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« Reply #20 on: April 29, 2013, 04:16:00 AM »
Aww poor Kai-kun

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« Reply #21 on: April 29, 2013, 08:36:05 AM »
Well i'm a little bit busy here....i hope i can finish the next chapter today ....Thank you for reading this first fanfic of mine.. :kneelbow: ...thank you again..
~anyway...cisda83-san..I suppose that doctor guy is a bothersome to them as well you guys already know..Ouhhh mann..this gonna be a long fanfic story!!! wuahahhaahhaa..and i planned something too..though im still 13...hohohohoh :kekeke:
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« Reply #22 on: April 29, 2013, 11:30:46 AM »
Sorry...a bit late...but anyway this is chapter 4!!! well...chapter 4 only involve Acchan and Takeru's POV...muahaahahaha...anyway enjoy it!!!
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The First And The Last ~Chapter 4~

In ward #408…
(Acchan’s POV)

My tired eyes can already see the sunlight even though the fact that my eyes is still closed. As I open my eyes, the sun has already greeted me in the evening. I yawn for a little, then, when I try to move my head…

“Itaii!!” –I scream because of the pain on my neck. When I look at my surrounding, the pain on my neck relieved after my head is full of question mark. “Eh…Why am I here?” –I said to myself. Then I can hear someone knocking the door.

He come in and greeted me with “Yo!!” –As if he know me. As I look at his coat, I could guess that he is a doctor. Then he continues “Is your head still in pain?” –I am really confused of what is happening here, but I just give him a yes for his question.

“Ohh…Yeah…My name is Sato Takeru, I’m a doctor that works in this hospital.” –He give me the short introduction. Then as I realize that he just said hospital, I give him a question “Hospital? Why am I here?” –I ask him.

“Ehh…It’s a long story but anyway, could I seat first?” –He said to me as he pointing his thumb to the chair beside me. “Ah…Sure, I’m sorry.” –I’m apologizing to him as I realize my rudeness.

He began to move his lips to explain my whole confusion and question that is appearing from my head one by one. “And…that’s it…your memory is…” –He is hesitating to end the explanations.

I can feel my eyes is teary now, but I hold it as I hear the whole story. “Well…I’m gonna’ check on something first, please take a rest Maeda-san.” –He ask me to rest as he give me his ‘that’s okay’ face.

Once again, the room is empty. Just for some reason, I need someone by my side, for some reason I wanted to meet someone and for some reason I feel lonely but… “Who am I waiting for?” –I ask myself.

“Is it he or she? Is that someone my friend or family? Wait…I can still clearly remember my family and friend…just who is this person...” –I look at the tree outside the window from my bed, still trying to remember everything.

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(Takeru’s POV)
In the office…

As I stretch my body, I yawn because of the tiredness. I then put all the disorder file at my table on a brown envelopes. I feel refresh back when I see my office is clean and with the help of the air conditioner too.

“That Atsuko girl…I petty for her…” –I yawned again. “That midget guy too…Life is really cruel…sigh…” –I continue as I take a look of my picture and that…girl.

“Yo…As always, life are though…I wish you a good luck there” –I smile as I look at the girl beside me in the photo, the girl whom I admired for 9 years.

“Gezz…I can’t even remember her name now…God, I’m such a forgetter.” –I hit my head with my own palm. “Itaiiiii!!...Damn, I forget about that girl, must run now!” –After I realize that I must visit Maeda-san.

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I open the door slowly so that I won’t give her a shock. I open the door slowly as if there is no sound at all. I can see that girl, spacing out while looking outside of the opened windows.

The blowingwinds that make her black hair sway. Her beautiful calm face is more beautiful compare than the shining sun, my heart is beating faster and faster, my face become redder and redder than before. That’s the first time I realize…

“Ahhh…No way…I would…Fall in love…With her…” –I said to my heart while looking at her face, then our eyes meet together… “Ehh…” –

“Oh my gawddd!!I didn’t even realize that she is looking at me all this time!!” –I said while trying my best to hide my shock and my blush too.

“Umm…Is there anything I can help?” –Maeda look at me with a confuse face, well as expected. “Uhh…I’m the one who supposed to say that line Maeda-san” –I smile and blush again.

“Ehh…Doctor? Why are you blushing?” –She asks me a question. “Ohh…um…This, it’s not blushing Maeda-san…It’s  just…I run all the way here…I’m not good at running, so that’s why my face become red…hahaha” –Luckily I can come up with a reason.

“Hahahaha…Doctor you are so funny!!” –Her statement just now makes me blush as I look at her laughing face.
We have a nice chat that day, even if she doesn’t realize my feelings yet, I’m just glad that I can see her face. Then she suddenly say…

“Ne…Doctor-san…Just call me Atsuko from now on.” –She says that as it is no big deal but…

“S…sure and…You may call me T…Takeru…” –I blush as hard as my beating heart is.

“Yosh…Sure…hehe…Ta-ke-ru-kun~” –She say while giggling.

“Wa…What…Mae…Ahh…Atsuko…huh” –We both giggling together, then…

I can feel that there is no gap between our face, I can feel a very warm and sweet feelings on my lips, as I slowly open my eyes, I can see her...

Atsuko kissing me...

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oh my god!!!!can't believe i wrote that 'part' !!!! Hope you enjoy it...and don't forget to wait for chapter 5~Wuahahahahaha..!!
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« Reply #23 on: April 29, 2013, 12:48:44 PM »
What... NO NO.... They kissed each other (Takeru and Atsuko)

I knew you would make the twist about Takeru and Atsuko...

But still... I am quite upset to know about that...

Anyhow, who was the girl in Takeru's picture? The one that he was waiting for 9 years

And Takeru can just easily falling in love with Atsuko just because she was pretty...

I thought doctors could not have relationship with the patients that they were in charged with as long as they were responsible for their health..

How could Atsuko easily flirting and wanting to be near Takeru but was scared of Kai....

Poor Kai... what would he do... once he knew about this decision?

Would he let her go or would he fight for her?

And what was Takeru reaction over Atsuko's kiss?

Can't wait to find out

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« Reply #24 on: April 29, 2013, 01:16:04 PM »
ah...cisda83-san...i know you must be confuse but just you wait..i have the conclusion over this...and about kai...you know right his personalities here~ he won't ever give up to that doctor guy...just wait and see' kay...that's why i say it's gonna be a long chapter..hohohohoh~ :glasses: :hehehe:
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« Reply #25 on: April 29, 2013, 06:38:31 PM »
Thank you for update
WTF Atsuko ???
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« Reply #26 on: April 30, 2013, 05:31:26 AM »
Thank you for update
WTF Atsuko ???
Please update soon :)

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« Reply #27 on: April 30, 2013, 09:31:45 AM »
Hey guys...thank you for reading this...and sorry for making the story complicated, i have the solutions in my head here already but the problem is...ughhh..about school, there is an exam in my school so...i think' i'll be busy[for sure]!! But i hope you can wait...i'll try my best to make it faster.....really!! i'm very very sorry about this!!!!
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« Reply #28 on: May 01, 2013, 07:48:57 AM »
Sorry for the late update...Here is chapter 5, a bit confusing but it can be understand easily too, i think...enjoy~~!
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The First And The Last ~Chapter 5~

(Kai’s POV)
Kai’s house…

“I’m going to visit Atsuko, yeah…Even if she doesn’t remember me…I’ll try to make her remember me again!!” –Is what I swore to myself as I’m ready to go to the hospital where Atsuko is hospitalized.

As I walked in the hospital’s entrance, I quickly write my name on the piece of paper in order to visit Atsuko. I then go straightly to the 4th floor, and walk until a yellow door with number #408 is in front of me.

“It should be fine…yeah” –I think and think about that word so that I can calm myself down. Without knocking the door, I walked in and say “Atsuko…Morning!” –I greet her, it’s a relief she reply me with “Ah…Good Morning…But who are you again?” –I get hurt by that kind of question but I know that ‘me’ didn’t exist in her heart.

“Atsuko...No…Maeda-san…Nice to meet you, my name is Takahashi Kai.” –I introduce myself to start over our relationship as friend first. “Ah…Haik, nice to meet you too, I’m Maeda Atsuko.” –I’m just glad she accept me at least as a friend.

“Here, Maeda-san, for you…it’s just a gift.” –I said as giving a bouquet of flower to Atsuko. “Ah…Thank you, but…I know I have a memory lost, but, can I ask you what is my relationship with you?” –She ask me a question that I have expected from her.

“Maeda-san, I’m…just your friend…” –I accidently let out a disappointment tone of mine, but I managed to cover it. “Eh…oh…souka…The flower, thank you.” –She said thanks to me, but I still can’t stand it.

“Ah…Maeda-san, I’m going to go outside a little bit, gomen” –I give an excuse to run away from seeing her not knowing me, the real me…

(Acchan’s POV)

“I wonder who is he…nnn, the flower has a nice smells.” –I smell it and put back the flower that Takahashi-san bought for me. I looked at the scenery outside the window, I start to remember something from the past, a boy...

-Flashback-

“Yo! Atsuko” –Said a boy, while knocking my door of my bedroom.

“Ah…Baka-kun” –I said.

“I’m not stupid…look!!” –He reply as he give me a paper.

“Ehhh!? Baka-kun got straight A!!?? –I said in a shock tone.

“Who’s the smarter here again? –He ask with a proud-like tone.

“Baka-kun desu~” –I reply to him while teasing him again.

“Then stop calling me Baka!!!” –He shout as I cover my ear with both of my tiny palms.

“You wanted to be a doctor right, someday…” –I ask him even if I knew it.

“Yeah…I wanted to be a doctor so that I can help my dad and my mom” –He said seriously.

“Wish you the best!! Well, Baka-kun, you’re 5 year older than me…You’re smarter than me, I’m just a normal girl…” –I said with a low tone.

“No worry Atsuko…I’ll take you to my life after I become a doctor and when I’m grown up.” –Said the boy while patting my head.

“T…Takeru-kun…You’re the best!!Uwahhhhh” –I hugged him as my feelings says “I’m proud of him to say such a word.”
Then after 9 years, here I am, being hospitalize in here…

Then, someone knocked the door, he then come in with a white coat, I can already guess he must be a doctor. Then, the word “Yo” that greeted me is somehow the same voice as the boy that wanted to take me to his life.

The doctor who is the boy that would take me with him is in front of me, chatting with me happily, then, my body started to move on its own, I kiss him with passion as I realize that Takeru is the one I truly love.

As I kiss him, I waited for his answer…

“Atsuko?” –He suddenly break the kiss and only says my name.

“Atsuko…9 year ago…Right? –He then ask me the question that make me happy for a while. I just replies his question with the word “Do you still remember the promise?” –I answer his question with my own question.

“I remember it…” –As he smile to me.

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(Kai’s POV)

“Yosh…Don’t be weak!” –I said to myself in order to give myself strength to see Atsuko again.

I open the door and see Atsuko, I said while giving her excuse “Ahahaha…Sorry for being late, someone call me just now.”

“Unnn…Don’t worry, I’m not that angry.” –She said while moving her head as a ‘no’. At that time, I can’t even think about what I want to talk with her, but thank god she start the conversation.

“You know why I end up in this hospital right, so…um…I’m so sorry for forgetting you even the fact is I am your friend.” –She said and apologize to me. “No, no, don’t worry…It’s okay” –I reply to her with a smile at my face, glad she didn’t show the
disappoint face again.

We talk about ourselves, about her even though I know her. I feel like I am happy whit this chat, I feel happy not like I chatted with her when she knows me, I just feel happy…

Those feeling is kept inside me until 3 month…

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I think i'll make the next chapter[chapter 6] the last chapter...Because of the exam!! I must study plus my whole family said i should stop opening the computer for a while and study...soo...GOMENNN!!!!! so that's why i must finish the chapter quickly!!~SOrry......  :kneelbow: :badluck:
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« Reply #29 on: May 01, 2013, 10:15:36 AM »
Acchan kiss Takeru and in Acchan memory on Takeru, hehe, but i'm sure deep inside Acchan heart there is Kai. Yoshh !!!

Update next !

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« Reply #30 on: May 01, 2013, 11:53:25 AM »
Thank you for this chapter :)

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« Reply #31 on: May 01, 2013, 02:43:51 PM »
Eh... why did Kai not want Atsuko to know his relationship with her... was lovers not only friends?

I understand that he didn't wait to burden and pressure Atsuko.... or guilty trip Atsuko about not remembering their relationship

But by him being a good guy like this.. there is no obligation for Atsuko not to fall for someone else... i.e. Takeru...

OMG... Takeru's childhood friend is Atsuko and they have a promise to be together...

But Takeru was unfair... he knew that Kai and Atsuko are lovers now...

What's going to happen now... Atsuko thought she loved Takeru... and she didn't have any feeling for Kai?

And Kai didn't even know that Atsuko and Takeru kissed each other...

I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

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« Reply #32 on: May 04, 2013, 05:06:49 PM »
Well here is Chapter 6(the last chapter)..but wait...i make this chapter into 2 part..so here is the 1st part..i really hope you'll enjoy this chapter...hahah~ make sure you wait for the next part kay'~ :heart: :yep:
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The First And The Last ~Chapter 6~ Part 1

(Kai’s POV)
Kai’s house…

Why…

Those happy feeling of mine that is been kept inside me until 3 month is destroyed when I heard that Sato guy is actually dating with Atsuko, what is more surprising is that Sato guy quit his job in order to marry Atsuko, what is he!?

I heard from the rumors around the hospital that, he will be opening a small clinic where he and Atsuko will be working together. Again that can’t be describes feelings is attacking my heart and mental.

“Why, is it too late for me!?” –I speak to myself as if I am angry of myself. I can only sigh, cry and regretting. “I wonder if Atsuko...will be happy with the guy she loves, Sato…” –I can only think about Atsuko future with that guy.

I can only lie down on my bed, I can’t face Sato Takeru, and even Atsuko. What am I, more than a pathetic…

~The wedding day~

The worst day had arrived, I can’t think of anything else, i just seat there, worrying and hoping the wedding is canceled. Then I noticed something. “At least…I can confess to her, no, at least I can go to her wedding” –I said while standing and put on my suits.

I run and run, searching for Atsuko at the place by place, I can’t take it anymore as my energy is drowning. Then, I found it, it must be it, the last place. “I…It must be this, there is a board that says Takeru and Atsuko” –I am so nervous at that time, I gulped and push the big wooden door. My heart beat faster.

Tumppppp…

As I open the heavy door, I can’t see anything in there, I can’t see people in here, I can’t see anything in here, I can’t see my Atsuko. I somehow disappointed because the wedding is already end. “I’m just too late…Atsuko…Sorry” –The tears I holding until now is flowing on my cheek.

As I turned back around to go home with my head down and tears all over my eyes…

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5 years later…
(Kai’s POV)

I’m wondering at the streets to reach an unfamiliar house, I walk and walk until I reach the house, I then check again to be sure if the address is correct or not, as I want to check the address at my phone, I can already someone…The two of them.

There they are, Atsuko and her beautiful daughter walking and wandering around at the new house. I approach them and said “Tadaima, I’m back!!” –I said with a big smile and wave my hand to both of them.

“Daddy, Okaeri!!~” –That healthy little girl is running faster at my direction, I give her a hug and a kiss at her cheek. “Oh my, Ai-chan, do you miss daddy already?” –I said while still holding the girl named Takahashi Ai, my daughter and of course, my Atsuko too.

“Okaeri, Kai, isn’t the house is a little big?” –Atsuko, my wife said as she point her finger at our new house. “Eh, really, why not? It’s not a haunted house.” –I said while joking. Atsuko giggle.

“Ai-chan is laughing cheerfully, right?” –I ask Atsuko, she give me kiss on the cheek. “Of course” –She continue, she then hold my hand and lean on my shoulder, while looking at Ai-chan. I look at the clear blue sky and remembering what have happened.

5 years ago…
(Kai’s POV)

As I turned back around to go home with my head down and tears all over my eyes...

Ba-thump, ba-thump, ba-thump… *Heartbeat*

A warmth from my back is making me shock, then I hear a crying girl behind my back, holding my suits tightly, the warmth that I missed for a long time – “Kai-kun, I’m sorry, for not remembering you…” –A familiar voice with a familiar warmth, it would be only Atsuko.

I look behind me, I can see Atsuko crying while saying sorry to me. I am in a shock state, I can’t think of anything that time, I can only ask a question to her… “Ma…Maeda-san, your wedding?” –I ask her with a hesitating tone of mine.

“Maeda-san? Just call me Atsuko.” –She said to me. “At…Atsuko? Eh, I didn’t understa…” –Without giving me a chance to finish my word, her soft lips seals my mouth. As a reply, I kiss her with passion.

“For now, I don’t want you to understand anything, I just want you to understand that…I miss you” –She said to me while giving me a warm smile. “Could you believe it, I ruin my own wedding…Hahaha...” –She said it like it is not a big deal…

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(Acchan’s POV)

My heart is beating fast as I reach the heavy door, with a white dress covering my whole body, I started to walk. Following the red carpet, and I can see a man standing there with a bright smile.

After the long speech has finished...

“Would you accept this man, Sato Takeru to be with you forever?” –A guy said that stand beside me. Suddenly my head started to hurt for some reason, I can see it, a blond haired guy. “I…Is that Takahashi-san?” –I am confuse why the person called Takahashi Kai is showing up in my head or…maybe memory?

As my head is spinning, I can remember everything. I remember that Takahashi-san, no, Kai-kun is precious to me, more than that. I can’t seems to control my head, Kai-kun face is taking over my whole memories.

I fainted…

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Well...since this chapter is a little bit long than the other chapter...so..Well, just wait for the 2nd part of chapter 6.. and again sorry for the late chapter...and thank you..
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« Reply #33 on: May 04, 2013, 05:17:26 PM »
Yoshh !! Atsuko finally remember Kai. Lucky she manage to remember hertrue lover, Kai before marrying Sato.

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« Reply #34 on: May 04, 2013, 06:42:17 PM »
Ah... I nearly thought... Atsuko and Sato were married

And Kai was too late to stop the wedding...

Yeah Atsuko... remembered Kai before the vow

So the marriage is not finalized...

Eh... they are happily marriage in the future...

But what really happen before Atsuko ran up to Kai...?

How did Sato react to Atsuko's sudden memory gain?

What happen after Atsuko woke up from her faint...?

Can't wait to see the second part

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« Reply #35 on: May 04, 2013, 07:17:17 PM »
Yosh!! the memory back atthe right time!

please tell us how's the marriage of kai n acchan... i wanna know what Acchan did when she wake up, and finally back together with kai
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« Reply #36 on: May 04, 2013, 07:28:17 PM »
Thank you for update
Memory is back
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« Reply #37 on: May 06, 2013, 03:59:24 AM »
Yoshh!~ The next part is the last part and the last chapter so...MAYBE if i have time, i would post the last part TODAY but i don't know if i have the time to do it, but i hope i can post the last chapter TODAY...Uwahhhh..Maybe it will be tomorrow and maybe it will be today...anyway just wait for it okay and really...Thank you for reading my fanfic... :bow:

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Re: The First And The Last (KaixAcchan)[Love and Betrayal]-On Going-
« Reply #38 on: May 06, 2013, 09:04:59 AM »
So, here is the last part and the last chapter of The First And The Last...I hope you enjoy it, well i think the story is a little scattered but i know you can understand it, because you know the story from the start till' the end...so i really hope you enjoy this fanfic!!~ I think i want to say thank you to you guys...jya..ARIGATOU!!! :lol:
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The First And The Last ~Chapter 6~ Part 2

(Takeru’s POV)

She fainted in front of me, the excited feelings of mine is being replace by a shock and worry feelings. As I see my future bride began to regain conscious, I was a bit relief.

I was shock even I was a little bit relief because the first word that came out from her lips is…

“K…Kai-kun!” –She said while moving her head, like she is searching for someone “is it Takahashi-san?” –I said to myself while the feelings of anger overturn my relief feeling. As if she said that as a ‘no’ for me to take her to my life, begging me to let her go.

I start to raise my voice and say “No, why now? Is it because of that guy?” –My hand start to raise by itself as if I want to slap her on the face. Then she continue “Ta…Takeru…Please, I want to be with Kai-kun.”

She continue “Takeru…rather than I love you, I would like you as a friend.” –She said that it with a soft voice while hugging me.
“Atsuko.”- I left the room and slam the door. A man come to me asking if Atsuko is alright. I said to him “Let’s cancel the wedding, looks like it’ll rain” –He is confuse when hearing those word as he saw my face, he give a sigh and put his hand on my shoulder.

Atsuko came to me with the wedding ring, then she open my palm and give me the ring. I burst into tears –“I…I’m sorry…Takeru” –She said to me while kiss my hand, maybe for the last time.

My last word to her is “Take care, maybe you will forget about me after this, but I will never forget you” –I said while holding her soft cheek and wiping her tear with my thumb.

She just smile to me as a thank you. Seeing her smile make me happy, even though I will lost her forever…

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(Acchan’s POV)
Somewhere in the streets…

After Takeru’s approve to let me go from his life, I can’t help but feel guilty about them two, Kai-kun and Takeru. I start thinking negatively about myself, I can’t stop my thinking, then…

I spotted a midget man standing in front of the church, I start thinking “Midget? I…It must be Kai-kun for sure!!” –I said with a happy tone while running toward Kai. When I run in the halfway, my happy feelings is interrupt by this little feeling, the feelings of guilty.

I stop for a while because of the guilty feelings, I can’t think how to face him, I can’t think of anything in that time. I then saw him walking away from the church with his head down, I can notice that he is disappointed.

As I saw him walking, I run to him without him noticing me. I raise my hand to hug him from the back. I hug him without any hesitation, I can feel the warmth of his body, I can feel his body again, I hug him while crying.

I said “Kai-kun, I’m sorry, for not remembering you…” –I said while leaning my head at his back to wipe all my tears. “Ma…Maeda-san, your wedding?” –He said while his face is full of question marks.

I giggle a little bit in my heart because I can’t believe he call me ‘Maeda-san’. I then correct him with saying “Maeda-san? Just call me Atsuko.” –I said to him. He is still with his confuse face.

“At…Atsuko!? Eh I didn’t undarsta…” –Without letting him to speak again, I kiss his lips, the lips that I miss for a long time after my absent from him. I can feel he reply my kiss with passion, I was happy that he reply to my kiss.

“For now, I don’t want you to understand anything, I just want you to understand that…I miss you” –I said while hugging him more tightly while giving him a bright smile. I then continue

“Could you believe it…I ruin my own wedding” –I said to him while giggling and as expected, he is still confuse with all this, but who cares that…As long as I can be with his side.

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1 years later…
(Kai’s POV)

Time pass by really quick, Atsuko and I has graduate from our college. At that time, I brought her to the beach. She really loves beach, we walk at the foreshore, holding each other hand while talking about the past and our future.

Then I stop for a while, I then point my finger at the sun. “So beautiful…The sunset.” –She then praise the beautiful yellowish sun. “Yosh, the time has come!!” –I said to myself in the heart.

“Oi, Atsuko, do you want to be by my side?” –When hearing my question, Atsuko giggle but she answer with “Ba~ka…Of course I want you to be by my side~” –She said while looking at my eyes.

As the sun start to set, waiting for the right timing nervously. I said “Atsuko…Close your eyes” –With a gentle voice yet stern. “Give me your left palm” –I said as I handing her a ring that shows the sign of a new beginning to our relationship.

“Atsuko, now open your eyes” –I said to her, she seem to at a state of shock and started to cry when seeing the sun started to sink and the beach is full with floating candle decorating the sea which represent our love that neither the sea or the vast sky could hold.

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(Acchan’s POV)
As Kai-kun told me to close my eyes, it felt like he is trying to propose me, the feeling give me a cold sweat.

He then take my hand, at that time when he take my hand, I can feel that his hand is shivering. I know that he is not a brave man to start with. But I can feel that he is trying his best to do it, even though I don’t have a single clue what will he do next.

“Atsuko, now open your eyes” –I then hear his voice again, I do as I’m told, I open my eyes and when the view of my eyes become clear, I can see the sea is covered with a red and yellow color, I can see the floating candle all over the sea.

As the sky become dark, the sea start to shine, even though I know that Kai-kun is not a brave man, the fire of the candle prove that he is a brave man in the inside, he is the one that light our path, he is the one who give me direction if I ever lost in my own path of life.

He’s the source and the reason that our love is still blooming, I cry and cry but at the same time, I am surprise that this man successfully capture my heart without saying anything, he represent the nature to express his love to me, his responsibilities to take me to his life.

“Kai, I’m sorry…” –I said to him. He look totally shock and pale when I’m apologizing to him. “Eh?” –He said while his eyes is widen. I then continue “Ba~ka…Not that, I mean the fight long time ago…hehehe” –I said while giggling to his reaction but at the same time I’m crying because I’m feeling happy. “Mou…Don’t make me shock like that” –He said with a relief tone.

As I cry after I discover how strong he is and how gentle he is in the inside, I, without thinking any further, I give my hand to him, a sign that I want him to put the silver ring on my finger, giving my hand is also the same as giving my life and my soul to him.

 “Please take care of me from now on, Kai…” –I said with a bright smile while crying in happiness. He pull the ring out, and put it on my finger, it fit perfectly. I look at him again, we stare at each other in the eyes.

We then kiss with passion while the sea is shining brightly than before, lighting the dark sky, lighting my life. “I love you Kai…” –I said to myself, but our lips is still locking at each other lips.

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(Kai’s POV)

“Daddy!! I want to take a look at what is inside the house!!” –Ai’s voice brought me to reality again. “Ah, oii, Ai-chan, don’t go first…Let daddy and mommy go in first.” –I said while looking at Atsuko, giving her a ‘let’s go’ gesture.

In our house, we’re living like a normal family, having a dinner together and everything is going smoothly, even if the night has come, our love and bond still shining brightly…



THE END~
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Re: The First And The Last (KaixAcchan)[Love and Betrayal]-COMPLETED-
« Reply #39 on: May 06, 2013, 11:29:21 AM »
Oh.. I thought Takeru would slap Atsuko....

He should have known the result would be Atsuko leaving him behind... if by any chance she remembered everything.

Because Atsuko was with Kai... And Atsuko was not the type that play around with someone...

The one at fault was him... He took advantaged of Atsuko's condition (while she was still losing her memories) to have relationship with

So Takeru's relationship was only real during those time... when Atsuko able to get back her memories... Takeru was nobody... just a childhood friend

Yeah... Kai is so good... still waiting for Atsuko even after all this time...   :love:

Just be there for her as a friend... doesn't pressure her with any obligation or even pushing her to remember the memories that she lost...

Just Waiting and Waiting... Hoping for Atsuko to come back to him.  :wub:

If Atsuko doesn't remember her memories forever... I think Kai would always waiting for her...

So Romantic....  :inlove: Filling the sea with candles.... lighting up the path even in the dark.... Ah... such a nice phrase...

I like it... Their daughter name is Ai... so nice...

Thank you for the update... and the ending....

Very good fic...

Can't wait to see your other creation...

Thank you

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