted even though she knows Tomochin can’t see her adorable pouting face, one of her weapon against the stubborn blond.
Sensing her bestfriend won’t budge anytime soon she decided to climbed up the bed, spooning the much smaller girl. Reaching over to rest her hand on the blonde’s toned stomach as she rests her head on her back. A content sigh escaped from her mouth as the familiar scent of her bestfriend attack her ever sensitive nose. The thought of staying in for minutes to cuddle with Tomochin settled comfortably in the recess of her mind, temporarily forgetting about the favor. And a small smile finally crept on her face as she held the other girl closely to her.
“I’m sorry. Does it still hurt?” The husky voice of Tomochin cracked the silence in the room. Her hand unconsciously drawing circles to the arm draped around her.
“Hmm…you smell so good even in the mornings.” The blond girl chuckled lightly at the random response of Atsuko. But the compliment was much appreciated as she gently squeezed the hand resting on her stomach.
“And you have a dragon breathe I can’t stand.” Tomochin playfully replied, earning a pinch to her stomach which made her yelped and struggle from her bestfriend’s embraced.
“I so don’t have a dragon breath, you lie Itano.”
“Whatever you say, Maeda.”
And both giggled at their silly antics.
“Ne Tomochin…”
“Hmm…?”
“So, about my favor?” And the blond girl found herself groaning again.
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Oh LOL! :rofl: I told ya, its very short...so yeah, Happy New Year everyone :) (better late than never :roll:)
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So it's going to be TomoAcchan ??
Update soon ^^
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A favor hein? Sounds interesting
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I'd really like to write this as a TomoAcchan, Sydney W, but I don't want the loyal fans of AtsuMina to go in rampage and kill me! :lol: and yes kahem, its a favor, one that Tomochin can't refuse. Anyways, this is the first time I'm writing an OS after so long so gimme a break, will ya? :lol:
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THE FAVORS
-A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 2-
Itano’s POV
I’m not a morning person, so what? Sue me then. And you can’t blame me that my childhood bestfriend was now sporting a nice bruise on her left arm. Who by the way was now sitting comfortably at the passenger side of my car while happily eating creampuffs and smudging her nose with it. Such a child. Which she automatically defended that everyone becomes a child when eating creampuffs. Riggghtt! Like someone would believe that crap she made up.
“I’m so so happy that you’ll drive me there.”
I rolled my eyes at the ridiculousness of her statement. How can I turn down such favor when she was being all sweet and cuddly? And that I love her to the core of her bones was an already enough reason for me to give in. But it won’t hurt to guilt trip her for this. We’re talking about my sleeping hours being robbed from me after all.
“Of course, I’m such a really really good friend to sacrifice my sleeping time to drive you in Nagoya. Which by the way was only, I dunno like a 5-hour drive? I have such a good heart to do this for you then.” The sarcasm in my voice was oozing and was clearly evident, but it seems my bestfriend didn’t faze. Or she was completely ignoring my blatant attack of making her feel guilty as she continues to put creampuffs on her mouth. Playing the airhead card, huh?
“Bestfriend.”
She said after swallowing a chunk of creampuffs. I glanced at her momentarily as I turn the car towards Tomei Expressway, a little confused to her one word spouting. When I didn’t say anything back to her, she took my silence as a query to her earlier word. Though I clearly know she’s talking about me, me being her bestfriend.
“Firstly, you’re not my friend but my precious bestfriend.” I told ya, didn’t I?
“Secondly, I know you have a good heart because if not then we’re not in this road right now enduring a 5-hour drive towards Nagoya.” Atsuko pointed out, a cheeky smile on her face.
“And lastly, because you love me you really don’t have a choice but to concede-” She quickly put the hand that wasn’t holding a creampuff up to stop me from saying anything when she saw me threw a glare at her.
“-with my favor. And those we’re only part of the million reasons why I love you to the roots of your blond hair.” So she wasn’t using the airhead card, it was the being affectionate card all along. And as sappy as it sounds, it washed all away my very tiny grudge for waking me up early in the morning and making me drive to another prefecture.
Knowing she already won our unofficial battle, she smiled that nose-crinkling smile towards me which I scoffed as a response. Heck! I do not admit defeat... yet.
“Whatever, but you so owe me big time for this, Maeda.” My words only made her smile her trademark smile which prompted me to finally smile back at her. My right arm left momentarily the steering wheel to wipe the cream off of her nose. She giggled while mumbling ‘eyes on the road, Tomochin’ before giving me a kiss on the cheek. Guess this just prove I can’t say no to a Maeda Atsuko favor.
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The time we arrived at our destination it was already noontime. The heat of the sun was seeping through the material I was wearing, making me sweat profusely. Atsuko was no better because she was sweating just like me. My stomach also wasn’t helping in the situation since it was protesting; it wants to get feed like this very instant. That’s why I almost jump in clear happiness when I saw our lunch already waiting for us. I immediately found myself settling at one of the chairs in the dining room, grabbing food after food as I placed it on my own plate. I practically tuned out everyone until a distinct voice snapped me out of my eagerness to devour the food in front of me.
“I’m glad Tomomi-chan finds my cooking to her delight, but please remember to chew it properly before swallowing, alright sweetie?” Even though it was a known fact that I have a huge appetite, it still embarrasses me a little when someone pointed it out for me. But then, it was Auntie Sakiko so I’m not embarrass at all, hence it made me smile even.
“Mama, Tomochin can swallow a whole cow without getting choke, that’s like her innate talent or something.” The brat opposite from me said, grinning widely at me. Her comment made Atsuko erupted into a fit of light laughs, Auntie Sakiko doing the same which made me turn my full glare towards the bratty perpetuator.
“Har-har that was so funny.” I said to the brat, my glare still in place.
“It was.” Atsuko readily agrees, smirking towards me.
“See? My jokes are hilarious.” The brat announced triumphantly, doing an arm pump. A tag team, huh? I glared to my bestfriend sitting beside me.
“I’m just saying.” She shrugged her shoulders before turning her attention back to her food. When she noticed I’m still glaring at her, she pointed to my plate. Right, food first and then maiming the brat and Atsuko later.
If you’re wondering who’s the brat was, I suggest you stop that thought immediately. Because after I finish eating you’ll probably won’t hear about her again. She’s a devils spawn that I need to get rid of. I’m joking. The brat’s name was Matsui Jurina, Atsuko’s cousin. We actually quite get along with each other. She’s a cool kid when she’s not trying to get under my skin. I’ve practically know her when she’s still in her baby diapers, meaning I know a secret or two about her that if she pisses me big time she’ll never wants to leave her house again. But what I am trying to say was that the Matsui’s are a family to me as I am to them.
“Now play nice girls.” Auntie Sakiko chided but the smile on her face gives away that she wasn’t really mad at our harmless banters. I smiled sweetly at her as I discreetly elbowed my bestfriend lightly and kicking Jurina’s leg under the table, making them both choked with their food at the same time. I chuckled inwardly seeing the cousins scrambled to reach for their respective glass of water while glaring at me.
“Atsuko-chan, Jurina-chan what did I say about chewing the food properly?”
“Food went down the wrong pipe, Mama. It happens all the time.”
“Especially when there’s an external force that made you choke on purpose.”
“I agree with them, Auntie Sakiko. So where’s Uncle Masato?” I smiled widely at the cousins when the only adult present didn’t even realized my small trick, and silently congratulated myself for changing the topic wisely, leaving the cousins to grunt in displeasure.
“He’s at the fishing center with his friends. They were talking about a fishing competition. I’m not really sure but as long as he’s enjoying then who am I to complain.” Aunt Sakiko laughed and I nodded in return.
“Why don’t you girls go down at the fishing center? Maybe check up on him if he’s winning.”
“Oh come on, Mama. We all know that Papa sucks at fishing.” The brat said, frowning lightly as she bends down on her chair like she was picking up something under the table. I figured she was probably rubbing the leg I kicked. Now I feel a little guilty.
“Jurina, watch your language, and yes your Papa isn’t good in fishing.” Aunt Sakiko admonished, but she smiled after a while.
“Uhm..Auntie, is it okay if we drop by the fishing center later? I kind of made plans already.” This made my brow arched towards the brat, silently asking her about the plans Atsuko mentioned. She shrugged her shoulders in response. And when I glanced to my bestfriend, she was absently playing at the salad on her plate as she waited for the go signal from Auntie Sakiko.
“Of course, Atsuko-chan. You teens would probably just get bored watching the adults do their fishing match.”
“Thanks Auntie.” Atsuko smiled instantly, her smile so wide one would think she won the lottery or something.
Now that I think about it, my bestfriend was acting kind of secretive these past few months. And the fact she begged me to drive her here where she can actually ask their driver instead, clicked something in my head. Atsuko was keeping something from me, and I bet it’s something big.
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“I call shotgun.” Jurina yelled, running towards my car while purposely bumping my shoulder. I almost kissed the ground if it wasn’t for the arm that protectively wrapped on my waist, saving my pretty face in a nick of time.
“Hey!”
I yelled at the brat, giving her my most icy glare ever but she only mocking smiled back at me.
“I’m sorry, but that was for kicking me earlier.” The nerve of this brat. And to think I felt guilty for kicking her. She grinned triumphantly when I didn’t say anything to defend myself.
“That’s what I thought.” She added smugly before jumping at the passenger side. Her hand immediately found the switch to turn the radio on, bouncing her head when the music flooded the interior of my car.
“Can’t say you didn’t deserve that.” My savior said behind me, arms still wrapped on my waist in case I decided to give the brat a bump in the head.
“Yeah, whatever.” I replied in a bored tone, prying my bestfriend’s arm gently as I started to walk back inside the house but to be only pulled back. I was only feigning this hurt act to see what persuading technique she would use on me. And guess what?
“Tomochin…”
–it’s the pouting technique while tugging at the hem of my pink tee. I rolled my eyes; a small smile appeared at the corner of my mouth.
“I didn’t get the memo where I become you’re official driver, Maeda.” I scoffed at her, playfully punching her arm as I strode towards my car.
“And I so love you too, Itano.” She replied in a cheerful voice as I ease behind the steering wheel... again. Her toothy smile reflected in the front mirror when she finally seated herself at the backseat.
“So where to?”
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After a 15-minute drive I found myself staring at the stone plate on the wall we passed along the way as we enter a certain vicinity. Written in bold letters was Nagoya Public Highshool.
“So what exactly are we doing here, Atsuko-nee? Its summer break and being in school was the last thing on my mind.” Jurina asked as she turns off the music when I stopped the car that seems to be the parking lot of the school.
My thoughts exactly as I was about to voice it out, but the brat beats me to it. I patted her shoulder instead, completely agreeing with her.
“I promised I’ll meet someone here.” Was her only reply, not even looking at us as she yanked the door open. Oookay, this is major weird because I haven’t seen Atsuko this timid or shy about something before. Now it was crystal clear that my bestfriend was keeping a secret from me. What it is about soon I’m going to find out, and I’m pretty sure about it.
“Someone’s being secretive.” Jurina singed song while climbing out my car. My eyes trailed at the back of my bestfriend as she paced across the parking lot, the brat catching up behind her. When the cousins realized I’m not following them Jurina looked back.
“You coming or not?”
Walking side by side with the cousins who were taking animatedly, I glanced up the building were heading into. I’ve been here before because of Prefectural Tournament being held here last year. I’m a futsal player and our team was the one representing for the Tokyo-Ken. And yes, our team was awesome like that and I have the right to brag about it.
Nearing our destination, my thoughts lead back as to why my bestfriend dragged me out here in Nagoya. She has ulterior motive to do so and that I know now. But the question is, what is it exactly?
‘THUD’
The swishing sound in the air and the distinct thud broke me out of my thoughts, my eyes following the object that caught my attention.
‘THUD’
Another one.
‘THUD’
And there goes the third one.
“Sweet! How cool is that, right Tomochin?” Jurina nudged me, her eyes never leaving the object. She was staring at it with amazement so obvious in her hazel eyes.
“Sugoi…” Atsuko whispered, also amazed. I mean, who wouldn’t?
“And I thought this only happens in movies.” I’m really impressed. Three arrows hitting bull’s-eye less than a minute. I have to give it to the girl; she really knows her thing with bows and arrows.
“Maybe I should try joining the Archery Club next year. It’s so cool, she’s so amazingly cool.” The brat gushed on, staring dreamily at the girl wearing a navy blue Hakama. If I wasn’t involve to any sports right now I would love to learn the art of Kyudo.
“I never doubt Rena’s skills to garner fans now and then.”
An amused voice said behind us. When I turned around to connect the voice to a face, my periphery caught the wide smile already plastered on my bestfriend’s face. It was nothing compared to the smile she gives to me or to our friends. It was more expressive, more feelings were put into it and her eyes says it all. It was sparkling and I’ve never seen it so alive before, not until now.
And just like in the movies, everything was moving in a slow-motion as I watch Atsuko made two long strides before throwing herself to a girl. Her arms automatically envelop the girl in a bone crushing hug. And if I’m not imagining things, both were wearing adorable blush on their faces. I continued to stare at them, wracking my brain to put a name to that familiar face before me. And in cue, my bestfriend answered my unspoken question.
“Minami…”
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If you're asking if its a love triangle between Tomo, Taka and Atsu, nope it isn't :yep:
It's clearly AtsuMina that shows the great bond of TomoAcchan friendship :lol:
So, AtsuMina fans at ease now and put your swords back to its sheath, a'right? :nervous
And a shout out to Megumi, kahem and Ryo Hiroshi for pressing the arigatou button! :thumbup
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Yea!! Thank you for the Update :D
I'm glad that it's Atsumina XD
And its getting intersting :thumbsup
Please update soon :mon cute:
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:bow: :rofl: TmchinxAcchanxJurina hilarious moment!
Rena made a cameo! hehehe
I laughed when Tomochin described the slow motion scene between Acchan & Takamina...
Can't wait for the next update!
Arígatou! :kneelbow:
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If you're asking if its a love triangle between Tomo, Taka and Atsu, nope it isn't :yep:
It's clearly AtsuMina that shows the great bond of TomoAcchan friendship :lol:
So, AtsuMina fans at ease now and put your swords back to its sheath, a'right? :nervous
And a shout out to Megumi, kahem and Ryo Hiroshi for pressing the arigatou button! :thumbup
I wasn't planning to attack you with my sword XD but okay, I forgive you :pimp:
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Relieved. Luckily is Atsumina. I was wondering TomoAcchan earlier but the end is Atsumina. ^^
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Ahahah! The restaurant scene is so funny!
So Acchan wants to introduce Takamina to Tomochin?
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I love ur shots, plzzzz update soon!!!!!!!!! :cow:
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ok!! *keep her sword down*
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MOAR ATSUYUU!!! AND TOMOACCHAN!!!! DON'T FORGET ATSUMARI!!!
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Yuri Case No.2 continue this please???
really like!!!!
UPDATE SOON
thanks
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First of all I want to apologize for somewhat abandoning my ff :bow: :bow: :bow: but I somehow got my muse back and continued some of ff in my desktop XD XD I'm not good at writing ff now, especially most of my favorite akb members already graduated :bleed eyes:
Yagami.Rai - Yes, it is Atsumina and a subtle TomoAcchan. Gomen ne, I can't help myself since im a TomoAcchan fan :lol:
Megumi - I'm glad you find that scene hilarious. I really want to make Jurina antagonize Tomo as much as she can XD :P and i will try to make more scene for the W Matsui :P
Tanchan - I'll take it your an AtsuMina loyal fan nee~ :nervous :nervous :nervous Don't worry, as ive said this is TakAcchan :peace:
Sydney W - Hahaha did i scare you? yes, that's what i want. nanchatte~ :P I don't know but I really like the concept of TomoAcchan so I may write this with a subtext of TomoAtsu
Kahem – Yes, that’s what Atsuko’s plan :lol:. Introduce her girlfriend to her bestfriend. Acchan was sly for forcing Tomochin to drive her to Nagoya hahaha :twothumbs
Sone12 – ohhh thanks for liking my cases :bow:…I will try to get back on writing soon. :nervous
Haruko - yesss, keep that sword to its sheath :panic:. Though I somewhat deserve to be slayed haha :nervous
Ashurax – whoaaa :w00t:! Nakama!!!! :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup We TomoAcchan shippers are rare so we should stick together. XD I will try to write more about them, and also AtsuYuu. :peace:
Archer1992 – Oh! About the case2, oh well :P. Don’t worry, I’m writing Takamina’s POV now so matte te ne? :nervous
And shout out to these amazing peepz who likes my case3: badsaints, Yagami.Rai, Loveforever, dee1711, s34l, anoni2, Megumi, Tanchan, kahem, Ryo Hiroshi, turlde, miayaka, Elo, tfme3638 :bow:
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Okayyy, so here’s a little update from me after over a year has passed :nervous. My writing skills are very rusty so forgive me! :bow: :bow:
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THE FAVORS
-A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 3-
Maeda’s POV
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Alright… I know, okay? Asking my bestfriend to drive me to Nagoya was over the top and was making me feel guilty, especially when I didn’t tell her the reason. And keeping secrets from her? Uh-it makes me the most horrible bestfriend ever. It’s not like I don’t want to tell Tomochin, and rather than tell her I thought it’s better to show her instead. Saves me a lot of time to explain things, hence where my favor comes in.
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“Minami…”
The instant my eyes found hers, I can’t help but embraced her, hold her. I want her close to me so that I can feel her. It’s been like forever since the last time she’s in my arms like this. I so missed her, Minami.
“Uh, hey-uh Acchan…”
Her stuttering and flustered face was so adorable…Minami was so adorably cute, but I don’t find her cute when she only patted my back awkwardly when I’m giving her the hugest hug. I want her to hug me back.
“A-hem!”
It was my grinning cousin who interrupted my not so lovely reunion with Minami, and sadly I have to let her go. Reluctantly, if you ask me.
“What do we have here?” Jurina eyed me, and she smirked when Minami refuses to look at her. Oh no, please not now, I really don’t want Juri-chan to tease Minami when she haven’t officially meet my best friend yet. And looking at Tomochin right now, I’m betting Minami needs tons of courage and confidence whatever Tomo throws her way.
“Atsuko-nee, you didn’t ever mention you were this closed to, Takahashi-senpai.” Jurina brought her two index fingers together, enunciating how close I am to her senpai. Juri-chan, you’re not helping by pointing out the obvious here, mou…
Seeing as I don’t know how to explain things right now, I giggled nervously and unconsciously looped my left arm to Minami’s right. And right now, I’m trying very hard to deflect Tomochin’s laser beam stares.
“We uh-met last year during the Inter-High.” Minami scratched her cheek shyly as Tomochin continues to send her laser beams. While I’m the epitome of being relaxed and giddy, I’m actually scared what Tomo would do to me…or to my Minami.
“I-uh nice to see you again, Itano-san.” That snapped out Tomo from whatever she’s doing, like scaring the heck out of me and Minami. I congratulate Minami internally for finally meeting my bestfriend’s eyes, though I can feel she was nervous. I can’t blame her; Tomochin can be scary if she wants to, especially when she left a remarkable stunt by kicking a rival player during the championship in Futsal last year.
“Yeah, you too.” I flinched inwardly when Tomo coldly replied. Her straight face and clenched fist says it all, she wasn’t thrilled by this meeting at all. This is bad.
“Okay, that’s all for today. Let’s meet again tomorrow, same time everyone.”
The announcement made by that amazing girl, Rena I think, catches our attention. I never felt so glad for the interruption till now, the awkwardness was stifling. Then an idea hit me. Tomochin is a sports girl, so in what way to break the ice between my two favorite person? A friendly game.
“Ne Minami, do you have extra Hakama here?” I asked her, keeping the mirth in my voice with the idea flowing inside my head.
“Yeah, why?” She asked skeptically, sensing what I’m about to say.
“Because you’re going to teach us the art of Kyudo.” I smiled widely.
“Hell yes! I’m in.”
My cousin readily agrees and I thank the heavens they made Jurina athletic….as for my bestfriend. Ah! My beloved blonde was already arching her perfect eyebrows towards me. I pouted at her, one of my weapons against her stubbornness. Eep! Bad move, Atsuko. She was now arching her brows, arms akimbo while tapping her right foot on the ground. Oh no! The deadly combinations, these are the signs that Tomo’s cold demeanor is leveling up.
And before Tomochin can open her mouth to refuse, I let go of Minami’s arm and with wide strides I was instantly in front of my bestfriend, pulling her in a hug. She was surprised by my randomness act of showing my affection. My cousin beside her was shaking her head while smiling, she probably knows I’m about to use my ultimate weapon in persuading my ever beloved stubborn bestfriend, and before I burry my head in Tomochin’s neck I saw Minami frowned. Jealous maybe?
“Please, Tomo? For me? I just want my two favorite girls to know each other or get along?” I whispered to her ear, hope evident in my voice as I pleaded.
Tomochin is stubborn when she already made her decision and the only way to change her mind is to kill her with kindness and affections. I know it’s not right to take advantage of her weakness, that’s why I’m only using this technique once in a while..err, fine. I did it every chance I got whenever I want something that she can only get or do. But this time, it’s for real. I’m doing this for…well, myself but most importantly for Minami.
She sighed, warm breathe touches my bare neck and it made me shiver. “I guess it won’t hurt to try this Kyudo thing.” She whispered back giving me a squeeze before letting go of me. I squealed excitedly, mouthing an ‘I love you’ to her which she only rolled her eyes off before I latch myself to Minami again.
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‘Thud’
Missed.
‘Thud’
Missed again.
‘Thud’
Missed again and again.
There’s a reason why I belonged to the ‘going-home-girl-after-school’ club. I’m so klutzy and I’m not good with any sports. It was like I’m the total opposite of Juri-chan and Tomochin, but hey I’m kind of good with Calligraphy, that should count something, right?
“Uhmm, Acchan, you’re supposed to hit the target not the wall.”
“I’m trying.”
‘Thud’.
Another missed.
“This is so frustrating, why can’t I hit the target?” I whined at Minami, handing her my bow and arrow.
“Relax. This is the first time you held a bow so cut yourself some slack. Firs timers tend to miss their target or not hit the target at all.” She patted my head good-naturedly and smiled at me. I smiled back, a smiling Minami makes my heart pace gallops. I love her smile more than anyone. And I believed her, if she said first timers tend to miss their target then I don’t have a reason to doubt her.
‘Thud’
“Awesome. You hit bull’s eye on your first try. I’m not gonna lose to you, Tomochin.”
‘Thud’
“Nice try, brat.”
“Darn it, I almost hit bull’s eye. Ne, Rena-chan did you see that? I almost hit bull’s eye.”
“Still missed the target though.”
“Shut up, Tomochin. I’ll show you how good I am.”
I looked pointedly at Minami, raising my eyebrows as I gestured to my cousin and bestfriend. Didn’t she just tell me beginners tend to miss their target? But it seemed my bestfriend was doing pretty well, same with my cousin.
“Uhmm…those two were exceptional, I guess. Besides, it’s our Ace Rena the one teaching them.” Minami laughs nervously, trying to cheer me up seeing the frown on my face. Honestly, I really don’t care whether I hit the target or not, my goal is for my bestfriend and uhmm girlfriend to get along, but it’s not happening in the slightest when Tomochin decided to join my cousin and Rena instead of us.
“Acchan…” she called softly when I planted a fake sad pout.
“Look, how about we go to this ice cream shop we went before-”
“-or you can give me a hug instead.” I cut her, my eyes challenging. What? I haven’t received a soft hug from her, only a pat on my back. What kind of girlfriend gives a greeting like that?
“Uh-hug?” She asked nervously. Her hands were fidgeting, bow and arrow now forgotten. I nodded at her.
“R-right now?” She looks sideways where my cousin and bestfriend boring holes at their targets. I frowned. I’m not surprised Tomochin nailed this Kyudo art but Juri-chan as well? I feel so incompetent so I need Minami’s hug to make me feel better.
“Yes, now. Be glad I’m not asking you to kiss me.” I smirked when her eyes widened. Minami was just so adorable I can’t help but tease her. Though I really don’t mind if she’s really going to kiss me, well if she has the guts to do so which I totally doubt.
“Acchan! Are you trying to get me killed by your bestfriend?”
“No, I just want a hug from Minami.” I pouted cutely at her as I open my arms. She scowled, looking down then sideways. I bet she’s having an internal turmoil whether to give in or not.
A wide smile broke into my face when she finally steps into my open arms. Hmm...I love this feeling of her being close to me, but I love it more when she’s hugging me back, like right now.
“Minami…” I whispered to her ear.
“What a big baby…” She huffed and it made me giggle. Sooo tsundere. When I glanced at Tomochin’s way to see if she was watching us I saw her talking to her phone instead. I frowned. I want to spend time with her, with me and my girlfriend but somehow I got this feeling it might be hard. And looking at her face right now, I can tell my perfect summer vacation wouldn’t be perfect as I envisioned.
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There :lol: maybe 2 more chapters then I would end it hahaha :twisted:
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A long way to make Tomochin and Minami get along...
What's going to happen next?
What's Atsuko going to do to make them get along?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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I like TomoAtsu too so you can throw them in as much as you like (and don't forget Atsumina mm of course) and yes, I'm an Atsumina fan 8).
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hahahahaha
very Funny, what are you doing atsuko???
Thanks and Update soon ^^
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You're baaaaaaaaack.....Lol Acchan.... :lol: She really knows how to deal with our fave tsundere. Who's Tomochin calling to? Tomo~mi? :?
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If it's really Tomo~mi, then it's gonna be a best friends battle~ Who's more affectionate, Atsumina or WTomo~? And probably a third party, Jurina the crazy kid and Lolicon Rena~? And for some reason God would send out angels in the battlefield to aide the warriors! Their names being Yuki, Mayu, Yuk-
Okay, I'll shut up.
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I bet it's chiyuu, atsumina and tomoxtomo pairing great nice great nice great! :3
I'm biased XD
This is funny keep it up :jphip:
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Comments Response: :)
Cisda83 – Lol, you’re right :lol:. It will be hard to get Tomochin and Minami to get along. Though with Atsuko’s power of persuasion I guess will get into that. XD XD
Tanchan – I will try really hard to put some TomoAcchan as much as I can XD XD XD. You will see it in the later chapters, it will be more obvious then wahahahha :grin:
Archer1992 – Thanks for the constant support of this ff by reading! :) :) :) Just bare with me more because I’m still getting back into writing again. hahaha :peace:
Stv-wong – Yessss, I’m back from the dead :cow:. It was so hard climbing out from the whole I was hiding wahahahaha :grin:. Yes, Atsuko is sly like that :D; she’ll do anything to get what she wants. And for the mysterious caller, you’ll know in the next chaper. XD
AshuraX – hahaha I love how you guys instantly think its Tomo~mi who called Tomo XD XD XD. And yesss it would be epic, the bestfriend’s battle that is. And for the affectionate couple, let’s just see about that :P. And thanks for leaving a comment, I’ll try to write as I fast as I can. :)
Miayaka – It’s okay to be biased because I’m doing the same thing hahahaha XD XD XD I’m a fan of AKB way back since 2009 so I’m more likely to write those pairings you mention. Te-hee :peace: :nervous XD
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Douzo :nervous
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THE FAVORS
-A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 4-
Maeda’s POV
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It turned out it was Yuko who called my bestfriend, and I found out she need’s Tomo’s assistance. For what that I don’t know. But one thing I know is for sure, Oshima Yuko is not going to take my bestfriend away from me or ruin my planned summer vacation with my Minami and bestfriend. That if I can help it, which is why I’m currently running in the hallways of Minami’s school. You’re asking why? Its because…
“Maeda! You get your butt to stop running this instant.” I heard my blonde bestfriend yelled meters away from me. By the looks she’s giving me right now there’s no way I would do what she’s asking.
“Yadda! You’re not going back to Tokyo till I say so.” I yelled back at her, panting lightly from exertion.
“Dammit! You’re not my mother so give me my keys back.” She yelled again, still running after me. You see, when I found out Yuko needs her back from Tokyo I skillfully stole her car keys from her pocket and run away.
“Uh…Acchan, why am I running as well?” Minami asked beside me. When I run away, of course I didn’t forget to grab my girlfriend with me. Who knows what Tomo will do to her. She might even use my Minami as a hostage to exchange for her keys.
“Do you want Tomo to kick you too?” I asked jokingly as her eyes widened while shaking her head side to side. Hmm…even in a frightened state my Minami is still so cute. I giggled inwardly.
“Right! Let’s keep running.” She replied and flinched when she glanced back to find my bestfriend giving her trademark death glares.
“Ne, ne Rena-chan, this is fun, right?”
Asked Juri-chan to Rena-san who was forcefully involved in our situation. The latter only smiled uncomfortably as my cousin drags her into running with her. Looking at her running in hakama was kind of hilarious, that is why it was hard not to erupt in laughter. Though I reminded myself to apologize to her later for my cousin’s behavior.
“Oi brat, stop flirting and get your cousin to stop running already.” My bestfriend barked at my smiling cousin. She’s enjoying this too much.
“Atsu-nee, anytime now. Come on, stop running.” Juri-chan sing-songed from behind me. When I looked back at her, I saw her skipping? While swinging Rena’s hand.
“Juri-chan, you supposed to be on my side.” I whined, still running. At this rate I’m going to run out of oxygen any moment and that is totally bad for me.
“Gomen, Atsu-nee! Tomochin paid me a lot.” She excitedly said back.
“Damn right! So do your job.”
“Aye! Aye! Captain Itano.”
With that she suddenly sprinted, surprising Rena-san who was caught off guard by the sudden change pace.
My eyes widened comically as she gained on us pretty fast. At first I was confident I can out run my bestfriend. Yes, she’s a futsal player, specifically the ace player of their team. So there’s no really an argument that she would catch me, the girl who belongs to going-home-after-school club. But as her bestfriend who knows her the most, I knew she wouldn’t risk ruining her designer boots running after me. After all, she’s not just known as the futsal ace player but also the fashionable Queen of Shibuya. What I didn’t count into the equation is for my cunning blonde bestfriend bribing my dear cousin.
“Acchan, this way.” My girlfriend suddenly took a right turn, taking me with her. With that, our so called pursuers lost sight of us momentarily. And with ease, Minami slides the door open to one of the classrooms as she pulled me inside.
“Shh…” she gestured quietly, and seconds later I heard the running footsteps and murmurs of my bestfriend and cousin plus Rena-san as they passed us by unknowingly.
I sighed of relief escaped from my mouth as I heard their voices growing faint. All I need now is to buy more time. If I can do that then I can somehow prevent my blonde bestfriend from going back to Tokyo, consequences be damned.
“So, what now?” My Minami asked, taking a peek at the small transparent window at the upper corner of the door.
I ignored her and looked around instead and pass the open window. A smile crept into my face when I noticed the sun almost setting. I looked back to my girlfriend who was still peeking outside from the small window. A thought crossed my mind as I suddenly enveloped her in a hug from behind. She yelped in surprise.
“A-Atsuko…w-what do you think you’re doing?” I giggled. Minami is so cute being all shy, so I decided to tease her more by nuzzling my nose to her neck.
“Minami…you smell so good.” I purred into her ear and I felt her shiver.
“Atsuko…s-stop that.” I ignored her pleading and bit her ear instead. She jumped in surprised, knocking my forehead accidentally whilst letting her go at the same time.
“Ittai…” I muttered while touching my forehead.
“B-baka, it’s your own fault.”
“But you don’t have to head-butt me.” I pouted cutely at her. I know it’s not her fault but I’m trying to milk my injury for Minami’s caring side to appear. Surprisingly it’s working as she walked closer to me, prying my hand from my forehead gently to check for any injuries.
“Tsk…you big baby, it’s only a tiny bump.”
“But its still hurts.”
“You’ll live.”
“You’re so mean, Minami-meanie.” I feigned being hurt, rubbing my forehead for more effects.
Why can’t she just be sweet now that we’re alone? Does it kill her being affectionate to me once in a while? I grimaced inwardly when a certain blonde crossed my mind. Kami-sama, these two are really much like two peas in a pod.
“Am I not important to you, Minami-meanie?” I asked while trying to muster the saddest expression I can make. If my Minami won’t show her caring side then I’ll force it out of her.
“W-What are you talking about? Of course you’re important. That’s a stupid question, insulting even.” A frown appeared on her face. I’m only teasing her but she took my question seriously. Really, this girl has to loosen a bit.
Smiling softly at her, I tugged at her hand to bring her closer to me. She stumbled a little and quickly put her free hand to my shoulder to steady herself. She mumbled something about pulling people without warning is dangerous. I only chuckled at her adorableness. When she looked up at me, she instantly looked away as a blush slowly appeared on her face due to our close proximity. Ahhh! My Minami is so adorably cute and sadly oh very shy as well.
“You’re so shy.” I voiced out, tugging her more closely to me.
“And I’m sorry for teasing you so much. You’re right, that’s a stupid question, and I know I’m important to you as you are to me. After all, Minami is the only one for me.” I smiled at her while softly touching her cheek.
“Baka! Stop saying embarrassing things.” My Minami blushed even more. But contrary to what she said, she leaned more to my touch. Slowly, she looked up to meet my gaze. I can see she was fighting herself not to look away due to her shyness. And knowing she’s doing it for me makes me fall even harder to her.
“Atsuko is the only one for me too, just so you know.”
That instant I thought my heart stops beating, but I was wrong. It was actually beating loudly against my ribs it’s the only thing I can hear that it rendered me speechless. What’s more was that Minami said it without stuttering and with a soft expression on her face. I felt my cheeks getting warm by her sudden confession. If I’m not sure what to describe my feelings for Minami before, now I have a pretty clear idea what to call it. Love. I’m in love with my Minami.
Smiling back to my girlfriend I forgot all the restraints I had put to myself as I leaned in and captured her lips in a searing kiss. I can’t help but smiled into the kiss when I felt Minami kissed me back with the same passion and intensity. I felt like melting and floating in the air at the same time. Her lips are so soft I couldn’t resist in nipping it lightly. I was about to deepened the kiss when suddenly the door slides open with a loud bang.
“Mit-suke-ta AHHH!!”
“Oh my God, I can’t unseen that.”
“Ta-Takamina-san…ki-kissu?”
Three different reactions; when I felt like floating in the air before, now I left like burying myself underground being caught red-handed so to speak. But despite with wanting to disappear right now, I tried to read the one reaction that matters to me the most, Tomochin. I know she already knows my relation to Minami, but to see it out in the open without admitting to her first feels like I betrayed her trust. Like I failed as her bestfriend. I don’t want Tomo to think she’s not important to me. It’s the total opposite actually, she’s important as my Minami. As I’ve said, her opinion matters the most that is why I find it hard to tell her I already have a girlfriend. I’m afraid of what’s she’s going to say about Minami, her view of her. And considering her over-protective nature I wouldn’t be too surprise if she’ll give my girlfriend a hard time. We all know how scary Tomo can be.
Jumping away from my girlfriend I flinched when I saw the pointed stare my bestfriend was giving me. That is not good news for me. I may need a lot of courage to face her wrath later. For now I need to fix this.
“Seriously Atsu-nee, we don’t need to see that.” My cousin grumbled, hiding behind Rena-san who appears to be in a catatonic state.
“Ki-ki-ssu…?!”
“I think you just broke her.” Tomo gestures towards Rena-san.
“Both of them.” She added, nodding towards my girlfriend sprawled on the floor, eyes widened as she looks to my bestfriend while mumbling ‘I’ll take responsibility for my actions.’ I think my Minami was in a state of shock and panic for being caught kissing me by my bestfriend. Oh, poor Minami.
“I guess I did.
I said slowly, an awkward smile on my face.
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If you haven't read my TomoTomo, you can find it here ---> INDEX (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=30161.msg926870#msg926870)
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Oh Atsuko broke two people...
What kind of trouble Minami going to get from Tomo?
Can't wait to see the next
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Aww... shucks... I actually hoped there will be TomoTomo here.
lol at Acchan.... she broke two persons :lol:
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Funny thing is, Jurina was okay even though she's the youngest between them XD
And when I heard Yuko's name at the start, I thought "HELL YEAH ATSUYUU!!!!!!!!!!!!" but I guess I was wrong >3>
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Case 2 seems really interesting although I'm alergic to AtsuYuu or should I say hate....
And I'm in love with case 3!!!
You said it's not AtsuTomo but it sure looks like they like each other...
Poor Minami, indeed we know Tomo can be really scary..
Ah... the kiss...
Please update soon I want to read more!!