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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 3 27/09/13
« Reply #20 on: September 27, 2013, 12:00:51 PM »
noah minami: thanks for reading!  :heart:
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A simple list of character:

Takahashi Minami:
Class 3C, a new transfer student, always making troubles in her old school that her parents transfer her to another school in order that she will change.

Oshima Yuko:
Class 3C, have a big obsession on Kojima Haruna, a pervert.

Watanabe Mayu:
Class 1A, smart student, always with her cyborg face, not a type of a person who likes to play around.

Maeda Atsuko:
Class 3B, school princess, do not like people messing with her, kind of arrogant but good with her friends.

Kojima Haruna:
Class 3B, an airhead sometimes, friends of Maeda Atsuko, doesn’t like Oshima Yuko.

Shinoda Mariko
Class 3B, a granddaughter of the owner of the school, Maeda Atsuko’s friend, dreams to be a model.

Minegishi Minami:
Class 3C, just, Minegishi Minami.

Kashiwagi Yuki:
Class 3B, a transfer student, friendly…at first.

TwinTowers:
Class 3C, Saeyaka...a twintowers...Saeyaka!  :lol:

Matsui Rena:
Class 3C, a quiet person, but she is scary when you stole her melon pan.

Itano Tomomi:
Class 3B, Tomochin, A friend of Maeda Atsuko, good with people.

Kasai Tomomi:
Class 3C, Chiyuu, Tomochin’s girlfriend, loves saying ‘Chiyuu’.
 



Chapter 3


“Takamina…wake up!” Yuko shaking the sleeping Takamina.

“Oi! Takamina! Wake up! We’re late already!” Yuko said shaking her harder.

“Mmmhhhhm! 10 more minutes!” Takamina whine as she turns her body facing her back to Yuko.

“Geez...WAKE UUUPPPPP!!!!!” screamed Yuko on her ear making Takamina surprised
and bump her head hard with Yuko’s head.

“Ouchh!!!” Yuko said rubbing her head.

Takamina quickly look on her alarm clock but it still early and the class haven’t even started yet.
“It’s still 5 a.m.!!! our class start 6 a.m!”
Takamina said glaring at the squirrel girl because she disturbs her sleep.
“Hehehe….come on!!! Let’s be a good student and come early to school!”
Yuko said as she drags Takamina out of her bed.
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At school

“Be a GOOD student you say…” said Takamina narrowed her eyes looking at the other girl who completely ignore her.

“Seriously Yuko, is this what you’re doing every day?” Takamina asks her as she crossed her arms.

‘I can’t believe this girl is really a pervert!’ said Takamina to herself.

“Hey look! It’s Mayu!” Yuko said as she saw her through her binoculars.

“Hmmm…Mayu is so early huh...it’s still…5.20.” Takamina said as she looks at her wrist watch.

“Of course, that’s why she’s a smart student.”
Yuko said grinning while looking back at observing other student’s ‘asset’.

‘Hehehe…Mayu is a nice oshiri too…’ said Yuko in her mind.




5.40 a.m.

Takamina got bored waiting for Yuko to finish stalking on other students who enters the school gate.

“Ughhh!! Let me see what really attracts you.” Takamina took the binoculars from Yuko and watch through it.

“Hey! I haven’t finished yet!” whine Yuko.

Takamina observe the surrounding ignoring Yuko.

“Huh?” Takamina said when she saw a face looking at their direction.

“What is it? I’m curious!!!” Yuko said excitedly.

‘Is she glaring at me?’ thought Takamina still watching her.

Then Takamina smiles at her.

Takamina gives back the binoculars to Yuko while still looking at her.

“NyanNyan!!!” Yuko shouted when she saw her NyanNyan walking with her friends.

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Meanwhile at the other side.

Acchan, Mariko and Haruna are walking towards to school building.

‘Why I feel like someone is watching me?’
said Acchan to herself as she looks around.

Then she saw two girls looking at their direction.

One of them watching with a binoculars.

‘What is she doing?’ thought Acchan as she walks while looking at them.

‘Wait…she looks familiar.’ Thought Acchan again.

‘Ahh~ now I remember her.’ Acchan said in her mind then she glare at her.

‘Is she smiling at me?!’ Acchan thought slightly shock.

“NyanNyan!!!”
Yuko screamed making both Haruna and Mariko turn their eyes towards them.

“NyanNyan~~~” Mariko teases her.

“Pervert!” Haruna said as she walks ahead of them.
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At 1A classroom

It seems Mayu is talking to her new friends when she suddenly is greeted by her two friends with a hug.

“Mayuuuuu!!!” Jurina and Lovetan said as she hugs Mayu from behind.

Mayu just ignored them.

“She’s Jurina…and she is Lovetan.” Mayu introduced them to her new friend.

“Hey~ I’m Shimazaki Haruka. Nice to meet you!” Her new friend said smiling at them.

“Nice! Let’s be friends!” Jurina said excited.

Mayu sigh inwardly looking at her friends.
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At 3B classroom.

“So…NyanNyan~ mind to share us what happen during your family meeting?” Mariko asks her.

“Mou~ don’t call me NyanNyan!” Haruna pout at her.

“Ah~ Mariko~ don’t call her like that~ only Yuko can call her NyanNyan~~”
Acchan join Mariko in teasing Haruna.

“Stop it guys!” Haruna slap their arm playfully.

Then a girl walks elegantly enters the room towards the three girls.

“Tomochin! Why you absent yesterday? I call you but your phone is off.”
Acchan greeted her other friend who is sitting beside her.

“Yeah…I heard from Chiyuu that you’re sick.” Grinned Mariko at her making Tomochin to blush.

“I thought you’re not talking to my Chiyuu?” Tomochin raise her eyebrow.

“I talk to everyone! And she’s your girlfriend so she must know about you” Mariko said.

Tomochin smiles thinking of her girlfriend.

“Anyway Haruna, tell us about your family meeting. What did your parents talk about you?”
Acchan asks looking at her.

“Hmmm…*pout* they are going to lives abroad for a long time.
And they don’t want me to be alone so they want me to stay at school dormitory.”
Haruna explain to them while pouting.

“You can live in my house.” Mariko said as she playing with her pen.

“Really??” Haruna asks her with sparkling eyes.

“No~ just kidding~ I don’t want to get my house dirty~”
Mariko said making Haruna to slap her arms hard this time.

“Marichan~~~ I’m not dirty!!!” Haruna whine at her making Tomochin and Acchan laugh.

“You’re not dirty Haruna…your room’s are!” Acchan said laughing.

“Mou~ I don’t want to stay in dormitory~” Haruna said as she lean her head beside the window.

“Or you don’t want to see your number one fan?” teases Tomochin.

“Both!” Haruna whine.

“Don’t worry Haruna, I also planning to stay in dormitory.” Tomochin said smiling at her.

“Why?” They ask her.

“Because I want to see my Chiyuu always~ but you lives in your own room!”
Tomochin jokes and they all laughing except Haruna who pouts.

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At 3C classroom

“Yukoooooo!!!” shout a girl to Yuko while enter the class.

“Saaeeeeee!!!!” Yuko shout back at her as she jumps on her as Sae just hold her.

“Where is Sayaka?” Yuko asks her.

“She’s at the student’s council room. Talking with the president!” Sae said.

“Anyway I want to introduce you to our new friend! Takamina!”
Yuko said as she point at Takamina who just looking at their interaction.

“Hai.” Takamina greeted her shortly.

“Hai! I’m Sae!” Sae greeted her back smiling as she pats Takamina’s head.

“What are you doing?” Takamina asks her.

“You’re same like Yuko… *chuckle* midget!” Sae said still patting her head.





“Stop it.” Takamina said releasing dark aura around her.




“Ohh…Sorry!!!!!” Sae shout running away as the two midgets chasing after her.




Lunch time

All of the students rushed towards the school canteen as usual.

Mayu were walking slowly towards the canteen.

Her friends are leaving her behind because she’s so slow.

“Hey~” someone greeted her from behind.

Mayu looks at the person as she walks beside her.

“Let’s walk together, Mayu.” Yuki said smiling at her.
Mayu just smile at her.

Then she invites Mayu to eat together with her.

“Mayuuu!!!” As they both eating their lunch, then Mayu’s friend coming towards her grinning.

“They are my friend.” Mayu said to Yuki who nodded looking at them smiling.

“Hey~ I’m Jurina”

“And I’m Lovetan!”
They both said extending their hands to Yuki.

“Err…Kashiwagi Yuki desu.” Yuki said as she shakes their hands.

Uninvited, they both sits with Mayu and Yuki then eat their lunch and talk about various things.

“Hey Mayu, after school we’ll be going to register for a club.
Are you joining? Which club?” Jurina asking her.

“I don’t want to join any club.” Mayu said.

“Oh come on Mayu~ let’s join Taekwondo club! Pleaseee~~”
Jurina pleaded her intertwines both her hands kneeling in front Mayu.

Mayu just look at her with a cyborg face.

“Besides Lovetan also joining the club!” Jurina added to convince her.

“Yeah~ but I’m joining cheerleader club.”
Lovetan said as she only eats her lunch not minding to join Jurina convincing Mayu.

“Hey! You agree to me we’re going to join the same club!” Jurina whine at Lovetan.

“Nope! I change my mind~” Lovetan said not looking at Jurina.

“But…*turns to Mayu* Mayu~~~ please?” Jurina is making a puppy eyes.



“I’m going to join indoor games club, more relaxing.” Mayu said ignoring Jurina.


“I’m joining indoor games club too.” Yuki said then continue eating.

Jurina mumbled something that they did not hear her.

“Then take care of my friend here Kashiwagi-san.
She’s smart but she’s really weak when it comes to physical exercise.”
Lovetan said as she pats Mayu’s back.

“Just call me Yuki. I will look for her then!” Yuki said smiling.


“See…told you Mayu…she’s a fan of yours!” whispered Jurina into Mayu’s ear.

“Shut up Jurina.” Mayu mumbled to her as she looks at Yuki.
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Meanwhile

Sayaka already meet Takamina when they bump into her on their way chasing Sae this morning.

Currently they are at the school rooftop since Yuko insisted to eat there.

Yeah~ to stalk on her NyanNyan of course.

“So…what club are you joining?” Sayaka ask them.

“Go-home club” Yuko and Takamina said in unison.

“Ahhh!!! Takamina~~” Yuko said.

“Yuko~~~” Takamina said impressed that they think of the same thing.

“We’re friends!!!” They both hug each other.

“Yeah~ yeah~ a midget friends~”Sae said as she munch her foods.

“Are you jealous Sae? If you are let me give you a super hug!!!”
Yuko said then hug her from behind. More like strangle her.

“Takamina, want to join me?” Yuko asks grinning.

“Of course!!!” Takamina said then join Yuko hugging Sae who’s desperately trying to free herself.

They just meet Takamina but they are already that close.  :lol:

“LET.ME.GO!!!” Sae said. Then she suddenly fainted. She’s just pretending.

Takamina and Yuko then release her.

“Oi!” Takamina poke her.

Sae suddenly wake up making both of them running away from her.

“Now let me give you my super duper hug!!!!” Sae shout as she chasing them.

Sayaka just looking at them.

While they were running, Takamina bumps into someone making the girl to fall.

When she looks up, the girl’s face is full of foods.

“Acchan!”



T.B.C.




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Offline olive29

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 3 27/09/13
« Reply #21 on: September 27, 2013, 12:35:20 PM »
It looks like Yuki also joins the club because Mayu's there.. :grin:

I love Yuko and Takamina's relationship in here..so cute..  :grin:

Can't wait for the next chapter...

Update soon, please.. :bow:

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 3 27/09/13
« Reply #22 on: September 27, 2013, 01:24:44 PM »
Well... Takamina is in trouble again with Atsuko

She gave Atsuko more reasons to hate her...

Ah... Mayu is being chased by Yuki... Does she like her more than normal friend?

And Yuko is going to see more Haruna at dormitory soon enough

What kind of troubles would Haruna get from Yuko?

Well can't wait to see

Thank you for the update

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 3 27/09/13
« Reply #23 on: September 27, 2013, 08:51:12 PM »
This is really interesting!
Please update soon  :kneelbow:

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 3 27/09/13
« Reply #24 on: September 30, 2013, 06:46:58 AM »
i still believe in atsumina but is really hard

continue soon

this is interesting

thanks ^_^

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 4 12/10/13
« Reply #25 on: October 12, 2013, 01:10:00 PM »
I thought I already update this... :huhuh
Whatever, let's just enjoy the moment ne~

Chapter 4


Acchan’s pov

I and my friends are walking on the hall as we just finish our lunch except for
Haruna whose still stress about her living in dormitory.

Hikk…poor her, she’s going to see her number one pervert fan every day.

“Acchan, can you hold my bento first, I need to tie my shoelace”
Haruna said as she stop walking and give her bento to me.

“Wow~ you did not eat anything Haruna?” I ask her as I look inside the bento.

Still look full.

“I eat a little only.” Haruna said as she tying her shoelace.

When Haruna finish tying her shoelace, I heard a sound coming towards us.

When I look at my front, just like in slow motion, someone was running towards me.

I just stand there and still processing my brain.

It’s too late, she’s already bump me making me fall along with her.

“Acchan!” Haruna shout.

Arrrghhh! My butt hurts!

W-wait…I feel something sticky and slimy on my face.

I opened my eyes to see THAT weird girl so close to me!


Takamina’s pov

As I run away from Sae, I suddenly bump into someone making both of us fall as I was on top of her.

“Acchan!”

Acchan? Wait…I look up to see the face.

She looks at me also.

Then her foods are full of foods.

“Puuuuffftttt!” I close my mouth with my hand as I want to laugh by seeing her dirty face.

Then I can she her expression started to change as her eyes widen.

U-uh…I think she’s getting mad now.

“Sorry sorry…let me wipe out the foods.” I said as I wipe away some of the food from her face with my bare hand.

Then when I look at her eyes, she looks like she’s getting madder at my action.

Oh no…should I run again?

“GET.OFF.ME!!!” She said in a mad voice with a disgusted look.

She startled me! Gosh this girl~

I quickly stand up still looking at her angry face.

I lend my hand to her to help her to stand up.

“GET OUT OF HERE!!!”She shouted at me making me startled again.

Then Yuko and Sae suddenly grab me and put their hand on the back

of my head making my head bow at her as they do the same saying, “GOMENASAI!!!” then they both drag me out of there.



Normal’s pov

“Acchan are you okay?” Tomochin asks her as she helping Acchan to get up.

“S-she…I’m going to kill her!” Acchan said mad as she walks to the bathroom to clean herself.

Her friends just look at each other then followed Acchan to calm her down.

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Inside 3C classroom

“*pant* that….was horrible!*” Yuko said panting because they were running while dragging Takamina.

“Yeah…*pant* we’re dead.” Sae said as she sits at her place.

“No! *pant* not us…HER!!” Yuko said pointing at Takamina.

“What? Why? I already apologize to her!” Takamina said clueless as she stand beside window.

“Do you think she would forgive you that easily? Haaa?!” Yuko said poking Takamina’s forehead.

“So…What will she do to me then?” Takamina asks them as she tilted her head curious.

*bell rings*

“Oi! Answer me!” Takamina said to them as they ignore her then took their sit as the teacher comes in.

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After register for the clubs, they went to the dormitory as other students go home as well.

At dormitory

“So…Mayu~ what club did you join?” Yuko asks her.

“Indoor games club.” Mayu answered shortly.

“Owh…” Yuko said.

*KNOCK* *KNOCK*

Takamina opened the door revealing Yuki who probably going to see Mayu.

‘Wow…who is this? She has a nice oppai!’ thought pervert Yuko as she scans her body from top to bottom.

“Hey, Kashiwagi Yuki desu!” Yuki bowed her head introduce herself to Yuko and Takamina.

Takamina was about to extend her hand to Yuki when Yuko quickly walks towards her before Takamina reach her.

“I’m Oshima Yuko! Which class are you from?” Yuko asks as she grabs Yuki’s hand and shaking her hand with Yuki’s.

“Err…3B.” Yuki said smiling awkwardly.

Yuko gasped. “Really?! NyanNyan is in class 3B too!” She said excited then suddenly she grope Yuki’s breast.

‘Wow! She really has a big oppai! But I think NyanNyan’s bigger~’ thought pervert Yuko.

Yuki was shocked while showing her big reaction.

“Pervert!!!!” *slap!* Yuki slapped Yuko hard on her cheek then cover her chest with her arms.

“Yuko!” Takamina run towards Yuko who fall down due to the hard slap by Yuki.

“Let’s go, Yuki.” Mayu said ignoring the two midgets as she walks out of the room followed by Yuki.

“She slap me hard…it hurts!” Yuko said rubbing her right cheeks.

“Serve you right for being a pervert!” Takamina laugh at her.


 
At Maeda’s villa

Acchan’s pov

That girl…she’s totally dead if I saw her again!

I grip the paper on my hand as I was doing my homework inside my room.

I won’t kick you out of the school dormitory…yet.

*smirk*

I will play with you for a while…

Takahashi Minami…

Your name sounds familiar though…

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The next day Acchan went to Takamina’s classroom bringing a pack of foods on her hand.

Takamina and Yuko are talking with each other when…

“Takahashi!!!” Shout Acchan as she enters their classroom.

Everyone in the house looking at her as she walks towards Takamina.

“Atsuko-sama!” Some of her fans inside the classroom said.

Takamina look at the person who’s calling her.

She quickly stands up as Yuko stand behind her scared knowing that she’s getting revenge for yesterday.

Without warning Acchan quickly throw the foods on her face but unfortunately,
at exact time Takamina bend down to tie her shoelace.

After that, Takamina get up and facing her.

“Y-Yes?” Takamina asks smiling looking at her innocently.

Acchan was looking behind Takamina with a shocked face.

“I-I will deal with you later!” Acchan then looking at Takamina and quickly walk out of the room.

Takamina look behind to see Yuko standing there frozen with her whole face covered by foods.

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After school

Haruna and Tomochin are on their way to their room bringing their luggage.

Since the owner of the school is Mariko’s grandfather, they can have their own room without sharing with others.

Haruna’s room is besides Tomochin’s room.

Yuko and Takamina are walking on the hallway when they saw Haruna and Tomochin enter their own rooms.

“Hey, is that your NyanNyan?” Takamina said pointing at where Haruna is.

Yuko was shocked to see her NyanNyan in the dormitory plus she’s bringing a luggage.

“I-is she going to s-stay…here? Here?!” Yuko said feeling over-excited as she jump around.

“Let’s talk to her!” Yuko said taking Takamina’s hand and was about to walks towards
NyanNyan’s room when Takamina stop her.

“Wait, this is not a good idea Yuko.” Takamina said.

‘Knowing you would grope her as soon as you saw her~’ thought Takamina.

“Then how?” Yuko said confuse.

“First, let’s go to our room and take a good sleep!” Takamina said dragging Yuko to their rooms.

That night, Takamina and Yuko are planning to approach Haruna ‘nicely’.

At night, dormitory students usually doing their homework at their own rooms.

Some are having fun hanging and talking with friends.

The midgets have been watching NyanNyan for some quite time now.

Haruna is currently talking with TomoTomo as they were at the garden.

“Okay Yuko, let’s start our plan, remember, approach her nicely,

don’t do any sexual harassment even with your eyes! Use your dimples smile and talk to her nicely.”

“Got it!” Yuko said determined to talk to her NyanNyan without being rejected or slapped.

Yuko then walks towards NyanNyan who was alone now since TomoTomo wants to have their own private times.

Takamina was watching at them from afar.

“H-hey…” Yuko said from behind as she was nervous.

‘This is my first time to talk to her nicely. I need to control my pervertness!!!’
thought Yuko as her heart started to beat faster when NyanNyan turn around to look at her.

“You!” NyanNyan was about to run away from her.

“w-wait! Wait, Kojima-san, please, I just want to talk…” Yuko said nicely.

‘Kojima-san? Since when this pervert calling me like that?’ Haruna thought confuse.

“Please…really, promise I won’t do anything…I just…want to talk to you…”
Yuko said shyly as she plays with her fingers.

‘Cute~’ Haruna thought.

“Oh Really? Why would I talk to someone like you! Hmmpphh!!” Haruna crossed her arms looking away.

“b-but…I really want to talk to you! Please~~~” Yuko then kneeled down while both her hand holding each other looking at the taller girl with a puppy eyes.

Haruna still ignore her.

“Fine! But if you do anything I won’t talk to you again!” Haruna said giving up to her.

“Un! Let’s sit here!” Yuko said as she sits on the bench.

Haruna also sit beside her still beware of her action.

“Umm…So…why did you stay in dormitory?” Yuko started their conversation.

‘It’s not wrong talking with this pervert right? Besides she looks nice.

“My parents going to lives in New York so I’m here now.” Haruna said pouting.

“You looks cute when you pouting NyanNyan~” Yuko said smiling showing her dimples.

‘Yeah…that’s it! Show your famous dimple-smile Yuko!’ Takamina who watch over them behind the big tree.

NyanNyan looks away hiding her blush from Yuko.

‘Mou~ why am I feeling like this?’ thought her.

‘Awww~ my NyanNyan is blushing~~~’ Yuko said in her mind controlling herself from jumping over NyanNyan.

“NyanNyan, ummm…can we be friends?” Yuko said looking at NyanNyan smiling.

NyanNyan think for a while.

NyanNyan nodded her head.

“But don’t do anything or else I will stop talking to you!” NyanNyan pouted crossing her arms.

Haruna looks at Yuko who looks like she’s struggling on herself.

“Yuko?” Haruna called her as Yuko closed her eyes shut.

‘I can’t!!!!’ Yuko screamed in her mind.

“N-NyanNyan! I’m sorry!” Yuko shouted before planting a kiss on NyanNyan’s right cheek
then she run away before NyanNyan yelled at her.

‘W-what is s-she d-doing just now?!’ NyanNyan was dumbfounded by the action as
she touches her right cheek while her other hand on her chest.

Yuko run to Takamina. “Yuko! Why did you do that?!” Takamina scolded her.

“Mou, I can’t hold myself anymore…She’s so cute when she pout~” Yuko said started to daydreaming again.

*smack!* “Well, it’s good as long as you don’t grope her in public.” Takamina said.

“So I can grope her in private?” Yuko grinned while rubbing her head.

*smack again on the head*

“*sighed* let’s just go to our room…it’s late already”
Takamina said dragging Yuko by her ear as she still daydreaming about what she did to Haruna just now.






T.B.C~



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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 4 12/10/13
« Reply #26 on: October 12, 2013, 01:31:49 PM »
 :wahaha: i think acchan is embrassed

and yuko  :hiakhiakhiak: you canthold the power of perv

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 4 12/10/13
« Reply #27 on: October 12, 2013, 03:56:38 PM »
yeahh takamina is TROUBLEMAKER ( especially for Acchan haha) , I hope acchan not going crazy regarding takamina behavior and oh yuko still perv haha it's about time for nyannyan to give up ...
thanks for update  :twothumbs

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 4 12/10/13
« Reply #28 on: October 12, 2013, 05:12:27 PM »
Well Atsuko first payback attempt was backfired.

What is she going to do next?

Would Minami able to avoid it again or not?

If yes, who would get it?

Haruna felt something for Yuko but would she realise it?

Mayu is still normal here, but her Yuki is already been molested by Yuko.

Well can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 4 12/10/13
« Reply #29 on: October 12, 2013, 07:31:19 PM »
Ah Yuko, she can't control herself when she is with her Nyannyan but we love her like that hehe

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 4 12/10/13
« Reply #30 on: October 12, 2013, 09:21:07 PM »
awwwwwsss Yuko so cute!!! kojiyuu moment <3

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 4 12/10/13
« Reply #31 on: October 13, 2013, 03:28:31 AM »
awwwwwsss Yuko so cute!!! kojiyuu moment <3

awww kojiyuu

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 4 12/10/13
« Reply #32 on: October 13, 2013, 09:23:15 AM »
Chapter 5


The next day,

Lunch time,

As usual Yuko and Takamina are at the rooftop having lunch.

Sae and Sayaka did not join them since they have something to do.

Then a girl comes to the roof top.

She walks towards Takamina and give her a note then leave.

Takamina took the note from her and read it.

“Takahashi, come to 3B classroom before lunch time finish!”

Takamina frown.

“It must be Acchan.” Yuko said as she watches her NyanNyan through the binoculars.

Takamina look down to where Acchan and her friends have lunch.

“Fine~ if that she wants! I don’t mind~” Takamina said grinning.

‘It’s going to be fun~!!’ Takamina said in her mind.

“I’m going with you~ but I’m not going to be your back up!” Yuko said.

‘Hehehe~ to see NyanNyan~’ thought Yuko grinning.

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With that, Takamina and Yuko heading to 3B classroom before the bell rings.

When they got there, Acchan already inside the room with her friends waiting for her.

Takamina walks inside the room carefully as she looks around.

Who knows? Acchan might put a trap inside the room for her.

“So…Maeda-san, what is it that you want me to come here?” Takamina said confidently.

Acchan crossed her arms glaring at her.

Acchan was about to speak when…

“Kyaaa!!! Pervert!!!” NyanNyan screamed when Yuko suddenly hugs her as she buried her face into her chest.

*SLAP!* “Ouchh!!” NyanNyan slapped Yuko on her head.

*Click*

Mariko was holding her phone while taking a picture of Yuko got slapped by Haruna.

“Nice shot!” Grinned Mariko while looking at the picture that she just captured.

“Hey! Mobile phone is not allowed in school!” suddenly the class president shouted at Mariko when she saw Mariko with a
mobile on her hand.

“So? What will you do to me then?” Mariko said raising her eyebrow.

‘She must be forgotten the fact that who I am~’ Mariko thought.

Then the class president suddenly screamed waving her hands crazily on the air while running
out of the class for no apparent reason.


Back to the situation…

“So…what do you want to talk about?” Takamina grinning said as she getting closer to Acchan.

Acchan grinned at her.

“Mocchi!” Acchan calling Mocchi as Mocchi walks towards them.

“She’s yours~” Acchan said looking at Mocchi as she took her seat.

Takamina looks at Mocchi who also looking at her.

“What?!” Takamina was confused.

‘Why am I feeling nervous now?’ thought Takamina.

Suddenly she feels her ears getting licked.

“Iewww~~~” Other student said.

Takamina step back from Mocchi who was looking at Takamina’s ear like it was her favorite food.

“What are you doing?!” Takamina said shocked as she cover her ears.

Mocchi started to be aggressive as she grabs Takamina’s body tight.

“Yuko!!” Takamina shout at her.

“Remember what I said before Takamina!” Yuko said.

‘I want to stand beside NyanNyan~ hehehe’ Yuko thought as she looks at Haruna
whose looking away crossing her arms.

Then Mocchi put Takamina’s ear into her mouth making Takamina to feel really
disgusted as her head trying to back away from her.

“Stop it! I don’t even know you! Gaahh!!!” Takamina said struggling.

Meanwhile Acchan and the others are just looking at them smirking and laughing.

‘Seriously! Is this weird girl an ear maniac?!!!’ Takamina said in her mind.

“Mmmmm~ I like your ears~” Whispered Mocchi in her ear making Takamina feeling goose bump.

She then let go of Takamina and went back to her seat still looking at Takamina.

“Ieewwww~” Takamina said as she wipes her ears.

Acchan then got up from her seat and walks towards Takamina.

“It’s just the beginning Takahashi! I will play with you more after this!”
Acchan said her face is close to Takamina’s. She is looking at Takamina with hatred in her eyes.

“Oh really?! Then I should play along with you~ Maeda!”
Takamina said crossing her arms as she blow Acchan’s fringe.

Acchan closed her eyes controlling her anger.

Then Takamina walks away grinning.

“NyanNyan, I will see you later~”Yuko said as she followed Takamina.

NyanNyan pout ignoring the squirrel.

“Wow~ it’s seems like you’re being good to your fan Haru-Nyan~” Mariko said smirked.

“Shut up Marichan!” Haruna said.

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Inside 3C classroom

“Oi, Takamina what are you doing?! Are you out of your mind?!” Sae scolded Takamina who just sit at her place.

“Yeah…she just declared her war between Acchan~” Yuko said.

Then Miichan who sit beside Takamina took out a microphone out of nowhere then pointed it to Takamina.

“So, Takamina-san, what do you thing will Acchan do next to you?” Miichan ask as she wears glasses.

“Where did you get that mike?!” Takamina asks confuse.

Miichan just shrugged her shoulder waiting for her answer.

“Oh, Well, She has her own plan, I have my own plan too~” Takamina answered grinning.

“What is your plan then?” Asked Miichan.

Sae, Sayaka and Yuko are just listening to the so call ‘interview’.

“Hmmmm…*giggle*” Takamina is already imagining things.

The four people making a confuse face.

“What?!” Yuko asks impatiently.

“Let’s just see what will happen ne~” Takamina said.

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Jurina went to the bathroom to wash herself.

In the bathroom, she found a girl with a pale face staring at herself in front of the big mirror.

Jurina just ignore her and wash her face.

When she looks up to see the mirror, she notices that the other girl is looking at her.

*they were alone*

Jurina show her cat smile at the girl.

But the girl just stays with her normal expression.

Jurina keep her smile showing her white teeth as the atmosphere started to get weird.

The girl finally smiles at her.

Jurina stares at her smiling face.

Then the girl just left the bathroom.

Jurina just frozen at her place still smiling.

‘I never met a goddess before…but I think I just met one now…’ thought Jurina remembering her smile again.

“Are? Whose handkerchief is this?” Jurina said looking at the handkerchief beside the sink.

She took the handkerchief…then she looks at the bathroom door…and looking at the handkerchief again.

“Is this…hers?” mumbled Jurina then she started to smile widely.

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After school

Every student has started to attend on their clubs activities.


Indoor games clubroom

Many students were joining this club since it was more relaxing and does not use much physical strength.

Mayu currently playing chess with Paruru.

Suddenly, Yuki come towards them.

“Hey Mayu, can I play with you?” Yuki said smiling at her.

Mayu just look at her with a blank face.

“Wait for your turn, I’m still playing with Paruru.” Mayu said coldly.

“Okay.” Yuki said with a disappointed tone.

“You’re really good Mayuyu!” Paruru praised her as Mayu win.

‘Mayuyu?’ Yuki said in her mind.

“Okay my turn!” Yuki said excitedly as she push Paruru aside then sit across Mayu.

As they play, Mayu look at her weirdly.

‘Why does she look so happy playing this game?’ Mayu said as she glances at Yuki who keep smiling.

Then it was Yuki’s turn.

“Wait…you can’t move it backward…this one could only moves forward.” Mayu said to her.

“Ah! S-sorry my m-mistake…hehe” Yuki said panicked then she moves it two steps forward from its initial place.

“Yuki, it can only move one step forward.” Mayu said.

Yuki quickly moves it one step backward then just act like it was nothing.

“Is this your first time playing chess?” Mayu asks her.

Yuki nodded looking down embarrassed.

‘No wonder she just followed my movements at the beginning.’ Mayu sigh inwardly.

“Let me teach you then.” Mayu said making Yuki look up at her.

“Thank you Mayuyu!” Yuki said happy.

“Mayuyu?” Mayu confused.

“I will call you Mayuyu from now on!” Yuki said excited.

‘Whatever~’ thought Mayu then she teach Yuki how to play chess.

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Meanwhile at the same time inside taekwondo clubroom.

Jurina had just introduces herself as all the members had to introduces themselves.

“Next!” The teacher who in charge said firmly.

“Matsui Rena desu! Class 3C.” When Jurina heard the voice, she quickly looks
at the owner of the voice as she widens her eyes.

‘S-she’s in the same club with me!’ thought Jurina could not believe it.

‘Waaaahhhh!!! I’m in heaven!!!’ Jurina said in her mind.



Yuko was skipping on her way back to the dormitory with a happy expression

as she is planning to approach her favorite school idol for the second time.

On her way she saw Takamina running for her life. Looks like she’s being chased.

Then she saw a girl chasing her from behind.

“Is it Acchan?” mumbled Yuko as she stopped walking.


“Kaaaiiiii!!!!!” Shouted the girl who chased Takamina.

Takamina looks like she’s been seeing a ghost as she running fast.

“Kai? Who’s kai?” Yuko said confuse not noticing that Takamina is running towards her direction.

“Yuukoooooooooo!!!!” Takamina shouted making Yuko look at her.

“Kaaaiiiii!!!!” The girl looks happy chasing Takamina.

“Noooooo!!!!”



T.B.C






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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
« Reply #33 on: October 13, 2013, 09:46:28 AM »
The girl who chase Takamina is Ray, isn't she?

Can't wait for the next chapter..

Update soon, please.. :bow:


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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
« Reply #34 on: October 13, 2013, 10:43:56 AM »
Yuko pervert like always xD

A war declaration~

What the.. RAY!? I want to know the backstory about Kai/Minami xD

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
« Reply #35 on: October 13, 2013, 12:50:57 PM »
Minami is being chased by ray?

Yeah... What with the backstory about Kai and Minami?

Did Minami used to be an idol or something?

Or she had a brother or cousin that look like her?

Or did she ever attend a cross-dress competition?

Can't wait to see what kind of troubles both Atsuko and Minami bring to each other

Thank you for the update

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
« Reply #36 on: October 13, 2013, 05:56:38 PM »
Yuko pervert like always xD

A war declaration~

What the.. RAY!? I want to know the backstory about Kai/Minami xD

Me too

With this:
“Oh really?! Then I should play along with you~ Maeda!”
Takamina said crossing her arms as she blow Acchan’s fringe.

i this that minami gonna kiss acchan to prove that she is not afraid of her

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
« Reply #37 on: October 14, 2013, 02:45:52 AM »
dont tell me that is Ray

what is she doing there!!???

hahahahahahahahahahaha this is going to be very funny and whit so much drama!!!

thanks and please Update SOON!!!!

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
« Reply #38 on: October 14, 2013, 09:22:23 AM »

Me too

With this:
“Oh really?! Then I should play along with you~ Maeda!”
Takamina said crossing her arms as she blow Acchan’s fringe.

i this that minami gonna kiss acchan to prove that she is not afraid of her

Hey Haruko-san! yeah...you gave me some idea there...  :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 5 13/10/13
« Reply #39 on: October 14, 2013, 01:13:44 PM »
chiqinna-san.. Takamina and Yuko are so funny.  :lol:

Maeda...maeda.... What's going to happen if she realize that Takamina is her old friend?
I'm curious about this.

I'm happy that WMatsui included in this fanfics... I'll waiting how the taekwondo club will develop.  :D

Can't wait for your update.  :twothumbs

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