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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: veforveranda on May 12, 2012, 04:12:29 PM
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#prolog#
this story about JKT48 (sister group AKB48 from Indonesia), JKT48 is first sister group out of japan..
they are young
they have a dream
they come form diferent status and personalities
but they walk on the same purpose tobe idol, that make people around them happy
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jkt48 is the first sister group out of japan, that was a shocking news...
it bring new hope in indonesian music industry, even though they are still unfamiliar with idoling world.
but they are know if become apart of 48 family will bring them to cacth their dream.
this story abaut jkt48 member and some akb48 member,
the main character is jesicca veranda tanumihardja a.k.a Ve and devi kinal putri a.k.a kinal and some jkt48 member.
born in rich family is not guarante make your life happy or you can do anything you like. this is happend in jesicca veranda life.
she born in rich and famous "tanumihardja" family, her parent spoiled her alot and over protective to her because she is the
only doughter in their family. she have 2 brother and always protect her and make sure that no one from those guys will hurt
their beloved sister, it makes ve never get boyfriend in her live and sometimes she annoyed with this. she never get life lessons
form her family, so she don't know how to survive.
in other story kinal is an orphan, she must strugel to find some money to fill her daily need. severe life made her become a strong
person but beside that she hiding a big mistery. she used in street life, because of thiat she was first discovered by street dance.
with dance she feel so different, she found pleasure and new hope in her live.
how it would be if both of them meet together, will they become friens or become foe??
TBC
sorry for my bad english, coz it's not my 1 st language :sorry
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This is the wrong thread to post this fic. There is already a AKB thread where you can post fics. I will just move this thread.
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:smiling from ear to ear:
Yes! Someone writes a JKT-based fanfic in jphip! :D
So the pairing would be Ve X Kinal I see. I've been kind of imagining this pairing for so long since I discovered they're close in reality.
And the background you set for both of them in the prologue perfectly fits!
I can't help but saying I'm really looking forward to the story. Yoroshiku! :thumbsup
Btw, just relax at English isn't your 1st language... don't mind about them. You're not alone in this matter. :yep:
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A JKT 48 FANFIC!!!!
UWAH!!! SO HAPPY!! *crying*
at last, a fanfic from JKT48!!
i want to write about them, but, i don't familiar with them..
even if i live in Indonesia.. at JAKARTA! oohh the irony..
VEY?! and KINAL!? *squealing*
Vey is my oshi.. and Kinal is my friend's oshi..
she must be excited to read this. hoho i'll tell her about this! :D
and JKT48 first theather will be held on 17 may!
but i can't go.. I have final exams after that day.. so.. TT.TT
and veforveranda-san, are you indonesian?
aruka-san too? an indonesian?
I can't wait for the first chapter veforveranda-san. And don't worry about grammar mistakes. hoho
Semangat!!
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JKT fanfic..hohohohoho..YES!! :cow:
i'm waiting for the first chap..
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HELL YEAH, JKT48 FANFIC!! :cow:
and it's about Ve and Kinal. Well, they're not my oshi but............ still good to see fic about them
Bring the first chapter as soon as possible
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aruka-san too? an indonesian?
Hehe... I thought you would never ask. :grin:
I love the fact that more Indonesians (you and pwoper48-san) are coming to jphip's AKB fics thread after yukofan-san and me. :D
Jadi kita dari negeri yang sama, kawan. :thumbsup
To veforveranda-san (or hotaru-san).. you already got your :welcome from your fellow Indonesians. Mudah2an bisa lebih men-ganbatte-kan dirimu dalam menulis lanjutan ceritanya.
:D :peace:
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LOL
so everyone in this thread are indonesian?
never thought that i will met another indonesian. Yes, i knew yukofan-san an indonesian earlier, then pwoper48-san, and the last is you aruka-san. LOL
so that's why there's a jkt48 OS on your thread aruka-san.
sorry for not giving a comment. LOL
i will after i read all of them~ :D
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The awkward moment when you meet another person from same country on an international forum and dont know what to say :smhid
Hm... anybody apply for JKT48 1st theater next week?? :D
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The awkward moment when you meet another person from same country on an international forum and dont know what to say :smhid
Hm... anybody apply for JKT48 1st theater next week?? :D
LOL yup, that's what i felt.
I CAN'T TT.TT
sudah mau UAS at 20 may.. so bye2 1st theater..
i hope after exam finished, i can watch them.. TT.TT
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The awkward moment when you meet another person from same country on an international forum and dont know what to say :smhid
Hm... anybody apply for JKT48 1st theater next week?? :D
LOL yup, that's what i felt.
I CAN'T TT.TT
sudah mau UAS at 20 may.. so bye2 1st theater..
i hope after exam finished, i can watch them.. TT.TT
I know what you feel :glasses:
Well, my final exam will be start at May 21... But, we don't know when the permanent theater will be realized. So, yeah.... Exam is now the 2nd on my to-do list ...
even sasshi approved this :sashiko:
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YES! we don't know where or when there'll be a permanent theater for them..
LOL 48s family for life eh? LOL
I can't... TT.TT tell me what happened later if you really watch them pwoper-san. LOL
kinda feel bad for veranda-san.
sorry for chatting in this thread.. and please update as soon as possible~ :D
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Although I like JKT48 only a little bit. But I'm still curious what will happen to them
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@writerjunkie : thank you, i am still new in here so i am little bit confuse :)
@aruka : thank you so much, i am glad that someone notice they closenesh hehehehe :twisted:. thank you for your support
semoga tetap semangat..
@bochang : i little bit upset because i can't see their first show :cry: but because of that i post this fanfic today :)
i am indonesian, just call me hotaru ok :)
thank for your support.. i am not feel alone here :lol:
@Pwoper48 : hehe don't worry you are not the only one ttah can't see jkt48 first theater..
@bochang+@Pwoper48 : ganbate... semangat..
@anzai48 : i agree with you ve is like a princess-like idol, she is shy too if i see her in reality.
and i am interest with kinal too.
just call me hotaru ok, i will insert dhike, ghachan and nabila in this fic so don't worry
regional : SBY48 8)
@Katouryuken : thank's for read this fanfic. an i hope you enjoy this
@all : thank for you all, i am still new here so please take care of me.. :)
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i am sorry if this fanfic is far form the reality, i set this time when they are still student.
so i hope all of you like it guys..
and it's for CELEBRATE THEIR FIRST THEATER :heart: :heart: :heart:
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#CHAP 1#
NO ONE POV
“Uh.. I can’t breath.. uhuk..uhugh..” everything look so hazy..” what happen to me??”. Suddenly that accident cross my mind.
“ oh no.. mom.. dad..” I struggle my self to break free form my seat belt when I success, I fall to the ground.
When I try to reach them I feel wetnes in may feet and my hand,when I realize it I am dorwn in pools of blood.
I am start crying my body is shaking, I try to call them “ mom.. dad.. are you ok..” still silent but suddenly I herd groan from front seat.
“ urgh.. kinaru it’s you? are you ok honey?’ with low voice. I try my best to reach their place when I came there I saw bloody covered all of their body.
“i.. it’s me.. dad, are you o..ok?” I reply with suttering and start to sobbing.
“ honey.. listen to dady ok! Now plese leave this car quicly..” .
“no!! I won’t leave you two, we can go to gether”tear drowning in may cheek.
“ honey plese just do it, dady can’t go because… dady want to accompany your mom till end” while turn his head in left side to lifeless body.
When she look to the side too, she realize that her mother is already gone, she crying hard. “no..no..no..dady!!” while hold her father hand.
”don’t cry honey, just remember that we always love you and…. Gomenasai..”and then his hand losen form the grip.
“dad.. plese don’t leave me..” suddenly gas smell every where and fire start burning the car.
I take my hand free and try to move out from the car crawly.
I try hard to open the dor eventhougt the dor is little open but it stuct so it must be pushed, a quicly turn around and kick the dor to open.
With all my left energy I finaly break free and go outside form the car. My body is trembling and all my energy is gone.
Not along time form my succesfull escape fire burn wildly and then the car explode
“mom.. dad.. don’t leave” I am criying hard in silence.
Kinal POV
“mom.. dad.. don’t leave.. m..” suddenly a feel my back hit the ground “ argg.. ittai..”, i open my eye look around, it’s stil in my room.
I touch my forehead and wipe the sweat that roling down my face i am still out of breath,
but i decide to slowly got up and reach my bed, it’s have been 5 years ago i got that accident and for 5 years too i always got nightmare.
Until now i still feel tears traill down my cheek, after that accident i always crying all of night until the tears run out.
i don’t have their stuff or even their picture how a pity isn’t?
the only thing i get from them just necklace with key-shaped pendant and i always wear it anytime and enywhere.
I watch my clock and it’s already 4 a.m, it’s still dark outside so i decide to get some water to calm my self,
yeah this is me Devi Kinal Putri, i am 14 years old now still young rigth.
I leave a lone, i haven’t family since my perents died, actually i have aunt but she leave in Bandung and have 5 childerns,
because finance problem she can’t take care of me and i won’t to distrub her,so I decide to lookfor money by my self.
Because i am still under age find job is not easy, i ever be clening service in public toilet, selling cigarate and newspaper until stret musicians.
I do anything to survive and do proper job, eventhougt it hard job but i am be grateful because i am not become drugs dealer or slut like my other friends.
They are still young but because they need money they accept that dirty job..
some one even overed me that dirty job but i refuse it eventouth i can get alot of money form that and use it to continue my study but my parent wouldn’t agree with that.
I live in sub urban area with crowdied enfirontment, I rent a room fomer warehouse and i am so lucky to get this with cheap price.
it’s beter than i leave in bridge column like old times.
Now i decide to fix my room and then go to shower so i can ready to work.
In other side
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Ve POV,
“Fire...fire...fire...do..dododo...dor... fire.. fire..fire.. do..do.. [BEP]”.
I shut that alarm form my cell phone, i groaned because i must get up and go to school again but i am still so sleepy.
It wouldn’t happen if I not come home late because my friends party, yeah that stupid party.
I am stretching my body and sit up in my bed, i saw my window when the sun is already set and the light hazily entering my room. I enjoying this scene for a minute and decide to go to bathroom.
In several time i already finish and change to my uniform, this is my final year to be senior high school student so i am be so bussy this semester.
My parents want me to enter university of economic with majoring in management so i can continue my father company.
i dont like it because i want tobe professional modeling and become fashion desainer later on, but my parent deny it they said that those job is useless.
I am so angry about it but i can’t do anything, i always do what ever they said and what ever they want because i am they precius daughter raight?!
Yeah raight, because this is me... Jessica Veranda “Tanumihardja”,
Knock..knock..knock.. “ ve sama.. can i came” said the house maid. “ come in it’s unlock” i said.
“ excuse me ve sama, i just inform you that the breakfast is already set” said the maid with proper manner.
“ oh.. thank you, i am done so I will go down now” i said with smile.
“ ok i will tell your mother now” she bow and excuse her self.
i take my bag and look at mirror once again and check my self “ ok i am ready”.
In breakfast table
“ good morning dear.” Said ve mom.
“good morning mom” while kiss her mother cheek have not been sit my mother said
“ honney i am so sorry, mom must hurry because i have to go to Berlin this morning because my duty”.
“ what.. again?? Mom.. why you always not at home.. i am so lonely” with whining like a baby.
“ sorry honey i sudenly have call last night and my plane will departure this morning so i have to go, don’t forget to attend your piano and your english perivate leasson ok” she get up and kiss her daughter.
“ ok i will attend” with slightly nod.
“ good that’s my daughter” she hug her and order the maid to bring her bag to car and leave.
I sighing and sitting at the breakfast table, this is my daily routine.
I always alone because my parents never at home, my old brother in Holand Medical School to become doctor and my little brother never come home because he always stay in his friends house and rarely go home.
“ve sama.. this is your schedule for this day”, one of my maid lend me the note and i continue to read it.
“1 pm go to beauty spa and clinic and then meet Mrs. Martha to learn public manner. 4-6 pm piano class. 7-9 p,m english private, what the hell with this schedule” i groaned in my mind.
i keep it in my bag and start to breakfast when i saw food on the tabble i open my eyes wide,this is to much for one person.
“ it’s to much for me can all of you accompany me to eat all of this?” she look at her maid.
“ but ve sama.. we can’t because we are your maid, and we aren’t alowed to do this.”hear it make ve little bit up set “don’t worry my parent aren’t at home so it’s ok, just please.. accompany me.. ”with puppy eye. Can’t bear saw their sama pleading they decide to sit and accompany her.
“good.. thank you to accompany me and don’t be to formal ok” she said happily.
“ but we must ve sama, we are so sorry” with slide bowing.
”sigh.. alraigth let’s eat together”. Ve is really pretty like a princess, she is so calm and shy too.
All of the maid feel so happy with the kindness from her, she always thread them good and friendly because of that they really love her.
After breakfast she got out from her house, in front.. the car and the driver is waiting, the maid open the door and excuse her to enter.
“thank you” she smiled in the young boy maid.
“ yo..you are welcome ve sama..” said the boy stuttering no one can handle ve smile ^^.
“good morning ve sama, are you ready to go to school”, greeting the driver politely.
“ i am ready sir and i hope you rather fast because i won’t late to my first day in my second semester”.
“as you wish ve sama..”
Back to Kinal
I wear my jean, my black tan top and covered it again with plaid red T-shirt, i grab my wallet and go to front door to wear my sneakers, i check my room once again it's clear so i start to lock my room and walk down stair.
My room in second floor while first floor is the owner of this house. I walk in front of this house to meet the owner.
“good morning Nabilla chan..”, i greet the little girl with two ponytail wear her shoes.
” Ah... good morning kinaru-san, my mom will come soon”, she said cheerly.
”how about your school nabila-chan?”i ask her and sit beside her.
“ i will be busy with my final exam to enter the middle school, so can you help me to study.”with puppy eye and sweet smile.
“ uhm.... should i help you??”with teasing tone.
“ yah.. kinaru-san you are so stingy.”while slightly pouting.
“ hey, if i am stingy I wouldn’t help you to do your home work.”complain me.
Sudenly some one appear
“don’t teasing your kinaru-san like that, she always help you right.. Oh here kinaru-san the bread for this day”with handed full pack basket of bread. “oh ok, just only it aunty??”.
”yes..just it, thank you for your help kinaru-san”.
“no problem aunty”.
“say goodbye to your oneechan before you go to school” ordered the little girl.
“ ok mom.. i am go now, and goodbay onechan.. stingy.. wee...” while sticking out her tongue.
Sigh.. this kid is really naughty but i am never upset to her, she is so adorable and i like it. And then i excuse myseIf,
t’s my morning job to deliver bread to food stall near this area, nabila mother is kind person, she rent the room with cheap price but lately she never ask the rent money.
I help her to delivery her home made bake bread to food stall or bakery and she always give me tip, i won’t accept it but she force me to accept that. she is like mother for me and i am honored her. I walk down on the streat, passing narrow alley, and arrive in complex of shop.
I hurried my pace to cross the street because the light is still green.
While i cross the zebra cross suddenly
BRAAK!!!!
i fell on the ground.
TBC....
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i am sorry if this fic is kinda short or boring.. gomenasai...
i will do my best to write this, and i am sorry for my late up date coz my final project.
i hope you enjoy it.....
:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:ganbare JKT48 :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
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@veforveranda Well....who said I'm not going? :lol:
The theater is so......OMG i can't describe it. They're so cool
Oh ehm, wait.... we are in Fanfic Forum so.........
Well, I just reserve this place to comment later...
I Swear, in the name of Sanju
After read the fic :
Wow, Ve is a rebel inside... isn't she? And her (soon) meeting with Kinal is the beginning of their love :heart:
Even though the story is short but its good enough. Just make sure you'll make a longer update later :)
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@veforveranda Well....who said I'm not going? :lol:
The theater is so......OMG i can't describe it. They're so cool
Oh ehm, wait.... we are in Fanfic Forum so.........
Well, I just reserve this place to comment later...
I Swear, in the name of Sanju
hoa........ sugoi....... u make me jelous :cry: :cry: :cry:
i hope they perform regulary so we can saw them anytime..
you like shanju.. she is cute, may be i will bring new fic with the youngest member
like: nabila, sanju, ochi, bebi. rena, sonia, cindy etc.. LOLI time hehehehe
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@veforveranda Well....who said I'm not going? :lol:
The theater is so......OMG i can't describe it. They're so cool
Oh ehm, wait.... we are in Fanfic Forum so.........
Well, I just reserve this place to comment later...
I Swear, in the name of Sanju
What did they sing, were they sing in Indonesian language ? Pajama Drive?
Wow, Kinal got nightmare. Btw, her parents already dead?
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Hotaru-san! I decided to comment. :p
OMG! WHAT HAPPENED TO KINAL!?
TT.TT
Poor girl..
I'm happy that she can moved on.. :')
and not become some.. yeah.. like you said..
drug dealers or escorts..
:)
is it nabila? as Kinal's sister? LOL
another char! yey!
and Vey is so kind! OMG.. i want her to be my sister! :p
because if i want her to be my girlfriend.. i would be dead.. LOL
so scary. :p
poor girl (too)
surrounded by happiness, yet lonely..
and WHAT HAPPENED AGAIN!?
another accident for Kinal..
sheeshh.. she should try get away from car..
but i have another feelings that the car.. actually vey's car! :D
and then..
idk.. it's up to you. LOL
thx for the update hotaru-san~
@pwoper-san:AAAAAHHHHH!!! I hate you! LOL
i want to watch them too.. TT.TT
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Poor Kinal... So ouchhhh at the start and end of the story! :bleed eyes:
But I'm glad she has that strong principle (not getting involved in jobs for dirty money), people nowadays surely need it for life. :yep:
Ve, she's the down-to-earth ojousama. Suteki~ :love:
But what's with her cell's alarm? :grin: I sense 'something' from that alarm for possible later events, not gonna spoil it here though.
And last but not least, Nabilah made an appearance. Yeyy! :D
Hoping for a fast and longer update.. :yep:
..., may be i will bring new fic with the youngest member
like: nabila, sanju, ochi, bebi. rena, sonia, cindy etc.. LOLI time hehehehe
I'll be happy to wait for that too, hotaru-san. It would be a great time for loli-s and lolicon-s XD
@anzai:
I knew aruka-san is Indonesian, because of his fic titled Aku Ingin Bertemu Denganmu (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=30281.msg983116#msg983116).
Woa.. so you read that too? :w00t: Terima kasih very much for reading it! :D
I also read a JKT fic from sorakamiya here (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31716.msg994211#msg994211).
Ah yes, the fic I've been waiting for its update for so long. sorakamiya-san, where are you currently? :? You still have several not-updated fics.
P.S.:
Ane aganwati. :lol:
Oshi: Yukirin, Acchan, Gekikara.
Regional: BDG48.......XD
BDG48?! :w00t: Actually I'm in a 'rental transfer' to BDG48 currently, concurrent with me in BGR48. :lol: About my oshi... she's Akimossan. 8)
@bochang:
@pwoper-san:AAAAAHHHHH!!! I hate you! LOL
i want to watch them too.. TT.TT
Damn, it seems I'm gonna be hated by you too, bochang-san. :lol:
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@veforveranda Yeah, i hope so. Because, permanent theater is the one we are waiting for
About sanju, when this group announce, i promise to wait until their stage to have my oshi. And sanju's performance last night is so....... AH!
@katouryuken yep Pajama Drive full translated into Indonesian
@bochang dont hate me!! :cry: lol
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nice story ^^b
poor kinal :( her life isn't an easy one..
i like ve's character here..
ehhh,so kinal was hit by ve's car??
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@Pwoper48 : are you go to their second theater too??
@Katouryuken : yes her parents already pash away, yes their first and second theater using pajamas drive
@bochang : it's still a secret until i up date the next chapter :)
i am sorry i am up date so late because i have final project
but i am fail :cry: :cry:
@aruka :a bout the cell alarm will be revealed soon ^^
i will update this chapter2 soon,
and i give you some drabble that i am promising before
so plis enjoy.. :)
@ yukofan : thank you yukofan,
it's still a sicret ok :P2, but i will up date soon
@vicchan02 : thank for read my fanfic
kinal is my oshi best friend hehehe
i will up date soon
@for all : i am sorry for my late update so i bring you shanju and nabila darabble hire, so please enjoy... :heart: :heart: :cow:
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This is short drabble from jkt48 ( loli time ^^)
Shanju x nabila
Morning in practice place
this morning JKT48 have daily practice and they start at 8 am, because this day is Saturday so member don’t have any scadule except practicing.
But some one came erlier this morning. yeah she is jkt48 youngest member :)
Knock..knock…
no answer..
“ sigh.. I guest I come to early”
She open the dor and step in to the room..
“hello.. guys…” her voice echoing the room.. “hellow…ww…www..” the sounds make her laugh and she instead start palying with her voice..
“ oi.. oi… oi… oi…” her voice ochoing every where.
”hihihihihih i think nobody is here”, she drop the bag and drop her self on the floor. She stare at clock in the wall, it still 06.50 /(O.O)\
“heee… it’s not already 7 yet, huah.. mom why you bring me here so.. so.. early, biside that this room is so silent and made it little bit creepy”
Uneasy she wake up and initiate to prepare the practice room.
‘I think there is no harm to help oneechan to prepare this room, nabilah is a good girl right hehe...”
She start clean the room, arrange the stuff and try the music player. She play aitakatta song,
when the music start playing her body move according to the rhythm.
Aitakatta! Aitakatta! Aitakatta! YES!
Aitakatta! Aitakatta! Aitakatta! YES!
denganmu....
She jumping hire, she jumping there rolling her body. She don’t realize that some one watching her in very beginning,
that person stare at her and sometimes cukling with her funny and kawai action.
“huah.. it done.. I think it better if I am take the mattres so I can used it to lying for amoment”.
She walking to mattress rack, because the location of the mattress on top so it’s not easy to grab it.
She was jumping up and down to achieve it, but it useless because it was taller than her size.
slowly some one appear from her back and sock her..
“HOI.. RABBIT..”,
“KYA…..spirit don’t hurt me “ she startled and walk away from the resource.
“MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.” The person laugh so hard.
Farmiliar with that voice, nabila turn around and found sanju laugh hard while grab her stomach.
“ YAH you wanna me got heart attack huh…”
“ huahahha our little nabila is very coward”.
“I am not.. it’s because of you that scared me, and why you appear so sudden??”
“yah.. I am already hire before you come, and I know everything you do at the beginning.”
“yu..you.. know evertything w… wha,,,,at I a..am doing?” nabila felt so embrassing and reply it with suttering.
“ofcours.. I look little bunny jumping righ here and there, and I think some one not high enough to grab something.” With teasing tone.
Infact eventought sanju just one year older than nabila but she is much taller than her.
“I am not little bunny, and I can take that mattress by my self”
“oh yeah.. so show me.”
Fell slighted nabila try her best to grab the mattress but fail. Sanju see her with cuckling.
“see.. you can’t.. if you want, I can grab it to you.”
“ok.. so grab that stuff to me..”
“um.. but you must begging me nicely.” While smirking..
Nabilla fell so up set, but she know that sanju can get that stuff easily but her pride telling her to not do that.
She fell so frustrated with that.
“arrggghhh.. ok!uhm.. shanju-san.. can you grab it to me ~~~~~”
“as you wish...”
she grab the mattress easily.
“heire little kid, its so easy…” while tapping her head and walk away.
With that motion nabilla can’t hold her temper anymore.
“ hey you little devil.. I am not a little bunny or little kid, I will show you that I will grow up faster than you.”
Sanju stop her step and turn around, she stare at nabila and walk closer to her.
“hey.. hey.. hey.. what do you say before, a litte devil huh.” She smirking and stare devilishly.
Feel the the atmosfir change made nabila step back.
“you are not just little devil but arrogan kid I ever seen.”
“now you call me arrogant, it just two of us here.. are you not afraid with me??”
she walk more closer ti nabila causing her step back more far and nearly the wall.
“I am not afraid wi.. th.. yu..you…, if I grow up lat..lat..te..er I will knocking you.” Now her back touch the wall.
It’s made sanju get easy access to pinned her on the wall. She grab nabilla shoulder and stare at her,
time like freezing for a moment, she obserb nabila face. Its an akward situation for nabila.
“let me go..” but sanju ignoring her, and it made sanju hold her more, sanju start grabe nabila face and stare at her.
All is silent they just hear they breath, sanju start lean closer to nabilla face.
“wa.. wait, wha.Aa..t are.. you..u.. doing??” nabila heart start beating faster, now sanju face just millimeter for nabila face,
it causing nabilla closing her eyes. she dont know what sanju will do to her, but something hot near her ear.
“I will be waiting for it, grew faster my kawai llttle princess and I will be your side to watch you grown up.”
she whispering it with seducting tone to nabila ear, made nabila shiffering.
Sanju leaned closer to her face again, it make nabila more nervous
she just kiss nabila in forehead and than release her and walk away.
Nabilla opened her eye slowly and she can’t do anything,
she just blussing hard about what sanju already tell and do to her.
she look sanju back, an deep down in her heart she fell so warm for the first time
“I am promise I will be your beautiful and kawai princess.” Said nabila in her mind.
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huah finaly i made some drabble.
sorry i am not up date the beginning yet, but i will update soon
so for in return i give you all this drabble..
sory if my english not good, I am still learn alot
and have you some request for loli jkt48 pairing??
maybe i make the drabble
i have gullaxbeby, soniaxochi, ayanaxrena
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Oh my God... I'm getting wide-eyed and blushing myself. :oops:
The almost-resorting-into-deeper-intimacy moment between the lolis are so unsafe! :lol:
I never imagine Shanju to be this wild. In general, never imagine the JKT younger members to be this wild. :lol:
To Shanju's oshis, Pwoper-san and bochang-san what do you think of this more intimate Shanju? :twisted:
Between Gulla x Beby, Sonia x Ochi, and Ayana x Rena? Would it be wise for me to say 'bring them all' ?
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Holy... sanju.. thanks God, i already gulp the water in my mouth before i read this.. or i will make my bedroom messy.. LOL
Sanju n nabilah eh? The two youngest.. am i right? Someone stop them!! I will give them proper lecture about LSD.. (love,sex,and dating) LOL
And, actually, stella keep seducing me with her photos at instagram.. my soul is wavering.. LOL
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@aruka : hahaha.. don't worry i just try to teasing hehehehehe..
i wouldn't do that to the youngest ok :P i am not that pervet anyway :peace:
or i must try it to the older :twisted: my ve and kinal?? :lol:
hahaha ok i will made some drabble soon..
@ bochang : thank god i am not make your bedroom messy :lol: :lol:
they are still young, but jkt have 2 youngst member they are nabilla and neneng(a.k.a ochi)
but ochi 8 month older than nabila hehehehe
oi.. oi... they are still under age gegegegegek..
stella is like a security guard in the team, because she will scold the youngest member if they naughty :lol: :lol:
if ve look pretty so stella look so exotic (she is really foto genic i think) they are have their own charm
@aruka + @ bochang : thank you for reading and comment my fanfic.. :heart: :heart:
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i don't remember all their birthdays. LOL only sanju, since she just celebrating her birthday this week. :3
yes, stella.. argh, since biore CM.. gah.. she looks prettier.. in my eyes. LOL and when i watched her live in june theater.. gah..
the temptation.. should not oshihen.. should not.. not.. should.. LOL
but stella.. really is my ideal type.. argh #squealing
and i won't be called as a pedo again.. LOL
sigh.. sorry for my randomness.. LOL
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i don't remember all their birthdays. LOL only sanju, since she just celebrating her birthday this week. :3
yes, stella.. argh, since biore CM.. gah.. she looks prettier.. in my eyes. LOL and when i watched her live in june theater.. gah..
the temptation.. should not oshihen.. should not.. not.. should.. LOL
but stella.. really is my ideal type.. argh #squealing
and i won't be called as a pedo again.. LOL
sigh.. sorry for my randomness.. LOL
all member have their own charm, don't worry because some of my frinds have morethan one oshi..
as far as we keep support them i think it's ok right :twothumbs
may be i will bring some drabble about ghaida-chan draw attention from the member,
because sooner or letter member will dating with her including stella wakakakak
i said this because i read their twitter :lol: :lol:
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@bochang: :twisted: fufufufu... I understand the temptation. Stella's too... too... <what's the perfect adjective to fill the blank here> to resist.
Well, several people say Stella's sex appeal is among the highest between all members, and I so agree about it. :drool: <I'm sorry I'm drooling :lol:>
@hotaru:
or i must try it to the older :twisted: my ve and kinal?? :lol:
actually for me, Ve and Kinal aren't flirty enough as a pair (more like the innocent-type couple), but who knows?
some 'experiments' in a story shouldn't be harmful. :twisted:
may be i will bring some drabble about ghaida-chan draw attention from the member,
because sooner or letter member will dating with her including stella wakakakak
i said this because i read their twitter :lol: :lol:
eh, Ghaida and the others are likely to resort into dating? really? I should immediately log into twitter and check it then! :grin: Ittekimasu!
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actually for me, Ve and Kinal aren't flirty enough as a pair (more like the innocent-type couple), but who knows?
some 'experiments' in a story shouldn't be harmful
may be i will made a sweet love relationship between them, because ve is 3 years older than kinal hehehehe..
innocent huh?? wait until gachan in action :twisted:
eh, Ghaida and the others are likely to resort into dating? really? I should immediately log into twitter and check it then! Ittekimasu!
i am found link that ghaida and beby are dating :theking
http://forum.aif48.org/viewtopic.php?f=105&t=1652
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i know this one, the picture! ghaida is so kakkoi!!! :3 why!! seriously!! she looks like mariko-sama's dansho...
and this: (i know i already posted this on my thread.kekeke)
something happened in the first day, june theater.
this is happened after the unit songs.
Stella: Ghaida, what is your fav song that we've performed until now?
Ghaida: Me? Hmmm.. Inochi no Tsukaimichi! *with her usual genking attitude
Stella: Why?
Ghaida: Well, it's reflected what i felt.
Stella: eh?
Ghaida: Yes, I want to be loved!
Stella: *giggle* by who?
Ghaida: BY YOU!!! *Shouting to the audience
Stella: *embarrassed* GHAIDA!!!!!! (Annoyed tone)
Ghaida: *happy* STELLAAA~!! (happy tone)
Ghaida is a pimp.. LOL
then she dated beby.. LOL
waiting for another victim :twisted:
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@hotaru:
http://forum.aif48.org/viewtopic.php?f=105&t=1652
yahoo~! arigatou for the link, hotaru-san! :D this is 'treasure' for sure. I'll bookmark it immediately. :lol:
tbh, when JKT48 surfaced the first time, nothing in my mind once thought about the members would be involved in this kind of 'fan service'. well, because you know, it's not Japan.
just in the span of months, Ghaida successfully torn away that innocent wrap from that brain of mine. :lol: sasuga~
may be i will made a sweet love relationship between them, because ve is 3 years older than kinal hehehehe..
innocent huh?? wait until gachan in action :twisted:
okay, I'll wait for these too. :twisted:
@bochang:
btw, did you know about this too bochang-san?
before stella and beby were fallen victim, ghaida had once being flirtatious with melody in the middle of their performance? :roll:
if I recall, it's during their off air show in BDG.. not the one at u*p*d, but at Login store, long before their very first theater.
when they're singing kimisuki, suddenly ghaida kissed melody on the cheek (since their position were so close to each other). :twisted: melody herself only smiled while closing her eyes in a short time and keep singing. (source: IDWS)
perhaps... the victim's also enjoying it? :lol:
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@bochang : eh...??? seriously??
for the first time i think that ghaida will pairing with dhike, but now it's more general anyway
Ghaida is a pimp.. LOL
then she dated beby.. LOL
waiting for another victim
huah.. seriously the last sentence make me worry because not longtime a go she try to flirt with ve too
so i think the next target is ve-chan, i realize it when i read ve G+.. gachan always comment in there.
whoah if you dont mind, may i join your thread too??
@aruka : yahoo~! arigatou for the link, hotaru-san! this is 'treasure' for sure. I'll bookmark it immediately.
tbh, when JKT48 surfaced the first time, nothing in my mind once thought about the members would be involved in this kind of 'fan service'. well, because you know, it's not Japan.
just in the span of months, Ghaida successfully torn away that innocent wrap from that brain of mine. sasuga~
yeah i hope this is just for fansernice :)
when they're singing kimisuki, suddenly ghaida kissed melody on the cheek (since their position were so close to each other). melody herself only smiled while closing her eyes in a short time and keep singing. (source: IDWS)
woah... she already kiss melochin too??? :doh: :doh:
because i have news that ghaida kiss shanju too last night :doh:
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@veforveranda of course.. Theater is the only way to watch them perform not in the parking lot :lol:
To Shanju's oshis, Pwoper-san and bochang-san what do you think of this more intimate Shanju? :twisted:
What? :stoned:
2 words. Me Gusta. :lol:
Eventhough it's to imagine this in their real life story :lol: I mean, are these loli know things like "that" :lol:
Somehow, this fanfic thread turn into JKT48 fans general thread haha :lol:
Comment on Ghaida : well, actualy i like hiw she teasing with the others
woah... she already kiss melochin too??? :doh: :doh:
because i have news that ghaida kiss shanju too last night :doh:
What? :stoned:
Uh, i'm thinking to make story about Stella&Sonia or Melody&Frieska (yeah, me and my perverted mind) :twisted:
Ps. The link.... Ah... Where's my ctrl and D? :lol:
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@ Pwoper48 :
@veforveranda of course.. Theater is the only way to watch them perform not in the parking lot
aarrrrrggghhh.. even this is their second theater i can't see it (http://www.laymark.com/l/m/m147.gif)
i hope they have permanen theater soon :cow: :cow:
Somehow, this fanfic thread turn into JKT48 fans general thread haha
ups....... is't legal here :? :? hahahaha.. but i hope you guys enjoy
Uh, i'm thinking to make story about Stella&Sonia or Melody&Frieska (yeah, me and my perverted mind)
woah.. that be so interesting, i prefer stella&sonia :twisted: :twisted:
i will wait for your story....
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Wait.. stella sonia?! It's forbidden love!! Incest!! Gah!!! It's so wrong, but it felt right.. LOL
Ghaida melody eh? Hmm yeh.. i think, she also trying to get melody attention at the second theater too!! LOL
And i didn't know that actually ghaida have kissed melody before!!! Gah!!!
And yes, this thread become a general jkt48 fans thread. LOL should we move? LOL
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aarrrrrggghhh.. even this is their second theater i can't see it (http://www.laymark.com/l/m/m147.gif)
i hope they have permanen theater soon :cow: :cow:
Then the 3rd theater it is... i hope that "soon" is next month. hopefully
ups....... is't legal here :? :? hahahaha.. but i hope you guys enjoy
And yes, this thread become a general jkt48 fans thread. LOL should we move? LOL
since there's nobody tell us to move then, it's legal XD
woah.. that be so interesting, i prefer stella&sonia :twisted: :twisted:
i will wait for your story....
Wait.. stella sonia?! It's forbidden love!! Incest!! Gah!!! It's so wrong, but it felt right.. LOL
Then stella and sonia it is. I just think about the plot but never make the whole story till now :lol
Hope that i can post it soon :D
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because i have news that ghaida kiss shanju too last night :doh:
Where did you get that news? :shocked I need to read it myself. :lol:
Then stella and sonia it is. I just think about the plot but never make the whole story till now :lol
Hope that i can post it soon :D
Yeah, another one to wait. Hehe.. please conceive the plot wholly now. :grin:
Ghaida melody eh? Hmm yeh.. i think, she also trying to get melody attention at the second theater too!! LOL
Still going after Melody too? My goodness! Ghaida's sure full of 'energy', sasuga~ Sae (or Jurina) 's copy. :lol:
LOL should we move? LOL
How about moving here... http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31022.0 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31022.0) ? :roll:
So far that one's supposed to be the most appropriate room to be called 'general JKT48 fans thread'. After all, that thread needs to be revived too. :(
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soo...this is the thread where the indonesians fanfic authors and readers gather (http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f318/wildgamer/onionhead/pala%20bawang/emo-hmm.gif)
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soo...this is the thread where the indonesians fanfic authors and readers gather (http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f318/wildgamer/onionhead/pala%20bawang/emo-hmm.gif)
Eh nani? No no no... I'm reader and beginner author from Mars :lol:
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@ bochang@ Pwoper48 :
And yes, this thread become a general jkt48 fans thread. LOL should we move? LOL
soo...this is the thread where the indonesians fanfic authors and readers gather
haha i think we should move here :lol: :lol:
How about moving here... http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31022.0 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31022.0) ?
So far that one's supposed to be the most appropriate room to be called 'general JKT48 fans thread'. After all, that thread needs to be revived too.
@ Pwoper48 :Then stella and sonia it is. I just think about the plot but never make the whole story till now :lol Hope that i can post it soon
i hoop so, ganbatte ne.. :cow:
@aruka : here the link
http://www.kaskus.co.id/showthread.php?t=15124433&page=225
for the video
http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=dSBIF9X56Qw#!
@ bunny_rabbit : soo...this is the thread where the indonesians fanfic authors and readers gather
dont worry this is not just for indonesan authors and readers but for all general authors and readers :heart:
@vicchan02 : but i have OTP in JKT48, and they're Ochi and Beby!! I don't know why but in twitter they're often mentioning each other... and I think they'll make a good pairing in the future...
lately they are more close than before, maybe i will make it one soon...
thank for reading my fic
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Hmm, interesting start for a relationship. :lol:
I like how you are using the plot line to your advantage, especially with Ve as the rich and Kinal as the poor, social statuses are usually nice to use in plots, especially when you make it your biggest point, though I think you'd get into conflict with this and that's what I'm interested in the most because its always been my main interest, the conflicts, drama or angst in the story. Hope you can utilize this to the best of your efforts, you really have a good plot in hand.
I'm liking this so far...I just started to get interested in JKT48, mostly because of VeNal, so I'm hoping to see more of these two, to be honest, I hope more people would make fics of them because its interesting to see them two together, I want to make a fic for these two, but then, I don't know much about them though I'm interested in them frankly because they catch my attention just like BlackGeki/YukiRena. :3
Nice to see you update this, been reading this since the first time you posted it, sorry if I didn't comment. Hahaha. ^ ^llll
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hoho..2 SM*SH members appeared in this fic..LOL..
i can't wait for ve and kinal to meet again..i think kinal will enter in the same school as ve..
nice update..can't wait for the continuation..
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Hmm, interesting start for a relationship. :lol:
I like how you are using the plot line to your advantage, especially with Ve as the rich and Kinal as the poor, social statuses are usually nice to use in plots, especially when you make it your biggest point, though I think you'd get into conflict with this and that's what I'm interested in the most because its always been my main interest, the conflicts, drama or angst in the story. Hope you can utilize this to the best of your efforts, you really have a good plot in hand.
I'm liking this so far...I just started to get interested in JKT48, mostly because of VeNal, so I'm hoping to see more of these two, to be honest, I hope more people would make fics of them because its interesting to see them two together, I want to make a fic for these two, but then, I don't know much about them though I'm interested in them frankly because they catch my attention just like BlackGeki/YukiRena. :3
Nice to see you update this, been reading this since the first time you posted it, sorry if I didn't comment. Hahaha. ^ ^llll
thank you for reading my fic :) :heart: and thank for your advice, i am still new in this kind of think hehehe
I like BlackGeki role in majisuka and their personalities, but in reality i like saeyuki moment :)
I hope many author write their fanfic or jkt48 fic..
hahaha don't worry.. i realy happy that you read my fic from the beginning :cow:
lol interesting... :lol: can't wait for the update... :D
maybe put other pairings in the fanfic would be great.. or maybe make Ghaida become a harem owner... XD
update soon! ;)
i will put other pairing like dhike-->ghaida<--stella, movaxsendy, diasta(nyas)xrica(riyo) and loli pairing shanjuxnabilah :heart:
don't say that "Morgan" what you mentioned is Morgan SM*SH??
hoho..2 SM*SH members appeared in this fic..LOL..
i can't wait for ve and kinal to meet again..i think kinal will enter in the same school as ve..
nice update..can't wait for the continuation..
hahahahaha i think (yukofan,vicchan02) and the others don't know their name but in fact you realize it..
um... how i can explain this.. :sweatdrop: actualy i need 2 hour to decide the boys character in here,
i haven't interest in drama(sinetron), BB or GB indonesia so it dificult to choose.. and then my friend talking about them so i searching in internet and decide them to fill the position.. :doh:
ah.. gomenasai.. if it's not suit the strory :bow:
@yukofan : hoho let see the next up date, thank you for reading my fic
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Wut!? SM*SH?!
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will edit after reading..
COMMENT
Glad that the General is alright XD *salute (FYI: Kinal's nickname is General(in army), because she's the center in the unit song kagami no naka no joan de arc XD and she really lives up her title XD)
hohoho conflict will be make them closer. fufufu learn about each other and fell in love. :on cigar:
(since i haven't write anything in english.. my grammar is.. hmmm.. destroyed? :kneelbow:)
Gachan! Kamen Rider Ghaida!! XD Hmmmm kinda suspicious with Gachan.. love triangle? XD :kekeke:
wooofasfashdhabbad! Many members appeared!! XD :onioncheer:
My oshimen~ Stella :luvluv1:
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boyfriend.. stella.. boyfriend.. :mon huh:
i can't process those words.. it's not related.. :mon huh:
WAGWEHCWHE UNME! :mon zoom:
Tell me his name.. :mon worklate:
and more than one.. :mon headbang:
JUST WHAT QQR!!@$V$GHREG! :mon mad:
:mon runcry:
and why are those two boyband member show up?!
seriously reading "rafael" name is a nightmare for me..
i remember last year.. almost every freshman call me rafael.. :mon uggh:
and what's with that touchy2 thingy! :mon uggh:
and Ve-Morgan?! :mon evil:
Aigooo.. Jebal.. Kinaru.. save your princess from those guys..
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wogh, sieka interested to write VeNal.. well, they're cute XD
you should watched the theater performance to see those two cute moment. LOL
i want to write, but so lazy! LOL my Stella fic~ haven't finished yet. LOL
ah and sorry for bashing those guys..
well.. it's obvious i will :mon evil: if they gonna get so close with JKT48 member.. even in the fic. XD
Continue! XD
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Every time those two names showed up during the read, I was like grinning myself all the time, yet it's more of a 'what the ..' feeling. :lol:
Instead of putting the two names, how about replacing them with my and bochang's name instead? XD XD Nah, I was just kidding!! :P But I don't know if bochang-san agrees with the idea.
In the meantime, just continue with the Sm*sh blast as you initially did.
So, many new characters are present here. Ghaida with hints on Dhike, the hugging-crazed Nyash, the 'popular' Stella, and others. Me gusta! :D
I was surprised with Mova's attitude. To picture her with that behavior never once crossed my mind. If it's attributed to Stella I could imagine it, but to Mova? Hehehe.. but I'll wait and see for future events to unfold.
And reading Cleo's background in the story, hiii~ merinding disko! Scary!!
i will put other pairing like dhike-->ghaida<--stella, movaxsendy, diasta(nyas)xrica(riyo) and loli pairing shanjuxnabilah :heart:
Yes, yes, yes! :w00t: This, I'd love to wait!!
Please don't make us wait too long! :cry:
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@bochang :
Glad that the General is alright *salute (FYI: Kinal's nickname is General(in army), because she's the center in the unit song kagami no naka no joan de arc and she really lives up her title )
ohohoho i am agree with you
boyfriend.. stella.. boyfriend..
i can't process those words.. it's not related..
WAGWEHCWHE UNME!
Tell me his name..
and more than one..
JUST WHAT QQR!!@$V$GHREG!
ah.. gomenassai i made stella being playgirl (don't worry it's juat fic :thumbsup)here but i have some surprise later, dont worry
and why are those two boyband member show up?!
seriously reading "rafael" name is a nightmare for me..
and Ve-Morgan?!
Aigooo.. Jebal.. Kinaru.. save your princess from those guys..
ah.. gomen...gomen... i alrady change the name so please forgive me :cry: :bow:
@ aruka:
Every time those two names showed up during the read, I was like grinning myself all the time, yet it's more of a 'what the ..' feeling.
yeah.. even bochang disagree with this :cry:, don't worry i already change the character
So, many new characters are present here. Ghaida with hints on Dhike, the hugging-crazed Nyash, the 'popular' Stella, and others. Me gusta!
I was surprised with Mova's attitude. To picture her with that behavior never once crossed my mind. If it's attributed to Stella I could imagine it, but to Mova? Hehehe.. but I'll wait and see for future events to unfold.
And reading Cleo's background in the story, hiii~ merinding disko! Scary!!
stella has as play girl role model here (it just fiction ok), about mova.. many secreat that not revealed yet so please watch it ;)
about cleo.. that jusy her family background anyway :grin:.. but she will be kinal rival here.. ups... i am slipped out
i will update as soon as posible ok ;)
thak for read my fic
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Every time those two names showed up during the read, I was like grinning myself all the time, yet it's more of a 'what the ..' feeling. :lol:
Instead of putting the two names, how about replacing them with my and bochang's name instead? XD XD Nah, I was just kidding!! :P But I don't know if bochang-san agrees with the idea.
In the meantime, just continue with the Sm*sh blast as you initially did.
So, many new characters are present here. Ghaida with hints on Dhike, the hugging-crazed Nyash, the 'popular' Stella, and others. Me gusta! :D
I was surprised with Mova's attitude. To picture her with that behavior never once crossed my mind. If it's attributed to Stella I could imagine it, but to Mova? Hehehe.. but I'll wait and see for future events to unfold.
And reading Cleo's background in the story, hiii~ merinding disko! Scary!!
i will put other pairing like dhike-->ghaida<--stella, movaxsendy, diasta(nyas)xrica(riyo) and loli pairing shanjuxnabilah :heart:
Yes, yes, yes! :w00t: This, I'd love to wait!!
Please don't make us wait too long! :cry:
ARUKA SAN! YOU'RE A GENIUS!! XD :mon thumb:
Mova Sendy? hmm i thought Rica is closer with Sendy. --> From my observation as a stalker in twitter. LOL
Ghaida Stella! :mon lovelaff:
Dhike reminds me of tomochin.. Tsundere LOL
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oh and hotaru san, it's okay to using those guys name. :3 I don't mind, it's just a fic. :3
i'm not angry.. well yeah.. but it's okay. XD
and i'm nobody to them(member of JKT48) .. LOL only a simple mere fan.. TT.TT
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oh and hotaru san, it's okay to using those guys name. :3 I don't mind, it's just a fic. :3
i'm not angry.. well yeah.. but it's okay.
and i'm nobody to them(member of JKT48) .. LOL only a simple mere fan.. TT.TT
i already change their name because when i read it again i giggling by my self so it's better if i change this with my first character :)
it's because my friend give me advice to bring the sm@#$ member hahaha...
Mova Sendy? hmm i thought Rica is closer with Sendy. --> From my observation as a stalker in twitter. LOL
Ghaida Stella!
Dhike reminds me of tomochin.. Tsundere LOL
actualy mova,sendy,rica are trio best friend like ochi,gaby,delima
but sendy and mova often slept together :twisted: :twisted: when i read their twitter ]
stellaxghaida and jelousy dhike gegegegegegek...
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for the first I say sorry to JKT48 story "the beginning" for my late update.. because my flassdisk lost and the data gone
so i will rewrite again the story because i will change the story line
and i will give one shoot collecttion VeNal, today is kohaku uta gassen event but Ve not join the event :cry: :cry: lost VeNal moment
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JKT48 one-shot collection
Ve x Kinal (VeNal)
Wherever you go, you always in my heart (one shot)
Kinal POV
Today I go to Japan to attend AKB48 Kohaku Uta Gassen with members include Aki-san and haruka-san but it’s not same because Ve not join with us, it’s make me fell so lonely without her..
“Kinal.. Kinal…. Wake up.. we almost arrive” shout Dhike who sit beside Kinal..
“um.. Ve just give 5 minute more please..” mumbling Kinal in her sleep.
“Ve??” Dhike rise her eyebrow “oi… Kinal this is me Dhike.. You should wake up and take your seatbelt properly because we will landing soon.”
Hearing another voice beside Ve make her open her eye suddenly.
“eh… Dhike?? Gosh.. sorry.. I am so sleepy.” While fix her position and use her seatbelt.
“you really miss her? Until you recognize me her!”
“who is your talking about??”.
“don’t act like idiot, of course Ve-san”
“Really?!” this time Kinal rise her eyebrow “ ah.. it’s must be my sleep talking, so just ignore it”.
But deep in her heart she really miss Ve until she bring it in her dream..
#Flash back#
“Ve.. Ve.. Ve-chan where are you??” while searching the person.
“I am here.. and don’t shouting like a kid lost her mother, Kinal…” while out from changing room.
Suddenly Kinal approach her and grab her shoulder and look at her directly
“Ve is it true you are not join with us in Kohaku event”.
Ve little bit surprise with Kinal question and sudden act but she know it will happen soon.
“Yes it’s true Kinay.. because I must finish my final assignment so I decide to not join.” This time she call Kinal with her nick name to muffle her..
”um.. I see.. study is more important, I hope next year we can go there together” she give Ve her smile even in her heart she little bit disappointed.
“sorry.. this time I can’t fulfil our promise, to see snow fall and spent this holiday together..” she said it with down her face because she fell so guilty. Kinal know it and try to give her spirit again, she would not let her sad. she grab Ve hands and Ve raise her face again because the sudden touch.
“don’t worry.. next time we will go together again. Until that time we must work hard and do our best again.. so we will go together OK!!” while give her warm smile..
”re.. really..?” Ve blushing because that smile.
“sure.. we must optimist.. now you must concentration on your study and me concentration to perform in Japan.”
“yah.. we can do it”. Ve fell relieve “before you go to Japan I will give you this.” Ve open her bag and take a pair of glove .”it’s gone be cold there so please wearing this to make your hands warm”
“you bring me your favorite glove.. uwah.. thank you Ve.” She hug Ve tightly ”even you not beside me, with this I can fell your warmness because you always holding me.” She wink to Ve playfully
“tha.. that.. n.. not what.. I..,I.. mean..” Ve blushing so hard..
End #
Finally I arrive in Japan.. and it’s winter season so the air so cold. I breathe deeply and fell the atmosphere around me, snow start falling down and all covered with snow. So this is snow that Ve always tell for me before, it’s really beautiful.. I hope I can see this together with you..
“Kinal.. don’t spacing out!!hurry up.. or we will be left out the bus” dhike voice breaking Kinal tough..
“Ok.. I am coming..”
Kinal wear Ve glove and hold it in her chest she can smell Ve scent while running to appear Dhike..
What ever you do now, you will always be my side and holding me tight..
Ve POV
I got up late because I must finish my final project for assignment until morning but I must hurry because I have appointment with Sonya for hang out together before practicing.
“Ve.. you late..”
“sorry.. Onya.. I must finish my assigment until morning, How is your final exam??”
“I still have remidial, I really hate math! Ah.. today don’t talk about study, come on lets heave fun.” She grab Ve hand and drag her.
Sonya drag me to game center first, I ask her why we go to this place and she answer me because we need release our stress. We play WHACK A MOLE GAME, in first I just wacth Sonya playing, she hit the mole accurately.. when I look at her so excited I try playing too and yes it’s so funny, it’s like we can release our temper and stress.
“hahaha.. how are you now??”ask Onya
“um.. satisfied and very relieved”
“I know you will enjoy this.. ok next we will shoping.”
“sounds good”
At least I can relax for a bit even i still miss you kinal, how hard I try to make me happy but it’s not same without you in my side. Sonya and me walking arround, some times we go to clothes stand just for watching or try some, wallking in the corridor and pass many stand. It make me flass back in time when I spend time together with her. Me and Kinal always buy same clothes, glsses, or shoes. She is little bit tomboy but sometime she make me shockek when she choose a feminim clothes to twinning with me xD
Finaly me and Sonya buy some clothes, and go to japanesse restourant before we start our practicing.
“today is so blessed rigth...??”while look at Ve
“um..” ve just noded her head for repply.
Sonya feel Ve hidding something, she know how close Kinal and Ve and know their feeling each other but poorly beside Kinal and Ve never reveal it.
“hey.. come on Ve!! Kinal and the others just leave for three days not forever”
“ah.. who said I miss her??”
“there you are.. you already said that.”Sonya just give Ve a bait and she hooked.
Ve just face palm her self, how easily get teased like that.
“um.. what is your order, I am hungry??” she try to change the topic.
“gezzz... you are so misterious, ok let I see the menu first.”
When sonya look at the menu,I see the menu too and glued in one menu, this menu..
Flassback
“Ve what is your order??” said Kinal enthusiast
“like always salmon sushi and.. how about we order ramen?”
“ah.. Ve noddles is not good for health.”
“but I wanna try it Nay...look they have spicy level.”said Ve spoiledly.
“eh.. really.. ok I will try the 5 level.” Level 5 is the higest spicy level.
“ok me too”.
“are you sure??”kinal rise her eyebrow because she know that Ve cannot eat spicy food like her.
“ofcourse I am not a kid anymore.” Said Ve confident.
Kinal just lughing at Ve act, this is the other side from Ve that only Kinal who know it.
When the order arrive they start eat the ramen, as kinal predict Ve can’t finish eat the ramen because it’s very spicy..
“um.. Nay.. I can’t finish the ramen..” while crying because the the spiciness
“hahahaha.. look who is the kid rigth now.”
“ah... Kinay...”while hit Kinal shoulder lightly.
End
“I order sushi roll how about you?”
“salmon sushi and spicy ramen level 5.”
The waitress take the order and for a moment the food is coming and they start eat the food.
“ittadakimasu....” said Ve and Sonya coincide.
“sushi roll is the best.” Said Sonya happily, but when she look at Ve who start to cry because the ramen made her worry”Ve are you ok??”
“um.. i am fine,, it just because the ramen is so spicy.”
Yes it’s because the ramen is very spicy as always but the real reason is at the time like this what ever I do, your presence always hounted me.
Wherever you go now, you always in my heart
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please continue the story, 6 months waiting!
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guys, just want to inform you if dont know yet about this news that TEAM J HAS BEEN CREATED!! and the member is all of the JKT48 1st gen. and who's the captain??? IT'S KINAL!!!! XD
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please continue the story, 6 months waiting!
sorry for waitting the story for long... :bow: :bow:
I still concentration to finish my final project (TA) so next year I will graduate from my collage..
maybe in january I post the next chapter ^^
guys, just want to inform you if dont know yet about this news that TEAM J HAS BEEN CREATED!! and the member is all of the JKT48 1st gen. and who's the captain??? IT'S KINAL!!!! XD
yes it's announced yesterday.. and it have bad news too, Ghaida announce her graduate :cry: :cry: :cry:
so many graduation this year.. and it make me confuse to continue my story anyway..
any some advice maybe???
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please continue the story, 6 months waiting!
sorry for waitting the story for long... :bow: :bow:
I still concentration to finish my final project (TA) so next year I will graduate from my collage..
maybe in january I post the next chapter ^^
january? yay! :cow:
good luck with your TA, though :grin:
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Ah finally... I graduate from my college.. thank God...
I am so sorry about my long hiatus :bow: :bow: :bow:
I erase the previous chap and rewrite again, because maybe some one already forget the story... so do I :lol: :lol:
so many occurrence in JKT48 as specialy graduating member, so I little bit confuse to continue the story but I decide to keep the member who gradute still in my story..
gomen if my english is not good.. but I hope you enjoy..
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flashback
#Ve POV#
I sit quietly in back, i check my cell phone there is one message on my screen, i open it:
From sandy : hey princess... where are you ??
To sandy : hum... some one already miss me , i am still on the way...
From sandy : you must hurry, i realy miss you >.<
Iam cackled read her message..When i want to reply sudenly..
BRAKKKK...!! i am startled, i drop my cell phone and check what happen. When i realize it.
“oh god.. i bump some one”, without thinking again i get out from the car to check the person
“ve sama wait...”
I walk in front of the car, i saw a young girl fell in the ground with bread spread every where, she try to get up and collect them all.
“is she alright??”i said in my mind.
Kinal PoV
BRAAAKKK!!
It happen so fast, when i open my eyes i feel my body in asphalt streets, my back is hurt but i try to wake up.
When i wake up i saw the bread spread every where
“oh shit.... i am death, how i can explain this to aunty..” i start collect the bread and ignoring the pain, who dare to do this to me.
Suddenly i hear some one approach.
End flass back..
#NO one POV#
“miss are you alright?? I am so sorry.. my driver is so clueless”,helping collect the bread.
When Kinal turn arround, she found a young lady help her collect the bread. Her skin is so white, her long wavy hair covered her face,
when she turn around kinal can see the girl face.
She stunning..
this girl is so pretty, her eyes is so calming and her pink lips made her look like an angel.
“am i dreaming??she is so gorgeous” shout kinal in her mind and her temper is already gone. S
he snap her day dream and start to collect the bread again. When she collect the bread their hand meet together.
Kinal can feel the warm and soft skin touch her fist, they start look each other and suddenly.
“ve sama... are you ok. Please come back to your sit. I will handle this”.
“I am fine, just please appologize to her”.
“oh.. sorry miss I bumped you” while helping kinal to stand up.
“it’s ok sir.. I am fine, I hope you more carefull”
Ve feel so guilty about what happen to the young girl and she initiation to repay the demage.
“sorry for this accident, i made your bread rod. And here, please take this money to pay this demage.”
While handed 500.000 rupias to that girl.(Rp 500.000 = $50) /(O.O)\
Kinal raise her eyebrow, she felt the uneasiness.
“no.. miss!! Thank you but i don’t need this, it’s fine so please take your money back.”with handed back the money.
“but please take this..”she still insist to give the money.
“no.. i can’t..”she start fell irritated.
“just take it, please...” she grab kinal hand and handed the money.
“i said NO!!” without realize it she pull her hand and it made Ve fell on the ground while the money spread every where.
“oi.. kid what are you doing to Ve sama huh...” he grab her collar shirt and pushed her back down.
Suddenly ....
“STOP!! what are you doing to Kinal” she pull the man back.”don’t even dare to touch her.”
“do not interfere kid”
situation began to heat up and they started to fighting, realize it kinal pull ghaida back and ve try to stand up and grab her driver fist
“calm dawn sir.. violence will not solve the problem”she try to calm him down.
Kinal start collect the money back to return it, her pride is hurt for little bit.
“sorry, but i am not need your money miss, here.. give it to some one else.”with cold tone and serious face.
Ve just stand up in there and frozen, no one ever do that to her she just shock with that girl reaction.
Kinal pull Ghaida and handed her basket and start to walk a way.
“ve sama.. ve sama.. are you ok, you look so pale??” while shaking her shoulder.
Tin.. tin.. tin.. the clackson bring ve to the reality.
“huh?? Ow sorry i am fine, lets get back.”
Ve POV
i sit in the car the scene spinning in my mind. Why?? Why i am still remember her.
this girl.. she is so different with people i ever meet before, Am i do wrong thing?? Why she is so angry??
Sigh... beside that she is cute actually enventought she look boyish.
Her eye is pretty but i can feel the loneliness in her eyes.
I start curious with her, Is this girl as lonely as me?? And her name...?? her name....?
i try to remember, oh.. her name is Kinal.
Kinal.. i hope someday i meet you again..
I check my phone again, i got 4 message pending.
From sandy : ve.. are you ok, why you dont replay??
From sandy : where are you??
From sandy : hello... anybody there???
From sandy : what ever you now i hope you are fine, just quick or you will be late.
To sandy : sorry i got little incident, i need your help... can i borrow your skirt?? I will explain this when i arrive.”
From sandy : gosh.. you make me worry, you are lucky i still have one in my locker, just come here ok..”
Kinal PoV
“geezz.. are you ok kinaru???”
“i am, fine thank for your help gachan..”
“never mind, we are friends right, and let me take that.”
“i am fine i can bring it”
“ (-.-)”... you are so stubborn, let me handle one of that.”
“alright... here take this one”.
“that girl is pretty, but i don’t like that men.. hey... you must appologize to her, you make her fell down.:
“ yeah.. maybe you right, but she is so stubborn to keep me that money, you know me well that money can’t buy my pride.
“gezzz.. i know.. i know.. i think she is stubborn as you.”
“hey.. are you mocking me?? We are different, you remember that man, he called her Ve sama, i thik she is from rich family.”
“woah.. you remember her name huh.. i haven't remember her name.” With teasing..
“are you wanna died..”
“hey .. he.. hey..I am just kidding.”
that is kinal, she is so sensitive if it’s about money she think that girl hurt her pride with give her that money,
eventhough she is so stubborn she is so kind, honest, pure and loyal friend.
When arrive at bakery
We open the door and entering that small bakery. There is a girl arrange cake in glasses stall,
when she her door bel ringing she turn arround.
“hey kinal.. you late!!”
“ah...dhike.. sorry i am late.”
“she got accident this morning.”while put the bread in the table
“what??? Really, are you ok kinaru?? She up to her.
“I am fine, here the breads and i really sorry about this the bread look so mess.”
“nah.. don’t worry i will explain this to my father.”
when she get the bread from kinal she announce something strange when she realize it.
“kinaru, your elbow hurt!!”
“eh.. what?? Where??
“oh you right, here look at this” ghaida took her hand.
“hold on i will bring the medictools”
Ghaida guide kinal sit in nearest chair, and place her hand in table. Not for so long dhike back and bring the first aid kit.
“let me see your wound.” Slowly she lift her elbow and clean it with antiseptic cotton. Fortunately the wound is not deep,
when she caressing the wound kinal arched her shoulder. Realizing this she more carefully caressing the wound and start blew a little.
Saw the scene in front of her ghaida little bit jealous.
The three are friends since they kid even though kinal is one year younger than them is not make different.
Ghachan is orphan like Kinal, because she look boyist and handsome many people think that she is a boy,
she is a street musician and she start made her own band with kinal. Dhike is owner daughter of this bakery,
when you meet her in first time you will feel this girl is so cold but when you know her she is fastidious and caring.
She is good at cooking and made cake, she is lucky can continue her study rather than kinal and ghachan.
Both of them can’t continue their study becau they don’t have money to pay the registration fee.
“ok it’s done”
“thank.. ike.. i think somone starting get jelous.” While glance to ghaida.
“hu.. uh.. wha..t.. wahat do you mean.” Shocking with sudden declaration and she start punc kinal shoulder.
“ouch you hurt me.”
“who dare to teasing me”
“gezz.. not again.. ok guys, stop this and i got to go.”
“ow.. we forget that you must go to school, i think i must go to my work too.”
“you wanna me accompany you kinaru..?”
“nope.. thank.. i can take care my self, i think some one need your help than me.”
with teasing tone and glance to dhike and it’s made that girl flustered.
It’s funny to teasing both of them.
In school
“Ve.. what happen, why you take so long??”
“sorry to waiting me, i need your help and i will explain it when lunch time, now we got to hurry.”
“yeah.. i think we must hurry, the gate will closed.”
Sandy is ve childhood, she is smart and she is a good singer, because of that she get schoolarship in this school.
Sandy is some of people that ve can trust in this world, even though ve has alot of friends
but she feel that their attention is just a fiction because she is form rich family and one of popular girl in this school.
Back to Kinal
“nyas-san…. Morning, sorry I am late..”
Someone appear from bartender desk.. not thingking twist she run and hug kinaru.
“kinaru-chan… u late, I really ..miss… you.. muach” while try to kiss her
“kya.. sempai.. st,,o,,op it.. I am already got accident this morning”
In one moment she relese her
“mow, kinaru got accident.. how?? Are you ok?
While checking her condition
“oi… oi.. I am fine, just little scar..
“poor my little kinaru” patting her head
“ yah.. I am not a kid anymore” with pouting.
“ hihihihihi.. ok2 my little kinaru got older right now, here I have something to you.
She take a letter from desk and give it to kinaru.
“ what is it??”
“ um.. just open it (^.~)
Without thinking again kinal open the envelope and start read the letter. She silent for a moment and then look to nyas,
without thinking again she run and hug nyas..
“uwa nyas… am I dreaming??it’s true right??I can school again.. I can school again.. thank you so much nyas..muach..”
she is not aware if she kiss nyah.
“you like my own sister, so I am happy if you happy too,um.. I think we should buy your school supplies after this “.
“eh.. realy.. ok!! I will finish my work faster. Yosh.. I can school again lalalalalalalala…”
Nyas just smile at her behavior, sometimes kinal behave random like this if she fell so happy, kid just likes a kid anyway ^^.
ve school
after bell ringing all student gathered in public canteen, no exception for ve and sendy they walking together to go there.
why it called public canteen because in this place the girls and the boys can meet.
This school have two building, one building for boys and one building for the girls they are deliberately separated during school hours it is
because their school principal thinking if they study separated the students will concentration for studies.
Sendy : “how if we sit down there??”while pointing empty sit near vending machine.
Ve : “ok.. we are lucky still get empty seat.”
Sendy : “you wanna get some drink?? Because I want to grab some in vending machine.”
Ve : “it’s not a bad idea since they not come up, if you don’t mind I want coffee latte please.”
Sendy :” hahaha.. don’t worry they will arrive soon, ok I will be back so wait for me ok.”
When sendy go to vending machine she look a round, when suddenly she stop from one direction.
She observed someone sitting alone reading a book near the window, she look the perxon without blinking.
Mova :“hum.. he is cute don’t you?? Ask some one from behind her. Ve just nodded her head without realizing it,
after a while she realized that there was someone next to her.
Ve : “heh... what.. are ,, you talking about?? I am not looking to him I am.. just..”.
Sandy : “ just what ve?? Am I miss something??here your coffee”
Mova : “I caught her looking at marcel again.”whit teasing tone.
Sendy : “ow.. really.. he is cute, smart and cool person. If you not hurry to move you will lost him.”start to teasing ve too.
Ve : “hei.. hei.. what are you two talking about, I am just curious about him no more than that.” Her face suddenly flustered red.
Sendy and mova just giggling looking at ve face, she is innocent and shy girl. she is so easily to be teasing and not good to telling a lie.
Marcel is one of popular student in this school because he is handsome, smart and former school president.
He have a good impression because he look so cool and calm. Many student admiring him but no one are accepted.
The girls sit in their own seat properly.
Mova : “uhm.. sendy can you help me return this book to the library after this lunch??”while handed a bunch of book.
Sandy : “sure I will return your book.”
Mova : “and one more, can you make a presentation of our history assignment. Because I have schedule this nite.”
Ve : “ wait..it’s your duty to return the book and finish your home work mova, why you order sendy to do your job??”
with a bit upset to mova behavior.
Mova : “hey why you so up set, I order sendy not you.”
Ve : “ but sendy is our friend not your servant.”
Mova : “ so what do you want fairy godmother??”move start to get mad to.
Sendy : “ it’s ok ve.. I am fine with this, I was planning to go to the library this afternoon.
And for the home work that is our task so I will do it.”
sandy father work at mova father company and because of that mova always order sendy to do what ever she want. T
he situation still tense, no one dare to speak but luckily some one break the wall.
Stella : “hey…girls.. sorry we late~~”
Two ladies join and sit an empty seat
Cleo : “sorry we late, it’s because of her” while pointing her finger at stella nose.
Mova : “what happen again??”
Cleo : “she accept random guy again, she easily accept that poor guy confession” with face palmed her self.
“AGAIN!!!!” shouted the three of them.
Stella : “hey slowdown girls, I am just be kind to them ok, I do not want to disappoint him.”
Mova : “ if you don’t like him so just reject him, or you will get karma.”
Ve : “ mova right, how many boyfriends do you have now??”
Stella : “um.. I am forget it”.she just grinning to them
Cleo : “ gaze.. you even forget how much your boyfriend “(-.-)”
Stella : “ that not my false if they love me that much”
Yeah it’s not pure stella fault, because stella is pretty, cheerful girl, and many boy said that stella is damn HOT.
She is in second grade while four of them in third grade, because of her exotic charm she be a model of her father fashion magazine
and many boys admirer her but they are no one will everlasting.
Cleo father was a dreaded and rich mafia, so,,, many student in this school afraid with her and became her servant,
despite that Cleo is very caring with her friend especially if some one try hurt them.
Sendy : “so ve what happen to you this morning” sendy try to change the topic.
Cleo : “eh.. what happen ve??”
Ve : “actually .., I have accident this morning”
“no way…!!!!” they replied in unison.
Stella : “how come??” ask stella impatiently.
Ve start telling the story a bout what happen this morning, they listen it carefully and wait until the story complete.
Cleo : “so that girl push you and made you fall, that so rough I can’t accept that.”
Mova : “beside that she was ungrateful with your kindness.”
Sendy : “hey but I think she is inadvertent with that, ve car hit her first anyway.”
Stella : “no comment…”
Ve : “ok it’s better if we forget it.” But deep down in ve heart she want to saw her again.
Cleo : “ah.. bay the way I am forget something, yesterday my friend offered me VIP cards from night club,
she said that tomorrow they have ladies party, are you guys wanna join??.”
Mova : “I will go…”
Sendy: “sorry I can’t go, I must keep my sister because my parent go to my grandma house tomorrow.”
Stella : “can I join??”
Ve : “you can’t you still under age and don’t have ID card yet.”
Hear it, stella pouting like a kid
Cleo : “so how about you ve??”
Ve : “all of you know the answer, that is NO!!”
Mova : “ya..ya.. ya.. the child's father, come on ve your parents is not at home right, so why not you have some fun with us.”
Cleo : “don’t worry it’s girls night, so the customer is totally all girls.”
Ve : “but.. I don’t know I can go or not”
Mova : “cih.. spoiled child, when are you going to get this fun again ve??”
Cleo : “mova right.. sometimes you must enjoying life and having fun”
Ve : “i… will thinking about this”
Cleo : “here take one card for you, if you change your mind call me ok.”
“yo.. girls.. what make all of you so serious.”said a guy from mova back
Stella : “hello Radit.. miss someone huh..” (^.~)
Raditya : “you right.. I miss her..”he kiss mova cheek
Mova : “hey stop it, we are in school” while gigiling
Raditya : “but I miss you honey, should we go to another place”
He start circled his arm to mova neck
Mova : “aw.. radit we are in school, latter when the school is offer.”
Sandy : “um guys.. I think i should go to library because I must return this book bye..”
See the scene in front of her make sendy uncomfortable, so she decide to excuse and go away
Ve : “I will accompany her, so bye too..”
When ve turn around sendy walk away so fast it make ve little bit running to cacth her
Ve : “sandy.. wait….. “
But she ignore her
Ve : ‘I said wait.” Finally ve can reach her.
Sendy : “why are you follow me?? You should around them.”
Ve : “because you are my best friends, so what happen to you?? Why you always avoiding Raditya? You like him too?”
Hear the last sentence make sendy stop her walk.
Sendy : “what make you think that I like him, honestly a hate him.. because of him mova change, she is not like her anymore.”
Ve : “sorry.. I think you like him because you look so intense to him, I feel it to since her mother died and start have relationship with Radit she change a lot.”
Sendy : “she is not cheerfull like before, and now she like party, drinking and come home late. I miss old mova.”
Ve : “ I hope she understand us and back as her again.”
Sendy : “ how about their invitation?? Are you will join them?”
Ve : “ I don’t know sen.. I can join or not”
Sendy : “ ve.. you are my best friend too, but I hope you not join with them because that’s not your behavior.”
Ve : “yeah I know it, thank you for be my friend for along time.” They holding hands and go to library. But deep down in ve heart she want fell free and have some fun like the other. But sandy advice is right too..
#at Diasta Club#
Diasta sit in front of bar while Kinal busy clean the table with wiper, Diasta have a night club and hiring Kinal to help her but just before the club open because she still under age, Diasta first time meet Kinal near her club, in that time she found Kinal with pathetic condition, body full with wound and freezing because the cold night air. feel sorry for her condition she bring Kinal to her club and treat her as her sister. because of that Kinal be indebted to Diasta because she safe her life.
Diasta : “Kinal.. are you finish yet??”
Kinal : “just little more”
Diasta : “Ok.. don’t forget we must buy your supplies.”
Not for so long a person entered the club and give a greeting for them, that person made Diasta surprised.
Rica : “Hi.. girls.. I am home..”
Diasta : “Riyo~ it’s long not to see you, come here and sit beside me” while pat a chair beside her.
Rica : “I have completed my business in Italy so I decide to meet you this day” she look at Diasta deeply and sit beside her.
Kinal : “you look more prettier Rica-san..”
Rica : “Thank you.. and you look more taller than before” with smile plestered in her lip.
Diasta : “are you done with your duty?” Kinal nodded her head “so change your cloth because we get free ride, you don’t mind to give us a ride.. Riyo~!”
Rica : “of course.. it will be nice to go out with you two, I will treat the lunch for my come back”
“Yey…” said Kinal and Diasta occasionally, Kinal dashing to her room and start to change her cloth, while Diasta and Rica sit together in front of bar. Diasta is Rica girlfriends but they conceal their relationship from Kinal because they won’t make her confuse.
Rica : “Hei.. Nyas.. did you miss me??” suddenly Rica got up from her seat and step closer to Diasta, she grab her waist and lean closer.
Diasta : “Ri.. Riyo.. what are you doing?? It’s not the right place”
Rica rise her eye brow, surprised with Diasta statement.
Riyo : “I am not do something naughty.. so why you take it so serious.” She smirking and kiss Diasta cheek, Diasta close her eyes because the sudden touch, her cheek get reder.
Diasta : “umh… ri..riyo..please stop it..”
Rica : “no… I don’t!” her smile grew wider, she cup Diasta cheek and start to kiss her.”
Diasta : “Ri.. Ump…” before Diasta can protest Rica already kissed her, but lately Diasta not refuse it and start to enjoy the sensation.
Lulled with the situation they forget that Kinal has already change her cloth and go to approach them.
Kinal ; “Ricasan… Nyas~ let’s go!!”.
Diasta push Rica until she back to her seat while she got up and set her face that there is nothing happen. When Kinal come the situation little bit awkward.
Kinal : “um.. did I miss something??”
Diasta : “No!!! I mean.. um.. just forget it.. come on lets go Kinal….” She grab Kinal hand and drag her out, Rica just follow them with smile she look so happy can teasing Diasta
#Back to School#
When school is over as always Sendy accompany Ve until her driver pick up her, sometime Ve give Sendy ride too. But this time Sendy can’t accompany her because some problem.
“Ve sorry I can’t accompany you, I get phone call from my sister home room teacher, and I must meet her.”
“it’s not like usual, is something happen??”
“I don’t know what exactly.. so I will find out”
“just tell me if something getting wrong, your sister is my sister too” while hug Sendy.
“you always be the right person at the right time Ve, Thanks…”
she release from her and wave for Ve to say good bay. Sendy School and her sister is near just 15 minute by on foot but she speeding her step because she won’t came late. Not for so long she enter the gate, the most prestigious junior high school in Jakarta. She pass the corridor and go to teacher room, she knock the door and give a greeting politely.
“excuse me..”
“come in” shout a women inside the room and then Sendy enter the room.
“ miss Sendy??”
“yes, I am”
“please sit down”
She sit beside her sister, her sister just look at her for a while and hide her face not dare to look at Sendy gaze.
“um.. mam what wrong with my sister??”
“She get a fight with her class mate”
“she get a fight??.. how come?? I am sorry mam, but I think it’s any mistake”
“at first I think the same but all her classmate tell me she beat him so hard.”
“You said him mam… She beat a boy!?”, Sendy face palmed her face, “I am so sorry about my sister behave, how is his condition now?”
“the nurse take care of him and fortunately his injury is not to serious.”
“me and my sister ask for pardon, she wouldn’t do this anymore, right Shania?!” with a firm tone of voice, because of that Shania give her voice after long time just keep silent.
“I am sorry mam.. I wouldn’t do this anymore”
”hemh… you are the smartest and excellent student in this school so I will release you but next time if you get a fight again I can’t help you again”
“Ah.. thank you very much mam” said both of them.
“um.. actually Shania still have another problem, she owe tuition fees for three months and I hope you confirm it to your parents.”
“for tuition fees we will repay it as soon as possible, we just need more time and understanding because my mother still need medical treatment, I am promise I will pay off”
“I am sorry can’t help much, I hope all can be resolved an you two can go home now.”
They excuse their self and go home together. On the way home they keep silent no one dare to start a conversation. Shania still afraid if her sister mad at her, five minute get passed and still silent. The youngest finally brave herself to start a conversation.
“Kak Sendy I am so sorry”, she stop her step and pull Sendy hand, because of that Sendy stop her walk.
Nb: “Kak” or “kakak” is siiliar with oneechan
“for what Shanju?!” with no emotion in her face.
“I am sorry, I.. I don’t mind to do that..I.. am.. sorry to make you worry and disappointed you.”her tear start rolling down, Sendy not bear to see her little sister cry so she pull her sister and sit in the bench near the park.
“why you do that Nju..?”
“they would throw my bag from 3’rd floor!!” Shanju silent for a moment and Sendy shocked with her bold statement.. “ I can accept all their mocking and whispering but not for this time, because I know how hard you make efforts to buy me the bag for my birthday present, I know you collect the money for your own money until you don’t have lunch in school, how I can bear it…. How…” with her last statement she is crying hard. Deep in Sendy heart she really sad with her sister condition, she feel failed to become a good sister because she don’t realize how Shanju feeling all this time to hide this pain alone.
“Sorry.. sorry… I still can’t be a good sister for you.” She hug Shania so tight, they cry together to release their true feeling and their sorrow.
“no.. I am the only one who must be blamed .You are the best sister I have in this world, I must be grateful to have some one like you.”
“shhh.. don’t say like that, if you promise to not do that again I will forgive you.”while release from their warm hug.
“um…I wouldn’t do that again Kak Sendy..” she shook her head with her childish way. Sendy smile looking for her.
“good girl” she pat Shanju head and Shanju enjoy her sister treat.
“Kak Sendy.. how about my school tuition fees, should we tell mom and dad??”
Hear it make Sendy silent for a moment, in fact if she told this problem to her parent it just make condition getting worse but if not she don’t know how to collect that money because the nominal is to much. “Kak Sendy…..??” Shanju voice wake Sendy from her thought.
“don’t say anything to mom and dad”
Shanju still confuse with Sendy sudden decision.
“But Kak Sendy it to much for you to handle, I am alright if I must quit from school”
“No… don’t ever think to quit or give up, that school is one of prestigious school in this town, and just only the chosen could enter. Please don’t do that, trust me I will get that money.” While cup Shania cheek and give her deep gaze. Shania hold Sendy warn palm and node for agreement. “I think we agreed about this.. so come on let go home together.” She drag Shania hand and walking to their house together.
#no one pov#
In other place Rica, Diasta and Kinal are enjoy their moment, they have lunch together and accompany Kinal to buy her supplies, it’s look like Dista and Rica are Kinal own parent XD. Looking Kinal choose and buy her own supplies made both if them laugh because Kinal is too cute and innocent, she look like a kid when she think so hard and mumbling sometimes for just to pick a goods she like. After collect all she need Rica initiate to bought ice cream for all of them. She handed the ice cream for Diasta and Kinal.
Kinal : “Hum… this ice cream is delicious, thank you Rica-san”.
Rica : “you are welcome, so how about your feeling to enter new school.”
Kinal : “I am so happy because finally I can school again, but I still nervous about my new friend soon.”
Diasta : “Don’t worry… you are a good and funny girl, I think you will easily get a good friend too”
Kinal : “Really?? Ah… I am so glad to hear that. Eh Rica-san what are you doing in italy??”
Rica : “I learn many think especially to mix drinks and learn how to be barista too.”
Kinal : “woah.. that’s sound great, how about living around there??
Rica : “I leave in lecce town, there are one of romantic place in italy, The streets are quiet small, have old baroque-style buildings and friendly locals make this city feels very romantic. I stay in small flat near my workplace, in night walking around the city could be one way of maximizing romanticism in this city moreover with drink a hot chocolate.” Kinal just dazed hear Rica story.
Diasta : “it’s look like a good place to take honeymoon or vacation with our beloved person.” While she look at Rica
Rica : “Absolutely.. Yes!!” she reply with meaning smile. for the nth time Diasta blushing with her behave. But in other side Kinal think something about it.
Kinal : “some day I will go to that place too!”
Diasta : “ah with who you will be go? You should invite me”
Kinal : “no.. I would not” with playful tone.
Diasta : “eh… why not…??” she start to pouting.
Kinal : “because Rica-san the only one who invite and accompany Nyas-san ”
Both Rica and Diasta shocked with Kinal statement, they afraid if Kinal realize their relation ship. They looking for each other.
Kinal : “hehe.. I just kidding, of course I will go with a person I love, some one who stole my heart.” When Kinal ended her statement, the vision of the girl that hit her this morning rise in her mind “an angel” but hastily she shock her head to remove that thought.
Rica : “I see.. Kinal already grown up now.”
Diasta : “ah… I won’t to join too, but if Kinal think about that we are also happy too, someone you love!! Ah.. Kinal you grown up so much.” She hug kinal like a cat..
Kinal : “Nyah-san.. please stop it, we are in publik now.”
Diasta : “no way, bwe….” She ticking her tounge..
They laugh together, for them a momentlike this it’s a precious time in their life.
Rica : “But you must study hard first, Ok!!”
Kinal : “of course… SEMANGAT!!! Hehe..”
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Finally i found venal fanfic :twothumbs
wait for update :pimp:
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how I will start this..
in the first time I make this FF is only to introduce JKT48 member to 48famely fans..
but time by time I get difficulties to write the story first because the language barrier, second is my TA (final project), and I lost the data ( it make me ruin my mood) :banghead:
so for my friends, fiewer and 48fans who has read my fanfic I say "THANK YOU" but I really sorry can't continue this story again..
but I will make sort fanfic or one shot collection..
and I accept opinion and request which member/pairing will get the short story
and in the end I apologize for everything.. :bow: :bow: :bow:
but I hope all of you still watch them [JKT48 member] :heart:
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too bad you wont continue this ff.. i'll wait for your shortfic then.. i want venal pairing of course :lol:
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this is VeNal fanfic.. request by FairyNyan :love:
please enjoy :)
#no one pov#
It have been more than a year since we meet and become JKT48 member and for many times too we drawing ahead many moment. Moment when we get conflict, moment when we down, moment when we lost our members one by one until moment of happinest. I still remember when management announced team J members, in that time we can’t hide our fidgetiness if there are any member can’t be a part of team but in the same time we really deserve it. How happiness we are when all of first generation get into a same team and Kinal become our captain, I still remember we holding hand, hug each other, crying for happiness and be grateful. Almost more than a year too you and me become best friend, I still remember how we support each other, how hard we work to grab our dream, and always do our best so that we can still side by side in this idol world. We always spend time together when we have a break time from our activity, like this time I am waiting here patiently because we would grab some food after practicing. But something get wrong because you are not coming yet, it’s unusual because you are an on time person. I still waiting you in changing room when the other already go home, but never mind I am enjoying a moment like this. After 15 minute I hear foot step approaching when the door open a beautiful young lady appear.
“VE....!!! hosh,,hosh.. hosh...so..sorry.. I.. I am late hosh..hosh..” said that girl with out of breath.
“You late Capt!! How you can be a good Captain if you can’t fulfill your promise.” She said with serious tone and with her pocker face.
“are you mad with me?? Ah.. I am so sorry Ve... Because suddenly Kak Angga ask me to deal with some stuff.”
(Kak Angga= team J manager)
“at least you can send me a message, you know how lonely I am waiting for you here.”
She still not change the tone yet her face, although in fact she never get mad to Kinal.but It make Kinal worry and face palmed her self.
“I really..really sorry about this, for repay it I will treat you meal but please don’t get mad..Ok!! ya.. ya.. ya.. Ve~chan.” While she holding Ve hand and set her puppy eye.
“Oh no.. don’t set that face again”said Ve in her mind “hemh.. Ok!! I wouldn’t mad at you”
“really.. you are not mad anymore, hah.. thank God.. can you smile for me now?? It so scary when you set your emotionless face like that.”
“ah..don’t worry about what happen a while ago, come on.. lets grab some food.” In this time she give her warm smile to Kinal and drag her out.
“see.. you look more pretty when you smile.” She said it as reply for Ve warm smile, in other side Ve blushing when her best friend said it.
It’s a late nite so not a lot of people walking around in Fx Sudirman, so they can walk calmly without pull attention from fans. As usual Kinal always tell story about anyting and sometimes make Ve lough, she is so friendly and easy get along with the other when Veranda is opposite type of Kinal, she realy calm, not much talk and introvert person. When Kinal busy with her story, there is something that bothering Ve though she holding Kinal hand tightly
“ah.. how happy I am, have a good friend like you. You really attend to me never let me sad or feel lonely. How long we can spend time together like this Kinal.. I am afraid some day I lost you as my friend. We getting busy time by time, especially you.. how big your responsibility as a Captain and as 3’rd grade high school student and will do National examination.” Said Ve in her mind, realize that her friend not pay attention for her story Kinal stop her walk and it make Ve stop her walk too.
“eh.. what’s wrong Nay???” ask Ve because the sudden stopping. She didn’t reply Ve question but just examine Ve face and it make Veranda bloomer.
“if you have a problem or something bother you, you can share it to me. Because you are my best friend.” Hear Kinal bold statement make her shock, if she reply she is fine it mean she lie to her and wouldn’t make Kinal stop her worry. So she decide tell the truth.
“um.. Nay.. how if some day we can’t talk each other, or we can’t see each other again and can’t spend time together like this, are you still be my friend.”
“what do you mean Ve.. you talk like the world will end tomorrow.”
“I just afraid if some day I lost you and you are not become my friend again.”
“Hey.. Hey.. Hey.. don’t tell like that, I wouldn’t leave you or ignoring you.”
“promise me if no mather what happen latter, when we mad or how worst that condition can be latter, we still can be best friend.”
This time Kinal hold Ve face and observe intenly in her eyes.
“I am promise even we get into worst time, I will always in your side and be your best friend, you can hold my promise”
See her honest feeling from Kinal make Ve insensibly drip her tear and hug her best friend.
“thank.. to become my friend Nay.”
“Me too, Ve...”
Day by day change so fast and their relation is still in good condition but can it be everlasting like their promise
In practice room
“huah.. finaly we can rest for a while. I am so exhausting” Said Kinal happily and sit beside Ve.
“I am not suppose if today we would get physical training, huft...” like usual Ve always puff her cheek if she feel boring or little bit upset.
She take a mineral botle from her bag after drink it she lend it to Kinal.
“Thank!!! hahahaha but it’s good for our stamina and performance. ”
“it’s good but it’s like drain my life <(@____@)>”
“maybe because you getting old like unty.. unty... wakakakakak.” While she drink the water.
“aaaa...ah... Nay!!” she unrealize punch Kinal soulder quite hard
“ya.. don’t punch me to hard, how if I choke.”
“ah.. sorry.. sorry.. but you are the one who teasing first”
Not for so long some one appear and lean her hed in Ve thigh.
“Kak Ve... I am tired.. I want to sleep here fo a while please”
“oi.. Anaya.. if you come and want to sleep at least ask permission first”
“uu..uh.. my name is Ayana Kak Kinal not Anaya, but I want to sleep here you don’t mind right Kak Ve?”
“I don’t mind Ayana” she patting Ayana head lovely.
“Kak Ve is so tired, let her rest fo a while.”
“is that true Kak Ve??” Ve just shake her head for the answer and thenAyana turn arroun and now face Kinal “see.. Kak Ve didn’t complain obout it, I thing Kak Kinal got jelous because she can’t doing this.” She put tounge out for tesing Kinal.
“yah.. you start to moking me, little kid.” Kinal start come close to Ayana.
“but.. but.. it’s true right?? Ahhahahahahaha”
Kinal start tickling her, and make Ayana laugh out loud. They start teasing each other, in otherside Ve just enjoy this moment and giggling for this two behaviour. Just sound of their stomach can stop their fighting and it’s a code for Veranda to do something.
“I thing some one getting hungry, wait a minute... I will give you two something” she open her bag and take a box of strowberry jam bread. “ here.. I made it this morning.. at least it can make us sated until lunch”
“woah.. it look so delicious.” Said Kinal and Ayana occasionly. They start eat that bread together hunggrily. The moment like this is so valuable for them.
“hey.. slow down girls for eat this.” Said Veranda look their friends behaviour.
“cih.. ayane eat so messy, see.. like a little kid.”
“really??”
“don’t be so messy, here wipe your mouth whit this” she trow a pack of tissu to Ayana.
“Ih.. Kak Kinal so cruel to me.. hiks..”
Once again Ve just loughing
“please come close Ay...” When Ayana close with her, Veranda take a tissue and start to wipe the messy. Ayana so happy with Ve kindness because she doing this like Ayana is her own sister.
“thank you Kak Ve.”
“you are welcome (^.~)”
Time going so far so good, but can it be last long... or it just a beginning for their true story.
In this year JKT48 got many onair and off air job, they must dirrect selling their first album and it mean a hand shake event will held, fortunetly second generation can fill theater space when team J can’t perform.
After RKJ theater they make an appointment to eat noddles together.
“come on.. let get the food Nay..”
“um.. Ve.. I am so sorry, because I can’t accompany you to eat noddles. It’s too late nigh I would miss the travel going to Bandung. May be next time we can go out together”
“never mind but let me carry you until travel station because I bring my car.”
“no.no.no.no.. you wouldn’t do this because Dhike and Beby accompany me, beside that you are so tired and also must drive car by your self.”
“but Nay....”
“it’s ok Ve.. Your condition is more importan to me, don’t worry tomorrow we can meet again.”
“okey.. if you decide for that, be carefull because it too late”
Honestly she little bit dissapointed but she wan’t Kinal get trouble because of her.
“you too Ve..”
End then they go to their own destination.
Today is JKT48 prees conference for they fisrt album heavy rotation, members look so nervous especialy the center and ofcourse our captain but they try hard to stay strong.
“Nay.. are you nervous?? Ask feranda to her best friend.
“a little bit.. but I am fine.. I hope we can do it well”.
“ofcourse you can Nay.. be strong like Kinal I ever know this time, if you strong so do us.”
“thanks.. you are the one who know me better.”With holding hand each other...“hem.. Ve hand is always warm..”
“Kinal.. Kinal.. Please come here, I need your help..” shout Melody in far away, and make them release their grasp.
“Ve-chan.. I.. “ before Kinal continue her words, Ve cut it immediately
“she need your help, so.. you got to go now”
Kinal walk away and approach Melody, she accompany Melody where ever she go, she stay in Melody side from start until end of the prees conference. During that time Ve and Kinal sit separate, Kinal and Melody in middle whe she sit in left corner. Ve just observing them from her place “sometimes they look so suitable when they together.”
Day by day they were getting bussy with farious job so it made them rarely meet, some times they can cit chat awhile in break time and before theater rehesal. Slow but surely it made gap between them, something doesn’t work like before and it made one of them start to worry with this condition.
“Kinal.. lets.. get lunch together..” “sorry Ve.. I have meeting with staff and manager after this maybe next time” one of rejection, when break time Ve try to accompany Kinal but she is studying with Dhike and Frieska so she decide do not distrub. when they can’t meet Ve try to send massage to Kinal just for ask Kinal condition or just say hai but she rarely got a repply. “you don’t repply my message last night, and rarely repply my message too, are you ok??” “I am fine, sorry I oversleep last night.. um Ve sorry but I get to go now” another rejection.
Ve start get worried with her sudden change of her best friend but she try hard to positive thinking. Today all members are gathering to do practice together so first generation and second generation can share knowlage and experience. Ve just sit alone in corner of the studio her gaze is empty and a lot of thing in her mind. When she look at Kinal in the same time Kinal look at her too, Kinal smiling at her and made Ve happy, maybe all she tought last time to axcessive. She more happy when Kinal walk over her, she just smiling at Kinal as always but in the middle unexpected thing happen one of second generation stop her walk, she pull Kinal arm and invite Kinal in other place beside that Kinal just follow her without rejection. See what’s going on infront of her make Veranda mad and dissapointed.
“why.. why you ignoring me again, Nay..”
“she would never do that Ve..”
“Sonya!! Since when you are here.”
“not for so long, but I know you observing our Captain.”
“I... I am.. not.. .”
“you are not a good liar, just admit it.. you really worry about her right.’
“honestly!! Yes... she change Onya.. Kinal not same as before.”
“really?? Hey why you think like that??’
“we rarely meet and she ignoring me lately, when I try to get close to her she deny it and keep a distance but not with the other”.
“she is our Captain rihgt now, so she have a big responsibility and many work to do, and remember she always care with the other and help them when they get trouble”.
“I just worry if some day she broke her promise to me.”
“trust me she wouln’t!! We know how Kinal is, she type of person that wouldn’t break her promise, we trust her so thats why she can be our Captain.”
“ah.. sorry if I think so immature.. but i realy want her in my side even just a secon.. I just want to make sure if she is fine and not get trouble*
“just remember it if you two are so lucky to become best friend, sometime is easier get foe than get a good friend, when you lost in your path so just get it back”
Ve thinking again about Sonya talk while Sonya busy texting some one. Not for so long Ve,repply Sonya statement.
“I will do my best to keep her as my friend”
“good girl ^_^”
Let’s bet for luck tomorrow...
TBC
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long time no post and finally I write VeNal fanfic again :cow:
sorry if any mistake.. and I need your review :)
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when will you continue the story? can't hardly wait :lol:
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Really bad because you can't continue "the beginning" but thanks for venal fic veforveranda-san
and njunab os omg :shocked i like it kkk~ :D
Please update soon :)
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LOL
so everyone in this thread are indonesian?
never thought that i will met another indonesian. Yes, i knew yukofan-san an indonesian earlier, then pwoper48-san, and the last is you aruka-san. LOL
so that's why there's a solar panel (http://www.shinesolar.net)on your thread aruka-san.
sorry for not giving a comment. LOL
i will after i read all of them~ :D
Really liked the thread.. Everyone out there have some similarity with me.. Really nice to be part of the community.