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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #20 on: February 02, 2013, 05:54:18 AM »
 Your story is great but like the others said its a bit hard to follow without knowing who the people are..

Everything is really interesting though, can't wait to read more of it  :twothumbs

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #21 on: February 02, 2013, 05:58:39 PM »
''Guys! there is no food''Yuko said running around the living room.
''WHAT!?!''Takamina started running around too.They both runned around until Nobunaga had enough.She grabbed both of them by their collar.''NO FOOD MEANS NO LIFE!!!''Yuko shouted.
''AND NO LIFE MEAN-MPFHM!!!!''Mureshige throwed a pillow at Takamina to shut her.
''Be quiet ,Yagi, is going to sleep''Juri said from the 'L' couch.
''Is she babysitting ,Yagi?''Acchan asked Shimazaki who had just came back with a glass of juice for Yuria.
''Looks like it''Shimazaki answered.


''Someone need to go and buy some''Juri stated the obvious.
''Who will go?''Miyu asked.
''Janken?''Nanashi said.
''No, that will take forever''Maria said.
''Then...?''Nanashi looked at Juri.
''The youngest will go''Juri said.
''But it's dark outside, i'm scared to go by myself''Kanon who is the youngest said.
''Then Nanashi and Kanon''Nobunaga said.
''But we are both scared to go outside''Mureshige sighed, she was really hungry and those two wont do.
''I'll go with you two''Kumi said and gave them one of her smiles.
''Really?''Both girls asked.
''Yeah!''

''Then just.......just.....GOOO!!!''Mureshige yelled.Her stomach growled, she sighed and turned on the table she was lying on, resting her head on her left hand.

''Ok,ok we are going''Kumi,Nanashi and Kanon put on their sneakers.They went out and started walking to the nearest convenience store.''So what are we gonna buy?''Nanashi asked after a while.
''I don't know, let's just go there and see first''Kanon said.After a while they arrived.They went in, Kanon, went to buy rice,Rina, went to buy some vegetables.While Kumi went to buy meat.

''La~ La~ La~ Meat~ Is~ Good~  For~ You~~!!''Kumi was signing while putting the meat in the basket.Kanon came back with rice,spaghetti,bread and other things.She put them in the basket, then started going to wherever ,Kumi, was going.After a while ,Rina, came back with vegetables and fruits.

''Is this all?''Kumi asked the girls.
''No''
''We need snacks''Kanon and Rina grinned.Then they runned to where all the snacks where.It was like heaven for them.Then they started picking their favorite snacks.After they paid for the food and snacks they walked home.

''I'm hungry''Nanashi whined.
''Are you sure this is the right way?''Kanon asked Kumi who was walking in the front.Kumi didn't say anything but continued walking.Kanon didn't ask anything more and walked behind Kumi with Rina.

After a while Kumi stopped.
''Kumi? Where are we?''Rina asked Kumi who was looking at a building.
''Come''Kumi ordered and went inside the building she was looking at.The two girls followed her and walked in.
They walked inside a hall.Then Kumi stopped again, in front a door.

She knocked and opened the door.''Come''She said again and looked at the girls behind her.
''Where are we?''Kanon asked and hugged Rina.
''You back?''A girl around Kumi's age who was leaning on a wall said.She looked up and meet eyes with Kanon.
''Hee? that's all?''She asked.
''0047 can you be quiet?''
''No''Rina and Kanon looked at Kumi who closed the door and locked it.She looked back at them, and smirked.

''K-Kumi? w-where are we?''Kanon asked.
''0047''Kumi said and went to sit on the only table in the middle of the room.The room was big, really big.And dark, the only light, was the light from the moon.

''Sure......my ladies......you are in the 00's meeting room.
''00?''Kanon looked at the girl.
''You will know soon''
''W-what's you name?''
''Real name, Motomura Aoi but they call me 0047''The girl smiled sweetly at them.She went to the window and opened it.In come another girl, flying.
''Be careful,Churi''Aoi said.
''Churi,you're not a bird you know''Kumi said from the table.
''Shut up''Churi said.A knock a was heard.Aoi took the two poor girls to a couch.While Churi went to open the door that Kumi locked.When she opened the door,she saw.................nothing.She closed the door and looked back.
''You know,you don't need to do this here,Black''Churi said.She looked at the girl who was walking calmly to the table in the middle.But the girl ignored her and opened a book.


After a few minutes giggles was heard.Giggles,yeah.......scary giggles.Kanon hugged Rina and buried her face in Rina's neck.
''Open the door~~''A voice came and then a giggle.Churi sighed, she went to the door,opened the door and let the person in.''Can you please stop giggling? You're scaring my babies''Kumi said with a bored tone.
''Babies?''The person who is a girl giggled again.Kanon looked at the giggling girl everyone in the room could see that her eyes was watering, meanwhile Rina was staring blankly at the floor.

''Churi~ chuuuu~~''A girl runned in the room and started trying kissing the Churi.
''Airi~''Churi grinned and went to the running girl.
''Guys! please! I don't want to see that''Kumi and Black yelled the same word at the same time.
''Looks like someone is jealous''Another girl came in wearing a black hat, a pair of white sneakers, black pants and a white shirt and a black vest.
''Sakura-tan~~''Aoi smiled slowly.Sakura gulped slowly.

''Gekikara can you just.......just.....make them all stop?''Black asked.But they all stopped before Gekikara did anything.......well except biting her nails.


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''When are they coming~~~?!?!''Yuko and Takamina was running around the mansion.
''I need to sleep, so shut up!!!!''Nobunaga shouted from her room upstairs.
''I'm hungryْ''Acchan whined.
''Why am I stuck with those?''Mureshige asked herself.
''What if something bad happened to them?''Annin said.
''We need to go and search for them''
''But it's freaking 3AM''
''But-''
''We will search tomorrow''Juri said.



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''Let's start our meeting I don't have all nigh''Airin said.
''Finally''Sakura sighed in relief.


And then the meeting started.Kanon and Rina listened to everything.Their eyes widened when they listened to the 00's plan.They looked at each other in fear.

''What are we gonna do with them?''Churi asked Kumi.
''You will know later.....''Kumi smirked.
''Damn you're soooooo evil''Aoi said.
''Only for you bebe''Kumi smirked and gave Aoi a kiss on her cheek.
''Hey!''Sakura protested.
''Don't start again!''
''You all know that the police is after us, right?''Black asked.
''Of course''



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Yo! again  :hee:

First I need to apologize  for the chapter before this :kneelbow:

For everyone who didn't follow this chappie is for you too know who is who.

I need to go now Bye  :byebye:

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« Last Edit: February 03, 2013, 06:19:24 PM by K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS »

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #22 on: February 02, 2013, 06:36:48 PM »
the story is getting interesting!!!!  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

so what is the 00's planning? is kumi one of the prisoner people?   :? :? :?

or are they going to hurt takamina they all?? starting to wondering the kumi's past..haha

haha...interesting..please update soon :)
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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #23 on: February 03, 2013, 12:46:16 AM »
Eh...what's going on....

Is this fic related to MG1&2.... if yes.... how can Yuko doesn't know Haruna...?

I mean Black and Gekikara are there? and also Kumi's past before prison... is she Dance as in MG1&2?

More and more mysteries are reveled and created.

Great fic... can't wait for more.... Thank you

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #24 on: February 03, 2013, 04:49:26 AM »
I'm a liitle bit confused lol

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #25 on: February 03, 2013, 01:20:46 PM »
''Ugh, why am I here again?''Acchan mumbled as she and the others couldn't find Kumi,Kanon and Rina.
''Relax''Takamina said.
''You are soo gonna get a punishment when we get home''Acchan glared at Takamina.Takamina gulped and looked down.

I know what you are thinking.
'What the hell is that stupid idiot writing?' Right?
Anyway it all started this morning when


________________________________________FLASHBACK___________________________________________________Yeah flashback......


''EVERYONE WAKE UPPPPP!!!!!!!!''Takamina,Yuko and Nobunaga shouted to the sleepyheads.
''Be quiet or I'll fry you alive''Oba Mina said.
''Uruseeyo!''Shimada yelled.
''Takamina I swear you WILL get a punishment later''Acchan said still half awake sitting on the couch.Takamina gulped and starred at the girl lying down on the couch.''Stupid sexy Acchan''She mumbled but unfortunately Yuko heard it.
And then the teasing never took an end.

Until everyone was wake sitting on the floor or the couch.
''We need a plan''Nobunaga said.
''We ain't gonna rob a bank or something''Bunker said and went to the kitchen to get something to eat.
''She's right''Oba said.
''Whatever we will separate in 7 teams.Acchan,Takamina and Yuko in one team.Shimzaki, Kizaki and Miyu in one team.Lemon and Kato, JuriTagi,Mureshige and Oba.Bunker, Abe and Shimada.And lastly me and Anna''Nobunaga grinned when she said Anna's name.

''Just make sure you two wont do 'it' ''Juri smirked at them.Making Annin blush and Nobunaga grin.
''Anyway let's go''The girls went out and started looking for the missing girls.


_________________________________END OF DA FLASHBACKU :P_________________________________________

(With JuriYagi)

''I don't think we will find them here''Juri said.
''Then where?''Yagi asked.
''Come''Juri started walking followed by Yagi.They walked to a dark place.
''Ehh? Where are we?''Mariya asked.
''Earth''Juri replied witha a cold tone.They walked a little more then they reached a building.Before Yagi could ask more questions she was dragged inside the building.
They walked inside a hall then they went into a room.A big room, Yagi looked at the clock it showed 8pm.
''Where are w-''Yagi's question was cut by a voice.
''Juri! Mariya! help us!!''They both looked at where the voice was coming from.It was a jail in the corner of the room.Inside the jail there was two girls,Kanon and Rina.

''What are you two doing here?''Yagi was about to go to them when a hand stopped her.She looked back and meet Juri's eyes,they looked cold.''Eh?''

''Hee? Got more people?''Aoi who came out of no where with Kumi.
''Tch,you shouldn't open that mouth of yours''Was Juri's reply.
''Kumi? Kanon? Rina?.....Juri what's going on?''The still confused Yagi got dragged inside the jail by Juri.
''Do what's better for you and be quiet''Kumi gave a smirk.

''We are soo gonna be called vampires in the future''Came a voice from behind them.
''It is the future, where the moo-''
''Black, please shut up!''Juri said.
''We don't want to listen to whatever you're reading from that book''Geki who just came in said and giggled after that.Kumi looked at Juri then at the 3 poor girls in the jail.

''Should we.......yeah 'that' and then make them go to the school and.....yeah.......''Airi smirked.
''Should we?''Kumi smirked and went to the jail.She sat down and looked at Kanon.
''Then let's do it now''Kumi smiled, a sweet and dangerous smile.
''With who?''

''With my favorite girl''Kumi looked at Kanon.She opened the jail and took Kanon's hand.She dragged her out and closed the door before anyone of the 2 girls inside would get out.She locked the door and starred at Kanon.Kanon's eyes was only showing fear.

''Ne? Are you mad?''Gekikara giggled.
''Geki~''Black looked at Gekikara making her shut her mouth.Kumi,Juri and Aoi then dragged Kanon to another room.In the room there was chains hanging from the ceiling.In the end of the chains there was a thing you put around your wrist.Kumi and Juri with a little help if Aoi put The metal thingy's around Kanon's wrist.Making her hang.

Kumi then started ripping Kanon's clothes, just the upper part.Showing Kanon's milky and smooth skin.Kumi smirked again.
''Damn she looks soooooo kissable''Aoi smiled.

''You know, that you can just kiss her''Juri said and facepalmed.
''Oh right''Kumi then started kissing Kanon all over her neck.
''Ok, we got it now STOP IT!''Juri and Aoi yelled.
''Sorry''Kumi's smile turned to a dangerous smile.She went to a big box that Aoi was sitting on.Aoi stood up and Kumi opened the box.She took out a whip.

''Kanon~~ enjoy~~''


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''I wonder if that kid is gonna be ok''Churi said.
''Kumi wont do it hard on her tho''
''WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING TO KANON!?!?''Rina shouted.The 00's ignored her.The main door opened and in came Sakura with cakes.She put one of the cakes in the jail and the others on the long table.The others started eating.
While Mariya and Rina was looking at each other in fear.



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While with the girls they went back to the mansion.
''Guys I cant reach Juri or Mariya at all''Yuria said.
''What's going on?''Shimazaki wondered.
''And we have school tomorrow''Shimada said.
''What do we do''Miyu asked.
''We will just say they catched cold or something''Nobunaga said.Everyone sighed, 'what's going on?'Everyone wondered.



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Hey!

How's this chapie?

Need to go and do something so comemeto or else......... :shifty:

No just kidding  XD

I need to go now sooo Byebye!  :byebye:

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #26 on: February 03, 2013, 01:29:47 PM »
Eh.... Kumi is bad, she's going to whip Kanon...?

Who is this 00 family?

What's going on... I can follow the story easily now but what's going on with the story?

More and more mysteries this story going to be

Thank you for your update....

Can't wait for the next

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #27 on: February 03, 2013, 04:15:40 PM »
 
''Ugh, why am I here again?''Acchan mumbled as she and the others couldn't find Kumi,Kanon and Rina.
''Relax''Takamina said.
''You are soo gonna get a punishment when we get home''Acchan glared at Takamina.Takamina gulped and looked down.

hmm...this part i don't really understand...  XD

anyway, this is awesome!! I really wanted to know what will happen to Kanon! haha

so, will there also have people like kumi and juri who is 00's member in the group?

please update soon  :bow: :bow: :bow:
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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #28 on: February 04, 2013, 06:59:52 PM »
No one could really sleep that night.What they all wondered is 'what's going on?'.But even thought that no one could do anything because no one knew whats going on.Or so they thought,Kumi and Juri knew..............Hee......... Even I feel sorry for Rina,Kanon and Mariya.
The new day,even thought most all of them was REALLLY tired.........

''EVERYONE WAKE U-AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!''Takamina who slipped on a banana peel.That somehow manged to get there and fell on the floor.

''Shut up!! We are awake''Yelled an angry Mina.
''Uruseeyo!!''Yelled Shimada who manged to get down with the school uniform.''Ugh, foooooood''The still hungry squirrel climbed on a chair and just sat there.

''Guys the school starts in 10 minutes''Miyu said and calmly walked out of the mansion.''OH RIGHT SCHOOL.......EVERYONE RUUUUUNNNN!!!!''Nobunaga started running followed by the others while Miyu and Annin calmly walked.


After 10 minutes they arrived.They looked at the school's clock and saw that they are an hour early.
''Why the **** are we so early?''The poor squirrel cursed.
''Sorry......I thought that it was 7:55 but it is 6:55......hehe......''Takamina hided behind Acchan.She shouldn't have done that.
''Now I know why Annin and Miyu was walking''Yuria said making Paru facepalm.
''Well, there is nothing to do so let's just get in.I heard some girls get her an hour before the school starts and look for ghosts''Nobunaga said and made a fail face.

''Whatever, let's just go in''Mureshige said.They went in and went to Jurina,Anna and Juri's classroom.When they went in they found Kumi,Kanon,Rina,Mariya and Juri inside.

''EH?!? WHERE THE HELL WHERE YOU FIVE?!?''Paru yelled at them.
''Sorry......we......got...l-lost''Kumi said looking down.Yuria patted Haruka's shoulder in order to calm her down.Haruka sighed,
''Well they are back now so we can't do anything''Miyu said.Miyu looked at Juri, their eyes meet.But nothing happened.
''By the way, I heard there is two new girls in this school''Mayu,Rabutan and Milky who came out of no where said.

''WAAHHHH!!''Takamina who just heard a voice behind her yelled.
''Eh? sorry didn't really want to scare you, but I wanted''The Watanabe who was behind them said.
''How did you know that?''Asked Matsui.
''Do you remember the girl I said that knows everything?''
''Yeah?''
''From her, she never attends classes with us''Mayu said.
''Why?''
''No one knows,no one knows the history of this school,no one except her''

''Oh......Hey school starts in 10 minutes let's go to our classes''Maria said.



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Sorry for the short chapter but need to go now

Byebye!  :byebye:

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #29 on: February 04, 2013, 10:44:32 PM »
The missing girls are back.... how...?

Are they changed already?

Who are the 2 new student? Geki and Black?

I wonder what's going to happen next....

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the update

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #30 on: February 05, 2013, 09:15:14 AM »
Nice update.. hmm..Now I getting curious what had happen to the kanon, rina and mariya? If they are able to go back to school so now they are belong to the 00's members right?  :?

Mayu, nice job of scaring takamina..haha   :lol:

So is the school history going to related to the 00??  :?

all I can say that I can't wait to read the next update ><

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #31 on: February 05, 2013, 04:44:19 PM »
''My name is Kasai Tomomi, you can call me chiyuu~~''One of the new girls introduced herself.After she said her Chiyuu-thingy made the (almost the whole) class squeal.She bowed and waited for the teacher to tell her where to sit.

''Kasai-san you can sit beside Yamamoto-san''The teacher said.Tomo~mi looked at Sayaka knowing the whole time it is the Yamamoto girl but didn't move.
''Oh, yeah you don't know who she is, Yamamoto-san can you please rise you hand?''The teacher asked Sayanee.Sayaka looked at them and rised her eyebrow.
''Yamamoto can you-''
Before the teacher could continue Kasai was already sitting on her seat.Kumi who was sitting behind Sayaka looked at her.'Something is wrong'She thought and looked around.The teacher was busy reading from some book so she didn't see Kumi,pass a little paper to Kato Rena.Rena opened the little paper and looked at it together with Ichikawa who was sitting beside her.

There is something wrong with that Sayaka girl isn't it?

                                                                                     
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Kato and Ichikawa looked at Kumi who made a signal with her head for them to pass the paper to Oba.''I bet she is dying of boredom''Kumi mouthed making them giggle a little.They passed the paper to Oba who was sitting in front of them.Kumi was sitting beside Kato and Ichikawa while Oba was in front of them and Bunker was sitting behind Kumi.Kumi made another paper and passed it to Bunker.
She looked at Oba who looked at her and nodded, then at Bunker who also nodded.

''Seems like everyone thinks so''Kumi mumbled.
''Yagami-san!''
''HAI!''Kumi stood up from her seat in a fighting position.
''Did you say something''After knowing it's just the teacher she sat down again.
''I said, Hai?''Kumi replied.The teacher sighed and continued reading that random dark green book.Bunker pet her head on the desk,sighed and looked at the clock.
''Another freaking 20 minutes''She mumbled and sighed


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''Damn it! The teacher was boring as hell''Bunker said and sat down.They where in the school's cafeteria waiting for the 'senpai's' to come.''Mureshige I LOOOOVEEEE YOUUUU and Mariya for killing that loser''Milky hugged them both.Mureshige shoved her away, while Yagi hugged her.

''Hey! eating without is?''Nobunaga grinned.
Annin was walking behind her with a girl, and behind everyone Juri who was wearing a mask.She looked at Kanon,Rina and Mariya.''Who's this?''Paru asked.''Oh, my name is Matsui Rena,you can call me Rena''She bowed slowly.Juri smirked from under the mask,Kumi gave Rena a smile.Kanon,Rina and Mariya was tembling in fear.They all remembered what this girl did with them.

''I-I need to go to the bathroom''She said.Rina,Mariya and Kumi went with her.


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When they went inside one of the bathrooms,Kumi turned to the girls who was now trembling.She took out a whip from inside her uniform.''You know what will happen if you wont to the mission''She said.

The three girls nodded.''Get out you two I need to talk to Kanon''Kumi said.Rina and Mariya went out and went to where the others was.

''You will do a different mission''Kumi said still holding the whip.
''H-hai''
''You will...........'''


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''Is she doing the mission I was talking about?''Gekikara wearing black said.
''She will, soon''Replied Kumi who was also wearing black.They was about to go and hunt down some random people on the street or something.
''Hee.......I just love that girl''Aoi said.
''So all she has to do is to Kill T.........?''


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Haha! Yo man!  :mon lol:

If you wonder what Kumi did to Kanon......I'll tell you............


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In one chapter....


So tell me what you think  :mon fyeah:

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #32 on: February 05, 2013, 08:08:56 PM »
Wah, its getting so good!

I can't wait till all the mysteries are revealed

Is it Bakamina that they want killed?! WHY?  :panic:

Acchan isnt going to be happy, Nobunaga stop Rena and Kumi's evil plans!!!

Looking forward to the next chapter, update soon!!!!  :w00t:


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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #33 on: February 05, 2013, 08:19:15 PM »
Oh Tomo~mi is here....

Eh... they want to kill T...? Who?

Wondering...

Thank's for the Update

Can't wait to know more

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #34 on: February 06, 2013, 09:13:52 PM »
The girls are now in a black mini bus with Mayu,Rabutan,Milky,Rena and Tomo~mi.I bet you are wondering Why Tomo? Well she goes in class 2A with Oba and the others.So they do get along....yeah....back to whatever I was talking about.Well They all 22 persons was sitting in a really BIG mini bus.The driver was Nobunaga because Takamina and Yuko was to short to drive.They where sitting like this


Nobu                Takamina

Yuko                 Jovi

Bunker             Rina   

Mariya               Juri

Oba                 Tomo

Shimazaki        Yuria

Ichikawa          Kato           

Rabutan    Milky     Mayu

Acchan      Annin     Miyu

Shimada         Maria

Kanon            Kumi



Well Mayu and Rabutan with their little child(?) Milky was talking about manga/anime.Well Aika and Mayu was talking about manga and stuff while the tired Miyuki was sleeping with her head on Rabutan's shoulder.Acchan and Anna was talking about some fashion things while Miyu was listening to music ignoring the world.Takamina was telling Nobu about some things.Bunker looked at Rina and suddenly asked her why she have a scar in her shoulder.Rina got thet panic-danger moment but answered with.''I don't know never saw this'Which was a lie.'I wonder how many Kanon had'She thought glancing at Kanon who was looking outside the window.


On the other hand Kanon was scared to death, whenever she thought about the mission.Well at least she don't have to kill someone.But she will help with that.Making it easy for the killer to kill the person.She sighed and looked at the person she need to do that on.She sighed again and looked outside the window.'I wonder what Kumi's past is'She though.

After a hour or so they arrived.At the place, it was a hotel near a beach.They took their things and went inside the hotel.They got the key's to their rooms.Mayu,Aika and Milky had to share and Miyu had a room for herself.While the others had to share rooms.Yuko did share room with Tomo.



After that they went down to the beach to swim and sunbath and stuff.Takamina and Yuko was sitting on the sand right beside the water, starring at the water like a cat and a squirrel.

''Takabear? what are you doing?''Atsuko who was the first to put on her bikini on and go to them.She wore a blood red bikini.Takamina was drooling and taking pics.Yuko was still looking at the water like a confused squirrel.

''What wrong with her?''Annin came and pointed at Yuko.
''Who knows what the hell is going on in that squirrel's head''Replied Paru that came with Yuria.They both where wearing a yellow two pieces thingy,Then the others came wearing different bikinis.


''Hey who want to play?''Acchan pointed at the ball she was holding.
''Me!''Some of them said while the others went to the water.Other was sunbathing while Takamina and Yuko was just starring at the water.Paru and Yuria was sitting on the beach/sand.Looking at the others,Then Shimazaki looked at Peace who was between her legs.

''You look hot''She whispered.She could see Kizaki shiver, she smirked.Yuria leaned her body on Haruka's body.She closed her eyes and just enjoyed that moment.

Then four girls came to them.

''YOU!''One of the girls pointed at Yuko.
''Nyannyan~~!!''



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Lol I wonder what's gonna happen with Kojinyan~

Soon everything will be reveled

like Kumi's past.  :shy2:

And that means.............one thing..............you will know soon

Sorry if the chap is short but I need to go now have school tomorrow  :gyaaah:

I'm seriously gonna burn it or something.

Anyway Byebye!  :byebye:


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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #35 on: February 06, 2013, 11:55:22 PM »
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If you wonder what Kumi did to Kanon......I'll tell you............


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In one chapter....


damn you  :angry:
hahaha...just kidding  :twisted:  :lol:

hmmm..more mystery...
so is sayaka know tomo?
so the 00’s group were just a killing machine?
 :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :?

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After that they went down to the beach to swim and sunbath and stuff.Takamina and Yuko was sitting on the sand right beside the water, starring at the water like a cat and a squirrel.


Does this mean that takabear and yuko sense something wrong or they are just too stun to see the ladies body  :lol:

kumi had tortures the kanon, rina and mariya...actually i was expecting more for this part ..hehe

Nice chapter for me  XD
Hope that all the mystery will be solve. I will be expecting more for the kumi's past and why it had lead her to become like a killing machine  :lol:
Become AKB fan after watching AKB0048.
Oshimen : Takamina and Mayu
Favorite pair : TakaAstu, Mayukirin, KumiYuria, Wmatsui, JirinaMayu etc.
(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #36 on: February 07, 2013, 03:25:01 AM »
Hehehe... Takamina is actually drolling over Atsuko in her bikini...

Hahaha.... NyanNyan... is here... yeah... Yuko gets to see her darling...

What's happening in Kumi's past?

Who is this person that Kumi cs wants to kill?

More mysteries.... Can't wait to see and find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #37 on: February 07, 2013, 06:33:04 PM »
''Nyannyan~''
''Get of me! Pervert!''
''Nyaro''Three girls came after Kojima.
''Mari-chan~ Tomochin~ Sayanee~ Help!''
The three girls came and helped the poor Kojima from Yuko who was clinging on her.
''Nyannyan~ Chuuuu~~~''Yuko was now trying to kiss her.But Nobunaga, Paru, Takamina was holding her.
''Stop it you hentai!''Kojima said hugging Mariko.

''Nyannyan~ Don't hate me~~''Yuko looked at Haruna with teary eyes.Her face looked like this  :cry: .
''D-don't cry''Kojiharu who is really scared to get someone to cry suddenly hugged the younger girl.Yuko buried her face in Kojiharu's neck.
''It's my first time seeing her cry''Rabutan whispered to Mayu and Mina.
''Me too''They both whispered.
''I'm sorry for the trouble''Takamina bowed to the three girls.
''It's ok we understand, right?''The tallest one looked at the younger girls.
''Yeah, right''
''Eh? What is Saya-chiyuu~ doing here chiyuu~?''Tomo looked at Sayaka.
''Eh? Tomo?''Yamamoto Sayaka looked at the older girl.


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''So she is your mom's ex-boyfriend who was gay and had a boyfriend and that boyfriend's ex was a girl who is now married and had *** with a man when she was 17 and that man's dad's mom's grandson's ex girlfriend's who had cheated on him with a another man and that man is now your mom's boyfriend, am I right?''Juri looked at Sayaka.
''Yeah, like that''
''So basically she is your step sister''Acchan asked.
''Yeah.........''Was the reply that made everyone facepalm except Milky who had dozed out........with Kojiharu.
''You could just say that she is your step sister''Kumi who was trying to sound like someone really not-so-idiotic like she is.
''Kumi, Kumi, Kumi........you shouldn't say that''Kizaki said.
''Look who's talking''Mureshige said.
''But you still didn't say why you are here, Saya-chiyuu~''
Sayaka pointed at Mariko,Tomochin and Kojiharu who was still hugging the still crying Yuko.
''Is here with my friends''Sayanee looked at Milky who had came back to earth and is now getting nosebleed because Sayaka winked at her.


Mayu looked at Rabutan who was standing with a :nervous face.
''I can't get this girl''Rabutan said.
''No one does''Was the reply that came from Mayu.
Making Aika nod.
''Say what are we gonna do with Kumi''Aika whispered.
''I don't know, we are the only ones except Kanon,Mariya and Rina who knows about her and Juri''
''That's the problem''
''I feel really sorry for Kanon, I heard that she got tortured more that the others because she is Kumi's favorite''
Rabutan's eyes widened.
''Really? From who?''
''Miichan''
''Oh........''





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''You have to do it tomorrow night, or else''Kumi looked at Kanon.The poor girl was shaking in fear.
''I............I.............Why are you even doing this?''Kanon manged to ask.
''Because.............''




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Yo man! Lemme just tell you something


Next chapter..............Kumi's past from her POV............

I wonder what's going to happen  :kekeke:

Anyway I need to go now! Byebye!  :byebye:

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #38 on: February 08, 2013, 11:11:15 AM »
Eh... Kanon is still being tortured by Kumi... why?

I understand the favorite... but there should be a more believable reason, what is it?

Hehehe... the interaction between Haruna and Yuko is so cute...

How are they going to develop?

I can't wait to find out more...

Thank you for this update

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #39 on: February 11, 2013, 06:42:15 PM »
Yo! I'll do this at the end so here is Kumi's past

Enjoy!  :)


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________FLASHBACK________


Two girls looking exactly the same was walking home.School has ended and they are going back home.Or so they thought, a few girls -or a gang- came out of no where and was now standing in a circle.In the middle was the two poor girls.

''Oi! Ain't you one of the rapapa's queen's follower?''One of them asked.
''Eh?''The youngest one of the two girls looked at the older one.
''I am her, what do you want?''The older girl asked.
''Tch, we are here to destroy the rapapa''The gang leader said.
''And you are?''The older one asked.
''We are Orange!!''The gang stood there shooting glares at the girls.
''Orange? First time hearing it''Said the older girl.
''Nee-chan what's happening?''They younger girl asked.

''Dance! Listen if you tell us how we can take the top of Rapapa we will let you go''The gang leader said.
''Never!''Dance said.
''Nee-chan?''One of the girls in the gang said smirking.
''Never knew Dance had a little sister''She said again and leaned on her bat.
''You have nothing to do with her! Let her go!''Dance said again standing in a fighting position.She sensed danger, really big.She's in trouble, and the first thing she thought about was her little sister.
Kumi was still a kid, she isn't even in middle school.

The girls in the gang looked at the leader.
''Sure we will let her go, but you will stay here''The leader smirked.
''Kumi go!''Dance looked at her little sister.
''But-''
''Go!''
''But you-''
''JUST GO!!''Not wanting her big sister to be angry at her.So she runned away, she was glancing back sometimes but couldn't see anything.She runned all the way home.When she opened the door, the first thing that welcomed her was blood.Her eyes widened.

''Mom! Dad!''She went to the kitchen.But no one was there, she went to the living room.Nothing was there too, she looked at the stairs that lead to Dance,her and her parents rooms.She couldn't even see the stairs as the blood covered it.She went up, slowly, she looked down at her feet.Blood, blood, and blood that's all she saw.She reached the top of the stairs.She looked at her parents room.

''It's only a joke, don't believe it''She mumbled to herself.

She starred at the door for a few seconds.It took her all her energy to put her hand on the door knob.She pressed the door knob down.Then she pushed the door open.

''M-m-m o-o-om''Her eyes widened.She couldn't believe her eyes.Shoe froze at her spot in front of the door.'No! this isn't happening!!''She thought.

Why? why was this happening to just her.At this day, why her of all the people on the world.She felt something wet on her cheek.She didn't even want to know what it is.

She saw a bloody scene that will not even appear on a movie.In front of her was a room covered with blood.And her mom's head lying on the floor in front of her feet.Her parents was lying lifeless on the floor.And beside the window stood a girl.A girl with short hair, starring at her.She was feeling like the world was laughing at her.

Why? was the only question she wanted to ask.But nothing came out from her mouth.The girl walked to her, she stood in front of her.Kumi starred at the girl.
The girl bent down and gave Kumi a kiss on her forehead.

''Sorry, I had to''The girl said looking at Kumi.
''Why''Kumi manged to say.Her voice was weak, even she barely heard it.
''You will know when you grow up, and it was me who said to the gang to attack you're sister.''The girl said.
''And also, my name is Takahashi Erena''Erena said again.She then walked to the window, she jumped out.While Kumi just starred into nothing.Then it came.

''Dance''She mumbled.She dragged her feet out and went to where her big sister was.She started running, when she arrived she didn't see anyone from the gang.But instead she saw her sister on the ground.She runned to where her sister was.

''Nee-chan!''She yelled as tears was streaming down.She felt a hand on her wet cheek.
''D-d-don't I-I d-don't w-want to see m-my l-little b-baby cry''Dance said.She was really weak, she just starred at her little sister who was crying.
''Nee-chan mom a-and-''
''I know''Dance said.
''D-don't cry''Dance said.Her eyes was getting really heavy.She feelt her eyes close.
''Nee-chan!''She heard her sisters voice call.
''Nee-chan''She heard it.She then started fleeing weird.
''Nee-chan''She was barely hearing it anymore.Till she saw nothing but black.


On the other hand.Kumi, the poor Kumi was still in shook.Her parents are dead, her sister is dead.And all happened at the same day.Why?!?!
She didn't know what to do.She just stood there beside the lifeless body crying her heart out.




________END OF FLASHBACK________

That was the biggest shook for Kanon.She never knew that Kumi's past was this sad.
She couldn't feel what Kumi is feeling.But If it was her she wouldn't even want to live anymore.She quickly gave Kumi a comforting hug.A hug, Kumi looked shocked at Kanon.She never knew that she will feel a hug again.No one has ever hugged her after when her family died.

''But why do you want to kill Takamina?''Kanon asked after a while still hugging the now-has-calmed-down Kumi.
''Later I found out that Erena is Takamina's sister''Kumi answered.

''But why me?''Kanon asked.
''I just took you by chance''Kumi lied.After that no one said something more.They just enjoyed the hug, they never really wanted to end it.But of course they need to do the plan.


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Mwahahahahah!!!!! *Evil grin*

How do you feel right now? Tell me what you think

And sorry for not updating those last days.I just started a new fic and just focused on it.




So yeah...........I need to go now! *waving*

Byebye!  :byebye:

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