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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 4 REPLIES~
« Reply #260 on: September 06, 2013, 12:38:49 PM »
I'll be waiting for your update how ever long

Hopefully when you did update you would make a very long chapter

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Eh.. Making someone died... Well if the bad guys I don't care or sae for this matter

But not the good guys please...

It would be heart breaking if that was the case.

Can't wait to see what's kenzo plan for them?

Thank you for the reply

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 4 REPLIES~
« Reply #261 on: September 06, 2013, 01:45:05 PM »
well, I'm not thinking of making Atsu or Mina died... :)
so no worries!!  :D
but...now I'm thinking again...bad guys definitely will die some of them...and probably... good guys died too... hmmm...
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Cisda83  :cry: ...thank you so much for ur support~ hehe
Maybe I will update tomorrow~ or tomorrow or tomorrow...  :lol:
P/S: Make sure your heart  is in good condition! Prepare for the worst!   :twisted:
Okay..not really.. :sweatdrop:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 20 Part 4 REPLIES~
« Reply #262 on: September 06, 2013, 02:30:21 PM »

P/S: Make sure your heart  is in good condition! Prepare for the worst!   :twisted:


PLEASE DONT BREAK MY HEART CHIQINNA-SAN

btw, im your silent reader

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 07/09/13
« Reply #263 on: September 07, 2013, 01:08:01 PM »

PLEASE DONT BREAK MY HEART CHIQINNA-SAN

btw, im your silent reader
silent reader!!!  :heart: Don't worry I wont break ur heart~~ yet~~~ :P

here is the new chapter, don't expect anything~  :sweatdrop:

Chapter 21



It’s been usual day since the day Mayu got kidnapped.
Only Miichan knows about it while the others are still clueless of what
had happened because Mayu did not tell them.

Mayu has gone back to Miichan’s house.
She’s gone to school as usual too.

But there is one problem.
Her bodyguard is not with her.

Instead, her father’s bodyguards had been seen by her watching at her from afar.
Seems like they are the one who’s guarding her now.

After she woke up the other day, she had not seeing her bodyguard even once.
She had tried to text and calls her but to no avail.

This makes Mayu curious and worried something might happen to her.
Or is it something to do with her father.
Mayu decided to ask her father about it after she gone back from school.



After school...

Mayu and Lovetan are at the gate waiting for Jurina and Kanon
since they don’t have any extra classes today.

“Mayuyu, where is your bodyguard? Usually she would wait for you already here.”
 Ask Lovetan as she also realized about Black is not there.

“I don’t know. I’m going to my dad’s house first, you go home with the others.”
Said Mayu as she walks away to see her dad.
“Okay.” Said Lovetan then she saw Jurina and Kanon heading
towards her direction when Mayuyu bid her goodbye.

“Where is Mayuyu going?” Ask Jurina.
“To her real home.” Answered Lovetan.
“*sighed* I was about to ask Black about Rena-Chan...
She haven’t going to see me this past few days.” Said Jurina frowning.

“How can you ask Black when you don’t know where is she?
 Even Mayuyu don’t know about her own bodyguard.” Said Lovetan then she started to walk home.

‘Hmmm...Maybe they are busy with their works.’ Thought Jurina as she followed Lovetan and Kanon from behind.





At Watanabe’s villa.


Inside the house, it seems like Watanabe Hiroshi is busy with his work in his office room.

Mayuyu dashed inside the room and stand in front of the desk where her father is doing his work.
Her father stopped doing his work as he sees her daughter
in front of her with an unreadable expression.

“Mayu, is there anything wrong? Did anyone disturb you again?” Ask her father worried.

“Where is Black?” Ask Mayuyu directly without answering to her father’s question.

“Black? Ahh...I forgot to tell you. Black is no longer your bodyguard Mayu.
 Don’t worry I will find the most skillful bodyguard for-“

“I don’t want another bodyguard. Bring Black back, now!” interrupted Mayuyu mad.

“Look Mayu, Black had failed to take care of you! I don’t want the same thing to happen to you again!” said her father as he standing up from his chair.

“Father! I’m the one at fault. I made her mad that time so she leaves me-“
“But still she should not leave you that time! Even if she mad, she should not leave her duty just like that!” this time her father interrupt her.

“I don’t care! I still want her as my bodyguard! And I know that she is a mafia.” Said Mayu as coldly.
“H-how...*sighed* never mind. But I will still find you a better bodyguard.” Said his father.

“Okay fine!! If you don’t bring Black back to me, I won’t talk to you anymore!”
 said Mayu as she walks away and slammed the door closed.

“Mayu, Mayu-*sighed*“

His father could only sighed looking down the floor.
.

.

.

“Acchaaan~” said Minami pouting.

“Here...say ahh~” said Acchan as she feed Minami a katsudon.

Minami eat it while pouting.

“Why are you pouting? You should be happy that I feed you~” said Acchan as she eat it too.
“Mou~ but I want to eat by myself~” said Minami trying to snatched the chopsticks from Acchan’s hand.

“And get choked again? No I will not let you~” said Acchan she also trying to prevent Minami from taking it.
“I’m not going to get choked again! I want to eat my katsudon~” whine Minami.

“Yeah right~ *here* *Minami munch her food* If it were something
 else other than Katsudon then I will let you eat by yourself.” Said Acchan while feeding Minami slowly.

Minami silently eating her food that was feed by Acchan.

“You are mad at me again...” said Acchan as she look at the food and shove it then feed it to Minami.

“*munch* mNo~~ *munch*”

“Don’t talk when your mouth still full of foods! Eat them slowly.” Said Acchan raising her voice a bit.

“Sowwy~” said Minami pout still have food in her mouth.

Acchan was chuckling seeing her acting cute like that.
“Nee...Acchan, you promised me we’re going to the amusement park and you still haven’t bring me there...” said Minami looking at Acchan.

Acchan just smile at her.
“When do you want us to go there?” Asked Acchan.
“Now!!” said Minami suddenly happy.

Acchan giving out a small laugh seeing her reaction.

“Not yet~ we’re going there on the weekend okay?
You said you want to bring Miichan and the others too right?” Acchan says to her.

Minami nodded to her.

“Can we go this weekend?” Ask Minami with sparkling eyes.

Acchan nodded then chuckled.
“Yayy!!!” Minami jump happily.

“Minami! Finish your food first!”

.

.

.

Mayu is in her room still sulking with her father.

*knock* *knock*

“Mayu, are you in there? I want to talk to you.” Said his father as he knocks on Mayu’s door.
Mayu still doesn’t answer to him.

“Are you really going to ignore your father like this?”His father said in a sad tone.
His father sighed knowing that Mayu is really mad at him now.

After discussing with his assistant, Watanabe Hiroshi decided to give a
 second chance to Black and bring her back to be her daughter’s bodyguard.

He really loves his daughter that he doesn’t want her to avoid him again.

“If it’s my daughter’s wish, then I will do it.” Said him as he goes to Mayu’s room.

“Alright, you win, I will bring Black back to be your bodyguard.” Said him outside the room.

Still Mayu haven’t opened the door.
So he just waits for Black to come here because he already told Mariko about it.






Meanwhile Mayu is lying on her bed sleeping inside her room.
She probably did not listen to what his father said just now.

After a long time sleeping, Mayu heard a sound of a windows open.
Feeling scared, Mayu keep shutting her eyes shut and pretending that she is still sleeping.

Then the sound of the footsteps coming near to her bed.


“Nezumi” said the person. Mayu can feel that the person is smiling right now.

‘This voice...’ thought Mayu as she heard the voice.

“I-I mean, Mayu.” Said her again.
Mayu quickly turn around to see Yuki standing near her bed.

“Y-Yuki.” Mayu was shocked.

“Are you okay now?” Asked Yuki worried.
“Un.”

Then Yuki comes and sit on the side of the bed.

“I’m sorry for leaving you alone that time.” Said Yuki looking away from her.
“It’s not your fault, I’m the one who should say sorry.” Mayu said.

‘I wonder if she still remember what happen in the forest...’
 thought Mayu while staring at Black.

Black who was still looking away suddenly felt a warm breath near her cheeks.

When she turn her head around,
she saw Mayu’s face so close to hers that makes her quickly step back from it.


Meanwhile Mayu just smirking in her mind.
‘Should I remind her about that?’ said Mayu to herself.

“What are you doing?” ask Black with a shocked expression in her face and obviously her face is red now.

“Ne...Do you still remember what happen in the forest that time?”
 ask Mayu smirk slowly getting closer to Black while Black keep moving backwards.

They are still sitting on Mayu’s bed.

“W-what are you talking about? When you sleep on me?” Ask Black feeling confused with Mayu’s action.

Mayu shook her heads.

“Do you want me to remind you?” said Mayu as she traps Black making her lying down on the bed.

Black was trying to remember every bit that happens in the forest.
“Do you?” whisper Mayu while looking at Black’s lips.

Black then look at Mayu who’s looking at her lips then
remembers something did happen that time.
 Due to she was too focused on the something else that time
almost making her forget that Mayu’s lips was on hers.

“Y-you...” before Black said anything, Mayu already kissing her lips closing her eyes.

‘Why is my heart beating so fast? It’s just a kiss!!’ thought Black with her eyes widen still kissing Mayu.

‘Why I could not move her away from me?!’ said Black to herself again.

Then Mayu slowly part away from Yuki’s.

She looks directly into Yuki’s eyes. Yuki was still stunned with the kiss.


“Yuki...can I kiss you again?” Ask Mayu still locking her eyes with Yuki.

Yuki nodded her head continuously as she also wants more.

Mayu then smirk to her and sealed her lips with Yuki’s for the second time.


[Black...Yuki...Black...Yuki...I’m still confuse to use which one...hehe   :doh:]





Mariko was walking on the dark alley herself at night because
she wants to free her mind sometimes.
That how a mafia do to release their stress.

If they encounter a bad people on their way then poor the bad people to get hit for no reason.

Imagine how a fashionista walking alone along the dark alley,
only to be accompanied by the street light.


Suddenly Mariko felt like someone is stalking and following her.
“Sasshi I told you don’t follow me.” Said Mariko as she thought tha
t the person was Sasshi but no respond from the other person.

That mean it’s not Sasshi.

Mariko stopped walking. The other person also stopped her movements.

Then Mariko starts to walk again. Slowly to confirm the person that was stalking
her is the one she was thinking right now.

Then she heard some movements in the bushes.

Mariko chuckled.
“Ouch!” said the other person in a low voice afraid that Mariko would hear her.

Without looking at where the person was, Mariko stops her tracks.

“What are you doing here, Miichan?” said Mariko finally she really sure who that person was.
Miichan who finally got caught in action comes out from the bushes.

She then looks at Mariko pouting while Mariko just smiles.

“How did you know it was me?” Asked Miichan as she walks towards Mariko while cleaning herself
.
“Because...you are Miichan?” said Mariko giving out a small laugh because of Miichan’s messy clothes.

Miichan pouting even more.

“Anyway...what are you doing here? Are you trying to be a spy again?
Getting back to your old job?” Ask Mariko curious.

“Not really, I was just training myself after 5 years I did not do this kind of thing.
Who knows, someday I would do this again.
 And I heard that Kato’s group is going crazy again?” Miichan said.

Mariko let out a sighed.

“Well, you know them. Ever since his son got released from the prison,
they started to get wild again and even kidnapped my client’s daughter.” Explain Mariko.

“Tsk...Thanks god Mayuyu is safe now.” Said Miichan serious.

“I think you should take care of Takamina more. You know, she’s in this too.” Mariko said looking at Miichan.

“I know, that’s why I’m training myself again.
This is what I afraid now. I hope her lover is doing great taking care of her.”

“Lover?”

“You know who~~~” said Miichan smirking to her.

Mariko also smirks knowing what Miichan means.

“I hope so...don’t depend on her so much.” Said Mariko.

“I’m not. I have to go home now. See ya!!” said Miichan then disappeared herself into the bushes again.

“Stupid Miichan, you could have used the road to go home...” said Mariko to no one.



T.B.C~



I don't want to be cruel~~  :cry: my mind already thinking about the next thing that will happen~


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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 07/09/13
« Reply #264 on: September 07, 2013, 02:11:12 PM »
Atsumina kawaii :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: mayuki is back too I'm gonna faint from fangirling

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 07/09/13
« Reply #265 on: September 07, 2013, 02:44:45 PM »
Then if it's happen then just do it hehe

Maybe it will make me cry or curse but okay lets see what happen


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Runners, until the race is run
Soldiers, you've got to soldier on
Sometimes even right is wrong
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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 07/09/13
« Reply #266 on: September 07, 2013, 08:43:34 PM »
let's make the Drama begin!!...

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 07/09/13
« Reply #267 on: September 08, 2013, 12:18:43 AM »
Yeah..Mayuki together more or less...

Yeah Atsuko would need to protect Minami even more

But someone need to actually tell Atsuko to keep an eye on things

Also how about the rest of the teens that live with them, they could be in danger to...

Everyone would be liable for Kato to use against them?

What's going to happen next?

would kojiyuu coming back?

Can't wait

Thank you for update

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 07/09/13
« Reply #268 on: September 08, 2013, 12:25:35 AM »
mayuki <3

good job  :on GJ:

astumina scene is so cute!  :luvluv1:

i am seriously very curious what takamina's past! hope that it will be a great chapter  :on lol:

This lately i might not be able to comment about the new chapters as I starting to get more and more busy  :imdead:
Become AKB fan after watching AKB0048.
Oshimen : Takamina and Mayu
Favorite pair : TakaAstu, Mayukirin, KumiYuria, Wmatsui, JirinaMayu etc.
(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 07/09/13
« Reply #269 on: September 08, 2013, 07:32:38 AM »
Mayuki finally had some development :on gay: :mon firecrack:
Atsumina is so cute and sweet :luvluv1:
Curious about what'll happen next :onioncheer:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
« Last Edit: September 09, 2013, 04:13:01 PM by leEwẬy »
Working on translating an awesome Kojiyuu fanfic, right now ☆〜(ゝ。∂) :mon beam:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 07/09/13
« Reply #270 on: September 08, 2013, 01:10:58 PM »
Oooh Yuki is back. XD :w00t:
Yaaaaaaaaaaay :)
KAMI OSHI: MATSUI RENA

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 REPLIES~ 09/09/13
« Reply #271 on: September 09, 2013, 11:30:46 AM »
Atsumina kawaii :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: mayuki is back too I'm gonna faint from fangirling

 :deco: *fangirling*

Then if it's happen then just do it hehe

Maybe it will make me cry or curse but okay lets see what happen

Next Chapter okay~ I hope u curse then cry..  :lol:

let's make the Drama begin!!...

get ready for this!!!!  :twisted:

Yeah..Mayuki together more or less...

Yeah Atsuko would need to protect Minami even more

But someone need to actually tell Atsuko to keep an eye on things

Also how about the rest of the teens that live with them, they could be in danger to...

Everyone would be liable for Kato to use against them?

What's going to happen next?

would kojiyuu coming back?

Can't wait

Thank you for update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs



yeah..let's see how Atsuko fail to protect Minami.. Oooppss~
the rest of the teens...you're right they could be in danger too...but I think Kato Kenzo is now only focused on getting revenge on minami...  :dunno: and he's stupid I guess..  :lol:
kojiyuu...I'm still searching where they are right now...  :sweatdrop:
mayuki <3

good job  :on GJ:

astumina scene is so cute!  :luvluv1:

i am seriously very curious what takamina's past! hope that it will be a great chapter  :on lol:

This lately i might not be able to comment about the new chapters as I starting to get more and more busy  :imdead:

about Takamina's past...some already been revealed isn't?
It's okay if you doesn't have time to comment on it qweakb-san...  :) as long as you still support this fic~  :bow:

Mayuki finally had some development :on gay: :mon firecrack:
Atsumina is so cute and sweet :on luvluv1:
Curious about what,ll happen next :onnioncheer:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Oooh Yuki is back. XD :w00t:
Yaaaaaaaaaaay :)


thanks for reading and commenting!!!!  :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

okay, I actually started to work this week...
and I'm afraid that I will have no time to write and update this fics..
when I get home, Im tired and my mind also tired~ hehe
but I will try my best to use my free time to update okay
thanks for reading and commenting!!  :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 REPLIES~ 09/09/13
« Reply #272 on: September 09, 2013, 12:37:29 PM »
Eh... You are going to make Atsuko fails protecting Minami?!

Really...ah...my heart....  :bleed eyes:

Whatever it is.., looking forward to the next update

Well at least the rest of the people seem to be saved for now,

If kenzo only paid attention more on Minami  :nervous

Eh... Really... You don't know where kojiyuu are at the moment?! :lol:

Will be waiting for the next update...

Thank you for the reply...

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 REPLIES~ 09/09/13
« Reply #273 on: September 13, 2013, 09:25:36 AM »
Did yuki realkjy let mayu kissed her?

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
« Reply #274 on: September 18, 2013, 12:00:53 PM »
Chapter 22


Black’s POV

I was at my room when Mariko telling me that Watanabe Hiroshi wants me back as Mayu’s bodyguard.
*sighed*
It just a few days ago since he fired me…and now he hire me back.
I have no choice…I owe my life to him.
Without further ado, I went to Watanabe’s villa since Mariko said he wants to see me as soon as possible.



At Watanabe’s

I walked inside and meet Watanabe Hiroshi at the living room. He looks sad.
When he saw me, his expression change into a normal one.
“Ehmm…good that you come back Black.” Said him.

I just stay silent and waiting for him to continue.

“*sighed*, its Mayuyu…She still want you as her bodyguard.
I told her I already fired you but now she won’t talk to me until I bring you back.”
He explains looking at me.

I can feel that he’s really sad that him daughter is ignoring him.
 All this time I can see they don’t have a good relationship.
Mayu seems cold to his father, I understand that since he’s involved in a mafia world.

“I have nothing to say anymore. Welcome back, Black.” Said him slightly smile.

I was about to walk to Mayu’s room when he said Mayu locked her door
and he doesn’t want to make her more mad at him if he use the spare keys.

So I decided to use the windows. Well, it’s a good way to surprised her.
I don’t know why I feel like I want to protect Mayu more after what had happen.

When I got fired, I just let it be since Watanabe said he is going
to find a more experience bodyguard for Mayu.

Not like me, I’m just a mafia.

I know she still care about her father. She cried when Kato Kenji said he will kill her father.

Luckily the window is not locked.
When I get inside the room, I found Mayu is lying with her back facing me.
I slowly walk towards her.

Is she sleeping?

“Nezumi?” I call her. I don’t know why I smile when I call her.

Then I remembered that I can call her Mayu now.

“I-I mean, Mayu.” I said again. Mayu quickly turn around.
She looks shocked seeing me.

“Are you okay now?” I asked her.
“Un.” Mayu nodded.

Then I walk and sit beside her.
“I’m sorry for leaving you alone that time.” I said as I look away.
It’s true, I still feel guilty until now.

“It’s not your fault, I’m the one who should say sorry.” She said.
Good that she is admitting her fault though. Usually she would blame me.

Then I can feel that she’s staring at me by the end of my eyes.
I suddenly felt a warm breath near my cheeks.
So I turn around only to see Mayu’s face so close to mine.

I quickly step back.

“What are you doing?” I asked her shocked with the sudden action.
I can feel my face is heating up now.

Why does she always shocking me with her action?

“Ne…Do you still remember what happen in the forest that time?"

What happen?

Mayu smirk at me while slowly getting closer to me. I just keep moving backwards.

I think she has turn into Nezumi now...

“W-what are you talking about? When you sleep on me?” I ask her. Well that’s what I remembered.

Mayu shook her heads.

“Do you want me to remind you?” she said.
I could not move anymore.
 She trapped me!
I don’t want to hurt her if I use my strength, I also try to remembers what happen that time.

Ah! I remember something!

Mayu kissed me that time right? But because I was too focused by the surrounding making me forgot about it.

Wait….kiss??!!

Why am I feeling nervous now?

Oh no…

“Y-you…”before I could say anything, Mayu already kissing me.

Why is my heart beating so fast? It’s just a kiss!!

Why I could not move her away from me?!

Then she slowly part away from me.
I don’t know what is wrong with me.

I want more. I like the kiss.

She stares at my eyes. I felt like I was drowned into her eyes, and the kiss.

“Yuki…can I kiss you again?” she ask.

My head acts on its own.
Mayu smirk at me then she kissed me again.

I don’t want to think about anything else as I kissed her back.





Oh my…the author…what is wrong with u?!  :banghead:







Tonight, Acchan is spending the night at Miichan’s house since she doesn’t have work.
Well, Mayu told them she is going to sleep at his father’s house.

They are now at the living room watching variety show when the door opens revealing Miichan.

“Tadaima~” said Miichan tiredly.
“Okaeri~” they looking at Miichan from head to toe.

“What happened to you Miichan?? You look…messy.” Said Jurina as
 she looks at Miichan’s clothes. Her clothes, her face are all dirty.
She looks like she has come back from playing mud wrestling.

“Yeah…and you’re late…usually you come home before 8.00 pm…
now are almost 10.” Lovetan added as she looks at the clock.

Acchan was just looking at them while Minami’s eyes still glued at the TV.
Kanon is doing her homework while looking at Miichan for a while.

“Err…n-nothing…it just so many works to do at bakery...fuhhh…
and I fell on my way home just now…hehehe” said Miichan laughing awkwardly.
“Owh…Okay…”Jurina said then her eyes went back watching TV.

“Aren’t you guys supposed to sleep now??” Miichan ask them.
“Why? Tomorrow is Saturday…no school ‘mother’~” Lovetan said.

“Really? Owh…my mistake…hehe” Miichan said the she walks
to the bathroom to clean herself but she stop walking and walk back to the
living room when she finally realize something…

or someone to be exact.

“Ehh?? Acchan?? When did you get here?” Miichan was shocked.

Acchan just look at her smiling.

“You just realize Acchan now? Seriously Miichan?” Jurina and Lovetan face palmed.

“So…you’re spending the night here….hehe…with Minami…hehehe…” Miichan laugh, smirk then wink at Acchan.

Acchan look away blushing then looking at Minami.

“I actually want to tell you guys that we’re going to Amusement Park this Sunday.” Said Acchan smiling.

“I see…” Miichan then continue her walk to the bathroom.





Since its already late night, everyone decided to go to sleep.
As usual, Miichan and Lovetan are in their room while
Kanon decided to sleep with Jurina since Acchan is going to sleep with Minami.


Minami is already boarding to a dreamland while Acchan was still awake.
Her right arm is supporting her head while her eyes staring at Minami’s sleeping face.

Acchan smile to herself remembering their happy times.

Then she hears Minami talking. It looks like she’s having a nightmare because her face was frowning.

Acchan caressed her hair slowly.

“You are really a kid, Minami...” mumbled Acchan when Minami’s face turns back to normal.

Acchan decided to sleep but before that,
she gives a peck on Minami’s lips then on her forehead.

‘It’s not wrong right? Loving a person like you?’ Acchan thought to herself.







Meanwhile,

“Father, do you still remember the name Takahashi Minami?”
Kenzo ask his father who’s having a rest at the balcony.

“Every person who had been a long time in mafia world would
know her and her other two friends, Kenzo. And I never forgot what she did to me.”
Said Kato Kenji as he looks at his right leg.

“Don’t worry father, I will give her our revenge…soon.” Kenzo said as he pat his father’s shoulder.

“What do you mean? You know where is she? I heard that she’s not normal right?” His father said as he looks at him.

“I know that, but revenge is revenge. I have a plan already. And you…just wait and see.” Kenzo smirk.

“Be careful Kenzo, I don’t want you to get into trouble,
 they have Rapappa with them.” His father said serious.

“I will, and I will take Rapappa’s ace.” He added.

“Yuko?”

“I mean…the new ace.” He grins.
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Let’s skip to the amusement park!!!!

“Rena-Chan!!!” Jurina screamed happily when she saw Rena was there
also with Bla- I mean Yuki. Or Black.
 They were waiting for them at the front gate.

Rena just smiles looking at her sister jumping happily towards her.
“Hey, how have you been? I’m sorry I was so busy lately I
could not go and see you Jurina.” Said Rena smiling as she looks at her beloved sister.

“It’s okay Rena-Chan, as long as you are here now, let’s have fun!”
 Jurina say as clinging on Rena’s arm.

Meanwhile Bla- errs... Yuki is avoiding looking at Mayu’s eyes and Mayu is smirking to herself.

“Come on! Let’s get inside!” They all went inside the park.

“Minami, hold my hand tight okay? Don’t let go.
 I don’t want you to get lost in this crowded.” Acchan said as she intertwines her hands with Minami.

Minami just nodded.

The three people, Miichan, Lovetan and Kanon are looking at them while grinning.
“Yeah…hold on tight…” Miichan said smirking.

Acchan hears them then she turns around to look at them
 but they quickly looks somewhere else pretending to think what should they ride first.


Mayu and Black are already somewhere else having fun on their own.

They were all having fun there.

While Miichan, Lovetan and Kanon were walking passed the Ferris wheel,
 Kanon stop walking while looking at the Ferris wheel.

Miichan and Jurina also stopped walking and look at Kanon.

“Kanon?” Lovetan call her then Kanon pointed at where she looks at.

They both were shocked to see what they were seeing.

It’s Mayu and Black.

Kissing inside the Ferris wheel.

Miichan quickly close Kanon and Lovetan’s eyes with both her hands.

“You guys are underage.” Miichan said as she still looking at them.

“What??!!! It’s not like they are having s-*&*^&%$^” Miichan quickly close
 Lovetan’s mouth to prevent her from saying the word.



Jurina and Rena-Chan are playing the bumper car while
 Acchan and her midget are at the carousel.

Well, the other three also enjoying their moments together
while sometimes peeking on the other couple.




While they are busy having fun, somewhere inside the park, there were also some people who are waiting patiently for their time.




It’s already afternoon, they decided to meet altogether
 at the restaurant to have lunch since they were all tired and hungry.

“Whoa~ that was fun! Haha” Jurina said as she
sits besides Rena in the restaurant.

“Yeah…ngehehehe~” Kanon, Lovetan and Miichan laughing sheepishly
 when they saw Mayu and Yuki finally arrived at the restaurant.

Mayu and Yuki look at them weirdly.

Minami and Acchan already filling their stomach with foods.

“So…Takamina…is it fun?” Miichan ask smiling.
“Un! It was sho fuunn~~~” Minami answered while eating.

“Minami~ finish your foods in your mouth first~” Acchan said.


“Onee-chan! You know…earlier I saw May-*&^&*^&%#$!” Miichan
quickly cover Kanon’s mouth before she said anything about what they saw.

“They ki-(*&^@#$%^&!!!” Lovetan also trying to spill it but Miichan close her mouth.

Lovetan pull Miichan’s hand from her.

“What? They need to know too!” Lovetan whine to Miichan.

“You mean on the Ferris Wheel right?” Jurina whispered
to Kanon who sit on her right while Rena on her left.
“You know?” Kanon ask also whisper to her.

Jurina nodded.

“Me and Rena-Chan also riding on that Ferris wheel that time.
Then we saw them…oh my god…Mayu is soooo bold!” Jurina said then Mayu heard her name.

“What is soooo bold Jurina?” Mayu ask as the waiter put their food on the table.
“Eh? Err…N-nothing…hehehe” Jurina said giving an awkward smile.




After having their lunch, they continue exploring inside the amusement park.

Mayu and Yuki are walking side by side then Mayu took the chance
 to hold Yuki’s hand making Yuki to blush the action.

They keep walking holding hand until they realized they were
being stalked when they heard a giggling sound from behind.

Mayu look behind still walking but she just saw people walking here and there.

She then turns back to front.

“It’s them, Miichan, Lovetan, and Kanon.” Yuki said looking down embarrassed.

Mayu stop walking.

She then turns around again but this time she saw them trying to hide.

“I saw you guys.” Mayu said with her cyborg face.

“Ah! Mayuyu…what a coincidence! Hehehe” Miichan said as she and the others smiling awkwardly.

“We saw you guys k-*&^%$#@!!” Miichan quickly cover Lovetan’s mouth.

Lovetan glare at Miichan.

“Well, I guess its okay then~” Miichan said then she let Lovetan to says it.

“We saw you guys kissing! Inside the Ferris Wheel!” Lovetan said smirking.
“Yeah~” Kanon added.
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“Guys, I think this is wrong idea.” Miichan said as she looks at Mayu’s face getting darker.

“You're right~ Hehehe…Mayuyu…we’re going now! See you later!” They said as they run away.

“Come back here you guys!!!” Mayu said as she chased after them leaving Yuki.

Yuki was smiling looking at them while blushing then her eyes saw some people behind the stall.

They were putting on a smurf mascot.

‘They look familiar....’ Yuki thought as she looks at their face.

‘Isn’t that…Sae?’ Yuki then saw several men’s also there helping her.

“This is bad…Mayu!!” Yuki quickly call Mayu and bring her close to her.

“What is it?” Mayu ask panting because she was busy chasing the three
 but eventually they manage to escape from Mayu.

“I saw Sae. There.” Yuki said as she pointing at where Sae was.

“Don’t go near the mascot. They might be them.”
 Yuki said as they leaving the place to go somewhere safe.

They don’t know that their enemy was aiming the other person...




T.B.C~



What do you think of Mayuki's relationship?  :?
What do you think will happen next?
What do you think they will do?
What is Sae doing there?
What if the author loses her mind and keeps talking nonsense?
What if the author feeling like to fainted like now?
What if the author has another fic on mind she already write it but she ter'delete' it! [oh my English!!!!!!  :panic:]
Okay, I will just be a readers for a while. or a stalker  :lol:

Offline olive29

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
« Reply #275 on: September 18, 2013, 12:38:17 PM »
Yeahh..Mayuki kissing in the ferris wheel  :lol:

Danger ahead !!!  :panic:

I think Sae will try to kidnap Minami or Acchan or both of them..

I want Kojiharu and Yuko to go back already and join forces with Miichan and Rappappa to protect Minami and Acchan..

Can't wait for the next chapter..

Update soon please.. :bow:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
« Reply #276 on: September 18, 2013, 12:48:31 PM »
Yeah... mayuki got together...

how about wmatsui would they become more than that?

Ah... They are aiming for Minami and Atsuko

Well revenge for Minami

How about for Atsuko? Kato took a liking for Atsuko?

Ah... Now would Atsuko be able to protect Minami and herself?

Would the others be able to save them?

Would they be kidnapped and waiting for the others to save them?

Would Minami get back all her memories and intelligent then?

Can't wait to see some action on the next chapter

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs


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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
« Reply #277 on: September 18, 2013, 03:40:46 PM »
mayuki kissu  :wriggly:

i want atsumina kissu too in bed..naked *teehee*  :hehehe:
my pervert mind is on :ding:
can someone help me to turn it off?? :hiakhiakhiak:

wahhh i smell trouble..
i cant wait to read the next update!!
thank u for the update :on gay:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
« Reply #278 on: September 18, 2013, 04:19:59 PM »
Mayuki's kiss :mon lovelaff: Al's on the Ferris wheel :luvluv1:
Yuki slowly begins to fall in love with Mayu :mon evillaff:
Sae's aiming for Takamina and Acchan :OMG:
Someone or anyone protect then :pleeease:
You're writing another fic but accident deleted it :mon headbang:
Anyway, update soon, please :kneelbow:
Working on translating an awesome Kojiyuu fanfic, right now ☆〜(ゝ。∂) :mon beam:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 21 REPLIES~ 09/09/13
« Reply #279 on: September 18, 2013, 05:45:35 PM »
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about Takamina's past...some already been revealed isn't?
It's okay if you doesn't have time to comment on it qweakb-san...  :) as long as you still support this fic~  :bow:

I mean I am curious what she had did to the both father and son.  :mon sweat:

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What do you think of Mayuki's relationship?
good!  :luvluv1: :on GJ:

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What do you think will happen next?
Takamina is being kidnapped by Kendo's man. Acchan become crazy..  :on lol:

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What do you think they will do?

who is they? refer to the Sumf mascot?

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What is Sae doing there?
Helping them to kidnapped takamina? Trying to get closed black/yuki again? Or change her target and chased after sayaka? haha  :on lol:

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What if the author loses her mind and keeps talking nonsense?
I will help her call in her country mental hospital number and ask them to send her to mental hospital  :on crazygran: :mon lol:

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What if the author feeling like to fainted like now?
give you ice?  :mon huh:

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What if the author has another fic on mind she already write it but she ter'delete' it! [oh my English!!!!!!  :panic:]
Okay, I will just be a readers for a while. or a stalker
:mon cry: Why you had delete it? LOL
Oh well.. up to you.. your choice  :hee:

Just nice, I am free  :on lol:

Thank for the nice chapter!
Become AKB fan after watching AKB0048.
Oshimen : Takamina and Mayu
Favorite pair : TakaAstu, Mayukirin, KumiYuria, Wmatsui, JirinaMayu etc.
(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

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