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 :welcome Hi Guys!
actually I have been following AKB for more than two years, but It's my first time to write down a fanfiction -or maybe posting something in Jphip forum. I ever joined in my region/country fanbase, but it's rare since I used to have my own world in tumblr.  :nervous
I am willing to make a different genre of fanfiction, but since I'm not a native in English, it end up with a lot of broken language.  :banghead:

I'm writing it down slowly, I hope you enjoy my very first sequele.



PROLOGUE
There are a number of children in this world that born to be special. However, some of them are unrecognized, seen as mentally disturbed, and rejected by society. The reason of parents keeping them in the house, and not allowing them to go out is due to the embarrasment or just wanting their child not to bother the people around. Yes, because they can not stop talking about bizzare things, that only known by themself, spells, or can not stop doing weird things.
Indigo, some of them have their own world, live on their own thought, and doing everything in their own way. Despite of their selfishness, there are hidden ability, outstanding intellegent, and mysterious power that no one can ever touch.
Majisuka Private School, a boarding school established by a mysterious foundation is selecting this special chidren every years. Only a few children who are eligible, can attend this school with or without their parent’s allowance.


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Chapter I : Akai Hana No Namae Wa Mada Shiranai
Part 1 http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35389.msg1170212#msg1170212
Part 2 http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35389.msg1170318#msg1170318
Part 3 http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35389.msg1170837#msg1170837
Part 4 http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35389.msg1172313#msg1172313

Chapter 2 :
Part 1 : http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35389.msg1173209#msg1173209
Part 2 : http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35389.msg1174453#msg1174453

*dunno how to hyperlink it #noobs
« Last Edit: May 05, 2013, 05:56:56 AM by KeiOshi »
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Re: Majisuka Mahogakuen -100%Noobs- [Daredemo Daisuki]
« Reply #1 on: April 05, 2013, 06:14:34 PM »
Nice start :thumbsup

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« Reply #2 on: April 05, 2013, 06:16:56 PM »
CHAPTER 1 - Akai Hana no Namae Wa Mada Shiranai (1/4)

Jurina gazed out  the window  of her compartment. Everything dark was changing into blue with reddish silhouette. It had been a night she was being in that small room. Having sailed away for first time made her head dizzy. Moreover, she didn’t have anything to eat since last night. She woke from her bed, walked slowly out the compartment, she didn’t want to make a girls next to her bed awake as she was still sleeping.
Who is her name... Jurina tried to remember her conversation last night but she failed. The girl seemed to busy with her mobile phone, and Jurina just could stop talking at that time. She prefered to go to her bed, stop thinking about her next destination and fell asleep soon after that. 
Jurina looked around and decided to go to the main deck. She supposed that the restoration room is located near that place or maybe at least she could ask someone about it there. As Jurina reached the main deck, some people had already gathered, some of them were talking while having their breakfast. She need not to ask anyone since she already seen the board with written “ All Passagers can take their breakfast here, for free” in contralateral side of the main deck. Jurina directly went to that room and took her meals.  Honey roasted bread and hot chocolate milk was her menu for today’s breakfast.
“Hey watch out!” a girl warned Jurina, but it was late. Jurina bumped against that girl and suddenly her milk spilled out at that girl’s white sleeve.
“ aaa... I am sorry...” Jurina apologized for her mistake and direclty took a tissue for wiping that girl’s sleeve. Intead of wiped out, the stain was getting wider.
“what the hell you are doing! Gosh, look at my sleeve, you have messed it.” Said that girl. She shooked off Jurina hand and moved back. She walked away yelling.   Jurina looked at her back regretting the thing happened before.
Jurina sighed and decided to come back to her compartment. She didn’t own money even a dollar for buying other foods.  As she came back to her compartment, her roommate already woke up.
“ Ne, do you want some?” she offered a box of pocky stick while having a bublegum in her mouth.  Jurina took a stick and returned that box to her. “arigatou..”
“Take it all for you, I don’t like chocolate...”  She refused. “...I still have some in my bag. If you want more, you can ask me ” the bublegum girl said.
“un...” jurina nodded. “thank you...” Jurina moved closer and sat next to that girl. She was curious of what make that girls was so serious with her mobile phone.
Knowing that Jurina was trying to peek her mobile phone screen, the girl directly flip it up. Jurina felt embarrased as that girl known her intention.  After a moments kept on silent the girl started grumbling, “Heck! there is no mobile provider signal here even a bar”. 
Jurina chuckled “Of course there is no signal here... we are in the middle of ocean now...ahahahahaha....” she can’t hold her laugh for a while.
“ I already know that, I just pretending!” the girls smirked. Jurina stopped laughing, she had been tricked by the girl.
“Hey, we haven’t know each other... Have we?” Jurina started to make a conversation. They had been in same compartment since the night before, but they were not have any talks, even just for asking name.
 As Jurina asked, the girl started to tell about herself. Watanabe Mayu, dropped uot from Matsuoka Public  Junior High School after hacked school main server PC and meesed up all students and teachers database. She was been homeschooled by her parents then. She told that how happy she was because after dropped out, she could have fun with hacking as she wanted.
“ Valentine Kiss??? A! I have heard about that virus! When the PC started up, suddenly there was love picture shown, and the PC turned off after that... when you restarting it once more, seems all the file changed into love shortcut... It can’t be recovered...” Jurina commented about Mayu latest virus that she made. “that’s so bad...” Jurina continued. Mayu smiled proudly. 
“How you coud create such dangerous virus? When did you start to learn about PC programming?” Jurina asked.
“Well, I don’t ever learn about that... It seems like I just get the knowledge in my brain and somebody whispering it”... mayu said.  Jurina was fallen silent.
“ My parents were so happy knowing there is a highschool that want to accept me. No Matter how far the school is...” I wonder if there are computer lab with network in that school...” Mayuyu sighed.
“Mayu, how often you get somebody whispering in your ears....?”
“Psssst...” Mayu put her index finger in front of her nose.  “ Right now, I already know who you are...” Mayu told Jurina. Jurina bright eyes widen.
 “It’d be fun that I could beat up 10 man in only a night” Mayu told something that Jurina had never tell before, she blown her buble gum, and... “POP”. Jurina hearbeet seemed to stop for a moment as the buble gum pooped.
“ Don’t worry... I’m not a person who like to  divulge a secret...” Mayu smirked. Jurina felt little relived.  She didn’t love fight a much, but nobody know that accidentally one night, ten man who tried to bully an elementary school girl would face unexpected moment ever in their life. Yes, Jurina fought them. A day after, A local mass media reproted that ten men were passed away mysteriously in suburbs. No one ever find the cause of this mysterious death. 
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After a week on sea journey, finally Jurina, Mayu and other girls arrived in their destination : Majisuka Privat School. The school was located in an isolated island of pacific islands, far away from Japan mainland, the only access to get there is by sea transportation. The island was not so big, so it wouldn’t figured in any map. From the shore, the school buildings can be seen built on the hill. With mountains scenery behind it. Near the port there was a village, with classical archithecture buildings, seemed that it was the only village in this island. They stayed for a while in the village for buying some groceries.  Jurina, who didn’t bring any money even a dollar, just walking around the village for sightseeing. The village was really cozy, the air was so fresh, and she could feel the coastal wind blown soflty. She sat on the bench of a park near  the port and intended to take nap for a while, but suddenly the carriage had came, so she canceled it.
 “Welcome to Majisuka Private school...” Shinoda sensei, the headmaster welcomed  the freshmen. “This school is the right place to built up your personality, and characther to be an extraordinary person, the strongest fighter, the bravest knight, and the greatest witch...” she continued.
As the freshmen came, the whole students had gathered in the main hall af school. The Freshmen was welcomed by a welcoming ceremony.  Jurina could feel the athmosphere inside the school was changed a lot from the outside-the village. Somehow she felt a little bit scared, she must not be in this unknown place and myst world. However, Shinoda sensei speech encouraged her. This place is her destiny and her dream. She felt that she was not alone. She found a lot of face, girls with a super ability like her.   
“...So, tomorrow we will held a annual event  for admissioing the freshmen... All the freshmen must take place in this challenge as regulation of this school ”
The student that kept on silent before began to buzz.
“ What?? I never hear this before” one girl whispered
“ What kind of Challenge?” someone asked
 “ Dunno, but I heard the rumour that the challenge is really dangerous” the girl stood beside her answered.
“ I am scared....” another girl talked
“ Please be silent!” Shinoda sensei calmed the freshmen down.
“ I know that you are really curios about what challenge it will be. However, I won’t tell you about it until tomorrow. For now on, please enjoy the dinner dishes we serve specially for celebrating your coming, and after that you may take a rest in your own dormitory!” 
All the student yelled and applaused.  Soon after that a number of plates were flying and landed right on the table in front of every student. “Pop” special menu foods were appeared and laid out the plates afterwards. The freshmen were amazed, included Jurina. It was the first time for her to see the magic, and it was for real!  Jurina, who had not eat anything since arrived to this Island was so happy seeing a lot of food in front of her eyes. She will no longer starving here, she thought. It’s time to get party! She took a slice of roasted peking duck, a plate of sphagetti meatballs, a bowl of salad, and chocolate pudding. She was really hungry!

-TBC

« Last Edit: April 07, 2013, 11:21:13 AM by KeiOshi »
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Re: Majisuka Mahogakuen -100%Noobs- [Daredemo Daisuki]
« Reply #3 on: April 05, 2013, 06:22:37 PM »
I like this already, Mayu's character will be a total anti-heroine type while Jurina will probably be straight forward stay on the line until she is willing to be knocked off :nervous
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Re: Majisuka Mahogakuen -100%Noobs- [Daredemo Daisuki]
« Reply #4 on: April 05, 2013, 06:24:46 PM »
Nice start :thumbsup

Are we looking at a Nezumi/Center fic?

thanks  :)
Although J/M are the main character in the beginning... I wish it will not make a special OTP though...  I am willing to make it daredemo daisuki. since it's in school, there will be a lot of girl right?
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Re: Majisuka Mahogakuen -100%Noobs- [Daredemo Daisuki]
« Reply #5 on: April 05, 2013, 08:22:21 PM »
Nice! Mahogakuen.. :)  JuriMayu are the main characters great love it! Ammm.. Can't wait what will happen next.. Hope you update soon.. Thanks :) Great story!

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Re: Majisuka Mahogakuen -100%Noobs- [Daredemo Daisuki]
« Reply #6 on: April 05, 2013, 10:11:50 PM »
Interesting story and idea

Can't wait to see how the story going to continue

Thank you for the interesting update

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Re: Majisuka Mahougakuen -100%Noobs- [Daredemo Daisuki]
« Reply #7 on: April 06, 2013, 12:37:32 AM »
the first chapter is too much  :grin: I end up divide it into three, so I could make the update as soon as possible.  :panic:
I hope the story is getting much interesting and unpredictable. Magical Boarding School... So many things would happen



CHAPTER 1 - Akai Hana no Namae Wa Mada Shiranai (2/4)

“ Gokigen’you... my name is Kashiwagi Yuki, Third grade. I am student president of this school. I ll lead you to your room in the dormitory. Please follow me”  Yuki-senpai introduced herself, after that she moved her body back and began to walk. The Freshmen followed her way to the dormitory.
“In this dormitory, you must share a room with your mates, so please throw away your selfishness. Because there must be four persons each room and you were 20, so we will divide you into five” Yuki explained the rooms allocation.

“ Can we choose our own room? I want to be in same room with Annin” the twin tailed hair girl- Kato Rena asked.
 “ I am sorry you can’t, we have the list for the room member already...” Yuki answered. Kato Rena drooped dissapointly.
“ OK, I’ll divide you now.... Room 301 : Shimazaki, Iriyama, Kawaei, and Takahashi.  Room 302: Kato, Iwata, Tano, and Oba. Room 303: Matsui, Kizaki, Kimoto, and Yagami, room 304: Murashige, Kodama, Miyawaki, and Oshima room 305: Moriyasu, Muto, Furuhata, and watanabe...” “Now pelase gather in a group based on your room! 301 here, 302 there, 303 there, 304 beside 303 and 305 there...” The girls followed Yuki directions.

“ It’s strange...” Yuki squinted there was a group with five members.
“ Hey you! 305 rooms! Why there are five persons??? Is anyone of you in the wrong room?.. aarhg, but the others are already in four...”  Yuki confused, she tried to call the 305 members once more.  “ Furuhata..” Furuhata nao raised her hand. “Moriyasu...” Moriyasu madoka raised her hand. “Muto...” Muto tomu raised her hand. “watanabe...” Watanabe Mayu and......
Watanabe Miyuki raised their hand.

 “Wait. I must clarify this up,” Yuki took her walkie-talkie. “Umeda sensei...” the conversation started. “...........What???are we have 21 freshmen? But this paper only listed 20?.” yuki said madly. “ Gomen ne, I forgot to include Watanabe Mayu into the list... she is the last registrant of our school...” the opposite side of the walkie-talkie talked. “ So how about her??? We have no room left for the freshmen???” Yuki asked. “ A! That’s right.... ummm..umm.... Yukirin,  isn’t there a bed left on your room since Maeda graduated?...”
“ e... “ yuki stupefied.
“ Ahahaha... please take care of her! Ja ne. Bye bye...” the opposite one hung up the call.  “ Hello... Umeda sense???.... Umeda sense...” Yuki call back the opposite side, but there was no answer anymore. She sighed.
“Okay, Watanabe mayu... you can stay in my room.”  Yuki felt that she just got a karma, she said to the freshmen not to be selfish and now she must share a room with a kouhai- that she actually don’t want to.


***

“ Aaa... I am really full...” Jurina laid her body down on the bed. In the room, they were four. Yuria began to arrange her wardrobe, Kumi and Kanon chatted.
“ Ne, I am really curious about what tomorrow challenge” Jurina interruped Kumi-non chatting. “  you haven’t sleep yet. Have you?” Yuria asked. Jurina shook her head.  “ I don’t know...” Kumi answered... “ Do you know it kanon?”  kanon nodded and smirked.  “ Let me know it... please tell me” Jurina begged.
“ hahaha it’s secret!”  kanon refused, then suddenly she raised up and walked away.
“ hey? Where will you go???”
“ I want to take a bath” Kanon answered regardless.  Then she moved her body back, “Nantene!” she laughed after that. Her roommates just sighed together. Annoying girl!

***

“ Good afternoon everybody. I hope you got enough resting last night and have been prepared for this challenge!”  Shinoda began the event with her speech. The freshmen already gathered in the school’s field.  “ So, as I promised yesterday, I will announce this challenge systematisc and rule. Please listen carefully” The whole freshmen was paying their attention to shinoda-sensei. They didn’t want to get failed to enter Majisuka. “ I challanged you all, to find a sacred flower in this island!” the freshmen started to make noise.

 “ That sacred flower is on the top of the highest mountain in this island.... I’ll give you all two days for completed this challenge”  Shinoda sensei continued her explanation. The freshmen ogled than faced to the mountains behind their school. The highest mountain was the southest mountain, it was approximately 10 kilometers distance from their school, and the height was about 1500 meter. 

“ It’s impossible”  Madoka whispered.

“ What??? This is crazy! I could die on the way to get there” Kumi moaned.

“...Once someone of you can pick it up the others will be free for the obligation, and all af you will officially approved as a student of Majisuka. Otherwise, if no one of you could find and pick it, so  all af you will be failed and no one will be approved as student of Majisuka. You may get back home instead...” “ it’s not a competition, but the first girl who can pick it up will be awarded as a honor student. So, the way how you can reach the top of the mountain is up to you. You may go by yourself or you can go there together if you don’t sure you can reach it alone. However, be sure that you wont put your friend in a danger only for being the honor student.” The freshmen who were getting down at the first time were being encouraged. They didn’t know what the benefit of being a honor student, but they were sure it would be great opportunity.  “Okay student... do you accept my challenge?” Shinoda asked the freshmen.

“ Of course, sensei !!!!” The freshmen yelled spiritfully.
“ For now, the challenge started. Be careful, there are a lot of obstacle in the way to the top of the mountain...” Shinoda sensei warned the students. “ Yes sensei!!!” the student complied.

“ Good, for the last thing please remember this phrases : “The world ain’t worshipping over more than one god. When you just see goddesses nearly met  in the same time, look toward goddess dancing farewell bring red, A rebirth for the color of flame in a blameless conscience.“   Shinoda sinsei closed her speech for beginning the challenge           

***

Jurina still feelt unsure. For her, it was no matter that she could pick the flower or not. The biggest thought in her mind was can she survive in the journey?  The way to the top of the mountain was not easy way. It was a unknown forest, and they were never know what danger hidden behind the trees. They would stay day and night in the middle of forest. Suddenly she was chilled. She ran pursuing her friend ahead.

Most of them were agreed to walk together, except Tano Yuka and Iwata Karen. Tanochan and Karen were challanging each other to be the fastest, so they ran off their friends behind. While Iriyama Anna walked slowly behind all of them. She thought that this challenged was riddiculous. She didn’t want to take this challenge, but She was forced by the regulation that every freshman must take this challenge.  Jurina prefered to walk next to Mayu, but she talked nothing since the first time and just chewed her bubblegum.

“ How was your new roommate – I mean the shool president?” Jurina started to make a conversation.
“ Un...” Mayu just kept silent.

 “ Yuria is a nice girl, she gave me this...” Jurina showed Mayu a wristband she wearing. “ Kumi and Non get the same to...” Jurina pointed at Kumi and Kanon who were walking together in front of them.  “ Nice wristband...” Mayu praised and back to keep silent chewing her bublegum.

“ Ne, Mayu... why you just keep silent?” Jurina asked. “ I am a little bit tired Jurina, I lack of sleep last night..”
“ Could it be...” jurina wondered and looked Mayu face with a sense of suspicion. “ No...” Mayu blushed. “ She studied mantra like idiot until the middle of the night, after that she fell asleep and snored like a pig sound, it was really disturbing me that I coudn’t sleep last night...” Mayu clarified and grumbled.  Suddenly  Jurina laughed out loud. 
However, no long  time after that.... “Kyaah...” somene screamed from the back. Everybody stopped and faced back, but they didn’t see anyone.

-TBC
« Last Edit: April 07, 2013, 11:22:29 AM by KeiOshi »
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Re: Majisuka Mahogakuen -100%Noobs- [Daredemo Daisuki]
« Reply #8 on: April 06, 2013, 12:52:13 AM »
Jurina  :lol:

Mayu is quite a studious person although this challenge may be a tough one for any person :nervous
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Re: Majisuka Mahogakuen -100%Noobs- [Daredemo Daisuki]
« Reply #9 on: April 06, 2013, 12:57:58 AM »
oh it's like a mix of harry potter and akb hebe
lol Yukirin snores

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Re: Majisuka Mahogakuen -100%Noobs- [Daredemo Daisuki]
« Reply #10 on: April 06, 2013, 05:10:58 AM »
this is interesting  :roll: :roll: :roll:
and I really like you're fast update :D :D :D
looking forward for the next update 8) 8) 8)

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Re: Majisuka Mahogakuen -100%Noobs- [Daredemo Daisuki]
« Reply #11 on: April 06, 2013, 08:55:21 AM »
Ara... with Maeda is graduating.... so no Atsumina....

Yaada.... I want Atsumina too

Anyhow... great story so far

Very interesting too...

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you

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« Reply #12 on: April 06, 2013, 09:39:16 AM »
awww i wanna read more, please update soon~  :panic:
the story is interesting, the girls having special powers i like it! what girl just screamed? i wanna knoooowww :panic: 
Mayu complainign about Yuki and Jurina just laughing about that hahahah

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Re: Majisuka Mahogakuen -100%Noobs- [Daredemo Daisuki]
« Reply #13 on: April 06, 2013, 11:55:06 AM »
Thank you for this fic  :kneelbow:

I love it!!  I wonder what happened with the one who screamed and who she is....?  :dunno:

Is she still alive? Please don't kill my babies (Kumi, Non and Yuria)  :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

I bet you're gonna do that  :shifty:

Anyways! Update soon I can't wait!  :wigglypanda:

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Re: Majisuka Mahogakuen -100%Noobs- [Daredemo Daisuki]
« Reply #14 on: April 06, 2013, 04:36:25 PM »
my first impression of the school was like hogwarts+xavier's with girls from 48 family in it...sounds interesting for me... :on GJ:

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« Reply #15 on: April 06, 2013, 05:40:35 PM »
Thank you for the comments

oh it's like a mix of harry potter and akb hebe
lol Yukirin snores
my first impression of the school was like hogwarts+xavier's with girls from 48 family in it...sounds interesting for me... :on GJ:

Actually, this is not really like harry potter  :nervous.
I just know there was a school named Xavier, it is X-men home, right?  :D
Anyway, I hope the story wouldn't be the same  :grin:

Thank you for this fic  :kneelbow:

I love it!!  I wonder what happened with the one who screamed and who she is....?  :dunno:

Is she still alive? Please don't kill my babies (Kumi, Non and Yuria)  :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

I bet you're gonna do that  :shifty:

Anyways! Update soon I can't wait!  :wigglypanda:

Just guess who will appear... and who will end  :catglare:
the story is still under development... I'm still working for next continuance. So, since I write it as the mood come, it need long time.

I'll update it as soon as possible, please be patient...
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Re: Majisuka Mahogakuen -100%Noobs- [Daredemo Daisuki]
« Reply #16 on: April 06, 2013, 07:39:50 PM »
The challenge reminds me of Paruru's challenge in eien pressure lol, getting a flower in seemingly dangerous mountain XD

And lol Yukirin 8D
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Re: Majisuka Mahougakuen -100%Noobs- [Daredemo Daisuki]
« Reply #17 on: April 07, 2013, 11:44:01 AM »
 

since it's weekend,finally I could make an update as soon as possible. thank you for read this story...
I need one additional part to finish this chapter... it hasn't finished yet.

:lol: but somebody has know the story line :lol:

However, I hope you enjoy this story...  :oops: douzo...



CHAPTER 1 - Akai Hana no Namae Wa Mada Shiranai (3/4)

“Hey is Iriyama with us? I saw she walked in the very back from the first time...” Juri wondered. Everybody looked around. Juri was right, Iriyama Anna were not with them. “ I’ll gonna check in the back! Everybody please continue your way. I will come after if i have found her...” Jurina said. “ OK, please be safe, the day is getting darker...”  Everybody  continued walking while Jurina ran to the back.

Soon after, Jurina found a girl just sat down, leaned back against the tree and seemed getting trouble.  Jurina walked over her. Although she hadn’t talked to her before, she was sure that the girl was Iriyama Anna. Jurina couldn’t see her face clearly because it was overshadowed as the day was getting darker.

“ Are you okay...?” Jurina asked her.“ OK janai...” the girl yelled. “Hurry up, and help me...” She strenghten her head and faced to Jurina. Jurina could see the girl face, somehow she remembered that the girl was someone she had talked to before. Annin, who felt the same, gasped. The girl who come to her was the girl who spilled chocolate milk on her favourite white sleeve. “ I need not your help. Please go on! I want to go back to the school!” Then she raised up and tried to move her body back. However, before she could do the first step, she fell down.

“ Ugh...” she moaned. “ Are you okay” Jurina approached her and hold her upper arm. She know that the Annin was mad on her, but she ignored it. She worried that Annin got an injury in her leg. Without asking she moved Annin back under the three and started to examine. “Itai...” Annin yelled as Jurina tried to examine her right foot.

“ I am afraid you got a sprain” Jurina told Annin. Who being told just kept silent. Jurina opened her backpack and tried to find out useful thing, but she found nothing could be used. Then she took her slayer down and and tear it into two. After that, she started bandage Annin right foot.  “ Ok, finish” said her cherrfully.  Annin just kept silent. She slowly tried to stand once more moved her legs. At that time she felt better. The pain on her right foot was reduced drastically. She was able to walk then.

 “Yokatta, Could you walk? Let us join the other!” Jurina smiled, hold Annin arm and put in in her shoulder. However, before Jurina could help Annin to walk, Annin pulled her arm back and yelled. “ Yamete!” Jurina was surprised then fastly removed her arm from Annin. “ I am sorry” “ I can walk by myself..” said Annin confidently and started to go.

“ Hey... that is not the rigt way!” Jurina told. “I said before, I want to go back to the school...” . “ Wait...” Jurina walked over Annin. “ Please go, I can go back alone” Annin said ungratefully. Jurina stopped. The girl drived her pissed off. Jurina just helped her, but she didn’t even say thank you or show her grateful. Regardless, Jurina tried to bury it  soon as she felt the atmosphere surrounding them was changing. She was sure that someone is heading, but it was impossible to be their friends since they are move away.

Jurina catched Annin arm and hold it thight. “ Please let me...” Annin yelled and pulled her arm, but Jurina didn’t let her. She thighten her hold instead. Annin faced to Jurina, Instead of showing unpleased expression for letting her go, their eyes simply gazed one another for seconds. Don’t know why she catched fear  from Jurina eyes, then suddenly she caught on the fright too.

“ Psst... silent please. Did you heard something?” Jurina Whispered.

 “ e... Nope.” Annin shook her head. “ What’s wrong?”

 ZAP. a shadow passed by.

“Don’t move” Jurina instructed Annin. She swept her view surround them but she could find nothing. It’s twillight. The only things she could do at that time was to keep her ear alert. Unexpectedly Annin felt something touched her leg, she looked down scarefully then suddenly screamed. “ Kyah!”

Jurina fastly reacted and tried to figure it up. Her eyes widen as she seen a ghostlike black furry creature. It looked like a monkey but it had scary red eyes and long fang.  Soon, Jurina took a stone near her and threw it to that scary creature. The stone hitted right on it’s head, the creature strarted to groan. Jurina smiled of victory.

“ Ne...” Annin whispered to Jurina stammerly. It seemed like her fear was not dissapeared, it was getting bigger instead.   “ Look at that!” her hand shivering, she pointed to the trees in front of her. “What?” Jurina gasped then turned her view towards Annin’s pointing direction. Her eyes widen, she didn’t belive of what she’s seeing right now.  A group of the same creature surrounded  them.  A lot of monkey like creature with red eyes and long fang look like really wanted to attack Jurina and Annin.  They came closer and closer. They sounded like angry monsters. ‘hrrr....hrrr” 

“ What to do now?” Annin asked Jurina. She was really afraid. She had never see this scary creature before. 

“Okay, if I said three, you must follow whatever I do. One, two,....” Jurina instructed Annin, then she nodded.
Annin mind was going distracted. As she heard Jurina counting, she was confused. She took the initiative to get herself ready for fighting the creatures though.
“ three... Ruuuun.....!” unexpectedly, Annin was surprised because unexpectedly Jurina instucted to run away. Then they tried to run against the bunch of that scary creature.

A creature jumped on Annin body, She tried to remove them off. Finally, the fight is unavoidable. Jurina gripped it then pull it powerfully. She succeeded to remove it, “Damn” She grumbled and after that, she threw the creature with no mercy.

“ Watch out!!” Annin warned Jurina. Some creature attacked Jurina. Jurina tried ti fight back. She hitted and kicked them down. “Grrr...” a creature roared and  jumped on her head. It closed her face, she couldn’t  see anything. Annin took a tree branch near her then helped Jurina by hitting the creatures that attacking them one by one. Annin was overwhelmed. The scary creatures were very numerous. While Jurina was trying to remove the one that jumped on her head, suddenly another creature rushed and bit her arm.

 “Gyaa...” Jurina screamed. She moved her arm and thwacked it to the tree. As It hitted on the three, the creature loosen it bit and detached. With all effort, Jurina could remove the one that jump on the head. They ran as they could until finally they found that the creature were not following them anymore.       
“hhh...hh...hh...” They stopped running  then panted out of breath. “ They seem like not chasing us anymore” Jurina said. Annin nodded. She still felt  a big fear from what just happened to them. All that she was thinking this time is how to find the way getting back to the school sooner. She didn’t care if she would be disqualified from this challenge and expelled from Majisuka. This school is really scary. They had not become a student there but they must face this insane challenge and put in  the dangerous situation.   

“ Let’s go back to the school” Annin asked Jurina. Jurina swallowed, she wanted to do that too after everthing she had. However, She really didn’t want to just end up like this. No, She didn’t want to give up. She want to enrolled as Majisuka student no matter what. Furthermore, The night is just come and it could be even more dangerous to walk.

“ I’m afraid we can’t. Jurina refused. “ Listen...  It’s impossible to walk now since we just run away from that goddamn scary monkeys, and we lost the way. It's impossible too if we took the same way back. It’s all dark out here, You don’t want to meet that monkeys again, right?” Jurina explained.   We must find other way, at least until we find a safe place to stay overnight...”

Annin felt a little bit dissapointed with Jurina answer, but she  really didn’t want to meet with those scary creatures once more. So, she could just obey her.  They ovserved surrounding them, looking for a place that could be use for stay overnight. Then Jurina find a cave on the hill that she felt  quite safe.
It was so dark in the cave, so, Jurina started to make a fireplace. Once the fire light up, They could see everytthing better. Suddenly Annin realized something wrong in Jurina. 

“Your hand bleed...” Jurina, at first time didn’t realize it, she look at her hand and find a big wound on it. “A! You are right... don’t worry...” she smiled calming Annin down. She took a bottle of water form her backpack and cleaned up her wound. She just realized that she got a big wound and it was really painful. Knowing Jurina got a big wound, Annin felt guilty. She wondered if she could safe Jurina from the attack, this wound would never happen. 

“I am sorry...” Annin apologized sincerely.  Jurina nodded. “ Unn.. I am sorry too for spilling milk chocolate on your sleeve. It was not my intention at all...” Jurina apologized back.    “ My name is Matsui Jurina, nice to meet you” Jurina introduced herself. “...and you are Iriyama Anna, right?” Jurina confirmed. Annin nodded.


 ***

The dawn came. It’s time for continuing the Journey. Since they didn’t eat anything since the day before, They agreed to look for things to eat. They walked on a small road and finally they come to the river. Moreover, They found there was a beautiful waterfall in it upstream. Then, they saw someone was fishing on that river. Annin and Jurina looked each other and smiled. They ran approaching her.

“ Miyuki....”
Miyuki moved her head back, and waved her hand.

-TBC



Well, let's wait for last part of first chapter. I'm still working on it...   :cow:

PS: I don't ship on any pairing.... so, Anninnaga Shipper buddies. ya betta calm down :lol:
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« Reply #18 on: April 07, 2013, 12:09:07 PM »
“ Miyuki....”
Miyuki moved her head back, and waved her hand.

Milky-chama appears!!! I just had to comment, it's getting better and better!!!  :inlove: :inlove:

B.U.T.

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PS: I don't ship on any pairing.... so, Anninnaga Shipper buddies. ya betta calm down :lol:


You broke my heart with this... I really did slump in my chair and I really did hit a table with my head... I want some pairings, even if just small moments... I know you're a DD, but please... GAH, why no Anninaga?!!!!  :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes: :banghead: :banghead:


Anyway, thank you for this amazing story and I'll be eagerly waiting for your another update!!  :bow:
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Re: Majisuka Mahougakuen -100%Noobs- [Daredemo Daisuki]
« Reply #19 on: April 07, 2013, 12:15:40 PM »
.........I was sooo happy and thought that there is gonna be some kind of cute momen beween Anna and Jurina.....
But sll I get is nothing!! oO y u no put some moments!?!??

xD I liked it thought,

And the end, Milky-sama~ fishing~ ......

fishing?

FISHING?!?!?

lol xD

nice update as always! *hugs*

update soon~

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