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Title: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 07) FINALLY UPDATED! :D
Post by: creamcracker on November 06, 2011, 05:57:23 PM
WHEN REBEL MEETS NICE
A SNEEK PEEK



OPPOSITES ATTRACTS, A LOT OF PEOPLE SAID IT
LIKE WHITE PEOPLE MARRYING BLACK PEOPLE
WHERE TALKATIVE FALLS IN LOVE WITH A SILENT TYPE
AND A THIN BOY HAVING A CRUSH ON A FAT GIRL


HAVE YOU EXPERIENCE FALLING IN LOVE?
I'M SURE YOU EXPERIENCED IT ALREADY
BUT

WHAT IF SHE/HE IS OPPOSITE TO YOUR IDEAL MAN/WOMAN?
WHAT IF SHE/HE CAN CHANGE YOU FOR BETTER OR FOR WORSE?
WHAT IF EVERYTHING IS RIGHT FOR YOU BUT IT'S WRONG FOR HIM/HER
DO YOU STILL WANT TO CONTINUE YOUR FEELINGS?
OR FORGET IT TO PROTECT YOURSELF FROM HEARTBREAK
and what will happen
WHEN REBEL MEETS NICE
WILL IT BE A HAPPY ENDING OR A WOUNDED FEELINGS




This is a takaachan/KaiAachan series brought to you by creamcracker
  :wub:
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: creamcracker on November 06, 2011, 06:00:58 PM
By the way this is my first time writing a fan fiction and I hope it will get your interest and attention. Please do comment or give me some advise because it will really help me a lot and I'm still a newbie. ^_^ .



:D
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: Sydney W on November 06, 2011, 06:18:20 PM
Let Acchan be rebel and kai be nice character. Pls post your storyline, cant wait to read it.
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: creamcracker on November 06, 2011, 06:32:36 PM
Sydney: yeah Aachan is rebel here and Kai is the nice one. I'll update soon when my dad is done fixing our Internet coz I saved it in my laptop but I'm using now an iPad. I promise I'll update 2 long chapters :D
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: blueangel65 on November 06, 2011, 06:48:46 PM
Yehey! New Fic to read..  XD
and by the way, WeLcome here creamcracker..  :welcome
I did'nt write Fics, I'm just a reader, so I don't have many ideas about making stories..
but I suggest to you to read all the Fics here, specially about your pairings, I know it will heLp..  :)
 Actually I'm Atsumina Fans, I like anything that about them, I like your opening and I think it's new,
well! that's all..  :) GOODLUCK OK!  :jphip: I hope your internet will be fixed fast, heHe! OK Thanks..  :D
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: creamcracker on November 06, 2011, 07:31:44 PM
Blue thanks for your warm welcome.  Yeah I hope too that our internet will be fixed as soon as possible. But while it is under construction bwhahaha I'm doing my fanfic now and I'm on chapter 5 already. :D
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE chapter 01
Post by: creamcracker on November 06, 2011, 11:43:45 PM
WHEN REBEL MEETS NICE
CHAPTER 01

(what if you meet someone at the wrong place at a wrong time? What if she is opposite to your dream girl? Do opposites really attracts? What if you meet someone who can change you and lastly what will happen if a rebel meets nice)  :huhuh :? :O :shocked

Kai-kun wake up it's already 7 o'clock in the morning and you still have job. Kai-kun , Kai-kun!

(I'm Takahashi Kai, 21 years old, a simple guy who lives in a simple life. Well others call me mr. Nice guy but I don't know why.Supposed to be I'm a college student now but instead I'm working to save money for the tuition fee. I'm a NGSB or no girlfriend since birth [what a shame  :banghead:]. I'm not picky to girls though but let us say I have an ideal girl, she must be nice,humble,honest,loyal and have similar chracteristics with me)

"I'm coming mom"

Sigh! It is supposed to be weekend but I have to work hard for my future. I was thinking

"I'll be going now mom, Ahh and by the way I'll be going home late alright?"

"Alright, take care of yourself son" mom answered

It was a sunny day and everyone looks so happy. Family goes out, couples have date, and friends hang out and I'm totally jealous, yeah FREAKING JEALOUS! I thought.
I saw an old lady alone crossing the streets ; it was dangerous so I helped her.

"Oh good morning obaachan why are you alone crossing this road?let me help you"

"Thank you you are a nice person." the old lady said.

"Oh don't think about it too much,well I'm used to the word nice because they always call me mr.nice" I replied with a smile

"Hahaha you are a joker too" the old lady laughily said to me

"shit" I whispered as I look my wristwatch.    " I have to go obachan I have a work, be careful and see you around" I said as I tie my shoe lace preparing to run fast. I run as fast as I could so that I will not be late to my work. Luckly I just arrived in time.

"whew! That was close" I said as I breath deeply and wipe my sweat in my forehead.

"oh good morning kai" Sae-kun said with a bright smile

Sae is my best friend since kindergarten, I know a lot about him and he too knows about me a lot.

" oh good morning too Sae,   Ehhhh? You look so happy to day huh?" I said with curiosity

"well somebody accepted my offer, right sayaka? Sae answered happily

"ehhh? What offer? I asked

" don't mind him!" Sayaka answered while her face is blushing.

"oh my! Don't tell me you two are official? I quickly said with a shocking voice

" BINGO!" Sae answered and kiss Sayaka

"hey you two! Don't do that here in the cafe, you are ruining the ambiance of this place" I said jokingly

" my,my! Don't be jealous, you are good looking, mr.niceguy. I'm sure you can find a lot of girls out there" Sae said to me teasingly

"hey, first of all I'm not jealous alright? And I don't like boys, I like girls" I said while laughing.

" oi! What's the meaning of that? Sayaka even though she has an abs and look like a guy, she is still a girl and I love her" Sae said while trying to stop his laughter

" ouch! Hey you two, do you want to be a punching bag huh? Sayaka said with anger.

" alright! Alright! Get back to work guys hurry coz we have a lot of customers today since it is weekend". Manager said, and Kai can you put the garbage outside so that the collector can pick it up.

"alright manager"

I picked up the trash and putted it outside. When I'm about to get inside to the cafe somebody got my attention. I look at my right side and saw this bunch of teenagers,well to be exact, 6 teenager girls roaming around the area and passed by in our cafe and then the garbage bag that I put earlier is now few steps away from its original position. One of those teenagers kicked it.

" umm. Excuse me? Can you put the trash bag that you kicked into its original place? I said politely while faking my facial expression as she might notice that I was irritated.

" what is it? Do you have a problem with it? A girl with long curly brown hair replied. Her other friends just stare me. Their glares gives me goosebumps.

" w w well nothing. Continue walking to your destination"I answered as I don't want to make the issue bigger or I was just too scared.

I sighed and walked towards the garbage bag to to pick it up and put it back to its orignal place but something pops out in my mind, the bar pin that the girl was wearing. It was my first time seeing that bar pin with a word written.

"WNA.   What is that?" I murmured as I looked back to the teenagers.

I saw them walking away,heading to their destination but someone paused and looked back at me and smiles evilly which pissed me off and make my blood boiled. My emotions exploded as I can't hold my anger anymore.

"WTH? what's that supposed to mean? Arggghhh, what's with that group of youngsters roaming around in this place, and that girl that smiles at me? What is wrong with teenagers nowadays? Yes she is beautiful but her attitude doesn't suits with her angelic face,
I need to be calm.......... INHALE ,,, EXHALE! Calm down mr nice guy. I muttered while talking to my ownself.

I get back inside with my eyebrows meeting with each other.

" what happened?you look so scary Mr. Nice guy." Sae teasingly said

"hey what is wrong with teenagers nowadays huh? I don't get them. Doing some stupid things in front of an adult? I said with anger.

"hmmm? Maybe you are just old that is why you can't understand them and come here let me check your temperature" Sayaka responded.

I walk where Sayaka is standing having a thought that she is serious but after she touches my forehead she said.

"what the! You already reach your boiling point, you have to cool down a little bit Kai hahaha" she said while laughing

" nice one! Sae said and give Sayaka a high five.

" I thought you are concern with me Sayaka and I'm so serious here you know? I said annoyed

" alright calm down dude! We are just joking here hahaha and start to work now so you can forget what happened earlier.

I took Sae's advice and start working. Hours were passed until our jobs were done. It was an exhausting day for me and its already 10 o'clock in the evening. As I'm on my way to our house walking, I stop for a bit and look up the sky. It's beautiful. The moon is so bright and also the stars that twinkles in the sky. The wind that is blowing in my ears is so refreshing. What a wonderful world I lived in and......

"ehhhh? What was that? Did I heard something?"My mind stop functioning for a while,when my ears heard something.

"is it a ghost? I'm shaking as I walk closer and closer to the place where I heard some voices until I saw something that makes my eyes wide O.O

"what the hell is this? I thought as I saw the bunch of teenagers that I met earlier fighting with adults.

"what the! They are fighting with some loan sharks but I admit they are skilful in fighting but why? I muttered

I was hiding while watching the fighting scenes until one of them got punched and false down near me. The girl was injured and had blood on her mouth and head. She saw me and smirked like nothing happens.

"wait, I know her. She was the one who smile at me evilly previously, these teenagers are really bad ass" I thought while having a shock-scared face

"hey are you ok? Are you hurt? What are you doing? It is dangerous you know" I whispered at her while she was getting up from that fall. I scratch my head saying to myself, of course she is hurt, it is obvious you idiot"

She smiles again and wipes her bloody mouth but this time she has the terryfying look. It is like that she is hunger for blood. I mean to make the guy pay for what he had done,to punch him with all her strength, but I also saw the loneliness she had.

The girl fought back with her other teammates  and beat the guys until they are unconscious. After that the girls just left and vanished having a light injury.

 That fight was bloody hell. How come they defeated these guys? And what did these guys do to them? And there was a scene that comes to my mind, the girl that I saw smiling at me with a terryfying expression.

"who is she? I was thinking. Then I step forward and walk away to the place before the police will come
however I stepped something. I looked down and saw an I.D. I picked it up and saw the picture and read what is written.

"MAEDA ATSUKO" oh she was that beautiful-evil-hunger-for-blood girl but why did she crush out her school name? And what is with this sticker?.

"WNA,,, EHHH? I said



To be continued......

I hope you like it.:sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:

What is WNA? Hahahha   :?
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: ilovecandiedapples on November 07, 2011, 01:23:57 AM
i like it :heart:
bad ass acchan and mr. nice guy kai/takamino
i can't wait to find out what happens on their next meeting :D
can't wait for the next chapter please continue
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: Sydney W on November 07, 2011, 01:55:22 AM
I'm curious abt WNA ?! Could it be watanabe + atsuko ?! Guessing. Pls update next chapter. It's awesome storyline of your. Thank you.
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: cocos_milos on November 07, 2011, 02:02:26 AM
Wow.. nice start.. :w00t:
may be next chapter it will more incredible situation :cow:

good job!!! :wub: Nice chapter!!  :heart:UPDATE SOON......... :inlove:
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: haruhi16 on November 07, 2011, 02:18:14 AM
nice fic! hope you add other couples here!! <333 update soon!
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: skytsuna on November 07, 2011, 02:40:09 AM
Wow!!!  :w00t: Nice Plot~!!!
I would love to know what would happen later~  :heart:
Hehe.. Rebelious Acchan and Nice Takamina/Kai  :inlove:
Please update soon~  :mon inluv:
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: Flean on November 07, 2011, 03:41:47 AM
WOOTTT!!!!  :w00t:  new fic!!!!  XD

mr nice guy Kai x rebellious Acchan~~~ nice start..  :on GJ:   

update soon... wanna know how they fall for each other...  :mon inluv:
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: blueangel65 on November 07, 2011, 06:28:10 AM
Your weLcome.. :)
Umh WOW!  :w00t: You're fast, You wrote 5 chapters now? haHa..  XD
Keep it up Boy/GirL..  :twothumbs and Wow! the story is good, I want more..  :lol:  :bow:
pLease write more next chapter, heHe! It's really interesting.. :) and when I read the 6 teenager girLs,
1st thing tha cames to my mind is the Princesses of Majisuka Gakuen, but No! I'm wrong 'coz Atsuko is with them..  :huhuh
weLL! the WNA, is Like a cLan, I think, heHe! Well! pLease update soon as possibLe, heHe! Thank You..  :thumbsup :D
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: Haruko on November 07, 2011, 07:03:22 AM
jajaj maeda is like a bad ass... like it!! and kai kun aww sweetest kai kun.. you gonna be in dangerous cause maeda-san is a perv person :D
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: kahem on November 07, 2011, 08:52:26 AM
Oh the concept is really interesting.
WNA? Euh... Euh... Hum... Aaaaaaah!!! What could it be?!!!
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: creamcracker on November 07, 2011, 03:44:16 PM
Thank you so much for your very nice comments. I'm happy the you like my very first fanfic. Yeahey :love:

Haruhi16: don't worry, because in the next chapter there would Be new characters/pairings.

Blueangel: I'm a girl.^_^.

Note: WNA meaning will be revealed in the next chapter, and I will update the next chapter later. Hahahaaha. By the way some of their age and surnames are also a fiction here in my story.thanks :D
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: haruhi16 on November 07, 2011, 04:03:27 PM
thank you <33 update soon!!
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: kiniki on November 07, 2011, 04:12:47 PM
I want to know what happen :ding:
thanks for nice fic :hee:
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: creamcracker on November 08, 2011, 01:17:44 AM
CHAPTER 02

I was lying on my bed, reminisce the action that I saw earlier on my way home as I stare the I.D that the gril dropped. Luckily the address is written and she didn't crush it out.

"sigh! There is no choice but to return it tomorrow after my work since I'm dayshift and it will end at 3 o'clock pm and I will take this opportunity to ask about WNA" I said in a low tone as I started feeling sleepy and ended up into the other place called DreamLand.
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(WNA a.k.a Wild Night Atmosphere is an organization consist of 12 rebellious teenager girls. They only attack at night making the atmosphere wild. Everyone left their houses and lived in a one particular place which they called their HOME, the WNA house)

      *WNA house*
"hello? Yes, we already did your request, just check our website for the evidence, and your now safe to roam around in that area peacefully" one of the WNA member answered to the person in other line of the phone.

"what did she say Mariko?a gachapin looking girl asked the girl holding the phone.

"oh miichan you're there.. Uhmm she said thank you and she will send the payment tomorrow morning." the tall girl replied.

"ne, mayuyu, are you done looking for other request on our website? A girl with black aura asked.

"no not yet yukirin, there are lots of request here but mostly they are not worth it." the cyborg girl responded.

A few moments later the door opened and there are 6 girls step inside the room.

"oh welcome back guys" the youngest girl said loudly.

" how was the fight? Hunger for blood again?hehehe by the way Jurina can you get some bandages and medicines so that we can clean their injury" Mariko told the youngest girl

"yes, of course Mariko senpai" the youngest girl responded

" no we are not hunger for blood today, even Rena's other side(gekikara) didn't appear this time but asked this girl beside me who punched her pawn half dead" the long brown curly hairl girl said.

" I agree to tomochin, I don't know what is going on with Aachan, she was really scary, chiyuu" a girl name tomo~mi corresponded.

"I'm telling you now guys that don't mess with Aachan or else you will end up like those bastards that she beaten up earlier,neh Kojima" the cat look alike girl told the group.

The tall air headed girl just nodded.

"here are the bandages and medicines Mariko senpai." Jurina shouted.

" thanks Jurina and please next time don't shout coz we can hear you loud and clear ok?" Mariko replied

" I'll be going to my room now and have some rest, good night guys and don't forget to do your assign work because we have a lot of request right now" the serious looking girl with eyeglasses said as she headed to her room located on the second floor.

" hey Aachan we still have to put some meds and bandage to your injury" miichan exclaimed.

" leave her alone for now, there must be something bothering her" Kojima answered.

"YATA! I found it, I found the right person for the next mission" mayuyu eagerly said to hear teammates.

" hey Yuko can you read it loudly for us coz I'm still applying here some meds with others" Mariko said while seeing Yuko doing nothing.

" alright, alright" Yuko answered while clearing her throat

       To WNA
       
              Hi I'm Kim, a first year high school student . I was wondering if you could help me about my problem. Can you investigate my father because he is kinda suspicious these past few weeks and I feel that he is betraying my mother. In terms of condition and regulation you ask for,I agree to it. I'll send the picture to you with the information attached to the picture and also the agreement form with my signature. I hope you will accept my offer and don't worry about the payment as soon as you finished your job, I'll send it immediately.

" geez I really hate adults like that" yukirin said having the black aura that will definitely give you a goosebumps

" that is why we have a motto right? Rena said while wearing her trademark laugh

" don't trust adults easily coz somehow, someway they will hurt you" mayuyu corresponded

" trust yourself and you will know how to live, but I also trust WNA right? Kojima stated

Everyone nodded as a sign that they agreed to what Kojima said. The night got deeper and deeper and one by one went to their own rooms to have a rest. Every room consist of two people except Aachan's room.

(mayuyu-yukirin , Mariko-miichan, Rena-Jurina, tomo-tomo, Kojima-Yuko)- pairing of each room.

   *THE NEXT DAY* ( I = Kai)

" thanks for the hard work. I'll go now and see you tomorrow" I said as I leave the cafe. I search my phone as I'm going to use the google map to locate the exact location of the owner of this I.D

"wow I have lots of missed call, who would it be?    Oh it's my little sister, it's weird that she called me 5 times already" I murmured while contacting her.

" the number you have dialed is not yet on service, please try again later"

"she is not answering, well maybe that was not important" I said without having a second thought and went to google map instead and search for the address

After 20 mins

"maeda, maeda, maeda" as I was looking for their house. " oh here it is. WOW! Their house is huge" as I said with with an amazed expression.

As the time I'm about to press the doorbell somebody asked me and said.

" Uhmm, who are you? A girl asked with curiosity as she saw me standing in front of their house.

"I'm Kai, Takahashi Kai! I'm about to give this thing to the owner, do you know Maeda Atsuko? Because she dropped her I.D yesterday.

"Takahashi Kai? He's" she whispered

"yes? Is there something wrong? I asked as I heard her saying my name.

" oh, no, nothing. And yeah I know her, she is my older sister and by the way, are you an acquaintance of my sister?

" oh, no, it's jut that" i looked down because I don't know how to tell her that I saw her sister fighting with guys, that she have some injury coz for sure it will make her worry

" it's just that?" she asked me interested of what i'll say

" Uhmm how will I say this, Uhmm" I look at her and guess what I saw, WNA bar pin

"WNA!" geez I shouted it.

"ehhh? WNA?? Ah this bar pin in my upper left? The girl replied

"yes! If you don't mind can I ask what is the meaning of that?" I asked excitedly because I'm really curious about it.

"well, it's just a bar pin or still you are not yet destined to know the meaning of this one but I'm sure someday you will know the meaning of WNA, definitely" she said with a smiling face

"but--- I didn't finished talking as she abruptly get the I.D and said, " my name is Erena and thank you for returning this one".

She get inside into their house. I walk away disappointed.

" sigh! I still don't Know what WNA stands for.  Uhmm, is it WOW NICE ABS? that is why they are embarrassed to say the meaning of WNA especially when I'm the one asking? I know I'm hot but they don't have to be shy." I murmured while talking to myself, puzzled  about the word.

"but what does she meant about 'I'm sure someday you will know the meaning of WNA" I scratched my head thinking for an answer to another question.

To be continued....
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Question : what is bothering with Aachan?
                What do Erena mean about the words she said to Kai?

Hahaha I miss Erena that is why i include her in my story. Hope you like it. And in the next chapter it will be an action.

   :) :) :)
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: Flean on November 08, 2011, 01:29:12 AM
(WNA a.k.a Wild Night Atmosphere is an organization consist of 12 rebellious teenager girls. They only attack at night making the atmosphere wild. Everyone left their houses and lived in a one particular place which they called their HOME, the WNA house)
Cool name!!! Wild Night Atmosphere FTW~~ :twothumbs   and Acchan is wild~~ I wanna know what's bothering her too...  :panic:

update soon~~~  :bow:
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: blughise on November 08, 2011, 01:46:28 AM
Nice!!! Im liking this story already!!!

lol at Mr. Nice guy Kai XD

Atsuko kick ass!!! XD XD XD

This sort of remind me of Majisuka Gakeun, with Atsuko being so wild back then before she meet Minami!!!

please update soon!!
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: haruhi16 on November 08, 2011, 04:33:41 AM
woah!! bad ass !! more actions! yay~  :heart:
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: skytsuna on November 08, 2011, 05:27:31 AM
Oooh~!!  :heart:
 :on GJ: Nice update~  :k-inlove:
Hm.. I am really curious about whats bothering Acchan  :banghead:
 :mon cute: Please update soon  :)
And thank you for the update  :on cny2:
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: Haruko on November 08, 2011, 06:10:11 AM
that sound so interesting!
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: kahem on November 08, 2011, 09:14:49 AM
Ahahaha 'WOW NICE ABS', Kai failed xD
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: creamcracker on November 08, 2011, 08:58:47 PM
I'll update the 1st part of chapter 3 later since it's long and i hope you will read it hahaha. :D
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: creamcracker on November 09, 2011, 01:53:22 AM
Can someone teach me how to attach an image from my ipad? Coz it is really important for the next chapter but i dont know how.T_T. Please
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: sorakamiya on November 09, 2011, 02:07:05 AM
Can someone teach me how to attach an image from my ipad? Coz it is really important for the next chapter but i dont know how.T_T. Please

uhm... u can upload it in somewhere first like in photobucket then copy the url and paste to this code -> (http://)  :)
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: creamcracker on November 09, 2011, 02:39:10 AM
Thanks for the help sorakamiya but i dont have photobucket account and i tried flickr. It wont allow me to upload pics maybe coz im not using laptop or pc. Maybe i'll just wait until our internet connection will be fixed and stable.

To all the readers of my fanfic. Im sorry if i cant update my fanfic today or tomorrow maybe and i broke my promise. I will surely update the whole chapter 3 when everything is fix. Im really sorry. T_T.
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: Flean on November 09, 2011, 02:44:35 AM
^ no problem... everyone have their own problems that couldn't be avoided.. take your time...

me <--- always keeps broking my promises...  :nervous  LOL... XD
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: creamcracker on November 09, 2011, 02:49:30 AM
Thank you for understanding flean. I was writing it earlier and then a problem came out. The picture coz it's important And i was like ohhh :(
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: creamcracker on November 23, 2011, 03:29:04 PM
Ohlalalalala. Do you want an update for this? Lol :D
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: Sydney W on November 23, 2011, 03:36:28 PM
yes...... douzo...... please continue....... thanks
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: skytsuna on November 23, 2011, 03:58:38 PM
Yes!!!!! Please Update this!!!! :panic: I've been waiting and am so curious about what will happen next :banghead:
It's really interesting to me and I can't help but want more of this XD

Please Update this Soon!!! Please~~~~ :bow: :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE
Post by: creamcracker on November 24, 2011, 12:01:48 AM
weeeeeeeeeeee. We already have an internet connection lol. Happiest idiot in the world  :panic: ^_^. ohh so much for that, here is the first part of chapter 3.
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Chapter 03 A

*WNA House*

“mayuyu, jurina, how is your investigation going on out there? Mariko asked

“ehto, koichi (kim’s father) is always seen at unlimited night club, there was a rumour before that his mistress was working there” mayuyu the cyborg girl replied.

“adding to mayuyu’s information, he will be there tomorrow evening at 8 o’clock” jurina said.

“welcome back kojima, yuko, what information did you gathered while stalking koichi.” Gachapin miichan said.

“well guess, he is a vice president of big company. It means that kim is not lying about the information she gave to us. ”yuko reported.

“that is why it is easier for him to lie about his mistress making his work as an excuse and related to yuko’s report he has 2 bodyguards that are always at his side no matter where he go” kojima informed the team.

“well it will be a great night tomorrow for us, alright rena, Call Aachan so that she can start the planning” yukirin said with an excitement.

Few minutes later………

Alright based on the information that you guys gathered, the payment day will be tomorrow (the plan of beating koichi). Rena, examine the location of the club and look a place where we can bring the convict without other people noticing and also a safe place to escape. Mayuyu, Jurina, you will be in charge to the evidence, make sure to prepare the recorder, the wireless microphone and the earphone on each of our uniform, if there Is a cctv camera hack it and remember to stop recording if the convicted already admit the crime they have done and lastly give a signal before stopping the recording so that we can do our job, the beating up :) . Tomochin, tomo~mi, you are the one that will greet and bring koichi in the designated place. Make sure to wear your sexy clothes so that he will be easily attract on you two, we’ll be depending on your acting skills. Kojima and yuko, you will be the lookout make sure to do your job before doing some stupid things especially you yuko! I hope your pervert attitude will not occur tomorrow evening or else I will not pair you with your kojima anymore. Mariko you will be in the van coz you are the only one having a driver’s license and it is for emergency purpose also. Lastly, yukirin, miichan and I will be the one who will evaluate the convict until he admitted his crime. Meeting is now adjourned, prepare now for the things that you will need specially you rena because we need the full information of the location. Alright dismiss.

“alright” everyone said as they proceed to what job they are assigned.

“hey kasai, don’t you ever, ever dare to hug that old man, understood?” tomochin said with jealousy

“I’m with you so I don’t dare to do something that will make you jealous or upset. Chiyuu~” tomo~mi said reassuring her partner tomochin.

“mayuyu don’t wash your face after using your computer coz It might damage your eye sight” yukirin said with concern

“I won’t, and thanks for reminding me, by the way yukirin please minimize your black aura when you are with me or beside me. thanks” mayuyu replied as she continue tapping her keyboard

“will it be rena or gekikara tomorrow? I wonder” jurina asked

“hmm, it depends on the situation, but one thing is for sure imma kicked their asses out” rena responded

“mariko are you going to a gas station tonight? Can I come with you coz I want to buy something to eat” miichan said with a puppy eyes looking at mariko

“alright, let’s go, and what a stomach you have in there, you glutton!” mariko teasingly said as they headed out to the house and start’s the car engine.

“kojima! Can I sleep at your lap tonight as I know we will end up sleeping here in living room because we are busy for tomorrow’s mission, please just for tonight” yuko said with a grin

“you! You didn’t hear what aachan said? Kojima replied

“but that deal will start tomorrow not tonight , so aachan will not be angry and besides I will only sleep at your lap” yuko begging while wearing a cat eyes and showing her dimples

“alright, but just for today” kojima agreed as she already can’t do anything about it

Everyone continued what they are doing until they fall asleep in living room.

(http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g352/jlove59/locationview.png)

Alright I will explain now the location. As you can see there are two hearts, it stands for tomochin and tomo~mi, You two will be the one who will open the ceremony, remember that koichi has 2 bodyguards so be careful and don’t worry I’ll back you up when things gets difficult. You must follow the arrow lines, because it is the safest and there were almost no people passing that direction. The two blue circles will represents yuko and kojima. After tomotomo duo successfully bring the convict, kojima and yuko will give a signal, so that the girls inside the abandoned building can be ready. By the way the microphone is connected to each and every one of us and we also have tiny earphones. The 3 circles inside the abandoned building well obviously are aachan, miichan and yukirin. The x in the upper right is where mariko and the van is parked, we will use that part as our exit. Mayuyu and jurina will hack the cctv camera in front and right side of the club. Alright everything is clear? Rena reported to the group as she was assigned about the location.

“alright every one pack your things up, mayuyu and jurina check if our microphones are functioning. Mariko check the van if there is gasoline. Guys be careful” Aachan added.

*THE TIME HAS COME*

“cctv hacking done”mayuyu said

“guys you are all in your position now?” jurina asked

Everyone said yes as it is about time that koichi will show up in the club and a few minutes later.

Broom,broom, and turned the engine off.  A car stops in front of the club.

“ahh, koichi-san long time no see” tomi~mi seductively said while coughing once as a signal that target has been located.

“you look so thin now, have you eaten your food at exact time?” tomochin asked with a sexy voice

“oh lucky even though I don’t know them but still they are hot” koichi whispered, “uhmm I’m so sorry girls if I haven’t seen you for a long time now I was so busy at my work.

“what a pervert old geezer”  yuko exclaimed as everybody hears because of their earphones.

“ohh look who’s talking” kojima teasingly said to yuko.

“guys serious now, there is no time for joke right now” mariko said as she feels that others taking this mission lightly.

“gekikara are you there?or still rena chan?” jurina asked

“ahahaha,hahaha, are you mad?” gekikara responded

“good, can you please stand by in the right side of the club so that you can back up tomotomo easily” jurina said as she was watching in the cctv camera that they hacked.

Koichi hugged tomotomo duo and quickly said,

“do you wanna have fun tonight? I’ll treat you” koichi asked as he was trying to make a move to the duo

Tomochin stares with an angry look while tomo~mi puts down koichi’s arms

“ahh let us think about it” tomo~mi replied

“come on girls, we are just having fun you know already where right?” Koichi smile perverted

“alright but we are the one who will choose the place alright?” tomochin said as she agreed to what koichi offer.

They go to the exact direction as planned but the two bodyguards keep following them.

“anoo, can you order your bodyguards to stop following us, it’s kinda embarrassing, chiyuu” tomo~mi said as she was worried that things might get difficult but a few step forward she saw gekikara and make a sigh of relief.

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i will update the next part later after watching a movie with friends hahahaha.
oops the x in the picture was not there hahaha lol my fault sorry.
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 3A)
Post by: creamcracker on November 24, 2011, 01:16:11 AM
Chapter 03 B

Tomochin gives a signal that the fight will be starting in a few seconds. Gekikara walk nearer to tomotomo duo while laughing while saying are you mad? Koichi was terrified after seeing gekikara as he described her as a scary creature human being. Before he can run away, tomotomo duo trapped him. Koichi shouted to his bodyguard that he is in danger. His bodyguards run as fast as they could. Gekikara runs towards the bodyguards and tomochin helps her.

“you old geezer, you hugged me and made my tomochin angry. I will never ever FORGIVE YOU old hag! Tomo~mi whines while pointed her finger to Koichi.

Tomo~mi handcuffed koichi so that he can’t escape while adding a kick to his stomach and punch to his face. (ting ting ting K.O hahaha just kidding~ writer's imagination O.O now go back to the story ^_^) gekikara greeted one of the bodyguards a 45 degree high kick which landed to his face. After the bodyguard received the high kick, he knelt down because of pain but he did the wrong move. Gekikara step 5 steps backward and then started running towards the injured bodyguard. She steps to the right knee of the bodyguard, putting her all strength on her right knee which she uses to kick the chin that make her opponent knock down full of blood on his face.

“ahaha ahaahaha ahahaha, jaw,nose and chin broken, estimated recovery, 5 months” she said victoriously

On the other hand tomochin also didn’t give mercy to her opponent. She broke his arm, kick his stomach that made him cough with blood and put her strength to her elbow giving him her final blow at bodyguard’s back.

“first stage complete” tomo~mi reported as they are now heading to the abandoned building where the look outs are waiting.

The look outs kojima and yuko give their signal so that the girls inside can be ready.

“here you go, this is the place that we choose, chiyuu”

“do you like it koichi san?” tomochin questioned with a smile

“where am i?what do you want?money I’ll give you money, please don’t kill me. Koichi answered who was trembling because of fear.

“we won’t kill you if” miichan responded with a serious face to add fear to koichi.

“if what? Tell me and I’ll do everything.” Koichi answered with a desperate voice.

“if you will admit that you are having an affair with someone else. That you are betraying your family.” Yukirin builds her black aura to add tension.

“huuuh? what is that question? You can’t gain anything from that and, and I’m not having an affair with someone else” kouichi shouted.

Aachan step forward, holds koichi’s suit and attempted to punch him but aachan stops while her fist is just 1 inch away from koichi face.

“ a a a a alright, I admit it, I’m having an affair with a girl from the unlimited night club for 1 year already. I betrayed my wife my family. But who cares? You kids can’t do anything about it and what is this? Do you think you are good enough by doing this? Do you think people will acknowledge you? You are just a trash in society. Koichi said provokingly.

“mayuyu, jurina got it?” yuko said as they all heard what the man said.

“got it” mayuyu answered.

“recording deactivated” jurina told them as a hint that they can already do what they want.

“alright now who will do the honour? Kojima asked

“I’ll do it” yukirin and miichan said in unison

“hey let me do it gachapin, I want to warm up” yukirin said heatedly

“nahh not this time, let me do it” miichan said with disagreement

“I’ll do it”

“ehhhhhhh? O o oh alright” the two girls agreed while watching the other one who volunteered.

“aachan are you ok? Seems like these past few days you are not the usual you” rena asked (yeah she is back to her normal side)

Aachan didn’t respond to rena and just headed to her new pawn. She punch him like there is no tomorrow, like a vampire enjoying the blood on her fangs, like a kid that don’t want to let go of her first teddy bear, like a fat boy who will not stop until there is no more cake left on his plate and others plate and a predator who is hunger for her prey.

In the other hand mariko went out to the van and walk towards the abandoned building wanting to see the fight but her eyes widened. O.O

“hey somebody stop her, she is killing koichi already, hey what are you doing? Mariko shouted as she rushed to the scene.

“hey stop her! Guys move! Mariko yelled but she can’t blame her teammates as they were shock on what they saw

“atsuko! Stop it” mariko shouted as she holds aachan hand.

Aachan just watch Mariko and again she try to hit koichi but mariko slaps her.

“atsuko wake up! What is wrong with you? Mariko asked with a worried face. The other girls went back to reality after the undesirable scene they saw.

Aachan woke up and became her usual self. She was surprised as what she did to koichi.

“sorry, I’m really sorry” aachan said while bowing her head and run to the van that is waiting outside.

“what   ,  was     ,     that?” yukirin said with unbelievable look on her face

“that was” kojima answered O.O

“TERRIFYING” yuko,rena,tomotomo and miichan continued kojima’s words.


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hope you like this chapter.

and i'm sorry if this chapter disappointed you  :( I know you are all curious on how they will meet (kai and aachan) but don't worry that will happen soon. ^_^.
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 3A-3B)
Post by: sorakamiya on November 24, 2011, 03:11:24 AM
wohoooooooooooo finally bunny update~  :cow: :cow:

thanks and this is great~ now i'm waiting for the next update~  :grin: :grin:
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 3A-3B)
Post by: kazuski on November 24, 2011, 05:00:35 AM
it so good~  XD  too good~  :cow:

thank for an update!!!  :twothumbs

they're so cool!  :w00t: and Aachan is the boss! lolz.  :lol:  8)

as usual pervert Yuko  :grin: . black Yukirin  :tama-mad:  and gekikara.  :inlove:

Aachan is really scary!!  :banghead:  :shocked how can takamina deal with her?  :smhid  poor takamina.  :smhid

anyway, update soon.  :fap
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 3A-3B)
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 24, 2011, 06:48:29 AM
Yea!! Thanks for the Update XD

Wow.. Acchan is really scary :shocked

They were all so professional doing their works XD

Please Update Soon :bow:
Hopefully something about Kai and Acchan ;)
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 3A-3B)
Post by: kahem on November 24, 2011, 08:40:32 AM
Ehhh!!! Acchan O_O did her father betray her family too or what?

I like jealous Tomochin ^^
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 3A-3B)
Post by: haruhi16 on November 25, 2011, 04:16:58 AM
woah those girls <3 Aww Jelous Tomochin <3

Duddddeee! Gekikara is a bad ass monster as usual <333

Woah Acchan is scaryy , raging like that O: ~

I want the next chapter!~
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 3A-3B)
Post by: creamcracker on November 25, 2011, 07:13:59 PM
haru9210: thanks for liking this chapter ^_^

sorakamiya: panda, please do my OS request ok? hahaha

kazuski: ohh is this your first time commenting in my fic? good that u like it

yagami.rai: i think this chapter will disappoint you again hahaha but the next chapter will give you a clue on how they will meet. coz this chapter is important especially to what is bothering with aachan. ^_^.

kahem: let us see if her father betray his family, yeah jealous tomochin FTW

haruhi16: here is the next chapter lol
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Chapter 04

*ATSUKO’S POV*
I ran as fast as I could from the abandoned house. I open the van and took the back sit. I was thinking of what I’ve done. What if mariko didn’t stop me? What will happen? As the scenes are floating in my head trying to forget what happened in the abandoned building. I was shock when I saw koichi full of blood, unconscious that will took months of healing and rehabilitation. I think I broke his 4 ribs, face and even his arms. I was frightened with my own self as I saw my hands full of blood. Thanks to mariko, if she didn’t stop me I might end up being a killer. But what is with that usual self? Even me, don’t know much about myself anymore now because of what had happened. Who am I? Then a flashback of memory crosses my mind.

*FLASHBACK*

“don’t ever call here again or try to contact her, you leave her without words now you are telling me that you care for her? Damn it.  And Ohh you’re concern about her accident? Then let me tell you frankly, you have no rights and don’t even bother yourself about it coz i-i-i-,, iiit has nothing to do with you” my father said with anger as he was talking with another person on the phone.

“wait? What accident? And who is he talking with? And does this one connected with the accident? I whispered as I was eavesdropping while watching the scar in my wrist.

“neechan what are you doing?” my little sister asked.

“shhh erena, don’t shout as father might hear you” I muttered while my heart is beating faster because I was nervous that I might get caught.

“oh sorry, what are you doing here? It’s been awhile that you come to this house since you’ve been staying in WNA house for a month. Erena muttered while having a happy face seeing her sister.

“yeah it’s been awhile, but I’m just here to get some money. Well can you asked father to give me some money? I asked

“ohh sure, but why? I thought business in WNA is doing great? But I miss you oneechan” erena run towards me and hugged me tightly

“yeah it is doing great but we have to buy some equipment to be used in important and special request, just send it to my bank account ok” I replied as I also hugged her, after a few seconds I cut the hug as I asked her with a question “ahh by the way do you know anything about this scar in my wrist? Did I try committing suicide? I asked her because I was curious about what I heard with my father talking privately in his office room.

“oh that scar? Ermmm, I really don’t know about it, this is my first time seeing it as u always covered it with wristband. Erena replied while hiding something.

“are you sure that you really don’t know?? I said while trying to find some clue in her facial expression that might give me a hint that she is hiding something from me.

“yes, I’m sure” she replied with confident, but somehow, someway , I feel odd, I feel like she is lying but I think it is for my own sake. I still trust my sister coz after all she is the only one that I trust the most along with the WNA members.

“oh atsuko welcome home” my father said while he went out to his office room and saw us with erena chatting.

“I have to go erena, see you again but I don’t know when and don’t forget what I asked you coz I really need it, after all you are part of that group as finance secretary” I said as I went out to our house hurriedly since I don’t want to talk or see my father’s face.

“wait atsuko, come back here, hey!” my father shouted. “what did she did in our house? Did she heard anything from my conversation?” father asked erena with a worried face

“well she just need money just send it to her bank account, and about the conversation yeah sort of,  she heard but I didn’t tell her the truth, it is not because I did it for you father it is for oneechan coz I care for her not like you” erena replied as she headed back to her own room.

“hey erena what is the meaning of that?” father quickly asked but erena didn’t respond instead he just heard the door bang loudly.
*END OF FLASHBACK*but still in ATSUKO’S POV

As we traveling back to WNA house. The atmosphere is quiet. No one dares to talk or joke. I can’t watch them in their eyes or try to talk to them. I was thinking that they might be afraid of me right now because of what happened. Few minutes later we arrived in our house.

“welcome home, how was the beating up?” mayuyu asked while she was excited to hear about it from us

They didn’t know or hear or saw it because they deactivated the recording and quickly edit the audio to post in the website as evidence so that Kim can hear it and prove that we did our job.

“yeah share it to us, we are busy editing the audio and also Kim called us and said payment will be send tomorrow and thank you for your hard work” as jurina corresponded.

“I got to go to my room and have a rest” I said while looking down and went straight to her room.

“wait atsuko we need to talk about what happen” miichan asked as they want to clear their thoughts in mind and know the exact reason.

“not now please, can we do it tomorrow? I need to be alone to think” I requested

“but” yuko replied

“please, just for now, I’m begging you guys” I said with a lower voice trying to hold back my tears as I was really confused.

“alright! We will be waiting at the time you already wanted to open up. We are just here for you please don’t forget that. Mariko approved as she saw me that is really bothered.

“thank you” I said and headed straight to my own room.

“what happened? And what is with those expressions you are wearing? Jurina asked with curiosity

“you left this house normal but you came back being weird” mayuyu said

“we will know it when by the time she will open up to us and the two of you, you don’t need or have to know what happened when you deactivated the recording” yukiriin said while her black aura is vanishing.

“we have to rest now guys, it’s been a long tiring day for us” miichan told them as she don’t want to discuss about what happened

I heard their conversation but I immediately get inside to my room as I heard their footsteps. I went straight to my bed and lay. I used the quite evening atmosphere to think. Questioning myself like who really am I? I didn’t know that this scar in my wrist is really a big part of my past. That a big clue or hint to an unsolved mystery. I tried to remember but I can’t. How, where, and why did I have this? Until something pop outs in my mind.

“ehhh?what was that? The image is unclear, a girl holding a cutter, was the girl me? I whispered making me totally confused as a sudden memory appeared.

There is something lacking in my memories. That like I’m sent to the future without knowing all my past. That I must find the missing piece of a puzzle that will lead to the real me. Suddenly my head hurts as I saw a flash of light and heard some beep from a car.

“aahhh” as I scream because of the pain

I heard somebody open the door and said

“aachan are you ok? oi are you ok? Answer me!” I heard kojima’s voice

“what happened?” I heard everyone’s voice as they quickly went in my room because of my scream.

Their voice slowly and slowly disappeared and I collapsed.

TBC....

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 :panic: aachan's past.
sorry if this chapter is short :kneelbow:


Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 04)
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 25, 2011, 07:26:19 PM
Haha.. it's okay :lol:
Hm.. I wonder what happened :?
I'm really curious.. :banghead:

Please Update Soon :bow:
Thanks for the Update :thumbsup
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 04)
Post by: kahem on November 25, 2011, 07:37:26 PM
OMG! Did she killed someone??? O_o
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 04)
Post by: creamcracker on November 25, 2011, 07:42:06 PM
yagami: hahaha curious again? atleast we knew a little thing about her past
kahem: hmmm i think her scar in the wrist will give you an answer? lol -spoiler- hahaha.
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 04)
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 25, 2011, 07:48:31 PM
Yea.. XD
Although it seems to be sad :cry:
I'm a curious person :P

I wonder who is the one talking with Acchan's dad on the phone :?
And about the accident and Acchan's scar on her wrist... :cry: seems sad...
I also wonder what Erena knows and is hiding away from Acchan and..
What happen to Acchan when it seems like some memory is coming back to her.. (wait... it seems like Acchan has lost some of her memory??!!! :shocked)
Haha.. so many questions in my head :nervous but I demand for the answers!!! XD
And I'll be expecting you to supply me with the answers through your fic 8)

So Please Update Soon :mon cute:
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 04)
Post by: creamcracker on November 25, 2011, 07:53:45 PM
yagami: wow a lot of questions you have there huh. hahaha. i'm still not in the mood on writing the fic lol but i will try later coz i'm making another series lol.^_^.
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 04)
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 25, 2011, 07:56:22 PM
Haha.. :lol:
It's okay I'll wait XD
And I'll also be looking forward to your next work 8) :peace:
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 04)
Post by: Megumi on November 26, 2011, 12:15:35 AM
Poor Acchan!

I wonder if it's the same girl from Majisuka Gakuen that stabbed Gekikara and Center
but this version it's Acchan :P

Just my imagination running wild  :panic:

I'm happy that Erena is in this fic...I kind a miss her since she left AKB  but I'm glad that she's back into the business entertainment again...
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 04)
Post by: sorakamiya on November 26, 2011, 01:12:25 AM
wohohohohohoho.... u update bunny bear~  XD XD XD

okay, i will make your request but be patient...  :grin: :grin: :grin:
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 04)
Post by: creamcracker on December 03, 2011, 12:50:27 AM
Chapter 05

*THE NEXT MORNING* Aachan's POV

“miichan stop running in the hallway, you might wake up others” Mariko shouted

“naaah I’m hungry” miichan answered

I woke up because of the noise while I saw tomotomo duo sleeping inside my room but when I tried to move tomochin woke up.

“oh goodmorning tomochin” I said while on the other hand tomo~mi also woke up.

“good morning aachan how are you feeling now?” tomochin replied

“I’m fine now, thank you for the concern” I said with a smile.

“we are worried about you because you suddenly collapsed last night” tomo~mi said in a low tone

“well I’ll explain to you guys later what happened, let’s go down and eat our breakfast, I bet everyone is already awake” I told them while standing up.
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*WNA KITCHEN*

“good morning Aachan and tomotomo” rena voiced out

“breakfast is ready now” jurina said

Everyone gathered in the dining table to have their breakfast. It’s early in the morning and the ambiance is still quite until I broke the silence.

“uhmm, I apologized for what happened last night” I said while bowing my head

“it is fine now, we are just really surprise of what happened” miichan replied with a smile

“you can ask any question to clear your thoughts, and I’ll answer it” I stated as I know that there are lots of questions inside their head floating.

“are you sure? I mean there is no hurry for explaining yourself you know” mariko responded

“yeah I’m sure, after all I don’t want to hide anything from you guys” I answered

“if you say so” yukirin said while continuing eating her breakfast.

“alright, let me ask you first, what is bothering you? I mean you are not with your usual self, to tell you honestly, you are scary now, we don’t know what you are thinking, like you are full of mystery” kojima stated while other members look at her with an impressed look.

“WoW” yuko responded

“hey what’s with the wow yuko!?” kojima exclaimed

“I think yuko was just surprised coz she always think you are airheaded ohhh not she always think but WE always think hahaha but now we change our mind, your question gives us nosebleed” miichan said teasingly as everybody laugh out loud.

“good that all of you got back to your usual self” mayuyu the cyborg said with a relief

“as you remember, I went to our house last week to get some money for the equipment and to see also my little sister” I answered

“uhmm,last week??   Ahhh yeah, then? Is it the reason why you are acting so weird? What happened?” yukirin asked

“yes, it’s just that I heard something from my father” I replied as I explain all the details of what had happened and heard about my father’s conversation.

“WHAT? You got an accident? When? You never told us about it before” rena shouted

“hey minimize your voice” jurina said with annoyance

“oh sorry I was just surprise” rena responded

“that is the problem, I really don’t know about the accident, I can’t remember about it at all, I tried but I can’t” I said with continuation “and I think this will be your fist time seeing this but I think it will help about my past”  I wear off my wristband a show them the scar.

“did you tried committing suicide? Tomochin asked with her eyes widened O.o

“I don’t know, that is why I’m revealing this to you guys so you can help me find the missing piece of my past, I mean we are like a family here and we spent 6 months already living in the same house, if you have any idea about my past could you tell me? I told them as I really need someone to help me.

“as far as I or we remember, thing that we knew about your past was you moved here in Akihabara from Hokkaido last year because your mother died of an illness” mayuyu said

“moving here will give you a fresh start that is your father’s reason, but you hate him so much because he is always busy on his work and he has no time for you. He always sees you like a stranger; he only acted as a father in giving you a financial support. Yukirin continued as what mayuyu said

“you also hate him because he took your mother for granted and after moving here you established this house for teenagers like us” tomo~mi answered

“but I think mariko knew something, well the two of you established this WNA and you’re also relative to each other” yuko responded

“me???ahhm??      ohh right! Speaking of it, it is unusual that your father decided to move here. It was the first time that he communicated with me and asked if I could live with you aachan in this house. Since I’m blood related to your mother but not to your father. I accepted the offer coz he promised that he will pay all our needs but that is all that I know nothing more nothing less sorry. Mariko apologized.

“ohh I see, I think I’m the only one who can solved this thing, I’m sorry for bothering you guys” I told them as they really can’t give the answer that I was searching.

TING TING TING EXCUSE ME BOSS YOU HAVE NEW E-MAIL

“jurina can you please check the laptop coz there is someone who e-mailed us” kojima stated and jurina went straight to living room to found out if there is one.

“we have a new request guys and I think we really have to take actions with it” jurina yelled so that everybody can hear them

Everyone finished their breakfast and went towards the living room. Mariko read the letter.

To WNA, can you please revenge me with the guys from paper heart agency? They tried to harass me and dragged me in a dark place. They even said that they wanted me to be part of their girl group that they will introduce to public as soon as possible. I tried begging them because I know what really their plan was but they won’t let me go home until I said yes. They tried to rape me too but luckily someone helped me and said her name is Erena. She said she is a member of this team and gives me a card where your website is written. I tried to tell my brother about it but no words came out in my mouth. I also can’t say this to my parents coz I’m afraid they will not believe me as they sees me as a boyish chubby girl. Hope I can get your approval

P.S= I heard rumors about this agency being a scam, they asked teenager girls who wanted to be a singer to join them to achieve their dreams without knowing that they will end up being a prostitute in a club which I don’t know the name.
    
Sincerely, Takahashi Myao

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so got a hint now how the rebel will meet mr.nice? lol. and i'm sorry if this chapter is short and the development of the whole story is soooo soooo slow :kneelbow:







Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 05)
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 03, 2011, 02:06:41 AM
Yea! Update :w00t:

Takahashi Myao.. :shocked
So Myao is Takamina's sister!!! :w00t:

Oh! So they take this request and it could be how Acchan will meet Takamina!!! XD

Please Update Soon :mon cute:
Can't wait to read more XD
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 05)
Post by: Sok on December 03, 2011, 03:29:02 AM
Yay update.  :twothumbs Thank you.

ohho. The last part is very interesting.

I wonder when they'll meet.

Thank you once again. Can't wait for your next update.
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 05)
Post by: kahem on December 06, 2011, 07:11:13 PM
Oh I see. Next part would be really interesting, can't wait ^^
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 05)
Post by: creamcracker on January 10, 2012, 04:40:06 PM
Chapter 06

*1 DAY EARLIER*-ON KAI’S SIDE AFTER MEETING MAEDA ERENA

“This WNA really bothered me but I guess it’s just a famous bar pin” I thought while giving up my curiosity about the bar pin.
It was already night and I have to go home before dinner. When I was about to go inside our house I saw my sister crying.

“hey myao what is wrong? What happened?” I asked worriedly

“it’s ……”

“it’s what?” I asked as she didn’t continue her words

“n n n nothing, and even if I tell you, you will not believe me” she replied coldly

“I will believe in you, I’m your brother, and I care for you” I exclaimed

“I’ll tell you about it when I’m ready. And besides you also have your own problems” she responded and run quickly inside our house.

“I have my own problems? Ohh yah, I don’t have money for my tuition fee, I don’t have girlfriend and I don’t even know what WNA is. I muttered and paused for a minute and think “ehh is that what they call problem? i don’t think so”

We are about having our dinner as my sister didn’t come out to her room.

“Kai can you call your little sister and tell her that dinner is ready” father asked

“alright” I responded
I went upstairs and knocked her door.

KNOCK!KNOCK!

“who’s there?” she replied

“it’s Kai” I said

“Kai who?” she asked

“uhmm, Kai the most handsome guy in the world, the nicest person you have met, and the best brother of yours who is damn worried about you” I answered back

She opened the door. I saw her red eyes (it must be the effect of crying nonstop) I tried to step closer to her but she step backward with fear. I tried to hug my little sister so that she can feel that she is safe but before I take the action she said something

“sorry, but I’m not yet hungry, can you please leave me alone for now and please just make the excuse why I’m not hungy” she begged

“alright, I’m just here if you need me ok?” I agreed and close her door.

I was worried what happen to my sister, but I have to wait until she wanted to speak about it. I must respect her decision for now and I must think of an excuse why she is not hungry.

*MYAO’s POV* (note I here = Myao)

I was lying in my bed crying. Forgetting what happened previously but I can’t. It is already part of my painful past. I cried and cried while punching my teddy bear until I remember something. Something that a girl gave me after that incident happened.

+FLASHBACK+

“Hi miss, why are you alone? Do you want to have some fun? “A scary guy said as he approached me along with his 2 friends.

“sorry I have to go” I said with a fear in my voice

As I tried to walk away the two men dragged me in a dark area.

“if you will do what we want, you will have a chance to become a star as we are recruiting new members of this girl group ” the other man said with a grin giving me a calling card.

As I saw what is written (Paper Heart Agency) my heart beat faster. I heard a lot of rumors about paper heart recruiting teenager girls. Telling them that if they signed up to their agency their showbiz dream will come true. But it wasn’t true, their real motive is to gather a lot of fresh teenager girls and send them into a night club making them a prostitute.

“I refuse” I yelled and run away

The men didn’t let me escape. The one man punched my stomach and let me lay down in the ground. 

“if you refused then I have no choice but to do this” the perverted man said

The two men hold my hands and feet. The other man tried to take his move and tried to rape me. His face is getting nearer and nearer to my neck and I don’t have the strength to pull him instead I just closed my eyes praying that a hero will save me. After few seconds nothing happened, I opened my eyes and saw a girl the same age as me fighting with the 3 men. She is so good, like a black belter martial artist. It only took her 3 minutes to knock down all of the pervert men. She gave her hand and tried helping me to stand.

“nice timing, and by the way are you ok?” she asked me while wiping my face with her handkerchief

“t t thank you for saving me” I replied as my tears fall down

“shhh, everything is fine now, do you want me to call your parents? Or do you want me to send you home?” she asked me with concern

“please don’t call my parents, just call my brother instead. It’s Takahashi Kai” I replied and give my cellphone to her. She dialed it but no one answer instead she always sent to the voice mail area.

“oh your brother is not picking up my call, well I guess I have to send you home if it’s alright?” she stated

“I can go home by myself and I already caused you so much trouble besides I want to be alone to think” I responded, I’m shy to accept her offer especially to the scene she saw.

“well if you say so, ahh and by the way if you don’t have someone whom you can talk to or share what happened, here I’ll give you this card” she said while wearing a bright face that makes me feel that I’m safe now

“WNA? I read what is written

“yeah, it is wild night atmosphere. They will surely help you especially when you want to take revenge. My sister is part of that group and I’m their finance secretary. Feel free to write us an e-mail” she stated

“I have to go now, see you around and please be extra careful next time, I might not be able to save you for the second time around” she said as she walked away

“ what is your name?” I shouted quickly so that she can hear me

“ ERENA, MAEDA ERENA” she responded as she waved goodbye

*END OF FLASHBACK*

It was already 11 o’clock in the evening and I was staring the card that Erena gave me. I open my laptop and search for the website. I was thinking if this website is a scam or not but I trust Erena and I want to take revenge badly. I filled all the details that they needed and after few minutes a new topic was posted.

“To Kim – Evidence no. 89” I whispered as I read the title of the new topic

I click the topic and I hear a voice.

““ a a a a alright, I admit it, I’m having an affair with a girl from the unlimited night club for 1 year already. I betrayed my wife my family. But who cares? You kids can’t do anything about it and what is this? Do you think you are good enough by doing this? Do you think people will acknowledge you? You are just a trash in society”

I was shocked of what I heard. Erena is really telling the truth. This website really helps us teenagers who suffered some pain or bad memories because of some bad adults.

“I must send an e-mail, hope they can read it and accept it” I murmured but when I’m about to type on my keypad somebody knock at my door. I quickly turn my laptop off and put the card beside it.

“Myao you have to sleep now, you still have a class tomorrow” mother voiced out

“yes mom” I said nervously. I turned off the lights and lay down in my bed.

“sigh! I’ll just get up early in the morning tomorrow to send WNA a request e-mail” I thought while I close my eyes and sleep.

*The Next Morning*

         To WNA, can you please revenge me with the guys from paper heart agency? They tried to harass me and dragged me in a dark place. They even said that they wanted me to be part of their girl group that they will introduce to public as soon as possible. I tried begging them because I know what really their plan was but they won’t let me go home until I said yes. They tried to rape me too but luckily someone helped me and said her name is Erena. She said she is a member of this team and gives me a card where your website is written. I tried to tell my brother about it but no words came out in my mouth. I also can’t say this to my parents coz I’m afraid they will not believe me as they sees me as a boyish chubby girl. Hope I can get your approval
P.S= I heard rumors about this agency being a scam, they asked teenager girls who wanted to be a singer to join them to achieve their dreams without knowing that they will end up being a prostitute in a club which I don’t know the name.
                                                                                 
                                                                                                     
Sincerely, Takahashi Myao

I click the send button after I’m done typing my message to WNA.

“YATA! I’m done, hope they will accept it” I said with a sigh of relief.
After few minutes, a message appears.

“ From WNA
   Thank you for your request. You are currently our customer number 90. Please do fill up this form below and print it. Put your picture in the space given and also your signature. Please send us the hard copy of the documents. Hope you will do it now because we still have a lot of request. If you fail to send us the copy today, you will not be given a second chance. If we already have the hard copy, please wait for our mail/text as we will inform you the date and time of revenge. Thank you :)

                                                                                                                         

                                                                                                                                                                                                             
space for 2x2 pic
 
Name:
 Age:
 Location:
 Telephone/cellphone no:
                 Please put your signature in the Customer’s signature as a proof that you agreed to our terms of condition and regulations that you read earlier when you were signing up to our website.
             
                                                                                                                                                                                                 
  _____________________
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Customer’s signature

“yes! They accepted it. Lucky I have one 2x2 picture left inside my wallet” I said while heading to fill up the documents. After few minutes I printed it out and sign it with my signature.

“alright, it’s done” I muttered as I put the documents in an envelope with their address.

I went to the nearest post office telling them that they need to send this documents I’m holding because it is urgent. They made me choose their special delivery which will take 30 minutes to 1 hour delivering my mail. I paid for it even though it is quite expensive.

“my cellphone, where is my cellphone?” I stated while searching for it

“shit! I left it at home” I murmured. I check the time but it’s already 7:50

“geez, what a wrong timing, I have a test today so I can’t be late, I’ll just go home early” I thought as I went towards the direction of our school. 

*KAI’s POV*

Knock! Knock!

As I’m trying to check my sister’s condition

Knock!knock!

Still no one answer. I’m worried of what she might do and decided to open her door.

“eh? She is not here and she forgot to bring her cellphone” I thought while walking near to her study table.

“well, maybe I’ll just drop it by at her school since it’s on the way to the café and I’m also in the afternoon shift” I whispered as I get her cellphone something has fallen. It was like a calling card or something and I pick it up. I read was it is written.

“ WNA (Wild Night Atmosphere).. eh?? Don’t tell me?” i said with a surprised tone as my question was answered about WNA. The phone I was holding vibrated and it received 1 message. I read it with a low voice

“we already got the documents, the revenge will be this evening 8 o’clock” the unknown sender texted.

My heart beats faster as I read the message. A lot of thoughts are floating inside my head. I was nervous if my sister is part of this group, or she did something wrong to them and they gonna revenge her tonight. I immediately search for the address which written down in the card. I run straight towards the given address while calling Sae telling him that I can’t come to the café. After few minutes of running I arrived at the place. It was western style 2 story house. I pressed the doorbell while catching my breath.

“who are you?” a girl’s voice asked

“I’m Kai, Takahashi Kai” I replied

“sorry but we don’t know you, and as far as I remember we don’t have an appointment with that name” she said

“I’m Takahashi Myao’s brother, I just want to clear things out” I responded

“Takahashi Myao? Ohh number 90, alright come in” she said as she pressed something that make the gate open automatically.

I got inside and saw a bunch of teenage girls, 11 to be exact with the beautiful-evil-hunger-for-blood girl sitting in the couch reading a book.

“come in shorty” a tall girl with a short hair said(mariko) while others stares at me stopping what they are doing

“thank you, and please don’t call me shorty, I already know that” I said jokingly while trying to hide my annoyed face

“sorry but this is our territory shorty, so you must accept the nickname we had given to you” the long brown curly hair (tomochin) which I met before in the café, the one who kicked the garbage bag, stated

“so what is your reason of coming here shorty?” a short girl but definitely taller than me (yuko) asked

“what do you want with my sister, and what is with this message, are you the one who send it, is she part of this group?” I asked directly showing them the message while I’m already pissed off hearing them saying shorty in front of my face. The forbidden word that makes my blood boiled.

“hahaha, what is with that question shorty? You don’t know anything, do you? And your sister is not part of us as we are not recruiting new members” a girl with black aura (yukirin) said teasingly

“I can’t hold it anymore! You! Bunch of delinquents or rebellious teenage girls beating up adults, stop calling me shorty and also if you do something about my sister, I will not forgive you. And thanks God she is not part of this crap group or else she will end up like a trash in society” I yelled with anger as I can’t hold it anymore.

I look up to them with my eyes wide opened. I was carried away with my emotions; I said too much, too much painful words. I saw their angry, shocked faces until someone stood up and voiced out.

“heh, thank you for entering our territory and destroying our mood. For your information, we are not planning to hurt or do something stupid to your sister. She is the one who needs our help. And what the heck! Do you call yourself her brother? Damn it, you don’t know anything about what happened to her yesterday and you have the guts showing your face here and telling that words? Yes we are rebellious, we are stubborn, we left our houses and we beat up those fvcking unreliable, untrustworthy, and a bad role model adults but you don’t have the rights to call us a trash in society. You don’t know us, you don’t know a single thing about this CRAP GROUP and please don’t judge us” the beautiful-evil-hunger-for-blood girl said with anger and walked out, headed to the second floor of the house.

“before saying all those hurtful words, please know about the real situation” the girl with a long black hair(mayuyu) approached while letting me see what is written on the laptop.

I read what is written in the laptop. They are right I judged them without knowing their real motive. I was so angry about myself for telling those hurtful words to them, angry for not protecting my own sister.

“I’m so sorry for the rude words I said earlier” I said while bowing my head

“we are used to it already but still it hurts” kojima stated

“yeah it’s sad that everyone judge us even though it’s the very first time that they meet or see us” miichan voiced out

“ and I’m part of that ‘everyone’, I’m embarrassed because people said I’m nice but I ended up judging you. I’m really sorry” I bowed feeling guilty

“ damage has been done” jurina replied

“you can go now Mr. nice guy coz we still have lots of things to do” tomo~mi said

“but I want to help you. I want to have a revenge for my sister also and to pay for my wrong judgments about your group. Please let me help you” I begged

“ we don’t want another luggage in our shoulders” rena responded

“I will not be a burden to you, I just want to take revenge for my sister” I said

“do what you want but don’t you ever be a burden to us” mariko approved

“yes, I won’t, definetly” I responded while bowing.

I watched them prepared their things for tonight’s work. I’m a bit nervous as this is my first time fighting bad guys.

“alright let’s go” atsuko said while giving me a scary stare

We went to the location. They are like professionals in fighting. They beaten up the guys but there is one that call some backups. A bunch of guys immediately comes to the rescue and the girls are slightly tired already. Yes, I’m not burden to them coz I’m hiding somewhere because of fear until

“hey look out, at your back” I shouted

She didn’t hear me and continue punching the guy who was lying on the ground. I run towards her and protect her from the guy who was about to hit her using a metal tube.

“hey are you ok, you’re bleeding, oi wake up, wake up!” she shouted as I’m about to lose my consciousness

“aachan and mariko take him to the van, we can handle this” Yuki shouted and beat the guy who hits me.


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sorry if this chapter is not good.

BTW i will take a break writing fics for now as i have so many things to do with my life lol.
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 06) update 1/10/12
Post by: Sok on January 10, 2012, 05:04:00 PM
Yay~ Update.
Wow this chapter is very interesting.
The bad guys had back up.  :thumbdown:
Poor Kai, I hope he's okay. i wonder who'll be taking care of him?
Thank you can't wait for your next update.  :thumbsup
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 06) update 1/10/12
Post by: Yagami.Rai on January 10, 2012, 05:35:13 PM
Yea!! Update!! I've been waiting for this :D
Oh~ Kai went to WNA and want to help them :lol:
I wonder who Kai defended XD and I hope nothing too much will happen to him :)
Yea, I also wonder who will be taking care of Kai XD

Thanks a lot for the update :thumbup :thumbup
Please Update Soon :mon cute: No matter how long, I'll still wait :thumbsup
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 06) update 1/10/12
Post by: Haruko on January 11, 2012, 05:58:27 AM
OMG!!! good chapter
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 06) update 1/10/12
Post by: Megumi on January 11, 2012, 09:57:05 PM
Waaa! You updated!

 :panic: ErenaxMyao!  *yes! Erena was so cool here saving Myao...

Nooo Kai!

Thank you for your update!

Arígatou!  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 06) update 1/10/12
Post by: Sydney W on January 12, 2012, 03:36:04 AM
Kai save one of the WNA girls. Wonder who is he saving ?
Hope the next update, Kai have a good communication with the girls group. Everything will start to be good.
I want to see more KaiAcchan moments. ^^
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 06) update 1/10/12
Post by: kahem on January 15, 2012, 08:38:22 PM
Wow Myao I was scared for her
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 06) update 1/10/12
Post by: acchaniu on May 23, 2012, 02:32:13 AM
haha you've already rested a couple of months  :angry:
haha please update soon  :farofflook:
ehhhhhhhhh Maeda san  :cow:
anyway fix KaixAcchan xDD
I love your fic    :ding: :wigglypanda:
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 06) update 1/10/12
Post by: flameeyes on June 23, 2012, 12:40:09 PM
WHEN?

 :depressed: :dunno: :depressed:

 :x when do you think you will UPDATE? hu?!!!! :x
 I stuck here!!! :x !

 :temper: :tantrum: :temper:
arghhhh!!! :x I want more!!!
 :pen_whirl: :mon unsure: :mon whine: :mon unsure: :pen_whirl:
SO UPDATE SOON I COMMAND YOU!!!
 :on thumbb:
 :lol: ahahahaha :lol:

 :thumbup that's all!!! :peace:

HOPE you UPDATE soon okey!!!! :thumbup

arghhh!!  :doh: what well happen to kai :?
I also want to know what is the past of Acchan why is she act like that :shocked

okey so PLEASE :bow: UPDATE!!!! :cry:

Take care always and keep up your good work!!!

 :skull: :cat: :pen_wave: :cat: :skull:

[/color]FLAMEEYES!!!
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 06) update 1/10/12
Post by: miayaka on June 23, 2012, 05:38:07 PM
me want an update here  :(
lookin forward to the story of my atsumina
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 06) update 1/10/12
Post by: Trickster on August 01, 2012, 01:56:40 PM
creamcracker-san, I'll be waiting for your update :thumbsup
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 06) update 1/10/12
Post by: xxx220 on August 05, 2012, 05:07:17 PM
Please COntinued mOre
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 06) update 1/10/12
Post by: creamcracker on August 18, 2012, 11:48:41 PM
 :cool1:
 hahaha i know i know i haven't updated this fic for a very long time now. it's been 7 months i think? but i feel guilty now especially some of you are still commenting and waiting for an update. Well to be honest I somewhat lost the plot of this story and some of you received a pm from me. Well i really don't know if this will be an interesting update or not. I did my best but maybe it will disappoint you?HAHAHA i don't have confidence with this one but nevertheless I want to give you an update and criticisms and suggestions are welcome :D. so much for talking here huh? so here's the next chapter

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Chapter 07

“hey are you ok, you’re bleeding, oi wake up, wake up!” she shouted as I’m about to lose my consciousness

“acchan and mariko take him to the van, we can handle this” Yuki shouted and beat the guy who hits me.

--- Writer’s PoV---

Acchan and Mariko took Kai to the car and left the other WNA members fighting with the bad guys. Mariko drove the car to the nearest hospital in the city.

“ hey can you help us? We have an emergency here coz our friend was hit with a metal tube in the head” Mariko said to the receptionist.

“friend?” Acchan whispered to Mariko

“just go with the flow Acchan, you don’t want the people to know what really happened right?” mariko whispered back.

“alright alright” Acchan said

The receptionist quickly called for a doctor and some nurses. The doctor and nurses then speedily went to where Mariko’s car parked and smoothly transferred Kai’s body to the gurney and immediately send him into the OR.

“you can wait here Miss’s, your friend will be fine” The nurse said and then went inside the OR.

“the nurse said he’ll be fine, let’s go back now Mariko” Acchan said trying to walk towards the exit.

“we can’t leave him alone, especially he’s the brother of our client. We have a responsibility here since we brought him in the location. We have to make sure he is totally fine before we can make a report to his sister” Mariko said while sitting down in the bench waiting for the operation to finish.

“but we didn’t forced him to come with us. It was his decision, it was his own will and besides, maybe Yuki and the others need our help there”  Acchan trying to convince her cousin said

“Hey Acchan, that person inside the OR protected you. He even risks his own life for you and this is all you can do? Leaving him alone here?” Mariko trying to lower her voice because they are in a public place replied.

“I didn’t command him to protect me neither to risks his own life for me” Acchan shouted with anger

“your voice Acchan, we are in a public place” Mariko reminded

“sorry, I was just carried away with my emotions” Acchan apologized and leaned on the wall trying to calm herself a little bit.

“what’s wrong with you? You’re not the Acchan that I knew before” Mariko stood up and walked to where Acchan is leaning.

“nothing” the only word that came out from Acchan’s mouth.

“of course it’s not just nothing, I know there’s something wrong. Tell me, what’s wrong with you? What’s really bothering you?” Mariko puts her hand to Acchan’s shoulders and looks deeply inside her eyes.

“Tell me” she added

“I don’t want to bother you guys with my own problems” Acchan removed her earpiece then walks towards the vending machine to get something to drink. Mariko who is standing there just watches Acchan’s back with a sad eyes.

 “I just want to know the story behind your lonely eyes” Mariko thought and sat down in the chair waiting for the operation to be finish.

“is everything fine Mariko, Acchan?” Yuko worriedly asked

“I forgot you guys can hear us and she can’t hear you, she just removed her earpiece just seconds ago” Mariko sighed

“what happened?” Yuki asked. Noises can be heard as they are still doing their work.

“I’ll tell you guys about it later, just concentrate to the things you’re doing right now” Mariko ordered to the members.

“here”

Mariko looked at the ice cold coffee in front of her. She then looked up to the person who is offering the drink.

“take it”

“Acchan” she whispered and then took the drink.

 “you heard what I said to them right?”

“yeah sort of”

“they’re worried about you, we are worried about you”

“I’ll be in the rooftop to have some fresh air”

With that, the hallway is now filled with silence while Acchan is walking away leaving Mariko behind.

There’s still lot of words that Mariko wants to deliver to Acchan but afraid that she can’t hold her tears any longer.

“why?” she said loud enough for Acchan to hear.

“why are you keeping all the pain by yourself?” Mariko spoke again now trying to prevent a single tear to drop from her eyes.

Acchan who is walking away was shocked by the sudden question making her to stop walking midway.

“if your sad, then say it to us, if your lonely then tell us, if you have problems then share it to us. Don’t keep it to yourself. You saved us before now it’s our time to save you from your despair” Mariko who is now shedding tears stood up and looked at to where Acchan is standing.

“who am i? you said I’m not the person I used to be anymore. How can you guys save me from my own despair if I don’t know the reason why I’m in this room of loneliness, sadness and hatred.  Right now my life is a puzzle with a piece missing” Acchan said without looking at Mariko then continued walking and went to the rooftop.

Mariko just stood there while looking at Acchan who is slowly vanishing from her sight. With Acchan’s question and words, Mariko now is somewhat lost and couldn’t find any answer. Even though she’s close with Acchan, she feels helpless.

Minutes had passed and the red light on the upper middle part of the room went off and then the door opened revealing the doctor who operates Kai.

Mariko quickly wipes her tears away and went to the doctor and ask if Kai is fine.

“the operation is successful, it’s not really that life threatening. He just needs some rest and he’ll be fine” the doctor bowed and then went to his
changing room.

“that’s good to hear” Mariko sighed with relief. The door once again opened revealing an unconscious Kai in gurney.

“excuse me miss but can you come to us in the reception area and sign some papers for the patient” A nurse asked.

“sure” Mariko followed the nurse and signed some papers. After signing she then went to comfort room to talk to other WNA members.

“how the thing going on in there?” she asked through her earpiece

“it’s already done, Mayu and Jurina already uploaded it on our website” Kojima spoke

“how about the payment?” Mariko asked as she is mostly the one who negotiate about it

“Rena was the one doing it” Miichan said while munching chips

“don’t worry Mariko, I’m smart if I’m not in Geki mode so the negotiation went fine. Payment will be at our bank account tomorrow” Geki said quickly before Mariko will say anything bad about her.

“oh I see. So do you guys want me to pick you up?” Mariko asked once again as being a driver for every mission they have is also her job.

“don’t bother, we’re already here in the hospital, now where are you?” Tomochin said

Mariko can hear some of the members’ voices asking where Kai’s room is.

“I’ll just meet you guys in Kai’s room” Mariko said then washes her hands and went out from the comfort room

*meanwhile in the rooftop *

A girl who is laying on the floor watch deeply in the scenery above her. It makes her feel warmth inside her heart like there’s someone who is watching her from above.

“you’re not the Acchan I knew before….. if your sad, then say it us, if your lonely then tell us, if you have problems then share it to us……… why are you keeping all the pain by yourself” she keeps replaying the words that Mariko said to her earlier.

“what kind of person I am really before?” she asked her own self while trying to reach a star from the sky.

“is being in the room of loneliness, sadness and hatred make me alive for a particular reason?”

“does this hatred inside me when I face those adults that do awful things in this society has something to do with my puzzled life?

“what’s the reason on all of this things?” she asked lots of question to herself but answer couldn’t find anywhere. Then a shooting star appeared in the scenery she currently looking at. She then closes her eyes and made a wish but suddenly a vague memory was played.

“neh Atsuko, when you miss me and wanted to see me just watch the stars in the sky and the most beautiful and sparkling star you see, that would be me” the girl who’s face can’t be seen clearly said with a smile.

“uhn” the girl named Atsuko said.

“what was that?” Acchan who was shocked from a sudden memory opened her eyes quickly.

“was that child me? and who’s that girl I’m talking with? Is she my mother?” Acchan is now in deep thought and currently lost in the forest of questions. She didn’t even bother her aching head as she still trying to analyze this weird memories appearance in these past few months.

“what the hell did really happen to me?” she looked up at the sky trying to find the most beautiful and sparkling star.

“Acchan, Kai is awake” A sudden voice interrupted her

“Are you ok?” The girl asked trying to get Acchan’s attention

“ohh Yuko, yeah I’m fine” Acchan looked at Yuko who is walking near her.

“air here is so refreshing, and the sky looks beautiful neh?” Yuko said and lay down beside her.

“yeah and It’s peaceful in here” Acchan replied looking back at the sky.

“about earlier---“ Yuko was about to say something but interrupted by Acchan

“let’s go” Acchan stood up and stretches her muscles.

“but”

“I don’t want to talk about it, not now”

“alright”

The two figures then went downstairs and go to where Kai room is.

“where are the others?” Yuko asked as she only saw few people the moment when she opens the door.

“Yuki,Rena and the TomoTomo went home. It’s not good that there are lots of people in here. Besides Mayu and Jurina are the only people in the house so Rena and Yuki are bit worried” Miichan said who is now eating an ice cream.

“so how is he?” the person behind Yuko asked

“Acchan” Kojima said

“he’s fine. He just needs some rest” Mariko stated with a smile.

“ohhh he’s awake” Kojima said then walked to where Kai is laying down.

“where am I?” Kai spoke looking around trying to figure out where he is.

“you are in the hospital, you save Acchan earlier remember?” Yuko said to the confuse Kai

“oh yeah, how is she?” Kai asked without even noticing that Acchan is there standing near the door.

“she’s fine, as you can see she’s here with us” Kojima pointed to where Acchan is standing.

“I’m glad you’re fine” Kai said with a smile.

“did you tell my parents about what happened to me?” Kai asked as he don’t want her family to be worried about him

“it’s fine, Mayu and Jurina handled it perfectly earlier. They used your voice that was recorded earlier when you were in the scene and edited it in the voice changer and called your parents that you’ll be sleeping over in your friend’s house and they said it’s fine” Yuko said

“oh thanks”

“anyways we have to go now Nyannyan and take some rest in the house” Yuko smile in perverted way.

“Acchan and I will be guarding Kai tonight so it’s fine for you to home and you too Miichan” Mariko said

“I’ll stay here with you” Miichan said looking at Mariko.

“but wh----“ Acchan was about to say but then Yuko covered her mouth and whispered something to her.

“he saved your life of course you have to be with him even just for tonight” she whispered

“and besides if you’ll be in the house I know you will interrupt us again just like before” Yuko said with a pout

“because you guys are so loud” Acchan retorted

“what are they talking about?” Kai asked confused as he don’t know what’s going on

“no, nothing , don’t mind them and let’s go Yuko” Kojima is now blushing quickly drag Yuko out in the room.

“jeez, those two” Acchan murmured

“oh Acchan I know you’re hungry, want something to eat?” Mariko asked as she’s hungry too

“yeah, anything would be fine as long as it’s edible” Acchan smirked

“haha you’re learning, alright” Mariko smiled

“wait Mariko, I’ll come with you, I want to buy something too, ja ne~” Miichan wave to Acchan and Kai then hurriedly run to Mariko.

Now silence filled in the room. No one wants to talk first. Acchan is thinking about what happened earlier while Kai still can’t find any words to say until

“do you have anything to say to me?” Kai asked as she knows when you did something good you’ll receive a thank you in return.

“no” a cold reply from the lady who is sitting in the couch right next to his bed.

“even the words like thank you?” Kai said. It’s not really that thank you is so important to him after saving the girl’s life but she just wanted to hear those words from her.

“it’s too early for me to say that to you, but if you really wanted me to hear those words then maybe change your name into that words and I’ll think about calling you that way” Acchan replied without looking at Kai.

“as expected from a rebel girl” Kai thought

“well oyasumi” Kai said and is about to sleep but a sudden hum interrupted him from dozing off.

It was as if she was singing him a lullaby, a thank you lullaby but it’s not. The tune of the song is somewhat sad, it’s like the song represents on how she really feels.  Kai was about to ask about the song but the door opened making him to close his eyes again and pretended to be asleep.

“Acchan!” shouted Mariko with a worried face.

“what?” Acchan asked as she know something must had happen.

“Mayu and Jurina” Mariko said while panting from the running she did just to get in Kai’s room

“What happened to them?”

“they lock their selves in the room. Yuki nor Rena couldn’t persuade them to get out” Miichan explained

“why? Don’t tell me?” Acchan who is now worried to the two younger members of WNA asked

TBC!!!

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well that's it HAHAHA. now now i'm lazy to re-read this one so there's lot of mistakes in the story and I apologize for that.
Hope this chapter is fine.

Thanks to
Yagami-san, well she's the first one i really pm'd about this
Chichay-san,  who pm'd me to continue this fic
Mia-san and Trickster-san, whom I asked for some suggestions

and to some readers who're waiting for this update, thank you :D

now need to hide again hahahaha ja ne~~~  :on blackhole:



Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 07) FINALLY UPDATED! :D
Post by: Sydney W on August 19, 2012, 03:36:53 AM
Acchan being cold towards Kai. Not to worry as I guess Acchan heart will be melt by Kai sooner or later. Hehehe. Thanks for update
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 07) FINALLY UPDATED! :D
Post by: Wmatsui22 on August 19, 2012, 04:58:16 AM
YOU FINALLY UPDATE !!! YEHEY!! I'M HAPPY!!
I WAIT VERY LONG FOR YOUR NEXT CHAPTER :(
I HOPE YOU UPDATE ALWAYS
ANYWAYS..
THANK YOU FOR UPDATE..
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 07) FINALLY UPDATED! :D
Post by: Trickster on August 19, 2012, 12:34:12 PM
at last I can read it XD
I wonder who's the girl in Acchan's memory? another mystery XD
Acchan is still cold towards Kai, I wonder how they'll end up together (it's KaiAcchan fanfic after all XD)
Jurina and Mayu locked themselves in the same room? don't tell me... :o

thanks for the update, and of course I'll be waiting for your next update :thumbsup:
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 07) FINALLY UPDATED! :D
Post by: flameeyes on August 24, 2012, 12:00:19 PM
 
-EVIL!-

Me:YOU!!!! YOU!!!!!
DON'T HIDE LIKE THAT!!!!!!
 
UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!......  :mon fire:

Personality 1,2&3:
fuck!!
We need a mental hospital here!!!
or a shot gun and shot her head to stop her mouth to yell!!!
  :on_plug: :on_plug: :on_plug:
 
Me: What?...  :mon huh:
 
Personality 1,2&3: *HIDE  :mon lurk: :mon curtain: :on freeze:

Me:
Where they went?.....  :mon look:
 
 
after a minute

Personality 1,2&3: :mon exhaust: :mon exhaust: :mon exhaust:
 
 

Me:
oopss....I remember  :hehehe:
something :glasses:
 :mon geek: you!!!!! Creamcracker!!!
 :mon fire: YOU SHOUDN'T HIDE!!!  :mon mad: UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!  :mon evil:
 

-END-

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that's all
 
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 :flower: Take care always :peace: and keep up your good work!! :thumbsup
 
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LINK:Comment on the other fanfic of yours (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31062.msg1083728#msg1083728)
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 07) FINALLY UPDATED! :D
Post by: jurichan on September 15, 2012, 09:13:42 PM
stp update

I want to know more, what will happen with Jurina and mayu?
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 07) FINALLY UPDATED! :D
Post by: Tiptip on August 10, 2013, 08:16:24 AM
Creamcracker-san please update your fic :')
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 07) FINALLY UPDATED! :D
Post by: chichay12 on August 10, 2013, 09:19:43 AM
Creamcracker-san please update your fic :')

see creamy..im not the only one wants an update of this..XD
oh well...i just wait to ur update..
update soon :on gay:
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 07) FINALLY UPDATED! :D
Post by: cisda83 on August 10, 2013, 12:31:30 PM
Just seen the update...

Interesting development in the story..,

What made Mayu and Jurina locked themselves?

What about Atsuko and Kai development?

Who was the person that was in Atsuko's memory?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update...

But please update the story please....

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs


 
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 07) FINALLY UPDATED! :D
Post by: ezha on August 20, 2013, 12:28:53 PM
thanks u for update
keep writing for next chapter hehehehe
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 07) FINALLY UPDATED! :D
Post by: chichay12 on September 08, 2013, 12:20:57 PM
BUMP! :twisted:
CREAMY~~ where are u???

UPDATE SOON!!!!PLEASSSSEEEEEE  XD
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 07) FINALLY UPDATED! :D
Post by: rhin12 on September 08, 2013, 12:26:05 PM
I agree with Chichay12-san   :deco: please update soon, creamcracker-san~  :cow:
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 07) FINALLY UPDATED! :D
Post by: Senelcar on February 03, 2014, 10:39:34 AM
Can we still ask for an update, even after 18 month ???
I fear not, but I ll still do it, cause it's a pity to end such a fanfic unfinished like this :-(
Title: Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 07) FINALLY UPDATED! :D
Post by: ryu201 on March 24, 2014, 06:31:16 PM
Why there's many fanfic unfinished here?
It so sad when read great fanfic like this just like that without an ending :(
Please author-san update this fanfic,onegai -bow-
I waiting for ur come back  :twothumbs
Sorry for bad english