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:welcome Hi Guys!
actually I have been following AKB for more than two years, but It's my first time to write down a fanfiction -or maybe posting something in Jphip forum. I ever joined in my region/country fanbase, but it's rare since I used to have my own world in tumblr. :nervous
I am willing to make a different genre of fanfiction, but since I'm not a native in English, it end up with a lot of broken language. :banghead:
I'm writing it down slowly, I hope you enjoy my very first sequele.
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PROLOGUE
There are a number of children in this world that born to be special. However, some of them are unrecognized, seen as mentally disturbed, and rejected by society. The reason of parents keeping them in the house, and not allowing them to go out is due to the embarrasment or just wanting their child not to bother the people around. Yes, because they can not stop talking about bizzare things, that only known by themself, spells, or can not stop doing weird things.
Indigo, some of them have their own world, live on their own thought, and doing everything in their own way. Despite of their selfishness, there are hidden ability, outstanding intellegent, and mysterious power that no one can ever touch.
Majisuka Private School, a boarding school established by a mysterious foundation is selecting this special chidren every years. Only a few children who are eligible, can attend this school with or without their parent’s allowance.
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Chapter I : Akai Hana No Namae Wa Mada Shiranai
Part 1 http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35389.msg1170212#msg1170212 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35389.msg1170212#msg1170212)
Part 2 http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35389.msg1170318#msg1170318 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35389.msg1170318#msg1170318)
Part 3 http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35389.msg1170837#msg1170837 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35389.msg1170837#msg1170837)
Part 4 http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35389.msg1172313#msg1172313 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35389.msg1172313#msg1172313)
Chapter 2 :
Part 1 : http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35389.msg1173209#msg1173209 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35389.msg1173209#msg1173209)
Part 2 : http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35389.msg1174453#msg1174453 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35389.msg1174453#msg1174453)
*dunno how to hyperlink it #noobs
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Nice start :thumbsup
Are we looking at a Nezumi/Center fic?
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CHAPTER 1 - Akai Hana no Namae Wa Mada Shiranai (1/4)
Jurina gazed out the window of her compartment. Everything dark was changing into blue with reddish silhouette. It had been a night she was being in that small room. Having sailed away for first time made her head dizzy. Moreover, she didn’t have anything to eat since last night. She woke from her bed, walked slowly out the compartment, she didn’t want to make a girls next to her bed awake as she was still sleeping.
Who is her name... Jurina tried to remember her conversation last night but she failed. The girl seemed to busy with her mobile phone, and Jurina just could stop talking at that time. She prefered to go to her bed, stop thinking about her next destination and fell asleep soon after that.
Jurina looked around and decided to go to the main deck. She supposed that the restoration room is located near that place or maybe at least she could ask someone about it there. As Jurina reached the main deck, some people had already gathered, some of them were talking while having their breakfast. She need not to ask anyone since she already seen the board with written “ All Passagers can take their breakfast here, for free” in contralateral side of the main deck. Jurina directly went to that room and took her meals. Honey roasted bread and hot chocolate milk was her menu for today’s breakfast.
“Hey watch out!” a girl warned Jurina, but it was late. Jurina bumped against that girl and suddenly her milk spilled out at that girl’s white sleeve.
“ aaa... I am sorry...” Jurina apologized for her mistake and direclty took a tissue for wiping that girl’s sleeve. Intead of wiped out, the stain was getting wider.
“what the hell you are doing! Gosh, look at my sleeve, you have messed it.” Said that girl. She shooked off Jurina hand and moved back. She walked away yelling. Jurina looked at her back regretting the thing happened before.
Jurina sighed and decided to come back to her compartment. She didn’t own money even a dollar for buying other foods. As she came back to her compartment, her roommate already woke up.
“ Ne, do you want some?” she offered a box of pocky stick while having a bublegum in her mouth. Jurina took a stick and returned that box to her. “arigatou..”
“Take it all for you, I don’t like chocolate...” She refused. “...I still have some in my bag. If you want more, you can ask me ” the bublegum girl said.
“un...” jurina nodded. “thank you...” Jurina moved closer and sat next to that girl. She was curious of what make that girls was so serious with her mobile phone.
Knowing that Jurina was trying to peek her mobile phone screen, the girl directly flip it up. Jurina felt embarrased as that girl known her intention. After a moments kept on silent the girl started grumbling, “Heck! there is no mobile provider signal here even a bar”.
Jurina chuckled “Of course there is no signal here... we are in the middle of ocean now...ahahahahaha....” she can’t hold her laugh for a while.
“ I already know that, I just pretending!” the girls smirked. Jurina stopped laughing, she had been tricked by the girl.
“Hey, we haven’t know each other... Have we?” Jurina started to make a conversation. They had been in same compartment since the night before, but they were not have any talks, even just for asking name.
As Jurina asked, the girl started to tell about herself. Watanabe Mayu, dropped uot from Matsuoka Public Junior High School after hacked school main server PC and meesed up all students and teachers database. She was been homeschooled by her parents then. She told that how happy she was because after dropped out, she could have fun with hacking as she wanted.
“ Valentine Kiss??? A! I have heard about that virus! When the PC started up, suddenly there was love picture shown, and the PC turned off after that... when you restarting it once more, seems all the file changed into love shortcut... It can’t be recovered...” Jurina commented about Mayu latest virus that she made. “that’s so bad...” Jurina continued. Mayu smiled proudly.
“How you coud create such dangerous virus? When did you start to learn about PC programming?” Jurina asked.
“Well, I don’t ever learn about that... It seems like I just get the knowledge in my brain and somebody whispering it”... mayu said. Jurina was fallen silent.
“ My parents were so happy knowing there is a highschool that want to accept me. No Matter how far the school is...” I wonder if there are computer lab with network in that school...” Mayuyu sighed.
“Mayu, how often you get somebody whispering in your ears....?”
“Psssst...” Mayu put her index finger in front of her nose. “ Right now, I already know who you are...” Mayu told Jurina. Jurina bright eyes widen.
“It’d be fun that I could beat up 10 man in only a night” Mayu told something that Jurina had never tell before, she blown her buble gum, and... “POP”. Jurina hearbeet seemed to stop for a moment as the buble gum pooped.
“ Don’t worry... I’m not a person who like to divulge a secret...” Mayu smirked. Jurina felt little relived. She didn’t love fight a much, but nobody know that accidentally one night, ten man who tried to bully an elementary school girl would face unexpected moment ever in their life. Yes, Jurina fought them. A day after, A local mass media reproted that ten men were passed away mysteriously in suburbs. No one ever find the cause of this mysterious death.
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After a week on sea journey, finally Jurina, Mayu and other girls arrived in their destination : Majisuka Privat School. The school was located in an isolated island of pacific islands, far away from Japan mainland, the only access to get there is by sea transportation. The island was not so big, so it wouldn’t figured in any map. From the shore, the school buildings can be seen built on the hill. With mountains scenery behind it. Near the port there was a village, with classical archithecture buildings, seemed that it was the only village in this island. They stayed for a while in the village for buying some groceries. Jurina, who didn’t bring any money even a dollar, just walking around the village for sightseeing. The village was really cozy, the air was so fresh, and she could feel the coastal wind blown soflty. She sat on the bench of a park near the port and intended to take nap for a while, but suddenly the carriage had came, so she canceled it.
“Welcome to Majisuka Private school...” Shinoda sensei, the headmaster welcomed the freshmen. “This school is the right place to built up your personality, and characther to be an extraordinary person, the strongest fighter, the bravest knight, and the greatest witch...” she continued.
As the freshmen came, the whole students had gathered in the main hall af school. The Freshmen was welcomed by a welcoming ceremony. Jurina could feel the athmosphere inside the school was changed a lot from the outside-the village. Somehow she felt a little bit scared, she must not be in this unknown place and myst world. However, Shinoda sensei speech encouraged her. This place is her destiny and her dream. She felt that she was not alone. She found a lot of face, girls with a super ability like her.
“...So, tomorrow we will held a annual event for admissioing the freshmen... All the freshmen must take place in this challenge as regulation of this school ”
The student that kept on silent before began to buzz.
“ What?? I never hear this before” one girl whispered
“ What kind of Challenge?” someone asked
“ Dunno, but I heard the rumour that the challenge is really dangerous” the girl stood beside her answered.
“ I am scared....” another girl talked
“ Please be silent!” Shinoda sensei calmed the freshmen down.
“ I know that you are really curios about what challenge it will be. However, I won’t tell you about it until tomorrow. For now on, please enjoy the dinner dishes we serve specially for celebrating your coming, and after that you may take a rest in your own dormitory!”
All the student yelled and applaused. Soon after that a number of plates were flying and landed right on the table in front of every student. “Pop” special menu foods were appeared and laid out the plates afterwards. The freshmen were amazed, included Jurina. It was the first time for her to see the magic, and it was for real! Jurina, who had not eat anything since arrived to this Island was so happy seeing a lot of food in front of her eyes. She will no longer starving here, she thought. It’s time to get party! She took a slice of roasted peking duck, a plate of sphagetti meatballs, a bowl of salad, and chocolate pudding. She was really hungry!
-TBC
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I like this already, Mayu's character will be a total anti-heroine type while Jurina will probably be straight forward stay on the line until she is willing to be knocked off :nervous
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Nice start :thumbsup
Are we looking at a Nezumi/Center fic?
thanks :)
Although J/M are the main character in the beginning... I wish it will not make a special OTP though... I am willing to make it daredemo daisuki. since it's in school, there will be a lot of girl right?
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Nice! Mahogakuen.. :) JuriMayu are the main characters great love it! Ammm.. Can't wait what will happen next.. Hope you update soon.. Thanks :) Great story!
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Interesting story and idea
Can't wait to see how the story going to continue
Thank you for the interesting update
:wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
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the first chapter is too much :grin: I end up divide it into three, so I could make the update as soon as possible. :panic:
I hope the story is getting much interesting and unpredictable. Magical Boarding School... So many things would happen
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CHAPTER 1 - Akai Hana no Namae Wa Mada Shiranai (2/4)
“ Gokigen’you... my name is Kashiwagi Yuki, Third grade. I am student president of this school. I ll lead you to your room in the dormitory. Please follow me” Yuki-senpai introduced herself, after that she moved her body back and began to walk. The Freshmen followed her way to the dormitory.
“In this dormitory, you must share a room with your mates, so please throw away your selfishness. Because there must be four persons each room and you were 20, so we will divide you into five” Yuki explained the rooms allocation.
“ Can we choose our own room? I want to be in same room with Annin” the twin tailed hair girl- Kato Rena asked.
“ I am sorry you can’t, we have the list for the room member already...” Yuki answered. Kato Rena drooped dissapointly.
“ OK, I’ll divide you now.... Room 301 : Shimazaki, Iriyama, Kawaei, and Takahashi. Room 302: Kato, Iwata, Tano, and Oba. Room 303: Matsui, Kizaki, Kimoto, and Yagami, room 304: Murashige, Kodama, Miyawaki, and Oshima room 305: Moriyasu, Muto, Furuhata, and watanabe...” “Now pelase gather in a group based on your room! 301 here, 302 there, 303 there, 304 beside 303 and 305 there...” The girls followed Yuki directions.
“ It’s strange...” Yuki squinted there was a group with five members.
“ Hey you! 305 rooms! Why there are five persons??? Is anyone of you in the wrong room?.. aarhg, but the others are already in four...” Yuki confused, she tried to call the 305 members once more. “ Furuhata..” Furuhata nao raised her hand. “Moriyasu...” Moriyasu madoka raised her hand. “Muto...” Muto tomu raised her hand. “watanabe...” Watanabe Mayu and......
Watanabe Miyuki raised their hand.
“Wait. I must clarify this up,” Yuki took her walkie-talkie. “Umeda sensei...” the conversation started. “...........What???are we have 21 freshmen? But this paper only listed 20?.” yuki said madly. “ Gomen ne, I forgot to include Watanabe Mayu into the list... she is the last registrant of our school...” the opposite side of the walkie-talkie talked. “ So how about her??? We have no room left for the freshmen???” Yuki asked. “ A! That’s right.... ummm..umm.... Yukirin, isn’t there a bed left on your room since Maeda graduated?...”
“ e... “ yuki stupefied.
“ Ahahaha... please take care of her! Ja ne. Bye bye...” the opposite one hung up the call. “ Hello... Umeda sense???.... Umeda sense...” Yuki call back the opposite side, but there was no answer anymore. She sighed.
“Okay, Watanabe mayu... you can stay in my room.” Yuki felt that she just got a karma, she said to the freshmen not to be selfish and now she must share a room with a kouhai- that she actually don’t want to.
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“ Aaa... I am really full...” Jurina laid her body down on the bed. In the room, they were four. Yuria began to arrange her wardrobe, Kumi and Kanon chatted.
“ Ne, I am really curious about what tomorrow challenge” Jurina interruped Kumi-non chatting. “ you haven’t sleep yet. Have you?” Yuria asked. Jurina shook her head. “ I don’t know...” Kumi answered... “ Do you know it kanon?” kanon nodded and smirked. “ Let me know it... please tell me” Jurina begged.
“ hahaha it’s secret!” kanon refused, then suddenly she raised up and walked away.
“ hey? Where will you go???”
“ I want to take a bath” Kanon answered regardless. Then she moved her body back, “Nantene!” she laughed after that. Her roommates just sighed together. Annoying girl!
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“ Good afternoon everybody. I hope you got enough resting last night and have been prepared for this challenge!” Shinoda began the event with her speech. The freshmen already gathered in the school’s field. “ So, as I promised yesterday, I will announce this challenge systematisc and rule. Please listen carefully” The whole freshmen was paying their attention to shinoda-sensei. They didn’t want to get failed to enter Majisuka. “ I challanged you all, to find a sacred flower in this island!” the freshmen started to make noise.
“ That sacred flower is on the top of the highest mountain in this island.... I’ll give you all two days for completed this challenge” Shinoda sensei continued her explanation. The freshmen ogled than faced to the mountains behind their school. The highest mountain was the southest mountain, it was approximately 10 kilometers distance from their school, and the height was about 1500 meter.
“ It’s impossible” Madoka whispered.
“ What??? This is crazy! I could die on the way to get there” Kumi moaned.
“...Once someone of you can pick it up the others will be free for the obligation, and all af you will officially approved as a student of Majisuka. Otherwise, if no one of you could find and pick it, so all af you will be failed and no one will be approved as student of Majisuka. You may get back home instead...” “ it’s not a competition, but the first girl who can pick it up will be awarded as a honor student. So, the way how you can reach the top of the mountain is up to you. You may go by yourself or you can go there together if you don’t sure you can reach it alone. However, be sure that you wont put your friend in a danger only for being the honor student.” The freshmen who were getting down at the first time were being encouraged. They didn’t know what the benefit of being a honor student, but they were sure it would be great opportunity. “Okay student... do you accept my challenge?” Shinoda asked the freshmen.
“ Of course, sensei !!!!” The freshmen yelled spiritfully.
“ For now, the challenge started. Be careful, there are a lot of obstacle in the way to the top of the mountain...” Shinoda sensei warned the students. “ Yes sensei!!!” the student complied.
“ Good, for the last thing please remember this phrases : “The world ain’t worshipping over more than one god. When you just see goddesses nearly met in the same time, look toward goddess dancing farewell bring red, A rebirth for the color of flame in a blameless conscience.“ Shinoda sinsei closed her speech for beginning the challenge
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Jurina still feelt unsure. For her, it was no matter that she could pick the flower or not. The biggest thought in her mind was can she survive in the journey? The way to the top of the mountain was not easy way. It was a unknown forest, and they were never know what danger hidden behind the trees. They would stay day and night in the middle of forest. Suddenly she was chilled. She ran pursuing her friend ahead.
Most of them were agreed to walk together, except Tano Yuka and Iwata Karen. Tanochan and Karen were challanging each other to be the fastest, so they ran off their friends behind. While Iriyama Anna walked slowly behind all of them. She thought that this challenged was riddiculous. She didn’t want to take this challenge, but She was forced by the regulation that every freshman must take this challenge. Jurina prefered to walk next to Mayu, but she talked nothing since the first time and just chewed her bubblegum.
“ How was your new roommate – I mean the shool president?” Jurina started to make a conversation.
“ Un...” Mayu just kept silent.
“ Yuria is a nice girl, she gave me this...” Jurina showed Mayu a wristband she wearing. “ Kumi and Non get the same to...” Jurina pointed at Kumi and Kanon who were walking together in front of them. “ Nice wristband...” Mayu praised and back to keep silent chewing her bublegum.
“ Ne, Mayu... why you just keep silent?” Jurina asked. “ I am a little bit tired Jurina, I lack of sleep last night..”
“ Could it be...” jurina wondered and looked Mayu face with a sense of suspicion. “ No...” Mayu blushed. “ She studied mantra like idiot until the middle of the night, after that she fell asleep and snored like a pig sound, it was really disturbing me that I coudn’t sleep last night...” Mayu clarified and grumbled. Suddenly Jurina laughed out loud.
However, no long time after that.... “Kyaah...” somene screamed from the back. Everybody stopped and faced back, but they didn’t see anyone.
-TBC
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Jurina :lol:
Mayu is quite a studious person although this challenge may be a tough one for any person :nervous
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oh it's like a mix of harry potter and akb hebe
lol Yukirin snores
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this is interesting :roll: :roll: :roll:
and I really like you're fast update :D :D :D
looking forward for the next update 8) 8) 8)
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Ara... with Maeda is graduating.... so no Atsumina....
Yaada.... I want Atsumina too
Anyhow... great story so far
Very interesting too...
Can't wait to see the next
Thank you
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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awww i wanna read more, please update soon~ :panic:
the story is interesting, the girls having special powers i like it! what girl just screamed? i wanna knoooowww :panic:
Mayu complainign about Yuki and Jurina just laughing about that hahahah
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Thank you for this fic :kneelbow:
I love it!! I wonder what happened with the one who screamed and who she is....? :dunno:
Is she still alive? Please don't kill my babies (Kumi, Non and Yuria) :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
I bet you're gonna do that :shifty:
Anyways! Update soon I can't wait! :wigglypanda:
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my first impression of the school was like hogwarts+xavier's with girls from 48 family in it...sounds interesting for me... :on GJ:
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Thank you for the comments
oh it's like a mix of harry potter and akb hebe
lol Yukirin snores
my first impression of the school was like hogwarts+xavier's with girls from 48 family in it...sounds interesting for me... :on GJ:
Actually, this is not really like harry potter :nervous.
I just know there was a school named Xavier, it is X-men home, right? :D
Anyway, I hope the story wouldn't be the same :grin:
Thank you for this fic :kneelbow:
I love it!! I wonder what happened with the one who screamed and who she is....? :dunno:
Is she still alive? Please don't kill my babies (Kumi, Non and Yuria) :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
I bet you're gonna do that :shifty:
Anyways! Update soon I can't wait! :wigglypanda:
Just guess who will appear... and who will end :catglare:
the story is still under development... I'm still working for next continuance. So, since I write it as the mood come, it need long time. (http://static.tieba.baidu.com/tb/editor/images/jd/j_0009.gif)
I'll update it as soon as possible, please be patient...(http://static.tieba.baidu.com/tb/editor/images/bobo/B_0011.gif)
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The challenge reminds me of Paruru's challenge in eien pressure lol, getting a flower in seemingly dangerous mountain XD
And lol Yukirin 8D
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since it's weekend,finally I could make an update as soon as possible. thank you for read this story...
I need one additional part to finish this chapter... it hasn't finished yet.
:lol: but somebody has know the story line :lol:
However, I hope you enjoy this story... :oops: douzo...
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CHAPTER 1 - Akai Hana no Namae Wa Mada Shiranai (3/4)
“Hey is Iriyama with us? I saw she walked in the very back from the first time...” Juri wondered. Everybody looked around. Juri was right, Iriyama Anna were not with them. “ I’ll gonna check in the back! Everybody please continue your way. I will come after if i have found her...” Jurina said. “ OK, please be safe, the day is getting darker...” Everybody continued walking while Jurina ran to the back.
Soon after, Jurina found a girl just sat down, leaned back against the tree and seemed getting trouble. Jurina walked over her. Although she hadn’t talked to her before, she was sure that the girl was Iriyama Anna. Jurina couldn’t see her face clearly because it was overshadowed as the day was getting darker.
“ Are you okay...?” Jurina asked her.“ OK janai...” the girl yelled. “Hurry up, and help me...” She strenghten her head and faced to Jurina. Jurina could see the girl face, somehow she remembered that the girl was someone she had talked to before. Annin, who felt the same, gasped. The girl who come to her was the girl who spilled chocolate milk on her favourite white sleeve. “ I need not your help. Please go on! I want to go back to the school!” Then she raised up and tried to move her body back. However, before she could do the first step, she fell down.
“ Ugh...” she moaned. “ Are you okay” Jurina approached her and hold her upper arm. She know that the Annin was mad on her, but she ignored it. She worried that Annin got an injury in her leg. Without asking she moved Annin back under the three and started to examine. “Itai...” Annin yelled as Jurina tried to examine her right foot.
“ I am afraid you got a sprain” Jurina told Annin. Who being told just kept silent. Jurina opened her backpack and tried to find out useful thing, but she found nothing could be used. Then she took her slayer down and and tear it into two. After that, she started bandage Annin right foot. “ Ok, finish” said her cherrfully. Annin just kept silent. She slowly tried to stand once more moved her legs. At that time she felt better. The pain on her right foot was reduced drastically. She was able to walk then.
“Yokatta, Could you walk? Let us join the other!” Jurina smiled, hold Annin arm and put in in her shoulder. However, before Jurina could help Annin to walk, Annin pulled her arm back and yelled. “ Yamete!” Jurina was surprised then fastly removed her arm from Annin. “ I am sorry” “ I can walk by myself..” said Annin confidently and started to go.
“ Hey... that is not the rigt way!” Jurina told. “I said before, I want to go back to the school...” . “ Wait...” Jurina walked over Annin. “ Please go, I can go back alone” Annin said ungratefully. Jurina stopped. The girl drived her pissed off. Jurina just helped her, but she didn’t even say thank you or show her grateful. Regardless, Jurina tried to bury it soon as she felt the atmosphere surrounding them was changing. She was sure that someone is heading, but it was impossible to be their friends since they are move away.
Jurina catched Annin arm and hold it thight. “ Please let me...” Annin yelled and pulled her arm, but Jurina didn’t let her. She thighten her hold instead. Annin faced to Jurina, Instead of showing unpleased expression for letting her go, their eyes simply gazed one another for seconds. Don’t know why she catched fear from Jurina eyes, then suddenly she caught on the fright too.
“ Psst... silent please. Did you heard something?” Jurina Whispered.
“ e... Nope.” Annin shook her head. “ What’s wrong?”
ZAP. a shadow passed by.
“Don’t move” Jurina instructed Annin. She swept her view surround them but she could find nothing. It’s twillight. The only things she could do at that time was to keep her ear alert. Unexpectedly Annin felt something touched her leg, she looked down scarefully then suddenly screamed. “ Kyah!”
Jurina fastly reacted and tried to figure it up. Her eyes widen as she seen a ghostlike black furry creature. It looked like a monkey but it had scary red eyes and long fang. Soon, Jurina took a stone near her and threw it to that scary creature. The stone hitted right on it’s head, the creature strarted to groan. Jurina smiled of victory.
“ Ne...” Annin whispered to Jurina stammerly. It seemed like her fear was not dissapeared, it was getting bigger instead. “ Look at that!” her hand shivering, she pointed to the trees in front of her. “What?” Jurina gasped then turned her view towards Annin’s pointing direction. Her eyes widen, she didn’t belive of what she’s seeing right now. A group of the same creature surrounded them. A lot of monkey like creature with red eyes and long fang look like really wanted to attack Jurina and Annin. They came closer and closer. They sounded like angry monsters. ‘hrrr....hrrr”
“ What to do now?” Annin asked Jurina. She was really afraid. She had never see this scary creature before.
“Okay, if I said three, you must follow whatever I do. One, two,....” Jurina instructed Annin, then she nodded.
Annin mind was going distracted. As she heard Jurina counting, she was confused. She took the initiative to get herself ready for fighting the creatures though.
“ three... Ruuuun.....!” unexpectedly, Annin was surprised because unexpectedly Jurina instucted to run away. Then they tried to run against the bunch of that scary creature.
A creature jumped on Annin body, She tried to remove them off. Finally, the fight is unavoidable. Jurina gripped it then pull it powerfully. She succeeded to remove it, “Damn” She grumbled and after that, she threw the creature with no mercy.
“ Watch out!!” Annin warned Jurina. Some creature attacked Jurina. Jurina tried ti fight back. She hitted and kicked them down. “Grrr...” a creature roared and jumped on her head. It closed her face, she couldn’t see anything. Annin took a tree branch near her then helped Jurina by hitting the creatures that attacking them one by one. Annin was overwhelmed. The scary creatures were very numerous. While Jurina was trying to remove the one that jumped on her head, suddenly another creature rushed and bit her arm.
“Gyaa...” Jurina screamed. She moved her arm and thwacked it to the tree. As It hitted on the three, the creature loosen it bit and detached. With all effort, Jurina could remove the one that jump on the head. They ran as they could until finally they found that the creature were not following them anymore.
“hhh...hh...hh...” They stopped running then panted out of breath. “ They seem like not chasing us anymore” Jurina said. Annin nodded. She still felt a big fear from what just happened to them. All that she was thinking this time is how to find the way getting back to the school sooner. She didn’t care if she would be disqualified from this challenge and expelled from Majisuka. This school is really scary. They had not become a student there but they must face this insane challenge and put in the dangerous situation.
“ Let’s go back to the school” Annin asked Jurina. Jurina swallowed, she wanted to do that too after everthing she had. However, She really didn’t want to just end up like this. No, She didn’t want to give up. She want to enrolled as Majisuka student no matter what. Furthermore, The night is just come and it could be even more dangerous to walk.
“ I’m afraid we can’t. Jurina refused. “ Listen... It’s impossible to walk now since we just run away from that goddamn scary monkeys, and we lost the way. It's impossible too if we took the same way back. It’s all dark out here, You don’t want to meet that monkeys again, right?” Jurina explained. We must find other way, at least until we find a safe place to stay overnight...”
Annin felt a little bit dissapointed with Jurina answer, but she really didn’t want to meet with those scary creatures once more. So, she could just obey her. They ovserved surrounding them, looking for a place that could be use for stay overnight. Then Jurina find a cave on the hill that she felt quite safe.
It was so dark in the cave, so, Jurina started to make a fireplace. Once the fire light up, They could see everytthing better. Suddenly Annin realized something wrong in Jurina.
“Your hand bleed...” Jurina, at first time didn’t realize it, she look at her hand and find a big wound on it. “A! You are right... don’t worry...” she smiled calming Annin down. She took a bottle of water form her backpack and cleaned up her wound. She just realized that she got a big wound and it was really painful. Knowing Jurina got a big wound, Annin felt guilty. She wondered if she could safe Jurina from the attack, this wound would never happen.
“I am sorry...” Annin apologized sincerely. Jurina nodded. “ Unn.. I am sorry too for spilling milk chocolate on your sleeve. It was not my intention at all...” Jurina apologized back. “ My name is Matsui Jurina, nice to meet you” Jurina introduced herself. “...and you are Iriyama Anna, right?” Jurina confirmed. Annin nodded.
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The dawn came. It’s time for continuing the Journey. Since they didn’t eat anything since the day before, They agreed to look for things to eat. They walked on a small road and finally they come to the river. Moreover, They found there was a beautiful waterfall in it upstream. Then, they saw someone was fishing on that river. Annin and Jurina looked each other and smiled. They ran approaching her.
“ Miyuki....”
Miyuki moved her head back, and waved her hand.
-TBC
Well, let's wait for last part of first chapter. I'm still working on it... :cow:
PS: I don't ship on any pairing.... so, Anninnaga Shipper buddies. ya betta calm down :lol:
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“ Miyuki....”
Miyuki moved her head back, and waved her hand.
Milky-chama appears!!! I just had to comment, it's getting better and better!!! :inlove: :inlove:
B.U.T.
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PS: I don't ship on any pairing.... so, Anninnaga Shipper buddies. ya betta calm down :lol:
You broke my heart with this... I really did slump in my chair and I really did hit a table with my head... I want some pairings, even if just small moments... I know you're a DD, but please... GAH, why no Anninaga?!!!! :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes: :banghead: :banghead:
Anyway, thank you for this amazing story and I'll be eagerly waiting for your another update!! :bow:
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.........I was sooo happy and thought that there is gonna be some kind of cute momen beween Anna and Jurina.....
But sll I get is nothing!! oO y u no put some moments!?!??
xD I liked it thought,
And the end, Milky-sama~ fishing~ ......
fishing?
FISHING?!?!?
lol xD
nice update as always! *hugs*
update soon~
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To be fair, jurina did a wonderful job to save annin and has to move on with her own powers
Also the last part is just saying that you don't favor certain pairings compared to shipping none XD
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Oho~ small AnninNaga moment... and....
LOL AT THE MILKY WHO'S FISHING HAHAHAHAHA 8'D
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Nice fanfic......... cute..... and the update speed is good.......
but the problem is, I can't tell where I last stopped reading.........
KeiOshi-san, you might want to rename ur post subject so it's easier to get around >.<
nom nom >.< well, ganbatte!~
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Milky-chama appears!!! I just had to comment, it's getting better and better!!! :inlove: :inlove:
And the end, Milky-sama~ fishing~ ......
fishing?
FISHING?!?!?
lol xD
LOL AT THE MILKY WHO'S FISHING HAHAHAHAHA 8'D
Nothing left in my brain about Milky except her Fishing quality... So, everything about milky is all about Fishing... :grin:
.........I was sooo happy and thought that there is gonna be some kind of cute momen beween Anna and Jurina.....
But sll I get is nothing!! oO y u no put some moments!?!??
What Cute Moments are... :smhid ahaha, i'm Noobs and Cool enough to to not have such cute things 8)2
I might have inserted 'something' when they were two in the cave. :twisted:
However, NO! It'll destroy my DD-point in this story. Gomenne. :nervous
Besided, Hellooo... They Just met!!!! :lol: So, Just let the story flow... :cow:
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You broke my heart with this... I really did slump in my chair and I really did hit a table with my head... I want some pairings, even if just small moments... I know you're a DD, but please... GAH, why no Anninaga?!!!! :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes: :banghead: :banghead:
So, what I must do??? :grin:
I've said that Anninnaga shipper must calm down... It's dont mean I wont bring them anymore. Let the story flow...
It's weekend and I have some spare time yesterday, so, It's likely to update as that soon.
maybe I'll be in semi-hiatus until the next update since the weekday started and I have a lot of University tasks... or maybe I'll continue the next chapter in following months. It's depend on my moods and activities. I hope you understand. :bow:
Ja! thank you for reading... :jphip:
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finally, this week's weekday is end. tough days... fhew :yawn:
at first, I want to delay updating this for some days... but seems that this topic will fade away...
finally could finished this first chapter... I was so happy...
since I am noobs was in hurry, maybe there's some mistaken, and short dialogue. I hope you can still enjoying... douzooo...
CHAPTER 1 - Akai Hana no Namae Wa Mada Shiranai (4/4)
“ So, you are stay overnight here?” Jurina asked. They arrived at a small wooden house. “Un...” Milky nodded. In that house, other girls had gathered in the living room. “ Milky, we are waiting for you... Let’s start cooking!” Juri said. “ Jurina, Anna... where have you been?” Kumi asked worrily. “We wait you overcoming us yesterday, but you didn’t show up again until we found this house. So, we decided to stay overnight here waiting for you..” Kanon added.
“ Hey, look at you! You are really messy. Are you okay?” Haruppi asked.
“ Yeah, We are okay. we got a little accident yesterday” Jurina simply answered Haruppi. Annin eyes widen. Little accident? We nearly to face the death, she said that was just a little acciedent? She must be crazy!
“ Annin... Yokatta. I am really worriying about you” Kato Rena yelled. She bump on Annin and hug her thight. “you got a scratch...” Renachi looked at Annin. She's a little bit messy - but her beautiful fase was still there. “ It doesn’t matter. The main thing is that you are both safe” Minarun said wisely. “... So, let ‘s have breakfast before continuing this journey!” Murashige yelled. Everybody agreed, they took the fish brought by Milky and started to cook their breakfast.
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A Day after, Finally, they reached the top of the higest mountain. There was a small plain field with a crater that plumes of smoke. The crater was not big, but it seemed so hot. The view from the top was really beautiful. From the top, They could see al the island surrounded by sea water. Their school looked like a small point in the expanse of green. This beautiful athmosphere made some girls spontaneously scurrying around. Iwata and Tanochan had came first, they just sat down on the field.
“ Karen... Tanochan... Since when you're here?” Renachi asked.
“ We have been here since morning, but we couldn’t find any flower growing here” Tanochan answered sadly.
The other girls were realizing about their main goal why of reaching that top of mountain: Shinoda –sensei told them to pick a flower there. However, it was nowhere in that field. They didn’t see any flower grew there. The girls started to look around once more, but the result was nothing. Where was it?
“ Where is the flower? I couldn’t find it here” Murashige complained.
“ Maybe it is hidden behind something” Haruppi tried to answer. The other girls shooked. There was nothing here except field and stones. They began to feel anxious. The sun was almost to set. Two days of challenge os almost over. If they couldn’t find it, that means they’ve wasted their effort.
“ Could it be Shinoda-sensei just tricked us” Mayu started to talk.
“ Ne, Mayu what do you think? I have looking for the flower even try to explore within the crater’s ledge. It was not there too” Jurina asked Mayu. She was really worry. Mayu’s sentence may be true. However, what kind of trick did Shinoda used? Was she really want to deceive them all?
“The world ain’t worshipping over more than one god. When you just see goddesses nearly met in the same time, look toward goddess dancing farewell bring red, A rebirth for the color of flame in a blameless conscience.“ Mayu started to recall Shinoda sensei last clue.
“ That mean...” Jurina tried hard to get the sentence and conlude it. “ Two god who never meet, Amaterasu and Tsuki-Yomi.... the sunset is the analogy of Amaterasu farewell...” She got some mean and hurried running to the west side of field. As she reach the edge of it, suddenly her hope was faded. Other girls approached her.
“ It should be here” Jurina said hopelessly.
“ No, Jurina. I am not sure your interpretation was right. Hear me... Shinoda want to make some trick with her clue, that I had thought...” Mayu said, She was trying to interpretate Shinoda-sesei clue.
“ You guys are fools...”
suddenly a girl talked. All the freshmen move their look towards her. It was Kanon talking. She smirked mysteriously and her mouth began to humming. “There need a special spell that let someone able to see that flower” Kanon started to explain. It was heard like a bullshit for Jurina.
“ but you said that you don’t know anything about this challenge, Kanon...” Jurina pouted. “ I don’t care about you hide it from us... However, if you know it, just spell it now, we have no more time to wait...” Nao plead.
“ Because the time hasn’t come. We need to wait for the goddess of water come. Right?” Kanon argued. Finally, they waited for the moon to be appeared. Then, as it shine reflected form water in the crater, Kanon whispered the spell. Jurina couldn’t hear it, but she could read Kanon’s motion of lips. MA-JI-SU-KA.
From the west edge of crater, a red flower appeared. It sparkled white color of the moonlight. Kanon approached the precious flower that almost be hers. All the girls looked at her enviously. It was that haughty girl that would be the honor student at the end. As kanon pulled that red flower to pick it up, her face seemed showing something unbelivable happened. She smirked and continued pulling that flower with her full effort. She tried to make the others not seeing that she was in the trouble, but it was useless at the end. Everybody was knowing that she couldn’t pick that flower. Soon after, she moved back with horrible face.
Jurina ventured forward. She was sure that the flower is not as a common flower, It was protected by the magic and can choose the right person that will be allowed to pick it up. “A rebirth for the color of flame in a blameless conscience....“ Mayu whispered last part of Shinoda sensei clue suddenly she realized something. “ It is pure-minded one that will inherit the power of that sacred flower” she concluded all the thoughts in her mind.
Jurina exhaled deeply wondering that she was pure-minded or not. Her uncertainty was covered by strong desire to inherit it’s power. Flower, I’ll pick you.
Experiencing the same as the former girl that the flower was unpickable is finally made this short- haried girl fell in desperate. Even the other girls tried to do the same way, nobody can pick it. They were facing each other. “ How if we can’t pick it? The day is going to change into dark night” Annin asked worrily. “ Could it be... another spell to pick it?” Mayu wondered. She looked straight forward to Kanon. Kanon shook her head showing her ignorance.
“ friends, I think we still have a person left...” Jurina caught a face that she never seen her ever tried picking that flower. The girl sat on a stone staring down to the crater gasping as Jurina pointed at her. “ Paruru, come on! You are the last who hasn’t tried to pick that flower” Minarun pull her hand and bring her toward the flower. Everybody looked at Paruru filing their hope on her. Paruru simply gazed upon the flower, but it’s radiance was really dazzling that made the fear in her heart getting bigger. “ I just can’t...” Paruru moved back her body and cast down her eyes.
“What the heck...” Mayu pouted.
Jurina approached her pushing her back. “ Please go...” . “ Never give up before you ever try it” she plead. Suddenly, Paruru burst into tears. “ No, it shinnes so brightly until I have no confidence for touching that...”. “... I’m so scared. I wonder if I couldn’t pick it, will everybody blame at me? Otherwise, if I could pick it will everybody hate me? I need not to be honor student. The thing I want is only not being guilty and hostile” she expressed her unease.
“No, paruru. Of course not. We are loving you” Minarun calmed her down. Everybody nodded affirmatively. Who will hate ya, girl? That’s only your delusion. “ Paruru, you are our last hope” Jurina encouraged and brouhgt her to the front of that flower once more.
“ Now, do it!”
As paruru hand approached the flower, it glowed brighter and brighter. That sacred flower looked give it’s sign to the choosen girl who is going to inherit it’s power. Yes, the power left by sun goddess for moon goddess to keep enlight the world when he’s gone. The goddess might never met in same time forever, but their existence in both day and night give all the living to the world. That time there’s a llittle power was given to magic. For human, in the world.
Paruru smiled while the flower was suceeded to be picked up. Now it was in her hand glowing bright. Her heart fluttered for disbelieving why that flower choose the girl who is not good at anything as it’s power inheritant. Why it must be her? Why it don’t choose anyone else who has greater ability than her? However, In that uncertain feeling of happy or anxious, She was encouraging herself. Whether she will get a big pressure or not in the future by owning that flower, the most important thing now is everyone face is showing they relief and happiness. They are officially passed for being student of Majisuka.
That flower, which the name they didn’t know, finally choose the right girl to inherit it’s magical power and make her as the honor student of Majisuka. As it name which they didn’t know, they also didn’t know how big the power of that sacred power.
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I guess that you will said whatt??? is the end is like this??? :shocked
ahahaha... :lol: somehow, I also felt something like that, I'm lil bit unsatisfied with this part ending. I want to make something based on paruru's eien pressure story though. She is rarely or almost never been in fanfic... So, i just wanna bring her up.
Congratulation Yukii... you're right! :grin:
to be honest, I'm not paruru oshi. However, lemme do this appreciation fiction. :theking
I'm not sure when I'll made another chapter since I find hard to get a good idea. I hope I could start to write it down sooner.
thank you for reading my Crappy story :sweatdrop: :jphip:
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So Paruru was the destined one to get the flower.
After all that... that was extremely amusing as a story
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Kyaaah~ at the end it was Paruru~ xD
Wait! Kanon? How did she knew that spell thingy?
AND WHY DID YOU MAKE MY BABY (Kanon) SUCH A B****?!?!
*takes out a gun slowly* You'll pay for that!! xD
Update soon I can't wait!
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It's getting more and more interesting by the minute
Ah.. what's going to happen to everyone now that Paruru able to obtain the flower?
Can't wait to find out more
Thank you for the lovely update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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love it!!!
I was expecting for Jurina to pick it>.<
whew, paruru is also epic...
since im pretty clueless about the girls that made up team 4
dunno much bout paru~
cute, i forget if yuria peace is here?
well, she's paru's stalker in majisuka 3 >.< so who knows
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Thank you for reading!!! :grin:
Kyaaah~ at the end it was Paruru~ xD
Wait! Kanon? How did she knew that spell thingy?
AND WHY DID YOU MAKE MY BABY (Kanon) SUCH A B****?!?!
*takes out a gun slowly* You'll pay for that!! xD
Update soon I can't wait!
Ahahaha. Kanon is your baby? It might I made her little bit creepy. However, without her knowing the spells, the girls wont find the flower showing, right?
She's helpful although she's little bit creepy...
Kanon know the spell since she was actually has a nature to have prophecy ability. she was actually "pure-blood", was born from parents who mastering the magic as well. so, she has already knew a little bit more about magic.
love it!!!
I was expecting for Jurina to pick it>.<
whew, paruru is also epic...
since im pretty clueless about the girls that made up team 4
dunno much bout paru~
cute, i forget if yuria peace is here?
well, she's paru's stalker in majisuka 3 >.< so who knows
It just I were too inspired by eien pressure MV... :)
Of course yuria will be there... she's Jurina roommate. yep, she was Paruru stalker in that dorama. but I'm not intend to give her such image, she is too cute.
I'm writing the continuation slowly. I wish it will be ready to update this end of week.
Need a little bit research, I guess next chapter will be more interesting than before. :thumbsup
Yoss ikuzo! :cow:
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This weekend is going to end, but I haven't finished the second chapter. :sweatdrop:
seems like I got idea too much but can't word it. :lol:
So I decided to update it a small beginning part.
Class scene, still not the main story of this chapter...
But from here.... the Magic BEGIN! :yossi:
Majisuka Mahougakuen Ch. II : Miracles Don't Make It On Time (pt.1)
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“ From what we should start this lesson...ummm...” Umeda sensei, the first teacher as well as the homeroom teacher, fixed her eyeglasses. She held student attending list and finally called up a name to move forward. “ Kawaei!” Ricchan gasped pointing her nose. “eh, me?”. “Yes, Kawaei please come to the front.” Umeda asked. Ricchan walked to the front of class lazily.
“ Please mention all the elements in the chemical periodic table!” Umeda sensei asked. Everybody gazed with wonder, “It’s not a chemistry lesson....” Kawaei tried to remember... “ nitrogen... oxygen.. Carbondioxide...carbonmonoxide...” Everybody in the class laughed, She stopped and made a foolish smirk. Kojima sensei exhaled “ Okay, enough! Please back to your seat”.
“ Damn! She’s deceiving us.” Mayu pouted. “Eh... How could??” Jurina who sat beside Mayu wondered. “ Actually she is not that airhead. She got the best 10 in National Examination of Junior High School, and she ever won the gold medal in International Chemistry Olympiad when she was in 2nd year. She just pretend to be airhead to hide the fact that she is genius...” Jurina got Mayu sentence, there such type of person in this world that he/she wont to look superior than other. Rather than showing up in public, it’s better to enjoy normal life with the others.
“ The sense of spells is actually like a chemistry...” Umeda sensei started the lesson. Spells was the really basic thing to use magic. No magic without spells, the magical students must learn this during their first year. “ There were four basic elements of things you must understand to directing on something...” “ The first element was the easiest of all, it’s the air. The elements of air was the most light of all, It’s easy to control. “ she continued her speech, after that she closed her eyes and started to whisper “ kaze wa fuiteiru..”. Soon after, Jurina felt the wind was blowing softly lashed her face.
“ It’s just an example of spells that use for controlling air elements. We also can use air to move something by have it fly in the air”. Umeda pointed her index fingers onto a book in her desk. “ flying getto”. The books flew towards umeda sensei and soon umeda captured it by her right hands. The students were marvelled, since it’s their first time to see the magic.
“The second element is water... remember that water is actually consist of two elements which if they are stand by themselves, it will be just like other air elements.” Umeda took a glass of water from her desk and hold it by both her hands, “ Koimizu” she started the water spell. The water from the glass slowly moved up from the glass and floated in the air. It much like a bubble floating in the air now. “Koru” the water bubble suddenly changed into an ice ball. It’s so clear and reflected the sunlight until Jurina felt that she saw a little crystal ball. Beautiful.
“The third element is fire, fire is formed because of there’s a gathering of electron energy, and to make the fire, you will always need oxygen...” Umeda sensei explained the third element that spells used in. “kira-kira” she whispered a spell that made all the torch hanging on the class wall turned on. “ Please be aware with this third element , since it’s consist of a lot of energy, it can also be used to destroy thing” Umeda picked a piece of paper wasted in the floor and squeezed it. She threw up the paper in the air and suddenly it were burned. Nothing was remained except the ash. Jurina heart beat faster. It’s were so amazing. It’s just the piece of paper, she was sure that the magic can be use for the bigger thing, for instance to burn...
“ The last element is the hardest” haven’t finished her imagination, Jurina turned her attention back to Umeda sensei explanation. “the earth. As chemical substances, more solid the element, more heavy it’s weight. Infact, not all the witch can master this element” Umeda continued. “Besides it was the hardest there one thing that you must know about this special element”. Jurina lifted her eyebrow. “What’s that sensei?” she asked. Umeda sensei exhaled “ the formers elements was exist in inanimate objects, but the last elements is the basics elements that compiling living things. The man, for instance, were originated form the earth” All the girls caught in the silent. That mean, by mastering earth element, they can use spell for mastering someone body. The scariest thing that they ever know as far.
“ Did you believe in voodoo before?” Jurina asked Mayu who still chewing her bublegum although she was attending the lesson. The one being asked lifted her shoulder “even there’re a lot of people belive it, I definitely didn’t care about it before. I thought, only the fool people who believing such stodgy things. In this technology era, infact there were still such ancient things. I don’t belive this...” Mayu sighed. The magical seems to far away from her “Hi-tech otaku” mind.
“ Okay, let’s practice it now! So, who want to try it first?” Umeda sensei asked, almost the whole student in the class raised thier hand. “ Yep, You...” she pointed at Tanochan who looked really enthusiast. Spiritfully Tanochan walked forward. “What you want to do, Tano?” Umeda smiled. “I want to write down on that blackboard” Tanochan took a chalk and offered it to Umeda sensei.
“ First of all, you must focus your concentration at this chalk” Umeda took the chalk and put it on the table. “ Point your hand and begin to spell. Tano followed Umeda sensei instruciton, soon after that the chalk was flying on the air. She moved her hand slowly result in the chalk following her hand movement. No longer, it reached the blackboard. Tano has succesfully made a line before she lost her concentration so that the chalk was fell down at the end. She sighed, the psycokinetic was not as easy as she thought before. “Wow, That’s awesome...” Umeda sensei applaused. “ You may back to your seat, Tanochan..” “Thank you sensei...” Tanochan heading her way back to her seat next to Karen.
“ So, Who’s next?”
the student raised their hand more enthusiast.
-TBC
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Element manipulation class with Umeda-sensei :lol:
TBH she would make a great teacher :twothumbs irl
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Man~
I love you *hugs so that you can't breath*
I....I...*tears of joy* LOVE YOU FOR THIS AWESOME CHAPTER!!
Ricchan is genius? nice~ xD
I wonder what Jurina will take :D
Update soon I can't wait
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interesting.....
I dont know that many of these girls...
but I know the ones that had roles in Majisuka mostly....
and the older gen....
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I like the spells name lol
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lol, ricchan is a genious? xD i want to know what can do her little mind ~ she will be good for magic for sure! :grin:
magic is so cool! i want a magic duel with the girls!! xD
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Interesting.. elements control... very interesting power to have...
Can't wait to see the next
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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I love Umeda sensei..... :3
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I love thursday since it's the last day of lecture activity.... :cow:
I little bit had mind distracted because I can't write anything in my mind, still having thinking without acting. meh :catglare:
However, It's fine since I kept my spirit for writing. :rock:
I felt I was too obvious for writing a very long story without focusing in one person/ certain ship, I also thought that you felt a little bit confused since the story is jump for one to another person... :smhid
I would say this as a serials, but maybe you have already know who is the main character in this story.
So, even I tell about many members, and a little story about them, (this because I am DD), I hope you will still following this story till the end and keep supporting me writing this, so I can finish it :bow:
then today, let's enjoy a bit more story in majisuka, It's still related to the lessons, but I will tell you the focus character in this chapter! :yossi:
Majisuka Mahougakuen Ch. II : Miracles Don't Make It On Time (pt.2)
It was fun to learn about using spells for psycokinetic. However, because Umeda sensei took permission to leave the class earlier, the remaining time of the lesson was used to practice the lessons independently. The class was being so crowded. Some students practiced their magical spell to the objects around them while some others were having fun with the new ability they got. Little Oshima intended to make prank on her mate- Karen who were seriously practing by herself. She flew a box of pencil case directing to Karen’s head. Instead of hitting Karen’s head, infact the pencil case was missed and end up hitting Murashige’s head. Not accepting what just suffered by her, Murashige started to pointed her hand at a dictionary on her table and began to move it. Although Ryoka had apologized, Murashige seemed ignoring that. She chased Ryoka with her dictionary. As the result, Ryoka ran around the class avoiding Murashige’s revenge.
It was a short time when finally Ryoka stopped running around after bumped on Paruru. Paruru who was learning spells on water can’t control her motion. In consequence, the water buble which floated in the air burst and splashed on her. Murahsige ended her pursuance knowing that there was already a victim of their prank.
A brown-short-haired man suddenly entered the class in the middle of this ruckus. He was little bit surprised with all happened there, but he simply smiled right after. He approached paruru who fell down on the floor, then offered her his handkerchief. “ You are wet, you will caught by cold if you’re not have it dried” He soflty said looking at poor Paruru getting splashed by water. Ryoka, the one causing this trouble looked away innocently. Seem to finish with Paruru matter, he approached Ryoka then patted her head, “Promise me you will not cause any trouble again next time, okay?”. Ryoka nodded, the thing the man did totally made this little girl ashamed.
The students ended their self-learning and went back to their seats include Ryoka and Paruru. Murashige gave Ryoka a naughty grin and sticking her tongue out. Accept that, Little brat!. The man took his place in teacher’s desk in front of the class then introduced himself. Without controlling, a chalk straightly moved and wrote the man’s name when he was still talking to the students. Had such great introduction speech made all the class paid their attention well to this enchanting man.
“ potion-concocting is an art” He began hs explanation. “ the first thing that you must pay attention well is the preparation. You must prepare all you need to make a potion, All of the tools and ingredients must be there before you start to progress. Only best ingredients that will make best efficacious potion” He took one example of ingredients and showed it to the class, suddenly the students screamed. It was a disgusting dried lizard. “hahaha, don’t worry girls! Since it has been dried, it won’t bite you” the man came back to his place and put the lizard in the bottle. “that lizard is the main ingredients for making antipyretic potion...” he said.
“I don’t want to use that potion if i got fever, it’s disgusting” Juri whispered to Kawaei who sat beside her. Don’t know why, the man still could hear that whisper so he added his explanation, “ the potion is not used for usual fever, I mean... it’s for fever caused by something unnnn...” the teacher thougt what things should he use for an example.
"....black magic, or posion”. he said his last words by pressing the intonation indicating the deep meaning behind it. Black magic? What else is that? The magic itself has been so dark, so what about black magic?
“ Okay, let’s begin our lesson. Today, I’d like to explain you about some herbs that usually be used as ingredients. After you know some tools and ingredients, you may start practising.” The man took a thick-old-red covered book from his briefcase and opened it. “ Is anybody want to help me reading this chapter?” he asked. Some student raised their hand enthusiastly, including Jurina. The man finally choose her because she sat in the front row. Spiritfully, Jurina move forward and read the chapter the man referred.
“Four leaf clover, Usually the clover will have three leaves. Four leaf clover is uncommon variation of this which hard to find. It has been estimated that there are approximately 10,000 three-leaf clovers for every four-leaf clover;however, this probability is not definitive. Clover is a genus of about 300 species of plants in the leguminous pea family Fabaceae. The genus has a cosmopolitan distribution, the highest diversity is found in the temperate Northern Hemisphere, including Europe, Canada, and North America. We use four leaf clover as a main ingredient to make a lucky potion...” At that part, the man stopped Jurina who firmly reading the book and let her taking her seat. Jurina thanked and returned the book back.
Suddenly the man looked at this girl hand that had wounds in some place. “ Girl, Please meet me in the school clinic after the class end” he said. At first Jurina was not willing to do, but the man look so sincere that would make her feeling uneasy if she refused it. So, she end up nodding and accepted his offer.
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“ Maeda Atsuko was the honor student in her era...” without being asked, the man, Miyazawa sensei talked to Jurina while carefully cleaned the wound around Jurina hand. As He sweeped potioned-cotton onto the wound, amazingly it started to healed. Paying attention to her skin reaction, Jurina ignored Miyazawa sensei statement before. However, she suddenly realized that his statement was an important information. She widen her eyes and asked enthusiastically. “ E... really? Then why she...” unfinished her question, Miyazawa sensei interrupted Jurina’s question. “Acchan was not graduated... the students, the teachers, even this boarding school staffs, love her so much. Everything were run well until someday, suddenly she gone...” Miyazawa sensei exhaled.
“ Isn’t it good to be a honor student?. I mean, It would be nice that she has special rights in this school than other students, treated well by the teachers, and nobody could againts her since she has a big power... but why, she gone?” Jurina question made Miyazawa sensei smirked, “It was not as simple as you thought”.
“ So, why?” Jurina asked with big curiousity.
“ You are too naive, girl! Do you ever think why in this world there is a thing called King and Kingdom?” Jurina shooked her head. why?. “The king. Despite it’s power of leading everyone, the main purpose of it’s existence was actually as a symbol of a society... Because there is a king, there is a live of kingdom.” Although Miyazawa sensei tried to explained, Jurina really couldn’t get what Miyazawa sensei was telling her about. Besides, Her wound wass still felt a little bit painful.
Miyazawa tried to expand his explanation “Despite of it’s special power, the honor student bear a big burden in her shoulder, they took the responsible of her generation, and their existence was the main requirment for one generation to be exist, because of they are there, their generation are there. Acchan is a weak girl and she always felt like she wasn’t deserve for being the honor student. The truth is The sacred magical power will always choose a weak girl... you know why?” Knowing the girls in front of him showing her nesience, Miyazawa continued his explanation.
“ So, you would say that the honor student... was actually the sacrifice one, sensei?” Jurina tried to speak up.
“ The answer is yours” Miyazawa sensei smiled. “ You know why pharaoh kindom were destroyed but the british still exist?”. Jurina laughed, “ what the relationship with this? They are from the different age instead”.
“ The kingdom which have weak one as their king will last long. In the other hand, if the king is too strong, he will use the power for malicious things... that caused the destroy at the end”. Answering his retorical question, Mizayawa turned away his view and started staring out the window. “Nice analogy” Jurina finally understood what Miyazawa sensei was talking about.
Suddenly Miyazawa-sensei started to hold Jurina’s hands tightly “ Promise to me Jurina, to always protect her no matter what.” His eyes seemed want to talk something behind his word. Something fearful, something untalkable, something hidden from the past.
Is that related to Acchan’s disappearance in the past or something else, the girl had no courage to to inquire further. She just can nod and gave him ensuring face. Sure, You can rely on me, Sir !
The bell rang, It mean the resting time was over. Miyazawa sensei immediately end his talks and cleaned up the stuff. “ Nice to talk with you sensei” Jurina thanked Miyazawa. “ and thank you for healing my wound... It’s so fast, amazing!”. Miyazawa smiled “ You must learn about Posion Concocting next”. “Sure!” Jurina passed by leaving the school clinic to class building.
-TBC
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Acchan will develop strong skills because of her current status. Hope somebody can match her
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Ah.. Atsuko gone... why...? I don't think just because of pressure...
Why did the sensei said that to Jurina...?
Is there going to be another person like Atsuko... that might be the target again... so He asked Jurina to help.. supporting her mentally or physically?
Can't wait to find out that next
Thank you for the update
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I was little bit busy lately for university study. I just can open my tumblr and playing around there with new loli lovers. ;D
So that, i was little bit lazy for writing fanfics... Moreover, Budokan just made my mental status worse. :bleed eyes:
I wish I wont have mind distracted by these girl. So here I tried to update Mahougakuen once more. :sweatdrop:
Majisuka Mahougakuen Ch. II : Miracles Don't Make It On Time (pt.3)
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“Eh, you were treated by Miyazawa sensei??? Huwa... I want too” Miyuki started to be taken aback while Jurina told her friend why Miyazawa sensei, the charming teacher who made some girls secretly admire into him, called her up. “ aaa... If he passed by me, I would faint in front of him. So, he bring me to his clinic. Miyazawa sensei... please cure me, please cure my... heart” Miyuki exaggregatedly talked with euphoric facial expression. “Or I just pour a pail water on you, so he would come to you with a towel” Hearing that crazy talks by her fishing-souled friend, Mayu quipped and looked away to Paruru. “Ne, Paruru?”. Paruru blushed ,“No... it was just an incident”. She took the omelette then continued her lunch.
Every mealtime, the main hall of majisuka boarding school is used as the refectory. All the student can eat whatever they want from the food served on the dinning table. Since the lesson of magical school schedule is so tight and depleting the student’s energy, Mealtime become the time all the students always waiting for. They have only thirty minutes in the noon for taking a rest, including lunch time, before continuing their lessons. Along with mayuyu, Jurina took the table near the window facing to the garden, so she can enjoy her dish by enjoying the scenery. “ E, mayu. Can you eat that much?” Jurina just realized that her friend took her fifth piece of cheese lasagna*, while she was only taking a piece of chicken sandwich and a bowl of cream soup for her lunch. Mayuyu just showed her ignorance and continued her delicious meal, leaving her friends being amazed with her tummy capacity.
*writers comment: Nezumi loves cheese right? ahahaha
On the others dinning table, some others students who could hear Miyuki confounding words started girlstalking about Miyazawa sensei too. “ I heard that he is liking our third grade senpai” Renacchi started gossiping. “E.. really, who’s that?” Juri aksed. “ I got this from yamauchi sempai, the second grade, she said that the one who Miyazawa sensei falling into her is....”. “ Our student’s council president” Murashige interupted Renacchi sentence. “eeee....” the girls was surprised until can’t hold themselves shouting. “ Unfortunately, Poor Miyazawa sensei... His love to her will be always one-sided because yukirin senpai is not the type who is into the man.” Murashige creepy whispered. The girls closed their mouth by their hands preventing from shouting. “ Instead of making clean image of being student’s president, her actions actually isn’t for avoiding teacher-student relationship” Murashige put a piece of meatball into her mouth and continued her talks. “Some students ever found her went out with Yui sempai”. she swallowed and took another meatball. “Yuihan sempai? did you mean the honor student of second grade? Isn’t she just a vice of president?” Annin asked disbelievingly. “ Even for amusement park? C’mon what on the earth they go to such place for something student-council related” Murashige convinced her friends. “ Sorry Anya, Since i haven’t see her do such thing, I’m still disbelieving on you” Annin finished her meals and aked Renacchi to leave with her.
Geez, It’s crazy! Is this school has no regulation for mutual relationship?. However, suddenly her eyes met a black short hair who sat next to paruru, and regret her thought then simply smiled. Somehow, another side of her heart seemed to take in her sempai deed. What’s wrong with mutual relationship??? However, her mind was going to be distracted soon after since she reminded that the girl was nicely getting along with their generation’s honor student these days. Meh, Just because they are honor students, they could get extra attention from the people around. She fasten her walks and shook her head. It couldn’t be, It couldn’t be.
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The students were wondering since Mariko sensei entered the class. It should be their beloved Miyazawa-sensei’s concoction class at that time. So, why Shinoda-sensei is suddenly entered the class? Haven’t finishing their wonder, Shinoda-sensei told the student, “It seems that I’d temporary teach you for concoction lesson.” The students know that beside headmastering this school, Shinoda also teaching. However, they’re surprised because this lesson she taught was out of her speciality in prophecy. In addition, where Miyazawa had gone until their headmaster must take over his class? Is he okay?
“ Today, we will make a sleep potion” shinoda-sensei began her class then picked an ingredients box she brought. “ara... I supposed i brought some pumpkin seeds...” she took an empty bottle labeled by pumpkin seeds. “ So who would help me to take some?” shinoda asked. Since they didn’t know how to get the grains, nobody raised their hand. “Who is the class representative here?” She asked once more. Everyone in the class pointed at Jurina. Yep, she was elected as class representative in their first day of school. She raised up then ventured forward. Besides having responsibility to lead the class matter, It was likely to a class representative to accept some orders from the teacher.
“ Please go to the botanical, and ask the greenhouse keeper there for some pumpkin seeds” Shinoda-sensei ordered Jurina to go to the greenhouse. “ Ano...where is that greenhouse,s ensei...?, I’ve never been there before” Jurina asked the greenhouse location while Shinoda-sensei gave her that labeled bottle. “A! It’s behind the school, walk straight forward the main corridor until the end you can see an exit to handball filed, then turn a left, after 2 buildings of warehouse, step down stone stairs, you can find the greenhouse from there. You got it?” Shinoda gave Jurina brief direction. Jurina nodded in understanding, she asked the teacher’s permission and went out the class.
School’s main corridor in classtime was so quiet, there are some carving and pictoral decorated the classical architecture of the building. She stooped at a shelf filled ot thropies. The biggest throphy was for handball tournament. It was shiny gold plated throphy although the year written there was almost ten years ago. Beside it, there was a pictoral of the players holding up that trophy. A long-black-haired girl looked proudly holding up it with a short-haired girl put her hand on the girl shoulder. They school had a handball club. But since that time, they never been heard winning any competition again. Suddenly she desired to join the club. Handball looks interesting!
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Jurina walked out the main corridor then found a handball field as Shinoda-sensei told. It was not as big as football field, but it was bigger than basketball field. The interesting thing that she found the goal was a circle. She wondered how the players scored. Her interest of this game was getting bigger and bigger. Although there was no one in that filed, she imagined that there was a competition. Some players were fighting to be the winner, and the others student cheering them up. Not letting herself lulled into daydream, she continued her way to the greenhouse.
“ Hallo... anybody here?” She shouted right after enter the greenhouse since she can’t see anyone there. It was her first time to come in that greenhouse. There are a lot of plants that she haven’t see before. Her eyes fixed on a big-red woodbine. It look so beautiful with silvery leave which breadth almost as big as her hand. As she touched the leave, the plant started to creep around her hand. Jurina tried to release it, but it end up the plant grabbed her other hand. Instead of getting away from that creepy plant by making bigger effort, the plant was grasping her stronger then begin to creep throughout her body. She struggled to get loose but it was useless.
“Help... Somebody help me!!” she shouted as her body became weaker since all her effort result in nothing.
“ Heee...lp” she shouted once again. Now with the higher pitch.
Soon a long haired women came in haste with a big scissor in her hand.
“A... gomen... “ She immediately cut up the plant and released Jurina from the woodbine.
“fhew... finally. Thank you for saving me” Jurina clean up the woodbine around her body. The leaves of that cutted woodbine’s had not it’s silvery shine anymore. They just like usual woodbine with reddish leave.
“ Unn... mistress, are you the keeper of this greenhouse?”
The woman laughed. “ Am I looked so old to be called like that...?” She put her hands on her lower lip since she felt embarrassed.
“So... “ Jurina looked at the woman face ensuring what should she called her by. Somehow the face look familiar, but Jurina can’t remember where she ever meet the similar face. The woman seemed not so old to be called by mistress. But there are an exotic look on her face.
“Call me sayaka-san. So what I can help you? ” The woman introduced herself.
“ Sayaka san... I need some pumpkin seeds. Dou you have some here?” Jurina took a bottle that fell down before as Jurina needed to face the creepy woodbine.
“ Yep! We should have it in the storage. C’mon follow me...!” She took the bottle and aksed Jurina to follow her way to the storage place.
“ Miyazawa-sensei didn’t come to our class. We are worried about him”
“O, soukka?”
“ Do you know what happened with him today?”
The woman keept silent then shook her head. “ Sorry, I don’t know”
She showed her ignorance but her eyes showed that she was hiding something.
“Here your pumpkin seeds!” she offered the bottle that had been filled with pumpkin seeds to Jurina.
“ Arigatou!”
“ I’m really sorry for what happened just now. Would you come with me to have a cup of tea as a redemption?” that women apologized.
“ Thank you, but Shinoda sensei has been waiting for me” Jurina refused politely.
“ A.. that’s right. Hurry up go back to class then!”
Jurina nodded and ran back to the classroom.
-TBC
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interesting...
It's quite straight forward this time...
Can't wait to see the next
Thank you for the update
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Sleeping potion u said :cool2: hmmm :mon wtfmm: .........*smack* :on kimbo: :on beatup sorry I let my dirty mind take over and yeah...
I what going to happen next in this story hehehe :oops:
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Lol for Jurina
Mayu and cheese : drool:
Shinoda for Miyazawa? What is that about?
Interesting chapter altogether!
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I thought that Mayuyu was the no-eats big type of person~~ lol
so I guess I have trouble remembering things....
Yui~~~~han~~~ any fanfic with Yui and Paru will make me explode from happiness due to the fact that
if the older members were to graduate, they are basically the only ppl I really have a clue and love~