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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor-Update -01/12/12
« Reply #60 on: January 12, 2012, 07:23:27 PM »
So it's going to be TomoAcchan ??
Update soon ^^

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor-Update -01/12/12
« Reply #61 on: January 12, 2012, 10:34:09 PM »
A favor hein? Sounds interesting

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor-Update -01/12/12
« Reply #62 on: January 14, 2012, 03:08:13 PM »
I'd really like to write this as a TomoAcchan, Sydney W, but I don't want the loyal fans of AtsuMina to go in rampage and kill me! :lol: and yes kahem, its a favor, one that Tomochin can't refuse. Anyways, this is the first time I'm writing an OS after so long so gimme a break, will ya? :lol:


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THE FAVORS
-A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 2-

Itano’s POV

I’m not a morning person, so what? Sue me then. And you can’t blame me that my childhood bestfriend was now sporting a nice bruise on her left arm. Who by the way was now sitting comfortably at the passenger side of my car while happily eating creampuffs and smudging her nose with it. Such a child. Which she automatically defended that everyone becomes a child when eating creampuffs. Riggghtt! Like someone would believe that crap she made up.

“I’m so so happy that you’ll drive me there.”

I rolled my eyes at the ridiculousness of her statement. How can I turn down such favor when she was being all sweet and cuddly? And that I love her to the core of her bones was an already enough reason for me to give in. But it won’t hurt to guilt trip her for this. We’re talking about my sleeping hours being robbed from me after all.

“Of course, I’m such a really really good friend to sacrifice my sleeping time to drive you in Nagoya. Which by the way was only, I dunno like a 5-hour drive? I have such a good heart to do this for you then.” The sarcasm in my voice was oozing and was clearly evident, but it seems my bestfriend didn’t faze. Or she was completely ignoring my blatant attack of making her feel guilty as she continues to put creampuffs on her mouth. Playing the airhead card, huh?

“Bestfriend.”

She said after swallowing a chunk of creampuffs. I glanced at her momentarily as I turn the car towards Tomei Expressway, a little confused to her one word spouting. When I didn’t say anything back to her, she took my silence as a query to her earlier word. Though I clearly know she’s talking about me, me being her bestfriend.

“Firstly, you’re not my friend but my precious bestfriend.” I told ya, didn’t I?

“Secondly, I know you have a good heart because if not then we’re not in this road right now enduring a 5-hour drive towards Nagoya.” Atsuko pointed out, a cheeky smile on her face.

“And lastly, because you love me you really don’t have a choice but to concede-” She quickly put the hand that wasn’t holding a creampuff up to stop me from saying anything when she saw me threw a glare at her.

 “-with my favor. And those we’re only part of the million reasons why I love you to the roots of your blond hair.” So she wasn’t using the airhead card, it was the being affectionate card all along. And as sappy as it sounds, it washed all away my very tiny grudge for waking me up early in the morning and making me drive to another prefecture.

Knowing she already won our unofficial battle, she smiled that nose-crinkling smile towards me which I scoffed as a response. Heck! I do not admit defeat... yet.

“Whatever, but you so owe me big time for this, Maeda.” My words only made her smile her trademark smile which prompted me to finally smile back at her. My right arm left momentarily the steering wheel to wipe the cream off of her nose. She giggled while mumbling ‘eyes on the road, Tomochin’ before giving me a kiss on the cheek. Guess this just prove I can’t say no to a Maeda Atsuko favor.

~~

The time we arrived at our destination it was already noontime. The heat of the sun was seeping through the material I was wearing, making me sweat profusely. Atsuko was no better because she was sweating just like me. My stomach also wasn’t helping in the situation since it was protesting; it wants to get feed like this very instant. That’s why I almost jump in clear happiness when I saw our lunch already waiting for us. I immediately found myself settling at one of the chairs in the dining room, grabbing food after food as I placed it on my own plate. I practically tuned out everyone until a distinct voice snapped me out of my eagerness to devour the food in front of me.

“I’m glad Tomomi-chan finds my cooking to her delight, but please remember to chew it properly before swallowing, alright sweetie?” Even though it was a known fact that I have a huge appetite, it still embarrasses me a little when someone pointed it out for me. But then, it was Auntie Sakiko so I’m not embarrass at all, hence it made me smile even.

“Mama, Tomochin can swallow a whole cow without getting choke, that’s like her innate talent or something.” The brat opposite from me said, grinning widely at me. Her comment made Atsuko erupted into a fit of light laughs, Auntie Sakiko doing the same which made me turn my full glare towards the bratty perpetuator.

“Har-har that was so funny.” I said to the brat, my glare still in place.

“It was.” Atsuko readily agrees, smirking towards me.

“See? My jokes are hilarious.” The brat announced triumphantly, doing an arm pump. A tag team, huh? I glared to my bestfriend sitting beside me.

“I’m just saying.” She shrugged her shoulders before turning her attention back to her food. When she noticed I’m still glaring at her, she pointed to my plate. Right, food first and then maiming the brat and Atsuko later.

If you’re wondering who’s the brat was, I suggest you stop that thought immediately. Because after I finish eating you’ll probably won’t hear about her again. She’s a devils spawn that I need to get rid of. I’m joking. The brat’s name was Matsui Jurina, Atsuko’s cousin. We actually quite get along with each other. She’s a cool kid when she’s not trying to get under my skin. I’ve practically know her when she’s still in her baby diapers, meaning I know a secret or two about her that if she pisses me big time she’ll never wants to leave her house again. But what I am trying to say was that the Matsui’s are a family to me as I am to them.

“Now play nice girls.” Auntie Sakiko chided but the smile on her face gives away that she wasn’t really mad at our harmless banters. I smiled sweetly at her as I discreetly elbowed my bestfriend lightly and kicking Jurina’s leg under the table, making them both choked with their food at the same time. I chuckled inwardly seeing the cousins scrambled to reach for their respective glass of water while glaring at me.

“Atsuko-chan, Jurina-chan what did I say about chewing the food properly?”

“Food went down the wrong pipe, Mama. It happens all the time.”

“Especially when there’s an external force that made you choke on purpose.”
 
“I agree with them, Auntie Sakiko. So where’s Uncle Masato?” I smiled widely at the cousins when the only adult present didn’t even realized my small trick, and silently congratulated myself for changing the topic wisely, leaving the cousins to grunt in displeasure.

“He’s at the fishing center with his friends. They were talking about a fishing competition. I’m not really sure but as long as he’s enjoying then who am I to complain.” Aunt Sakiko laughed and I nodded in return.

“Why don’t you girls go down at the fishing center? Maybe check up on him if he’s winning.”

“Oh come on, Mama. We all know that Papa sucks at fishing.” The brat said, frowning lightly as she bends down on her chair like she was picking up something under the table. I figured she was probably rubbing the leg I kicked. Now I feel a little guilty.

“Jurina, watch your language, and yes your Papa isn’t good in fishing.” Aunt Sakiko admonished, but she smiled after a while.

“Uhm..Auntie, is it okay if we drop by the fishing center later? I kind of made plans already.” This made my brow arched towards the brat, silently asking her about the plans Atsuko mentioned. She shrugged her shoulders in response. And when I glanced to my bestfriend, she was absently playing at the salad on her plate as she waited for the go signal from Auntie Sakiko.

“Of course, Atsuko-chan. You teens would probably just get bored watching the adults do their fishing match.”
 
“Thanks Auntie.” Atsuko smiled instantly, her smile so wide one would think she won the lottery or something.

Now that I think about it, my bestfriend was acting kind of secretive these past few months. And the fact she begged me to drive her here where she can actually ask their driver instead, clicked something in my head. Atsuko was keeping something from me, and I bet it’s something big.

~~

“I call shotgun.” Jurina yelled, running towards my car while purposely bumping my shoulder. I almost kissed the ground if it wasn’t for the arm that protectively wrapped on my waist, saving my pretty face in a nick of time.

“Hey!”

I yelled at the brat, giving her my most icy glare ever but she only mocking smiled back at me.

“I’m sorry, but that was for kicking me earlier.” The nerve of this brat. And to think I felt guilty for kicking her. She grinned triumphantly when I didn’t say anything to defend myself.

“That’s what I thought.” She added smugly before jumping at the passenger side. Her hand immediately found the switch to turn the radio on, bouncing her head when the music flooded the interior of my car.

“Can’t say you didn’t deserve that.” My savior said behind me, arms still wrapped on my waist in case I decided to give the brat a bump in the head.

“Yeah, whatever.” I replied in a bored tone, prying my bestfriend’s arm gently as I started to walk back inside the house but to be only pulled back. I was only feigning this hurt act to see what persuading technique she would use on me. And guess what?

“Tomochin…”

 –it’s the pouting technique while tugging at the hem of my pink tee. I rolled my eyes; a small smile appeared at the corner of my mouth.

“I didn’t get the memo where I become you’re official driver, Maeda.” I scoffed at her, playfully punching her arm as I strode towards my car.

“And I so love you too, Itano.” She replied in a cheerful voice as I ease behind the steering wheel... again. Her toothy smile reflected in the front mirror when she finally seated herself at the backseat.

“So where to?”

~~

After a 15-minute drive I found myself staring at the stone plate on the wall we passed along the way as we enter a certain vicinity. Written in bold letters was Nagoya Public Highshool.

“So what exactly are we doing here, Atsuko-nee? Its summer break and being in school was the last thing on my mind.” Jurina asked as she turns off the music when I stopped the car that seems to be the parking lot of the school.

My thoughts exactly as I was about to voice it out, but the brat beats me to it. I patted her shoulder instead, completely agreeing with her.

“I promised I’ll meet someone here.” Was her only reply, not even looking at us as she yanked the door open. Oookay, this is major weird because I haven’t seen Atsuko this timid or shy about something before. Now it was crystal clear that my bestfriend was keeping a secret from me. What it is about soon I’m going to find out, and I’m pretty sure about it.

“Someone’s being secretive.” Jurina singed song while climbing out my car. My eyes trailed at the back of my bestfriend as she paced across the parking lot, the brat catching up behind her. When the cousins realized I’m not following them Jurina looked back.

“You coming or not?”


Walking side by side with the cousins who were taking animatedly, I glanced up the building were heading into. I’ve been here before because of Prefectural Tournament being held here last year. I’m a futsal player and our team was the one representing for the Tokyo-Ken. And yes, our team was awesome like that and I have the right to brag about it.

Nearing our destination, my thoughts lead back as to why my bestfriend dragged me out here in Nagoya. She has ulterior motive to do so and that I know now. But the question is, what is it exactly?

‘THUD’

The swishing sound in the air and the distinct thud broke me out of my thoughts, my eyes following the object that caught my attention.

‘THUD’

Another one.

‘THUD’

And there goes the third one.

“Sweet! How cool is that, right Tomochin?” Jurina nudged me, her eyes never leaving the object. She was staring at it with amazement so obvious in her hazel eyes.

“Sugoi…” Atsuko whispered, also amazed. I mean, who wouldn’t?

“And I thought this only happens in movies.” I’m really impressed. Three arrows hitting bull’s-eye less than a minute. I have to give it to the girl; she really knows her thing with bows and arrows.

“Maybe I should try joining the Archery Club next year. It’s so cool, she’s so amazingly cool.” The brat gushed on, staring dreamily at the girl wearing a navy blue Hakama. If I wasn’t involve to any sports right now I would love to learn the art of Kyudo.

“I never doubt Rena’s skills to garner fans now and then.”

An amused voice said behind us. When I turned around to connect the voice to a face, my periphery caught the wide smile already plastered on my bestfriend’s face. It was nothing compared to the smile she gives to me or to our friends. It was more expressive, more feelings were put into it and her eyes says it all. It was sparkling and I’ve never seen it so alive before, not until now.

And just like in the movies, everything was moving in a slow-motion as I watch Atsuko made two long strides before throwing herself to a girl. Her arms automatically envelop the girl in a bone crushing hug. And if I’m not imagining things, both were wearing adorable blush on their faces. I continued to stare at them, wracking my brain to put a name to that familiar face before me. And in cue, my bestfriend answered my unspoken question.

“Minami…”

~~

If you're asking if its a love triangle between Tomo, Taka and Atsu, nope it isn't :yep:
It's clearly AtsuMina that shows the great bond of TomoAcchan friendship :lol:
So, AtsuMina fans at ease now and put your swords back to its sheath, a'right? :nervous
And a shout out to Megumi, kahem and Ryo Hiroshi for pressing the arigatou button! :thumbup





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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 2-Update -01/14/12
« Reply #63 on: January 14, 2012, 07:41:20 PM »
Yea!! Thank you for the Update :D
I'm glad that it's Atsumina XD
And its getting intersting :thumbsup

Please update soon :mon cute:

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 2-Update -01/14/12
« Reply #64 on: January 14, 2012, 10:55:09 PM »
 :bow:  :rofl: TmchinxAcchanxJurina hilarious moment!
Rena made a cameo! hehehe

I laughed when Tomochin described the slow motion scene between Acchan & Takamina...

Can't wait for the next update!

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor-Update -01/12/12
« Reply #65 on: January 15, 2012, 04:03:44 AM »

If you're asking if its a love triangle between Tomo, Taka and Atsu, nope it isn't :yep:
It's clearly AtsuMina that shows the great bond of TomoAcchan friendship :lol:
So, AtsuMina fans at ease now and put your swords back to its sheath, a'right? :nervous
And a shout out to Megumi, kahem and Ryo Hiroshi for pressing the arigatou button! :thumbup

I wasn't planning to attack you with my sword  XD but okay, I forgive you :pimp:

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 2-Update -01/14/12
« Reply #66 on: January 15, 2012, 06:25:35 AM »
Relieved. Luckily is Atsumina. I was wondering TomoAcchan earlier but the end is Atsumina. ^^

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 2-Update -01/14/12
« Reply #67 on: January 15, 2012, 08:19:36 PM »
Ahahah! The restaurant scene is so funny!
So Acchan wants to introduce Takamina to Tomochin?

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 2-Update -01/14/12
« Reply #68 on: June 22, 2013, 11:12:49 PM »
I love ur shots, plzzzz update soon!!!!!!!!! :cow:

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 2-Update -01/14/12
« Reply #69 on: June 23, 2013, 01:17:34 AM »
ok!! *keep her sword down*

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 2-Update -01/14/12
« Reply #70 on: June 23, 2013, 12:43:07 PM »
MOAR ATSUYUU!!! AND TOMOACCHAN!!!! DON'T FORGET ATSUMARI!!!

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 2-Update -01/14/12
« Reply #71 on: July 01, 2013, 11:04:17 PM »
Yuri Case No.2 continue this please???

really like!!!!
UPDATE SOON

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 2-Update -01/14/12
« Reply #72 on: July 24, 2013, 09:46:30 AM »
First of all I want to apologize for somewhat abandoning my ff  :bow: :bow: :bow: but I somehow got my muse back and continued some of ff in my desktop  XD XD I'm not good at writing ff now, especially most of my favorite akb members already graduated  :bleed eyes:
Yagami.Rai  - Yes, it is Atsumina and a subtle TomoAcchan. Gomen ne, I can't help myself since im a TomoAcchan fan  :lol:
Megumi - I'm glad you find that scene hilarious. I really want to make Jurina antagonize Tomo as much as she can  XD :P and i will try to make more scene for the W Matsui  :P
Tanchan - I'll take it your an AtsuMina loyal fan nee~ :nervous :nervous :nervous Don't worry, as ive said this is TakAcchan  :peace:
Sydney W - Hahaha did i scare you? yes, that's what i want. nanchatte~ :P I don't know but I really like the concept of TomoAcchan so I may write this with a subtext of TomoAtsu
Kahem – Yes, that’s what Atsuko’s plan :lol:. Introduce her girlfriend to her bestfriend. Acchan was sly for forcing Tomochin to drive her to Nagoya hahaha :twothumbs
Sone12 – ohhh thanks for liking my cases :bow:…I will try to get back on writing soon. :nervous
Haruko -  yesss, keep that sword to its sheath :panic:. Though I somewhat deserve to be slayed  haha :nervous
Ashurax – whoaaa :w00t:! Nakama!!!! :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup We TomoAcchan shippers are rare so we should stick together. XD I will try to write more about them, and also AtsuYuu. :peace:
Archer1992 – Oh! About the case2, oh well :P. Don’t worry, I’m writing Takamina’s POV now so matte te ne?  :nervous

And shout out to these amazing peepz who likes my case3:  badsaints, Yagami.Rai, Loveforever, dee1711, s34l, anoni2, Megumi, Tanchan, kahem, Ryo Hiroshi, turlde, miayaka, Elo, tfme3638 :bow:
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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 2-Update -01/14/12
« Reply #73 on: July 24, 2013, 10:08:08 AM »
Okayyy, so here’s a little update from me after over a year has passed :nervous. My writing skills are very rusty so forgive me!  :bow: :bow:

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THE FAVORS
-A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 3-

Maeda’s POV
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Alright… I know, okay? Asking my bestfriend to drive me to Nagoya was over the top and was making me feel guilty, especially when I didn’t tell her the reason. And keeping secrets from her? Uh-it makes me the most horrible bestfriend ever. It’s not like I don’t want to tell Tomochin, and rather than tell her I thought it’s better to show her instead. Saves me a lot of time to explain things, hence where my favor comes in.
^
“Minami…”

The instant my eyes found hers, I can’t help but embraced her, hold her. I want her close to me so that I can feel her. It’s been like forever since the last time she’s in my arms like this. I so missed her, Minami.

“Uh, hey-uh Acchan…”

Her stuttering and flustered face was so adorable…Minami was so adorably cute, but I don’t find her cute when she only patted my back awkwardly when I’m giving her the hugest hug. I want her to hug me back.

“A-hem!”

It was my grinning cousin who interrupted my not so lovely reunion with Minami, and sadly I have to let her go. Reluctantly, if you ask me.

“What do we have here?” Jurina eyed me, and she smirked when Minami refuses to look at her. Oh no, please not now, I really don’t want Juri-chan to tease Minami when she haven’t officially meet my best friend yet. And looking at Tomochin right now, I’m betting Minami needs tons of courage and confidence whatever Tomo throws her way.

“Atsuko-nee, you didn’t ever mention you were this closed to, Takahashi-senpai.” Jurina brought her two index fingers together, enunciating how close I am to her senpai. Juri-chan, you’re not helping by pointing out the obvious here, mou…

Seeing as I don’t know how to explain things right now, I giggled nervously and unconsciously looped my left arm to Minami’s right. And right now, I’m trying very hard to deflect Tomochin’s laser beam stares.

 “We uh-met last year during the Inter-High.” Minami scratched her cheek shyly as Tomochin continues to send her laser beams. While I’m the epitome of being relaxed and giddy, I’m actually scared what Tomo would do to me…or to my Minami.

“I-uh nice to see you again, Itano-san.” That snapped out Tomo from whatever she’s doing, like scaring the heck out of me and Minami. I congratulate Minami internally for finally meeting my bestfriend’s eyes, though I can feel she was nervous. I can’t blame her; Tomochin can be scary if she wants to, especially when she left a remarkable stunt by kicking a rival player during the championship in Futsal last year.

“Yeah, you too.” I flinched inwardly when Tomo coldly replied. Her straight face and clenched fist says it all, she wasn’t thrilled by this meeting at all. This is bad.

“Okay, that’s all for today. Let’s meet again tomorrow, same time everyone.”

The announcement made by that amazing girl, Rena I think, catches our attention. I never felt so glad for the interruption till now, the awkwardness was stifling. Then an idea hit me. Tomochin is a sports girl, so in what way to break the ice between my two favorite person? A friendly game.

“Ne Minami, do you have extra Hakama here?” I asked her, keeping the mirth in my voice with the idea flowing inside my head.

“Yeah, why?” She asked skeptically, sensing what I’m about to say.

“Because you’re going to teach us the art of Kyudo.” I smiled widely.

“Hell yes! I’m in.”

My cousin readily agrees and I thank the heavens they made Jurina athletic….as for my bestfriend. Ah! My beloved blonde was already arching her perfect eyebrows towards me. I pouted at her, one of my weapons against her stubbornness. Eep! Bad move, Atsuko. She was now arching her brows, arms akimbo while tapping her right foot on the ground.  Oh no! The deadly combinations, these are the signs that Tomo’s cold demeanor is leveling up.
And before Tomochin can open her mouth to refuse, I let go of Minami’s arm and with wide strides I was instantly in front of my bestfriend, pulling her in a hug. She was surprised by my randomness act of showing my affection. My cousin beside her was shaking her head while smiling, she probably knows I’m about to use my ultimate weapon in persuading my ever beloved stubborn bestfriend, and before I burry my head in Tomochin’s neck I saw Minami frowned. Jealous maybe?

“Please, Tomo? For me? I just want my two favorite girls to know each other or get along?” I whispered to her ear, hope evident in my voice as I pleaded.

 Tomochin is stubborn when she already made her decision and the only way to change her mind is to kill her with kindness and affections. I know it’s not right to take advantage of her weakness, that’s why I’m only using this technique once in a while..err, fine. I did it every chance I got whenever I want something that she can only get or do. But this time, it’s for real. I’m doing this for…well, myself but most importantly for Minami.
She sighed, warm breathe touches my bare neck and it made me shiver. “I guess it won’t hurt to try this Kyudo thing.” She whispered back giving me a squeeze before letting go of me. I squealed excitedly, mouthing an ‘I love you’ to her which she only rolled her eyes off before I latch myself to Minami again.
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‘Thud’

Missed.

‘Thud’

Missed again.

‘Thud’


Missed again and again.

There’s a reason why I belonged to the ‘going-home-girl-after-school’ club. I’m so klutzy and I’m not good with any sports. It was like I’m the total opposite of Juri-chan and Tomochin, but hey I’m kind of good with Calligraphy, that should count something, right?

“Uhmm, Acchan, you’re supposed to hit the target not the wall.”

“I’m trying.”

‘Thud’.

Another missed.

“This is so frustrating, why can’t I hit the target?” I whined at Minami, handing her my bow and arrow.

“Relax. This is the first time you held a bow so cut yourself some slack. Firs timers tend to miss their target or not hit the target at all.” She patted my head good-naturedly and smiled at me. I smiled back, a smiling Minami makes my heart pace gallops. I love her smile more than anyone. And I believed her, if she said first timers tend to miss their target then I don’t have a reason to doubt her.

‘Thud’

“Awesome. You hit bull’s eye on your first try. I’m not gonna lose to you, Tomochin.”

‘Thud’

“Nice try, brat.”

“Darn it, I almost hit bull’s eye. Ne, Rena-chan did you see that? I almost hit bull’s eye.”

“Still missed the target though.”

“Shut up, Tomochin. I’ll show you how good I am.”

I looked pointedly at Minami, raising my eyebrows as I gestured to my cousin and bestfriend. Didn’t she just tell me beginners tend to miss their target? But it seemed my bestfriend was doing pretty well, same with my cousin.

“Uhmm…those two were exceptional, I guess. Besides, it’s our Ace Rena the one teaching them.” Minami laughs nervously, trying to cheer me up seeing the frown on my face. Honestly, I really don’t care whether I hit the target or not, my goal is for my bestfriend and uhmm girlfriend to get along, but it’s not happening in the slightest when Tomochin decided to join my cousin and Rena instead of us.

“Acchan…” she called softly when I planted a fake sad pout.

“Look, how about we go to this ice cream shop we went before-”

“-or you can give me a hug instead.” I cut her, my eyes challenging. What? I haven’t received a soft hug from her, only a pat on my back. What kind of girlfriend gives a greeting like that?

“Uh-hug?” She asked nervously. Her hands were fidgeting, bow and arrow now forgotten. I nodded at her.

“R-right now?” She looks sideways where my cousin and bestfriend boring holes at their targets. I frowned. I’m not surprised Tomochin nailed this Kyudo art but Juri-chan as well? I feel so incompetent so I need Minami’s hug to make me feel better.

“Yes, now. Be glad I’m not asking you to kiss me.” I smirked when her eyes widened. Minami was just so adorable I can’t help but tease her. Though I really don’t mind if she’s really going to kiss me, well if she has the guts to do so which I totally doubt.

“Acchan! Are you trying to get me killed by your bestfriend?”

“No, I just want a hug from Minami.” I pouted cutely at her as I open my arms. She scowled, looking down then sideways. I bet she’s having an internal turmoil whether to give in or not. 

A wide smile broke into my face when she finally steps into my open arms. Hmm...I love this feeling of her being close to me, but I love it more when she’s hugging me back, like right now.

“Minami…” I whispered to her ear.

“What a big baby…” She huffed and it made me giggle. Sooo tsundere. When I glanced at Tomochin’s way to see if she was watching us I saw her talking to her phone instead. I frowned. I want to spend time with her, with me and my girlfriend but somehow I got this feeling it might be hard. And looking at her face right now, I can tell my perfect summer vacation wouldn’t be perfect as I envisioned.
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There :lol: maybe 2 more chapters then I would end it hahaha  :twisted:
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Offline cisda83

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 3-Update -07/24/13
« Reply #74 on: July 24, 2013, 01:26:58 PM »
A long way to make Tomochin and Minami get along...

What's going to happen next?

What's Atsuko going to do to make them get along?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 3-Update -07/24/13
« Reply #75 on: July 24, 2013, 08:03:54 PM »
I like TomoAtsu too so you can throw them in as much as you like (and don't forget Atsumina mm of course) and yes, I'm an Atsumina fan 8).

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 3-Update -07/24/13
« Reply #76 on: July 24, 2013, 09:20:19 PM »
hahahahaha

very Funny, what are you doing atsuko???

Thanks and Update soon ^^

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 3-Update -07/24/13
« Reply #77 on: July 25, 2013, 04:30:33 PM »
You're baaaaaaaaack.....Lol Acchan.... :lol: She really knows how to deal with our fave tsundere. Who's Tomochin calling to? Tomo~mi? :?

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 3-Update -07/24/13
« Reply #78 on: July 25, 2013, 08:43:04 PM »
If it's really Tomo~mi, then it's gonna be a best friends battle~ Who's more affectionate, Atsumina or WTomo~? And probably a third party, Jurina the crazy kid and Lolicon Rena~? And for some reason God would send out angels in the battlefield to aide the warriors! Their names being Yuki, Mayu, Yuk-
Okay, I'll shut up.

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 3-Update -07/24/13
« Reply #79 on: July 26, 2013, 06:01:23 PM »
I bet it's chiyuu, atsumina and tomoxtomo pairing great nice great nice great! :3
I'm biased XD

This is funny keep it up  :jphip:

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