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Title: TroubleMaker - Chapter 11 (AtsuMina) 17/02/2015
Post by: chiqinna on September 19, 2013, 11:57:49 AM
Here as I said...I was thinking to make a long version fic of Trouble Maker for those who know the OS...
So i made it...I still don't know the outcomes...so if you like it, I will continue it~ :)
this is just a prologue...hehe I'm trying my best...

Trouble Maker


Prologue


“Minami!!! Give me back my crayon!”
said little Atsuko as she chasing the little girl who took her crayon.

“NO!! Bleekkkkkk!! Hahahahahaha!” little Minami said as she running from mad little Atsuko.
Sometimes she looks back and sticks out her tongue at her.

“*sighed* those kids are really like Tom and Jerry… Minami-Chan!
Give Atsuko-Chan her crayon back!”
 Their kindergarten teacher said shaking her head looking at them.

“NOO!!!” Little Minami said as she keeps running while little Atsuko chasing after her.

Then Atsuko stop chasing her and sit down on the ground.

“*Hisk* Ngeeeeeeeee!!! My crayoonn! *hisk*”
Little Atsuko crying while rubbing her eyes with her arms.

Little Minami also stop running when she heard Atsuko cried.

Then she walks towards her.
“Here” Little Minami said as she stretch her little hand towards Atsuko to give her crayon back.

Atsuko stop crying but still sobbing when she heard Minami’s voice.

She looks up while sobbing and was about to take the crayon from Minami’s hand when…

“Gotcha!!! Hahahahahaha!!!” Little Minami laughing as she running away again with Atsuko’s crayons.


Little Atsuko who got tricked by naughty Minami crying even louder after that.




Then, Atsuko had to moves to somewhere far with her family because of her family’s business.



“Mama~ mama~ where is Atsuko-Chan? I don’t see her at school today.”
Little Minami ask her mother.

“Miichan, Atsuko-Chan had to move to somewhere with her family
because of her family’s business.” Answered her mom.

“Why?” Ask her innocently while sitting on her mom’s lap.

“Well, like I told you, because of their family business.” Her mom said.

“Mou~ I can’t disturb her anymore then~” Said Minami pouting.

Her mom chuckling at her knowing her naughty behavior but she still a kid.

“Don’t worry Miichan, you have many friends at kindergarten right?”
Her mom said smiling while patting her head.



Eventually, Minami and Atsuko forgot about each other.



That’s how they separated…

Do I have to explain? No…



Thanks for...reading.  :kneelbow:
Is it okay? Is it good?
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Prologue 19/09/13
Post by: blakwhite on September 19, 2013, 01:29:40 PM
eeeh?

btw chiqinna-san, can you give me link of your one shot ?  :?


and, yes its so good  :thumbsup
sasuga  :D
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Prologue 19/09/13
Post by: chichay12 on September 19, 2013, 02:34:29 PM
Is it okay? Is it good?
its good as long its atsumina XD
kidding aside..its really good  :D
minami being the trouble maker is so cute.. :oops:
i cant wait to know what will happen when they see each other again  :wub:
chapter 1~ where are u? :on gay:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Prologue 19/09/13
Post by: lezperv on September 19, 2013, 05:56:16 PM
awww that was sooo cute :D

Tsundere Minami lol, its okay Acchan it just means she loves you  :heart:

Kinda sad that their young lives only last in the prologue. I wonder when the older Minami meets older Atsuko, will she remembers again and will she be a Tsundere towards Acchan again or if nothing will happen...

Please update soon  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Prologue 19/09/13
Post by: Archer1992 on September 19, 2013, 06:19:48 PM
mmm chapter 1 please

thanks

and update ASAP!!
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Prologue 19/09/13
Post by: qweakb on September 19, 2013, 11:29:16 PM
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btw chiqinna-san, can you give me link of your one shot ?  :?

Me too! I also want!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :frustrated:

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Here as I said...I was thinking to make a long version fic of Trouble Maker for those who know the OS...
So i made it...I still don't know the outcomes...so if you like it, I will continue it~ :)
this is just a prologue...hehe I'm trying my best

I like it.. Please continue!  :kneelbow:

So now finally what do you mean of Trouble Marker when you mention it at You are my sunshine..hehe
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Prologue 19/09/13
Post by: cisda83 on September 19, 2013, 11:53:17 PM
Ah... Chiqinna-San...

You're on roll now.. I guess you got your inspiration

Atsumina... Banzai...

Chibi Atsumina... So cute and sweet...

Like this one too... Chibi Minami is so naughty...

I guess... Minami likes Atsuko lots...

Can't wait to see how they met each other again

Would they remember each other?

Would Atsuko want to be with Minami when they meet again?

Would Minami be mature when dealing with Atsuko?

Thank you for the prologue...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Prologue 19/09/13
Post by: chiqinna on September 20, 2013, 12:45:24 PM


thanks for the support minna-san!!!  :bow:
and...here is the one shot hehe~
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1199787#msg1199787 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1199787#msg1199787)



Chapter 1


10 years later…


ShiNoda High School…

All the students are rushing towards the hall because they have an assembly today.
Some of them even walk slowly so that they would sit at the last row.
Except for a few students who are walking like models while the other students
step aside to give a way for the three girls to walk.

“Kyaaa!!! It’s Nyan Nyan!!” a midget said as she squealing over the tall girl who looks like a model.

“And Maeda-sama is soooo pretty with that uniform!” someone said with a sparkling eyes.

They all enter the hall while waiting for the principle to gives words.

“Ehem…Well, Good Morning to all my beloved students and teachers.
I don’t want to give a long speech as I know you all would get bored and
sleepy because of my speech so in this new year, there will be many students
that will entered this school as well as the students who will transfer to this school.
So with this chance I hope all of the students will welcome our new family
member with open arms. And also I hope this year our school reputation would
increase than the past year. Then…blab bla bla bla…”


“Geez…He said it’s not long…I’m already getting bored here…”
one of the students said as she laid her head on her friends shoulder.

Her friend beside her nodded.




Long after, the assembly ended.

The students walking out of the hall. Some having a sleepy face.




In class 3B

“Hey, Acchan, what do you think we should be doing today?” Shinoda Mariko, her friend asks her.

Acchan, leaning her back on her chair as she looks at her two friends who are waiting for her answer.

“Hmmmm…let’s just go shopping.” Acchan said with a boring face.

“Sorry girls, I can’t go with you two, I have a family meeting today.”Kojima Haruna said.

“Family meeting? Do you even have a family meeting?” laughed Acchan and Mariko at her.

“Mou~ Of course we have!! And my mom insisted me to go. She said it’s regarding me.” She added.


“NyanNyan!!!” Someone scream outside the class.

They look outside the glass window to see a squirrel-like girl calling Kojima Haruna

then the midget squirrel giving her a flying kiss while Haruna just ignore her.

Acchan and Mariko smirk at her while Haruna looking away pouting.

“Hey, your fan is calling you there~” Acchan tease her.

“She’s not my friend! She’s a pervert!” Haruna said pouting.

Soon after, the teacher entered the classroom.

“Okay class, stand up.” The teacher said.
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The students keep quiet while still sitting on their own place.

This making the teacher to get confused.

“I said stand up!” the teacher said raising his voice a bit.

“Sensei, you said, class, stand up…we’re not a class sensei.”
A class president said as he fixed his glasses.

The teacher was dumbfounded by his students.

“Then?” the teacher still confused.

“We’re student!”
one of the students said as the other students also agree with her nodding their head.

The teacher face palmed himself.
“*sighed* you’re not a top class, but you have that kind of genius brain aren’t you?
Okay Students, stand up!” The teacher said in defeat.

With that they all stand up and bow to the teacher except for Acchan, Mariko and NyanNyan.

The teacher doesn’t even bother at them.

“Okay, today as being told by the principle, there are some
transfer students to our school and yes, one of them is going to enter your class.”

The students started to mumble each other.

“Sensei, where is that transfer student?” Ask Kuramochi Asuka.

“Err…” The teacher walks towards the door and look outside. Then he walks back to his place.

“I think she’s not arrived yet.” The teacher said making the others to mumble again.

“Tsk…this is boring.” Acchan said looking out of the window.
Her seat is near the window as well as her other friends.


Suddenly,
“Kyaaa!!!!” Acchan scream falling out of her chair when suddenly
the window where she looks at opened then a figure appear from
outside while her head peeking inside the classroom.

All of the students inside the classroom looking at her and also shocked.

The girl is wearing a school uniform and she is looking at Acchan with a clueless face.


“Ano~ is this class 3C?” The small girl ask them smiling while still hanging outside the window.

“N-No…and who might you be?” the teacher asks as he looks at the student confused.

“Owh~ I got it wrong…it must be the next of it”
the girl who looks like a new students said to herself as she ignored
the teacher’s question and she disappeared again.

“Is she crazy? Using windows?” The students in 3B classroom said.

“Acchan, are you okay?” Haruna ask her worried.

“My butt~~ ouch~ that…that…stupid midget!!!”
Acchan gritted her teeth mad because the girl just now made her fall.

Then Acchan pull out a mirror to check on her makeup.


Then they can hear a student screaming same like Acchan in the next classroom.

‘*sighed’ Class 3C? Oh God…why all weird students are in class 3C?!
But it’s good! As long as they are not in my class~’ the teacher thought to himself as he sighed in relief.


*knock* *knock*

“Come in.” the teacher said as the new transfer student entering the classroom.

“Please introduce yourself.” Said him smiling.

“Hai! My name is Kashiwagi Yuki! Please take care of me!” Yuki said as she bowed.

“Hai! Okay Kashiwagi-san…please takes a seat behind Kuramochi Asuka-san there.”

He say then Kuramochi raise her hands so that Kashiwagi knows where she is as she smiling at her.
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Meanwhile in classroom 3C

After some of the students sending their teacher who fainted when she was surprised seeing the student earlier climbing through the window, they all went to their seats as the new transfer student still standing in front of the classroom with a clueless expression.

Soon the other teacher walks inside the classroom.

“Okay, since your classroom teacher is at the infirmary now,
I will be taking her place for the time being. So Takahashi-san, you may introduce yourself now.”
He said as he looking at her.

“Takahashi Minami desu!” she said shortly.

Then the teacher told her to sit in front of Oshima Yuko.

“Ano, Takahashi-san, why are you using the window just now?”
The squirrel-like girl a.k.a Yuko ask her as she moves her body forward.

“Just call me Takamina. Ermm…about that…just for fun…isn’t fun…
it makes you look different from other student!” she said smiling turning her head towards her.

“Call me Yuko then. Really? Hmmm” Yuko said started to daydreaming.

“Not really, it’s troubling…I just do it sometimes.”
Takamina said shrugged her shoulders.

“Hmmmm…maybe I should use windows to stalk on NyanNyan too…”
Yuko said in a low voice as she started to imagining things about her so call NyanNyan.

“NyanNyan?” Takamina ask curious.

“Ahhh…there is so much things you need to know about-“

“Oshima-san, Takahashi-san, please pay attention!”
The teacher said making both of them turn their eyes to him.

“Hai!” they both said.

Not long after them both continue talking with each other again making the teacher mad.

“You two! Stand outside the class until recess!” the teacher yelled at them.





Outside the 3C classroom

“*sighed* first day of school, first time got punished~*sighed*” Takamina said as she leaning at the wall.

“Hehehe…sorry for getting you into trouble.” Yuko said as she standing beside her.

“It’s okay, I got used to this, at my old school I was known as a trouble maker…hehe” Takamina said looking at her.

“Really?”

“Yeah~ and now my parents transfer me to this school because they want me to changes
and I have to stay at the school dormitory since our home is far.” Added her.

“Hey! I was staying in school dormitory too! Let’s live with me in my room then!” Yuko said excited.

“Hm? We can choose any room we want?” Takamina ask confused.

“Err…no…hehehe…” Yuko said laughing awkwardly.

“Don’t tell me-“

“Yeah~” Yuko said giving an evil smile.
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Lunch time

“Takamina, let’s have lunch together! Come on!”
Yuko said as she drags her new friend towards the school canteen.

After buying foods, Yuko brings her to the rooftop and they eat their lunch while
looking at the view of the whole school from above.

“Mmmmm…Oishiii~” Takamina said as she munch her food.

Meanwhile Yuko was giggling by herself looking somewhere with her
small binoculars that’s coming from nowhere at the school garden then she eats again and looking again.

Takamina was looking at her then she looks at where she looks at.

“Hm? Who are they?” Takamina ask looking at the bunch of girls talking
and laughing at the school garden as they also eat their lunch.

“Eh? Ah! They are the school princesses, and that tall girl who looks
like a model is my NyanNyan~~~” Yuko said with a sparkling eyes.

“That skinny one?” Takamina ask again.

“No! That girl who her face looks like a cat~ that’s why I called her NyanNyan~”
Yuko said smiling showing her dimples.

Takamina nodding her head as she looks at them.

“I remember that one who sit besides NyanNyan,
she is the one fall off her sit when I suddenly pops up in their class window…pppuufftttt~ poor her~”
Takamina said pointing at the girl with them.

“Besides NyanNyan? She’s Acchan…and don’t mess with her…she’s dangerous.” Yuko said.

“Dangerous? Why?”

“Hmmm…long story…” Yuko said looking at Acchan.

“Make it short.” Takamina said looking at Yuko.

*Bell rings indicate that lunch time is over!*

“I will tell you later let’s go back to class!” Yuko said as they finish their food.
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After school

At school dormitory…

How Yuko made Takamina to be her roommates?
Well, she told the warden that Takamina has a weird behavior when she sleeps and
Yuko lied to the warden saying she’s been ask by her mother to take care of Takamina.
And yeah the warden is good enough to just let her so now they are on their way to their room.

Yuko is living alone in her room since she’s waiting for new roommates as her old roommates…
both are being kicked out of the school dormitory.

“And here is our room!!!” Yuko said excitedly as she open their room.

They both entered the room.

Takamina’s eyes exploring the whole room as she drags her big luggage inside.

“Why are there three beds? I thought it’s only two…”Takamina said.

“No…all rooms have three beds…means three students shared one room…
means…we have one more roommate~” Yuko said grinning.

Then Takamina prepared all her things as she chooses a bed above Yuko’s.

Then Yuko started to smile and giggling all of a sudden that attracts Takamina’s attention.

“What are you looking at?” Takamina ask her then she saw Yuko is looking at something like an album.

“Nothing~” Yuko said.

Takamina wants to peek at it but Yuko hides it from her making Takamina to get more curious.

“Let me see~~~~” Takamina said as they started to forcing each other.

As a result, they both fall as Takamina fall on top of Yuko.

Suddenly the door open making both of them froze then appeared a girl…

[chapter one ended with this fic’s OST, Always by U-kiss~”]
 :on drink:



T.B.C~





Okay~ comment!!! critics!!! all accepted!  :byebye:






Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 1 20/09/13
Post by: blakwhite on September 20, 2013, 02:19:46 PM
LOL
that will be misunderstanding  :rofl:

ah takamina just like a spiderman lol

pls update soon  :thumbsup
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 1 20/09/13
Post by: cisda83 on September 20, 2013, 03:00:49 PM
Ah... Minami never changed from her childhood...

Always make troubles... even now... unintentionally distrubing Atsuko

Why was Atsuko called as 'dangerous'?

Who is this new roommate?

Yuki, Atsuko or Haruna?

I think is Yuki...

This person that was just coming into Yuko's and Minami's room... would misunderstand thier situation...

So How is she going to react with how she saw them in compromise position...?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 1 20/09/13
Post by: lezperv on September 20, 2013, 10:59:20 PM
LMAO I really didn't expect Takamina to be the weird girl with the window thing. I really thought she would changed and walk in like Yuki did hahaha

I wonder if they will remember each other X3

Ahhh did Takamina accidentally kiss Yuko  :shocked
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 1 20/09/13
Post by: Archer1992 on September 22, 2013, 07:08:00 PM
Maybe is Mayuyu ^_^

hahahahahahaha

thanks and update soon!!!

¬3¬
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 1 20/09/13
Post by: chiqinna on September 23, 2013, 04:15:42 AM
archer san is maybe right... ツ
Sorry guys im busy with my work now.. *taking a break because my right shoulder is hurt again!!* new stuff coming... and im being lazy to arrange them.. this is the hard thing when u work alone... •⌒•
sigh... all by myself!! ♬♬♬ ╰(`⌒╰´)
i stop here to prevent from getting into nonsense talk.
Love u guys! Thanks for reading and commenting!
With♡ , Chiqinna
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Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 2 26/09/13
Post by: chiqinna on September 26, 2013, 12:58:42 PM
Chapter 2

Both Takamina and Yuko looks at each other then their eyes turn to look
at the girl that was just open the door also looking at them with a blank expression on her face.

When the two midgets realized about their awkward position, they furiously get up.

“It’s not what you think it is!!!” they both said in unison while shaking their hands and head.

The girl just looks at them.

Then she enters the room with her luggage and put it beside the empty single bed across Yuko and Takamina’s.

‘It’s not like I care.’ The girl said in her mind.

Takamina and Yuko look at each other as the girl just ignore them and went to her bed.

Yuko then walks to her but on that time she also looking at the girl’s butt as her back is facing them.
Yuko try to start a conversation.

“Hey, I’m Yuko and you are?” Yuko greeted her while showing off her popular dimples smile.

“Watanabe Mayu” she said coldly.

Yuko was startled by the way she talk.

“Y-you must be new student right? I haven’t seen you here before.
Which class are you from? Yuko ask while sitting on the girl’s bed.

“1A” she answered as she unpacking her things and put them inside her wardrobe.

‘She must be smart girl.’ Yuko thought.

“Then we are your senpai then!” Takamina suddenly said while sitting next to Yuko.

“But you also a new student here Takamina…” mumbled Yuko confuse.

“Who cares? I’m still older than her though” Takamina shrugged her shoulders.

“Whatever~” Yuko said.

“Whatever~ by the way I’m Takamina! What’s your name?”

Yuko face palmed.

“She said her name is Watanabe Mayu just now Takamina.” Yuko said.

“Eh? Really? Hehehe…” Takamina said scratching her head.

Meanwhile the other girl keeps busying herself.



It was dinner time so Takamina went to the cafeteria to have her dinner.

“Hmmm…I wonder where is Yuko…she just disappear after she finish taking a bath.”

Takamina said as she walks towards the counter.

There were many students eating and chatting there.

When she arrived she saw Yuko in front of her with an apron attached on her.

“Hey!” Yuko greeted her new friend.

“You work here?”Takamina ask her.

“I was just helping my Auntie Mai. She owns this cafeteria.” Yuko said.

“Then…can I get a free food??” Takamina said to her grinning.

She tried to wink at Yuko but apparently fail as both her eyes close when she did that.

Yuko laugh at her fail attempt making Takamina pout.

“Of Course. This is how I got free food ya know!” Proudly she said winking at Takamina.

“Yes!!! Then I can eat free food everyday!”
Takamina said as she pumps her fist in the air.

“Hehe…okay…okay…so what is your order Miss?” Yuko as her smiling.

“Do you have katsudon?” Takamina ask hoping there would be katsudon in the menu.

“Oh yes we have it! How many do you want?” Yuko ask writing down the order.

“Hmmmm….5 bowls of KATSUDON!!!” Takamina excitedly said.

“WHAAAATTTT?!!!!”
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After dinner, they both went back together to their room.

“I can’t believe you really eat all 5 bowls of katsudon!” Yuko said impressed.

“It’s no big deals~ besides I’m really hungry.” Takamina rubbing her stomach as a sign that she’s full.

When they enter the room, the other new student is nowhere to be seen.

“Where is she?” Takamina ask.

“She’s at the foyer I guess; they have an orientation for new students.” Yuko explain.

“Oh yeah I forgot. I was supposed to be there too. But it must be boring.” Takamina said climb on her bed.

“It still early Yuko, tell me more about this school and the students. The readers also want to know.”
Takamina said lying on her bed. Her arms are supporting her head as she looks at the ceiling.

“Okay~ hmmm…let’s talk about my NyanNyan first.”

“NyanNyan is a beautiful princess in this school. She from class 3B.
She has a nice oshiri…and she has a big oppai…”

*silent*

Takamina look down confuse to see why Yuko was silent.

It looks like Yuko started to daydreaming about her NyanNyan again
as Takamina can see blood running out of her nose.

Then *smack*!!! “Ouuuchhh!!”

Yuko got smack by a pillow.

“Let’s talk about other things OTHER than your NyanNyan shall we?
Tell me about her friends…what was her name again? Archo? Atcha?”

Yuko pout at her as she wipes her blood on her nose with a tissue.

“Fine~ and her name is Maeda Atsuko. We call her Acchan.
She’s really popular and they call her a goddess of the school because of her princess-like attitude.
But there’s one thing dangerous about her.” Yuko said making Takamina look down on her curious.

“She hates it when people mess with her.” Yuko’s statement making Takamina more curious.

“Why??” Takamina ask.

“From what I heard, she’s been like that since she was kid.
Whenever there are people messing with her or her things, she would do something and the next day,
they stopped disturbing her. And that what happen to my roommates.

“What happen to them?” Takamina was getting more interested.

“They got kicked out of the dormitory. It’s all Acchan’s doing. Just because her father is rich~”

“What did your roommates do to her?”

“Well, they were playing a basketball then the ball flew towards Acchan’s head making her fall then people laugh at her.
My friends did apologize to her but she’s really mad because she’s embarrassed.”

“Luckily they just kicked out of the dormitory, not school.
Tomorrow I will introduce you to them. They are my best friend!” Yuko said smiling.

“But why? It just an accident.” Takamina said.

“Do you think it was an accident when she always got hit by a ball every time she enters the stadium?”

“No.” Takamina answered.

‘I think she’s interesting.’ Thought Takamina having an evil plan in her mind.



Then Mayu come back.
She quickly put her note book on her table and changes her clothes then goes to sleep.

“*yawning* good night Yuko, Good night Mayu.” Takamina said the she closed her eyes.

“Good night” Yuko also started to sleep.

Mayu mumbled a good night but they probably did not hear it due to they were fast asleep.
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Mayu’s pov

This is my first time in high school.
Since my parents are always busy with their business,
I told them that I want to stay in dormitory and they agreed.

Fortunately, I met my old crazy friends but they are not in the same class with me.

Well, they are not as smart as me.

I’m not bragging about myself. It’s a fact!

After first day of school finish, I took my luggage and carried them towards my room.

I don’t know yet who will be my roommates.

When I open the door I found two girls, in an awkward position.

They are weird.

I just ignore them.
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After having a dinner, I quickly went to the foyer because we have an orientation for new students.

On my way I bump into someone.

She looks…pretty…tall.

I felt déjà vu when I saw her eyes.

Maybe in another fanfics.

And the author never forgets to interrupt my thought.

*Mayu glares at the author*
[Okay I will stop now. I can’t help it! My hand is itchy~ :P]

“Sorry~” She said apologize at me.

I just smile at her.

It just for a second then I went back with my blank face.

Then I continue my walk to the foyer leaving her.




At the foyer

I met my friends, they were lucky because they are in the same class.

They are Matsui Jurina and Oota Aika.

They are in class 1B.

We took a seat at the very behind because we know this night assembly will be as bored as hell.

Then I met her again.

She seat next to me!

“Hey, Kashiwagi Yuki desu!”
She said as she extends her hands to me.

I look at her hands then her face.

“Watanabe Mayu.” I said as my hand slowly reaches hers.

“Which class are you from?” She asks me.

“1A.” She’s friendly.

“I’m in 3B~ nice to meet you!” She said.

“Ano, can you let go now?”
I said as I look at our hands.

“Oh, s-sorry.” She said.

Is she blushing?

Then I heard a giggle.

I knew who it is.
I glare at them.

“Mayuyu, I think you have a fan now!” Jurina said whispering to my ear.

“Wow! You’re fast!” Lovetan added.

I just ignore their nonsense talk as I focused on what the teacher said.




T.B.C



YOU'RE WELCOME  :cool2:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 2 26/09/13
Post by: noah minami on September 26, 2013, 08:11:54 PM
its a good updates...waiting for next ..... XD
hope coming soon.. :thumbsup :cow:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 2 26/09/13
Post by: cisda83 on September 27, 2013, 12:14:37 AM
Ah... Minami.. Evil thought...

What's she planning to do to Atsuko?

Ah.. Mayuki... Together later right?

Eh.. Mayu quite cold huh...?

Well thought both Mayu and Yuko have perv link with each other?

Or are you making Mayu as a serious person here not perv. like Yuko?

Anyhow can't to see the next update

Thank you for the update

PS: take care of yourself... Take your time in work and in writing fics.

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 2 26/09/13
Post by: chiqinna on September 27, 2013, 02:08:59 AM
Ah... Minami.. Evil thought...

What's she planning to do to Atsuko?

Ah.. Mayuki... Together later right?

Eh.. Mayu quite cold huh...?

Well thought both Mayu and Yuko have perv link with each other?

Or are you making Mayu as a serious person here not perv. like Yuko?

Anyhow can't to see the next update

Thank you for the update

PS: take care of yourself... Take your time in work and in writing fics.

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

YEAH...MAYU WILL GET AFFECTED BY YUKO'S PERVERTNESS SOON OR LATER.. :lol:
I WANT TO MAKE S SERIOUS MAYU FIRST...BUT LET'S JUST SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN SOON.
PS: NOW I FORGOT HOW TO TAKE CARE OF MYSELF ANYMORE.. :lol: I NEED TO DISTRACT MYSELF BY DOING SOMETHING ELSE...LIKE WORKING,WRITING FICS...THAT NEWS HAS REALLY GOTTEN INTO ME.. :cry: I EVEN ALMOST CRY WHEN I WRITE THE UPDATE... :cry: BUT YEAH IT JUST FOR A WHILE...DON'T WORRY CISDA-SAN...
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 2 26/09/13
Post by: blakwhite on September 27, 2013, 02:28:11 AM
^ HANG IN THERE CHIQINNA-SAN
BELIEVE IN ATSUMINA !
 
btw i got nightmare too after read the article   :lol:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 2 26/09/13
Post by: cisda83 on September 27, 2013, 04:43:26 AM
Every Atsumina fans out there is having a nightmare

Well Chiqinna San please do take care of yourself..

Since you're by yourself in the shop, you can always take your time...

Do the presentation little by little..

At least the customers would see the new products if there are...

Or if it's extra products just put enough on the display and the rest you can do it later

Which ever it is... Do it in moderation...

Don't over do it... Eat, drink and sleep well...

Take care...

Looking forward to your updates...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 2 26/09/13
Post by: Archer1992 on September 27, 2013, 06:26:14 AM
hahahahaha is interesting

update soon

thanks!!!
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 3 27/09/13
Post by: chiqinna on September 27, 2013, 12:00:51 PM
noah minami: thanks for reading!  :heart:
blakwhite: I'm hanging right now!!  :lol: I do believe them!
cisda83: you're right cisda-san, I will take care of myself~  :) gladly my boss already arrange the other stuff that coming.  :lol:
Archer1992: thanks for reading!!!  :heart:


A simple list of character:

Takahashi Minami:
Class 3C, a new transfer student, always making troubles in her old school that her parents transfer her to another school in order that she will change.

Oshima Yuko:
Class 3C, have a big obsession on Kojima Haruna, a pervert.

Watanabe Mayu:
Class 1A, smart student, always with her cyborg face, not a type of a person who likes to play around.

Maeda Atsuko:
Class 3B, school princess, do not like people messing with her, kind of arrogant but good with her friends.

Kojima Haruna:
Class 3B, an airhead sometimes, friends of Maeda Atsuko, doesn’t like Oshima Yuko.

Shinoda Mariko
Class 3B, a granddaughter of the owner of the school, Maeda Atsuko’s friend, dreams to be a model.

Minegishi Minami:
Class 3C, just, Minegishi Minami.

Kashiwagi Yuki:
Class 3B, a transfer student, friendly…at first.

TwinTowers:
Class 3C, Saeyaka...a twintowers...Saeyaka!  :lol:

Matsui Rena:
Class 3C, a quiet person, but she is scary when you stole her melon pan.

Itano Tomomi:
Class 3B, Tomochin, A friend of Maeda Atsuko, good with people.

Kasai Tomomi:
Class 3C, Chiyuu, Tomochin’s girlfriend, loves saying ‘Chiyuu’.
 



Chapter 3


“Takamina…wake up!” Yuko shaking the sleeping Takamina.

“Oi! Takamina! Wake up! We’re late already!” Yuko said shaking her harder.

“Mmmhhhhm! 10 more minutes!” Takamina whine as she turns her body facing her back to Yuko.

“Geez...WAKE UUUPPPPP!!!!!” screamed Yuko on her ear making Takamina surprised
and bump her head hard with Yuko’s head.

“Ouchh!!!” Yuko said rubbing her head.

Takamina quickly look on her alarm clock but it still early and the class haven’t even started yet.
“It’s still 5 a.m.!!! our class start 6 a.m!”
Takamina said glaring at the squirrel girl because she disturbs her sleep.
“Hehehe….come on!!! Let’s be a good student and come early to school!”
Yuko said as she drags Takamina out of her bed.
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At school

“Be a GOOD student you say…” said Takamina narrowed her eyes looking at the other girl who completely ignore her.

“Seriously Yuko, is this what you’re doing every day?” Takamina asks her as she crossed her arms.

‘I can’t believe this girl is really a pervert!’ said Takamina to herself.

“Hey look! It’s Mayu!” Yuko said as she saw her through her binoculars.

“Hmmm…Mayu is so early huh...it’s still…5.20.” Takamina said as she looks at her wrist watch.

“Of course, that’s why she’s a smart student.”
Yuko said grinning while looking back at observing other student’s ‘asset’.

‘Hehehe…Mayu is a nice oshiri too…’ said Yuko in her mind.




5.40 a.m.

Takamina got bored waiting for Yuko to finish stalking on other students who enters the school gate.

“Ughhh!! Let me see what really attracts you.” Takamina took the binoculars from Yuko and watch through it.

“Hey! I haven’t finished yet!” whine Yuko.

Takamina observe the surrounding ignoring Yuko.

“Huh?” Takamina said when she saw a face looking at their direction.

“What is it? I’m curious!!!” Yuko said excitedly.

‘Is she glaring at me?’ thought Takamina still watching her.

Then Takamina smiles at her.

Takamina gives back the binoculars to Yuko while still looking at her.

“NyanNyan!!!” Yuko shouted when she saw her NyanNyan walking with her friends.

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Meanwhile at the other side.

Acchan, Mariko and Haruna are walking towards to school building.

‘Why I feel like someone is watching me?’
said Acchan to herself as she looks around.

Then she saw two girls looking at their direction.

One of them watching with a binoculars.

‘What is she doing?’ thought Acchan as she walks while looking at them.

‘Wait…she looks familiar.’ Thought Acchan again.

‘Ahh~ now I remember her.’ Acchan said in her mind then she glare at her.

‘Is she smiling at me?!’ Acchan thought slightly shock.

“NyanNyan!!!”
Yuko screamed making both Haruna and Mariko turn their eyes towards them.

“NyanNyan~~~” Mariko teases her.

“Pervert!” Haruna said as she walks ahead of them.
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At 1A classroom

It seems Mayu is talking to her new friends when she suddenly is greeted by her two friends with a hug.

“Mayuuuuu!!!” Jurina and Lovetan said as she hugs Mayu from behind.

Mayu just ignored them.

“She’s Jurina…and she is Lovetan.” Mayu introduced them to her new friend.

“Hey~ I’m Shimazaki Haruka. Nice to meet you!” Her new friend said smiling at them.

“Nice! Let’s be friends!” Jurina said excited.

Mayu sigh inwardly looking at her friends.
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At 3B classroom.

“So…NyanNyan~ mind to share us what happen during your family meeting?” Mariko asks her.

“Mou~ don’t call me NyanNyan!” Haruna pout at her.

“Ah~ Mariko~ don’t call her like that~ only Yuko can call her NyanNyan~~”
Acchan join Mariko in teasing Haruna.

“Stop it guys!” Haruna slap their arm playfully.

Then a girl walks elegantly enters the room towards the three girls.

“Tomochin! Why you absent yesterday? I call you but your phone is off.”
Acchan greeted her other friend who is sitting beside her.

“Yeah…I heard from Chiyuu that you’re sick.” Grinned Mariko at her making Tomochin to blush.

“I thought you’re not talking to my Chiyuu?” Tomochin raise her eyebrow.

“I talk to everyone! And she’s your girlfriend so she must know about you” Mariko said.

Tomochin smiles thinking of her girlfriend.

“Anyway Haruna, tell us about your family meeting. What did your parents talk about you?”
Acchan asks looking at her.

“Hmmm…*pout* they are going to lives abroad for a long time.
And they don’t want me to be alone so they want me to stay at school dormitory.”
Haruna explain to them while pouting.

“You can live in my house.” Mariko said as she playing with her pen.

“Really??” Haruna asks her with sparkling eyes.

“No~ just kidding~ I don’t want to get my house dirty~”
Mariko said making Haruna to slap her arms hard this time.

“Marichan~~~ I’m not dirty!!!” Haruna whine at her making Tomochin and Acchan laugh.

“You’re not dirty Haruna…your room’s are!” Acchan said laughing.

“Mou~ I don’t want to stay in dormitory~” Haruna said as she lean her head beside the window.

“Or you don’t want to see your number one fan?” teases Tomochin.

“Both!” Haruna whine.

“Don’t worry Haruna, I also planning to stay in dormitory.” Tomochin said smiling at her.

“Why?” They ask her.

“Because I want to see my Chiyuu always~ but you lives in your own room!”
Tomochin jokes and they all laughing except Haruna who pouts.

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At 3C classroom

“Yukoooooo!!!” shout a girl to Yuko while enter the class.

“Saaeeeeee!!!!” Yuko shout back at her as she jumps on her as Sae just hold her.

“Where is Sayaka?” Yuko asks her.

“She’s at the student’s council room. Talking with the president!” Sae said.

“Anyway I want to introduce you to our new friend! Takamina!”
Yuko said as she point at Takamina who just looking at their interaction.

“Hai.” Takamina greeted her shortly.

“Hai! I’m Sae!” Sae greeted her back smiling as she pats Takamina’s head.

“What are you doing?” Takamina asks her.

“You’re same like Yuko… *chuckle* midget!” Sae said still patting her head.





“Stop it.” Takamina said releasing dark aura around her.




“Ohh…Sorry!!!!!” Sae shout running away as the two midgets chasing after her.




Lunch time

All of the students rushed towards the school canteen as usual.

Mayu were walking slowly towards the canteen.

Her friends are leaving her behind because she’s so slow.

“Hey~” someone greeted her from behind.

Mayu looks at the person as she walks beside her.

“Let’s walk together, Mayu.” Yuki said smiling at her.
Mayu just smile at her.

Then she invites Mayu to eat together with her.

“Mayuuu!!!” As they both eating their lunch, then Mayu’s friend coming towards her grinning.

“They are my friend.” Mayu said to Yuki who nodded looking at them smiling.

“Hey~ I’m Jurina”

“And I’m Lovetan!”
They both said extending their hands to Yuki.

“Err…Kashiwagi Yuki desu.” Yuki said as she shakes their hands.

Uninvited, they both sits with Mayu and Yuki then eat their lunch and talk about various things.

“Hey Mayu, after school we’ll be going to register for a club.
Are you joining? Which club?” Jurina asking her.

“I don’t want to join any club.” Mayu said.

“Oh come on Mayu~ let’s join Taekwondo club! Pleaseee~~”
Jurina pleaded her intertwines both her hands kneeling in front Mayu.

Mayu just look at her with a cyborg face.

“Besides Lovetan also joining the club!” Jurina added to convince her.

“Yeah~ but I’m joining cheerleader club.”
Lovetan said as she only eats her lunch not minding to join Jurina convincing Mayu.

“Hey! You agree to me we’re going to join the same club!” Jurina whine at Lovetan.

“Nope! I change my mind~” Lovetan said not looking at Jurina.

“But…*turns to Mayu* Mayu~~~ please?” Jurina is making a puppy eyes.



“I’m going to join indoor games club, more relaxing.” Mayu said ignoring Jurina.


“I’m joining indoor games club too.” Yuki said then continue eating.

Jurina mumbled something that they did not hear her.

“Then take care of my friend here Kashiwagi-san.
She’s smart but she’s really weak when it comes to physical exercise.”
Lovetan said as she pats Mayu’s back.

“Just call me Yuki. I will look for her then!” Yuki said smiling.


“See…told you Mayu…she’s a fan of yours!” whispered Jurina into Mayu’s ear.

“Shut up Jurina.” Mayu mumbled to her as she looks at Yuki.
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Meanwhile

Sayaka already meet Takamina when they bump into her on their way chasing Sae this morning.

Currently they are at the school rooftop since Yuko insisted to eat there.

Yeah~ to stalk on her NyanNyan of course.

“So…what club are you joining?” Sayaka ask them.

“Go-home club” Yuko and Takamina said in unison.

“Ahhh!!! Takamina~~” Yuko said.

“Yuko~~~” Takamina said impressed that they think of the same thing.

“We’re friends!!!” They both hug each other.

“Yeah~ yeah~ a midget friends~”Sae said as she munch her foods.

“Are you jealous Sae? If you are let me give you a super hug!!!”
Yuko said then hug her from behind. More like strangle her.

“Takamina, want to join me?” Yuko asks grinning.

“Of course!!!” Takamina said then join Yuko hugging Sae who’s desperately trying to free herself.

They just meet Takamina but they are already that close.  :lol:

“LET.ME.GO!!!” Sae said. Then she suddenly fainted. She’s just pretending.

Takamina and Yuko then release her.

“Oi!” Takamina poke her.

Sae suddenly wake up making both of them running away from her.

“Now let me give you my super duper hug!!!!” Sae shout as she chasing them.

Sayaka just looking at them.

While they were running, Takamina bumps into someone making the girl to fall.

When she looks up, the girl’s face is full of foods.

“Acchan!”



T.B.C.




something wrong
I'm sorry if it doesn't reach your expectation~  :kneelbow:
gidaehae!!!
everyone, thanks for reading and supporting my fics all this time.  :kneelbow:
somehow it sounded like I was leaving lol
thanks again!  :heart:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 3 27/09/13
Post by: olive29 on September 27, 2013, 12:35:20 PM
It looks like Yuki also joins the club because Mayu's there.. :grin:

I love Yuko and Takamina's relationship in here..so cute..  :grin:

Can't wait for the next chapter...

Update soon, please.. :bow:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 3 27/09/13
Post by: cisda83 on September 27, 2013, 01:24:44 PM
Well... Takamina is in trouble again with Atsuko

She gave Atsuko more reasons to hate her...

Ah... Mayu is being chased by Yuki... Does she like her more than normal friend?

And Yuko is going to see more Haruna at dormitory soon enough

What kind of troubles would Haruna get from Yuko?

Well can't wait to see

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 3 27/09/13
Post by: Takahashi Atsuko on September 27, 2013, 08:51:12 PM
This is really interesting!
Please update soon  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 3 27/09/13
Post by: Archer1992 on September 30, 2013, 06:46:58 AM
i still believe in atsumina but is really hard

continue soon

this is interesting

thanks ^_^
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 4 12/10/13
Post by: chiqinna on October 12, 2013, 01:10:00 PM
I thought I already update this... :huhuh
Whatever, let's just enjoy the moment ne~

Chapter 4


Acchan’s pov

I and my friends are walking on the hall as we just finish our lunch except for
Haruna whose still stress about her living in dormitory.

Hikk…poor her, she’s going to see her number one pervert fan every day.

“Acchan, can you hold my bento first, I need to tie my shoelace”
Haruna said as she stop walking and give her bento to me.

“Wow~ you did not eat anything Haruna?” I ask her as I look inside the bento.

Still look full.

“I eat a little only.” Haruna said as she tying her shoelace.

When Haruna finish tying her shoelace, I heard a sound coming towards us.

When I look at my front, just like in slow motion, someone was running towards me.

I just stand there and still processing my brain.

It’s too late, she’s already bump me making me fall along with her.

“Acchan!” Haruna shout.

Arrrghhh! My butt hurts!

W-wait…I feel something sticky and slimy on my face.

I opened my eyes to see THAT weird girl so close to me!


Takamina’s pov

As I run away from Sae, I suddenly bump into someone making both of us fall as I was on top of her.

“Acchan!”

Acchan? Wait…I look up to see the face.

She looks at me also.

Then her foods are full of foods.

“Puuuuffftttt!” I close my mouth with my hand as I want to laugh by seeing her dirty face.

Then I can she her expression started to change as her eyes widen.

U-uh…I think she’s getting mad now.

“Sorry sorry…let me wipe out the foods.” I said as I wipe away some of the food from her face with my bare hand.

Then when I look at her eyes, she looks like she’s getting madder at my action.

Oh no…should I run again?

“GET.OFF.ME!!!” She said in a mad voice with a disgusted look.

She startled me! Gosh this girl~

I quickly stand up still looking at her angry face.

I lend my hand to her to help her to stand up.

“GET OUT OF HERE!!!”She shouted at me making me startled again.

Then Yuko and Sae suddenly grab me and put their hand on the back

of my head making my head bow at her as they do the same saying, “GOMENASAI!!!” then they both drag me out of there.



Normal’s pov

“Acchan are you okay?” Tomochin asks her as she helping Acchan to get up.

“S-she…I’m going to kill her!” Acchan said mad as she walks to the bathroom to clean herself.

Her friends just look at each other then followed Acchan to calm her down.

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Inside 3C classroom

“*pant* that….was horrible!*” Yuko said panting because they were running while dragging Takamina.

“Yeah…*pant* we’re dead.” Sae said as she sits at her place.

“No! *pant* not us…HER!!” Yuko said pointing at Takamina.

“What? Why? I already apologize to her!” Takamina said clueless as she stand beside window.

“Do you think she would forgive you that easily? Haaa?!” Yuko said poking Takamina’s forehead.

“So…What will she do to me then?” Takamina asks them as she tilted her head curious.

*bell rings*

“Oi! Answer me!” Takamina said to them as they ignore her then took their sit as the teacher comes in.

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After register for the clubs, they went to the dormitory as other students go home as well.

At dormitory

“So…Mayu~ what club did you join?” Yuko asks her.

“Indoor games club.” Mayu answered shortly.

“Owh…” Yuko said.

*KNOCK* *KNOCK*

Takamina opened the door revealing Yuki who probably going to see Mayu.

‘Wow…who is this? She has a nice oppai!’ thought pervert Yuko as she scans her body from top to bottom.

“Hey, Kashiwagi Yuki desu!” Yuki bowed her head introduce herself to Yuko and Takamina.

Takamina was about to extend her hand to Yuki when Yuko quickly walks towards her before Takamina reach her.

“I’m Oshima Yuko! Which class are you from?” Yuko asks as she grabs Yuki’s hand and shaking her hand with Yuki’s.

“Err…3B.” Yuki said smiling awkwardly.

Yuko gasped. “Really?! NyanNyan is in class 3B too!” She said excited then suddenly she grope Yuki’s breast.

‘Wow! She really has a big oppai! But I think NyanNyan’s bigger~’ thought pervert Yuko.

Yuki was shocked while showing her big reaction.

“Pervert!!!!” *slap!* Yuki slapped Yuko hard on her cheek then cover her chest with her arms.

“Yuko!” Takamina run towards Yuko who fall down due to the hard slap by Yuki.

“Let’s go, Yuki.” Mayu said ignoring the two midgets as she walks out of the room followed by Yuki.

“She slap me hard…it hurts!” Yuko said rubbing her right cheeks.

“Serve you right for being a pervert!” Takamina laugh at her.


 
At Maeda’s villa

Acchan’s pov

That girl…she’s totally dead if I saw her again!

I grip the paper on my hand as I was doing my homework inside my room.

I won’t kick you out of the school dormitory…yet.

*smirk*

I will play with you for a while…

Takahashi Minami…

Your name sounds familiar though…

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The next day Acchan went to Takamina’s classroom bringing a pack of foods on her hand.

Takamina and Yuko are talking with each other when…

“Takahashi!!!” Shout Acchan as she enters their classroom.

Everyone in the house looking at her as she walks towards Takamina.

“Atsuko-sama!” Some of her fans inside the classroom said.

Takamina look at the person who’s calling her.

She quickly stands up as Yuko stand behind her scared knowing that she’s getting revenge for yesterday.

Without warning Acchan quickly throw the foods on her face but unfortunately,
at exact time Takamina bend down to tie her shoelace.

After that, Takamina get up and facing her.

“Y-Yes?” Takamina asks smiling looking at her innocently.

Acchan was looking behind Takamina with a shocked face.

“I-I will deal with you later!” Acchan then looking at Takamina and quickly walk out of the room.

Takamina look behind to see Yuko standing there frozen with her whole face covered by foods.

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After school

Haruna and Tomochin are on their way to their room bringing their luggage.

Since the owner of the school is Mariko’s grandfather, they can have their own room without sharing with others.

Haruna’s room is besides Tomochin’s room.

Yuko and Takamina are walking on the hallway when they saw Haruna and Tomochin enter their own rooms.

“Hey, is that your NyanNyan?” Takamina said pointing at where Haruna is.

Yuko was shocked to see her NyanNyan in the dormitory plus she’s bringing a luggage.

“I-is she going to s-stay…here? Here?!” Yuko said feeling over-excited as she jump around.

“Let’s talk to her!” Yuko said taking Takamina’s hand and was about to walks towards
NyanNyan’s room when Takamina stop her.

“Wait, this is not a good idea Yuko.” Takamina said.

‘Knowing you would grope her as soon as you saw her~’ thought Takamina.

“Then how?” Yuko said confuse.

“First, let’s go to our room and take a good sleep!” Takamina said dragging Yuko to their rooms.

That night, Takamina and Yuko are planning to approach Haruna ‘nicely’.

At night, dormitory students usually doing their homework at their own rooms.

Some are having fun hanging and talking with friends.

The midgets have been watching NyanNyan for some quite time now.

Haruna is currently talking with TomoTomo as they were at the garden.

“Okay Yuko, let’s start our plan, remember, approach her nicely,

don’t do any sexual harassment even with your eyes! Use your dimples smile and talk to her nicely.”

“Got it!” Yuko said determined to talk to her NyanNyan without being rejected or slapped.

Yuko then walks towards NyanNyan who was alone now since TomoTomo wants to have their own private times.

Takamina was watching at them from afar.

“H-hey…” Yuko said from behind as she was nervous.

‘This is my first time to talk to her nicely. I need to control my pervertness!!!’
thought Yuko as her heart started to beat faster when NyanNyan turn around to look at her.

“You!” NyanNyan was about to run away from her.

“w-wait! Wait, Kojima-san, please, I just want to talk…” Yuko said nicely.

‘Kojima-san? Since when this pervert calling me like that?’ Haruna thought confuse.

“Please…really, promise I won’t do anything…I just…want to talk to you…”
Yuko said shyly as she plays with her fingers.

‘Cute~’ Haruna thought.

“Oh Really? Why would I talk to someone like you! Hmmpphh!!” Haruna crossed her arms looking away.

“b-but…I really want to talk to you! Please~~~” Yuko then kneeled down while both her hand holding each other looking at the taller girl with a puppy eyes.

Haruna still ignore her.

“Fine! But if you do anything I won’t talk to you again!” Haruna said giving up to her.

“Un! Let’s sit here!” Yuko said as she sits on the bench.

Haruna also sit beside her still beware of her action.

“Umm…So…why did you stay in dormitory?” Yuko started their conversation.

‘It’s not wrong talking with this pervert right? Besides she looks nice.

“My parents going to lives in New York so I’m here now.” Haruna said pouting.

“You looks cute when you pouting NyanNyan~” Yuko said smiling showing her dimples.

‘Yeah…that’s it! Show your famous dimple-smile Yuko!’ Takamina who watch over them behind the big tree.

NyanNyan looks away hiding her blush from Yuko.

‘Mou~ why am I feeling like this?’ thought her.

‘Awww~ my NyanNyan is blushing~~~’ Yuko said in her mind controlling herself from jumping over NyanNyan.

“NyanNyan, ummm…can we be friends?” Yuko said looking at NyanNyan smiling.

NyanNyan think for a while.

NyanNyan nodded her head.

“But don’t do anything or else I will stop talking to you!” NyanNyan pouted crossing her arms.

Haruna looks at Yuko who looks like she’s struggling on herself.

“Yuko?” Haruna called her as Yuko closed her eyes shut.

‘I can’t!!!!’ Yuko screamed in her mind.

“N-NyanNyan! I’m sorry!” Yuko shouted before planting a kiss on NyanNyan’s right cheek
then she run away before NyanNyan yelled at her.

‘W-what is s-she d-doing just now?!’ NyanNyan was dumbfounded by the action as
she touches her right cheek while her other hand on her chest.

Yuko run to Takamina. “Yuko! Why did you do that?!” Takamina scolded her.

“Mou, I can’t hold myself anymore…She’s so cute when she pout~” Yuko said started to daydreaming again.

*smack!* “Well, it’s good as long as you don’t grope her in public.” Takamina said.

“So I can grope her in private?” Yuko grinned while rubbing her head.

*smack again on the head*

“*sighed* let’s just go to our room…it’s late already”
Takamina said dragging Yuko by her ear as she still daydreaming about what she did to Haruna just now.






T.B.C~



any mistake, just say it!
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 4 12/10/13
Post by: blakwhite on October 12, 2013, 01:31:49 PM
 :wahaha: i think acchan is embrassed

and yuko  :hiakhiakhiak: you canthold the power of perv
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 4 12/10/13
Post by: ezha on October 12, 2013, 03:56:38 PM
yeahh takamina is TROUBLEMAKER ( especially for Acchan haha) , I hope acchan not going crazy regarding takamina behavior and oh yuko still perv haha it's about time for nyannyan to give up ...
thanks for update  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 4 12/10/13
Post by: cisda83 on October 12, 2013, 05:12:27 PM
Well Atsuko first payback attempt was backfired.

What is she going to do next?

Would Minami able to avoid it again or not?

If yes, who would get it?

Haruna felt something for Yuko but would she realise it?

Mayu is still normal here, but her Yuki is already been molested by Yuko.

Well can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 4 12/10/13
Post by: kahem on October 12, 2013, 07:31:19 PM
Ah Yuko, she can't control herself when she is with her Nyannyan but we love her like that hehe
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 4 12/10/13
Post by: abcari on October 12, 2013, 09:21:07 PM
awwwwwsss Yuko so cute!!! kojiyuu moment <3
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 4 12/10/13
Post by: Haruko on October 13, 2013, 03:28:31 AM
awwwwwsss Yuko so cute!!! kojiyuu moment <3

awww kojiyuu
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 4 12/10/13
Post by: chiqinna on October 13, 2013, 09:23:15 AM
Chapter 5


The next day,

Lunch time,

As usual Yuko and Takamina are at the rooftop having lunch.

Sae and Sayaka did not join them since they have something to do.

Then a girl comes to the roof top.

She walks towards Takamina and give her a note then leave.

Takamina took the note from her and read it.

“Takahashi, come to 3B classroom before lunch time finish!”

Takamina frown.

“It must be Acchan.” Yuko said as she watches her NyanNyan through the binoculars.

Takamina look down to where Acchan and her friends have lunch.

“Fine~ if that she wants! I don’t mind~” Takamina said grinning.

‘It’s going to be fun~!!’ Takamina said in her mind.

“I’m going with you~ but I’m not going to be your back up!” Yuko said.

‘Hehehe~ to see NyanNyan~’ thought Yuko grinning.

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With that, Takamina and Yuko heading to 3B classroom before the bell rings.

When they got there, Acchan already inside the room with her friends waiting for her.

Takamina walks inside the room carefully as she looks around.

Who knows? Acchan might put a trap inside the room for her.

“So…Maeda-san, what is it that you want me to come here?” Takamina said confidently.

Acchan crossed her arms glaring at her.

Acchan was about to speak when…

“Kyaaa!!! Pervert!!!” NyanNyan screamed when Yuko suddenly hugs her as she buried her face into her chest.

*SLAP!* “Ouchh!!” NyanNyan slapped Yuko on her head.

*Click*

Mariko was holding her phone while taking a picture of Yuko got slapped by Haruna.

“Nice shot!” Grinned Mariko while looking at the picture that she just captured.

“Hey! Mobile phone is not allowed in school!” suddenly the class president shouted at Mariko when she saw Mariko with a
mobile on her hand.

“So? What will you do to me then?” Mariko said raising her eyebrow.

‘She must be forgotten the fact that who I am~’ Mariko thought.

Then the class president suddenly screamed waving her hands crazily on the air while running
out of the class for no apparent reason.


Back to the situation…

“So…what do you want to talk about?” Takamina grinning said as she getting closer to Acchan.

Acchan grinned at her.

“Mocchi!” Acchan calling Mocchi as Mocchi walks towards them.

“She’s yours~” Acchan said looking at Mocchi as she took her seat.

Takamina looks at Mocchi who also looking at her.

“What?!” Takamina was confused.

‘Why am I feeling nervous now?’ thought Takamina.

Suddenly she feels her ears getting licked.

“Iewww~~~” Other student said.

Takamina step back from Mocchi who was looking at Takamina’s ear like it was her favorite food.

“What are you doing?!” Takamina said shocked as she cover her ears.

Mocchi started to be aggressive as she grabs Takamina’s body tight.

“Yuko!!” Takamina shout at her.

“Remember what I said before Takamina!” Yuko said.

‘I want to stand beside NyanNyan~ hehehe’ Yuko thought as she looks at Haruna
whose looking away crossing her arms.

Then Mocchi put Takamina’s ear into her mouth making Takamina to feel really
disgusted as her head trying to back away from her.

“Stop it! I don’t even know you! Gaahh!!!” Takamina said struggling.

Meanwhile Acchan and the others are just looking at them smirking and laughing.

‘Seriously! Is this weird girl an ear maniac?!!!’ Takamina said in her mind.

“Mmmmm~ I like your ears~” Whispered Mocchi in her ear making Takamina feeling goose bump.

She then let go of Takamina and went back to her seat still looking at Takamina.

“Ieewwww~” Takamina said as she wipes her ears.

Acchan then got up from her seat and walks towards Takamina.

“It’s just the beginning Takahashi! I will play with you more after this!”
Acchan said her face is close to Takamina’s. She is looking at Takamina with hatred in her eyes.

“Oh really?! Then I should play along with you~ Maeda!”
Takamina said crossing her arms as she blow Acchan’s fringe.

Acchan closed her eyes controlling her anger.

Then Takamina walks away grinning.

“NyanNyan, I will see you later~”Yuko said as she followed Takamina.

NyanNyan pout ignoring the squirrel.

“Wow~ it’s seems like you’re being good to your fan Haru-Nyan~” Mariko said smirked.

“Shut up Marichan!” Haruna said.

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Inside 3C classroom

“Oi, Takamina what are you doing?! Are you out of your mind?!” Sae scolded Takamina who just sit at her place.

“Yeah…she just declared her war between Acchan~” Yuko said.

Then Miichan who sit beside Takamina took out a microphone out of nowhere then pointed it to Takamina.

“So, Takamina-san, what do you thing will Acchan do next to you?” Miichan ask as she wears glasses.

“Where did you get that mike?!” Takamina asks confuse.

Miichan just shrugged her shoulder waiting for her answer.

“Oh, Well, She has her own plan, I have my own plan too~” Takamina answered grinning.

“What is your plan then?” Asked Miichan.

Sae, Sayaka and Yuko are just listening to the so call ‘interview’.

“Hmmmm…*giggle*” Takamina is already imagining things.

The four people making a confuse face.

“What?!” Yuko asks impatiently.

“Let’s just see what will happen ne~” Takamina said.

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Jurina went to the bathroom to wash herself.

In the bathroom, she found a girl with a pale face staring at herself in front of the big mirror.

Jurina just ignore her and wash her face.

When she looks up to see the mirror, she notices that the other girl is looking at her.

*they were alone*

Jurina show her cat smile at the girl.

But the girl just stays with her normal expression.

Jurina keep her smile showing her white teeth as the atmosphere started to get weird.

The girl finally smiles at her.

Jurina stares at her smiling face.

Then the girl just left the bathroom.

Jurina just frozen at her place still smiling.

‘I never met a goddess before…but I think I just met one now…’ thought Jurina remembering her smile again.

“Are? Whose handkerchief is this?” Jurina said looking at the handkerchief beside the sink.

She took the handkerchief…then she looks at the bathroom door…and looking at the handkerchief again.

“Is this…hers?” mumbled Jurina then she started to smile widely.

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After school

Every student has started to attend on their clubs activities.


Indoor games clubroom

Many students were joining this club since it was more relaxing and does not use much physical strength.

Mayu currently playing chess with Paruru.

Suddenly, Yuki come towards them.

“Hey Mayu, can I play with you?” Yuki said smiling at her.

Mayu just look at her with a blank face.

“Wait for your turn, I’m still playing with Paruru.” Mayu said coldly.

“Okay.” Yuki said with a disappointed tone.

“You’re really good Mayuyu!” Paruru praised her as Mayu win.

‘Mayuyu?’ Yuki said in her mind.

“Okay my turn!” Yuki said excitedly as she push Paruru aside then sit across Mayu.

As they play, Mayu look at her weirdly.

‘Why does she look so happy playing this game?’ Mayu said as she glances at Yuki who keep smiling.

Then it was Yuki’s turn.

“Wait…you can’t move it backward…this one could only moves forward.” Mayu said to her.

“Ah! S-sorry my m-mistake…hehe” Yuki said panicked then she moves it two steps forward from its initial place.

“Yuki, it can only move one step forward.” Mayu said.

Yuki quickly moves it one step backward then just act like it was nothing.

“Is this your first time playing chess?” Mayu asks her.

Yuki nodded looking down embarrassed.

‘No wonder she just followed my movements at the beginning.’ Mayu sigh inwardly.

“Let me teach you then.” Mayu said making Yuki look up at her.

“Thank you Mayuyu!” Yuki said happy.

“Mayuyu?” Mayu confused.

“I will call you Mayuyu from now on!” Yuki said excited.

‘Whatever~’ thought Mayu then she teach Yuki how to play chess.

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Meanwhile at the same time inside taekwondo clubroom.

Jurina had just introduces herself as all the members had to introduces themselves.

“Next!” The teacher who in charge said firmly.

“Matsui Rena desu! Class 3C.” When Jurina heard the voice, she quickly looks
at the owner of the voice as she widens her eyes.

‘S-she’s in the same club with me!’ thought Jurina could not believe it.

‘Waaaahhhh!!! I’m in heaven!!!’ Jurina said in her mind.



Yuko was skipping on her way back to the dormitory with a happy expression

as she is planning to approach her favorite school idol for the second time.

On her way she saw Takamina running for her life. Looks like she’s being chased.

Then she saw a girl chasing her from behind.

“Is it Acchan?” mumbled Yuko as she stopped walking.


“Kaaaiiiii!!!!!” Shouted the girl who chased Takamina.

Takamina looks like she’s been seeing a ghost as she running fast.

“Kai? Who’s kai?” Yuko said confuse not noticing that Takamina is running towards her direction.

“Yuukoooooooooo!!!!” Takamina shouted making Yuko look at her.

“Kaaaiiiii!!!!” The girl looks happy chasing Takamina.

“Noooooo!!!!”



T.B.C





Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: olive29 on October 13, 2013, 09:46:28 AM
The girl who chase Takamina is Ray, isn't she?

Can't wait for the next chapter..

Update soon, please.. :bow:

Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: abcari on October 13, 2013, 10:43:56 AM
Yuko pervert like always xD

A war declaration~

What the.. RAY!? I want to know the backstory about Kai/Minami xD
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: cisda83 on October 13, 2013, 12:50:57 PM
Minami is being chased by ray?

Yeah... What with the backstory about Kai and Minami?

Did Minami used to be an idol or something?

Or she had a brother or cousin that look like her?

Or did she ever attend a cross-dress competition?

Can't wait to see what kind of troubles both Atsuko and Minami bring to each other

Thank you for the update

  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: Haruko on October 13, 2013, 05:56:38 PM
Yuko pervert like always xD

A war declaration~

What the.. RAY!? I want to know the backstory about Kai/Minami xD

Me too

With this:
“Oh really?! Then I should play along with you~ Maeda!”
Takamina said crossing her arms as she blow Acchan’s fringe.

i this that minami gonna kiss acchan to prove that she is not afraid of her
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: Archer1992 on October 14, 2013, 02:45:52 AM
dont tell me that is Ray

what is she doing there!!???

hahahahahahahahahahaha this is going to be very funny and whit so much drama!!!

thanks and please Update SOON!!!!
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: chiqinna on October 14, 2013, 09:22:23 AM

Me too

With this:
“Oh really?! Then I should play along with you~ Maeda!”
Takamina said crossing her arms as she blow Acchan’s fringe.

i this that minami gonna kiss acchan to prove that she is not afraid of her

Hey Haruko-san! yeah...you gave me some idea there...  :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: anakpanti on October 14, 2013, 01:13:44 PM
chiqinna-san.. Takamina and Yuko are so funny.  :lol:

Maeda...maeda.... What's going to happen if she realize that Takamina is her old friend?
I'm curious about this.

I'm happy that WMatsui included in this fanfics... I'll waiting how the taekwondo club will develop.  :D

Can't wait for your update.  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: ezha on October 15, 2013, 05:50:35 PM
waiting for you to update this~ My lovely chiqinna~ :on slopkiss:

You are my Angel~ Ops sorry, wrong statement, you're my sunshine~  :mon innocent: :mon kissy: Double kiss~

Third kiss~  :gmon heartu: :gmon love2:

I'm waiting Angel~ :wriggly:

And by the way, why are you suddenly adding the girl who was chasing Takamina? and why she's suddenly become Kai?  :cool2:

ps: SELAMAT HARI RAYA AIDIL ADHA!!! Nyaha! Nak berkampung kat sini jugak~ :on gay:



Wahahahaha you two really romantic,sorry if I annoy you at the moment hehehe , but I have a same questions about that and WOW you know a lot of malay language ryuuka-san??? SUGOI....
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: chiqinna on October 16, 2013, 03:48:45 AM
huh? o.O ezha-san...I'm laughing right now when I read your statement... xD really...hahaha :lol: how should I explain this..ummm... hmmm... Ryuuka also can speak malay fluently you know...sugoi right? fufufu~
and about the chaser...it related to takamina's old school~
mari kita berkampung di sini~ ryuuka! ♥ tolong sembelih lembu seekor~ sy mau masak rendang~ :P
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: ezha on October 16, 2013, 01:33:24 PM
huh? o.O ezha-san...I'm laughing right now when I read your statement... xD really...hahaha :lol: how should I explain this..ummm... hmmm... Ryuuka also can speak malay fluently you know...sugoi right? fufufu~
and about the chaser...it related to takamina's old school~
mari kita berkampung di sini~ ryuuka! ♥ tolong sembelih lembu seekor~ sy mau masak rendang~ :P

 
is it true?yeah SUGOI !!maybe I can learn malay language from chiqinna-san and ryuuka-san Hohoho ..
and oh I can't take this anymore , both of you is full with LOVE hahahahaha ...peace
I will wait for your update sensei and stop this NONSENSE conversation hehe~~~forgive me
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: chiqinna on October 16, 2013, 02:01:22 PM
where are you from ezha-san? yeah i'm asking the question to the obvious answer just to make sure~  :sweatdrop:
you want to learn from me? no prob...  :D but I'm a bad teacher~  :sweatdrop:
no don't stop the nonsense talk...make me happy...I'm breaking down right now..  :cry:
sorry if i'm being selfish...
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: ezha on October 16, 2013, 03:12:49 PM
I will answer your question in pm chiqinna-san bcz I want private talk just for us hahaha
(I hope ryuuka-san not jealous hohoho)   :grin:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: blakwhite on October 16, 2013, 06:03:32 PM
<--- just watching / reading your nonsense conversation  :wahaha:
please continue your nonsense :3 im enjoy it  :lol:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: ezha on October 16, 2013, 06:33:09 PM
<--- just watching / reading your nonsense conversation  :wahaha:
please continue your nonsense :3 im enjoy it  :lol:

 ohh blackwhite-san maybe u can join to help me to be my couple bcz ryuuka-san and chiqinna-san is so sweet and I feel more more jealous and lonely huhuhu~~~~
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: blakwhite on October 16, 2013, 06:47:53 PM
ohh blackwhite-san maybe u can join to help me to be my couple bcz ryuuka-san and chiqinna-san is so sweet and I feel more more jealous and lonely huhuhu~~~~

yeah~ im jealous with them too, huhuhuu  :farofflook:

how about we kidnap chiqinna-san?  :hehehe:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: chiqinna on October 16, 2013, 07:32:47 PM
ugh.. feeling so weak.. woke up...its 1:00 am here... feeling wanna puke! :(
what? kidnap me? me??!!! as in...ME?!!!!
hmmmm...I dont mind but you hv to kidnap takamina first for me!  :P
the update? I haven't write for the next chap... wait okay?
other readers, sorry if you're annoyed by our nonsense talk...
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: chiqinna on October 16, 2013, 07:56:04 PM
after that im going to keep her forever... :P
i'm going to sleep...woke up bcuz having nighmare... @-@
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: blakwhite on October 17, 2013, 02:33:27 AM
^ okay~ I will kidnap Takamina for you~ and give her to you after I done hugging her and....tutt...tutt..tutt... With her for three nights~ :lol: I'll be waiting then, take your time. :D

Ps: take care of yourself, don't get sick, LOVE YA my lovely chiqinna :on slopkiss:

i will call acchan if you kidnap takamina  :on thumbb:

ah btw, chiqinna -san, we are same, i feel wanna puke too lol  :hee:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: blakwhite on October 17, 2013, 03:07:37 PM
well, i wanna puke because im eat hmm, you know sup kambing?
i eat that when cold -_-

btw, gaaaahh and now you make me really impatient  :tantrum:

please update soon  :pleeease:

or i will make roasted rukaecchi  :kekeke:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: ezha on October 17, 2013, 03:50:48 PM
well, i wanna puke because im eat hmm, you know sup kambing?
i eat that when cold -_-

btw, gaaaahh and now you make me really impatient  :tantrum:

please update soon  :pleeease:

or i will make roasted rukaecchi  :kekeke:

urkkk I can't imagine "sup kambing when cold" taste ~~ maybe u can join fearfactor blackwhite-san hehe
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
Post by: chiqinna on October 18, 2013, 11:21:25 AM
Chapter 6

Takamina managed to escape herself from the crazy fan girl thanks to Yuko. She ran straight to her room.

Takamina who was finish changing her clothes looking at Yuko and laughed.

“hahaha! What happen to you?” asked Takamina laughing at her friend.

“It’s your fault! I need explanation. Now!” Yuko said taking off her bag and on her bed while crossing her arms glaring at
Takamina.

“Who’s that girl just now?” Asked Yuko.

Takamina took a chair beside her table and sit on it in front of Yuko.

“*sigh* She’s Ray…a student from my old school…but I was surprised that she even here?! I never told her where I transfer
though…” Takamina said.

“But why is she chasing after you? And moreover calling you kai?” Yuko asked curious.

“Yeah…that’s a long story~” Takamina said leaning on her chair.

“Make it short~”

So Takamina explain about this girl from her old school.

This diva-like girl really head over heels over Takamina but she never thought that Ray even following her to this school.

And she calling her Kai because Takamina had joined a drama club where she has to act as a boy named Kai.

That was when Ray started to likes Takamina even though she knows that Takamina is a girl.

The more Takamina tried to resist her, the more she likes her. Takamina always running away from her.

“Souka…” Yuko nodded her head.

“Then you should stop resisting her…maybe she will leaves you~” Yuko said looking at Takamina.

“I’ve tried already…”


Flashback

Takamina’s pov

Okay readers, this is flashback when I was in my old school~

“Kai!” There she is…Ray.

I turn around to look at Ray who’s walking happily towards me.

This is the time…If I tried to stop running away from her...maybe she will stop chasing after me!

"Yes Ray?" I asked her sweetly.

Wow~ she’s blushing right now!

“Umm…kai~ here, I made you a cake!” Ray said as she handed a box with cake in it.

I looks at the cake… is this even deserve to call a CAKE?!

“Y-yea…thanks.” I said as I scratch my un-itchy head.

 Then Ray grabbed my hand. “Come on! You need to eat it now!” She drag me somewhere where we can eat.

“A-Ano…Ray…I can it eat later~” I said feeling nervous.

“No! You don’t like my cake?” Ray said pouting.

Gaahh!! It’s not just your cake! It’s you that I don’t like!

Forcefully, I took a spoon and look at the piece of the cake for the last time before it enters my mouth.

I look at Ray who’s sitting across me with a wondering expression waiting for me to dig in.

I slowly shove it into my mouth…

I close my eyes as I still did not munch it. Oh God…I can feel the awful taste coming from it!

“Kai~ what are you doing? You have to eat all of this!” Ray’s statement making me opened my eyes widely.

Takamina! Think of an idea to get rid of this maniac!

Oh! Maybe she will be hurt if I being harsh to her!

I then spit out the cake from my mouth. Yuck! It’s taste like a mud.

Ray stand up shocked when she saw my action.

I look at her…no, I glared at her.

“Are you trying to kill me or what?!” yeah keep it up! Make her sad!

“kai-“

“This is not even taste like a cake!” I said as I throw away the cake along with its box.

“Kai…” Yes! Ray is becoming sad! I think she’s hurt by my words!

 “You should not have made it for me!” I said mad as I turn around from her. As soon as I turn, I let out an evil smile.

Then suddenly I felt someone hug me from behind.

“Kai! I didn’t know that you care about my cooks! I love you kai!” W-what?! I did not even say that I care for it?!!

I quickly push her from me. “Ehh??!” I was confused. I thought she’d be hurt and leaves me!

“I know…I will try to make a cake for you again and you’ll taste it if it’s getting better ne?!”

Ehhhhh??!!! Why? Why?!!!


End of flashback



“Woo…I didn’t know that you have such a fan~” Yuko said teasing her.

“Shut up! Because of her I can’t have fun in school…always running from her. Tsk!” Takamina said crossing her arms.



The next day

Mayu was walking to her classroom when she saw Yuki talking and laughing with a genking girl.

She raised her eyebrows.

But then she just ignored them and continues her walk to the classroom.


“fuhh…I’m glad Ray is not in this class!” Takamina said as she looks around in their class.

“Yeah…you’re lucky~ but she still will come to you~ hahaha!” Miichan said laughing along with Yuko.

Takamina already told her about it last night when they having study together in the library.

“This is better than having her as my classmates…same as that Mocchi girl!” Takamina said rubbing her ears.
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Time for club activities

Jurina haven’t tried to talk to Rena yet.

“Okay now I will announce the pair you will do practice with…” The coach said as he said the pairings one by one.

“…Matsui Jurina, with Matsui Rena. Okay let’s start practice now! And don’t play around! I already teach you the skills so make

 sure, don’t hold back! Your opponent will never hold back if he/she is attacking you!” He explained as he walks back and forth
 with his hands behind his back.

‘Gosh!!! I’m with her~ But! I have to fight with her! Even though it was just a practice but…’
Jurina seems worried that she might hurt Rena because Rena looks like a weak girl due to her skinny and pale face.

‘Okay, this is just a practice Jurina, don’t be so hard on her.’ Jurina thought as she decided to not do her best.

As they were facing each other, Jurina looks at Rena who’s having a serious face looking at her.

With a Taekwondo moves, Jurina started to attack her and tried to tackle her down, Rena did a counter-attack
making Jurina to fall instead.


[I’m not good in this part… skip!]


Jurina’s expectation was wrong. Rena is quite strong despite her skinny body.

She did not even hold back.

Jurina ended up injured her ankle while Rena just ignored her and walk away from her and that makes Jurina sad.

She’s being sent to the school infirmary.

“I can’t believe it! She’s that strong! Maybe I was holding back too much~” Jurina mumbled as she was taking a rest on the
bed.

Suddenly the door opened revealing Rena with melon pans on her right hand.

Jurina sit up on the bed as Rena was walking towards her and sit beside her.

(They were alone as the nurse were having day off)

‘She’s sitting beside me!’ Jurina feels happy that Rena is coming to see her even though she did not say anything and just sit
beside her.

“Are you okay?” Rena finally asked her. ‘Her voice is so cute!!!’ Jurina squealing in her mind.

“It’s fine” Jurina said smiling.

Rena looks at her making Jurina to blush and look down shyly.

“Want some?” Rena offered her one of her melon pan as she brings two.

Jurina happily took the melon pan and eat it. Rena also eats hers.

“What’s your name again?” Rena asked.

“Jurina”


Then the atmosphere falls in to silence again as they only focused on munching melon pan.

After Rena finished eating. She excused herself.

Before Rena walk out of the room, Jurina stopped her making Rena turn her head towards Jurina.

Jurina shyly ask her, “C-can we talk again after this?”

Rena looks at her. Then she smiling at her and walks out.

“That means…yes!!!” Jurina was so happy that she suddenly jumps on her
feet forgetting that she has injury.
“Ouch! Ouch! Ouch! Itai!”



At the same time

Indoor games club

Yuki were sitting at the corner as she did not play with the other.

She keeps looking at the front door expecting for someone to come in.

Then she saw Paruru so she called her. “Paruru!”

Paruru walks towards her. Yuki asked where Mayuyu is.

Paruru said Mayuyu is at the teacher’s room and she will not attend the club activities today.

Yuki frown and sigh as she leans on the chair.



Meanwhile
Takamina were wandering around the school as Yuko is watching other student playing basketball.

Oh, more to watching her NyanNyan playing. Yeah…NyanNyan is in the club!

Suddenly Takamina saw Acchan walking along the hallway but her eyes is looking elsewhere.

She was about to walk to her when she heard someone was calling her name.

“Kai! Kai!” ‘Oh no! Why now?!’ though her as the voice sending chills to her body.

Acchan is in front while the voice coming from the opposite side.

Takamina then smirked.

“Killing two birds with one stone~” grinned her.

She runs towards Acchan who did not saw her because she keeps looking at the scenery outside.

When she turn her head to the front, Takamina already in front of her as she suddenly being push to the wall.

Takamina trap her then she kissed her on the lips…hard.




T.B.C~




Special thanks to Haruko-san for the kissing part idea~  :twothumbs
I love doing this...always ended up like this…I wonder if you guys like it.

But yeah...my mind is getting nonsense.

I don’t want to use logic in this fic…I will get stress then I will started to talk to myself then I will suicide! *jk*

Gave me some ideas~


p/s: she might be leaving but she will always watching...  :)

Happy 20 years 5 months ChiqinNa :P ~
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Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 6 18/10/13
Post by: cisda83 on October 18, 2013, 02:41:11 PM
ah... Kai and Ray... very cute... Ray is a stalker as always...

Eh... Minami kissed Atsuko... what would Ray and Atsuko do to Minami?

And also what would Ray do to Atsuko?

Wmatsui... interesting interaction

Yuko as always trying to be near Haruna

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 6 18/10/13
Post by: Haruko on October 19, 2013, 03:44:59 AM
OMG!! She kiss her!! in front of RAY!!!... But I think that Ray gonna fight for  her midget right?.. Double kiss Part 2.. like mendol dorama
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 6 18/10/13
Post by: Konoe on October 19, 2013, 04:28:07 AM
LOL at Takamina's attempt to make Ray hate her. Just imagining Takamina eating the cake :hiakhiakhiak: her face is definitely priceless.

Takamina is soo bold. Kissing Acchan  :nya:

I want to know Acchan's reaction. Update soon~
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 6 18/10/13
Post by: Kirozoro on October 20, 2013, 05:37:12 PM
OMG is TakaAcchan   :heart:

“Killing two birds with one stone~”

Takamina kiss Acchan  :drool:

I wonder how Ray feels after seeing Takamina kiss Acchan

Can't wait to see next CH   :w00t:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 6 18/10/13
Post by: Archer1992 on October 20, 2013, 09:08:23 PM
OMG!!!

why you left the ff in that part...

God

Continue soon!!!

please...
thanks!!
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 6 18/10/13
Post by: chiqinna on October 21, 2013, 11:47:31 AM
Chapter 7



She runs towards Acchan who did not saw her because she keeps looking at the scenery outside.

When she turn her head to the front, Takamina already in front of her as she suddenly being push to the wall.

“Kai! ´The owner of the voice is coming closer so Takamina trap the dumbfounded Acchan then she kissed her on the lips…
hard.

Acchan’s eyes widen to the sudden action.

She’s struggling from her but Takamina gripped her arms making her could not move as their body touched each other.

“Kai?!” Ray saw them kissing.

Acchan widen her eyes as she realized other student saw her being kissed.

Acchan push Takamina making their lips part as she took a deep breath but it’s just for a second when Takamina this time
cupped both her cheeks with her hands and kissed her for the second time.

“Mmmmm!!!” Acchan said~

Using her whole strength, Acchan pushed both Takamina’s shoulder.

She managed to break the kiss as they both breathing heavily looking at each other.

Acchan was totally red as tomato right now.


“Kai…” Ray is still standing there looking at the two.

Takamina turned her head to Ray smiling.


‘She must be hate me now seeing me kissing other girl…hahaha~’ Takamina said in her mind.

“Hi Ray~” She greeted her expecting that Ray would hating her and stop chasing after her after seeing the kissing earlier.


“Kai!!” Ray said happily.

Takamina was like ‘huh?’

She then turns to Acchan who’s smokes coming out of her ears and looks like about to turn into hulk.

‘I thought…it was different reaction than I thought’ she thought.

She looks at Ray…then looked at Acchan.

‘O-oww…big trouble…BIG TROUBLE!’ Takamina started to feel nervous.


“I give you three seconds to-”

Before Acchan finished, Takamina already disappear from the two girls.

“Grrrr!!! Takahashi!!! I will really kill you this time!!!” Acchan screamed as she chasing Takamina along the hallway.

Ray who was still standing decided to chase after her kai too.



Meanwhile

“NyanNyan!” Yuko called Haruna who’s finished playing basketball as she resting on the stands.

Haruna turn to looks at Yuko who’s smiling shyly walking towards her with a bottle of water on her hand.

Haruna blushed seeing Yuko walking towards her.

They have started being good friends since last night.


Flashback

Haruna were at the library…study-…she’s sleeping with a book covering her face.

Yuko entered the library to search for some books.

Then she saw someone with a book covered her face.

“Wait, that body…looks familiar…” Yuko mumbled as she scans the figure sleeping while sitting with her head on the table.

Yuko slowly walks towards the sleeping person.

Haruna felt a presence near her woke up as she uncovered her face from the book.

“Hi NyanNyan~” Yuko greeted her smiling.

“Hmmm” Haruna rubbing her eyes as she straightens herself.

“Can I sit here?” Yuko asked with pleading eyes.

‘This is my second chance to talk to NyanNyan~ ganbatte Yuko!’ Yuko cheered herself in her mind.

Haruna nodded as she lazily opened the book and randomly flipping the page.

Yuko quickly sit beside Haruna.

‘Calm down Yuko!!! It just sitting beside NyanNyan! Don’t over joy yourself! ‘Yuko took a deep breath silently as she still holding the books that she just took from the shelf.

“So…umm…what are you reading?” Yuko trying to started the conversation.

Haruna using her other hand as her left hand is supporting her head showing the cover to Yuko.

Yuko nodded seeing the book’s cover.

Then Haruna continue flipping the page one by one. While Yuko continue staring at Haruna.

Haruna then realized the other girl beside her so she turned to look at her.

“Why are you staring at me like that?” Haruna said coldly as she looks away feeling heat on her face.

“A-ah, S-sorry…hehehe” Yuko said as she pretending to read a book.

Haruna look at her again.

Then Haruna suddenly laughed making Yuko to look at her confusedly.

“Why are you laughing NyanNyan?” ‘Gosh! She’s so cute when she laughs too!’

“Umm…nothing…it just…the book you read…puufftt!” Haruna was trying to contain her laugh.

Yuko then look at the book she holds.

It was upside-down. “How can you read it upside down Yuko? You’re so funny!” Haruna said laughing silently because they
were in the library.

Yuko just smiled embarrassed by her stupid act.

“It because I was staring at you NyanNyan~” Yuko said sweetly making Haruna blushing.

“Mou~ don’t stare at me like that! You pervert!” Haruna said pouting looking away.

“NyanNyan~ I’m trying my best to hold my pervertness towards you~” Yuko said honest.

‘She’s so cute when she acts like this!’ Haruna thought.

“If you want to be friend with me, then you have to control yourself. Understand?” Haruna said looking at Yuko.

Yuko nodded happily. “Un! I will try my best NyanNyan!” Yuko smiled showing her dimples.

“I love your dimples~” Haruna said poking her dimple.

Yuko feels her heart beating so fast the moment Haruna’s index finger touch her dimple.

“Hehehe~” Yuko said blushing.

“Let’s study together NyanNyan!” Haruna nodded to her.


End of flashback


So…where are we? Oh…

Haruna were looking away pretending to wipe her sweat with a towel as Yuko walks towards her.

Suddenly they heard people screaming.

“Takahashi!!!”

“Kaaaiiiii!!!!!”

“Yukoooooo!!!!” Yuko turn around when she hears Takamina’s voice.

As soon as she turned, a sudden weight was bumping on her making them both falling on the ground.

“Oucchhh!!!” Yuko groaned in pain as her back falling hard on the ground.

“Yuko! Sorry! Help me!” Takamina said looking at Yuko below her then she looks behind to see Acchan and Ray still after her.

“Yaaaarrhhh!!!” Takamina quickly get up and run around the court from the two crazy girls.

One is calling her happily while the other one is angrily still smoke can be seen coming out of her ears like a train’s smoke.


“Yuko! Are you okay?” Haruna walks towards Yuko who’s still lying on the ground.

“My back…” Groaned Yuko.

“NyanNyan~ help me~” Yuko said extend her hand towards NyanNyan.

Haruna help her to get up.

Without Haruna noticed, Yuko is grinning widely.


“Acchan! Watch out!!!” Someone screamed.

Acchan stop chasing Takamina but before she looks at the person who called her,

“Acchan!!!” Haruna shouted as Acchan fall on the ground fainted.

Takamina and Ray also stop their chase and run and looked at Acchan.




Night at Maeda’s villa...

Acchan’s pov

Ughhh…my head hurts!

Damn it! Why I always got hit by a ball when I was in basketball stadium?!

Luckily Haruna and Mariko quickly send me home.

It’s too embarrassing!

That Takahashi!!!

How dare she k-kissed me?!
 
That was my first kiss… aaaarrrrggghhh!!!

*Acchan rolling on her bed angrily*

You’re dead when I meet you again Takahashi!

And the person who throw the ball at me!


You guys are dead! DEAAAAADDD!!!!

*Acchan screaming inside her room*




The next day (its weekend)

Yuko went back home while Takamina stayed at Dormitory.


Takamina’s pov

Tsk…this so boring…

Laying on the bed all day…nothing to do~

It would be best if that Acchan is here~ *grinning*

So that I can play with her~

She must be really mad because of the kissing.

Hahaha!

But…*sigh* Ray~ what should I do to this diva~?

I really thought she would get mad or slap me or anything…

Instead she’s happy? Happy that I kissed other girl?

Or she’s crazy? Yeah…she’s indeed crazy girl.

I will ask for Yuko advise about this when she’s back.

End of Takamina’s pov

Mayuyu stay at dormitory as well as her crazy friends.

They were currently inside Mayu’s room.

(Takamina went out…walking around the dormitory)

“So…Mayuyu~ how’s your progress with Yuki-Chan?” Lovetan asked as she sits on the bed.

Mayu is doing her revision as she sat on the chair beside the bed.

“What progress?” Mayu asked without looking at the two.

“Your love progress~~” Jurina teased her.

Without answering to their nonsense question, Mayu put her book on the table and grab her manga
then started to read her manga.

“Mayu~ don’t ignore us~” Jurina pouted.

Lovetan and Jurina are playing on Mayu’s bed.

“Jurina I heard you injured your ankle during taekwondo practice?” Mayu said without looking at her and just keep reading manga.

“Really? Is it hurt?” Lovetan said checking her leg.

“Hehehe~ yeah…but its okay now~” Jurina said cupping her own cheeks smiling remember certain incident.

“Jurina, are you blushing?” Lovetan said making Mayu look at her.

“I’m not~” mumbled Jurina still covering her cheeks.

“Yeah…you’re blushing…something must have happened right?” Mayu asked narrowed her eyes to her.

Jurina keeps quiet.

“So it’s true!” Lovetan said poking Jurina’s side.

“Tell us! Tell us!” Lovetan and Mayu started to tickle Jurina.

“Guys! Stop it! It’s nothing!” Jurina was struggling from the two.

Mayu got excited, she sit on Jurina’s stomach.

“Be careful my ankle! Oi!” They ignored Jurina’s words.

“Tell us who is it?” Lovetan asked.

Suddenly the door opened.


“Ehhhhh???!!!” The person shouted with a very big shocked expression looking at the scene.


T.B.C~




Oopss~ I did it again~  :P

Hmmm...If there's any mistake please correct me!  :kneelbow:
This is suppose to be short...looks like I'm making it longer again...  :lol:
I know you guys can easily guess who the person is~  :rofl:  :yuki:

I don't know when will I update the next chap~
I'm going to be active again as a Kiss Me soon~  :bigdeal:
so here's a kiss for everyone!  :mon kissy:
and a special kiss for my lovely Ruka~   :ptam-kiss:
not enough? here's another one~ :on slopkiss:
and a bonus kiss!!!  :mon kissy:
thanks for reading! and commenting!  :wub:




 
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 7 21/10/13
Post by: Konoe on October 21, 2013, 12:02:57 PM
Woah! Takamina kissed Acchan not once but TWICE.  :nya:

But Ray is still happy after seeing that?! She's weird indeed.

Kojiyuu moments :heart:  :shy2: :nya:

Jurina and Mayu caught by Yuki in an awkward position.  :shock:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 7 21/10/13
Post by: qweakb on October 21, 2013, 02:20:27 PM
I love the kissing scene between takamina and acchan  :wub:

It is  :farofflook: +  :on GJ:

I wonder what revenge acchan is going to do takamina again  :hehehe:
It is fun to read about this.. hehe

Kojiyuu moment is also the best..haha..   :wub:

Quote
Instead she’s happy? Happy that I kissed other girl?

Or she’s crazy? Yeah…she’s indeed crazy girl.
Send Ray to mental hospital!!!!!!!

Can I ask for more mayuki and wmatsui moment? hehe :kneelbow:

Quote
This is suppose to be short...looks like I'm making it longer again...
I know you guys can easily guess who the person is~  :rofl:  :yuki:

I don't know when will I update the next chap~
I'm going to be active again as a Kiss Me soon~  :bigdeal:

I like the story to be longer! Thank for updated! :kneelbow:
 
For the kiss, leave it to Ryuuka-san..  XD
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 7 21/10/13
Post by: cisda83 on October 21, 2013, 03:02:30 PM
Who is it that walk on Mayu and Jurina in compromise position?

Is it Yuki?

AH... Atsuko is very scary and very angry toward Minami

And what's going on with Ray?

How can she get no feeling whatsoever when she saw Minami and Atsuko were kissing?

Does Ray really love Minami, that everything Minami do was for her sake...?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 7 21/10/13
Post by: ptrd3009 on October 21, 2013, 08:34:09 PM
yuko is so cute and someone open the door is yuki?
can't wait for next chapter :cathappy:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 7 21/10/13
Post by: kahem on October 21, 2013, 08:59:26 PM
Ray is really weird lol
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 7 21/10/13
Post by: Haruko on October 22, 2013, 05:20:57 AM
The kiss!! OMG!! and kojiyuu so sweet
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 7 21/10/13
Post by: ezha on October 22, 2013, 06:07:16 AM
 :on slopkiss: :on slopkiss: :on slopkiss:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 7 21/10/13
Post by: noah minami on October 25, 2013, 09:13:23 AM
Haha. Takamina is such a teaser...
Acchan sure mad. Haha
Ray is happy when takamina kiss acchan??
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 7 21/10/13
Post by: Archer1992 on October 25, 2013, 11:20:50 PM
waaw all the suspense...

very funny....


thanks

Update Soon!!!!
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 7 21/10/13
Post by: ezha on October 26, 2013, 07:17:37 AM
chiqinna~san get well soon and update your fanfic ....
I MISS YOU  :on slopkiss:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 7 21/10/13
Post by: anakpanti on October 26, 2013, 07:34:08 PM
Ray will never feel hurt by Takamina, no matter how hard Takamina tried to hurt her.
Love is blind.  :lol:

Acchan... big shock for her! First Kiss!!  :shocked
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 7 21/10/13
Post by: ykariya on November 04, 2013, 05:12:48 PM
omg

Acchan in shock from the kiss

Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 7 21/10/13
Post by: mikaellitsa on November 05, 2013, 01:54:16 AM
minami is so dead after the kiss  :nervous
cant wait fo the next one  curious to see wht ill happen between the two 8)
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 7 21/10/13
Post by: FairyNyan on November 05, 2013, 03:38:39 AM
i always LOL-ed when read your fic  :wahaha:

esp the chasing scene  :wahaha:

and the last scene im sure she is our reaction queen   :yuki:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 7 21/10/13
Post by: shazrey on December 16, 2013, 06:39:57 PM
i love ur story
please update its soon  :cry:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 7 21/10/13
Post by: chiqinna on December 17, 2013, 11:26:26 AM
This chapter have no Atsumina moments~  :sweatdrop: sorry~
I tried my best...to update for my lovely readers~  :grin:







Chapter 8


Awkward…


Awkward…


Awkward…



Mayu and Yuki has been standing in the room for almost 15 minutes after the awkward scene Yuki saw just now.

Jurina and Lovetan were already leaving the room with a big grin on their face to Mayu.

It was the most embarrassing moment for Mayu.

Her face was really red when she got ‘caught in action’.

Now, she just standing there looking at the blank wall with a blank face, still thinking of how to start the conversation.
Meanwhile Yuki was waiting for Mayu to talk.

“What brings you here?” Mayu finally utters few words, without looking at the taller girl.

Yuki was slightly surprised with Mayu’s sudden question.

“E-eh? Uhmm… I just…want to see you…?” Yuki answered with hesitate tone as she tilted her head.

Mayu turned around to face Yuki. When she turn around, Yuki’s face was too close to hers making them both staring at each other’s eyes.

*doki doki* *doki doki*


[I think…I will just let them staring each other’s eyes forever~  :heart:]

“Geez…Lovetan…how could she leave me alone…with my condition right now?!!” Jurina whined alone to herself as she was walking slowly through the hall due to her injury.

Lovetan had to leaves her alone because she suddenly remembers that her club has practices that evening.

While walking along the hallway, Jurina’s eyes wandering around the scenery outside the hall.

There’s a beautiful park near the dormitory. Surrounded with colorful flowers.

As her eyes were looking around the park, something attracted her attention.

She spots a long-haired girl sitting on the bench. It seems like she’s listening to music since a small headphone is covering her ears.

Jurina stopped walking and turning her whole body to the direction she’s currently looking at. She only can see the girl’s back.

“Hmmm…what a nice weather today~” smiled Jurina taking a deep breath as she watch the blooming flowers around the park. The shiny day making its more beautiful.

Her eyes turn back to look at the girl’s back.
Then she saw her taking out something from her bag. She can see that it was a melon pan.

“*chuckle* melon pan…” mumbled Jurina smiling as she watched the girl’s hand taking out the melon pan from its wrapper.

Something suddenly crossed her mind as she keeps looking at the girl’s hands.

“Melon pan?”

She then remembers about the scene in the infirmary where Rena offered her melon pan.

Jurina stares at the girl’s back for a few seconds before realizing it was…

“Rena…” gasped Jurina as an excited feeling rushing inside her.

Her smile growing bigger and bigger.



~At the park~

Rena was sitting at the bench while listening to her iPod.

She took out her favorite food, melon pan out of her bag.

She closes her eyes as she munching a piece of melon pan slowly tasting every bits of it…while listening to the music.


5 minutes later,

Rena still with her eyes closed listening to the music played in her iPod.

Without realizing someone is staring at her for quite a long time because she was really enjoying her time ‘alone’.

Meanwhile, Jurina was already near Rena, without even bothering her.

She keeps staring at the white-pale girl with a smile on her face.

‘She looks really beautiful while closing her eyes…’ thought Jurina mesmerizes by the natural beauty.

Suddenly Rena opened her eyes making Jurina who was sitting not so close beside her froze.

She takes out another piece of melon pan and munches it as she closed her eyes again.

Jurina sigh in relief silently but could not help to let out a small chuckled.

‘She still did not realizing my presence right?’ Jurina said in her mind grinning.


Meanwhile

Mayu is the first one to break their staring contest as she quickly turned around facing her back to Yuki who was also back to her sense.

‘What is this?’ Both of them thought as their heart beating faster.

“Ah...I-I’m…busy.” Mayu said without looking at the other girl.

“O-oh…w-well then…I will go…sorry for bothering you, Mayuyu.” stuttered Yuki as she walks towards the door.

“See you next time…” Yuki said as Mayu slightly nodded still not looking at Yuki.

When Yuki already out of the room, Mayu look down at her trembling hands.

“Am I feeling…nervous?” mumbled Mayu as she felt hot yet cold on her cheeks.

~

When Yuki already got out from the room, she quickly leaning her back to the door whiles her hand holding her pounding chest.

She closed her eyes as she tries to remember the moment their eyes met.

‘God…her eyes are so…beautiful~’ Yuki smiled. 'I wish I can stare at it longer~'

“Ano…”

‘Her blushing face…so cute!’ Yuki giggled to herself.

“Ano…Yuki-san~” Yuki opened her eyes and saw Takamina standing in front of her with a confused look on her face.

“E-err…yes?” Yuki still in her position.

“I want to enter my room~” Takamina said pointing at behind Yuki.

Yuki look behind her and realized she’s blocking her way to the door room.

“Oh...S-sorry…” Yuki step aside feeling embarrassed then she walks away.






Rena finally opened her eyes and took off her headphones and put it on her neck.

She stands up, walks away but stopped after a few steps.

She turned around and saw Jurina looking at her smiling.

“Hi~” Jurina finally greeted her while waving her hand at Rena.

Rena keeps looking at the younger girl.

‘Since when did she’s there?’ thought Rena.

“How long have you been there?” Asked Rena with a slightly shocked expression.

“Eh? Ermm…J-just now~ hehehe~” Lied Jurina.

Rena then just ignored Jurina and walk away.

Jurina don’t want to lose this chance so she ran up to Rena and walk beside her.

“Rena-Chan~” The way Jurina called her making Rena turned her head to look at the cat-smile girl.

“Rena-Chan, can I call you Rena-chan, Rena-chan?” Jurina gives her cat-smile at the other girl.

“Why should you?” Rena asked her as she keeps walking towards their dorm.

“B-because I want to call you Rena-chan, Rena-chan~” Jurina this time giving Rena a cute puppy eyes.

“Don’t look at me like that.” Rena replies her frankly.

“So I can call you Rena-chan?” Jurina asked excited. Rena just nodded at her.

“Go back to your room, it’s getting late.” Rena pats Jurina’s head as she walking ahead.

Jurina got excited by Rena’s action, she jump around happily until she fell because her ankle is still not recovered yet.

Rena hears Jurina’s voice so she looks behind and saw Jurina on the ground.

“Itai~~” Jurina holding her ankle with a pain expression.

“What are you doing? Get up, let me help you to your room.” Rena is standing in front of her while extending her hand.
Rena knows her injured ankle is hurt.

With Rena’s help Jurina stand up. Rena put her hand around Jurina’s waist making Jurina to frozen.

“Put your right hand on my shoulder.” Rena’s ordered making her back to her sense as she slowly put her right hand on Rena’s shoulder.

‘I’m in heaven~~~~’ Jurina smiles dreamingly at Rena as her heart beating faster.



~Monday~

“Sayaka! Faster!!” Sayaka looks like she’s panting hard already.

“We’re almost there! Hurry up!” Sae once again shout with a loud voice as she keeps telling Sayaka to go faster.

“Sae~*pant* I don’t think I can...hahhh~” Sayaka starting to slow down.

“Arghh!! I told you not to go jogging before we go to school! Now we’re getting late! Let me paddle it then!”
Sae changing their position on the bike as she is at the back seat, stepping her feet on the paddle and started to paddle fast towards the school
gate.

 “Yaaaarrhhh!!!!” shouted both of them as they riding the bike faster towards the gate before the school gate closed.

[ hahahaha XD I just…well~ :P  :rofl: Don't mind meh~]


The school started as usual.

Mariko and the Acchan were talking with each other while Haruna is sitting on her seat with a sleepy look.

Mariko noticed her looks like she is lack of sleep.

“Harunyan~ Are you okay?” Mariko asked her concern at her friend. Acchan also looks at Haruna.

Haruna lean her head on the desk.

“I can’t sleep well last night~ There is…” Haruna paused and look at Tomochin’s back who sit in front of her.

“There is..?” Mariko waiting for her to continue.

“There is a weird sound coming from the next room of mine~” Mumbles Haruna blushing.

“Huh?” Acchan and Mariko still don’t understand what she said as they furrowed their eyebrows.

“I heard a moaning sounds coming from…Tomochin’s room.” Haruna stated it clearly that even Tomochin can hear it.

Tomochin froze and widen her eyes when she hears what Haruna said.

“Ehhhhh?!!” Mariko and Acchan said in unison as they both turned their head towards Tomochin.

That whole day, the poor Tomochin being teased by her friends.


“Yuko~ Yuko~ Yuko~ Yuko~ Yuko-“

“Stop it Takamina! What do you want?!” Yelled Yuko at Takamina while she was trying to focus on stalking her NyanNyan having lunch. Of course they were at the terrace of the school along with Sae and Sayaka.

“Help me~” Takamina says as she started to eat her lunch.

“Help with what?” Yuko doesn’t really pay attention to Takamina.

“Umm…about Ray…”Both Sae and Sayaka also listening to her as they silently eating their foods.

Yuko finally turned her head towards Takamina. “Why Ray?” Asked her.

“Make her stop chasing after me.”Answered Takamina.

“How?” Yuko asked her as she also started to eat her lunch.

“*sigh* that’s why I ask you to help me~” Takamina said in a desperate tone.

“Maybe we could help too~” Sayaka voiced out as Sae nodded to her statement.

“What should I do then?”Takamina asked for their suggestion.

“Hmm…Ray always called you Kai right?” Takamina nodded at Sayaka.

“I have tried to make her hate me…but she keeps misunderstood my action.” Pouted Takamina.

“Ah! I got it! She likes your manly behavior!” Yuko said.

“So?” Takamina was confused.

“That’s mean you have to act girly in front of her~ who knows, she will get annoyed~” Laughed Sae as she started to imagine the girly Takamina.

“That’s kinda…embarrassing ~” said Takamina. ‘But maybe…I should try it~’

“Or…ask someone’s ikemen to distract her from you~” Sae suggest her idea as she wink.

The other three looked at Sae then the same thought popped in their mind.


~
Ray was looking around as she walks towards the hall.

Suddenly she bumps into someone making them both fall.

“S-sorry~” Said Sae who is on top of Ray.

Sae stand up then extended her hand gently towards Ray to help her to stand up.

Ray at first hesitated but then she accept her hand.

“I’m sorry again~” Sae smiled at her who kissing the back of her hand.

Ray looks like she’s blushing while Sae was grinning widely in her mind as she winking at her friends who was watching from afar.

Phase 1: Complete!


Ray saw Takamina walks towards her, in a girly way.

Ray was smiling stupidly but her smile faded when she noticed something on the midget. She’s wearing a ribbon clip on her hair.

“Hi Ray~” Takamina greeted her, in a girly way as she sway her short hair to the side.

“That acting looks…awkward.” Yuko commented on Takamina’s act again as they watching from afar.
Sae and Sayaka nodded.

Ray was speechless as she never seen this other side of her ‘Kai’.

They both sit on the bench at the park.

“Ne…Ray, why are you still chasing me when you see me kissed a girl the other day?”
Takamina decided to ask the question since the readers were curious and confused.

“Because I know~ Kai wants to make me jealous right?” Takamina’s jaw dropped when she hears the answer.

“Urmm…no~” Takamina cutely said as she still want to keep her acting.

Ray pouted at her but inside she still feels weird at her behavior.

“Ah! I have a practice for my club now~ I have to go~ bye Ray~” Takamina get up and wave at Ray in a, girly way.

“K-kai!” Ray was calling her but Takamina ignored her while skipping away from her.

“Tsk…I told her not to skip!” Sae whined as they watch Takamina skipping awkwardly.

 Phase 2: -_-



Next will be D-D-D-D-DANSOOO!!!!!   :luvluv1:

I don't know when is the next~  :lol: but for sure it will come~  :yep:
sorry for my english, grammar, and the nonsense!  :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
I'm still lacking in many aspects but i tried my best! Ganbatte!!





T.B.C~  :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
Post by: strangervs on December 17, 2013, 11:36:09 AM
DANSO!!! I like it!   :twothumbs please make yuko danso
who knows nyan nyan will be attracted...fufufu  :wub:  :deco:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
Post by: FoxKing on December 17, 2013, 12:44:01 PM
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“I heard a moaning sounds coming from…Tomochin’s room.” Haruna stated it clearly that even Tomochin can hear it.

Tomochin froze and widen her eyes when she hears what Haruna said.

“Ehhhhh?!!” Mariko and Acchan said in unison as they both turned their head towards Tomochin.

That whole day, the poor Tomochin being teased by her friends.

lol... :P

cant wait for danso... :twothumbs
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
Post by: love angel on December 17, 2013, 12:51:34 PM
 yay~ Danso...i want sae danso!!!!

 and thanks for the update... :twothumbs

 can`t wait for the next....
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
Post by: cisda83 on December 17, 2013, 01:09:30 PM
Everyone seems to be having a nice time with thier chosen crushes..

But the takamina girlly self is the best plot...

What will Ray do about Minami behaviour?

Would she release Minami or getting more and more attracted?

Would ray prefer Minami or sae?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
Post by: Konoe on December 17, 2013, 01:49:03 PM
Mou, Mayuki should stop staring at each other and kiss already! :D

TomoTomo are... at the highest level. :heart:

Takamina acting girly seems to be working! :kekeke: GO TAKAMINA!!! :onioncheer:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
Post by: Kirozoro on December 17, 2013, 03:46:52 PM
You back!!!

I wait for the next ch for so long

Yes Sae help Takamina to get away from the diva!!

I hope their plan work

Cant wait for the next ch ><
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
Post by: Feat on December 18, 2013, 01:57:15 AM
I can't wait for the Danso!

 Thank you for this.    :)
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
Post by: Rachel431 on December 18, 2013, 04:03:45 AM
Yay you finally updated !!!
hope to get my atsumina fix next time XD
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
Post by: Haruko on December 18, 2013, 04:37:04 AM
DANSOOOOOOOOOOO! yeah!
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
Post by: qweakb on December 18, 2013, 05:36:28 AM
Mayuki and Wmatsui moment  :wub: :wub:

Thank you :kneelbow:

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“Tsk…I told her not to skip!” Sae whined as they watch Takamina skipping awkwardly.

LOL.. takamina's skip..  :rofl:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
Post by: noah minami on December 19, 2013, 04:53:05 PM
yeah danso can't wait!
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
Post by: cisda83 on December 20, 2013, 05:03:12 AM
Update please...

Looking forward to see the next chapter

Thank you for the story up until now.

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
Post by: saiyukire on December 21, 2013, 04:23:28 AM
nice story! :wub:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
Post by: Archer1992 on January 07, 2014, 08:56:19 PM
hahahahahaha yeah!! Girly

hahahahahaha funny!!!

thanks and continue soon...

SOON!!!
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
Post by: Ishikawa on January 10, 2014, 02:24:38 PM
Thanks for update. I cannot wait to see what happen next. I hope there will be Atsumina moment soon. But don't wanna pressure you, just take your time to update.  :) This fiction story was attracting my eyes. Trouble maker, nice title  ;)
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
Post by: KaoriChan on January 12, 2014, 02:55:42 AM
DANSO~ :heart:

Can't wait for the next chapter  :)2

"Takamina skipping"  :lol:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
Post by: DKA48 on January 26, 2014, 07:31:42 PM
kyaaaa.....  :love:

I'm waiting for the dansoooooo!!!! :yossi:

please!  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:

update soon!!!! :bow: :bow: :bow:

thanks!!!! :thumbsup
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
Post by: Archer1992 on January 27, 2014, 06:24:51 PM
still waiting for danso!!

continue soon!!
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: chiqinna on April 14, 2014, 02:15:42 PM
Ho Hello~ Well this is my first update in 2014..  :sweatdrop: hehe~
Firstly, I want to apologizes deeply for not updating for a long time~  :kneelbow:
I was...lazy and unmotivated  XD
and also sorry, for this update, might have lacking something because...it's been long I haven't write anything..but actually I already wrote this update long time ago..I just realized I already finished it when I checked it today hehe..hehe  :smhid
I don't care if I lose a reader or whatever...I'm going to continue writing~!  :bigdeal:
Lastly, pardon my bad English  :kneelbow:




go! go!



Chapter 9

“A danso competition?”
“Yep! A danso~ where all the participants presenting their fashion style as an ikemen and grabs all the fans heart~ <3” explained Yuko to Takamina as they are at the library.

“Ohh…just like when I dressed as Kai in a school drama…” Takamina nodded as she understood what Yuko said.
“So…since this our school owner also owning a fashion company, they organized a danso competition every year~ I heard it was started by Mariko-sama’s idea…”Yuko said in a low voice because the librarian already glared at them.

“Mariko-sama? That Acchan’s friend?” Asked Takamina who still not aware of the librarian’s glare.
Yuko nodded while signaling Takamina to low down her voice. Takamina realized that the librarian is watching them.

Takamina then quietly stands up and goes to the random shelf while her eyes randomly looking at the books. That was until she spotted a shoulder-length hair girl trying to reach the book at the top shelf.
Takamina walk towards her. “Need help lady?”

The student turned around and soon after both of them widens their eyes.
Takamina’s eyes widen happily while the other girl widen her eyes in shock, and mad.

“Oh hey it’s you~” smirked Takamina at Acchan.
“Tsk…a midget like you wants to help me?” Mocked Acchan as she crossed her arms sarcastically.

“Heh~ what if I can do it~?” Takamina sounds like she’s challenging the taller girl.
“Well then, proves it to me~” Acchan smirked at Takamina. ‘I bet you can’t reach that book with your short leg, midget~’
‘teehee~ BakAcchan~’ Said Takamina grinning in her mind as she walks somewhere and taking a chair that was used to take a book that usually located at the top shelf.

Acchan did nothing but to watch her when she realized what was the midget going to do with the chair. ‘S-she…’
Poor Acchan…she must be feel so stupid in front of her enemy~

Takamina stand up on the chair and finally grabbed the book and playfully showed it to Acchan as she gave a smirk.
“T-That’s not fair!” Huffed Acchan annoyed. But then an idea pops up in her evil mind she glanced at the chair Takamina was standing on.

Acchan gave an evil smile at Takamina making the short girl confused.
Without giving any warning or thought, Acchan kick the chair making the short girl to losing her balance on the chair.

BakAcchan~

Takamina fall towards Acchan. Acchan could not move fast due to Takamina’s upper body already collided with her body making them both falling on the floor. Hard.

“Ouchh!!” Both of them said as they fell on the floor.

Acchan groaned as she felt pain on her back. And also the weight on top of her.
Then Yuko passed by and saw the scene. Yuko put both her hands on her mouth as her eyes widen in shock and horror when she saw the girl that was below Takamina.

“T-Takamina?” Yuko seeing her midget friend that was on top of the school princess.
Then the librarian comes to check because she heard the noise.

“No making out in the library please.” The librarian said as she fixed her glasses glaring at the two and then to Yuko who quickly pretended like she’s searching for a book.

“M-making out??!!” Yuko silently said with a slightly wide eyes after the librarian walks away from the place. ‘Are they really making out? Damn I should have come earlier!’

Takamina and Acchan did not really pay attention to what librarian said.

As soon as Takamina looks at the girl below her, her mind suddenly went blank.
However it only last for a few second when Acchan opened her eyes looking at Takamina.

Takamina looked at Acchan smiling. “Oh, here is your book~ and you’re welcome~” Takamina said to Acchan as she placed the book that was still in her hand on Acchan’s face then she quickly get off from her.

Takamina knows what will happen next so she quickly walks out of the library without looking at Yuko.
Acchan still holding her temper as she stood up and fix her clothes then look at Yuko.

“Where’s that midget go?” Acchan gritted her teeth looking deathly at the other midget.

‘Takamina is sure dead after this.’ Yuko thought as she can feel a killer aura around the princess.

"Where?!!" Shouted Acchan.
Yuko with trembling hand pointing at the exit door still her eyes on the mad girl.

Without wasting any more time Acchan quickly dashed out of the library to chase after the girl that just ruin her day.
“Takamina will never stopped disturbing her...” sighed Yuko as she relieved for still alive.
‘Should I help Takamina?’ Yuko ask herself as she tilted her head.

“Oh well~ she’s the one who’s causing trouble~ why should I care~” Shrugged Yuko finally decided to not interfere.
“Hmm…I wonder where is NyanNyan right now~” With that, Yuko started searching for her NyanNyan~

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At the corridor

Acchan was looking around as she gripping the broom stick that she got who knows where searching for her prey.
Then she saw the midget running slowly on the corridor as there were many people around.

“Takahashi!!!” Shouted Acchan not minding the eyes that looking at her.

Takamina turned around only to see Acchan already running with a broom stick behind her.

“Waaaaaa!!!” Takamina also started to fasten her pace.

Acchan chase Takamina with a broom stick ready to beat her to death.
Takamina turned her head to look behind while still running. She sticks her tongue out at Acchan playfully.

Meanwhile Acchan suddenly felt familiar with this kind of thing. Chasing someone.

‘Why am I feeling like I have done this before?’ Acchan thought as she stopped chasing after the midget.

Takamina realized that she’s not being chased anymore looks behind to see Acchan.

Takamina also felt the same. But it’s a hazy memory.
Eventually, Takamina just walk away thinking that maybe Acchan is tired of chasing her.

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“So…what we are planning for the danso?” Asked Takamina. They are inside their dorm room.
“Humm…You and Sae will participate for it.” Yuko said as she sat on Mayu’s bed while looking at some of Mayu’s manga.

“Eh? How about you join too?” Takamina looking at her from the top bunk.
“Me? Well...”

“Who knows, NyanNyan will fall for you~” Takamina grinned to convinces her friend.

Yuko thinking for a while.
“Great idea there~” Yuko said as she started to imagine something. ’Oh this is going to be great~ NyanNyan saw the ikemen Yuko~ Awww~’.

“Yeah~”Nodded Takamina but then she thought of something.
“Wait, if I dressed as a boy, Ray will be more attached to me then!!” Takamina suddenly sat up looking at Yuko with a worried expression.

“That’s why…we’re going to dress you as an…ugly ikemen~ while Sae, a handsome ikemen~” Yuko playfully grinning at her.

‘Ugly ikemen??!! Is that even exist?’

[A/N: It does exist I guess…^^;]

‘Somehow…I don’t like that idea.’ Thought Takamina with a fail expression.

Then the door opened revealing Mayu.

“Hey Mayu~” Greeted both of them as Mayu walks in. Mayu has started to open up to both of her senpai since they always keep on talking to her despite knowing her personality. Such a friendly roommates. And crazy.

“Hey, Mayu, how about you join danso competition!” Takamina suggested to her.
“Danso?” Mayu asked as she took off her bag and put it on her chair.

“Yep~ A competition where you dress like a man~ and grab all the girls’ heart~” Explained Yuko as she moves from Mayu’s bed then sit on her own bed.

Mayu glazed at them. ‘Why should I?’

“Well, it’s up to you~ but I saw you have THAT potential~” Takamina shrugged her shoulders.
“And what is THAT potential?” Asked Mayu while sitting on her bed while taking off her shoes.

Yuko then started to scanning Mayu’s facial and down to her body and look up again at Mayu closely. “You know…the potential to grabbed all the girl’s heart~ Just give it a try Mayu~”

“You should try something new other than reading a manga, and studying~” Yuko frankly said to her.

“But…I’m not good at those kind of things.” Mumbled Mayu as she sits on her chair and started to read her manga.
“Then…we’ll teach you~~~” Both Takamina and Yuko smirked at her.

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‘*sigh* why did I even agreed to them…’ said Mayu in her mind with a slightly frown on her face.

“M-maybe I should not do…this.” Mumbled Mayu as she comes out of the bathroom wearing-

“Kyaaa!!! Ikemen!!!” Squealed Yuko and Takamina as soon as Mayu comes out of the bathroom.

[Ehem...wearing a waiter costume owned by Yuko that she used to work at her aunt’s cafe]

“You’re so cute Mayu~~” Yuko pinched Mayu’s cheeks making Mayu feel uncomfortable.

“How about you use this costume on that competition? I bet all the girls are going to fangirling over you~” Takamina said as she fix a wig on Mayu’s head.

[I wonder where they got that wig...  :? ]

“I never agreed to join in the competition.” Mayu took off her wig and enter the bathroom to change her clothe.
‘Yes you will Mayu~’ Takamina smirked in her mind. Yuko who saw Takamina’s expression know that she must have had an idea in her mind.

“What are you thinking of?” Yuko asked her.
“You will know soon~”
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Poor Mayu, Takamina secretly wrote her name as the participant for the competition.

Mayu could not even do anything because her two friends, Jurina and Lovetan found out about this and was shocked to know but of course they were expecting something from her.
Yeah, they won’t let Mayu quit the competition.

It was time for the competition; every participant was getting ready with their male outfits.
Meanwhile, on the outside, Mariko, Acchan, and Haruna were sitting at the front sits for the audience waiting for the competition to start.

“Hey Haruna, I heard that your squirrel is also joining~” All of her friends started to smirking at her.
“So what?” Pouted Haruna preventing herself from smiling.

Indeed, she was also excited to see an ikemen Yuko.

“Hey guys, sorry for the late~” Tomochin took a sit beside Acchan as she dragged her Tomomi beside her.
“Hey~” Acchan greeted her but she face looks bored.

“Don’t worry Acchan~ someone is going to entertained you soon~” Mariko said seeing her friend’s bored face.
Acchan was confused for a while.

“Let’s see.” ‘I wonder where the midget…is’


Meanwhile, Ray took a sit beside Yuki. Yuki look at her smiling but Ray just ignored her.
‘So arrogant~’ thought Yuki as she turn back to look at the stage.

‘I can’t wait to see Mayuyu danso~ must be cute hehe~’ Yuki let out a light squeal.

“Hey! I know that I should look ugly, but why am I dressing as a beggar?!” Whined Takamina inside the changing room.
Sae, Sayaka, Yuko and the others just holding their laugh seeing her.

Some even goes out of the room because they could not hold it anymore. Then they could hear loud laughters from outside of the room.

“Don’t worry Takamina, it just for a day~” Yuko tries to calm her friend as she patting her back.

“Yeah, besides you do this to stay away from Ray remember?” Sayaka said as she fix Sae’s wig.

“You look Ikemen~~” Whispered Sayaka to Sae’s ear making Sae to giggled at her.

‘Oh yeah…I almost forgot.” Takamina nodded at them.
“Miyazawa Sae it’s your turn next!” The staff said from the door.

Sae quickly got up. “Osu! I’m ready!” She patted her chest confidently.
“You look so handsome…” mumbled Takamina looking at Sae then she looks at her own outfit.

It was Sae’s turn. Everyone was always excited to see ikemen Sae.
As soon as she appeared on the stage, the loud scream can be heard from the audience.

But Sae, for the sake of Takamina, her eyes only darted on Ray.

‘Is she looking at me?’ Yuki thought as Sae’s looking at her direction.

Ray also feeling like Sae is looking at her. Then Sae winks making them scream louder.
From the corner, Mayu could see Sae is winking at Yuki. Or that was what she thought.

“Mayu it’s your turn after this! Good luck!” Yuko said as she suddenly popped out behind Mayu.
After Sae goes back to the backstage, Mayu quickly glance at the handsome Sae.

‘Well, who doesn’t fall for that handsome face…?’ Admitted her mind.

With all the nervousness, Mayu comes out to the stage.
She just stands there with her head down.

She could hear her crazy friends are screaming her name giving her courage.
"Mayu-kun!!! look at me!!" Hearing Jurina's voice Mayu look up looking at the audiences.
Mayu look up to see her friends. They smiled at her. Her attention only on her friends that she doesn’t realized the other audiences were squealing over her.

Mayu just gives her best smile and quickly end her time as she goes off the stage. And she forgot to see Yuki’s reaction.

Takamina was the last one. Wow, she got a loud screamed though. And a loud laugh. Especially from the front sit. The person laughing at the front sit draws Takamina’s attention.

“Yeah…laugh at me~ Laugh as loud as you can~” Takamina grinned.

Somehow looking at the shoulder-length girl at the front laughing making her heart beat faster.

Ray just looks at Takamina with mouth half open. ‘What happen to my Kai?!’
“Oh look at Ray! I think we’ve success this time!” The trio behind the stage was peeking at Ray’s reaction.

After the competition ended, Mayu was about to walk out of the room when Yuki comes in.
“M-Mayu…” Yuki called her with a nervous tone.

“Yes?” Mayu look at her with a blank face.
She can see that Yuki was nervous by the way she’s playing with her fingers.

Yuki took a deep breath and then she look at Mayu in the eyes.
“I…think…”

“What?” Mayu still with her blank face.

“I think…I’m in love…with you” Yuki confessed but Mayu could not hear the last two words clearly as Yuki was mumbling it with low voice.

Mayu was about to say something when the next words comes out of Yuki’s mouth.

“W-Will you be my girlfriend?” Yuki’s face was extremely red as she keeps her eyes on Mayu’s.

Mayu was shocked as hell as dropped her bag to the ground.
They keep on looking at each other.

“No.”


XXXXXXX




T.B.C





I know...I know... the danso part is bad isn't it?   :doh: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:
I'm still bad  at writing hahaha  :lol:
*back to hiding spot*
K.bye  :on blackhole:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: ShipEveryone on April 14, 2014, 02:19:28 PM
FINALLY A UPDATE
*SAVE SPOT .


Ma , librarian , just take it as you never see anything is fine too isn't it ?  ;)
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What if both of them remember what they had done as a kid ?
Will they be like .. Chasing around each other again ? XD
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KAII ! Ehem , I mean Takamina .*Cough .
This might really be a chance for for her to get rid of Ray ..
But what if Ray still doesn't let go .. *Sigh , Good luck Takamina .
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MAYUUU , WHY .
WHYYYYYYYYYYYY .
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AND OF COURSE , I'LL WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATEEE ! ~
Don't you dare to feel lazy & unmotivated , I'll find you , and I'll force you to update ! ;Won'tDoThat , ;ImAlsoLazy . XD
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: cisda83 on April 14, 2014, 03:35:19 PM
Well it's good that the plan is working to make Ray back away from Kai

But poor Kai being laughed by everyone.... But Kai herself don't care so much about it

EH........ 'NO' why???? Poor Yuki... she is being rejected

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: kazutoryu on April 14, 2014, 03:55:24 PM
aaa mayu dont be soo tsun~ tsun~  :depressed:
poor yuki  :on speedy:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: amachan48 on April 14, 2014, 03:56:43 PM
nooooo mayu-chaaann what are you doing :'( :banghead:

by the way author-san thanks for the update. it is a great story. please don't give up on this fic, and update again soon >.<
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: liabont on April 14, 2014, 03:58:28 PM
Well it's good that the plan is working to make Ray back away from Kai

But poor Kai being laughed by everyone.... But Kai herself don't care so much about it

EH........ 'NO' why???? Poor Yuki... she is being rejected

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

thank you, please update again  :inlove:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: MayuxMatsuixMusic on April 14, 2014, 09:25:27 PM
i don't know why but i'm laughing the whole time while reading this fic xD


yeah!! no danso no mayuyu xD



mayuyu~~ why did you reject yukirin!! baka mayu!!

can't wait to find out the next update  :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: Kirozoro on April 14, 2014, 09:55:12 PM
Ahhh why Mayu why are u reject Yuki!!!

I hope Takamina plant is work

Update son
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: Konoe on April 15, 2014, 05:52:30 AM
“I think…I’m in love…with you” Yuki confessed but Mayu could not hear the last two words clearly as Yuki was mumbling it with low voice.

Mayu was about to say something when the next words comes out of Yuki’s mouth.

“W-Will you be my girlfriend?” Yuki’s face was extremely red as she keeps her eyes on Mayu’s.

Mayu was shocked as hell as dropped her bag to the ground.
They keep on looking at each other.
Yes! Yuki finally made a big step! :ding:
“No.”
:stoned: :scared: :on blackhole: :fainted: :frustrated: WHY!?
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: ryu201 on April 15, 2014, 12:16:49 PM
DOMO!!!!!!!
silent reader here  :hee: :mon sweat:
i thought u will not continue this fiction ne but im happy u continue it  :on GJ:
since im  atsumina shipper,can u make more atsumina moment?
onegai  :kneelbow:
heheheh....
i really waiting ur next update author-san,ganbatte ne!!!!   :mon beam: :mon star: :mon yeah:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: qweakb on April 15, 2014, 03:49:12 PM
 :onioncheer:  :onioncheer:  :onioncheer:

Finally an update! I thought you have stop writing.. LOL  :on lol:

Wonder what is NyanNyan's POV when she saw yuko's danso?  :dunno:

AstuMina part is always nice to read.. haha.. chasing here and there.. haha..  :hiakhiakhiak:

 :stoned:
Why Mayu did not accept Yuki's confession? Why WHy WHY?!!  :frustrated:

Looking forward to your next updated :)

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I don't care if I lose a reader or whatever...I'm going to continue writing~!  :bigdeal:
That good!  :on GJ:
If not  :shifty:  <-- jk
LOL..

Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: Justqle on April 16, 2014, 12:05:26 PM
Yeay update  :twothumbs

Eeh, mayu???? What's wrong?!!  :mon huh:

I can bear the slow update, but please don't take too long like months or years  XD lol

I've read this story since i was a silent reader, and now you update when i've made an acc already  :cool2:

But that's cool, I can give my comment  :lol:

I'll still be a loyal reader, as long as it's Atsumina  XD


AND OF COURSE , I'LL WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATEEE ! ~
Don't you dare to feel lazy & unmotivated , I'll find you , and I'll force you to update ! ;Won'tDoThat , ;ImAlsoLazy . XD

and well, i'll also wait for the next update  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: takeshi77 on April 22, 2014, 07:36:56 PM
lol..its ok as long u still update its  :)

anyway, great story..i had also read ur OS..its kinda sweet etc..something like that always happen..i mean disturb someone that we like etc
also this story also great with the danso etc

and i wonder wht ray reaction toward takamina after that danso  :lol:
also how will takamina and atsuko relationship afterward etc

look forward to its..thank you for the update  :)

Title: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: ainivel on April 23, 2014, 09:49:04 AM
the last time i read your fic was last year, i wasn't a member here yet back then, just a total lurker lol! you just don't know how you made my day when i saw your update! i didn't notice it was posted a week ago, i read it just now lol

anyways, please continue! :)
'coz everyone's still waiting y'know!


Sent from my iPhone 5s using Tapatalk
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: taenylove on June 17, 2014, 11:59:50 PM
Really good story!!
I laugh a lot with Takamina and Yuko  :rofl:  That wMidgets :roll:
Please author-san update soon  :cathappy:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: chiqinna on June 18, 2014, 01:26:50 PM
:mon lurk:
Hai!  :D
Everyone that still waiting for the update, thank you so much for still reading this story.  :kneelbow:
Honestly, its not that I'm abandoning this thread again as you can see I'm always around   :)
I'm just procra- what was the word again ?  :roll: forget it  XD
well, I just want to inform that I'm still writing for the next chapter same goes to You're My Sunshine  :yep:
it is just, I hope my lovely readers can bear with my slow update.
I don't know when will I finish but I'm working on it..slowly  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:
ehehe.. I'm sorry for making you all curious  :banghead: well I'm curious myself  :banghead:
stay tuned~  :tama-bye:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: taenylove on June 18, 2014, 06:29:50 PM
:mon lurk:
Hai!  :D
Everyone that still waiting for the update, thank you so much for still reading this story.  :kneelbow:
Honestly, its not that I'm abandoning this thread again as you can see I'm always around   :)
I'm just procra- what was the word again ?  :roll: forget it  XD
well, I just want to inform that I'm still writing for the next chapter same goes to You're My Sunshine  :yep:
it is just, I hope my lovely readers can bear with my slow update.
I don't know when will I finish but I'm working on it..slowly  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:
ehehe.. I'm sorry for making you all curious  :banghead: well I'm curious myself  :banghead:
stay tuned~  :tama-bye:


Don‘t worry, I will wait all the time it‘s necessary  :D
Btw your profile photo is so cute! ~  :wub:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: 48matama on June 19, 2014, 12:37:56 PM
N-NOOO

WHY MAYU DIDN'T ACCEPT???

Update it please ╮(╯_╰")╭
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: mizuratpro95 on June 19, 2014, 07:49:29 PM
your fic is great
please update soon  :on GJ:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: sastio13 on July 01, 2014, 12:48:58 PM
i can imagine the danso part scene... :D

oh no..... why mayu reject yuki? hmm....
ano, would you mind to continue this ff? hehe
arigatou chiqinna-san! :bow:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
Post by: chiqinna on August 26, 2014, 02:59:15 PM
I'M BAAAAAAAACK!!!!  :ptam-glow: :ptam-glow: :ptam-glow:
okay..really..really sorry for being slow and late  :kneelbow:
told ya already I'm gonna be slow..  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:
but here I am finally appear~  :roll:
and..gomen..I'm not use to write anymore so its a short update..  :badluck: :badluck:
I hope anyone enjoy this~ don't worry..I will try my best for the best~  :wigglypanda:
yosshhhh!!!






Chapter 10



“No.”
“I don’t love you. I mean, I never loved you since before.” Said the shorter girl.
“But-“The taller girl tries to reach for her arm, “please, Ray, leave me alone, and see…I’m not Kai okay? I’m just a normal girl that you can see now.” Takamina step back quickly avoiding her hands from reaching her.

[No you’re not normal =_=]

“Seriously, Are they making a drama or what?! Seriously boring!!” Whined Yuko as she, Sae and Sayaka peeking at the two girls while munching potato chips. That was their last plan actually. Takamina having a talk with Ray so that Ray could leave her alone after this. And forever.

Ray furrowed her eyebrow looking at Takamina. “You look this ugly to shows me that you’re not Kai?”
Takamina nodded at her. And yes she is still wearing that beggar ikemen looks xDD.

‘Please please please just go away~ I’m bored talking like this already~’ Said Takamina in her mind.

“And look, Sae is more ikemen right? Why don’t you go after her?” Sae who was currently listening to their conversation widen her eyes.

“What if she really chase after me?!” Sae whispered to Sayaka and Yuko with her frightened face.

Meanwhile, the other two just looking at each other then look at Sae and shrugged their shoulders.

“We never thought of that one.” They both said in unison making Sae to face palmed herself.

“Kai, I only look at you, not someone else that is more handsome than you or anything.” Ray said.

“I told you I’m not K-“Before she could continue, Ray made an aggressive action by suddenly kissing her lips.
The trio was also shocked at the sudden action.

Ray put her arms around Takamina’s shoulders still kissing the short girl.

Suddenly the image of Acchan laughing passed the midget’s mind. She quickly pushed Ray and broke their kiss.

“That was the last one from me.” Smiled Ray still blushing from the kiss.

“Huh?” was Takamina’s reaction.
Without giving any more words, Ray walks away from the dumbfounded midget with freaking sad face.

Seeing Ray leaving the scene, the three then comes out of their hiding spot and jumped towards Takamina.


“Wow ~ Takamina, you just got kissed by hot crazy diva!” Yuko said patting Takamina’s back.

“Shut up Yuko.”

“So…that was it??” Sayaka asked rising her eyebrow.

“S-she’s not gonna chase after me right?” Sae suddenly clinging on Sayaka still with frightened face.







The next day

The school started as usual. Except for a certain cyborg that walks through the corridor with her usual blank face.
She looks fine from outside but inside, her brain is still not functioning well after the incident happened yesterday.

Flashback
“Mayu...Mayuyu!!” Long after blankly looking at Yuki who just confessed her feelings towards Mayu, Mayu suddenly fainted.

Gladly Yuki was fast reacting by holding her before the young girl’s body touching the floor.

They were lucky someone passing the place and help her bringing Mayu to the infirmary.

Yuki was so worried that maybe Mayu was too shocked by her sudden confession.

Who would suddenly confessed and asking someone to be their girlfriend when they are not even that close...yet.



*one blink*

*two blinks*

*three blinks*

The cyborg finally opens her eyes as she blinking her eyes adjusting to the room’s light.

She stares at the ceiling when Yuki’s voice made her turn her head towards the side of the bed.

*Mayu…a-are you okay now?” Yuki asked her worried. She also afraid Mayu will reject her but she already prepared for it even before she made that brave action.

Mayu stares at Yuki wondering what she was doing here with her.

‘Wait, where am I?’

Yuki blushed seeing Mayu keep staring at her.

*two blinks*

‘Ah, she must be wondering why she’s here...’ thought Yuki seeing Mayu looks lose though her face still giving no expression.

“Actually, uh...you were suddenly fainted just now... so I bring you here.” Hearing Yuki’s explanation, she finally realized that she was in infirmary room.

“Wait, so...y-you...*Mayuu!!*” Someone suddenly interrupted their moment as Jurina dashed into the room dragging Lovetan with her.

Yuki quickly stand up as both Mayu’s friend made their way towards Mayu.

“Mayu!! Are you okay?? I just heard that you fainted. What happened? Thank God you are okay~” Jurina and Lovetan hugging the cyborg who was a little annoyed by the hugs.

After parting from the bear hug, Mayu let out a small sigh as she sat up on the bed.

“I’m fine.” She answered.

“Uh…since Mayuyu’s friend is here, maybe I should go now.” Jurina and Lovetan almost forgot Yuki’s existence that stood behind them.

“Ah, Yuki-chan~ thank you for taking care of Mayu~” Lovetan said as she nudged Jurina’s arm.

“Yeah~ don’t worry we will take care of Mayu now.” Jurina grinned at Yuki who just smile. Then she looks at Mayu.

“M-Mayu, I’m leaving now.” Without even waiting for their response, Yuki quickly leave the room.

After Yuki left the room, the duo turned their heads towards to cyborg girl with a big grin on their face.

“So…mind to share us what happened?” Jurina sit beside Mayu as she wrapped her arm around her shoulders. “Yeah I heard Yuki was with you when you fainted right?” Added Lovetan.

“I thought it was a dream...” Mayu mumbled still thinking whether what happened a few hours ago was a dream where Yuki asking her to be her girlfriend.

“Mayu~ “Jurina shook her shoulder breaking Mayu’s thought.

“I’m fine.” Mayu answered.

“We know you were fine but we want to know what happened actually~?” The two was desperate to know what happened to their friend since it was rare to see Mayu acting like that.

“Nothing happened. I was just fainted and Yuki was with me that time.” Mayu was not lying though. Yuki was indeed there with her. Hell no she would tell her two friends or anyone about what really happen that made her fainted. She would get teased non-stop in she tells them.

“Really??” Both her friend narrowing their eyes at Mayu. Of course they would not believe Mayu that easily.

“Really.”

.

.

.

.

“Oooookay~ we’ll ask Yuki then~” Jurina said.

‘I don’t think Yuki will tell the truth...it will be more embarrassing for her.’ Thought Mayu. “Whatever.” Mayu removes the blanket that was still covering half of her body and drink a glass of water near the table before get up and walks towards the door.

“Okay~ I will ask Yuki after this!” Grinned Jurina as they followed Mayu out of the room.









“You sure she’s not going to go after me?” A tall genking girl asks the other tall one as she looks around to see if there’s any sight of a crazy diva.
“I don’t know”. Sayaka only shrugged her shoulders. They were walking towards the school gate.
Sae, who was afraid that Ray will really chase after her after the plan they did before in order to get rid of her from Takamina, clinging onto Sayaka’s arm.

“Sayaka you’re not helping at all!” Whined Sae as she punched her arm lightly.

“Hey!” Laughed Sayaka making Sae pouted. “Don’t worry, if she is going after you, we’ll make you become ugly beggar like Takamina”. Sayaka said as she's holding back a smirk.

“Hell no! I will lose many fans if I do that!” After the danso competition, Sae has regained more fans especially from the first year students.

“Oh...now are you worried more about your fans or...Ray?” Grinned Sayaka.

“Oh…well...b-both?” Sayaka only face-palmed hearing her bestfriend’s answer.

“Hey TwinTowers!!” Yuko suddenly appear behind them while dragging the sleepy Takamina.

“Hey midgets!” Sae said to them.

“Sae...I think you should be careful form now...I heard Ray is going after you...” Takamina said serious. Actually she’s grinning inside her mind. Yuko seeing Takamina’s expression joining her on teasing one of the taller girl.

“Yeah...I just saw she’s asking the other student about you!” Yuko pretended to get worried over her tall friend.

Sae really believed on them. “R-really?” Her face started to change into horror when both Takamina and Yuko nodded their head. And she quickly runs inside the school leaving Sayaka.

“Oi! Sae!!” Sayaka then turned her towards the laughing midgets behind her. “You guys...” She narrowed her eyes at them.

“Oh well...serve her right for calling us midget! Hahahaha!!” Laughed Yuko as she high-five Takamina.

“Yeah...and what if that Ray is still here and she’s still couldn’t get after you?” Sayaka asked her.

Takamina eventually get nervous thinking of it. “Then...” she scratched her head. Her eyes then fell on a certain student walking with her friends as they entered the school. “…then I have many plans ahead to get rid of her~” Smirked Takamina.





T.B.C







hummm...thats all for now..
you know.. I'm happy!!  :mon fan:
 :mon bye: :mon bye: :mon bye:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 10 26/08/14
Post by: cisda83 on August 26, 2014, 03:31:00 PM
Eh... Ray let Kai go...????

That's very easy.... too easy after all the time chasing after Kai...

Yeah... Minami really really liked Atsuko

Ah... Mayu and Yuki...

What's going to happen to them?

Poor Poor Sae... being teased and scared out of her wit about being stalked by Ray...

I don't think Ray would come after Sae...

Would this be the last time Ray is going to appear?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 10 26/08/14
Post by: ryu201 on August 26, 2014, 07:29:08 PM
Author -san!!
I miss you!!!
Hehehe......

Here my comment~
ray let takamina off?
Is that for real?! :dunno:
I mean i love to see takamina with acchan but...come on,let ray appear again.
It gonna be fun  :kekeke:

Wmidget sure happy to tease sae like that.
Sae!! Run for ur life!!!
 :on lol:

Please update soon author-san.
Im waiting ^^
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 10 26/08/14
Post by: Kirozoro on August 26, 2014, 08:46:14 PM
Yes update!!!!

Welcome back~~

Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 10 26/08/14
Post by: Justqle on August 27, 2014, 12:16:22 AM
you're baaaaaaacccckkkkkk :mon squee: :mon squee:
thank you for the update, glad to see you again author-san  XD
Wmidget LOL  :lol: :lol:
what will takamina plan?  :mon mischief:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 10 26/08/14
Post by: RenshuChan on August 27, 2014, 10:31:35 AM
Wahahaha, if Takamina is really funny in real life... LOLies...
Why there's no progress on wMatsui's relationship? Come on Jurina... Kiss her or something! XD
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 10 26/08/14
Post by: Ava on September 03, 2014, 02:11:03 AM
Pleaseeee updateee

I wanna know what happens between atsumina

And mayuki to

But more atsuminaaa

Oh and kojiyuu too

Pleaseee
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 10 26/08/14
Post by: noah minami on September 12, 2014, 05:38:58 PM
lol i forgot to comment. sorry chiqa. haha. well there is NO WAY ray let go of kai. haha its impossible.
she is "ray" after all.haha. and i wanna know about mayuyu, yuki and jurina ~
chiqa update it longer lol.

IM SUPPOSE TO DO RESEARCH lol.but i was here so off to do assignment.haha
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 10 26/08/14
Post by: crosteks on December 11, 2014, 12:38:33 PM
 :gyaaah: NO UPDATE PLS. UPDATE THIS :gyaaah:
  I like the way going in this Story
some one pls. update this  :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 10 26/08/14
Post by: ubulubulbilu on December 12, 2014, 09:38:15 AM
I nee an update, pls finish this fanfic Author San. I am dying want it more :fainted:
Title: Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 10 26/08/14
Post by: chiqinna on February 17, 2015, 03:11:19 PM
Special thanks to ChiBraRine for the proofread

Chapter 11

  It’s been few days, no sign of Ray around Shinoda High School. Everything is back to normal, except that some things had gotten worse. Especially for Acchan. Takamina had really gotten on her nerves lately now that the short girl is free from a certain crazy fan. No one knows what happened to Ray, she just left like that. Well, who knows she might come back again.



The good thing for having an expressionless face is that no one knows what is inside your mind. What are you thinking at the moment or what you feel. Probably feeling numb, like you don’t feel anything. It just plain.

But for Mayu, there’s something going on inside the mind of hers lately. Confusion.
She was confused. She started to question her own feelings. What does she feels anyway?

Yuki rarely talks to her or come to have lunch with her like usual. It was all after the confession thing. Which makes Mayu confused of why was she feeling sad of the thought that Yuki is ignoring her, or maybe because she was embarrassed because of her own confession of her love towards Mayu.

But the thing is what does Mayu feels towards Yuki right now? She was confused herself. But it didn’t ruin her day or making some mistakes on her study. Maybe not yet. She managed to focus on her study while thinking about her confusion.
Go to Yuki and talk to her? Of course Mayu’s not gonna do that. It was always Yuki who comes to her first.



Meanwhile on the other side...
Yuki was planning to talk to Mayu after several days not talking to Mayu because she’s too embarrassed of what had happened after the Danso competition. Mayu didn’t even go to see her or asked anything. She understands, Mayu must be still shocked about her sudden confession. She really likes Mayu. But she realize what she did is too rushed. And she already regretted it after some deep thought about it.

Before the class started, Yuki was walking towards Mayu’s classroom but she stopped halfway when she spotted Mayu is talking to other student, a girl.

“Who is that talking with Mayuyu?”She’s a little jealous since Mayu is smiling to the girl.

After that girl walks away from Mayu, Yuki walks nervously towards the young girl. Mayu still didn’t realized Yuki’s presence until she turned around. The smile on her face immediately dropped into a shocked cyborg expression.

Mayu just froze in her position as she holding a file with her both hands.
Yuki slowly stepped in front her. “H-hi...Mayuyu.” Yuki greeted her with a nervous smile.
“Hi.” Mayu replied with her usual blank smile.

“Um…Mayuyu, I want to apologize about the...other day…I’m sorry I must have shocked you am I? And I didn’t mean to make you fainted and can you please forget about what happened? I know-“Before Yuki could ramble more, Mayu stopped her.

“Yuki, its fine.” Just a simple reassuring word from her.
“I’m sorry” Yuki said again with an apologetic smile.

“It’s okay, I already forget about it.” Mayu replied as she let out a little smile to assure the tall girl.
Yuki sighed in relief.

“So…umm…do you…want to have lunch together again?” Yuki asked nervously while smiling.
“S-sure, usual place?” Mayu asked back which Yuki nodded happily.

“Ah, by the way, who is that talking to you just now?” Asked Yuki out of curiosity.

“Student council president.” Answered Mayu short.

“I see…” Yuki is actually holding the urge to asked what was actually they talked about since the president makes Mayu smiles like that. But Mayu beat her as she told her first.

“She asked me if I could join the student council as a member.” Explained Mayu as if she could read what was in Yuki’s mind.

“Ohh” Yuki just stand there awkwardly before she excused herself to her own classroom as the bell rang.

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.

.

In the girl’s restroom, a certain princess was busy cleaning a dust on her school uniform while mumbling some cursing words towards a certain annoying midget.

If a curse could really be turned real, Takahashi Minami would probably ended up on the hospital bed right now, or laying on her bed with a lifeless body for the rest of her life, or begging for Maeda Atsuko to stop her misery. That last one was her wishful imagination though.

Even her fanatic fans couldn’t stopped that midget, mostly it was because they couldn’t expect what she will do to their goddess, Maeda Atsuko at some time.

“Just you wait, Takahashi Minami, I’m waiting for the right time.” Mumbled Acchan as she finished cleaning herself and decided to fix her make-up afterward before heading to her classroom.






In 3C’s classroom,

The teacher hasn’t arrived yet, so the atmosphere in the class is still noisy as in the supermarket. The students are talking to each other, laughing, playing, and some were continuing their sleep from waking up too early.

“Hey, Takamina.” Miichan called Takamina who currently talking with Sae and Yuko. Miichan walked to them and took the nearest empty chair to join their conversation.

“Sup, twin.” Takamina greeted her. Twin, is because of their same first name. Twin in term if name actually.

“You know, I’m actually curious about something. Why are you still alive till today?” Miichan asked as a microphone comes out of nowhere as usual pointing towards Takamina. Also, she is wearing full-framed glasses as well.

“Where did that microphone comes from?” Takamina asked for an nth time which is always ignored by the reporter girl.

“And what do you mean I’m still alive? Because I’m not dead yet, that’s why I’m still alive hahaha.” Joked Takamina which as usual, failed.

“Yeah, Miichan was right though,” Yuko said agreed to Miichan’s question. “Usually, if someone messed up with Acchan, it would only last one or two days. If not one week. But Sae and Sayaka’s case is different. Since they didn’t really intend to get her head hit by a ball whenever she entered the stadium. Or did you?” added Yuko as she turned to look at Sae. Sae just shook her head.

“Hmm…I guess maybe it because my play game is still strong.” Smirked Takamina a little proud of herself.

“Nah, Acchan has her own plan. Remember last time, she gave you an ice bucket challenge?” Sae asked her.



Flashback about what happened few days ago.


An Ice bucket challenge has been going on in the school for a few days because of its popularity through the internet and even the idols does the challenge.

And now it seems the students too are doing it for fun by challenging their friends, and even the teachers to do the ice bucket challenge.
Acchan has a plan. Not just a plan. It is an evil plan, for Takahashi Minami.

It seems the short midget has not got the ice bucket challenge yet. So she decided that she will be the one who will challenge her.
She is a little surprised that the midget accepts her challenge.

And so she and her boys (her fans that usually do things for her actually), prepared for the biggest one special for her.
Takamina accepted the princess challenge because she thought it was just a normal cold water in a small bucket and they will pour it on her and done.

No, Acchan has it different. She had it prepared with a big bucket, filled with ices, soy sauce, water, salt for the taste, and some leftover food hoping that Takahashi will accidentally open her mouth and eat it.

And so that was what happened, with a school uniform, Takahashi Minami, for the first time, received the first successful punishment by Maeda Atsuko.

She was lucky that they did it after school time.
She went home cold and smelly. Acchan is satisfied at least.


End of flashback


“Yeah, I still smelled like salty sauce mixed with some fried chicken rice though...” Takamina said as she sniffed her own school uniform while the others are feeling disgusted at her act by the ‘Ew~’ sounds even though she was just joking.

“Anyway, I’m kinda impressed you know…you two didn’t even know each other that well and yet you look like you have known each other for so long and always having a fight, like Tom and Jerry.” Sae said to Takamina while the others nodded in agreement to what Sae just said.


Something suddenly struck Takamina’s mind.

“Hmm...Thinking about it…” The teacher suddenly came in which makes them goes to their respective seat. And eventually Takamina forgot what she was about to say. :v





Jurina started to hang out a lot with Rena during their Taekwondo class though Rena don’t really mind her presence. Usually it was Jurina who always cheerfully started their conversation. Jurina found out that Rena really loves melon pan.
Melon Pan is her breakfast, melon pan is her lunch, and melon pan is her dinner. No wonder she looks skinny but have quite a strong physical strength.



During lunch,

Jurina saw Rena sitting at her usual place again. So she sneaked behind Rena and took her melon pan that was placed next to her.

Jurina giggled silently because Rena still didn’t realize that as she was too busy munching and listening to music. Jurina was hiding behind the bench.

Later, Rena reached out her hand to grab another melon pan when she can’t find any near her. So she finally turned her head and found nothing.

“Ehh…where’s my melon pan~!” Rena started to get panic to see her melon pan gone. Rena looks like she was about to cry and it makes Jurina felt guilty so Jurina comes out.

“Rena-chaaan~~” Jurina said as she walks to her front while handing out Rena’s melon pan in front of her.

“You stole my melon pan?!” Rena asked shocked and she looks mad.

“Err...yeah...no...I mean...I was just playing around with you, Rena-chan.” Jurina suddenly feels nervous by the sudden aura.

Rena took her melon pan from Jurina’s hand. “Don’t do that again.” Rena said in serious tone.

“I’m sorry, Rena-chan~” Jurina said with a nervous smile.

Rena packed her things and walks away. Jurina didn’t even dare do stop Rena because she can feel Rena is mad at her and she could only sigh in frustration.

‘What have I done?!’




To be continued~




No Kojiyuu~ gomen~
Next chapter~
She's back.
*vanosh*

Title: Re: TroubleMaker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 11 17/02/2015
Post by: blakwhite on February 17, 2015, 04:19:16 PM
LOL, FINALLY U UPDATE IT CHIIIIIIIQQQQ  :hiakhiakhiak:
Title: Re: TroubleMaker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 11 17/02/2015
Post by: Mayukishipper on February 17, 2015, 05:04:35 PM
A new update!! Finally

Thanks author-san, can't wait for next mayuki moment
Title: Re: TroubleMaker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 11 17/02/2015
Post by: cisda83 on February 17, 2015, 08:22:05 PM
Ah... yuki is jealous of anyone coming close to mayu..

Well Jurina... Just buy her few melon pan everyday for her...

Surely Rena would forgive you sooner than later

Oh... Minami... What kind of trouble is she going to come across?

What's Atsuko next plan?

Can't wait to see more

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TroubleMaker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 11 17/02/2015
Post by: ubulubulbilu on February 18, 2015, 12:35:25 AM
It has been a year! Lol
Title: Re: TroubleMaker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 11 17/02/2015
Post by: Kirozoro on February 18, 2015, 02:22:15 PM
Yay u update!!!!!


It's been long time :,(

Rena is scary when is came to melon pan XD

Poor Takamina
Title: Re: TroubleMaker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 11 17/02/2015
Post by: Kairi65 on February 20, 2015, 12:27:30 PM
yatta! an update~ :cathappy:

Rena's still the same scary person when its about her melon pan.. XD
Title: Re: TroubleMaker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 11 17/02/2015
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on February 20, 2015, 01:12:00 PM
I were laughing crazily while reading fic. It's soooo funny you make my day.


Waiting for next chapter.
Title: Re: TroubleMaker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 11 17/02/2015
Post by: chiqinna on November 26, 2015, 01:54:19 PM
mmmm...
Title: Re: TroubleMaker~ Chapter 11 17/02/2015
Post by: blakwhite on November 26, 2015, 02:56:02 PM
UPDATE UR FIC CHIQ ! GANBATTE !!  :cool1: