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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on January 26, 2013, 10:26:54 PM
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*Grins* Hi! *Waving* It's me again with a fanfiction :onioncheer:
Yaay! I did watch Majisuka Gakuen 3 (more like all the Messi/Yagi moments :depressed: )
Ok so I wanted to do a fan fiiiiic~~!
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Hai.......Sorry :kneelbow:
Let me tell you what happened
In the real MG 3 only Paru, Peace and Nanashi went out but in this fic all of them went out (Team Habu and Team Mongoose)
Ok let me start
After all of them went out they went to the nearest place
And it was Tokyo (Dat is no good (I think) )
Ok anyway so this is a fic on what happened in Tokyo and I'm gonna use most of the persons in MG 1 and 2 in this
Ok, I'm really gonna start
P.S The fic is no one's pov unless I put is like 'Paru's pov' or anything like that
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Sound of footsteps on the ground and sounds of people's breathing.That's what you gonna hear if you walk with them.Hmm? Who is 'them'?.The girls who had been in one of the most feared prisons 'Prison Of Hope'.I wonder why it's called 'Prison Of Hope' because there is no hope once you get in.One you get in you can't get out.But those girls are different, they manged to get out without losing anyone or anything.I think you all want to know who the girls is,then let me introduce them.
Name:Shimazaki Haruka Name:Kizaki Yuria Name:Kawaei Rina Name:Kimoto Kanon Name:Shimada Haruka Name:Abe Maria
Fight name(?):Paru Fight name:Peace Fight name:Nanashi Fight name:Nantene Fight name:Uruseeyo Fight name:TetsuoFight
Age:16 Age:16 Age:16 Age:16 Age:16 Age:16
Name:Oba Mina Name:Yagami Kumi Name:Mureshige Anna Name:Ichakawa Miori Name:Kato Rena Name: Yamauchi Suzuran
Fight name:Dasu Fight name:Komimi Fight name:Jovijovich Fight name:Sudachi Fight name:Shokkaku Fight name:Bunker
Age:17 Age:17 Age:16 Age:17 Age:17 Age:17
Name:Takeuchi Miyu Name:Nagao Mariya Name:Takahashi Juri Name:Iriyama Anna Name:Matsui Jurina<3
Fight name:Miyu Fight nameName:Yagi Fight name:Messi Fight name:Annin Fight name:Nobunaga
Age:16 Age:16 Age:18 Age:18 Age:18
That’s all of them.The ones who escaped one of the most feared prisons.As they where walking a sigh was heard.Paru looked back to the girl.’’Tired?’’She asked.
‘’Yeah’’The girl said.Paru looked at Nobunaga and Annin.They both nodded and looked back at the girls as the three of them was walking first.’’We are gonna take a break now’’Nobunaga said.All of them (except Messi and Miyu) fell on the ground.Messi sat like a boss while Miyu sat like a normal person.Nobunaga went to a tree and sat down and leaned on the tree.Paru went to where peace is and sat down beside her.Annin went to Nobunaga.For the others,Kumi was lying down in her stomach talking to Kanon and Dasu.Messi was leaning on a tree with Yagi between her legs leaning on Messi’s body.Jovijovich was with Uruseeyo,Tetsuo and Bunker.Miyu was sitting with Nanashi looking at Shukkaku teasing Sudachi.’’Stop it’’Sudachi whined.While Shukkaku just smirked.Miyu and Nanashi was giving them a Are-You-Guys-Serious-look.Back to Paru and Peace.Paru was lying with her head on Peace’s thighs.’’Paru?’’ Peace looked at paru as she noticed Paru starring at her.’’Yeah?’’
‘’Are you ok?’’The latter nodded slowly.’’Just thinking’’
‘’About?’’Peace asked but Paru only starred at her .’’About all the time in the prison’’.’’What do you mean?’’Peace asked.Paru give her one of those smiles.’’If I did not come to the prison.I would not have meet you’’Peace blushed and looked away.Paru smiled and reached her hand up and touched Peace’s cheeks.Peace was not in a good state her face was red.Paru who was enjoying teasing Peace sat up and gave Peace a kiss in her forehead.For Peace she isn’t red any more but turned purple.Paru smirked and laid down and made herself comfortable.While Paru was teasing Peace Annin and Nobunaga had their ‘little moment’ well don’t they where cuddling and all.Yeah….let’s move on.Jovijovich ,Uruseeyo,Tetsuo and Bunker was sitting on a tree resting and talking about random things.Nantene,Komimi and Dasu was talking while Komimi was trying to make herself comfortable on the ground.’’You will get dirty’’Dasu said.While Nantene’s doll Sally was nodding.’’See,even Sally agree’’Dasu said again.Komimi gave her a I-Don’t-Care-Look and continued rolling on the dirty ground.Yagi leaning on Messi while she is between her legs.She was playing with Messi’s glasses and had her head on Messi’s chest.Messi had her head on Yagi’s head and was looking at Yagi innocently playing with her glasses looking like a little child.Messi smirked and gave the Still-Innocent Yagi a kiss on the cheek.The Forever-Innocent Yagi looked at her with a confused look.Messi then gave her a smile.Not like those devilish smiles she used to give but a real smile.Yagi was so glad that she did not believe her eyes.’’Guys,get up we are gonna continue
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Hai this is the first chapter
Tell me what you think.And also it's just so you guys understand everything.Took me one day to write this chapter because I deleted it 2 times
:err: Yeah it was stuped
Soo please tell me what you think
Bye bye! :byebye:
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Chapter 2
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''Guys,get up we are gonna continue''
Everyone got up-Well all of them except Komimi who got dragged because she didn't wan't to get up-and started walking to where Nobunaga is leading them.
After a minutes they saw something that looked like some houses.''Am I dreaming?''Bunker stupidly asked.Komimi got an idea so she went and pinched Bunker's left cheek.
''Ahh!''Bunker screamed in pain.''Shh!''
''But she-''
''Shhh!!''Komimi was grinning until Nantene pinched her cheek.
''Guys,I think this is Tokyo''Annin said.
''Yeah''
''I don't think we should use our names''Nobunaga said
''Why?''Nanashi asked.
''Because the prison can find us if we use our names''Nobunaga answered the question.
''We have to change our names''Paru said.
''Think about a name''Komimi grinned again as she came up with the best--or not--name
''Kumi, Yagami Kumi desu!''Komimi half yelled.
''Yuria,Kizaki Yuria desu''Peace said and did a peace sign.
''Oba Mina? Is that good?''Dasu asked.
''Yeah it's good.I'm err.....Shimazaki Haruka''
''Wait! we are all using our real names''Annin said
''But the prison don't know our real names''Miyu said.
''And also i'm Takeuchi Miyu''
''Well then,Takahashi Juri desu''Messi said with a calm.''Nagao Mariya''
''Kimoto Kanon''This time Nantene by herself said.
''Kawaei Rina''
''Ichikawa Miori''
''Kato Rena''
''Mureshige Anna''Jovijovich said''
''Shimada Haruka''
''Abe maria''Tetsuo said.
''Yamauchi Suzuran''Bunker said.
''Why is your name Bunker?''Mureshige asked.
''Iriyama Anna''Annin said.
''Ok let's just go and remember don't ever call each other by your prison name''Nobunaga warned them and started going.The others fallowed quietly.After a few minutes they saw some people walking.''Excuse me,sir''Paru being the most polite one decided to ask one of the people outside.
''Do I really look like a guy?''The person asked.
''Eh?''
''I'm a girl''The girl said.The girl then looked at the others standing behind Paru.They all had where full of bruises and some of them even had scars.She also noticed that their clothes was not what a normal person would wear.Then it clicked her eyes widened.''Are you from Prison Of Hope?''The girl asked in a calm voice.
''We escaped''Messi answered with the same calm voice''The girl smiled.''Wait! you don't seem to fear us''Paru said.
The girl smiled at her.''You don't seem to be that fearsome and also that prison don't really have criminals''The girl said.
''Yeah,and we have been walking all the way from the prison to this place''Nobunaga said.
''This is Tokyo, right?''Annin asked.
''Yeah''The girl said.
''Do you guys have a place to stay at?''The girls asked.
''No''
''You can stay at my place if you want.And also don't worry I won't do anything with you''The girl said again smiling at them.
''What's you name?''Komimi asked.
''Soory, i've been rude.I'm Takahashi Minami you can call me Takamina''
''I'm Takahashi Juri''Juri said and smiled at Takamina.
''Can we really stay at your place?''Komimi asked and of course only to get smacked on her head.''Itaii~''She whined.
Takamina grinned.''Yeah you can stay at my place''
''Sure we will''Juri said.
''Oi, we know nothing about her''Paru warned her.
''But she looks fine''Juri said.
''So are you coming or not?''
''We are coming''Juri quickly answered Takamina's question.
''Good! now come my house is not far away from here''Takamina started walking followed by the others.
About 10 minutes later they arrived at Takamina's house.Well It wasn't exactly a house it was a mansion.They went inside the mansion.
''Ta.Ka.Mi.Na.''Came a voice.Takamina froze.
''Acchan''She mumbled.Everyone looked at her with a confused look.
Suddenly a girl came to them.''Eh? we have guests?''The girl looked at them.
''Prison Of Hope?''She asked.Annin nodded.
''How did you know?''Komimi asked.And of course got smacked by Dasu.
''Clothes''The girl answered simply.
''A-Acchan''Takamina gulped.
''TADAIMA!''Came another voice.
''Hm? Guests? Hi I'm Oshima Yuko''The girl who just came in said her name and grinned at them.The others introduced them self.They also got to know that the first girl's name is Maeda Atsuko and her nickname is Acchan.
''How about school?''Takamina asked them.
''School?''Shimada asked.
''You have to go in school''
''But,we don't have money or anything''Paru said.Acchan smiled at her.''Leave the money for me''
''I'll tell daddy to put them in the same school with us''
''Thanks''Kanon's doll Sally said.As Kanon was hiding behind Komimi's back.
''Yeah,we don't know how to thank you''Paru said being really thank full.Takamina,Acchan and Yuko smiled at them.
''No it's ok''
''Hey daddy said it's ok''Yuko said.
''So tomorrow you will begin school with us''Takamina grinned at them.
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Ok that's all for chapter 2
And also comment for the sake of this fanfic
Please :pleeease:
Ok I need to go and take a bath :bath:
Bye Bye :byebye:
AND COMMENT
or I'll cry :cry:
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If you don't know the girls didn't have their 'prison' clothes but had school uniform
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The next day they all went to the school.They went with Yuko,Takamina and Acchan to the principal.''Uncle!''Yuko shouted.
''Hey~~!''
''Oh! Hi,Aki-P''Acchan greeted.All 20 went in the room.
''Those are the girls your dad was talking about?''The guy named Aki-P asked Yuko who nodded.
''I see''He said looking at them.
''So,how old are you?''He asked.And the question got answered by Paru.
''Oh so some of you are in their third year?''
''Yeah''
''I see''
''Yuko,Acchan,Takamina can you take them to their classes?''He asked Yuko,Acchan and Takamina and gave them a little papper.
''Sure''The three answered.Then they went to their classes.No one was in the halls because the classes already started.
(With the girls in 1-C)
''Ok, we have some new girls in this class''The teacher said to the class.Everyone was shouting happily because they don't usually get new kids.''He! so it was true after all''One girl said to her friend who was sitting beside her.
''Yeah,but seriously how does that gossip queen know everything that happen and will happen in this school?''Her friend asked her.
''No one knows''Her friend nodded.
Girls,please get in''The door opened and in came Yagi,Nantene,Jovijovich,Nanashi.The whole class started squealing.Words like 'Kawaii' and 'Kakoii' was heard.
''Can you introduce yourself?''The teacher asked Mureshige who was standing first from the left.''Name Mureshige Anna''She simply introduced herself.And that made the girls in the class squeal.
''Yag-mphmpf''Mariya who was about to introduce herself got cut by Nanashi's hand on her mouth.After Nanashi got a glare and she put her hand down Mariya introduced herself again.
''Nagao Mariya,desu''She said without bowing and showed her fangs.That made the girls squeal even more that before.'What the hell is wrong with them?'Mariya thought.
''Kanon''Nanashi whispered to Kanon who was standing behind her.Being the shyest girl out of them was hard for her.But even thought the girl's name got called a few times she didn't dare to do anything.Rina sighed.
''I'm sorry but she's shy.......sometimes.But her name is Kimoto Kanon''Kawaei Rine introduced Kanon to the whole class.
''And i'm Na-ehm! I mean i'm Kawaei Rina''More squeals was heard.
'Why was I in this class now again''The same girl asked her friend again.
''How the hell am I supposed to know,Mayu?''The friend answered her friend's question by a question.
''Don't answer my question by another one,Rabutan''Mayu said.
''Oh,please''
''But they are pretty cute ain't they?''Another girl sitting on Mayu's left said.
''Yeah''Mayu answered.
''Cuter than Kashiwagi-san?''Rabutan started the teasing.But Mayu just ignored her.
''Mayu''The girl on Mayu's left called her name.
''Hm?''Mayu said.Looking in her bag for her new manga..
''are they cuter than Yuki?''
''Watanabe-san!''The teacher called.
''Which one?''Mayu asked.
''Watanabe Miyuki!''
''Hai?''The girl on Mayu's left half shouted when she heard her name being called.The teacher sighed.''Can you be quiet?''
''But I am''Milky said.The teacher sighed again.Mayu and Rabutan was on the floor laughing.''What's so funny?''The teacher asked.
''Loser''Mureshige mumbled.But unfortunately the teacher heard it.
''What did you just say?''The teacher shot Mureshige a glare.
''Deaf too? I said Loser''The whole class gasped except Mayu,Rabutan and Milky.
''Do you know who I am?''The teacher asked Mureshige who was looking at her nails totally uninterested.''My father?''The class gasped again.
''You!''
''Me what?''The teacher got so angry that she punched Anna.Anna who wasn't prepared for the punch didn't have time to dodge it.She felt it again,the feeling when someone punch you.She smiled,a sweet smile.''Yagi~''She looked at Mariya.''Do it for me I'm not in the mood''She smiled at Mariya.A smile started forming on Mariya's face.
Mariya gave the teacher a dangerous smile.She walked to the teacher.She grabbed the teacher by her collar.She pinned the teacher on a wall.She punched the teacher on her face.She started trowing punches on random places on the teacher's body.She was about to kick the now-bleeding teacher until she heard a familiar clap.She stopped and put down her hand.She stepped back.She turned back only to meet Juri's eyes.
''When did you come here?''She asked.Juri ignored Mariya's question.''Can you two stop all the mess?''Came a voice.
''Loser!''Nobunaga pointed at the teacher.
''Not you too''Annin groaned.
''That's what i've been telling this loser ,that she is a loser until she got angry and decided to punch me.I wasn't in the mood so I called Yagi''Mureshige explained.
Mayu got up from her seat and went to the on-the-floor-still-bleeding teacher,she poked her cheek.''Dead?''She asked Mariya.
''No she just fainted''
''Makes this class without another boring teacher''Rabutan said.
''Uhu,then to teacher means no boring class''Milky said and got up.
''I'm hungry''She said again.
''Thank you for killing this loser over here! and bye!''Mayu said and walked out fallowed by Milky and Rabutan
Juri starred at Mariya.She sighed.'It's gonna be a rough day today'She thought and walked out with the others.
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What's wrong with my fanfic? :dunno:
No comment :shock:
WHY?! :frustrated:
I need one comment to continue this fic :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
Ok anyways i'm going
BUT COMMENT! please :pleeease:
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lol... it nice, please continue to update the fic :)
so that mean the school will be slowly turning into fighting sch like MG?
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Lol 20 girls in a mansion!!!!
This fic is really interesting
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Wah... it's great story... making one after MG3... and all of them survive....
Eh... how Takamina knew about Prison Hope...?
Are you going to make it that the corpse with a cloth 001 is actually one of the security guy that was killed by Maeda Atsuko to make it looks like she died there. So she can escaped.
Great plot... Thank you for the interesting idea of the story.
I can't wait for the next plot.
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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'I already said it's gonna be a damn rough day'Messi sighed for the 9th time.
''Did you know how much this nose cost me?!''The teacher yelled at Yagi.The teacher was really angry about Mariya punching her nose.One the other hand Mariya was looking down eyes closed.Yeah........she was sleeping.Messi sighed again.'How can this girl be like this?'She asked herself mentally.
''Miss Hayashi, can you calm down?''Aki-P was trying to calm the teacher as the teacher keep talking to a half dead body.''HOW DO YOU EXPECT ME TO CALM DOWN WHEN SHE PUNCHED MY NOSE?!?!''She yelled at Aki-P.
''SHE ISN'T EVEN SAYING ANYTHING!!! WHY?! BECAUSE SHE HAVE NOTHING TO SAY!!!''She yelled again.
''One, don't yell at me.Two, She isn't going to answer because she's sleeping''Aki-P said calmly.
''I'M TALKING AND SHE IS SLEEPING!?? THIS GIRL NEEDS TO KNOW WHO IS WHAT AND NEED TO RESPECT PEOPLE!!''The teacher yelled again.Mariya looked up at Juri.
''Why shout?''She asked Mureshige who also was with them while rubbing her eyes.
''Who knows''Mureshige said.
''YOU!''The teacher pointed at Mureshige.
''Me?''Mureshige said and smirked after she saw the teacher's angry face.Juri sighed again, why was she here again?
''Takahashi-san''Aki-P looked at Juri.
''Hai~?''
''Can you please take Nagao-san and Mureshige-san with you? i'm gonna calm this loser over here down''He mouthed the last words to her.She smirked, 'so everyone really think of her as a loser'She thought.
''Yag- I mean Mariya and Anna let's go''
''WHERE ARE THEY GOING!! WE ARE STILL NOT DONE!!!''The teacher shouted at them.Juri sighed and went out of the principal's room (It's called room ,right?) with Mariya and Mureshige.
When they came out Takamina and Yuko was standing in front of them.''Sorry''Yagi mumbled looking down.Juri sighed.
''Did you two know that everyone in this school started calling that loser by loser?''Takamina said smiling at them.Yuko gave them thumbs up with both her thumbs.
Juri took off that kind-girl mask and smirked.She took out a chain like thing ant put it around Mariya's neck.''Eh? I thought i'm free from this''She looked at Juri with pleading eyes.
''I'm putting this on so no one will get into trouble''Juri said.
''Yeah of course,not getting into trouble.More like when you want her to kill someone''Mureshige said.
''Ehh? I don't kill''Juri smirked.
''My ass''Mureshige replied.
They walked out of the school while chatting.They took a cab to Takamina's 'so called house' mansion.
When they went in they where greeted by Shimada who was grinning at them.Juri who had put one the kind-girl mask took it off as she went in.
''I was awesome ,right?''Mariya grinned back and showed two thumbs up.
''You should see her face after all the beating''Yuko said.
''Mariya!''Came a familiar voice.
''H-hai!''Mariya may look strong but she is a really scared when it comes to scolding.
''We need to talk!''Paru said and went to one of the rooms in the mansion with Yagi.
Yagi got scolded for 4 hours.Juri sighed.
''But she did a good job thought''Acchan smirked.
''Yeah, a really good job''Mureshige said and went to her bedroom which she shared with bunker.A sigh was heard but this time it was Annin who sighed.Nobunaga patted her shoulder and gave her a kiss.Annin pouted and went to the kitchen.While Nobunaga was fangirling about Annin's cuteness.
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Chapter 4 I think is updated :hee:
I got some comments :gyaaah:
I'm really thankful :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
I came home really tired but when I saw the comments I got all the energy from the comments :tama-music:
Thank you for all the comments :monk gboy:
Byebye! :byebye:
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Nobunaga and anni are so cute~
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lol..haha
nice one...hope that the chapter will be longer XD
this is quite funny to me..haha..everyone starting to call the teacher loser.. :D
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first day of school they already causing troubles....
Calling a teacher, a loser.... is great....
Thank you for the fic... can't wait for the next update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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''Nya nya nya~~~''.''Nya nya nya nya~~''
''Uruseeyo!!''Shimada shouted at Kumi and Rina who was singing one of their 'nyan-songs'.
''Nyan?''Kumi looked at her with puppy eyes.Takamina starred at Kumi.Kumi felt someone looking at her.She turned her head, only to meet Takamina's eyes.
'I got you'Takamina mouthed.Kumi's eyes widened.She looked at Takamina with a 'how-did-you-know' look.Takamina only smiled at her.Anyway you may wonder where they are and what they are doing, right? no? Well anyway I'll tell you.They are on their way to go shopping.Why?, because Acchan said so.And of course you don't want to say no to Atsuko.
''Takabear! Hayakuuuuuu!!!!''Maeda whined.
''Hai, hai''
''Hayakuuuuu~~''
''I'm coming''Takamina replied and looked at Kumi for the last time before running to Acchan who was whining like no tomorrow.Kumi stood there,frozen.
'How did she know?'She asked herself mentally.
''Kumi''Kanon poked Kumi who was just standing there.
''E-eh?''
''Are you ok?''
''Y-yes of c-course!''Kumi shouted.Making the people on the street look at them.Kanon bowed to them then turned to Kumi.
''Are you sure?''She asked.
''Yeah!''
''Ok, let's go then''Kanon dragged Kumi to a store.
(with Yuko,Oba,Rina,Takamina,Acchan,Paru,Peace,Annin and Juri)
''Is this good, Takamina?''Atsuko asked the still-panting-poor-girl.
''Y-y-eah''
''Really?''
''Yes!''Takamina looked back to tell Yuko a thing.But when she turned....
''Nyan nyan!!''Yuko was groping some girl in the store.
''Yuko!''Takamina shouted at her trying to make Yuko stop.
''Get of me!''The girl struggled, trying to make Yuko stop groping her.
''Nyannayn!''Yuko smiled and continued groping the girl.
''Get of me Hentai!!''The girl shouted at Yuko surprising Yuko.Yuko stopped groping the poor girl and looked up at the girl.''W-what?''Yuko who was in the verge of crying asked.
''Nyaro!''Came a voice.
''Marichan!''The so called Nyaro runned to the caller and hugged her.The caller was a tall and slim girl.
''Why are you crying?''The tall and slim girl asked.
''S-she was g-groping me''The girl Yuko groped said between her sobs and pointed at Yuko.The tall and slim girl glared at Yuko and patted the girls head.
''She looks like a troll''Nobunaga whispered to Annin who was beside her.Annin only gave her a what-are-you-talking-about look.
''Mariko, did you find -- oh there she is''Another girl came running to the two girls.
''Kojiharu are you crying''The same girl asked the now-so-called-Kojiharu.The tall and slim girl who's name is Mariko pointed at Yuko.''She groped my baby''The girls eyes widened.
''You!''She pointed at Yuko.At that time Yuko was also crying like a baby who's candy got stolen.
While the two girls was crying the rest of them was like :err:
Yes......they where like that.At the end Takamina went to the three girls asked for forgiveness - More like begged-,which she got.She went back to Yuko who was still crying and hugged the girl.
At the same time Kumi and Kanon came back from all the shopping they did together.But, they did not come back alone.Instead they came back with a girl.
''Guys!''Kanon waved her hands at them.Kumi,Kanon and the other girl went to them.
''Eh? is she crying''Kumi asked Takamina who was still hugging the crying girl.
''Well yes....because...''Takamina turned her head to where the three girls was standing.''Hm? where are they?''She asked after she saw nothing there.
No one said anything.After that Takamina explained why Yuko was crying.When she was done Yuko had stopped crying and is now eating ice-cream.
At the same time behind a wall nearby them a figure was standing there.The figure smiled and put on a hat.
''It's nice seeing you again''The figure smirked and went away
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Sorry if the chapter is short but I have school tomorrow and need to sleep soon :bored:
I also wonder who the figure is........... hehe i'm not gonna tell you :mon blblbl:
Don't kill me :mon pray2: :mon pray2:
So who do you think the figure is and what does Takabear know about Kumi?
Commento!
Byebye! :byebye:
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your fic so interesting. I'm sorry for only comment your fic after 4 chapter
but I wonder do you want to add more moment of those pairings? :)
thanks for update
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''I'm hungry''Kumi said loudly enough for the whole class to hear.The teacher raised her eyebrow.
''Miss Yagami, You can keep that to yourself.''The teacher said.
''Hm? What did you just say?''Bunker stood up.''Uruseeyo!''Obe shouted at them.
''I'm hungry~~''Kumi whined.
''Miss Yagami and Miss Yamauchi, Can you please sit?''The teacher who was trying to sound calm asked.
''No''
''I'm still hungry''
''I'm going''Mina stood up.
''Excuse me! We are studying right now!''The teacher half yelled.
''So?''Mina asked as she opened the door and went out.While the teacher's face was red from anger.Kato and Ichikawa also stood up from their seats and went out of the classroom.Bunker was still standing while smirking and Kumi was sitting playing cards with herself.
''Heyy~~''Kumi lifted her eyebrow at Bunker.Bunker went to the teacher who was still red.
''I heard you like girls''The girl smirked after she saw her teacher freeze.She looked back at the class and winked, then went out.A girl then stood up.''Tch, the new girls are pretty much awesome''The girl said.She walked to the door.Kumi looked up at he girl.''Nobunaga?''She mumbled.
But the girl heard it.
''My name is Matsui Jurina''The girl said and looked at Kumi with cold eyes.'Eh? isn't that Nobunaga's real name?'She thought but didn't say anything.Jurina went out.
While the forever-frozen-with-red-face teacher was frozen in her spot the others in the class went out.The only person left was Kumi.The teacher went out after she snapped out of her who-knows-what and saw that no one except Kumi was left in the class.
Kumi smirked and looked behind her.''You can come out now''She said.
A blanket-like-thingy was thrown on the floor.''Hee....you knew?The figure asked.
''You now me, 0047''Kumi smirked.
''Hee......I have a name you know''The figure said looking down.Kumi looked out of the window.She sighed and leaned on her chair still looking out of the window.
''But, you know we are forever 0047 and 0046''Kumi said and sighed.The figure also looked out of the window.She nodded and walked to a chair near Kumi.Kumi looked at the figure.The figure was wearing a hoodie and had a book in its hand.
''I wonder what I am''The figure sighed.Kumi stood up and took a few steps near the figure.She putted her hands on both sides of the hoodie and put down the hood.
''You are xxx xxx''Kumi said but the name of the figure was not heard by anyone except them.The figure's eyes widened when she felt something soft on its lips.When Kumi pulled out from the kiss she gave a smile to the figure and whispered something to it.The figure nodded and Kumi walked out of the room.
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''And that's how you........''That's all Nobunaga heard until she dozed off.World: off.Dream land: On.
''Ui!''Ui?
''Tsui''Hm? who's that.
''Matsui!!''
''HAII!!''She stood up from her seat half awake and shouted.The whole class laughed.
''Oh''She bowed to the teacher and took a seat on her chair.Annin who was sitting beside her facepalmed herself mentally.Nobunaga looked at Juri who was sitting in the front.Juri was writing something on a paper.The still half-awake half-asleep Nobunaga looked at the book in front of her.Suddenly a paper was throwed on her.She took the paper and opened it.Annin's curiously was killing her so she put her cheek on Matsui's shoulder.And looked at the paper as Jurina was opened the paper.
Why the hell are you sleeping in class?
Also I have to go and check on Yagi and Mureshige.
And I heard from the girl beside me that Oba's class did something to the teacher like the 16:ers.
-Juri
''Eh? The teacher again?''Annin sighed and looked at Juri.
''Excuse me''Juri looked at the teacher.
''Hai?''The teacher replied.
''May I go to the toilet?''She asked while taking of her glasses.The teacher looked at her, and looked at her, and looked at her, and looked at her until.
''Yes you may go''Juri stood up and went out.Anna and Jurina looked at each other with a :nervous face.
''And after that you....blah blah blah''The teacher continued lecturing the class.After a few minutes Jurina looked at the clock on the wall.She yawned, and put her head on her desk thingy.She looked at Annin who was playing with her fingers.Annin stole a glance at Jurina, and their eyes meet.Nobunaga ginned at her while Anna blushed...............
And the rest of the class went with Nobu starring at Anna and Anna blushing........
Yeah........moving on
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''So you know?''A girl said.
''Yeah''
''How?''
''I have my ways''
The first girl gave her a you-are-kidding-me look.''I'm just kidding''
''I.........''The girl continued.
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Is the chapter short?
Sorry for that :mon sweat:
No really i'm sorry :kneelbow:
I have school and stuff.....yeah
Soo this is chapter.................I.......don't know....... SORRY AGAIN! :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
I don't know what's wrong with me and I think I need to rest...... :on cloudeye:
Soo Byebye! :byebye:
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comment for chapter 4:
hmm...kumi's character....will she actually be the clever and cool type?
who is that figure? hmm...
comment for chapter 5:
haha..all of them seem like they are going to create more troubles in school everyday...haha
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Who is the girl Kuumin kissed????
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Oh man, such troublesome kids. Juri gonna check on them, they are about to get a scolding.. Haha
Hm, is that figure Kanon? I wonder who was talking at the end too???
Cant wait for the next chapter, hopefully some fight goes down
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Interesting.... so Yuko and Haruna don't know each other....
Takamina understands Kumi.... 'Nyaa' language.... how?
Who is the girl with a hat?
All those MG3 prisoners seem to be causing trouble again for the teacher....
Who is this 0047? Kumi is kissing this 0047.... why?
Interesting updates.... Thank you.... can't wait to see more
:wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:
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A figure has walking on the street between two walls.''Why the hell is the meeting in such a place?''She said loudly.
''Because we don't want some idiot to come her and act like you in school''Came a voice.
''Tch,0047, stop scaring the shit out of me''The figure said not exactly feeling scared.
''Hee? THE Kumi feeling scared?''0047 said.
''Oh, shut up''
''Like hell she would''They looked back and saw another girl.When you see her she looks like a princess but when she is mad......you're dead
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''Man class was soooo freaking boring and it's like our third day''Shimazaki said while walking to Yuria.
''Man even the pri---ster's class wasn't that boring''Bunker said and looked around when she saw that every one was giving a DON'T-YOU-EVER-SAY-PRISON look.
Everyone sighed in relief when Bunker said some random name that starts with pri.........I wonder if that's even a name.
''Is there such name as Prister?''Watanabe Milky who had become one of their 'group' member along with Rabutan and Mayu asked.
''Ehh.....err........I.....It's.......''
''Yes there is''Bunker who was trying to find the right words was cut by Maria who lied - or maybe not -.
''Oh....never knew that''Milky said while blushing.
''Hm? Milky? Are you blushing?''Takamina asked.Which led to two smirking girls which is Rabutan and Mayu.
''Yamamoto-san fan much?''Mayu teased.
''Eh?! You what?!!!''Came a voice.Everyone looked at the person who shouted.And it was Yamamoto Sayaka who was talking on the phone.
''Damn you!''She cursed.
''I'll kill you ***********''She started cursing like no tomorrow.
''What's wrong with her?''Mayu said.
''Who would know what she does everyday''Shimada said.
''I know someone who would know what she does everyday''Mayu said and looked at the others.
''Who?''Mureshige asked.
''Her name is Minegishi Minami,Aka the gossip queen.She knows every single thing that happens inside this school and outside it''
''Damn she's like a mouse''Yuko said.
''Excuse me,the only mouse here is her''A girl with a hat and a mask who came out of no where said and pointed at Mayu.
''And you are?''Peace asked.
''You will know soon''The girl said and walked away.
''And that was?''
''Unexpected''
''I've seen her a lot........like a lot.....''Mayu said.She then turned to Rabutan while Rabutan was starring at her.They nodded at each other.
''We are going now,Bye!''Mayu and Rabutan said and Dragged the poor Milky with them.
''Anyway I think I should go now,class is about to start''Maria said and went to her class with Miyu and Shimada.
''What do we have now?''Paru asked Peace who was sitting on her lap.
''History''Peace answered.
''NOOOO!!''
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''Now or not?''
''Soon baby, just relax and watch''
''But-''
''No but's,just watch''
''I wan't to do it too~~''One of the girls whined.
''Shh....''
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''But-''
''It's ok''
''But-''
''No! Marichan and you Tomochin it's ok''
''Really?''
''Yeah''
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''Damn it, this can't be happening''
''Well sorry, it can''A figure wearing black said and then killed the people in the room in a few seconds.
She stuck out her tongue at the dead bodies and went out.
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A figure wearing a hat and a pair of sunglasses was behind a wall panting.She was being chased by a group of 'people'.She painted heavily.She felt something was not right.
She looked beside her and saw one of the 'people' chasing her standing there smirking at her.Her eyes widened.She didn't even have time to scream when the 'person' chasing her hugged her and put it's head on her shoulder and looked at her neck.
''You look awesome,baby''And then she saw nothing but black.
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''They are not there!!!''
''What!?!''
''0047370 and 0047371 are not there''
''DAMN THIS *******''
''We need to find them or else they will kill everyone''
''Remember we need to find them all not only 2 of them''
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''Hee.......this sucks''A girl said while looking at her partner.
''Seriously why do ,0046, always get all the fun?''Her partner asked.
''I want to cry''The first girl said.
''Naw naw.....don't cry baby''0046 said and gave her a kiss.
''You should stop kissing everyone, you're becoming like her''The partner said and pointed behind her.
''Tch, can't she become like me?''Another girl who was behind them asked.She went to 0046 and gave her a kiss, a really deep one,they all knew it didn't mean that she loves them.Because for them,there is no such thing as love
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''Boring''A girl said and stood up from her chair.She took out her phone and walked out of the room.
''Oi! we are still talking miss baka''Another girl said.
''Why am I with you two again?''A girl who was standing,leaning on a wall beside the window asked the girl who is looking outside the window.
''Because i'm awesome~''
''Oh, please''
''Shut up!''
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''Why are you doing this?''The little girl asked the figure in front of her.
''It's our job''
''And also, goodbye!''Sound of someone shooting was heard.The figure smirked and runned away
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Yo! man I love you guys :shy2:
But seriously I don't even know what I am typing :depressed:
Comment the couple you want and I'll see who I'll put with who :kekeke:
MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA........hah....ha......ha......ha? IDK what i'm typing sooo I gotta go!
Byebye! :byebye:
P.S Comment!
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Very nice update there... Thank you
However, I don't quite follow it.... coz' there are lots of saying like "this girl", "little girls", etc.... I don't know who you mean? (may be you are trying to be mysterious about your story...)
Apart from that.... it's good story.... can't wait to see the next one...
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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However, I don't quite follow it.... coz' there are lots of saying like "this girl", "little girls", etc.... I don't know who you mean? (may be you are trying to be mysterious about your story...)
totally agree with you XD
I guess it okay as I believe that maybe the next few chapters I will know who they are..haha
haha.. I want mayu x jurina or mayuki or anna x jurina, asumina, kumi x 0047 ??? XD XD XD :lol: :lol: :lol:
anyway it is up to you to write the couple that you want in your story :lol:
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Your story is great but like the others said its a bit hard to follow without knowing who the people are..
Everything is really interesting though, can't wait to read more of it :twothumbs
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''Guys! there is no food''Yuko said running around the living room.
''WHAT!?!''Takamina started running around too.They both runned around until Nobunaga had enough.She grabbed both of them by their collar.''NO FOOD MEANS NO LIFE!!!''Yuko shouted.
''AND NO LIFE MEAN-MPFHM!!!!''Mureshige throwed a pillow at Takamina to shut her.
''Be quiet ,Yagi, is going to sleep''Juri said from the 'L' couch.
''Is she babysitting ,Yagi?''Acchan asked Shimazaki who had just came back with a glass of juice for Yuria.
''Looks like it''Shimazaki answered.
''Someone need to go and buy some''Juri stated the obvious.
''Who will go?''Miyu asked.
''Janken?''Nanashi said.
''No, that will take forever''Maria said.
''Then...?''Nanashi looked at Juri.
''The youngest will go''Juri said.
''But it's dark outside, i'm scared to go by myself''Kanon who is the youngest said.
''Then Nanashi and Kanon''Nobunaga said.
''But we are both scared to go outside''Mureshige sighed, she was really hungry and those two wont do.
''I'll go with you two''Kumi said and gave them one of her smiles.
''Really?''Both girls asked.
''Yeah!''
''Then just.......just.....GOOO!!!''Mureshige yelled.Her stomach growled, she sighed and turned on the table she was lying on, resting her head on her left hand.
''Ok,ok we are going''Kumi,Nanashi and Kanon put on their sneakers.They went out and started walking to the nearest convenience store.''So what are we gonna buy?''Nanashi asked after a while.
''I don't know, let's just go there and see first''Kanon said.After a while they arrived.They went in, Kanon, went to buy rice,Rina, went to buy some vegetables.While Kumi went to buy meat.
''La~ La~ La~ Meat~ Is~ Good~ For~ You~~!!''Kumi was signing while putting the meat in the basket.Kanon came back with rice,spaghetti,bread and other things.She put them in the basket, then started going to wherever ,Kumi, was going.After a while ,Rina, came back with vegetables and fruits.
''Is this all?''Kumi asked the girls.
''No''
''We need snacks''Kanon and Rina grinned.Then they runned to where all the snacks where.It was like heaven for them.Then they started picking their favorite snacks.After they paid for the food and snacks they walked home.
''I'm hungry''Nanashi whined.
''Are you sure this is the right way?''Kanon asked Kumi who was walking in the front.Kumi didn't say anything but continued walking.Kanon didn't ask anything more and walked behind Kumi with Rina.
After a while Kumi stopped.
''Kumi? Where are we?''Rina asked Kumi who was looking at a building.
''Come''Kumi ordered and went inside the building she was looking at.The two girls followed her and walked in.
They walked inside a hall.Then Kumi stopped again, in front a door.
She knocked and opened the door.''Come''She said again and looked at the girls behind her.
''Where are we?''Kanon asked and hugged Rina.
''You back?''A girl around Kumi's age who was leaning on a wall said.She looked up and meet eyes with Kanon.
''Hee? that's all?''She asked.
''0047 can you be quiet?''
''No''Rina and Kanon looked at Kumi who closed the door and locked it.She looked back at them, and smirked.
''K-Kumi? w-where are we?''Kanon asked.
''0047''Kumi said and went to sit on the only table in the middle of the room.The room was big, really big.And dark, the only light, was the light from the moon.
''Sure......my ladies......you are in the 00's meeting room.
''00?''Kanon looked at the girl.
''You will know soon''
''W-what's you name?''
''Real name, Motomura Aoi but they call me 0047''The girl smiled sweetly at them.She went to the window and opened it.In come another girl, flying.
''Be careful,Churi''Aoi said.
''Churi,you're not a bird you know''Kumi said from the table.
''Shut up''Churi said.A knock a was heard.Aoi took the two poor girls to a couch.While Churi went to open the door that Kumi locked.When she opened the door,she saw.................nothing.She closed the door and looked back.
''You know,you don't need to do this here,Black''Churi said.She looked at the girl who was walking calmly to the table in the middle.But the girl ignored her and opened a book.
After a few minutes giggles was heard.Giggles,yeah.......scary giggles.Kanon hugged Rina and buried her face in Rina's neck.
''Open the door~~''A voice came and then a giggle.Churi sighed, she went to the door,opened the door and let the person in.''Can you please stop giggling? You're scaring my babies''Kumi said with a bored tone.
''Babies?''The person who is a girl giggled again.Kanon looked at the giggling girl everyone in the room could see that her eyes was watering, meanwhile Rina was staring blankly at the floor.
''Churi~ chuuuu~~''A girl runned in the room and started trying kissing the Churi.
''Airi~''Churi grinned and went to the running girl.
''Guys! please! I don't want to see that''Kumi and Black yelled the same word at the same time.
''Looks like someone is jealous''Another girl came in wearing a black hat, a pair of white sneakers, black pants and a white shirt and a black vest.
''Sakura-tan~~''Aoi smiled slowly.Sakura gulped slowly.
''Gekikara can you just.......just.....make them all stop?''Black asked.But they all stopped before Gekikara did anything.......well except biting her nails.
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''When are they coming~~~?!?!''Yuko and Takamina was running around the mansion.
''I need to sleep, so shut up!!!!''Nobunaga shouted from her room upstairs.
''I'm hungryْ''Acchan whined.
''Why am I stuck with those?''Mureshige asked herself.
''What if something bad happened to them?''Annin said.
''We need to go and search for them''
''But it's freaking 3AM''
''But-''
''We will search tomorrow''Juri said.
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''Let's start our meeting I don't have all nigh''Airin said.
''Finally''Sakura sighed in relief.
And then the meeting started.Kanon and Rina listened to everything.Their eyes widened when they listened to the 00's plan.They looked at each other in fear.
''What are we gonna do with them?''Churi asked Kumi.
''You will know later.....''Kumi smirked.
''Damn you're soooooo evil''Aoi said.
''Only for you bebe''Kumi smirked and gave Aoi a kiss on her cheek.
''Hey!''Sakura protested.
''Don't start again!''
''You all know that the police is after us, right?''Black asked.
''Of course''
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Yo! again :hee:
First I need to apologize for the chapter before this :kneelbow:
For everyone who didn't follow this chappie is for you too know who is who.
I need to go now Bye :byebye:
Comment! :mon lurk:
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the story is getting interesting!!!! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
so what is the 00's planning? is kumi one of the prisoner people? :? :? :?
or are they going to hurt takamina they all?? starting to wondering the kumi's past..haha
haha...interesting..please update soon :)
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Eh...what's going on....
Is this fic related to MG1&2.... if yes.... how can Yuko doesn't know Haruna...?
I mean Black and Gekikara are there? and also Kumi's past before prison... is she Dance as in MG1&2?
More and more mysteries are reveled and created.
Great fic... can't wait for more.... Thank you
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I'm a liitle bit confused lol
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''Ugh, why am I here again?''Acchan mumbled as she and the others couldn't find Kumi,Kanon and Rina.
''Relax''Takamina said.
''You are soo gonna get a punishment when we get home''Acchan glared at Takamina.Takamina gulped and looked down.
I know what you are thinking.
'What the hell is that stupid idiot writing?' Right?
Anyway it all started this morning when
________________________________________FLASHBACK___________________________________________________Yeah flashback......
''EVERYONE WAKE UPPPPP!!!!!!!!''Takamina,Yuko and Nobunaga shouted to the sleepyheads.
''Be quiet or I'll fry you alive''Oba Mina said.
''Uruseeyo!''Shimada yelled.
''Takamina I swear you WILL get a punishment later''Acchan said still half awake sitting on the couch.Takamina gulped and starred at the girl lying down on the couch.''Stupid sexy Acchan''She mumbled but unfortunately Yuko heard it.
And then the teasing never took an end.
Until everyone was wake sitting on the floor or the couch.
''We need a plan''Nobunaga said.
''We ain't gonna rob a bank or something''Bunker said and went to the kitchen to get something to eat.
''She's right''Oba said.
''Whatever we will separate in 7 teams.Acchan,Takamina and Yuko in one team.Shimzaki, Kizaki and Miyu in one team.Lemon and Kato, JuriTagi,Mureshige and Oba.Bunker, Abe and Shimada.And lastly me and Anna''Nobunaga grinned when she said Anna's name.
''Just make sure you two wont do 'it' ''Juri smirked at them.Making Annin blush and Nobunaga grin.
''Anyway let's go''The girls went out and started looking for the missing girls.
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(With JuriYagi)
''I don't think we will find them here''Juri said.
''Then where?''Yagi asked.
''Come''Juri started walking followed by Yagi.They walked to a dark place.
''Ehh? Where are we?''Mariya asked.
''Earth''Juri replied witha a cold tone.They walked a little more then they reached a building.Before Yagi could ask more questions she was dragged inside the building.
They walked inside a hall then they went into a room.A big room, Yagi looked at the clock it showed 8pm.
''Where are w-''Yagi's question was cut by a voice.
''Juri! Mariya! help us!!''They both looked at where the voice was coming from.It was a jail in the corner of the room.Inside the jail there was two girls,Kanon and Rina.
''What are you two doing here?''Yagi was about to go to them when a hand stopped her.She looked back and meet Juri's eyes,they looked cold.''Eh?''
''Hee? Got more people?''Aoi who came out of no where with Kumi.
''Tch,you shouldn't open that mouth of yours''Was Juri's reply.
''Kumi? Kanon? Rina?.....Juri what's going on?''The still confused Yagi got dragged inside the jail by Juri.
''Do what's better for you and be quiet''Kumi gave a smirk.
''We are soo gonna be called vampires in the future''Came a voice from behind them.
''It is the future, where the moo-''
''Black, please shut up!''Juri said.
''We don't want to listen to whatever you're reading from that book''Geki who just came in said and giggled after that.Kumi looked at Juri then at the 3 poor girls in the jail.
''Should we.......yeah 'that' and then make them go to the school and.....yeah.......''Airi smirked.
''Should we?''Kumi smirked and went to the jail.She sat down and looked at Kanon.
''Then let's do it now''Kumi smiled, a sweet and dangerous smile.
''With who?''
''With my favorite girl''Kumi looked at Kanon.She opened the jail and took Kanon's hand.She dragged her out and closed the door before anyone of the 2 girls inside would get out.She locked the door and starred at Kanon.Kanon's eyes was only showing fear.
''Ne? Are you mad?''Gekikara giggled.
''Geki~''Black looked at Gekikara making her shut her mouth.Kumi,Juri and Aoi then dragged Kanon to another room.In the room there was chains hanging from the ceiling.In the end of the chains there was a thing you put around your wrist.Kumi and Juri with a little help if Aoi put The metal thingy's around Kanon's wrist.Making her hang.
Kumi then started ripping Kanon's clothes, just the upper part.Showing Kanon's milky and smooth skin.Kumi smirked again.
''Damn she looks soooooo kissable''Aoi smiled.
''You know, that you can just kiss her''Juri said and facepalmed.
''Oh right''Kumi then started kissing Kanon all over her neck.
''Ok, we got it now STOP IT!''Juri and Aoi yelled.
''Sorry''Kumi's smile turned to a dangerous smile.She went to a big box that Aoi was sitting on.Aoi stood up and Kumi opened the box.She took out a whip.
''Kanon~~ enjoy~~''
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''I wonder if that kid is gonna be ok''Churi said.
''Kumi wont do it hard on her tho''
''WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING TO KANON!?!?''Rina shouted.The 00's ignored her.The main door opened and in came Sakura with cakes.She put one of the cakes in the jail and the others on the long table.The others started eating.
While Mariya and Rina was looking at each other in fear.
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While with the girls they went back to the mansion.
''Guys I cant reach Juri or Mariya at all''Yuria said.
''What's going on?''Shimazaki wondered.
''And we have school tomorrow''Shimada said.
''What do we do''Miyu asked.
''We will just say they catched cold or something''Nobunaga said.Everyone sighed, 'what's going on?'Everyone wondered.
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Hey!
How's this chapie?
Need to go and do something so comemeto or else......... :shifty:
No just kidding XD
I need to go now sooo Byebye! :byebye:
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Eh.... Kumi is bad, she's going to whip Kanon...?
Who is this 00 family?
What's going on... I can follow the story easily now but what's going on with the story?
More and more mysteries this story going to be
Thank you for your update....
Can't wait for the next
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''Ugh, why am I here again?''Acchan mumbled as she and the others couldn't find Kumi,Kanon and Rina.
''Relax''Takamina said.
''You are soo gonna get a punishment when we get home''Acchan glared at Takamina.Takamina gulped and looked down.
hmm...this part i don't really understand... XD
anyway, this is awesome!! I really wanted to know what will happen to Kanon! haha
so, will there also have people like kumi and juri who is 00's member in the group?
please update soon :bow: :bow: :bow:
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No one could really sleep that night.What they all wondered is 'what's going on?'.But even thought that no one could do anything because no one knew whats going on.Or so they thought,Kumi and Juri knew..............Hee......... Even I feel sorry for Rina,Kanon and Mariya.
The new day,even thought most all of them was REALLLY tired.........
''EVERYONE WAKE U-AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!''Takamina who slipped on a banana peel.That somehow manged to get there and fell on the floor.
''Shut up!! We are awake''Yelled an angry Mina.
''Uruseeyo!!''Yelled Shimada who manged to get down with the school uniform.''Ugh, foooooood''The still hungry squirrel climbed on a chair and just sat there.
''Guys the school starts in 10 minutes''Miyu said and calmly walked out of the mansion.''OH RIGHT SCHOOL.......EVERYONE RUUUUUNNNN!!!!''Nobunaga started running followed by the others while Miyu and Annin calmly walked.
After 10 minutes they arrived.They looked at the school's clock and saw that they are an hour early.
''Why the **** are we so early?''The poor squirrel cursed.
''Sorry......I thought that it was 7:55 but it is 6:55......hehe......''Takamina hided behind Acchan.She shouldn't have done that.
''Now I know why Annin and Miyu was walking''Yuria said making Paru facepalm.
''Well, there is nothing to do so let's just get in.I heard some girls get her an hour before the school starts and look for ghosts''Nobunaga said and made a fail face.
''Whatever, let's just go in''Mureshige said.They went in and went to Jurina,Anna and Juri's classroom.When they went in they found Kumi,Kanon,Rina,Mariya and Juri inside.
''EH?!? WHERE THE HELL WHERE YOU FIVE?!?''Paru yelled at them.
''Sorry......we......got...l-lost''Kumi said looking down.Yuria patted Haruka's shoulder in order to calm her down.Haruka sighed,
''Well they are back now so we can't do anything''Miyu said.Miyu looked at Juri, their eyes meet.But nothing happened.
''By the way, I heard there is two new girls in this school''Mayu,Rabutan and Milky who came out of no where said.
''WAAHHHH!!''Takamina who just heard a voice behind her yelled.
''Eh? sorry didn't really want to scare you, but I wanted''The Watanabe who was behind them said.
''How did you know that?''Asked Matsui.
''Do you remember the girl I said that knows everything?''
''Yeah?''
''From her, she never attends classes with us''Mayu said.
''Why?''
''No one knows,no one knows the history of this school,no one except her''
''Oh......Hey school starts in 10 minutes let's go to our classes''Maria said.
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Sorry for the short chapter but need to go now
Byebye! :byebye:
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The missing girls are back.... how...?
Are they changed already?
Who are the 2 new student? Geki and Black?
I wonder what's going to happen next....
Can't wait to see the next
Thank you for the update
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Nice update.. hmm..Now I getting curious what had happen to the kanon, rina and mariya? If they are able to go back to school so now they are belong to the 00's members right? :?
Mayu, nice job of scaring takamina..haha :lol:
So is the school history going to related to the 00?? :?
all I can say that I can't wait to read the next update ><
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''My name is Kasai Tomomi, you can call me chiyuu~~''One of the new girls introduced herself.After she said her Chiyuu-thingy made the (almost the whole) class squeal.She bowed and waited for the teacher to tell her where to sit.
''Kasai-san you can sit beside Yamamoto-san''The teacher said.Tomo~mi looked at Sayaka knowing the whole time it is the Yamamoto girl but didn't move.
''Oh, yeah you don't know who she is, Yamamoto-san can you please rise you hand?''The teacher asked Sayanee.Sayaka looked at them and rised her eyebrow.
''Yamamoto can you-''
Before the teacher could continue Kasai was already sitting on her seat.Kumi who was sitting behind Sayaka looked at her.'Something is wrong'She thought and looked around.The teacher was busy reading from some book so she didn't see Kumi,pass a little paper to Kato Rena.Rena opened the little paper and looked at it together with Ichikawa who was sitting beside her.
There is something wrong with that Sayaka girl isn't it?
-Kumi
Kato and Ichikawa looked at Kumi who made a signal with her head for them to pass the paper to Oba.''I bet she is dying of boredom''Kumi mouthed making them giggle a little.They passed the paper to Oba who was sitting in front of them.Kumi was sitting beside Kato and Ichikawa while Oba was in front of them and Bunker was sitting behind Kumi.Kumi made another paper and passed it to Bunker.
She looked at Oba who looked at her and nodded, then at Bunker who also nodded.
''Seems like everyone thinks so''Kumi mumbled.
''Yagami-san!''
''HAI!''Kumi stood up from her seat in a fighting position.
''Did you say something''After knowing it's just the teacher she sat down again.
''I said, Hai?''Kumi replied.The teacher sighed and continued reading that random dark green book.Bunker pet her head on the desk,sighed and looked at the clock.
''Another freaking 20 minutes''She mumbled and sighed
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''Damn it! The teacher was boring as hell''Bunker said and sat down.They where in the school's cafeteria waiting for the 'senpai's' to come.''Mureshige I LOOOOVEEEE YOUUUU and Mariya for killing that loser''Milky hugged them both.Mureshige shoved her away, while Yagi hugged her.
''Hey! eating without is?''Nobunaga grinned.
Annin was walking behind her with a girl, and behind everyone Juri who was wearing a mask.She looked at Kanon,Rina and Mariya.''Who's this?''Paru asked.''Oh, my name is Matsui Rena,you can call me Rena''She bowed slowly.Juri smirked from under the mask,Kumi gave Rena a smile.Kanon,Rina and Mariya was tembling in fear.They all remembered what this girl did with them.
''I-I need to go to the bathroom''She said.Rina,Mariya and Kumi went with her.
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When they went inside one of the bathrooms,Kumi turned to the girls who was now trembling.She took out a whip from inside her uniform.''You know what will happen if you wont to the mission''She said.
The three girls nodded.''Get out you two I need to talk to Kanon''Kumi said.Rina and Mariya went out and went to where the others was.
''You will do a different mission''Kumi said still holding the whip.
''H-hai''
''You will...........'''
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''Is she doing the mission I was talking about?''Gekikara wearing black said.
''She will, soon''Replied Kumi who was also wearing black.They was about to go and hunt down some random people on the street or something.
''Hee.......I just love that girl''Aoi said.
''So all she has to do is to Kill T.........?''
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Haha! Yo man! :mon lol:
If you wonder what Kumi did to Kanon......I'll tell you............
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In one chapter....
So tell me what you think :mon fyeah:
I just love reading you guys's comments :tama-excite:
Byebye! :byebye:
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Wah, its getting so good!
I can't wait till all the mysteries are revealed
Is it Bakamina that they want killed?! WHY? :panic:
Acchan isnt going to be happy, Nobunaga stop Rena and Kumi's evil plans!!!
Looking forward to the next chapter, update soon!!!! :w00t:
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Oh Tomo~mi is here....
Eh... they want to kill T...? Who?
Wondering...
Thank's for the Update
Can't wait to know more
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The girls are now in a black mini bus with Mayu,Rabutan,Milky,Rena and Tomo~mi.I bet you are wondering Why Tomo? Well she goes in class 2A with Oba and the others.So they do get along....yeah....back to whatever I was talking about.Well They all 22 persons was sitting in a really BIG mini bus.The driver was Nobunaga because Takamina and Yuko was to short to drive.They where sitting like this
Nobu Takamina
Yuko Jovi
Bunker Rina
Mariya Juri
Oba Tomo
Shimazaki Yuria
Ichikawa Kato
Rabutan Milky Mayu
Acchan Annin Miyu
Shimada Maria
Kanon Kumi
Well Mayu and Rabutan with their little child(?) Milky was talking about manga/anime.Well Aika and Mayu was talking about manga and stuff while the tired Miyuki was sleeping with her head on Rabutan's shoulder.Acchan and Anna was talking about some fashion things while Miyu was listening to music ignoring the world.Takamina was telling Nobu about some things.Bunker looked at Rina and suddenly asked her why she have a scar in her shoulder.Rina got thet panic-danger moment but answered with.''I don't know never saw this'Which was a lie.'I wonder how many Kanon had'She thought glancing at Kanon who was looking outside the window.
On the other hand Kanon was scared to death, whenever she thought about the mission.Well at least she don't have to kill someone.But she will help with that.Making it easy for the killer to kill the person.She sighed and looked at the person she need to do that on.She sighed again and looked outside the window.'I wonder what Kumi's past is'She though.
After a hour or so they arrived.At the place, it was a hotel near a beach.They took their things and went inside the hotel.They got the key's to their rooms.Mayu,Aika and Milky had to share and Miyu had a room for herself.While the others had to share rooms.Yuko did share room with Tomo.
After that they went down to the beach to swim and sunbath and stuff.Takamina and Yuko was sitting on the sand right beside the water, starring at the water like a cat and a squirrel.
''Takabear? what are you doing?''Atsuko who was the first to put on her bikini on and go to them.She wore a blood red bikini.Takamina was drooling and taking pics.Yuko was still looking at the water like a confused squirrel.
''What wrong with her?''Annin came and pointed at Yuko.
''Who knows what the hell is going on in that squirrel's head''Replied Paru that came with Yuria.They both where wearing a yellow two pieces thingy,Then the others came wearing different bikinis.
''Hey who want to play?''Acchan pointed at the ball she was holding.
''Me!''Some of them said while the others went to the water.Other was sunbathing while Takamina and Yuko was just starring at the water.Paru and Yuria was sitting on the beach/sand.Looking at the others,Then Shimazaki looked at Peace who was between her legs.
''You look hot''She whispered.She could see Kizaki shiver, she smirked.Yuria leaned her body on Haruka's body.She closed her eyes and just enjoyed that moment.
Then four girls came to them.
''YOU!''One of the girls pointed at Yuko.
''Nyannyan~~!!''
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Lol I wonder what's gonna happen with Kojinyan~
Soon everything will be reveled
like Kumi's past. :shy2:
And that means.............one thing..............you will know soon
Sorry if the chap is short but I need to go now have school tomorrow :gyaaah:
I'm seriously gonna burn it or something.
Anyway Byebye! :byebye:
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Comment for chapter 10:
If you wonder what Kumi did to Kanon......I'll tell you............
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In one chapter....
damn you :angry:
hahaha...just kidding :twisted: :lol:
hmmm..more mystery...
so is sayaka know tomo?
so the 00’s group were just a killing machine?
:? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :?
Comment for chapter 11:
After that they went down to the beach to swim and sunbath and stuff.Takamina and Yuko was sitting on the sand right beside the water, starring at the water like a cat and a squirrel.
Does this mean that takabear and yuko sense something wrong or they are just too stun to see the ladies body :lol:
kumi had tortures the kanon, rina and mariya...actually i was expecting more for this part ..hehe
Nice chapter for me XD
Hope that all the mystery will be solve. I will be expecting more for the kumi's past and why it had lead her to become like a killing machine :lol:
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Hehehe... Takamina is actually drolling over Atsuko in her bikini...
Hahaha.... NyanNyan... is here... yeah... Yuko gets to see her darling...
What's happening in Kumi's past?
Who is this person that Kumi cs wants to kill?
More mysteries.... Can't wait to see and find out
Thank you for the update
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''Nyannyan~''
''Get of me! Pervert!''
''Nyaro''Three girls came after Kojima.
''Mari-chan~ Tomochin~ Sayanee~ Help!''
The three girls came and helped the poor Kojima from Yuko who was clinging on her.
''Nyannyan~ Chuuuu~~~''Yuko was now trying to kiss her.But Nobunaga, Paru, Takamina was holding her.
''Stop it you hentai!''Kojima said hugging Mariko.
''Nyannyan~ Don't hate me~~''Yuko looked at Haruna with teary eyes.Her face looked like this :cry: .
''D-don't cry''Kojiharu who is really scared to get someone to cry suddenly hugged the younger girl.Yuko buried her face in Kojiharu's neck.
''It's my first time seeing her cry''Rabutan whispered to Mayu and Mina.
''Me too''They both whispered.
''I'm sorry for the trouble''Takamina bowed to the three girls.
''It's ok we understand, right?''The tallest one looked at the younger girls.
''Yeah, right''
''Eh? What is Saya-chiyuu~ doing here chiyuu~?''Tomo looked at Sayaka.
''Eh? Tomo?''Yamamoto Sayaka looked at the older girl.
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''So she is your mom's ex-boyfriend who was gay and had a boyfriend and that boyfriend's ex was a girl who is now married and had *** with a man when she was 17 and that man's dad's mom's grandson's ex girlfriend's who had cheated on him with a another man and that man is now your mom's boyfriend, am I right?''Juri looked at Sayaka.
''Yeah, like that''
''So basically she is your step sister''Acchan asked.
''Yeah.........''Was the reply that made everyone facepalm except Milky who had dozed out........with Kojiharu.
''You could just say that she is your step sister''Kumi who was trying to sound like someone really not-so-idiotic like she is.
''Kumi, Kumi, Kumi........you shouldn't say that''Kizaki said.
''Look who's talking''Mureshige said.
''But you still didn't say why you are here, Saya-chiyuu~''
Sayaka pointed at Mariko,Tomochin and Kojiharu who was still hugging the still crying Yuko.
''Is here with my friends''Sayanee looked at Milky who had came back to earth and is now getting nosebleed because Sayaka winked at her.
Mayu looked at Rabutan who was standing with a :nervous face.
''I can't get this girl''Rabutan said.
''No one does''Was the reply that came from Mayu.
Making Aika nod.
''Say what are we gonna do with Kumi''Aika whispered.
''I don't know, we are the only ones except Kanon,Mariya and Rina who knows about her and Juri''
''That's the problem''
''I feel really sorry for Kanon, I heard that she got tortured more that the others because she is Kumi's favorite''
Rabutan's eyes widened.
''Really? From who?''
''Miichan''
''Oh........''
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''You have to do it tomorrow night, or else''Kumi looked at Kanon.The poor girl was shaking in fear.
''I............I.............Why are you even doing this?''Kanon manged to ask.
''Because.............''
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Yo man! Lemme just tell you something
Next chapter..............Kumi's past from her POV............
I wonder what's going to happen :kekeke:
Anyway I need to go now! Byebye! :byebye:
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Eh... Kanon is still being tortured by Kumi... why?
I understand the favorite... but there should be a more believable reason, what is it?
Hehehe... the interaction between Haruna and Yuko is so cute...
How are they going to develop?
I can't wait to find out more...
Thank you for this update
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Yo! I'll do this at the end so here is Kumi's past
Enjoy! :)
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________FLASHBACK________
Two girls looking exactly the same was walking home.School has ended and they are going back home.Or so they thought, a few girls -or a gang- came out of no where and was now standing in a circle.In the middle was the two poor girls.
''Oi! Ain't you one of the rapapa's queen's follower?''One of them asked.
''Eh?''The youngest one of the two girls looked at the older one.
''I am her, what do you want?''The older girl asked.
''Tch, we are here to destroy the rapapa''The gang leader said.
''And you are?''The older one asked.
''We are Orange!!''The gang stood there shooting glares at the girls.
''Orange? First time hearing it''Said the older girl.
''Nee-chan what's happening?''They younger girl asked.
''Dance! Listen if you tell us how we can take the top of Rapapa we will let you go''The gang leader said.
''Never!''Dance said.
''Nee-chan?''One of the girls in the gang said smirking.
''Never knew Dance had a little sister''She said again and leaned on her bat.
''You have nothing to do with her! Let her go!''Dance said again standing in a fighting position.She sensed danger, really big.She's in trouble, and the first thing she thought about was her little sister.
Kumi was still a kid, she isn't even in middle school.
The girls in the gang looked at the leader.
''Sure we will let her go, but you will stay here''The leader smirked.
''Kumi go!''Dance looked at her little sister.
''But-''
''Go!''
''But you-''
''JUST GO!!''Not wanting her big sister to be angry at her.So she runned away, she was glancing back sometimes but couldn't see anything.She runned all the way home.When she opened the door, the first thing that welcomed her was blood.Her eyes widened.
''Mom! Dad!''She went to the kitchen.But no one was there, she went to the living room.Nothing was there too, she looked at the stairs that lead to Dance,her and her parents rooms.She couldn't even see the stairs as the blood covered it.She went up, slowly, she looked down at her feet.Blood, blood, and blood that's all she saw.She reached the top of the stairs.She looked at her parents room.
''It's only a joke, don't believe it''She mumbled to herself.
She starred at the door for a few seconds.It took her all her energy to put her hand on the door knob.She pressed the door knob down.Then she pushed the door open.
''M-m-m o-o-om''Her eyes widened.She couldn't believe her eyes.Shoe froze at her spot in front of the door.'No! this isn't happening!!''She thought.
Why? why was this happening to just her.At this day, why her of all the people on the world.She felt something wet on her cheek.She didn't even want to know what it is.
She saw a bloody scene that will not even appear on a movie.In front of her was a room covered with blood.And her mom's head lying on the floor in front of her feet.Her parents was lying lifeless on the floor.And beside the window stood a girl.A girl with short hair, starring at her.She was feeling like the world was laughing at her.
Why? was the only question she wanted to ask.But nothing came out from her mouth.The girl walked to her, she stood in front of her.Kumi starred at the girl.
The girl bent down and gave Kumi a kiss on her forehead.
''Sorry, I had to''The girl said looking at Kumi.
''Why''Kumi manged to say.Her voice was weak, even she barely heard it.
''You will know when you grow up, and it was me who said to the gang to attack you're sister.''The girl said.
''And also, my name is Takahashi Erena''Erena said again.She then walked to the window, she jumped out.While Kumi just starred into nothing.Then it came.
''Dance''She mumbled.She dragged her feet out and went to where her big sister was.She started running, when she arrived she didn't see anyone from the gang.But instead she saw her sister on the ground.She runned to where her sister was.
''Nee-chan!''She yelled as tears was streaming down.She felt a hand on her wet cheek.
''D-d-don't I-I d-don't w-want to see m-my l-little b-baby cry''Dance said.She was really weak, she just starred at her little sister who was crying.
''Nee-chan mom a-and-''
''I know''Dance said.
''D-don't cry''Dance said.Her eyes was getting really heavy.She feelt her eyes close.
''Nee-chan!''She heard her sisters voice call.
''Nee-chan''She heard it.She then started fleeing weird.
''Nee-chan''She was barely hearing it anymore.Till she saw nothing but black.
On the other hand.Kumi, the poor Kumi was still in shook.Her parents are dead, her sister is dead.And all happened at the same day.Why?!?!
She didn't know what to do.She just stood there beside the lifeless body crying her heart out.
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That was the biggest shook for Kanon.She never knew that Kumi's past was this sad.
She couldn't feel what Kumi is feeling.But If it was her she wouldn't even want to live anymore.She quickly gave Kumi a comforting hug.A hug, Kumi looked shocked at Kanon.She never knew that she will feel a hug again.No one has ever hugged her after when her family died.
''But why do you want to kill Takamina?''Kanon asked after a while still hugging the now-has-calmed-down Kumi.
''Later I found out that Erena is Takamina's sister''Kumi answered.
''But why me?''Kanon asked.
''I just took you by chance''Kumi lied.After that no one said something more.They just enjoyed the hug, they never really wanted to end it.But of course they need to do the plan.
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Mwahahahahah!!!!! *Evil grin*
How do you feel right now? Tell me what you think
And sorry for not updating those last days.I just started a new fic and just focused on it.
So yeah...........I need to go now! *waving*
Byebye! :byebye:
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Thank you for the update...
At last about Kumi's past...
Ah... so the one that she wants to kill is Takamina...
And Erena is the one that start all the killing of Kumi's family...
And why did Kumi get send into the prison hope?
If there is a bit of relation between Rappappa... so there is a relation with MG1&2 with this fic.
I thought Minami (Atsuko's friend died) died in MG1 so how is this Minami related to that Minami... Erena's sister?
Still unanswered... more mystery to solve...
I feel sorry for Kumi to lose all her family at such a young age....
What's going to happen with Takamina....?
Wondering what's happening next... can't wait
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Comment for Chapter 12:
So she is your mom's ex-boyfriend who was gay and had a boyfriend and that boyfriend's ex was a girl who is now married and had *** with a man when she was 17 and that man's dad's mom's grandson's ex girlfriend's who had cheated on him with a another man and that man is now your mom's boyfriend, am I right?''Juri looked at Sayaka.
All I can comment for this is that this is so complicated. haha...
From the chapter, can I conclude that Mayu, Aki and Rubutan actually know all the action that Kumi had done?
Comment for Chapter 13:
For the ending part that about Konan learn about the Kumi's past is not clear. It like she suddenly knew it...hmm...from what I had finally understand I think it is Kumi told Konan about her past.. hehe
From what I remember, Takamina know that Kumi wanted to kill her right?
Nice updated for the Kumi's past :)
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This is the last chapter................don't kill me an I hope you enjoy!!
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''Takamina-san? C-can I talk to you?''Kanon asked Takamina who was standing on an edge of a cliff looking at the sea.She turned back looking at Kanon who was standing a few meters from her.
''Sure!''Takamina said.
Kanon took a few steps, she stopped after she took a few steps.
''I...........I...........I'm sorry''Kanon bowed.
''E-eh? why?''Takamina looked at her confused.
''Look who we have here~~''Came a voice.Takamina looked to where the voice came from.In front of her stood Aoi and Gekikara(Rena).
Her eyes widened.
Then Geki's mad giggle started.''Ne, are you mad?''She asked and bit her nails.
''W-who are you? Kanon what's all this?''The confused Takamina asked Kanon who was looking down.
''You shouldn't ask her, you should ask me''Came a familiar voice.
''Kumi''Takamina didn't even need to look up to know who the person is.
''I should have known''
''And now you know''Kumi smirked.
''Why do you keep wanting to revenge?''Takamina asked calmly.
''DO YOU EVEN KNOW WHAT SEEING YOUR WHOLE FAMILY DIE IN FRONT OF YOU?!?!''Kumi shouted at her while tears was falling down from her eyes to her cheeks.
''I didn't do it''Takamina said.
''Maybe, but you're sister is going to know how I felt''Kumi said but with a calm voice as Black who was now beside Kumi.
Takamina looked at Kanon then Kumi then the others.
''I knew it......the whole time''Takamna confessed.
''I know, and it's your fault that you didn't stop me''Kumi smirked.She had a hand behind her back.She was holing a gun with it.She glanced at her gun.It was a silver gun with her number '0047' inscribed on it.
''Now, Takamina enjoy your death''Kumi smirked and pointed her gun at Takamina.
Takamina didn't move.She closed her eyes knowing that she will feel the feeling again.That feeling, when someone shoots you.Kumi pulled the trigger.
Takamina who had closed her eyes felt it.She let out a loud scream.'I think I'll die before I confess to Acchan'She thought.She opened her eyes and looked at her arm.She looked at the new wound.It was bleeding, she put her hand on it trying to make the blood stop.The others who heard the scream had ran all the way from the Hotel to the beach - or the cliff -.
''TAKAMINA!!''Acchan shouted and ran to Takamina.
''What happened? Who did this to you?''Acchan didn't stop her questions.
''Seems like I missed''Kumi pouted.
The girls all looked at Kumi.''WHAT?!''They didn't understand.
''What do you mean by what? I shoot Takaidiot.And I missed''Kumi said simply.
''Kumi why?!''Nobunaga shouted at her.
''Oh....why....? Ask Kanon''Kumi smirked.
''Takamina''She said knowing that Takamina will understand her.
Takamina looked at Acchan.
''Acchan, gomen''She said looking down as tears was falling down.She pushed Acchan and stood on the edge of the cliff again.
''Acchan........I..........I....I LOVE YOU!''She shouted.Kumi then started running to Takamina.Then she pushed Takamina.But Takamina grabbed Kumi's sleeve.So they both fell, down from the cliff.They both heard the girls shout.
As they where falling down Kumi looked at Takamina.
''Gomen''Kumi mumbled.Then.................
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''TAAAAAAAAAAAKAAAAAAAAMINAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!'''
Kanon's legs was giving up.She fell down on her knees.Acchan looked back at Kanon.
''KANON WHY?! KANON!!! TELL ME!!!! NOW!!!!!!!''She shouted.Annin,Yuria and Shimazaki was holding her from doing anything stupid.
''Kanon.......please.............why?''Acchan was now crying.
''I..........had........''Kanon manged to say after a while.
''S-she s-said y-y-you a-all or Ta-Takamina-s-san''Kanon said.
Yuria went to the poor little girl and hugged her.''I'm really sorry b-but your life.........''
''Shhh.......we know''Yuria stopped the girl from saying anything more.She just hugged the girl.
''Hee? They forgot us?''Aoi asked.
''Let's go..........''Airi said.They all started running away all except Juri.She glanced at the girls who was now in the middle of a group hug.She saw Yagi look at her.Their eyes meet, she froze.'Now I know what Kumi meant by ''I feel like she is looking at my soul'' ' She turned around and went with the others 00 members.
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Where am I? Wait? Who am I? And who is this?
The girl looked around.But all she could see was blurred.She closed her eyes.'And why am I here?'She thought.
''Hey! Wake up, now tell me, what's your name?''A girl asked.
''I.....my......name.............I......don't know''The girl looked at the other girl.
The other girl sighed.
''Guess there is no point''Then another girl came into the white room.
''She's awake?''The girl who just came in asked the second girl.
''Mm, and she can't remember her name''
The first girl looked at the two other girls.She then looked around,''Where the hell am I?'
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Ne, as I said........the last chapter...........
I wonder what happened to Kumi and Takababy
now........I wonder if I should make a MG S 2 :D
Should I?
Commento!
Now byebye! :byebye:
P.S don't kill me pleaseee :kneelbow:
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now........I wonder if I should make a MG S 2
Should I?
YES YOU SHOULD!! haha :)
Nice update for the scene of kumii taking revenge on takamina. Actually I hope that this will be a super long chapter as you had mention that it is last chapter :'(
P.S don't kill me pleaseee
How can I don't kill you when you had left a mystery behind... haha (joking)
Please make MG S2 soon... :)
(By the way, please also update your other fic soon, I like your AKB high school project! and AKB48 family dabbles :) Just that I am quite lazy to comment, usually I prefer to be silent reader and mostly the comment I post is please update soon as there are fanfic seem like already dead :( )
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Eh... I understand the revenge and everything..
But that how 'Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)' finish?
It's not finish yet.... who is this person at the last paragraph...?
Who will survive? Kumi? Takamina? or Both?
There is still more mystery...
Thank you for the update
I hope you can make a sequel for this story
And Yes, please make MG2 Season 2 too
Thank you
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