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Title: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 30 (4/11/2014)
Post by: chiqinna on January 20, 2013, 01:36:51 PM: [prologue]

As I was walking through the park...
Enjoying the peace feelings...
Something caught my attention..
There, a girl playing at the playground happily...
Like a kid who never played..or even saw a playground..
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'Takamina!'
A voice was heard, calling someone's name.
The girl earlier who currently playing at a swing stop playing as the other girl who called her coming to her.
Maybe her sister..or friend..I thought.
'There you are,come on takamina, lets go home its late already..'
'But...I still want to play, Miichan~' takamina frowned adding a sad expression to her face.
'Aw~ Don't be sad..tomorrow you can come here again to play okay?'Said the girl named Miichan.
'Yay!!' takamina cheered happily like a kid...
'Let's go!!'Miichan took Takamina's hand and they walk away from the playground.
As I watched them walked away.. My mouth unconcsiously muttered the name...

'Takamina...'
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Hey everyone!! Anyone?? O.o huhu.. Well, this is my first time writing a fanfic so...I dont know why I want to make one..if there is anything wrong with my writing/fanfic please tell me.. I will stop doing this if u want to.. Hehe.. Please be good to me!! n_n
Title: Re: new fanfic [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: arrow27 on January 20, 2013, 02:37:42 PM: nice intro, I'm curious to see where its headed :) Good luck with the fic, and looking forward to the next chapter :)
Title: Re: new fanfic [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: Ricchan_Sawa on January 20, 2013, 02:40:00 PM: hohohoho LOLOLOL so many posts out there XDDD

umm... an Atsumina huh-----
I think I still have to see the next story :)
頑張って！ ojii-chan will read it~ LOL
Title: Re: new fanfic [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: FNK23 on January 20, 2013, 03:55:04 PM: nee, it's good intro, you should continue it. I wonder that it will be atsumina or other pairing.
Title: new fanfic [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: chiqinna on January 21, 2013, 10:40:21 AM: List Of character:

Takahashi Minami
21 years old, but currently due to some accident happen to her in the past, she acts like a kid,innocent ..like she’s back to her childhood times..

Minegishi Minami
Known as Miichan,Takamina’s best friend. She owns a bakery. She have to take care of Takamina and they lives in one house together with the Mayuyu,Jurina,kanon,and lovetan.

Maeda Atsuko
A member of a powerful mafia in Japan. Even though she is involved in mafia, but she is kind...only to people who being kind to her. She like doing things on her own. She joins mafia because of some reason that will be reveal soon..

more character will be revealed soon~

actually I still have no idea about the title for this fic~~ huhuhu :P
wahhh.. everyone!! thank for the support! :w00t:
I think my English is getting worst~ -.- :sweatdrop:
please continue support me! :nervous
Title: new fanfic: Chapter 1 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: chiqinna on January 21, 2013, 02:03:34 PM: Chapter 1

Atsuko’s POV

After having a small walk at the playground, I went back to the mansion where I lived.
My mind was still thinking about the girl at the playground earlier. She looked familiar.
But why did she acted like a kid?
Despite her small figure, I’m pretty sure that she is not a kid.
I think I have met her somewhere before though.

but where???

Hmmm..

Whatever..

As soon I entered the mansion, my mind doesn't think about the girl anymore as something else happened.
“What happened?” I asked to one of my underling as I looked around at the mess in the living room.
“W-well... Rena-sama,..err...Gekikara,..melon pan... ehh...etou...”*sighed* I let out a sighed knowing what was probably happened earlier.
“Nevermind, just clean the mess.. and...where is she?” I asked.
“She’s in Mariko-sama’s bedroom right now..with Mariko-sama..eating melon pan” answered her while cleaning the living room.

Feeling a bit tired, I walked straight to my room.
As I was about to enter my room, the door across my room opened revealing a girl with a black jacket..
Across my room is Yuki’s room. Yes... its her..also known as Black.
Even her past was also black, as I can’t see anything from it..
Walking passed me, Yuki glared at me like usual..and then she disappeared just like that..
Like a wind passing by me..
This girl is really something... well, everyone in this big house is really something.. they have their own stories...I hope the author will revealed them one by one soon...

My thought was disturbed by the ringtone of my phone..
I pressed the green button on my phone..
“Maeda-sama, we have a problem, looks like there is other gang of mafia disturbing our places.” Said the person on the phone.
“Just let them be.. “ I told her.
“but...Maeda-sama... they-“
“I said just let them.. I will take care of this myself. And don’t you ever dare tell Mariko about this. “
“O-okay..then..” said the person on the other side.
“ Wait, *smirked* why don’t you buy some melon pan for Rena before you going back home..I don’t want her to cause another chaos in the living room.” Well, I hate hearing her laughs when she turned into Gekikara actually.
“*sighed*.. fine...I will buy it, but i’m not going to give it to her m-myself!..”

Knowing that this person is scared to death of Rena...well not Rena to be exact.. she is scared of Gekikara..even though they are the same person..but the personality is totally different..

“Hmmm..its time to have fun I guess.. “ I mumbled

*meanwhile*

Miichan and Takamina just arrived at home. Suddenly they heard some people arguing in the house so they quickly open the front door.
Looks like there were three people arguing about something and one just stand there watching them.
Acting as the she is the most matured one in the house, Miichan is trying to butt in their argument .
“what happened?” asked Miichan.
Takamina just standing there beside Miichan looking confused, doesn’t really get what is really happening.
All four of them suddenly keep quiet and staring at Miichan....

But then..

Not long after that..

They started again their argument..

“YOU ARE THE ONE WHO FINISHED IT SO YOU WILL BUY! Said the other to another person.
“NO! IT WAS YOUR FAULT! YOU ARE THE ONE WHO EAT IT FIRST! SO YOU ARE GOING TO BUY IT!”
“HEY! THATS NOT FAIR! ITS NOT ONLY ME WHO EAT IT! YOU ALSO EAT IT AFTER THAT AND GUESS WHAT? YOU EAT MOST OF IT! I just eat a little~ SO YOU ARE GOING TO BUY!” said the other one.
“CHOTTO!!!! I AM THE ONE WHO BUY IT SO I’M GOING TO DECIDE WHO WILL BUY!” shouted the third girl.

Realizing that there's only one person who did not include in the argument ,Miichan decided to ask her.
“Kanon, what happen actually? Why are they arguing? What are they talking about?” asked Miichan.
“Well, from what I see...they were arguing about food.” Tell kanon.
Still doesn’t get the real situation, Miichan asking her again.
“food? What food??” asked Miichan again.
“hmm..Lovetan was asking those two about the food that she buy for Onee-chan that she put in the fridge because when she searched for the food, it was gone.. “ explained Kanon.
“*sighed* Kanon, bring you sister to the room.. I will take care of this.” Tell Miichan to Kanon.
“Okay, Onee-chan, lets go take a bath!” said Kanon to Takamina.
“Un! But after that i want to eat katsudon!! “ said Takamina happily.
With that, Kanon dragged Takamina to the room..
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Miichan’s POV

Takamina should not know about this, If she knows that her favorite food was eaten by them, it takes us a looooooooong time to calm her down unless there is someone who will buy it so that she will stop crying .
Hmmm.. looks like I should use this method to shut them up..

Taking a deep breath.....Miichan start shouting,

“LISTEN!!!”

“LISTEN!!!”

*still arguing*

" LISTEN!!! "

*Sounds familiar to some people isn’t?* ;p

“LISTEN!!!”

“LISTEN!!!”

“LISTEN!!!”

After that the three of them stopped arguing and looked at Miichan.

“Finally....” Miichan sighed in relief that her method worked..

“Let me speak.. *but* LET ME SPEAK!..
Now Lovetan , I want to know what is really happening .. care to explain?” I asked to Lovetan.

“The thing is, I bought Katsudon for Takamina that I promised her earlier but when I checked in the fridge, the katsudon was gone and I bet these two people are the one who ate it because I know they always did that!” Explained Lovetan.
“Now, Mayuyu, Jurina, why did you two eat it?” asked me to them.
“Obviously because we are hungry! That’s why we eat it..” answered Mayuyu with her cyborg face.

Taking a deep breath again..
Let me facepalmed myself first..for asking a stupid question just now.. =.=

“ I know, but you knew that was for Takamina right?”
“yeah, we know that was for Takamina but you know when people are hungry they just eat what they see without thinking you know… “ said Jurina still trying to find excuses.

Without wasting any time, I made a decision.

“how about you two go and buy it now since both of you are the one who ate it.” I told them.
“but, Jurina was the one who eat most of it!” protested Mayuyu.
“I said YOU TWO! So go now and buy it before Takamina searching for her Katsudon!” I yelled at them.
“Ughhh..Okay~~~ “ groaned Mayuyu while walking to the front door following by Jurina..

I’m glad that those two listened to me. Well, they have to listen to the older right..
Hmm.. I think Mayuyu is going to spend her time here again knowing that she always have a problem with her family..we doesn’t have any problem for her to stay in this house since she is our friend..
For Jurina.. still unknown… the author didn't tell me about her family.. :\
Suddenly , the front door opened again. Mayuyu walked inside and coming toward me. She hold out her hand like she's wanting something from me.

“What?” asked me confused.
“Money..I didn’t bring money with me..Jurina also doesn’t have money right now” said Mayuyu with a cyborg face.
“*sighed* here…” I gave some amount of money to her. Then, Mayuyu walked out of the house.

Even though we were always like this, arguing over something, but actually we are happy to live together.. despite Takamina’s condition..we are taking care of her together.
I know… deep inside her heart, Takamina is really missing someone,

someone that she really loves,

Someone who treat her like her sister,

someone that all of us in the house know..

Someone that leaving the house ..

leaving Takamina, us , to take care of something at somewhere we don’t even know her whereabout.

I hope one day she will be back.. :)

T.B.C

ne...how about that?? good?? bad??
I don't know~~ :dunno:
teehee~~

I hope to get a good response from you guys~ :kneelbow:

*still thinking bout the title lol~* :hee:
any suggestion?? just tell me!!

:mon bye:
Title: Re: new fanfic: Chapter 1 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: hazwani on January 21, 2013, 04:49:21 PM: yeah. :twothumbs
nice story :thumbup
i really love story plot especially takamina character :P
haha.. i can imagine how takamina act like a child.. :inlove: it be must so cute :drool:
please continue you story..
i will keep reading .. :P
Title: Re: new fanfic: Chapter 1 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: Sydney W on January 21, 2013, 05:29:31 PM: It sounds familiar ''listen listen listen'' !!! Let me speak !! Hahaha. Author~san I know what u mean. *p
Title: Re: new fanfic: Chapter 1 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: matsuru on January 21, 2013, 06:15:49 PM: wow this story so interesting :fap

i liked when the characters mention the author in their thought XD

please continue :twothumbs
Title: Re: new fanfic: Chapter 1 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: arrow27 on January 21, 2013, 08:43:23 PM: thanks for the update :)Def seems interesting with the two groups. So Takamina's condition makes her act like a kid? Really curious about her now. Looking forward to the next chap :)
Title: Re: new fanfic: Chapter 1 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: miayaka on January 21, 2013, 08:45:43 PM: two words from me - SO GOOD! :nya:
Title: Re: new fanfic: Chapter 1 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: steven_0809 on January 21, 2013, 11:38:39 PM: mmmm let me guess that person is M.A right
Title: Re: new fanfic: Chapter 1 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: Haruko on January 22, 2013, 12:34:52 AM: sounds interesting..
Title: Re: new fanfic: Chapter 1 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: chiqinna on January 22, 2013, 06:51:35 AM: Hai!!!!!!!!!! :wave:
well, I'm so glad that its good.. hehe
before I reply all of your comments,
here~

list of characters:

Kimoto Kanon
Takamina's younger sister.After their parent's both leaving them, Takamina is the one who was taking care of her but after the incident happen to Takamina, Kanon have to take care of her sister instead.

Watanabe Mayu
a smart girl, too smart that she sometimes skip school xD. About her parent, I don't want to tell you yet~ :P

Matsui Jurina
A girl that lives with them. Miichan have to take care of her too since she is still young. her family? I don't know either :dunno:

Oota Aika
A friend of Mayu. She is the one who brings Mayu to the house that she lives in currently.

thats all I can tell for now~ :D

reply:

hazwani: thanks for the support! ^^ Takamina act like a cute kid.. imagine that! haha
Sydney W: hahaha :lol: u know what I mean~ :kekeke:
matsuru: thanks! I might continue it! XD
arrow27: i'm curious about her too.. hehe~ :)
miayaka: thank you so much for the comment!! :shy2:
steven_0809: hehe...steven.. WRONG!!! :hehehe: its not M.A ~ guess again!
haruko: I don't know if it interesting for the next chapter..hee.. please keep supporting! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: new fanfic: Chapter 1+new characters [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: cisda83 on January 22, 2013, 11:13:13 PM: Takamina acting as a cute kid... well that's interesting...

The someone that Takamina loves is probably Atsuko I guess...

Yeah... great beginning there... Thank you for the Atsumina fic.

Can't wait to see the next chapter

:wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:
Title: Re: new fanfic: Chapter 1+new characters [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: FlameHazeKatsu on January 23, 2013, 12:46:15 AM: this ish interesting~ :mon inluv: can't wait for update :mon thumb:
Title: Re: new fanfic: Chapter 1+new characters [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: kahem on January 23, 2013, 01:06:47 AM: I wanna read more about this fic ^^
Title: Re: new fanfic: Chapter 1+new characters [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: chiqinna on January 23, 2013, 05:23:47 AM: cisda83 - that someone is not Atsuko.. hehehe guess again! ^o^
FlameHazeKatsu - u think? hehe thanks for reading! :D
kahem - thanks for reading! hehe~ :)

I will update chapter 2 after I got a suitable title for this fic~ haha xD
Title: Re: new fanfic: Chapter 2 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: chiqinna on January 26, 2013, 04:29:34 AM: The title for the fic is 'You are my sunshine'!!!! :pepper: (don't ask me why I don't even know why LOLOLOL)

Chapter 2

*Conversation on the phone

“What do you want?” asked the person.

“I have a job for you” said the other person.

“Why me?” asked the person again.

“Because I want to... since you are fast, and plus you are a girl.” Explained the other person.

“What do I have to do?” asked her again.

“I just want you to find this one young girl...”said the other person.

“Who?” asked her again.

“I will send you the details later.” Replies the other person.

“Do you want me to kill her?”

“No, of course not. I know you are not that cruel to kill a girl, Black. I just want you to make sure that she is okay and safe. I have to go now. I will send you her picture and details so that you can find her.”

Conversation ended

*somewhere in the night

Maeda walked to the place where the gangsters have disturbed their territory.
Looks like they did not realized Maeda’s existence near them yet. They were busy playing cards.

Until...

“Can I join you guys?” Maeda finally came out of her hiding spot.
One of the guys stood up and walked towards Maeda.
“*smirk* you want to join us? Why don’t you entertain us here?” He said then winked at her.
“I have no problem with that.” Said Maeda while grinning.
“Hoho... guys! Looks like this girl want to entertain us here~” said the guy to his gang.
“Then show us what you got there...cute girl~~”said the guy while trying to put his arm around Maeda’s shoulder.

“I got... THIS!”Maeda said while kicking the guy on the stomach who was trying to touch her just now.
“Arrghhhh!!!” screamed the guy in pain.
The other member stops playing then all of them stood up.
“Oi! What are you doing? Do you know who we are?”Asked the other guy getting mad at Maeda’s action.
“Yeah I know what I am doing and I know who you are!”Said Maeda.
“Really? Then who send you here? Which group are you from?” asked the guy.
“No one send me here. I walked here by myself~ :P you don’t know me?”Asked Maeda rising one of her eyebrow still having her calm posture.
“Why would we know you? We were just asked by our Boss to take care of this place.”
“I see. And do you know this is my place and right now you are disturbing it!”Said Maeda.
“What? Aha~ so you are from top group huh...”
“I am. Now could you please get out of this place and don’t come again...or do you want me to send you out one by one?”
“This is our place now you see. You come here alone and we are many here. You can’t beat us that easily. “Smirked the guy.
“Now I’m mad. Don’t underestimate me you idiots!” said Maeda mad. Then she starts throwing a punch to the guy.

Then all of them start attacking Maeda. Easily Maeda dodge all the attacks.
“Is that all you got idiots!!” shout Maeda to them while giving a victory smile.
They were mad and start attacking Maeda again. Maeda also start punching and kicking them all at once.

All of them lay on the ground while holding their stomach and all because of the pain.
Then Maeda comes to one of the guy laying there and grab his hair.
“You are just underlings, you know, and you guys are no match with me. Send my regards to your Boss. Tell him don’t mess with Maeda Atsuko again. Understand?”
“M-Ma-Maeda! So you are-“
“Now you know who I am huh...too late.....

What are you waiting for? Want me to give more?” said Maeda.
All of them start running away ignoring the pain on their body.
“Its late already, I’m sleepy~” said Maeda yawning while putting her hands into her pockets and walks away.

After the bunch of gangster make sure they were already far from that place, they stopped running.
“*pant* that was crazy! If I knew that was her*pant* I would run already...” said one of them.
“You should be glad it was Maeda*pant*...if it was the other one...we are dead already!” said another one.
“You’re right...from what I heard, they are really strong even though they are girls...this is my first time facing her.”
“Yeah...but she’s hot.” Said one of the guys.
“Lets go, we should inform our Boss about this.”

*meanwhile

“We’re back!!!” shouted Jurina while walking inside the house followed by Mayuyu.
Miichan and Lovetan were watching some tv shows.
“Welcome back~” Greeted Lovetan.
“Where’s the Katsudon?” asked Miichan.
“Here~” Jurina give the food to Miichan.
Takamina just got out from the kitchen.
“I can’t find my katsudon~~” Said her while pout sadly.
“Takamina, come here...” Miichan gesture Takamina to come to her.
“Hai!” Takamina comes to Miichan and sit on her lap. Lap?
“I didn’t even ask you to sit on my lap...”Miichan said in her mind.
“Here... your katsudon!” Miichan said while giving the food to Takamina.

Seeing the food, Takamina’s eyes started sparkling and her smiles went wider.
“My katsudon!! I love Miichan!! Mmuaaahh~” said her while kiss Miichan on the cheek.
“Okayyyy~~ I know you love me~~ now kiss those two also...”Grinned Miichan pointing at Jurina and Mayuyu.
Takamina ran to Jurina and kissed her cheek.
Jurina just smile and kiss Takamina back on her right cheek.
“I love Juri-chan~~~” said Takamina happily.
“I love Takamina too~~~”repled Jurina smiling.

After that she went to Mayuyu to give a kiss.
“Yadaa~~” said Mayuyu try to avoid the kiss.
Takamina still want to kiss her. Mayuyu started running away from Takamina and they ran around in the house.
“Mayu-chan!!!!! Kiissuuu!!” Takamina ran to Mayuyu while pouted her lips to kiss Mayuyu.
The others just had fun laughing while watching the two.

After a while, Mayuyu give up due to tiredness, she finally got kissed by Takamina on the cheek. “I love Mayu-chan!!!”

“hahaha!!! Mayuyu~~ you know even though she is a midget, she have more stamina than you. You are smart...but sometimes you are dumb too...hahaha!” said Jurina laughing.
“Shut up Jurina!” Said Mayuyu breathless while glaring at the laughing girl.

They are getting ready to sleep because they have school except for Takamina and Miichan.

Takamina already sleep in her bedroom with Kanon.
Usually Mayuyu will sleep with Jurina while Lovetan with Miichan.
Lovetan comes into Mayuyu and Jurina’s room. Mayuyu and Jurina were lying on their bed already.

“Mayuyu, can I borrow your phone for a while? I need to text my mom about something. I forgot to charge my phone’s battery...” asked lovetan.
“No problem...here.” said Mayuyu handing her phone to Lovetan.
“Thank you~”Lovetan turning her back from them and smirked.

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“Done! Here~” said Lovetan after finish doing her ‘work’. She gives the phone back to the owner...

After Lovetan getting out from the room...

she stopped for a while...

and then gave an evil smile to the readers... (Imagine it yourself okay~)[/size]

[to be continued...]

~~I feel so lame right now~~~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 2 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: arrow27 on January 26, 2013, 04:59:20 AM: Thanks for the update, like how the story is progressing!
Atsuko sure kicked butt :D She's awesome :) & such a cute scene where Minami gave everyone a "thank you" kiss & their reactions lol.
Wonder what was up with Lovetan at the end.
Looking forward to the next chapter :D
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 2 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: cisda83 on January 26, 2013, 05:26:05 AM: Takamina is soo cute... the way she acts and the way she says her Thank you.... very very cute....

Who is the one asking Black to find out about a 'girl'... who is this 'girl' in question?

Why Lovetan gave evil grin towards the end... after borrowing Mayu's phone?

Getting more and more mysterious.... Can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the update...

:heart: :love: :inlove: :wub:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 2 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: chichay12 on January 26, 2013, 08:19:09 AM: I WANT MORE!! XD
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 2 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: FlameHazeKatsu on January 26, 2013, 11:07:00 PM: lol yesh I really think so! xD :mon innocent:
oh and when Kanon and Lovetan were mentioned I was like "dare?????" and had to look them up :mon wind: I saw them before but...wasn't really.... *looks away* :mon dunno:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 2 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: steven_0809 on January 27, 2013, 03:08:58 AM: some how the last part make me...... :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 2 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: FNK23 on January 27, 2013, 06:01:24 AM: ahhh, takamina really make me smile XD
i love when takamina and jurina kissing moment, it's really cutee. Thanks for update, need more takamina cuteness moment :3
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 2 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: Hii_chan on January 28, 2013, 10:11:08 AM: Wao.....Atsuko so strong so kakoii.. :ding: :ding:
Ah...Takamina is so cute ...I want to be kissed by her :bath: :bath:
Uhm..about the girl whom Black have to find...I gues she is Mayuyu right :dunno:
I'm so curious about the one who left Takamina :dunno: maybe it's Tomochin :nervous
please update soon :byebye: :byebye:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 2 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: Elo on January 28, 2013, 05:45:24 PM: Quote from: Chichay12 on January 26, 2013, 08:19:09 AM
I WANT MORE!! XD

I tooooooo
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 2 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: kahem on January 29, 2013, 01:53:55 AM: Hihihi I'm sure Love-tan did something funny ^^
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: chiqinna on January 30, 2013, 11:43:28 AM: arrow27 : haha :P she did kick butt~
cisda83 : here is the next chapter! ^^
chichay12 : here!!
FlameHazeKatsu : don't worry we are a beginner! hehe~
steven_0809 : don't worry Lovetan is not bad..xD
FNK23 : even me couldn't stand the cuteness by writing it LOL~
Hii_chan : you're right! its Mayuyu..and Tomochin..wrong! hehe~
Elo : Hello Elo!! ^^
kahem : she did~ xD

here is the next chapter!! :D

Chapter 3

The next morning...

Two girls who still having a nice dream were merely having a heart attack due to the alarm song of the phone.
They quickly woke up because of the alarm song.

Mayuyu quickly turn off the alarm phone.

[the alarm song is ‘Top That’ by U-kiss..I suggest you guys use this song as your morning alarm.. xD ]

“Arrgghhh!!! Mayu!! Why you use that song as an alarm! I was nearly having a heart attack just now...” said Jurina while rubbing her chest.
“I did not put this song as my alarm!” said mayuyu confuse but still with a sleepy face.
Suddenly, Mayuyu realise about something.

“wait...

last night...

Lovetan....”

Then she gasped when she realise about it..

“LOVETAAAAAANNNN!!!!!!!!” scream Mayuyu. Jurina beside her closing her ears with her hands.
Mayuyu quickly get up from the bed and storm out of the room and walk fastly to Lovetan and Miichan’s room.
When Mayuyu open the door,there was no one in there. Then she goes to the kitchen, there she saw Miichan
preparing breakfast while Takamina was sitting on the chair watching Miichan preparing breakfast.
“Miichan, where is Lovetan?” ask Mayuyu to Miichan.
“She already going to school with Kanon awhile ago...” answered Miichan.
“that girl...” said Mayuyu while gritting her teeth.
After that, Mayuyu and Jurina quickly taking a shower and then go to school.

*meanwhile

“That was punishment for you two for eating katsudon that I bought for Takamina..hehe..” said Lovetan with a victory smile on her face.
She and Kanon are on the way walking to school.

*At school

Lovetan and Kanon already on their own class. Mayuyu and Jurina just arrived.
Mayuyu was in the same class with Lovetan while Jurina with Kanon.
“Good Morning cyborg!” greeted Lovetan showing her smile to Mayuyu who enter the classroom with a cyborg face.
She went to her sit which is in front of Lovetan’s. Then Lovetan move her head forward and whisper to Mayuyu’s ear.
“Ne..how was the morning alarm song? Great right? Hihi~”
“Whatever~” mumbled Mayuyu while crossing her arms to her chest still looking at the front.
She can’t do anything since she know Lovetan doing that as their punishment for eating that food.

*
Black just got a details about a girl that she had to find.
(http://i646.photobucket.com/albums/uu188/rasiel_photos/nezumi_01.jpg)
Name: Watanabe Mayu
Age:17 years old.
Currently studying at Sakura High School.
p/s: I want you to find where she lives right now and with who. And make sure that she doesn’t know
that you are looking for her. She is a very smart girl, be careful.

“Watanabe Mayu..” mumbled Black while looking at Mayuyu’s picture that was being sent to her.

*After school..

Jurina and Kanon are still at school because they have some work to do.
“Mayuyu,aren’t you going back home?” asked Lovetan as their walking out of the school gate.
“No, I don’t want to go home yet..I think I’m going to Miichan’s bakery.” Answered Mayuyu without looking at her.
“okay then,I’m going home first. Bye~” said Lovetan.
“bye~” said Mayuyu.
Mayuyu then walking to Miichan’s bakery.

*At Miichan’s bakery.

Mayuyu enters the bakery..
“hey Miichan~” said Mayuyu to Miichan who was busy with her customers.
“oh hey Mayuyu~ Why are you here?” ask Miichan.
“don’t know either.. the author brings me here~” tell Mayuyu with a blank face.
Miichan was confuse at what Mayuyu’s talking about.
“Oh, since you are here, why don’t you bring Takamina to the playground. I think I will be busy this whole day.” Said Miichan.
“Hmmm...alright then.. where is she?”
“She’s at the back. And after that bring her home. I might be late today.” Tell Miichan.

That evening, Mayuyu brings Takamina to the playground.

“We are here!” said Mayuyu as they arrived.
Takamina smile happily then quickly let go of Mayuyu’s hand and running happily to the playground.
There are not many people at the playground.
Mayuyu sit on the bench there and take out her manga from her bed and read them.
Sometimes she looks at Takamina who was playing there afraid that she is gone.

After a while,

Mayuyu felt like someone was watching at their direction.
She looks everywhere.
She felt like someone was watching her as she looks from the corner of her eyes.

Sensing the danger, Mayuyu quickly call Takamina.
“Takamina!!! Come here~”
Takamina then come to Mayuyu. Then Mayuyu put her arm on Takamina’s shoulder
and bring her out of the playground.
“Lets go!” said Mayuyu. Mayuyu saw Takamina’s frown face.

“Lets go buy Ice cream!!” said Mayuyu after that.
Takamina’s expression change from sad to happy.
“yay!!! Ice cream!!” said Takamina looking at Mayuyu.
Mayuyu sighed.
Mayuyu end up buying ice cream for Takamina.

Suddenly, Takamina bump onto someone and her ice cream fall on the ground.
“my ice cream~~” said Takamina about to cry.
Mayuyu just looking at the ice cream on the ground.
“I-I’m sorry~ I did not meant to-“ said Acchan who was bumping onto Takamina just now.
“ice cream~~”said Takamina still looking at her ice cream on the ground.
“Ehh, how about i buy you new ice cream?” said Acchan looking at Takamina.
“Really?”ask Takamina suddenly looking at Acchan.
Acchan suddenly hipnotize by the sparkling eyes. “y-yes..”

“problem solved!!” said Mayuyu smirked suddenly making the two look at her.
After that, Acchan buying an ice cream for Takamina.
“here you go~” said Acchan smiling while giving the ice cream to Takamina.
Takamina happily taking the ice cream.
Then Mayuyu told Takamina to give her a thank you kiss~
Acchan was currently looking at somewhere else.

Then Takamina start moving her head forward to kiss Acchan’s cheek,

but at the same time, Acchan turn her head to the front...

and they lips touched...

T.B.C~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: FlameHazeKatsu on January 30, 2013, 12:29:25 PM: yay first to commentoo on this lol ;p :farofflook: (this is the first for me that's why...)

THE ENDING!!! KYAAA!!!!!! :on lol: :on lol: :on lol: lol that made me fall out of my sit... hahahaha wooooooooo~~~ looking forward to the next chapter... :on gay: :on gay: and *cough* *cough* my image on Takamina here is a kid? o.o" bahahaha....i'm imagining things 2 much? :err:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: chiqinna on January 30, 2013, 12:35:31 PM: CONGRATULATION!! :onioncheer: lol~ haha :lol:
I can imagine that.....you fall out of your sit :mon trudge: lol~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: FNK23 on January 30, 2013, 12:39:58 PM: aaahh, minami kissing acchann !!
Wonder what happen next, probably minami will act know nothing and innocent while acchann ?? Ahh you made me smile X))
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: chiqinna on January 30, 2013, 12:46:01 PM: hehe~ I don't know yet how to make the next part LOL~ :dunno:
just wait and see~~~~ :on gay:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: cisda83 on January 30, 2013, 01:27:05 PM: Wah.... Minami and Atsuko kissing each other....

What's Atsuko reaction after that kiss.... wondering?

Mayu can sense something off... is it Black who is giving the danger vibe that Mayu's sense?

Can't wait to see more... as usual Minami is so Cute.... Thank you for the udpate

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: chiqinna on January 30, 2013, 02:00:30 PM: Yes its Black cisda83.. hehe :)
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: mo-chan on January 30, 2013, 08:49:39 PM: it is just now that I found out your fic. It is really sad to see Takamina in that state she is like an 5 years old little girl I like it that she ended up kissing Acchan XD I wonder how is going to be the meeting between Yuki.and Mayu :3 I like it when you comment inside the it made the fic funny :D
I can't wait to know about everybody's past~
update soon your story is original ;)
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: arrow27 on January 30, 2013, 08:50:13 PM: thanks for the update! Mayu is sweet, and she has great senses to pick up that someone was watching her! As for the meeting b/w Minami and Atsuko, it was sooooo cute~ Wonder how Atsuko will react :)
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: stepk on January 31, 2013, 01:00:44 AM: cool
minami is really childish XD
great fanfic
thanks for update. :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: kahem on January 31, 2013, 01:39:01 AM: lol a heart attack alarm, not bad
kiss!!!!! yay!!!
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: Haruko on January 31, 2013, 05:41:29 AM: atsumina´s kiss awww..
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 4 [atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: chiqinna on January 31, 2013, 08:37:09 AM: :bored: i have nothing to do so...

Chapter 4

Acchan’s pov

That evening, I walk to the playground again to see whether that girl I saw yesterday was there playing.
As I arrived there, I can’t seem to see her anywhere at the playground. Maybe she did not come to play today.
I don’t know but I feel disappointed for not seeing her today.
So, I just walk around since I don’t have anything to do. Usually I do my ‘work’ at night.
Suddenly, I bump into someone in front of me. It was my fault actually because I was looking
at somewhere else at the time.
I apologized to the person that I was bumped into.

When I look at the person…. It was her. That playground girl.
She just looks at her ice cream that was on the ground.
She looks like she was about to cry.
So my mouth acts on its own...
“Ehh, how about i buy you new ice cream?”
I offer to buy her a new ice cream as a payback.
The moment she looks into my eyes asking if I really said that. “Really?”

That sparkling eyes…
“Y-yes…” I said still hypnotized by her eyes.
After I buy the ice cream, I gave it to her.
She take it happily, I unconsciously smile watching her like that.

But then I felt like someone was looking here.
I look to the direction.
I think I just saw… Black just now.
I turn my head to the front again

Suddenly I felt something soft on my lips.

She kissed me!

So many things appear on my head that time.

My first kiss!!

With a girl!

What to do?!!

After that she moved her lips away from mine.
I was just too stunned to say anything.
Her friend also shocked at what she just saw I guess.

“I was about to kiss your cheek…” said the girl innocently.
“Ah! Takamina, we have to go home now.” Said the girl’s friend grabbing her hand and walking away.
Then her friend looks at me and apologized.

I’m still shocked that I just walk away too…like a zombie.

*end of Acchan’s pov

After that day, they are having a normal life as usual.

After Black almost got caught by Acchan that day, She stop following Mayuyu for a while. She still doesn’t know where Mayuyu lives.
Looks like Acchan didn’t really care about it.

*weekend!!!

The six girls just stay in the house as they cleaning the house.
Sometimes they go out together and having fun.
After finished cleaning around the house, they gathered around in the living room.

“Mayuyu, aren’t you going home? Its weekend you know.” Ask Lovetan to Mayuyu who was sitting on a couch reading manga.
The rest are watching a variety show on TV.
“This is home Lovetan~~” answered Mayuyu.
“I mean your family’s home!!” said Lovetan.
“Why should I?”
“Well, they don’t know where you lived right now. They might be searching for you.” Explained Lovetan.

“*sighed* and how about you? Aren’t you going home?” ask Mayuyu to Lovetan.
“Mayuyu~~ my parents are at New York!!!” yelled Lovetan.
“I know~~ hehe~ “said Mayuyu smiling.
“Maybe you’re right, I should go home.” Said Mayuyu while wearing her hood on.
“I’m going!” tell mayuyu to them and going out of the house.

*Mayuyu’s house

Mayuyu just walking into the big house with her cyborg face.
Then her father saw her walking inside.
“Mayu, come here.” Said her father.
Lazily Mayuyu walk to his father who is sitting at the living room doing his work.
“Tell me, where you lived?” ask her father.
“That’s not of your business, father.”Answered Mayuyu.
“*sighed* I’m sorry for the last week okay-” tell her father.
“Easy for you to say sorry” said Mayuyu to her father flatly.

Then mayuyu walk straight to her room.
She just laid her body on her bed and looking at the blank ceiling.
Then she closed her eyes and fell asleep.

After her mother passed away, [in this story only okay!] Mayuyu start being different and so his father.
His father always busy with work and never spend time with Mayuyu.
This makes Mayuyu lonely… until she found her family, her best friends.
Lovetan start bringing Mayuyu to where they lived currently because she knows about Mayuyu’s family.
Then, Mayuyu lives with them whenever she had a problem with her father or whenever she wants.

Tomorrow is Monday;
Mayuyu is going back to her second home.

“Are you going away again? Be careful Mayu...its already dark out there.” tell her father while typing something on his laptop.
“Like you care…” mumbled Mayuyu without looking at her father and going out of the house.

“I do care… my daughter…” said her father softly after Mayuyu goes out of the house.

Then her father making a phone call.

“She is going to where she lived right now, go follow her.” Tell her father to the person on the phone.
“And if she found you, just tell her that it’s my order.” Tell him again.

*it was late night already

Mayuyu was walking alone to the house.
But sometimes she felt like someone was following her.

Without looking around, she stopped walking and just stands there
There are houses around her so she doesn’t really scare.
“Just revealed yourself already!!” said Mayuyu knowing that the person is still there watching her.
Then she felt a strong wind passed by her.
And a black haired girl wearing a black jacket stand in front of her.
Mayuyu stare at her for a while.

“Who are you?” ask Mayuyu looking at her.
“Your father orders me to look for you.” Said the girl calmly.
Mayuyu sighed.
“He will never stop doing this…” said Mayuyu with a low voice.
“Just go away… tell him don’t disturb my life like this.” Said Mayuyu to the girl while looking other way.
“No, this is his order so I have to do it.” Tell her.
Mayuyu glare at her.

But then she suddenly smiles like she has something on her mind.
“Well, how about we make a deal.” Said Mayuyu.
Black was confused.
“Let’s see who run faster then if you win I will show you where I lived.” Continue Mayuyu
Black looking at her curiously.
“*sighed* don’t underestimate my ability. I’m smaller than you doesn’t mean that you can run faster than me.” Smirked Mayuyu try to convince her.
Black knowing that she is faster than Mayuyu then accepts the deal.
“Okay then, let’s see who is faster.” Said Black ready to run.

“Our stop is at the playground which is not far from here.” Explained Mayuyu.

They both were in a position ready to run.

“1, 2, 3… go!!!” said Mayuyu.

Then Black disappeared like a wind.

[Hehe...Mayuyu didn’t run :lol:]

‘Wow~ she was fast…” said Mayuyu impressed.

“But she is a baka I guess…” added her.

Actually, Mayuyu already arrived home, the moment she stopped walking,
on her left is where the house that she lived located.

Mayuyu quickly enter the house before that girl comes back again.

Meanwhile,
Black stopped halfway [halfway means she already far from that place since she is fast]

She thinks for a while and then she realized that the girl is not behind her or in her front.

“That girl….” Mumbled Black. Well, feeling mad at herself because she was being fooled by a
young girl.
Black thinking again,

“The house she lived might be around that place.” Thought Black.
Then Black going back home since it already late.

T.B.C

Oh my imagination~~~~ :nya: :on gay: :whistle:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 4 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: Hii_chan on January 31, 2013, 09:09:41 AM: Acchan was kissed by Takamina and her expression so funny :hiakhiakhiak: :hiakhiakhiak:
Mayuyu so smart fool Black so easy :hehehe: :hehehe:
I want to read more so please coutinue this fic fast :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 4 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: mo-chan on January 31, 2013, 12:56:32 PM: hahaha Bakarin was fooled by Mayuyu XD
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 4 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: FNK23 on January 31, 2013, 02:47:31 PM: wow it's really fast updatee~
mayu such a smart girl, even black can be fooled by her XDD
soo acchan, tell me, do you like the kiss or not ? :3
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 4 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: stepk on January 31, 2013, 07:01:53 PM: You update
mayu is really intelligent
and black no so much :lol:
how do you fall in stuff like that. XD
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 4 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 31, 2013, 07:47:54 PM: lol mayu outsmarted yuki :lol:
thanx for the update :cow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 4 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: kahem on February 01, 2013, 01:54:48 AM: lol good job Mayuyu ^^
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 4 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: cisda83 on February 01, 2013, 04:59:10 AM: Eh... Atsuko is going to the park just to see Minami....

Interesting.... hahaha she got kissed accidentally....

Mayu is good to be able to trick Black....

So it was Mayu's father that asking Black to find out about Mayu's whereabouts...

but it's quite weird for Mayu's father to make a acquaintance with a yankee like Black....

How do they know each other?

More mysteries... can't wait to see more

Thank you for the update

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 4 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: chiqinna on February 01, 2013, 07:41:20 AM: yeah..so much mysteries lol~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 5 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: chiqinna on February 03, 2013, 07:55:12 AM: Chapter 5

Black have been stalking Mayuyu for a several days, she finally found out where Mayuyu lived.
Black went to Watanabe’s Villa to give the information.
“I have found where she lived.” Tell her to Mayuyu’s father.
“Where? With who?” asked him.
“She lived with her friends, the house is not far from her school. “Explained Black.
Mayuyu’s father, Watanabe Hiroshi, think for a while...

Then he looks at Black
“I want you to be her bodyguard.” Tell him.
Looks like Black doesn’t like at what had the man said.
“No.” said her shortly.
“It’s my order. You have to.”
“She will not agree.” Insist Black.
“She will. I need someone to take care of her. She is my only daughter. Besides, my rivals
already know about her and I’m afraid they will go after her.” Tell him.
“Why me? Why not the other bodyguard?” ask her.
“Look, I already did that long time ago. But she said she doesn’t like a man to guard her, so maybe
you as her bodyguard would work.” Explained him.
‘That girl have fooled me once. How can I be her bodyguard?!’ thought Black.
“Remember Black, you owe your life to me.” Said Watanabe to her.
Hearing that, she doesn’t have any choice than to be a bodyguard to Mayuyu.
“I will ask Mayu to come back home and tell her “said him.

Mayuyu currently playing video games with Takamina in the living room.
Only two of them in that house. Miichan is working while the rest are at school.

Looks like she skips school today.
‘How come this ‘kid’ is so good at this?’ thought Mayuyu impressed by how Takamina playing the video games.

The front door opened.
“We’re back!” shout Jurina while opening the door and enter the house followed by Kanon and Lovetan.
“Aahhhh~ school is sooo tiring~” said Jurina throwing herself to the soft couch.
“Yeah~ being a good student is tiring~~” mocked Mayuyu still playing.
Jurina just ignored her.

Suddenly Mayuyu’s phone rang.
Mayuyu stop playing and look at her phone.
‘Father? What did he want now?’ thought her.
She answered it. Her father is telling her to come home immediately because he has something to say.
“Jurina you play with Takamina, I have to go home now.” Said Mayuyu while giving the game controller to Jurina.
Even though Mayuyu is still mad at her father, but still he is her father after all.
After that Mayuyu goes to her house.

*Watanabe’s villa

Mayuyu enter to her father’s office room in the house.
She was a little shocked when she saw that girl that she had been fooled that night.
“Well, since you are here. Let me introduced to you, your new bodyguard, Black” tell her father.
“BODYGUARD??!! HER?!?!!” shout Mayuyu shocked by her father’s statement.
“Yes. She will be your bodyguard since you said you don’t like a man to be your bodyguard.” Explained him

Mayuyu is totally mad right now.

“I.don’t.need.any.bodyguard!”Said Mayuyu.
“Mayu, please this time listen to me. It’s dangerous for a young girl to roaming around the town by herself.” Her father tries to convince her.
Mayuyu keep quiet. She really doesn’t like the idea of having a bodyguard.
“I know you still mad at me but please, this is for your own sake.”
Then Mayuyu look at Black. Black just standing there looks other way.

“*Mayuyu sighed* Fine…” she accepted it but actually she smirked in her mind.
“Good, btw you can call her Black. She will start be your bodyguard tomorrow. You can go now.” Tell her father.
After that Mayuyu goes back to the house.

*that night

At Shinoda’s mansion

The members are gathering at the dining room.
Shinoda Mariko, Matsui Rena, Maeda Atsuko, Sashihara Rino,
including Black who just comes back from her business.
Everyone was looking at Acchan weirdly. Looks like she is in other world,
staring at the food, playing with the fork.

“Acchan” called Mariko.
Maybe Acchan did not hear Mariko that she still in her deep thought.
Then, Sasshi who sit beside her tap her shoulder.
Acchan finally back to the reality.
“So, Acchan how’s our business?”Asked Mariko.
“Don’t worry, our business is going fine. Besides, I have Sasshi to help me.” Explained her.
“Good. Don’t let the others disturb our business.”

“And Black, I just heard from Watanabe Hiroshi that he made you her daughter’s bodyguard isn’t?” asked Mariko to Black.
“Yes” answered Black shortly.
“Bodyguard?” said Rena smiling suddenly earning a glare from Black.
“If it’s like that then, you should stop doing our business and do your job as a bodyguard.” Tell Mariko.
“But-“before Black say anything mariko cut her.
“Its okay, Watanabe is also our client, don’t disappoint him.”
Black just nodded silently.

“I need to go to my room” said Acchan suddenly stand up from the chair and leaving them.
Looks like something has been bothering her lately. Or someone?
After that they all go back to their own room.

*Acchan is laying on her bed

Acchan’s pov

*sighed*
What is wrong with me…?

Why I keep thinking about her...

Why my heart beats fast when she kissed me…
on the lips...

*sighed*

What is wrong with me…?

Every time I think about the kiss,

My heart beats faster than usual…

Arrgghh!!!
Who is that girl!!
Why I feel like I have met her before…?
I need to find out about her…

*the next morning in Miichan’s house
[Let’s just call it Miichan’s house]

Mayuyu, Lovetan, Jurina and Kanon are getting ready to go to school.
Once they are out of the house, there was a girl with a black jacket
outside the house, looks like she is waiting for someone.

“Who is that?” asked Jurina.
Mayuyu who knows it answered calmly.
“My bodyguard.” She said blankly.
“Bodyguard?” said Lovetan.
“It must be your father’s order right?” asked Lovetan.
“*sighed* who else…” said Mayuyu while start walking.
Black just following them from behind.

When they enter the school, Mayuyu told Black to go since she already arrived.
Mayuyu hope that she will not waiting for her. Its annoying.
When they finish school, Black is there waiting for her.
“Seriously, Mayuyu your bodyguard doesn’t look friendly..” said Lovetan.
“I don’t know...let’s just wait and see~” said Mayuyu with her cyborg face.

T.B.C

sorry~ :kneelbow:
if this chapter is boring..
:fever:

btw.. :on cny1:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 5 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: chichay12 on February 03, 2013, 08:23:24 AM: Quote from: chiqinna on February 03, 2013, 07:55:12 AM
sorry~ :kneelbow:
if this chapter is boring..
:fever:

This.....boring??
NO!!! not at all :farofflook:
i want more!!!
:on gay: :on gay: :on gay:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 5 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: Hii_chan on February 03, 2013, 11:00:22 AM: how can it be boring when it do interesting :twothumbs
Black become Mayuyu's bodyguard?
I want to know more
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 5 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: cisda83 on February 03, 2013, 01:20:55 PM: Thank you for the nice update

Ah... so Black became Mayu's bodyguard... I think she will play trick on Black somehow in the future.

Black owned a life debt to Mayu's father, how? when? where?

Atsuko has love sickness... She has seen Takamina before now, how? when? where?

More mysteries....

Can't wait to see the next

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 5 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: Chanaline on February 03, 2013, 02:11:43 PM: Black and Mayu OhOOOOOhhh!!

Black as Mayu's bodyguard!! Black cold...

My comment became weird... I stop it now...
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 5 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: arrow27 on February 03, 2013, 02:13:17 PM: thanks for the update, great chap as always :D

Aw, Atsuko is thinking about Minami :) I'm curious as so why Minami is familiar to her.

& interesting development that Yuki became Mayu's bodyguard :P

Looking forward to the next :D
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 5 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: FNK23 on February 03, 2013, 02:41:54 PM: no kissu moment ?? I thought there will be another kiss from minami jajajaa
black become mayu bodyguard! Yeaahhh !! I wonder what'll happen between them
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 5 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: stepk on February 04, 2013, 02:43:44 AM: Acchan thought about the kiss :wub:
I'm waiting when black is so great and protector
with mayu, and then mayu fall in love. :inlove:
please continuous :panic:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 5 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: chiqinna on February 04, 2013, 04:54:59 AM: Chichay12: its not? hmm... maybe its just me who felt boring when i write it..hehe :lol:
Hii_chan: I'm glad you said it interesting~ hehe thank you~ :)
cisda83: well...lets see for the next update~ :)
Chanaline: don't stop! I love weird comments~ teehee~
arrow27: I'm curious too~ :? why is atsuko felt minami is familiar..
FNK23: I'm not good at this kiss kiss thing~ :D
stepk: lol your imagination~~~ :twothumbs

I don't know whether I will update this fic sooner or later... :err:
I just lose someone that I can called a good neighbour of mine.. :cry:
she just died this early in the morning.. it was so sudden that I didn't have a chance to talk to her..
the day before she is just as healthy as usual but that evening she suddenly lose conscious..
she always tease me~ I hate it but now i'm going to miss it... :(
a lot if things happen this past few days.. :fainted:
I can't sleep last night.. actually every night I have a hard time to sleep..
I think I need someone to lullaby me~ =.=

when I feel better I will update this fic as soon as possible okay! :)
thank you for reading... :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 5 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: Haruko on February 04, 2013, 05:49:40 AM: i want more atsumina moments :B
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: chiqinna on February 08, 2013, 08:48:54 AM: The life must go on~ :cool1:

Chapter 6

“ne...what should we name our baby girl, honey?”
“ermm..how about Jurina?”
“that sounds nice! Baby Jurina then~ hehe”
.
.
“whats wrong my wife? What are you thinking about?”
“honey,do you think we should tell Rena that she is not our real daughter?”
“hmm...I don’t know, she is still young to know about this yet..
Besides, I’m afraid that she could not accept the truth.”
“me too...I’m afraid that she will hate us and leave us”
“Don’t worry, you should not thinking about this too much you know, you just giving birth to our Jurina yesterday...”

They don’t realized that there is someone outside the room that has been listening to their conversation..
“I’m.....not... their real daughter....” said her in a low voice still shocked after hearing the fact about herself.

Rena wake up from her sleep...
“this dream again...” thought Rena suddenly feeling sad.
“I wonder how is Jurina right now...she must be growing up beautiful..like her mother..” thought Rena again.

Black has been Mayuyu’s bodyguard for a week now...
So far so good...
Which means Mayuyu have been ‘nice’ to her bodyguard.
Sometimes it irritates her that Black even follow her everywhere she go.
For Black, she does that because it was her job.
She has to protect Mayuyu.

Right now Mayuyu is bringing Takamina to the playground..
of course Black was with them.
Mayuyu is sitting on a bench near the playground watching Takamina playing there while Black standing next to her.
“Is she going to stand like that the whole time?” thought Mayuyu feel annoyed.
Mayuyu then stand up from the bench and stand in front of Black.
“Buy us an ice cream.” Command her.
Black nodded as following the command.
“Takamina loves chocolate flavour, I want strawberri and Vanilla.” Tell Mayuyu.
Then Black goes to buy ice cream.

Mayuyu walk to Takamina and join her play. xD
Then Black appeared out of nowhere with ice cream on her hand.
“wow~ that was fast...” said Mayuyu in her mind.
“Ice cream!!!!” shout Takamina happily when she saw ice cream on Black‘s hand.
They stop playing for a while to enjoy the ice cream.
“Takamina...how’s your ice cream?” asked Mayuyu.
“mmmm...oishiii~~~” answered Takamina while licking the ice cream that melt on her hand.
“You have to thank Black for buying the ice cream for you~” smirked Mayuyu.

Black doesn’t know anything.

“ne...Black-chan~ thank you!!” said Takamina to Black.
Black eyes opened widely as she felt something soft..and cold..on her right cheek.
[yeah...you guys know what happen... :bigdeal:]
Takamina giggled seeing Black’s reaction then continue eating her ice cream.
Mayuyu just watch with a smirked on her face.

Mayuyu felt like she want to go buy a new manga.
But she can’t leave Takamina alone.
“Black, I want you to watch Takamina for a while, I need to go buy something.” Said Mayuyu to Black.
“I’m your bodyguard, not hers.”tell Black doesn’t want to let Mayuyu go alone.
“I know, as my bodyguard, you also must listen to me. Now go watch her, or play together with her... “ explained Mayuyu.
“Don’t worry, I’m not taking a long time.” Added her while walking to the store that sell manga.
After seeing Mayuyu walk away, Black turn her head to watch over Takamina.
Black already know Takamina’s condition, Mayuyu told her.
.
.
.
20 minutes have passed, but Mayuyu haven’t come back yet.
Black start feeling worried that something happen to Mayuyu, so she goes to find Mayuyu..
And she forget about Takamina.
Black enter every stores in that place to find Mayuyu. Since she is fast so it was easy for her..-.-
Then she found Mayuyu inside one of the store. Mayuyu is standing while reading a manga.
She still doesn’t realized that Black is there.
Black walk to Mayuyu. Then Mayuyu sense someone is walking to her.
Mayuyu turn her head to the person and saw Black.
“Black, what are you doing here?” asked Mayuyu.
“You said you’re not taking a long time but its already 20 minutes so I go search for you.” Answered Black.
“ouh..sorry, I was to focus on reading this that I forgot about time.” Said Mayuyu showing the manga that she read earlier.
Then Mayuyu pick some of her favourite mangas and go to the counter to buy it.

After they out from the store, Mayuyu realized something.
Then she looks at Black.
“Did you just leave Takamina alone at the playground?!” asked Mayuyu.
Black just realized about that now..
“I forgot about her...” said Black.
“Arrghh!! I hope she is still playing there!” said Mayuyu while walking fastly to the playground.
Black felt guilty about that.

When they arrived, Mayuyu doesn’t see anyone playing there.
There’s no shadow of Takamina anywhere.
Mayuyu started to get worried.
“Where is she...” said Mayuyu while looking around.
“I told you to watch over her and look what happen now!” said Mayuyu feeling mad to Black.
“Sorry, I was worried about you that I forgot to watch over her.” Said Black.

Then they heard someone’s laugh not far from the playground.
“Its Takamina’s voice..” thought Mayuyu then try to find where the source of the voice come from.
Then she saw Takamina’s walking towards the playground...with a girl...holding hands...
“Takamina! Where did you go? I was worried that you were gone just now you know!”said Mayuyu to Takamina.
Takamina walk to Mayuyu with a happy smile on her face.
“I’m walking with Acchan! Look! She buy me a candy!” said Takamina showing the candy that Acchan’s bought for her.
“Acchan?? Who is that?” Mayuyu looks at the girl who was with Takamina.
“Ahhh~~ its you...the girl that day...” said Mayuyu remembered the scene where Takamina accidently kissed her lips.
Acchan felt like her face is heating up when Mayuyu said ‘the girl that day’... it reminds her of the kiss.

Then Acchan looks at the other girl beside Mayuyu.
“Black?!” said Acchan looking at Black who was looking at her too.
Black was looking at Acchan curiously.
“What is she doing here?”said Black in her mind.
“you guys know each other?”asked Mayuyu watching both of the girls looking at each other.
Black and Acchan doesn’t want to exposed their true identity so they lied.
“She was my classmate during high school” lied Black while looking at Acchan like try to make Acchan agree with her.
“Y-yes..we are..” said Acchan agreed.
“Really? No wonder you two looks like you know each other.” Said Mayuyu but feeling the awkwardness between those two.
“Maybe they aren’t really close I guess..” thought Mayuyu.

“Its getting dark, Takamina lets go home.” Tell Mayuyu.
“But, I want to play with Acchan~~” said Takamina frowned.
“Ne..Takamina, we can play tomorrow if you want..”said Acchan smiling at her.
“really? Promise?” said Takamina while let out her pinky finger to Acchan as a promise.
Acchan chuckled. “I promise~” said her while interwined their pinky fingers.
“hmmm...I wonder what happen to those two when me and Black is gone..” thought Mayuyu while making a thinking pose.

flashback (when Black leave Takamina alone to find Mayuyu)

“Mayuyu! Lets play together!” said Takamina while run to where Mayuyu sat earlier.
“Eh? Where is Mayuyu? Black-chan? Where are you?” said her noticing that both of them are not there.
Takamina was looking around searching for Black and Mayuyu.
Then she start feeling scared for being left alone by Mayuyu.
“Mayuyu, where are you~~” said her sadly.
Takamina kneeled down and put her arm on her knees.
She was looking down and about to cry.. [I think she cried already~]

“Are you okay?” Takamina heard someone’s voice so she look up.
“I’m scared...” said Takamina to the person who bend down to look at her.
“Why are you scared?” asked her again.
“Mayuyu left me...” said Takamina sadly.
“Hmm...Mayuyu will not left you...maybe she just going to buy something..” said the person to Takamina.
Takamina just look at her.
“How about we go to buy something for you?” said her to make Takamina happy.
“but I don’t know you...Miichan said don’t talk to strangers” said Takamina.
“Okay, My name is Acchan...and your name is?” asked Acchan.
“Takamina...” said Takamina still feeling insecured.
“Well, we know each other now right?” asked Acchan again.
“Un.”answered Takamina.
“Don’t worry, I’m a good person. We go buy food first then we come back here.. okay?” tell Acchan to convince her.
Takamina think she felt safe with her so she just nodded.
“Come on.” Acchan extend her hand to Takamina to help her to stand up.
“Lets go.” Said Acchan. She was about to let go of Takamina’s hand but Takamina held her hand tight.

Acchan just smiled. Then they walk to buy candy.

Flashback end.

t.b.c

hmmm..should I make Acchan's pov for the flashback too??? :dunno:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: cisda83 on February 08, 2013, 11:41:00 AM: yeah... great update as always....Thank you

Wah.. Mayu really likes to play trick on Black...

By saying to takamina that she needs to 'thank's' someone... it means she needs to kiss that person's cheek.

Black was very suprise... I think...

Atsuko and takamina are together... they are introducing themselves... good 1st step... can't wait to find out more....

So Rena (Geki) was adopted by Jurina's parents... and left home after that... but why Jurina live with Miichan cs...?

More think to find out...

Can't wait to see the next update

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: no-chan on February 08, 2013, 12:01:17 PM: kyaaaa!! XD
nice update!!! :inlove:
thank you!!thank you!!thank you!! :bow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: mo-chan on February 08, 2013, 01:29:08 PM: so Rena and Jurina are sisters but not related blood
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: FNK23 on February 08, 2013, 02:13:40 PM: yeahh, please put acchan pov!
I like your atsumina scene, but i still didnt know what will going happen to their relationship, i feels like acchan being a mother and minami is acchan's young daughter ahahaa
need more story about wmatsui also~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: DC2805 on February 08, 2013, 04:11:26 PM: Thank you! I want more of Wmatsui! :)
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: Hii_chan on February 08, 2013, 05:26:07 PM: you should put Acchan's POV
I want more Atsumina moment :)
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: Chanaline on February 08, 2013, 05:46:10 PM: Thank you for this update!

It was funny!! Acchan like Takamina...

Black is so idiot!!
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: stepk on February 08, 2013, 10:55:54 PM: they are so sweet
Waiting the moment
when minami now fall in love :wub:
I like dream XD
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: chichay12 on February 09, 2013, 05:07:00 AM: ATSUMINA
For LIFE!!!
Thank you for the update..
:on gay: :on gay: :on gay:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: chiqinna on February 09, 2013, 11:10:12 AM: so I'll put Acchan pov for the next chapter!! :hehehe:
:on cny1:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: kurogumi on February 10, 2013, 09:19:45 AM: So jurina is rena sister,yuki is mayu bodyguard,and acchan is err...something related with takamina maybe LOL

LoL its funny fate,i waiting when rena meet jurina
Black will confused why her friend have relation with mayu friends,first takamina and now jurina

Thank for the update,want the next chapter
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: miayaka on February 10, 2013, 09:04:11 PM: Everyday atsumina!!!
I know Im flooding comments but i cant resist it before i go to sleep!

im waiting for the scene where taka falls for her beloved :heart:
i love your fic!
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: TakaminaBG on February 10, 2013, 10:14:49 PM: I want MORE AtsuMina moments!!!!!
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 7 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: chiqinna on February 14, 2013, 09:13:46 AM: Chapter 7

flashback

Acchan’s pov

I couln’t stop thinking about this girl...
Arrgghh!!!
I keep walking and walking to anywhere my feet lead me to.
Then, I realized that I already near the playground...
I don’t see her shadow here...
Wait, what am I thinking?
Uggghh...
I close my eyes trying not to think about that girl but then… I heard someone’s sobbed.
Where is this sound comes from?
I look around and I saw a small girl...
She sits on the ground while putting her knees to her chest and buried her head to her arms…
I know that figure…
From the ribbon on her head I already know it’s her...
I felt like my feet moves on its own to the girl,
I took a deep breath before I asked her…
I don’t know why I felt so nervous right now...

“Are you okay?”

The moment she look up at me, my heart start to beat faster, but her eyes, her brown eyes makes me feels warm inside…
“I’m scared…”
She tells me. Her arms still on her knees.
“Why are you scared?” I asked her again.
“Mayuyu left me…” said her sad.
Mayuyu? Who is Mayuyu? Maybe her friend that day...
Or her guardian…?
What should I do now?
Maybe I should comfort her first.

“Hmm…Mayuyu will not leave you…maybe she just going to buy something...” I said to her.
She just looked at me.
Hmmm…maybe I should buy something for her...
Candy maybe?
That’s what people always do to make a kid stop crying or to make them happy right?
She’s not a kid… but I think this will work...
“How about we go to buy something for you?” said me to her.
“But I don’t know you...Miichan said don’t talk to strangers” said her.
She’s really innocent…
“Okay, my name is Acchan…and your name is?” Asked me.
“Takamina...”
“Well, we know each other now right?” asked me again.
“Un.” Answered her.
“Don’t worry, I’m a good person. We go buy food first then we come back here okay?” tell me to convince her.

Yeah...a good person you are~

She nodded.
“Come on.” I extend my hand to help her to stand up.
“Let’s go.” I said to her.
I was about to let go of her hand but she held my hand tight.
I feel happy when she tightens her grip on my hand.
Maybe I should just let her be.
Then we walk to buy candy.

When we walk, she keeps asking me nonstop...

She asks me happily...

Acchan, what is your favorite food?
I just answered whatever comes to my mind...
Then she starts telling me about her favorite foods…

Acchan, do you like ice cream?
Food again…

Acchan, can I play with you after this?
I just nodded to her…
She always with her wide smile on her face…
I love seeing her smile though…

Seeing her smile like that makes me forgot about other things, my problem, work,
about the real Maeda Atsuko, the world I’m in right now,

*At Miichan’s house

Mayuyu and Takamina just arrived. Black already went home after sending them.
“Non-chan! Non!” Shout Takamina happily seeing her younger sister at the living room.
“Ah! Oneechan!” replied kanon the hugged her beloved sister.
Mayuyu took off her bag and put it on the couch.
“Ne…Non-chan, today I met new friend, her name is Acchan! She is so nice! Look! She buys me candy!” tell Takamina
happily to her while showing the candies.
“Really? She is soooo nice...” said Kanon.
“Un!”
“Okay,*sniff**sniff* you smell bad oneechan...let’s take a bath!!” said Kanon while smelling Takamina’s body.
“Take a bath??” asked Jurina with smirked who suddenly come out from the kitchen as she hear Kanon.
All of them look at each other’s including Mayuyu who also smirked.

“Let’s take a bath together then!!!” shout Mayuyu then run to the bathroom followed by Jurina, Takamina, and Kanon.

Their bathroom is quite big so they always take a bath together.
It’s not just taking a bath that make them so excited,
it’s because they are playing around in the bathroom, making a bubbles,
rubbing each other’s back, singing in a loud voice ignoring their neighbors
, dancing, jumping, like a kids, even though there is already a kid there..

Then, Lovetan and Miichan just arrived.
They heard the noise in the bathroom.
“Did they take a bath together?” asked Miichan looking at Lovetan.
“It’s not fair!!! They didn’t wait for me!!!” said Lovetan then she run to the bathroom leaving miichan.
“Wait, I want to join too!!!” shout Miichan.
Of course Miichan doesn’t want to be alone...

The readers want to join to?? :kekeke: Teehee~

Meanwhile

Somewhere else.

A girl with a tomboyish look walking towards one of the room and knock on the door.
“Come in” tell the person inside.
She come in and the sit on the chair. The looks like an office, there is a table,
two chairs in front and a big chair that the man is sitting facing his back to the girl.

“What did you got there?” asked the man.
“*grin* Watanabe Mayu, the only daughter of Watanabe Hiroshi, currently still studying at Sakura High School...” tell the girl.
“Hmmm...” the man while showing himself to the tomboyish girl and smirked.
“I heard that her relationship with her father is not going well.. and currently she lives with her friends.” Tell her again.
“Thats a good news...I can easily bring down Watanabe Hiroshi like this” smirked the man.

“But...there is a but.. hehe.. I think Watanabe Hiroshi has hired a bodyguard to guard his daughter,
a woman bodyguard.. I think he knows already your plan.” Said the girl again.
“I see...so he try to protect his daughter this time..*smirked* lets see if that bodyguard is that strong enough to protect her..” said him.

“then, where is my pay?” asked the girl.
“Tsk...i will transfer the money to your account. Don’t worry, you still have other works to do for me... Sae..”
“Well, I can do any work you ask me to..as long as there is a payment for that..” smirked her.
“Of course...I will give anything you wish.. as long as you did your work..” said the man also smirked.
“So...what should i do next?” asked Sae.

“Hmmm...I want you to keep watching over that Watanabe Mayu, and beware of her bodyguard,
we don’t know yet how strong is her.. maybe, you could become a friend with Watanabe Mayu, that would makes our plan easier..” explained the man.
“no problem...thats easy...Sae can do anything you know..” smirked Sae then she got up and got out of the room.

“as long as you gave me money..” thought Sae while smirking.

t.b.c

sorry its short update~ hehe
:kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 7 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: no-chan on February 14, 2013, 12:08:49 PM: thanks for the update... XD
i'm looking forward for the update..~
yoroshiku ne~ :bow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 7 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: leEwẬy on February 14, 2013, 01:05:45 PM: Thanks for your update :bow:
They take a bath together...Seem fun :onioncheer:
Sae in this fic is a bad guy, intersting :wahaha:
Hope you'll update soon!!!
I look forward it :on woohoo:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 7 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: Hii_chan on February 14, 2013, 02:00:44 PM: thanks for update :)
I want to join too :cry: :drool:
Sae appear :O
I'm waiting for your next update :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 7 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: stepk on February 14, 2013, 05:44:53 PM: uhh acchan you love minami XD
sae :w00t:
thanks for update :thumbsup
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 7 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: Haruko on February 15, 2013, 02:32:04 AM: aww atsumina.. :B
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 7 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: arrow27 on February 15, 2013, 02:36:49 AM: Thanks for the update!!! Great chapter :)
Atsuko and Minami are so cute *__*
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 7 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: cisda83 on February 17, 2013, 03:00:21 AM: Hehehe... Atsuko is thinking about Takamina all the time...

Yeah... all the Yankee seem to have all kind of trouble in their real life that they want to forget....

Who is he that hiring Sae to spy on Mayu and Yuki...?

What's going to happen with Mayu and Yuki...?

Will they start to disturb the life of Mayu and friends?

What's going to happen with Atsuko and Minami?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

:wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 1 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: chiqinna on February 18, 2013, 12:15:55 PM: Chapter 8 part 1

The next day...

Acchan has promised to Takamina that she will play with her in the evening.
Maybe she was too excited that she woke up earlier than usual.
“Acchan, where are you going this early morning? It’s not usual to see you woke up early...Is there something wrong?” asked Mariko
while having a breakfast when she saw Acchan all dress up in her usual clothes.
“Ermm...everything’s fine... I just want to take a walk...need to stretch out a bit...” said Acchan while stretching her arms.
“Oh...okay...” replied Mariko calmly.

After that, Acchan got out to take a walk.

‘*sighed* Why am I so excited to see her again... I’ve never been this excited before....’ thought Acchan while walking on the sidewalk.
‘But I love the feels...the excitement~ ‘smiled Acchan when she thinks about seeing Takamina this evening.
‘I wonder if she knows who I really am...how will she react to it...and know Black is there’ thought Acchan again...

As she walks, she suddenly bumps into an old lady causing the old lady to fall.
“S-sorry...I’m really sorry...” said Acchan while helping the old lady to get up and then picking up her things.
“Its okay dear...” replied her smiled to Acchan.
“Are you okay? Do you hurt anywhere?” asked Acchan concerned.
“I’m okay, don’t worry dear...accident happen everywhere...” answered the old lady.

Acchan feels relieved after hearing that.
“W-well, where are you going Obaasan? Let me help you then...” offered Acchan smiling to her.
“I’m on my way back home actually...but is it okay for you?” said the grandma.
“It’s okay, I don’t have anything to do anyway...” replied Acchan.
Acchan helping the grandma with her things.
They already arrived at the grandma’s house.
“We are here...thank you so much my dear...you are really a good person.” Thanked the grandma to Acchan while holding Acchan’s hands.
“My pleasure Obaasan, but to be honest, I’m not a good person as you see...” Said Acchan giving a small smile to the grandma.
“What do you mean my dear?” asked the grandma confused.
Acchan just smile to the grandma then look down. “It just... I’m a bad person...”
The grandma chuckled when hearing Acchan’s answer.
“If you are bad person then, why are you helping me just now?” said grandma again.
Acchan keep silent. Looks like she doesn’t what to answer to the grandma.
“Look, my dear, whether you are a bad or good person, you still have a good heart to help other people...like me. Tell me, do you have someone you love?”
Acchan think for a while. ‘Someone I love?’ asked her in her mind.
“I don’t think so...I never have a boyfriend actually.” Answered Acchan.
“It’s okay, maybe soon or later you’ll find your sunshine dear...” tell the grandma smiled.
“Sunshine?”Said Acchan confused. The grandma just nodded then explained to her.
“Yes...sunshine...your happiness, hopes, lighten your days when you are down, the one that will always love you no matter who you are...when you found the person, then that’s your sunshine dear.” Smiled her to Acchan.
Acchan smiled back.

“I hope someday I will find my sunshine...then, I’m going now Obaasan.” Acchan was about to go.
“And one more thing dear, when you found your sunshine,
don’t ever let them go away from you.” Said the grandma smiling.
“Take care, Obaasan.” Smiled Acchan.
“You too my dear and thank you again for helping me.”
After that Acchan walk away.

Meanwhile

Last night Sae was thinking about a plan on how
to approach Mayuyu since she always has a bodyguard with her.
“Hmmm…maybe I should approach her bodyguard first...” smirked Sae.
“But…she doesn’t look friendly...hmm….” Sae thinks again.

Laying on the bed while looking at the ceiling trying to find an idea.

Then, Sae grinned like she has found a good idea.
“Sae can do anything…*smirk*”

Mayuyu was skipping school again…
Usually at this time she spends her time at manga store.
But this time she’s not alone, of course her bodyguard was with her.
Actually this morning Miichan ask her to bring Takamina along with her but
she refused and said that she will only take Takamina to the playground in the evening.

At the store…

Mayuyu is searching for a new manga.
But it’s kinda annoying that someone keeps standing beside her.
“*sighed* Black, can you just wait outside?” asked Mayuyu with a blank expression.
Black looks around before she goes outside, to make sure that there is no suspicious person in there.
After that, she walks away from Mayuyu silently.
“*sighed* finally…” mumbled Mayuyu while her eyes searching for the manga she likes.

But Mayuyu is being Mayuyu…

She asked the worker in there whether there is an exit door on the backside of the store.
Then the worker shows her to the door at the backside.
“Thank you” said Mayuyu to the worker.
Mayuyu is putting a victory smile on her face while she walks away from there.
“Find me if you can Black…let’s start the game” whispered Mayuyu to herself.

Well, Black still doesn’t realize that Mayuyu is not in the store anymore.

Outside the store, Black saw some guy with a black jacket keep looking at her direction.
But then they look inside the store.
‘Something is wrong…why is Mayuyu taking so long inside....’ thought Black.
Then she decided to go inside.
Once she’s inside, Mayuyu is nowhere to be found.
‘Where is she?’ said Black in her mind.
‘Don’t tell me they got her!’ thought Black again remembering the guys outside the store just now.
Then she asked the worker if they saw Mayuyu. Since she didn’t see Mayuyu walk out from the front door.
After the worker tells her that Mayuyu used the back door, Black quickly runs to the back door.
The worker was shocked because Black suddenly disappears from her sight.
“What was that…” said the worker shocked.

Black already at the back of the store but she didn’t see Mayuyu.
‘Damn, where is she?’ said Black in her mind looking around.
Black is using her speed to find for Mayuyu around.
Since Mayuyu is not a fast runner so she should still be around the place.

Meanwhile…

Mayuyu is now walking on an alley. There was no one there.
But Mayuyu felt like she was being followed.
‘Maybe its Black…she is fast than I thought’ thought Mayuyu so she just walk.
But then a bunch of man appeared in front of Mayuyu making her to stop walking.
“Hey there…” said one of the guys smirked. They look like a gangster.
“Oh no…wait, Black is behind me…why I have to be worry.” Thought Mayuyu then smirk to them.
“Hey…” replied Mayuyu to them.
Then Mayuyu start reverse slowly still facing them.

“Black” she called Black.

No answer.

Mayuyu look behind her then she saw no one.

“Black?” realizing that Black is not behind her, Mayuyu looks at her front again.
They were smirking to Mayuyu while walking towards her.

T.B.C~

I'll post the next part tomorrow or the day after tomorrow or maybe sooner or later or...
*sighed* I'll update it soon~ :D
thanks for reading! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 1 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: FlameHazeKatsu on February 18, 2013, 12:23:55 PM: Oohhhh~~~~ yeah Atsuko don't let go of your 'sunshine' when you fine 'er! XD lolol and sigh* Mayu, stop neglecting your bodyguard >_< well I'm sure she'll be there to save ya. Or maybe Sae will show up instead... O.o
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 1 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: cisda83 on February 18, 2013, 01:02:19 PM: Hehehe... Atsuko such a nice girl....

Well she already find her sunshine... she just didn't know it...

What's going to happen with Mayu...?

Will Black be there on time...?

Or Atsuko will be the one meeting and saving Mayu on her way to meet Takamina?

Well can't wait to know what happen next

Thank you for the update

:wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 1 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: stepk on February 18, 2013, 09:40:21 PM: atsuko :wub:
now mayu is in trouble
black you have to go there... :panic:
thanks great update :w00t:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 1 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: Haruko on February 19, 2013, 05:49:10 AM: yeah soon acchan you gonna found it!

o_o mayu?
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 1 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: Chanaline on February 19, 2013, 06:38:54 PM: Waaah Mayu!!!!

Wher are you Black!
Thank you for this chapter!
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 1 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: kahem on February 19, 2013, 11:56:21 PM: hehe I think I know what is in Sae's mind and it's funny how she speaks at the third person ^^
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 2 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: chiqinna on February 20, 2013, 08:07:14 AM: Chapter 8 part 2

“Black” she called Black.
No answer.
Mayuyu look behind her then she saw no one.
“Black?” realizing that Black is not behind her, Mayuyu looks at her front again.
They were smirking to Mayuyu while walking towards her.

Mayuyu step back slowly.
‘Think Mayuyu! Think! What should I do now?!!’ thought Mayuyu panicked.
‘If I called Black, they might already kill me if they saw me taking out my phone’ said Mayuyu in her mind.
‘If I run, no…that was stupid action…even Takamina is faster than me!’ thought her again.
“Let’s play little mouse~” said the guy try to touch me.

“Oi!!” a shouted can be hearing from behind.
Mayuyu turn around to looks at the voice’s owner.
‘And now who is this?’ said Mayuyu in her mind while looking at the tomboy girl.
“If you want to touch her, fight me first!” said the girl glaring at the guys the she step in front of Mayuyu with her back facing her.
“Don’t worry, I’ll take care of them.” Said the girl to Mayuyu.
Mayuyu just standing there not knowing what to do.
Then the guys start attacking the girl.
She dodge all the of the attacks.
Mayuyu watched her with mouth open amazed. ‘Wow’
Then she kicks and punches the guys.
But the guys keep attacking her.

When they still having a fight, Black appeared and she saw Mayuyu.
“Mayuyu!” said Black.
Mayuyu turn around and saw Black coming to her.
‘Mayuyu?’ said Mayuyu in her mind.
“Stay behind, let me handle them.” Said Black then walk towards the guys then finished them all in a minute.
Mayuyu and the other girl were impressed by what they just saw.
All of the guys are now laying on the ground.

Black then walks back to Mayuyu with a death glare.
‘Ooppss’ said Mayuyu in her mind.
“Hehe…Black…how you found me? I-I was actually-“before Mayuyu could find any excuses, Black stops her.
“Shut up.” Said Black still glaring at her.
“O-Okay…” replied Mayuyu looking away from her glare. ‘This girl is scary sometimes....’

Then she looks at the other girl.
“Ah! I forgot about you! Thank you for helping me…even though Black already finished them.” Said Mayuyu to the girl.
“It’s okay! For a cute girl like you, I can do anything! By the way, my name is Sae…” said her to them.
“Mayuyu-desu” replied Mayuyu shortly. ‘I think she is a player…’ thought Mayuyu.
Then both of them looking at Black. They are waiting for Black to introduce herself.
“And you?” ask Sae to Black. Black did not answer her.

“She is Black.” Answered Mayuyu instead.
“Black?!”Said Sae confused. She watched her from the top to the bottom.
‘All black…No wonder her name is Black…’ thought Sae.
“*sighed* let’s go Black.” Said Mayuyu as she walks away then followed by Black.
“W-wait!! Ano… Mayuyu, can we meet again next time?” asked Sae smiling.
Mayuyu looks at Sae strangely. “Why?” asked Mayuyu curious.
“Err...Emm...I just want to be your friend!” Said Sae while smiling widely.
.
.
“I don’t want to be your friend.” Said Mayuyu to Sae with a cyborg face then walks away.
“B-but…Mayuyu…I just...” Mayuyu and Black just ignored her and walk away.
Sae sighed.
But then she smirked to their back.
‘Sae never give up that easily, Mayuyu…” said Sae in her mind.

That evening…

Mayuyu brings Takamina to the playground since someone already promised to play with her today.
Acchan haven’t arrived yet so Takamina is playing at the playground while waiting for her.
Mayuyu is sitting on a bench facing the playground.
‘Why she always standing when there is a place to sit here?!’ thought Mayuyu as she looks at Black who stand near the bench.
“Black-san, could you please have a sit? It’s irritated my eyes seeing you stand like that...” said Mayuyu to Black ‘politely’.

Black silently sits on the bench.

There was awkward atmosphere around them since no one is talking.

Mayuyu try to break the silence.

“Why is your name’s Black?” asked Mayuyu without looking at Black.

Black just stays silent.

‘Is she ignoring me just now?’ thought Mayuyu.
Mayuyu still didn’t give up.
“What is your real name?” asked her again this time looking at Black.
Black let out a small sighed then answer her.
“No need for you to know.” Replied her coldly.
Mayuyu looking at her annoyed by the answer.
“Then, if you didn’t tell me your real name, don’t call me by my real name also…
I’ll only respond to you when you called me….Nezumi…” said Mayuyu smirked.

“Why?” asked Black.

“Simple…because I want to know your real name…” answer Mayuyu while watching Takamina’s playing.
'whatever...' said Black in her mind.

Meanwhile,

Takamina is playing at the swing when suddenly she heard a voice from behind her.

“Takamina…” said Acchan playfully while standing behind Takamina.
Takamina turn her head around while still sitting on the swing.
Takamina smile widely when she saw Acchan.
“Acchan~ you came…I thought you forgot our promise” said her pouting cutely.
“I already promised you…of course I’ll come~” said Acchan smiling while sitting on the other swing next to Takamina.
Mayuyu already know that Acchan is there so she take out her manga and enjoy her own time.

For Black, it’s uncomfortable for her since Acchan is there also…playing with Takamina.
‘A mafia…likes to play with a ‘kid’ like Takamina…? What is her intention actually?’ thought Black while watching them playing and talking happily.
‘Maybe she was attracted by Takamina’s act.'
‘I’ve never seen this side of her though…’ thought Black again.
Takamina and Acchan are playing at the playground happily…
Or it was Takamina actually who was so excited playing there…meanwhile Acchan was watching her play.

While she was having fun with Takamina…

“Oneechan!!!” shout Kanon calling her sister who run to the playground still with her school uniform.
Before she runs to Takamina, she goes to Mayuyu who sitting there.
“Mayuyu~*pant*” called Kanon still panting from the running.
She sits beside Mayuyu to rest for a while.

“Kanon, what are you doing here? Where is Jurina? And Lovetan?” asked Mayuyu looking at Kanon.
“I just want to see you guys…hehe…Jurina is still at school, she has martial arts practice…
and…Lovetan is helping Miichan at the bakery, she said you guys are here so I went here…” explained Kanon.
After listening to Kanon, Mayuyu turn her head again to her manga.

Kanon just realized that there is someone else playing with Takamina.
“Who is that?” asked her to Mayuyu.
“Acchan” replied Mayuyu still reading her manga.
“Ah~~ the one that Takamina told me…” said Kanon nodding her head.
Then Kanon went to Takamina to join her.
“Non-chan~~” called Takamina seeing her sister.
“Non-chan, this is my new friend! Acchan~” Takamina introduced Acchan to Kanon.
“I’m Acchan” said Acchan smiling to Kanon.
“I’m kanon, Takamina’s younger sister. Thank you for taking care of Takamina...” Said Kanon while bowing to Acchan.
“Eh…it’s okay, I love playing with Takamina actually.” Said Acchan.
They play together at the playground.

After that day, Acchan often comes to the playground to see Takamina.
Sometimes, she always forgot about her real work as a mafia…
Usually, Sasshi is the one who taking care of the business.

[*sighed* poor Sasshi~ :kekeke:]

T.B.C

hey everyone~
I hope you enjoy this update... since....
WMATSUI HAVEN'T MAKE AN APPEARANCE YET!!!! :frustrated: :OMG: :dizzy: :scolding: :tantrum:
and KOJIYUU also~~~~ EH??! KOJIYUU??!! THERE WAS KOJIYUU??!! :dunno:
I don't know yet~~ :bigdeal:
ermm... thank you for reading~ :kneelbow:
bye~~~ :on blackhole:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 2 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: mo-chan on February 20, 2013, 08:48:20 AM: mayuki are so slow
still waiting for wmatsui.
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 2 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: Hii_chan on February 20, 2013, 09:00:08 AM: jaa thanks for updating
Mayuyu begin curious about Black
Sae appearand seem will have some Saemayu moment ;)
And Acchan and Takamina is so cute XD
waiting for your next update :cow:
Title: Re: new fanfic: Chapter 1 [atsumina+other pairings]
Post by: qweakb on February 20, 2013, 09:10:43 AM: Quote from: chiqinna on January 21, 2013, 02:03:34 PM

“LISTEN!!!”

“LISTEN!!!”

*still arguing*

" LISTEN!!! "

*Sounds familiar to some people isn’t?* ;p

“LISTEN!!!”

“LISTEN!!!”

“LISTEN!!!”

yup..to me..haha
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 2 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: cisda83 on February 20, 2013, 11:44:21 AM: Ah... so Sae planned this whole attacking Mayu... so she could come out as the rescuer...

But Black came soon enough to be the rescuer....

Ah Mayu knew to be careful about Sae... not to trust her....

Hahaha... Atsuko always there to play with Takamina... nearly everyday...

Leaving the Mafia business for Sashi to take care.... Poor poor Sashi... need to do Atsuko's job

What's going to happen next... with Sae's plan, Atsuko's job, Black's duty....?

I can't wait to find out.... the next chapters....

How about Takamina's background.... why, how and what made her become what she is now?

Thank you for the update...

:wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 2 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: chiqinna on February 20, 2013, 12:14:52 PM: mo-chan: let's wait for wmatsui together! :)
Hii_chan: will there be SaeMayu....or SaeYuki? or SaeMaYuki? hehe lets see~
qweakb: :kekeke: high five!
cisda83: hmmm... about Takamina's background... :glasses: I'll tell you soon~ maybe?
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 2 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: arrow27 on February 20, 2013, 02:02:44 PM: thanks for the update! Mayuki is quite interesting here lol.
As for Acchan and Takamina they are an ongoing of cute! Still curious are Minami's full past :D
& lol for Sasshi having to finish all the work herself :P
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 2 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on February 20, 2013, 02:28:42 PM: haha black told mayu to shut up and death glare :lol:
awww atsumina and non-chan are so cute :inlove:
sae chan's a player 8)
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 2 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: qweakb on February 20, 2013, 03:10:08 PM: Quote
qweakb: high five!

haha.. high five

I thought you had another update...cheat my feeling..haha (joking)

hope that you will update soon ><
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 2 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: chiqinna on February 20, 2013, 03:23:08 PM: LOL~ no...not that fast~ :P
I don't know when will I update the next chap~
hahaha..
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 2 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: qweakb on February 20, 2013, 03:50:13 PM: Quote
LOL~ no...not that fast~
I don't know when will I update the next chap~
hahaha..

I see...
lol.. never mind, I will be waiting... ><
I know that being writer is not easy though I am not a writer... :p
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 2 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: Chanaline on February 20, 2013, 05:52:47 PM: Ooooooh Interesting! Mayu care about Black! She want to know Black's name!

Sorry but I don't like at all SaeMayu... Noooooo! Don't want it! It's your fanfic... What Am I Saying??

Thank you!! Hope you update fast!
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 2 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: no-chan on February 20, 2013, 07:32:36 PM: waaaa~thanx for the update!!
acchan and takamina moments are just the way too cute~ :inlove:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 2 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: stepk on February 20, 2013, 10:23:27 PM: moou acchan is more cute and tender
with takahashi now :wub:
thanks
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 2 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: gek geki on February 28, 2013, 11:19:43 AM: PLEASE UPDATE! TOO MANY GREATE HAPPEN WHEN I OPEN THIS THREAD AGAIN.AND THIS ONE AWESOME TOOJ
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 2 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: FNK23 on February 28, 2013, 04:54:23 PM: wooahh, its already 2 chapter, i'm so latee.
But still, i like acchan and takamina moment <3
hushh saee, husshh!! Dont you dare to getting close with mayu, or else black will eat you alivee! Ahahaa
more update pleasuuu~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 8 part 2 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: chiqinna on March 01, 2013, 10:21:32 AM: qweakb: yeah..it was hard being a writer since I'm a beginner.. :hee:
Chanaline: Will it be SaeMayu?? :dunno: hehe~ let's see~
no-chan: thanx for reading!! :bow: even the writer couldn't stand the cuteness lol~
stepk: thaks for reading!! :bow:
gek geki: thanks! :lol:
FNK23: just wait for the next update~ hehe..

Minna~
actually i was supposed to update the next chapter days before but I fall sick... :fever:
well not really sick..just a toothache~ hahaha :fainted:
But it's really hurt!!!! emotionally and physically~
you know how it feels right when you have it...
now its getting better~ :D

and for the next update!! I'm going to post it soon~ maybe this weekend? :hehehe:
the next update will be a loooong one...not really long...but longer than the usual update!
stay tuned! :mon bye:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 9 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: chiqinna on March 02, 2013, 09:41:47 AM: Chapter 9

At Watanabe’s villa

Black went to see Watanabe Hiroshi, Mayuyu’s father to inform him about the incident happen a week ago.
“So…what is it that you want to tell me…did something happen to my daughter? Or she did something on you?” asked Watanabe Hiroshi to Black while sitting on the big chair in his room office.
Black sitting in front of his desk facing him with her hands inside her jacket.
“Something did happen a week ago…and yes, she did something on me…she trick me, but gladly I was fast to know…she escape from me and when I found her, she was being trapped by a bunch of gangster…and also there was a girl trying to help her I guess.” Explain Black while looking blankly at the desk at her front.
“*sighed* I know soon or later she would do that…you have to be patient with her…about those gangsters, I bet they were sent by my rival…” said him.
“I think so…but I was more curious about the girl that helping her before I came…” said Black.
“What’s wrong with her?” asked him curious suddenly.

Black was thinking for a while before answering his question.
“Nothing…it just my feeling…” answer Black shortly.

“I’m going.” Said Black again knowing that she had nothing more to say.
When she was about to open the door, he said something to her.

“Black, thank you.” Said Watanabe to Black.

Then Black just walking out of the room.
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At school gate

Mayuyu and Lovetan are at the front gate.
“Eh? Where is your ‘black bodyguard’ Mayuyu? Usually she is the who always waiting for you at the front gate…” asked Lovetan looking around.
Mayuyu still with her blank expression.
“Maybe she is late…or she forgot about me? Hmmm…whatever…let’s go Lovetan.” Said Mayuyu start walks away.
“Ehh…aren’t you going to wait for her? She might be searching for you…” said Lovetan try to catch up with Mayuyu who walks in front of her.
“If you want to wait for her then you do it…besides its quite hot today...” replies Mayuyu.
“Mayuyu you are so mean…” said Lovetan.
“Don’t worry, she will found me somehow…she is fast…”smirked Mayuyu to Lovetan.

Lovetan suddenly stop like she remembers something.
“Ahh…I forgot~~ today I have to help Miichan at bakery after school…I guess I have to go there now.
Mayuyu are you going with me?” asked Lovetan to Mayuyu.
“Nah…I’m not going with you…I think I’m going to the store to buy something.” Replied Mayuyu.
“Okay, bye.” Then Lovetan leaving Mayuyu to go to Miichan’s bakery.

Mayuyu walking out of the store after buying something.
On her way home, she heard someone calling her name from behind.
‘Did someone call me?’ thought Mayuyu.
“Mayu!” called the person.
‘That was Black’s voice…” said Mayuyu to herself.
Mayuyu was about to turn her head to the back but then she remember about what she said to Black last week.
She said to Black that she will only respond to her when she called her Nezumi.

Mayuyu start walking faster.

Black was tired calling Mayuyu from afar.
Well, she is tired searching for her everywhere that her speed also decreasing plus its hot weather.
But she still has enough energy to call her.
Black suddenly remembered that Mayuyu would not answer her unless she called her Nezumi.

“Nezumi!” called Black.
Mayuyu finally stop walking.
Black sighed. She was sweating due to hot weather.
“Where did you go? I was searching for you.” Tell Black to Mayuyu while trying to hiding her tiredness.
“I went to the store. You were not there and I’m not going to wait for you.” Explain Mayuyu.
“And you. Are not you supposed to guard me? Or are you tired of me already?” asked Mayuyu again walking closer to Black with her smirked.
“I went to see your father.” Answer Black calmly.
“I see…”said Mayuyu then she start walking followed by her bodyguard.

Sometimes Mayuyu turn her head around to see Black and looking at her from her hair to her shoes.
Black of course felt uncomfortable by how Mayuyu look at her and curious.
‘Maybe she tries to trick me again?’ thought Black
While Mayuyu is actually looking at her all black wears. Shoes, pants, jacket, hair?
‘Hmmm…should I change her appearance to look better than wearing all black like that?’ thought Mayuyu turning her head back to the front.

Mayuyu and Black already arrived at home.
“You should go home too. You look…tired.” Said Mayuyu to Black.
Black just walks away from there.
‘When did I start to concern about her?’ said Mayuyu to herself while watching Black walking away…
and then she enters to the house.
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Meanwhile
Acchan is bringing Takamina to the playground.
Miichan already know about her so it was fine for her since Takamina seems to like her a lot.
Besides, her work will be easier since there will be someone who can take care of Takamina while she was working.
Takamina was playing at the slides while Acchan is waiting for her at the bottom.
Then she slide down and smile widely.
Acchan just chuckled watching her playing.

Then Takamina getting closer to Acchan’s face and examine her face.
Acchan suddenly froze by the sudden action.
“W-what are you d-doing?” asked Acchan nervous by the action.
Then Takamina smile to her.
“Acchan is beautiful…” said Takamina making Acchan blush by the statement.
‘Why am I feeling this way…’ thought Acchan.
Her heart beats faster than usual.
She tried to act like usual.
“T-Takamina is beautiful too…” said her making Takamina chuckled.
“But Acchan is more beautiful!” said Takamina cheerfully again making Acchan’s face redder.

“Ermmm...thank you~ how about I treat you a katsudon! It’s your favorite right?” said Acchan to change the topic.
“Really?! Yay!! Katsudon! I love Katsudon! Acchan is the best!!” said Takamina happily while hugging Acchan tightly then kiss her on the cheek.
“Mou…let’s go then!” said Acchan while taking Takamina’s hand and walking to buy katsudon.

While they were waiting for the katsudon, Acchan’s phone rang.
It was Sasshi that calling her.
Acchan told Takamina to wait at the counter then she goes out to answer the phone.
“What?” asked Acchan.
“Two group of gangster are making chaos at our place right now.” Told Sasshi with a panicked voice.
“What?!!” yelled Acchan.
“They were fighting to get our place and they started to destroyed the place.” Said Sasshi again.
“Where are our people that guard the place?” asked Acchan mad.
“T-they…they already knocked out by them. They were stronger than we thought.” Said Sasshi again.
Acchan took a deep breath.
“Then ask Rena to settle it. I’m busy right now.” Command her.
“B-but Rena right now is not really in good condition.” Replied Sasshi.
‘Black is busy being a bodyguard…I can’t ask her…’thought Acchan.
“Do you want me to tell Mariko-Sama-“
“No! Don’t tell her! We’ll settle this ourselves.” Said Acchan to Sasshi.

Acchan think for a while.

“Then just let them fight and let see who win to get the place from us, then after that we’ll take it back. Just watch over them. Are you clear?” said Acchan.
“Okay.” Answered Sasshi then hang up.
Acchan close her eyes for a moment and sighed then goes back inside to pay for the food.
“Acchan~ where did you go? I thought you left me…” said Takamina pouting when she saw Acchan coming back inside the restaurant.
“Sorry~ I was just having some business just now. After this I’ll send you home okay?”Said Acchan smiling.
“Un~” answered Takamina nodded her head.
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That night, Acchan and Sasshi along with their people are planning on how to handle the mafia that taking their place.
“I think we don’t need much people to settle this. First, we’ll use the gentle way, we’ll ask them nicely to give back our place. If they don’t then we’ll need to show them who are stronger. Understand?” explain Acchan briefly.
After that, they went to the place to settle the problem.
The other party already know that the ex owner of the place that they conquer now went to meet them to take back their place so they already prepare themselves.

“So…..Rap-pap-pa~ group isn’t?” smirked one of the big guy standing in front of Acchan with her underlings behind her preparing themselves for any result of the deal.
Acchan still with her cool personality and smile to their rival opposite them.
“What is your intention to meet us here?” asked him again even though he knew already their purpose is to take back their place.
“Don’t act like you don’t know. I don’t want to waste time with you guys so…I give you people time to get out of our place safely now…or you want to face the consequence?” said Acchan with a smirk on her face.

The guy who looks like their leader in the group walking around Acchan whiles his hand in his pocket.
Then he stopped in front of Acchan again and glare at her.

“Maeda-san…your group are one of the top mafia here, we all know that…but we’re not afraid you know…also, right now I have more people here than you. Aren’t you are the one that should be afraid?” Smirked him again glancing a bit to Acchan’s people.
“*sighed*I have fewer people than you doesn’t mean that we can’t beat you guys. That’s why…we are the top, we don’t waste our man just for thugs like you guys! You should accept our offer to you gets out safely you know…”said Maeda grin to him.

“What.did.you.say.”Said the guy gritting his teeth mad by her statement.
“So…your answer is no then…” said Acchan then she start walking to the back slowly to give way for her people to handle them first.
They are getting ready to beat them all up.
The other one also getting ready.
“Guys, they look down on us, let’s finish them!” said the leader to his man.
Then the battle started.

Acchan just looking at the fight while crossing her arms.
‘Not bad…Sasshi is right when she’s right, they are strong than I thought…’ said Acchan to herself watching them fighting.
They opponent looks like they will not surrender and keep attacking their rival.
Acchan felt like they are taking too long time to finish the fight.
So she butt in and join the fight.
She hangs on the bar and used her leg to kick them.
Then she face the leader and fight him.
“I told you already, you should accept my offer…”said Acchan smirked to the leader.
He was really mad then he punched Acchan on the face.
“Is that all you got?” provoke Acchan smiling like the punch did not hurt her at all.
Then he run to Acchan and try to kick her stomach but Acchan is faster, she dodge the attack and kick his stomach hardly making the guy groan in pain.
He got up quickly and fast attacked her.
Acchan did not realize the attack that she got kick and punch by him.
“Damn you…” mumbled Acchan mad.
‘Now I'll got bruise on my face. How am I going to face Takamina tomorrow?’ Said Acchan to herself.
She got really mad and finish the leader in one go.
All his man already knocked out by her man.
After that all of them getting up slowly and two of them carry their leader and put his arms around their shoulder.
Before they leave, they stop in front of Acchan.
“*pant*Remember Maeda*pant*…we’ll be back to take a revenge!*pant*” said the one of them giving the last glare at Acchan.
Then they all leave the place.

Acchan just smirked.

“We’ll wait for you then!!” shout Acchan to them hoping that they can hear her.
She look around the place.
"What a mess..." said her.
“You guys can go now…it’s late already, take a rest. Tomorrow you need to clean this mess.” Command Acchan to her people.
They all leave except for Sasshi who still waiting for Acchan.
“Maeda-san, aren’t you going back home?” asked Sasshi.

Acchan look at Sasshi who did not have any bruise on her face or arms.
“Did you fight along with us Sasshi? Asked Acchan curious.
“H-hehe~ I did fight with you guys…”said her nervous.
Acchan is getting more curious.

“Then why you did not have any wounds on your body?” asked Acchan raising one of her eyebrows.
“Eh? It because, when I fight them, I try my best to avoid them from hitting my arms and face so that I looks like I did not have any bruise. But they did punch my leg, stomach, my back, it just my clothes are hiding them so…people will not know that I was in a fight or so…hehe” Explain Sasshi while showing her wounds on her stomach.
“Sou ka~” said Acchan.

“Why did not you tell me earlier!!!? You should tell me about that so that I did not get bruise on my face! Now it will take time for it to heal!” yelled Acchan while walking away still whining about her bruise and that Takamina will saw her wounds and worried about her.
“Did I say something wrong?”Said Sasshi to herself.

That night at Miichan’s house

The entire member except Takamina was at the living room discussing about something.
They make Takamina sleep earlier so that they plan will be easier.

“So…soon is going to be Takamina’s birthday, we should make a surprise birthday party for her. What do you think?” Miichan started the discussion.
“Do you think it will work? Do you remember last year? Our surprise birthday party was ruin because Lovetan slip her tongue and tell Takamina about it!” said Jurina.
“H-hey! It’s not my fault! I-I just accidently said it to her okay~~” whine Lovetan.
“Shut up you two!” said Miichan.
“As long as you guys keep your mouth shut then our plan would work.” Said Mayuyu while lay on the couch.

They think for a while searching for any good idea.

“Kanon, do you have any idea?” ask Lovetan.
“Hmmm…I think we should invite Acchan and Mayuyu’s bodyguard too. Takamina would be happy to see them.” Answer Kanon.
“Good idea Non-Chan~ the more the merrier~” said Miichan smiling.
“My bodyguard? Why we should invite her?” said Mayuyu.
“Well, it looks like Takamina likes her, so why not…Don’t be so cruel to your bodyguard Mayuyu~” replied Jurina.

Mayuyu only sighed.

Then they discuss about the other things and hope that their plan success.

T.B.C

Hmmmm....is it good? :err:

NEXT UPDATE....maybe there will be wmatsui...? :dunno:

anyway, thanks for reading everyone! :kneelbow:
I love you guys!! :luvluv1:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 9 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: Elo on March 02, 2013, 10:39:32 AM: yeyyy partyyyyy partyyyyy :twothumbs :lol:

I cant wait for mayuki atsumina :twothumbs

If you could ,could you make marimii too pleaseeeeee :bow: :bow:

please update soon :bow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 9 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: Hii_chan on March 02, 2013, 10:52:43 AM: jaa.. Mayuki and Atsumina so cute
Takamina's bithday party will have Black and Acchan :shocked
It will be fun :D
waiting for your next update :thumbsup
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 9 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: kahem on March 02, 2013, 01:35:33 PM: It's so cute, Acchan is worried because Takamina will see her bruise~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 9 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: arrow27 on March 02, 2013, 02:35:08 PM: Thanks for the update :D Atsuko and Minami's outing are always so adorable lol :D

& haha at the birthday planing in the end! Looking forward to the next chapter~ :)
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 9 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: Haruko on March 02, 2013, 07:05:38 PM: aww cutie minami :B
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 9 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: cisda83 on March 02, 2013, 10:31:14 PM: Black's instinct is so spot on.... able to feel something is not right about Sae...

Yeah... Black don't trust Sae... and protect Mayu from any of Sae's advances

AH.... Atsuko is so cute... getting embarrass over Minami's comment.... although Minami meant it innocently... Atsuko in the other hand.... :lol:

Atsuko is so piss at Sashi... for not telling her... how to avoid getting bruises on the visible places while fighting

Now she can't see Takamina while she got her bruises.... since she didn't wait to worry Takamina

How is the Birthday is going to go....

I can't wait to see what happen next....

Thank you for the lovely update

:wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 9 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: leEwẬy on March 03, 2013, 06:35:39 AM: Atsumina are so cute :mon santa3:
Mayuki also :mon money:
There'll have a birthday party for Takamina :mon squee:
They're going to invite Yuki or Black and Acchan come, too :mon evillaff:
Hope it'll has some Mayuki's and Atsumina's scenes :mon roll:
Update soon, please :mon pray2:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 10 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: chiqinna on March 09, 2013, 11:09:02 AM: Chapter 10

Takamina’s birthday
The members had been secretly planning a surprise birthday party for Takamina without her knowing it.
Of course, they already invite Acchan and Black secretly and told them not to tell Takamina about it.
Mayuyu, Lovetan, Kanon and Jurina are in charge to buy for decoration, food, drinks and so on. They are on their way from school to shop to buy the stuff.
Lovetan was listing the things to buy on their way to the shop.
“Hmm…things to buy; balloons, candles, drinks, snacks, gift for midget, cake-“
“Wait, we don’t need to buy cake, Miichan said she will make the cake especially for Takamina…cancel the cake.” Interrupt Jurina.
“Oh, Okay. Cake no need…” Replied Lovetan.

Once they arrived, they split and decide who is going to buy those things.
“Okay, kanon, you are in charge of balloons, candles, aaand anything you found useful!” Said Lovetan.
“Okay!” replied Lovetan.
“And Jurina, you buy foods and drinks…”
“Roger!” replied Jurina.
“Lastly Mayuyu, you’ll go with me to find a gift! Mayuyu? Where did she go?” Said Lovetan looking around when she realized that Mayuyu is not with them anymore.
Jurina and Kanon also looking around searching for Mayuyu.
“She’s gone…with Black.” Said Jurina.
Lovetan only sighed. “Never mind her, let’s go inside.” Said Lovetan while walking inside the big shop.
They all start searching and buying the things that needed for the party.
Well, there is not so much things that they bought since they don’t want to waste things.
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Meanwhile

Mayuyu is somewhere else with Black following her. It’s not far from the shop that they went actually.
The truth is, while they were still with Lovetan and the others, she was having this idea when they were discussing on what to buy.
She was planning to make a new appearance for Black, like a new clothes for her.
And Black still doesn’t know about it because she was just following Mayuyu around.
Right now both of them are at the mall at female clothes area.
Then Mayuyu glance at Black from top to bottom while crossing her arms.
‘Hmmm…what is suitable for her…?” thought Mayuyu while looking at Black.

“Why are you looking at me like that?” asked Black curious.
Mayuyu sighed inwardly before telling her.
“Actually, I want to buy a new clothe for you.” Answer Mayuyu.
Black was looking at her confused by the answer. But then she started to understand what did she means by that.
“No need to. I’m fine with my clothe now.” Tell Black doesn’t like Mayuyu’s idea.
Mayuyu hate it when someone declined her offer. She is not the type who will give up that easily.
“You must to. Since you are going to Takamina’s birthday party, you have to dress properly…I mean…as for the birthday party, you must dress like you are going to a party.” Explain Mayuyu.
“But-“
“No buts! You have to obey my order. Come on, it’s not like I’m going to ask you to wear bikini or something, I just want to you to change your ‘all black theme’. Said Mayuyu tries to convince her.
It seems like Black still doesn’t like the idea.

Without waiting for her, Mayuyu start searching a suitable clothe for Black.
While Black is having a little frown on her face, Mayuyu is putting some clothes in front of her to see whether it was good or not.
Black wants to stop her but her mouth did not let out any words.
Then the one of the worker there comes to Mayuyu when she watched Mayuyu searching for clothes.

“Good Evening Miss, may I help you?” asked the female worker smiling.
“Ah, Y-yes, hmmm…can you recommend a suitable wears for her…but not too girly one.” Said Mayuyu to the worker while pointing to Black when she mentioned her.
The worker looking at Black and think of suitable clothes for her.
Then the worker smiling at Black and Mayuyu then motion them to follow her.
After that she stop and showing clothes that was being wear by the human doll that used to shows the clothes.
Mayuyu was looking at the clothes. After that she grin widely still looking at the clothes.
She looks at Black still with her big smile.
“I’m.not.going.to.wear.that.” said Black gritting her teeth. Only Mayu can hear her saying that.
“You can try it out to see if it looks good on you. There is the changing room.” said the worker smiling while showing the changing room.
“Okay, let’s try it out!” said Mayuyu ignoring Black.
She then gave the clothes for Black to wear it.
Black glare at Mayuyu like she doesn’t want to wear it.
Mayuyu glare at her back.

Then Black remembered what Mayuyu’s father said to her last time. That is to be patient with her.
Black sighed silently then taking the clothes and enter the changing room.
Inside her mind, Black is cursing herself for doing this kind of things that is not her kind of things.
‘Is this how a bodyguard does? Why is being a bodyguard needed to do this…’ said Black in her mind still looking at the clothes in her hand.

While Mayuyu is waiting outside the changing room, she felt that Black is taking so long time.
‘Why is she taking so long time, or she still haven’t wear it?’ thought Mayuyu.
Then Mayuyu knock the changing room’s door.
“Are you done yet?” ask Mayuyu from outside.
Black who is still not doing anything inside startled by the voice.
“N-not yet.” Answered her.
‘Should I just wear it?’ said Black to herself.
“Just wear it already!”Said Mayuyu again.
‘Did I say it out loud?’ thought Black confused.
[Just wear it Black, I don’t have time to wait for you, I’m busy right now. :cool1:]
‘Since the author also demand me to wear it, I guess I don’t have any choice, just for this time only Black.’ Said Black to herself.
Black already wears it, but she still hasn’t come out yet because she was embarrassed to show herself.
Mayuyu cannot hold her patient that makes her to open the door and enter the changing room.

Once Mayuyu saw Black with the dress, she was stunned.
‘wow~ she looks freaking beautiful…’ thought Mayuyu with her mouth slightly open.
Black was blushing hard when Mayuyu looking at her like that.
“That’s perfect!” said Mayuyu smiling to Black.
“Let’s go out.” Said Mayuyu dragging Black out of the changing room knowing that she wouldn’t come out.
Mayuyu is showing Black to the worker.
“How do you think?” asked Mayuyu to the worker.
“It’s great! It really suits for you!” said the worker smiling to Black.
Black was just looking down embarrassed.
Mayuyu beside her smirk goes to the counter to pay for it.
After done with the payment, Mayuyu goes back to Black.
“Let’s go.” Said Mayuyu.
“Eh? But I haven’t change to my clothe yet. Wait-“before Black continues any words Mayuyu interrupt her.
“No need to change. We don’t have time for that as the author said she is busy, besides I already pay for it so let’s go.” Said Mayuyu dragging Black out of there.

Black keep walking while looking down on her foot behind Mayuyu. It was really embarrassing for her since she was never wearing something like that her whole life.
“Don’t worry, soon or later you’ll get used to it.” Said Mayuyu still looking at the front.
Mayuyu also buying some clothes for Black actually.
She also bought one for Takamina.

They met Lovetan, Jurina and kanon on the way.
“Hey Mayuyu!” said Jurina.
“Where did you go? You know we already bought everything for the party and….where is Black?” said Lovetan looking around Mayuyu still not realized the person was behind Mayuyu.
Then Mayuyu step to the side revealing Black, but with a different appearance.

The three girls were jaws dropping when they looks at Black.

“I was bringing her to find some new clothes for her and I also buy one for Takamina.” Explain Mayuyu.
The three were still freezing on their spot not moving a bit, still looking at Black.
Mayuyu sighed at them.
“Come on, Black. I want to see how Takamina is doing with Acchan now.” Said Mayuyu walking away leaving those three.
“W-Why don’t you just go home? Besides you are still wearing your uniform.” said Black doesn’t want to show herself like that to Acchan actually.
“No excuses Black.” Replied Mayuyu.
‘Just be patient Black…be patient…’ said Black to herself while sighed inwardly.

[Let’s skip!]

When Acchan saw Black, she also shocked to see Black with a new appearance.
But she still has her black aura when she glared at Acchan.
After that Mayuyu and Black are walking back home.
On their way, they bump into someone.
Since Black keep looking down when walking, she ended up bumping into someone.
“You??!” said Mayuyu to the person who bump into Black just now.

It was Sae.

The moment Sae looks up to see the person that she bumps into, she was totally dumbfounded.
‘Just like the others.’ Thought Mayuyu.
“Let’s go Black.” Said Mayuyu start walking away.
Sae was still in her position. xD

[It’s time for Takamina’s birthday!]

That day, all of them are going back home early to prepare for the party.
They told Acchan to not bringing Takamina to home until they text her to.
It’s already night.
“Is everything ready?” asked Miichan.
“All set!!” answered Jurina.
“Okay, I’ll text Acchan now.” Miichan say while taking out her phone to text Acchan to bring Takamina.
Before that, they switch off all the light in the house.
Kanon is waiting at the front door to send a signal whether they already arrived or not.
“They are here!” said Kanon. Then all of them started to prepare to surprise Takamina.
“Why is the house looks so dark?” asked Takamina curious.
“Let’s just go inside, okay?” said Acchan.
“Okay~”

Once they were inside, Acchan close Takamina’s eyes and signaling them to bring the cake.
They quickly bring the cake in front of Takamina and lit up the candles.
After that, Takamina open her eyes.

“HAPPY BIRTHDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYY!!! Said them in unison.

Takamina was indeed surprise because she doesn’t even remember that today is her birthday and she was so happy.
Then they start singing a birthday song to her and after that she blows the candles.
After that they all eating and chatting at the living room while giving their own present for Takamina.
Acchan was giving her a pink ribbon as a present.
“Everyone! Attention!!!” said Mayuyu while clapping her hand to get their attention.

Mayuyu smirk before she tells something.

“Now, we’re going for a real drink!!!”Shout Mayuyu that was joining by Jurina.
“Oh no…” Miichan face palm herself when hearing that.
“Real drink?” said Acchan curious.
“Real drink means, we’re going to be drunk tonight.” Explain Miichan.

“But, they are underage!” Said Black as Mayuyu and Jurina started to take out the alcohol drinks from the fridge that they secretly bought.
“It’s okay! Tomorrow is Saturday!! TGIF!!!” shout Miichan.

Actually, they were playing a game.
They were putting an empty bottle on a table, and then they spin the bottle. If the head of the bottle pointing to the person, that person have to take one shot. They play until they drunk. The one who still stand is the winner.
All of them were sitting on the floor around the round table.
All of them already have their one shot, but Black have more than five shot already.
But since Acchan and Black is a mafia, they were tough enough to take it. So they were still not drunk yet.
Everyone except for Takamina who was already down from 2 shot of drinks still continued playing to see who the winner is.

Kanon and Jurina already knocked out!

“I want to sleep~ I felt dizzy~~” said Kanon while walking to her room like a zombie.
“I follow you!” said Jurina following Kanon.

“Impressive, you two were good at this huh…?” said Miichan to Acchan and Black since they still looks calm. Miichan sounds drunk already.

Mayuyu is with her head down already then she fall on Black’s lap.
Black look at Mayuyu who’s her head is on her lap.
“Mayuyu, knocked out!” said Lovetan, and then she also got totally drunk.

“Lovetan, knocked out!” said Miichan drunk.

“You also good at this huh, Miichan…” said Acchan smirk to her.
“Well~ this is K-…M-Miichan!!! Hehehe~” said Miichan smirked back.
“Black, can you bring Mayuyu to her bed, I mean, the room that Jurina and Kanon enters just now…just let them three sleep together.” Said Miichan.
With that, Black carried Mayuyu to the room.
“I’ll bring Lovetan to our room then.” Said Miichan while lifting Lovetan and still walk drunkly.
After that Miichan went back to the living room.
“You can stay the night if you want.” Said miichan to them.
“I’ll go home.” Said Black then got up and walks to the front door.
“Anou...H-how about Takamina?” said Acchan while looking at Takamina who’s still laying on the floor.
“Huh? I forgot about this midget hehe~ Anou…Can you sleep with her for the night? Takamina…can’t sleep alone. Well, since Kanon already sleep with those two.Thats the room!” Said Miichan smirked in her mind then got up and walks to her room. We don't know whether Miichan is really drunk or she just have something in her mind~
“Ehh?” said Acchan.
‘Looks like I have to.’ Thought her then carried Takamina bridal style to her room.

Acchan put Takamina slowly on the bed. Before she got up, suddenly a pair of arms wrapped around her neck making her to fall on the small body.
Their face is only an inches apart.

“Acchan is beautiful…” mumbled Takamina in her sleep.
Acchan was totally red hearing that again from her.
Then, her eyes look down on the lips. The longer she looks at it, the more she wants to feels those lips.

*gulped*

Then she starts moving her lips closer to Takamina’s lips.

Takamina’s arms are still around her neck.
Acchan suddenly stopped her action.

‘W-what am I doing??!’ said Acchan to herself.

Before she started to move her body away,
Takamina suddenly tighten her arms making their lips to touch each other.

Acchan eyes widen…

But then she closed her eyes to enjoy the feelings.

T.B.C

p/s: Hmm...sorry if it bad, my mind is somewhere else when i write it. hehe
sorry,Wmatsui haven't make an appearance yet... :kneelbow:
Marimii?? let's see~ :P
hope you like the update~ :hee:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 10 update 09/03/13 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: Elo on March 09, 2013, 11:23:23 AM: yoshaaaa atsumina kisss hehe :inlove: :drool:

what will happen to black and mau I am so curious hehe :w00t: :drool: :D

thank you !!! I hope you will make marimii hehe :thumbsup

please update soon :bow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 10 update 09/03/13 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: cisda83 on March 09, 2013, 12:08:24 PM: Wah... Yuki was made over....Must be very pretty

Ah... Atsuko and Takamina are kissing...

What's going to happen next

I can't wait to find out

Thank you for the lovely update

:wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 10 update 09/03/13 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: stepk on March 10, 2013, 12:55:00 AM: Atsumina kiss... :inlove:
black and mayu they are more close than before. :panic:
great update :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 10 update 09/03/13 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: Kimcoton on March 10, 2013, 04:46:29 AM: Lol sae was left there in her position right? I wonder if she's still there hahaha
Well i cant blame her yukirin is way too gorgeous >.<
And yay!
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 10 update 09/03/13 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: leEwẬy on March 10, 2013, 05:24:42 AM: This chapter is great :on GJ:
I wonder what does Yuki look like when she didn't wear "Black theme" :on gay:
It must be very beautiful :nya:
Atsumina's kiss :imdead:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 10 update 09/03/13 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: FNK23 on March 10, 2013, 06:05:32 AM: mayu start to thinking about black, i hope she could be nice with black soon :3
perhaps she should buy some new "non-black" clothes for black and see that black can be cute as well as her too XDD
aah,takamina will held birthday partyyy, looking forward the party and acchan too~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 10 update 09/03/13 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: gek geki on March 13, 2013, 06:13:59 AM: YEAH THEN WHEN BLACK START THINGKING ABOUT MAYU?
AND WHEN RENA MEET JURINA?
AND WHAT HAPPEN WITH ACCHAN AND TAKAMINA ACTUALLY?
MARIMII?
YEAH SO MUCH SECRET
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 10 update 09/03/13 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: qweakb on March 16, 2013, 05:10:00 PM: Sorry that I did not realised that it had been updated! :mon freeze: :on blackhole: :on cloudeye: :mon slapself:
Both chapters are great!
yay.. Astumina kiss again :onioncheer:
I wonder what will happen next :mon mischief:
please make the Wmatsui appear soon. Can't wait to see their moment :kneelbow:
thank you for the update :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 11 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
Post by: chiqinna on March 20, 2013, 09:32:53 AM: Elo: yeah I'll make Marimii!! :lol:
cisda83: thanks~ hahah~ let's see next~
stepk: thanks for reading this fic!! :bow:
Kimcoton: If Sae is not in this chapter then she's still there then~ :lol:
leEwẬy: thanks for reading@@ :bow:
FNK23: yea...hope to see them more~ :D
gek geki: so many secret that even the author get confused~ :panic:
qweakb: How dare you did not realized my update!!!! :scolding: :temper: :on voodoo: :on kimbo: :mon zoom:
just kidding~ :on woohoo: hahaha :mon exhaust:

Chapter 11

It’s been several days Acchan did not seeing Takamina after the incident in the room. She was confused with her own feelings. What did she feels for her?
After she parts her lips from the sleeping Takamina’s that night, she falls asleep. Maybe she could not stand the alcohol anymore. When she wake up in the morning, she quickly stormed out of the house and goes home.

Shinoda’s mansion

One night, the owner of the mansion was waiting at the dining room, waiting for all the member of the house to sit on their own place. Looks like there’s something wrong when Mariko sitting at her place with a serious expression.
All of the members already there, only to wait for Mariko to speak.
Shinoda Mariko let out a soft sighed before start her talking.
“Maeda Atsuko how’s business?” asked her by calling her with a full name.
Everyone now it’s unusual when Mariko-sama, calling them with their full name.
“G-good.” Replied Acchan shortly doesn’t know what else to tell.
Mariko silent for a while.
“Maeda Atsuko, let me ask you again, how’s business?” She asks the same question again to Acchan. Acchan confused why she ask it again.
“B-business is going well.” Answered her again. The truth is she didn’t know what happen to their business lately. She gave it all to Sasshi to handle it after the last fight they had.
“Sasshi, how’s business? Tell me the truth.” This time she asked Sasshi the same question.
Sasshi nervously telling her the truth.
“O-our b-business…was d-down. Many other mafias had disrupted our business. They also take away some of our clients.” Tell Sasshi nervously afraid that she will get scolded by Mariko-sama.
Acchan who was sitting beside Sasshi shocked when she heard about their business.
But she keeps silent as she doesn’t know what to say.
“Did you hear that, Atsuko?” asked Mariko to Acchan who was startled.
“Y-yes. I’m sorry.” said Acchan knowing that she had not been taking care of the business even though she already has Sasshi to help her.
“Seriously, what are you doing all this time? “Mariko asks her.
“I’m…I…I’m sorry…” Acchan sighed. She doesn’t to tell anything that related to Takamina.
The only person who knows about it is only Black, who was only keeping silent sitting across Acchan, beside Rena.
She understands why Acchan did not tell Mariko the truth, she wants to protect Takamina.

“Who is she?” asked Mariko to Acchan making her confused.
“S-she? Who are you talking about?” ask Acchan hoping that Mariko doesn’t mean that the one she means is Takamina.
“Atsuko, don’t lie to me anymore. That girl who was always with you recently, who is she?” tell Mariko and asking her again.
‘How did she know?’ thought Acchan.
She hesitated before answering.
“She’s my friend. How did you know about her?” asked Acchan really curious.
“*sighed* I have my way…friend…huh~” replied Mariko with a small smirked on her face.
“Anyway, from now on, I want you to focus on our business and bring back Rappappa’s reputation. Rena, I want you to help her but remember, control yourself.” Tell Mariko.
“And Black…focus on your job, we don’t want to lose Watanabe Hiroshi as our client.” Said Mariko.
“Maybe I can help too, since I only work during the day, I can help our business at night. Beside, being a bodyguard is not that tiring though.” Said Black.
“If that what you want then. Remember, don’t expose yourselves too much.” Replied Mariko.

There were more that she wants to talk to them, but she want to take things slow.

After the meeting at the dining room they all go to their room. Except for Mariko who was still
Sitting alone at the dining room.
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It’s been a week Acchan focusing herself on their business.
She told Black to tell Takamina that she’s busy and couldn’t play with her.
Even though Acchan mostly worked at night, she also spends her day working…
To stop herself from thinking about her.

One night,

Jurina and Mayu were going to convenient store to buy something.
On their way home, they decided to walk on a dark alley.

It just for fun. :P

Suddenly, they were being cornered by gangsters.
Jurina quickly put herself in front of Mayu because Mayu don’t know how to fight meanwhile she had learn martial skills.
“Yabai~ Jurina~ what are we going to do now?” whispered Mayuyu to Jurina who had her back facing Mayuyu.
“Two girls…walking alone in a dark alley…aren’t you scared?” said one of the guys smirked.
Jurina and Mayuyu still quiet because they were thinking of a way to escape from them.
Unfortunately, the guys started their moves by walking closer to them.

“We have no choice.” Said Jurina then start to attack them.
Even though she knows how to fight, but it’s not enough to defeat 7 big guys alone.
Jurina started to get exhausted and the gangsters took this opportunity to beat her while Mayuyu just watching don’t know what to do.
She tried to fight them but instead one of the guys holds her while the others still fighting Jurina.
“Jurina!!!” shout Mayuyu when Jurina got beat by them.

Meanwhile

Black and Rena coincidently walking on the same alley when they heard someone’s screaming.
‘It sounds like Mayuyu…’ thought Black while looking around.
“Looks like someone are in danger…” said Rena.
Then they both went to where the sound comes from.
When Black saw Mayuyu she quickly run to the guy who hold her and kick him.
“Are you okay?” asked Black to Mayuyu.
“J-Jurina…” Mayuyu only look at Jurina who got beat.

Then one of the guy who beat Jurina suddenly scream in pain.
It was Rena who broke his arms making him groaned.
“I will kill you all!!!” said Rena with her Gekikara laugh.
Mayuyu with her mouth open looking at the scene while Black gave the rest to Rena to handle it.
Then Rena looks at the rest of the gangster.
And after that she turns her head to Jurina who already lying down on the ground.

‘She looks familiar.’ Thought Rena staring at the young girl.

One of the guys tries to punch Rena but Rena quickly realized it and stops his hand before it reaches her.
Then she finished them all in a short time.
The rest of the gangster already runs away.

Rena walks to Jurina who still on the ground with bruises all over her body.
She examines the young girl’s face.
Before she could touch her face, Mayuyu run to Jurina.
Rena stepped back to give a space for Mayuyu.
“Jurina! Are you okay?” asked Mayuyu holding Jurina in her arms.
“Ugghh~ I’m…okay~” said Jurina feeling the pain on her body.
“Let’s bring you to hospital-“said Mayuyu.
“N-no! I’m okay…let’s just going home…” said Jurina trying to get up but she fall back.

Mayuyu only sighed at Jurina.

“Fine~ Black, help me.” Said Mayuyu.
When Black is helping Jurina to get up, Rena was still in her deep thought that she didn’t realize that Jurina was looking at her.

After Jurina got up on her feet while her arms both on Mayuyu and Black’s shoulder, she still looking at Rena like she’s trying to figure out something in her mind.

Flashback
Rena going back home after school
When she entered the house, it was all mess.
The furniture was broken, there’s blood everywhere.
It seems like something had happened in this house.

Then she started running to her parent’s room to look for them.
She saw her mom and dad already on the ground with blood on their body.

“Mom! Dad!” shout Rena running towards them while crying.
“R-rena…g-go away…bring Jurina with you...w-we hide her in the store room…go now!” said her dad with pain.
“but-“
“Please…my dear, I...I’m sorry t-to hide this from you…actually-“
“I know it already dad, mom…don’t worry, I will always love you!” said Rena crying her eyes out.
“Thank you dear…please, t-take care...of Jurina…”before her father talk more, the sounds of footstep were heard from outside the room.
“G-go now Rena!!!” said her mother.

Rena quickly runs to the store room without being caught by them.
Jurina who saw her sister quickly run to her.

“Rena-ch-“
“Shhhh!!!” said Rena to Jurina while put her hand on Jurina’s mouth.
Rena quietly brought Jurina out of the house without being noticed and run far away from there.

Once they were safe and far from the house, they stop and take a rest for while.
“Rena-Chan…why are we running? Let’s go back to our house~” said Jurina who’s still a kid.

Rena bent down to the same level with Jurina and said,
“We can’t go back there Jurina. Let’s find a new place to live…”
“B-but, how about mommy and daddy?” asked Jurina innocently.

Rena was trying to hold her tears.

“Mom and dad are okay. For now, let’s find a place to sleep tonight okay?” said Rena to Jurina while holding both her hands.
“Un…”
She felt relieved that Jurina is a good kid and listening to her.
‘I promised mom, dad…I’ll take care of Jurina…’ said Rena to herself’
End of flashback

t.b.c

I'm sorry if it bored~ :kneelbow: or is it me who get bored of it? :dunno:
Actually, :mon whimper: it's not that I'm soo busy with other things... :mon impatient:
It just.... lazinesssssssssssssssssssssssss~ :mon sweat:
hhehehe~ k.bye~ :mon bye:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 11 update 20/03/13
Post by: FlameHazeKatsu on March 20, 2013, 09:47:46 AM: Awwww....noooo...*cough* *cough* I'm sure Takamina is sad there since she didń't see Acchan for a "while." Lolol and How did Jurina and Rena got separated... DX but hah...they saw each other again... xD hehehee
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 11 update 20/03/13
Post by: Elo on March 20, 2013, 10:54:13 AM: Takamina is sure sad after acchan didnt see her for oe week

eehh wmatsui are siblings I hope they will remember each other and I hope it will be Wmatsui

you know I love mayuki atsumina and Wmatsui

keep it up
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 11 update 20/03/13
Post by: kurogumi on March 20, 2013, 11:20:10 AM: They still remember each other right?well rena do,but jurina?we still didn't know it,she still a kid when she got separated with rena

Cant wait the next.thank for thd update
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 11 update 20/03/13
Post by: Hii_chan on March 20, 2013, 04:24:28 PM: Poor Acchan you cant meet Takamina :banghead:
finally Rena and Jurina meet each other
I wonder why they separated before :?
thank for update :thumbsup
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 11 update 20/03/13
Post by: Kimcoton on March 20, 2013, 05:45:46 PM: Well since sae's not in this chap, i guess it's safe to assume that she's still stuck on her spot xD
And a little sneak peek at wmatsui's past eh~ it seems like they actually remember about each other but are not quite sure if it's really them hahaha Thanks for the update :D
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 11 update 20/03/13
Post by: Haruko on March 21, 2013, 05:16:45 AM: aww no wmatsui -____-.. aww poor atsuko is so confused..
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 11 update 20/03/13
Post by: cisda83 on March 21, 2013, 07:40:10 AM: Okay... so Mariko is fine with Atsuko being absent... she just wants Atsuko to go back to work only....

Eh... the way they describe the job, seem only need to be attended at night mostly and in day time sometimes... then she can always work around that.... to play with Minami...

Even if she likes Minami or even loves her... she can't do anything... coz' Minami has a understanding of a toddle... That would be a pedophile...

Ah... so Rena's adopted parents are being killed by gangsters? Who?

If she escaped with Jurina... How? When? Why they separated?

How did Jurina come across Miichan and Minami..?

Did Jurina recognize her sister?

What's going to happen next?

I can't wait to find out

Thank you for the lovely update

:wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 11 update 20/03/13
Post by: leEwẬy on March 21, 2013, 02:59:07 PM: Interesting...Who kill Rena and Jurina's parents? The gangsters? :OMG:
Why they are separating now? What caused that? :scared:
When Black see Mayu, she immediately go and rescue her. :hehehe:
Is it bacause her job or maybe something else? :kekeke:
Hope you'll update soon :hee:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 11 update 20/03/13
Post by: qweakb on March 21, 2013, 03:41:16 PM: I am really sorry about it! :mon whimper: :mon waterworks: :mon runcry: :mon hanky:
please forgive me :mon innocent: :gmon tears: :kneelbow:

yay..Wmatsui finally meet! :luvluv1: :mon fyeah:
Hope that Wmatsui will remember each other :mon taichi: haha

Will Takamina be in danger after Mariko know about her existence? Will takamina be back to normal? :? :?

Please update soon ><
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 12 update 24/03/13
Post by: chiqinna on March 24, 2013, 08:48:38 AM: Chapter 12

Let’s continue the flashback~ ;)

That night, Rena found a place for both her and Jurina to stay for the night.
It was a cheap motel and Rena begged the owner that she would pay her when she found a job.
At first, the owner declined them but seeing Jurina still a kid, she had a pity on them so she gave them a room.

‘I need to find a job tomorrow morning to pay for the rent…’ said Rena to herself while lying on the bed beside the sleeping Jurina.
Then she looked at Jurina that already sleeping due to tiredness after long running.
She stroked her hair softly without waking her up.
“Even though you are not my real sister…but you still my family…mom and dad were probably gone now…I’ll protect you Jurina…” said Rena
as the tears falling to her cheeks.

That early morning, Rena woke up early so that she can find a job.
She told Jurina to stay in the room and don’t go out because she’s afraid that the people that kill their parent might be searching for them.
Fortunately for her, she found a job that morning and she had to start right that morning also because the boss needed a worker.
She worked as a waiter at a restaurant.
It was hard because it’s her first time working thus never have an experience.
But she keeps on working hard as she needs money as soon as possible.
After work, she earned some money from her boss and she uses that to buy food for Jurina.
.
.
.
.
.
It’s been a month they had live like that. Rena has stopped her school since she had to take care of Jurina.
Jurina always asking her about their parent, she keeps telling her that they are fine.
She had to lie to her since Jurina still too young to bear the pain she already felt.

It was a usual day as Rena coming back to the motel as she finished working.
As soon as she arrives there, she heard the sound of Jurina crying out loud.
She quickly runs inside to see why her sister is crying.
She was shocked when she saw a two man with black coat holding Jurina while Jurina is struggling with them.
As soon as Jurina saw her sister, she cried even louder.
“Rena-Chan!!!” shout Jurina crying for help.
“Jurina!!! Let her go!!!” shout Rena mad trying to take Jurina from them.
But Rena was not strong enough that she got kick by one of the big man.
Still she did not give up that easily. She kicks his ball and the man couldn’t say anything as he is holding where he got kick.
Then she jumps on the man that holding Jurina and bites their ear.
The man was screaming in pain and he have to let go of Jurina to take Rena off him.
He then grabs Rena’s hair and pulled her hair making Rena scream.
He pushed Rena away. Rena saw a long stick near her so she take it
then goes to the man who try to get closer to Jurina and beat him from behind.
She keeps beating him with the stick. The other man gets up and Rena saw it so she beat his balls for the second time.
Rena quickly takes Jurina’s hand and running out of the motel while the two man still struggling with pain.
When they were out, Rena looked around to make sure that there was no black-coat man outside.
After that, Rena and Jurina run for their life afraid that those man is chasing them from behind.
After a while running, Rena look behind them and see the man is nowhere to be seen.
It seems like they are in safe place. Both of them are panting hard due to the running.
“Rena-Chan…I’m tired~” said Jurina panting.
“*pant* Jurina, let’s rest here for a while…okay*pant*” said Rena to her while kneeled down hugging her sister.
‘I’ll protect you no matter what happen Jurina.’ Said in her mind.
While they were still hiding, Rena suddenly saw one of the black-coat men from afar walking around like looking for them.
Rena was thinking of a way to get them out of the place.
Then she saw a van near them. She thinks of an idea.
They go to behind the van and open the back of the car and she put Jurina inside.
She told Jurina to keep quiet and when she was about to goes in, she heard a man from behind her.
It was him.
“Jurina, don’t go out okay until I come here okay.” said Rena to her.
“Un.” Nodded Jurina.
She quickly closed the back door of the van.

Then she faces the man.
“If you want to kill me, just kill me, don’t kill my sister!” shout Rena to him.
The man walked to her. Rena thought he wants to kill her but he instead walk passed her.
Then Rena quickly stopped him by jump on him.
The man hit Rena making her fall. Then there comes the other man from behind.
They all beating and punch Rena.

Meanwhile Jurina felt like her sister is taking so long time outside.
But then she felt like the van she was inside is moving.
Feeling worried about her sister, Jurina look out from the back window to call her sister.
When she looks outside, she saw Rena lying down with the man still beating her.
While Rena could only gave a sad smile to her sister when she saw the vehicle is bringing her sister away.
Jurina was too shocked to cry or say anything when she saw her sister got beat by those bad people.

‘Good bye, Jurina.’ Said Rena in her mind.

End of flashback

[How Rena became Gekikara?? Hmmm…stay tuned until next next next next next update~ :P]

Present
Jurina already in her bed resting but her mind is still somewhere else.
“Seriously, why you guys use that road when there is a safe and short way to our house. Now look what happen! If Black and her friend were not there to help you, I don’t know what would happen to you two!” whined Miichan enter the room and cleaning on her wounds.
‘Here comes the mother of the house~’ said Mayu in her mind while standing in the room beside Black.
Rena is standing beside the window looking at Jurina.
She is still thinking whether the one that she looked at now is her long lost sister.
‘Should I just ask her? I’m afraid she doesn’t remember me. Or is she not my Jurina…’ thought Rena.

“Mayu, I need to talk to you.” Said Black to Mayu while walking out of the room.
Mayu still standing in her position.
Realizing that, Black stopped at the door and look at her.
“Nezumi...” called Black to Mayu.
Mayu sighed and then followed Black.

After the small talk, Mayu back in the room with a pout face.

“We have to go home, Rena.” Said Black at the door.
Jurina suddenly stopped her deep thought when she heard Black calling that name.
Rena walks to the door.
She suddenly stopped walking and looked at Jurina like she wanted to talk to her.

They are looking at each other as they can felt there is something between them.
Rena couldn’t speak out any words so she just walk out of the room and go home.

“It’s all thanks to both of them that you are still alive right now…” said Miichan continuing her lecture.

“Rena…..chan.” said Jurina in a low voice but still could be heard by Miichan.

T.B.C~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 12 update 24/03/13
Post by: DC2805 on March 24, 2013, 11:35:21 AM: Hope Rena and Jurina can quickly reunited and get back together, 'cause there is still such deep ~~sisterly~~ love between them...
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 12 update 24/03/13
Post by: leEwẬy on March 24, 2013, 11:59:00 AM: Hope Jurina's and Rena's problems will be solved :cool2:
I'll try to wait for your next next next next next update to know why Rena became Gekikara :prayers:
What did Black said? Why Mayu had a pouted on her face when they came back :kekeke:
Hope your next chapter'll answer my questions :hee:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 12 update 24/03/13
Post by: cisda83 on March 24, 2013, 02:22:41 PM: OMG... Rena is so good.... still taking care of Jurina...even if she knew that they were not blood related...

Also sacrifice her education, her future and her life to protect Jurina....

Ah... so that's how they separated.... but what happened to Rena after that....?

How did Rena become Geki... and also a gangster member?

Ah... they seem to recognize each other subconsciously but not able to be sure

And both are reluctant to ask the other.... to be sure...

Jurina at least recognize and still remembered 'Rena' her sister....

How is it going to develop...the relation between Rena and Jurina...?

What was Yuki and Mayu discussing about that made Mayu quite upset...?

Can't wait to see more

Thank you for the lovely update as always

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 12 update 24/03/13
Post by: kurogumi on March 24, 2013, 02:53:04 PM: Mayu pout really cute~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 12 update 24/03/13
Post by: Haruko on March 24, 2013, 08:34:48 PM: Ohh they are not real sisters.... aww sad past
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 12 update 24/03/13
Post by: mo-chan on March 24, 2013, 08:47:41 PM: again black won't Mayu her :smhid
I think she sshould ask Rena or Acchan XD
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 12 update 24/03/13
Post by: qweakb on March 25, 2013, 05:58:33 AM: Wonder who wanted to kill Rena and Jurina's parents!

Hope that they will have encouragement to acknowledge each other then become lover :mon inluv:

Wander what had happen between Black and Mayu when they went out for talk..
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 12 update 24/03/13
Post by: Kimcoton on March 25, 2013, 10:27:18 AM: Woah~ rena is sooooo cool ! she did everything to protect jurina.
How cool could that be!? and what did mayu and black talk about? Hmmmm..
thanks for the update :D
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 12 update 24/03/13
Post by: gek geki on April 06, 2013, 08:41:50 AM: THIS FIC IS MY SUNSHINE~

IF GEKI RECOGNISE JURINA,AND JURINO TOO
WILL JURINA ACCEPT RENA? I MEAN,MAYBE JURINA THINK RENA ABANDONE HER AT THAT TIME
AND MAYBE SHE'S MAD CAUSE RENA DONT TRY TO SEARCH HER
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
Post by: chiqinna on April 10, 2013, 10:32:26 AM: Chapter 13

Acchan was lying on her bed staring at the white ceiling thinking about someone.

Acchan’s pov

*Sighed*

I wonder what she is doing right now…
It’s been weeks I didn’t see her.
Takamina, do you miss me?
Because I miss you…so much!!

Arrghhh!!!
*flip her body and cover her face with the pillow*

Why am I acting like this?!?!!
What have you done to me??
I’ve tried hard to avoid thinking about you by working all day and going to casino...
But still you… *sighed* you keep on running in my head!!
Aren’t you tired?!! Running in my head like this??!!

End of Acchan’s pov

While Acchan was still frustrating, someone knocking on the door.
“Acchan are you in there?”Asked Mariko who was knocking the door just now.
Acchan got up sitting on the bed while fixing her hair and answered her.
“Y-yes…come in.”
Mariko come in and dragged a chair then sit in front of Acchan who sit at the edge of the bed.
Mariko looked at her for a while.
“Are you okay?” asked Mariko seeing Acchan’s frown face.
Acchan looks down and took a deep breath.
“Just tell me what it is Acchan...” said Mariko knowing something is bothering that girl.

“Marichan…c-can I ask you something?” asked Acchan with a low voice.
Mariko chuckled hearing Acchan calling her like that. She lean her back on the chair.
“Just ask me…anything” replied Mariko.
“Uhmm…have you ever always thinking of someone in your mind…?
I mean…like you can’t get the person out of your mind…” Asked Acchan while playing with her bed sheet.
Mariko smirked with the question.
“It was that girl right? On your mind…” asked Mariko without answering her question.
Acchan slowly nodded.
“*sighed* I can’t believe that you would fall for Takamina…” said Mariko looking at the window.
Acchan was shocked hearing Mariko knew her name.
“H-how-“
“-Did I know her name? Is that what you want to say?” Interrupted Mariko.
“Y-yes...” replied Acchan.
“Hmmm…Let’s just say that she’s my old friend. And I’ve been watching you two before…” Mariko says.
“You mean…she’s a mafia too…I mean before??” asked Acchan.
“No she’s not…we’re friend…but in other world, we’re like rivals. It’s hard to explain this…” said Mariko sigh.
Acchan was still trying to process everything.
“Don’t worry Acchan, she’s not a cop.” Smiled Mariko.
“Then what is she?” Asked Acchan again.
“Hmmmm…I can’t tell you that…the author already glaring at me now...” Said Mariko.
“Tell me Acchan…you like her don’t you?” asked Mariko smiling to Acchan.
Acchan blushed when Mariko asked her.
“So you do like her…” smirked Mariko.
“I just…*sighed* I don’t know…what happen to her actually? That she becomes like that?” asked Acchan curious.
“You know Acchan, better you ask Miichan. She knows more than me.” Said Mariko.
“You know Miichan too??” Asked Acchan looking at her.
Mariko got up and goes to the door. Before she walked out, she turned to look at Acchan and smiled.
‘What is that smile means to?’ said Acchan to herself.

*Meanwhile*

At school

“Mayuyu, are you going to school tomorrow night?” asked Mayuyu’s friend.
“For what?” asked Mayuyu confused.
“Ehh?? Don’t you know? Tomorrow night is our school cross-dressing competition!!!” said her friend.
“Really? I haven’t made any preparation for that…” said Mayuyu.
“Well, you still have time today…you should go Mayuyu…it has to be awesome like last year!” said her friend excited.
“You’re right, I should go tomorrow night.” Said Mayuyu.
Suddenly she remembered something.

Flashback when Mayuyu and Black having a small talk.

“What is it?” asked Mayuyu annoyed.
“From now on, If you want to go somewhere at night, call me and I’ll come with you.” Said Black.
Mayuyu smirked.
“What would you do if I didn’t call you?” Said Mayuyu.
Black suddenly grabbed Mayu’s shirt and slammed her softly on the wall.
Mayuyu’s eyes widen by her action.
Black looked into mayuyu’s eyes and told her,
“If you still want me as your bodyguard then, or not I will asked your father
to find other bodyguard for you. Do you want the same thing happen twice like tonight?”

‘Is she threatening me just now?’ thought Mayuyu.

“N-no.” answered Mayuyu pouted.
‘And I don’t want other bodyguard…’ said her in her mind.

End of flashback.

“It can’t be helped then…” mumbled Mayuyu while looking out of the window.

At Miichan’s bakery

Miichan was busy writing a list of ingredients to buy when
A tall figure like a model walking into the bakery.
As she approached the counter where Miichan is still looking down writing something,
Miichan sense a customer is in front of her so she looks up and greeted her.
“Good Evening-“as Miichan saw that person she was shocked and couldn’t say anything.
“Good Evening.” Replied Mariko still with her black glasses on.
“Are you here…to buy something...Shinoda-sama? Asked Miichan raising her eyebrow.
“Nope. I’m just…visiting.” Replied Mariko smiled.
Miichan put both her hand on the counter and looking at Mariko with eyes half open.
“I just want to tell you something.” Mariko said.

Miichan sighed then told her worker to take care of the counter while she brings Mariko to the back room.
Mariko sit on a chair with a big desk in front her while Miichan making a hot chocolate for them.
“Looks like your business going well…” said Mariko looking around the room.
Miichan didn’t answer her and just putting a cup of hot chocolate in front of Mariko and she took a sit at the opposite.
“What is it that you came here by yourself just to tell me something?” Asked Miichan.
Mariko took a sip of her hot chocolate.

“Hmmm…long time no see you.” Said Mariko.
Miichan narrowed her eyes to Mariko and put both her hands on the table and intertwined them.
“Just tell me Mariko…I have worked to do.” Miichan says.
“*sighed* fine~ I just want to tell you about Acchan…”
Miichan shocked.
“Acchan? How did you know her?!!” said Miichan rising voice a bit.

Mariko let out a small laugh.

“Acchan is my group’s member, the new ace.” Replied Mariko.
“WHAAAT??!!! Miichan was shocked hearing it from Mariko.
“Calm down Gachapin~~ She’s not that bad…she’s a good girl.” Explain Mariko.
“But she and Takamina…”
“I know…I’ve seen them once. You know about it too right?” said Mariko.

Miichan nodded.

“But still she’s a mafia like you!! It could danger Takamina’s life you know!!
She’s not ‘that’ Takamina right now as you can see!” said Miichan worried.
“You’re right…” said Mariko.

Both of them sighed. Then they look at each other.
“Acchan likes her.” Said Mariko looking at the cup she’s holding.
“I know…Takamina likes her more…” replied Miichan.
“But if Takamina knows who Acchan really is…she might get mad at her...or herself…” said Miichan again.
“Miichan, like you said, Takamina is not ‘that’ Takamina right now. So I think it safe if they are together.” Explain Mariko.
“You’re talking like they are lovers you know…” said Miichan looking at Mariko.

“Can’t you see? There’s something between them? You know like…they keep thinking about each other...” smirked Mariko.
“Ahh~~ Now I realized…Takamina doesn’t look happy recently because Acchan is not coming to see her. And I heard from Mayuyu she always ask Black about her...hmm” said Miichan while doing thinking pose.
“Wait, Black? Black too?!!” said Mariko shocked.
“Well, Black is Mayuyu’s bodyguard. You know her? Don’t tell me she’s a mafia too??!!!” shout Miichan.
“*sighed* well, yes Black is my girl…seriously it’s been 5 years I leave you guys but so many have changed…*sighed*” Said Mariko sighing.

Then both of them sighed again.

“Author-san sure knows how thing goes…” said Mariko rubbing the edge of her forehead.
“There’s still a lot of thing that I need to know. And you must tell me EVERYTHING. Mariko…” said Miichan glaring at Mariko.
“Wrong, it’s WE my dear~ so…Are you going back to your old job?” smirked Mariko.
“Uhmmmm…I don’t think so…besides, it’s not complete without no3b~ :P and now Takamina is a ‘kid’…I can’t.” replied Miichan.
“Well then, I tell you everything, and you tell me everything you know. Deal?” said Mariko.
“Deal~ gossip girl~” smirked Miichan.

to be continued~

Hey, anyone? :?
It's been a looong time~~ hahaha :lol:
and before that,
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TAKAMINA!!!

:on BDay: :on BDay: :on BDay: :on BDay: :on BDay:
I LOVE YOU SOU-CHAN!!!! MUAAHHH MUAHHH MUAHHH!!!
Uhummm...so...how was it? If there's anything wrong with the update please tell me minna.. :kneelbow:
and if you have some idea just tell me~ :mon misch:
k.bye :mon loveflower:
Oh, and I'll try to update more often~ well, if nothing goes wrong~ :mon santa4:
I gave you a hint about that someone already~ :cool1:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
Post by: FlameHazeKatsu on April 10, 2013, 11:29:03 AM: DANSO!!! later on~? xD woooot! And what the hell seriously happen to Takamina that she's acting like that! >_< So Takamina was also a mafia before then...? Well anyways~ thanks for the chapter! xD looking forward to the next ones~
~~can I wish Takamina turns back into a badass mafia...~~ xD
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
Post by: arrow27 on April 10, 2013, 12:53:42 PM: Thanks for the update! Very interesting chapter! A few revelations where made like that everyone pretty much knows each other & has a past together! I'm really curious about "that" Takamina. What she was like b4/who she was & what happened!!!
Thanks again! I look forward to the next chapter :D
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
Post by: qweakb on April 10, 2013, 05:05:22 PM: yeay an update! :onioncheer: :whistle: :on woohoo:

interesting.. did not really thought that takamina, miichan and haruna will be no3b in marfia.. haha

now it getting more curious about takamina and acchan past!

Can't wait to know what Black will react when she saw Mayu's danso..haha

please update soon :mon pray2:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
Post by: cisda83 on April 11, 2013, 12:56:40 AM: Aachan misses Minami so much...

Hahaha.... how can Minami in Atsuko's mind is tired of running... :lol:

Mariko knew Takamina from before....

Eh... rival... what kind?

May be 'love' rival... Mariko likes Miichan but Miichan likes Takamina... or unable to leave Takamina alone in her condition?

Curious here.... more mysteries to solve

Ara... Mayu starting to like Black... she didn't want any other bodyguard

Mayu is going to go shopping for her cross-dress costume with Black

Going to be great shopping experience for Black :lol:

Ah... so No3b is mafia group... and Mariko used to be in their group...

What kind of Mafia was Takamina, Haruna and Miichan...?

What happen to Takamina that made her become like a child?

Where did Haruna go...?

So the most important person for Takamina and Miichan is Haruna?

Can't wait to see what happen next

Hope you can answer some of the mystery... like make a flashback chapter or something...

Ah... you made me so impatient to know everything about everything...

Great update as always... making it more and more interesting

Thank you for the lovely update

:wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:

PS: The one to be in danger if Takamina and Atsuko together would be Takamina with her current condition. Some more, no one seem to recognize Takamina anymore as a mafia member.

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
Post by: Haruko on April 11, 2013, 02:50:13 AM: ohh poo minami T_T
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
Post by: Hii_chan on April 11, 2013, 08:00:00 AM: I'm so curious here
at first, I thought that no3b is mafia but mariko say they weren't
what did happen to MInami and No3b
and how was that Minami like?
argh..I'm so confused
chiquina-san please update soon
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
Post by: Kimcoton on April 11, 2013, 10:20:02 AM: Lol cross dressing competition huh xD cant wait ! Since black is coming she might just fall for mayu hahahaha
Thanks for the update :D
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
Post by: leEwẬy on April 11, 2013, 02:53:19 PM: Cross-dressing competiton :on woohoo:
Yuki also come to :on gay:
Can't wait to see what happen :on speedy:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
Post by: DC2805 on April 11, 2013, 04:21:06 PM: Can't wait to see Mayu in the cross-dressing competition ! must be so Kakoi!!!

I bet Black will go :on bleed: :luvluv1: :nya:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
Post by: chiqinna on April 12, 2013, 12:15:38 PM: There is some misunderstanding here, Takamina, Miichan Haruna is not a mafia. Hiichan was right. :)
Maybe you should read chapter 13 again to confirm it~ :P thanks for commenting! I appreciates all your comments and love it!! :luvluv1: :luvluv2:
So many mysteries~ :dizzy: hahaha :lol:

Chapter 14

After school

As usual, Black was waiting Mayuyu at the school gate.
“Mayuyu!!! Wait for me!!” said Lovetan while running to Mayuyu who walk ahead of her.
Mayuyu ignore her but still walking slowly towards Black.
“Mayuyu, are you going for the competition tomorrow night?” Asked Lovetan.
“Of course I will. I must win this competition again.” Said Mayuyu smile to Lovetan.
“So…what type of ikemen you will be this time?” Lovetan ask her while walking beside her.
“Hmmmmm…I haven’t thought about it yet…” tell Mayuyu.
“Last year you dress as a young doctor…and you won.
I think you should dress like that again…haha and being chased by many girls~
I remembered last time they chased you all the way to our house…” Said Lovetan while
imagining what happen during the competition last year.
“Yeah~ yeah~ whatever…this time I have a bodyguard. I don’t think it would be a problem.” Smirked Mayuyu
while Black just followed her from behind.
“You’re right…” replied Lovetan nodding her head slowly.

That evening, Mayuyu and Black going to clothes shop.
She already has an idea for the competition but she won’t tell anyone yet.

Meanwhile,

Jurina and Kanon already finish their extra classes and heading to their home.
Jurina is still thinking about Rena. She really wants to know whether that girl related to her past since she doesn’t really remember anything about her past.
‘I need to ask her’ thought Jurina.
As they were walking home, they did not realize that Rena was watching her from afar.
‘I need to see her once more…’ said Rena to herself.
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Today, someone had been released from prison. Two black-coat men came out from a black luxury car.
They came to escort him.
“How are you, sir? We came to bring you home.” Said one of the men.
He smiled a little and stretching his arms.
“5 years holiday is not that bad though…” he said then goes inside the car.

They arrived at the big house.
A man came out from the house with his walking stick.
He approached the man that just arrived and hugged him.
“Welcome back, my son.” Said the old average man to him.
“It’s been five years, dad.” Said him smiled.
The two father and son smirked to each other.

Okay Let’s skip to the danso night!!!! :sweat:

Mayuyu is still at home waiting for Black.
Lovetan, Jurina and Kanon already at the school since early because they
have to help for the preparation since they did not enter the competition.
Mayuyu saw Miichan wearing a casual clothes like she want to go out somewhere.
Miichan was in hurry.
“Where are you going?” Asked Mayuyu.
“Ah! Eh…I have a dinner with my friend tonight, take care of Takamina!!” said Miichan already out of the house.
“W-wait!!! *sighed* I have to go out too!” said Mayuyu but Miichan already far away so she couldn’t hear her.

“Then, who’s going to take care of Takamina if I go out too? Black?” said Mayuyu to herself.
But then she has one idea. Mayuyu smirked thinking about what to do.
She took out her phone and text Black.
Black was about to go out of her room when she got the message from Mayuyu.
Black was confused when she read the message.
Then Black goes to Acchan’s bed to do what Mayu told her to.

In Acchan’s room, Acchan was looking out at the window.
She heard the door open so she turns around and saw Black.
There was an awkward moment for a while.
“Ano…I just want to tell that I heard from Mayuyu that…Takamina is…sick.” Black said to Acchan.
Acchan was shocked hearing that.
“What??!! I need to see her.” Said Acchan suddenly stormed out of her room to go to see Takamina.

‘That was fast reaction…’ thought Black.

‘But I saw Takamina is alright and healthy this morning…I wonder what Mayuyu is planning actually…’ said Black to herself then she also started heading to Mayuyu.
Acchan was running all the way to Takamina’s house while Black already arrived at the house. Well, you know… :whistle: teehee~

Mayuyu and Black are at the living room.
“Mayu-Chan…where is everyone?” said Takamina walking to the living room.
“Miichan is having a dinner she said…and the rest is already at school, and I also going to school now.” Explain Mayuyu while sitting waiting for someone.
“You said Takamina is sick.” Mumbled Black but still can be heard Mayuyu.

Mayuyu only smirked.

Suddenly the front door opens revealing Acchan panting with worried face.
Acchan then bowed and said,”Ah, sorry for intruding your house.”

As soon as Takamina saw Acchan, her smiles growing bigger.
“Acchann!!!” scream Takamina happily running to Acchan and hug her tightly.
Acchan was still confused but she slowly hugging Takamina back.
“I really miss Acchan~~~” said Takamina still hugging her.
“Eh??” the only word that Acchan could say.

After a while, they part the hug session~
“I thought you were sick…”said Acchan when she saw Takamina is all healthy.
“Sorry for lying to you. Takamina is not sick. I just need someone to take care of Takamina because everyone was all out tonight. Gomen~” said Mayuyu walking to them.
“Sou ka…” replied Acchan.
“We have to go now, bye~ and take care of Takamina!!!” said Mayuyu smirked then walk out to the front door followed by Black.

Acchan realize that they were alone now.
“I miss to play with Acchan~” mumbled Takamina.
“I miss Takamina too~”said Acchan smiled seeing Takamina pout face.
“Ne Acchan, do you want to play with me?” Asked Takamina then smiling widely because
she was too happy seeing Acchan again after a long time.
“But its night, w-we can’t go to playground.” Said Acchan.
“Mou~ we can play here also…I always play this video game with Mayu-Chan and Jurina-chan.” Said
Takamina taking Acchan’s hand and drag her to the living room.
“I see…” said Acchan while sitting at the couch and just watching Takamina setting the video game to play with Acchan.
The Takamina gives her one of the game controller.
‘H-how am I going to play this??!!’ thought Acchan as it was her first time playing that kind of game.

Meanwhile

Miichan already arrived at the restaurant where she and Mariko planned to meet.
They were at the second floor at the restaurant to take a good view.
The wall at the second floor was all glasses and you can see everything outside.
“Sorry for late…” said Miichan as she sat down on the chair and Mariko sat across her.
“Take your order first.” Said Mariko.
After Miichan take order for her foods, they started to talk.

“So…how’s Acchan become Rappappa’s member? And ace?” Asked Miichan.
“Well, I found her 4 years ago…she’s running from a gangster and I save her…
she said nothing about why she was being chased…one day, I saw her fighting some
street gangster so I just ask her to join me…and the reason why she’s the ace is because…
she has that kind of aura that Yuko have…” explain Mariko.
“I see…so you’re searching for a new replacement for Yuko?” Asked Miichan again.
“Well, since Yuko retire from the group, Rappappa’s reputation has dropped.
I have to find new ace and I found her. Even though Yuko is fiercer than her…” replied Mariko.
“So how about Black?” Asked Miichan.
“Black was not my member actually, she was a member of our rival but they betrayed her and they kill all of her family, the only left was her…she was lucky to be saved by Watanabe Hiroshi, my client and after that she said she wants to join me.” Explain Mariko.
“No wonder she was Mayuyu’s bodyguard…” said Miichan looking at the food being put on their table.
“Mayuyu? Watanabe Mayu?” Mariko says confused.
“Yeah…Watanabe Hiroshi’s only daughter, but I never met his father actually. But if Black is your member, why did she becomes a bodyguard?” asked Miichan.
“Well, even though she is my member but we need to satisfy our clients, plus Black owed her life to him so she worked with him also.” Tell Mariko.
“Sou ka…”

Meanwhile

Mayuyu is in the dressing room at school to prepare for her turn.
Black was at the guardian’s place since they were also students coming with their parents.
Mayuyu already wears her clothes.
~~You mean…like this??!!~~
(http://i.imgur.com/nhekc.jpg)
“Kakkoiiiiii!!! Mayu-kun!!!!!” said some fangirling student when they saw Mayuyu inside the dressing room. They were peeking for the outside actually.
There were also other competitors in there.
Mayu was looking at herself at the big mirror.
“Hmm…not bad.” Said her while fixing her clothe.

Suddenly someone hug Mayuyu from behind making her squealed.
Mayuyu look behind to see the person.
“Lovetan!!! Don’t scare me like that!!” shout Mayuyu to Lovetan who smirked to her.
“Awww~~ Mayu-kun so kawaii when she’s mad~ ahahaha!” laughed Lovetan.
“What are you doing here?” asked Mayuyu.
“I just want to say good luck to you! I have to go now bye~” said Lovetan walking out of the room.

Back to Marimii

As they were eating, Miichan saw a man comes out from a black car.
“Hey, Mariko, look…” said Miichan to Mariko to look at the direction.
Mariko stopped eating when she saw the man.
“Looks like he already got released from the prison.” Said Miichan.
The man with his people entered the casino that was across the restaurant they were at.
“And we know what’s that mean, he’s back.” Mariko says serious.

“By the way, I want to ask you something, do you know someone’s name Rena?” asked Miichan.
“Rena? She’s a member of mine too. Why?”Asked Mariko to Miichan curious.
“Does she have younger sister?” asked Miichan again.
“I don’t know…why?”
“Nothing. You still remember Jurina right?” Asked Miichan.
“Yes, why she’s still with you?” replied Mariko.
“Un, Takamina insist that we should bring her home so...” said Miichan shrugged her shoulder.
“And, I think Jurina told me that she had an older sister called Rena-Chan when she was still kid but I don’t think she remember about it.” Added Miichan.
“Rena-Chan? Hmmm…maybe they are related…who knows?” said Mariko.

Meanwhile

The competition already started. The participant has to walk and showed their charming smile so that the judges will gave them more marks.
It was Mayuyu’s turn to show up.
Her fans already screaming even before she goes up to the stage.
When she walks on the stage, the audience started to scream and Mayuyu showing her charming smile.
Black saw her on the stage with the cross-dressing.

‘Mayu…yu??’ said Black in her mind.

Mayuyu saw Black was looking at her so she wink at her making all the girls screaming loudly.
Black looking away hides her blush. ‘What is this feeling?’ said Black to herself when she felt her heart is beating faster.

After all the participant finished, it was time to judge their performance.
Long after that, they announced the winner. It looks like Mayuyu win again this year.
And also, it looks like many fan girls will follow her home tonight.

As Mayuyu was about to enter the dressing room to change her clothes, suddenly there was bunch of girls running to her from the opposite site while screaming her name.
“Why there’s always no time to change!?!! I need to run now!” Mayuyu said as she run from them.
Black was waiting for her outside.

As Mayuyu was hiding from the crazy fans, she saw Black was waiting for her at the gate.
Mayuyu walking to Black but then she heard a loud screaming from behind.
It was them, but more of them are going after her.
“So many??!! I’m tired to run already!!” said Mayuyu. Mayuyu got an idea.
Suddenly she jumps on Black’s back.
“Just run and don’t look back!” Command Mayuyu to Black while putting her arms tightly around Black’s neck.
But Black looks back also and when she saw them, her eyes widen and give a shocked expression.
“I told you just run already!!!” shout Mayuyu making Black started to run faster.
To the crazy fan, they were confused because Mayuyu suddenly disappeared in front of them.
“Ehhh??! Where is Mayu-kun? She was here just now…” said one of them confused.
"Ehhhh??!!"

to be continued~

sorry, I just want to say sorry~ :kneelbow:
please keep on commenting~ :D
:on blackhole:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
Post by: steven_0809 on April 12, 2013, 12:43:40 PM: hahahahahahahaha mayu u just got hunt by fan girl
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
Post by: kurogumi on April 12, 2013, 01:35:05 PM: LOL

Mayuyu fans!!

Looks like black start to like mayu's

Who's that man?
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
Post by: kahem on April 12, 2013, 01:48:50 PM: The last scene was so funny xD
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
Post by: cisda83 on April 12, 2013, 01:49:21 PM: Sorry for the misunderstanding, chiqinna-san

I wrote the review after reading everything... and didn't read your story again to confirm it.

Yeah... you did write Minami was not a mafia or a cop... It still doesn't explain what kind of group is No3b... Can't wait to find out...

Eh... Mayu was being chased around when she was danso as a young doctor (as in AKBingo)... I can just image it... :lol:

Rena and Jurina want to know each other.... Can't wait how they are going to develop

Who is this man and his father... He was prison for 5 years... why and how? Mystery again...?!

Ah... The man seems to have some relation with Mariko's and Miichan in the past... what kind?

Eh... Mayu is so naughty but she was good, she can make Atsuko come to see Takamina after avoiding her...

Atsuko and Takamina are so cute together...

As I thought Miichan was on a date with Mariko...

Eh.. Mariko's group was Yuko's... where did she go... and why she retired?

Mayuyu is so cute in her danso :) Yuki seems to like Mayu's danso... Her heart was beating very fast... seed of love... :inlove:

Yeah... Mayuyu won.... and she is being chased around again...

She has a good common sense... with her being carried by Black... Black can used her speed to help escape Mayu from her fans....

Good trick.... :lol:

Can't wait to see the next one...

Thank you for the lovely update

:heart: :love: :inlove: :wub:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on April 12, 2013, 02:33:02 PM: You updated! :D

Huh? Mariko and Miichan knows that dude?

I bet you haven't forgot about Sae....right?

Hmm...how about Sayaka?

Mayu.....Mayu OMG WEIFNWIOFNWFNEWIFNIFN I fangirled like no tomorrow!! xD

That pic!! Where did you get that?

Acchan can't play xD D'awwh~

Update soon I can't wait! :D
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
Post by: arrow27 on April 12, 2013, 02:36:47 PM: Thanks for the update! Great chapter as always :D story keeps progressing and its becoming more and more interesting everytime ^^ Minami & Atsuko are as adorable as always, & lol at Mayu for tricking Atsuko :P
So we got to learn some info with the meeting of Marimii since they both seem to know alot, and it was interesting.
Mayu & and blakc scenes were great too!

Thanks again, looking forward to the next chapter!
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
Post by: qweakb on April 12, 2013, 03:37:13 PM: Quote
There is some misunderstanding here, Takamina, Miichan Haruna is not a mafia. Hiichan was right.

Sorry, have misunderstanding the story as I reading :dizzy: :kneelbow:

Lol.. Black! Faster fall in love with mayu..haha XD :hiakhiakhiak:

who is the man? is he related to the takamina's past???? :mon huh:

it really getting more and more mysteries :dizzy::dizzy::dizzy:

Thank you for updating so fast :luvluv2: :shy2: :stuffed: :on woohoo: :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
Post by: Kimcoton on April 12, 2013, 05:31:49 PM: buahahahah thanks to those crazy fangirls we got some mayuki action xD
Skinship~ (=^ェ^=)
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
Post by: Haruko on April 13, 2013, 02:56:18 AM: jajaja crazy fans!

ohh atsumina moment..
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
Post by: Railgun96 on April 14, 2013, 04:27:05 AM: Danso mayu is so cool! :twothumbs

Love atsumina moments!

Update soon!
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
Post by: Rena-chan Daisuki on April 14, 2013, 08:05:00 AM: it really nice update!
i hope the next update will be about renaxjurina
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
Post by: leEwẬy on April 14, 2013, 09:01:15 AM: Mayu's fangirls :hiakhiakhiak:
Yuki's slowly falling in love with Mayu :hehehe:
Who's that man? :dunno:
Marimii seem know a lot of things :kekeke:
Anyway, update soon please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
Post by: chiqinna on April 14, 2013, 01:02:11 PM: REPLIES: :)

steven_0809: yeah poor Mayu~ :lol:
kurogumi: that man? stay tuned~ :hehehe:
kahem: I just thought about the idea to make it funny so I made it! hahaha :wahaha:
cisda83: yeah so much mysteries~ :dizzy: I love making readers curious~ :glasses:
K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS: yes Marimii knows him.. ^^ Sae? Don't worry~ I haven't forgot about Sae.... yet? :mon sweat: I think I didn't even mention Sayaka in this fic..but I felt like you can read my mind.. :on shady: how did you know??!!! :mon curtain: hehe~
arrow27: Marimii sure knows a lot... hehe :mon evillaff:
qweakb: yes that man is related to Takamina's past... :glasses:
Kimcoton: Skinship!!! :luvluv2:
Haruko: I think I need to make more atsumina~ :mon lol:
Railgun96: Mayu-kun is cool right? hehe~ :mon misch:
Rena-chan Daisuki: I hope so..the next update would be wmatsui~ :mon sweat:
leEwẬy: that man...is...let's just say he's a bad man. :) Marimii is a troll couple lol~ :mon evillaff:

minna, really, thanks for reading my first fic ever in my life! :bow: :kneelbow:
and thanks for the lovely comments!!! :gmon heartu: :gmon bang:
I love you all!!! :mon love:
p/s: IF I DIDN'T UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER WITHIN THIS 3 DAYS, THEN YOU HAVE TO WAIT FOR NEXT MONTH~ WILL YOU WAIT FOR ME? :mon cute: TEEHEE~

WMATSUI shippers will be strong! :mon determined:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
Post by: DC2805 on April 14, 2013, 01:27:21 PM: Oh! I'm running after mayu too! Coz I can't resist a danso mayu! :grin:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
Post by: gek geki on April 21, 2013, 05:46:50 PM: MY SUNSHINE~

NE CH.15 MORE WMATSUI HOPE THEY TALK TO EACH OTHER
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
Post by: chiqinna on April 30, 2013, 08:41:06 AM: Chapter 15

Flashback (Rena’s pov)

Why are you doing this to us…?
What is our fault?
What did my parents did that you kill them?
Mom and dad don’t deserve to die like that…
It was all in my mind when I got beat by that black coat man.
Then I started to laugh…a creepy laugh…
“Why?” I said while giving a sad smile.
They beat me again.
I spit out blood.
It does hurt. That I feel numb all over my body.
I got tired because they keep beating me nonstop.
Aren’t they got tired too?
Then one of the men taking out his phone and calling someone.
What are they going to do now?
Aren’t they going to kill me?
Just kill me already…
I couldn’t hear what he said to the other person on the phone.
They suddenly lift my almost dead body and going to their car.
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Slowly open my eyes, I realized that I was in somewhere dark…maybe a room.
I try to move my hands but I can’t…I was being tied…on a chair.
I still could feel pain on my body.
I want to cry…but my tears won’t come out.
I want to scream…but I’m too tired.
Suddenly I remember something…or rather someone.
Jurina…
Where is Jurina now? Is she fine?
I hope she is with good people that can take care of her.
And I hope that bad people didn’t search for her.
It was weird…
Why did not they kill me?
They kill mom and dad…
Life is so cruel…
First, I found out mom and dad is not my real parents.
Second, I saw mom and dad dying in front of me.
Third, the black coat man comes and ‘hunts’ my family.
Suddenly the door open making my eyes shut due to the bright light from outside the room.
A man comes in…his footstep can be heard.
Then he stands in front of me and grab my mess hair making me look up to him.
He smiled evilly.
“Tsk…Tsk…Tsk…look at your face…” said him.
“Now tell me, where is your sister?” asked him to me.
“Just kill me already…” I said in a low voice.
He smirked hearing my answer.
“Tell me where is your sister first, then after that I’ll kill you.” Said him.
Even I don’t know her whereabouts.
“I don’t know…” replied me. He slapped me on my swollen cheek.
He let out a big sigh.
Then he walks behind me. I could feel that the rope around my wrist is getting loose.
“Get up!!!” he shout while grabbing my hair making me to groan in pain.
He throws me to the cold ground.
He then sits on a chair and making a phone call.
“Did you found her?” asked him to the other person.
“Find her in every place! If you found her, kill her!” said him.
He close his phone put it back into his pocket.
He then turns to me while taking out a knife from his other pocket.
“Maybe this way could make you tell us…” said him while playing with the knife.
He got up and walk towards me.
I tried to defense myself when he tried to cut my skin.
Then the knife fall from his hand, I took this chance to quickly take the knife and stabbed right on his chest.
I stabbed him.
My hands started to shake.
I just kill him with my own hand.
“Haha…” I suddenly laugh by my action.
I smiled to the man that I just stabbed.
He’s died.
I started to laugh creepily. I took out the knife from his chest.
I don’t know what is happening…
It felt like my mind is being control by someone else.
The door opens again revealing a man.
When he see the man on the ground, his eyes widen in shocked.
“Ne…Okkotteru?”
The man runs towards me trying to punch me but my body reacts on its own.
I dodge him. My hand stabbed his with the knife.
It was fun…killing people…bad people.
More man coming into the room.
More man that I killed. How strong I am…I killed them all.
I walked out of the room.
I saw one man standing outside, pointing a gun to me. I gave a creepy smile.
Bang!
I got shot.
Bang!
He got shot too. But who shoot him?
I fall on the ground; I can see… some people walking towards me…then my eyes getting blurry…
End of flashback
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Present

Acchan was walking towards Miichan’s house with a happy smile on her face.
Of course, she is going to meet someone. Someone that made her feel happy.
Arrived, she made her way to the front door and knocking on it.
Miichan is the one who open the door.
“Acchan! You’re so early! Come in~” said Miichan cheerfully.
“Acchan comes in and her eyes start to look around.
Miichan, knowing that smirked to her.
“Takamina is still in her room, getting dress up.” Said Miichan making Acchan blushed.

It was weekend so everyone is in the house.
Acchan had promised Takamina to bring her to the park.
Miichan walking to the kitchen, making a breakfast for them.
Lovetan, Mayuyu, Jurina already there having their breakfast.
They greeted Acchan and Acchan did the same.
“Acchan!” Said Takamina seeing Acchan.
“Ohaiyo Acchan!” greeted Kanon.
“Takamina, have your breakfast first! After that you can go out.” Said Miichan to Takamina.
“Haik!” answered her.
Takamina quickly finished eating her food then said, “Thanks for the food!”

‘Cute.’ Thought Acchan chuckled.

“Let’s go Minami~” said Acchan to Takamina who’s putting her shoes on and they go out of the house.

Everyone in the house stop doing what they were doing when they heard it.
Miichan who was about to put her food into her mouth stop halfway.
They all look at each other like they have the same think in their mind right now.
“MINAMI?!?!!” They said in unison.
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Meanwhile

Rena has made her decision that she will come and see Jurina to confirm that she is her Jurina.
She couldn’t stop thinking about it until she asked her about it.
That evening, she asked Black to accompany her to see Jurina at Miichan’s house.
Black knows her story because Rena tells her.

At Miichan’s house

Miichan, Kanon and Lovetan were out to buy some groceries.
Only Jurina and Mayuyu at home watching anime.
Mayuyu got a message from Black saying that she and her friend are outside their house.
Mayuyu was confused for a while of what they were doing outside their house.
She then walks to open the front door. There was Black and Rena standing in front of her.
Mayuyu blushed when she saw Black and so do Black.

“What?” asked Mayuyu coldly.

“This is Rena, my friend.” Said Black to Mayuyu.

“So?” said Mayuyu.

“Ano…I want to talk to Jurina.” Said Rena smile.

Mayuyu look at her for a while.
“Why?” asked Mayuyu again.

“You…want to talk to me?” said Jurina who comes out from behind Mayuyu.
“Y-yes…” answered Rena nervous looking at Jurina.
“Let’s get inside then…” said Jurina knowing that she also has something to say to the older girl.

‘They just ignore me…’ said Mayuyu to herself.

“*sighed*… I’m going out.” Said Mayuyu walking out from the house. Black was following her
from behind because it was her job as a bodyguard.
Now, it’s only Jurina and Rena left alone in the house. They were sitting on a couch at the living room.
It was awkward since it was their first time talking to each other.

“So…” they both said in unison.
“Y-you start first.” Said Jurina blushing.

Rena took a deep breath.

“What is your full name?” asked Rena first.
“My name is Matsui Jurina. Why?” Replied Jurina looking at her.
Rena felt happy when she heard that but it was not confirmed that she is the one.
“Ano…Can you tell me about your family? I mean your real family?” Rena asked again.

Jurina thinking for a while.

“I don’t know…I don’t remember…” said Jurina looking down.
Rena felt guilty by asking that question.
“I’m sorry for asking you that.” Said Rena.
“Why are you asking me this?” asked Jurina.
“Because, I want to know whether you are my sister or not…her name also…Matsui Jurina…” explain Rena.
Jurina keep silent while looking at the girl in front of her trying to say something.

After the long silent moment, Jurina finally said something.

“Rena…..chan.”
Rena looks up when she heard it. She gasped.
“W-what did you say just now?” Asked Rena nervous.
“I only remember….Rena-chan…but don’t know who it is… is it you?” asked Jurina looking at her.
Rena now knows that the young girl in front of her is Jurina, her Jurina.
Rena was so happy to see her sister after a long time.
Tears started to fall down on her cheeks.

“Jurina!” said Rena then hugging Jurina tightly.
Jurina was still confused but she can tell that Rena is Rena-chan.
“You are….Rena-chan?” Asked Jurina again.

She can feel Rena nodding her head on her shoulder.

“You are….my sister?” Asked Jurina as her tears started to fall down.
Rena nodding again.

Jurina started to reply the hug and buried her face on Rena’s shoulder.
She was really happy that she has a sister.
They both cry hard while hugging each other tightly.

They hugging each other for a long time.

Rena part the hug. She looks at Jurina in the eyes.
“You really look like mom.” Said Rena smile while cupping both of Jurina’s cheeks.
Jurina also smiles.

T.B.C

I'm back!!!! :lol: :k-thrilled:
I even forgot about the storyline lol~ :mon sweat:
correct me if there's something wrong in this chapter~ :mon whimper:
wonder what happen to Mayuki before~ :mon evillaff:
I forgot what I want to say just now... :mon huh2:
k.bye~ :tama-bye:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
Post by: Elo on April 30, 2013, 09:30:52 AM: yeahhhh you are bak and bring a very good chapter with you XD

please update yyour chapters soon because I want to kn XDow more I love your fic
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
Post by: leEwẬy on April 30, 2013, 10:11:48 AM: Yay! New chapter :onioncheer:
Rena's sad past :gyaaah:
The reaction of everyone when they heard Acchan call Takamina is Minami :on lol:
Rena finally knew her sister was Jurina and so does Jurina :on woohoo:
What happen to the Mayuki? :on blackhole:
So that man is a bad guy huh? :kekeke:
Want to know what'll happen next :tantrum:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
Post by: Rena-chan Daisuki on April 30, 2013, 04:48:32 PM: Yeyyyy! Finally!
WMatsui Sweet Moment
I LOVE IT
:inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

Pls Update soon
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
Post by: DC2805 on April 30, 2013, 05:26:10 PM: :lol: happy happy happy of the happy reunion! by the way since they aren't real sisters....can they develop into lovers? :deco:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
Post by: Shinoki on April 30, 2013, 11:24:16 PM: to tell the truth, this is one of the fanfics that I dropped due to the fact that the prologue made me get the wrong pairing in my head.......... well, good thing that I decided to read it anyways...
yay!! so that was the start of their Rena's gekikara........
They care about each other so much~~ though it was fast.....
lol...... Sae-kun isn't doing anything......
mayuyu danso~~ I prefer the doctor though......
Acchan....... so, whats the big deal with the name Minami?
................this is a friendly fanfic.................
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
Post by: Wmatsui22 on May 01, 2013, 06:15:09 AM: Hi chiqinna-san! :deco:

You finally update! :deco:

I am very happy :otomerika:

I like the MWatsui, MaYuki and AtsuMina moments! :wub: :wub:

~thanks
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
Post by: gek geki on May 01, 2013, 01:36:58 PM: That weird,
why that man want to kill jurina?
not rena first?
So much mistery~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
Post by: cisda83 on May 01, 2013, 03:13:26 PM: Ah... so that was what happen to Rena after she separated with Jurina... The birth of Gekikara...

And also as to why she could not go back to be a normal person... she killed people that tortured her...

Who were those that saved her...? Rappappa?

Why did Jurina's family being targeted... and They are still desperate to kidnap Jurina...?

What kind of secret Jurina's family hide?

Ah... they just noticed that Atsuko called Takamina by her name 'MINAMI'... :lol:

Ah... very touching reunion between WMatsui...

What's going to happen to them next...

They are still people looking for Jurina...

How Atsumina relationship going to develop?

How about BlackxMayu?

Can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the lovely update

:wub: :twisted: :heart: :love:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
Post by: kurogumi on May 10, 2013, 02:54:51 PM: its been a while since i open this fanfic thread its update a lot!!!

and wow rena and jurina finally meet each other and they are a sister!!!

well not a really sister and just rena who know that, jurina still doesn't know it.

its funny to look at miichan house now, full of pairing! LOL

first miichan has a relation with mariko in the past, still doesn't know if they dating or not

and acchan fall in love with takamina,its about time to wait they being real couple

but they have their poroblem of course, and it is takamina past

mayu and black, the bodyguard and her kid LOL this pair still develop their relationship....

little by little seed of love will be grown up LOL

rena and jurina, we know they doesn't related by blood,

i wonder who the first start fall in love, its rena or jurina...

rena is kind of dense so maybe jurina,

but jurina think that rena is really her sister so i think she wont try to cross that....

Well its more possible if its rena who start to fall in love with jurina since she know that jurina is not her sister,

so rena wont think loving jurina in a romantic way is wrong....

thank for the update,cant wait the next update it would be interesting if all the yakuza member in miichan house LOL taht would be funny~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
Post by: chiqinna on May 11, 2013, 07:27:53 AM: Elo: thanks reading and commenting~ hehe I was late update~ :lol:
leEwẬy: here I give you the answer! :)
Rena-chan Daisuki: yeay! wmatsui! :deco:
DC2805: ahaha they maybe~ :lol:
Shinoki: is this a friendly fanfic? :dunno: hehe btw thanks for deciding to read this fic~ :kneelbow:
Wmatsui22: Wmatsui22!!! I know you've been waiting my update haha~ and the others too~ thanks so much for waiting for me! :D
gek geki: why that man want to kill Jurina first? stay tuned~ :P
cisda83: yeah Rappapa was the one that saved er...thats all I can say for now. hehe 8)
kurogumi: hmmmmm....you gave me some idea for my next update kurogumi-san... :hehehe: thanks for reading! :D

AND THANK YOU FOR EVERYONE WHO WAS READING THIS FIC AND COMMENTING TOO! :thumbsup

Chapter 16

Flashback (when Black was running from Mayu’s fan girls while Mayu’s on her back)

When they felt Black already far from that crazy fan girl of Mayu, Black stopped running.

She’s panting hard.
“Good job Black!” said Mayu still on her back.
Mayu’s arm still around Black’s neck.
Mayu was about to got off from her, but her right accidentally touch Black’s breast.

Meanwhile Black felt something touch her breast so she looks at it and saw Mayu’s hand on it.
Realizing what was happening, Mayu quickly get off from Black’s back.

They both felt awkward and blushing hard.
“S-sorry.” Said Mayu to Black who was covering her chest.

“L-let’s go h-home.” Said Mayu started to walk slowly then followed by Black.

‘It was…..big!’ said Mayu in her mind while looking at her right hand.
End of flashback
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“Ehemmm…what is happening here?” said Mayu who saw Rena and Jurina smiling together sitting at the living room.
Mayu and Black still at the front door. They just got home.
Jurina looks at Mayu then at Rena smiling to her.
“Mind to explain?” asked Mayu walking towards them.
“Ermm…Mayu…Rena…is my sister!” said Jurina happy.

Mayu keep her face blank.

“What?!” said Mayu confused.
“un…Rena is my sister. She just told me. I don’t remember but I can felt that she’s my sister.” Explain Jurina while looking at Rena smiling.
“Really?” asked Mayu looking at Rena.
Black just watching them since she already knows the truth.
“Y-yes...she is my younger sister.” Said Rena.
“Owh…” Mayu says.

“Tadaimaaaa!!!” shout the three who just got back from the buying groceries.
“Okaeri~” said Mayuyu sitting at the other couch.
“Eh? Hey Black aaaand….you?” said Lovetan pointing at Rena who was sitting next to Jurina.

“She’s my sister!”Said Jurina instead making the trio shocked.

“Sister?” said Miichan.

“How?” said Kanon.

“Well…I also just found out that she is my sister just now.” Said Jurina.

Then Jurina and Rena explain to them and they finally understand.

“So…you’re going to take Jurina with you?” asked Miichan.
“Eh? N-no…I mean…I think Jurina should stay with you guys. I-I can visit her here anytime.” Said Rena.
“Rena’s right…they just got to know each other.” said Black knowing that it was not a good idea for Jurina to stay with them.
“Okay then…” said Miichan.

“Tadaimaaaa~~” said Takamina while opening the front door.
“Acchan. Come in~” invite Takamina to Acchan.
“Hay~” replied Acchan.
‘Acchan?’ said Rena in her mind when she heard Acchan’s voice.

As soon as Acchan saw Rena, her eyes widen.
“Rena?!” said Acchan shocked to see Rena there.
Then she looks at Black who just shrugged her shoulder when Acchan looks at her.
“You know Rena too?” Asked Mayu.
“Eh? S-she…is…my classmate in high school.” Said Acchan.
“So…the three of you are classmate?” Asked Mayu referring to Black, Rena, and Acchan.
“Yes…we are.” Said Rena nodding since she got a signal from Black to just agree with them.
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Meanwhile

*somewhere far away from the country
A tall woman is watching at the beautiful scenery in front her eyes through the window.

Then she felt a pair of arms around her waist.
She smiles and turned around to look at the other person.
They both smiles to each other.
The she look out at the window again.

“I miss them.” Said the tall girl giving a sad smile.
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In a big mansion, the man and his father were having a dinner together.
“So…dad, I heard that you were going to bring down that Watanabe.” Said him to his father.
“Yes, and Kenzo, you’ll be helping me in this.” Said his father smirking.

“Dad, can you give me time to have fun for awhile? I just got out from that hell prison you know…” said Kenzo.
His father sighed.
“Fine~ besides I’ll have someone to help me.” Said his father smirking.

Kenzo just look at his father smirking and continue eating his food.
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Since that day, Rena and Jurina starting to know each other.
They have been talking to each other like sisters.
One day, Rena was visiting Jurina at Miichan’s house.
Mayu was at home and she had been thinking about something.
Rena was at the living room sitting at the couch while waiting for Jurina to finish shower.

Then Mayu comes toward her.
“Nee...Rena, can I ask you something?” Asked Mayuyu to Rena.
“What is it?” said Rena.
“Hmmm…well, you and Black are classmate right? So…can you tell me her real name?” asked Mayuyu.
“Hmm? Why?” said Rena confused and she also beware not to tell Black’s real identity.
“Well, because I don’t know her real name so I want to know…you must know it right?” said Mayuyu not giving up.
‘Black would be mad at me if I tell her…’ thought Rena biting her lips.
“I can’t tell you…but maybe I can give you a clue.” Said Rena.

“What?”Said Mayuyu.
“Black always brings her identity card with her. That’s all I can tell you.” Said Rena. She thought it was impossible for Mayuyu to take Black’s wallet from Black.
“Rena-chan! I’m ready!” said Jurina walking to the living room.
“Where are you guys going?” Asked Mayuyu.
“Somewhere!” said Jurina happily.
“Let’s go Rena-chan!” said Jurina then they both goes out.
“Hmmm…It’s not that hard to do that…why did not me thinking about that before…”said Mayu smirking to herself.
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That day also Mayuyu start her mission.
She and Black were walking on a street.
Mayuyu looks like she was searching for something or somewhere.
Then she found a crowded place.

She smirked in her mind.

She walks towards the crowded people but she stopped halfway.
Then she turned to Black, and said to her
“You go first, I’ll walk behind you, it’s so many people here.” Said her to Black.
At first, Black was curious but then she just follows her order.
Black started to walk through the crowded place followed by Mayuyu who was really near her.

They can feel that their body was touching with other people.
That time Mayuyu started her 'Nezumi' action.

After they get out from the crowded place, Mayuyu said to Black that she wants to go to toilet.
In the public toilet, Mayuyu get in one of the cubicle and take out something from her pocket.

Black was waiting outside the toilet.
“I got you~” said Mayuyu while holding the wallet in her hand. It was Black wallet.
Then she started to open the wallet to look at Black’s identity card.

There, she found it…Black’s real name.

Mayuyu grin widely seeing the name on the identity card.
Black’s picture was shown next to it.

“Kashiwagi Yuki…”

T.B.C~

fuhh~ Sorrry late update~ :sweat:
I was too busy reading other fanfic that I forgot to update my own fic~ :lol: also lazy to write it~ :mon sweat:
sorry lack of atsumina now~ hahaha :mon lol:
this one make me happy~~~ :mon lovelaff:
(https://pbs.twimg.com/media/BJRHhWjCIAAPkop.jpg)
I need to read this fic again! :mon determined:

Sae will appear on the next update!!!!! :mon bye:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
Post by: Kimcoton on May 11, 2013, 07:59:04 AM: ohhhh nezumi's in action xD
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
Post by: leEwẬy on May 11, 2013, 08:30:28 AM: Thank you for giving me the answer :on drink:
Mayu touch Black's breast and thought it's big :on spit:
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“Black always brings her identity card with her. That’s all I can tell you.” Said Rena. She thought it was impossible for Mayuyu to take Black’s wallet from Black.
Rena was totally wrong :on lol: Mayu is Nezumi, after all :wahaha:
And she has known Black's name after took Black's wallet successfull :kekeke:
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A tall woman is watching at the beautiful scenery in front her eyes through the window.

Then she felt a pair of arms around her waist.
She smiles and turned around to look at the other person.
They both smiles to each other.
The she look out at the window again.

“I miss them.” Said the tall girl giving a sad smile.
Who're they? :dunno:
And who's that Kenzo guy? :on shady:
His father want to bring down that Watanabe then it's mean Mayu'll be involved in this :stoned:
But maybe Black'll protect her :hehehe:
Can't wait to see what'll happen next :tantrum:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
Post by: kurogumi on May 11, 2013, 09:47:25 AM: LOL!!!

Is too easy for mayu tdn rtealing black wallet! LOL

I bet it is haruna and yuko,the taller girl is haruna right?

Kenzo and his father,hmmm~

Rena and jurina start to know each other yay~

Mayuyu yukirin mayuyu yukirin B! B! B! Whashoi! Yeah

Thank for the update
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
Post by: cisda83 on May 11, 2013, 10:08:58 AM: Ah... Mayu accidentally touching Yuki's breasts.... :lol: Both are so embarrass... :sweatdrop:

Yeah... Jurina is so HAPPY :wub: that she has Rena as her sister now...

Would the relationship develop from sisterly to lover?

Would Rena be able to prevent someone from going after Jurina?

The tall girl is Haruna right? With who.. Her lover is Yuko, isn't it?

Why did she need to leave Minami and Miichan...?

Can't wait to find out about Minami's past?

Kenzo... who is this person...? He was just release from jail... Kenzo and his father want to destroy Watanabe family .... Why?

He already has someone to help him.... I think it's Sae...

Would Black be able to protect Mayu?

And would Mayu and her father able to protect themselves from getting ruin?

Wah... Mayu is on a mission to steal Black's wallet... just because she wanted to know Black's real identity...

Ah... Nezumi is really good at stealing....

What Nezumi going to do with knowing Yuki's name?

What's Black going to do knowing that Mayu able to steal her wallet?

How about Miichan and Mariko's relationship? Would they get together?

What's going to happen next to everyone....?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
Post by: gek geki on May 11, 2013, 11:43:50 AM: MY SUNSHINE IS BACK!! WOW! WOOHOO WMATSUI! ARE THEY DATING?
MAYU KNOW BLACK REAL NAME!! YUKIRIN!!
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
Post by: Shinoki on May 11, 2013, 01:04:12 PM: kawaiii~
lol, nezumi is a pick pocket type character to begin with...
been some time since i read this~
all 3 are 'high school classmates'
i wonder if anyone has seen thriugh tje lie
minus those that arre related
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
Post by: Rena-chan Daisuki on May 11, 2013, 05:49:48 PM: yeyyyy!
WMatsui sister are finally getting back together again
and nezumi pick pocket is always the best
i want to be her student

anyway nice update :thumbsup
it really shine my day now
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
Post by: qweakb on May 12, 2013, 04:34:03 PM: Sorry, I had miss a chapter again :kneelbow: :mon slapself: :mon curtain:

Recently, I have been busy with my school stuff, thus I always read what the email that had notification about the updates and just went off.. hehe :mon sweat:

Mayu, you are so pervert..haha.. :hiakhiakhiak:
and also well done to steal black's wallet and figure out her real name :on lol:

WMatsui moment :luvluv1:

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qweakb: yes that man is related to Takamina's past...
will be waiting for this part!
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
Post by: Wmatsui22 on May 14, 2013, 11:34:30 AM: ~You are My Sunshine Chapter 16~

~Ah! Finally an update! [I’m so happy]

~I am so happy WMatsui is together now...

~What will Wise Mayu going to do now that she knows Black real name?

~I can’t wait for the next chapter!

~Thanks :D

~+WMatsui_22+~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
Post by: chiqinna on May 15, 2013, 12:47:20 PM: Chapter 17

“Kashiwagi Yuki…” mumbled Mayuyu while smirking.
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“Ne…Rena-chan…”
“Hm? What is it Jurina?” said Rena while sitting next to Jurina on a bench.
“How are mom and dad died?” Asked Jurina looking at her sister. Even though Rena told her that their parent passed away but Rena did not tell her the reason of their death. Jurina was curious.
Rena was startled by the question. She was thinking for a while before answering to Jurina’s question.

‘Should I tell her the truth?’ thought Rena.
‘But it might hurt her…’ thought her again.
‘I don’t want her to be sad.’

“Rena-chan~” said Jurina seeing Rena spacing out.
“Hmm…Mom and dad died in an accident...on their way home.” Lied Rena looking down on the ground.
“I see…” whispered Jurina. She felt sad that she doesn’t have a chance to see or talk to her real parent. She even doesn’t remember anything about them…how they look like.
Seeing Jurina sad expression, Rena takes both her hand and hold them tightly.
“Jurina, don’t be sad okay? I promised from now on I’ll be your mom, dad and sister! I will take care of you~” said Rena smiling to Jurina.
Jurina smiles back to Rena.
“Thank you Rena-chan! “Said Jurina while hug her sister.

“Ermm...Rena-chan…can I ask you one more thing?” Asked Jurina.
“Yes?”
“W-why you don’t want me to live with you?” Asked Jurina looking at her in the eyes.
Rena looks at her.
“How about we buy a drink? You must be thirsty right? Come on~” said Rena didn’t answered Jurina’s question or trying to avoid it.
“Un.” Jurina just nodded and thinking maybe Rena is not ready yet to bring her to live with her.
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Acchan and Takamina were having a lunch at a restaurant since Takamina was so hungry.
Acchan giggled seeing Takamina eat like she haven’t eat for a weeks.

Acchan suddenly saw a man wearing black glasses outside the restaurant looking at Takamina.
‘Who is that?’ thought Acchan.
The man looks like he was looking at Takamina like he knows her.
But the way his eyes full of anger when he took off his glasses. It makes Acchan curious.
Then he looks at Acchan for a while and walks away like nothing happen.
‘Maybe he got wrong person.’ Thought Acchan again shrugged her shoulders
and turn her head to Minami who was busy with her foods.

“Slow down Minami~ the food is not running away from you~~” said Acchan looking at Minami who’s still munching her food.
“But it’s delicious! It’s my favorite!”Replied Minami with her mouth full.
“Don’t talks while your mouth full!” Said Acchan.
Then Takamina choked her food.
“See?! Now you’re choking!” said Acchan mad while giving a glass of water to her then patted her back.

~.~

They got out from the restaurant.

Acchan was holding Takamina’s hand and Takamina’s still pouting.
Acchan saw Takamina pout cutely because Acchan was mad at her just now.
Actually Acchan was just acting.

Then Acchan bent down the same level to Takamina’s eyes.
“Are you mad at me?” Asked Acchan seeing Takamina still silent and looking down pouting.
Takamina shakes her head saying no.
“Then what’s wrong?” Asked Acchan again.

“Acchan is mad at me…” mumbled Takamina.
Acchan sigh when she heard it but it’s cute.
“Noo…I’m not mad at you~” said Acchan smiling.
“R-really?” Asked Takamina looking at Acchan in front of her.

Acchan nodded.

“Now let’s put your best smile~ and let’s go to Miichan’s bakery!” said Acchan pinching Takamina’s cheeks to make her smile and then take her hand walking to Miichan’s bakery.
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At Miichan’s bakery

Miichan was having a break at her room at the back.
“Miichaaaan!” shout Takamina entering the room with Acchan.
“Hey~” said Miichan sitting lazily at her chair.
“Miichan, I have something to ask you…about Takamina.” Said Acchan looking at Miichan.
“Owh, have a sit then. What is it?” Asked Miichan.
Acchan took a chair and sit across Miichan while Takamina is playing with Miichan’s psp.

“What did Takamina do when she’s still normal? I mean before she’s like that…what is her job?” Asked Acchan curious.
Miichan close her eyes and took a deep breath before answering to the question.
“Well…since Mariko told me everything so I guess its fine if I tell you…” said Miichan.
“Actually…Takamina is a mafia.” Said Miichan making Acchan shocked.
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“Just kidding~ hehe~” said Miichan playfully.

Acchan frown.

“Sorry~ sorry~ I’ll be serious now.” Apologized Miichan.
“Takamina is a secret agent…along with me…and Haruna.”Said Miichan with serious expression.
“Secret Agent? Who is Haruna?” Asked Acchan.
“Yeah…Haruna is our friend…We’re called No3b. But when we’re in disguise, we’re Persona. We’re not working with cops, we have our own private company. We do what we like~ But it was all before…” Explain Miichan.

“Owh…”

“After Takamina’s incident that made her like that…we have stopped doing this kind of things.” Added Miichan.
“How about Takamina’s incident?” Asked Acchan again.
“Hmmmm…about that…she just got into some accident...” said Miichan.
“Where is Haruna?” Asked Acchan.
“I don’t know…she just left us without leaving any note or something. And Takamina really loves Haruna.” Said Miichan smirked.

“L-love?”Said Acchan.

“Are you jealous? Don’t worry she loves her like a sister only~ hehe~” said Miichan making Acchan blushed.
“Owh by the way Acchan, please take good care of Takamina and don’t let her go around any strangers that looks suspicious. Okay?” Said Miichan serious.

“I will.” Replied Acchan.
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*Mayuyu is still in the bathroom
“I need to put this back into her pocket without her knowing it.” Said Mayuyu while putting the wallet into her pocket.
Mayuyu told Black to walk through the crowded again so that she can put the wallet back into Black’s pocket.
Black walk followed by Mayuyu behind her.
As Mayuyu was putting the wallet into Black’s jacket, suddenly Black look behind and saw Mayuyu’s hand still holding the her wallet.
Mayuyu saw Black glaring at her.
“A-ah…I saw it was about to fall so I…hehehe~” said Mayuyu smiling then walk fast leaving Black in the crowd to avoid her black glare.

~.~

“What did you do?” Asked Black to Mayuyu who was walking ahead.
“Do what?” Replied Mayuyu without looking back.
“I saw you holding my wallet.” Said Black.
“I was just trying to put it into your pocket since it was about to…fall.” Explain Mayuyu with her cyborg face.
“Nezumi…looks like you forgot to put my identity card back into its place.” Said Black gritted her teeth while taking out her wallet and showing it to Mayuyu.
“Oooppss~” Said Mayuyu in a low voice knowing that she makes a mistake and looks like black was really mad about it.

“You’ve gone too far, Nezumi.”
Black was mad walking away from Mayuyu without saying anything.
Mayuyu just watch her walking with a blank face.

‘She will come back eventually.’ Thought Mayuyu while also started walking the other way but she bumps into…

Sae.

“Mayuyu!” Shout Sae smiles.
Mayuyu with a cold face saying, “What do you want?”
“You!” Replied Sae with her charming smile.
“Whatever~” said Mayuyu.
“Come on Mayuyu! Let’s be friend! Looks like your bodyguard is leaving you~” Sae say putting her right arm around Mayuyu.

‘I guess it’s fine if I had fun with her~’ said Mayuyu to herself.

“Fine~” Replied Mayuyu.
“Then let’s go!” said Sae smirking.

‘Gotcha!’ said Sae in her mind.

T.B.C~

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Would the relationship develop from sisterly to lover?
Maybe~ :bigdeal:
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Would Rena be able to prevent someone from going after Jurina?
Maybe~ :bigdeal:
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The tall girl is Haruna right? With who.. Her lover is Yuko, isn't it?
Yes~ :glasses:
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Why did she need to leave Minami and Miichan...?
I don't know~ :P
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Can't wait to find out about Minami's past?
I can't wait too! XD
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Kenzo... who is this person...? He was just release from jail... Kenzo and his father want to destroy Watanabe family .... Why?
He have so many rivals ehhh~ :bigdeal:
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He already has someone to help him.... I think it's Sae...
Bingo! :bingo:
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Would Black be able to protect Mayu?
Of course! Mayuyu yukirin mayuyu yukirin B! B! B! Whashoi! Yeah :mon determined:

qweakb-san~ you always miss me and my fic aren't you? hahah~ :on gay:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
Post by: chemicalstar on May 15, 2013, 06:01:01 PM: Woah.. secret agent!!
i like secret agent story!!
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
Post by: qweakb on May 15, 2013, 08:13:09 PM: making me more and more curious about takamina's past and no3b! curiosity kill me now! :imdead:

what will happen between mayu and sae? i hope that sae won't do any stupid stuff to mayu :on lol:

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qweakb-san~ you always miss me and my fic aren't you? hahah~
I like your story :on GJ:
so I miss it..hehe :mon sweat:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
Post by: Shinoki on May 15, 2013, 10:31:36 PM: baka mayu
no! black go and save her
wait this is too quick
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
Post by: cisda83 on May 16, 2013, 12:05:58 AM: chiqinna-san, Thank you for trying to answer all my previous questions from my previous comment

Ara... Rena didn't want to tell Jurina anything whether about her parents and why she didn't want to live with Jurina...

Who was the man that was looking at Takamina with anger..?

Would Takamina be in danger?

Atsuko always seem to find Takamina so cute... Takamina always acted so cute.... :inlove:

Ah... No3b were private agents... as Persona...what happened to Takamina...? what was this accident?

Why did Haruna leave them behind without any contact whatsoever?

Did Haruna leaving them as anything to do with Yuko?

Would Atsuko be able to protect Takamina from any danger?

Ah... Black was so angry with Mayu that she left her alone...

Could Black be able to save Mayu from whatever trap Sae set for Mayu?

What's going to happen to Mayu?

Would Sae bring Mayu to Kenzo's father?

More mysteries again...

Can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the update

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
Post by: Haruko on May 16, 2013, 05:42:31 AM: takaboy is a spy!!
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
Post by: leEwẬy on May 16, 2013, 07:14:12 AM: New update :on woohoo: It's more and more interesting :on gay:
So Takamina used to be an agent with Miichan and Haruna :on drink: No3b and Persona :nya:
The man looked at Minami with angry eyes, who is that? :dunno: Takamina's relatives? :wahaha:
Mayu's busted by Black when she was about to put Black's pocket to its place :on lol:
Black's mad at her :pleeease:
Where does Sae lead Mayu to? :stoned: Hope it'll bot happen something bad :prayers:
If she did, Black please saves Mayu :on cloudeye:
Can't wait to see your new update :tantrum:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
Post by: gek geki on May 16, 2013, 10:15:53 AM: Why haruna leave?maybe because she's fall in love with yuko.
Yuki get mad and leave mayu

Bye bye mayu,hope your peace in sae place
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
Post by: kurogumi on May 17, 2013, 06:32:28 AM: Yeah Good Bye Mayu......[whisper] "Forever~" LOL!!!! :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: im just kidding LOL

awww dont be mad black~ mayu just a little bit curious LOL

thank for the update
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
Post by: blakwhite on May 20, 2013, 03:55:15 PM: takamina is secret agent lol, looking forward to the next update :3 :thumbsup
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
Post by: gek geki on May 31, 2013, 04:03:13 AM: Chiqinna SAN PLEASE~ HEHE
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 18 [preview]
Post by: chiqinna on June 14, 2013, 03:21:05 PM: Chapter 18

Mariko asked Acchan to meet her in her office room to discuss about something.

*knock knock*

"Come in." Invite mariko without looking at the door. She was looking outside the window.

"What is it that you want to talk about?" Asked Acchan as she sit down on the chair across Mariko.
Mariko turn her big chair around to face her group's ace.

'Does she want to ask me about work?' Thought Acchan.

"I-if you want to ask me about our businesses..we are doing fine so far..." tell Acchan.

Mariko smiled.

"It's not about that...I knew you were doing fine with our work. I just want to talk about you and...well Takamina.." the way mariko say it sounds like she was serious.

"Me and Takamina...?" Said Acchan curious.
'What is it about me and Minami? We are doing fine...'
"Do you really love her?" Asked Mariko.
Acchan started to blushed when Mariko asked her the question.

"W-well...I think so..?" Acchan was hesitating to answer it. She feels shy to answer
'yes I really love her!' Or 'Minami is my first and last love!' Or any love lines... she was still new to this feelings.

*sighed*

"There is more you need to know about her Atsuko." Said Mariko.

The way she called Acchan looks like it was a serious matter.

"What do you mean?" Curiosity started to rise in her mind.

"First, you already know that Takamina is secret agent right?"

Acchan just listening to her without answering or nodding to the question.

"Takamina doesn't like mafia."
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 18 [preview]
Post by: momondmozide on June 14, 2013, 03:41:34 PM: huaaaaaa please update soon :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 18 [preview]
Post by: gek geki on June 15, 2013, 08:46:54 AM: Want sunlight on my face

Mayu mayu im worried,yuki please safe her,its your job,despite the fact that mayu is anoying she just cute girl who need attention
And affection
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 18 [preview]
Post by: cisda83 on June 15, 2013, 09:21:10 AM: Yeah.. an update at last... eh.. it's only a preview

Atsuko really loved Minami... in term of forever love..

Eh.. Minami did not like Yakuza... why...?

I don't think the reason was simple as to Yakuza was bad people, or they were doing some illegal things...

Can't wait to read about Minami's past... and her reason as to why she hated Yakuza... and why she was secret agent?

Thank you for the preview

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 18 [preview]
Post by: leEwẬy on June 15, 2013, 10:43:29 AM: I thought you'll update but instead it was a preview :on cloudeye:
Oh, Takamina very love Acchan :wriggly:
Eh? Why she doesn't like yakuza :dunno:
Hope you'll update soon, please :gyaaah:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 18 update 17/06/2013
Post by: chiqinna on June 17, 2013, 09:19:37 AM: Chapter 18

Mariko asked Acchan to meet her in her office room to discuss about something.

*knock knock*

"Come in." Invite Mariko without looking at the door. She was looking outside the window.
"What is it that you want to talk about?" Asked Acchan as she sits down on the chair across Mariko.

Mariko turns her big chair around to face her group's ace.

'Does she want to ask me about work?' Thought Acchan.

"I-if you want to ask me about our businesses...we are doing fine so far..." tell Acchan.

Mariko smiled.
"It's not about that...I knew you were doing fine with our work. I just want to talk about you and...Well Takamina...”
the way Mariko says it sounds like she was serious.

"Me and Takamina...?" Said Acchan curious.

'What is it about me and Minami? We are doing fine...' thought Acchan.

"Do you really love her?" Asked Mariko.

Acchan started to blushed when Mariko asked her the question.

"W-well...I think so..?" Acchan was hesitating to answer it. She feels shy to answer 'yes I really love her!'

Or 'Minami is my first and last love!'

Or any love lines... she was still new to this feelings.

*sighed*

"There is more you need to know about her Atsuko." Said Mariko.
The way she called Acchan looks like it was a serious matter.

"What do you mean?" Curiosity started to rise in her mind.

"First, you already know that Takamina is secret agent right?"
Acchan just listening to her without answering or nodding to the question.

"Takamina doesn't like mafia."

That statement that Mariko has said suddenly made Acchan froze.

'W-what??!!!'
"If she hate mafia then...w-why you-"

Before Acchan could continue she was being interrupted by Mariko.

"Me and her are friends? Well...Takamina just doesn't like kind of mafia that being
bad and treat the innocent people badly. She really hates it.
As you see...
our group doesn't bring harm to good people. We just work among other gang of mafia.
That's why Takamina is good with our group." Explain Mariko.

Acchan stay silent while looking at the desk in front of her still thinking what to say.

"There is another reason why she hates mafia...
the reason is...
both her parents were got killed by a mafia...
they did not even do anything to deserve just die like that...
I’ve been knowing Takamina since high school...
after graduate we chose our own way of life...
After I’ve become a mafia following my father's step, we met again,
and I found out that she, miichan and Haruna are a secret agent...
since they are all my old friends, so I told them my TRUE identity.
I was surprise when Takamina told me about her parents.
At first, she was really mad at me, until I said I promised her I will not harm other innocent people.
We made a deal that; they will help me destroy other mafia group while our group only use our fist on bad people.
That’s why we are one of top mafia...

until one day...takamina found out about mafia group who killed her parents that is one of the our rival...she was really determined to vanished every of them from this world. But it did not come out well."

Flashback
"Are you sure Takamina? I mean…they are not a normal mafia that we always encounter you know…”

Miichan is getting worried hearing Takamina saying that she wants to get rid every of the mafia member who had killed both her parents.

“I’m very sure Miichan. I already promised to myself that I will find people who killed my parents
and I will kill them with my own hands.”Takamina gritted her teeth trying to calm herself down.

By looking at Takamina’s eyes, Miichan was sure that she can’t stop her partner anyhow.
Being by her side since they were high school, Miichan knows her really well by just looking at her expression when she is serious.
When her parents got killed, Miichan and Haruna is the one who always be by her side and taking care of her little sister, Kanon.

“Takamina, whatever you are thinking right now please, tell us so that we know what you are planning to do. Don’t do anything by your own. I’m here to help you.” Tell Mariko to Takamina.
She was also there, worrying about her friend.

Takamina look at her friends, they are all there for her.

“Thank you…thank you so much everyone.” Takamina smiled to them. A small tears form at the corner of her eyes.

Yeah, Takamina is sensitive when it comes to feelings.

She got easily cried when she was touched by whatever her friends doing something good to her.

“By the way, I haven’t seen Haruna here…where is she?” Asked Mariko looking around in the house.

Wminami parted their hug when Mariko asked the question to them.

“Haruna? Yeah I haven’t seen her also…Where is she?” Miichan also doesn’t Haruna’s whereabout even though
they lived together in the same house.

“Oh…Haruna said she is going out for a while but I don’t know where…”explained Takamina.

“Hmmm…thinking about Haruna, don’t you think she is being weird lately?” asked Miichan while making thinking pose.
“Really? What do you think is happening to her?” Asked Mariko.
“You’re right Miichan…when we ask her to hang out together, she always declined it. I wonder why…” said Takamina also curious about Haruna’s behavior.

“What’s wrong Marichan?” Miichan asked Mariko seeing Mariko looks like she was thinking about something.

“Nothing…it’s just, lately…you know Yuko right? My group’s ace…I think she was also started to act weird…” Mariko explains.

The trio looking at each other trying to figure out something.
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“Maybe it was just coincidence…” said Miichan breaking silence.

“Yeah…” agreed Takamina.

“I have to go back now. Call me if you need something.” Said Mariko while putting her eyeglasses and walking out of the house.
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At Shinoda’s mansion

Mariko just arrived home when she passed Yuko was looks like she was about to go out.

“Where are you going?” Asked Mariko curious.

“Somewhere…having some fun.” Answered Yuko smiled showing her dimples.

“Aaaand Mariko-sama, I might be late for dinner, don’t wait for me!”
shout Yuko when she was already far from where Mariko’s standing.

‘Seriously, this girl is really weird lately. She looks somehow…happy?” thought Mariko to herself.

[The flashback will be continued in the next chapter, I need to find Yuki right now… *sigh* where the heaven is this girl going…]

‘*sigh* where is she? Did she lose track of me or something?’ said Mayu in her mind.

“Mayuyu, look! I bought you a manga!” shout Sae walking towards Mayu who was waiting for her at the bench.

‘*sighed* and now I’m stuck with this tomboy…’ said Mayu to herself.

Mayu just look at the manga that was still in Sae’s hand.
“I already read that 100 times already~” Said Mayu to Sae.

“Owh~ really? Then read it for 101th times then…” Sae says scratching the back of her head.

“You’re no fun~~” Mayu with cyborg face started to walk away from her.

“W-wait, Mayuyu! I was just joking!” shout Sae following Mayu from behind before catching her by putting her arms around Mayu’s shoulders.

“What!!?” Said Mayu irritated.

“I have something more to show you…Something that more fun than teasing your bodyguard~” Said Sae grinning.

Somehow Mayuyu feels something weird when Sae said that.

“Come on, follow me! I’ll show you~ It’s going to be fun!” Said Sae walking to somewhere.

Getting interested by what Sae said, Mayu just follow her from behind.

Sae who was leading Mayu to somewhere smirked because it seems this cyborg is easily fall into her trap.

‘I’ll bring you to where your bodyguard won’t find you, Watanabe Mayu.’ Said Sae.

T.B.C

You'll need to wait one year for the next update! :lol: will you wait for it? :cry:
Sorry for my ENGRISH!! :kneelbow:
Sorry for the late update! :bow:
Sorry for lacking of ideas~ :kneelbow:
hope you guys enjoy it! :on blackhole:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 18 update 17/06/2013
Post by: no-chan on June 17, 2013, 11:08:05 AM: Quote
You'll need to wait one year for the next update! :lol: will you wait for it? :cry:
eehh? :OMG:
but,why? :fainted: one year is the way too longggg... :pleeease:
btw,i'll wait for it.. :kneelbow:
and,nice update :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 18 update 17/06/2013
Post by: Terragen on June 17, 2013, 11:19:28 AM: eh next years?
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 18 update 17/06/2013
Post by: mo-chan on June 17, 2013, 11:40:58 AM: eeeeeh I have to wait one year why!!! :shocked
It's a joke right!? :rofl: :rofl:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 18 update 17/06/2013
Post by: leEwẬy on June 17, 2013, 11:52:47 AM: NO!!!!! I can't wait till next year :gyaaah:
You're joking, right :pleeease:
Oho, Acchan love Takamina :luvluv1:
Where's Yuki :on study:
Sae's bring Mayu to somewhere unknown that Yuki couldn't find out :on freeza:
Yuki! Go and save Mayu :prayers:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 18 update 17/06/2013
Post by: cisda83 on June 17, 2013, 11:54:12 AM: Yeah... it's indeed an update at last...

Yeah... a bit on the background about Minami's childhood and why she hated Mafia...

Oh... Mariko's gang was the good group... doing legal things... only picked fight with other mafia group...

Ah... No3b were secret agents together... and they were helping Mariko group being the top...

Oh... Yuko was Mariko's ace... before Atsuko right?

They were getting together then...

What's going on with the plan getting rid of this mafia group that was responsible for Minami's parents death...?

Did they fail... that was why Minami became like that...?

Did Minami become injured during her fight with the mafia?

When did Haruna and Yuko leave them... and why?

Ah... stupid Mayu... trying to trick Yuki....

She became tricked by Sae...

Would Yuki be able to save Mayu?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 18 update 17/06/2013
Post by: gek geki on June 17, 2013, 01:55:33 PM: Mayu again good bye
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 18 update 17/06/2013
Post by: Shinoki on June 17, 2013, 02:45:49 PM: well, that was the past~
using manga to attempt to bribe mayuyu and fails - Sae
mayu...
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 19 update 24/06/2013
Post by: chiqinna on June 24, 2013, 08:56:43 AM: I was just kidding~ :lol: I want to troll but i guess i fail~ :banghead:
this chapter only focus on the flashback.

Chapter 19

"After that no3b members started to make a planned on how to attack the mafia group that Takamina wants to take revenge. I was also helping them. We planned it very carefully because even one small mistake might lead us to a big failure." explained Mariko.

Flashback
Inside no3b's building in a big room.

"Okay now, this is the place where they will go to. It’s an advantage to us since it was small place so that they will have no place to run."
Takamina was explaining to her friends and there were also their workers who will help them plus Mariko's people.
She was showing them the planned on a white board in front of them.

"But we need to be careful because I heard the leader will bring many of their underlings. “Added miichan.

"About that, I will ask my people to be a backup if anything happen." Tell Mariko.
Takamina nodded to mariko signaling that she was agreeing with her.

"So, if there is nothing more to discuss then, we'll stop for now. We'll make the attack tomorrow so...be prepared."
And with that they end their discussion.

Everyone was leaving the room except mariko and no3b members.

"*sighed* I’m hungry~ “said miichan leaning on the chair rubbing her growled stomach.

"Tsk... Before the meeting I saw you eating like a pig...and now you hungry?! Seriously what are you?" Said Mariko to miichan who just stuck her tongue at Mariko.

Takamina just chuckled seeing them.

But then Takamina notice that someone had been spacing out since the beginning of the discussion already.
Mariko and miichan also turn their head to look at the person.
Takamina look at miichan then miichan look at Takamina.

"Haruna." Called miichan to wake her up from her deep thought.
But looks like she doesn’t listen.

"Nyan nyan...are you okay?" This time Takamina try by shaking her shoulder.
"Mm? Ehh? What? Where is everyone? The meeting is already over?" Haruna finally snapped out from her thought.

The other three just rolled their eyes seeing Haruna’s reaction.

"Nyan nyan, is there something that you hide from us? Because it seems lately you have been spacing out a lot you know." A concern Takamina asked her.
"Yeah, you also always going out and going home late. You look suspicious you know." Said miichan narrowed her eyes at Haruna.
"N-no! I-im okay...I’m just..." Haruna is looking around to avoid their eyes.
"Just what? Just thinking about someone? Huh?" Mariko smirked when she saw Haruna blushed.

"You are thinking about me aren’t you?" Added Mariko joking.

Miichan laughing out loud when Mariko said that.

"SHUT UP GACHAPIN!!!" Yelled Mariko.
Miichan stopped laughing and then quickly turn her head to Haruna again.

"Who is it?" Asked miichan like a secret agent she is.

"W-what? W-who do you mean?" Haruna stuttered when miichan asked that sudden question.

"A-ha~ I just remember now... last night when I go out I saw you with someone..." said Mariko smirked.
"Eh? W-what? S-she's just a friend!!" Said Haruna blushed.

"A friend? Really? You guys were holding hands that time..." mariko rise one of her eyebrow.

"She?!! Holding hands?!! Who is she?!!" Said miichan while shaking Haruna’s shoulder.

"Miichan you are over-reacting!!!" Takamina stopped miichan.

"Hmmm...I think I should call Yuko now." Said mariko taking out her phone and acting like she's searching for Yuko's number.

"W-what?! Marichan don’t!!!" Haruna was trying to stop her.
"Eh?! Wait a minute...don't tell me...it’s her?!" Said miichan when she saw Haruna’s reaction when Mariko mention Yuko’s name.

Haruna was blushing hard right now.

Mariko and miichan grinned at each other.

"Okay fine!" Haruna crossed her arms pouting but still blushing.

"When did you two started going out?" Asked miichan.
"W-well...2 months ago..." answered Haruna shyly.

“Who ask first??” Asked miichan again.
“H-her” Haruna answered it with a shy smile.

"When is your first kiss?" Asked miichan again.

"Ouch!!!" Miichan got smacked by mariko for asking a nonsense question.
"Stop asking stupid question! “

"Wait...I still don't get it...who is it?" Takamina who still clueless finally asking something.

Both miichan and Mariko slapped their own forehead while Haruna just laugh at her.

"That it! Let’s get something to eat! I'm so hungry! And you need food to work out your brain bakamina!"
Said miichan while dragging Takamina out of the room.

"*sighed* looks like I have no chance..."joked mariko leaning on the chair while Haruna just smiled at her.
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That night, they had prepared everything for the attack.
Everything was done as planned.
That night, Takamina keeps telling everyone to be careful.
Their safety also important since the one they will attack was the strongest opponent.
Their target will be heading to a place where they will be doing a drugs trading with the other mafia.

“They are heading to the place right now.” Whispered Miichan to Takamina when she received the information from their spy there.

Takamina nodded to her signaling that they will be ready.

No3b and some of Mariko’s underling already not so far from the place.
While Mariko is preparing the backup in case anything happen.

From their place, Takamina and the others could see their target already arrived at the place.
It seems that they did not bring many people there so it was an advantage for them to make an attack on them.

Takamina signaling to them to block every way so that the mafia group couldn’t skip from the attack.

She looks at the leader of the mafia group, her eyes showing anger.

“Takamina...” Mariko pat her shoulder try to calm Takamina from her anger or else she would suddenly run out to them by herself.
Eventually, Takamina manage to control her anger.

After a while watching the drugs trading, they started to come out from their hiding place to start attacking them.

With the sudden attack from them, the group widens their eyes in shocked as they are not prepared for it.

But the first thing they do was to protect their leader.

No3b along with Mariko’s group started to attack them with their own weapon.
They tried to attack the leader but he was being surrounded by his bodyguard in order to protect him.
Takamina who saw the leader started to rage as she runs towards where the leader was and attack his underling first.

Haruna saw Takamina trying to attack the leader comes to help her.
Haruna kick someone who tried to hit Takamina from behind.

Then Haruna stand behind Takamina as her back is facing Takamina’s.

“This is getting fun.” Said Haruna to Takamina still facing their opponent.

Takamina smile hearing it.

“Takamina, their leader is alone right now, I’ll take care of them.” Whispered Haruna to Takamina.
Without answering, Takamina runs towards the leader who was running away from the place when he was aware that he is in trouble. Haruna tried her best to stop the leader’s bodyguard from going to their leader.

The leader keeps running all his might cuz Takamina is faster.

Unfortunately, he met the dead end in front of him.

Takamina smirk when she saw he doesn’t have anywhere to run from her.

“Tsk…Kato Kenji…where are you going to run now?” said Takamina tighten her fist to control herself.

“So? What are you going to do to me?” asked Kenji facing her still not afraid.

“You killed my parents!!!” Takamina gritted her teeth in anger.

He was confused at first when she said that…but then he remembered.

“Owh…that was your parents? Sorry but they are getting in my way so I have to killed them.” Said him making Takamina more angry.
Takamina dashed towards him as she couldn’t control her anger anymore.
She punches him hard on his face making him fall on the ground.

“Arrrghhh! You’re quite strong for a midget huh…”

Takamina keep punching and kicking him but he also try to fight back but Takamina is in rage making him to only defend himself.
Then he saw a metal bar on the ground so he took the chance to take the metal bar and hit Takamina with it.
Takamina saw it and react faster by holding the metal bar before it hit her body.
The man was shocked so he kicks Takamina on the stomach.

Then he tries the second time to hit her with the metal bar.
Takamina still stopped him then she took the metal bar harshly from him.

“You are going to pay for what have you done to my family!” shout Takamina while hitting him with the metal bar.

Kenji protects himself by using his arm.

Takamina with her anger hitting hard on his right leg making him groaned in pain.
She keeps hitting the same part continuously.

He keeps shouting in pain. “Arrghh!!! STOP IT!!!”

But Takamina suddenly stop hitting him. The metal bar on her hand fall on the ground.
Then she falls on the ground unconscious revealing the other man with the metal bar in his hand behind her.

“Kenzo…” said the man to the other guy.
“Dad, I hit her!” said the man to his dad who’s still on the ground.

“What are you doing here?” Asked his dad.
“I came here as soon I got called from our underling. Let’s go!” explain him as he helps his father to get up.

Haruna arrived there before two of them manage to run away.
When Haruna saw Takamina lying on the ground, she was shocked.

“Takamina!!!” Scream her but then she saw the two men in front of her.

Mariko and Miichan who heard Haruna run towards the place to see what happen.

They saw the leader with his son trying to run away from the place.
The black car arrived at the place. The son put his father inside the car quickly.

Before he also gets in the car, someone suddenly flying kick on him makes him fall far from the car.

He told the driver to just drive without him.
Looks like he’s protecting his father.

It was Yuko who was doing the flying kick.
“Come on! One on one!” shout Yuko to her.
He smirked to her and they started they fight.

Haruna, Miichan and Mariko just watching him. The other underlings already on the ground and some were running away to save themselves.
Mariko’s backup still fighting with the other mafia who’s coming with Kenzo.

After that Haruna remember Takamina so she runs to her.
Miichan and Mariko also run to where Takamina is lying.

“Takamina, are you okay?” said Haruna worried to the unconcsious Takamina while putting her head on her lap.

Takamina’s head is bleeding.

Haruna look up at Miichan. “We need to bring her to the hospital.” Miichan says.

Haruna nodded and Miichan help her to lift Takamina.

“I’ll take care here. You guys go bring Takamina to the hospital. Quick!” said Mariko.
With that Haruna and Miichan bringing Takamina to the hospital with the help of their people.

Yuko is still fighting with Kenzo. Looks like he’s starting to get tired.
Mariko also joins Yuko. She kicks him hard on the stomach.

Before Yuko start to hit him again, Mariko stopped her. Yuko was confused.

“Let’s leave him…to the police.” Smirked Mariko.

Yuko nodded.

Mariko dragged him to the light pole nearby. He was too tired to fight back.

“Sasshi!” Mariko calling Sasshi.
“Yes?” answered Sasshi running towards her.
“Do you bring the handcuffs?” asked Mariko to her.

Sasshi took out the handcuffs from her bag and give it to her boss.
Mariko handcuffed his hand to the light pole so that he can’t run.

“You are going to pay for what you did to Takamina.” Said Mariko while dialing a number on her phone.

“Hello, is this police station? I would like to report that there is group of mafia doing a drugs trading here.
And…Kato Kenzo is here, he tried to kill a girl just now. She already on the way to the hospital. I’ll tell you the place.”

“You…” mumbled Kenji without opening his eyes still weak.

Then Mariko and the others leave the place without leaving any clues to the police that they were there also.
End of flashback.

okay next update will be 2 years from now. :grin:
hahahaha XD
sorry i'm NG in making an action scene... well, i'm still a beginner after all. :nervous
I tried my best! :kneelbow:
if there is any mistaked tell me!
this is getting worst... :doh:
thanks for commenting and reading!!!
thank you minna!!! :k-wink:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 19 update 24/06/2013
Post by: cisda83 on June 24, 2013, 09:43:24 AM: Yeah... an update about Takamina's past cont.

Takamina was still clueless about Haruna and Yuko's relationship... even when they were discussing all those in front of her...

Great action scenes there... I could just image it....

Ah... Just a little more... every thing was perfect with Takamina's plan, and she was beating Kato Kenji up...

But she got struck by Kenzo from behind... because of her blind rage over her parents' killer... she was not aware of her surrounding...

So that was why Kenzo was in prison... because of Mariko and her group had done... but she could not link it to Kenji at all...

I guess the wound from Kenji... resulting Takamina became what she was now...

And why did Haruna leave Takamina while Miichan more than happy taking care of current state of Takamina?

Would Yuki be able to save Mayu?

Would Takamina be able to remember everything back and take her revenge?

How did Miichan and Mariko lose contact after all these time...?

How did Mayu, Jurina and the other younger girls come and live with Miichan...?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen in the next chapter?

Thank you for the update

PS: I do hope the next update would not be in 2 years time...
That's a long time... I would have forgotten about your story by then...
Well... Just update when you have inspiration...and when you have time...
I hope it will be soon enough...

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 19 update 24/06/2013
Post by: Shinoki on June 24, 2013, 01:53:06 PM: that was interesting...
the things that they said were kind of weird at the end, but that makes it fun to read~
ah... Haruna and Yuko~ Kojiyuu~
beware the Gachapin who eats a lot...
I'm basically going in backwards order~
hooray, we didn't have to wait that long~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 19 update 24/06/2013
Post by: qweakb on June 24, 2013, 05:59:48 PM: OH..that is takamina's past... that explain why she being child :(

Hope she will be normal soon... ><

I want to see her manly state toward acchan :rofl:

good update! thank for the update :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 19 update 24/06/2013
Post by: leEwẬy on June 25, 2013, 02:00:42 PM: I guess your troll didn't fail ~~to me~~ :wahaha:
To me, that's great action scene :on GJ:
Takamina's past :on woohoo:
There's also Kojiyuu :nya:
I wonder what'll Acchan react when she saw Takamina's manly side :hehehe:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
And don't make me wait for 2 years :gyaaah:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 19 update 24/06/2013
Post by: Archer1992 on June 30, 2013, 11:28:25 PM: awww!!

I want more Atsumina moments!!!!

UPDATE SOON...

Black saves Mayuyu!!!!

Wmatsui too...the good things is that they arent sisters....
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 19 update 24/06/2013
Post by: Terragen on July 02, 2013, 01:47:45 PM: Hyahahaha kojiyuu

Takamina~ sad

Mayu! Watanabe in danger!

But black leave her cause she mad at her,isnt she should be a little bit worried?

But think sae already goes wit mayu,i think its to late for black to safe mayu,hope someone else safe her.maybe yuko or haruna?
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 1 update 05/07/2013
Post by: chiqinna on July 05, 2013, 07:59:03 AM: here it goes! :cow:
Chapter 20 part 1

Acchan’s pov
After hearing everything from Mariko, I headed to Miichan’s bakery to see my favorite midget. It’s already late.
My mind is still thinking about what I had heard from Mariko earlier, especially her questions.

Do I really love Minami?
If one day Minami is back to normal, do I still love her?
Am I ready to accept whether Takamina remember me or not when she got her memories back?
What if she doesn’t remember me?
And the worst is what if she hates me because I’m a mafia?
Mariko said Takamina once ask her to stop being a mafia and live a normal life.
Mafia is a mafia after all whether they are good or bad.

But, it all doesn’t matter for now.
All I need to think is Minami’s safety.
Before I leave Mariko’s room, she tells me about the man who just being release from prison a few weeks ago. The one who make Minami becomes like that.

Kato Kenzo.

I think he is the one I saw outside the restaurant when me and Minami eating.
He looks like he wants to kill her.
From now on, I have to be careful. I heard that he had many underlings.
I have to protect Minami from them.
End of Acchan’s pov

Acchan was so busy with her thought that she doesn’t realize that she already arrived at Miichan’s bakery.
“Hey Acchan!” greeted Miichan at the counter when she saw Acchan enters the bakery.
“Hey.” Greeted Acchan shortly with a smile.
“Takamina is inside. She’s being waiting for you. And just bring her back home since it already late.
I still have worked to do here.” Said Miichan while her hand is busy working.
“Okay.” Answered Acchan then she walk inside the back room.

There she saw Minami playing psp on the couch with a pouting face.
Acchan quickly sit besides her smiling to her.

Minami saw Acchan besides her then pouting while looking away.
“Ne…are you mad?” Asked Acchan to her when Minami looking away from her.
Seeing Minami did not answering her question, Acchan wrapped her arms around Minami and lean her chin on her shoulder.

“Acchan say sorry okay…” said Acchan looking at her.
“Acchan is late!” said Takamina finally saying something.
“Sorry~ sorry~ I promised I won’t be late again okay?” says Acchan.
Minami turned her head to look at Acchan and slowly smiles.
“Okay!” said her smiling.

Acchan smiles back to her.

“Let’s go.” Acchan took her hand and walk out of the bakery.

As they were walking, Takamina suddenly realizes they already passed the playground.
Takamina stopped walking and look at Acchan.
“What’s wrong?” Asked Acchan.
“Where are we going?” Asked Takamina curious.
“Home.” Answered Acchan shortly.

“But I want to play~” whined Takamina while swaying Acchan’s hand.
“Minami, it’s late already, let’s just go home. We can play tomorrow.” Tell Acchan smiles to her.
Takamina started to pout shows her sad face.

Acchan quickly pull Takamina and hug her tightly.
Takamina was surprised by the sudden action.
“Acchan.”Said Takamina still dumbfounded.
“Let’s just stay like this for a while okay...” Said Acchan tighten her hug without open her eyes.
“Un.” Takamina nodded and also started to put her arms around Acchan’s waist.

After a while, Acchan part from the hug.
Takamina looks at her with a confused face making Acchan to giggle.
“Minami, do you want to go to amusement park?” Asked Acchan smiling.
Takamina’s eyes started to sparkle brightly when Acchan mention amusement park.

Her smile grew bigger and bigger.

She nodded continuously.

“Un! Yes! I want to go there! I really want to go there!” said Takamina actively.

Acchan let out a small laugh seeing Takamina’s reaction.
“Okay, soon I’ll bring you to the amusement park okay?” Said Acchan.

“Okay! Can Miichan join too?” Asked Takamina innocently.

Acchan nodded.

“Jurina-chan?” Asked her again.

Acchan nodded again.

“Ermm…Mayu-chan?” Asked her again.

Acchan nodded while giggling.

“Ermm…-“Acchan interrupt her before Takamina could list more name.
“Bring everyone then.” Said Acchan smiling to her.

“Yay! We’ll go to amusement park!!!” shout Takamina jumping around and suddenly she jump on Acchan’s back.

Luckily Acchan manage to hold both her legs.
“You’re getting heavy Minami!” joked Acchan laughing.

“Let’s go home!” said Acchan then walk with Takamina on her back.
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At Miichan’s house.

Everyone is at the living room.
Miichan, Lovetan and Takamina are watching TV while Jurina and Kanon are doing their homework.
They haven’t realized that someone is not there.
“Ne, minna~ Acchan said she will bring me to the amusement park.” Tells Takamina to them.
“Really?” asked Miichan while caressing Takamina’s hair.
“Un! And she said everyone can join too!” said her cheerfully.
“Yay!” Shout Jurina with joy making everyone doing the same.

Then Takamina started to look around sensing something is wrong.
“Where’s Mayu-chan?” Asked her still looking around.
Everyone also started to look around the house.
Jurina even goes to their room to see whether Mayu is sleeping but she’s not there.
“She’s not here.” Said Jurina.
“Maybe she’s at her father’s house.” Lovetan says.

“Hmmm…maybe…but it’s rare for her to go to her home at this time,
usually when she goes home she would tell us first.” Said Jurina curious.
“Call her.” Said Miichan started to get worried.

Jurina took her phone and then dial Mayuyu’s number.
“Her phone is off.” Said Jurina when she tries to call her.

“That’s weird, Mayuyu never turn her phone off.” Lovetan said starting to get worried.
“Let me ask Black.” Said Miichan texting Black. She got Black’s number during Takamina’s birthday.

To: Black
Hey Black, I just want to ask you about Mayuyu. Did she stay at her father’s house tonight?”
From: Miichan

At the other side,
Black who just got out from Watanabe’s villa just received the message from Miichan.

‘She is not home yet? She is not here at her father’s house too…’ thought Black.
Then she tried to call Mayuyu’s phone but it was off.
“Where could she be…” mumbled Black thinking.

Then she remembered the time when she left Mayu because Mayu took her wallet secretly
from her pocket and she could not hold her anger, that time she saw that tomboy girl walking
towards Mayu as she walks away from Mayu.

‘I have a bad feeling towards this girl from the first time we met…’ said Black in her mind.

She started to get worried. Then she text Miichan back.

To: Miichan
She’s with me now.
From: Black

Black doesn’t want them to get worried that’s why she lied to them.

“I need to find Mayu…” Said Black worried.

Not long after she got a new message from an unknown number.

It says,
‘Want to find Mayuyu? She’s here. *a pic of Mayu with both her legs and hands being tied on a chair*’
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T.B.C~

want to see Takamina's manly side ehhhh.... :hehehe:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 1 update 05/07/2013
Post by: leEwẬy on July 05, 2013, 08:23:51 AM: YES! I want to see Takamina maly side :ding:
Acchan, you're in love with Takamina :luvluv2:
Takamina just like a spoiled kid and Acchan is her mother :wahaha:
Now, Yuki and the others people know that Mayu's missing :stuffed:
OMG~~~ Mayu's in danger :on polter:
Beat Sae and save Mayu, YUKI!! :onioncheer:
Can't wait to see the action scene :nya:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 1 update 05/07/2013
Post by: olive29 on July 05, 2013, 08:57:55 AM: I want to see Yuki in action..

Next time it's Yuki vs Sae, right ??

Update soon, pleasee... :bow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 1 update 05/07/2013
Post by: blakwhite on July 05, 2013, 01:44:19 PM: me me, i wanna see takamina manly side XD

next will be black vs sae, eh?
looking forward for next chap :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 1 update 05/07/2013
Post by: qweakb on July 05, 2013, 03:27:58 PM: I like the Astumina moment!!! so sweet :wub: :wub:

OMG OMG!!! Cant wait for the next chapter for Mayuki :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:

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want to see Takamina's manly side ehhhh....

YES!!!! ABSOLUTELY
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 1 update 05/07/2013
Post by: Terragen on July 06, 2013, 05:06:46 PM: Takamina manly side! YÒSH!!!

And mayuki moment!

The moment they develope their love
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 1 update 05/07/2013
Post by: kurogumi on July 07, 2013, 08:36:17 AM: hai hai hai i need the part 2 jezzz it's really frustrating now...mayuuuuuuu~

takamina manly side??? how come!!! LOL
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 1 update 05/07/2013
Post by: gek geki on July 07, 2013, 08:42:13 AM: MI AMORE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOON
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 1 update 05/07/2013
Post by: mo-chan on July 08, 2013, 01:29:44 AM: Mayu!!! :panic:
Yuki save Mayu XD
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 1 update 05/07/2013
Post by: chiqinna on July 19, 2013, 07:19:59 AM: Chapter 20 part 2

Black's eyes widen when she saw the picture of unconscious Mayu being tied on a chair.
Then she got another message from the number.

'Come to this old building inside the big forest not far from the town if you want to save this cute little girl.
P/s: you know the consequences if you call the police.'

After that, Black immediately went to the location stated.
Black run all the way to the big forest.
Long after, she saw a small road with a big trees surrounding on both side of the road.

'I never knew that there's a road in this forest.' Thought Black as she looks around.

Since it was night, and dark, full moon, creepy atmosphere can be felt as the sound of the crickets and also the blowing wind from the forest. :on shady: [Am I making a ghost/horror story right now? Lol~ let's continue ~ :sweat: ]

She started searching for the old building.
On the right side of the small road, she saw a big white abandoned building from afar.
It was located not far from the road. It seems like there's a light from inside the building.

She quickly runs towards the building.
It looks like there were two big men outside the building. Maybe they were ordered to guard the outside.

Black calmly walks towards them.
When they saw black, one of them went inside the building.
He then come out and told Black to go inside.
So Black walk inside the room but still being careful as she walks and
looks around afraid that there is a trap made by them.
Once Black is inside the house, the front door closed and the black-coat man comes towards her.

"We need to check on you first." He said. They want to make sure that Black doesn’t bring any weapon.
"I'm harmless." Black says while putting her arms up to show them that she did not bring weapon.
"Really?" A voice could be heard from upstairs as the figure coming out from the room showing herself.
Black looks at Sae who have a grin on her face.
"I don’t think you are harmless, Black. Why would one of the top mafia like you is harmless?" Said Sae making Black slightly surprise that she knows about her true identity.
"Well, don’t be surprise that I know about you. Even Mayuyu doesn’t know about it am I right?" Said her smirked.
"Where is she?" Asked Black still calm.
"She's here. Follow me... and! Dont dare to do anything stupid." Warned Sae to her as she led Black to a room.
Inside the room, there is Mayu on the chair with both her hands and legs tied. Her head was looking down.
10 black-coat men were surrounding her so that Black could not do anything to save her.

Black rush towards Mayu and bend down to check if she is okay.

Suddenly Mayu's head look up a little enough to look at Black's concerned eyes.

"I....heard....it." Mayu said in low voice.

"You...heard what?" Asked Black curious.

"You...a mafia." Answered Mayu weakly.

Black was speechless.
There is nothing to say about the statement. It was true after all.

"Are you two done having a chit chat?" Sae walks around them.
Black stands up and looks at her.
"What do you want me to do?" Black asked. For now Mayu’s safety is more important than her identity.
"Hmmmm...I want you...to have a date with me!" Said Sae grinning then she earn a glare from Black.
"Wo~ wo~ easy there I’m just kidding okay~ you and Mayuyu really doesn’t like to take jokes huh..."

Then someone comes in.
He slowly walks towards them with a stick leg.
"I want...her father." Said him pointing at Mayu. Mayu look up surprised when she hears it.
"If you want her father then why you took her instead?" Black asked glaring at him.

"Tsk...When you go fishing, you need a bait to catch a fish. Get that? So...his beloved daughter is our bait." He explains.
“Why...you want...my father?” asked Mayuyu.
“Hmmm...Let’s just say, he’s my rival, and I need to get rid of him. Maybe you should ask your father instead...well, if you manage to see him before he...die.” He answered and then laughs loudly.

Mayuyu keep her face blank.

“Sae, your job is done here. Your payment will be sent to your account.” He added.
“Ummm...nah...I’m going to stay with them...just in case anything happen.” Said Sae as she smirked to the two girls.
“We will deal with them tomorrow, make sure they don’t try to escape.
Especially, that bodyguard.” He explains as he walks out o the room.

It’s already passed midnight.
And now the only left is Sae, Black and Mayuyu in the room.
Black also being tied on a chair beside Mayu while Sae was sitting in front of them watching at them.
It took a long time for them to tied Black, some got bruise on their face, and Black also got some beating from them.

It’s more like Black and Sae having a glaring contest.
The other bodyguard had been order by Sae to guard outside since both of them could not move.

“You know...it’s not my intention to do this to you, Mayuyu.” Said Sae breaking the silence.

Her statement making Mayuyu looking up at her.
“I’m just doing this for money~” she continued.

“Why are you telling this to us?” Asked Black.
Sae shrugged her shoulders. “Just because...I-“

“I’m hungry...” Said Mayuyu weakly as she lean her head on Black’s shoulder.
Black got startled by the action but she keeps herself calm.

“Hungry? I’ll get you some food!” Said Sae got up to the door and wink at them before she goes out.

“She’s really weird.” Mumbled Black.
“No, I think...She likes you.” Said Mayuyu in a low voice.
Black did not hear it.

Black was trying to take the rope off her hands but it was tied tightly.
Black sighed. “It’s useless.”

“Are you still mad?” Asked Mayuyu.
Black knows she’s asking about the wallet incident.
“Your father said to me...to be patient with you.” Black just looking at the floor.
“Regret...should...not...have...tricked...you...” Mayuyu was feeling regret and blame herself that they were in this situation right now.
“Don’t blame yourself. Soon or later they will get you for sure.” Black said.

“I know~ you are the one who’s at fault. You should not just leave me like that!” Said Mayuyu suddenly straighten up herself.

‘Is she a bipolar or something?’ thought Black.

Then Mayuyu lean her head back at Black’s shoulder.
“How...you become a mafia?” Asked Mayuyu to Black.

Black stays silent.

“Why?” Asked Mayuyu did not give up.
Still Black doesn’t answer her.

“You should use this time to escape shouldn’t you?” Asked Mayuyu.
“I can’t.” Answer Black finally.

“Then you want my father to die?”
Mayuyu’s statement making Black turn to look at her.

“No.”

“Then...” Mayuyu suddenly feeling something in her heart.
She feels like she wants to cry.
Black realized about Mayu’s sudden change. She looks pale.
“They will kill my father...” said Mayuyu as a drop of tear falling on her cheek. She remembers again what did the man before said to her.
“Mayu...” Black doesn’t know what to do to calm her.

“They will not have a chance to do that to your father. Trust me.” Said Black looking at her.
Mayuyu also looks at Black still with teary eyes.

“How?” Asked Mayu.

“Let’s just wait and see.” Said Black finally smile.

‘This is my first time seeing her smile like that.’ Said Mayu to herself.

Unconsciously, she herself smiles seeing Black smiling to her.

“Kashiwagi Yuki...” Mayu called her real name.
“Why are you so curious about my real name actually?” Asked Black curious.

“Just...because.” answered Mayuyu.

“Can I...call you...Yuki?”
Black was thinking for a while.

“In one condition, you can call me Yuki if I can call you Mayuyu.” Said Black to her.
Mayuyu smile again at her.

Somehow, seeing her smile warms Black’s heart.

Suddenly, they hear a laughing from the outside.
It’s not coming from the man for sure. It’s sound like a girl’s laugh. Creepy laugh that makes you Goosebumps.
Then they also heard a scream from the man.

“W-what was that?” whispered Mayuyu feeling scared.

“Finally...” Black sighed in relief. Mayuyu look at Black confused.

“It’s…Gekikara.”

T.B.C

Hmmm...I don't have ideas actually so I just write what is on my mind since I felt like I need to update this.
Yuki vs. Sae? Hmmmmm... :hehehe: I don't know..
Gomenasai~ for the late update.. :bow:
Hope you enjoy it...
Gekikara in action! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 2 update 19/07/2013
Post by: olive29 on July 19, 2013, 09:29:22 AM: Finally...an update !!!

Thanks :bow:

Gekikara to the rescue !!! :grin:

Can't wait for the next chapter... :grin:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 2 update 19/07/2013
Post by: cisda83 on July 19, 2013, 12:49:27 PM: Ah... Geki was following Black...

Would Geki be able to save Black and Mayu?

Would Black be able to prevent Mayu's dad from getting in danger?

What about Sae?

What's going to happen to the rest?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 2 update 19/07/2013
Post by: Shinoki on July 19, 2013, 01:06:52 PM: Gekikara~~!!!!! She makes me so happy for some reason...
Sae is weird....
Mayuyu thinks that Sae likes Black
Mayuki progresses...
Ah, the dad.... curious... though I don't really think that he'll get killed...
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 2 update 19/07/2013
Post by: qweakb on July 19, 2013, 11:11:27 PM: OMG OMG OMG!!! Gekikara sama in action! YES!! :twothumbs

Mayuki moment..sweet :wub:

Mayu, you actually care about your dad :)

okay...now waiting in progress for the fic :banghead: :nervous
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 2 update 19/07/2013
Post by: kurogumi on July 20, 2013, 02:00:32 AM: Oh mayu is a goòd kid

How geki come?ithough black not contact any person

Yay mayu could called black by her real name,this two step to mayuki's

Mayu should take over her dad bussines
Thank for the update
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 2 update 19/07/2013
Post by: leEwẬy on July 20, 2013, 10:32:05 AM: Wonder who's that man - the man who's Mayu's father rival :dunno:
Oho~ Thanks to him, Mayuki finally had some progress :farofflook:
Now, they call each other by their nickname or realname :on gay:
Yuki's a mafia :stoned:
And also Gekikara is going to help them :shock:
How's she able to know where Yuki was? GPS? :wahaha:
Can't wait to see action scenes :on drink:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 2 update 19/07/2013
Post by: DC2805 on July 20, 2013, 06:33:07 PM: Geki to the rescue! :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 2 update 19/07/2013
Post by: gek geki on July 27, 2013, 03:17:49 AM: GIVE ME LOVED GIVE US A KISSED

GIVE ME MAYUKI MORE

GIVE ME WMATSUI ON THIS FIC

KEKEKE
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 2 update 19/07/2013
Post by: gek geki on August 17, 2013, 04:34:13 AM: WHY???
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine REPLY!!! 21/08/13
Post by: chiqinna on August 21, 2013, 09:56:05 AM: HAI! :D
Olive29, cisda83, Shinoki, qweakb, kurogumi, leEwẬy, DC2805, geki geki:
thanks for the comment.
and sorry for making you guys waiting for so looooong time....again. :sweatdrop:
geki geki is right... i just realized that this fic lack of loves and kiss moment between the pairs...
sorry..hehe well...i realized that i'm slow in making the progress between their loves...
i tried... :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
do you still want me to continue? of course i need to! grrrr!!! :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
blame this PROCRASTINATION~
again...Gekikara in action!!!! hahahahahaha!!!!
sorry for being playful author! :bow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine REPLY!!! 21/08/13
Post by: cisda83 on August 21, 2013, 05:45:30 PM: Yeah... Please keep continue the story...

I like the story lots...

Thank you

Can't wait to see the next update

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine REPLY!!! 21/08/13
Post by: leEwẬy on August 22, 2013, 05:03:03 PM: Yeah, yeah~~~ continue, please :mon pray2:
I want to know what's next :on study:
I'm ok with the slow progress as long as it still have Mayuki little moments. :mon ignore:
Anyway, I'm looking forward to your update :ding:
So please update ASAP, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine REPLY!!! 21/08/13
Post by: qweakb on August 22, 2013, 07:55:35 PM: :on drink:

Lucky... scare that you will be like other writers and disappear with not finishing story :mon whimper:

thank you :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 3! 23/08/13
Post by: chiqinna on August 23, 2013, 09:32:50 AM: Chapter 20 part 3

“It’s...Gekikara.”
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After Black received the message from unknown number, she immediately went to the location stated in the message.

On her way to the place, she was thinking for a backup plan in case she did not manage to save Mayu. She decided to ask for Rena’s help since she is the only person who closes to Black.

She just forwards the messages she received earlier to Rena.

Meanwhile, Rena was on her way home when she received the message from Black.

“It’s Mayu...” mumbled Rena when she saw a picture of Mayu being tied on a chair that was sent by Black.

Then she received another text from Black.
She was confused for a while on why Black sending this to her.
Then she understands that Black want to ask for her help.

“Black must be on the way to that place now...” said Rena.
With that, Rena makes her moves to the location.

On her way, she bumps into someone, it’s Sae. [Rena still don’t know who is Sae actually]

“Oh! Sorry~” said Sae then she walks away just like nothing happen just now.

Rena looks at her back then she continues on searching for the building.

When she arrived there, she saw many black-coat men outside the house guarding the surrounding.

Seeing the black-coat men reminding her of something.
Her past.
People who killed her parents, also wearing the same clothes just like them.
Rena still standing there looking at the black-coat men talking to each other.

Her heart start to feel hurt remembering again how she and Jurina running away from them.
How she was tortured by them.

Rena slowly walks towards them and the black-coat men finally realized her existence.

“Hey Miss! What are you doing here?!” shout one of them while walking towards Rena.
Rena stopped in her track. Then she starts to look down and bite her nails.

[Imagine the music coming out when Gekikara in action during MG1]

“What is wrong with her?” Asked some of the man.

“Nee...we meet again...” Gekikara said looking at each of them with her creepy eyes.

All of the men were confused. Then one of them said,
“I knew her! S-she’s...that crazy psycho from Rapappa!”

Hearing that they slowly back away from her and position themselves to fight her.

Gekikara shows her creepy smiles then walks towards them
who are backing away still with their fighting position.

“Nee...okkotteru?”

One of them starts to make moves by running in full speed towards Gekikara.
Unfortunately for him, Gekikara easily dodge him and catch his head then put her arm around his neck.
She kicks his stomach using her knees. The kick maybe looks weak to them but the one who got kick was already down holding his stomach.

“Must be something she put on her knee...” said one of them scared a bit.

All of them start to fight her at the same time.

It makes Gekikara happier than getting mad. Her creepy laugh making them cannot focus on their fighting.

“Arrrgghhhh!!!” Shout the man whose hair got pulled hard by Gekikara.

Then she uses her leg to kick the one on her left that was trying to punch her.
Suddenly one of the black-coat men manages to punch her on her face.

She looks around to see the person who just punches her.
“Are you mad? because I’m mad now.” Said her then he try to kick her but she dodge it quickly
and she fight back by kicking on his butt hard making him fall with his face facing the ground.

Gekikara still fighting the others then she step on his body making him groan.

After finish her work on the outside, Gekikara walks inside the building and more black-coat men ready to face her.

“The more, the merrier...” said Gekikara to herself then start her crazy moves.

Meanwhile with Black and Mayu

“Gekikara? W-who is that?” Asked Mayu.
“She’s...you will see her soon.” Said Black doesn’t know how to tell her that Gekikara is actually Rena.

“Her laugh sounds creepy...”said Mayu scared.

Black just stays silent and waiting for Gekikara to save them.

Suddenly the door open, revealing Gekikara with a smile on her face.

One of the black-coat man kick her making her fall to the side.

Mayu who was eyes widen still shock seeing the live scene in front of her.
More likely shock to see that person who was completely turned into a
different person than she usually sees.

‘So...Gekikara is...Rena...what the hell is happening here?’ thought Mayu dumfounded.

“I will explain everything to you later.” Said Black serious.

Gekikara who was still on the door beating the man that was already down on the floor.
She got up and run towards Black and Mayu.

“Black! Are you okay?” said her smiling while cupping Black’s cheeks.

Mayu just looking at them blankly.

“Ah? It’s blood...” Gekikara said while looking at her hands that was full with blood.

“Untied us first.” Said Black and Gekikara nodded to her.
After she untied Black, Black went to Mayu and releases her from the rope.

“Let’s go.” Said Black as they walk out of the room.
Then they heard a sound coming from outside the building.
Looks like more black-coat men is coming.

“We need to use the back door. Come on.”
“You guys go first, I’ll distract them.” Said Rena looking at them.

Black and Mayu quickly go out of the building.

They have to enter the forest since the black-coat man already at the front building.

Mayu look again at the building.
“Mayu...” called Black.
“How about Rena?” Asked Mayu.
“She will be fine.” Without wasting more time, Black dragged Mayu from the building and enters the forest.

Eventually Mayu’s dad found out about Mayu from his people.
He got really mad to Kato Kenji for using her daughter as bait and
also to Black for not taking care of Mayu.

He smacked his hands on the table making all the people in the room to get startled.

“Find where they took my Mayu!!!” He shouts to his people.

Then his bodyguard comes in telling that they found where they bring Mayu.

Watanabe Hiroshi calm down for a while before he speak again.
“Call Shinoda, we need her help.” Command him to his bodyguard.
“Yes, sir.” Answered his bodyguard while taking out his phone.
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.
.
After that Shinoda Mariko send her people to help Watanabe
saving her daughter and also Black since they already know Black must be with her also.
Some of Watanabe’s bodyguard also going there to help.

When they arrived there, many of their opponent already lying on the ground.

“This more likely Gekikara’s doing.” Said one of Mariko’s underlings looking at the mess.

They got inside the house and saw Gekikara still fighting with the black-coat men.
They join her to finish them.

“Gekikara-sama, where is Black and Watanabe Hiroshi’s daughter?” Asked Mariko’s underling.

“I think they enter the forest behind the building.
Some of the black-coat men already searching for them.” Said Gekikara smiling still fighting.
[She still smiling...-.-]
Some of them went to the forest to search Black and Mayu before their rival found them first.

Meanwhile
“I think we’re safe for now.” Said Black while looking around.
They already run deep inside the forest not knowing where they are.

She looks at Mayu who was keeping silent.

“Are you okay?” asked Black worried.
Mayu was about to fall when Black fast catches her in her arms.

‘She must be tired from running.’ Thought Black.

She then laid Mayu on the flat ground.

“It’s uncomfortable...I wanna go home.” Mumbled Mayu with her eyes closed.

Black sit down on the ground beside Mayu while leaning herself on the big tree.
“Be patient, we’ll rest here for a while.” Black said as she closed her eyes tired.

Suddenly she felt a heavy thing on her.

When she opens her eyes, she saw Mayu lying on her while hugging her body.

Realizing their position, Black heart started to beat faster and her cheek getting red.

She froze in her position. Plus Mayu’s head is on her chest.

‘Breath in...Breath out...’ said her in her mind while breathing silently
trying to slow down her heartbeat.

Slowly they fall asleep in that awkward position.
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that early morning,

Mayu slowly woke up from her sleep.

The first thing she saw when she looks up is that angel sleeping face.

Mayu keeps staring at her until her head slowly moving forward to the sleeping face.

Her eyes focus on the irresistible lips.

Finally her lips meet the other one softly...

T.B.C~

how was it? :?
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 3! 23/08/13
Post by: olive29 on August 23, 2013, 10:52:09 AM: Finally... an UPDATE !!!! :bow:

Mayu finally made her move... :thumbsup

Will Mayu tell Jurina that Rena is Gekikara??

What's Jurina reaction when she knows that Rena is a mafia??

Can't wait for the next chapter...

Update soon please... :bow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 3! 23/08/13
Post by: cisda83 on August 23, 2013, 11:52:03 AM: Yeah an update... At last...

Eh... Mayu kissed Yuki?

What's going to happen to Mayuki next?

Would Yuki be in trouble from Hiroshi?

What's going to happen to Kato next?

Would he be able to be defeated?

Would Yuko and Haruna come back?

Would Minami be able to regain her intelegent again?

Would Marimii happen in the future?

Somehow nearly all the members of Rapappa had a past with Kato, same as no3b.

Can't wait to see more

Thank you for the update...

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 3! 23/08/13
Post by: Zita on August 23, 2013, 09:56:13 PM: I really like Mayu right now. Her first move. I'm so proud at her. :grin:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 3! 23/08/13
Post by: Archer1992 on August 23, 2013, 11:17:17 PM: FINALLY!!!

hahahahahahaha

thanks and continue soon!!
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 3! 23/08/13
Post by: qweakb on August 24, 2013, 06:12:57 AM: Quote
Finally her lips meet the other one softly...

:luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1

Mayu finally! Kissing scene.. :kekeke: LOL

Good updated as alway! haha :hee:

I hope that mayu's dad won't blame yuki since she failed to protect mayu..

Quote
Some of the black-coat men already searching for them.” Said Gekikara smiling still fighting.
[She still smiling...-.-]

that why she is Gekikara! haha :on lol:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 3! 23/08/13
Post by: leEwẬy on August 24, 2013, 04:38:15 PM: An update :on woohoo: :mon squee:
Mayu finally had a move :farofflook: :mon money:
Wonder what'll Yuki react :kekeke:
Gekikara is so scary and also very cool :ding:
Will Mayu tell Jurina about Gekikara is Rena :dunno:
Also what'll Mayu's dad do to Yuki after this :mon huh2:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 4! 31/08/13
Post by: chiqinna on August 31, 2013, 08:30:02 AM: Chapter 20 part 4

That early morning,

Mayu slowly woke up from her sleep.

The first thing she saw when she looks up is that angel sleeping face.

Mayu keeps staring at her until her head slowly moving forward to the sleeping face.

Her eyes focus on the irresistible lips.

Finally her lips meet the other one softly…
.
.
.
.
After a few seconds Mayu can sense the other one was waking up,
then she realized what she was doing but when she moves her lips away from hers,
their eyes meet...

Both hearts were thumping louder than usual.

Suddenly Yuki brings Mayu closer to her that Mayu was surprise by the action.

“W-wha-“Before Mayu could say anything, Yuki stop her.
“Ssshhhhh...” whispered Yuki to her ear.

Before Mayu could misunderstood more of her action, Yuki finally tell her in a low voice,
“I hear a movements...stay still and don’t move.” Yuki said.

Their position is still as last night. Mayu is on top of Yuki.

Yuki might be not thinking about what had happened a while ago
because she was too alert to their surroundings.

Mayu on the other side was closing her eyes tight with a red face trying to hold her breath.

Then they hear a voice from afar. It was getting nearer towards them.

“Black!” shouts the voice again but this time they can clearly heard them calling for Yuki.

‘It sounds like Sasshi’s voice.’ Thought Yuki.

“Watanabe-san!” they were also calling for Mayu’s name.
It seems like there were some people there.

“I think they are searching for us.” Said Yuki to Mayu.

“...”

“I think you should get up now, Mayu.” Said Yuki when Mayu still remained in her position that is above Yuki.

Mayu slowly get up without looking at the Yuki below her.
“Black! There you are!” Sasshi finally found them under the big tree.

“Watanabe-san! Are you okay?” said one of them.
Mayu recognized him as her father’s bodyguard.
“I think so...”Then she felt like head is spinning.

“Watanabe-san!” Mayu fainted.
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Mayu slowly opened her eyes from the deep sleep.

She found herself on a bed.

She looks around then she realized she was in her own bedroom.

Then a maid enters the room bringing a tray with foods.

“Good evening Watanabe-san.” Said the maid smiling to her.

‘It’s already evening?’ said Mayu to herself.

Mayu slowly get up to sit herself.
“How I get here?” She asks the maid.

“Your father’s bodyguard quickly brings you here when you were unconscious.”

“Where’s Yuki?”Asked her again.

“Yuki? Who is that Watanabe-san?” The maid was clueless.

‘I forgot...they know her as Black....’ thought Mayu.

“Never mind...I’m hungry.” Said Mayu as she takes the foods and satisfied her hunger.
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Meanwhile in Shinoda’s mansion.

Black just got back from Watanabe’s villa.
Sasshi already went home first since their job is done.
Black enters the front door and the first thing she saw is
Sasshi command her people to buy many melon pans.

“Buy as many melon pans as you can, understand?” Sasshi order her people.
They just nodded then leave.

‘This must be something happen to Rena.’ Black said to herself.

“What happen to Rena?” Asked Black to Sasshi as she walks towards Sasshi who sit on the sofa in the living room.

“Well, it started from last night...after we finish all the black-coat gang,
Rena wants to beat them even though they were already unconscious.
And she keeps saying she want to kill more black-coat men.
We have no choice but to hit her head hard so she fainted and
we bring her home and now she woke up she still thinking about the black-coat men.
Don’t worry; Mariko-sama is with her now.” Explain Sasshi.

Black sighs silently.

Then she walks to her room to rest.
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Miichan’s house

The members in the house were still clueless about
Mayu getting kidnapped last night because no one is telling them anything.

Acchan is on her way to the house to see her beloved Minami~

When she knocks on the front door, there is no respond from them.

She thought they all went out but when she twisting the door knob, it’s open.

She opens the door to see if anyone is inside, then she heard a noise.
Some people were taking a shower.

Then she heard them laughing and singing.

Curious, she decided to enter and see what happen.
She walks slowly towards the source of the sound.

It was coming from the bathroom. [Of course, they are taking shower right... =.=]

‘What are they doing inside...together?’ ask Acchan to herself as she put her ear near the bathroom door.

‘It’s Minami...’ thought Acchan as she heard Minami’s laughing.

The door suddenly open making Acchan almost fall inside if she did not balance herself.

“Acchan??!!” Said Jurina shocked seeing Acchan outside the room.
Luckily Jurina was behind the door so Acchan did not see her naked except for the other three.

Miichan was already gone out to work.

“Acchan!!!” the only person who greeted her happily, Minami of course.

Acchan was stunned seeing the scene in front of her eyes.

“Okay, we’ll see you later!” said Jurina quickly closed the door seeing Acchan
shocked seeing them together in the bathroom. Naked.

After they finish their bath, and dress up, they went to the living room
to see Acchan who obviously still shocked.

“Acchan...hehehe sorry for what you’ve been seeing earlier. Jurina apologized.

“I-It’s okay...I’m the one who should not just enter the house just like t-that.” Said Acchan while giving an awkward smile.
Her cheeks turn out slightly pink when she recall the earlier scene where she saw Minami’s body.

“Acchan!!Let’s go!” Suddenly Minami comes hugging her from behind making her redder on her face.

Lovetan, Jurina and Kanon were giving her a smirk on their face.

“A-ah, come on Minami. L-Let’s go!” Said Acchan as she walks quickly towards the door without taking Minami’s hand.
“Acchan! Wait for me!!!” said Minami as she put her shoes on and run after Acchan.

“They look cute together nee...” said Lovetan.

“Neee...” Jurina and Kanon nodded as they agree with Lovetan.
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Minami and Acchan were walking towards the park.
Acchan was walking slightly ahead of Minami while Minami is holding
the edge of Acchan’s shirt since Acchan did not hold her hand.

“Acchan...”mumbled Minami seeing Acchan’s weird behavior.
“Minami...” Acchan started the conversation.

“Um?”

“How many times have you guys taking a shower together?” Asked Acchan without looking at her.
“We always taking shower together...with Miichan and Mayu-Chan also! Next time
if Acchan have time Acchan can join us too!!” Answered Minami smiling widely.

Acchan stopped walking and look at the smiling girl.

“Next time don’t do that with the others.” Said Acchan firmly.
“Why?” Minami frowned.

“I-I mean, next time, lock the front door before you guys taking a bath together. It’s dangerous!” Said Acchan changing the topic.

“Ah~ Okay~” They continued walking.

“Is there anything else that you do with the others..Together?” Asked Acchan again wanting to know more.

“Hmmm...” Minami hummed while putting her index finger to her chin.
“There is!” Minami says.

“What is it?” Acchan look at her curious.
“This!! *Chu*” Minami kissed her on the lips then running away laughing to the playground.

Once again today, Acchan was leaving stunned in her position. :lol:
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Not far from the park, there are 3 men spying on them.

One taking out his phone and looks like he try to inform something to his boss.

“It’s true, the one with her is Maeda Atsuko, Rapappa’s member.” Said him talking on the phone.

Meanwhile, At Kato Kenji’s mansion.

Kenzo had just finished talking on the phone.
There was a grin on his face looks like he had something on his mind.

“Kenzo!” His moment was interrupted by his father who walks inside his resting room with his walking stick.

“Yes father?” Kenzo said to his father grinning.

“I told you to take care of that Watanabe’s daughter. Where were you last night?” Asked his father mad.

“I was...at the casino.” Said him frankly.

“Stupid!! Now we lost her you know that?!! That Watanabe...
he’s lucky to have Rapappa to back him up. If not, I would already kill him.” Said him gritting his teeth.

Meanwhile his son was still grinning looking somewhere else.
His father looks at him mad.

“We had lost many underlings and you still smiling like that, Kenzo!!”

Kenji’s shouting voice startled Kenzo from his thought.

“A-ah...don’t worry dad...I have better plan to do~” said him.

“Tsk~ You better do.” His father walks away still mad.

T.B.C~

okay, ignore the grammar,my English.
I cannot promise that I will update on time, but one thing for sure, I will definitely finish this story! :)
Even if it takes a years lol~ :P ~~if I still alive~~
Thanks for those who still reading this crappy fic of mine~ :kneelbow:
and also for those who comment on it.
*I'm still thinking... :hehehe:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 4! 31/08/13
Post by: cisda83 on August 31, 2013, 11:44:02 AM: Ah... Minami is so innocent...

Poor Atsuko getting her brain fried....

What kind of plan would Kenzo had?

Would it has anything to do with Minami?

Would Minami remember her past...?

Would Atsuko be able to save and protect Minami?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 4! 31/08/13
Post by: chichay12 on August 31, 2013, 01:14:15 PM: Quote from: Rukaeru on August 31, 2013, 01:00:31 PM
Hope you will finish this ...... With SMUT!! :wriggly:
Nyahahahahaha!!! :on gay:
^ :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly:

i want more atsumina XD
thank you for the update :on gay:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 4! 31/08/13
Post by: Archer1992 on August 31, 2013, 03:23:54 PM: Minami is like a child!!!

poor atsuko, she have to be really honest whit minami maybe she understand her feelings....

thanks

Update soon!!!!
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 4! 31/08/13
Post by: leEwẬy on September 01, 2013, 11:53:17 AM: Black (´Д` ) Why you're so cold :on speedy: :mon runcry:
I know that your mission is protect Mayu but you need to be that cold :mon headbang: :mon scary:
Poor Mayu :fainted:
Melon pans for Rena :wahaha: :mon lmao:
Atsumina :mon lovelaff:
What do you mean "If you were still alive" :shock:
Anyway, update ASAP, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 4! 31/08/13
Post by: gek geki on September 01, 2013, 12:45:40 PM: Yuki kne that mayu kissed her right?
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 4! 31/08/13
Post by: Zita on September 01, 2013, 01:22:23 PM: Tons of melon pan. :rofl:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 4! 31/08/13
Post by: olive29 on September 01, 2013, 01:28:37 PM: Acchan's reaction... :rofl:

What will happen next??

What will Kenzo do??

Update soon, please.. :bow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 4! 31/08/13
Post by: Terragen on September 01, 2013, 03:20:36 PM: aaaraaa yuki yuki yuki mayuki
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 4! 31/08/13
Post by: Haruko on September 02, 2013, 03:53:26 AM: atsumina kiss
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 4 REPLIES~
Post by: chiqinna on September 06, 2013, 12:28:03 PM: cisda83: Kenzo is planning to ************* soon! :D
Rukaeru:yeah~ keep on stalking me~ and I will keep stalking you too!! :kekeke: but i'm not good in making SMUT~ like you! :P :err:
Chichay12: more Atsumina coming soon! thanks for reading! :lol:
Archer1992: thanks for commenting and reading this fics! :kneelbow:
leEwẬy: thank god I'm still alive hehehe~
gek geki: I think so~ :dunno:
Zita: maybe I should give her a spicy melon pan~ :rofl:
olive29: next chapter is coming..sooon~~
Terragen: thanks for reading!
Haruko: atsumina kisssss~ :shifty:

It's been long time did not replies to all of you including.. do I have silent readers too? :?
anyway thanks for keep supporting me even though I'm not updating for a looong time... :)
I was thinking to make someone died at the end of the story... should I?? :twisted:
aaaaaand... I have one more story in mind...actually I already made the prologue..for fun... :lol:
It's Rukaeru's wish~ *excuses* :on gay:
but I'm still thinking whether to continue or not... :dunno:
some people might still remember about the OS that I post at someone's thread? :?
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 4 REPLIES~
Post by: cisda83 on September 06, 2013, 12:38:49 PM: I'll be waiting for your update how ever long

Hopefully when you did update you would make a very long chapter

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Eh.. Making someone died... Well if the bad guys I don't care or sae for this matter

But not the good guys please...

It would be heart breaking if that was the case.

Can't wait to see what's kenzo plan for them?

Thank you for the reply

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 4 REPLIES~
Post by: chiqinna on September 06, 2013, 01:45:05 PM: well, I'm not thinking of making Atsu or Mina died... :)
so no worries!! :D
but...now I'm thinking again...bad guys definitely will die some of them...and probably... good guys died too... hmmm...
:huhuh
Cisda83 :cry: ...thank you so much for ur support~ hehe
Maybe I will update tomorrow~ or tomorrow or tomorrow... :lol:
P/S: Make sure your heart is in good condition! Prepare for the worst! :twisted:
Okay..not really.. :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 4 REPLIES~
Post by: blakwhite on September 06, 2013, 02:30:21 PM: Quote from: chiqinna on September 06, 2013, 01:45:05 PM

P/S: Make sure your heart is in good condition! Prepare for the worst! :twisted:

PLEASE DONT BREAK MY HEART CHIQINNA-SAN (http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/onion-head/crying2-onion-head-emoticon.gif) (http://emoticoner.com)

btw, im your silent reader (http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/onion-head/ahaaah-onion-head-emoticon.gif) (http://emoticoner.com)
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 07/09/13
Post by: chiqinna on September 07, 2013, 01:08:01 PM: Quote from: blakwhite on September 06, 2013, 02:30:21 PM

PLEASE DONT BREAK MY HEART CHIQINNA-SAN (http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/onion-head/crying2-onion-head-emoticon.gif) (http://emoticoner.com)

btw, im your silent reader (http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/onion-head/ahaaah-onion-head-emoticon.gif) (http://emoticoner.com)
silent reader!!! :heart: Don't worry I wont break ur heart~~ yet~~~ :P

here is the new chapter, don't expect anything~ :sweatdrop:

Chapter 21

It’s been usual day since the day Mayu got kidnapped.
Only Miichan knows about it while the others are still clueless of what
had happened because Mayu did not tell them.

Mayu has gone back to Miichan’s house.
She’s gone to school as usual too.

But there is one problem.
Her bodyguard is not with her.

Instead, her father’s bodyguards had been seen by her watching at her from afar.
Seems like they are the one who’s guarding her now.

After she woke up the other day, she had not seeing her bodyguard even once.
She had tried to text and calls her but to no avail.

This makes Mayu curious and worried something might happen to her.
Or is it something to do with her father.
Mayu decided to ask her father about it after she gone back from school.

After school...

Mayu and Lovetan are at the gate waiting for Jurina and Kanon
since they don’t have any extra classes today.

“Mayuyu, where is your bodyguard? Usually she would wait for you already here.”
Ask Lovetan as she also realized about Black is not there.

“I don’t know. I’m going to my dad’s house first, you go home with the others.”
Said Mayu as she walks away to see her dad.
“Okay.” Said Lovetan then she saw Jurina and Kanon heading
towards her direction when Mayuyu bid her goodbye.

“Where is Mayuyu going?” Ask Jurina.
“To her real home.” Answered Lovetan.
“*sighed* I was about to ask Black about Rena-Chan...
She haven’t going to see me this past few days.” Said Jurina frowning.

“How can you ask Black when you don’t know where is she?
Even Mayuyu don’t know about her own bodyguard.” Said Lovetan then she started to walk home.

‘Hmmm...Maybe they are busy with their works.’ Thought Jurina as she followed Lovetan and Kanon from behind.

At Watanabe’s villa.

Inside the house, it seems like Watanabe Hiroshi is busy with his work in his office room.

Mayuyu dashed inside the room and stand in front of the desk where her father is doing his work.
Her father stopped doing his work as he sees her daughter
in front of her with an unreadable expression.

“Mayu, is there anything wrong? Did anyone disturb you again?” Ask her father worried.

“Where is Black?” Ask Mayuyu directly without answering to her father’s question.

“Black? Ahh...I forgot to tell you. Black is no longer your bodyguard Mayu.
Don’t worry I will find the most skillful bodyguard for-“

“I don’t want another bodyguard. Bring Black back, now!” interrupted Mayuyu mad.

“Look Mayu, Black had failed to take care of you! I don’t want the same thing to happen to you again!” said her father as he standing up from his chair.

“Father! I’m the one at fault. I made her mad that time so she leaves me-“
“But still she should not leave you that time! Even if she mad, she should not leave her duty just like that!” this time her father interrupt her.

“I don’t care! I still want her as my bodyguard! And I know that she is a mafia.” Said Mayu as coldly.
“H-how...*sighed* never mind. But I will still find you a better bodyguard.” Said his father.

“Okay fine!! If you don’t bring Black back to me, I won’t talk to you anymore!”
said Mayu as she walks away and slammed the door closed.

“Mayu, Mayu-*sighed*“

His father could only sighed looking down the floor.
.

.

.

“Acchaaan~” said Minami pouting.

“Here...say ahh~” said Acchan as she feed Minami a katsudon.

Minami eat it while pouting.

“Why are you pouting? You should be happy that I feed you~” said Acchan as she eat it too.
“Mou~ but I want to eat by myself~” said Minami trying to snatched the chopsticks from Acchan’s hand.

“And get choked again? No I will not let you~” said Acchan she also trying to prevent Minami from taking it.
“I’m not going to get choked again! I want to eat my katsudon~” whine Minami.

“Yeah right~ *here* *Minami munch her food* If it were something
else other than Katsudon then I will let you eat by yourself.” Said Acchan while feeding Minami slowly.

Minami silently eating her food that was feed by Acchan.

“You are mad at me again...” said Acchan as she look at the food and shove it then feed it to Minami.

“*munch* mNo~~ *munch*”

“Don’t talk when your mouth still full of foods! Eat them slowly.” Said Acchan raising her voice a bit.

“Sowwy~” said Minami pout still have food in her mouth.

Acchan was chuckling seeing her acting cute like that.
“Nee...Acchan, you promised me we’re going to the amusement park and you still haven’t bring me there...” said Minami looking at Acchan.

Acchan just smile at her.
“When do you want us to go there?” Asked Acchan.
“Now!!” said Minami suddenly happy.

Acchan giving out a small laugh seeing her reaction.

“Not yet~ we’re going there on the weekend okay?
You said you want to bring Miichan and the others too right?” Acchan says to her.

Minami nodded to her.

“Can we go this weekend?” Ask Minami with sparkling eyes.

Acchan nodded then chuckled.
“Yayy!!!” Minami jump happily.

“Minami! Finish your food first!”

.

.

.

Mayu is in her room still sulking with her father.

*knock* *knock*

“Mayu, are you in there? I want to talk to you.” Said his father as he knocks on Mayu’s door.
Mayu still doesn’t answer to him.

“Are you really going to ignore your father like this?”His father said in a sad tone.
His father sighed knowing that Mayu is really mad at him now.

After discussing with his assistant, Watanabe Hiroshi decided to give a
second chance to Black and bring her back to be her daughter’s bodyguard.

He really loves his daughter that he doesn’t want her to avoid him again.

“If it’s my daughter’s wish, then I will do it.” Said him as he goes to Mayu’s room.

“Alright, you win, I will bring Black back to be your bodyguard.” Said him outside the room.

Still Mayu haven’t opened the door.
So he just waits for Black to come here because he already told Mariko about it.

Meanwhile Mayu is lying on her bed sleeping inside her room.
She probably did not listen to what his father said just now.

After a long time sleeping, Mayu heard a sound of a windows open.
Feeling scared, Mayu keep shutting her eyes shut and pretending that she is still sleeping.

Then the sound of the footsteps coming near to her bed.

“Nezumi” said the person. Mayu can feel that the person is smiling right now.

‘This voice...’ thought Mayu as she heard the voice.

“I-I mean, Mayu.” Said her again.
Mayu quickly turn around to see Yuki standing near her bed.

“Y-Yuki.” Mayu was shocked.

“Are you okay now?” Asked Yuki worried.
“Un.”

Then Yuki comes and sit on the side of the bed.

“I’m sorry for leaving you alone that time.” Said Yuki looking away from her.
“It’s not your fault, I’m the one who should say sorry.” Mayu said.

‘I wonder if she still remember what happen in the forest...’
thought Mayu while staring at Black.

Black who was still looking away suddenly felt a warm breath near her cheeks.

When she turn her head around,
she saw Mayu’s face so close to hers that makes her quickly step back from it.

Meanwhile Mayu just smirking in her mind.
‘Should I remind her about that?’ said Mayu to herself.

“What are you doing?” ask Black with a shocked expression in her face and obviously her face is red now.

“Ne...Do you still remember what happen in the forest that time?”
ask Mayu smirk slowly getting closer to Black while Black keep moving backwards.

They are still sitting on Mayu’s bed.

“W-what are you talking about? When you sleep on me?” Ask Black feeling confused with Mayu’s action.

Mayu shook her heads.

“Do you want me to remind you?” said Mayu as she traps Black making her lying down on the bed.

Black was trying to remember every bit that happens in the forest.
“Do you?” whisper Mayu while looking at Black’s lips.

Black then look at Mayu who’s looking at her lips then
remembers something did happen that time.
Due to she was too focused on the something else that time
almost making her forget that Mayu’s lips was on hers.

“Y-you...” before Black said anything, Mayu already kissing her lips closing her eyes.

‘Why is my heart beating so fast? It’s just a kiss!!’ thought Black with her eyes widen still kissing Mayu.

‘Why I could not move her away from me?!’ said Black to herself again.

Then Mayu slowly part away from Yuki’s.

She looks directly into Yuki’s eyes. Yuki was still stunned with the kiss.

“Yuki...can I kiss you again?” Ask Mayu still locking her eyes with Yuki.

Yuki nodded her head continuously as she also wants more.

Mayu then smirk to her and sealed her lips with Yuki’s for the second time.

[Black...Yuki...Black...Yuki...I’m still confuse to use which one...hehe :doh:]

Mariko was walking on the dark alley herself at night because
she wants to free her mind sometimes.
That how a mafia do to release their stress.

If they encounter a bad people on their way then poor the bad people to get hit for no reason.

Imagine how a fashionista walking alone along the dark alley,
only to be accompanied by the street light.

Suddenly Mariko felt like someone is stalking and following her.
“Sasshi I told you don’t follow me.” Said Mariko as she thought tha
t the person was Sasshi but no respond from the other person.

That mean it’s not Sasshi.

Mariko stopped walking. The other person also stopped her movements.

Then Mariko starts to walk again. Slowly to confirm the person that was stalking
her is the one she was thinking right now.

Then she heard some movements in the bushes.

Mariko chuckled.
“Ouch!” said the other person in a low voice afraid that Mariko would hear her.

Without looking at where the person was, Mariko stops her tracks.

“What are you doing here, Miichan?” said Mariko finally she really sure who that person was.
Miichan who finally got caught in action comes out from the bushes.

She then looks at Mariko pouting while Mariko just smiles.

“How did you know it was me?” Asked Miichan as she walks towards Mariko while cleaning herself
.
“Because...you are Miichan?” said Mariko giving out a small laugh because of Miichan’s messy clothes.

Miichan pouting even more.

“Anyway...what are you doing here? Are you trying to be a spy again?
Getting back to your old job?” Ask Mariko curious.

“Not really, I was just training myself after 5 years I did not do this kind of thing.
Who knows, someday I would do this again.
And I heard that Kato’s group is going crazy again?” Miichan said.

Mariko let out a sighed.

“Well, you know them. Ever since his son got released from the prison,
they started to get wild again and even kidnapped my client’s daughter.” Explain Mariko.

“Tsk...Thanks god Mayuyu is safe now.” Said Miichan serious.

“I think you should take care of Takamina more. You know, she’s in this too.” Mariko said looking at Miichan.

“I know, that’s why I’m training myself again.
This is what I afraid now. I hope her lover is doing great taking care of her.”

“Lover?”

“You know who~~~” said Miichan smirking to her.

Mariko also smirks knowing what Miichan means.

“I hope so...don’t depend on her so much.” Said Mariko.

“I’m not. I have to go home now. See ya!!” said Miichan then disappeared herself into the bushes again.

“Stupid Miichan, you could have used the road to go home...” said Mariko to no one.

T.B.C~

I don't want to be cruel~~ :cry: my mind already thinking about the next thing that will happen~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 07/09/13
Post by: diamond kirara on September 07, 2013, 02:11:12 PM: Atsumina kawaii :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: mayuki is back too I'm gonna faint from fangirling
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 07/09/13
Post by: Terragen on September 07, 2013, 02:44:45 PM: Then if it's happen then just do it hehe

Maybe it will make me cry or curse but okay lets see what happen
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 07/09/13
Post by: abcari on September 07, 2013, 08:43:34 PM: let's make the Drama begin!!...
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 07/09/13
Post by: cisda83 on September 08, 2013, 12:18:43 AM: Yeah..Mayuki together more or less...

Yeah Atsuko would need to protect Minami even more

But someone need to actually tell Atsuko to keep an eye on things

Also how about the rest of the teens that live with them, they could be in danger to...

Everyone would be liable for Kato to use against them?

What's going to happen next?

would kojiyuu coming back?

Can't wait

Thank you for update

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 07/09/13
Post by: qweakb on September 08, 2013, 12:25:35 AM: mayuki <3

good job :on GJ:

astumina scene is so cute! :luvluv1:

i am seriously very curious what takamina's past! hope that it will be a great chapter :on lol:

This lately i might not be able to comment about the new chapters as I starting to get more and more busy :imdead:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 07/09/13
Post by: leEwẬy on September 08, 2013, 07:32:38 AM: Mayuki finally had some development :on gay: :mon firecrack:
Atsumina is so cute and sweet :luvluv1:
Curious about what'll happen next :onioncheer:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 07/09/13
Post by: Zita on September 08, 2013, 01:10:58 PM: Oooh Yuki is back. XD :w00t:
Yaaaaaaaaaaay :)
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 REPLIES~ 09/09/13
Post by: chiqinna on September 09, 2013, 11:30:46 AM: Quote from: diamond kirara on September 07, 2013, 02:11:12 PM
Atsumina kawaii :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: mayuki is back too I'm gonna faint from fangirling

:deco: *fangirling*

Quote from: Terragen on September 07, 2013, 02:44:45 PM
Then if it's happen then just do it hehe

Maybe it will make me cry or curse but okay lets see what happen

Next Chapter okay~ I hope u curse then cry.. :lol:

Quote from: abcari on September 07, 2013, 08:43:34 PM
let's make the Drama begin!!...

get ready for this!!!! :twisted:

Quote from: cisda83 on September 08, 2013, 12:18:43 AM
Yeah..Mayuki together more or less...

Yeah Atsuko would need to protect Minami even more

But someone need to actually tell Atsuko to keep an eye on things

Also how about the rest of the teens that live with them, they could be in danger to...

Everyone would be liable for Kato to use against them?

What's going to happen next?

would kojiyuu coming back?

Can't wait

Thank you for update

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

yeah..let's see how Atsuko fail to protect Minami.. Oooppss~
the rest of the teens...you're right they could be in danger too...but I think Kato Kenzo is now only focused on getting revenge on minami... :dunno: and he's stupid I guess.. :lol:
kojiyuu...I'm still searching where they are right now... :sweatdrop:
Quote from: qweakb on September 08, 2013, 12:25:35 AM
mayuki <3

good job :on GJ:

astumina scene is so cute! :luvluv1:

i am seriously very curious what takamina's past! hope that it will be a great chapter :on lol:

This lately i might not be able to comment about the new chapters as I starting to get more and more busy :imdead:

about Takamina's past...some already been revealed isn't?
It's okay if you doesn't have time to comment on it qweakb-san... :) as long as you still support this fic~ :bow:

Quote from: leEwẬy on September 08, 2013, 07:32:38 AM
Mayuki finally had some development :on gay: :mon firecrack:
Atsumina is so cute and sweet :on luvluv1:
Curious about what,ll happen next :onnioncheer:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Quote from: Zita on September 08, 2013, 01:10:58 PM
Oooh Yuki is back. XD :w00t:
Yaaaaaaaaaaay :)

thanks for reading and commenting!!!! :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

okay, I actually started to work this week...
and I'm afraid that I will have no time to write and update this fics..
when I get home, Im tired and my mind also tired~ hehe
but I will try my best to use my free time to update okay
thanks for reading and commenting!! :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 REPLIES~ 09/09/13
Post by: cisda83 on September 09, 2013, 12:37:29 PM: Eh... You are going to make Atsuko fails protecting Minami?!

Really...ah...my heart.... :bleed eyes:

Whatever it is.., looking forward to the next update

Well at least the rest of the people seem to be saved for now,

If kenzo only paid attention more on Minami :nervous

Eh... Really... You don't know where kojiyuu are at the moment?! :lol:

Will be waiting for the next update...

Thank you for the reply...

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 REPLIES~ 09/09/13
Post by: gek geki on September 13, 2013, 09:25:36 AM: Did yuki realkjy let mayu kissed her?
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
Post by: chiqinna on September 18, 2013, 12:00:53 PM: Chapter 22

Black’s POV

I was at my room when Mariko telling me that Watanabe Hiroshi wants me back as Mayu’s bodyguard.
*sighed*
It just a few days ago since he fired me…and now he hire me back.
I have no choice…I owe my life to him.
Without further ado, I went to Watanabe’s villa since Mariko said he wants to see me as soon as possible.

At Watanabe’s

I walked inside and meet Watanabe Hiroshi at the living room. He looks sad.
When he saw me, his expression change into a normal one.
“Ehmm…good that you come back Black.” Said him.

I just stay silent and waiting for him to continue.

“*sighed*, its Mayuyu…She still want you as her bodyguard.
I told her I already fired you but now she won’t talk to me until I bring you back.”
He explains looking at me.

I can feel that he’s really sad that him daughter is ignoring him.
All this time I can see they don’t have a good relationship.
Mayu seems cold to his father, I understand that since he’s involved in a mafia world.

“I have nothing to say anymore. Welcome back, Black.” Said him slightly smile.

I was about to walk to Mayu’s room when he said Mayu locked her door
and he doesn’t want to make her more mad at him if he use the spare keys.

So I decided to use the windows. Well, it’s a good way to surprised her.
I don’t know why I feel like I want to protect Mayu more after what had happen.

When I got fired, I just let it be since Watanabe said he is going
to find a more experience bodyguard for Mayu.

Not like me, I’m just a mafia.

I know she still care about her father. She cried when Kato Kenji said he will kill her father.

Luckily the window is not locked.
When I get inside the room, I found Mayu is lying with her back facing me.
I slowly walk towards her.

Is she sleeping?

“Nezumi?” I call her. I don’t know why I smile when I call her.

Then I remembered that I can call her Mayu now.

“I-I mean, Mayu.” I said again. Mayu quickly turn around.
She looks shocked seeing me.

“Are you okay now?” I asked her.
“Un.” Mayu nodded.

Then I walk and sit beside her.
“I’m sorry for leaving you alone that time.” I said as I look away.
It’s true, I still feel guilty until now.

“It’s not your fault, I’m the one who should say sorry.” She said.
Good that she is admitting her fault though. Usually she would blame me.

Then I can feel that she’s staring at me by the end of my eyes.
I suddenly felt a warm breath near my cheeks.
So I turn around only to see Mayu’s face so close to mine.

I quickly step back.

“What are you doing?” I asked her shocked with the sudden action.
I can feel my face is heating up now.

Why does she always shocking me with her action?

“Ne…Do you still remember what happen in the forest that time?"

What happen?

Mayu smirk at me while slowly getting closer to me. I just keep moving backwards.

I think she has turn into Nezumi now...

“W-what are you talking about? When you sleep on me?” I ask her. Well that’s what I remembered.

Mayu shook her heads.

“Do you want me to remind you?” she said.
I could not move anymore.
She trapped me!
I don’t want to hurt her if I use my strength, I also try to remembers what happen that time.

Ah! I remember something!

Mayu kissed me that time right? But because I was too focused by the surrounding making me forgot about it.

Wait….kiss??!!

Why am I feeling nervous now?

Oh no…

“Y-you…”before I could say anything, Mayu already kissing me.

Why is my heart beating so fast? It’s just a kiss!!

Why I could not move her away from me?!

Then she slowly part away from me.
I don’t know what is wrong with me.

I want more. I like the kiss.

She stares at my eyes. I felt like I was drowned into her eyes, and the kiss.

“Yuki…can I kiss you again?” she ask.

My head acts on its own.
Mayu smirk at me then she kissed me again.

I don’t want to think about anything else as I kissed her back.

Oh my…the author…what is wrong with u?! :banghead:

Tonight, Acchan is spending the night at Miichan’s house since she doesn’t have work.
Well, Mayu told them she is going to sleep at his father’s house.

They are now at the living room watching variety show when the door opens revealing Miichan.

“Tadaima~” said Miichan tiredly.
“Okaeri~” they looking at Miichan from head to toe.

“What happened to you Miichan?? You look…messy.” Said Jurina as
she looks at Miichan’s clothes. Her clothes, her face are all dirty.
She looks like she has come back from playing mud wrestling.

“Yeah…and you’re late…usually you come home before 8.00 pm…
now are almost 10.” Lovetan added as she looks at the clock.

Acchan was just looking at them while Minami’s eyes still glued at the TV.
Kanon is doing her homework while looking at Miichan for a while.

“Err…n-nothing…it just so many works to do at bakery...fuhhh…
and I fell on my way home just now…hehehe” said Miichan laughing awkwardly.
“Owh…Okay…”Jurina said then her eyes went back watching TV.

“Aren’t you guys supposed to sleep now??” Miichan ask them.
“Why? Tomorrow is Saturday…no school ‘mother’~” Lovetan said.

“Really? Owh…my mistake…hehe” Miichan said the she walks
to the bathroom to clean herself but she stop walking and walk back to the
living room when she finally realize something…

or someone to be exact.

“Ehh?? Acchan?? When did you get here?” Miichan was shocked.

Acchan just look at her smiling.

“You just realize Acchan now? Seriously Miichan?” Jurina and Lovetan face palmed.

“So…you’re spending the night here….hehe…with Minami…hehehe…” Miichan laugh, smirk then wink at Acchan.

Acchan look away blushing then looking at Minami.

“I actually want to tell you guys that we’re going to Amusement Park this Sunday.” Said Acchan smiling.

“I see…” Miichan then continue her walk to the bathroom.

Since its already late night, everyone decided to go to sleep.
As usual, Miichan and Lovetan are in their room while
Kanon decided to sleep with Jurina since Acchan is going to sleep with Minami.

Minami is already boarding to a dreamland while Acchan was still awake.
Her right arm is supporting her head while her eyes staring at Minami’s sleeping face.

Acchan smile to herself remembering their happy times.

Then she hears Minami talking. It looks like she’s having a nightmare because her face was frowning.

Acchan caressed her hair slowly.

“You are really a kid, Minami...” mumbled Acchan when Minami’s face turns back to normal.

Acchan decided to sleep but before that,
she gives a peck on Minami’s lips then on her forehead.

‘It’s not wrong right? Loving a person like you?’ Acchan thought to herself.

Meanwhile,

“Father, do you still remember the name Takahashi Minami?”
Kenzo ask his father who’s having a rest at the balcony.

“Every person who had been a long time in mafia world would
know her and her other two friends, Kenzo. And I never forgot what she did to me.”
Said Kato Kenji as he looks at his right leg.

“Don’t worry father, I will give her our revenge…soon.” Kenzo said as he pat his father’s shoulder.

“What do you mean? You know where is she? I heard that she’s not normal right?” His father said as he looks at him.

“I know that, but revenge is revenge. I have a plan already. And you…just wait and see.” Kenzo smirk.

“Be careful Kenzo, I don’t want you to get into trouble,
they have Rapappa with them.” His father said serious.

“I will, and I will take Rapappa’s ace.” He added.

“Yuko?”

“I mean…the new ace.” He grins.
.
.
.
.
.

Let’s skip to the amusement park!!!!

“Rena-Chan!!!” Jurina screamed happily when she saw Rena was there
also with Bla- I mean Yuki. Or Black.
They were waiting for them at the front gate.

Rena just smiles looking at her sister jumping happily towards her.
“Hey, how have you been? I’m sorry I was so busy lately I
could not go and see you Jurina.” Said Rena smiling as she looks at her beloved sister.

“It’s okay Rena-Chan, as long as you are here now, let’s have fun!”
Jurina say as clinging on Rena’s arm.

Meanwhile Bla- errs... Yuki is avoiding looking at Mayu’s eyes and Mayu is smirking to herself.

“Come on! Let’s get inside!” They all went inside the park.

“Minami, hold my hand tight okay? Don’t let go.
I don’t want you to get lost in this crowded.” Acchan said as she intertwines her hands with Minami.

Minami just nodded.

The three people, Miichan, Lovetan and Kanon are looking at them while grinning.
“Yeah…hold on tight…” Miichan said smirking.

Acchan hears them then she turns around to look at them
but they quickly looks somewhere else pretending to think what should they ride first.

Mayu and Black are already somewhere else having fun on their own.

They were all having fun there.

While Miichan, Lovetan and Kanon were walking passed the Ferris wheel,
Kanon stop walking while looking at the Ferris wheel.

Miichan and Jurina also stopped walking and look at Kanon.

“Kanon?” Lovetan call her then Kanon pointed at where she looks at.

They both were shocked to see what they were seeing.

It’s Mayu and Black.

Kissing inside the Ferris wheel.

Miichan quickly close Kanon and Lovetan’s eyes with both her hands.

“You guys are underage.” Miichan said as she still looking at them.

“What??!!! It’s not like they are having s-*&*^&%$^” Miichan quickly close
Lovetan’s mouth to prevent her from saying the word.

Jurina and Rena-Chan are playing the bumper car while
Acchan and her midget are at the carousel.

Well, the other three also enjoying their moments together
while sometimes peeking on the other couple.

While they are busy having fun, somewhere inside the park, there were also some people who are waiting patiently for their time.

It’s already afternoon, they decided to meet altogether
at the restaurant to have lunch since they were all tired and hungry.

“Whoa~ that was fun! Haha” Jurina said as she
sits besides Rena in the restaurant.

“Yeah…ngehehehe~” Kanon, Lovetan and Miichan laughing sheepishly
when they saw Mayu and Yuki finally arrived at the restaurant.

Mayu and Yuki look at them weirdly.

Minami and Acchan already filling their stomach with foods.

“So…Takamina…is it fun?” Miichan ask smiling.
“Un! It was sho fuunn~~~” Minami answered while eating.

“Minami~ finish your foods in your mouth first~” Acchan said.

“Onee-chan! You know…earlier I saw May-*&^&*^&%#$!” Miichan
quickly cover Kanon’s mouth before she said anything about what they saw.

“They ki-(*&^@#$%^&!!!” Lovetan also trying to spill it but Miichan close her mouth.

Lovetan pull Miichan’s hand from her.

“What? They need to know too!” Lovetan whine to Miichan.

“You mean on the Ferris Wheel right?” Jurina whispered
to Kanon who sit on her right while Rena on her left.
“You know?” Kanon ask also whisper to her.

Jurina nodded.

“Me and Rena-Chan also riding on that Ferris wheel that time.
Then we saw them…oh my god…Mayu is soooo bold!” Jurina said then Mayu heard her name.

“What is soooo bold Jurina?” Mayu ask as the waiter put their food on the table.
“Eh? Err…N-nothing…hehehe” Jurina said giving an awkward smile.

After having their lunch, they continue exploring inside the amusement park.

Mayu and Yuki are walking side by side then Mayu took the chance
to hold Yuki’s hand making Yuki to blush the action.

They keep walking holding hand until they realized they were
being stalked when they heard a giggling sound from behind.

Mayu look behind still walking but she just saw people walking here and there.

She then turns back to front.

“It’s them, Miichan, Lovetan, and Kanon.” Yuki said looking down embarrassed.

Mayu stop walking.

She then turns around again but this time she saw them trying to hide.

“I saw you guys.” Mayu said with her cyborg face.

“Ah! Mayuyu…what a coincidence! Hehehe” Miichan said as she and the others smiling awkwardly.

“We saw you guys k-*&^%$#@!!” Miichan quickly cover Lovetan’s mouth.

Lovetan glare at Miichan.

“Well, I guess its okay then~” Miichan said then she let Lovetan to says it.

“We saw you guys kissing! Inside the Ferris Wheel!” Lovetan said smirking.
“Yeah~” Kanon added.
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“Guys, I think this is wrong idea.” Miichan said as she looks at Mayu’s face getting darker.

“You're right~ Hehehe…Mayuyu…we’re going now! See you later!” They said as they run away.

“Come back here you guys!!!” Mayu said as she chased after them leaving Yuki.

Yuki was smiling looking at them while blushing then her eyes saw some people behind the stall.

They were putting on a smurf mascot.

‘They look familiar....’ Yuki thought as she looks at their face.

‘Isn’t that…Sae?’ Yuki then saw several men’s also there helping her.

“This is bad…Mayu!!” Yuki quickly call Mayu and bring her close to her.

“What is it?” Mayu ask panting because she was busy chasing the three
but eventually they manage to escape from Mayu.

“I saw Sae. There.” Yuki said as she pointing at where Sae was.

“Don’t go near the mascot. They might be them.”
Yuki said as they leaving the place to go somewhere safe.

They don’t know that their enemy was aiming the other person...

T.B.C~

What do you think of Mayuki's relationship? :?
What do you think will happen next?
What do you think they will do?
What is Sae doing there?
What if the author loses her mind and keeps talking nonsense?
What if the author feeling like to fainted like now?
What if the author has another fic on mind she already write it but she ter'delete' it! [oh my English!!!!!! :panic:]
Okay, I will just be a readers for a while. or a stalker :lol:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
Post by: olive29 on September 18, 2013, 12:38:17 PM: Yeahh..Mayuki kissing in the ferris wheel :lol:

Danger ahead !!! :panic:

I think Sae will try to kidnap Minami or Acchan or both of them..

I want Kojiharu and Yuko to go back already and join forces with Miichan and Rappappa to protect Minami and Acchan..

Can't wait for the next chapter..

Update soon please.. :bow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
Post by: cisda83 on September 18, 2013, 12:48:31 PM: Yeah... mayuki got together...

how about wmatsui would they become more than that?

Ah... They are aiming for Minami and Atsuko

Well revenge for Minami

How about for Atsuko? Kato took a liking for Atsuko?

Ah... Now would Atsuko be able to protect Minami and herself?

Would the others be able to save them?

Would they be kidnapped and waiting for the others to save them?

Would Minami get back all her memories and intelligent then?

Can't wait to see some action on the next chapter

Thank you for the update

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
Post by: chichay12 on September 18, 2013, 03:40:46 PM: mayuki kissu :wriggly:

i want atsumina kissu too in bed..naked *teehee* :hehehe:
my pervert mind is on :ding:
can someone help me to turn it off?? :hiakhiakhiak:

wahhh i smell trouble..
i cant wait to read the next update!!
thank u for the update :on gay:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
Post by: leEwẬy on September 18, 2013, 04:19:59 PM: Mayuki's kiss :mon lovelaff: Al's on the Ferris wheel :luvluv1:
Yuki slowly begins to fall in love with Mayu :mon evillaff:
Sae's aiming for Takamina and Acchan :OMG:
Someone or anyone protect then :pleeease:
You're writing another fic but accident deleted it :mon headbang:
Anyway, update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 REPLIES~ 09/09/13
Post by: qweakb on September 18, 2013, 05:45:35 PM: Quote
about Takamina's past...some already been revealed isn't?
It's okay if you doesn't have time to comment on it qweakb-san... :) as long as you still support this fic~ :bow:

I mean I am curious what she had did to the both father and son. :mon sweat:

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What do you think of Mayuki's relationship?
good! :luvluv1: :on GJ:

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What do you think will happen next?
Takamina is being kidnapped by Kendo's man. Acchan become crazy.. :on lol:

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What do you think they will do?

who is they? refer to the Sumf mascot?

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What is Sae doing there?
Helping them to kidnapped takamina? Trying to get closed black/yuki again? Or change her target and chased after sayaka? haha :on lol:

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What if the author loses her mind and keeps talking nonsense?
I will help her call in her country mental hospital number and ask them to send her to mental hospital :on crazygran: :mon lol:

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What if the author feeling like to fainted like now?
give you ice? :mon huh:

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What if the author has another fic on mind she already write it but she ter'delete' it! [oh my English!!!!!! :panic:]
Okay, I will just be a readers for a while. or a stalker
:mon cry: Why you had delete it? LOL
Oh well.. up to you.. your choice :hee:

Just nice, I am free :on lol:

Thank for the nice chapter!
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
Post by: chiqinna on September 19, 2013, 05:59:38 AM: okay i'm using my phone rite now...
and i'm working rite now...
and i'm bored rite now...
poor me~ always lonely~~
so I will just reply randomly...
Ryuuka-san...well, that's happen when my finger moving fast deleting some file and accidently I deleted it..yeah the trouble maker one... but! dont worry...it just a short prologue...ngwheheeeee!
and i'm working on it now!! hehe I have a free time at work! :D
duhhh its hard to reply to all...
qweakb...it would be more better if u send me to somewhere like Majisuka Gakuen place...haha!
anyway I actually already done with the next chapter xD...
I always bad with language...even with my mother tongue! hehe sorry~
with ♥, Chiqinna..
lol~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
Post by: cisda83 on September 19, 2013, 06:23:22 AM: Chiqinna-San

Well if you are bored... You can always make more updates to your stories

We the readers would be happy in getting multiple updates at the same time

Well.. That or you can always ask them for an early leave if the work place is not that strict

Mine can not.. Whether you have something to do or not, you need to stay according to the schedule

Sometimes overtime or emergency extra time or covering someone else shifts

Well enjoy your quite day... I wish I'm like that

Can't wait to see your next update if you have finished it

Thank you... Take care...

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
Post by: chiqinna on September 19, 2013, 07:45:48 AM: I do bored cisda-san...and I always want to write for my stories... it just ideas doesn't come always u know.. xD
actually, I feel like i'm the owner of this shop u know.. open it up every morning and close it on the evening... my boss is busy working somewhere else..but I cant do anything I want, I dont want to...this is my very first job after a looong time staying at home... hahaha...
hope to get a better job soon...I love this job but qweakb might really send me to a mental hospital if I get crazy of no entertaintment...no tv here, radio is not enough for me..hahaha kidding...I prefer quiet place like this but the neighbor is too noisy...when they are working... =•=
and I wish this shop is facing a beach lol ridiculous~
kay...I want to talk more but I might get into nonsense talk...
with ♥ Chiqinna~
;-)
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
Post by: qweakb on September 19, 2013, 09:00:24 AM: Quote
qweakb...it would be more better if u send me to somewhere like Majisuka Gakuen place...haha!
hmmm... why not send you to prison hope? LOL :wahaha:

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hope to get a better job soon...I love this job but qweakb might really send me to a mental hospital if I get crazy of no entertaintment...no tv here, radio is not enough for me..hahaha kidding...I prefer quiet place like this but the neighbor is too noisy...when they are working... =•=
and I wish this shop is facing a beach lol ridiculous~
kay...I want to talk more but I might get into nonsense talk...
with ♥ Chiqinna~

Nowadays where can get job so easily one?

LOL.. Human are so complicated!

Then I send you to the Ryuuka's nonsense world (Might be joining.. Feel like I talking nonsense now... Just that I don't write story..haha)
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
Post by: cisda83 on September 19, 2013, 09:51:44 AM: Ah.. So you are taking care someone else shop.

Big responsibility there... Me just come and go accordingly.

No need to open or close.

Sometimes work extra hours from home after finished.

Well yeah.. Nowadays it is very hard to get a job.

So just don't think too much about it..

Just do what you suppose to do then once you finish try not to think about it.

As what Ryuuka said try to enjoy if you like it... If not just do the job as long as its enough.

If you really really like it... You can put some efforts.., you might get promote... You never know

If you are bored... Play computer or Internet games from your iPhone or smartphone

Try to take it easy... If u busy yourself... The time go quickly.

Just put a post here... Even if u just want to chat or complain

Pretty sure people don't mind... Better than getting stress.

Anyway... Take care...

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
Post by: chiqinna on September 19, 2013, 11:41:42 AM: Chapter 23

Acchan and Minami were at the toy stall.

“Minami, here, one for you and one for me!” Acchan said smiling as she
put on the bracelet on Minami’s wrist.
It was a couple bracelets.
“It’s beautiful!” Minami said cheerfully.

After that,
Acchan was trying to shoot a small balloon to get the big prizes.
Minami was looking at her happily while cheer her up.

Then a mascot comes near her and makes Minami turns around.

“Smurf!!!” she screamed happily when she saw a smurf mascot.

The mascot also jumps while making Minami to jump as well.

Then the smurf took Minami’s hand and taking her away from Acchan who was still oblivious of the situation.

Minami was calling Acchan but it was so crowded that Acchan did not hear her.

Mayu was thinking about something.

“Wait, why would they wear a mascot?
I don’t like smurf.” Mayu said as she stops walking and looking at Black.

“Takamina likes smurf.” Mayu added.

Meanwhile Acchan who was finally get the smurf toy turns around to see Minami was nowhere to be seen.

“Minami?” Acchan was searching for her.
Acchan started to get worried.

She walks around searching for Minami.
Then she saw Minami was walking with a mascot.

“Minami!!!” Acchan called her.
Minami turns around smiling and was about to call Acchan back
when someone suddenly put a handkerchief on her mouth making her
unconscious then a men quickly carry her away.

Acchan running after them but the mascot suddenly
hug her tight making her hard to move.

Then Acchan really got mad that she slammed the mascot down.

That action gained people’s attention as they look at the mascot.

Acchan quickly get up and run to chase them.

Yuki and Mayu saw Acchan running and the mascot was lying down on the ground.

They walks towards the mascot and took off the head revealing Sae.

“You again.” Yuki said.
“Hehe…she was so strong...I think my backbone is broken.” Sae groaned in pain.

“Why is Acchan running?” Mayu ask her.
“I think it’s too late now. They took the midget already.
Sorry I was just doing this for money~”Sae said grinning.

“What?! Damn it!” Yuki then get up and call Rena then she call Mariko.

“No wonder you were wearing a smurf mascot…how did you know Takamina loves smurf?!”
Mayu said as she sit on the mascot and pinch Sae’s nose.

“I was just guessing-Oucchhh!!”Sae said as her nose got pinched.

Meanwhile

Acchan was still chasing them until the front gate.

Some men were getting in her way as they try to hit her making Acchan madder.

Then a black car coming and they get in with the unconscious Minami.
The car driving away fast leaving the place.

“NOOOO!!!!!!” Acchan screamed then she feels like someone
hit her head hard until she feels like her body being dragged.

After what happened, Mariko told them to go home while
their people are searching for Minami and Acchan.
The others were bringing back to Miichan’s house since it could danger their life too.

Miichan decided to tell them everything.
About Minami, Acchan, Yuki, Rena and everything that involve mafia.

They were really worried about Minami and Acchan.

Jurina was so shocked when she knows that Rena-Chan is a mafia.

Luckily Rena knows how to calm her down.

Miichan was going to see Mariko.
Mariko looks like she’s also worried.
“You have any idea where they bring them?” Miichan ask her.

Mariko shook her head.

“Did you tell them everything?” Miichan nodded.
“I’m glad that they understand.” Miichan said.

Then Black comes inside the living room.

“I think someone could help us.” She said as she pointed at the front door.
“Who is this?” Mariko asks serious.

“Sae. She’s the one who involved in kidnapping Minami.” Black said.
Sae was being hold by two Rapappa’s underlings so that she would not escape.

Miichan suddenly dashed towards her and punch her on the face.
“How dare you!!” Miichan said mad then kick at her stomach.
Sae was defenseless.

“Let me go!!!” Miichan was being stopped by Black.

Then Mariko slowly walks towards Sae.

“Where are they?” Mariko asks.

“*pant* I don’t know…I just do my job.” Sae said in pain.

Without warning Mariko slapped her hard.

The two underlings release their hold on Sae making her falling on the ground.
“You should know.” Mariko said looking at her.

“Like I said, I don’t know where they bring her.
If I know I would definitely told you.” Answered Sae serious.

“Then you should know where they always go…or their hideout or anything!” Miichan said.

Sae was thinking for a while.

“If I tell you, in exchange you have to give me money.” Sae said looking away.

“Tsk, are you drugs addict or something?
Are you trying to play with us now?!” said Miichan mad.

“I’m serious…I need money.
After this I knew Kato’s group will kick me out.” Sae said looking at them.

“Why do you need money anyway?” Black asks curious.

“I…I need money to pay the debt I have with the loan sharks.
And to buy a medicine…for my friend” Sae said.
Somehow she looks like she’s blushing. Maybe it’s because of the punch she got earlier.

“What? Then you could have just find a good job rather than working with a mafia!” Miichan scolded her.

“They offered me a big amount of money!” Sae said.

Mariko sighed rubbing her forehead.

“Tell us first then we’ll discuss about you later.” Mariko said.

Sae eventually agreed then told them about their hideout and where their always been.

“And before I forgot, be careful, they probably prepared for your attacks.” Sae says.
“Then we have to prepare more.” Miichan said.

“Ughhh…” Acchan groaned. Her head is really hurt.

They must be really hit her head hard.

She tried to open her eyes and looking at the surrounding.

“Good morning, sweetheart~” A voice sounded.
Then Acchan realized that she’s been surrounded by many black-coat men.

She quickly tried to stand up to prepared herself.

Then she remembers about Minami.

“Minami! Minami where is she?!!” Acchan said furiously looking around.

“Tsk…calm down will you. She’s here, sleeping peacefully~”
Kenzo said showing Minami behind her.

Minami was lying on the ground still unconscious.

Acchan was about to run towards her when they pointing their guns towards her head.

Acchan was mad glaring at Kenzo.

“What? Okkotteru?! You moves a bit, I kill her~”
Kenzo said making Acchan more mad.

“Don’t you dare to touch her!” Acchan gritted her teeth.

“Hahahahahaha!!! Let me give you an option, join my group,
and I will release her. Or leave this place, I will keep your beloved midget…
I mean her dead body, or….both.” Kenzo said grinning.

“Like I would do both…Let’s have a fight, if I win,
you will release her…safe and sound!” Acchan said serious.

“Hmmm…”Kenzo was thinking as he walks then he looks at the lifeless Minami.

“Fine. You, against all of them, bare hands.” He smirks.

Acchan was feeling confident so she prepared her position as well as the others.

The battle between her and more than a 100 begins as they attack her one by one.

Acchan put all her strength beating them.

It was about Minami that she deals with.
Of course she would not just let this chance to go away like that.

While they were busy fighting, Kenzo was just looking at them with interesting.

“It would be good if she joins our group though.” Mumbled him.

Then he heard a sound coming from the midget.
Looks like she’s waking up now.

Kenzo quickly took a bat and hit her head hard to make her fainted again.

Acchan saw his action.

“What are you doing?!!!” Acchan yelled at him mad.

Kenzo got startled by her.

They took this advantage to kick Acchan on the stomach making her bend down.

“This is not fair.” Acchan whined then she keeps on fighting them ignoring the pain.

Meanwhile, Mariko and Miichan were on their way to
find Kato’s group hideout but they got wrong place so they keep on searching at every place.

They even sent some of their people to Kato’s mansion,
Minami and Acchan might be there.

Meanwhile

Acchan was still busy fighting them.
There is still many of them left.
She’s panting hard while keep standing still.
Suddenly one of them use a metal bar then he hit hard on Acchan’s leg.

“Arrrghhh!!!!” Acchan screamed in pain as she fall down.

“Well~ well~ now…you look…such a pain to see…” Kenzo said grinning.

“*pant* Y-you use weapons…” Acchan said holding her legs trying to soothe the pain.

“Whatever!!!” Kenzo said.
“Now, I’m tired to see you guys fighting nonstop.
Let’s get to the point shall we?” Kenzo said as he grip on the metal bar that he took somewhere.

Acchan was glaring at him trying to get up.

Then he walks to Minami and straighten her right leg harshly.

“You know Maeda, she is the one who make my father to walk with a walking stick now, and now she-“

“NOO!!!! Don’t touch her you bastard!!!” Acchan interrupt him knowing what he will do to her.

“Ara? Revenge is revenge!”
Kenzo said mad as he hold up the metal bar and about to crush Minami’s leg.

“NOOOO!!!! I will join your group!!
Please…let her go!” Acchan said as her tears falling down.

Kenzo put down the metal bar.

“What? Say it again?” Kenzo said.
He just wants a confirmation.

“I…I will join your group,
and you will release her!” Acchan said closing her eyes.

‘I will do anything for Minami.’ Acchan said to herself.

Kenzo then laugh loudly with his underlings.

“Good.” He said as he walks towards Acchan.
He then bend down and grab Acchan’s hair.

“From now on, you will be in my group, and don’t worry,
your beloved there will be sent back to her house.”

Kenzo said then he let go of Acchan’s hair.

“Be sure to report yourself at Kato’s mansion tomorrow
after you officially get out of Rapappa.”
He said grinning then walks away from the place along with his people.

Acchan was just looking at them taking Minami away sorrowfully.

“I’m sorry, Minami *sobs*
I’m sorry…” Acchan said looking down crying silently.

T.B.C~
Hmmm... okay i will enjoy my time at work~ hahaha :D
you're right, it's hard to get a job nowadays~
maybe i should join nonsense world~
i don't want to go prison hope!!!
thanks cisda-san,qweakb-san, Ryuuka-san~ you guys spend some time talking nonsense with me~ :heart:
I ter'delete again my post...
click remove..i did not even read i just click yes~ *sighed*
I do that on purpose...except for the trouble maker...
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 23! 19/09/13
Post by: olive29 on September 19, 2013, 01:22:25 PM: Wow..fast update..

Thanks for the update.. :bow:

Now, I really hope Kojiyuu to come back and help them..

Can't wait for the next chapter..

Update soon please..
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 23! 19/09/13
Post by: DC2805 on September 19, 2013, 05:04:04 PM: I was thinking...hmm, Acchan...actually there's no need to keep your promise to join those bad guys...since there were ruthless and used underhand methods to get Minami... :smhid

Can tell that there will be more troubles coming up before getting rid of that villain. ;)
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 23! 19/09/13
Post by: qweakb on September 19, 2013, 05:22:17 PM: Hmmm... I don't think Kendo will let Minami go easily...

Since his hatred toward her is big.. I guess :on lol:

Sae's don't be shy.. LOL...

LOL...Smurf!

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Hmmm... okay i will enjoy my time at work~ hahaha :D
you're right, it's hard to get a job nowadays~
maybe i should join nonsense world~
i don't want to go prison hope!!!
thanks cisda-san,qweakb-san, Ryuuka-san~ you guys spend some time talking nonsense with me~ :heart:
I ter'delete again my post...
click remove..i did not even read i just click yes~ *sighed*
I do that on purpose...except for the trouble maker...

LOL.. haha..

So that mean you rather go to mental hospital? hahaha :glasses:

Seem like my life is not so busy as I had predicted on past few weeks.. haha
Please let me be free all the time :prayers: But this wish will never come truth! :gyaaah:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 23! 19/09/13
Post by: blakwhite on September 19, 2013, 05:34:58 PM: yeay update :3 thank you chiqinna-san

btw,good luck and i hope u will get a job soon :D
ganbatte ne ~ :thumbsup
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 23! 19/09/13
Post by: cisda83 on September 19, 2013, 10:41:37 PM: Yeah... An update...

Very interesting... Atsuko joined Kenzo...

Really... Well what's going to happen next?

Will Minami remember her everything due to the hit on her head ?

Well going to be lots of action, drama and twist...

Would kojiyuu come back and help them out?

Will they keep their promise to release Minami?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the quick update

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 23! 19/09/13
Post by: kurogumi on September 22, 2013, 11:36:21 AM: crap...i missed comment 2 chapter already...LOL

nah it's okay...but god!!! acchan now is kenzo underling!!! she's realy betray rapappa just for takamina??????

what the other will do???

so jurina know that rena is mafia now....
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 24 26/09/13
Post by: chiqinna on September 26, 2013, 12:47:05 PM: Chapter 24

Miichan, Mariko and the others quickly goes to Mariko’s place when they
were informed by Mariko’s underling that Takamina is found.

Kenzo’s underlings secretly leave her in front of Mariko’s mansion as they
don’t want Mariko’s underling to know they were there.

When they got there, Miichan quickly goes to Takamina as she was being laid on the couch in the living room.

“Takamina…” Miichan said worried and sad.

“She’s bleeding…her head is bleeding.”
Sasshi said as she saw a little of red color on the couch where Takamina’s head lied.

“Let’s bring her to the hospital.” Miichan said.
With that, they bring Takamina to the hospital.

They forgot about Acchan as they totally worried about Takamina’s condition.
Then Mariko was the one who realized about Acchan.

She told Sasshi to stay at the mansion because Acchan maybe went home.

Mariko is in the hospital along with Miichan, Black and the other underlings.

They were waiting outside the room.

“Black, you go to Miichan’s mansion take care of the others with Rena.” Mariko commands her.

Black went to Miichan’s house as she also worried about Mayu.

Mariko sigh then took a seat next to Miichan who had her head down.

“I wonder where Atsuko is now.” Mariko said serious as she looking at the white floor.

Then the door open revealing a doctor and a nurse as they walk out after checking on Takamina.

Miichan get up and ask the doctor about her condition.

“Doctor, how is Takamina?” Miichan ask worried.
“Looks like she got hit badly on the head but fortunately, her skull are fine.
We just need to wait until she is awake.” The doctor explains.

Miichan and Mariko sigh in relief but they still have a worried expression on their face.
The doctor then excuses himself.
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Miichan spend the night at the hospital while Mariko went to the cafeteria to buy some food for her since they haven’t eats yet.

Inside the room.
They both already finish their dinner.

Miichan was sitting next to the bed where Takamina is.
She’s holding her hand as she looks at Takamina’s sleeping face.

Meanwhile Mariko is standing next to the window looking outside.
The door open showing Sasshi with a trouble looks.

Sasshi then walks towards them.
Mariko something is wrong when Sasshi have that looks.

They both looks at Sasshi.

“M-Maeda…Maeda-san…said she is officially resign as Rapappa member.” Sasshi said serious.

Mariko and Miichan were shocked.

“Where is she now?” Mariko ask her mad.
“I don’t know…she went home just to take her things with her then
she just told me that and goes out with all her belongings without any more explanation.” Sasshi explain.

“This must be something to do with that Kato group.” Miichan said serious.

Mariko just keeps quiet as her mind is still dumbfounded.

She just lost her group’s ace…again.
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Meanwhile at Miichan’s house

The others are all gathering at the living room worried especially Kanon
who is still crying as soon as she hear the news about her older sister.
Lovetan is comforting her right now.

“I want to see Onee-chan~~ *sobs*” Cried Kanon buried her face into Lovetan’s embrace.

“Don’t worry Kanon, Takamina will be fine.” Jurina said patting her shoulder.

“If you want to see your sister, I can bring you to the hospital.” Black offered concern about her.

“Really?” Black nodded to Kanon.

Kanon quickly went to her room to change her clothe.
Mayu woke up and walks towards Yuki.

“I want to go with you.”Mayu said looking at her.

“No, just stay here with the others. I will be back.”
Yuki said giving a warm smile at her as she caressed Mayu’s left cheek.

Mayu smile back. “Be careful.”

After that Black send Kanon to see her sister.

Then she goes back to Miichan’s mansion.
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Wmatsui moment

“I’m sorry Jurina.” Rena said feeling guilty for not telling Jurina that she is a mafia all this time.
“It’s okay Rena-chan. You must have your own reason why you choose this path right?”

Jurina smile at her to convince Rena that she is fine.

“I promised, when you turn 20, I will tell you EVERYTHING.”
Rena said as she embraces her sister.

‘Everything including you and me.’ Rena thought in her mind.

Jurina just stay silent while in her sister’s arms.
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3 days later

It’s been three days Takamina haven’t waked up.

Kanon doesn’t want to leave her sister alone so she stays
with Miichan in the hospital taking care of Takamina.

Jurina, Lovetan and Mayu went to school as usual while Yuki and Rena are guarding them.

It’s been three days also they haven’t heard about Acchan’s whereabouts.

In the hospital

Is seems like Kanon is sleeping while sitting next to her sister.

Miichan is going outside to buy their lunch.

Suddenly, Kanon wake up due to some movement at her hand that was holding Takamina’s right hand.

“O-Onee-chan…” Kanon look up at her sister.

Then Miichan enter bringing some foods.

“What happen Kanon?” she asks when she saw Kanon’s expression.

“Onee-chan…I think her hand just show some movement just now.”
Kanon answered still shocked looking at Takamina’s hand.

“mmmhhhhm” A sound coming out of Takamina’s throat making both of them quickly look at her.

“Takamina!” Miichan call her happy that she finally awake.

Takamina looks like she’s having a difficulty to open her eyes at first as she had been sleeping for 3 days.

She slowly opens her eyes and blinks weakly for a few times as her sight is blurry.
“Onee-chan?” Kanon said as her sister looking at her with a blank face.

“Takamina, how do you feel now?” Miichan asks her still worried.

“What happen?” Takamina said as she tried to sit up and Miichan is helping her.

“Thank God you finally awake Onee-chan!” Kanon said happy as she hug her sister.

Takamina still confuse what happen.
She pats Kanon’s head. “What happen?”
She asks again looking at Miichan.

Miichan’s expression turn from happy to serious one.

“Do you remember your name?” Miichan asks.

“Of course, my name is Takahashi Minami a.k.a Takamina.” Takamina said still confuse.

“But why am I here?” Takamina ask as she looks around the room.

“I…I will call the doctor.” Miichan said as she quickly runs out to find the doctor.

Kanon then part her hug as she also feels strange about her sister.

Then the doctor comes in to check on her.

After several check up, the doctor asks Takamina a few questions.

Miichan and Kanon are standing beside her curious.

“Well, Takahashi-san, tell me what is the last thing you remember you did?”

Takamina try to remember but her head suddenly feel hurt as she put her hands on her head.

“I...can’t…It hurts.” Takamina said as she is in pain.

“Okay, don’t force yourself Takahashi-san.” The doctor said.

“Do you remember what your job is?” The doctor asks this time.
“I was a s-“Before Takamina could answer, Miichan dashed towards her and covered her mouth.

“She’s a still looking for job, doctor, heehee I think Takamina is alright now right?” Miichan said smiling mischievously.
“Y-yeah, she’s fine it just I think maybe she regain her memory back.
Like you explain to me she had lost her memories 5 years ago.”

The doctor said then he has some emergency thing so he left.

“What are you doing?” Takamina glare at her as she put down Miichan’s hand from her mouth.

“Sorry…hehe…here, have some water” Miichan said giving her a glass of water.

“Onee-chan…” Kanon call her as she sits beside her.

“Yes, Kanon?” Takamina respond to her sweetly.

“Do you remember how old I am right now?” Kanon ask looking at her sister.

“Of course I remember! You’re 10 years old!” Takamina said confidently.

Miichan and Kanon look at her silently.

“It is confirmed now the great Takamina is back.” Miichan said looking at her.

“Eh??” Takamina was more confuse.

“Kanon is 10 years old…five years ago Takamina.” Miichan added.

“Wait…what?! So what happen to me?”

“Hmmm…do you remember when we fight those Kato’s group?” Miichan asks her serious.

Again Takamina’s head hurt whenever she tried to remember something.

“*sighed* its fine. Just take a rest for now. You’re still not completely fine.”
Miichan said as she makes her lay on the bed.

“That’s right Onee-chan, we’ll explain to you when you got discharge from the hospital okay?” Kanon said.

“I will tell the others about this.”
Miichan said as she took out her phone then told them that Takamina’s awake...
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At Mariko’s mansion

Mariko is sitting alone in her office room as she just found out
about the news that Acchan is joining Kato’s group.

The only thing she left for her is a note on her desk saying ‘I’m sorry’.

“I won’t forgive you if you do something bad to other people, Atsuko.”
Mariko said as the paper note crumpled in her hand.

OOO
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 24 26/09/13
Post by: olive29 on September 26, 2013, 01:04:14 PM: Takamina is back..

But she forget about everything that happen when she acted like a kid...

It means she forget about Acchan.. :bleed eyes:

And now Acchan joins Kato's group..

Takamina will hate her for sure.. :bleed eyes:

So much drama ahead..

Can't wait for the next chapter..

Update soon,please.. :bow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 24 26/09/13
Post by: qweakb on September 27, 2013, 02:04:52 PM: Takamina memory is back!! YES! getting more excited!

That also mean that she had forgot Acchan :gyaaah:

Hope that acchan will be alright when she heard the news!

MAYUKI moment :wub:

(I am hardcore mayuki shipper.. hehe :mon sweat: )
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 24 26/09/13
Post by: cisda83 on September 27, 2013, 03:41:13 PM: Well Minami forgot everything while she was a childlike...

What would that affect Atsumina relationship?

Well if she forgot everything the past 5 years then she would not remember Atsuko

Then, there would be a fight between Kato group and Minami again

Would Minami be fighting against Atsuko?

Would Yuko and Haruna come back to help out?

Would Minami be able to remember and get together with Atsuko?

Can't wait to see what's going to happen next

Thank you for the update

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 24 26/09/13
Post by: Terragen on September 28, 2013, 02:59:36 AM: The great takamina is back!!

Cant wait takamina vs atsuko
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 24 26/09/13
Post by: FlameHazeKatsu on September 28, 2013, 05:49:17 PM: Takamina's regained her memories back! :onioncheer: but that means she probably won't remember Acchan? :badluck:
an exchange for an exchange? Perhaps no? maybe? it's ur decision~ lol :glasses:
well can't wait to see the update~ :ding:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 24 26/09/13
Post by: chiqinna on October 02, 2013, 11:50:05 AM: ChiqinNa is back!! :glasses: I got THAT feeling back~ :heart:
Since THAT feeling last just for a while, I make a double update!! :luvluv2: :luvluv1:
Let's read it together~ hehe :lol:

Chapter 25

It’s been a week since Takamina got discharged from the hospital.

When she arrived at Miichan’s home, she was greeted by unknown people.

Of course, she did not remember the others too except for Jurina since she is

the one who brings her home. It just Jurina is now same like Kanon, 15 years old.

They introduced Yuki, Mayu, and Rena to her just like she has met them for the first time.

Then Miichan telling her everything that happened 5 years ago.

What happen to her when they were fighting Kato’s group.

She tells Kato is the one who hit her head when she was beating Kenji and Kato also

the one who hit her head that she regain her memory back now.

Everything has been told except about one person, Acchan.

Miichan thought it’s better if she don’t know.

They were in the living room.

“Anyway…where is Haruna…now that I remember she is not here since
I was out of the hospital…” Takamina asks her curious.

“Ummm…I don’t know…” Sighed Miichan leaning her back on the couch.

“What?!!” Takamina said.

“Really…she just left without any note or something.
But don’t worry…I think she’s with Yuko…they both disappear on the same time~”

“Why would she leave us?” Takamina is getting mad.

“Takamina~~ I think she felt guilty whenever she saw you.”
Miichan said then get up and walks to the kitchen.

“G-guilty? Why?”
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Acchan’s pov

It’s been weeks since I leave Rapappa.

That stupid Kato told me to live in his mansion…Tsk…why should I?!

I make my decision to live in apartment instead.

I don’t live in the same roof with people who almost kill my Minami.

Sigh…

I miss Minami…

I hope she is fine…that jerk almost break her leg if I did not stop him.

But now I’m in Kato’s group.

I hate that Kenzo…he tried to order me around since I’m under his command now.

Who cares?

Maeda Atsuko does whatever she wants.

He keeps ordering me to beat any of Rapappa’s members.

Now I know why he wants me to be in their group.

To betray my own people…to make Mariko mad.

After they achieve their goal, they will kick me out of their group.

Like I don’t know their plan.

And Sasshi and her people always appear on my way whenever I have business with other group.

~Flashback~

“Sasshi…*sigh* what are you doing here?” Acchan asks while putting her hands inside her pocket.

“What are YOU doing Maeda-san?” Sasshi said mad.

“Just….go away…” Acchan said as she doesn’t want to fight them.

Then the other started to surround her making her cannot walks from them.

Acchan turn around to look at Sasshi who smirk at her.

‘So…you guys really serious huh…’ thought Acchan.

“Don’t regret this! I won’t tolerate.” Acchan said smirk at them.

She had no choice but to fight them because she knows Kato’s people always watching over her.

~End of flashback~

At Kato’s mansion

Kato Kenji now can relax his mind as he is proud of his son’s plan on
making Rapappa’s ace to join them.

“What are you smiling at father?” Kenzo asks his father who sit on the living room.

“You’re doing great job son. *smirk*” smirked his father.

“Don’t worry father, now that we got Maeda, we’ll take down all
your enemies…especially Watanabe Hiroshi~” Smirk his son.

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At Miichan’s bakery

“Takamina!!! Stop laughing at me!” Miichan said mad as Takamina
has been laughing at her once she found out Miichan opened a bakery.

“I thought you are joking when you said your dream is to open a
bakery when we were young.” Takamina said looking around her bakery.

Miichan pouted.

“But it’s nice.” Takamina’s words making Miichan smiles.

“What are you doing walking around? Help us here!”
Miichan shout at her as they were busy preparing to open the bakery.

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At school gate

It looks like Yuki is waiting for Mayu as they finish school.

“Hey Yuki!!!” Lovetan greeted her.

“Yuki?” Black confuses.

“Mayu told me your name! Teehee~” Lovetan said wrapping her arm
around Mayu’s shoulder who avoid Yuki’s eyes.

Yuki just look at Mayu who is totally avoids her gaze.

“Ahh…I have to go to Miichan’s bakery now, see you later~?” Lovetan said grinning at them.

Mayu said walks away then Yuki followed her.

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Mayu and Yuki sitting on a bench at the park.

“Why you told them my real name?” Yuki asks.

“Because it’s a beautiful name to hear. Black doesn’t suit you.”
Yuki unconsciously smiles to herself and blushing.

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“What if I say I want to be a mafia like you?” Mayu suddenly asks her.

Yuki sigh without answering Mayu’s question.

“I’m serious.” Mayu said looking at Yuki.

“Then try to beat me to see if you are qualified enough to become a mafia.” Black said.

Mayu stand up and walks in front of her.

“Fine, let’s do it now.” Mayu said serious.

‘Wow…she’s really serious…’ thought Yuki dumbfounded.

Then Yuki also stand up.

“As you wish…but I warn you…I won’t hold back.” Yuki said serious.

“I won’t too.” Mayu back away to prepare herself.

Mayu is ready with her ‘awkward’ fighting position while

Black is just standing there waiting for Mayu to attack her.

Black is laughing inside her mind seeing Mayu’s weird fighting position.

“I’m going now.” Mayu said.

“Just do it.” Black says calmly.

Then Mayu dashed towards her and was about to punch her face

when Yuki quickly catch her arms and trapped them to Mayu’s back.

Mayu groaned in pain as her back is facing Yuki.

“I told you I won’t hold back.” Yuki said still holding Mayu’s arms.

“Yuki, it hurts!” Mayu said then Yuki let go of her arm.

“It’s really hurt!” Mayu said glaring at her while rubbing her arms.

“Let me see…” Yuki was about to hold her hand when Mayu walks away from her mad.

‘Did I do it too hard?’ Yuki asks herself then followed the mad Mayu.

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Meanwhile Jurina and Kanon are walking with Rena as they walk home.

“Ne…Rena-Chan…here I bought you melon pan!!!” Jurina said as she pulls out a melon pan from her bag.

Rena smile at her as she took it happily.

“Thank you Jurina, how did you know I love melon pan?” Rena asks her.

“Black told us.” Jurina said as she gave one to Kanon also.

“Nee…Rena-Chan…how does it feel being a mafia?” Jurina asks her.

“Yeah…We’re curious.” Kanon added.

“Hmmm…*giggle* its fun~” Rena said as she giggling.

“F-fun?! I thought being a mafia is hard!” Kanon said.

“Hmmm…sometimes it’s hard, sometimes it’s….fun?” Rena said with a confuse face.

“Mmmmm…my melon pan is finished…Rena-Chan can I have some of yours?” Jurina asks her.

“No!” Rena said as she ignores Jurina.

“Eeeh?” Jurina and Kanon said while Rena is walking ahead of them.

“I guess not~” Jurina pout and sighed.

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After a few days, Takamina started to come home late at night.

This made Miichan and the others worried.

One night, Takamina went home late.

Silently, she tiptoed to her room as the light is off.

As she passed the living room, suddenly a voice startled her.

“What are you doing Takamina?” It’s Miichan’s voice.

“Huh? Miichan~ you caught me~ hehe” Takamina said as she walks towards Miichan who sit on the couch.

Looks like Miichan has been waiting for her.

“Sit here.” Miichan pat beside her then Takamina sit beside Miichan.

Takamina sigh.

“You have been out almost all night Takamina."

"I told you don’t go out but you sneak out silently.” Miichan said with a worried tone.

Takamina looks troubled.

“What’s wrong?” Miichan asks looking at her partner who looks like she’s being disturbed by something.

“I don’t know…I feel like…*sigh* I don’t know~” Takamina sigh leaning her back on the couch.

“I want to do this again…” Takamina mumbled.

“Takamina…You still not completely fine!” Miichan said worried.

“But…staying at home is boring…working in your bakery is boring!” Whined Takamina pout at Miichan.

Miichan is laughing at her seeing her pouting like the ‘kid’ Takamina.

“I want to beat the bad mafia! I want to find that Kenzo and kick his butt!”
Takamina said mad while her leg kicking the air.

“You’re alone Takamina…” Miichan narrowed her eyes.

“So what?! I can beat them one by one…silently~~ like a ninja! Woohhoo~” Takamina grinned.

‘Here she goes again~ ‘Miichan face palm.

“Whatever you want, just don’t let your guard down. And train yourself again…” Miichan said as she got up.

“I hope you won’t meet her…”

T.B.C~

Ooopssss...
Next!!! XD

Chapter 26

Takamina’s pov

I have been sighing all day as I was walking around the town.

Something felt wrong.

I feel like some part of me is missing.

Did something happen during these 5 years?

Whenever I tried to remember something, my head hurt.

But now I don’t feel hurt since I keep myself from trying so hard to remember anything.

I was walking through the park…

It felt so familiar!

*sigh*

I turn to look at the playground.

Then I close my eyes.

*something flashed inside Takamina’s mind*

*a blur flashback of the innocent Takamina as she play happily at the playground.*

Ughhh!!! My head hurt again!

I sit on the bench nearer as both my hands holding my head.

I close my eyes again.

*then a flashed of someone’s back watching at her playing*

What is this?!

Ughhh!!! Stop!

Takamina breathe in and breathe out as she calm herself down.

Then I open my eyes and look around.

There are not many people at the park currently.

What is really happening here?

When Miichan told me everything happen all those years,

I can feel that there is something more that she did not tell me.

That something must be important…

I need to go to Mariko’s mansion now…

End of Takamina’s pov

At Mariko mansion

Mariko is in her office room when Takamina comes in.

Mariko looks up at her.

“Oh…what brings you here? Takamina-san~” Mariko said smiling as she
gesture Takamina to sit at the chair across her desk.

Takamina looks around the room.

Then a file on the desk attracted her eyes.

At the front file stated the name…Maeda Atsuko.

Takamina extend her hand and was about to take the file when

Mariko react fast taking the file and put it inside the drawer.

“So…?” Mariko looks at her.

“I have a proposal.” Takamina said looking at her.

“Proposal?” Mariko raises her eyebrows.

Takamina nodded.

“Lend me some of your weapon. I will help you bring down some of your rivals.” Takamina said serious.

Mariko looking at her for a while.

“Hmmm…I have lost my group ace now…” Mariko thinking.

Takamina’s lips curved into a smile.

“Well, I can lend you some, but you have to work together with my underlings.”
Mariko said knowing that Takamina is not completely fine if does this job by herself.

“Fine, but if I saw your people mess with innocent people-“

“They won’t.” Mariko said convincing her.

“Okay. I will start tonight.” Takamina said.

‘I wonder what will Acchan react if she saw you tonight…’ Thought Mariko.

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“Mayu…” Yuki said as Mayu turned her back at Yuki.

“Don’t talk to me!” Pout Mayu.

“Are you mad at me?” Yuki asks as she looks at Mayu’s back.

Mayu crossed her arms looking away.

Yuki don’t what to do to this little spoil girl so she just do what her heart says.

Yuki grab Mayu’s arm then make her turn around to face her.

Mayu averted her eyes from looking at Yuki’s.

“I’m sorry.” Yuko said looking at her.

Mayu look at her.

“I will forgive you…in one condition” Mayu smirked.

‘Condition? I have a bad feeling right now…’ thought Yuki.

“w-what?” Yuki asks her.

“Kiss me” Mayu said pointing at her lips.

‘I knew it!’ Yuki thought.

Yuki was still silent. It was always Mayu who does this kind of things, but her?!

Mayu knows that Yuki is still feeling embarrass since it always her who started it.

“*sigh* fine…on the cheek~” Mayu said.

“S-still…” Mumbled Yuki as her face started to glow bright red.

“I won’t forgive you then…” Mayu was about to walk away from Yuki when Yuki grab both her shoulders.

Mayu turn to look at her slightly surprised.

Yuki slowly lean towards Mayu’s face.

Their hearts start to beat faster as their face grew closer.

Yuki tilted her head to lean a kiss on Mayu’s right cheek then…

*CHUU*

Mayu…being playful also tilted her head to the right so that Yuki’s lips landed on hers instead of her cheek.

Yuki who was closing her eyes when she kiss Mayu feeling some movement on her lips.

She opened her eyes only to see she kissed Mayu’s lips!

Her eyes grew wider.

Suddenly Mayu pulling Yuki’s neck closer to her as they deepen the kiss.

Yuki‘s hand that was on Mayu’s shoulder unconsciously move to Mayu’s waist to drew her closer.

Oblivious to the surrounding, the couple still focused on kissing passionately.

While Watanabe Hiroshi's people are taking a picture of them kissing.
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That night, Takamina went ‘hunting’ mafia.

True to her words, Takamina is being accompanied by Mariko’s underlings.

Sasshi and some of her member is with Takamina as they walks along the street that mafia always used.

Then they heard a sound of people screaming as if they got beaten.

Takamina and the others quickly went towards the source of the voices.

Then they saw a group of mafia is beating other people.

“Sasshi, you go first with the others” Takamina said to her. Sasshi nodded.

There is something else attract her attention.

Someone is standing not far from there just watching at them beating those people.

“What is she doing?” mumbled Takamina then she walks towards her.

The mafia who is busy beating people suddenly got disturb when

Sasshi and her people suddenly interfere on their business as they start to fight the other mafia.

Takamina walks towards the girl whose crossing her arms as she watch the fight.

The girl [okay fine! it’s Acchan! XD] realized someone is walking towards her

so she turn her head to look at the direction.

Acchan’s eyes grew wider when she saw that someone.

Completely different than usual as she looks at her appearance.

‘Minami…’ said Acchan in her mind still stunned.

Meanwhile Takamina also feeling déjà vu as she gazes at her.

‘Why does she look familiar to me?’

“Maeda-san! Help us!” Then one of the bad mafia calls for Acchan’s help.

Acchan was still stunned at the figure in front of her.

“So you’re one of them!” Takamina said mad as she is putting her gloves on.

‘No…Minami…not now….’

Acchan step back as she finally back to her sense.

Takamina dashed towards her and about throw a punch on her face but Acchan dodge her well.

Takamina act quick as she fast kick Acchan on her stomach making Acchan step back several steps.

Takamina dashed towards her again.

Acchan don’t want to let her guard down react fast as she dodge every of her attacks.

She doesn’t want to attack or doing anything to her.

‘What happen to you Minami…?’
Acchan thought as she avoids her punch.

Then Takamina react faster jump onto her making her fall and give her several punch on her face.

“You know…you have a beautiful face…but beating innocent people made you look ugly!”

Takamina said sitting on her stomach as she punch on her face.

Acchan smile when she heard the ‘beautiful’ part even though she got hit by her.

Takamina stop punching her when she saw her smiling.

‘Even your smile is beautiful…’ thought Takamina mesmerized by her smile.

Acchan looks at Takamina who looks like she’s being hypnotized.

Then Acchan took this advantage to turn her around so that now she is on top of Takamina.

Takamina then back to her sense.

She tried to get away but Acchan’s grip hard on her hands on the ground.

Then Acchan’s head move forwards close to Takamina’s.

Takamina started to feel heat on her face.

Acchan stopped then look into her eyes.

“You know…you are beautiful too…and your heart....makes you more beautiful~”

Acchan said smiling playfully as she gives a quick peck on her lips.

She let go of her then get up.

Acchan walks away but before that she turn around...

“Hope we see again~” Acchan wink at Takamina whose still on the ground

then she left the place without even bothering to help her group member.

Takamina was left dumbfounded.

T.B.C~

Okay, that's all~ thanks for reading! See you next time when I got THAT feeling back! XD XD
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Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 25 & 26 02/10/13
Post by: diamond kirara on October 02, 2013, 11:59:59 AM: OMG :w00t:atsumina kiss!!! :wub: :wub: :wub: yaayy hope u update soon
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 25 & 26 02/10/13
Post by: Haruto Lee on October 02, 2013, 12:10:43 PM: Hmm.... What is watanabe Hiroshi doing there?

Why is he taking picture of Yuki and Mayu?

But there are a lot of fun scene XD

Hope u can update soon
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 25 & 26 02/10/13
Post by: chiqinna on October 02, 2013, 12:17:10 PM: Ooopss...my mistake... :lol:
It's watanabe Hiroshi's people...
I already fix it! thanks Haruto Lee!
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Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 25 & 26 02/10/13
Post by: chichay12 on October 02, 2013, 01:00:50 PM: :on woohoo: :on woohoo: :on woohoo:
yey double update!
acchan hang in thier..
i hope minami remember acchan fast!
i want more atsumina :wriggly:

thank you for the update :on gay:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 25 & 26 02/10/13
Post by: qweakb on October 02, 2013, 01:35:16 PM: Double updates!!!!!!!!! :onioncheer: :kneelbow:

Hope that one day Acchan will back to Rappapa!

Curious to know what had Haruna had did to Takamina? Is she also the cause of Takamina to lose memory? :?

Mayuki Moment!!! Kiss scene.. So sweet :wub: :wub: :wub:

Thanks for the mayuki moment! :kneelbow:

I laugh at the Wmastui moment.. LOL.. Rena.. Melonpan

And also LOL and laugh at the part when I read that While Watanabe Hiroshi's people are taking a picture of them kissing. :hiakhiakhiak:

Hope that takamina will able to remember what had happen to her in the past 5 years.

Wonder what she will be react when she know the truth about being a good 'child' and bath together with miichan they all.. :hiakhiakhiak:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 25 & 26 02/10/13
Post by: olive29 on October 02, 2013, 01:58:16 PM: Waaaaahhhhhhh.. thanks for the double update.. :bow:

Mayuki moment.. :inlove:

Rena always choose melon pan over Jurina.. :lol:

Poor Juju.. :lol:

Yeah...Takamina finally meet Atsuko..

What will happen next??

I'm still hoping for Kojiyuu to make an appearance and help them out.. :grin:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 25 & 26 02/10/13
Post by: cisda83 on October 02, 2013, 03:18:17 PM: Oh.. Chi-San... You're great... Double updates...

Interesting development there...

Minami fought Atsuko but Atsuko didn't fight back

I'm wondering who's stronger between Minami and Atsuko ?

Kato is pretty happy with Atsuko.. But would he always happy?

Would Atsuko rebel now?

There is no reason for her to work for Kato anymore..

She did save Minami but now she can always go away from Kato already...

Some more... Minami can take care of herself now

Also she paid her due already... she did quit Rappappa and she did work for Kato for a while...

There was no mention about she needed to work for him forever... so Yeah....she can always go, right?

Unless... you are making Atsuko as a spy in Kato family.. to take down the family from the inside

Well whatever it is... it's going to be interesting...

Why did Haruna leave michan and Minami?

What's going to happen to Atsumina next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the updates

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 25 & 26 02/10/13
Post by: lezperv on October 02, 2013, 07:12:55 PM: holy shit! this is getting really good!!!

Atsumina kiss!!! woohoo :heart: I like how Minami is still attracted to Atsuko even if she lost her memory of her. That's Atsumina bond for you :twothumbs

hope u update soon :)
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 25 & 26 02/10/13
Post by: Terragen on October 04, 2013, 05:06:23 AM: so what if someone take mayuki kissed photo's????? i don't care

but i sense that black will get scolded mayu's father,how can a mafia kissed his beloved daughter (but if he try to separated them,mayu will sulking again and hated him,poor father)

woaa acchan was so bold when she know minami became different...i mean comeback to herself her real self

and rena...humm wonder what wil happend with wmatsui since we know someone from the past still looking for jurina if im not wrong

thank
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 25 & 26 REPLIES 05/10/13
Post by: chiqinna on October 05, 2013, 09:28:59 AM: diamond kirara: I hope I will~ :lol:
Haruto Lee: thanks for reading! and correcting my mistake...there is more mistake there...find it! :D
Chichay12: more Atsumina moment? ow yeah~ :bath:
qweakb: I thought you were busy ehhhh~ :hehehe: Takamina will probably fainted if she found out she had bath together with them! hahahahahaha :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
olive29: yeah...Kojiyuu will be back... :D
Quote from: cisda83 on October 02, 2013, 03:18:17 PM
Oh.. Chi-San... You're great... Double updates...

Interesting development there...

Minami fought Atsuko but Atsuko didn't fight back

I'm wondering who's stronger between Minami and Atsuko ?

Kato is pretty happy with Atsuko.. But would he always happy?

Would Atsuko rebel now?

There is no reason for her to work for Kato anymore..

She did save Minami but now she can always go away from Kato already...

Some more... Minami can take care of herself now

Also she paid her due already... she did quit Rappappa and she did work for Kato for a while...

There was no mention about she needed to work for him forever... so Yeah....she can always go, right?

Unless... you are making Atsuko as a spy in Kato family.. to take down the family from the inside

Well whatever it is... it's going to be interesting...

Why did Haruna leave michan and Minami?

What's going to happen to Atsumina next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the updates

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Chi-san?! I like it~ :luvluv2: I don't know also who's stronger between them.. :dunno:
Acchan has her own plan and she would not leave Kato yet~ like you said being a spy~ destroy from inside! :D
and like her character in this fics, she likes to do things on her own so Mariko and the others doesnt know about her plan unless they figure it out themselves~
Why Haruna leave them? easy...because- wait...why am I spoiling everything?! :banghead:

lezperv: yeah...their bond is strong! :thumbsup
teluwaih_jinih: teluwaih_jinih...where did you get that name?!! it sounds familiar to ME! :shock: I already lost THAT feeling but yeah...Atsumina sweet moment still lingering on my mind~ :shy2: :shy1: :shifty:
Terragen: you don't care but Watanabe Hiroshi care! :P
you're right, Jurina is in trouble once they found out about her. that Black-coat men! :twisted:

fuhhhh....I'm having a day off~~~ but tired....
well, I'm still in a healing process since...I read that news again!!! :banghead: :banghead: :kickass: :knee:
trouble maker is....*sigh* I don't know~ :mon sigh:
I need to meditate in....the shop...nowhere to go~

Everyone, including the silent reader/stalker, thanks again for your support that I write until this chapter....I thought I was going to stop writing...
until then...
:on blackhole:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 25 & 26 REPLIES 05/10/13
Post by: cisda83 on October 05, 2013, 11:04:54 AM: Chi-san... you like that nickname... good to know...

Yeah... I thought you would tell me every plot of your story there...

Don't spoil it... I like too guess the storyline so yeah...

Can't wait to find out what's going on in the next chapter

And also the side story about Haruna and Yuko as to why they left Minami...?

Can't wait...

Thank you for the story up until now and also reply

PS: what news... what scandal...? I thought it was that last news about kabuki guy... but it was his statement not Atsuko's right?

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 25 & 26 REPLIES 05/10/13
Post by: chiqinna on October 05, 2013, 11:18:57 AM: Cisda-san! Of course i won't spoil everything... no fun then... :D
about the news? it just some people loves to make false statement about our idols and try to make fans believe in them...
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 27 09/10/13
Post by: chiqinna on October 09, 2013, 12:20:57 PM: Kumusta! Sup! Okay, I was supposed to stay away from tumblr and I decided to stay away from internet but so many new fics asking for me to read them and I got confuse which one to read first~ and don’t know what to comment~ :P I need to finish this fic! Chaiyok! :jphip:

Chapter 27

Takamina’s pov

Today I take a break from doing my job.

I rest at home.

Sigh…

I still trying to figure out what is happening to me.

And that…t-that woman…*Takamina touch her lips*

How dare she kiss me?! That was my first!

[LOL!!! Readers, guess how many times have their lips met already~? I think 3? :?]

And why she acts like she has known me for long?

Plus she looks familiar…

I remember they call her Maeda-san…

*Takamina remember she saw a file on Mariko’s desk name Maeda Atsuko*

Hmmm…Maybe just coincidence.

Shit! She’s really making me insane like this?!

She’s strong and fast too…

Flashback(normal pov)

One night, Takamina going alone to do her job.

A group of mafia were walking on a dark alley as they just finish their business.

They were so loud as they had just finish drinking at the casino after doing their work.

Suddenly they heard a ‘ziiiing’ sound.

When they look behind, one of their member already lying on the ground.

“What’s wrong with him?! Oi!!! Kei! Wake up! Don’t sleep on the road! Oi!”

One of the guy said as he pokes the lying figure with his leg.

Then ‘ziiiiing’ sound could be heard again.

They turn to their front to see again one of their member on the ground unconscious.

“what is happening?” They started to be alert of their surrounding as they looking around
afraid that they will be the next victim.

Then they saw someone coming towards them.

“Oh…it just Maeda-san.” They said as Acchan walks towards them while
looking at the lifeless figure on the ground with a confuse expression.

“That was your doing right Maeda?!” One of them started to accused her.

“What?” Acchan asks confuse.

Then ‘ziiiing!!!!’ again…

Three people at once fall on the ground.

“The fuck is happening right now!!” Shouted one of them feeling scared.

“So it’s not you!” They said pointing at Acchan because they thought Acchan was trying to scared them.

“Then who is it?” One of them asks curious.

Acchan was also confuse as she looking around.

Then when she look back at her group member, they all already lying
on the ground with someone with a black leather jacket standing there facing her back.

‘who is this?’ Acchan thought as she looks at the figure’s back.

Short,

her hair is short.

“Your clothes looks nice!” Acchan smile still calm as she put her hands on her pocket.

When the person turns around to face her, Acchan’s smile getting bigger.

‘so it’s you…Minami…I almost did not recognize you because of your short hair.’
Acchan said happy looking at her beloved midget.

*Takamina cut her hair short after her first encounter with Acchan*

Takamina glare at her.

“Y-you!!!” Takamina said.

“Hmmm…You’re quite strong…and fast huh…” Acchan said walking towards her
as she looks at the bodies on the ground.

Suddenly Takamina dashed towards her leaving a punch on Acchan’s face.

“Ugh! I haven’t ready yet!!!” Shouted Acchan as she stumble backwards.

“Ow yeah?! But I’m ready to finish you!” Takamina then giving her a powerful kick on her stomach.

“Ugghhh!! Acchan groaned in pain as she did not avoid her attack just now.

“Tsk…I heard that you’re strong, but it looks like I heard a false rumors eehh…”
Takamina smirk provoking her.

Then Acchan suddenly punch her back on her face hard enough to make her step back.

"A-are you okay? I-I...-" Acchan started to get worried that she punch her too hard.

But Takamina react fast by kicking her leg then used her elbow to hit her.

'Ugh! I was worried about you but you keep on punching and kicking me Minami!' Thought Acchan.

“*chuckle* …I heard you’re not a mafia aren't you?” Acchan asks her as she avoid her punches.

“I hate mafia!” Takamina gritted her teeth.

“Then why you help Rapappa?” Smirked Acchan.

She actually knows already the reason because Mariko told her before.

“None of your business!!!” Takamina then do a flying kick to her head and Acchan dodge it quickly.

Takamina keep attacking her while Acchan keep dodging all her attacks.

“Stop this!!” Acchan shouted as she fast grab Takamina’s arm and
tackle her to the wall with her arms on her back.

“*sigh* You know, I’m not a bad person as you think!” Acchan said gripping tight on her arms.

“Then why are you in that killer group!!!” Takamina said mad trying to release herself.

"They kill my parents!!!" Takamina shouted.

Acchan was dumbfounded by what she heard.

‘So…Kato’s group also the one who kill her parents?’ Acchan thought.

Realize that the taller girl loosen her grip on her, Takamina took this chance to free herself.

Takamina harshly push her away making Acchan fall on the ground.

Takamina glare at her as her eyes teary then she walks away leaving Acchan alone.

“Minami…” Acchan feeling sad.

End of flashback

As Takamina were busy with her thought, Kanon enters the room.

“Nee-Chan~” Kanon call her older sister who sit in the chair near the window.

“Hmm?” Takamina looked at Kanon.

“Ah, I forgot to give you something, here…*Kanon handing her a bracelet* it was yours.” Kanon said.

Takamina took the pink bracelet from Kanon’s hand and look at it.

“It’s mine?” Kanon nodded.

She put the bracelet on her wrist. “Looks good.” She said.

‘Maybe I bought it before this.’ Thought Takamina as she keeps wearing the bracelet.

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Meanwhile Yuki and Mayu were walking around the town.

They were holding each other hands.

“So…you still want to be a mafia?” Yuki asks her.

“Un.” Mayu nodded.

“I don’t think your father would like the idea.” Yuki said looking at her.

Mayu pout.

“How about I teach you how to defend yourself and some fighting skills?” Yuki suggest to her.

She stopped walking at facing Mayu.

“I don’t want you to be a mafia, it’s dangerous.” Yuki said serious.

Mayu crossed her arms. “Fine~”

Yuki smile at her then put her arm around Mayu’s shoulder.

“Let’s go!” When they were walking,

Mayu’s father and his bodyguard suddenly appear in front of them…

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Acchan’s pov

*she is walking alone*

I did not know that Kato is the one who kill her parents.

I only know Kenzo is the one who make her lost her memories.

Now I feel guilty.

I’m sorry Minami…I promised I’d destroy them all!

I just need to think of a plans wisely.

I hope Mariko won’t be mad at me for leaving her group.

Thinking of Mariko,
there she is…standing in front of me.

*Acchan stop walking*

She is looking directly at me.

Eh? She’s smiling…I thought she’s supposed to get mad at me.

“Let’s talk, Atsuko.”

Normal pov

*Mariko brings Acchan to a small building*

“How are you?” Mariko asks her former ace.

“Good. You?” Acchan asks leaning her back on the chair.

“Not good. I lost my group ace.” Mariko said blankly.

“Sorry.”

“not your fault. So tell me…what is your plan?” Mariko asks her.

Acchan look at her confuse.

“What plan?” Acchan acts innocently.

“Don’t lie Acchan, don’t worry, Kato and her underling doesn’t know about this place.”

Mariko said as she looks around the room that looks like a meeting room with a chairs and long table.

“*sigh* I have my own plan Mariko-“

“I know you always what you want Acchan, but this is Kato we’re talking about.” Mariko said serious.

Acchan keeps silent.

“You want to take revenge for Takamina right?” Mariko’s sudden question making Acchan look at her.

“It won’t work if you do it alone.” Mariko said.

“Fine~ what is your plan then?” Acchan said giving up to do this job alone.

Mariko smirked.

“Good! Let’s wait for some people, I already call text them.” Mariko said holding her phone.

“Who are they? Sasshi?” Acchan asks.

Mariko shaking her head to the side.

“They will be here soon.” Smirked Mariko…

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Eh?

T.B.C~

Ehh?? Eeeehhhhh???!!!
What is this?! :huhuh
thank you for reading! :bow:
stay tuned~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 27 09/10/13
Post by: love angel on October 09, 2013, 01:16:05 PM: i like you story :twothumbs
cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 27 09/10/13
Post by: olive29 on October 09, 2013, 01:37:32 PM: Let me guess...

The people whom Mariko called are Nyannyan and Yuko,right??

Update soon,pleaseee...
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 27 09/10/13
Post by: chiqinna on October 09, 2013, 01:49:12 PM: nope! wrong guessing! :P
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 27 09/10/13
Post by: olive29 on October 09, 2013, 01:55:36 PM: Awwwww...is it Miichan and Takamina??

I'm curious..
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 27 09/10/13
Post by: cisda83 on October 09, 2013, 02:15:30 PM: Who are the people that Mariko called?

I agreed with olive-san if they could be Minami and Miichan...

If not them, could be the rest of rappappa members, ie. Rena, Yuki

And may be include Mayu's father clan.

Or Sae...?

Honestly... I can't be certain who they are going to be?

And also what's going to happen to Mayu and Yuki?

What would Mayu's father do to Yuki?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 27 09/10/13
Post by: Terragen on October 09, 2013, 03:01:23 PM: just because mayu father knowing his daughter dating a mafia,doesn't mean he really againts it,i know watanabe hiroshi love mayu so much,if he try separeted mayu and yuki,it will make mayu sad,and making mayu sad is the last think he want...if mayu couldn't be a mafia then how about yuki stop being mafia??

i cant wait to know what the plan to destroy kato clan

and the black suit man..remain mistery...what so special on jurina?

thank this is great
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 27 09/10/13
Post by: lezperv on October 09, 2013, 04:15:41 PM: lol you cut Minami's hair, thats fine, now in the story she'll look more like the 'now' Minami XD

Poor Atsuko, getting hit sooo much by her beloved X3 I bet the 'they' is Minami and Miichan... maybe Kojiyuu will be there too?

Hope you could update soon :)
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
Post by: chiqinna on October 12, 2013, 12:41:15 PM: Chapter 28

Mayu and Black were now at Watanabe Hiroshi’s office room.

Hiroshi has been sighing for the nth time already as he looks at the two girls sitting silently across him.

Looking at the picture of them kissing on the table, he sighed again.

“I can’t do anything about this…am I? He said looking at his beloved daughter.

Mayuyu smirked at his father.

“Black, do you really love my daughter?” He asked Black serious.

Yuki looked at Mayu as Mayu just give her a smile.

“I do.” Yuki said looking at her life savior.

Watanabe Hiroshi then looked at his daughter who only changes into a serious
expression when she felt his father is looking at her.

He sighed again.

“If I trust my daughter to you, promised me you’ll take care of her.” Hiroshi said.

He knows, if he opposed their relationship, Mayu would hate him more than she hate him now.

Also she’s dating a mafia, it could danger her life too.

“If anything happen to her, I-“Before he could continue, Yuki interrupt him.

“I promised I will take care of your daughter, and I guaranteed, she will be fine.”
Yuki said while intertwine her hand with Mayu’s.

‘I’m happy as long as Mayu is happy with her life.’ Thought Hiroshi looking at his
daughter who smiles lovingly at her partner.

“You two can leave now. I have nothing to say.” He said as he turns his seat around facing the glass window.

After they both walk out of the room, Yuki said something to Mayu that makes
Mayu walk back to her father’s office room.

Inside the room, his father is looking sadly at his wife picture.

“Papa!” Mayu said making Hiroshi to quickly stand up and look at his daughter
as it’s been long time she did not call him like that.

Mayu then walk towards her father and hug him tightly as she started to cry in his embrace.

Hiroshi who feels really happy wrapped his arms around her daughter’s body as he also cry.

“I miss my baby.” Hiroshi said tighten their hug as Mayu cry even louder.

“I miss you too Papa! And I love you…*sob* so much!” Mayu said sobbing as they
looks like they haven’t met for years.

Long after, they both part their hug.

“Go, Yuki is waiting for you.” He said smiling at her daughter.

“Thank you Papa…”Mayu said as she kisses his father’s cheek before left the room.

Watanabe Hiroshi then looks again at his wife’s picture but this time with a happy expression.

“Mayuyu’s happiness…is our happiness...right Miruki?”He says.

meanwhile

Takamina were walking alone on the sidewalk after their discussion at No3B’s old place.

She has this confuse expression after what she had heard from their explanation.

Especially about Acchan.

Flashback

Mariko and Acchan were still waiting as Acchan playing with her bracelet when the door suddenly opened.

“Mariko, what is it-“Takamina stopped talking when she saw Acchan also in the room.

‘Oh God…’ Acchan thought knowing Takamina will attack her again.

“You!!!” Takamina suddenly jump on her making them both falling to the ground.

“Takamina!!!” Mariko yelled at her as she stands up shocked by her sudden action.

“What are you doing here?!!” Takamina shouted at her as she was about to punch her.

Gladly Miichan entered the room and quickly separated her from Acchan.

“Miichan! Let me go! She’s a bad mafia!” Takamina said in rage.

“Calm down Bakamina!!!” Miichan said still holding her.

Then *praakk!!* Mariko slaps her head with a big paper fan.

“Glad I did not throw away this thing before.” Mariko said as she looks at the
thing she used to slap Takamina’s head just now.

“Sit down first, I will explain about her.”Mariko said as she gesture them both to sit
down while Acchan get up and sit on her chair looking at Takamina who’s glaring at her.

Mariko and Miichan sighed.

“Explain.” Takamina said serious while crossing her arms.

“Okay~ this is Acchan. My former group’s Ace.”Mariko said to her.

“What?! But she-“

“If only you know what happen…” Miichan said making Takamina looking at her confuse.

“What happen?!” Takamina is getting frustrated.

“Before you regained you memories back, Acchan and you has a good relationship,

she always being by your side, and…
*Miichan whisper to Takamina’s ear*
she really loves you…a LOT!” Takamina widen her eyes then
she looks at Acchan who looks like she’s blushing.

“No way…” Takamina said in disbelieve.

“Okay, now Acchan explained to them why you leave Rapappa and join Kato.”
Mariko said she already figure out the reason.

Acchan looks at the still confused Takamina before she started to explain to them.

“I bet with them that if I could beat 100 people there, they will free Minami but you know…
Kato always playing unfair. I lose.” Acchan said remembering again the incident.

“Then he…tried to hit her legs with a metal bar…so I…made a deal…you know that…
I would do anything for Minami…” Acchan said serious looking at her Minami sadly.

“So that was what happened Takamina.” Mariko said looking at Takamina.

Takamina still looking at Acchan as she still dumbfounded of what she hears just now.

So that was what happened that makes her still thinking about her.

They postponed their discussion to next day since Takamina could not focus.

“Minami!” Takamina look behind to see Acchan smiling at her.

‘Why am I always feeling weak when she’s around me?!’ Takamina thought.

Acchan walking besides her knowing that Takamina is not going to pick a fight with her again.

“So…are you still mad at me?” Acchan asks her.

“N-no…” Takamina said stuttering because she suddenly remembered her words earlier.

Noticing that the other girl keep quiet, Takamina look beside her to see Acchan is staring at her lovingly.

Takamina quickly turn her eyes to the front to avoid the taller girl’s eyes.

‘Why is she even looking at me like that?!’ Takamina said in her mind as her heart is beating faster.

“Y-you n-need to go…home. It’s l-late.” Takamina said to avoid the awkward moment.

Takamina stopped walking when she felt the other girl holding her hand.

“Minami, I want to walk you home like always.” Acchan said looking at her.

“l-like always?” Acchan nodded.

“I always walk you home when I bring you to play at the playground or eating Katsudon
at your favorite restaurant.” Acchan said happy as drag Minami’s hand to walk.

Somehow the way she talks making Takamina slowly comfortable around her.

Then as they were walking, Takamina noticed the bracelet on Acchan’s right hand.

“That bracelet…” Takamina said then she looks at her own bracelet.

‘It looks the same…’ thought her.

She hears Acchan giggle so she look at her.

“This is couple bracelet. I bought it one for you, and one for me~”
Acchan said pointing at the bracelet on Takamina’s right hand.

“Owh…” Takamina nodded as she blushing because it was couple bracelet~

“Acchan, I’m sorry for misunderstood about you before this.”
Takamina said as they arrived in front of Miichan’s house.

“It’s okay…besides you don’t know the truth.” Acchan said smiling at her.

“D-do you want me to walk you home?” Takamina said.

“Bakamina…*chuckle* I’m fine, besides I’m a mafia~” Acchan said playfully.

Takamina scratched her not-so-itchy head.

“So…I’m going now.” Acchan said.

Takamina was about to entered the house when Acchan calling her.

When Takamina turn around, her lips already on Acchan’s.

But it was just a peck as Acchan quickly part while smiling innocently.

“Oopss…I was about to kiss your cheek just now~” Acchan said then leaving the stunned Takamina there.

‘I still love you, Minami.’

At Kato’s mansion

“We saw Maeda walking with that Takahashi girl on our way home.” Said his underling.

Kenji was mad while his son keeping his expression calm.

“What?! She must be planning something behind us!” Kenji said as he got up using his walking stick.

“Dad! Could you please calm down?” Kenzo as he still calm.

“Kenzo, how can you still calm even though you know she’d betray us!” His father say mad.

“Tsk…I know already dad…soon or later she would do that.” He said grinning.

“We can’t attack that Takahashi, she’s different than what we see before.” Kenzo said.

“That’s right, she and her other partner are the one who take down the top mafia before.
They are back now that she has gaining her strength back, before we could not do anything because of her condition.”
Kenji said.

“Rapappa has loss their ace, Yuko before…and now, they lose one again.
Maeda, we will use her before she started to betrayed us.” Kenzo said smirking.

[Don’t forget readers, Kato’s group contain of BAKA people]

this fic will getting nonsense!
I don't care eh eh eh eh eh!
It's time to summon Kojiyuu!
This fic is going to end soon.
Cmze is going to leave.
I'm...no comment yet. :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
~~the serious side of me suddenly coming out of somewhere after a long time hiding and scolding me for no reason and dissappear again!~~
I really need to finish this fic cuz if i die i might hunt this thread~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
Post by: cisda83 on October 12, 2013, 05:21:54 PM: Yeah.. U bring out kojiyuu soon

Eh... Atsumina is back..

Though Minami still has problem to act on her feeling

What's going to happen?

Yeah Mayu and her father get back together

What kind of plan Kato is going to use Atsuko on?

Would Atsuko be able to trick Kato?

Can't wait to see what's going to happen with minami's revenge?

Thank you for the update

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
Post by: kahem on October 12, 2013, 06:57:49 PM: Kojiyuu!!!!! I'm summoning them!!!
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
Post by: chichay12 on October 12, 2013, 07:27:09 PM: finally!minami knows what happen..
i hope she will regain her (memories of acchan) soon :oops:
chiqin~~
update soon and thank u for the update :on gay:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
Post by: lezperv on October 12, 2013, 08:18:13 PM: It was sooo funny when Acchan said "Oh God" when she saw Minami, that was really hilarious, I can totally see her expression XD

I'm glad Minami doesn't dislike Atsuko as much anymore and that she even starts feeling more for Atsuko. The kiss was just sooo :shy2: I love it

I hope you can update soon :kneelbow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
Post by: abcari on October 12, 2013, 09:11:04 PM: Kojiyuu!! I choose you!! appear in this fanfic! *pokemon music*
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
Post by: kurogumi on October 15, 2013, 04:20:41 PM: mayu and yuki blessed!!!

just wait their marriage LOL

wmatsui want more wmatsui

thank by the way

takamina look so cool...short hair LOL
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
Post by: Terragen on October 29, 2013, 12:51:33 PM: i missed you chiqinna-an
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
Post by: edogawa4869 on October 29, 2013, 02:00:34 PM: hahaha...

acchan just do what takamina did to her before..

sweeeet... :wub:

continue please.. :bow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
Post by: chiqinna on October 29, 2013, 02:16:11 PM: Terragen-san, I know, I miss Chiqinna too... :(
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
Post by: ykariya on November 04, 2013, 04:53:26 PM: continues

what does the Kato plan to do, I'm curious.

Atsumina forever :heart:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
Post by: Kirozoro on November 04, 2013, 05:38:40 PM: Im so curios what Kenzo plaining

Hope it not bad

Mayuki and Takacchan forever :inlove:

Please update the next ch i can't wait

It my third time reading this fanfic
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
Post by: gek geki on November 09, 2013, 09:36:08 AM: My sunshine where are you buddy?
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
Post by: chiqinna on November 19, 2013, 10:48:18 AM: I'm back! XD
Sorry for the late~
Sunshine is here~~~ :lol:

Chapter 29 Part 1

Inside the no3b’s secret building
They held the second meeting to discuss about a plan to destroyed Kato. This time, several members of Rapappa join together in the meeting. They are Yuki, Rena, and Sasshi.

It’s been almost 15 minutes of talking when the door opened revealing a new recruited member of Rapappa.

“Sorry! I’m late!” Sae said panting as she leaning on the door.

All eyes turn to look at the new arriving figure.

Some have a questioning look on their face.

“Take your seat.” Mariko told her as Sae nodded then took a seat beside Acchan.

“This is my new member, Sae.” Mariko introducing her to them. The other members of Rapappa already knows her.

“Hi, Sae desu. Yoroshiku!” Sae greeted to them smiling.

“I still haven’t forgotten what you do…” Miichan who sitting beside Sasshi said narrowing her eyes at Sae.

“What did she do?” Acchan asked looking at the tomboy girl beside her. Acchan is the only
person who doesn’t know who Sae is.

Mariko was about to stop Miichan from saying anything but she’s a second late.

“She’s the one inside the smurf mascot that stopping you from chasing after Takamina.”
Miichan said smirking at Sae.

Sae suddenly felt a sudden killing aura coming from her side so she slowly moves
her chair a bit far from the person without looking at her.

“Okay, forget about the past. Since everyone is here, let’s think about our plan.”
Takamina said in serious tone as she stands at the front.

“Y-yeah…let’s forget the past things…hehe” Sae scratching the back of her head.

Sensing the glare from the girl beside her, Sae decided to change sit as she now sitting
beside Yuki as Rena at the other side.

After finished meeting, everyone left except Sae and Mariko as Mariko wants to have a talk with Sae for a while.

“So…how’s your friend?” Mariko asked her.

“Sayaka is getting better now. Thanks for your help Mariko-sama~ thank you so much for helping me…even though I’ve been burdening your group.” Sae sincerely said bowing to her leader.

“I already paid all your debts including for your friend’s medicine. As a payback, you must work with me.”

“I know. I will not betray you. I promised.” Sae said.

“Don’t mess with those loan sharks again after this.” Mariko last words before she walk out of the room.

Sae feels relieved that all her problem has been solved thanks to Mariko.
Sayaka is her friend that was sick. She got beaten by loan sharks for not paying their money.
That’s why Sae working hard to find money to pay them back and for Sayaka’s treatment.
She’s badly hurt.
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“Remember Minami, if ever we encounter with each other when I was with Kato’s members, fight me for real.”
Acchan tells her as she walks Minami home.

“It’s me who should say that to you…”Minami chuckled looking at her remembering that she would
avoid her punch when they fight last time.

“Hmm…but this time I will fight you seriously. Since I know you’re quite strong now~” Smirked Acchan.

“Let’s see…”

As they arrived at Minami’s place, Acchan bid a goodbye to her.

Minami turn around and was about to walk when she felt a tap on her shoulder.

She turned around only to meet a pair of lips on her again.

Unlike last time, this time it last for a few seconds.

Minami was too stunned to even react or maybe she likes it and her hearts beating faster.

Acchan slowly pull away from hers but their face still close to each other.

“Good night~” whispered Acchan looking deeply in her eyes with a blushing face.

Then she turned around and walks away.

Minami still looking at Acchan as she also can see the happy shy smile from the taller girl as she walks.

‘You sure know how to make my heart beating faster…’ said Minami in her mind smiling.

“Oho~ someone is in love~~” A voice said coming from behind.

Minami who was startled by the voice turned around and saw Miichan at the front door with a big grin on her face.

“Wait, h-how long have you been there?” Minami asked shocked.

“Exactly when you two…uhmm…making out~” Teased Miichan.

“We’re not making out!!” she shouted ignoring Miichan as she enters the house.

Her face started to glow bright red.

“Ohohohoho~~~ Takamina is in love!!!” shouted Miichan as she closed the front door.

“Shut up Miichan!” Takamina was totally red.

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The next day

After school~

Mayu was walking towards Yuki when Jurina suddenly hug her from behind.”Mayuyu!!!”

Mayu can see a jealousy from Yuki’s eyes. Yuki turns her eyes away from them.

“What?!”

“Hmmm…I-I think I need your help…” Jurina looks shy.

“You think?” Mayu asked with a blank face.

“Y-yea…since…you and Yuki now…” Jurina tries to hint something to her as she looks at Mayu then at Yuki.

‘Me and Yuki?’ thought Mayu as she also looking at Yuki who was waiting her at the school gate.

“Love?” Smirked Mayu at Jurina.

“Ermm…y-yeah…but I have problem…” Jurina pouted.

‘I wonder who it...that Jurina loves is.’

Mayu was waiting for Jurina to continue.

“It’s Rena…” mumbled Jurina.

Mayu turn her head to Jurina with a shocked expression.

“You’re crazy!!!” Mayu fasten her walk leaving Jurina behind.

“H-hey! Mayu! You must help me!” Jurina shouted frustrated.

“Come on Yuki” Mayu walk without looking back at Jurina as Yuki followed her.

“What’s wrong with Jurina?” Asked Yuki as she is now walking side by side with Mayu.

“She falls in love with her own sister~” Mayu frankly answered.

Yuki stopped walking. “Rena?”

“And Yuki, next weekend I will be going to my mom’s grave with my father.”
Mayu tells her not really minding about Jurina’s problem.

“Do you want to come with us?”

“No, I don’t want to disturb your family’s moments. Besides I have works to do.” Yuki smiled.

“Fine~” Mayu coldly say as she walks ahead.

Mayu felt pair of arms around her shoulders from behind.

“It’s just for two days. After that you’ll see me every day...” Whispered Yuki to Mayu’s ear making Mayu blushed.

Miichan’s bakery~

Takamina helped Miichan at her bakery since she has nothing to do during the day.

“Takamina, why don’t you ask Acchan out?” Miichan suddenly asked.

They were having a break.

Takamina almost spit out her hot chocolate when she hears that.

“Why would I?!!” Takamina raise her voice glaring at Miichan.

“Because you’re the ‘man’ now~” Grinned Miichan.

“Ughhh! Miichan, stop this will you?!”

“Fine~~ but at least you could ask her for a lunch or something~” Miichan still grinning at her.

“She’s not here…She said she’s out of town for three days.” A frown can be seen from Takamina’s face.

“Aaahhh~ no wonder you looks somewhat sad today…” Miichan says teasing her.

Takamina was about to deny her statement when her phone vibrates.

A new message, from Acchan.

Reading the short message, Takamina already smiling from ear to ear.

‘I miss you already~’ that short message from Acchan really making her day.

Still smiling looking at the text message from the taller girl, Takamina did not realize
that someone in the room also peeking at what she read that making her suddenly smiles.

Finally realizing someone’s head near her shoulder, Takamina quickly close her phone and put it in her pocket.

“Ohohohoho~~~ someone is missing you~~~” Miichan poke her shoulder.

“Shut up!”

Author-san, where is Wmatsui moments? :?

[Hmmm? Wmatsui? :doh: Y-yeah…I rarely put their moments in here isn’t? :sweatdrop: *sigh* I’m sorry…but I’m trying my best. *bow*]

You said this fic is going to end soon…when is the ‘soon’?

[Uh…soon enough? I don’t know~ :lol:]

Can you please continue the next part?
[…]

A few days has passed.

Jurina decided to confess her feelings to Rena.
Mayu is the one who told her to do it. Since Yuki told her about Rena and Jurina is not real sibling.

Flashback

Yuki were walking home with Rena that night after finish their work.

“Rena…” Yuki called her.

“Hmm?” Rena tilted her head looking at Yuki.

“What do you think about Jurina?” Asked Yuki.

“She’s a good girl.” Smiled Rena remembering her sister.

“I mean…are you thinking of her as a sister? I know…you two are not real sibling.” Yuki says.

Rena was thinking for a while.

“I don’t know…I just…love her…” Rena replies with a confused looks.

“Jurina fall in love with you Rena…” Yuki says straightforward.

Rena stopped walking.

‘W-why is my heart suddenly beating so fast now?’ thought Rena when she hears what Yuki said.

Yuki looking at Rena who stopped walking.

“Maybe it’s time for you to tell her the truth…” Rena looks at Yuki.

“It’s not easy Yuki…” Rena started to walk again.

“What if she confessed to you one day?” Yuki asked her.

Rena slowly walks while thinking about it.

She doesn’t know what to answer so she just ignores Yuki.

Yuki sigh silently.

The next day, Yuki told everything to Mayu that Jurina is not Rena’s real sister.

End of flashback

“R-Rena-Chan~ “Jurina called her sister.

They were walking around the small lake.

“Yes?” Rena looked at her.

Jurina stopped walking as she holding Rena’s hand shyly.

“I-I…” ‘Come on Jurina, you can do it!’ Jurina said in her mind.

“What is it Jurina?” Rena chuckled at her.

Jurina closed her eyes for a while.

She took a deep breath then opened her eyes looking directly at Rena’s eyes.

“Rena-Chan, I…I love you.” Jurina finally let out what she feels towards the other girl.

Rena was shocked for a second but she then smile.

“I love you too Jurina.” Rena laughed lightly at her while patting her head.

“N-no…I mean…I think...I have falling for you…not as a sister.” Jurina said looking down afraid that Rena will reject her.

Rena remembered what Yuki told her that night.

“Jurina…” mumbled Rena looking at Jurina.

“I…I’m sorry…Jurina…I-“

“I-it’s okay Rena-Chan...I understand…what am I saying?! Y-you’re my sister!” Jurina laughed awkwardly.
She doesn’t want Rena to feel bad and so does Rena.

‘I think I hurt her…’

“Ah, R-Rena-Chan…I have to go now…I-I will see you tomorrow!” Jurina quickly said then ran away.

“Jurina!” Rena called her but Jurina did not turn to look at her.

As Jurina was running, tears falling down.

After that day, Jurina rarely talk to Rena, she always made herself busy with extra classes.

Rena felt guilty. She tried to talk to Jurina but Jurina always avoiding her.

Rena also has been missing Jurina. It seems that Jurina has changed after the awkward confession.

“Thinking about Jurina?” Yuki says seeing Rena’s troubled looks.

“Un…she’s been avoiding me…” frowned Rena.

“There’s only one way to find out your true feelings…*Rena look at Yuki confused* Kiss her~” Yuki said.

“Ehh??”

Yuki chuckled at her reaction.

“Well that’s my advice~” Smiled Yuki then leaving Rena alone with her thought.

*Night

“You guys again?!!” Takamina accidentally meet Kato’s underlings as she
was walking through the dark alley to ‘hunt’ mafia.

They all start to surround her preventing her from escaping.

“Why don’t you guys stopped doing this stupid useless thing and just lives a normal life?” Whined Takamina.

“Maybe WE should say that to you~” One of them said smirking at her.

Because she’s alone…and they are now more than 10 people so they think they have advantage to beat her easily.

‘*sigh* I hate them!’ thought Takamina glaring at each of them while preparing her fighting gesture.

“Bring it on!” They all were trying to attack her at the same time.

Quickly, Takamina dodges every of their attack as her body is small so it’s easy
for her to escape from their punch and kick.

‘Ughhh! I’m too tired right now!’ Takamina groaned as one of the guy giving a sudden punch on her face.

She stepped back.

“Oi~ I heard that you’re really strong that almost all of mafia quit because of you huh~”
They smirked at her.

“Am I?” Takamina smirked back at them making them mad and attack her again.

She fights back with all her strength since they are quite active now.

Someone was trying to attack her from behind. Takamina did not see it coming
as she just focused on her front only.

Suddenly she heard a pain groan from the guy behind her.

Finishing the guy that she’s beating currently, she looks behind.

That guy was holding his nose as it starts to bleed. A woman standing there near them.

“Huh? Who are you?!” Takamina asked since the woman probably the one who did it to him.

She turned around revealing herself to Takamina.

“W-wait…Yu...Yuko?!”

“Behind you!!” Yuko shouted to Takamina.

Takamina turn her head around but she received a punch on her face making her fall.

Before the guy continues to hit her, another woman appeared and kicks his butt
from behind making his face landed on the ground.

With her hand on her bruise face, Takamina looks at the other person then her eyes widen.

“Takamina, are you okay?” She quickly rushed towards Takamina as Yuko finished all
the guys and making them running away.

“Y-you…”

T.B.C~
XD
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 19/11/13
Post by: olive29 on November 19, 2013, 11:25:59 AM: Rena...please tell Juju the truth...

Poor Juju... :cry:

Kojiyuu finally appear !!!

Yeahhh !!!

Next update, please... :bow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 19/11/13
Post by: chichay12 on November 19, 2013, 11:42:35 AM: chiqin your back :on woohoo:
atsumina kissu :wriggly: love it
poor juju :frustrated: rena why o why?? XD
thank for the update :wub:,, and chiqin.. update soon :on gay:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 19/11/13
Post by: ezha on November 19, 2013, 12:30:31 PM: wohoo chiqinna welcome back and thanks for update ~~ I love you
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 19/11/13
Post by: cisda83 on November 19, 2013, 12:48:13 PM: Yeah... Kojiyuu is here now...

Takamina is very weak nowadays

Wmatsui is coming together soon...

How are they going to be together?

How are they going to fight Kato now?

Can't wait to see the showdown between them?

Thank you for the update

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 19/11/13
Post by: blakwhite on November 19, 2013, 12:52:18 PM: FINNALLY YOU UPDATE IT CHIQINAAAAA :onioncheer: :wigglypanda:

LOL, i know what sae feel's when she near mad acchan :badluck:

and atsumina momment :luvluv2:

i want more than kiss atsumina scene :wriggly:

i feel bad for jurina, i hope jurina stop avoiding rena and rena will confess to her :3

and kojiyuu is backkkkk :onionwhip:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 19/11/13
Post by: Kirozoro on November 19, 2013, 02:01:40 PM: Yes! Update

Takamina finally fell in love with Acchan for real this time

Jurina confess to Rena...but she got rejected

Will Rena except Jurina??

Thank you for update, please update soon :bow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 19/11/13
Post by: ayudewi6 on November 19, 2013, 02:37:35 PM: oh god! I honestly want more there are moments atsumina.
oh yeah, what about yuko and haruna? why yuko could suddenly be in place and help takamina? then what if takamina reunited with haruna? how acchan fate? aahh! too many "ifs" that came to my mind today after reading this chapter hehehe ~ thank heavens after such a long wait you finally continued. thank you! spirit! :peace: :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 19/11/13
Post by: noah minami on November 19, 2013, 04:45:02 PM: If wonder takamina point you its haruna right?
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 19/11/13
Post by: edogawa4869 on November 19, 2013, 05:26:12 PM: your baaaaaccckkkk..... :onioncheer:

and u give me AtsuMina moment...

THEY'RE KISSING... :mon XD:

and i think Takamina has to get use to it...
'coz maybe Acchan will do that everytime she walk Takamina home... hehe... :mon misch:

rena....
why don't u just accept Jurina...
arrggh... :frustrated:

great chapter author-san.. :twothumbs

keep going... :thumbup
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 19/11/13
Post by: BbSis on November 20, 2013, 05:36:19 PM: Musume Chiqn you update~~ :heart:

despite being my first comment here, I really love this fic hehe

kojiyuu first appearance *.*

Takamina should really accept her feelings =p

Rena should tell the truth to Jurina already ><

Mayuki :heart: :heart:

Did I see a glimpse of saeyaka there? :roll:

Can you please do a marimii moment before the fic ends? ><//

Thank you~~~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 19/11/13
Post by: ezha on November 21, 2013, 09:33:56 AM: chiqinna My Sunshine :on slopkiss:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 19/11/13
Post by: chiqinna on November 21, 2013, 02:01:07 PM: REPLIES:

olive29: yeahh!! Kojiyuu!!! :ptam-wub:
Chichay12: I'm back!! :on woohoo: I will try to update~ soon~ :P
ezha: you're welcome~ :D you love me~
cisda83: so long cisda-san! :lol: yeah...I was still thinking how to make wmatsui together... :P its hard for me to make wmatsui scene... i will try my best!
blackwhite: Blacko!!! see??? you want more than kiss atsumina scene!!!! :mon geek:
kirozoro: well, jurina still didn't know that Rena is NOT her real sister~ so...let's see what happen next :lol:
ayudewi6: hi ayu~ :) you're right it's suppose to be Haruna in Yuko's place... :lol: but I changed it~ thanks for reading this fic~ :kneelbow:
noah minami: is it haruna?? :dunno: :dunno: :dunno:
edogawa4869: yeah.. I tried my best to give atsumina moments~ :D hope u like it!
Bbsis: Mama~ :heart: glad that u love this fic~ :shy1: u saw Saeyaka there? :roll: Marimii? I will try to make one~ for Mama~ :heart:
ezha: ezha-san... wait... YOU AGAIN??!!! :mon huh: I know~ I'm your sunshine~ cuz you're my sunsh- wait...I can't use that on you~ :P pppfftt~ if you know what i mean~ :mon misch: and..update yours! once you got idea~ :twothumbs

EVERYONE, THANKS FOR READING AND COMMENTING THIS FIC! :bow: EVEN THOUGH IT TOOK ME LONG TIME TO UPDATE~ :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 REPLIES 19/11/13
Post by: ayudewi6 on November 21, 2013, 02:35:12 PM: I'm so curious about the rest of it, I hope you can update it immediately :D well add a little drama in it also does nothing * oops * hehehe .. :peace: I will always wait for the continuation of this fanfic. spirit continues to ya! :onioncheer:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 REPLIES 19/11/13
Post by: BbSis on November 21, 2013, 03:42:04 PM: I swear for my love for Sayaka I saw a Saeyaka there =p

Yeey you are going to make a bit of MariMii part for me ~ :heart: I love you more now :heart: :heart:

You actually made my day and gave me a boost to finish my homework ><//
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 REPLIES 19/11/13
Post by: gek geki on December 02, 2013, 03:51:26 PM: I NEED SOME SUN

IT'S TOO COLD IN MY PLACE
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 REPLIES 19/11/13
Post by: ezha on December 02, 2013, 06:08:31 PM: Loving you as always ~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 REPLIES 19/11/13
Post by: cisda83 on December 02, 2013, 09:13:21 PM: Its fine...

I don't mind waiting...

Looking forward to see the next update...

Thank you....

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 REPLIES 19/11/13
Post by: chiqinna on December 11, 2013, 12:51:29 PM: Chapter 29 Part 2

~ No3b’s meeting room ~

Takamina opened the door with a loud slam. She walks in as the two figures followed her from behind.
Takamina crossed her arms still her back facing them.

Yuko hold her girlfriend’s hand to reassure her that everything will be okay.

“Yuko…can you leave us alone?” Yuko looked at Takamina’s back.

Yuko then slowly walks out of the room before giving a warm smile at her lover.

Takamina finally turn around to look at Haruna. Haruna was looking down.

“Look at me, Haruna.” Takamina says serious.

Haruna force herself to look at the shorter figure in front of her.

“I’m sorry…” was the only words that come out of her mouth.

“Sorry? After you leave us without any notes, not telling us where you go…only sorry?”

Haruna stays silent.

“Did you meet Miichan already?” Asked her.

Haruna nodded. “She already explained to me about you when I go to her house.”

“Tell me…why you leave us?” Takamina ask her with a sad tone. She doesn’t want to get mad at her because she must have reason for it. She’s been thinking she needs to control her madness.

“I…I’m sorry Takamina…” Haruna answered. Takamina sighed.

“Is it because you feel guilty?” Haruna look at her with wide eyes.

“So it was true…Miichan said you feel guilty…that’s why you leaving us…leaving me…” Takamina say looking at her.

“If only I did not let you fight that Kato alone that time…” Tears started to stroll down her cheeks.

Takamina could not stand seeing her friend crying walks towards her and hugged her.

“It’s fine…” Takamina pats Haruna’s back as she comforting her.

“I miss you guys …so much.” Sobbed Haruna leaning her head on Takamina’s shoulder.

“I miss you too~” Takamina smiled as she also started to cry.

“Let’s forget about the past...” Haruna nodded to the midget.

After that, they part the hug. Both laughing looking at each other’s face full with tears.

“Takamina, I heard that you have someone right now?” Smiled Haruna.

“Eh?” Takamina look at her confused.

“Miichan also told me about her~ what is her name again? A…Acchan?” Grinned Haruna.

“That Miichan…”Growled Takamina as her face started to glow red.

“Kawaii~~” Haruna pinched both Takamina’s cheeks seeing her blushing face.
“Stop it!!” Takamina trying to pouted.

Suddenly the door opened revealing Yuko with a questioning look at the two.

Haruna and Takamina look at her.

“Is everything okay?” Asked Yuko smiling.

Haruna’s hand was still on Takamina’s cheeks.

“Un…it just…Takamina is so cute~~” Takamina push Haruna’s hand off her cheeks as she rub her red cheeks pouting.

“It’s late already, we should go.” Yuko said to Haruna. Haruna nodded.

“Takamina, we have to go now. We’ll see you again tomorrow~” smiled Haruna.

“Aren’t you going to live with us?” Asked Takamina.

“No~ “Haruna and Yuko then leave Takamina alone.

Takamina smiled and relieves seeing her best friend come back to them.

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Jurina has been avoiding from meeting her sister, Rena this few days.

She felt so stupid for confessing to her own sister.

Rena decided to talk to Jurina this morning before she goes to school.

She comes with Yuki since Yuki is going to take Mayu to school.

At Miichan’s house~

Mayu already outside the house waiting for Yuki.

As they were walking towards the house, Rena looks around to see Jurina but she’s nowhere to be found.

“If you are searching for Jurina, she already went to school this early morning.” Mayu said when she looks at Rena.

Rena looks at Mayu.

“She must be avoiding you.” Yuki said looking at Rena.

“Let’s go~” Mayu started walking.

“Maybe you can wait for her after school.” Suggest Yuki then she walks towards Mayu.

Rena sighed sad. “Yuki’s right…Maybe I should wait for her after school.”

As they were walking, Yuki keeps glancing at shorter girl who keeps her eyes at the front with a blank face.

“What?” Mayu ask but keeps walking. She knows Yuki must have something to say to her.

“You know…I think we should help them…” Yuki told her while wrapping her arm around Mayu’s shoulders.

Mayu put her right arm on Yuki’s waist to bring her closer.

“Should we?” Mayu asked bluntly.

“We should~” Answered Yuki.

“What should we do then?”

Yuki was thinking for a while.

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It was taking a long time for Yuki to think that they already arrived at Mayu’s school~ XD

In school [During recess]

Mayu have been thinking to talk to Jurina so she goes to Jurina’s usual place to have lunch during lunch time which is at the school terrace.

Arriving there, she saw Jurina leaning at the wall while staring at the sky.

Her eyes somewhat looks sad.

Mayu walks towards Jurina. Jurina felt a presence near her, and she knows it was Mayu, by the way her walk and her shadow.
Mayu sit beside Jurina and ask, “Where’s your lunch?”

“I’m full.” Jurina answered shortly.

*silence for a while*

“Jurina-“
“Don’t talk about it.” Interrupted Jurina before Mayu said anything.

“I’m so stupid…” Jurina looking down.

‘You are…’ Mayu said in her mind.

“Jurina actually...” Jurina looks up at Mayu curious why she did not continue.

‘Ughhh! Why is it so hard to tell her the truth about her and Rena~!’ Mayu is struggling in her mind
whether it is okay to tell Jurina about it even though her face looks calm.

“What?!” Jurina asked.

“Ermm…I think…you should talk to your…sister…it’s not good avoiding her you know.”

Jurina did not answer her instead she let out a heavy sigh.

“She’s your sister…but it doesn’t mean you can’t love her in that way~” Smiled Mayu at Jurina.

Jurina look at Mayu confusedly.

“If you really do love Rena, then you should make an effort to make her fall for you.” Explain Mayu.

“But…she already rejected me!” Said Jurina frustrated.

“Bakaa…of course she would reject you! Suddenly confess to her and moreover she’s your sister. If I were her I will also do the same~” Mayu scolded Jurina.

“*sigh* I’m so stupid~” Jurina repeated her sentences from before.

“Yes you are~”Agreed Mayu.

“But…Rena-Chan must be feels disgusted at me now…”mumbled Jurina sad.

“She’s not…she will be waiting for you after school, don’t make an excuse that you have an extra classes again! I’m not going to help you this time~” Mayu tell her coldly.

“And she is also feels guilty you know…and she miss you~” added Mayu as she stand up and fix her uniform.

“Ugghh! Fine~ I will try~”Jurina finally decided to listen to Mayu’s suggestion to talk to her Rena-Chan.

“And one more thing, Rena has something to tell you, about you and her. Talk to her.” Mayu then walks away as the bell rang.

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~At the school gate~

It was almost time, Yuki were already waiting for her favorite cyborg, and the same goes to Rena. She is waiting for Jurina, and wanted to talk to her.

Yuki leaning calmly at the light pole with a crossed arms while seeing Rena with a slightly nervous and anxious look on her pale face as she keeps biting her nails.

“Tch…seriously Rena, you look like you were waiting to confess to her~ and stop biting your nails…it’s…creeping me out.”

*bell rang*

Students started to walk towards the gate.

Yuki saw Mayu from afar walking towards her while Rena’s eyes keeps searching for Jurina.

It seems like Mayu is dragging someone with her. It’s Jurina.

Yuki’s eyebrows furrowed seeing Mayu holding Jurina’s hand.

When they are near, Rena finally realized Jurina behind Mayu. It looks like she’s still trying to avoid her.

“I will leave her to you~” Mayu said as she let go of Jurina’s hand and push her to Rena and then Mayu goes to Yuki and hold her hand making Yuki feels happy.

Rena looks at Jurina who still looking down.

“We’ll go first~ and Jurina, remember my words~” Mayu and Yuki then leave them.

Jurina feels nervous, she was about to walk away when Rena suddenly grab her
arms tightly preventing her from running away from her again.

“Let’s talk Jurina.” Rena softly said to her.

At the park

Both Wmatsui sits on the bench.

“I miss you…” Rena mumbles looking at Jurina.

Jurina can hear it clearly since it was quiet at the park right now.

“R-Rena-Chan…” Jurina called her sister.

“Hmm?”

“D-Do you hate me now…that I-“

“No, I don’t hate you, Jurina, look at me.” Rena put her right hand on top of Jurina’s hand.

Jurina look at Rena. Rena smiles at her.

“I’m sorry for last time. I was too shocked because…it was so sudden.” Explained Rena.

“It’s okay Rena-Chan…I am the one who should say sorry, I was not supposed to confess in the first place.” Smiled Jurina.

“Jurina, please don’t avoid me again after this?” Pleaded Rena to the younger girl.

Jurina nodded. “Rena-Chan, can I hug you?”

Rena chuckled at her. Rena opened her arms inviting Jurina to hug her.

“I love you Rena-Chan~” Jurina lean her head on Rena’s shoulder as she tighten her hug.

“You’re my cute little sister~” Rena smiled patting her head.

‘Talking about sister, should I tell her now?’ thought Rena.

Then Jurina hear Rena sighed so she part their hug and look at Rena with a concern eyes.
“What’s wrong Rena-Chan?”

“Hm? N-Nothing…I was just…happy.” Rena gives warm smiles.

“Let’s forget about last time ne?” Jurina smiles back at her as Rena nodded.

Rena’s eyes suddenly landed on Jurina’s lips.

Kiss her~

She suddenly remembered Yuki’s advice.

Rena shook her head vigorously as she shut her eyes tight trying to not imagine anything.

“Rena-Chan?” Called Jurina.
“Ah, J-Jurina, I will buy ice cream for us okay!” Rena quickly went to buy ice cream leaving the confused Jurina alone.

~At Night~

Takamina, Sae, Sasshi and their underlings went out to do their usual works. Except from Takamina, she’s watching them, because she’s afraid that Mariko’s underlings might hurt good people.

Unfortunately, that night, they bump into Kato’s group at the alley.

This time, its Kato himself appear along with his underlings.

“Hah! Look who is here! Rapappa~ and…” Kato smirked at Takamina arrogantly.

‘Wait, if Kato is here, that’s mean…’ Takamina looks like she’s searching for a certain someone around Kato’s people but she’s not there.

“And you?” Kato suddenly pointing at Sae who had worked with them before, to kidnap Watanabe’s daughter, and to kidnap Takamina. But now she’s with another group, a.k.a their rival.

“Yeah? Me?” Grinned Sae making Kato feels pissed off.

~

Kato currently facing Takamina, still not taking his smirk off his face.

The others already started their fight with his underlings.

Takamina was about to launches her attack on Kato Kenzo but suddenly a fist landed on her face making her stumble backwards.

Kato also looks surprised by the sudden action.

Takamina looks at the person and was shocked to see the one hit her was…

“Maeda?!!” Kato said seeing her other member suddenly here.

“Let me handle her…alone~” Acchan said still looking at Takamina with a serious face.

‘She hit me!! For real?!!’ Takamina was dumbfounded.

“Oh...Okay then~” Kato grin as he step back to give them spaces.

‘Maybe she hit me because she was trying to convince that stupid Kato?’ Takamina was still thinking that she did not realize her collar was being pulled by Acchan.

“Hey~” Acchan’s voice making her look back at the taller girl.

“Do you miss me~?” Whispered Acchan afraid that other will hear her.

“And I told you right, let’s fight for real~” Before Takamina could say anything, another punch landed on her stomach.

“Ugghh!!” Groaned Takamina holding her stomach.

“So you’re really serious huh…” mumbles Takamina looking at Acchan.

Acchan wink at her.

“That wink...DOESN’T WORK ON ME!!!”
shouted Takamina as she started to attack Acchan with a kick but Acchan can dodge her attack.

Takamina, this time giving a powerful punch on her face making Acchan’s lips bleeding.

They started to exchanges punch and kicks to each other.

Meanwhile, Kato was really enjoying the show but his bodyguard, whisper something to him that he has to leave the place and let his underlings fighting with Rapappa members.

The lovebird starting to get into serious mode. Both don’t want to lose to each other.

It seems like Takamina keeps attacking Acchan non-stop while Acchan trying to dodge and attack at the same time.

“Hey” Acchan realizes that the shorter girl is not going to stop anytime soon.

Both already breathing heavily due to the intense fight.

“Minami!” It seems like Takamina is ignoring her and keep on attacking her.

Acchan have no choice but to lose to stop her.

Once Acchan stop dodging her attack, making her got powerful hit by Takamina.

Acchan falls on the ground and groan because of the pain.

Takamina then realizing that she is over-doing it.

They only said that they have to make their fight look real.

She looks at her surrounding, it was only them in there.

Then she looks at Acchan who tried to get up.

Takamina quickly goes to her and help her. “A-Are you okay? I’m sorry…” Takamina said feeling guilty.

As soon as Acchan stand on her feet, she suddenly stumbled forward and fall onto Takamina but Takamina react fast by holding her.

Acchan wrapped her arms around the shorter girl.

Takamina got startled. “A-Acchan?”

She hears Acchan chuckling near her ears.

“Y-you did that on purpose aren’t you?” She felt Acchan nodded.

Takamina smiles because of the taller girl cute action.

“I-I think they have gone already.” Takamina said.

“Minami?”

“Hmm?”

“Stay with me tonight?” Acchan buried her face onto her neck.

Takamina was too shocked to answer the question.

“I miss you so much~”

Takamina suddenly pushed Acchan until her back meets the wall.

Acchan slightly surprised and looking at Takamina.

Her last words making Takamina finally realizes what she truly felt for the other girl.

“It’s love…” Takamina said softly looking straight into her eyes.

Acchan also keep her eyes on her favorite midget’s eyes.

“What I feel for you…Its love.”Even though it does not sound like a confession,
Acchan knows the shorter girl trying her best to tell what she felt towards her.

Without their realizing it, their face is getting closer and closer, until their lips meet each other.

‘I love you…’

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Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 2 11/12/13
Post by: cisda83 on December 11, 2013, 01:14:13 PM: Yeah... an update at last...

Ah... Haruna and Minami... made up...

The final showdown is coming on soon?

What's going to happen to Wmatsui?

Would they get together?

Would they be able to eliminate Kato clan soon?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you for the update

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 2 11/12/13
Post by: chichay12 on December 11, 2013, 01:33:17 PM: Quote from: chiqinna on December 11, 2013, 12:51:29 PM
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chiqin..i know why..but when i saw ^that...~~it really pissed me off~~(maybe because its TBC again) kidding aside.. i really enjoy ur new update and i cant wait to know what will happen next specially this XD
Quote from: chiqinna on December 11, 2013, 12:51:29 PM
“Stay with me tonight?” Acchan buried her face onto her neck.
kyAAAAAA my atsumina feels :wriggly: :nya: :on bleed:

oh god i hope i can bare to wait again to read ur new update :panic:
update soon :on gay:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 2 11/12/13
Post by: Kirozoro on December 11, 2013, 02:13:33 PM: Thank you for the update!!! :D

Kojiyuu couple has coming back to the group

Acchan and Takamina is so cute
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 2 11/12/13
Post by: blakwhite on December 11, 2013, 04:26:33 PM: chiqa finally u update iiitttt :on gay: :on gay:

i want moar atsumina mommeeeennntt :on bleed: :on bleed: if u know what i mean :on GJ:

LOL
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 2 11/12/13
Post by: ezha on December 11, 2013, 04:54:24 PM: Quote from: blakwhite on December 11, 2013, 04:26:33 PM
chiqa finally u update iiitttt :on gay: :on gay:

i want moar atsumina mommeeeennntt :on bleed: :on bleed: if u know what i mean :on GJ:

LOL

pufftt bleki perv ~
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 2 11/12/13
Post by: Shinoki on December 12, 2013, 12:10:47 AM: You should've seen my face when I read this~~
Update...hooray~~
Yesh! WMatsui... *huhuhuhu creepy laugh...
Atsumina... *thumbs up
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 2 11/12/13
Post by: gek geki on January 13, 2014, 05:09:38 AM: I NEED MORE SUN TEHE
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 2 11/12/13
Post by: cisda83 on January 13, 2014, 11:43:38 PM: chiqinna-san

Update please....

Can't wait to see what happen next

Thank you

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 2 11/12/13
Post by: KaoriChan on January 15, 2014, 12:13:33 PM: More Atsumina Moment.. :mon innocent:

Please Update i miss your update :mon cute:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 2 11/12/13
Post by: takeshi77 on February 26, 2014, 05:14:03 PM: wht will happen next???
how they will resolve this prob?
and did atsuko secret being pretended at enemy group being exposed ??
look forward for ur update :)
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 2 11/12/13
Post by: takashu on March 11, 2014, 11:05:53 AM: need more atsumina moment....
Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

update soon please....
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 2 11/12/13
Post by: vivinardisa on March 17, 2014, 05:22:16 AM: Omg AtsuMina is so cute :cathappy:

I'm really looking for the next update !!!! 8)

Please update soon :bow: can't wait :cow: :cow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 2 11/12/13
Post by: ubulubulbilu on May 04, 2014, 04:51:11 PM: Thx for this fic author san, it's a great story, u really need to update this soon. :cow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 2 11/12/13
Post by: chotei_sha on June 03, 2014, 05:31:45 PM: Waaahhhh please update soon!!! :panic:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 2 11/12/13
Post by: Kakeru15 on June 08, 2014, 07:57:50 PM: Author-san, can you continue please? :cry:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 2 11/12/13
Post by: chiqinna on November 04, 2014, 03:31:33 PM: Hey~ finally~~ Haha…hum... long time no see nee~ XD sorry for the long wait… (If there’s still anyone reading this fic)
Though I always have been in this forum being a silent reader and all…uhh...so...
Okay let’s just see what happen... xDD and excuse the lack of ‘something’ because, it’s been long time I’ve been writing something o_o

Chapter 30

It’s been several days; it feels like they have reunited again, as Haruna and Yuko are back.

Jurina was getting ready to school when Rena comes to the house. Mayu and Yuki already walk to school.
“Jurina, are you free after school today?” Asked Rena as she watching Jurina putting her shoes on.
“Today? I don’t have extra classes today, so…yeah I’m free. Why Rena-chan?” It seems Jurina has stopped avoiding her sister. It’s not like she can avoid her forever anyway. She needs to move on…or that was what she planned in her mind.
“Let’s have lunch together, after school, I will pick you up.” Smiled Rena.
“Okay~!” Jurina excitedly nodded. Somehow seeing Rena’s expression, there must be something that she wants to talk about.

‘Is she going to confess to me?!’ thought Jurina as she looking at her sister walking beside her.
‘I don’t think so…Why would she confessed to me? Sigh…’ Jurina sighed out loud making Rena turning her head towards her.

“Are you okay?” Rena wrapped her arms around Jurina’s shoulders making Jurina slightly shocked at the action.
“I-I’m okay…hehe” The sudden action making Jurina’s cheeks feels warmer.

‘How am I going to move on like this Rena-chan..’

‘I have decided to tell everything to you today, Jurina.’ Rena said in her mind.

Rena and Yuki already waiting for their partner outside the school gate.

“So, you’re going to tell her today?” Yuki asked her fellow member, Rena.
Rena nodded. “I will tell her everything.” She looks at Yuki with determined eyes.

Soon after, the bell rang.

It seems Jurina is too excited as they watch her skipping towards them with her cat-smiles.
While, the other…umm… [Titled head] Mayu with her blank face is walking towards the gate with,
Lovetan’s arms clinging on her body. Kanon is looking at them weirdly.

Yuki curiously looking at the duo. [She is glaring at them]

“Rena-chan~ let’s go!” Jurina clinging on her sister as they walks away leaving the others.
“Hey Yuki-chan~” Greeted Lovetan as she finally stop clinging on Mayu.
Yuki only smiled lightly at her. “Kanon, Let’s go home~” This time, Lovetan clings on Kanon as
they walk home knowing Mayuki couple would have other plan after school.

After having lunch, Rena brings Jurina to the park. Right now they are sitting at the bench.
“Is there something you want to tell me Rena-chan? You…look like you have something serious to tell me.”
Jurina finally voiced out as they have been silent for a while.

“Y-yeah, I actually, want to tell you something, I mean…everything.” Somehow, the way Rena said it making
the younger girl nervous.
“Jurina, promised me, after hearing this, you won’t changed the way you treat me.”
‘Why are you talking like this Rena-chan?’ thought Jurina then she nodded. “I promised.”

Rena took a deep breath silently before looking at Jurina’s eyes directly.
She holds both her hands tightly.

“Our parent, mom and dad, are not dies because of accident. T-they…were killed.” Rena’s eyes started to gets teary as she remembers back of the scenes happened years ago.
Jurina is still processing what Rena said in her brain.

“W-what?”

“W-who kill…them?” Asked Jurina few minutes later as she still devastated at the statement.
Rena took a deep breath silently.

“The…black-coat men…t-they killed them...I...I saw them…*sob* I saw them with my own eyes…” Jurina pulled Rena towards her and hugs her tightly as Rena cried on her shoulder.

“It must be hard for Rena-chan…” Jurina rubbed her sister’s back as she also can’t help to hold back tears hearing the horrible truth even though she don’t have much memories with their parents but Miichan and Takamina has taught her many things about family .

After a while, Rena parted the hug since she has one more thing to say, the most important one.
Jurina wiped the tears left on her cheeks. Rena laughed lightly as she saw Jurina’s wet eyes. “I’m sorry for not telling you the truth last time.” Jurina shook her head telling that it’s fine. She understands now why Rena keeping it from her.
“Rena-Chan…I understand, you must have your reason why you’re keeping this from me.” Smiled Jurina. Being understanding is what Jurina needs to be right now.
“And…the most important thing you need to know…” Rena once again took a deep breath before saying,

“Actually, I’m not your real sister…I’m not mom and dad’s real daughter.” Rena softly saying staring directly into her eyes.

Jurina arrived home alone, with a smile plastered on her face. Rena leaves her when they’re near Miichan’s house since she needs to practice with the others.

Once inside the house, she greeted Lovetan, Kanon and Mayu who was at the living room watching TV show. “Hey~! I’m home~” Jurina said in tune. The trio greeted her back realizing the puppy girl’s mood seems good than usual.

“You look happy” Mayu said knowing that she must be having a good talk with Rena since she is in a good mood.
“Well~ I am happy~” Jurina can’t seem to wiped the smile off her face. Probably for the rest of the day.

“Spill it~” Lovetan said as she munch a popcorn that she took from Kevin’s store on her way home.

[Oh well~ :roll: ]

“Ermm...” Jurina tap her chin looking at the ceiling. “I will tell you guys soon~ but not now” Jurina stick out her tongue and dashed into her room.

“Really, everyone seems to be in a good mood today, am I right Non-chan?” Lovetan turning her head to Kanon as the young girl nodded. Then she turned to Mayu who seems busy with her phone since she got home.

Takamina was on her way to the old building when a pair of arms catching her from behind.
It’s Acchan of course.

“Gotcha!” Takamina only smiled shyly at the other girl.
“Hey” She greeted her girlfriend. They are lover now right? She blushed a little thinking about it.

Acchan stared at the shy girl. “Why are you looking shy? Last night you were so bold~” Teased Acchan making the short girl blushing deeper.

“Stop it~ don’t tease me” Takamina pouted as she avoiding Acchan’s gaze.
Acchan wrapped her arm around Takamina’s shoulder.”Minami” she turned to look at Acchan’s eyes.
“Let’s take things slow between us. I know you don’t like to rush things.” Smiled Acchan.
Takamina gave a simple nod smiling back at her. She is glad actually that Acchan said it first because it would take long time if it’s her the one to tell.

“Let’s go” They both then headed to the place.

Meanwhile, Kato’s group is having a gathering at the mansion.
Kenzo was looking at his father who was still thinking of something.
The other member in the room also present as the room was silent waiting for their big leader to speak.
Then one of the underlings came in the room and went to Kenzo. He whispered something to him as Kenzo’s eyebrows furrowed.

His father turned to him.

“As expected, that Maeda…Tch” Kenzo smirked a little. They have known that the new Rapappa ace are the stubborn type and do things on her own will. That’s what he heard from their underlings. And his underling just informed him that they found Maeda was with the midget girl. She even hardly joins their group meeting.

“First,” Kenji’s voice makes everyone’s attention turned to him. “..Let’s start from the bottom.”

“What do you mean?” Kenzo asked. Kenji looked at his son.

“That betrayer, that genking, let’s start with her first.” Kenji gave an evil smile at his son. Kenzo smiled back at his father then turn to the others. “We need to give them a warning.”

“Alright, let’s finish her first” He said sharing an evil smile with his father.

That evening, they are planning and training together at no3b’s old building.

“Okay, how about we started to train ourselves~ it’s been long I haven’t do this kind of thing.” Miichan said as she stretched her arms playfully.

Mariko raised her eyebrow as soon as Miichan said that. Miichan realized the taller girl’s looking at her stick out her tongue at her.

“Well why don’t we start now~” Takamina interrupted before the two started to argue.
After that, they all started to practice to fight Kato’s group with their respective partner.
Takamina with Acchan, Haruna with Yuko…and…

“GACHAPIN! STOP BOTHERING ME!!”

“I just want to practice with you~~” Miichan making a pouted face while disturbing Mariko whose trying to practice alone with her punching bag.

“Ugh!! Just...go practice with Sae or Sasshi there.” Mariko kicks her butt.

“Pleeeeeaase~~ just once~~” Miichan pleaded her.

Mariko sighed in defeat knowing the ghachapin-like girl would not stop until she gets what she wanted.
“Fine, just once. But don’t regret it afterward~” smirked Mariko.

“OUCH!!” MARI- OUCH!! THAT’S HURT YOU-OUCHH!!!”

“You are the one who asked for it!” Mariko laughed evilly as she enjoyed torturing the poor Miichan. Mariko gave Miichan a powerful kick on her butt.

“Hey! I said come to me slowly!” Whined Miichan who regretted for what she’s asking for.
Mariko finally let go of her and distance herself from the other girl.

“Fine then~ I will come slowly.” Mariko then getting serious.

True to her word, Mariko comes really slowly towards Miichan.
Really slow. Like...Freakin…really slow!!

Miichan was in her position already waiting for Mariko’s fist to arrive.
Miichan grabbed the tall girl’s arm before her fist landed on her left cheek.

“I grab your right arm, and twisted it...” Miichan did as what she said slowly while Mariko only rolled her
eyes playing along as her back is now facing Miichan because her arm was twist to her back. “…then,
I-*then you will kick at the back of my knee and make me kneel down?*” Interrupted the Rapappa leader
still with her calm expression.

Miichan gasped. “How did you know I was going to do that?!” She turned her head to the taller girl a little
so she can take a look at her.

Mariko only rolled her eyes and sighed. “It’s an obvious thing that you’d do.”

“Oh...seems like I need to changes my tactic then.” Miichan continues. “After twisted your arm to your back,
I use my other arm and wrapped it around your neck~” Miichan did as what she said. Mariko started to feel
uncomfortable since Miichan wrapper her arm quite tight.

“Could you please loosen up a bit?” Mariko said gritting her teeth in annoyance.
“Oh, okay~” Instead, she tighten it more while a grin started to appear from her face.

Mariko gets really annoyed at Miichan. This is one of the reasons why she doesn’t want to practice together
with this Gachapin girl. But hey, Mariko is not a mafia plus a top group leader for nothing.

Thus, in a swift move, Mariko grabbed at the back of Miichan’s neck with her free hand then quickly bends her body and flips the Gachapin over her making Miichan groaned as her body makes contact with the hard floor.

Mariko bend down as Miichan was looking at her upside down. “You really annoyed me Gachapin.
Do you really have to do that?” Mariko glared at Miichan.

Miichan gulped.

“Sorry~~~ I was just joking okay~” She raised both hand still lying down on the floor pleading the tall girl
to spare her life with a gachapin eyes.

Mariko then sits on Miichan’s stomach and grabbed both Miichan’s hands pinning them on the floor.
“Ugh! What are you doing?” Miichan groaned.

“You need a punishment” Smirked the tall girl. She turned closer to the girl.

And now their faces are close to each other. Too close that their nose almost touched.
Miichan held her breath as she looks at the taller girl’s intense eyes.

Miichan was about to open her mouth when the writer suddenly stopped writing the next scene.

Reader: Ehhhhh? :shocked
[What? >.> ] :huhuh
Reader: why you stop? D:

[It’s a cliffhanger~] :on drink:

*kicks the nonsense writer*
:kickass:
:angry1:

okay I'll stopped here before it gets really weird :err:
and don't expect anything for the next chapter okay ^^;
:kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

TO BE CONTINUED~

:mon sweat:
[SORRY FOR THE MISTAKES IF I HAD ANY WHILE POSTING/WRITING/SLEEPING/KICKING THIS CHAPTER AND THE WHOLE STORY]
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 30 [GOMENASAI!!] 04/11/14
Post by: Kirozoro on November 04, 2014, 06:41:14 PM: Lol Marmii

Oh no Sae watch iut for the bad guys

Update soon
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 30 [GOMENASAI!!] 04/11/14
Post by: triela on November 05, 2014, 02:58:22 AM: i miss your fanfic :cry: :cry:
update soon
more atsumina pair :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 30 [GOMENASAI!!] 04/11/14
Post by: qweakb on November 05, 2014, 02:17:00 PM: Finally!!! You have updated! Welcome back ^^
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 30 [GOMENASAI!!] 04/11/14
Post by: cisda83 on November 05, 2014, 08:49:36 PM: Yeah... You are back...

Eh... why did you stop when MariMii are getting into the juicy part...?

Would they kiss?

The mafia Kenzo are going to attack Sae 1st or who?

The Genking?

AH... What made Jurina in good mood?

Is she happy to know that she was not related to Rena...?

Is she happy that they can be together as a lover?

Well can't wait to see what's going to happen next

Thank you for the update

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 30 [GOMENASAI!!] 04/11/14
Post by: Kate21 on November 10, 2014, 01:37:13 AM: I started reading and did not stop

very good fanfic :twothumbs

Please Update :bow:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 30 [GOMENASAI!!] 04/11/14
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on May 06, 2015, 02:55:51 PM: okaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!

leeeeeeeeeeeeeeets seeeeee!!

THE FIC US AMAZING AND IT REALLY MAKE MY DAY.

*ROLL *ROLL *ROLL *ROLL *

(what i write *cry*)

lol why does Yuki glare at Acchan?

Ah gekikara again turn all the home upside down because of melon pan

hehehehehhehehehe

Those kids how dare they eat Takamina favorite food, even if they are hungry they shouldn't eat her favorite food.

poor Yuki get fooled by Mayu. huhuhuhuhuhu.

Yeaaaaah i want to join to in the baaath kekekekeke.

Lolololol The moment when Takamina kissed on Acchan lips *cathappy*

yeah black it's really strange to watch Mafia playing with kids.

ok there is so many moment that i like it, as you know i don't talk much, but i will write what i feel.

look like the fic is about to finish, yeah only few chapter still maybe one or two.

write the fight that happened between Rapapa vs that bastard.

Rapapa suddenly attack on their group and they found large amount of drag and other bad things, Takamina Rena all if them take revenge of their parents, and as you wish make it happy ending or sad.

you can do it, i believe in you,you also believe in your self.

Maybe this is all i can say from now,
FIGHTING YOU CAN DO IT.

there is only few chapter so hurry up and end it.
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 30 [GOMENASAI!!] 04/11/14
Post by: Ren-kun on May 31, 2015, 04:28:17 PM: WAAAHHHHH!!..THIS IS AN AMAZING FIC AUTHOR-SAN!!..all the scenes and each character stories are so interesting.. :farofflook:
I reeeaaaaally hope you'll finish this~..pretty please~?.. :gmon tears:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 30 [GOMENASAI!!] 04/11/14
Post by: chiqinna on June 15, 2015, 08:37:30 AM: the last update was...November 5 2014?? ⊙_⊙
aahhh... the stress..
I dunno if I can continue this or not...
been busy with real life..work.. huhu (｡ŏ_ŏ)
but... who knows~ ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
just wanna thanks to you guys who still read this..
tho its not finish....yet ._.
hehe..
thats all~
jaaa~ (ﾉ*>∀<)ﾉ♡
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 30 [GOMENASAI!!] 04/11/14
Post by: kuro_black29 on June 17, 2015, 07:46:58 PM: PLEASE CONTINUE IT

GANBATTE author san~

:onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 30 [GOMENASAI!!] 04/11/14
Post by: chiqinna on November 26, 2015, 02:28:24 PM: its been a....year..
I wonder if any human or cats still reading this..
if you are, raise your butt, on any of my fic.. the other one..or this one.
(if any care enough to even read this..)
(sorry no it's not an update)

this.need.to.come.to.an.end.
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine [nope..nope..nein update] 26 November 2015
Post by: takeshi77 on November 26, 2015, 02:54:05 PM: i will be happy if u continue this story until end of this story :lol:
i still remember all ur story cz its was really interesting :thumbsup :thumbsup
its doesnt matter if its a yr or so, as long u still continue its till end of this story
u wont ever know how u make a day for someone :) :)
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine [nope..nope..nein update] 26 November 2015
Post by: blakwhite on November 26, 2015, 02:54:37 PM: im still waiting chiq :cool1:
Title: Re: You Are My Sunshine [nope..nope..nein update] 26 November 2015
Post by: genkingblack on November 26, 2015, 06:08:39 PM: i'd prefer you finish it author-san many people read this

I hope you will end our misery soon from hanging :')