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Re: [jkt48] the beginning
« Reply #40 on: July 01, 2012, 03:03:20 PM »
soo...this is the thread where the indonesians fanfic authors and readers gather


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Re: [jkt48] the beginning
« Reply #41 on: July 01, 2012, 07:35:06 PM »
soo...this is the thread where the indonesians fanfic authors and readers gather

Eh nani? No no no... I'm reader and beginner author from Mars :lol:

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Re: [jkt48] the beginning
« Reply #42 on: July 02, 2012, 09:38:39 AM »
@ bochang@ Pwoper48 :
 
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And yes, this thread become a general jkt48 fans thread. LOL should we move? LOL
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soo...this is the thread where the indonesians fanfic authors and readers gather
                   haha i think we should move  here :lol: :lol:
                   
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How about moving here... http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31022.0 ?

So far that one's supposed to be the most appropriate room to be called 'general JKT48 fans thread'. After all, that thread needs to be revived too.

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Then stella and sonia it is. I just think about the plot but never make the whole story till now :lol Hope that i can post it soon
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@ bunny_rabbit :
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soo...this is the thread where the indonesians fanfic authors and readers gather
                          dont worry this is not just for indonesan  authors and readers but for all general  authors and readers  :heart:


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but i have OTP in JKT48, and they're Ochi and Beby!! I don't know why but in twitter they're often mentioning each other... and I think they'll make a good pairing in the future...
                    lately they are more close than before, maybe i will make it one soon...
                    thank for reading my fic


                   
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Re: [jkt48] the beginning
« Reply #43 on: July 21, 2012, 11:13:30 AM »
Hmm, interesting start for a relationship. :lol:
I like how you are using the plot line to your advantage, especially with Ve as the rich and Kinal as the poor, social statuses are usually nice to use in plots, especially when you make it your biggest point, though I think you'd get into conflict with this and that's what I'm interested in the most because its always been my main interest, the conflicts, drama or angst in the story. Hope you can utilize this to the best of your efforts, you really have a good plot in hand.

I'm liking this so far...I just started to get interested in JKT48, mostly because of VeNal, so I'm hoping to see more of these two, to be honest, I hope more people would make fics of them because its interesting to see them two together, I want to make a fic for these two, but then, I don't know much about them though I'm interested in them frankly because they catch my attention just like BlackGeki/YukiRena. :3

Nice to see you update this, been reading this since the first time you posted it, sorry if I didn't comment. Hahaha. ^ ^llll
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Re: [jkt48] the beginning
« Reply #44 on: July 21, 2012, 05:43:01 PM »
hoho..2 SM*SH members appeared in this fic..LOL..

i can't wait for ve and kinal to meet again..i think kinal will enter in the same school as ve..

nice update..can't wait for the continuation..


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Re: [jkt48] the beginning
« Reply #45 on: July 22, 2012, 09:59:27 AM »
Hmm, interesting start for a relationship. :lol:
I like how you are using the plot line to your advantage, especially with Ve as the rich and Kinal as the poor, social statuses are usually nice to use in plots, especially when you make it your biggest point, though I think you'd get into conflict with this and that's what I'm interested in the most because its always been my main interest, the conflicts, drama or angst in the story. Hope you can utilize this to the best of your efforts, you really have a good plot in hand.

I'm liking this so far...I just started to get interested in JKT48, mostly because of VeNal, so I'm hoping to see more of these two, to be honest, I hope more people would make fics of them because its interesting to see them two together, I want to make a fic for these two, but then, I don't know much about them though I'm interested in them frankly because they catch my attention just like BlackGeki/YukiRena. :3

Nice to see you update this, been reading this since the first time you posted it, sorry if I didn't comment. Hahaha. ^ ^llll

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I hope many author write their fanfic or jkt48 fic..
hahaha don't worry.. i realy happy that you read my fic from the beginning  :cow:

lol interesting...  :lol: can't wait for the update...  :D
maybe put other pairings in the fanfic would be great.. or maybe make Ghaida become a harem owner...  XD
update soon!  ;)
i will put other pairing like dhike-->ghaida<--stella, movaxsendy, diasta(nyas)xrica(riyo) and loli pairing shanjuxnabilah :heart:

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don't say that "Morgan" what you mentioned is Morgan SM*SH?? 
hoho..2 SM*SH members appeared in this fic..LOL..
i can't wait for ve and kinal to meet again..i think kinal will enter in the same school as ve..
nice update..can't wait for the continuation..
hahahahaha i think (yukofan,vicchan02) and the others don't know their name but in fact you realize it..
um... how i can explain this.. :sweatdrop: actualy i need 2 hour to decide the boys character in here,
i haven't interest in drama(sinetron), BB or GB indonesia so it dificult to choose.. and then my friend talking about them so i searching in internet and decide them to fill the position.. :doh:
ah.. gomenasai.. if it's not suit the strory   :bow:

@yukofan : hoho let see the next up date, thank you for reading my fic

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Re: [jkt48] the beginning
« Reply #46 on: July 22, 2012, 11:12:31 AM »
Wut!? SM*SH?!

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will edit after reading..

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Glad that the General is alright XD *salute (FYI: Kinal's nickname is General(in army), because she's the center in the unit song kagami no naka no joan de arc XD and she really lives up her title XD)

hohoho conflict will be make them closer. fufufu learn about each other and fell in love. :on cigar:
(since i haven't write anything in english.. my grammar is.. hmmm.. destroyed?  :kneelbow:)

Gachan! Kamen Rider Ghaida!! XD Hmmmm kinda suspicious with Gachan.. love triangle? XD :kekeke:

wooofasfashdhabbad! Many members appeared!! XD  :onioncheer:

My oshimen~ Stella  :luvluv1:

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boyfriend.. stella.. boyfriend..  :mon huh:
i can't process those words.. it's not related..  :mon huh:

WAGWEHCWHE UNME!  :mon zoom:

Tell me his name..  :mon worklate:

and more than one..  :mon headbang:

JUST WHAT QQR!!@$V$GHREG!  :mon mad:

 :mon runcry:

and why are those two boyband member show up?!

seriously reading "rafael" name is a nightmare for me..
i remember last year.. almost every freshman call me rafael..  :mon uggh:

and what's with that touchy2 thingy!  :mon uggh:

and Ve-Morgan?!  :mon evil:

Aigooo.. Jebal.. Kinaru.. save your princess from those guys..

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wogh, sieka interested to write VeNal.. well, they're cute XD
you should watched the theater performance to see those two cute moment. LOL

i want to write, but so lazy! LOL my Stella fic~ haven't finished yet. LOL

ah and sorry for bashing those guys..
well.. it's obvious i will :mon evil: if they gonna get so close with JKT48 member.. even in the fic. XD

Continue! XD
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Re: [jkt48] the beginning
« Reply #47 on: July 22, 2012, 12:26:25 PM »
Every time those two names showed up during the read, I was like grinning myself all the time, yet it's more of a 'what the ..' feeling. :lol:

Instead of putting the two names, how about replacing them with my and bochang's name instead? XD XD Nah, I was just kidding!! :P But I don't know if bochang-san agrees with the idea.
In the meantime, just continue with the Sm*sh blast as you initially did.

So, many new characters are present here. Ghaida with hints on Dhike, the hugging-crazed Nyash, the 'popular' Stella, and others. Me gusta! :D
I was surprised with Mova's attitude. To picture her with that behavior never once crossed my mind. If it's attributed to Stella I could imagine it, but to Mova? Hehehe.. but I'll wait and see for future events to unfold.
And reading Cleo's background in the story, hiii~ merinding disko! Scary!!

i will put other pairing like dhike-->ghaida<--stella, movaxsendy, diasta(nyas)xrica(riyo) and loli pairing shanjuxnabilah :heart:
Yes, yes, yes! :w00t: This, I'd love to wait!!
Please don't make us wait too long! :cry:
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Re: [jkt48] the beginning
« Reply #48 on: July 23, 2012, 05:20:13 AM »
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Glad that the General is alright  *salute (FYI: Kinal's nickname is General(in army), because she's the center in the unit song kagami no naka no joan de arc  and she really lives up her title )
ohohoho i am agree with you

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boyfriend.. stella.. boyfriend.. 
i can't process those words.. it's not related.. 

WAGWEHCWHE UNME! 

Tell me his name.. 

and more than one.. 

JUST WHAT QQR!!@$V$GHREG! 
ah.. gomenassai i made stella being playgirl (don't worry it's juat fic :thumbsup)here but i have some surprise later, dont worry

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and why are those two boyband member show up?!

seriously reading "rafael" name is a nightmare for me..
and Ve-Morgan?! 

Aigooo.. Jebal.. Kinaru.. save your princess from those guys..
ah.. gomen...gomen... i alrady change the name so please forgive me   :cry: :bow:

@ aruka:
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Every time those two names showed up during the read, I was like grinning myself all the time, yet it's more of a 'what the ..' feeling.
yeah.. even bochang disagree with this  :cry:, don't worry i already change the character

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So, many new characters are present here. Ghaida with hints on Dhike, the hugging-crazed Nyash, the 'popular' Stella, and others. Me gusta!
I was surprised with Mova's attitude. To picture her with that behavior never once crossed my mind. If it's attributed to Stella I could imagine it, but to Mova? Hehehe.. but I'll wait and see for future events to unfold.
And reading Cleo's background in the story, hiii~ merinding disko! Scary!!
stella has as play girl role model here (it just fiction ok), about mova.. many secreat that not revealed yet so please watch it ;)
about cleo.. that jusy her family  background anyway  :grin:.. but she will be kinal rival here.. ups... i am slipped out

i will update as soon as posible ok ;)
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Re: [jkt48] the beginning
« Reply #49 on: July 23, 2012, 05:26:20 AM »
Every time those two names showed up during the read, I was like grinning myself all the time, yet it's more of a 'what the ..' feeling. :lol:

Instead of putting the two names, how about replacing them with my and bochang's name instead? XD XD Nah, I was just kidding!! :P But I don't know if bochang-san agrees with the idea.
In the meantime, just continue with the Sm*sh blast as you initially did.

So, many new characters are present here. Ghaida with hints on Dhike, the hugging-crazed Nyash, the 'popular' Stella, and others. Me gusta! :D
I was surprised with Mova's attitude. To picture her with that behavior never once crossed my mind. If it's attributed to Stella I could imagine it, but to Mova? Hehehe.. but I'll wait and see for future events to unfold.
And reading Cleo's background in the story, hiii~ merinding disko! Scary!!

i will put other pairing like dhike-->ghaida<--stella, movaxsendy, diasta(nyas)xrica(riyo) and loli pairing shanjuxnabilah :heart:
Yes, yes, yes! :w00t: This, I'd love to wait!!
Please don't make us wait too long! :cry:

ARUKA SAN! YOU'RE A GENIUS!! XD  :mon thumb:

Mova Sendy? hmm i thought Rica is closer with Sendy. --> From my observation as a stalker in twitter. LOL

Ghaida Stella!  :mon lovelaff:

Dhike reminds me of tomochin.. Tsundere LOL

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oh and hotaru san, it's okay to using those guys name. :3 I don't mind, it's just a fic. :3

i'm not angry.. well yeah.. but it's okay. XD

and i'm nobody to them(member of JKT48) .. LOL only a simple mere fan.. TT.TT
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Re: [jkt48] the beginning
« Reply #50 on: July 23, 2012, 05:42:03 AM »
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oh and hotaru san, it's okay to using those guys name. :3 I don't mind, it's just a fic. :3

i'm not angry.. well yeah.. but it's okay.

and i'm nobody to them(member of JKT48) .. LOL only a simple mere fan.. TT.TT
i already change their name because when i read it again i giggling by my self so it's better if i change this with my first character :)
it's because my friend give me advice to bring the sm@#$ member hahaha...

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Mova Sendy? hmm i thought Rica is closer with Sendy. --> From my observation as a stalker in twitter. LOL

Ghaida Stella! 

Dhike reminds me of tomochin.. Tsundere LOL

actualy mova,sendy,rica are trio best friend like ochi,gaby,delima
but sendy and mova often slept together  :twisted: :twisted: when i read their twitter ]
stellaxghaida and jelousy dhike gegegegegegek...

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Re: [jkt48] the beginning
« Reply #51 on: December 17, 2012, 05:57:39 AM »
for the first I say sorry to JKT48 story "the beginning" for my late update.. because my flassdisk lost and the data gone
so i will rewrite again the story because i will change the story line
and i will give one shoot collecttion VeNal, today is kohaku uta gassen event but Ve not join the event  :cry: :cry: lost VeNal moment

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Ve x Kinal (VeNal)

Wherever you go, you always in my heart (one shot)

Kinal POV
Today I go to Japan to attend  AKB48 Kohaku Uta Gassen with members include Aki-san and haruka-san but it’s not same because Ve not join with us, it’s make me fell so lonely without her..
“Kinal.. Kinal…. Wake up.. we almost arrive” shout Dhike who sit beside Kinal..
“um.. Ve just give 5 minute more please..” mumbling Kinal in her sleep.
“Ve??” Dhike rise her eyebrow “oi… Kinal this is me Dhike.. You should wake up and take your seatbelt properly because we will landing soon.”
Hearing another voice beside Ve make her open her eye suddenly.
“eh… Dhike?? Gosh.. sorry.. I am so sleepy.” While fix her position and use her seatbelt.
“you really miss her? Until you recognize me her!”
“who is your talking about??”.
“don’t act like idiot, of course  Ve-san”
“Really?!” this time Kinal rise her eyebrow “ ah.. it’s must be my sleep talking, so just ignore it”.
But deep in her heart she really miss Ve until she bring it in her dream..

#Flash back#
“Ve.. Ve.. Ve-chan where are you??” while searching the person.
“I am here.. and don’t shouting like a kid lost her mother, Kinal…” while out from changing room.
Suddenly Kinal approach her and grab her shoulder and look at her directly
“Ve is it true you are not join with us in Kohaku event”.
Ve little bit surprise with Kinal question and sudden act but she know it will happen soon.
“Yes it’s true Kinay.. because I must finish my final assignment so I decide to not join.” This time she call Kinal with her nick name to muffle her..
”um.. I see.. study is more important, I hope next year we can go there together” she give Ve her smile even in her heart she little bit disappointed.
“sorry.. this time I can’t fulfil our promise, to see snow fall and spent this holiday together..” she said it with down her face because she fell so guilty. Kinal know it and try to give her spirit again, she would not let her sad. she grab Ve hands and Ve raise her face again because the sudden touch.
“don’t worry.. next time we will go together again. Until that time we must work hard and do our best again.. so we will go together OK!!” while give her warm smile..
”re.. really..?” Ve blushing because that smile.
“sure.. we must optimist.. now you must concentration on your study and me concentration to perform in Japan.”
“yah.. we can do it”. Ve fell relieve “before you go to Japan I will give you this.” Ve open her bag and take a pair of glove .”it’s gone be cold there so please wearing this to make your hands warm”
“you bring me your favorite glove.. uwah.. thank you Ve.” She hug Ve tightly ”even you not beside me, with this I can fell your warmness because you always holding me.” She wink to Ve playfully
“tha.. that.. n.. not what.. I..,I.. mean..” Ve blushing so hard..
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Finally I arrive in Japan.. and it’s winter season so the air so cold. I breathe deeply and fell the atmosphere around me, snow start falling down and all covered with snow. So this is snow that Ve always tell for me before, it’s really beautiful.. I hope I can see this together with you..
“Kinal.. don’t spacing out!!hurry up.. or we will be left out the bus” dhike voice breaking Kinal tough..
“Ok.. I am coming..”
Kinal wear Ve glove and hold it in her chest she can smell Ve scent while running to appear Dhike..

What ever you do now, you will always be my side and holding me tight..

Ve POV

I got up late because I must finish my final project for assignment until morning but I must hurry because I have appointment with Sonya for hang out together before practicing.
“Ve.. you late..”
“sorry.. Onya.. I must finish my assigment until morning, How is your final exam??”
“I still have remidial, I really hate math! Ah.. today don’t talk about study, come on lets heave fun.” She grab Ve hand and drag her.
Sonya drag me to game center first, I ask her why we go to this place and she answer me because we need release our stress. We play WHACK A MOLE GAME, in first I just wacth Sonya playing, she hit the mole accurately.. when I look at her so excited I try playing too and yes it’s so funny, it’s like we can release our temper and stress.
“hahaha.. how are you now??”ask Onya
“um.. satisfied and very relieved”
“I know you will enjoy this.. ok next we will shoping.”
“sounds good”
At least I can relax for a bit even i still miss you kinal, how hard I try to make me happy but it’s not same without you in my side. Sonya and me walking arround, some times we go to clothes stand just for watching or try some, wallking in the corridor and pass many stand. It make me flass back in time when I spend time together with her. Me and Kinal always buy same clothes, glsses, or shoes. She is little bit tomboy but sometime she make me shockek when she choose a feminim clothes to twinning with me xD
Finaly me and Sonya buy some clothes, and go to japanesse restourant before we start our practicing.
“today is so blessed rigth...??”while look at Ve
“um..” ve just noded her head for repply.
Sonya feel Ve hidding something, she know how close Kinal and Ve and know their feeling each other but poorly beside Kinal and Ve never reveal it.
“hey.. come on Ve!! Kinal and the others just leave for three days not forever”
“ah.. who said I miss her??”
“there you are.. you already said that.”Sonya just give Ve a bait and she hooked.
Ve just face palm her self, how easily get teased like that.
“um.. what is your order, I am hungry??” she try to change the topic.
“gezzz... you are so misterious, ok let I see the menu first.”
When sonya look at the menu,I see the menu too and glued in one menu, this menu..

Flassback
“Ve what is your order??” said Kinal enthusiast
“like always salmon sushi and.. how about we order ramen?”
“ah.. Ve noddles is not good for health.”
“but I wanna try it Nay...look they have spicy level.”said Ve spoiledly.
“eh.. really.. ok I will try the 5 level.” Level 5 is the higest spicy level.
“ok me too”.
“are you sure??”kinal rise her eyebrow because she know that Ve cannot eat spicy food like her.
“ofcourse I am not a kid anymore.” Said Ve confident.
Kinal just lughing at Ve act, this is the other side from Ve that only Kinal who know it.
When the order arrive they start eat the ramen, as kinal predict Ve can’t finish eat the ramen because it’s very spicy..
“um.. Nay.. I can’t finish the ramen..” while crying because the the spiciness
“hahahaha.. look who is the kid rigth now.”
“ah... Kinay...”while hit Kinal shoulder lightly.
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“I order sushi roll how about you?”
“salmon sushi and spicy ramen level 5.”
The waitress take the order and for a moment the food is coming and they start eat the food.
“ittadakimasu....” said Ve and Sonya coincide.
“sushi roll is the best.” Said Sonya happily, but when she look at Ve who start to cry because the ramen made her worry”Ve are you ok??”
“um.. i am fine,, it just because the ramen is so spicy.”
Yes it’s because the ramen is very spicy as always but the real reason is at the time like this what ever I do, your presence always hounted me.

Wherever you go now, you always in my heart






 



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Re: [jkt48] the beginning [one shot (VeNal)]
« Reply #52 on: December 23, 2012, 11:37:05 AM »
please continue the story, 6 months waiting!

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Re: [jkt48] the beginning [one shot (VeNal)]
« Reply #53 on: December 23, 2012, 01:20:55 PM »
guys, just want to inform you if dont know yet about this news that TEAM J HAS BEEN CREATED!! and the member is all of the JKT48 1st gen. and who's the captain??? IT'S KINAL!!!!  XD

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Re: [jkt48] the beginning [one shot (VeNal)]
« Reply #54 on: December 24, 2012, 06:44:16 AM »
please continue the story, 6 months waiting!
sorry for waitting the story for long...  :bow: :bow:
I still concentration to finish my final project (TA) so next year I will graduate from my collage..
maybe in january I post the next chapter ^^

guys, just want to inform you if dont know yet about this news that TEAM J HAS BEEN CREATED!! and the member is all of the JKT48 1st gen. and who's the captain??? IT'S KINAL!!!!  XD
yes it's announced yesterday.. and it have bad news too, Ghaida announce her graduate  :cry: :cry: :cry:


so many graduation this year.. and it make me confuse to continue my story anyway..
any some advice maybe???

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Re: [jkt48] the beginning [one shot (VeNal)]
« Reply #55 on: December 28, 2012, 06:53:20 PM »
please continue the story, 6 months waiting!
sorry for waitting the story for long...  :bow: :bow:
I still concentration to finish my final project (TA) so next year I will graduate from my collage..
maybe in january I post the next chapter ^^

january? yay!  :cow:
good luck with your TA, though   :grin:

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Re: [jkt48] the beginning Chap 2 full version
« Reply #56 on: March 23, 2013, 10:32:26 AM »
Ah finally... I graduate from my college.. thank God...
I am so sorry about my long hiatus  :bow: :bow: :bow:

I erase the previous chap and rewrite again, because maybe some one already forget the story... so do I  :lol: :lol:
so many occurrence in JKT48 as specialy graduating member, so I little bit confuse to continue the story but I decide to keep the member who gradute still in my story..
gomen if my english is not good.. but I hope you enjoy..

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flashback
#Ve POV#
I sit quietly in back, i check my cell phone there is one message on my screen, i open it:
From sandy    : hey princess... where are you ??
To sandy          : hum... some one already miss  me  , i am still on the way...
From sandy   : you must hurry, i realy miss you >.<
Iam cackled read her message..When i want to reply sudenly..
BRAKKKK...!! i am startled, i drop my cell phone and check what happen. When i realize it.
“oh god.. i bump some one”, without thinking again i get out from the car to check the person
“ve sama wait...”
I walk in front of the car, i saw a young girl fell in the ground with bread spread every where, she try to get up and collect them all.
“is she alright??”i said in my mind.

Kinal PoV
BRAAAKKK!!
It happen so fast, when i open my eyes i feel my body in asphalt streets, my back is hurt but i try to wake up.
When i wake up i saw the bread spread every where
“oh shit.... i am death, how i can explain this to aunty..” i start collect the bread and ignoring the pain, who dare to do this to me.
Suddenly i hear some one approach.

End flass back..


#NO one POV#
“miss are you alright?? I am  so sorry.. my driver is so clueless”,helping collect the bread.
When Kinal turn arround, she found a young lady help her collect the bread. Her skin is so white, her long wavy hair covered her face,
when she turn around kinal can see the girl face.
She stunning..
this girl is so pretty, her eyes is so calming and her pink  lips made her look like an angel.
 “am i dreaming??she is so gorgeous” shout kinal in her mind and her temper is already gone. S
he snap her day dream and start to collect the bread again. When she collect the bread their hand meet together.
 Kinal can feel the warm and soft skin touch her fist, they start look each other and suddenly.
“ve sama... are you ok. Please come back to your sit. I will handle this”.
“I am fine, just please appologize to her”.
“oh.. sorry miss I bumped you” while helping kinal to stand up.
“it’s ok sir.. I am fine, I hope you  more carefull”
Ve feel so guilty about what happen to the young girl and she initiation to repay the demage.
“sorry for this accident, i made your bread rod. And here, please take this money to pay this demage.”
While handed 500.000 rupias to that girl.(Rp 500.000 = $50) /(O.O)\
Kinal raise her eyebrow, she felt the uneasiness.
“no.. miss!! Thank you but i don’t need this, it’s fine so please take your money back.”with handed back the money.
“but please take this..”she still insist to give the money.
“no.. i can’t..”she start fell  irritated.
“just take it, please...” she grab kinal hand and handed the money.
“i said NO!!” without realize it she pull her hand and it made Ve fell on the ground while the money spread every where.
“oi.. kid what are you doing to Ve sama huh...” he grab her collar shirt  and pushed her back down.
Suddenly ....
“STOP!! what are you doing to Kinal” she pull the man back.”don’t  even dare to touch her.”
“do not interfere kid”
situation began to heat up and they started to fighting, realize it kinal pull ghaida back and ve try to stand up and grab her driver fist
“calm dawn sir.. violence will not solve the problem”she try to calm him down.
Kinal start collect the money back to return it, her pride is hurt for little bit.
“sorry, but i am not need your money miss, here.. give it to some one else.”with cold tone and serious face.
Ve just stand up in there and frozen, no one ever do that to her she just shock with that girl reaction.
Kinal pull Ghaida  and handed her basket  and start to walk a way.
“ve sama.. ve sama.. are you ok, you look so pale??” while shaking her shoulder.
Tin.. tin.. tin.. the clackson bring ve to the reality.
“huh?? Ow sorry i am fine, lets get back.”

Ve POV
i sit in the car the scene spinning in my mind. Why?? Why i am still remember her.
this girl.. she is so different with people i ever meet before, Am i do wrong thing?? Why she is so angry??
Sigh... beside that she is cute actually enventought she look boyish.
Her eye is pretty but i can feel the loneliness in her eyes.
I start curious with her, Is this girl as lonely as me?? And her name...?? her name....?
i try to remember, oh.. her name is Kinal.

Kinal.. i hope someday i meet you again..

I check my phone again, i got 4 message pending.
From sandy   : ve.. are you ok, why you dont replay??
From sandy    : where are you??
From sandy    : hello... anybody there???
From sandy    : what ever you now i hope you are fine, just quick or you will be late.
To sandy   : sorry i got little incident, i need your help... can i borrow your skirt?? I will explain this when i arrive.”
From sandy   : gosh.. you make me worry, you are lucky i still have one in my locker, just come here ok..”

Kinal PoV
“geezz.. are you ok kinaru???”
“i am, fine thank for your help gachan..”
“never mind, we are friends right, and let me take that.”
“i am fine i can bring it”
“ (-.-)”... you are so stubborn, let me handle one of that.”
“alright... here take this one”.
“that girl is pretty, but i don’t like that men.. hey... you must appologize to her, you make her fell down.:
“ yeah.. maybe you right, but she is so stubborn to keep me that money, you know me well that money can’t buy my pride.
“gezzz.. i know.. i know.. i think she is stubborn as you.”
“hey.. are you mocking me?? We are different, you remember that man, he called  her Ve sama, i thik she is from rich family.”
“woah.. you remember her name huh.. i haven't remember her name.” With teasing..
“are you wanna died..”
“hey .. he.. hey..I am just kidding.”
that is kinal, she is so sensitive if it’s about money she think that girl hurt her pride with give her that money,
eventhough she is so stubborn she is so kind, honest, pure and loyal friend.

When arrive at bakery
We open the door and entering that small bakery. There is a girl arrange cake in glasses stall,
when she her door bel ringing she turn arround.
“hey kinal.. you late!!”
“ah...dhike.. sorry i am late.”
“she got accident this morning.”while put the bread  in the table
“what??? Really, are you ok kinaru?? She up to her.
“I am fine, here the breads and i really sorry about this  the bread look so mess.”
“nah.. don’t worry i will explain this to my father.”
when she get the bread from kinal she announce something strange when she realize it.
“kinaru, your elbow hurt!!”
“eh.. what?? Where??
“oh you right, here look at this” ghaida took her hand.
“hold on i will bring the medictools”
Ghaida guide kinal sit in nearest chair, and place her hand in table. Not for so long dhike back and bring the first aid kit.
“let me see your wound.” Slowly she lift her elbow and clean it with antiseptic cotton. Fortunately the wound is not deep,
when she caressing the wound kinal arched her shoulder. Realizing this she more carefully caressing the wound and start blew a little.
Saw the scene in front of her ghaida little bit jealous.
The three are friends since they kid even though kinal is one year younger than them is not make different.
Ghachan is orphan like Kinal, because she look boyist and handsome many people think that she is a boy,
she is a street musician and she start made her own band with kinal. Dhike is owner daughter of this bakery,
when you meet her in first time you will feel this girl is so cold but when you know her she is fastidious and caring.
She is good at cooking and made cake, she is lucky can continue her study rather than kinal and ghachan.
Both of them can’t continue their study becau they don’t have money to pay the registration fee.
“ok it’s done”
“thank.. ike.. i think somone starting get jelous.” While glance to ghaida.
“hu.. uh.. wha..t.. wahat do you mean.” Shocking with sudden declaration and she start punc kinal shoulder.
“ouch you hurt me.”
“who dare to teasing me”
“gezz.. not again.. ok guys, stop this and i got to go.”
“ow.. we forget that you must go to school, i think i must go to my work too.”
“you wanna me accompany you kinaru..?”
“nope.. thank.. i can take care my self, i think some one need your help than me.”
with teasing tone and glance to dhike and it’s made that girl flustered.
It’s funny to teasing both of them.

In school
“Ve.. what happen, why you take so long??”
“sorry to waiting me, i need your help and i will explain it when lunch time, now we got to hurry.”
“yeah.. i think we must hurry, the gate will closed.”
Sandy is ve childhood, she is smart and she is a good singer, because of that she get schoolarship in this school.
Sandy is some of people that ve can trust in this world, even though ve has alot of friends
but she feel that their attention is just a fiction because she is form rich family and one of popular girl in this school.

Back to Kinal
“nyas-san…. Morning, sorry I am late..”
Someone appear from bartender desk.. not thingking twist she run and hug kinaru.
 “kinaru-chan… u late, I really ..miss… you.. muach” while try to kiss her
 “kya.. sempai.. st,,o,,op it.. I am already got accident this morning”
In one moment she relese her
“mow, kinaru got accident.. how?? Are you ok?
While checking her condition
“oi… oi.. I am fine, just little scar..
“poor my little kinaru” patting her head
“ yah.. I am not a kid anymore” with pouting.
“ hihihihihi.. ok2 my little kinaru got older right now, here I have something to you.
She take a letter from desk and give it to kinaru.
“ what is it??”
“ um.. just open it (^.~)
Without thinking again kinal open the envelope and start read the letter. She silent for a moment and then look to nyas,
without thinking again she run and hug nyas..
“uwa nyas… am I dreaming??it’s true right??I can school again.. I can school again.. thank you so much nyas..muach..”
 she is not aware if she kiss nyah.
“you like my own sister, so I am happy if you happy too,um.. I think we should buy your school supplies after this “.
“eh.. realy.. ok!! I will finish my work faster. Yosh.. I can school again lalalalalalalala…”
Nyas just smile at her behavior, sometimes kinal behave random like this if she fell so happy, kid just likes a kid anyway ^^.

ve school
after bell ringing all student gathered in public canteen, no exception for ve and sendy they walking together to go there.
why it called public canteen because in this place the girls and the boys can meet.
This school have two building, one building for boys and one building for the girls they are deliberately separated during school hours it is
because their school principal thinking if they study separated the students will concentration for studies.

Sendy    : “how if we sit down there??”while pointing empty sit near vending machine.
Ve        : “ok.. we are lucky still get empty seat.”
Sendy    : “you wanna get some drink?? Because I want to grab some in vending machine.”
Ve         : “it’s not a bad idea since they not come up, if you don’t mind I want coffee latte please.”
Sendy    :” hahaha.. don’t worry they will arrive soon, ok I will be back so wait for me ok.”
When sendy go to vending machine she look a round, when suddenly she stop from one direction.
 She observed someone sitting alone reading a book near the window, she look the perxon without blinking.

Mova      :“hum.. he is cute don’t you?? Ask some one from behind her. Ve just nodded her head without realizing it,
after a while she realized that there was someone next to her.
Ve        : “heh... what.. are ,, you talking about?? I am not looking to him I am.. just..”.
Sandy    : “ just what ve?? Am I miss something??here your coffee”
Mova       : “I caught her looking at marcel again.”whit teasing tone.
Sendy    : “ow.. really.. he is cute, smart and cool person. If you not hurry to move you will lost him.”start to teasing ve too.
Ve        : “hei.. hei.. what are you two talking about, I am just curious about him no more than that.” Her face suddenly flustered red.
Sendy and mova just giggling looking at ve face, she is innocent and shy girl. she is so easily to be teasing and not good to telling a lie.
Marcel is one of popular student in this school because he is handsome, smart and former school president.
He have a good impression because he look so cool and calm. Many student admiring him but no one are accepted.
The girls sit in their own seat properly.
Mova      : “uhm.. sendy can you help me return this book to the library after this lunch??”while handed a bunch of book.
Sandy    : “sure I will return your book.”
Mova     : “and one more, can you make a presentation of our history assignment. Because I have schedule this nite.”
Ve        : “ wait..it’s your duty to return the book and finish your home work mova, why you order sendy to do your job??”
with a bit upset to mova behavior.
Mova    : “hey why you so up set, I order sendy not you.”
Ve         : “ but sendy is our friend not your servant.”
Mova     : “ so what do you want fairy godmother??”move start to get mad to.
Sendy   : “ it’s ok ve.. I am fine with this, I was planning to go to the library this afternoon.
And for the home work that is our task so I will do it.”
sandy father work at mova father company and because of that mova always order sendy to do what ever she want. T
he situation still tense, no one dare to speak but luckily some one break the wall.
Stella    : “hey…girls.. sorry we late~~”
Two ladies join and sit an empty seat
Cleo      : “sorry we late, it’s because of her” while pointing her finger at stella nose.
Mova       : “what happen again??”
Cleo     : “she accept random guy again, she easily accept that poor guy confession” with face palmed her self.
“AGAIN!!!!” shouted the three of them.
Stella    : “hey slowdown girls, I am just be kind to them ok, I do not want to disappoint him.”
Mova       : “ if you don’t like him so just reject him, or you will get karma.”
Ve              : “ mova right, how many boyfriends do you have now??”
Stella   : “um.. I am forget it”.she just grinning to them
Cleo      : “ gaze.. you even forget how much your boyfriend “(-.-)”
Stella   : “ that not my false if they love me that much”
Yeah it’s not pure stella fault, because stella is pretty, cheerful girl, and many boy said that stella is damn HOT.
She is in second grade while four of them in third grade, because of her exotic charm she be a model of her father fashion magazine
and many boys admirer her but they are no one will everlasting.
Cleo father was a dreaded and rich mafia, so,,, many student in this school afraid with her and became her servant,
despite that Cleo is very caring with her friend especially if some one try hurt them.
Sendy   : “so ve what happen to you this morning” sendy try to change the topic.
Cleo      : “eh.. what happen ve??”
Ve              : “actually .., I have accident this morning”
“no way…!!!!” they replied in unison.
Stella        : “how come??” ask stella impatiently.
Ve start telling the story a bout what happen this morning, they listen it carefully and wait until the story complete.
Cleo     : “so that girl push you and made you fall, that so rough I can’t accept that.”
Mova    : “beside that she was ungrateful with your kindness.”
Sendy   : “hey but I think she is inadvertent with that, ve car hit her first anyway.”
Stella    : “no comment…”
Ve      : “ok it’s better if we forget it.” But deep down in ve heart she want to saw her again.
Cleo      : “ah.. bay the way I am forget something, yesterday my friend offered me VIP cards from night club,
she said that tomorrow they have ladies party, are you guys wanna join??.”
Mova      : “I will go…”
Sendy: “sorry I can’t go, I must keep my sister because my parent go to my grandma house tomorrow.”
Stella      : “can I join??”
Ve      : “you can’t you still under age and don’t have ID card yet.”
Hear it, stella pouting like a kid
Cleo      : “so how about you ve??”
Ve      : “all of you know the answer, that is NO!!”
Mova      : “ya..ya.. ya.. the child's father, come on ve your parents is not at home right, so why not you have some fun with us.”
Cleo      : “don’t worry it’s girls night, so the customer is totally all girls.”
Ve              : “but.. I don’t know I can go or not”
Mova      : “cih.. spoiled child, when are you going to get this fun again ve??”
Cleo      : “mova right.. sometimes you must enjoying life and having fun”
Ve        : “i… will thinking about this”
Cleo      : “here take one card for you, if you change your mind call me ok.”

“yo.. girls.. what make all of you so serious.”said a guy from mova back
Stella        : “hello Radit.. miss someone huh..” (^.~)
Raditya     : “you right.. I miss her..”he kiss mova cheek
Mova        : “hey stop it, we are in school” while gigiling
Raditya     : “but I miss you honey, should we go to another place”
He start circled his arm to mova neck
Mova     : “aw.. radit we are in school, latter when the school is offer.”
Sandy   : “um guys.. I think i should go to library because I must return this book bye..”
See the scene in front of her make sendy uncomfortable, so she decide to excuse and go away
Ve              : “I will accompany her, so bye too..”
When ve turn around sendy walk away so fast it make ve little bit running to cacth her
Ve        : “sandy.. wait….. “
But she ignore her
Ve        : ‘I said wait.” Finally ve can reach her.
Sendy   : “why are you follow me?? You should around them.”
Ve        : “because you are my best friends, so what happen to you?? Why you always avoiding Raditya? You like him too?”
Hear the last sentence make sendy stop her walk.
Sendy   : “what make you think that I like him, honestly a hate him.. because of him mova change, she is not like her anymore.”
Ve         : “sorry.. I think you like him because you look so intense to him, I feel it to since her mother died and start have relationship with Radit she change a lot.”
Sendy       : “she is not cheerfull like before, and now she like party, drinking and come home late. I miss old mova.”
Ve        : “ I hope she understand us and back as her again.”
Sendy       : “ how about their invitation?? Are you will join them?”
Ve        : “ I don’t know sen.. I can join or not”
Sendy   : “ ve.. you are my best friend too, but I hope you not join with them because that’s not your behavior.”
Ve         : “yeah I know it, thank you for be my friend for along time.” They holding hands and go to library. But deep down in ve heart she want fell free and have some fun like the other. But sandy advice is right too..

#at Diasta Club#
Diasta sit in front of bar while Kinal busy clean the table with wiper, Diasta have a night club and hiring Kinal to help her but just before the club open because she still under age, Diasta first time meet Kinal near her club, in that time she found Kinal with pathetic condition, body full with wound and freezing because the cold night air. feel sorry for her condition she bring Kinal to her club and treat her as her sister. because of that Kinal be indebted to Diasta because she safe her life.

Diasta    : “Kinal.. are you finish yet??”
Kinal      : “just little more”
Diasta   : “Ok.. don’t forget we must buy your supplies.”
Not for so long a person entered the club and give a greeting for them, that person made Diasta surprised.
Rica      : “Hi.. girls.. I am home..”
Diasta   : “Riyo~ it’s long not to see you, come here and sit beside me” while pat a chair beside her.
Rica      : “I have completed my business in Italy so I decide to meet you this day” she look at Diasta deeply and sit beside her.
Kinal      : “you look more prettier Rica-san..”
Rica      : “Thank you.. and you look more taller than before” with smile plestered in her lip.
Diasta   : “are you done with your duty?” Kinal nodded her head “so change your cloth because we get free ride, you don’t mind to give us a ride.. Riyo~!”
Rica      : “of course.. it will be nice to go out with you two, I will treat the lunch for my come back”
“Yey…” said Kinal and Diasta occasionally, Kinal dashing to her room and start to change her cloth, while Diasta and Rica sit together in front of bar. Diasta is Rica girlfriends but they conceal their relationship from Kinal because they won’t make her confuse.
Rica      : “Hei.. Nyas.. did you miss me??” suddenly Rica got up from her seat and step closer to Diasta, she grab her waist and lean closer.
Diasta   : “Ri.. Riyo.. what are you doing?? It’s not the right place”
Rica rise her eye brow, surprised with Diasta statement.
Riyo      : “I am not do something naughty.. so why you take it so serious.” She smirking and kiss Diasta cheek, Diasta close her eyes because the sudden touch, her cheek get reder.
Diasta   : “umh… ri..riyo..please stop it..”
Rica      : “no… I don’t!” her smile grew wider, she cup Diasta cheek and start to kiss her.”
Diasta   : “Ri.. Ump…” before Diasta can protest Rica already kissed her, but lately Diasta not refuse it and start to enjoy the sensation.
Lulled with the situation they forget that Kinal has already change her cloth and go to approach them.
Kinal       ; “Ricasan… Nyas~  let’s go!!”.
Diasta push Rica until she back to her seat while she got up and set her face that there is nothing happen. When Kinal come the situation little bit awkward.
Kinal      : “um.. did I miss something??”
Diasta   : “No!!! I mean.. um.. just forget it.. come on lets go Kinal….” She grab Kinal hand and drag her out, Rica just follow them with smile she look so happy can teasing Diasta

#Back to School#
When school is over as always Sendy accompany Ve until her driver pick up her, sometime Ve give Sendy ride too. But this time Sendy can’t accompany her because some problem.
 “Ve sorry I can’t accompany you, I get phone call from my sister home room teacher, and I must meet her.”
 “it’s not like usual, is something happen??”
 “I don’t know what exactly.. so I will find out”
 “just tell me if something getting wrong, your sister is my sister too” while hug Sendy.
 “you always be the right person at the right time Ve, Thanks…”
she release from her and wave for Ve to say good bay. Sendy School and her sister is near just 15 minute by on foot but she speeding her step because she won’t came late. Not for so long she enter the gate, the most prestigious junior high school in Jakarta. She pass the corridor and go to teacher room, she knock the door and give a greeting politely.
 “excuse me..”
“come in” shout a women inside the room  and then Sendy enter the room.
 “ miss Sendy??”
“yes, I am”
“please sit down”
She sit beside her sister, her sister just look at her for a while and hide her face not dare to look at Sendy gaze.
“um.. mam what wrong with my sister??”
“She get a fight with her class mate”
“she get a fight??.. how come?? I am sorry mam, but I think it’s any mistake”
“at first I think the same but all her classmate tell me she beat him so hard.”
“You said him mam… She beat a boy!?”, Sendy face palmed her face, “I am so sorry about my sister behave, how is his condition now?”
“the nurse take care of him and fortunately his injury is not to serious.”
“me and my sister ask for pardon, she wouldn’t do this anymore, right Shania?!” with a firm tone of voice, because of that Shania give her voice after long time just keep silent.
“I am sorry mam.. I wouldn’t do this anymore”
”hemh… you are the smartest and excellent student in this school so I will release you but next time if you get a fight again I can’t help you again”
“Ah.. thank you very much mam” said both of them.
“um.. actually Shania still have another problem, she owe tuition fees for three months and I hope you confirm it to your parents.”
“for  tuition fees we will repay it as soon as possible, we just need more time and understanding because my mother still need medical treatment, I am promise I will pay off”
“I am sorry can’t help much, I hope all can be resolved an you two can go home now.”
They excuse their self and go home together. On the way home they keep silent no one dare to start a conversation. Shania still afraid if her sister mad at her, five minute get passed and still silent. The youngest finally brave herself to start a conversation.
“Kak Sendy I am so sorry”, she stop her step and pull Sendy hand, because of that Sendy stop her walk.
Nb: “Kak” or “kakak” is siiliar with oneechan
“for what Shanju?!” with no emotion in her face.
“I am sorry, I.. I don’t mind to do that..I.. am.. sorry to make you worry and disappointed you.”her tear start rolling down, Sendy not bear to see her little sister cry so she pull her sister and sit in the bench near the park.
“why you do that Nju..?”
“they would throw my bag from 3’rd floor!!” Shanju silent for a moment and Sendy shocked with her bold statement.. “ I can accept all their mocking and whispering but not for this time, because I know how hard you make efforts to buy me the bag for my birthday present, I know you collect the money for your own money until you don’t have lunch in school, how I can bear it…. How…” with her last statement she is crying hard. Deep in Sendy heart she really sad with her sister condition, she feel failed to become a good sister because she don’t realize how Shanju feeling all this time to hide this pain alone.
“Sorry.. sorry… I still can’t be a good sister for you.” She hug Shania so tight, they cry together to release their true feeling and their sorrow.
“no.. I am the only one who must be blamed .You are the best sister I have in this world, I must be grateful to have some one like you.”
“shhh.. don’t say like that, if you promise to not do that again I will forgive you.”while release from their warm hug.
“um…I wouldn’t do that again Kak Sendy..” she shook her head with her childish way. Sendy smile looking for her.
“good girl” she pat Shanju head and Shanju enjoy her sister treat.
“Kak Sendy.. how about my school tuition fees, should we tell mom and dad??”
Hear it make Sendy silent  for a moment, in fact if she told this problem to her parent it just make condition getting worse but if not she don’t know how to collect that money because the nominal is to much. “Kak Sendy…..??” Shanju voice wake Sendy from her thought.
“don’t say anything to mom and dad”
Shanju still confuse with Sendy sudden decision.
“But Kak Sendy it to much for you to handle, I am alright if I must quit from school”
“No… don’t ever think to quit or give up, that school is one of prestigious school in this town, and just only the chosen could enter. Please don’t do that, trust me I will get that money.” While cup Shania cheek and give her deep gaze. Shania hold Sendy warn palm and node for agreement. “I think we agreed about this.. so come on let go home together.” She drag Shania hand and walking to their house together.


#no one pov#
In other place Rica, Diasta and Kinal are enjoy their moment, they have lunch together and accompany Kinal to buy her supplies, it’s look like Dista and Rica are Kinal own parent  XD. Looking Kinal choose and buy her own supplies made both if them laugh because Kinal is too cute and innocent, she look like a kid when she think so hard and mumbling sometimes for  just  to pick a goods she like. After collect all she need Rica initiate to bought ice cream for all of them. She handed the ice cream for Diasta and Kinal.
 
Kinal      : “Hum… this ice cream is delicious, thank you Rica-san”.
Rica      : “you are welcome, so how about your feeling to enter new school.”
Kinal      : “I am so happy because finally I can school again, but I still nervous  about my new friend soon.”
Diasta      : “Don’t worry… you are a good and funny girl, I think you will easily get a good friend too”
Kinal      : “Really?? Ah… I am so glad to hear that. Eh Rica-san what are you doing in italy??”
Rica      : “I learn many think especially to mix drinks and learn how to be barista too.”
Kinal      : “woah.. that’s sound great, how about living around there??
Rica      : “I leave in lecce town, there are one of romantic place in italy, The streets are quiet small, have old baroque-style buildings and friendly locals make this city feels very romantic. I stay in small flat near my workplace, in night walking around the city could be one way of maximizing romanticism in this city moreover with drink a hot chocolate.” Kinal just dazed hear Rica story.
Diasta   : “it’s look like a good place to take honeymoon or vacation with our beloved person.” While she look at Rica
Rica      : “Absolutely.. Yes!!” she reply with meaning smile. for the nth time Diasta blushing with her behave. But in other side Kinal think something about it.
Kinal      : “some day I will go to that place too!”
Diasta   : “ah with who you will be go? You should invite me”
Kinal      : “no.. I would not” with playful tone.
Diasta   : “eh… why not…??” she start to pouting.
Kinal      : “because Rica-san the only one who invite and accompany Nyas-san ”
Both Rica and Diasta shocked with Kinal statement, they afraid if Kinal realize their relation ship. They looking for each other.
Kinal      : “hehe.. I just kidding, of course I will go with a person I love, some one who stole my heart.” When Kinal ended her statement, the vision of the girl that hit her this morning rise in her mind “an angel” but hastily she shock her head to remove that thought.
Rica      : “I see.. Kinal already grown up now.”
Diasta   : “ah… I won’t to join too, but if Kinal think about that we are also happy too, someone you love!! Ah.. Kinal you grown up so much.” She hug kinal like a cat..
Kinal      : “Nyah-san.. please stop it, we are in publik now.”
Diasta   : “no way, bwe….” She ticking her tounge..
They laugh together, for them a momentlike this it’s a precious time in their life.
Rica      : “But you must study hard first, Ok!!”
Kinal      : “of course… SEMANGAT!!! Hehe..” 



 


Offline IntanLakz

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Re: [jkt48]the beginning Chap 2 full version
« Reply #57 on: May 09, 2013, 08:57:54 AM »
Finally i found venal fanfic  :twothumbs



wait for update  :pimp:

Offline veforveranda

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Re: [jkt48]the beginning Chap 2 full version
« Reply #58 on: September 29, 2013, 05:00:57 PM »
how I will start this..

in the first time I make this FF is only to introduce JKT48 member to 48famely fans..
but time by time I get difficulties to write the story first because the language barrier, second is my TA (final project), and I lost the data ( it make me ruin my mood)  :banghead:
so for my friends, fiewer and 48fans who has read my fanfic I say "THANK YOU" but I really sorry can't continue this story again..

but I will make sort fanfic or one shot collection..
and I accept opinion and request which member/pairing will get the short story

and in the end I apologize for everything..  :bow: :bow: :bow:

but I hope all of you still watch them [JKT48 member]  :heart:

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Re: [jkt48]the beginning -end season-
« Reply #59 on: October 01, 2013, 04:31:48 PM »
too bad you wont continue this ff.. i'll wait for your shortfic then.. i want venal pairing of course  :lol:
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