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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Dieyg48 on April 28, 2013, 04:12:19 AM
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Well..this is my first fanfic..I hope you can enjoy it..and i really hope that my english is good..and..there is a 'part' that is not a little logic but i hope you can accept that 'part'..enjoy :yep:
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The First And The Last ~Chapter 1~
“Hey!! You’re the on who start it!!”– Scold the short boy with a blond hair.
“You’re the one who spill the coffee on our project paper!!” – Continue the blond haired boy.
“Huh!? You’re the one who push me and suddenly my coffee spill on the project!” – Acchan , the girl with a black short hair, continue to offend herself.
“Don’t just talk nonsense, there is no way I would do that to my own hard work!!” – say Kai, the blond haired boy as he glare to Acchan.
"Eh? Did I hear it on mistake? Who’s hard work!!??" – Acchan said as she let out her angry asking tone.
They glare each other eyes and start to tease one and another in their burning of angry heart.
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(Acchan POV)*
Acchan’s Room…
“What the hell was that!? He’s the one who pushed me, then I accidently spilled the coffee! And he still blaming me!? Unbelievable…Even though he’s my boyfriend!!” – I said to myself as I remembering the accident.
After several hour, my angry heart is taken over by my guilty and worried feelings. “Sigh.. I think I should apologize to Kai-kun..” – I again said to my heart while regretting what happened before.
As I looked at the clock at my bedroom’s wall, it is already 10 o’clock. “Ughh…It’s this late already!?” – I sigh again and continue “No choice.. I’m going to apologize to Kai-kun tomorrow” – I began to sleep even though I can’t sleep because I can only think about Kai my lover.
I sleep tiredly without my light being turned off…
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(Kai POV)
Kai’s room…
As I remembering what happen today, I started to feel guilty at my own actions, even if I pushed her accidently because I tripped my left leg, I can only imagine Acchan’s face when we were fighting.
“Huhh…I think I should apologize to her, I don’t want to break my special relationship with Acchan…Tomorrow, yeah, I’ll apologize to her tomorrow. –I said to myself while I lie down on my bed and remembering what we did today.
I sleep as there is no tomorrow because what can I only do is just thinking about my dear Acchan…
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(Acchan POV)
Somewhere on the street…
--As today is a holiday for all the youngster, all the student can freely do their own activities but Acchan seems to be doing something, that is obvious that she is in her way to Kai’s house to apolagize.--
“Hmm…I wonder if Kai-kun will forgive me. Well I hope he can”—I said while predicting it, “but I bet he will forgive me.”- I continue.
“Wow! To think of it…This is our first time fighting…And this is the first time I’ll apologize to Kai-kun…”—I just realized that this is my first time fighting with Kai-kun.
“Ughhh…There is so many couple here! Hm…I want to be lovey-dovey again with my short Kai-kun!!—As I wished for Kai to be by my side again.
Kai-kun is cool, handsome, smart, cute, and everything. I don’t want to lose him!! I love him so much!!— while praising my Kai sweetly in my heart.
Then.....
“Ehhhhh...”—I open my eye as wide as I can
“Watch out!!!!!!”—
My heart that is beating normally suddenly stop for a second after I hear a honking from a certain car that is in front of me.
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There it is,chapter 1..well i'm really worried what is your point of view in this fanfic of mine..i really hope you guys like it..thank you for reading this fanfic..excuse my english if there is mistake.oh yeah...and how's that 'part' i was talking about..hope you accept it... :D
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“Watch out!!!!!!”—
Who saying that line !!?? Kai or Acchan ??!!
Omg ! I want to know the next "part" of it
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nee~ mina-san...i should be new here and so..umm..anyway..This fanfic of mine will only be update twice a week because of my freakin' busy schedule.. well i'm still 13 and not mature yet..school is bothersome as always..anyway..thank you for reading this sad facfic..as most of you would know what will happen to Acchan..urgghhh...i don't even know where the hell i get this idea from..~!! I'm ready for the comment you all made...if i need to improve, then i will try to improve..if you guys say it's good..i'll try to make it even more interesting!!~ Jya..i think chap. 2 will be update on tomorrow(29/4/13) and the 3rd chap will be update on (30/413) [[For the staring line i'll make it 3 in this week]]...jya...hope you enjoy it~yoroshiku~ :nervous :nervous
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@sydney W-san...the one who saying the "watch ou!!!!" line is the one who drive the car..nothing special..gomen..thanks for reading my fanfic~
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Tnx for this fanfic
it's really interesting
Acchan getting into an accident
will she loss her memories ??? or something else...
Pls.continue ^^
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Hohoh~i really can't restrain myself from posting another chapter of this.. well here we go!!! 2nd chapter will be release now!!!~
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The First And The Last ~Chapter 2~
(Kai POV)
Somewhere on a certain street…
“Uwah…There is still time! Well anyway I’m still going to apologize to my Atsuko.”—I said while some more idea keep popping in my head.
“Ahh…I’ll ask her to go date with me after I apologize to her! Yes…yes…That would make her at least happy.—I’m very excited with my idea to make my dear Acchan happy again.
“Itaiii!!”—‘What the hell’ is what I think that time when I’m being pushed by someone while I am thinking about Acchan’s beautiful face.
As I stand on my feet, I can see people gathering in the middle of the road. When my excited feeling has been replace by curiosity, I go and check what is happening there.
Just as I pushed a person by a person I can already see blood. Again, I push them one by one and I can clearly see a car and a girl covered in red blood.
As I pushed them again, I can clearly see a face I’m familiar with. A lying body which I adore is now covered in red blood, a face which I always praise is now covered in blood, not a single part of her is not covered in her reddish red blood.
I, Takahashi Kai, is feeling shock, guilty, sad, confuse and many more of my negative feelings when I see her, Maeda Atsuko, lying there like a corpse, she’s lying there while I can only stay frown, pale and speechless.
My body started to move on it own, my tears started to fall as I began to walk closer to my Atsuko. I grab her red cold body with all of my heart.
“ATSUKOOOOOOOOO!!!!!” –I scream until I can’t even scream anymore, I can only cry while hugging her body until my own shirt is covered in her blood. My tear is falling without resting.
Word is totally useless to describe my feelings, a feeling that I never felt before, a feeling without any name nor can be described, a feeling that could make me die, a feeling that can make my life and myself useless.
I fainted beside her because of my mixed feelings, I can only lie beside her shoulder, slowly closing my eyes as I moved my trembled hand on her cold cheek.
The feeling I felt for the first time would maybe last longer…
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(Acchan POV)
On the middle of the road, rather than beating fast, my heart stopped for a while. A white car suddenly honking on me. My eye is glued to the white car, then, closer and closer, I could feel my waist is being hit by the car.
“I’m regretting for spacing out, I also regret the fact that I haven’t apologize to Kai…But it’s a good thing that, my last moment is full of Kai’s happy face…” –I think after I feel a pain on my waist.
BAMMMM!!
As I opened my teary eyes. “Ah…The sky…red…Why is the sky become red?” – As I confused with the color of the sky. Then I remembered that I had an accident – As I move my head a little, I can clearly see the white car is now have been decorate by my blood even though my eyes is blurry.
Then, my eyes started to close on its own. I can feel the pain beginning to disappear. “Ah, sou ka?? I’m going to leave this world and Kai-kun” –I think as I am prepare to leave.
Suddenly I heard a familiar voice screaming…
“ATSUKOOOOOOO!!!” – A voice that I really want to hear for the last time calling my first name, no doubt that would be only my Kai-kun.
“But to bad… I can hear his sweet voice but I can’t see his face” –That what I thought while crying silently.
The warmth of his body can be felt by me, hugging me tightly. Then, I can feel my cheek is watered by Kai-kun’s tear. I am so happy that Kai-kun tear is flowing because of me, I’m truly happy.
“Wait…What will happen to Kai-kun after this??” –As I realized I have regret for Kai-kun.
Time has pass, my eyes start to blur even more, I can only see a shadow beside me, a sobbing sound beside my ear. I can’t help but lying on the road, waiting for my soul to be taken away.
“I can’t even apologize to Kai-kun…What a day…” –I think as I’m beginning to loss conscious.
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hohohoh...doki doki...here is it...but the chap 3 will still be on the 30/4/13...damn can't even restrain from my own desire..sry if there is mistake...ENJOY IT!!~THANKS
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Is alright, author-san. At very least, you granted my wish to update the next fics. So, thank you very much ! I'm looking forward to chapter 3 on 30/4/13. ^_^
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wahahaha...with pleasure @sydney-san...i also looking foward to make the 3rd chapter of it....i hope you enjoy this chapter..thanks for reading it.. :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :glasses: hohohoh~ next chapter~i guess what should i make...~
~and i don't really care if you call me author but anything else would suit me than the author-san...heheh~ :thumbsup
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woaah, nice fic :thumbup
pls update ASAP, i love this fic :twothumbs
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Ah...Atsuko and Kai wanted to apologize to each other...
Eh... Atsuko got hit by a car... there is a possibility of her dying...
Ah... No... don't kill Atsuko...
Poor Atsuko and Kai...
What's going to happen to Atsuko and Kai
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the updates and the beginning of a nice fic...
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hehe...cisda83-san...kill Atsuko...the possibility is 50%...just stay tune to find out what will happen..muahahahahah,, nobody know what is in my mind now...anyway you guys better pray for her to stay alive!!Muahahahah...LOL.. :kekeke:
~Anyway..thanks for reading my fic cisda83-san..arigatou.. :kneelbow: :kneelbow: and i'm still thinking about the next chapter now..huaaahhhh :smoke:
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As you all notice...i should update the 3rd chapter on 30/4/13..well..i make up my mind, after i finished a chapter i'll post it right away...and here we go..i just finish the 3rd chapter..so...i'm going to post it right away!! :on cigar:
muahahahah..yup this time i did really make up my mind!!A chapter that has been finished by me will be post right away!!SORRY FOR THE SUDDEN.~ :on drink: ...and enjoy it :on asmo: ...wahahaha
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Here it is...chap' 3..hohoh, now a special guest is coming..make sure you guys watch it..huahaha~
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The First And The Last ~Chapter 3~
(Kai’s POV)
In ward no.402…
As I opened my eyes, I can see light shining through my eyes. I think “Eh…What the heck!?” – I am confused with the light. Then I remember those unforgettable moment.
I get up from the bed and then I realize that I’m in the ward. I also remembered that I fainted beside Atsuko. “Atsuko…Atsuko…where is Atsuko!?” –I can only think that in my panic state.
As I run to reach the exit door from the ward, I bumped into someone. I scratch my head that is in pain and confuse of who did I bumped to.
“Oh…Takahashi-san right?” –A man with a white coat asking me a question while giving his hand to help me stand. I replied “Ah…Haik...Takahashi Kai desu.”
“So…you already awake I see, good then” –He said, as I glare him from the top until the end of it. I take his hand and stand back as I thank him for helping me.
“Oh yeah, I’m sorry for the late introduction. I’m Sato Takeru. Nice to meet you.” –He introduce his self while giving a welcome gesture to me. “Ah…yeah, nice to meet you, well, I’m kinda’ in hurry here, so excuse me…” –As I walk again he stopped me and say –
“Maeda Atsuko…Right?” –He then say the name that make me really shock, I stop for a moment. He continue “It’s okay, she is in stable condition…But if you wanted to see her, let me explain her condition first…” –“She is now in room #408 but…” –
Before he can finish his talk, I rush to the corridor and find the room with a number #408 on it. I search and finally find the room, without thinking or knocking, I open the door and –
I can see her lying on the bed, sleeping peacefully, I also can see her forehead is being wrapped by the bandage. I still can see her blood on the bandage. I approach her, I take her hand slowly and kiss her soft skin for a while.
I really wished I can kiss her in the lips again but then, I can feel her hand is moving a little. I hold her hand tightly, hoping for her to wake up. Her lips begin to move as she want to say something.
“Who…who are you?” –She throw a question that make my heart stop for a second. “Oi...Atsuko…It’s me, Kai!” –I replied to her question, I wait for her to speak again.
“Kai…who? Please…my hand…you shouldn’t…” –She said in a low tone. I release her hand because I thought her hand must be in pain when I hold her hand tightly. “Gomen…Atsuko is it hurt?” –I ask her a question to conform my action is right or wrong.
“N…no…You shouldn’t take my hand suddenly, I…I don’t know you…you’re s…stranger.” –She said with a low tone again. But this time, that low tone of her really shake my heart into pieces. The word ‘stranger’ give me a big shock.
“Atsuko…Don’t you have any better joke? You know I’m surprise by it right?” –I ask her a question again to escape from the reality.
What can I see is her confused expression on her face. That make me doom forever, the feeling that I myself can’t describe is coming again to attack my heart. I can only cry as I realize that the person named ‘Kai’ is not in Atsuko’s vocabulary anymore.
“Sigh…I already told you…you shouldn’t go see her” –That Takeru guy pat my shoulder and ask Atsuko to rest again. That Takeru guy then bring me to his office and explained Atsuko’s conditions.
“A…Amnesia!?that means…Memory loss!!??” –I said in a shock state as doctor Takeru explained the main cause that she doesn’t know or recognize me back then. My tear start to fall again, then he ask a question “Are you Maeda-san boyfriend?”. That question make me blush a little but I just answer “Yes”.
“I see…Okay then let me explain more further what type of amnesia that Maeda-san have...” –He continue “Amnesia, this type of amnesia is cause by shock, I mean extremely shock.” –As he show me a large picture of Atsuko’s head skulls.
“Maeda-san did get injured on the head but, luckily the damage that is receive by her brain is only a little, but the main cause is that she maybe is in shock when the car hit her.” –He keep talking and I can only nod to what he says.
“She might can only remember her name, family and her other private things. But, Takahashi-san…She might not remember you, maybe…She is thinking about you when she knows that she’ll be hit by the car. So…um…that’s just a theory Takahashi-san, plus one of the people that witnessed the accident say –“That poor girl…before she been hit she call a name called Kai” –The doctor say with a sigh. “That should explain it right?” –He said.
“Anyway…even if you don’t accept it, at least give Maeda-san a little time to rest…” –That doctor Takeru pat my shoulder again and leave his office. I cry and cry while thinking what will happen to me without Atsuko in my life…” –I think as I cry, wanting Atsuko to remember me.
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~oh my god!! i just realize that i made a long fanfic...and yeah...chapter 3's only involve Kai's point of view(POV)...gomen and one more time..thank you for reading this fanfic of mine...oh yeah..OMG that explaining part from doctor Takeru is really confusing me and some of you might think "Wat' ta heck is he trying to explain!!??" like that..well...i'm still a kid..just please understand it hahahah,,gomen ne~Talk about Takeru.. :on asmo: ...a tornado will come!!!!
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Tornado, u mean it !!! That Takeru and Atsuko might be together ??!! Since Atsuko lost her memory. Love triangle !!??
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Sydney W-san...buwahahaha...it's seems look like it..but we don't know yet..it should bring more than tornado i think...but i'll promise not to disappoint you and the reader too..it'll be an interesting story from now on!!!! :cool1:
thank you for reading it..i'll make a special bonus chapter after this..so..wait okay..BONUS CHAPTER!!uwahhh.. :hehehe:
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Here it is...The bonus chapter...well you know...i'm just boring in here so that's bring me this idea...yup..a bonus chapter..anyway enjoy~
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The First And The Last ~Chapter 3.5~[bonus chapter]
(Kai's POV)
“Oh yeah, I’m sorry for the late introduction. I’m Sato Takeru. Nice to meet you.” –He introduce his self while giving a welcome gesture to me. “Ah…yeah, nice to meet you, well, I’m kinda’ in hurry here, so excuse me…” –As I walk again he stopped me and say –
“Maeda Atsuko…Right?” –He then say the name that make me really shock, I stop for a moment. He continue “It’s okay, she is in stable condition…But if you wanted to see her, let me explain her condition first…” –“She is now in room #408 but…” –
Before he can finish his talk, I rush to the corridor, and then I got a chill feeling on my neck. I stopped for a bit, it’s getting cold and cold.
“arkhhh…arkhhh…arkhhhh” –A scary-like sound scared me. I then slowly turn my head to see what is at my back. Then when I look at the back, there is nothing. I turn back to my original position, I walk slowly as the sound following me. All the surrounding is black, no one is in the corridor.
I can’t stand it anymore, I then ask “Who is that!” –I ask with a harsh tone. A voice then replies “I want you…I need you…I love you…” –A very familiar voice reply to me. “No doubt that sweet-scary-voice-like must be…Atsuko?” –I am now confuse.
“Kai-kun…help me…help me” –Again the voice that is scaring me asking or help? I gather all my courage and speak up “Oii…Atsuko…is…is that you!?” –Even though I already gather all of my courage, I’m still hesitated to speak.
“Kai-kun…Would you hate me from now on? I’m lonely in here…I’m trapped because of you…YOU SHOULD COME HERE WITH ME!!!!” –She scream. I can feel her overwhelming power is shaking the whole building.
“Atsuko!? Those that mean she is dead!!??” –I think as I’m panicking the fact that the whole hospital building is being shaken by her. “Atsukoooo!! Stop it right now!!” –I’m trying to convince her by talking but then the replies that I got is “I’ll hunt you until you’ll be with me in the other world forever!” –The replies I got from her is even more scarier.
“I’m lonely here without you!!” –She then continue while I hear a sobbing sound from her. Even if I fell scared, but I don’t want my Atsuko to say such things. As my mind is in confuse, a word that I always wanted to say to her come out from my mouth…
“Atsuko!! Don’t say that!! I would always love you!!I would always be on your side!! Please…Atsuko!! I would always love you! More than the moon and the sun!! You’re precious to me!! I would die for you if you ask me to!! Atsuko!! Kill me and bring me with you!! –I said and scream my feelings to her with a teary eyes.
After I said those word, there is no replies from her, only her sobbing sound can be heard. I chase the sobbing sound until a room with a number 408 on it. Without thinking I…
BAMMMMMMM!!
“Itaiiiiiiii!!! –I scream because of the pain that I feel on my forehead. When I opened my eyes, I actually bumped the door with number 408 on it. I blush because the whole nightmare is only a dream of me…rather than a dream, I am spacing out because only thinking about my Atsuko the whole time.
“hahahaah” –I heard a giggle from my back, that’s make my face like a bright tomatoes. “Damn…damn…damn” –I think again as I blush like crazy.
“Guess I didn’t really have to knock the door after all…hehe~” –I think as patting my forehead that is currently in pain.
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yeah..i know..it's kinnda boring right..yeah, like my current state now...ughh hungry+boring..but...i hope you enjoy it..i'm just taking my time..hehehe~ :yawn: :yawn: :huhuh
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Change Topic!!~
~mannnn...i just saw AKB48 live concert in youtube..ARGHHHH!! I only manage to hear their 'sayonara Crawl' perfomance...geezz..i..right now i'm feeling pathetic :on cloudeye:..sigh...well..hope you guys enjoy the previous chapter of my fanfic..i think i wanna kill myself :mon headbang: :on speedy: :on blackhole: but wait..i'll kill myself after i finished this whole chapter...chapter 4 will be awaiting you guys next week!!~ :thumbsup
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Ahh... Atsuko lost her memory :(
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Great fic please update soon :)
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AH... Poor Kai for being forgotten....
How about their relationship....?
Eh... Sato is Atsuko's doctor...
I hope Sato is not going to try to be in the middle of their relationship.
Oh my... Kai is having a day-mare... (a nightmare in a day light)
What a scary thought there.... Atsuko being a ghost that haunted Kai forever...
But Kai lived up to my expectation... Kai even demanded to be killed so that he could be with Atsuko in death if can not be in life.
Great updates... Thank you
Can't wait to see your next chapters
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Aww poor Kai-kun
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Well i'm a little bit busy here....i hope i can finish the next chapter today ....Thank you for reading this first fanfic of mine.. :kneelbow: ...thank you again..
~anyway...cisda83-san..I suppose that doctor guy is a bothersome to them as well you guys already know..Ouhhh mann..this gonna be a long fanfic story!!! wuahahhaahhaa..and i planned something too..though im still 13...hohohohoh :kekeke:
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Sorry...a bit late...but anyway this is chapter 4!!! well...chapter 4 only involve Acchan and Takeru's POV...muahaahahaha...anyway enjoy it!!!
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The First And The Last ~Chapter 4~
In ward #408…
(Acchan’s POV)
My tired eyes can already see the sunlight even though the fact that my eyes is still closed. As I open my eyes, the sun has already greeted me in the evening. I yawn for a little, then, when I try to move my head…
“Itaii!!” –I scream because of the pain on my neck. When I look at my surrounding, the pain on my neck relieved after my head is full of question mark. “Eh…Why am I here?” –I said to myself. Then I can hear someone knocking the door.
He come in and greeted me with “Yo!!” –As if he know me. As I look at his coat, I could guess that he is a doctor. Then he continues “Is your head still in pain?” –I am really confused of what is happening here, but I just give him a yes for his question.
“Ohh…Yeah…My name is Sato Takeru, I’m a doctor that works in this hospital.” –He give me the short introduction. Then as I realize that he just said hospital, I give him a question “Hospital? Why am I here?” –I ask him.
“Ehh…It’s a long story but anyway, could I seat first?” –He said to me as he pointing his thumb to the chair beside me. “Ah…Sure, I’m sorry.” –I’m apologizing to him as I realize my rudeness.
He began to move his lips to explain my whole confusion and question that is appearing from my head one by one. “And…that’s it…your memory is…” –He is hesitating to end the explanations.
I can feel my eyes is teary now, but I hold it as I hear the whole story. “Well…I’m gonna’ check on something first, please take a rest Maeda-san.” –He ask me to rest as he give me his ‘that’s okay’ face.
Once again, the room is empty. Just for some reason, I need someone by my side, for some reason I wanted to meet someone and for some reason I feel lonely but… “Who am I waiting for?” –I ask myself.
“Is it he or she? Is that someone my friend or family? Wait…I can still clearly remember my family and friend…just who is this person...” –I look at the tree outside the window from my bed, still trying to remember everything.
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(Takeru’s POV)
In the office…
As I stretch my body, I yawn because of the tiredness. I then put all the disorder file at my table on a brown envelopes. I feel refresh back when I see my office is clean and with the help of the air conditioner too.
“That Atsuko girl…I petty for her…” –I yawned again. “That midget guy too…Life is really cruel…sigh…” –I continue as I take a look of my picture and that…girl.
“Yo…As always, life are though…I wish you a good luck there” –I smile as I look at the girl beside me in the photo, the girl whom I admired for 9 years.
“Gezz…I can’t even remember her name now…God, I’m such a forgetter.” –I hit my head with my own palm. “Itaiiiii!!...Damn, I forget about that girl, must run now!” –After I realize that I must visit Maeda-san.
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I open the door slowly so that I won’t give her a shock. I open the door slowly as if there is no sound at all. I can see that girl, spacing out while looking outside of the opened windows.
The blowingwinds that make her black hair sway. Her beautiful calm face is more beautiful compare than the shining sun, my heart is beating faster and faster, my face become redder and redder than before. That’s the first time I realize…
“Ahhh…No way…I would…Fall in love…With her…” –I said to my heart while looking at her face, then our eyes meet together… “Ehh…” –
“Oh my gawddd!!I didn’t even realize that she is looking at me all this time!!” –I said while trying my best to hide my shock and my blush too.
“Umm…Is there anything I can help?” –Maeda look at me with a confuse face, well as expected. “Uhh…I’m the one who supposed to say that line Maeda-san” –I smile and blush again.
“Ehh…Doctor? Why are you blushing?” –She asks me a question. “Ohh…um…This, it’s not blushing Maeda-san…It’s just…I run all the way here…I’m not good at running, so that’s why my face become red…hahaha” –Luckily I can come up with a reason.
“Hahahaha…Doctor you are so funny!!” –Her statement just now makes me blush as I look at her laughing face.
We have a nice chat that day, even if she doesn’t realize my feelings yet, I’m just glad that I can see her face. Then she suddenly say…
“Ne…Doctor-san…Just call me Atsuko from now on.” –She says that as it is no big deal but…
“S…sure and…You may call me T…Takeru…” –I blush as hard as my beating heart is.
“Yosh…Sure…hehe…Ta-ke-ru-kun~” –She say while giggling.
“Wa…What…Mae…Ahh…Atsuko…huh” –We both giggling together, then…
I can feel that there is no gap between our face, I can feel a very warm and sweet feelings on my lips, as I slowly open my eyes, I can see her...
Atsuko kissing me...
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oh my god!!!!can't believe i wrote that 'part' !!!! Hope you enjoy it...and don't forget to wait for chapter 5~Wuahahahahaha..!!
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What... NO NO.... They kissed each other (Takeru and Atsuko)
I knew you would make the twist about Takeru and Atsuko...
But still... I am quite upset to know about that...
Anyhow, who was the girl in Takeru's picture? The one that he was waiting for 9 years
And Takeru can just easily falling in love with Atsuko just because she was pretty...
I thought doctors could not have relationship with the patients that they were in charged with as long as they were responsible for their health..
How could Atsuko easily flirting and wanting to be near Takeru but was scared of Kai....
Poor Kai... what would he do... once he knew about this decision?
Would he let her go or would he fight for her?
And what was Takeru reaction over Atsuko's kiss?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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ah...cisda83-san...i know you must be confuse but just you wait..i have the conclusion over this...and about kai...you know right his personalities here~ he won't ever give up to that doctor guy...just wait and see' kay...that's why i say it's gonna be a long chapter..hohohohoh~ :glasses: :hehehe:
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Thank you for update
WTF Atsuko ???
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Thank you for update
WTF Atsuko ???
Please update soon :)
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Hey guys...thank you for reading this...and sorry for making the story complicated, i have the solutions in my head here already but the problem is...ughhh..about school, there is an exam in my school so...i think' i'll be busy[for sure]!! But i hope you can wait...i'll try my best to make it faster.....really!! i'm very very sorry about this!!!!
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Sorry for the late update...Here is chapter 5, a bit confusing but it can be understand easily too, i think...enjoy~~!
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The First And The Last ~Chapter 5~
(Kai’s POV)
Kai’s house…
“I’m going to visit Atsuko, yeah…Even if she doesn’t remember me…I’ll try to make her remember me again!!” –Is what I swore to myself as I’m ready to go to the hospital where Atsuko is hospitalized.
As I walked in the hospital’s entrance, I quickly write my name on the piece of paper in order to visit Atsuko. I then go straightly to the 4th floor, and walk until a yellow door with number #408 is in front of me.
“It should be fine…yeah” –I think and think about that word so that I can calm myself down. Without knocking the door, I walked in and say “Atsuko…Morning!” –I greet her, it’s a relief she reply me with “Ah…Good Morning…But who are you again?” –I get hurt by that kind of question but I know that ‘me’ didn’t exist in her heart.
“Atsuko...No…Maeda-san…Nice to meet you, my name is Takahashi Kai.” –I introduce myself to start over our relationship as friend first. “Ah…Haik, nice to meet you too, I’m Maeda Atsuko.” –I’m just glad she accept me at least as a friend.
“Here, Maeda-san, for you…it’s just a gift.” –I said as giving a bouquet of flower to Atsuko. “Ah…Thank you, but…I know I have a memory lost, but, can I ask you what is my relationship with you?” –She ask me a question that I have expected from her.
“Maeda-san, I’m…just your friend…” –I accidently let out a disappointment tone of mine, but I managed to cover it. “Eh…oh…souka…The flower, thank you.” –She said thanks to me, but I still can’t stand it.
“Ah…Maeda-san, I’m going to go outside a little bit, gomen” –I give an excuse to run away from seeing her not knowing me, the real me…
(Acchan’s POV)
“I wonder who is he…nnn, the flower has a nice smells.” –I smell it and put back the flower that Takahashi-san bought for me. I looked at the scenery outside the window, I start to remember something from the past, a boy...
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“Yo! Atsuko” –Said a boy, while knocking my door of my bedroom.
“Ah…Baka-kun” –I said.
“I’m not stupid…look!!” –He reply as he give me a paper.
“Ehhh!? Baka-kun got straight A!!?? –I said in a shock tone.
“Who’s the smarter here again? –He ask with a proud-like tone.
“Baka-kun desu~” –I reply to him while teasing him again.
“Then stop calling me Baka!!!” –He shout as I cover my ear with both of my tiny palms.
“You wanted to be a doctor right, someday…” –I ask him even if I knew it.
“Yeah…I wanted to be a doctor so that I can help my dad and my mom” –He said seriously.
“Wish you the best!! Well, Baka-kun, you’re 5 year older than me…You’re smarter than me, I’m just a normal girl…” –I said with a low tone.
“No worry Atsuko…I’ll take you to my life after I become a doctor and when I’m grown up.” –Said the boy while patting my head.
“T…Takeru-kun…You’re the best!!Uwahhhhh” –I hugged him as my feelings says “I’m proud of him to say such a word.”
Then after 9 years, here I am, being hospitalize in here…
Then, someone knocked the door, he then come in with a white coat, I can already guess he must be a doctor. Then, the word “Yo” that greeted me is somehow the same voice as the boy that wanted to take me to his life.
The doctor who is the boy that would take me with him is in front of me, chatting with me happily, then, my body started to move on its own, I kiss him with passion as I realize that Takeru is the one I truly love.
As I kiss him, I waited for his answer…
“Atsuko?” –He suddenly break the kiss and only says my name.
“Atsuko…9 year ago…Right? –He then ask me the question that make me happy for a while. I just replies his question with the word “Do you still remember the promise?” –I answer his question with my own question.
“I remember it…” –As he smile to me.
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(Kai’s POV)
“Yosh…Don’t be weak!” –I said to myself in order to give myself strength to see Atsuko again.
I open the door and see Atsuko, I said while giving her excuse “Ahahaha…Sorry for being late, someone call me just now.”
“Unnn…Don’t worry, I’m not that angry.” –She said while moving her head as a ‘no’. At that time, I can’t even think about what I want to talk with her, but thank god she start the conversation.
“You know why I end up in this hospital right, so…um…I’m so sorry for forgetting you even the fact is I am your friend.” –She said and apologize to me. “No, no, don’t worry…It’s okay” –I reply to her with a smile at my face, glad she didn’t show the
disappoint face again.
We talk about ourselves, about her even though I know her. I feel like I am happy whit this chat, I feel happy not like I chatted with her when she knows me, I just feel happy…
Those feeling is kept inside me until 3 month…
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I think i'll make the next chapter[chapter 6] the last chapter...Because of the exam!! I must study plus my whole family said i should stop opening the computer for a while and study...soo...GOMENNN!!!!! so that's why i must finish the chapter quickly!!~SOrry...... :kneelbow: :badluck:
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Acchan kiss Takeru and in Acchan memory on Takeru, hehe, but i'm sure deep inside Acchan heart there is Kai. Yoshh !!!
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Eh... why did Kai not want Atsuko to know his relationship with her... was lovers not only friends?
I understand that he didn't wait to burden and pressure Atsuko.... or guilty trip Atsuko about not remembering their relationship
But by him being a good guy like this.. there is no obligation for Atsuko not to fall for someone else... i.e. Takeru...
OMG... Takeru's childhood friend is Atsuko and they have a promise to be together...
But Takeru was unfair... he knew that Kai and Atsuko are lovers now...
What's going to happen now... Atsuko thought she loved Takeru... and she didn't have any feeling for Kai?
And Kai didn't even know that Atsuko and Takeru kissed each other...
I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next
Thank you for the update
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Well here is Chapter 6(the last chapter)..but wait...i make this chapter into 2 part..so here is the 1st part..i really hope you'll enjoy this chapter...hahah~ make sure you wait for the next part kay'~ :heart: :yep:
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The First And The Last ~Chapter 6~ Part 1
(Kai’s POV)
Kai’s house…
Why…
Those happy feeling of mine that is been kept inside me until 3 month is destroyed when I heard that Sato guy is actually dating with Atsuko, what is more surprising is that Sato guy quit his job in order to marry Atsuko, what is he!?
I heard from the rumors around the hospital that, he will be opening a small clinic where he and Atsuko will be working together. Again that can’t be describes feelings is attacking my heart and mental.
“Why, is it too late for me!?” –I speak to myself as if I am angry of myself. I can only sigh, cry and regretting. “I wonder if Atsuko...will be happy with the guy she loves, Sato…” –I can only think about Atsuko future with that guy.
I can only lie down on my bed, I can’t face Sato Takeru, and even Atsuko. What am I, more than a pathetic…
~The wedding day~
The worst day had arrived, I can’t think of anything else, i just seat there, worrying and hoping the wedding is canceled. Then I noticed something. “At least…I can confess to her, no, at least I can go to her wedding” –I said while standing and put on my suits.
I run and run, searching for Atsuko at the place by place, I can’t take it anymore as my energy is drowning. Then, I found it, it must be it, the last place. “I…It must be this, there is a board that says Takeru and Atsuko” –I am so nervous at that time, I gulped and push the big wooden door. My heart beat faster.
Tumppppp…
As I open the heavy door, I can’t see anything in there, I can’t see people in here, I can’t see anything in here, I can’t see my Atsuko. I somehow disappointed because the wedding is already end. “I’m just too late…Atsuko…Sorry” –The tears I holding until now is flowing on my cheek.
As I turned back around to go home with my head down and tears all over my eyes…
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5 years later…
(Kai’s POV)
I’m wondering at the streets to reach an unfamiliar house, I walk and walk until I reach the house, I then check again to be sure if the address is correct or not, as I want to check the address at my phone, I can already someone…The two of them.
There they are, Atsuko and her beautiful daughter walking and wandering around at the new house. I approach them and said “Tadaima, I’m back!!” –I said with a big smile and wave my hand to both of them.
“Daddy, Okaeri!!~” –That healthy little girl is running faster at my direction, I give her a hug and a kiss at her cheek. “Oh my, Ai-chan, do you miss daddy already?” –I said while still holding the girl named Takahashi Ai, my daughter and of course, my Atsuko too.
“Okaeri, Kai, isn’t the house is a little big?” –Atsuko, my wife said as she point her finger at our new house. “Eh, really, why not? It’s not a haunted house.” –I said while joking. Atsuko giggle.
“Ai-chan is laughing cheerfully, right?” –I ask Atsuko, she give me kiss on the cheek. “Of course” –She continue, she then hold my hand and lean on my shoulder, while looking at Ai-chan. I look at the clear blue sky and remembering what have happened.
5 years ago…
(Kai’s POV)
As I turned back around to go home with my head down and tears all over my eyes...
Ba-thump, ba-thump, ba-thump… *Heartbeat*
A warmth from my back is making me shock, then I hear a crying girl behind my back, holding my suits tightly, the warmth that I missed for a long time – “Kai-kun, I’m sorry, for not remembering you…” –A familiar voice with a familiar warmth, it would be only Atsuko.
I look behind me, I can see Atsuko crying while saying sorry to me. I am in a shock state, I can’t think of anything that time, I can only ask a question to her… “Ma…Maeda-san, your wedding?” –I ask her with a hesitating tone of mine.
“Maeda-san? Just call me Atsuko.” –She said to me. “At…Atsuko? Eh, I didn’t understa…” –Without giving me a chance to finish my word, her soft lips seals my mouth. As a reply, I kiss her with passion.
“For now, I don’t want you to understand anything, I just want you to understand that…I miss you” –She said to me while giving me a warm smile. “Could you believe it, I ruin my own wedding…Hahaha...” –She said it like it is not a big deal…
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(Acchan’s POV)
My heart is beating fast as I reach the heavy door, with a white dress covering my whole body, I started to walk. Following the red carpet, and I can see a man standing there with a bright smile.
After the long speech has finished...
“Would you accept this man, Sato Takeru to be with you forever?” –A guy said that stand beside me. Suddenly my head started to hurt for some reason, I can see it, a blond haired guy. “I…Is that Takahashi-san?” –I am confuse why the person called Takahashi Kai is showing up in my head or…maybe memory?
As my head is spinning, I can remember everything. I remember that Takahashi-san, no, Kai-kun is precious to me, more than that. I can’t seems to control my head, Kai-kun face is taking over my whole memories.
I fainted…
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Well...since this chapter is a little bit long than the other chapter...so..Well, just wait for the 2nd part of chapter 6.. and again sorry for the late chapter...and thank you..
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Yoshh !! Atsuko finally remember Kai. Lucky she manage to remember hertrue lover, Kai before marrying Sato.
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Ah... I nearly thought... Atsuko and Sato were married
And Kai was too late to stop the wedding...
Yeah Atsuko... remembered Kai before the vow
So the marriage is not finalized...
Eh... they are happily marriage in the future...
But what really happen before Atsuko ran up to Kai...?
How did Sato react to Atsuko's sudden memory gain?
What happen after Atsuko woke up from her faint...?
Can't wait to see the second part
Thank you for the update
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Yosh!! the memory back atthe right time!
please tell us how's the marriage of kai n acchan... i wanna know what Acchan did when she wake up, and finally back together with kai
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Memory is back
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Yoshh!~ The next part is the last part and the last chapter so...MAYBE if i have time, i would post the last part TODAY but i don't know if i have the time to do it, but i hope i can post the last chapter TODAY...Uwahhhh..Maybe it will be tomorrow and maybe it will be today...anyway just wait for it okay and really...Thank you for reading my fanfic... :bow:
*After the last fanfic is post i would ask something..oh i mean a question that involve anotther new fanfic..But i don't know if i would do that fanfic...Oh yeah..It's about AtsuMina!!!~ :thumbsup
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So, here is the last part and the last chapter of The First And The Last...I hope you enjoy it, well i think the story is a little scattered but i know you can understand it, because you know the story from the start till' the end...so i really hope you enjoy this fanfic!!~ I think i want to say thank you to you guys...jya..ARIGATOU!!! :lol:
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The First And The Last ~Chapter 6~ Part 2
(Takeru’s POV)
She fainted in front of me, the excited feelings of mine is being replace by a shock and worry feelings. As I see my future bride began to regain conscious, I was a bit relief.
I was shock even I was a little bit relief because the first word that came out from her lips is…
“K…Kai-kun!” –She said while moving her head, like she is searching for someone “is it Takahashi-san?” –I said to myself while the feelings of anger overturn my relief feeling. As if she said that as a ‘no’ for me to take her to my life, begging me to let her go.
I start to raise my voice and say “No, why now? Is it because of that guy?” –My hand start to raise by itself as if I want to slap her on the face. Then she continue “Ta…Takeru…Please, I want to be with Kai-kun.”
She continue “Takeru…rather than I love you, I would like you as a friend.” –She said that it with a soft voice while hugging me.
“Atsuko.”- I left the room and slam the door. A man come to me asking if Atsuko is alright. I said to him “Let’s cancel the wedding, looks like it’ll rain” –He is confuse when hearing those word as he saw my face, he give a sigh and put his hand on my shoulder.
Atsuko came to me with the wedding ring, then she open my palm and give me the ring. I burst into tears –“I…I’m sorry…Takeru” –She said to me while kiss my hand, maybe for the last time.
My last word to her is “Take care, maybe you will forget about me after this, but I will never forget you” –I said while holding her soft cheek and wiping her tear with my thumb.
She just smile to me as a thank you. Seeing her smile make me happy, even though I will lost her forever…
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(Acchan’s POV)
Somewhere in the streets…
After Takeru’s approve to let me go from his life, I can’t help but feel guilty about them two, Kai-kun and Takeru. I start thinking negatively about myself, I can’t stop my thinking, then…
I spotted a midget man standing in front of the church, I start thinking “Midget? I…It must be Kai-kun for sure!!” –I said with a happy tone while running toward Kai. When I run in the halfway, my happy feelings is interrupt by this little feeling, the feelings of guilty.
I stop for a while because of the guilty feelings, I can’t think how to face him, I can’t think of anything in that time. I then saw him walking away from the church with his head down, I can notice that he is disappointed.
As I saw him walking, I run to him without him noticing me. I raise my hand to hug him from the back. I hug him without any hesitation, I can feel the warmth of his body, I can feel his body again, I hug him while crying.
I said “Kai-kun, I’m sorry, for not remembering you…” –I said while leaning my head at his back to wipe all my tears. “Ma…Maeda-san, your wedding?” –He said while his face is full of question marks.
I giggle a little bit in my heart because I can’t believe he call me ‘Maeda-san’. I then correct him with saying “Maeda-san? Just call me Atsuko.” –I said to him. He is still with his confuse face.
“At…Atsuko!? Eh I didn’t undarsta…” –Without letting him to speak again, I kiss his lips, the lips that I miss for a long time after my absent from him. I can feel he reply my kiss with passion, I was happy that he reply to my kiss.
“For now, I don’t want you to understand anything, I just want you to understand that…I miss you” –I said while hugging him more tightly while giving him a bright smile. I then continue
“Could you believe it…I ruin my own wedding” –I said to him while giggling and as expected, he is still confuse with all this, but who cares that…As long as I can be with his side.
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1 years later…
(Kai’s POV)
Time pass by really quick, Atsuko and I has graduate from our college. At that time, I brought her to the beach. She really loves beach, we walk at the foreshore, holding each other hand while talking about the past and our future.
Then I stop for a while, I then point my finger at the sun. “So beautiful…The sunset.” –She then praise the beautiful yellowish sun. “Yosh, the time has come!!” –I said to myself in the heart.
“Oi, Atsuko, do you want to be by my side?” –When hearing my question, Atsuko giggle but she answer with “Ba~ka…Of course I want you to be by my side~” –She said while looking at my eyes.
As the sun start to set, waiting for the right timing nervously. I said “Atsuko…Close your eyes” –With a gentle voice yet stern. “Give me your left palm” –I said as I handing her a ring that shows the sign of a new beginning to our relationship.
“Atsuko, now open your eyes” –I said to her, she seem to at a state of shock and started to cry when seeing the sun started to sink and the beach is full with floating candle decorating the sea which represent our love that neither the sea or the vast sky could hold.
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(Acchan’s POV)
As Kai-kun told me to close my eyes, it felt like he is trying to propose me, the feeling give me a cold sweat.
He then take my hand, at that time when he take my hand, I can feel that his hand is shivering. I know that he is not a brave man to start with. But I can feel that he is trying his best to do it, even though I don’t have a single clue what will he do next.
“Atsuko, now open your eyes” –I then hear his voice again, I do as I’m told, I open my eyes and when the view of my eyes become clear, I can see the sea is covered with a red and yellow color, I can see the floating candle all over the sea.
As the sky become dark, the sea start to shine, even though I know that Kai-kun is not a brave man, the fire of the candle prove that he is a brave man in the inside, he is the one that light our path, he is the one who give me direction if I ever lost in my own path of life.
He’s the source and the reason that our love is still blooming, I cry and cry but at the same time, I am surprise that this man successfully capture my heart without saying anything, he represent the nature to express his love to me, his responsibilities to take me to his life.
“Kai, I’m sorry…” –I said to him. He look totally shock and pale when I’m apologizing to him. “Eh?” –He said while his eyes is widen. I then continue “Ba~ka…Not that, I mean the fight long time ago…hehehe” –I said while giggling to his reaction but at the same time I’m crying because I’m feeling happy. “Mou…Don’t make me shock like that” –He said with a relief tone.
As I cry after I discover how strong he is and how gentle he is in the inside, I, without thinking any further, I give my hand to him, a sign that I want him to put the silver ring on my finger, giving my hand is also the same as giving my life and my soul to him.
“Please take care of me from now on, Kai…” –I said with a bright smile while crying in happiness. He pull the ring out, and put it on my finger, it fit perfectly. I look at him again, we stare at each other in the eyes.
We then kiss with passion while the sea is shining brightly than before, lighting the dark sky, lighting my life. “I love you Kai…” –I said to myself, but our lips is still locking at each other lips.
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(Kai’s POV)
“Daddy!! I want to take a look at what is inside the house!!” –Ai’s voice brought me to reality again. “Ah, oii, Ai-chan, don’t go first…Let daddy and mommy go in first.” –I said while looking at Atsuko, giving her a ‘let’s go’ gesture.
In our house, we’re living like a normal family, having a dinner together and everything is going smoothly, even if the night has come, our love and bond still shining brightly…
THE END~
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Ahhh...There it is, the end of the part and also the end of the chapter. I really hope you would enjoy this fanfic of mine...Thank you for supporting it...with your comment and praise i get, it's really fun!! I really hope i can create another fanfic!! Jya...For now i just gonna say thank you :kneelbow: ...BYE BYE~ :byebye:
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Oh.. I thought Takeru would slap Atsuko....
He should have known the result would be Atsuko leaving him behind... if by any chance she remembered everything.
Because Atsuko was with Kai... And Atsuko was not the type that play around with someone...
The one at fault was him... He took advantaged of Atsuko's condition (while she was still losing her memories) to have relationship with
So Takeru's relationship was only real during those time... when Atsuko able to get back her memories... Takeru was nobody... just a childhood friend
Yeah... Kai is so good... still waiting for Atsuko even after all this time... :love:
Just be there for her as a friend... doesn't pressure her with any obligation or even pushing her to remember the memories that she lost...
Just Waiting and Waiting... Hoping for Atsuko to come back to him. :wub:
If Atsuko doesn't remember her memories forever... I think Kai would always waiting for her...
So Romantic.... :inlove: Filling the sea with candles.... lighting up the path even in the dark.... Ah... such a nice phrase...
I like it... Their daughter name is Ai... so nice...
Thank you for the update... and the ending....
Very good fic...
Can't wait to see your other creation...
Thank you
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My gawd cisda83-san...if it is not your support, i would not be able to finish this fanfic perfectly...
everyone too support me..so i thank you to read and comment on ths fanfic of mine...
and i hope i could really create another fanfic..thank you very much cisda83-san and everyone too.. :kneelbow:
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Sweet & happy ending for Kai x Atsuko. Yeay !!!
As for Takeru, he should predict the time will come when Atsuko memory will be back.
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atsumina baby! :B
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It's a sweet ending thank you :)
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~WOW...Glad you guys like it~ :on drink: ~ i can sleep well with it... :sleep:
~Well, maybe some will not be satisfied but....this is all i can do...sorry
~About the NEW fanfic...i must think about it for awhile..but still don't know if i want to make it or not... :huhuh :huhuh
~Anyway, thank you for reading and commenting this fanfic...and i hope you guys enjoy the previous chapter.. :kneelbow:
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You're welcome... Dieyg48-san
I enjoyed reading them
Very nice...
Thank you...
Please take your time to create another stories
I'll wait until then
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Waa.... :cathappy: nice2... XD
I happy that I read this.. :lol: ..it's an exploring time of reading a fanfic for me..and I glad that I found this... :deco:
I enjoying this.. :heart: :heart:
plus u're only 13 and u are more2 good than me...hihi...
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Hope to see more fanfic than u..
take ur time..>,< ..
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Waa.... :cathappy: nice2... XD
I happy that I read this.. :lol: ..it's an exploring time of reading a fanfic for me..and I glad that I found this... :deco:
I enjoying this.. :heart: :heart:
plus u're only 13 and u are more2 good than me...hihi...
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Hope to see more fanfic than u..
take ur time..>,< ..
~Thank you Ando-san, i'm glad you like it...i learn more in reading your fanfics.
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~And i really hope to learn more and more from you and the others too...
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~So thank you again for your comment Ando-san, i appreciate it..Sank you
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